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. 2023 Nov 22;18(11):e0294496. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0294496

Sexual orientation disclosure and depression among Thai gay, bisexual, and other men who have sex with men: The roles of social support and intimate partner violence

Eduardo Encina 1,2, Worawalan Waratworawan 1,3, Yamol Kongjareon 1, Mayur M Desai 2, Thomas E Guadamuz 1,4,*
Editor: Paolo Roma5
PMCID: PMC10664870  PMID: 37992077

Abstract

Background

Among gay, bisexual, and other men who have sex with men (GBM), sexual orientation disclosure to social groups can act as a significant risk for depression. The primary goal of this research is to understand the association between disclosure and depression, the association of social support and intimate partner violence (IPV) experiences, depression, and disclosure.

Methods

This project uses a secondary dataset of Thailand from a larger cross-sectional study distributed in the Greater Mekong Sub-Region. This study utilized web-based answers from 1468 Thai GBM respondents between the ages of 15–24 years.

Results

Prevalence of depression was over 50%. Across the social groups of interest, those who disclosed to everyone had the lowest depression prevalence. This association was statistically significant for all groups (p<0.050) except for “Family members” (p = 0.052). There was a statistically significant association illustrated between full disclosure to social groups and increased social support. Most respondents (43.9%) had low social support, and additionally this group had the highest level of depression, compared to those with high social support. There was a statistically significant association for lowered depression outcomes and increased social support. IPV experiences that occurred within the last six months had a statistically significant relationship with depression (p = 0.002). There was a notable association between those with experiences of being a victim of IPV, alone and in conjunction with experience of being a perpetrator of IPV, which was associated with increased odds of depression. However, the type of IPV experiences an individual had did not differ based on disclosure status.

Discussion

This study provides strengthened evidence of the impact that differences in supportive networks can have on mental health outcomes. In addition, they provided a wider consideration for how people may have different IPV experiences, either as a perpetrator, victim, or both, and how those shapes health outcomes of depression. GBM communities still face adversity and challenges that affect their long-term health outcomes, even if they do live in what is considered an accepting country.

Introduction

One of the most important expressive processes among lesbian, gay, bisexual, transgender, queer, and questioning (LGBTQ+) individuals is “coming out”, wherein individuals navigate their sexual identity and whether to disclose it to others [1, 2]. A few of the influential environmental and social factors that can impact when and to whom an individual discloses their sexual orientation include items such as self-esteem, potential for acceptance, perceived level of emotional or physical harm, and social stigma [3]. One potential buffer between the stress of coming out and worsened mental health outcomes is having a community that is supportive of and empowering towards LGBTQ+ individuals [46]. Without such a community, there can long-term, negative health impacts along with a decreased sense of self-comfort, acceptance, and identity development [7]. A family is one social group that can influence personal development and well-being, shown by studies supporting an association between family rejection related to sexual orientation and increased negative health outcomes [3, 8, 9].

Sexual orientation disclosure

While processing the decision of “coming out” to different social networks, gay and bisexual men grapple with the potential responses from others, including positives ones of support and acceptance, or negative ones of social disapproval, bodily harm, and avoidance [1012]. This can cultivate a variety of stressors that over time can translate into self-hatred, isolation, and increased violent behaviors [1012]. These negative stressors related to coming out can even compound by one’s race and ethnicity, which can further one’s risk for depression [2, 12]. The minority stress theory is a conceptual framework developed to describe the numerous stressors that may uniquely face members of minority groups [13]. It describes individual and external stressors, either psychological, physical, or social, that can afflict members of stigmatized social groups, and which may accrue with time, leading to health deficiencies [13, 14]. This theory encapsulates distal and proximal stressors that GBM communities may experience, ranging from the distal stressors of antigay violence, and homophobia to proximal stressors of internalized homophobia, along with increased concealment out of fear of rejection [13, 15].

These stressors can multiply among those who hold multiple marginalized identities in their respective communities, such as GBM who also identify with a marginalized racial/ethnic background, and negative health outcomes [14, 15]. Previous research has reported that for communities who experience minority stress, there have been positive associations illustrated between internalized homonegativity and identity concealment with same-sex partner violence perpetration, while increased community support can make people less vulnerable to such stressful experiences [15, 16]. Previous studies have analyzed the associations of perceived social support and mental health-related functioning using a Social Provisions Scale (SPS), a validated measure to study perceptions of social support in one’s environment, making it an adept variable to analyze mental health associations among Thai GBM communities [1719]. Social support can play a vital role in supporting human health, as direct links have been shown between social support and increased mental health outcomes, such as increased self-esteem and longevity [20]. In fact, previous research has attempted to understand the nuances with social support constructs by analyzing the variations in support from family and friends. Generally, studies have exhibited that family support can be a protective agent against negative mental health outcomes and when this family support is lacking, friend social support can be just as impactful [20, 21]. Research have shown that white respondents experience the lowest levels of stigma, followed by Hispanic/Latino, then Asian respondents, and then Black respondents having experienced the highest levels of stigma [15]. Social stigma towards gay and bisexual men within Western cultures is well-studied, however it may differ in subtle manners, compared to Southeast-Asian countries.

Thailand sentiment towards those who identify as LGBTQ+ has been popularized in urban areas through descriptions of being a “gay paradise” or a “safe haven [22].” Despite increased liberal attitudes and protective Thailand public policy, LGBTQ+ individuals have shown preference towards presenting as heterosexual and following heteronormative gender roles to actively avoid gossips, anti-gay comments, and ensure their own job security [23]. This heteronormative pressure can impact how people disclose their sexual orientation and with whom. Research has suggested that men are more likely to experience sexual violence perpetration and victimization if their social networks are comprised of more “closeted” gay friends or strictly sex partners [24]. Without a supportive environment comprised of individuals who gay and bisexual men trust and who they share positive character traits with, men may have trouble processing emotional and physical discrimination that can fester feelings of depression and internalization homonegativity, factors which have been associated with IPV [16, 24]. When considering reports that almost all MSM had experienced some form of homophobia in one study, and another study which reported that half of MSM discrimination events are connected to sexual orientation or gender identity, this becomes especially relevant [25, 26]. There has been an increase in recent years towards research catered to Thai gay and bisexual male communities, however there still remains a gap in understanding the effect that sexual orientation disclosure has on depression and the potentially influential role of other variables, including social support and IPV.

Intimate partner violence

IPV occurs when intimate partners or spouses engage in interpersonal violence, which can transpire as either physical, psychological, financial, or sexual [27]. While well-documented among women in heterosexual relationships (15–71%), IPV experiences remain scarcely studied among same-sex relationships [28]. Estimates from several studies analyzing IPV prevalence among LGTBQ+ individuals range from 5.75% to 54% for MSM [2932]. Deleterious health outcomes can result from experiencing some form of IPV, either physical (e.g. injuries, HIV infection) and/or psychological (e.g. chronic mental illness, depression) in nature [33]. The impacts from having a history of IPV, such as verbal abuse or forced sex, can be multi-layered, leading to lowered incidence of healthy self-image, an increased predisposition to depression, and sexually transmitted infections [34, 35]. A study elucidating depression risk factors among Canadian gay and bisexual men discovered most respondents having experienced at least some form of anti-gay violence (i.e. bullying, harassment, and physical violence) [36]. Considering ones potential feelings of self-insecurity, the homophobic attitudes of ones surrounding community, and the minimal availability of accessible and healthy emotional outlets, this can further ones susceptibility to long-term depression outcomes and IPV. IPV experiences are potentially thought to have a higher impact on health, including comorbidities among same-sex couples because of elevated substance/alcohol use, the scarcity of health resources commonly seen in same-sex couplings, and social stigma [35].

The majority of IPV research does not differentiate between “victims” or “perpetrators”, an important distinction as there may be unique risk factors among consistent IPV perpetrators such as history of trauma or internalized self-esteem issues. The lack of research is concerning, especially considering that 18.4% of MSM respondents in one study reported a history of forced sex, and of this, a majority of 67.3% reported forced sex on more than one occasion [37].

Current study

The present study aims to examine the associations between sexual orientation disclosure among Thai GBM to their social groups and depressive outcomes. Additionally, this study aims to understand the extent that social support and IPV may mediate the relationship between depression and full disclosure. This study is focused on using this knowledge to inform future policy and enhance community efforts to provide resources for Thai GBM who may experience negative emotional health outcomes related to either violent behaviors and sexual orientation.

