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. 2024 Apr 3;19(4):e0301675. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0301675

Comparing psychological versus pharmacological treatment in emotional disorders: A network analysis

Francisco Jurado-González 1,*, Francisco García-Torres 1, Alba Contreras 2, Roger Muñoz-Navarro 3, César González-Blanch 4, Leonardo Adrián Medrano 5, Paloma Ruiz-Rodríguez 6, Eliana M Moreno 1, Carolina Pérez-Dueñas 1, Antonio Cano-Vindel 7, Juan A Moriana 1
Editor: Patricia Moreno-Peral8
PMCID: PMC10990220  PMID: 38568925

Abstract

Transdiagnostic group cognitive behavioural therapy (TD-GCBT) is more effective in improving symptoms and severity of emotional disorders (EDs) than treatment as usual (TAU; usually pharmacological treatment). However, there is little research that has examined the effects of these treatments on specific symptoms. This study used Network Intervention Analysis (NIA) to investigate the direct and differential effects of TD-GCBT + TAU and TAU on specific symptoms of anxiety and depression. Data are from a multicentre randomised clinical trial (N = 1061) comparing TD-GCBT + TAU versus TAU alone for EDs. The networks included items from the PHQ-9 (depression) and GAD-7 (anxiety) questionnaire and mixed graphical models were estimated at pre-treatment, post-treatment and 3-, 6- and 12-month follow-up. Results revealed that TD-GCBT + TAU was associated with direct effects, mainly on several anxiety symptoms and depressed mood after treatment. New direct effects on other depressive symptoms emerged during the follow-up period promoted by TD-GCBT compared to TAU. Our results suggest that the improvement of anxiety symptoms after treatment might precipitate a wave of changes that favour a decrease in depressive symptomatology. NIA is a methodology that can provide fine-grained insight into the likely pathways through which treatments exert their effects.

Introduction

Emotional disorders (EDs; mainly, anxiety and depressive disorders) are highly prevalent, with approximately 4.4% of the world’s population suffering from a depressive disorder and 3.6% from an anxiety disorder [1]. The COVID-19 pandemic increased the prevalence of anxiety and depression worldwide [2, 3]. Specifically, depressive disorders increased by 27.6% and anxiety disorders by 25.6% [3]. On the other hand, it is estimated that one third of primary care (PC) consultations could be related to the presence of EDs [4]. This implies significant economic costs for public health systems, as well as an increase in the negative effects associated with these disorders (reduced quality of life, disability, increased comorbidity, etc.) for the individual; effects aggravated by the pandemic caused by SARS-CoV-2 [57]. Despite this serious public health problem, EDs are often incorrectly identified and treated in PC. Because most people experience symptoms of depression at some time in their lives that might be part of normal experiences, they may receive inappropriate diagnoses and treatment [8, 9].

Cognitive behavioural therapy (CBT) is the treatment of choice to address EDs [10, 11]. Previous studies have demonstrated the equality or superiority of CBT over pharmacological interventions for the treatment of EDs as they show better long-term outcomes and lower risk of relapse [1216]. Despite the importance of applying evidence-based interventions [1719] and patients’ preference for psychological intervention [20], pharmacological prescription is the usual treatment (TAU) in the PC setting [21]. This could be explained by the short duration of consultations, the poor training of general practitioners in psychological assessment and treatment, the high rates of comorbidity and the variety of specific protocols that prevent a comprehensive response to comorbid problems, among other reasons [2224].

These difficulties have led to the development of alternative approaches such as transdiagnostic therapies, which are useful for simultaneously treating several EDs through integrated protocols [25]. Specifically, several studies and meta-analyses have shown that transdiagnostic CBT (TD-CBT) compared to no treatment or TAU is more effective in reducing clinical symptomatology, treating comorbidity and decreasing relapses, and also produces fewer side effects and reduces economic costs [2629]. Furthermore, TD-CBT is effective in PC settings in both individual and group formats [27, 30], as well as in an abbreviated format [31]. However, in addition to taking into consideration the efficacy of a treatment, it is important to know the pathways of action through which therapeutic change occurs, as the identification of these pathways could facilitate the development of specific and more tailored treatments [32]. In this regard, the network analysis methodology has shown to be a useful technique to examine the differential effects of treatments on specific symptoms [33]. Network methodology is a set of analytical techniques derived from network theory where mental problems are conceptualised as a complex system of interactions between symptoms that influence each other [34]. It is important to note that the best interventions do not work for all ED patient profiles, so the use of new research techniques such as network analysis based on network methodology could guide us towards the development of more personalised treatment strategies [35]. However, most previous studies have compared the efficacy of treatments by noting whether there are differences in global scores, without providing information on the direct and differential effects of treatments on specific symptoms [26, 27, 36].

These relationships can be visualised in a network structure, where the nodes (i.e., circles) represent the observable variables (elements such as symptoms and/or other clinically relevant variables) and the lines linking them (i.e., edges) represent the association between the variables [37]. Network Intervention Analysis (NIA) is a recent tool that allows estimating a network of symptoms and observing which of them are directly affected by treatment over time, as well as analysing changes in the way symptoms combine [33]. NIA offers some advantages over traditional methods. For example, traditional research uses the sum of scores as an index of severity and provides results in terms of response vs. non-response [38]. In contrast, NIA allows using data from randomised controlled trials and including treatment assignment (e.g., experimental vs. control) as a node in the network and identifying differential effects of treatments on symptoms over time [39]. Moreover, as Mullarkey pointed out [40], NIA also allows looking at indirect treatment effects (i.e., whether the change in one symptom is mediated by the modification of another). A previous study has used this methodology to compare the differential effects of combination therapy versus psychotherapy for the treatment of depressive symptoms, and showed the superiority of combination therapy in the treatment of some symptoms such as feeling entrapped and emotional lability [41]. Another study found that insomnia-oriented CBT is useful for indirectly improving depressive symptoms through direct effects on two main symptoms of insomnia: early morning awakening and difficulty maintaining sleep [33].

Although significant efforts have been made to compare efficacy between different interventions, it is also important to provide additional findings that might help to understand the pathways of action of treatment. In our study, we used data from a randomised clinical trial comparing TAU (pharmacological treatment) with TD-GCBT plus TAU [42]. Briefly, the results of this clinical trial revealed that TD-GCBT plus TAU was highly effective in reducing symptoms of EDs after treatment and at 3-, 6- and 12-month follow-up [36]. Although uncertainties remain regarding the specific impact of these treatments at symptom level and how each treatment may directly impact specific symptoms, the results obtained using NIA could provide complementary insight as it allows modifying the relationships between symptoms in the network in different ways. Therefore, this paper hypothesises that each treatment will have specific pathways of action. To investigate these differential effects of treatments, we set the following objectives: (a) to explore whether each treatment (e.g. TD-GCBT vs. pharmacological) has a different impact on symptom-symptom interaction; (b) to examine the effects of both interventions on the association between symptoms over time; and (c) to observe whether there are changes in the association between symptoms at different time points, since the direct effect on one symptom may trigger changes in others indirectly.

Methods

Study design and procedure

A secondary analysis was performed using data from the PsicAP clinical randomised controlled trial (see registration in http://www.isrctn.com/ISRCTN58437086; main outcomes in the following study [36]).

