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. 2024 Nov 25;19(11):e0311966. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0311966

Effectiveness of a community-based intervention package in maternal health service utilization: A cross-sectional quasi-experimental study in rural Ghana

Hirotsugu Aiga 1,2,3,*, Yoshito Kawakatsu 4, Nobuhiro Kadoi 3, Emmanuel Obeng 5, Frank Tabi Addai 5, Frederick Ofosu 6, Kazuki Fujishima 7, Mayumi Omachi 8, Etsuko Yamaguchi 7
Editor: Mohammed Moinuddin9
PMCID: PMC11588241  PMID: 39585866

Abstract

Background

We examined the effectiveness of a community-based intervention package that targeted pregnant women for increasing utilization of maternal health services. The intervention package was implemented in Suhum Municipality, Ghana, from March 2019 to April 2022. The package consisted of: (i) maternal health education by female and male peers; (ii) training existing health workers on maternal health; and (iii) strengthening the local community health management committees.

Methods

A cross-sectional household survey was conducted in May 2022. We sampled four groups of women: (i) intervention at baseline; (ii) intervention at follow-up; (iii) control at baseline; and (iv) control at follow-up. Three outcome variables were set, i.e., the proportions of women having utilized: (i) at least four antenatal care (ANC) services; (ii) facility-based delivery (FBD) services; and (iii) post-partum care (PPC) services. To estimate the effectiveness of the intervention package in increasing the service coverages, both crude and adjusted difference-in-differences (DID) estimates were calculated. Significance levels were set at the values of 0.10, 0.05, and 0.01, since the aforementioned service coverages had already been too high to have room for an increase at the significance level of 0.05.

Results

The proportion of women completing at least four ANC services displayed significant DID in both crude and adjusted analyses. The proportions of women utilizing facility-based delivery services and post-partum care services did not display significant DID.

Conclusions

Of the three outcome variables set, only the proportion of women having utilized at least four ANC services significantly increased in the intervention group, compared with the control group. Ghana has been in the transition process of shifting the minimum number of ANC visits from four to eight. Thus, nationwide scaling up of the intervention package is expected to help the transition be smooth by increasing the number of ANC visits.

Background

Today, approximately 800 women die due to the preventable causes of maternal deaths in the world, every day [1]. Preventable causes of maternal deaths are composed of direct causes (obstetric hemorrhage, hypertensive disorders, puerperal sepsis, and unsafe abortion) and indirect causes (HIV and AIDS, malaria, tuberculosis, other sexually transmitted infections, malnutrition) [2]. They can be prevented through increasing availability of and access to quality of sexual, reproductive, and maternal care. More than 60% of maternal deaths occur in Sub-Saharan Africa [3]. Nearly 75% of maternal deaths are caused by severe bleeding, infections, pre-eclampsia and eclampsia, complications from delivery, and unsafe abortion whose majority cases are either preventable or treatable [4]. To reduce a significantly greater number of maternal deaths in Sub-Saharan Africa, timely and quality antenatal care (ANC) and facility-based delivery (FBD), post-partum care (PPC), Emergency Obstetric Care, and family planning are imperative [57]. Poorer access to health facilities, inadequate quality of health services, and socio-economic and socio-cultural barriers are the major obstacles in increasing maternal health service utilization. It prevents reproductive-aged women from reaching life-saving services [8, 9].

Improvement of women’s access to health facilities and health workers alone does not increase the reproductive-aged women’s utilization of the aforementioned key maternal health services, for instance by increasing the number of health facilities and availability of public transports. Creation of health service demands through direct intervention on women in communities needs to be undertaken in parallel [1012]. Health service demands can be created commonly through household visits and health education sessions conducted by facility-based and/or community-based formal health workers [13, 14]. However, demand creation initiated and implemented by formal health workers does not necessarily result in producing the expected effectiveness. This is largely because the formal health workers’ way of demand creation is not necessarily interactive and friendly enough for local women [1517]. On the other hand, peer education is expected to play a vital role in increasing service utilization, as the demands can be created more from service users’ perspective. Peer education has been often employed as an effective approach for increasing service utilization not only in adolescent health [18], family planning [19, 20], HIV and other sexually transmitted infection control [2125], but also in maternal health [10, 26]. Moreover, the interventions based on locally available resources (e.g. peer educators) are more likely to be sustainable by being integrated into local community systems, than facility-based interventions.

To improve reproductive and maternal health among reproductive-aged women (both adults and adolescents) in four African countries (i.e., Ghana, Kenya, Tanzania and Zambia), the Japanese Organization for International Cooperation in Family Planning (JOICFP) implemented a five-year program ‘Protecting the Lives of Pregnant Women in Africa: Community-centered sustainable health promotion program’ (the Program) during the period from January 2018 to December 2022 [27]. The Program was aimed at increasing pregnant women’s utilization of three key maternal health services (i.e., ANC, FBD, and PPC). The Program employed a community-centered approach to ensure its sustainable effectiveness beyond the program life. Both female and male peers recruited from local adults and youths through a series of consultations with the community key stakeholders, were trained as community health volunteers (CHVs) responsible for peer educations and peer consultations on reproductive and maternal health. They were responsible also for locally disseminating the information related to reproductive and maternal health and rights to their peers, and referring those in need of reproductive and maternal health care to primary health facilities. The Program also strengthened the functions and capacity of the existing community health management committees, to enable them to continuously support both CHVs and facility-based health workers. Capacity strengthening of community health management committees was conducted through a series of lectures, group works, and role plays. The Program trained health workers at primary health facilities to improve quality of facility-based health services, too.

By the end of December 2019, the JOICFP in collaboration with its local government partners of the four countries trained 1,856 CHVs composed of males and females, and adults and youths. Through the CHVs, a total of 466,549 individuals were reached in the Program sites with the promotive messages on reproductive and maternal health as of 31st March 2021. Of them, 79,662 were referred to primary health facilities.

To estimate the effectiveness of the aforementioned intervention package in reproductive and maternal health, this study was conducted in Ghana. There were three reasons for conducting the study only in Ghana. First, as the implementation of the Program was less affected by the SARS-CoV-2 (COVID-19) pandemic in Ghana than in other three countries. This study was conducted to estimate the effectiveness of the aforementioned intervention package in reproductive and maternal health in Ghana,. Second, the largest amount of funds was invested in Ghana (i.e., 45% of the total local implementation costs of all the four target countries of the Program). Third, the activities of the Program were fully implemented only in Suhum Municipality of Ghana throughout the entire five-year Program period. In Ghana, the Community-based Health Planning and Services (CHPS) initiative has been implemented since 2000 after careful piloting [28]. The initiative is aimed at ensuring availability of and access to basic maternal and child health services (antenatal care, delivery, postpartum care, child immunization, growth monitoring, and integrated management of childhood illnesses), in particular consideration to women in rural areas. Two community health officers are assigned at each CHPS compound, a primary health facility, to enable them to provide both facility-based and community-based maternal and child health. Specific objectives of the study are estimations of the degree of increases in proportions of women having utilized: (i) at least four ANC services; (ii) FBD services; and (iii) PNC services. National Health Insurance Scheme (NHIS) covers the significant part of maternal and child health service costs for those insured. Yet, not all costs are covered by NHIS and, needless to say, out-of-pocket payments made by those not insured become much larger. Thus, the poor have greater challenges in utilization of health services. The findings of the study are expected not simply to estimate the effectiveness of the Program, but also to serve as the key evidence for improving the design of the Program in the future.

Methods

A quasi-experimental study was conducted in Ghana. Of the four countries where the Program was implemented, Ghana was targeted for the study. Note that the community-based approach similar to this intervention package was previously tested in several countries by the JOICFP [2931]. Their crude effectiveness was estimated in a cross-sectional observational study, while it has not been precisely assessed [32].

Study design

To estimate the effectiveness of the Program in reproductive and maternal health care service utilization, difference-in-differences (DID) approach was employed [33]. A cross-sectional household survey was conducted, to compare reproductive and maternal health care service utilization between intervention and control sites. In the survey, we sampled four types of groups of women who gave live births during pre-intervention (baseline) and post-intervention (follow-up) periods for both intervention and control groups: i.e., Group I1 as the intervention group at baseline, Group I2 as the intervention group at follow-up, Group C1 as the control group at baseline, and Group C2 as the control group at follow-up (Fig 1).

