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. 2023 Sep 29;18(9):e0292321. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0292321

The effect of motivational and instructional self-talk on attentional control under noise distraction

Liu Yang 1,2, Yingchun Wang 2,*
Editor: Michael B Steinborn3
PMCID: PMC10540956  PMID: 37773946

Abstract

Inhibition is the key factor of attentional control (AC). Basketball players are typically exposed to noise from the audience or opposing teams while competing. These distractions disrupt the attentional systems, ultimately compromise the athletes’ inhibition ability and directly affect their performance on the court. Hence, effective AC strategies are crucial. Two studies were demonstrated to investigate the effects of noise distractions on attentional control and the moderating effect of self-talk. In Study 1, 36 participants undertook the Stroop task, showing an increased error rate with noise distraction. Thirty-nine national second-level basketball players participated in Study 2, where they engaged in the Antisaccade task under both quiet and noise-distraction conditions, employing different self-talk strategies. Results showed that instructional self-talk reduced the antisaccade error rate in quiet conditions, while motivational self-talk increased the error rate under noise distractions. These findings suggests that noise distraction reduces AC. In competition scenarios, basketball players are required to appropriately implement self-talk strategies to improve AC and prevent potential counterproductive effects.

Introduction

Attentional control theory is based on the processing efficiency theory [1]. According to the theory, anxiety affects attentional control (AC) through disrupting the balance between goal-directed and stimulus-directed attentional systems [2]. Furthermore, anxiety escalates the allocation of attention to irrelevant stimuli, both internal and external, leading to bottom-up processing. This process affects key functions of AC (i.e., inhibition and shifting), especially inhibition, the primary indicator [1, 2]. Inhibition is a process that involves suppressing, blocking, or delaying responses to irrelevant stimuli in order to prevent attentional resources from being allocated to task-irrelevant stimuli [3].

AC and sports performance are closely related, and the quiet eye is one of the indicators of AC. The participants who have undergone quiet eye training have a higher percentage of basketball free throws [4]. Three-point shot performance under pressure is positively correlated with quiet eye duration, suggesting that AC may fulfill an online control function [5]. Furthermore, experts have longer quiet eye duration and performance better on sport decision-making tasks than novices, causing experts could pay more attention to task-related cues and ignore the task-irrelated information [6].

After more than 20 years of development, however, attentional control theory has gradually expanded to cover other variables rather than being limited to the effects of anxiety on attentional control (e.g., noise distraction, cognitive load, ego depletion, working memory, etc.) [712]. Trimmel and Poelzl (2006) demonstrated that noise caused a decrease in AC and information processing in the cortical layer [13]. Trimmel et al. (2012) conducted further research and discovered that that noise from neighbors and aircraft both impaired learning ability when compared to the control group, with the potential mechanism being that noise affects attentional control and cognitive strategies during learning [14]. A meta-analysis of 242 research indicated that noise had a moderate negative influence on cognitive functions [15]. The mean effect size across the 191 cognitive tasks was d = -0.34 (95%CI = -0.42 to -0.25), with the highest effect size for high loudness, short duration, d = -0.68, (95%CI = -0.96 to -0.40), suggesting that short, loud noises have the most negative effect on AC [15].

Attentional focus in sport can be divided between external or internal dimensions. External focus cues direct a player’s attention to the environment or the effects of their movements on the environment, while internal focus cues direct a player’s attention to their own body movements or muscle engagement [16]. In basketball, players must be aware of their surroundings and the movements of their teammates and opponents to make quick decisions, such as passing, shooting, or defending on the court [17]. However, focusing on misleading information, such as fake moves or trash talk from the opponent, can often result in incorrect decision making and incoordinate movements, ultimately affecting the performance [18, 19].

External distractions such as noise or light can potentially affect motor learners and hinder motor performance [20]. Basketball players usually compete under the noise from the audience or opponents and they are expected to finish the game in that noisy environment. The noise level on the field is frequently high, for instance, in American football, peak noise levels from the audience can reach 123-140dB, which makes it difficult for athletes to communicate on the field and puts the athlete’s AC to the test [21]. Despite the athletes receiving 6 weeks of shooting training, there was a significant decrease in shooting performance in the presence of noise distraction compared to baseline levels (no noise distraction) [22]. This implies that psychological skills are necessary in order to counteract the negative effects of noise distraction and that skill training alone may not be sufficient.

One of the most frequently employed mental skills in sports is self-talk, which takes many different forms. There is empirical evidence that self-talk strategies are effective in enhancing sport/task performance through systematic [23] and meta-analytic reviews [24]. Self-talk can be categorized into motivational self-talk (e.g., “I can do it”) and instructional self-talk (e.g., “elbow, wrist, shoot”) based on its strategic characteristics [25]. Diverse self-talk cues engender distinct functional and performance outcomes. Specifically, both attentional and anxiety control cues have been observed to reduce the frequency of interfering thoughts while concurrently increasing confidence and effort levels [26]. Importantly, the efficacy of anxiety control cues in modulating anxiety control is distinctly more significant [26]. According to the valence of self-talk, it could be divided into positive self-talk (e.g., “good job”) and negative self-talk (e.g., “I’m going to lose”) [27]. Motivational self-talk seems more appropriate in competitive settings, whereas instructional self-talk seems more appropriate in training settings [28]. Instructional self-talk, primarily aimed at enhancing concentration, proved more beneficial for novel tasks by directing attention to skill outcomes [29]. However, for learned tasks, motivational self-talk demonstrated greater effectiveness over instructional self-talk [29]. In the Dart-throwing task, motivational group improved more from the baseline to the final task than the performance of the control group, but there was no significant difference in performance change from the baseline to the final task between the instructional and control groups [30]. The effectiveness of self-talk hinges on its ability to shape one’s appraisal of a task as a challenge or threat. Motivational self-talk serves to amplify an individual’s perception of tasks as challenges, subsequently enhancing performance outcomes. Conversely, instructional self-talk, though providing procedural clarity and guidance, may not sufficiently recalibrate an individual’s appraisal from perceiving a task as a threat to recognizing it as a challenge, thus the performance was not improved [30]. Theodorakis et al.(2000) and Hatzigeorgiadis et al. (2011) suggest that compare to motivational self-talk, instructional self-talk is more effective in fine motor control, whereas motivational self-talk is superior in strength and endurance sports when compared to instructional self-talk [24, 25]. Basketball players had better free throw performance and lower movement coordination variability when using instructional self-talk, which meant that they executed their movements with more consistency and fluidity, but motivational self-talk did not have a significant effect on either of these outcomes [31].

The empirical and theoretical research on why self-talk can influence exercise performance is still being developed and refined. The model proposed by Hardy et al. (2009) suggests that self-talk influences motor performance primarily through four factors: (1) cognition (e.g., attention); (2) motivation (e.g., self-confidence, self-efficacy); (3) behavior (e.g., motor skill); and (4) affect (e.g., anxiety) [32]. Another model proposed by Galanis et al. (2016) in a systematic review placed the focus on the mechanisms by which self-talk affects motor performance on attention and motivation, which were identified as two important variables in how self-talk affects motor performance [33]. In addition, a more insightful exploration suggests that frontal lobe generated decisions and actions are less connected to other perceptual information and top-down processing dominates the attentional system when participants use instructional self-talk [34]. In ego depletion state, self-talk could also improve attention functions (e.g., selective attention), which may be attributed to self-talk can counteract the effects of distracting stimuli or ego depletion [35, 36]. In summary, it can be concluded that self-talk affects performance by AC, and the correct use of self-talk facilitates the dominance of the goal-directed attention system, leading to AC on the task at hand.

In conclusion, attention may be affected by self-talk and noise distraction. Whereas there is little research reporting the relationship between noise distraction, self-talk, and AC. Hence, the present study aims to uncover the relationship via two experiments. AC will be assessed using the Stroop task and Antisaccade task, two well-established paradigms for investigating AC [8, 37, 38]. Study 1 will measure the effect of noise distraction on AC via the Stroop task, and the Study 2 will further examine the effects of noise distraction on basketball players and the moderating effect of self-talk via the Antisaccade task. Based on the previous findings, we hypothesized that (1) participants exhibit lower AC levels under noise distraction in the Stroop task and Antisaccade task; (2) Self-talk affects AC and moderates the effect of noise distractions on AC. Specifically, with noise distractions, only instructional self-talk group improved AC compared to motivational self-talk and control groups.

Study 1

Method

Participants

The sample size was computed by GPower 3.1 [39], by selecting “t -tests: Difference between two independent means (two groups)” as statistical test, tail (s) = two, effect size dz = 0.50, α err prob = 0.05, power (1-β err prob) = 0.80. Based on these parameters, a total of 34 participants were calculated to be necessary for the study.

Thirty-six university students (25 females, age = 22.00 ± 1.66, Mean ± SD) from Beijing Sport University, none of whom had any prior basketball training, participated in Study 1. All participants had normal or corrected-to-normal visual acuity. The study was approved by the Sports Science Experiment Ethics Committee of Beijing Sport University (ethical identification number: 2022107H). All participants gave written informed consent that they took part in the study voluntarily.

Experimental design

Single factor (condition: noise distraction condition, quiet condition) within-subjects design was used. The dependent variables were reaction time and error rate in the incongruent condition of the Stroop task [37].

Experimental materials

Stroop task. The Stroop task (Fig 1) was programmed by Psychopy 3.0 and was presented using a computer monitor (15", 1920 × 1080 resolution, frequency 60Hz). The task was comprised of the following three colors: red, blue, and green. Two trial types were included in this task: (1) incongruent trials, in which the word named a color incongruent with the ink color in which it was printed (e.g., the word ‘‘RED” in green color); (2) congruent trials, in which the word named a color congruent with the ink color (e.g., the word ‘‘RED” in red color). The ratio of congruent trials to incongruent trials was 1:2. Participants were instructed to ignore the word meaning of the stimulus and to use the keypad to determine the color of that word, pressing “1” for red, “2” for green, and “3” for blue.

Fig 1. Stroop task.

Fig 1

After 1000ms of fixation presentation, the stimulus (‘红’ means red in Chinese) appears until the participant responds and then disappears. Then 500ms blank screen appears.

In inconsistent condition, shorter reaction times and smaller error rates both reflect stronger inhibition.

Noise distraction. The noise distraction material comprises basketball commentary, the sound of basketball dribbling, whistles from the audience, and recorded voices [22]. The duration of the noise material is 4 minutes and 58 seconds. It is designed to be played continuously while the participant is performing the task. If the task duration exceeds 4 minutes and 58 seconds, the noise material should be replayed from the beginning and continue until the task is completed. The basketball commentary, excerpted from a particular game segment, spans a duration of 4 minutes and 58 seconds without any interruption. It maintains a moderate volume level and is presented in Chinese. The sound of basketball dribbling occurs at a frequency of once every second, with the volume set to the minimum level. The whistles from the audience manifest intermittently, with intervals ranging from 30 to 50 seconds, and are presented at the highest volume level. The recorded voices are comprised of “red, green, blue, up, down, right, miss the shot” in Chinese. They play uninterruptedly for a duration of 4 minutes and 58 seconds. The volume level is set to be lower than the basketball commentary but higher than the sound of basketball dribbling. The audio material was played on AirPods Pro in transparency mode. The playback intensity was monitored using the accessibility function provided by Apple’s iOS operating system, with the actual playback intensity ranging from 85 to 95dB. [15].

Procedure

After reading and signing the informed consent, participants completed 20 practice trials of Stroop task, four blocks of the formal experiment were then started and every block contains 45 trials. Two blocks are quiet conditions and two blocks are noise distraction conditions. The experimental sequence is based on the ABBA counterbalance design, where a random number either 1 or 2 determines the condition of the first block: if the number is 1 then it is quiet condition; if the number is 2 then it is noise distraction.

Data analysis

Using SPSS 26.0, conducted paired sample t-test for error rate and reaction time of incongruent trials. Trials with a Z-score more than 2 or less than -2 for each participant were discarded.

Result

As shown in Table 1, compare to quiet condition, the error rate was significantly higher under noise distraction condition (p < .01), however, there was no significant difference in reaction time (p > .05).

Table 1. Result of the Stroop task.

Variables NDC (N = 36) QC (N = 36) t p Cohen’s d
Error rate 7.60 ± 6.79 5.49 ± 4.69 2.82 < .01 0.47
RT (ms) 932.72 ± 120.28 933.25 ± 125.05 -0.04 .97 < -0.01

NDC: noise distraction condition; QC: quiet condition; RT: reaction time.