Participants were recruited from 22 primary care centres in eight regions of Spain by their general practitioners during a routine clinical visit, between the months of January and July 2016. The patients presented signs or mild-moderate clinical symptoms of depression, anxiety and/or somatoform disorders. Individuals receiving treatment with antidepressants, anxiolytics and/or hypnotics were also invited to participate by their general practitioners. After receiving information about the study, those willing to participate signed a written informed consent and responded to a set of questionnaires designed to determine if they were eligible to participate in the study. The self-administered questionnaires included measures of clinical symptoms that were evaluated using the Patient Health Questionnaire (PHQ) [43]. Specifically, the Patient Health Questionnaire-9 (PHQ-9) [44] and the Generalized Anxiety Disorder-7 (GAD-7) were used to assess symptoms of depression and anxiety, respectively [45]. Validated cut-off criteria (≥10) were used to confirm the presence of symptoms suggestive of an ED. Patients with PHQ scores indicative of severe depression (PHQ-9 ≥ 20) and/or severe anxiety (GAD-7 ≥ 15) were re-evaluated by a clinical psychologist using a Structured Clinical Interview for DSM Axis-I Disorders (SCID-I), and were referred back to their primary care physician for referral to specialty care services. The inclusion criteria were: (a) age 18–65 years; (b) patients with mild to moderate EDs (anxiety, depression and/or somatisation); and (c) willingness to voluntarily participate in the study. The exclusion criteria were: (a) diagnosis of a severe mental disorder (e.g., psychosis, substance abuse or dependence, eating or personality disorders); (b) frequent or recent suicide attempt(s); and (c) individuals receiving psychological treatment for any other mental disorder. In addition, after treatment, the following question was included in the questionnaire battery to determine whether the participants were following another therapy in addition to the one established in the study: “Since the beginning of your participation in this study, have you received any other psychological or psychiatric therapy (public or private)?". Participants had to answer yes or no. If the answer was yes, the participant was automatically excluded from the study. The sociodemographic and clinical characteristics of the sample are shown in Table 1.

Table 1. Sociodemographic and clinical characteristics of participants at baseline.

Participants N = 1061
Demographic characteristics
Age, mean (SD) 43.0 (11.8)
Sex: women, n (%) 861 (81.1)
Marital status, n (%)
    Married 513 (48.4)
    Divorced 87 (8.2)
    Widowed 29 (2.7)
    Separate 58 (5.5)
    Never Married 212 (20.0)
    Unmarried 162 (15.3)
Level of Education, n (%)
    No schooling 11 (1.0)
    Basic education 267 (25.2)
    Secondary education 233 (22.0)
    High School 262 (24.7)
    Bachelor 242 (22.8)
    Master/Doctorate 46 (4.3)
Employment situation, n (%)
    Part-time employee 392 (36.9)
    Employed full time 180 (17.0)
    Unemployed, in search of work 230 (21.7)
    Unemployed, not looking for work 137 (12.9)
    Temporary incapacity to work 73 (6.9)
    Permanent incapacity to work 23 (2.2)
    Retired 26 (2.5)
Clinical characteristics
Symptoms, mean (SD)
    PHQ-9 13.6 (5.4)
    GAD-7 12.3 (4.6)

Note. SD = Standard deviation; GAD-7 = Generalized Anxiety Disorders-7; PHQ-9 = Patient Health Questionnaire-9 (depression).

Ethical aspects

The study was conducted in accordance with the Declaration of Helsinki. This project is a multi-center Randomized Clinical Trial with medication (N EUDRACT: 2013-001955-11; protocol code: ISRCTN58437086) promoted by the Psicofundación (The Spanish Foundation for the Promotion of the Scientific and Professional Development of Psychology). The research was approved by the CEIC-APCV—the national research ethics committee coordinator—and the Spanish Medicines and Health Products Agency. Approval was received by both agencies in November 2013, prior to study initiation in December 2013.

Only direct members of the internal study team can access the data. A more detailed description of data confidentiality can be found in the study protocol [42].

Sample

A total of 1061 participants were randomised to receive TAU alone (n = 527) or combined treatment involving TD-GCBT + TAU (n = 534).

Measures

The following assessment measures were administered at five different time points (pre-treatment, post-treatment and 3-, 6- and 12-month follow-up).

Patient Health Questionnaire-9 (PHQ-9) [44]. The PHQ-9 is a screening instrument that is widely used in PC to assess the frequency of depressive symptoms over the last 2 weeks [46]. The instrument consists of nine items scored from 0 (not at all) to 3 (nearly every day) with a maximum score of 27. A score of ten or higher is considered a good cut-off point for establishing the presence of depression. This instrument has been shown to offer good internal consistency in a Spanish population (α = 0.82) [46] and also in the clinical trial conducted by Cano-Vindel [36] (α = 0.86).

Generalized Anxiety Disorder-7 (GAD-7) [45]. The GAD-7 is a screening instrument widely used in PC to assess the frequency of anxiety symptoms over the last 2 weeks [47]. The instrument consists of 7 items scored from 0 (not at all) to 3 (nearly every day) with a maximum score of 21. A score of ten or higher is considered a good cut-off point for establishing the presence of anxiety. This instrument has been validated in a Spanish population [48] and has been shown to offer good internal consistency in the clinical trial conducted by Cano-Vindel [36] (α = 0.87).

Description of treatments

Treatment as usual (control group)

The control group included participants receiving TAU, also described as standard or pharmacological treatment [36]. TAU consisted of routine consultations with the GPs in face-to-face sessions (5–7 minutes) to assess the patients’ physical and/or psychological complaints and included the prescription of antidepressants, anxiolytics or hypnotics, and/or informal counselling/support.

Transdiagnostic group cognitive behavioural therapy (experimental group)

The experimental group included patients receiving transdiagnostic group cognitive behavioural therapy (TD-GCBT) plus treatment as usual (TAU). Patients receiving pharmacological treatment prior to the start of the study could also be randomly assigned to the experimental group. Once assigned, primary care physicians were not allowed to prescribe new medications or increase pharmacotherapy to these participants, but could decrease or eliminate medication if there was improvement. The treatment consisted of seven sessions of 90 minutes each held over a period of approximately 12–14 weeks in small groups (8–10 patients) at the PC centre. The sessions were conducted by clinical psychologists who had been previously trained in the treatment protocol through an 8-hour training programme led by a senior clinical psychologist (for a detailed description see [36]).

The TD-GCBT protocol modules are as follows: (1) introduction and psychoeducation: presentation and explanation of the protocol and information to participants about emotions, their adaptive function and when they become maladaptive and turn into EDs; (2) relaxation: reduction of psychophysiological activation through different self-regulation strategies (diaphragmatic breathing, progressive muscle relaxation and visualization); (3) Cognitive restructuring: information about rational and irrational thoughts and strategies to modify them; (4) behavioral therapy: behavioral activation, exposure techniques, social skills and problem solving and (5) relapse prevention: acceptance of relapses and restructuring of relapses. (for a detailed description see [36]).

Statistical analyses

All analyses were performed in R Studio (version 4. 2. 2). Our study is a secondary analysis of a randomized clinical trial where an intention-to-treat analysis was performed including all randomized patients using the chained equation multiple imputation procedure with five imputations [36]. The evaluations were completed by the following number of participants: At PRE measure (TAU = 534; TD-GCBT + TAU = 527), at POST (TAU = 316; TD-GCBT + TAU = 315), at 3-month follow-up (TAU = 238; TD-GCBT + TAU = 273), at 6-month follow-up (TAU = 205; TD-GCBT + TAU = 229), and at 12-month follow-up (TAU = 180; TD-GCBT + TAU = 208) [36].