Fig 1. Difference-in-differences framework for this study.

Fig 1

(A) Three types of maternal health service coverages were employed: (i) ANC: at least four antenatal care visits as proxy for continuation of ANC; (ii) FBD: facility-based delivery; and (iii) PPC: at least one postpartum care visit within two days after delivery. (B) Utilizations of the three types of maternal health services were measured, based on mothers’ memories at the time of the cross-sectional survey.

Study area

Of seven municipalities/districts intervened by the Program in Eastern Region, Suhum Municipality was selected as the intervention site for this study. This is because Suhum Municipality was the only municipality/district where the Program implementation was long and deep enough (i.e., >2 years) to assess its effectiveness. Note that the Program intervention, nevertheless, was suspended during the period from March to October 2020 due to COVID-19 pandemic in all the intervention municipalities/districts of Ghana (incl. Suhum Municipality). The other six were the municipalities/districts where the interventions of the Program started later than in Suhum Municipality (i.e., Akyemansa District, Birim North District, Kwahu East District, Lower Manya Krobo Municipality, Upper Manya Krobo District, and Yilo Krobo Municipality). Atiwa West District was selected as the control site where the Program’s intervention was neither implemented nor planned at the time of the study. Atiwa West District was appropriate as the control group also because its socio-economic and socio-demographic characteristics, and maternal health service coverages at the baseline were reportedly at the similar level to those of Suhum Municipality. Another reason for selecting Atiwa West District is that no externally supported maternal and/or reproductive health project had been planned and implemented in the district. In both Suhum Municipality (intervention site) and Atiwa West District (control site), all the basic health services described earlier were made available.

Study participants

All the women who delivered between 1st January 2018 and 28th February 2019 before the Program’s launch in March 2019 were included in the baseline sampling frames for both intervention and control groups (Group I1 and Group C1 in Fig 1). Similarly, all the women who delivered between 1st August 2021 and 30th April 2022 after the 10 months had passed since the Program’s launch were included in the follow-up sampling frames for both intervention and control groups (Group I2 and Group C2 in Fig 1). Those not having continued to live in Suhum Municipality during the entire pregnancy were excluded from the follow-up sampling frame for the intervention group (Group I2 in Fig 1). By doing so, we ensured that, in the intervention group, the follow-up study participants were fully exposed to the intervention during their pregnancies, while the baseline participants were never. Those having been relocated from Suhum Municipality and other six intervention municipalities/districts to Atiwa West District during their pregnancies were excluded from the follow-up sampling frame for the control group (Group C2 in Fig 1). By doing so, we ensured that, in the control group, the follow-up study participants were never, even partially, exposed to the intervention during their pregnancies.

Interventions and outcome variables

The Program intervention package was composed of three pillars: (i) peer health education and promotion on reproductive and maternal health by locally recruited CHVs; (ii) improvement of the quality of reproductive and maternal health care by training existing health workers at primary health facilities on reproductive and maternal health; and (iii) strengthening of the local community health management committees (Fig 2).

Fig 2. Design of the intervention package.

Fig 2

Under the first pillar, the Program trained a total of 180 adult and 150 youth CHVs (Maternal and Child Health Promoters and Peer Educators, respectively) in Suhum Municipality. As shown in Table 1, while a majority of Peer Educators completed either junior or senior high school education (81.3%), education attainments of Maternal and Child Health Promoters are more diverse.

Table 1. Education attainments of two types of community health volunteers.

Maternal and Child Health Promoters Peer Educators
N (%) n (%)
No education 26 14.4% 14 9.3%
Junior high school 66 36.7% 56 37.3%
Senor high school 53 29.4% 66 44.0%
University or college 35 19.4% 14 9.3%
Total 180 100.0% 150 100.0%

To effectively create reproductive and maternal health care demands, the trained CHVs conducted peer health education and promotion activities at the community level (i.e., individual/group health education and consultation sessions, and referrals of women in need of maternal health care services to local primary health facilities). The Program provided technical support to participatory development of communication strategies, tools and messages. They were designed so as to address the local common obstacles in accessing maternal and sexual reproductive health services from health service users’ perspective.

Under the second pillar, the Program supported the municipal/district health directorates in training facility-based health workers on client-centered care (i.e., respectful maternity care, adolescent-friendly services, and 5S-Initiative activities). 5S-Initiative is the conceptual framework composed of Sorting, Setting, Shining, Standardization, and Sustaining that helps organize and manage the workplace and workflow with the intent to improve efficiency, by eliminating waste, improving flow and reducing process unreasonableness [34].

Under the third pillar, the capacity of community health management committees was strengthened in the implementation of evidence-based planning, implementation, monitoring and evaluation as well as resource mobilization for sustaining the CHVs’ activities and health workers’ quality client-centered care. Capacity strengthening of community health management committees was conducted through a series of lectures, group works, and role plays. These three pillars are mutually complemented to synergically ensure women’s timely access to maternal-health-related information and care.

To estimate the effectiveness of the interventions of the Program, three variables related to the utilization of essential maternal health services (i.e., ANC, FBD and PPC) were set as the outcome variables (Table 2). They were selected as the outcome variables since they serve as the appropriate proxies for health-seeking behavior changes that can be expected to be achieved through the interventions of the Program. All the three outcome variables were defined as dichotomous variables (i.e,. 0 as not utilized and 1 as utilized). In addition to the outcome variables, socio-economic and socio-demographic data were collected as the independent variables, by conducting structured interviews in local languages (Akan, Ewe and Krobo).

Table 2. Three outcome variables for the study.

Outcome variable Definition
ANC At least four antenatal care visits Proportion of women having utilized antenatal care services provided by qualified health professionals at least four times: (%)
FBD Facility-based delivery Proportion of women having utilized delivery services at public or private health facilities: (%)
PPC Postpartum care visit Proportion of women having utilized postpartum cares within two days after the birth: (%)

Sample size and sampling

The sample size was calculated, so as to detect a significant DID for each outcome variable, by making finite population correction adjustments [35]. This is because the target group was the specific populations in limited geographic areas: i.e., those who delivered between 1st January 2018 and 28th February 2019 (baseline) and those who delivered between 1st August 2021 and 30th April 2022 (follow-up), in Suhum Municipality (intervention site) and Atiwa West District (control site). Those having delivered during the period other than the above two periods were excluded from the sampling. Moreover, those having been relocated, absent despite three repeated visits or refused to participate in the study were excluded, too. Then, design effect of 1.3 was multiplied, as two-stage cluster sampling where mean cluster size was 25 was employed [36]. Assuming 10% non-response rate, the final sample sizes was set at 1,812 mothers (i.e., 453 for each of four groups: Group I1, Group I2, Group C1 and Group C2 in Fig 1). Systematic random sampling was used for selecting mothers having children of respective age groups, for both first and second sampling stages. Expanded Programme on Immunization (EPI) registers readily available at all the Community-based Health Planning and Services (CHPS) compounds (primary healthcare facilities in Ghana) in Suhum Municipality and Atiwa West District were used as sampling frames of mothers of children.

Data analysis

A series of data analyses were conducted in a two-step manner. First, descriptive analysis was conducted for both outcome/dependent and independent variables. As a part of descriptive analyses, the characteristics of study participants were presented. Second, to estimate the effectiveness of the interventions of the Program, both crude and adjusted DID values were estimated. For calculating adjusted DID estimates, mixed-effect logistic regression was employed, by applying sub-district as the random effect of and independent variables (i.e., group, time, maternal age, education attainment, marital status, enrollment in health insurance, household size, and household’s wealth group) as the fixed effects. To test possible multicollinearity, variance inflation factor (VIF) was assessed for each independent variable, by applying VIF value equal to or greater than 10 as the presence of multi-collinearity. Significance levels were set at the values of 0.10, 0.05, and 0.01. The reason for unusually employing 0.10 as one of the significance levels was that the service coverages of the outcome variables had been already too high to have room for an increase at the significance level of 0.05 (e.g., 93.1% of ANC in the intervention group at baseline). Moreover, note that 0.10 has been widely employed as a significance level for behavioral studies into which this study can be categorized [37, 38].