Methods

Sample

Data for this study comes from an online, multi-country cross-sectional project, “Greater Mekong–Young MSM Internet Survey”, aimed at describing HIV risk behavioral trends, prevalence, and syndemics factors. Data collection occurred in ten countries throughout the Greater Mekong sub-region (i.e. Cambodia, Hong Kong, Indonesia, Lao PDR, Malaysia, Myanmar, Philippines, Singapore, Thailand, Vietnam). The study was a collaboration between Mahidol University and the Asia Pacific Coalition on Male Sexual Health (APCOM).

Data was collected between 30 March and 31 May 2018. Recruitment occurred through a web-based behavioral and epidemiological survey which was disseminated through several popular social networking websites and gay-oriented dating applications, as well as through NGO partner provided email lists with potential participants. Interested participants who accessed the survey entered a welcome page, then were provided with a unique ID and preferred language for the survey. The respondent’s eligibility was then assessed, and upon acceptance, they were given a study overview and information to contact the study staff.

Mahidol University Social Sciences Institutional Review Board (MU-SSIRB) reviewed and approved the study (Certificate of Approval No. 2016/040.0902). For participants younger than 18 years, MU-SSIRB approved waivers of parental permission, informed by our previous study on proxy permission and waivers of parental permission [38]. All participants reviewed a participant information sheet at the first page of the online survey and then clicking through the assent/consent process. Details of the study’s risks and benefits and contact information for the MUSSIRB chairperson were included in the consent process. Participation in this study was voluntary and anonymous. The secondary data analysis was reviewed by Yale University Institutional Review Board and was deemed exempt from IRB review and approval.

Measures

Depression

To accurately assess participant mental health, the survey included the Center for Epidemiologic Studies Depression Scaled Revised (CESD-R-10), a self-reported depression measure—shortened version of the original Center for Epidemiologic Studies Depression Scale (CES-D) [39, 40]. The CESD-R-10 scale is comprised of various items probing into commonly associated symptoms and behavioral patterns of depression. The CESD-R-10 has been well-used within previous epidemiological studies and is considered a valid and accurate tool for discerning or predicting emotions and behaviors that algin with depressive outcomes [4143]. A participant responses to questions on the CESD-R-10 are scored on a scale of 0–3. A respondent is considered missing if they fail to answer more than two items on the survey, but otherwise their total score is calculated by summing the remaining 10 items. A dichotomized variable was created based on this scale. A participant was considered depressed and coded “1” if they scored 10 or above, but if they scored below 10 then they were not considered depressed and were coded “0”.

Sexual orientation disclosure

There were four defined social networks that participants were asked to estimate the degree to which they had disclosed their sexual orientation to the people in those groups. The first three networks comprised friends or colleagues through: (1) “Other people in the same school/university/workplace”, (2) “Friends outside school/university/workplace”, and (3) “Teachers in your school/university/boss in your workplace”, which are subsequently referred to as “People in school/work”, “Friends outside school/work”, and “Teachers or Boss”. The fourth social network was participants’ (4) Family members. Among each of the networks, an individual’s response was coded as “1” if they had told everyone, or their response was coded as “0” if they stated that they had not told everyone.

Social support

The “Scale of Social Provisions-10 items (ÉPS-10)” is a shortened scale that participants were presented with, and based on their responses, it was used to build a continuous variable of social support. The ÉPS-10 has been validated in multiple studies and is comprised of questions analyzing attachment and social integration with scores attached to each answer, in order to gauge social support availability [1719, 44]. The scale has a total possible score out of 40, and participants are considered to have higher social provisions with a higher score and lower social provisions with lower scores. There are no defined thresholds that distinguish between low or high social support with the ÉPS-10, and so this study set them on the 33rd (30), 66th (34) and 99th (40) percentile of respondent scores to create a 3-level categorical variable (1 = Low support, 2 = Medium support, 3 = High support).

Intimate partner violence

Four questions were related to IPV experiences within the last 6 months (i.e. "Hurting, hitting, slapping the body of a regular partner, casual partner or male sex work partner", "Forcing a regular partner or casual partner to have sex", "Forcing a person who is a male sex work partner to have sex." and "Fondling or unwanted sexual touching."). For each question, participants explicitly answered whether they had never experienced the behavior described, and if they had experienced it, they identified whether they were the perpetrator, the victim, or both. Participants who responded that they “Never” engaged in any IPV experiences were coded as “0”. Those who were identified as an IPV perpetrator were coded as “1”. Participants could have answered “Never” or “I did it” to any of the four defined behaviors for this label, but they had to have answered “I did it” for at least one of the questions. Those who were identified as a victim of IPV were coded as “2”. Participants could have answered “Never” or “It was done to me”, but to be classified as an IPV victim they must have answered “It was done to me” to at least one of the four defined behaviors. Participants who were identified as both a perpetrator and victim of IPV were be coded as “3”. In order to be classified as a dual perpetrator and victim of IPV, participants could have answered a combination of “Never”, “I did it”, “It was done to me”, or “Both” to any of the four behaviors, but they must have answered in a manner that indicated having performed both actions.

Demographics and social characteristics

Demographic and social characteristics of area of residence, age, sexual orientation, work, and education status, along with income per month, and religion were acquired from each participant. The “Age” variable was dichotomized (0 = 15–17, 1 = 18–24) and distinguished between teen and adult participants. The variable that defined a person’s highest achieved education was classified from the original six categories to three (1 = Secondary or less, 2 = Vocational, 3 = Bachelor’s or higher).

Statistical analysis

The sociodemographic characteristics of the sample were summarized using descriptive statistics and were followed by chi-square tests to examine the associations between the sociodemographic variables with depression prevalence among participants. Both chi-square tests and logistic regression modeling were used to examine the distribution of the four sexual orientation disclosure variables, IPV experiences, social support, and their respective associations with depression. Sociodemographic characteristics were adjusted using multivariable models. We examined the associations of each disclosure variable with social support levels and IPV experiences to discern whether social support and IPV may be statistical mediators of the association between disclosure and depression. Finally, a series of three logistic regression models were run for the four sexual orientation disclosure variables to test the hypothesized mediating effect. These three logistic regression models, in addition to the disclosure and sociodemographic control variables, included 1) level of social support, 2) experience of IPV, and 3) both potential statistical mediators. We identified the attenuation of the effect of disclosure on depression outcomes with the addition of these potential statistical mediators to be supporting evidence for our hypothesized mediation pathway. Any p<0.05 was defined as statistically significant. The statistical analysis software SAS, version 9.4 [SAS Inc., Cary, North Carolina], was used to perform all analyses. The aim of this study was to understand the relationship between sexual orientation disclosure on an individual’s mental health and the mediating influence of possibly related variables (i.e. social support and IPV experiences). To properly understand any association between sexual orientation disclosure and the potential mediating effects of social support and IPV, several associations were probed. Fig 1 illustrates the identified six pathways of interest.

Fig 1. Hypothesized model of the impacts that sexual orientation disclosure has on emotional health outcomes.

Fig 1

1 –sexual orientation disclosure direct impact on emotional health. 2 –the effect of sexual orientation disclosure on levels of social support. 3 –social support effects on emotional health. 4 –sexual orientation disclosure effect on IPV experiences. 5 –the total association between individual social support and IPV experiences. 6 –IPV experiences association with emotional health outcomes.

Results

Descriptive statistics

As shown in Table 1, the sample consisted of 1468 total respondents who answered all survey questions and were included in the final analysis. Adults were the primary respondents (1287; 87.7%), of whom most (586; 39.9%) lived in the capital city of Bangkok, followed closely by those (531; 36.2%) who lived in a different Thai city. Among total respondents, most self-identified as “Gay” (1209;82.4%) and to a lesser extent, 217 (14.8%) self-identified as “Bisexual”. Many of the participants held a degree of religious value in their lives, specifically finding it to be very important (712; 48.5%) or somewhat important (616; 42.0%). A third of respondents consistently disclosed their sexual orientation to everyone a part of all their social groups, with individual disclosure to “All” highest among “Family members” (37.4%) and lowest among “Friends outside school/work” (28.1%).

Table 1. Sociodemographic characteristics among GBM study sample (n = 1468) and their associations with depression.