Study 2

Method

Participants

The sample size was computed by GPower 3.1 [39], by selecting “ANOVA: Repeated measure, within-between interaction” as statistical test, effect size f = 0.25, α err prob = 0.05, power (1-β err prob) = 0.80, number of groups = 3, number of measurements = 2, and keeping the rest of the parameters default. Based on these parameters, a total of 42 participants were calculated to be necessary for the study.

Forty-two participants (all males) who come from Beijing Sport University participated in Study 2, all participants were national second-level basketball players and had normal or corrected-to-normal visual acuity. Two participants were excluded due to the qualified rate of less than 60% on the antisaccade trials and 1 person was excluded due to the key press error rate of more than 20%. Thirty-nine participants (age = 21.54 ± 2.49, Mean ± SD) were eventually included in Study 2. They have played basketball for 8.46 ± 2.34 (Mean ± SD) years and trained for 10.00 ± 5.99 (Mean ± SD) hours per week. The study was approved by the Sports Science Experiment Ethics Committee of Beijing Sport University (ethical identification number: 2022107H). All participants gave a written informed consent that they took part in the study voluntarily.

Experimental design

Two (condition: noise distraction condition, quiet condition) × three (group: motivational self-talk group, instructional self-talk group, control group) mixed experimental design was used. The condition is within variable and the group is between variable. The dependent variables were the latency of the first correct antisaccade, the error rate of the first saccade, and pupil diameter.

Experimental materials

Antisaccade task. The Antisaccade task was programmed by Ergolab 3.16 and presented using a computer monitor (24", 1920 × 1080 resolution, frequency 60Hz). The Tobii Pro Spectrum was used to record the participants’ eye movements, with a sampling frequency of 1200Hz and an accuracy of up to 0.3°. With five calibration points, video-based pupil- and corneal reflection eye tracking was used to capture the participants’ eye movements.

In each trial, the participant starts by fixating on the Chinese word “准备” (i.e., “ready” in Chinese). Once this word vanishes, a cross fixation point appears for one second. A rectangle, serving as a distractor stimulus, then appears on either the left or right side of the screen. Participants are instructed to swiftly shift their gaze in the opposite direction of the distractor stimulus. After the distractor disappears, an arrow briefly shows for 200ms before being covered by a circular stimulus. This arrow, which randomly points left, right, or up, requires the participant to respond correctly to its direction (e.g., pressing the left button for a left-pointing arrow). As soon as the participant responds to the arrow’s direction, the circular stimulus vanishes (refer to Fig 2 for details).

Fig 2. Antisaccade task.

Fig 2

A 1000ms “ready” was presented first, followed by a 1000ms cross fixation, which the participant needed to look at before the cross fixation disappeared, otherwise it was considered an invalid trial. The distractor stimulus was then presented for 600ms, followed by a 200ms arrow after the distractor stimulus disappeared. After the arrow vanishes, a circular stimulus appears and remains until the participant responds to the arrow’s direction.

Noise distraction. Same as Study 1.

Self-talk intervention. Introduced the concept and advantages of self-talk at first. Then asked participant to use self-talk cue when ‘ready’ appears in every trial. Motivational self-talk group used ‘I can’ or ‘I can do it’ which are commonly used in previously research [31, 40]. There are no references about the instructional self-talk cue on the antisaccade task. However, according to Hardy (2006), the performance of relatively fine motor tasks requiring skill, timing, and accuracy was enhanced to a greater extent by instructional self-talk, focusing on the technical aspects of performance, than motivational self-talk. Therefore, ‘look at the opposite’ is used for instructional self-talk cue. It intended to remind participants to look in the opposite direction of the target, which is the goal and technical aspect of the task [27]. Control group talked nothing to themselves during whole experiment.

Manipulation check. Five-point Likert scale (1 = never, 5 = always) which contained 2 items was used: (1) I just said to myself something like ‘I can’ or ‘I can do it’; (2) I just said to myself something like ‘look at the opposite’.

Procedure

After reading and signing the informed consent, participants were randomly grouped and completed 20 practice trials of Antisaccade task, if the error rate of the first saccade in practice were higher than 20%, a new 20-trial was required, until the error rate was less than 20%. Four blocks of formal experiment were then started and every block contains 36 trials. The condition setting and sequence setting as in Study 1. After finishing the experiment, participants completed the manipulation check, some simple questions about whether they used self-talk cues and demographic information.

Data analysis

Using SPSS 26.0, conducted ANOVA for manipulation check and demographic information, 2 × 3 repeated measures analysis of variance (RMANOVA) with Group (control, motivational self-talk, instructional self-talk) as the between-subjects factor and Condition (noise distraction condition, quiet condition) as the within-subjects factor. Similar to previous study [38], the saccade threshold criterion was set at 30º /s and amplitude was set at 3º. The pupil diameter was the average diameter in one second from distractor stimulus appears. Anticipatory saccades with latencies less than 80ms or late saccades more than 600ms were discarded.

Result

Demographic information

Descriptive statistics are provided in Table 2. The ANOVA analysis revealed a non-significant difference in the number of years playing basketball between the control, motivational self-talk and instructional self-talk groups (F (2, 36) = 1.21, p = .310); and a non-significant difference in the number of hours of training per week (F (2, 36) = 1.03, p = .366).

Table 2. Demographic information and manipulation check.
Group NOP PBY M (SD) THPW M (SD) Item 1 M (SD) Item 2 M (SD)
CG 13 8.69 (4.52) 9.62 (2.63) 1.38 (0.65) 1.92 (1.26)
MSTG 13 7.08 (3.52) 11.85 (9.54) 4.23 (0.73) 1.54 (0.97)
ISTG 13 9.62 (4.52) 8.54 (3.07) 1.46 (0.66) 4.23 (1.01)
Sum 39 8.46 (4.24) 10 (5.99) 2.36 (1.50) 2.56 (1.60)

NOP: number of participants; PBY: playing basketball years; THPW: training hours per week; Item 1: I just said to myself something like ‘I can’ or ‘I can do it’; Item 2: I just said to myself something like ‘look at the opposite’; CG: control group; MSTG: motivational self-talk group; ISTG: instructional self-talk group.

Manipulation check

Descriptive statistics are provided in Table 2. The assumptions for conducting an ANOVA analysis were met. The ANOVA analysis revealed that motivational self-talk group had a higher score of the item that I just said to myself something like ‘I can’ or ‘I can do it’ compare to other groups (F (2, 36) = 74.06, p < .001); and instructional self-talk group had a higher score of the item that I just said to myself something like ‘look at the opposite’ compare other groups (F (2, 36) = 23.37, p < .001).

Antisaccade latency

The assumption of sphericity for the within-subjects factor was met based on the result of the Mauchly’s sphericity test.

The 2 × 3 RMANOVA showed that neither Condition (F (1, 36) = 2.20, p = .147, ηp2 = .058) nor Group (F (2, 36) = 1.39, p = .262, ηp2 = .072) had a main effect on antisaccade latency. Furthermore, there was not a significant Condition × Group interaction (F (2, 36) = 0.71, p = .500, ηp2 = .038) either (Fig 3A). Descriptive statistics are provided in Table 3.

Fig 3. Results of antisaccade task.

Fig 3

a, analysis results of antisaccade latency. b, analysis results of antisaccade error rate. c, analysis results of pupil diameter. Error bars represent standard error of mean (SEM). *p < 0.05, **p < 0.01.

Table 3. Result of the antisaccade task.
CG (n = 13) MSTG (n = 13) ISTG (n = 13)
QC M (SD) NDC M (SD) QC M (SD) NDC M (SD) QC M (SD) NDC M (SD)
Antisaccade latency(ms) 447.52 (43.91) 447.71 (43.01) 467.83 (35.77) 471.43 (38.79) 446.98 (29.69) 454.68 (29.60)
Antisaccade error rate 8.04 (8.01) 7.02 (5.20) 11.6 (6.55) 15.93 (10.15) 3.64 (5.86) 9.87 (9.49)
Pupil diameter(mm) 4.81 (0.54) 4.96 (0.54) 4.82 (0.57) 5.05 (0.53) 5.24 (0.68) 5.43 (0.70)

CG: control group; MSTG: motivational self-talk group; ISTG: instructional self-talk group; NDC: noise distraction condition; QC: quiet condition.

Antisaccade error rate

The assumption of sphericity for the within-subjects factor was met based on the result of the Mauchly’s sphericity test.

The 2 × 3 RMANOVA yielded significant main effects of Condition (F (1, 36) = 8.19, p = .007, ηp2 = .185) on antisaccade error rate. Post-hoc comparisons revealed that the error rate was higher in the noise distraction condition (p = .007). Group also had a main effect (F (2, 36) = 3.998, p = .027, ηp2 = .181). Post-hoc comparisons revealed that the error rate of the motivational self-talk group was significantly higher than the control group (p = .028) and instructional self-talk group (p = .014). Additionally, there was a significant Condition × Group interaction (F (2, 36) = 3.81, p = .032, ηp2 = .175). Bonferroni comparison tests showed that the motivational self-talk group had a higher error rate in the noise distraction condition than the quiet condition (p = .031), participants who used instructional self-talk had a higher error rate in the noise distraction condition compared to the quiet condition (p = .003), and the control group did not demonstrate a significant difference in error rate between the quiet and noise distraction conditions (p = .601) (see Fig 3B). Descriptive statistics are provided in Table 3.

Pupil diameter

The assumption of sphericity for the within-subjects factor was met based on the result of the Mauchly’s sphericity test.

The 2 × 3 RMANOVA revealed a significant main effect of Condition on pupil diameter (F (1, 36) = 78.21, p < .001, ηp2 = .685). Post-hoc comparisons revealed that the pupil diameter was larger in the noise distraction condition (p < .001). However, there was not a significant main effect of Group (F (2, 36) = 2.23, p = .110, ηp2 = .110). In addition, there was not a significant Condition × Group interaction (F (2, 36) = 1.09, p = .346, ηp2 = .057) either (Fig 3C). Descriptive statistics are provided in Table 3.

Discussion

This study explored the effect of noise distraction on attentional control and the moderating effect of self-talk. Two experiments were conducted, the Stroop paradigm was used in Study 1 to demonstrate the detrimental effect of noise distraction on attentional control. Although Study 2 used the Antisaccade paradigm to further demonstrate that noise distraction can also impair AC in basketball players, failed to demonstrate all kinds of self-talk strategy facilitate AC. These results fully supported hypothesis1(i.e., noise distraction weakens AC level). It demonstrated how noise distraction, in line with attentional control theory, altered the equilibrium between goal-directed (top-down) and stimulus-directed (bottom-up) attention systems. Noise distraction made participants preferred to allocate attentional resources to external and irrelevant stimuli, which in turn affects attentional control, showing that the balance between goal-directed and stimulus-directed attention systems is key to affecting AC [41]. One indicator of cognitive load is pupil diameter, which was significantly higher in the noise distraction condition than in the quiet condition. This finding suggests that noise distraction not only increases bottom-up processing, but also cognitive load, which in turn impairs AC [8].

However, it can be concluded that hypothesis 2 was only partially supported, as evidenced by the observed differences in antisaccade performance between the motivational self-talk group and the instructional self-talk and control groups. Specifically, the antisaccade error rate of the motivational self-talk group was worse than that of the other two groups. This seems to contradict previous studies on the benefits of self-talk for cognitive function [24]. Participants who underwent a self-talk intervention performed better in the old “pong” game (i.e., a task reflected attention ability) compared to control group under distracting condition [22]. In addition, Gregersen et al. (2017) demonstrated that contrary to the control group, participants who used self-talk in ego depletion state performed better on the visual test in terms of the proportion of correctly responses, and they demonstrated shorter reaction times on both the visual and the auditory tests [35]. Galanis et al. (2021) further investigated the relation between self-talk and attention via the Vienna Test System, the results suggest that self-talk benefits the attention functions and support postulations for an attentional interpretation of the facilitating effects of self-talk strategies on task performance [42]. However, the above studies failed to distinguish between motivational self-talk and instructional self-talk, and referred to them collectively as “self-talk”. This may make it difficult to directly compare their findings to the present research, and it would be challenging to determine which type of self-talk was responsible for the observed effect. Therefore, the present research may contribute to a better understanding of the distinct effects of motivational and instructional self-talk on AC.