Wealth index was calculated for each household to which respective respondent women belonged, by applying the variables on households’ ownership of 11 types of utilities and assets to principal component analysis. The 11 types of utilities and assets were composed of bicycle, cart, electricity, fixed-line telephone, motorbike, radio, personal computer, refrigerator, television set, vehicle, and watch. The principal component score was calculated for each household, by applying all the dichotomous variables of ownership of 11 types of utilities and assets to principal component analysis with varimax rotation [39]. Then, all the households were categorized into three groups (i.e., wealth tertiles) according to the values of wealth index. In addition, for an additional analysis to assess the impact of interventions by wealth groups, we divided all the households into two groups (i.e., rich and poor) to produce robust estimates and avoid quite high standard errors due to small sample size in each group. All the statistical analyses were conducted, by using Stata 17 (Stata Corp LLC, College Station, TX, USA).

Ethical considerations

An informed consent to participate in the study was obtained in a written form from each mother after the explanation of the study upon household visits. For mothers under 18 years of age, both informed assent and informed consent were obtained from them and their guardians, respectively. In view of the ongoing COVID-19 pandemic, the interviewers practiced either hand washing or alcohol-based hand sanitization both before and after the interviews, and wore face masks during an interview by keeping themselves 1.5 meters away from the respondent. The authors had access to the information that could identify individual participants during and after data collection. To ensure the confidentiality of personal data of the participants, the dataset for analyses was anonymized by encoding the data with unique participant identification numbers. Another dataset composed exclusively of the identification numbers and participants’ personal data (i.e., names and phone numbers) was separately created. Both datasets were protected by using the different passwords.

The study protocol was both internationally and locally approved by: (i) the Institutional Review Board, School of Tropical Medicine Global Health, Nagasaki University, Japan (Approval no. NU_TMGH_2021_179_1); and (ii) Ethics Review Committee, Ghana Health Service, Ghana (Approval no. GHS-ERC 001/02/22). The official permissions for the implementations of the study were obtained from both Suhum Municipal Health Directorate and Atiwa West District Health Directorate. Moreover, local agreements on the implementation of the study were obtained from the leaders of all the target communities, prior to data collection.

Results

Data collection was conducted during the period from 5th to 29th May 2022. Of 1,812 mothers sampled, 1,471 participated in the study (76.1%). Those not having participated were composed of: (i) 158 having already relocated; (ii) 148 ineligible without meeting the inclusion criteria; (iii) 20 absent; (iv) 14 refusals; and (v) one withdrawal in the middle of the interview.

Characteristics of participants

Table 3 shows the socio-demographic and socio-economic characteristics of the respondent mothers, by comparing between the intervention and control groups and between baseline and follow-up. Significant differences were unexpectedly detected in the proportions and mean values of nine and seven of 12 characteristic variables between the intervention and control groups at the baseline and follow-up respectively. This indicates that a need for calculating an adjusted DID estimate for each outcome variable by controlling its confounders, in addition to estimating its crude DID. In both groups, approximately 70% or more of mothers completed secondary education or higher. More than three quarters of their households had at least one mobile phone. Approximately, 90% or more of the mothers were either protestants or other types of Christians.

Table 3. Socio-demographic and socio-economic characteristics of participants.

Characteristic variable Baseline (n = 692) P-value Follow-up (n = 639) P-value
Intervention (n = 393) Control (n = 299) Intervention (n = 438) Control (n = 340)
Maternal age [year] (mean, sd) 30.7 7.3 31.6 6.6 0.086* a 28.6 6.8 28.6 7.0 0.890 a
Education attainment (n, %) 0.016** b 0.169 b
None / pre-primary education 21 5.3% 15 5.0% 23 5.3% 25 7.4%
Primary education 109 27.7% 58 19.5% 87 19.9% 50 14.8%
Secondary and vocational education 256 65.1% 224 75.2% 314 71.7% 247 73.3%
University / post graduate education 7 1.8% 1 0.3% 14 3.2% 15 4.5%
Marital status (n, %) < 0.001*** b < 0.001*** b
Single not living with partner 118 30.0% 27 9.0% 137 31.3% 40 11.8%
Cohabiting living with partner 170 43.3% 124 41.5% 166 37.9% 160 47.1%
Married living with partner 89 22.6% 133 44.5% 107 24.4% 135 39.7%
Married not living with partner 8 2.0% 4 1.3% 26 5.9% 5 1.5%
Separated/widowed/divorced 8 2.0% 11 3.7% 2 0.5% 0 0%
Enrollment in health insurance (n, %) 0.149b 0.001***b
Enrolled 371 94.4% 290 97.0% 418 95.4% 339 99.7%
Not enrolled/do not know 22 5.6% 9 3.0% 20 4.6% 1 0.3%
Household size [person/HH] (mean, sd) 2.33 1.28 2.53 1.28 0.048**a 2.53 2.34 1.25 1.39 0.010*a
Ownership of household assets (n, %)
Television set 319 81.2% 247 82.6% 0.699b 365 83.3% 280 82.4% 0.792b
Radio 262 66.7% 200 66.9% 1.000 b 304 69.4% 236 69.4% 1.000 b
Mobile phone 307 78.1% 267 89.3% < 0.001***b 350 79.9% 297 87.4% 0.008***b
Bicycle 48 12.2% 90 30.1% < 0.001***b 47 10.7% 89 26.2% < 0.001***b
Motorbike 60 15.3% 71 23.7% 0.006***b 55 12.6% 67 19.7% 0.009***b
Vehicle 25 6.4% 40 13.4% 0.003***b 30 6.8% 48 14.1% 0.001***b
Religion (n, %) 0.001***b 0.472b
Roman catholic 3 0.8% 6 2.0% 6 1.4% 10 2.9%
Protestant and other Christianity 373 94.9% 260 87.0% 397 90.6% 303 89.1%
Muslim 10 2.5% 28 9.4% 27 6.2% 22 6.5%
Other religion and no religion 7 1.8% 5 1.7% 8 1.8% 5 1.5%

* P < 0.10

** P < 0.05

*** P < 0.01

a One-way analysis of variance (ANOVA)

b Chi-square test

Overall difference-in-differences

Fig 3(A)–3(C) (show crude DID for three outcome variables, i.e., ANC, FBD and PPC, respectively. Of the three outcome variables, ANC produced a significant crude DID between the intervention and control groups while the others did not. Note that these crude DID values are likely to be less accurate because they were estimated without controlling the possible confounders despite difference in characteristics of mothers between the two groups.

Fig 3. Overall crude difference-in-differences for three outcome variables.

Fig 3

Crude DID is expressed in form of percentage points. * P < 0.10, ** P < 0.05, *** P < 0.01.

Therefore, adjusted DID estimates were calculated by controlling the possible confounders, using mixed-effect logistic regressions. None of independent variables produced VIF values equal to or greater than 10. Thus, no multicollinearity was assumed. Table 4 shows the results of mixed-effect logistic regressions for the three outcome variables. Similarly to crude DID, only ANC produced a significant adjusted DID estimate (aOR = 2.23; P = 0.099 < 0.10) also in the regression models. FBD and PPD did not produced significant adjusted DID estimates. Thus, significant effectiveness of the intervention package among mothers was detected exclusively for ANC.

Table 4. Results of mixed-effect logistic regressions for three outcome variables: Overall analysis.