Characteristic N (%) (Total n = 1468) N (%) Depressed (n = 826) p value
Where do you live 0.610
    Bangkok 586 (39.9) 336 (57.3)
    City other than Bangkok 531 (36.2) 297 (55.9)
    Regional center/town 277 (18.9) 148 (53.4)
    Rural or remote area 74 (5.0) 45 (60.8)
Age 0.018
    15–17 181 (12.3) 87 (48.1)
    18–24 1287 (87.7) 739 (57.4)
Sexual Orientation 0.214
    Gay 1209 (82.3) 668 (55.3)
    Bisexual 217 (14.8) 131 (60.4)
    Heterosexual/straight 42 (2.9) 27 (64.3)
Employment Status 0.283
    Full-time 383 (26.1) 203 (53.0)
    Part-time 273 (18.6) 153 (56.0)
    Not working 812 (55.3) 470 (57.9)
Education Enrollment Status 0.091
    Full-time student 813 (55.4) 445 (54.7)
    Part-time student 270 (18.4) 168 (62.2)
    Not a student 385 (26.2) 213 (55.3)
Highest Education Completed 0.649
    Secondary or Less 864 (58.8) 493 (57.1)
    Vocational 211 (14.4) 113 (53.6)
    Bachelor’s or Higher 393 (26.8) 220 (56.0)
Income per month 0.273
    < $100 491 (33.4) 272 (55.4)
    $101 - $150 248 (16.9) 144 (58.1)
    $ 151–300 341 (23.2) 205 (60.1)
    $ 301–450 205 (14.0) 114 (55.6)
    $ 451–600 89 (6.1) 46 (51.7)
    $ 601–900 48 (3.3) 20 (41.7)
    > $900 46 (3.1) 25 (54.4)
Importance of Religion <0.001
    Very important 712 (48.5) 363 (51.0)
    Somewhat important 616 (42.0) 375 (60.9)
    Not important 140 (9.5) 88 (62.9)
    Social Group
People in school/work 0.002
    All 491 (33.4) 249 (50.7)
    Not everyone 977 (66.6) 577 (59.1)
Friends outside school/work <0.001
    All 413 (28.1) 200 (48.4)
    Not everyone 1055 (71.9) 626 (59.3)
Teachers or Boss <0.001
    All 440 (30.0) 212 (48.2)
    Not everyone 1028 (70.0) 614 (59.7)
Family members 0.052
    All 549 (37.4) 291 (53.0)
    Not everyone 919 (62.6) 535 (58.2)
    Social Support <0.001
    Low 644 (43.9) 419 (65.1)
    Medium 376 (25.6) 199 (52.9)
    High 448 (30.5) 208 (46.4)
    IPV Type 0.002
    None 1056 (71.9) 566 (53.6)
    Perpetrator only 82 (5.6) 45 (54.9)
    Victim only 108 (7.4) 75 (69.4)
    Both perpetrator and victim 222 (15.1) 140 (63.1)

p value for the χ2 test.

A common trend of higher prevalence of depression was identified in each of the four social groups of interests for those who had “Not [told] everyone”, specifically with the highest prevalence among those who did not disclose their orientation to their “Teachers or Boss” (59.7%). Except for the social group of “Family members” (p = 0.052), every other group had a statistically significant association between full disclosure and lower prevalence of depression (p<0.050). Among the majority who were categorized with low social support (43.9%), the highest depression prevalence (65.1%) was identified while among those who had high social support had a lower identified depression prevalence (46.4%). There were no IPV experiences reported among most respondents (71.9%), but among the 108 (7.4%) who were identified as IPV “Victims” was the highest prevalence of depression (69.4%). This contrasts with the lower prevalence of depression (53.6%) among those with no IPV experience. The association between social support and depression was seen to be statistically significant (p<0.001) along with types of IPV experiences and depression (p = 0.002).

Mediational analysis

In the unadjusted and adjusted analyses presented within Table 2, “Friends outside school/work” (OR 0.64; 95% CI 0.51–0.81) and “Teachers or Boss” (OR 0.63; 95% CI 0.50–0.79) both had the lowest odds of depression based on their full disclosure behavior. Overall, our analyses revealed a trend of higher social support along with lower odds of depression. There was no apparent statistically significant association among IPV perpetrators (OR 1.05; 95% CI 0.67–1.65), however depression among IPV victims (OR 1.97; 95% CI 1.28–3.02) was statistically significant. Adjustment for sociodemographic variables did not significantly alter the ORs (95% CI) for full disclosure to any of the social groups, levels of social support, or IPV Types.

Table 2. Unadjusted and adjusted associations for individual study variables.

Study Variables Unadjusted OR (95% CI) Adjusted* OR (95% CI)
Full Disclosure
    People in school/work 0.71 (0.57, 0.89) 0.72 (0.58, 0.91)
    Friends outside school/work 0.64 (0.51, 0.81) 0.65 (0.51, 0.82)
    Teachers or Boss 0.63 (0.50, 0.79) 0.63 (0.50, 0.80)
    Family members 0.81 (0.65, 1.00) 0.84 (0.67, 1.05)
Social Support
    Low 1.00 1.00
    Medium 0.60 (0.47, 0.78) 0.61 (0.47, 0.79)
    High 0.47 (0.36, 0.60) 0.49 (0.38, 0.63)
IPV Type
    None 1.00 1.00
    Perpetrator only 1.05 (0.67, 1.65) 0.94 (0.59, 1.49)
    Victim only 1.97 (1.28, 3.02) 1.89 (1.22, 2.93)
    Both perpetrator and victim 1.48 (1.10, 1.99) 1.44 (1.06, 1.95)

* Adjusted for Table 1 variables

Table 3 describes the analysis looking at the associations of sexual orientation disclosure with IPV type and social support. Regardless of the social group, the majority of those who were categorized with low social support did not disclose to everyone, however with higher levels of support, there was a steady increase across all groups in the percentage of those who disclosed to all (Table 3). Amongst people with “high” social support in their lives, there was a similar percentage between those who indicated full disclosure to all and those who had not disclosed to everyone. Considering those with “high” social support, their disclosure to all was highest for “People in school/work” and conversely, those with “low” social support exhibited the lowest disclosure to all for “Friends outside school/work”. There was a statistically significant association noted between sexual orientation disclosure and social support amongst each social network of interest (p<0.001). 30% of people continually disclosed to everyone among “People in school/work”, “Friends outside school/work”, and “Teachers or Boss”. Patterns of disclosure to “All” did not generally differ based on an individual’s experiences with IPV, however higher reports of IPV were always seen among those who did not tell everyone. “Family members” were the social group who received the highest full disclosure while “Friends outside school/work” received the lowest disclosure. The highest reports of IPV were among those who did not tell all their “Friends outside school/work” in comparison to the three others groups. Across all social groups, there were no statistically significant associations noted between sexual orientation disclosure and IPV experiences (p>0.050).

Table 3. Associations of sexual orientation disclosure with social support and IPV (n = 1468).

Social Group Social Support IPV Type
Low Medium High p value None Perpetrator Only Victim Only Both p value
People in school/work <0.001 0.757
    All 142 (22.0) 120 (31.9) 229 (51.1) 347 (32.9) 26 (31.7) 40 (37.0) 78 (35.1)
    Not everyone 502 (78.0) 256 (68.1) 219 (48.9) 709 (67.1) 56 (68.3) 68 (63.0) 144 (64.9)
Friends outside school/work <0.001 0.616
    All 109 (16.9) 94 (25.0) 210 (46.9) 287 (27.2) 24 (29.3) 33 (30.6) 69 (31.1)
    Not everyone 535 (83.1) 282 (75.0) 238 (53.1) 769 (72.8) 58 (70.7) 75 (69.4) 153 (68.9)
Teachers or Boss <0.001 0.607
    All 121 (18.8) 111 (29.5) 208 (46.4) 306 (29.0) 26 (31.7) 36 (33.3) 72 (32.4)
    Not everyone 523 (81.2) 265 (70.5) 240 (53.6) 750 (71.0) 56 (68.3) 72 (66.7) 150 (67.6)
Family members <0.001 0.516
    All 196 (30.4) 138 (36.7) 215 (48.0) 385 (36.5) 29 (35.4) 44 (40.7) 91 (41.0)
    Not everyone 448 (69.6) 238 (63.3) 233 (52.0) 671 (63.5) 53 (64.6) 64 (59.3) 131 (59.0)

p value for the χ2 test.