Ariely et al. (2009) conducted three experiments and found that very high incentives could led to a decrement in performance than moderate incentives [43]. Mobbs et al. (2009) further explained the relationship between motivation and performance through excessive drive and arousal (i.e., overmotivation theories) [44]. In this study, they presented incentive-dependent performance decline in a reward-pursuit task and participants had lower success rates in capturing a high valuable reward in a computer maze [44]. It indicated that high motivation from reward can impair performance even in a simple motor task and can also lead to a narrow focus on achieving the desired outcome at the expense of other important factors, such as skill development and enjoyment of the activity. Neuroimage results revealed that more activation of ventral midbrain which associated with incentive motivation and reward responding when the number of near-misses associated with high reward is coming [44]. Analysis in conjunction with pupil diameter revealed that using motivational self-talk did not result in higher cognitive load for participants. Therefore, the higher level of achievement motivation among the athlete group and the increased motivation level via motivational self-talk may be the reason why participants who used motivational self-talk performed worse in AC [45]. Moreover, the use of motivational self-talk was accompanied by high error rates in both quiet and noise distraction conditions, and this negative effect was more pronounced in the high cognitive load caused by the noise distraction. This may be due to the fact that high motivation is often accompanied by a specific action tendency, such as specialising in the pursuit of a particular goal, which in turn reduces attentional breadth [46, 47]. Breadth of attention is an important factor in the Antisaccade task because it reflects an individual’s ability to maintain attentional focus on the central fixation point while also monitoring the periphery of their visual field for the appearance of the target stimulus. This requires individuals to have a broad attentional focus and the ability to suppress distractions that may interfere with their task performance. In addition, high motivation, whether it is approaching motivation or avoiding motivation, can affect cognitive flexibility. For instance, even with controlled arousal, high motivation has been shown to increase reaction time in shifting tasks [48]. Cognitive flexibility is also an important factor for AC, with individuals who possess higher cognitive flexibility tending to perform better on AC [49]. At last, athletes generally have a higher level of motivation than the general population, which is one of their special characteristics [50, 51]. In conclusion, one possible reason why basketball players who used motivational self-talk performed worse in AC than other groups could be the combination of their pre-existing high motivation as athletes and the added high motivation from motivational self-talk, which may have resulted in a decrease in AC.

Motivational self-talk and effort instruction (i.e., an instruction that prompts participants to try harder in the current trial) share many similarities and have the common goal of improving motivation and performance. Specifically, effort instruction resulted in a global speed-up of responses, while the error rate is higher than stander condition in short foreperiod (FP), and motivational self-talk also increased the error rate in Antisaccade task [52]. Notably, both the short FP and the interval between “ready” (the signal of starting self-talk) and fixation point (the signal of starting the Antisaccade task) in the Antisaccade task are 1000ms. Therefore, we assume that the results of present study partially confirm that motivational self-talk in short FP hampered the precise control of the motor-system components that are decisive for performance [5254].

The results from the descriptive statistics showed that individuals had less antisaccade errors than motivational self-talk group and control group when using instructional self-talk in quiet condition (although failing to reach a statistically significant difference). This result is consisted with previous studies and suggests that to some extent instructional self-talk has a facilitating effect on AC. It is possible that instructional self-talk is more effective for fine tasks than motivational self-talk, while motivational self-talk is more effective for gross tasks, which may mean that in terms of cognitive tasks, motivational self-talk is directed more towards perseverative self-control tasks, whereas instructional self-talk is directed more towards inhibitory self-control tasks [24]. Another possibility may be that different self-talk cues led participants to use different strategies when performing the task. According to the Strategic Resource Model, strategic allocation of cognitive resources can be modulated by the type of self-talk [55]. With instructional self-talk facilitating a more efficient distribution of attentional capacity compare to motivational self-talk. These findings underscore the significance of tailoring self-talk strategies in alignment with the strategic-resource framework to optimize cognitive performance in specific tasks [56].

Cognitive load is also an important factor that affects attentional control [9, 10, 57, 58]. The results of Study 2 demonstrated that noise distraction significantly increased cognitive load and reduced the saccade error rate. However, it is worth noting that, based on descriptive statistics, individuals had the highest cognitive load when using instructional self-talk. Nonetheless, under quiet conditions, the saccade error rate of the instructional self-talk group was significantly lower than that of the motivational self-talk group. Therefore, it is particularly important to consider the valence of cognitive load, that is, whether the increase in cognitive load is related to threatening stimuli. If the increase in cognitive load is brought by task-related stimuli, it may not affect the balance between attentional control systems. However, if it is brought by internal or external threatening stimuli, it may disrupt the balance between goal-directed and stimulus-directed attentional systems, thereby affecting AC.

In conclusion, a model integrating noise distraction, self-talk and AC is proposed. Noise distraction increases cognitive load and influence attentional control, with self-talk playing a modulatory role. Improper use of self-talk can disrupt the balance of attentional systems, diminish attentional control, and ultimately impact athletic performance, regardless of noise distraction (Fig 4).

Fig 4. ND-ST-AC integration model.

Fig 4

ND: noise distraction; ST: self-talk; AC: attentional control. Noise distraction increases cognitive load and affects AC, which is modulated by self-talk. Improper use of self-talk can disrupt AC system balance and thus affect task performance.

This study is innovative in terms of ACT. First, by focusing on auditory stimuli from external sources, this study supports and advances the attentional control theory while also generating fresh ideas for future attentional control theory research. Second, the present study provides guidance on the use of self-talk as a psychological skill for basketball players to maintain AC under distraction conditions.

There are several limitations in this study. First, lack of measurement of control variables such as motivation and state anxiety. According to ACT, individuals with high anxiety often improve motivation as a compensation [41]. However, anxiety and motivation were not measured and controlled effectively in this study, and although participants did not report the presence of anxiety in the post-experimental interview, it does not mean that anxiety did not necessarily occur, and it is recommended that variables such as state anxiety, trait anxiety and motivation should be monitored in subsequent studies. Secondly, although the sample size met the requirements of G*power and the number of participants per group was higher than some of the self-talk intervention studies with athletes [22, 31, 59, 60], there is still a need to include a larger sample for empirical studies in the future to ensure stability and reproducibility of the results. Thirdly, due to an oversight in the experimental design and Stroop task programming, we included data only from the incongruent condition. As a result, the results of Study 1 do not capture the complete Stroop effect as traditionally calculated. Future studies would benefit from incorporating data from both congruent and incongruent conditions to offer a more comprehensive understanding of noise distraction’s impact on the Stroop task. Finally, the participants in Study 2 were all male basketball players and there was a lack of female players, therefore caution is needed when extrapolating the findings to females. It is advised that female athletes be included in order to examine any potential gender-based differences.

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Data Availability

All relevant data are within the manuscript and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

The author(s) received no specific funding for this work.

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This study explored the effects of noise distraction on attentional control in basketball players and the moderating effects of self-talk. I think this study has practical implications. Firstly, the attentional control theory was verified in a specific sport (basketball). Secondly, the results were validated using eye-movement equipment. Finally, no positive results were found is insightful, but the authors do not discuss it in depth.

Specific comments:

Authors need to enhance the writing norms:

1. Line numbers should be added throughout.

2. Space before and after the symbols ±, =, etc.

3. English writing should be left-aligned, not end-to-end.

4. Pay attention to the tenses.

5. Note the subject of a sentence.

6. Please distinguish between full and half corner punctuation, e.g., for the Pupil diameter section of P16, please use a half corner comma.

About abstract:

The abstract should include purpose, methods, results, and conclusions.

1. There is too much "purpose". Consider stating that basketball players' attentional control affects performance, especially in the presence of noise distractions. Improving attentional control is therefore necessary. Self-talk is a psychological skill that enhances motor and cognitive performance and may improve attentional control. Thus, our study investigated the effects of noise distractions on attentional control and the moderating effect of self-talk.

2. Missing "Method", consider adding: (a) How does noise distractions operate? (b) What did the Stroop task and the Antisaccade task measure respectively? (c) Were instrumental and motivational self-talk used in each experiment?

3. The "conclusions" are not sufficiently illuminating. The current conclusions merely repeat the results. And your study did not find these findings.

About introduction:

1. The first paragraph is too long. Consider stopping after the introduction of attentional control theory and discussing the effect of noise on attentional control in the next paragraph.

2. One of the innovative points of this study is to examine the effect of noise distractions on attentional control and the moderating effect of self-talk among basketball players. Therefore, there is a need to emphasise the specificities of basketball, such as where does basketball need to focus attention? What distractions need to be inhibited more than anything else?

3. d values in italics, spaces before and after the “ = ”; what is the exact value of the 95% CI for the meta-analysis of Szalma et al. (2011)?

4. The paragraph introducing the quiet eye is oddly placed, splitting the review of the effects of noise distractions on attentional control. It could be considered for placement after the literature (Derakshan et al., 2009).

5. Note that the key words noise interference, noise disturbance, noise distraction should not be substituted at random.

6. Regarding the mechanisms by which self-talk affects motor performance, at citation points [22-26], it should be emphasized or summarized that the mechanisms are improvements in attention rather than listed theories and research findings.

7. "Hase et al. (2019) found motivated self-talk to be better due to participants' greater willingness to perceive threat as a challenge." What is the illumination of this finding for your research? One might consider adding: the study suggests that whether participants perceive the task as a threat or a challenge influences the performance of self-talk types on fine motor control.

8. The mechanism by which self-talk improves basketball performance needs to be highlighted. And it needs to be stressed that attentional control is key.

9. Please explain why two paradigms are used for study 1 and study 2?

10. The introduction needs to explain what can be examined in study 1 and study 2 respectively.

11. Is “Participant” a normal university student?

12. Hypotheses 2 and 3 should count as one hypothesis: self-talk moderates the effect of noise distractions on attentional control. Specifically, with noise distractions, only instrumental self-talk group improved attentional control compared to the other groups.

13. The use of different participants and different paradigms made the logic of the two experiments incoherent. And as previous studies have demonstrated that noise can affect attentional control, study 1 alone can be considered as a basis for testing the validity of the material.

Regarding study 1:

1. Are the participants normal university students? Need to specify.

2. Lowercase z in Hz.

3. Clarification is needed on how the results of the Stroop task can be interpreted. For example, in the inconsistent condition, shorter response times indicate stronger inhibition and smaller error rates indicate stronger inhibition.

4. Is the validity of noise material tested?

5. Instead of “greater”, use “more” to describe the size of a number in Data analysis.

6. Why use data within 2 standard deviations instead of 3?

7. For images and tables please use the insert form [insert figure 1], then the images and tables at the end of the manuscript.

8. Please use the 3-wire table

Regarding study 2:

1. Why did study 1 and study 2 use two different paradigms?

2. Is the qualified rate equal to the correct rate?

3. Were the sample sizes of study 1 and study 2 tested a priori power by G*power?

4. In Procedure (Page 13), it should be “study 1” and not “experiment 1”.

5. Stress assessment is a variable that the researcher should control for.

6. “The rest of group” can be replaced with “other groups” in the P15 manipulation check.

7. Note the writing specification, (F(1, 36) = 2.20, p =.147, ηp2 = .058), these data can be enclosed in parentheses.

8. Antisaccade error rate section, the reader is more interested in knowing the difference between motivational and instrumental self-talk in the presence of noise distractions. Rather than just reporting significant results, non-significant results may sometimes be more meaningful.

9. Has consideration been given to setting some additional variables as covariates to control for the interference? For example, the Stressor Appraisal Scale (Schneider, 2008) was used to measure whether participants perceived the task as stressful or challenging.

10. Please italicise statistics, e.g., M, SD.

11. There are no table notes in Table 2. The abbreviation of each table must be indicated so that its meaning is clear when it appears independently.

12. Please standardise the font for captions and notes on tables and images.

13. The relationship between quiet eye and eye movement data needs to be explained.

About discussion:

1. “However only to a limited extent were hypotheses 2 and 3 supported.” is not quite the appropriate sentence, because it is not supported.

2. “Specifically, while there was a significant main effect of self-talk on antisaccade error rate, post-hoc comparisons revealed that antisaccade error rate of motivational self-talk group was significantly higher than control group (p =.028) and instructional self-talk group (p =.014).” should be in the results section, not the discussion section.

3. These studies “Galanis et al. (2018), Gregersen et al. (2017), Galanis et al. (2021)” can only show that self-talk improves attentional control. You need to discern why your study did not find that self-talk improves attentional control. You need to clarify the differences between previous study and your study, which may be that the task is different in difficulty, or that certain confounding variables have not been controlled for.

4. The focus needs to be on “self-talk as an internal disturbance”.

5. Is high motivation equal to motivational self-talk? I think high motivation is the outcome and motivational self-talk is the method. I do not think that the literature that exemplifies how high motivation impairs attentional control proves that motivated self-talk is bad. If you think my understanding is incorrect, please illustrate with examples of literature.