NIA (Network Intervention Analysis)

NIA [33] was used to investigate the direct and differential effects produced by treatment on specific symptoms and the impact of interventions on the network structure over time. In other words, NIA identifies whether some of the symptoms included in the network are more strongly affected by one of the treatments (i.e., direct treatment-specific effects). A mixed graphical model (MGM) was applied to estimate a network for each assessment point (pre-treatment, post-treatment and 3-, 6- and 12-month follow-up) using the R package mgm (version 1.2–12) [49]. This model is useful to represent complex systems and to obtain information about the relationship between variables of different types, including binary, ordinal, categorical and continuous variables, among others. In addition, MGM allows representing the interaction between two nodes after controlling for associations with all the other variables of the network [50]. In the present study, the networks included depressive and anxious symptoms as continuous variables and treatment allocation as a binary variable (0 = TAU, 1 = TD-GCBT + TAU). Graphical LASSO (least absolute shrinkage and selection operator) was used to regularize models and reduce potential spurious edges [51]. We use the cross-validation approach to select the adjustment parameter and specify the degree of regularization. Specifically, we estimated the networks using a gamma hyperparameter of 0.25 to control the amount of regularisation applied.

To visualise between-group differences in symptom severity, item-means were standardised to baseline for each group separately using means and standard deviations. Differences between the TAU group and the TD-GCBT + TAU group were then compared. Negative values indicate a greater decrease in symptom severity in the experimental group compared to the control group (see Table 2). In the network, the results reflect the size of the nodes: a smaller size represents a larger effect of the TD-GCBT + TAU intervention. In this way, we can observe treatment-induced changes over time.

Table 2. Group differences in changes in PHQ-9 and GAD-7 item severity over time.

Anh SadMood Sleep Energy Appet Guilt Concen Mot Sui Nerv ConWorry TMWorry Relax Rest Irri Afra
Baseline -0.02 0.02 0.03 0.08 0.00 0.10 0.01 0.00 -0.00 0.15 0.06 0.04 0.06 -0.01 0.03 -0.00
Post-treatment -0.56 -0.72 -0.52 -0.59 -0.44 -0.50 -0.45 -0.43 -0.36 -0.64 -0.64 -0.75 -0.81 -0.58 -0.56 -0.43
Three months -0.31 -0.42 -0.35 -0.26 -0.24 -0.22 -0.35 -0.34 -0.16 -0.28 -0.30 -0.37 -0.50 -0.39 -0.25 -0.18
Six months -0.42 -0.38 -0.33 -0.41 -0.23 -0.19 -0.28 -0.35 -0.15 -0.40 -0.44 -0.43 -0.40 -0.32 -0.24 -0.27
Twelve months -0.25 -0.31 -0.43 -0.55 -0.27 -0.22 -0.37 -0.19 -0.13 -0.49 -0.50 -0.45 -0.54 -0.32 -0.38 -0.28

Note. Standardized change scores were computed at each assessment points. Differences in changes between the two groups were then calculated. Values indicate the magnitude of difference between the groups, rather than the magnitude of change for any individual group. A value of 0 indicates that the TAU alone and TD-GCBT + TAU group exhibited the same degree of change. Positive values indicate that the TAU alone group reported larger declines in symptom severity from baseline than the TD-GCBT + TAU group. Negative values indicate that the TD-GCBT + TAU group reported larger declines in symptom severity from baseline than the TAU alone group. Anh = anhedonia. SadMood = sad mood. Sleep = trouble sleeping. Energy = low energy. Appet = Appetite change. Guilt = Feeling of worthlessness. Concen = concentration difficulties. Mot = psychomotor agitation/retardation. Sui = thoughts of death. Nerv = nervousness or anxiety. ConWorry = uncontrollable worry. TMWorry = worry too much. Relax = trouble relaxing. Rest = restlessness. Irri = irritable. Afra = afraid something will happen.

To evaluate the accuracy of the edge-weights in the networks, we used the resample () function implemented in the mgm package (number of bootstrap samples). For each network, we ran 1000 bootstrap samples for which we fitted the model and plotted the resulting sampling distribution of all edges using the function plotRes () of the mgm package. The plot (see S1S5 Figs) shows the 5% and 95% quantiles of the sampling distribution [33].

Results

Fig 1 shows the five estimated networks for each assessment point (see also S6S10 Figs). The circular nodes represent the PHQ-9 and GAD-7 symptoms, and the square node indicates the treatment condition (TAU or TD-GCBT + TAU). A link between two nodes represents the only association between two variables, after controlling for all other variables in the network. The thickness of the links is proportional to the relative strength of the association. The largest and most consistent positive associations (green links) over time were found between the items interest or pleasure (D1) and feeling down, depressed or hopeless (D2), as well as between not being able to stop or control worrying (A2) and worrying too much about different things (A3).

Fig 1. Estimated networks pre-treatment (baseline), post-treatment and 3-, 6- and 12-month follow-up.

Fig 1

The nodes in the network represent the seven items of the Generalized Anxiety Disorder-7 and the nine items of the Patient Health Questionnaire-9 (circles), and treatment (square). The edges represent the unique association between two variables, after conditioning on all other variables in the network. Green edges represent positive associations, red edges represent negative associations, and the width and color-saturation of the edges are proportionate to the strength of the association and can be compared across networks. Associations between the treatment variable and a symptom indicate that symptom to be more directly affected by only one of the treatments. Green edges indicate a positive treatment effect for TD-GCBT + TAU, and red edges indicate a positive treatment effect for TAU alone. Abbreviations: Treat = treatment. Anh = anhedonia. SadMood = sad mood. Sleep = trouble sleeping. Energy = low energy. Appet = Appetite change. Guilt = Feeling of worthlessness. Concen = concentration difficulties. Mot = psychomotor agitation/retardation. Sui = thoughts of death. Nerv = nervousness or anxiety. ConWorry = uncontrollable worry. TMWorry = worry too much. Relax = trouble relaxing. Rest = restlessness. Irri = irritable. Afra = afraid something will happen.

Fig 1 shows a direct link at baseline between TAU (green link) and the symptoms feeling nervous, anxious or on edge, while the transdiagnostic group CBT shows the greatest impact at all other time points. Specifically, the results revealed direct effects at post-treatment of TD-GCBT + TAU on the anxiety symptoms worrying too much about different things (A3), trouble relaxing (A4), being so restless that it is hard to sit still (A5), becoming easily annoyed or irritable (A6) and the depressive symptoms feeling down, depressed or hopeless (D2). In subsequent assessments up to the one-year follow-up, differences between treatments continued to show a greater effect of TD-GCBT + TAU on certain specific symptoms compared to TAU. Specifically, at 3 month follow-up, TD-GCBT + TAU was associated with a decrease in difficulty relaxing (A4), restlessness (A5), concentration problems (D7) and sad mood (D2). Subsequently, at 6-month follow-up, differences were observed in favour of the treatment received by the experimental group in irritability (A6), psychomotor problems (D8) and anhedonia (D1). Finally, at 12 month follow-up, TD-GCBT + TAU was particularly efficacious for the symptoms difficulty relaxing (A4) and increased energy (D4).

Discussion

The aim of the present study was to establish whether two treatments (TD-GCBT + TAU vs. TAU alone) for EDs could influence symptoms differently over time. For this purpose, we applied NIA and estimated five network models (pre-treatment, post-treatment and 3-, 6- and 12-month follow-up). We expected each treatment to show a different pathway of action.

The main finding of our study was the direct association between TD-GCBT + TAU and some specific symptoms of anxiety and depression, whereas TAU was not directly associated with any symptoms differentially, indicating favourable effects of TD-GCBT + TAU compared to TAU alone. These results are similar to previous traditional research that has largely demonstrated a greater effect of TD-CBT in reducing clinical symptoms compared to TAU [26, 27, 36], thus suggesting that the addition of TD-GCBT to TAU is likely to exert a beneficial influence on clinical symptom improvement in patients with EDs. Despite this, other research has highlighted that the use of psychotropic drugs, such as benzodiazepines, may interfere negatively with some learning processes such as habituation [52]. In addition, scientific evidence advises against the administration of anxiolytics and antidepressants in most cases because of their side effects and their limited long-term effect [53].