Among each of the individual social groups, adjustment for sociodemographic characteristics, social support, and IPV type was conducted (Table 4). Within Table 4 are three models that adjusted for sociodemographic characteristics, and each model only differs based on the inclusion of a social group, social support levels, or IPV type. The OR for sexual orientation disclosure was raised after social support adjustment within each social group, compared to the unadjusted analyses. An elevated OR of 0.84 (95% CI 0.66–1.06) for “People in school/work” was reported, however there were significant changes following an adjustment for IPV experiences from the unadjusted analysis (OR 0.72; 95% CI 0.57–0.90). While there was no significant changes produced from IPV experiences being accounted for (OR 0.64; 95% CI 0.50–0.81), there was a significant increase in the OR for depression among “Friends outside school/work” to 0.76 (95% CI 0.59–0.97) with social support adjustment. There was an increased, significant association for depression risk (OR 0.73; 95% CI, 0.57–0.93) following social support adjustment, and this pattern was seen amongst “Family members” who received full disclosure (OR 0.91; 95% CI 0.73–1.15). We noted that adjustment for IPV showed no change in OR compared to unadjusted analyses. Regarding the fully adjusted model for all four social groups which included all study variables, the full disclosure OR was consistently comparable to the individual ORs focused on social support adjustment.

Table 4. The adjusted associations between sociodemographic characteristics, social support, and IPV factors among different groups.

Study Variables Model 1* Model 2** Model 3***
People in school/work
Full Disclosure 0.84 (0.66, 1.06) 0.72 (0.57, 0.90) 0.83 (0.65, 1.05)
Social Support
    Low 1.00 - 1.00
    Medium 0.62 (0.48, 0.81) - 0.61 (0.47, 0.80)
    High 0.51 (0.39, 0.67) - 0.51 (0.39, 0.66)
IPV Type
    None - 1.00 1.00
    Perpetrator only - 0.93 (0.59, 1.49) 1.02 (0.64, 1.64)
    Victim only - 1.91 (1.23, 2.96) 1.95 (1.25, 3.04)
    Both perpetrator and victim - 1.45 (1.07, 1.97) 1.46 (1.08, 1.99)
Friends outside school/work
Full Disclosure 0.76 (0.59, 0.97) 0.64 (0.50, 0.81) 0.75 (0.58, 0.96)
Social Support
    Low 1.00 - 1.00
    Medium 0.62 (0.48, 0.81) - 0.62 (0.47, 0.81)
    High 0.53 (0.41, 0.69) - 0.53 (0.40, 0.69)
IPV Type
    None - 1.00 1.00
    Perpetrator only - 0.95 (0.59, 1.52) 1.03 (0.64, 1.65)
    Victim only - 1.92 (1.24, 2.98) 1.96 (1.26, 3.06)
    Both perpetrator and victim - 1.47 (1.08, 1.99) 1.47 (1.08, 2.00)
Teachers or Boss
Full Disclosure 0.73 (0.57, 0.93) 0.63 (0.49, 0.79) 0.72 (0.56, 0.92)
Social Support
    Low 1.00 - 1.00
    Medium 0.63 (0.48, 0.82) - 0.62 (0.48, 0.81)
    High 0.53 (0.41, 0.69) - 0.53 (0.41, 0.69)
IPV Type
    None - 1.00 1.00
    Perpetrator only - 0.95 (0.59, 1.52) 1.03 (0.64, 1.65)
    Victim only - 1.93 (1.24, 3.00) 1.97 (1.26, 3.08)
    Both perpetrator and victim - 1.46 (1.08, 1.99) 1.47 (1.08, 2.00)
Family members
Full Disclosure 0.91 (0.73, 1.15) 0.83 (0.66, 1.04) 0.90 (0.72, 1.14)
Social Support
    Low 1.00 - 1.00
    Medium 0.61 (0.47, 0.80) - 0.61 (0.47, 0.79)
    High 0.49 (0.38, 0.64) - 0.49 (0.38, 0.64)
IPV Type
    None - 1.00 1.00
    Perpetrator only - 0.94 (0.59, 1.50) 1.03 (0.64, 1.65)
    Victim only - 1.90 (1.23, 2.95) 1.95 (1.25, 3.04)
    Both perpetrator and victim - 1.45 (1.07, 1.97) 1.46 (1.08, 1.99)

* Adjusted for Social Support and Table 1 variables

** Adjusted for IPV type and Table 1 variables

*** Adjusted for all variables

Fig 2 summarizes the complex intersection between the variables of disclosure and sexual identity, social support, IPV experiences, while simultaneously illustrating the distinct associations that each has with mental health. While improved mental health outcomes and elevated social support are positively associated with full disclosure to others, there does not appear to be an association with experiences of IPV. It appears that for Thai GBM, social support levels and IPV experiences do not have any bi-directional or uniliteral association with one another.

Fig 2. The demonstrated associations between variables of full sexual orientation disclosure, IPV experiences, social support levels, and depression as an emotional health outcome.

Fig 2

Discussion/Conclusion

Our study provides strong supporting evidence among Thai GBM for independent associations between full sexual orientation disclosure, IPV experiences, and social support with depression as an emotional health outcome. Full disclosure of one’s sexual orientation was expected to cement larger, healthier connections to other people, and as expected, it was associated with greater social support. Elevated social support in itself was associated with lower odds of depression among respondents, thus lending support to our hypothesized mediation pathway. Although there were greater odds of depression associated with being an IPV victim, we found that IPV experiences did not vary by disclosure status, and thus was not a statistical mediator.

The results of this study illustrated a consistent and positive association between increased levels of disclosure and experiential levels of social support (Table 3). Gay, bisexual, and other men who have sex with men can be motivated to disclose their behavioral experiences and sexual orientation through a need for therapeutic resolve over stressors, including feelings of confusion or despair over being “closeted”, while other men may be motivated to improve relationships and minimize emotional distance from others by sharing such information [11]. The trend of increased social support and disclosure was seen among all social groups, but not all GBM may feel comfortable disclosing to every community due to higher levels of sexual identity related stressors, and lacking a sense of comfort due to anticipated maltreatment within these networks. The potential negative responses that may ensue upon disclosure to others (i.e. bodily harm, social disapproval, social avoidance) can heavily influence whether to “come out” depending on the social context in which disclosure ensues [10]. Hence, disclosure processes are likely dependent upon one’s social environment and that lower levels of disclosure in certain contexts may be adaptive and resilient [45, 46]. By increasing “outness”, GBM can elevate self-acceptance, authentic living, and reduce distress, thus strengthening social networks through healthy and more expressive friendships [7, 10, 47, 48].

A lack of disclosure in this study was associated with increased depression across all social groups, potentially due to GBM anticipation of social discrimination and deciding against opening up to certain hostile social groups. Having to contend with the potential for negative physical and social responses from others upon disclosure can weigh as heavy stressors, and result in people remaining “closeted” for protection, however this can ultimately fester feelings of self-consciousness, depression, and low self-esteem [2, 10, 12]. Past research among men who have sex with men has shown that social network connections can be instrumental in protecting against the effects of distal minority stressors on their psychological well-being, and lowered support can exacerbate depressive symptoms [49]. Among “Family members”, the association between full disclosure and depression was not statistically significant (p = 0.052), possibly explained by people gaining acceptance from other communities in a substantially enough manner that buffered against family-related struggles.

There was a prevalence of 65.1% for depression outcomes among the majority of respondents categorized with low social support. This prevalence exhibited a downward trend with increased levels of social support, a pattern that is consistent among other studies that applied the same social provisions scale to conceptualize and measure self-perceived community engagement. Elevated levels of social support in a person’s life suggest that notable levels of social worth tend to trend with increased positive self-reliance and a greater overall quality of social connections [17, 50, 51]. Those that have disclosed to social groups and received positive and supportive responses have highlighted on the strengthened relationships they have gained, marked by an openness and comfortability with engaging in topics of sexuality [2]. It may be that stronger relationship ties are potentially inspired by the feeling that one’s sexuality and same-sex relationships are valid, enabling others to be open and receive, at least partially, support from others. With a greater belief that one is connected to an understanding community accepting of gay and bisexual orientations, this can help GBM discover allies in their networks which may be protective against depression.

Our study did not find any significant difference between types of IPV experiences among respondents when analyzed by each social group and the extent to which GBM disclosed to them. Within the context of Thailand, recent increased digital communication and Internet accessibility has led to notable increases in cyberbullying, and digital harassment, with one study among 15–24-year-olds demonstrating around 50% have witnessed harassment/violence in online/offline manners in the past year [52]. Such witnesses have a correlation with being perpetrators of violence and further being cyclically involved in violent scenarios as victims themselves. With a prominent number involved in violence and considering that IPV experiences were not significantly associated with disclosure to any social groups in our study, this may inspire a fervent normalization of violence that is tolerated and more easily perpetrated against high risk minority groups such as GBM.