6. The strength of your study is the addition of eye-movement data to prove your research hypothesis, but this aspect of the explanation is rarely mentioned in the discussion and needs to be added.

7. “Second, the present study provides guidance on the use of self-talk as a psychological skill for basketball players to improve AC”. Your study did not prove this, but only found that self-talk impairs attentional control. So, you should stress that self-talk can be a distraction and in practice you need to be aware that not all mental skills are applicable.

8. I see that your limitations mentioned not satisfying G*power, but in the methods section also mention how much sample size should be used for the calculation using G*power. In addition, you can perform a post hoc power calculations to determine the power.

Reviewer #2: p.5. The authors are advised to add in the self-talk literature that there is empirical evidence that self-talk strategies are effective in enhancing sport/task performance through systematic (Tod et al., 2011) and meta-analytic (Hatzigeorgiadis et al., 2011) reviews. Also regarding the matching hypotheses the authors are advised to consider two more matching hypotheses; one involving the setting by self-talk type matching and one involving the learning stage by self-talk type matching. Regarding the former, motivational self-talk seems more appropriate in competitive settings, whereas instructional self-talk seems more appropriate in training settings(Hatzigeorgiadis, Galanis, et al., 2014). Regarding the latter, instructional self-talk should be more effective for novel tasks, or tasks at the early stages of learning, whereas motivational self-talk should be more effective for well-learned tasks, or tasks at the automatic stage of performance (Zourbanos, Hatzigeorgiadis, Bardas, & Theodorakis, 2013).

p.7. Although in the introduction the authors write also about motivational self-talk in the hypotheses motivational self-talk is not clearly reported.

p.8 Why the authors didn’t use control group in the experimental design. Can this added in the limitation section?

p.10. Are the participants in experiment 2 participated also in experiment 1?

p.11. Have the authors tested the assumptions of the mixed design?

p.13. Why did you use these self-talk cues? How did you select them? The authors are advised to give more details about the self-talk cues selection.

p.13. Regarding the manipulation check, did you ask the participants if they said something else except of the instructional or motivational self-talk cues?

p. 14. Have the authors tested the assumptions of 2x3 repeated measures anova?

p.15. Please report the results of the assumptions of 2x3 Manova?

p.16. I suggest the authors to report for all the analyses performed the appropriate assumptions.

p.22. The authors are advised to include applied implications to their discussion section as this would help coaches but also sport psychologists to choose the right self-talk cues for their athletes.

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PLoS One. 2023 Sep 29;18(9):e0292321. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0292321.r002

Author response to Decision Letter 0


11 May 2023

Response to reviewers

Dear Editor and Reviewers,

We would like to thank the reviewers for carefully reading our manuscript. We appreciate the comments and suggestions. In the following, we include a point-by-point response to the comments from each reviewer. In the revised manuscript, all the changes have been highlighted in red.

Reviewer #1: Comments to the Author:

General comments:

This study explored the effects of noise distraction on attentional control in basketball players and the moderating effects of self-talk. I think this study has practical implications. Firstly, the attentional control theory was verified in a specific sport (basketball). Secondly, the results were validated using eye-movement equipment. Finally, no positive results were found is insightful, but the authors do not discuss it in depth.

Specific comments:

Authors need to enhance the writing norms:

1. Line numbers should be added throughout.

Thank you for your suggestion. However, I did submit a manuscript with the line numbers, maybe the version you reviewed doesn't have the line numbers.

2. Space before and after the symbols ±, =, etc.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have added the space around all symbols.

3. English writing should be left-aligned, not end-to-end.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have changed the text into left-aligned.

4. Pay attention to the tenses.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have reviewed the tenses paragraph by paragraph and marked the changes in red.

5. Note the subject of a sentence.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have changed the grammar errors and marked the changes in red.

6. Please distinguish between full and half corner punctuation, e.g., for the Pupil diameter section of P16, please use a half corner comma.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have changed the mis-usings and marked the changes in red.

About abstract:

The abstract should include purpose, methods, results, and conclusions.

1. There is too much "purpose". Consider stating that basketball players' attentional control affects performance, especially in the presence of noise distractions. Improving attentional control is therefore necessary. Self-talk is a psychological skill that enhances motor and cognitive performance and may improve attentional control. Thus, our study investigated the effects of noise distractions on attentional control and the moderating effect of self-talk.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have removed redundant parts to decrease the repetition of the "purpose" and added a sentence that illustrates how noise from competitive conditions can affect the attentional control (AC) and performance of basketball players. Please see the revised abstract for details.

2. Missing "Method", consider adding: (a) How does noise distractions operate? (b) What did the Stroop task and the Antisaccade task measure respectively? (c) Were instrumental and motivational self-talk used in each experiment?

Thank you for your suggestion. (a) In the abstract, I have mentioned that participants were required to wear earphones to receive noise distraction; (b) Both the Stroop and Antisaccade task are means of measuring AC, as I mentioned in the last paragraph of “Introduction”(p.8): “AC will be assessed using the Stroop task and Antisaccade task, two well-established paradigms for investigating AC.” Hence, I added “In Study 1, the effects of noise distraction on AC were initially demonstrated” in abstract; (c) the self-talk interventions only used in study2. I think “In Study 1, the effects of noise distraction on AC were initially demonstrated” this sentence can not only tell readers what the task was measuring, but also tell them that self-talk was not used in Study1.

3. The "conclusions" are not sufficiently illuminating. The current conclusions merely repeat the results. And your study did not find these findings.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have rewritten the conclusion according the results: “In conclusion, noise distraction increases cognitive load and reduces AC. For basketball players, the implementation of instructional self-talk in quiet condition proved to be more effective in enhancing AC. However, the utilization of motivational self-talk in noise distraction condition diminished AC level.”

About introduction:

1. The first paragraph is too long. Consider stopping after the introduction of attentional control theory and discussing the effect of noise on attentional control in the next paragraph.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have started a new paragraph to discuss effect of noise on AC.

2. One of the innovative points of this study is to examine the effect of noise distractions on attentional control and the moderating effect of self-talk among basketball players. Therefore, there is a need to emphasise the specificities of basketball, such as where does basketball need to focus attention? What distractions need to be inhibited more than anything else?

Thank you for your suggestion. I have added three major information in p.5, the first one is illustrating two dimensions in sport; the second discusses what needs to be focused on in basketball, and the third explains what distractions need to be avoided in basketball. Please refer to the revised introduction for more details.

3. d values in italics, spaces before and after the “ = ”; what is the exact value of the 95% CI for the meta-analysis of Szalma et al. (2011)?

Thank you for your suggestion. I have changed “d” in italics and added space around “ = ”, plus, I have added the exact value of the 95% CI . Detail in “mean effect size across the 191 cognitive tasks was d = -0.34 (95%CI = -0.42 to -0.25) with the highest effect size for high loudness, short duration, d = -0.68, (95%CI = -0.96 to -0.40).”

4. The paragraph introducing the quiet eye is oddly placed, splitting the review of the effects of noise distractions on attentional control. It could be considered for placement after the literature (Derakshan et al., 2009).

Thank you for your suggestion. I have moved the paragraph which introduces the relation between quiet eye and performance after the first paragraph. Surprisingly, it seems to have made the logical chain more fluent. Thank you for this suggestion again.

5. Note that the key words noise interference, noise disturbance, noise distraction should not be substituted at random.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have replaced all “noise interference” and “noise disturbance” with “noise distraction”.

6. Regarding the mechanisms by which self-talk affects motor performance, at citation points [22-26], it should be emphasized or summarized that the mechanisms are improvements in attention rather than listed theories and research findings.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have summarized the mechanisms by which self-talk affects motor performance through attention and added this sentence after introducing the research findings: “In summary, it can be concluded that self-talk affects performance by AC, and the correct use of self-talk facilitates the dominance of the goal-directed attention system, leading to AC on the task at hand.”

7. "Hase et al. (2019) found motivated self-talk to be better due to participants' greater willingness to perceive threat as a challenge." What is the illumination of this finding for your research? One might consider adding: the study suggests that whether participants perceive the task as a threat or a challenge influences the performance of self-talk types on fine motor control.

Thank you for your suggestion. This sentence is helpful to better illustrate the illumination of this finding for my research, and I have added it (details in p.7).

8. The mechanism by which self-talk improves basketball performance needs to be highlighted. And it needs to be stressed that attentional control is key.

Thank you for your suggestion. At the beginning of our discussion, I hope we could build a consensus is that “key” means the most important thing. As I responded in suggestion 6, I have added description that self-talk affects performance by attention. However, there are lots of aspects that self-talk affects performance. I acknowledge that AC is the key in the present research, but other factors (e.g., motivation, motor execution) are equally important to basketball performance. Therefore, I highlighted the mechanisms by which self-talk affects motor performance through attention, but stressing that AC is the “key” of performance may not be necessary.

9. Please explain why two paradigms are used for study 1 and study 2?

Thank you for your question. The reason why used two paradigms separately is avoiding common method biases. If I used the same task to measure AC in two studies could potentially lead to common method biases. This may lead to similar or correlated measurement errors that are specific to the task. Using different tasks to measure AC in two studies can help reduce the impact of common method biases.

10. The introduction needs to explain what can be examined in study 1 and study 2 respectively.

Thank you for your suggestion. Study1 and Study2 both examined AC level and I mentioned it in the last paragraph of Introduction: “AC will be assessed using the Stroop task and Antisaccade task, two well-established paradigms for investigating AC [8, 31, 32]. Study 1 will measure the effect of noise distraction on AC via the Stroop task, and the Study 2 will further examine the effects of noise distraction on basketball players and the moderating effect of self-talk via the Antisaccade task.”

11. Is “Participant” a normal university student?

Thank you for your question. The “participants” in hypothesis refer to all participants in Study 1 and Study 2. The participants in Study 1 are normal university students, and participants in Study 2 are basketball players, and I hypothesized that their AC will be affect by noise distraction, so I call them “participants” collectively.

12. Hypotheses 2 and 3 should count as one hypothesis: self-talk moderates the effect of noise distractions on attentional control. Specifically, with noise distractions, only instrumental self-talk group improved attentional control compared to the other groups.

Thank you for your suggestion. Hypotheses 2 and 3 are indeed redundant expressions, I have changed the original hypothesis as your suggestion. Please see the last paragraph of introduction for more details.

13. The use of different participants and different paradigms made the logic of the two experiments incoherent. And as previous studies have demonstrated that noise can affect attentional control, study 1 alone can be considered as a basis for testing the validity of the material.

Thank you for your suggestion. As I responded in Suggestion 9 and 10, the Stroop and Antisaccade task are well established paradigms for testing AC, and the purpose of using different paradigms is avoiding the common method biases. Therefore, using different paradigms may not made the logic of the two experiments incoherent. However, you are totally correct about considering Study 1 as a basis for testing the validity of the material, and this is the most important reason why I designed it.

Regarding study 1:

1. Are the participants normal university students? Need to specify.

Thank you for your question. Yes, they are normal university students. I have specified this in the part of participants.

2. Lowercase z in Hz.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have changed the mis-usings.

3. Clarification is needed on how the results of the Stroop task can be interpreted. For example, in the inconsistent condition, shorter response times indicate stronger inhibition and smaller error rates indicate stronger inhibition.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have added the interpretation of indicators in p.10.

4. Is the validity of noise material tested?

Thank you for your question. As I responded in Suggestion 13, the purpose of Study 1 is testing the validity of noise material. The error rate was higher under noise distraction condition, it indicated that the material is effective.

5. Instead of “greater”, use “more” to describe the size of a number in Data analysis.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have replaced “greater” with “more”.

6. Why use data within 2 standard deviations instead of 3?

Thank you for your suggestion. There are two reasons why I consider 2 and -2 as thresholds. First, a z-score threshold of 2 is more commonly used than 3 generally, because using a z-score threshold of 3 would result in a more conservative criterion for identifying outliers, as it would require data points to be more extreme than with a z-score threshold of 2. Using data between 2 and -2 z-score can increase the reliability of statistical analyses by reducing the influence of extreme values on the results. Second, there may be situations where a z-score threshold of 3 is appropriate, such as when the data are highly skewed. However, the distribution of data is normal, so the use of 3 as threshold is not considered.

7. For images and tables please use the insert form [insert figure 1], then the images and tables at the end of the manuscript.

Thank you for your suggestion. However, I insert images and tables follow the “PLOS Manuscript Body Formatting Guidelines”.

8. Please use the 3-wire table

Thank you for your suggestion. However, the formal of tables follows “PLOS Manuscript Body Formatting Guidelines”.

Regarding study 2:

1. Why did study 1 and study 2 use two different paradigms?

Thank you for your question. I have answered this question in suggestion 9 and 13.

