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. 2024 Apr 18;15:1374330. doi: 10.3389/fpsyg.2024.1374330

Table 2.

Article sample results.

Sample article Example
Persuasive rhetoric of measurement
Explicitly persuasive forms of rhetoric
Reported a “substantial link” between the independent and dependent variables where estimated effects were normatively small (i.e., r = 0.17 and d = 0.34). Article 1
Explicit reference to the importance of “objective measures,” without elaboration of what constitutes objective in reference to the measure used. Articles 6, 18, 33
Stated the measure used in the study “has undergone rigorous evaluation and been found to perform well relative to similar measures,” without reporting explicit psychometric evidence to justify. Article 19
Described instrument used in study as the “gold standard” for the assessment of the phenomenon without elaboration of why this marker of excellence was provided. Article 36
Common or rote expressions and tropes
Vague gestures to previous research, validity, and reliability
“Previous research has shown that…measures are more sensitive to [focal phenomenon].” Article 2
“Previous research finds the [measure]has adequate test–retest reliability.” Article 19
“Previous research has demonstrated the validity of [the measure].” Articles 28, 37
Reported “reliability and validity” as a general property. Articles 12, 13, 22, 27, 31
Metaphors and other literary styles
Metaphors
Measure was described “tap[ping]* children’s ability to suppress a dominant response and undertake a subdominant response.” Article 5
“The results revealed* a significant three-way interaction between age group, condition, and perceived partner closeness.” Article 26
References to “emerge” or “emerging” in relation to measured phenomena. Articles 5, 12, 20, 21, 22, 27, 29
References to “detect” or “detection” in relation to measured phenomena. Articles 1, 2, 6, 8, 17, 19, 21, 22, 25, 26, 28, 30, 32, 33, 35, 38
Use of “metaphorical story-telling” (Carlston, 1987). Articles 16, 20
Use of passive voice
“The Structured Clinical Interview for the DSM–IV, nonpatient edition … was administered* to assess for Axis I DSM–IV disorders.” Article 15
“Reward valuation ability* was assessed…” Article 18
Misascribing actions or capacity
e.g., “the measure* assessed” or “items access” as opposed to “We [the researchers] assessed … with the measure/items,”“this study* conceptualized…” instead of “We conceptualized…”
A growing literature has explored…” instead of “A growing number of researchers have explored…” Articles 3, 4, and 12
Confusing expressions, ambiguous, or unjustifiable claims
Construct validity
“Such improvements in ADHD knowledge, use of behavioral strategies, and adaptive thinking skills, as measured by our study-specific measures, speak to their potential role as clinical change mechanisms, lending support to the construct validity of our design* Article 3
“[Cited authors] have provided evidence for the construct and criterion-related validity of this measure.” Article 31
Constructs
“As implicated in [cited study] meta-analysis, alliance is a living, * evolving, and dynamic construct that can be perceived and reported differently throughout the course of therapy.” Article 1
Describe the construct of “functioning” as representing* “a rather multifaceted construct, whose complexity may not have been captured by [the measure].” Article 16
Described the relationship between the focal construct and other constructs as follows: “anxiety, depression, and posttraumatic stress disorder (PTSD) are constructs that display* significant overlap with alexithymia.” Article 18
Generativity is a distinct construct driven by* the underlying desire to contribute to the community and future generations through one’s own legacy.” Article 34
Missing Information
“It is beyond the scope of this article to report on all of the behavioral outcomes that were assessed in the current study but, in addition to measures of subjective response…” Article 19
Hedging
“Various measurement approaches have been utilized in the field … Each of these measurement approaches has associated advantages as well as disadvantages and may capture distinct aspects of daily life.” Article 27
Other
Conflating ordinary and technical meanings of terms (e.g., reliable [as in dependable] measurement tools and measurements demonstrating high psychometric reliability). Articles 1, 3, 5, 8, 17 and 30
Conflating aggregate statistical findings with individual-level causal claims (e.g., “Previous research has demonstrated the validity of this manipulation, showing, for example, that social exclusion makes individuals more aggressive … and reduces prosocial behavior,” and “Participants in the frustration condition further reported lower levels of satisfaction of the need for self-esteem”). Article 28
Confusing statements
“[Cited article] reported that the [measure] can be applied in a four dimensional or unidimensional structure to collect data with good reliability and validity.” Article 13
“…the experimental design could detect the presence/absence of the [measure] effect moderately well, but likely does not reliably detect small changes in the [measure] effect across conditions. To reliably detect a 15 ms change in the [measure] effect at roughly 80% power, for example, we estimate would require 100 participants per group.” Article 21

*Emphasis added.