This is particularly alarming given that on average, four out of ten individuals in Southeast Asian countries still reject neighbors who are lesbian or gay [53]. While Thailand is found to be more accepting as a gay-friendly locale, especially in comparison to Indonesia and Malaysia, there is a need for culturally competent mental health mobilization as 50% of LGBTQ+ individuals report being bullied [53, 54]. Aggression still exists towards even when such Thai individuals seek health care to alleviate their mental health issues, with 36.5% report being stereotyped by health service providers and 24.6% being harassed or ridiculed, illustrating a need for increased mental health practitioner empathy and cultural competency towards their sexual orientation minority clientele [54].

A distinct association between IPV experiences and depression was shown by the OR for IPV perpetrators being practically 1.0, meaning that in comparison to those with no reported IPV experiences, there was no significantly higher odds of depression for the “perpetrator only” group. One study reported that men who experienced minority stressors of verbal or physical harassment diminished their level of disclosure to others and were more likely to report experiences of IPV, while another study found that sexual orientation related victimization was significantly and positively associated with psychological IPV perpetration [16, 55]. In this study, the experience of being an IPV victim–alone and when coupled with the experience of being an IPV perpetrator–is associated with depression. It is suggested that the limited social connections to other family or friends and increased isolation or depression that individuals feel could predispose them to higher risk of violence. A previous study reported on similar results that, in comparison to female opposite-sex IPV victims, poor self-perceived health status was twice as likely among same-sex victims [56].

We conceptualized that full disclosure everyone in a social group would safeguard against IPV, as there would likely be a greater likelihood of disclosing to a surrounding community that shows acceptance and understanding. In environments that are high in autonomy support, described as interpersonal acceptance support for a person’s true self-expression, researchers have found that gay and bisexual individuals are more likely to increase the degree to which they disclose to others [57]. Having autonomy support in social groups significantly moderated reports of negative feelings of anger, depression, and low-esteem issues [57]. A separate study reported that men whose social networks that contained higher amounts of sex partners or “closeted” gay friends were associated with higher IPV victimization and perpetration, in contrast to the significantly lower reports among those who had more gay friends [24]. While such levels of lowered sexual orientation disclosure may be related to fear of negative emotional and social responses from others, it was suggested that these men may also not have access to a wider LGBTQ+ inclusive community, diminished access to social support, or culturally appropriate services [12, 24]. It was anticipated that tolerance would inspire bonds that could be helpful against IPV risk factors, however, the results did not support this idea. This study did not find any statistically significant associations between different social groups and IPV history, illustrating that IPV involvement is not affected by the networks one discloses to. There are multiple triggers found to generally predispose couples to IPV, such as financial hardship or substance usage, however same-sex specific factors may be more comprehensive and encompass internalized homophobia, or discrimination based on racist attitudes [29, 5860]. It is possible that such IPV risk factors may prove more instrumental in their contribution to the minority stressors that GBM experience, such as negative self-image and sexual identity discomfort, which may compound if left unresolved.

Limitations and future directions

There are some limitations of note, the first being the study’s cross-sectional design. There may exist a reverse causality between the variables of sexual orientation disclosure and social support, with increased levels of disclosure contributing to community connections or vice versa. However, given the cross-sectional study design, causality cannot be inferred at all. Longitudinal research to address this limitation is urgently needed. The second limitation is regarding the web-based survey distribution, as it narrowly excluded those without stable internet access. A potential GBM respondent lacking a reliable internet access would likely seek an alternate avenue separates from the social gay-network apps that this study was promoted through. Another limitation is related to the survey itself, as questions regarding sexual orientation disclosure contain vague wording that leaves room for subjective interpretation among participants who are self-reporting their behaviors. This is particularly important since people may have unique perceptions regarding their disclosure status among their social groups, and certain social settings may not prove as important toward their well-being as other groups are.

Despite these limitations, our study provides strengthened evidence that supportive social networks can have impacts on an individual’s mental health. These findings also elucidate a greater understanding of how different IPV experiences, either as a perpetrator, a victim, or both, can shapes health outcomes of depression. There are unique challenges that GBM communities face daily that affect their long-term health, even if they do live in a country that may be more accepting in comparison to others. Efforts to inform and positively support GBM individuals may reduce the community stigma and in turn support them in their decision to disclose their sexual orientation. Additionally, concerted efforts to improve attitudes and understanding of GBM communities can be used to provide better informed medical care in mental health counseling. Finally, improving mutual respect between communities with GBM individuals and reducing the perceived harm that people may feel surrounding their own IPV experiences can lead to better-informed health care and provide an opportunity to connect people who have experienced IPV. Through this discussion we can begin to provide resources and improved strategies that improve the lives of GBM individuals by improving their self-confidence and longevity.

Acknowledgments

We thank all study participants for their willingness to participate, and all study staff for their support.

Data Availability

Data are available upon request from the Center of Excellence in Research on Gender, Sexuality and Health (MUGSH), Mahidol University 999 Puttamonthon 4 Road Salaya Nakhon Pathom, Thailand 73170, or by emailing Ms. Mudjalin Cholratana at mudjalin@gmail.com. Data cannot be deposited into a public repository because of ethical restrictions. While the data have been stripped of all identifiers, there exist potential risks where sensitive data on substance use and sexual behaviors may be traced back to specific participants. For this reason, MUGSH can be contacted on a case by case basis to retrieve data from this study.

Funding Statement

Materials for this research project was funded by Mahidol University. Eduardo Encina was supported by the Yale School of Public Health Summer Fellowship Award 2020. Thomas E. Guadamuz, Worawalan Waratworawan, and Yamol Kongjareon were supported through NIAID grant R21AI140939 and NIMH grant R01MH119015. The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: No

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Reviewer #1: Strengths

There is a great need for research on the mental health of LGBTQ communities, particularly in non-Western societies. Furthermore, understanding the relationship of depression and intimate partner violence is of great significance for global public health. As such, this research is critically important. The purpose of the study has merit and has the potential to contribute to the field.

Areas of Weaknesses

The article being reviewed is an obvious contribution to the field. The study’s focus on depression, IPV, and sexual orientation disclosure among Thai men and is important and there is a dearth of research in this area. However, the manuscript as currently written is not suitable for publication. I would recommend accepting with several major revisions needed. Below are some tips to improve the quality of the manuscript for future publication.

Introduction

The introduction of the paper is very disjointed and does not underscore the rationale for the study. Specifically, it is unclear how sexual orientation disclosure relates to depression and IPV. The authors need to review the introduction to clearly tell the reader why they feel the relationship exist and its importance.

There are several places where the authors make claims that aren’t defended by either a citation or example of the existing research in the area (see lines 53, 57, 64, 65). Adding examples of the literature and citations for the claims would strengthen the arguments.

The aim of the study is to examine sexual orientation disclosure of gay and bisexual men however the authors use the term MSM to refer to the study population which is a behavioral term. Since the authors are referring to identity, the authors should use gay and bisexual not MSM which include people across sexual orientations. Furthermore, the authors should be consistent in language. Currently the authors use sexual minority, LGBTQ, and gay community to refer to the population. Please be specific and use consistent and correct language.

On line 66, the authors use the term “surrounding spaces” but it is unclear what they are referring to. Please clarify.

Methodology issue

The authors should clarify what the Greater Mekong sub-region is for readers and identify the countries part of this region.

The authors should identify the name of the study/project the data comes from.

It would be useful to the readers to have an example of one of the items parts of the IPV questions used in the study.

There is conflicting information about the age of participants. In one part of the paper, it states only persons over the age of 18 are included but in another it indicates people from 15-24. Please clarify who is included.

Analysis issues

The authors in the study state they had an initial sample of 1496 but only 1468 are included for analysis. The authors need to explain how they came up with this sample. Why were people excluded from the analysis?

Discussion

A large issue with this paper is that the authors do not address this critical issue of what might impact sexual orientation disclosure or non-disclosure. The authors suggest disclosure is a good thing, however this omits the reality of how it might be harmful to disclose one’s sexual orientation. Furthermore, the authors suggest disclosure reduces depression however the analysis doesn’t allow from this level of analysis. You cannot determine direction based on this study. It could be that individuals who are depressed are less likely to disclosure their sexual orientation or that in fact disclosure leads to reduction of depression. The authors should address this limitation.