2. Is the qualified rate equal to the correct rate?

Thank you for your question. Yes, the qualified rate is equal to the correct rate.

3. Were the sample sizes of study 1 and study 2 tested a priori power by G*power?

Thank you for your question. The sample sizes were calculated before the experiments, and the relevant information has been added to the "participants" section. Specifically, 34 participants were included in Study 1 and 36 participants were included in Study 2, and all sample sizes were met.

4. In Procedure (Page 13), it should be “study 1” and not “experiment 1”.

Thank you for your question. I have changed this mistake and marked it as red.

5. Stress assessment is a variable that the researcher should control for.

Thank you for your feedback and suggestion. While we did not control for stress in this study, we acknowledge that stress can be an important factor to consider in present research. In hindsight, we agree that controlling for stress could have strengthened the internal validity of our study. Therefore, the first limitation we proposed in discussion is lacking measurements of control variables.

In future research, we plan to control for stress by implementing a stress induction procedure or by measuring participants' stress levels prior to the experiment. We will also report any stress-related variables in our study to better understand how stress may have influenced our results. Thank you for your valuable feedback and I will make sure to address this issue in future research.

6. “The rest of group” can be replaced with “other groups” in the P15 manipulation check.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have replaced “the rest of groups” with “other groups” in p.17.

7. Note the writing specification, (F(1, 36) = 2.20, p =.147, ηp2 = .058), these data can be enclosed in parentheses.

Thank you for your suggestion. I agree that enclosing these data in parentheses would improve the clarity and readability of the manuscript. I will make the necessary changes accordingly in the revised version of the manuscript.

8. Antisaccade error rate section, the reader is more interested in knowing the difference between motivational and instrumental self-talk in the presence of noise distractions. Rather than just reporting significant results, non-significant results may sometimes be more meaningful.

Thank you for your suggestion. I agree that this is an important point to clarify for the reader and I believe that it is still important to report this finding as it provides important information for future research in this area. I will revise this section to include this information. Please see more details in p.19.

9. Has consideration been given to setting some additional variables as covariates to control for the interference? For example, the Stressor Appraisal Scale (Schneider, 2008) was used to measure whether participants perceived the task as stressful or challenging.

Thank you for the suggestion to set additional variables as covariates to control for interference. However, due to limitations in our study design, I am unable to collect data on those variables. As a result, I am not able to include them as covariates in our analysis. I acknowledge that this may be a limitation of our study and will address it in future research.

10. Please italicise statistics, e.g., M, SD.

Thank you for your suggestion. I agree that italicizing statistics such as M and SD will enhance the clarity and readability of the manuscript, and I have made the necessary changes accordingly.

11. There are no table notes in Table 2. The abbreviation of each table must be indicated so that its meaning is clear when it appears independently.

Thank you for your comment regarding Table 2. I appreciate your feedback and recognize the importance of indicating the meaning of abbreviations used in the table. I have added table notes to clarify the meaning of abbreviations and improve the readability of the table.

12. Please standardise the font for captions and notes on tables and images.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have revised our manuscript to ensure that all captions and notes have the same font size and type.

13. The relationship between quiet eye and eye movement data needs to be explained.

Thank you for your question. Although quiet eye and eye movements in the antisaccade task are both indicators measure AC, thy are two different concepts related to eye behavior.

Quiet eye refers to the final fixation of the eyes on a specific target before initiating a motor action, such as throwing a ball or shooting a target in sports. During the quiet eye phase, the athlete's gaze is fixed on a specific location, and this gaze fixation is associated with improved performance accuracy.

On the other hand, eye movements in the antisaccade task refer to a cognitive task that requires inhibiting a reflexive saccade toward a suddenly appearing visual stimulus and instead making a voluntary eye movement to the opposite side. The task requires inhibitory control and cognitive flexibility, and performance on this task is used as an index of executive function.

Therefore, the key difference between quiet eye and eye movements in the antisaccade task is that the former refers to a gaze fixation behavior associated with improved motor performance accuracy, while the latter refers to a cognitive task requiring inhibitory control and cognitive flexibility.

About discussion:

1. “However only to a limited extent were hypotheses 2 and 3 supported.” is not quite the appropriate sentence, because it is not supported.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have changed another expression based on new hypothesis 2 that according to Suggestion 12. Please see more details in p.20.

2. “Specifically, while there was a significant main effect of self-talk on antisaccade error rate, post-hoc comparisons revealed that antisaccade error rate of motivational self-talk group was significantly higher than control group (p =.028) and instructional self-talk group (p =.014).” should be in the results section, not the discussion section.

Thank you for your suggestion. I agree that the information regarding the significant main effect of self-talk on antisaccade error rate and the post-hoc comparisons should be included in the Results section rather than the Discussion section. I have revised the manuscript accordingly to reflect this change. Please see more details in p.18 and p.21.

3. These studies “Galanis et al. (2018), Gregersen et al. (2017), Galanis et al. (2021)” can only show that self-talk improves attentional control. You need to discern why your study did not find that self-talk improves attentional control. You need to clarify the differences between previous study and your study, which may be that the task is different in difficulty, or that certain confounding variables have not been controlled for.

Thank you for your valuable feedback. I agree that it is important to clarify the differences between our study and previous studies that have found self-talk to improve attentional control. I have added two sentences in p.22 to address this reason. While it is difficult to directly compare the task difficulties between studies, our study was unique in that we distinguished between motivational and instructional self-talk interventions. This may have contributed to the partially different findings compared to previous studies. Thank you again for your helpful comments.

4. The focus needs to be on “self-talk as an internal disturbance”.

Thank you for your suggestion. I apologize for misapplying the interpretation of self-talk as an internal disturbance in the present research. It is important to note that self-talk can be either positive or negative, and its impact on an individual's mental state and performance can depend on the content and context of the self-talk. While some types of negative self-talk, such as self-criticism or rumination, can contribute to feelings of distress or inner disturbance, the types of self-talk used in the present research were motivational and instructional self-talk, which are typically viewed as positive forms of self-talk.

Regarding the reference I quoted, Brinthaupt (2019) suggested that although self-talk frequency is positively correlated with cognitive disruption, the use of self-talk is generally viewed as a self-regulatory tool. Additionally, Ariel (2022) found that some individuals may view self-talk as an inner disturbance due to the social stigma associated with it as non-normative behavior in adulthood. However, it is important to recognize that self-talk is a natural and important cognitive process that individuals use to regulate their thoughts and emotions (Ariel, 2022).

Therefore, while self-talk can sometimes be viewed as an internal disturbance, it is not a correct interpretation in the present research. I have deleted this expression from the manuscript, and I appreciate your feedback and guidance in improving the clarity of our interpretation.

5. Is high motivation equal to motivational self-talk? I think high motivation is the outcome and motivational self-talk is the method. I do not think that the literature that exemplifies how high motivation impairs attentional control proves that motivated self-talk is bad. If you think my understanding is incorrect, please illustrate with examples of literature.

Thank you for your question. You are correct that high motivation is an outcome of motivational self-talk, as motivational self-talk tends to increase motivation. In the present research, basketball players who used motivational self-talk performed worse in the Antisaccade task compared to other groups. One possible explanation for this is that the high motivation brought about by self-talk may have influenced attentional control (AC).

First, athletes generally have a higher level of motivation than the general population, which is one of their special characteristics (Giakoni-Ramírez et al., 2022; Šmela et al., 2017).

Second, according to overmotivation theory (also known as Incentive-based theory), people are motivated to engage in certain behaviors or activities because they believe that doing so will lead to a desirable outcome or reward. However, larger and more desirable rewards are more likely to motivate people than smaller or less desirable ones. Overmotivation from rewards can impair performance even in simple motor tasks, and can also lead to a narrow focus on achieving the desired outcome at the expense of other important factors, such as skill development and enjoyment of the activity (Mobbs et al., 2009; Short & Sorrentino, 1986).

Third, there is evidence to suggest that high approach-motivation reduces the breadth of attention (Gable & Harmon-Jones, 2008). Breadth of attention is an important factor in the Antisaccade task because it reflects an individual's ability to maintain attentional focus on the central fixation point while also monitoring the periphery of their visual field for the appearance of the target stimulus. This requires individuals to have a broad attentional focus and the ability to suppress distractions that may interfere with their task performance.

In conclusion, one possible reason that basketball players who used motivational self-talk performed worse in AC than other groups is the conjunction of high motivation in athletes and high motivation from self-talk interventions, which may have resulted in a decrease in AC.

Your question has helped me provide a better explanation in the discussion section regarding this phenomenon. Please see p.24 for more details.

6. The strength of your study is the addition of eye-movement data to prove your research hypothesis, but this aspect of the explanation is rarely mentioned in the discussion and needs to be added.

Thank you for your suggestion. The antisaccade task has some advantages compared to the Stroop task or traditional attentional control tasks. Firstly, the task requires a high degree of cognitive control, as it involves inhibiting a prepotent response (looking towards a peripheral target) and instead generating a saccade in the opposite direction. This makes it a more ecologically valid measure of attentional control than traditional tasks, as it more closely reflects the types of inhibitory processes required in real-world situations where we need to inhibit automatic responses. Second, the antisaccade task has been shown to be a reliable and valid measure of attentional control, with good test-retest reliability and sensitivity to individual differences in attentional control. the two core indicators of the antisaccade task are saccade latency and saccade error rate, which correspond to the reaction time and error rate of key presses in the Stroop task, other eye movement data (except pupil diameter) is meaningless to us. Pupil diameter is an additional indicator to measure cognitive load.

However, I completely agree that discussing pupil diameter data is an essential aspect of our research, which adds strength to our study and proves our research hypothesis. I have added related discussion, please see p.24 to p.25 for more details

7. “Second, the present study provides guidance on the use of self-talk as a psychological skill for basketball players to improve AC”. Your study did not prove this, but only found that self-talk impairs attentional control. So, you should stress that self-talk can be a distraction and in practice you need to be aware that not all mental skills are applicable.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have changed the expression into “Second, the present study …… to maintain AC under distraction conditions.” And in the final of Discussion, I proposed ND-ST-AC Integration Model to better illustrate the results. Please see more details in p.25 and Fig 4.

8. I see that your limitations mentioned not satisfying G*power, but in the methods section also mention how much sample size should be used for the calculation using G*power. In addition, you can perform a post hoc power calculations to determine the power.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have included the information related to the sample size calculated by G*power. Furthermore, after performing a post hoc power analysis, Power (1-β err prob) = 0.768. This indicates that the current study has a relatively high probability of detecting a true effect or relationship, provided that such an effect or relationship exists in the population and the statistical test is appropriately designed and executed.

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Brinthaupt, T. M. (2019). Individual Differences in Self-Talk Frequency: Social Isolation and Cognitive Disruption. Frontiers in Psychology, 10(1088). https://doi.org/10.3389/fpsyg.2019.01088

Gable, P. A., & Harmon-Jones, E. (2008). Approach-Motivated Positive Affect Reduces Breadth of Attention. Psychological Science, 19(5), 476-482. https://doi.org/10.1111/j.1467-9280.2008.02112.x

Giakoni-Ramírez, F., Merellano-Navarro, E., & Duclos-Bastías, D. (2022). Professional Esports Players: Motivation and Physical Activity Levels. International Journal of Environmental Research and Public Health, 19(4), 2256. https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph19042256

Mobbs, D., Hassabis, D., Seymour, B., Marchant, J. L., Weiskopf, N., Dolan, R. J., & Frith, C. D. (2009). Choking on the Money: Reward-Based Performance Decrements Are Associated With Midbrain Activity. Psychological Science, 20(8), 955-962. https://doi.org/10.1111/j.1467-9280.2009.02399.x

Short, J.-A. C., & Sorrentino, R. M. (1986). Achievement, affiliation, and group incentives: A test of the overmotivation hypothesis. Motivation and Emotion, 10(2), 115-131. https://doi.org/10.1007/BF00992251

Šmela, P., Pačesová, P., Kraček, S., & Hájovský, D. (2017). Performance Motivation of Elite Athletes, Recreational Athletes and Non-Athletes. Acta Facultatis Educationis Physicae Universitatis Comenianae, 57(2), 125-133. https://doi.org/10.1515/afepuc-2017-0012

Reviewer #2: p.5. The authors are advised to add in the self-talk literature that there is empirical evidence that self-talk strategies are effective in enhancing sport/task performance through systematic (Tod et al., 2011) and meta-analytic (Hatzigeorgiadis et al., 2011) reviews. Also regarding the matching hypotheses the authors are advised to consider two more matching hypotheses; one involving the setting by self-talk type matching and one involving the learning stage by self-talk type matching. Regarding the former, motivational self-talk seems more appropriate in competitive settings, whereas instructional self-talk seems more appropriate in training settings(Hatzigeorgiadis, Galanis, et al., 2014). Regarding the latter, instructional self-talk should be more effective for novel tasks, or tasks at the early stages of learning, whereas motivational self-talk should be more effective for well-learned tasks, or tasks at the automatic stage of performance (Zourbanos, Hatzigeorgiadis, Bardas, & Theodorakis, 2013).