Independent variable Model 1 Model 2 Model 3
ANC: ≥4 Antenatal care visits FBD: Facility-based delivery PPC: Postpartum care visit
aOR 95% CI P-value aOR 95% CI P-value aOR 95% CI P-value
Intercept 3.12 0.79–12.32 0.105 1.71 0.57–5.07 0.337 1.95 0.69–5.46 0.205
Group
Control (Ref.) (Ref.) (Ref.)
Intervention 0.71 0.30–1.68 0.437 0.70 0.34–1.41 0.318 0.80 0.44–1.46 0.465
Time
Baseline (Ref.) (Ref.) (Ref.)
Follow-up 0.48* 0.22–1.04 0.064 1.21 0.75–1.95 0.434 1.03 0.65–1.65 0.887
Adjusted DID estimates a 2.23* 0.86–5.77 0.099 0.95 0.53–1.73 0.875 0.91 0.51–1.61 0.739
Maternal age [year]
< 20 (Ref.) (Ref.) (Ref.)
20–29 1.48 0.70–3.10 0.302 1.49 0.84–2.65 0.172 1.02 0.58–1.81 0.933
30–39 2.06 0.93–4.55 0.073* 1.76 0.97–3.20 0.061* 1.39 0.77–2.51 0.275
≥40 1.52 0.58–4.03 0.398 1.41 0.70–2.83 0.334 1.07 0.54–2.14 0.847
Education attainment
None / pre-primary education and primary education (Ref.) (Ref.) (Ref.)
Secondary and higher education 1.22 0.76–1.96 0.420 1.80 1.33–2.43 <0.001*** 1.66 1.24–2.22 <0.001***
Marital status
Living together (Ref.) (Ref.) (Ref.)
Not living together 0.71 0.44–1.16 0.175 1.23 0.87–1.74 0.233 1.00 0.72–1.37 0.98
Enrolment in health insurance
Not enrolled (Ref.) (Ref.) (Ref.)
Enrolled 3.77 1.75–8.14 <0.001*** 1.18 0.59–2.38 0.634 1.17 0.60–2.29 0.644
Household size [person/household] 0.96 0.82–1.13 0.639 1.01 0.91–1.13 0.823 1.02 0.92–1.14 0.708
Household’s wealth group
Poor b (Ref.) (Ref.) (Ref.)
Middle c 2.40 1.21–4.77 0.012** 1.60 1.07–2.39 0.021** 1.72 1.18–2.52 0.005***
Rich d 1.90 1.08–3.31 0.025** 1.37 0.96–1.94 0.083* 1.70 1.21–2.40 0.002***

* P < 0.10

** P < 0.05

*** P < 0.01

a The interaction term of group and time pre-intervention (baseline) vs post-intervention (follow-up)

b Lower tertile of index (i.e., bottom 33%)

c Middle tertile of wealth index (i.e., middle 33%)

d Higher tertile of wealth index (i.e., top 33%)

Wealth-group-specific difference-in-differences

As shown in Table 4, the household wealth group was the only independent variable that systematically produced significant odds ratio across the three models. This implies that the household wealth group was a common predictor of effectiveness of the intervention package. Moreover, it should be carefully noted that the intervention package had been originally designed to priority target women from poor households. For the above two reasons, wealth-group-specific DID was examined, through estimating crude DID by wealth group of mothers’ households (Fig 4). Again, ANC for the poor group was the only outcome variable that produced significant crude DID (11.4 percentage points; P = 0.085). For the other two outcome variables, no significant crude DID values were produced in all three economic level groups. Considering not only the importance of mothers from poor households as the Program’s priority target populations but also a need for more precisely DID estimates, adjusted DID estimates among mothers from poor households were further calculated for the three key outcome variables.

Fig 4. Wealth-group-specific crude difference-in-differences for three outcome variables.

Fig 4

Crude DID is expressed in form of percentage points. * P < 0.10, ** P < 0.05, *** P < 0.01.

Table 5 shows the results of mixed-effect logistic regressions for the three outcome variables with an interaction between DID estimates and wealth groups (i.e., poor and rich). Mothers from poor households in the intervention group exhibited an increase in the likelihood of utilizing ANC services, although it was not significant (aOR = 3.63; P = 0.231). Also, our analysis did not reveal a variation in the effectiveness of the intervention package for the other outcomes across wealth tertiles.

Table 5. Results of mixed-effect logistic regression for three outcome variables: Inter-wealth-group comparison analysis.

Independent variable Model 1 Model 2 Model 3
ANC: ≥4 Antenatal care visits FBD: Facility-based delivery PPC: Postpartum care visit
aOR 95% CI P-value aOR 95% CI P-value aOR 95% CI P-value
Intercept 5.44 1.33–22.34 0.019** 2.18 0.73–6.56 0.165 3.06 1.07–8.74 0.036**
Group
Control (Ref.) (Ref.) (Ref.)
Intervention 0.95 0.28–3.26 0.932 1.11 0.47–2.61 0.816 1.28 0.58–2.83 0.545
Time
Baseline (Ref.) (Ref.) (Ref.)
Follow-up 0.67 0.25–1.76 0.413 1.21 0.70–2.09 0.490 1.01 0.58–1.73 0.984
Household’s wealth group
Rich a (Ref.) (Ref.) (Ref.)
Poor b 0.95 0.24–3.82 0.946 1.49 0.68–3.24 0.320 1.00 0.48–2.09 0.997
Interactions
Interaction between group and wealth group 0.50 0.09–2.80 0.433 0.34 0.13–0.92 0.034** 0.40 0.15–1.05 0.064*
Interaction between time and wealth group 0.42 0.08–2.15 0.300 0.98 0.34–2.83 0.966 1.11 0.41–3.02 0.832
Difference in DID estimates among the rich 1.12 0.24–5.17 0.884 1.38 0.53–3.56 0.509 0.97 0.39–2.41 0.944
Difference in DID estimates among the poor (DDD) 3.63 0.44–29.98 0.231 0.63 0.16–2.51 0.516 0.84 0.23–3.07 0.793
Maternal age [year]
< 20 (Ref.) (Ref.) (Ref.)
20–29 1.47 0.70–3.10 0.308 1.50 0.84–2.68 0.172 1.05 0.59–1.85 0.879
30–39 2.04 0.92–4.52 0.080* 1.77 0.97–3.23 0.062* 1.42 0.78–2.57 0.248
≥ 40 1.51 0.57–4.00 0.409 1.43 0.71–2.88 0.321 1.09 0.54–2.18 0.806
Education attainment
None / pre-primary education and primary education (Ref.) (Ref.) (Ref.)
Secondary and higher education 1.22 0.76–1.96 0.420 1.79 1.32–2.42 <0.001*** 1.66 1.24–2.22 <0.001***
Marital status
Living together (Ref.) (Ref.) (Ref.)
Not living together 0.67 0.41–1.11 0.118 1.27 0.90–1.80 0.174 1.01 0.73–1.39 0.952
Enrolment in health insurance
Not enrolled (Ref.) (Ref.) (Ref.)
Enrolled 3.79 1.76–8.17 <0.001*** 1.11 0.55–2.24 0.766 1.12 0.57–2.2 0.744
Household size [person/household] 0.96 0.82–1.13 0.638 1.01 0.90–1.13 0.896 1.02 0.91–1.13 0.773

* P < 0.10

** P < 0.05

*** P < 0.01

a Higher than median of wealth index

b Lower than the median of wealth index

Discussion

Of the three types of essential maternal health service utilization (ANC, FBD and PPC), the intervention package improved only ANC visit coverage. A positive impact of the intervention package on FBD and PPC was not confirmed. Moreover, an adjusted DID estimate for ANC among mothers from poor households shows the positive trend, while it was not significant (aOR = 3.63; P = 0.231).

Effectiveness in ANC coverage

Overall, the intervention package of the Program was effective only in increasing ANC coverage. The differences in DID estimates among the poor group did not produce statistically significant effect size, as indicated by the adjusted odds ratios (Table 5). These findings may suggest that a larger sample size would have uncovered a discernible trend of the impact of the intervention package across different wealth groups. Several earlier studies in low- and middle-income countries reported that health education and promotion contributed to an increase in the proportion of those having completed at least four ANC visits among rural pregnant women [13, 40, 41]. Generally, when health education and promotion activities were conducted by peers rather than by health workers [42], parents [43], or teachers [44, 45] and internet [46], its effectiveness became more conspicuous.

A study in Ethiopia indicated that peer education was one of the factors significantly associated with ANC coverage [28]. Another study in Zambia reported that a combination of ANC service availability and peer education significantly increased ANC coverage, compared with ANC service availability alone [20]. Thus, the findings of our study support the results of these earlier studies. Higher education and greater exposure to media are the facilitators for service utilization [4752]. However, mothers from poor households are generally likely not only to be poorly educated and less literate [53, 54], but also to have limited access to media and mobile phones [55, 56]. In fact, our study found the proportion of mothers having completed secondary education or higher was significantly smaller among those from poor households than among the others (P < 0.001). Thus, peer educators likely to be friendlier to mothers from poor households should be appropriate facilitators in more effectively encouraging them to make at least four ANC visits.

Probably, improvement of the quality of services through increasing clinical staff’s skills alone has limited effectiveness in increasing ANC coverage. In rural areas where access to health facilities is often more challenging, the creation of service demands is an equally necessary intervention for increasing ANC4 coverage [11, 12, 57]. Note that the Program attempted to creating ANC service demands through peer education and promotion, while other previous projects did it through offering an incentive [11, 12, 58].