On line 345 the authors incorrect use the term sexual orientation when they should be using gender identity.

The authors should avoid causality. They cannot establish causality given the study design.

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


11 Jan 2023

Reviewer #1: Strengths

There is a great need for research on the mental health of LGBTQ communities, particularly in non-Western societies. Furthermore, understanding the relationship of depression and intimate partner violence is of great significance for global public health. As such, this research is critically important. The purpose of the study has merit and has the potential to contribute to the field.

Areas of Weaknesses

The article being reviewed is an obvious contribution to the field. The study’s focus on depression, IPV, and sexual orientation disclosure among Thai men and is important and there is a dearth of research in this area. However, the manuscript as currently written is not suitable for publication. I would recommend accepting with several major revisions needed. Below are some tips to improve the quality of the manuscript for future publication.

Introduction

The introduction of the paper is very disjointed and does not underscore the rationale for the study. Specifically, it is unclear how sexual orientation disclosure relates to depression and IPV. The authors need to review the introduction to clearly tell the reader why they feel the relationship exist and its importance.

- Response: The introduction of the paper has been revised to properly reflect the relationships between disclosure, depression and IPV to reinforce the importance of this study (Introduction, lines 62-68, pages 3-4).

There are several places where the authors make claims that aren’t defended by either a citation or example of the existing research in the area (see lines 53, 57, 64, 65). Adding examples of the literature and citations for the claims would strengthen the arguments.

- Response: We have now included examples and provided proper citations (Introduction, lines 52-53, 56-57, 62-66, pages 3-4).

The aim of the study is to examine sexual orientation disclosure of gay and bisexual men however the authors use the term MSM to refer to the study population which is a behavioral term. Since the authors are referring to identity, the authors should use gay and bisexual not MSM which include people across sexual orientations. Furthermore, the authors should be consistent in language. Currently the authors use sexual minority, LGBTQ, and gay community to refer to the population. Please be specific and use consistent and correct language. On line 66, the authors use the term “surrounding spaces” but it is unclear what they are referring to. Please clarify.

- Response: We have now made the terms clearer and consistent throughout the manuscript. We feel that the term MSM is appropriate in the spaces where it is used because some participants identify as “straight” and not as “gay” or “bi.”

- Additionally, “surrounding spaces” was meant to refer to research on surrounding spaces for gay men. It has now been edited for clarity (Introduction, lines 68-71, page 4).

Methodology issue

The authors should clarify what the Greater Mekong sub-region is for readers and identify the countries part of this region.

- Response: We have now clarified what the Greater Mekong sub-region is and the countries that are included in this region (Methods, lines 126-127, page 6).

The authors should identify the name of the study/project the data comes from.

- Response: This has been updated appropriately (Methods, lines 125-127, page 6).

It would be useful to the readers to have an example of one of the items parts of the IPV questions used in the study.

- Response: Example of the IPV questions such as "Hurting, hitting, slapping the body of a regular partner, casual partner or male sex work partner", "Forcing a regular partner or casual partner to have sex", "Forcing a person who is a male sex work partner to have sex." and "Fondling or unwanted sexual touching" have now been included in the Methods section (Methods, lines 187-189, page 9).

There is conflicting information about the age of participants. In one part of the paper, it states only persons over the age of 18 are included but in another it indicates people from 15-24. Please clarify who is included.

Analysis issues

- Response: We have checked and edited the manuscript so that all participants included in this study are age of 18 years and older.

The authors in the study state they had an initial sample of 1496 but only 1468 are included for analysis. The authors need to explain how they came up with this sample. Why were people excluded from the analysis?

- Response: In our final analysis, we decided to only include those individuals who fully answered all survey questions and clarified this appropriately in the new draft (Results, lines 235-236, page 11).

Discussion

A large issue with this paper is that the authors do not address this critical issue of what might impact sexual orientation disclosure or non-disclosure. The authors suggest disclosure is a good thing, however this omits the reality of how it might be harmful to disclose one’s sexual orientation. Furthermore, the authors suggest disclosure reduces depression however the analysis doesn’t allow from this level of analysis. You cannot determine direction based on this study. It could be that individuals who are depressed are less likely to disclosure their sexual orientation or that in fact disclosure leads to reduction of depression. The authors should address this limitation.

- The reviewer is correct that this study is limited by being a cross-sectional study and hence cannot establish causal relationships among the variables. We have now revised our discussion to reflect this limitation. (Discussion, pages 19 – 22).

On line 345 the authors incorrect use the term sexual orientation when they should be using gender identity.

- Response: This sentence was removed and edited in the new updated manuscript (Discussion, pages 19 – 22).

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Decision Letter 1

Paolo Roma

11 Apr 2023

PONE-D-22-15018R1Sexual Orientation Disclosure and Depression among Thai Men Who Have Sex with Men: Associations with Intimate Partner Violence and Social SupportPLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Guadamuz,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

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Additional Editor Comments:

Dear Authors,

as highlighted by both Reviewers, especially Reviewer 2, the manuscript still needs some work before it can be considered for publication.

I believe that the manuscript would strongly benefit from following Reviewers' insightful suggestions.

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Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #2: (No Response)

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Reviewer #2: Partly

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: No

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: I appreciate the author's attention to the feedback and responsiveness in their revision. I believe the article reads better overall. In general the authors have responded to all of my concerns. I still have a major concern which is about the sample. There is a conflation of sexual orientation and gender in the sample and analysis. The goal of the study is the examine sexual orientation disclosure and IPV. However the sample includes heterosexual men and they use the term MSM to define the sample. There is a clear incongruence here. Heterosexual men may be engaging in sexual behavior with other men but they are still not part of the LGBTQ community and it doesn't make sense to include them in the analysis because your question is related to identity not behavior. I would suggest omitting them or you need to change the angle of your paper and not focus on sexual orientation disclosure and LGBTQ issues.

Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript, which examines the associations between sexual orientation disclosure, IPV experiences, social support, and depressive symptoms among Thai gay and bisexual men. The revised version of the paper is generally well-written, and this is an important cross-cultural topic as a dearth of knowledge surrounds the nature, prevalence, and impact of minority stress in Thailand. Interesting associations are proposed. However, I have several suggestions, considerations, and questions that need to be addressed before considering the paper for publication.

Title

- Given the sample demographics, it might be more accurate and less misleading to use the term “gay, bisexual, and other men who have sex with men” throughout the manuscript or at least in the title instead of solely “MSM.”

Abstract

- “This article’s goal” should be reworded to sound less informal (e.g., “The purpose of this study,” “The goal of this study,” “The primary goal of this research,”)

- Should include that the majority of the sample identified as gay and bisexual. It cannot be assumed that the sample consists entirely of MSM participants unless you specify that in the Methods section of the abstract.

- The Discussion section of the abstract reads too much like the Results section. Rather than repeating findings, this section should synthesize and interpret major takeaways and highlight important implications. No implications are highlighted at the moment in this section.

Introduction

- The paper starts off by highlighting the experiences of LGBQ people specifically rather than MSM. I would recommend adding “questioning” to account for the small number of participants in your sample who may be questioning but still identify as heterosexual.

- Consider rewording the second sentence of the introduction to “Some key environmental and social influences that… include…”

- Make sure the terms you use throughout the manuscript when citing studies are consistent with their samples (e.g., LGBTQ+, LGB, LGBQ, MSM).

- Could add subheadings to improve the organization of the introduction.

- Although the proposed associations are explained in the introduction, there does not appear to be an explicitly stated theoretical framework that guides the conceptualized models. For example, you reference “stressors” and “social stressors” a couple of times throughout the manuscript and cite research guided by minority stress theory, but do not mention minority stress theory or any other established theories that might help bolster your hypotheses.