Our work incorporates a novel approach underpinned by network methodology and provides additional and specific information at the symptom level (specific associations between network elements) that are directly and differentially affected by either of the treatment conditions. Specifically, our results revealed that TD-GCBT + TAU was directly associated with four specific anxiety symptoms (worrying too much about different things, difficulty relaxing, restlessness and irritability) and one depression symptom (sad mood), showing greater differential effects than TAU in symptom reduction after treatment (see Table 2). These results support those of the main study of Cano-Vindel [36] who observed significant differences in favour of TD-GCBT + TAU in the overall reduction of anxiety and depressive symptoms using a sum score. Therefore, it seems possible that TD-GCBT can effectively modify, both directly and indirectly, the symptoms targeted by the different components included in the protocol modules (psychoeducation, relaxation, cognitive restructuring techniques, behavioural therapy and relapse prevention) [42]. Thus, the implementation of NIA is useful for revealing specific treatment pathways of action, which may favour the development of more effective interventions to address the symptoms of emotional disorders. In our case, it is likely that the addition of TD-GCBT may help patients to decrease their physiological arousal and tolerate physical and emotional sensations (difficulty relaxing, restlessness and irritability), and to develop cognitive reappraisal strategies useful for changing the way an emotion is experienced and to generate more realistic interpretations (sad mood and worrying too much about different things) [54].

Furthermore, our results indicate that the impact of TD-GCBT on specific symptoms is maintained in the long term (one year in this case). Specifically, direct associations were observed on specific anxiety symptoms (e.g., difficulty relaxing, restlessness and irritability), just as new differential effects on depressive symptoms (anhedonia, sad mood, concentration problems, psychomotor problems and energy) gradually emerged. Based on our results, we hypothesized that TD-GCBT, compared to TAU, might be contributing to a greater extent to the improvement of two key symptoms of EDs (sad mood and anhedonia). Afterwards, TD-GCBT could increase energy status by improving sad mood and anhedonia. Although further research is needed, it is possible that these changes are favoured by psychological treatment (e.g., through the effects exerted by behavioral activation). These results support the network analysis proposition that treatments appear to affect specific symptoms first and subsequently trigger a wave of changes in other symptoms indirectly, thus modifying the connections between network elements. That is, an intervention may promote changes in certain variables that, in turn, lead to changes in others. This is consistent with the phenomenon known as hysteresis, or the process of activation between symptoms, even after the triggering cause has disappeared [37].

On the other hand, it should be noted that there is temporal variability in the direct effects of TD-GCBT on some symptoms. For example, direct associations on irritability emerge at post-treatment and at 6 months, but not at 3 or 12 months follow-up. Similar results were observed in the difficulty to relax. Several reasons could explain such variability in the effects of TD-GCBT: first, the order established in the treatment modules; second, the variability between subjects in the training and in the regular practice followed by each participant after the end of the treatment and, finally, a statistical explanation based on the Regularization process (i.e., if there is a similar effect at two time points, the link between two nodes will appear exclusively in the one that presents statistical significance). However, this does not mean that there are no effects on these symptoms at the other time point, but that these have not been significant compared to the other time point.

However, more research is needed to determine the direct and indirect effects of treatments on mental disorders in general and EDs in particular, which could help to improve the effectiveness of treatments through symptom-targeted interventions. In this regard, it would be interesting to analyse other trials with transdiagnostic treatments or other effective therapies that can be implemented in the context of PC, such as brief therapies, and to examine changes at the symptom level. On the other hand, future research could incorporate more assessments over time to examine long-term symptom improvement. In addition, it may be of interest to specifically analyse how each module of the protocol affects each symptom, and to observe whether these changes are sustained over time, which would help to determine which intervention strategies would be more likely to improve particular symptoms (e.g., people who regularly practise relaxation techniques may be more likely to improve their level of physiological arousal). Importantly, as Mullarkey pointed out [40], these differential treatment effects are masked when sum scores are used to examine changes in symptom severity, making the application of the NIA relevant and providing information that complements these obstacles reported in previous research.

Two of the symptoms directly affected in our study, worrying too much and sad mood, have been identified as core symptoms through network analysis in previous research [55, 56]. From network theory, it is proposed that intervening directly and effectively on these core symptoms could be a promising strategy that could lead to a cascading decrease in other symptoms [57]. In this sense, TD-GCBT + TAU directly decreased the symptom worrying too much, and in turn, significantly decreased the symptoms (uncontrollable worries, nervousness or anxiety and difficulty relaxing) strongly associated with this core symptom. On the other hand, transdiagnostic therapy directly reduced sad mood, which is strongly associated with other symptoms (anhedonia, low energy, or guilt) that improved significantly throughout the treatment and in the months following the end of treatment. However, as noted above, it would be appropriate to develop other designs that include more assessments during treatment to determine more solidly the trajectory of symptom changes produced by transdiagnostic intervention or other treatments for emotional disorders. Or, on the other hand, studies incorporating centrality measures could be considered to design specific interventions aimed at experimentally manipulating these nodes and observing changes in the network.

In terms of clinical implications, our results highlight the importance of understanding the potential pathways through which treatments exert their effects. In our study, both the absence of differential effects of TAU on specific symptoms and the direct effects of TD-GCBT + TAU on specific symptoms of anxiety and depression support the results that highlight the beneficial effects of adding TD-GCBT to treat mild-moderate EDs in primary care settings. Defining these specific underlying treatment pathways of action could be useful to improve treatment efficacy (e.g., by combining different interventions or applying specific techniques to modify certain variables). These findings are in line with the need to clarify the key mechanisms on which we could rely to design or adjust interventions for specific psychological problems in a targeted way [35].

Some limitations of our study need to be mentioned. First, we only examined effects after treatment. We encourage future studies to include more measures before and during the intervention that would allow us to identify more comprehensively the order of TD-GCBT-induced effects on anxiety and depressive symptoms throughout treatment. Second, only symptomatic variables were included in the network model and future research would benefit from including other variables that are clinically relevant for EDs (e.g., neuroticism or emotional regulation strategies). Third, although the sample size is large, the presence of stronger direct effects may have been affected by the variation in the number of participants at different time points. Fourth, it is unlikely that the symptomatic variables of EDs selected in this study perfectly capture all variables relevant to understanding the effect of TAU or TD-GCBT + TAU on specific symptoms. Thus, future research should take into account the comorbidity between anxiety, depression, somatizations, and panic and include other variables of interest. Fifth, the findings of the present study can only be considered for mild and moderate symptoms. Sixth, since this is a very specific sample, the results cannot be generalized to other populations. Finally, future studies are needed to analyse whether there are differences between individual and group format interventions.

In conclusion, the current study shows the viability and utility of applying this novel network methodology (NIA) and highlights the importance of examining treatment-specific pathways and the usefulness of NIA in providing complementary information to overcome the limitations of previous research. Thus, identifying the specific effects of interventions on symptoms could help to select the optimal treatment based on the symptoms a person presents with, thus opening the door to the development of more effective treatments. In other words, knowing how the effects of the intervention develop could help to reorganise the treatment modules and select the techniques that are best suited to patients’ needs. Therefore, we believe that the new NIA approach can be a useful tool for examining the effects of treatments at the symptom level at different time points.

Supporting information

S1 Fig. Bootstrapped sampling distribution of edge weight estimates at pre-treatment.

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S2 Fig. Bootstrapped sampling distribution of edge weight estimates at post-treatment.

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S3 Fig. Bootstrapped sampling distribution of edge weight estimates at 3-month follow-up.