A significant increase in ANC coverage has been reported often among women from poor households [26, 5961]. One of the possible reasons for this is that there is relatively greater room for an increase in ANC coverage among women from poor households [62], compared with those from middle-wealth or richer households. ANC coverages among middle-wealth and rich households are generally already high enough [63]. The results of our study are in the similar trend, by identifying 91.1%, 94.0%, and 97.6% of ANC coverages among those from poor households, middle-wealth households, and rich households, respectively.

Effectiveness in FBD and PPC

This study did not identify the effectiveness of the intervention package in increasing service coverages of FBD and PPC not only among mothers in general but also even specifically among those from poor households.

The effectiveness of intervention projects aimed at increasing the coverage of ANC, FBD, and PPC differs according to the type, combination, and magnitude of interventions, and is mixed. Some interventions such as mass media campaigns and health education reported to significantly increase the service coverage of ANC but not of FBD [64, 65]. The intensive quality improvement initiative jointly implemented by District Health Management Team and respective health facilities improved service coverage of both ANC and FBD in Kenya [66]. Health promoters’ intervention targeting the poorest population was successful in increasing service coverages of ANC, FBD and PPC [26, 58]. One study in Uganda found that an intervention package composed of community mobilization and capacity building of health workers increased service coverage of FBD but not of ANC [67], In Ethiopia, an intervention package composed of training of health workers and extension workers, rehabilitations of health centers, consumable supplies and community sensitization resulted in increased service coverage only of FBD [10].

It is reasonable that increasing ANC visits is less challenging and earlier realizable than increasing utilization of FBD and PPC services. This is because a majority of those having utilized FBD services must have made ANC visits while very few mothers not having made any ANC visits choose FBD. In other words, ANC attendance is one of the determinants of utilization of FBD services [6876]. For the same logic, ANC and FBD service utilization are the primary and secondary determinants of utilization of PPC services, respectively [71, 7779]. A systematic review of the studies in Ethiopia reported that mothers having attended one or more ANC were four times more likely to deliver at facilities and, then, receive PPC [80]. Moreover, deliveries are unpredictable events that can take place on rainy days, at night, and on weekends. Unpredictability of labor is a significant barrier to increasing FBD coverage [78].

More intensive and comprehensive intervention may increase FBD and PPC coverage. Improving quality of care is indispensable to increasing FBD coverage [74, 81, 82]. The Program provided facility-based clinical health workers with the training on client-centered care that addresses four of the eight standards of quality of maternal care: (i) effective communication; (ii) respect and preservation of dignity; (iii) emotional support; and (iv) competent and motivated human resources [83]. However, training on other maternal care standards (e.g., evidence-based routine care practices and essential physical resource availability) might be additionally necessary to increase FBD coverage [10, 67]. Client-centered care, the second pillar of the intervention package, might not have been effective enough to adequately attract pregnant women to FBD and PPC services. This is because there are several other key barriers to FBD and PPC services utilization in Ghana, as reported earlier (i.e., greater informal payments to health workers, and inadequate health infrastructures, medical equipment and essential medicine) [84].

Limitations of the study

There are four types of limitations of the study. First, there is possible sampling bias in both intervention and control groups. Since the lists of children were not readily available in the local civil registration systems, EPI registers were used as the sampling frame for both groups. This is because EPI registers were expected to cover almost all the children whose mothers were the study participants as 96.4% of children were vaccinated at least once through EPI in Eastern Region.

Second, the quality of baseline data could be less accurate because they were collected at the time of follow-up data collection, too. Though baseline data should be collected from both groups prior to the implementation of interventions generally in any DID studies, this study collected both baseline and follow-up data cross-sectionally only after the interventions was implemented. For this reason, the reliability of the baseline data particularly those derived from the respondents’ memories (e.g., the number of ANC visits) should be less accurate.

Third, the COVID-19 pandemic made health services available in an intermittent manner during its pandemic period. This extraordinary situation sometimes created the cases where pregnant women and mothers returned home without receiving ANC, FBD, and/or PPC services at health facilities in Ghana [8587]. They were caused largely by temporary reassignments of health workers from obstetric and gynecological department to other clinical departments at health facilities [85]. Moreover, some women must have been hesitant and reluctant in utilizing maternal care services for fear of possible infections with COVID-19 at health facilities. This might have led to underestimation of the effectiveness of the intervention package of the Program. If it had not been for the COVID-19 pandemic, the effectiveness of the intervention package would have been more precisely estimated. Thus, the COVID-19 pandemic undermined the generalizability of the results of the study.

Fourth, there are little possibilities of contamination of a series of interventions from the intervention group into the control group. This is because: (i) Atiwa West District (control group) and Suhum Municipality (intervention group) are not mutually adjacent; and (ii) people’s movement was regulated and voluntarily refrained from during the COVID-19 pandemic. Yet, a certain level of the possibilities of contamination cannot be negated.

Conclusion

Of the three outcome variables set, only the proportion of women having utilized at least four ANC services significantly increased in the intervention group, compared with the control group. We recommend the intervention package be scaled up either nationwide or selectively to the areas where greater room for improvement in ANC coverage is identified. Ghana has been in transition process of shifting the minimum number ANC visits from four to eight. This indicates the additional need for an overall nationwide increase in the number of ANC visits. Thus, scaling up of the intervention package tested in this study is expected to help the transition be smoothly completed though ensuring increasing in the number of ANC visits.

Acknowledgments

The authors gratefully thank Magnus Ebo Duncan and his team for their technical supports in data collection. This work is sincerely dedicated to all the reproductive-aged women in rural areas of Ghana.

List of abbreviations

ANC

Antenatal care

ANC4

At least four antenatal care visits

aOR

adjusted odd ratio

CHPS

Community-based Health Planning and Services

CHVs

Community health volunteers

CI

Confidence interval

COVID-19

Coronavirus Disease 2019

DID

Difference-in-differences

FBD

Facility-based delivery

GHS

Ghana Health Service

JOICFP

Japanese Organization for International Cooperation in Family Planning

NHIS

National Health Insurance Scheme

OR

Odds ratio

PPC

Postpartum care

TDRC

Tropical Diseases Research Centre

TMGH

School of Tropical Medicine & Global Health, Nagasaki University

UNFPA

United Nations Population Fund

WHO

World Health Organization

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the manuscript and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

This study is funded by Takeda Global CSR Program of Takeda Pharmaceutical Company Limited. The funder had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or and preparation of the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: I am thankful for this opportunity of reading a very interesting research. I must emphasize that the manuscript will benefit immensely from a thorough editing to eliminate language-related and grammatical mistakes.

Abstract

Background

The main objective is not clearly written.

I would request the authors to consider writing something like this: “We examined the effectiveness of a community-based intervention package for pregnant women in increasing utilization of maternal health services. The package consisted of: (i)..., (ii)..., (iii)... and (iv) ...

Methods

I recommend the authors clarify how both baseline and follow-up data were collected simultaneously “after the implementation of the intervention package” (lines 102–104). How could baseline data be collected “after the implementation of the intervention package”? I found out the answer in lines 228–229, but readers should not be kept wondering about this. Thus, it needs to be clarified in the Abstract that by the word “simultaneously” the authors meant simultaneously in intervention and control sites.

The authors need to specify when the intervention was implemented (from X month to Y month of the year Z) in this section of the Abstract.

The authors need to mention the P-value that they considered for the level of statistical significance: P < 0.05 or a different one? I know that they have provided two reasons in lines 345–350, but here in the Abstract they need to mention that they considered P < 0.10 to indicate statistically significant associations.

Results

This section of the Abstract must be re-written. The authors need to present the answer to their main research question; i.e., the adjusted estimates for the three outcome variables.

I also recommend deleting lines 112–115 for the following two reasons:

i. whether the effectiveness of the intervention varied by categories of household wealth (assuming this to be a proxy for socio-economic status) was not the primary research question. In simpler words, whether household wealth or socio-economic status modifies the “effect” of the intervention on the outcome was not the primary research question as per the explanations provided by the authors in lines 439–445;

ii. the authors kept comparing the stratum-specific odds ratio for women from the “poorer” households with the overall odds ratio for wealth level. Instead, the stratum specific odds ratio for women from the “poorer” households should be compared against stratum-specific odds ratios for the other two wealth categories; i.e., odds ratios for women from the “middle-income” and “richer” households. Moreover, it was not clear whether the authors tested the interaction term incorporating “group” and “wealth level” in the mixed-effects logistic regression model (the legend below Table 3, line 433 does not indicate so). Without the interaction term “group × level” being tested and its P-value being statistically significant, it would be erroneous to infer that household wealth or socio-economic status modifies the “effect” of the intervention on the outcome.