- There are conceptual nuances to your proposed model that should be addressed in the Introduction section and/or the Discussion. As demonstrated by your findings and previous findings that you cite, sexual orientation disclosure is largely associated with positive mental health outcomes, but not always, as sexual orientation disclosure can lead to more frequent instances of discrimination, which can harm mental health/well-being. It is possible that greater outness may result in lower social support and a greater reliance on partners for support due to discrimination, which may exacerbate IPV experiences. Therefore, it should be emphasized that these processes are likely highly contingent upon the individual’s social environment and that lower levels of disclosure in certain contexts may be adaptive, as evidenced in the following studies:

1) van der Star, A., Pachankis, J. E., & Bränström, R. (2021). Country-level structural stigma, school-based and adulthood victimization, and life satisfaction among sexual minority adults: A life course approach. Journal of Youth and Adolescence, 50(1), 189–201. https://doi.org/10.1007/s10964-020-01340-9

2) Shepherd, B. F., Chang, C. J., Dyar, C., Brochu, P. M., Selby, E. A., & Feinstein, B. A. (2022). Out of the closet, but not out of the woods: The longitudinal associations between identity disclosure, discrimination, and nonsuicidal self-injury among sexual minoritized young adults. Psychology of Sexual Orientation and Gender Diversity. Advance online publication. https://doi.org/10.1037/sgd0000597

- Lastly, the hypotheses of your study need to be more clearly stated in the Introduction section. I recommend creating a “Present Study” or “Current Study” subsection to briefly state the study’s overarching purpose and specific hypotheses, especially given the complexity of the proposed multiple mediation model.

Methods

- The Ns should be italicized in the tables and throughout the manuscript, as well as the p values.

- Based on this statement (“Attenuation of the effect of disclosure on depression with the addition of the potential mediators was taken as evidence supporting the hypothesized mediation pathway”) and the results (e.g., no “indirect” or “direct” effects/associations were stated), I believe the authors may be confusing moderation with mediation. Attenuation alone is not sufficient evidence to support a mediation pathway, especially since the data are cross-sectional, but social support and IPV experiences may both affect the strength or directionality of the association between sexual orientation disclosure and emotional health as potential moderators. Please clarify or use alternative methodologies to test statistical mediation such as Hayes’ (2017) PROCESS macro. Was mediation hypothesized, but not tested?

Results

- Subheadings are recommended to improve the organization of the Results section. There is a lot going on in this section and it is easy for readers to get lost, especially since a summary of the specific hypotheses tested was not provided in the Introduction section.

- I would avoid the use of the word “impact,” “led to,” and other words that may suggest causation between the variables of interest in the Results and Discussion sections, since the data are cross-sectional.

- In the tables, percentages of participants should be rounded so each column adds up to 100%.

Discussion

- The Discussion section has a lot of great information regarding sexual orientation disclosure, social support, IPV, and emotional health, but can be more strategically organized.

- The first paragraph is a summary of the study and your main findings, which is fine, but the following paragraphs read more like an Introduction section. In this section, each main finding should be explicitly stated, explained, and related to theories and prior research findings to highlight and support your contributions to the existing literature. You do this wonderfully in some paragraphs, but not so much in others.

- I would recommend adding subheadings to improve the organization of the Discussion section. For example, you could create a “Limitations and Future Directions” section.

- The authors state that there might be “reverse causality” because of the cross-sectional design of their study. However, because the data are cross-sectional, causation cannot be inferred at all, in any direction, and that needs to be clearly stated. I recommend that the authors encourage future longitudinal research to address this limitation.

Relatedly, the authors use too much causal/longitudinal language (e.g., “led to”) when discussing their findings, which again are based on cross-sectional data. Even the term mediator itself implies causation and should instead be called a “statistical mediator.” However, as previously stated, it is unclear whether the authors tested social support and IPV experiences as statistical mediators or jumped to conclusions based on independent associations/odds ratios.

Thank you again for the opportunity to review this manuscript, which touches on a very important topic and has a lot of potential.

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Reviewer #1: Yes: Darren L Whitfield

Reviewer #2: No

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Author response to Decision Letter 1


29 Jun 2023

Reviewer's Responses to Questions/Comments

Title

- Given the sample demographics, it might be more accurate and less misleading to use the term “gay, bisexual, and other men who have sex with men” throughout the manuscript or at least in the title instead of solely “MSM.”

- Response: We agreed and already changed the title.

Abstract

- “This article’s goal” should be reworded to sound less informal (e.g., “The purpose of this study,” “The goal of this study,” “The primary goal of this research,”)

- Response: We agreed and already reworded to “The primary goal of this research”.

- Should include that the majority of the sample identified as gay and bisexual. It cannot be assumed that the sample consists entirely of MSM participants unless you specify that in the Methods section of the abstract.

- Response: We agreed and added gay, bisexual, and other men who have sex with men (GBM) to the methods section of the abstract.

- The Discussion section of the abstract reads too much like the Results section. Rather than repeating findings, this section should synthesize and interpret major takeaways and highlight important implications. No implications are highlighted at the moment in this section.

- Response: We agreed and have revised discussion on the abstract.

Introduction

- The paper starts off by highlighting the experiences of LGBQ people specifically rather than MSM. I would recommend adding “questioning” to account for the small number of participants in your sample who may be questioning but still identify as heterosexual.

- Response: We agreed and have included “questioning” to our list of LGBTQ.

- Consider rewording the second sentence of the introduction to “Some key environmental and social influences that… include…”

- Response: We have revised the sentence to “Some key environmental and social factors influence…”

- Make sure the terms you use throughout the manuscript when citing studies are consistent with their samples (e.g., LGBTQ+, LGB, LGBQ, MSM).

- Response: We have now made sure the terms we use throughout the manuscript when citing studies are consistent with their samples.

- Could add subheadings to improve the organization of the introduction.

- Response: We have now added subheadings.

- Although the proposed associations are explained in the introduction, there does not appear to be an explicitly stated theoretical framework that guides the conceptualized models. For example, you reference “stressors” and “social stressors” a couple of times throughout the manuscript and cite research guided by minority stress theory, but do not mention minority stress theory or any other established theories that might help bolster your hypotheses.

- Response: We have now re-structured to the Introduction to include a discussion on the minority stress theory and how it relates to the current study.

- There are conceptual nuances to your proposed model that should be addressed in the Introduction section and/or the Discussion. As demonstrated by your findings and previous findings that you cite, sexual orientation disclosure is largely associated with positive mental health outcomes, but not always, as sexual orientation disclosure can lead to more frequent instances of discrimination, which can harm mental health/well-being. It is possible that greater outness may result in lower social support and a greater reliance on partners for support due to discrimination, which may exacerbate IPV experiences. Therefore, it should be emphasized that these processes are likely highly contingent upon the individual’s social environment and that lower levels of disclosure in certain contexts may be adaptive, as evidenced in the following studies:

1) van der Star, A., Pachankis, J. E., & Bränström, R. (2021). Country-level structural stigma, school-based and adulthood victimization, and life satisfaction among sexual minority adults: A life course approach. Journal of Youth and Adolescence, 50(1), 189–201. https://doi.org/10.1007/s10964-020-01340-9

2) Shepherd, B. F., Chang, C. J., Dyar, C., Brochu, P. M., Selby, E. A., & Feinstein, B. A. (2022). Out of the closet, but not out of the woods: The longitudinal associations between identity disclosure, discrimination, and nonsuicidal self-injury among sexual minoritized young adults. Psychology of Sexual Orientation and Gender Diversity. Advance online publication. https://doi.org/10.1037/sgd0000597

- Response: We have now emphasized that these processes are likely highly contingent upon the individual’s social environment and that lower levels of disclosure in certain contexts may be adaptive. We have also included two studies you kindly provided for us.

- Lastly, the hypotheses of your study need to be more clearly stated in the Introduction section. I recommend creating a “Present Study” or “Current Study” subsection to briefly state the study’s overarching purpose and specific hypotheses, especially given the complexity of the proposed multiple mediation model.

- Response: We have included “Current Study” subsection to briefly state the study’s overarching purpose and specific hypotheses.

Methods

- The Ns should be italicized in the tables and throughout the manuscript, as well as the p values.

- Response: Ns have now been italicized in the tables and throughout the manuscript, as well as the p values.

- Based on this statement (“Attenuation of the effect of disclosure on depression with the addition of the potential mediators was taken as evidence supporting the hypothesized mediation pathway”) and the results (e.g., no “indirect” or “direct” effects/associations were stated), I believe the authors may be confusing moderation with mediation. Attenuation alone is not sufficient evidence to support a mediation pathway, especially since the data are cross-sectional, but social support and IPV experiences may both affect the strength or directionality of the association between sexual orientation disclosure and emotional health as potential moderators. Please clarify or use alternative methodologies to test statistical mediation such as Hayes’ (2017) PROCESS macro. Was mediation hypothesized, but not tested?