Thank you for your suggestion. We appreciate your input and have revised our paper to include the empirical evidence of the effectiveness of self-talk strategies in enhancing sport/task performance through systematic and meta-analytic reviews (Tod et al., 2011; Hatzigeorgiadis et al., 2011).

While we agree with the two hypotheses you proposed, we would like to clarify that they may not be suitable for the present study due to two specific reasons. First, the condition settings in the present study are quiet and noise distraction conditions, which may not fully match with training and competitive settings. There may be external distractions in the training setting, while the quiet laboratory environment in our study meant that external distractions were well-controlled.

Second, in Study 2, during the practice stage, if the error rate of the first saccade was higher than 20%, a new 20-trial was required until the error rate was less than 20%. This means that all participants in Study 2 had well-learned the purpose of the antisaccade task, and therefore the hypotheses involving the learning stage may not match the present study design.

However, these two hypotheses you proposed were perfect to add to the introduction to better introduce motivational and instructional self-talk, thank you again for your insightful suggestion. Please see more details in p.6 to p.7.

p.7. Although in the introduction the authors write also about motivational self-talk in the hypotheses motivational self-talk is not clearly reported.

Thank you for your suggestion. We have revised the manuscript to better illustrate the hypotheses at the end of Introduction, please see more details in p.9.

p.8 Why the authors didn’t use control group in the experimental design. Can this added in the limitation section?

Thank you for your suggestion. We appreciate your attention to detail and concern regarding our experimental design. We would like to clarify that we did, in fact, use a control group in our study. Participants in the control group performed the same task as the experimental group but did not receive any self-talk intervention. We apologize for any confusion or lack of clarity in our paper that may have led to this misunderstanding. We will make sure to clarify this in the revised manuscript. Thank you for bringing this to our attention.

p.10. Are the participants in experiment 2 participated also in experiment 1?

Thank you for your question. The participants in Experiment 2 did not participate in Experiment 1, as we recruited a new set of participants for each experiment. The participants in Experiment 1 were normal university students, the participants in Experiment 2 were national second-level basketball players. I have clarified this in the revised manuscript

p.11. Have the authors tested the assumptions of the mixed design?

Thank you for your question. A Mauchly's sphericity test was conducted to examine the assumption of sphericity for the within-subjects factor in a mixed design. The result showed that for all variables, the Mauchly's W value was 1.000, indicating that the assumption of sphericity was met. The approximate chi-square value was .000 with 0 degrees of freedom, but the significance level could not be calculated. Therefore, no adjustment was necessary and the traditional F-test could be used to analyze the data.

In conclusion, the assumption of sphericity for the within-subjects factor was met based on the result of the Mauchly's sphericity test.

p.13. Why did you use these self-talk cues? How did you select them? The authors are advised to give more details about the self-talk cues selection.

Thank you for your question. Thank you for your suggestion. We selected the self-talk cues based on the working definition of self-talk (Hardy, 2006) and previous literature (Abdoli et al., 2018; Dali & A. Parnabas, 2018). According to one of definitions from Hardy (2006), self-talk should serve at least two functions: instructional and motivational, for the athlete. Therefore, instructional self-talk cues and motivational self-talk cues were used in the present research.

“I can do it” or “I can” is a commonly used motivational self-talk cue that has been shown to enhance performance among basketball players (Abdoli et al., 2018; Dali & A. Parnabas, 2018).

There are no references about the instructional self-talk cue on the antisaccade task. However, according to Hardy (2006), the performance of relatively fine motor tasks requiring skill, timing, and accuracy was enhanced to a greater extent by instructional self-talk, focusing on the technical aspects of performance, than motivational self-talk. Therefore, “Look at the opposite” is intended to remind participants to look in the opposite direction of the target, which is the goal and technical aspect of the task.

We have added these details to the revised manuscript to provide more clarity on the selection of the self-talk cues.

p.13. Regarding the manipulation check, did you ask the participants if they said

Thank you for your question. We did ask participants after the experiment whether they used any self-talk cues other than the ones provided to them (i.e., "I can do it" for the motivational self-talk group and "look at the opposite" for the instructional self-talk group). None of the participants reported using any other self-talk cues during the task. We have added this information to the manuscript in p.17.

p. 14. Have the authors tested the assumptions of 2x3 repeated measures anova?

Thank you for your question. Like I responded in “p.11. Have the authors tested the assumptions of the mixed design?”, the assumption of sphericity for the within-subjects factor was met based on the result of the Mauchly's sphericity test.

p.15. Please report the results of the assumptions of 2x3 Manova?

Thank you for your suggestion. Here is the report the results of the assumptions of 2x3 MANOVA.

Antisaccade Latency: The 2 × 3 RMANOVA showed that neither Condition (F (1, 36) = 0.206, p = .651, η2 p = .069) nor Group (F (2, 36) = 2.651, p = .077, η2 p = .073) had a main effect on antisaccade latency. Furthermore, there was not a significant Condition × Group interaction (F (2, 36) = 0.066, p = .936, η2 p = .002) either

Antisaccade Error Rate: The 2 × 3 MANOVA yielded no significant main effects of Condition (F(1, 36) = 2.855, p = .095, η2 p = .038), but Group has a significant main effects (F(2, 36) = 6.309, p = .003, η2 p = .149) on antisaccade error rate. Post-hoc comparisons revealed that participants in the motivational self-talk group had a significantly higher error rate than those in the control group (p = .005) and instructional self-talk group (p = .002). There was no significant Condition × Group interaction (F(2, 36) = 1.329, p = .271, η2 p = .036).

Key-Press Error Rate: The results of the 2 × 3 MANOVA on key-press error rate revealed no significant main effect of condition (F(1, 36) = 0.406, p = .526, η2 p = .006) or group (F(2, 36) = 0.216, p = .806, η2 p = .006). There was also no significant Condition × Group interaction (F(2, 36) = 0.183, p = .833, η2 p = .005).

Pupil Diameter: The 2 × 2 MANOVA on pupil diameter showed that no significant main effects of Condition (F(1, 36) = 1.932, p = .169, η2 p = .026), but Group has a significant main effects (F(2, 36) = 4.404, p = .016, η2 p = .109) on antisaccade pupil diameter. There was no significant Condition × Group interaction (F(2, 36) = 0.027, p = .973, η2 p = .001).

We also conducted a post hoc power analysis, Input: Effect size f(V) = 0.25, α err prob = 0.05, Total sample size = 39, Number of groups = 3, Number of measurements = 2. After calculating, Power (1-β err prob) = 0.249, this means that there is a low probability (24.9%) of correctly rejecting the null hypothesis when it is false. Therefore, MANOVA may not be an appropriate statistical method for the present research.

p.16. I suggest the authors to report for all the analyses performed the appropriate assumptions.

Thank you for your suggestion. We appreciate your feedback and will make sure to report the appropriate assumptions for all the statistical analyses performed in the revised manuscript. Please see more details in the section of Result of the Study 2.

p.22. The authors are advised to include applied implications to their discussion section as this would help coaches but also sport psychologists to choose the right self-talk cues for their athletes.

Thank you for your suggestion. In the final of Discussion, I proposed ND-ST-AC Integration Model (i.e., Noise Distraction-Self-Talk-Attentional Control Integration Model), the model integrates several factors, including noise distraction, self-talk, and attentional control, and their potential effects on cognitive load and athletic performance. The conclusion emphasizes the importance of using self-talk appropriately to balance attentional systems and maintain attentional control, particularly in the presence of noise distraction. Improper use of self-talk can disrupt the balance of attentional systems, diminish attentional control, and ultimately impact athletic performance, regardless of noise distraction.

References

Abdoli, B., Hardy, J., Riyahi, J. F., & Farsi, A. (2018). A Closer Look at How Self-Talk Influences Skilled Basketball Performance. The Sport Psychologist, 32(1), 9-15. https://doi.org/10.1123/tsp.2016-0162

Dali, M. S., & A. Parnabas, V. (2018). The effects of self-talk on free throw performance and the level of anxiety among male novice basketball players. MoHE, 7(1). https://doi.org/10.15282/mohe.v7i1.174

Hardy, J. (2006). Speaking clearly: A critical review of the self-talk literature. Psychology of Sport and Exercise, 7(1), 81-97.

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L58-62. Sentence is too long and difficult to be understood.

P79. Remember that “studies” or “investigations” do not find anything, but “researchers” or “scholars” or “investigators” do!

L158. Please distinguish between affection and emotion. I think it should be emotion here.

Please use participants instead of subjects.

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L310-319. This sentence is so long that it makes me very confused.

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1. I seriously recommend professional language editing. I gave some examples.

L58-62. Sentence is too long and difficult to be understood.

Thank you for your valuable feedback. I understand the sentence was initially complex and challenging to follow. I have now broken it down into several smaller sentences to clarify the meaning and improve readability. The revised sentences now read as follows: “Furthermore, anxiety escalates the allocation of attention to irrelevant stimuli, both internal and external, leading to bottom-up processing. This process affects key functions of AC (i.e., inhibition and shifting), especially inhibition, the primary indicator.” I hope this provides a clearer understanding of the concept I am presenting.

P79. Remember that “studies” or “investigations” do not find anything, but “researchers” or “scholars” or “investigators” do!

Thank you for your valuable feedback. I understand your point and agree that it is the researchers who make the discoveries, not the studies themselves. I have therefore revised the sentences and you could see them in revised manuscript with track changes. I hope this modification appropriately addresses your concern.

L158. Please distinguish between affection and emotion. I think it should be emotion here.

Thank you for your suggestion. In L158, I cited the article from Hardy et al. (2009). In the original text, under the heading of “Affective mechanisms,” Hardy stated: “Although there has been much debate in the sport and exercise psychology literature concerning the definition and conceptual distinction of the terms ‘affect’, ‘mood’ and ‘emotion’, we have used the phrase ‘affective mechanisms’, as an umbrella term overseeing this family of concepts.” And after further checking on APA Dictionary of Psychology, the definition of “affect” is: Any experience of feeling or emotion, ranging from suffering to elation, from the simplest to the most complex sensations of feeling, and from the most normal to the most pathological emotional reactions. Hence, I believe “affect” is the most appropriate term to use in this context, and not “emotion” or “affection”.

Please use participants instead of subjects.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have changed all “subjects” into “participants”, you could see them in revised manuscript with track changes.

L202. The word "normal" you are trying to express should mean untrained, please amend it.

Thank you for your suggestion. You are correct that the term 'normal' was not the most accurate descriptor in this context. I have now amended the sentence to specify that the participants had no prior basketball training, which is what I intended to convey with the term 'normal'. The revised sentence could be seen in revised manuscript with track changes.

L310-319. This sentence is so long that it makes me very confused.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have revised the sentence to improve its clarity and readability. I believe this revision provides a clearer, more understandable description of the trial process.

2. I still think the abstract is too long, please refer to the author's guidelines for changes.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have revised and shortened the abstract, ensuring it aligns with the guidelines provided for authors. I hope that the changes made are satisfactory and meet your requirements.

3. Parameters should be reported with two or three decimals only.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have kept 2 as decimals for all parameters in table two.

4. It is also good practice to present the interaction effects first, before moving onto the main effects.

Thank you for your suggestion. According to APA 7th edition, however, reporting statistical results needs to be relevant hypotheses. In addition, presenting the results of tests should be in the order that you performed them—report the outcomes of main tests before post-hoc tests. In the present research, the first hypothesis to test is whether the noise has an effect on the AC; the second hypothesis to test is whether the self-talk has an effect on the AC. The moderate effect is tested at the end. Therefore, in order to maintain the overall logic of the article, it is necessary to keep the original order of results presentation.

5. There are still many missing spaces, e.g., L130.

Thank you for your suggestion. I have thoroughly reviewed the document and corrected this issue not only at the line you pointed out, but throughout the entire manuscript. I have taken extra care to ensure the correct use of spaces throughout the text. I appreciate your patience and attention to detail, which helps improve the clarity and readability of the manuscript.

References

Hardy, J., Oliver, E., & Tod, D. (2009). A framework for the study and application of self-talk within sport. Advances in applied sport psychology: A review, 37-74.