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S4 Fig. Bootstrapped sampling distribution of edge weight estimates at 6-month follow-up.

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S5 Fig. Bootstrapped sampling distribution of edge weight estimates at 12-month follow-up.

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S6 Fig. Regularized network at pre-treatment.

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S7 Fig. Regularized network at post-treatment.

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S8 Fig. Regularized network at three months follow-up.

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Acknowledgments

The authors wish thank to all the patients who participated in the study and to all members of PsicAP-Cost project.

Data Availability

Data cannot be shared publicly because this is a multi-center Randomized Clinical Trial with medication (No. EUDRACT: 2013-001955-11 and Protocol Code: ISRCTN58437086) promoted by the Psicofundación and approved by the Corporate Clinical Research Ethics Committee of Primary Care of Valencia (CEIC- APCV) (as the national research ethics committee coordinator) and the Spanish Medicines and Health Products Agency. The CEICAPCV have some availability restrictions, as a part of the legal and ethical control data of a Randomized Clinical Trial with medication. Data are available from the promoter (Spain) for researchers who meet the criteria for access to confidential data. Contact via Psicofundación (Spanish Foundation for the Promotion, Scientific and Professional Development of Psychology). Address: Calle Conde de Peñalver, 45, 5o izquierda, 28006 Madrid, Spain.) for researchers who meet the criteria for access to confidential data.

Funding Statement

This research was financially supported by Spanish State Research Agency. Ref. RTI2018-099201-B-C21, awarded to Antonio Cano-Vindel and ref. PID2019-107243RB-C22, awarded to Juan Antonio Moriana. The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: As the statistical reviewer I will focus on methods and reporting.

1) the authors state "...reduce potential spurious edges by selecting the tuning parameter called ‘cross-validation’". I struggle to understand what they mean, especially in regarding cross-validation, which is a technique and not a parameter. Can they clarify and rephrase please.

2) clarify what the resample() function does, as it is currently unclear (is it the bootstrap)

3) clarify how time is modelled into the analysis. was it a separate model for each time point?

4) clarify all the covariates used in the analyses, as per the STROBE statement, in the methods section.

5) clarify what was done with missing data, levels of missingness (per variable and overall dropped in the model). if a large number of observations is dropped, why wasn't multiple imputation used?

Reviewer #2: This article sheds some light on how a group transdiagnostic treatment has a greater effect on certain symptoms of anxiety and depression compared to pharmacological treatment in primary care through a network analysis. It therefore has a novel methodology that can provide directions for new therapeutic approaches and individualization of treatments. However, I have some doubts and comments that may improve the quality of the article.

1. The authors talk both in the introduction and in the discussion about “mechanisms of change” to refer to the contributions of their work. However, a mechanism of change attempts to explain why a treatment works and this study focuses on identifying the sequence of symptoms most affected. I consider that the terminology used should be modified and perhaps opt for others such as “path of action”, which is also used at some point in the manuscript.

2. Diagnostic interview is said to be used to identify major depressive disorder. Why is it not applied to generalized anxiety disorder?

3. In the original clinical trial, there are more measures of symptoms, such as measures for somatoform disorder or panic disorder. Why are these measures not included in this study? Somatic problems are mentioned within emotional disorders, but they are not analyzed later.

4. In the discussion it is said “These results are similar to previous traditional research that has largely demonstrated a greater effect of TD-CBT in reducing clinical symptoms compared to TAU [24,25,34], thus suggesting that the addition of TD-CBT GCBT to TAU is likely to exert a beneficial influence on clinical symptom improvement in patients with EDs.” I agree, but not only would it not add anything, but it could potentially interfere with the therapeutic process (there is evidence that reducing anxious symptoms through drugs can reduce the habituation response to anxiety disorders). This is without counting the costs and side effects. Perhaps the authors will consider expanding this argument.

5. Also, in the discussion it is said that the treatment would be beneficial to increase emotional regulation. Although I believe that this statement may be true, the results of this study do not fully support this, since of the core symptoms, two of them have more to do with the physiological state (relaxation and rest) than with a cognitive process.

6. According to the results, it would seem that the most immediate benefit of transdiagnostic group therapy would be in anxiety symptoms and, subsequently, in depressive symptoms. It is argued that it could be the former who bring about change in the latter. In that case, would it be wise to focus exclusively on a treatment for anxiety disorders and hope that it would also have an effect on depressive symptoms? What would justify the use of a transdiagnostic approach then? Or is it the treatment itself that takes time to take effect? Would the intervention change depending on the core disorder or symptoms? It would be helpful for the authors to reflect on these issues and outline how treatments can be individualized to be useful to clinicians.

7. In the limitations section, it would be convenient to add that these results are for mild and moderate symptoms, since they could change substantially when dealing with serious emotional disorders. Furthermore, the extent to which comorbidity between anxiety, depression, somatization and panic can influence the results is not studied. Finally, it would also be appropriate to comment that there could be differences between the group and individual treatment formats.

Reviewer #3: This study employs an innovative approach by utilizing network analysis methodology to investigate the dirrect and differential effects of TD-GCBT+TAU and TAU on symptoms of anxiety and depression. The findings demonstrate a direct association between TD-CBT+TAU and different anxiety and depression symptoms over time, highlighting a more pronounced effect of TD-CBT+TAU in reducing emotional symptoms compared to TAU alone. This study contributes significantly to our understanding of the functioning of CBT and underscores its relevance in the context of primary care. The manuscript has several notable strengths, including its extensive sample size and the inclusion of multiple follow-up time points, which enhance the robustness of the study. From a general point of view I consider that the study is well written but I have some minor comments:

1. In the first paragraph of the introduction, the author mentions emotional disorders, highlighting depression, anxiety, and other related disorders. It would be beneficial for the author to specify the scope and definition of these categories to provide clarity to the readers. Defining the specific disorders encompassed within the term "other related disorders" will enhance the overall understanding of the study's context.

2. Within the same paragraph, the manuscript presents statistics on the prevalence of depressive and anxiety disorders, citing data from a study conducted in 2017. Given that the manuscript also alludes to the potential exacerbation of these effects following the pandemic, it would be advisable to update these epidemiological figures. The COVID-19 pandemic has had a significant impact on mental health, and it is likely that the prevalence of these disorders has increased since 2017. Updating this information with more recent data would provide a more accurate and relevant context for the study.

3. While the Measures section delves into detailed descriptions of the instruments used in the study, it would be beneficial to specify this information in the Study Design and Procedure section as well. In the current text, there is a lack of detailed information regarding the questionnaires employed, with only a brief mention of the PHQ (Patient Health Questionnaire).

4. In the manuscript, it is mentioned that "Patients with PHQ scores indicative of major depression were re-evaluated by a clinical psychologist using a semi-structured interview". It would be interesting to clarify the specific cut-off point employed to determine the criteria for major depression. Furthermore, it would be beneficial to understand the basis of this interview and the specific criteria used for the inclusion or exclusion of participants in the study.

5. It is my understanding that the presence of a major depressive disorder is considered an exclusion criterion in the study. However, the inclusion and exclusion criteria do not explicitly specify this information. Instead, they refer to the "presence of emotional symptomatology" without detailing the severity of these symptoms.

6. Furthermore, in the Methods section, it is mentioned that "patients presented signs or symptoms of negative emotional problems, moderate depression, anxiety, or somatic symptoms." However, in the Discussion, reference is made to "mild-moderate EDs." This inconsistency in terminology could lead to confusion among readers regarding the study's eligibility criteria.

7. Regarding the measures used in the study, it would be valuable to specify whether these instruments are self-administered by the participants.

8. I recommend verifying the data presented in Table 1. Specifically, in the "Marital Status" category, it appears that the number of individuals exceeds the sample size specified in the study.