Conclusion

Lines 118–120 read, “Peer health education activities and training existing health workers are likely to have synchronously contributed to an increase in antenatal care coverage. This is largely because peer educators are friendlier to the women from poor households”. I strongly recommend the authors consider deleting these two sentences as they have done no analysis to support these inferences. These inferences regarding how or through which mechanism(s) did the intervention work were not examined by the authors in the study. Besides, I wonder how the authors would know: i. whether “peer health education” and training of “existing health workers” acted synchronously, and ii. peer educators were “friendlier to the women from poor households”?

I would recommend the authors reiterate the main result and comment on the public health relevance of the extent of increase in maternal health care utilization brought on by the intervention in the Conclusion. It would be insightful if the authors comment on whether they think the intervention should be scaled up based on their findings. I would assume the overall impact to be smaller than anticipated after an intervention that ran for more than 16 months (as per lines 238–243).

Main text

Background

Lines 158–161, please provide the reference for these interventions being effective at the end of the sentence.

Lines 161–165, please re-frame this long sentence containing 45 words.

Line 167, please omit the word “physical”.

The authors argued that home visits carried out by “formal health workers” do not lead to “expected effectiveness” as “formal health workers” are “not necessarily interactive and friendly enough to local women” (lines 174–177). I briefly looked into the paper that they cites as a reference for this argument (reference number 11, a study from Ghana by Konlan et al.), and could not find the part of the paper that supports the authors’ arguments. I would request the authors to help me find the part of the paper on which the authors based their argument. Otherwise, the authors need to find a different reference to support their argument.

Line 192, please omit the word “in”.

Lines 200–203 read “The Program also strengthened the functions and capacity of the existing community health management committees, to enable them to continuously support both CHVs and facility-based health workers”. The authors need to briefly mention how did the Program strengthen the “functions and capacity” of the committees.

Customarily, a reader would expect to find out the specific objective(s) of the study in the last paragraph of the Background. However, this was lacking in the manuscript. I would recommend the authors do this instead of what they wrote in lines 213–215.

Methods

I would strongly recommend the authors shed light on any theoretical framework or model and empirical evidence from the same or similar settings that they used to inform and design the intervention. Otherwise, the approach would appear to be “top down” and shaped by the funder’s agenda, not by the local community’s needs.

Under the subsection “Interventions and outcome variables”, the authors need to provide information regarding the educational status of the Maternal and Child Health Promoters and Peer Educators.

In lines 302–305, the authors need to describe how the “capacity of community health management committees was strengthened” for carrying out “evidence-based planning, implementation, monitoring and evaluation”. The authors avoided describing what was actually done “under the third pillar”. This leaves readers open to speculation.

Line 354, please provide a reference that outlines how principal component analysis is used for computing wealth index or asset scores.

In lines 356–358, the authors wrote that “Then, all the households were categorized into five groups (i.e. wealth quintiles) according to the values of wealth index”. However, in the Results section, in Figure 3 captioned “Economic-group-specific crude difference-in-difference for three outcome variables”, they appear to have collapsed the bottom two quintiles into one single category (labelled “Poorer”) and the top two quintiles into another single category (labelled “Richer”). This is a serious discrepancy in my opinion. I strongly recommend the authors either: i. present the DID for all five quintiles, or ii. they convert the values of wealth index into tertiles instead of quintiles and present the DID for all three tertiles.

It would be transparent, if the authors clearly mention which variables were considered random-effect and which were considered fixed-effect in the mixed-effects logistic regression.

I also suggest the authors mention how they assessed the adequacy or fit of the logistic regression models and how they checked for collinearity.

The authors wrote that they had access to attributes that could identify individual participants during and after data collection (lines 368–369). The authors need to mention under Ethical considerations how they have ensured the confidentiality of identifying attributes and personal information as well as what would happen to these in future. The authors need to mention whether participation was voluntary and whether the participants retained their right to withdraw throughout the study.

Results

It is a common practice in writing the Results section that only the findings are presented not any interpretation(s) of the finding(s). Nevertheless, the authors resorted to presenting interpretations and inferences in the Results section (lines 396–400 and 401–405). The authors need to remove these.

As mentioned above, the authors either: i. present the crude DID for all five quintiles, or ii. they convert the values of wealth index into tertiles instead of quintiles and present the DID for all three tertiles in Figure 3. Similarly, Table 4 should demonstrate the estimates for all five or three wealth groups, not just the estimates among “poorer” women. I also think both in Tables 3 and 4, the estimates for “Maternal age”, “Education attainment”, “Marital status”, “Enrolment in health insurance” and “Household size” should not be presented as the main research question does not deal with these variables. Not presenting these estimates would also make the tables less busy.

Discussion

In the first paragraph of this section, the authors need to interpret the difference in difference estimator in a way that would give the readers an impression about how much improvement was brought on by the intervention and what this means from an “effect size” perspective. Please see the comment for the Conclusion

Lines 473–475 read, “This indicates that ANC coverage significantly increased between pre- and post-intervention stages particularly among women from poor households in the intervention group”. I do not agree with how the sentence has been framed. The authors should consider writing something like this: out of the three aspects of maternal health service utilization, the intervention improved only the ANC visit coverage ... A positive impact of the intervention on ... ... ... was not observed.

Furthermore, I think the word “significantly” in line 473 is ambiguous: did the authors mean statistical significance? If so, they should write it clearly. Or, did the authors use “significantly” to indicate a considerably large “effect size”? In that case, the authors need to elaborate further.

I strongly recommend the authors remove what they wrote in lines 565–601. While it is very interesting to explore what might have happened when there were health systems disruptions from COVID-19, this should be reserved for another study. Moreover, the authors used the word “resilience”, and if I am to assume this to be a construct, then the question arises which variable captured this construct. I could not find any variable that systematically and validly captured resilience. In fact, the authors performed no specific analysis to support what they discussed in line 565–601; which makes it akin to speculation. The authors argued that “People’s overall hesitancy to go out should have made pregnant women in the control group refrain from making antenatal care visits. Despite generally increased hesitancy to go out, the proportion of those having made at least four ANC visits slightly increased in the intervention group” (lines 585–589). There could be other confounding factors behind this small increase in proportions (unadjusted, bivariate estimate) of those completing at least four ANC visits among “poorer” women that were not possible to capture because of the study design.

I would prefer a Conclusion section where the authors present the principal finding in plain English and comment on the public health relevance of the extent of increase in maternal health care utilization brought on by the intervention and its scalability.

Reviewer #2: The study is on an important subject with precious information on interventions and women's health.

Regarding the abstract, it could be revised to be more on point and send a clearer message. Also the background and methods need, I would recommend to rewrite those sections and some suggestions are in the document, which can be found as an attachment. Additionally as it is based on an intervention, I would recommend to make a graphical depiction on how the intervention was carried out.

This study might be read, and used also in other contexts and thus it is important to include context specific information on current healthcare services for women of reproductive age.

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PLoS One. 2024 Nov 25;19(11):e0311966. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0311966.r002

Author response to Decision Letter 0


22 Dec 2023

RESPONSES TO THE REVIEWERS’ COMMENTS

We are extremely grateful to the editor and reviewers for their comments on the manuscript. We have significantly revised the manuscript based on those useful comments. Please refer to the following point-by-point-based responses to the respected comments, along with revised manuscript. Please note that the changes in the revised manuscript (i.e. main text, tables/figures, and reference list) have been shown in: (i) red in this file for “Responses to Reviewers” as follows; (ii) track changes in the file “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes”; and (iii) red in the cleaned revised file “Revised Manuscript”.

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COMMENTS FROM REVIEWER #1

[Comment 1-1] I am thankful for this opportunity of reading a very interesting research. I must emphasize that the manuscript will benefit immensely from a thorough editing to eliminate language-related and grammatical mistakes.