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24 Jul 2023

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 Editor comments. As the newly appointed editor responsible for handling this manuscript (the former editor is no longer available), I have read your manuscript and the comments from the two reviewers. To me, it seems the reviews generally converge towards a positive evaluation over the rounds, which aligns with my own impression of the current manuscript. However, there are several critical methodological points that urgently need to be clarified. These points mainly concern the calculation of effects and performance parameters in the tasks (Stroop task and Anti-saccade task) as well as the conceptual implementation of motivational self-talk. Overall, I have provided detailed comments that should be carefully addressed in a further revision. My comments are listed below.

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Additional Editor Comments

 (-1-) theory  The authors have utilised Eysenck's attention control theory of anxiety as the theoretical framework for the study. The main argument of this theory revolves around the notion that momentary (state) anxiety negatively impacts working memory functions, including executive control, phonological loop, and visual-spatial sketchpad. While this theory might be insightful and serve as a base metaphor in exploring individual differences in anxiety and related personality concepts such as neuroticism, it does not offer any specific predictions about the performance effects that could potentially be expected in the present research context. To address this limitation and enhance the theoretical impact of the study, it is recommended to provide a theoretical background that focuses on predicting the effects of the factors that are assumed to influence the outcome performance measures in the Stroop and Anti-saccade tasks. This theoretical background should address how the chosen factors, such as noise distraction and self-talk strategies, are expected to interact with attentional control and ultimately impact task performance. By incorporating a more predictive theoretical framework, the study findings and interpretations would be much better grounded and would likely contribute largely to the understanding of attentional control under noise distraction conditions. To guide you in the process of revision, I recommend a recent work of Schumann et al. which provides you with an overview of theory and relevant studies on the interplay of computational (directing, coordinating) and energetical (motivating) attentional resources to ensure performance stability (doi:10.3389/fpsyg.2022.867978), in both basic and applied (e.g., sports) psychology.   (-2-) design to study "self-talk" vs. design to study "cuing"   In sports psychology fields, the concept of self-talk is typically used to study real-life tasks such as tennis or basketball because in these tasks, the coordination of multiple mental operations is crucial as they need to be executed in a well-timed sequence and in the correct or optimal order. When the task is not already over-learned (or is below a certain level of automatisation), self-talk strategies are critical as they can aid coordinating action sequences. In other words, directional self-talk is equivalent to representing the points in a sequence in working memory prior to the actual execution of the action, ensuring that the intended sequence of movements is followed accurately. When the task is highly over-learned, then sole motivational self-talk is more essential (see Schumann et al., doi:10.3389/fpsyg.2022.867978, chap. 4.5) in ensuring the retrieval of specified sequences from memory (and not to miss it at some occasions). The present paper employs the concept and terminology of self-talk explicitly, while the actual experiments align more with other concepts referred to as "cueing" in the literature. The problem here is that this creates a misunderstanding as you link your experiments to the self-talk literature while the actual experiments are essentially designed as commonly done in the field of cognitive-experimental research. These studies focus on cueing effects, specifically involving directional cueing (e.g., look-away effect in the antisaccade task) and effort cueing (e.g., try-harder effect). To understand the mechanism of cueing, in particular to understand effort cuering relating to why some of the manipulations did not work in the present experimental context of your study, I would suggest one of my own work (doi:10.1007/s00426-016-0810-1), apologising for doing so, but in this work it is explained how try-harder manipulation work, what factors are critical and what aspects of performance is most indicative of increased motivation. In very brief, (1) motivational cues work best when pre-instructed (i.e., the cue try-hard is explained before the experiment to the participant), (2) when they are implemented as reminders during the task (because participants would forget the instruction over the course of a block of trials (see Schumann et al., 2022, chap. 5.4) when the instruction is only given before the experimental block), that the instruction is given in optimal temporal intervals before the task (to enable the participants to get ready (these two papers of Langner et al. and Polzien et al. are recommendable as they highlight on this aspect, the first in more general terms (doi:10.1037/xhp0000561,) and the second in the context of sports (basketball) psychology (doi:10.1037/xap0000419).   (-3-) stroop task  The calculation of effects for the Stroop task in your study appears to deviate from the conventional methodological standards typically employed for Stroop-like (conflict) tasks. It is important to acknowledge that the task used in your study does not strictly adhere to the traditional Stroop test or stroop-like tests. A paper by Polzien et al., which I recommended earlier, nicely explains these aspects in the context of sports psychology (though they used a stroop-like paradigm known as the head-fake paradigm in basketball). The way performance measures are computed in your study resembles more of a reaction time effect solely for the incongruent condition, while the congruent condition is simply disregarded. In typical computerized Stroop test versions, participants are presented with colour words and are required to respond to the colour itself, with the word serving as the irrelevant dimension. There are two conditions: the congruent condition, where the word and colour are the same, and the incongruent condition, where the word and colour differ, leading to increased difficulty. The Stroop effect is usually calculated as the difference in reaction times and accuracy between these two conditions.To ensure alignment with established methodological standards for Stroop-like tasks, it is crucial to accurately measure and interpret the Stroop effect as a key performance indicator in your study design.  (-4-) statistics  the statistics including what is presented in tables is at parts incorrect or inadequate. To name one point, you use a t-test to compare the reaction times of only the incompatible trials of the stroop test with regard to the noise condition. A correct comparison would be to use the factors congruent, incongruent and noise in a three-factorial anova design separately on reaction time and errors, which would result in 7 statistical effects (3 main, 3 two-way interactions, 1 three-way interaction). To say the stroop effect is affected by noise would be validly, when there is a significant three-way interaction effect, indicating that the RT difference (the difference between congruent and incongruent trials is modulated by the factor noise). I suggest considering this in a potential revision of the manuscript.   (-5-) providing additional information in the method section, several aspects need more specification, to name only one among others, it would be crucial to know more about the noise manipulation with regard to duration, intensity, irrelevant speech effects, and so on. In general, I suggest presenting all information relevant to the experiments so that other researchers would potentially be able to replicate your work in a follow-up study. 

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Abstract

These distractions disrupt the attentional systems, ultimately putting the athletes' inhibition ability and performance to the test. Please rephrase the above statement. …specifically “to the test”.

Introduction

p. 6, ln.112. Participants in the Drat-throwing task. Please correct

p. 6, ln.117. challenge, which led to better performance on the Drat-throwing task. Please correct.

p. 6. Lns. 108-118. I would suggest here to read and report the nice discussion about the matching hypothesis. Hatzigeorgiadis, Zourbanos, and Theodorakis (2007) noticed that depending on parameters of the task, some self-talk cues can be more effective than others, explaining the equivocal results on the matching hypothesis. I would suggest you to read Zourbanos et al. 2013 in TSP.

p. 6, lns. 112-120. I am not convinced about this please elaborate.

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31 Aug 2023

Response to reviewers

Dear Editor and Reviewers,

I wanted to express my heartfelt gratitude for taking the time to review my manuscript. Your insights and constructive feedback were invaluable, and I truly appreciate the expertise you brought to this review process.

Your suggestions were astute and have greatly improved the quality and clarity of the work. I have taken your feedback to heart and have made necessary revisions to address the concerns and recommendations you mentioned.

I recognize and appreciate the effort and dedication it takes to provide such thorough and insightful feedback. Please know that your input has not only improved this particular work but has also contributed to my growth as a researcher.

Thank you once again for your invaluable contribution. I look forward to possibly benefiting from your expertise in the future.

Sincerely,

Liu Yang & Yingchun Wang

Additional Editor Comments

(-1-) theory

The authors have utilised Eysenck's attention control theory of anxiety as the theoretical framework for the study. The main argument of this theory revolves around the notion that momentary (state) anxiety negatively impacts working memory functions, including executive control, phonological loop, and visual-spatial sketchpad. While this theory might be insightful and serve as a base metaphor in exploring individual differences in anxiety and related personality concepts such as neuroticism, it does not offer any specific predictions about the performance effects that could potentially be expected in the present research context. To address this limitation and enhance the theoretical impact of the study, it is recommended to provide a theoretical background that focuses on predicting the effects of the factors that are assumed to influence the outcome performance measures in the Stroop and Anti-saccade tasks. This theoretical background should address how the chosen factors, such as noise distraction and self-talk strategies, are expected to interact with attentional control and ultimately impact task performance. By incorporating a more predictive theoretical framework, the study findings and interpretations would be much better grounded and would likely contribute largely to the understanding of attentional control under noise distraction conditions. To guide you in the process of revision, I recommend a recent work of Schumann et al. which provides you with an overview of theory and relevant studies on the interplay of computational (directing, coordinating) and energetical (motivating) attentional resources to ensure performance stability (doi:10.3389/fpsyg.2022.867978), in both basic and applied (e.g., sports) psychology.

Thank you for your suggestions regarding the theoretical foundation of this study. The reference you recommended (Schumann et al., 2022) elaborately details the impact of rest breaks on attention restoration in multitasking world. This article classifies rest, summarizes its effects on task performance, and discusses methodological issues. The explanation of phenomena through a theory is a complex and lengthy process, wherein the theory needs constant refinement. No matter it is Energetic Capacity Model, Strategic Resource Model, or other theories, most of their studies are derived from multitasking research. However, in the present study, both Experiment 1 and Experiment 2 focus on single-tasking research. The core objectives of the study are to explore the effects of noise distraction and self-talk on inhibition and their interactions, and develop Attention Control Theory (ACT). Your understanding of ACT is mostly accurate, but as mentioned, theories constantly evolve. Once a work is published, it no longer solely belongs to the author. As Roland Barthes puts it, "The death of the author is the birth of the reader." Since its inception in 2007, ACT has undergone 16 years of development (Eysenck et al., 2007). Its scope has broadened beyond just the effects of anxiety on attentional control, encompassing variables such as working memory (Angelopoulou & Drigas, 2021), mental health (Armstrong & Olatunji, 2012), affect (Pessoa, 2009). In my opinion, anxiety is one of the keys to ACT, with another key being the balance between stimulus-driven bottom-up processing and task-driven top-down processing. If the balance of attention system is disrupted, individuals might be more susceptible to external stimuli, leading to distractions and thus affecting attentional control. From the theoretical perspective, ACT can offer predictions for experimental results; from the results perspective, experimental results of the present study can further develop ACT. In conclusion, I believe ACT serves as a foundational theory for this study, but it's also essential to integrate multiple theories for interpreting the experimental results. Therefore, in the discussion section, explanations based on the Strategic Resource Model have been added (see more details in p.25).

(-2-) design to study "self-talk" vs. design to study "cuing"

In sports psychology fields, the concept of self-talk is typically used to study real-life tasks such as tennis or basketball because in these tasks, the coordination of multiple mental operations is crucial as they need to be executed in a well-timed sequence and in the correct or optimal order. When the task is not already over-learned (or is below a certain level of automatisation), self-talk strategies are critical as they can aid coordinating action sequences. In other words, directional self-talk is equivalent to representing the points in a sequence in working memory prior to the actual execution of the action, ensuring that the intended sequence of movements is followed accurately. When the task is highly over-learned, then sole motivational self-talk is more essential (see Schumann et al., doi:10.3389/fpsyg.2022.867978, chap. 4.5) in ensuring the retrieval of specified sequences from memory (and not to miss it at some occasions). The present paper employs the concept and terminology of self-talk explicitly, while the actual experiments align more with other concepts referred to as "cueing" in the literature. The problem here is that this creates a misunderstanding as you link your experiments to the self-talk literature while the actual experiments are essentially designed as commonly done in the field of cognitive-experimental research. These studies focus on cueing effects, specifically involving directional cueing (e.g., look-away effect in the antisaccade task) and effort cueing (e.g., try-harder effect). To understand the mechanism of cueing, in particular to understand effort cuering relating to why some of the manipulations did not work in the present experimental context of your study, I would suggest one of my own work (doi:10.1007/s00426-016-0810-1), apologising for doing so, but in this work it is explained how try-harder manipulation work, what factors are critical and what aspects of performance is most indicative of increased motivation. In very brief, (1) motivational cues work best when pre-instructed (i.e., the cue try-hard is explained before the experiment to the participant), (2) when they are implemented as reminders during the task (because participants would forget the instruction over the course of a block of trials (see Schumann et al., 2022, chap. 5.4) when the instruction is only given before the experimental block), that the instruction is given in optimal temporal intervals before the task (to enable the participants to get ready (these two papers of Langner et al. and Polzien et al. are recommendable as they highlight on this aspect, the first in more general terms (doi:10.1037/xhp0000561,) and the second in the context of sports (basketball) psychology (doi:10.1037/xap0000419).