9. My understanding is that the experimental group combines TD-GCBT and TAU alone. It would be beneficial to provide details on how these treatments are combined. Is there a specific protocol with a defined number of TAU sessions? Can these treatments overlap in time?

10. Furthermore, it would be valuable to provide a concise description of the TD-GCBT protocol. The manuscript makes references to different modules in the discussion, but these modules are not explained in detail earlier in the text. Providing a brief overview of the treatment protocol will help readers understand the specific components and methodologies involved in TD-CBT, which is crucial for interpreting the study's findings and relevance.

11. During the various assessment time points, has there been any monitoring or control to ascertain whether patients engaged in other forms of psychological therapy beyond the established sessions? While I understand that not receiving any other psychological therapy during the established sessions is an exclusion criterion, it is not clear whether patients are permitted to pursue additional therapy during the follow-up period.

12. In the Results section, there is a sentence that reads as follows: "Specifically, at follow-up, TD-GCBT+TAU was associated with a decreased..." My concern pertains to the term "follow-up." While it appears that this term may refer to post-treatment based on the data presented in the figure, it would be beneficial to explicitly clarify which specific measure of follow-up is being referenced. Ensuring this clarification will eliminate potential ambiguity and enhance the readers' understanding of your results.

13. I have noted that in the Discussion section, you mention the variation in the number of participants at different time points as a limitation of the study. I would like to obtain more information on this matter. Could you provide details on how many participants were considered at each assessment time point? Were any data imputation methods employed to address potential variations in sample size at different time points?

14. It would be interesting to specify in the discussion that the results cannot be generalized to other populations, as the one considered in the study is very specific.

15. The authors stated that "treatments appear to affect specific symptoms first and subsequently trigger a wave of changes in other symptoms indirectly, thus modifying the connections between network elements." However, how does the author explain the occurrence of these changes in variables like anhedonia or energy, but not in other variables such as sleep and appetite?

16. Similarly, there is an observed loss of association in variables like irritability at three and twelve months, but not at six months. A similar pattern is also noted with difficulty in relaxing. How can this variation be explained?

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PLoS One. 2024 Apr 3;19(4):e0301675. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0301675.r002

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11 Jan 2024

Emily Chenette. Editor in Chief of PLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Emily Chenette,

We would like to thank you and the reviewers for carefully reviewing our paper entitled “Comparing psychological versus pharmacological treatment in emotional disorders: A network analysis”. Reference PONE-D-23-20048. We have made changes following the valuable suggestions, what we believe have strengthened the manuscript, helping us to improve our manuscript.

REVIEWER #1:

Comment #1: The authors state "...reduce potential spurious edges by selecting the tuning parameter called ‘cross-validation’". I struggle to understand what they mean, especially in regarding cross-validation, which is a technique and not a parameter. Can they clarify and rephrase please.

Response: We have been able to re-examine and reformulate the sentence, as follows: “We use the cross-validation approach to select the adjustment parameter and specify the degree of regularization ”. (p. 11-12, para. 2).

Comment #2: Clarify what the resample() function does, as it is currently unclear (is it the bootstrap).

Response: The resample () function implemented in the mgm package allows to evaluate the accuracy of the edges weights (resampling number). In other words, it allows to estimate the accuracy of the networks by using subsets of the available data (i.e. sampling with replacement of the original sample). (p. 14, para. 1).

Comment #3: Clarify how time is modelled into the analysis. was it a separate model for each time point?

Response: Indeed, a different model was estimated for each time point (pre-treatment, post-treatment and 3-, 6- and 12-month follow-up), as described in the "statistical analyses" section. (p. 11, para. 2).

Comment #4: Clarify all the covariates used in the analyses, as per the STROBE statement, in the methods section.

Response: We thank the reviewer for the suggestion to clarify the covariates used according to the STROBE statement. In our study, covariates, i.e., those variables that may influence the dependent variable and may be related to the independent variable, were not taken into account. However, we only consider the independent variable (treatment) as a covariate for the purposes of statistical analysis.

Comment #5: Clarify what was done with missing data, levels of missingness (per variable and overall dropped in the model). if a large number of observations is dropped, why wasn't multiple imputation used?

Response: Following the reviewer's recommendations, we have clarified that our study is a secondary analysis of a randomized clinical trial where an intention-to-treat analysis was performed, including all randomized patients using the chained equations multiple imputation procedure, with five imputations. (p.11, para. 1).

REVIEWER #2:

Comment #1: The authors talk both in the introduction and in the discussion about “mechanisms of change” to refer to the contributions of their work. However, a mechanism of change attempts to explain why a treatment works and this study focuses on identifying the sequence of symptoms most affected. I consider that the terminology used should be modified and perhaps opt for others such as “path of action”, which is also used at some point in the manuscript.

Response: Indeed, the concept "pathways of action" is more appropriate for the purpose of our study (to identify the sequence of symptoms most affected by treatment). Therefore, we have eliminated the concept "mechanisms of change" and, instead, we have written "pathways of action", thus unifying the terminology throughout the text.

Comment #2: Diagnostic interview is said to be used to identify major depressive disorder. Why is it not applied to generalized anxiety disorder?

Response: Severe anxiety disorders were a reason for exclusion from the study, and were therefore also identified through the diagnostic interview with the clinical psychologist. We have made the relevant clarifications in the "Study design and procedure" section. (p. 7, para. 1).

Comment #3: In the original clinical trial, there are more measures of symptoms, such as measures for somatoform disorder or panic disorder. Why are these measures not included in this study? Somatic problems are mentioned within emotional disorders, but they are not analyzed later.

Response: We also considered the possibility of including somatic symptoms in network analyses. However, in complex systems research, it is advisable to start from simpler models and then add other components (e.g. somatic symptoms) that allow progressing towards more complex models that deepen the understanding of the system. Consequently, we believe and consider it necessary that future research should incorporate somatic symptoms in the analysis in order to understand more precisely the effect of treatments on emotional disorders.

Comment #4: In the discussion it is said “These results are similar to previous traditional research that has largely demonstrated a greater effect of TD-CBT in reducing clinical symptoms compared to TAU [24,25,34], thus suggesting that the addition of TD-CBT GCBT to TAU is likely to exert a beneficial influence on clinical symptom improvement in patients with EDs”. I agree, but not only would it not add anything, but it could potentially interfere with the therapeutic process (there is evidence that reducing anxious symptoms through drugs can reduce the habituation response to anxiety disorders). This is without counting the costs and side effects. Perhaps the authors will consider expanding this argument.

Response: Following the reviewer's recommendations, we considered it appropriate to review the bibliography and add a few sentences in the manuscript that would allow us to approach the subject with a broader perspective: “Despite this, other research has highlighted that the use of psychotropic drugs, such as benzodiazepines, may interfere negatively with some learning processes such as habituation. In addition, scientific evidence advises against the administration of anxiolytics and antidepressants in most cases because of their side effects and their limited long-term effect”. (p. 16, para. 2).

Comment #5: Also, in the discussion it is said that the treatment would be beneficial to increase emotional regulation. Although I believe that this statement may be true, the results of this study do not fully support this, since of the core symptoms, two of them have more to do with the physiological state (relaxation and rest) than with a cognitive process.

Response: following the reviewer's recommendations, we have drawn some conclusions more in line with the results of our study: “In our case, it is likely that the addition of TD-GCBT may help patients to decrease their physiological arousal and tolerate physical and emotional sensations (difficulty relaxing, restlessness and irritability), and to develop cognitive reappraisal strategies useful for changing the way an emotion is experienced and to generate more realistic interpretations (sad mood and worrying too much about different things)”. (p. 17, para. 1).