� [Response 1-1] We appreciate Reviewer #1 for his/her overall comments on this paper. We have addressed the specific comments and suggestions made by Reviewer #1 as follows.

[Comment 1-2] Abstract/Background: The main objective is not clearly written.

I would request the authors to consider writing something like this: “We examined the effectiveness of a community-based intervention package for pregnant women in increasing utilization of maternal health services. The package consisted of: (i)..., (ii)..., (iii)... and (iv) ...

� [Response 1-2] Thanks for this concrete suggestion. The first sentence in ‘Background’ of Abstract has been revised according to this suggestion. Now, the manuscript reads “We examined the effectiveness of a community-based intervention package that targeted pregnant women for increasing utilizations of maternal health services. The intervention package was…..” (see lines 93-95 “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes”; lines 93-95 of “Revised Manuscript”).

[Comment 1-3] Abstract/Methods: I recommend the authors clarify how both baseline and follow-up data were collected simultaneously “after the implementation of the intervention package” (lines 102–104). How could baseline data be collected “after the implementation of the intervention package”? I found out the answer in lines 228–229, but readers should not be kept wondering about this. Thus, it needs to be clarified in the Abstract that by the word “simultaneously” the authors meant simultaneously in intervention and control sites.

� [Response 1-3] This comment from Reviewer #1 is reasonable. The necessary revision has been made accordingly. Now, the manuscript reads “A cross-sectional household survey was conducted in May 2022. We sampled four groups of women: (i) intervention at baseline; (ii) intervention at follow-up; (iii) control at baseline; and (iv) control at follow-up”. (see lines 101-103 of “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes; lines 101-103 of “Revised Manuscript”). Please note that the word count limit for Abstract set by PLoS One (=300 words) does not allow us to write more details on how baseline and follow-up data were collected in a cross-sectional manner.

[Comment 1-4] Abstract/Methods: The authors need to specify when the intervention was implemented (from X month to Y month of the year Z) in this section of the Abstract.

� [Response 1-4] To respond to this suggestion from Reviewer #1, an additional sentence “The intervention package was implemented in Suhum Municipality, Ghana, from March 2019 to April 2022.” has been inserted in the Background of Abstract (see lines 94-96 of “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes”; lines 94-96 of “Revised Manuscript”).

[Comment 1-5] Abstract/Methods: The authors need to mention the P-value that they considered for the level of statistical significance: P < 0.05 or a different one? I know that they have provided two reasons in lines 345–350, but here in the Abstract they need to mention that they considered P < 0.10 to indicate statistically significant associations.

� [Response 1-5] Thanks for this careful comment. Based on the comment, a new sentence has been newly inserted in Methods of Abstract, accordingly, i.e. “Significance levels were set at the values of 0.10, 0.05, and 0.01, since the aforementioned service coverages had been already too high to have room for an increase at the significance level of 0.05.” (see lines 108-133 of “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes”; lines 108-110 of “Revised Manuscript”).

[Comment 1-6] Abstract/Results: This section of the Abstract must be re-written. The authors need to present the answer to their main research question; i.e., the adjusted estimates for the three outcome variables. I also recommend deleting lines 112–115 for the following two reasons: (i) whether the effectiveness of the intervention varied by categories of household wealth (assuming this to be a proxy for socio-economic status) was not the primary research question. In simpler words, whether household wealth or socio-economic status modifies the “effect” of the intervention on the outcome was not the primary research question as per the explanations provided by the authors in lines 439–445; (ii) the authors kept comparing the stratum-specific odds ratio for women from the “poorer” households with the overall odds ratio for wealth level. Instead, the stratum specific odds ratio for women from the “poorer” households should be compared against stratum-specific odds ratios for the other two wealth categories; i.e., odds ratios for women from the “middle-income” and “richer” households.

� [Response 1-6] Thanks for this constructive comment. Having agreed to the reviewer’s suggestion, lines 112-115 in the previous manuscript have been deleted. Then, ‘Results’ of Abstract has been rewritten. Now, the manuscript reads “The proportion of women having utilized at least four ANC services produced significant DID in both crude and adjusted estimates. The proportions of women having utilized facility-based delivery services and post-partum care services produced significant DID in neither crude nor adjusted estimates.” (see lines 136-139 of “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes”; lines 113-116 of “Revised Manuscript”).

[Comment 1-7] Abstract/Results: Moreover, it was not clear whether the authors tested the interaction term incorporating “group” and “wealth level” in the mixed-effects logistic regression model (the legend below Table 3, line 433 does not indicate so). Without the interaction term “group × level” being tested and its P-value being statistically significant, it would be erroneous to infer that household wealth or socio-economic status modifies the “effect” of the intervention on the outcome.

� [Response 1-7] Thanks for the comment. Table 3 was created for the purpose of showing overall effectiveness of the intervention package among all the respondents regardless of household’s wealth levels. In other words, it is not intended to show the comparison of the effectiveness between the poorer, middle-income, and richer. Therefore, it is not necessary to add the interaction terms of ‘Group x Household’s wealth level’ in the mixed-effect logistic regression models for Table 3. Thus, the way of analyzing data for Table 3 does not change. Please note that the categorization of ‘Household’s wealth groups was corrected based on the reviewer’s reasonable comment in [Comment 1-20]. However, the reviewer’s suggestion of inclusion of the interaction term has been usefully applied to calculation of wealth-level-specific DID in Table 4.

[Comment 1-8] Abstract/Conclusion: Lines 118–120 read, “Peer health education activities and training existing health workers are likely to have synchronously contributed to an increase in antenatal care coverage. This is largely because peer educators are friendlier to the women from poor households”. I strongly recommend the authors consider deleting these two sentences as they have done no analysis to support these inferences. These inferences regarding how or through which mechanism(s) did the intervention work were not examined by the authors in the study. Besides, I wonder how the authors would know: i. whether “peer health education” and training of “existing health workers” acted synchronously, and ii. peer educators were “friendlier to the women from poor households”?

I would recommend the authors reiterate the main result and comment on the public health relevance of the extent of increase in maternal health care utilization brought on by the intervention in the Conclusion. It would be insightful if the authors comment on whether they think the intervention should be scaled up based on their findings. I would assume the overall impact to be smaller than anticipated after an intervention that ran for more than 16 months (as per lines 238–243).

� [Response 1-8] Based on this strong recommendation, ‘Conclusions’ of Abstract has been totally rewritten. Implication of the nationwide scaling-up of the intervention package has been added. Now, the manuscript reads “Of the three outcome variables set, only the proportion of women having utilized at least four ANC services significantly increased in the intervention group, compared with the control group. Ghana has been in transition process of shifting the minimum number ANC visits from four to eight. Thus, nation-wide scaling up of the intervention package is expected to help the transition be smoothly completed though ensuring increasing in the number of ANC visits.” (see lines 141-146 of “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes”; lines 119-124 of “Revised Manuscript”). We agree to the reviewer’s view that the interruption of the intervention package due to COVID-19 pandemic made the overall impact actually smaller and less significant than anticipated. Yet, the word count limit for Abstract (=300 words) does not allow us to write on this point. Hope the reviewer will kindly understand this.

[Comment 1-9] Main text/Background: Lines 158–161, please provide the reference for these interventions being effective at the end of the sentence.

� [Response 1-9] To respond to this comment, three references have been added to the sentence “To reduce a significantly greater number of maternal deaths in Sub-Saharan Africa, timely and quality antenatal care (ANC) and facility-based delivery (FBD), post-partum care (PPC), Emergency Obstetric Care, and family planning are imperative.” I.e. (i) Ref #5 - Sexual and Reproductive Health and Research, WHO. Maternal mortality: Evidence brief [Internet]. 2019. Available from: https://www.who.int/publications/i/item/WHO-RHR-19.20

(ii) Ref #6 - Paxton A, Maine D, Freedman L, Fry D, Lobis S. The evidence for emergency obstetric care. Intl J Gynecology & Obste. 2005 Feb;88(2):181–93.; and

(iii) Ref #7 - Levine R, Langer A, Birdsall N, Matheny G, Wright M, Bayer A. Contraception. In: Jamison DT, Breman JG, Measham AR, Alleyne G, Claeson M, Evans DB, et al., editors. Disease Control Priorities in Developing Countries [Internet]. 2nd ed. Washington (DC): The International Bank for Reconstruction and Development / The World Bank; 2006 [cited 2023 Oct 18]. Available from: http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/books/NBK11771/

(see line 213 and 907-918 of “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes”; line 164 and 672-683 of “Revised Manuscript”)

[Comment 1-10] Main text/Background: Lines 161–165, please re-frame this long sentence containing 45 words.