Thank you for your valuable suggestions and recommendations. After carefully reading the literature you provided me (Langner et al., 2018; Polzien et al., 2023; Schumann et al., 2022; Steinborn et al., 2017), I have a clearer understanding of the similarities and differences between motivational self-talk and the implementation of the effort instruction. Self-talk is defined as: “(a) verbalizations or statements addressed to the self; (b) multidimensional in nature; (c) having interpretive elements association with the content of statements employed; (d) is somewhat dynamic; and (e) serving at least two functions; instructional and motivational, for the athlete (Hardy, 2006),” and effort instruction is defined as a cue to instruct participants try harder in the trial (Steinborn et al., 2017). From a definitional standpoint, hence, motivational self-talk is different from effort instruction. In addition, the two also have slight differences in some other characters, such as the context teller, frequency and performance (see Table 1). It is clear that the current paper employs 'self-talk' correctly, rather than using 'cueing' as it is typically used in the field of cognitive-experimental research. However, motivational self-talk and effort instruction share many similarities and have the common goal of improving motivation and performance. This is also reflected in the similarity between the result of the present study and yours (Steinborn et al., 2017). Specifically, try-harder instruction resulted in a global speed-up of responses, while error rate is higher than stander condition in short foreperiod (FP, the interaction effect of FP × CUE is significant), and motivational self-talk also increased the error rate in antisaccade task. Notably, the short FP and the interval between “ready” (the signal of starting self-talk) and fixation point (the signal of starting of the antisaccade task) are both 1000ms. Therefore, we assume that the results of present study partially confirm your conclusion from another aspect, which is effort instruction in short FP hampered the precise control of the motor-system components that are decisive for performance. Finally, thank you for your constructive suggestions and recommendations again, I will add relevant information in Discussion part (see more details in p.24-25).

Table 1. Characters of motivational self-talk and effort instruction

Characters Motivational self-talk Effort instruction

Context Cue word(s) Cue word(s)

Context teller Participants themselves The text on screen

Timestamp Beginning of a trial Beginning of a trial

Frequency Every trial 20% of all trials

Interference Not interfere any process Not interfere any process

Performance Not necessarily improve Must improve

(-3-) stroop task

The calculation of effects for the Stroop task in your study appears to deviate from the conventional methodological standards typically employed for Stroop-like (conflict) tasks. It is important to acknowledge that the task used in your study does not strictly adhere to the traditional Stroop test or stroop-like tests. A paper by Polzien et al., which I recommended earlier, nicely explains these aspects in the context of sports psychology (though they used a stroop-like paradigm known as the head-fake paradigm in basketball). The way performance measures are computed in your study resembles more of a reaction time effect solely for the incongruent condition, while the congruent condition is simply disregarded. In typical computerized Stroop test versions, participants are presented with colour words and are required to respond to the colour itself, with the word serving as the irrelevant dimension. There are two conditions: the congruent condition, where the word and colour are the same, and the incongruent condition, where the word and colour differ, leading to increased difficulty. The Stroop effect is usually calculated as the difference in reaction times and accuracy between these two conditions.

To ensure alignment with established methodological standards for Stroop-like tasks, it is crucial to accurately measure and interpret the Stroop effect as a key performance indicator in your study design.

Thank you for your valuable feedback. We acknowledge that the standard Stroop effect is typically calculated by comparing reaction times and accuracy between the congruent and incongruent conditions. Regrettably, during the programming of the Stroop task, the inclusion of the congruent condition data was overlooked. I deeply regret that I cannot recalculate the data following the conventional method due to this oversight. The decision not to include the congruent condition data was motivated by several reasons: (1) Study Objective: The primary aim of Study 1 was to ascertain the effectiveness of noise distraction materials in attenuating inhibition. With this goal in mind, we believed that demonstrating a difference in accuracy or reaction time for the incongruent condition—between noisy and quiet conditions—would suffice. (2) Research Focus: While Study 2 is the main thrust of our research, Study 1 served primarily as a foundational stage for it. (3) Literature Precedent: Our method was influenced by Alimohammadi and Ebrahimi (2017). In their work, the effects of low-frequency and high-frequency noises on inhibitory performance were compared. Here, the key dependent variables were "incorrect reactions" and "working time" in the incongruent conditions of the Stroop task, and they did not calculate the Stroop effect as the conventional procedure. To address this methodological limitation, we will explicitly mention it in our manuscript. This ensures readers fully grasp the data constraints when interpreting our results. We appreciate the keen insights provided and hope to make the necessary amendments to enhance our paper's clarity and rigor (see more details in p.28).

(-4-) statistics

the statistics including what is presented in tables is at parts incorrect or inadequate. To name one point, you use a t-test to compare the reaction times of only the incompatible trials of the stroop test with regard to the noise condition. A correct comparison would be to use the factors congruent, incongruent and noise in a three-factorial anova design separately on reaction time and errors, which would result in 7 statistical effects (3 main, 3 two-way interactions, 1 three-way interaction). To say the stroop effect is affected by noise would be validly, when there is a significant three-way interaction effect, indicating that the RT difference (the difference between congruent and incongruent trials is modulated by the factor noise). I suggest considering this in a potential revision of the manuscript.

Thank you for your suggestion. We deeply regret and acknowledge an oversight in our experimental design. Due to this oversight, only data from the incongruent condition were included in Study 1. This means we cannot conduct ANOVA analysis as you suggested, and we deeply apologize for it. In our future studies, we will ensure rigorous experimental design checks to avoid such oversights. We believe in the importance of this line of inquiry and are committed to providing a comprehensive understanding of the topic. Thank you again for pointing out this crucial aspect. We greatly appreciate your patience and understanding.

(-5-) providing additional information

in the method section, several aspects need more specification, to name only one among others, it would be crucial to know more about the noise manipulation with regard to duration, intensity, irrelevant speech effects, and so on. In general, I suggest presenting all information relevant to the experiments so that other researchers would potentially be able to replicate your work in a follow-up study.

Thank you for highlighting the need for more specificity in our method section. We have expanded on the details of the noise manipulation, providing information on duration, intensity, and other relevant properties to make sure that other researchers would be able to replicate our work in the future (see more details in p.10).

References

Alimohammadi, I., & Ebrahimi, H. (2017). Comparison between effects of low and high frequency noise on mental performance. Applied Acoustics, 126, 131-135-135. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.apacoust.2017.05.021

Angelopoulou, E., & Drigas, A. (2021). Working memory, attention and their relationship: A theoretical overview. Research, Society and Development, 10(5), e46410515288. https://doi.org/10.33448/rsd-v10i5.15288

Armstrong, T., & Olatunji, B. O. (2012). Eye tracking of attention in the affective disorders: A meta-analytic review and synthesis. Clinical Psychology Review, 32(8), 704-723. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.cpr.2012.09.004

Eysenck, M. W., Derakshan, N., Santos, R., & Calvo, M. G. (2007). Anxiety and cognitive performance: attentional control theory. Emotion, 7(2), 336. https://doi.org/10.1080/02699931.2015.1081494

Hardy, J. (2006). Speaking clearly: A critical review of the self-talk literature. Psychology of Sport and Exercise, 7(1), 81-97.

Langner, R., Steinborn, M. B., Eickhoff, S. B., & Huestegge, L. (2018). When specific action biases meet nonspecific preparation: Event repetition modulates the variable-foreperiod effect. Journal of Experimental Psychology: Human Perception and Performance, 44(9), 1313-1323. https://doi.org/10.1037/xhp0000561

Pessoa, L. (2009). How do emotion and motivation direct executive control? Trends in Cognitive Sciences, 13(4), 160-166. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.tics.2009.01.006

Polzien, A., Güldenpenning, I., & Weigelt, M. (2023). Repeating head fakes in basketball: Temporal aspects affect the congruency sequence effect and the size of the head-fake effect. Journal of Experimental Psychology: Applied, 29(2), 292-301. https://doi.org/10.1037/xap0000419

Schumann, F., Steinborn, M. B., Kürten, J., Cao, L., Händel, B. F., & Huestegge, L. (2022). Restoration of Attention by Rest in a Multitasking World: Theory, Methodology, and Empirical Evidence. Frontiers in Psychology, 13. https://doi.org/10.3389/fpsyg.2022.867978

Steinborn, M. B., Langner, R., & Huestegge, L. (2017). Mobilizing cognition for speeded action: try-harder instructions promote motivated readiness in the constant-foreperiod paradigm. Psychological research, 81(6), 1135-1151. https://doi.org/10.1007/s00426-016-0810-1

Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed all the comments provided by all the reviewers. I have no further comments.

Reviewer #2: The paper is interesting and almost ready for publication, but as the other reviewer commented several times it needs professional language editing. Although it needs minor revisions in many pages still has a lot of errors. Below I have spotted some and make some additional comments for the authors to improve the quality of the paper.

Abstract

These distractions disrupt the attentional systems, ultimately putting the athletes' inhibition ability and performance to the test. Please rephrase the above statement. …specifically “to the test”.

Thank you for your suggestion. Based on your feedback, I propose the following revision: "These distractions disrupt the attentional systems, ultimately compromise the athletes' inhibition ability and directly affect their performance on the court."

Introduction

p. 6, ln.112. Participants in the Drat-throwing task. Please correct

Thank you for your suggestion. I apologize for the typo. This mistake has been corrected in the revised manuscript.

p. 6, ln.117. challenge, which led to better performance on the Drat-throwing task. Please correct.

Thank you for your suggestion. I apologize for the typo. This mistake has been corrected in the revised manuscript.

p. 6. Lns. 108-118. I would suggest here to read and report the nice discussion about the matching hypothesis. Hatzigeorgiadis, Zourbanos, and Theodorakis (2007) noticed that depending on parameters of the task, some self-talk cues can be more effective than others, explaining the equivocal results on the matching hypothesis. I would suggest you to read Zourbanos et al. 2013 in TSP.

Thank you for your suggestion. After reviewing the mentioned paper (Hatzigeorgiadis et al., 2007; Zourbanos et al., 2013), I found their insights further complemented my understanding, and I have referenced their work where relevant to strengthen the introduction in my manuscript (see more details in p.6, lns104-117).

p. 6, lns. 112-120. I am not convinced about this please elaborate.

Thank you for your suggestion. We have expanded on this by providing a more details, and we believe these additions provide a more comprehensive understanding of self-talk (see more details in p.7, lns 117-146).

Results

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Thank you for your suggestion. The formal of tables follows “PLOS Manuscript Body Formatting Guidelines”.

Discussion

Is there a figure inserted in the discussion? This is the first time I see a figure in the discussion section. Please delete it.

Thank you for your question and suggestion. There indeed is a figure inserted in the discussion, aiming to visually represent the ND-ST-AC Integration Model (ND: noise distraction; ST: self-talk; AC: attentional control). We believe this figure greatly aids readers in grasping the interactions under discussion. Having a visual representation within the discussion can streamline the understanding of our proposed model and its implications. This approach, while perhaps less traditional, is not without precedent. For instance, Feher da Silva and Hare (2020) in their article published in Nature Human Behaviour inserted a figure in the discussion to clarify differences in the interpretation of results by two theories. Similarly, Shirer et al. (2012) also included a supplementary figure in their discussion section to elucidate anticipated improvements in imaging techniques as technology evolved. Therefore, given the figure's significance in clarifying the model's intricacies and aiding readers' understanding, we humbly request to retain it in the discussion section.

Feher da Silva, C., & Hare, T. A. (2020). Humans primarily use model-based inference in the two-stage task. Nature Human Behaviour, 4(10), 1053-1066. https://doi.org/10.1038/s41562-020-0905-y

Hatzigeorgiadis, A., Zourbanos, N., & Theodorakis, Y. (2007). The Moderating Effects of Self-Talk Content on Self-Talk Functions. Journal of Applied Sport Psychology, 19(2), 240-251. https://doi.org/10.1080/10413200701230621

Shirer, W. R., Ryali, S., Rykhlevskaia, E., Menon, V., & Greicius, M. D. (2012). Decoding Subject-Driven Cognitive States with Whole-Brain Connectivity Patterns. Cerebral Cortex, 22(1), 158-165. https://doi.org/10.1093/cercor/bhr099

Zourbanos, N., Hatzigeorgiadis, A., Bardas, D., & Theodorakis, Y. (2013). The Effects of Self-Talk on Dominant and Nondominant Arm Performance on a Handball Task in Primary Physical Education Students. The Sport Psychologist, 27(2), 171-176. https://doi.org/10.1123/tsp.27.2.171

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