Comment #6: According to the results, it would seem that the most immediate benefit of transdiagnostic group therapy would be in anxiety symptoms and, subsequently, in depressive symptoms. It is argued that it could be the former who bring about change in the latter. In that case, would it be wise to focus exclusively on a treatment for anxiety disorders and hope that it would also have an effect on depressive symptoms? What would justify the use of a transdiagnostic approach then? Or is it the treatment itself that takes time to take effect? Would the intervention change depending on the core disorder or symptoms? It would be helpful for the authors to reflect on these issues and outline how treatments can be individualized to be useful to clinicians.

Response: We welcome the various reflection questions posed by the reviewer. First of all, we would like to point out that psychological treatment initially exerts a greater effect on certain anxiety symptoms compared to TAU. However, this does not indicate that transdiagnostic group therapy does not influence depressive symptoms. Therefore, and given that our study sample presents heterogeneous symptoms, we think that transdiagnostic therapy may be an appropriate intervention to ameliorate EDs. However, in the future it would be useful to compare specific interventions for anxiety or depression versus transdiagnostic approaches, and to observe differences in direct effects and in the evolution of network structure in people with EDs. On the other hand, we think that intervention techniques should be different depending on the core disorder or the most important symptoms. To approach this goal, it would be interesting, for example, to design N = 1 investigations and collect more measures during treatment, to see the direct associations that emerge after each treatment module and to design more personalized treatments.

Comment #7: In the limitations section, it would be convenient to add that these results are for mild and moderate symptoms, since they could change substantially when dealing with serious emotional disorders. Furthermore, the extent to which comorbidity between anxiety, depression, somatization and panic can influence the results is not studied. Finally, it would also be appropriate to comment that there could be differences between the group and individual treatment formats.

Response: Following the reviewer's suggestions, we added the following limitations to the manuscript: “Fourth, it is unlikely that the symptomatic variables of EDs selected in this study perfectly capture all variables relevant to understanding the effect of TAU or TD-GCBT + TAU on specific symptoms. Thus, future research should take into account the comorbidity between anxiety, depression, somatizations, and panic and include other variables of interest. Fifth, the findings of the present study can only be considered for mild and moderate symptoms”. (p. 20, para. 2).

REVIEWER #3:

Comment #1: In the first paragraph of the introduction, the author mentions emotional disorders, highlighting depression, anxiety, and other related disorders. It would be beneficial for the author to specify the scope and definition of these categories to provide clarity to the readers. Defining the specific disorders encompassed within the term "other related disorders" will enhance the overall understanding of the study's context.

Response: Several authors have defined the concept of "emotional disorders" indicating which DSM diagnoses were included within this concept (anxiety and depressive disorders, somatoform disorders, panic disorder, phobias, bipolar disorder, obsessive-compulsive disorder). These disorders under the umbrella of emotional disorders appear to share underlying functional processes and meet a number of criteria: 1) the experience of frequent and intense negative emotions; 2) negative appraisal of the emotion and an aversive reaction to the emotional experience; and 3) the individual makes efforts to buffer, escape or avoid the emotional experience. However, as Bullis et al. (2019) point out, the term "emotional disorders" has been used primarily and more consistently in reference to anxiety and depressive disorders. In our manuscript, we have redefined it.: “Emotional disorders (EDs; mainly, anxiety and depressive disorders)”. (p. 3, para. 1).

Bullis, J. R., Boettcher, H., Sauer‐Zavala, S., Farchione, T. J., & Barlow, D. H. (2019). What is an emotional disorder? A transdiagnostic mechanistic definition with implications for assessment, treatment, and prevention. Clinical Psychology (New York), 26(2), 1-19. https://doi.org/10.1111/cpsp.12278

Comment #2: Within the same paragraph, the manuscript presents statistics on the prevalence of depressive and anxiety disorders, citing data from a study conducted in 2017. Given that the manuscript also alludes to the potential exacerbation of these effects following the pandemic, it would be advisable to update these epidemiological figures. The COVID-19 pandemic has had a significant impact on mental health, and it is likely that the prevalence of these disorders has increased since 2017. Updating this information with more recent data would provide a more accurate and relevant context for the study.

Response: Following the reviewer's recommendations, we have updated the prevalence data for depressive and anxiety disorders.: “The COVID-19 pandemic increased the prevalence of anxiety and depression worldwide [2,3]. Specifically, depressive disorders increased by 27.6% and anxiety disorders by 25.6%”. (p. 3, para. 1).

Comment #3: While the Measures section delves into detailed descriptions of the instruments used in the study, it would be beneficial to specify this information in the Study Design and Procedure section as well. In the current text, there is a lack of detailed information regarding the questionnaires employed, with only a brief mention of the PHQ (Patient Health Questionnaire).

Response: Following the reviewer's suggestions, we have also added information from the questionnaires used in the study in section “Study design and procedure”: “Specifically, the Patient Health Questionnaire-9 (PHQ-9) [44] and the Generalized Anxiety Disorder-7 (GAD-7) were used to assess symptoms of depression and anxiety, respectively”. (p. 6-7).

Comment #4: In the manuscript, it is mentioned that "Patients with PHQ scores indicative of major depression were re-evaluated by a clinical psychologist using a semi-structured interview". It would be interesting to clarify the specific cut-off point employed to determine the criteria for major depression. Furthermore, it would be beneficial to understand the basis of this interview and the specific criteria used for the inclusion or exclusion of participants in the study.

Response: Following the reviewer's recommendations, we have indicated the cut-off points used to determine the severity criteria for depression and anxiety (p. 7, para. 1), as well as the interview used by clinical psychologists to confirm the presence of a major depressive disorder or a major anxiety disorder (Structured Clinical Interview for DSM Axis-I Disorders; SCID-I) (p. 7, para. 1). The changes made to clarify these issues can be seen in the "Study design and procedure" section.

Comment #5: It is my understanding that the presence of a major depressive disorder is considered an exclusion criterion in the study. However, the inclusion and exclusion criteria do not explicitly specify this information. Instead, they refer to the "presence of emotional symptomatology" without detailing the severity of these symptoms.

Response: We again refer the reviewer to the "Study design and procedure" section to observe the changes made with respect to the inclusion and exclusion criteria.

Comment #6: Furthermore, in the Methods section, it is mentioned that "patients presented signs or symptoms of negative emotional problems, moderate depression, anxiety, or somatic symptoms." However, in the Discussion, reference is made to "mild-moderate EDs." This inconsistency in terminology could lead to confusion among readers regarding the study's eligibility criteria.

Response: We have revised the text and unified the terminology throughout the text indicating that our sample is represented by patients with mild-moderate clinical symptoms of an emotional disorder.

Comment #7: Regarding the measures used in the study, it would be valuable to specify whether these instruments are self-administered by the participants.

Response: Following the reviewer's recommendations, we have specified in the manuscript that the questionnaires are self-administered by the patients: “The self-administered questionnaires included measures of clinical symptoms that were evaluated using the Patient Health Questionnaire (PHQ)”. (p. 6, para. 3).

Comment #8: I recommend verifying the data presented in Table 1. Specifically, in the "Marital Status" category, it appears that the number of individuals exceeds the sample size specified in the study.

Response: Thank you for your comment. We have reviewed the sociodemographic data and indeed we had made a mistake when transferring the data to the table. In the "unmarried" participants it indicated 260 and we have replaced it with the correct number which is 162. (p. 8, Table 1).

Comment #9: My understanding is that the experimental group combines TD-GCBT and TAU alone. It would be beneficial to provide details on how these treatments are combined. Is there a specific protocol with a defined number of TAU sessions? Can these treatments overlap in time?