- Response: We have improved the methods section by including a clarification of the statistical mediators of interest.

Results

- Subheadings are recommended to improve the organization of the Results section. There is a lot going on in this section and it is easy for readers to get lost, especially since a summary of the specific hypotheses tested was not provided in the Introduction section.

- Response: We have now added subheadings in the results section.

- I would avoid the use of the word “impact,” “led to,” and other words that may suggest causation between the variables of interest in the Results and Discussion sections, since the data are cross-sectional.

- Response: We have now replaced “impact” with “association” throughout the manuscript.

- In the tables, percentages of participants should be rounded so each column adds up to 100%.

- Response: We have now rounded up percentages of participants so that each column adds up to 100%.

Discussion

- The Discussion section has a lot of great information regarding sexual orientation disclosure, social support, IPV, and emotional health, but can be more strategically organized.

- Response: We have now reorganized the discussion section as suggest.

- The first paragraph is a summary of the study and your main findings, which is fine, but the following paragraphs read more like an Introduction section. In this section, each main finding should be explicitly stated, explained, and related to theories and prior research findings to highlight and support your contributions to the existing literature. You do this wonderfully in some paragraphs, but not so much in others.

- Response: We agreed and have now made sure that the discussion section does not read like the introduction section and each main finding is explicitly stated, explained, and related to theories and prior research findings to highlight and support the study’s contributions to the existing literature.

- I would recommend adding subheadings to improve the organization of the Discussion section. For example, you could create a “Limitations and Future Directions” section.

- Response: We have now added subheading to improve the organization of the Discussion section.

- The authors state that there might be “reverse causality” because of the cross-sectional design of their study. However, because the data are cross-sectional, causation cannot be inferred at all, in any direction, and that needs to be clearly stated. I recommend that the authors encourage future longitudinal research to address this limitation.

- Response: We have included a statement to emphasize that causality cannot be inferred at all since this is a cross-sectional study. Longitudinal research to address this limitation urgently needed.

Relatedly, the authors use too much causal/longitudinal language (e.g., “led to”) when discussing their findings, which again are based on cross-sectional data. Even the term mediator itself implies causation and should instead be called a “statistical mediator.” However, as previously stated, it is unclear whether the authors tested social support and IPV experiences as statistical mediators or jumped to conclusions based on independent associations/odds ratios.

- Response: We have replaced the word mediators with statistical mediators throughout the manuscript. They are social support and IPV experiences.

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Decision Letter 2

Paolo Roma

1 Aug 2023

PONE-D-22-15018R2Sexual orientation disclosure and depression among gay, bisexual, and other men who have sex with men: Associations with intimate partner violence and social supportPLOS ONE

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I would suggest the title indicate Mekong Region.

The introduction is greatly approved. I would suggest the authors provide either a theoretical or empirical rationale for why social support is included.

Reviewer #2: I'm quite satisfied with the revisions that have been made based on the rounds of review and look forward to seeing the article published in PLOS One. My only remaining concern is the future directions section at the end of the paper. Research limitations are adequately described, but the real life applications of your paper are not. For example, you briefly mention implications for public policy and community efforts/resources in the abstract and introduction, but do not clearly tie your findings to these implications in the discussion section even though implications for policy and community resources are critical to the purpose and theoretical basis for your paper (e.g., structural/community stigma leads to increased sexual orientation concealment and decreased community resources). Implications for clinical practice (e.g., affirmative mental health conceptualizations/interventions) could also be described. Overall, your paper aims to increase awareness on ways to mitigate depressive mental health outcomes, but needs to provide readers (especially policy makers, community advocates, and mental health practicioners) with a better understanding of how this awareness can be translated into action.

I also think the concluding sentence of the paper can improved upon/reframed to end on a stronger note. Too many ideas are crammed into a single sentence and overgeneralizations are used. I would avoid calling the entire country "extremely tolerant and gay-friendly." If this was the case, sexual orientation disclosure would not be an issue. The word tolerant also implies that sexual diversity is something to be "tolerated" rather than accepted or embraced, so I would avoid using that language as well in academic writing.

Recommended readings include:

-Layland, E.K., Bränström, R., Murchison, G.R. et al. Kept in the Closet: Structural Stigma and the Timing of Sexual Minority Developmental Milestones Across 28 European Countries. J Youth Adolescence (2023). https://doi.org/10.1007/s10964-023-01818-2

-Pachankis, J. E., Soulliard, Z. A., Morris, F., & Seager van Dyk, I. (2023). A model for adapting evidence-based interventions to be LGBQ-affirmative: Putting minority stress principles and case conceptualization into clinical research and practice. Cognitive and Behavioral Practice, 30(1), 1–17. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.cbpra.2021.11.005

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Author response to Decision Letter 2


14 Oct 2023

Responses to Reviewers’ Questions/Comments

Sexual Orientation Disclosure and Depression among Thai Men Who Have Sex with Men: The roles of Social Support and Intimate Partner Violence

Dear editor and reviewers: We thank the editor and reviewers for your feedback, suggestions and the recommended readings. We have subsequently edited the paper according to the suggestions which we feel have greatly improved the quality of the paper. We have included a discussion on the importance of Social Support as an important variable in this paper in the Introduction and have adjusted the title. We also updated and adjusted the future directions and conclusion of the paper. Finally, we have edited the paper for better flow and had a native English speaker make final edits throughout the paper. Please find below a point-by-point response to the reviewers’ comments.

Reviewer #1: I appreciate the author's consideration of the reviewer's comments. I believe the current iteration is improved. I only have minor suggestions to improve the article.

1.1 I would suggest the title indicate Mekong Region.

Response: While the name of the study is “Greater Mekong - Young MSM Internet Survey”, only the Thai data was analyzed for this paper. We have now added the word “Thai” in the title to be clearer to the readers.

1.2 The introduction is greatly improved. I would suggest the authors provide either a theoretical or empirical rationale for why social support is included.

Response: We have now added to the Introduction an empirical rationale for why social support is included in the analysis.

Reviewer #2: I'm quite satisfied with the revisions that have been made based on the rounds of review and look forward to seeing the article published in PLOS One. My only remaining concern is the future directions section at the end of the paper.

2.1 Research limitations are adequately described, but the real-life applications of your paper are not. For example, you briefly mention implications for public policy and community efforts/resources in the abstract and introduction, but do not clearly tie your findings to these implications in the discussion section even though implications for policy and community resources are critical to the purpose and theoretical basis for your paper (e.g., structural/community stigma leads to increased sexual orientation concealment and decreased community resources).

Response: We have now added some real-life applications of the findings of our paper to the future directions section at the end of the paper.

2.2 Implications for clinical practice (e.g., affirmative mental health conceptualizations/interventions) could also be described. Overall, your paper aims to increase awareness on ways to mitigate depressive mental health outcomes, but needs to provide readers (especially policy makers, community advocates, and mental health practitioners) with a better understanding of how this awareness can be translated into action.

Response: We have now added implications to the discussion section of the paper.

2.3 I also think the concluding sentence of the paper can be improved upon/reframed to end on a stronger note. Too many ideas are crammed into a single sentence and overgeneralizations are used. I would avoid calling the entire country "extremely tolerant and gay-friendly." If this was the case, sexual orientation disclosure would not be an issue. The word tolerant also implies that sexual diversity is something to be "tolerated" rather than accepted or embraced, so I would avoid using that language as well in academic writing.

Response: We have now reframed the concluding sentence of the paper.

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Decision Letter 3

Paolo Roma

3 Nov 2023

Sexual orientation disclosure and depression among Thai gay, bisexual, and other men who have sex with men: The role of social support and intimate partner violence

PONE-D-22-15018R3

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Paolo Roma

13 Nov 2023

PONE-D-22-15018R3

Sexual orientation disclosure and depression among Thai gay, bisexual, and other men who have sex with men: The roles of social support and intimate partner violence

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    Data Availability Statement

    Data are available upon request from the Center of Excellence in Research on Gender, Sexuality and Health (MUGSH), Mahidol University 999 Puttamonthon 4 Road Salaya Nakhon Pathom, Thailand 73170, or by emailing Ms. Mudjalin Cholratana at mudjalin@gmail.com. Data cannot be deposited into a public repository because of ethical restrictions. While the data have been stripped of all identifiers, there exist potential risks where sensitive data on substance use and sexual behaviors may be traced back to specific participants. For this reason, MUGSH can be contacted on a case by case basis to retrieve data from this study.


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