Response: As suggested by the reviewer, we have provided more details in the manuscript on how the two treatments could be combined: “Patients receiving pharmacological treatment prior to the start of the study could also be randomly assigned to the experimental group. Once assigned, primary care physicians were not allowed to prescribe new medications or increase pharmacotherapy to these participants, but could decrease or eliminate medication if there was improvement”. (p. 10, para. 2). To clarify the questions posed by the reviewer: (1) There was no specific protocol with a defined number of TAU sessions, but rather each patient took the medication prescribed by his or her family physician, and (2) both treatments (pharmacological and psychological) could overlap in the case of participants who were previously taking medication, with the indication to family physicians that they could not prescribe new drugs or increase the dose (only decrease or withdraw the medication).

Comment #10: Furthermore, it would be valuable to provide a concise description of the TD-GCBT protocol. The manuscript makes references to different modules in the discussion, but these modules are not explained in detail earlier in the text. Providing a brief overview of the treatment protocol will help readers understand the specific components and methodologies involved in TD-CBT, which is crucial for interpreting the study's findings and relevance.

Response: As suggested by the reviewer, we have provided a brief description of the components of the TD-GCBT protocol in the section "Description of treatments": “The TD-GCBT protocol modules are as follows: (1) introduction and psychoeducation: presentation and explanation of the protocol and information to participants about emotions, their adaptive function and when they become maladaptive and turn into EDs; (2) relaxation: reduction of psychophysiological activation through different self-regulation strategies (diaphragmatic breathing, progressive muscle relaxation and visualization); (3) Cognitive restructuring: information about rational and irrational thoughts and strategies to modify them; (4) behavioral therapy: behavioral activation, exposure techniques, social skills and problem solving and (5) relapse prevention: acceptance of relapses and restructuring of relapses”. (p. 10, para. 3).

Comment #11: During the various assessment time points, has there been any monitoring or control to ascertain whether patients engaged in other forms of psychological therapy beyond the established sessions? While I understand that not receiving any other psychological therapy during the established sessions is an exclusion criterion, it is not clear whether patients are permitted to pursue additional therapy during the follow-up period.

Response: Yes, after treatment and in the different follow-up measures, a question was included in the questionnaire battery to determine whether the participants were following another therapy in addition to the one established in the study. The question was: "Since the beginning of your participation in this study, have you received any other psychological or psychiatric therapy (public or private)?". Participants were asked to answer yes or no. If the answer was yes, the participant was automatically excluded from the study. (p. 7).

Comment #12: In the Results section, there is a sentence that reads as follows: "Specifically, at follow-up, TD-GCBT+TAU was associated with a decreased..." My concern pertains to the term "follow-up." While it appears that this term may refer to post-treatment based on the data presented in the figure, it would be beneficial to explicitly clarify which specific measure of follow-up is being referenced. Ensuring this clarification will eliminate potential ambiguity and enhance the readers' understanding of your results.

Response: Following the reviewer's recommendations, we have rewritten some sentences of the results to reduce possible ambiguities and clarify the time point to which each differential treatment effect of the experimental group corresponds. (p. 14-15).

Comment #13: I have noted that in the Discussion section, you mention the variation in the number of participants at different time points as a limitation of the study. I would like to obtain more information on this matter. Could you provide details on how many participants were considered at each assessment time point? Were any data imputation methods employed to address potential variations in sample size at different time points?

Response: In the statistical analysis section, we have provided information on the number of participants at each time point and explained how the data were imputed. (p. 11, para. 1).

Comment #14: It would be interesting to specify in the discussion that the results cannot be generalized to other populations, as the one considered in the study is very specific.

Response: Following the reviewer's recommendations, we have specified in the discussion the following limitation: “Sixth, since this is a very specific sample, the results cannot be generalized to other populations”. (p. 21, para. 1).

Comment #15: The authors stated that "treatments appear to affect specific symptoms first and subsequently trigger a wave of changes in other symptoms indirectly, thus modifying the connections between network elements." However, how does the author explain the occurrence of these changes in variables like anhedonia or energy, but not in other variables such as sleep and appetite?

Response: The direct edges observed in the network indicate a greater effect of one of the treatments on those particular symptoms compared to the other treatment. However, the fact that no direct associations appear between the treatment variable and the symptoms does not indicate that there is no effect on those symptoms. These effects may exist, but, when a direct edge between the treatment variable and some symptom appears, it indicates that this treatment is superior to the other in modifying these symptoms. In our study, it is likely that the direct and differential effects in favour of TD-GCBT (red edges) are due to the specific techniques included in the protocol modules. For example, cognitive restructuring strategies or behavioral techniques (behavioral activation, exposure techniques, social skills and problem solving) could favour, in comparison with TAU, the improvement of depressed mood and anhedonia; then, these changes could facilitate the increase of activities and consequently of energy. Therefore, certain specific techniques could have differential effects on some specific symptoms, but not on others. (p. 17, para. 2).

Comment #16: Similarly, there is an observed loss of association in variables like irritability at three and twelve months, but not at six months. A similar pattern is also noted with difficulty in relaxing. How can this variation be explained?

Response: We hypothesize that there could be different reasons for this temporal variability, as we reflected in the discussion: “On the other hand, it should be noted that there is temporal variability in the direct effects of TD-GCBT on some symptoms. For example, direct associations on irritability emerge at post-treatment and at 6 months, but not at 3 or 12 months follow-up. Similar results were observed in the difficulty to relax. Several reasons could explain such variability in the effects of TD-GCBT: first, the order established in the treatment modules; second, the variability between subjects in the training and in the regular practice followed by each participant after the end of the treatment and, finally, a statistical explanation based on the Regularization process (i.e., if there is a similar effect at two time points, the link between two nodes will appear exclusively in the one that presents statistical significance). However, this does not mean that there are no effects on these symptoms at the other time point, but that these have not been significant compared to the other time point”. (p. 18, para. 2).

We thank the reviewers for the valuable comments they have provided and to give us the opportunity to substantially improve the manuscript for publication in the PLOS ONE.

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    Supplementary Materials

    S1 Fig. Bootstrapped sampling distribution of edge weight estimates at pre-treatment.

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    S2 Fig. Bootstrapped sampling distribution of edge weight estimates at post-treatment.

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    S3 Fig. Bootstrapped sampling distribution of edge weight estimates at 3-month follow-up.

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    S4 Fig. Bootstrapped sampling distribution of edge weight estimates at 6-month follow-up.

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    S5 Fig. Bootstrapped sampling distribution of edge weight estimates at 12-month follow-up.

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    S6 Fig. Regularized network at pre-treatment.

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    S7 Fig. Regularized network at post-treatment.

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    S8 Fig. Regularized network at three months follow-up.

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    S9 Fig. Regularized network at six months follow-up.

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    S10 Fig. Regularized network at twelve months follow-up.

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    Data Availability Statement

    Data cannot be shared publicly because this is a multi-center Randomized Clinical Trial with medication (No. EUDRACT: 2013-001955-11 and Protocol Code: ISRCTN58437086) promoted by the Psicofundación and approved by the Corporate Clinical Research Ethics Committee of Primary Care of Valencia (CEIC- APCV) (as the national research ethics committee coordinator) and the Spanish Medicines and Health Products Agency. The CEICAPCV have some availability restrictions, as a part of the legal and ethical control data of a Randomized Clinical Trial with medication. Data are available from the promoter (Spain) for researchers who meet the criteria for access to confidential data. Contact via Psicofundación (Spanish Foundation for the Promotion, Scientific and Professional Development of Psychology). Address: Calle Conde de Peñalver, 45, 5o izquierda, 28006 Madrid, Spain.) for researchers who meet the criteria for access to confidential data.


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