� [Response 1-10] Thanks for the comment. The same/similar comment was raised by Reviewer #2 in [Comment 2-7]. Based on this reasonable comment from both reviewers, the sentence has been shortened, simplified and separated into two sentences. Accordingly, the number of words of the two sentences has been reduced from 45 to 32. Now, it reads “Poorer access to health facilities, inadequate quality of health services, and socio-economic/ cultural barriers are as the major obstacles in increasing maternal health service utilizations. This prevents reproductive-aged women from life-saving services” (see lines 213-216 of “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes”; lines 164-167 of “Revised Manuscript”). See the [Response 2-7], too.

[Comment 1-11] Main text/Background: Line 167, please omit the word “physical”.

� [Response 1-11] Thanks for this suggestion. Having agreed to the reviewer’s suggestion, “physical” has been deleted. (see line 218 of “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes”; line 169 of “Revised Manuscript”).

[Comment 1-12] Main text/Background: The authors argued that home visits carried out by “formal health workers” do not lead to “expected effectiveness” as “formal health workers” are “not necessarily interactive and friendly enough to local women” (lines 174–177). I briefly looked into the paper that they cites as a reference for this argument (reference number 11, a study from Ghana by Konlan et al.), and could not find the part of the paper that supports the authors’ arguments. I would request the authors to help me find the part of the paper on which the authors based their argument. Otherwise, the authors need to find a different reference to support their argument.

� [Response 1-12] Many thanks for carefully reviewing this part. We agree that the reference “Konlan et al. 2021” does nor clearly indicate poorer client-friendliness and interactivity of formal health workers’ demand creation (e.g. household visitis). The referencce “Konlan D et al. 2021” has been replaced by three new references, i.e. (i) Ref #15 – Moyer CA, Adongo PB, Aborigo RA, Hodgson A, Engmann CM. ‘They treat you like you are not a human being’: Maltreatment during labour and delivery in rural northern Ghana. Midwifery. 2014 Feb;30(2):262–8.; (ii) Ref #16 – Dapaah JM, Nachinaab JO. Sociocultural Determinants of the Utilization of Maternal Health Care Services in the Tallensi District in the Upper East Region of Ghana. Advances in Public Health. 2019 Feb 10;2019:1–11.; and (iii) Ref #17 – Amu H, Nyarko SH. Satisfaction with Maternal Healthcare Services in the Ketu South Municipality, Ghana: A Qualitative Case Study. BioMed Research International. 2019 Apr 10;2019:1–6.

(see line 243 and 953-963 of “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes”; line 179 and 713-723 of “Revised Manuscript”)

[Comment 1-13] Main text/Background: Line 192, please omit the word “in”.

� [Response 1-13] Thanks for finding this typo. This “in” has been deleted, accordingly (see line 271 of “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes”; line 194 of “Revised Manuscript”).

[Comment 1-14] Main text/Background: Lines 200–203 read “The Program also strengthened the functions and capacity of the existing community health management committees, to enable them to continuously support both CHVs and facility-based health workers”. The authors need to briefly mention how did the Program strengthen the “functions and capacity” of the committees.

� [Response 1-14] Thanks for this comment. An additional sentence has been newly inserted after this sentence “Capacity strengthening of community health management committees was conducted through a series of lectures, groups works, and role plays.” (see lines 282-284 of “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes”; lines 205-207 of “Revised Manuscript”).

[Comment 1-15] Main text/Background: Customarily, a reader would expect to find out the specific objective(s) of the study in the last paragraph of the Background. However, this was lacking in the manuscript. I would recommend the authors do this instead of what they wrote in lines 213–215.

� [Response 1-15] We are thankful to the reviewer for this suggestion. An additional sentence “Specific objectives of the study are to estimate the degree of increases in proportions of women having utilized: (i) at least four ANC visits; (ii) FBD; and (iii) PNC.” has been inserted in the location the reviewer indicated (see lines 307-309 of “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes”; line 227-229 of “Revised Manuscript”).

[Comment 1-16] Methods: I would strongly recommend the authors shed light on any theoretical framework or model and empirical evidence from the same or similar settings that they used to inform and design the intervention. Otherwise, the approach would appear to be “top down” and shaped by the funder’s agenda, not by the local community’s needs.

� [Response 1-16]

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Mohammed Moinuddin

26 Mar 2024

PONE-D-23-10669R1Effectiveness of a community-based intervention package in maternal health service utilizations: A cross-sectional quasi-experimental study in rural GhanaPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: I thank the authors for their substantial revision. My final, minor suggestions are as follows.

Line 94: please omit the "s" in the word "utilizations".

Line 101: please put a comma after the word "cross-sectional".

Line 109: please consider writing "had already been" instead of "had been already".

Line 113-116: please consider writing "The proportion of women completing at least four ANC visits displayed statistically significant DID in both crude and adjusted analyses. The proportions of women utilizing facility-based delivery services and post-partum care services did not display statistically significant DIDs.".

Line 123-124: please consider writing "... the transition be smooth by increasing the number of ANC visits.".

Reviewer #3: The authors made great efforts to overcome difficulties in conducting the impact evaluation during the pandemic and provide rigorous estimates. The reviewer was invited after the revised manuscript was submitted, i.e., did not participate in the review process at the initial submission. Therefore, the reviewer mainly commented on the points that other reviewers did not address in the first round of the peer review process.

1. Rationales of conducting this study: The authors might want to add explanations in the Background section regarding why this intervention was required in the study site where maternal health coverage was high. The authors added that “Poorer access to health facilities, inadequate quality of health services, and socio-economic/ cultural barriers are the major obstacles in increasing maternal health service utilizations. This prevents reproductive aged women from reaching life-saving services.” (Lines 164-) However, the authors might want to re-examine if this statement is valid to maternal health service provision situations in the study site. Particularly, they would need to explain that the intervention package benefited women who could not receive maternal health services while most women received these services.

2. Design effect: The authors set the design effect at 1.3 (Line 363) for the sample size calculation, seemingly without reference articles. As across-cluster differences may be large in an outcome of receiving health services, compared to a health outcome, this design effect might be too small. Readers may have an impression that a reason for insignificance in DID estimators at a 5% significance level might be because of insufficient sample size, not “the service coverages of the outcome variables had been already too high to have room for an increase 387 at the significance level of 0.05 (e.g., 93.1% of ANC in the intervention group at baseline).” (Lines 386-) The authors might want to justify the design effect level and add a limitation statement if the design effect was smaller than an adequate level. As the authors might have information regarding the high level of maternal health service coverage at the study site as the project funder, the high level of maternal health service coverage at baseline might not be a good reason for loosening the significance level to 10%. Rather than that, logistic or financial constraints in the impact evaluation might justify setting the significance level at 10%, particularly for behavioral studies.

3. Significance testing in socio-demographic and socio-economic characteristics: The authors explained that “Significant differences were unexpectedly detected in the proportions and mean values of 10 of 12 characteristic variables between the four groups (i.e., intervention group at baseline, intervention group at follow-up, control group at baseline, and control group at follow-up).” (Lines 441-) It is unclear why these four groups should have been compared. This approach seems to mix up detecting differences in baseline characteristics between the arms, detecting differences in follow-up characteristics between the arm, and detecting changes in characteristics between baseline and follow-up within the arm. If the authors needed to check the balance of the characteristics between the arms, they might want to present significance testing results at the baseline and at the follow-up separately.

4. Possible contamination: Were Suhum Municipality and Atiwa West District locations close with each other? Is it possible that people in Atiwa West District used maternal health services in Suhum Municipality or received part of the intervention package? The authors might want to expand explanations on the choice of the intervention and control group sites considering contamination possibilities.

5. Terminology: Is the word “difference-in-differences” more common than “difference-in-difference,” which the authors used? Please disregard this comment if the authors had a good reason to call their method difference-in-difference.

6. Estimation of Wealth-group-specific difference-in-differences: The approach used for the analysis of heterogeneity in DID across different wealth groups is so-called difference-in-difference-in-differences, or DDD (for example, Olden and Møen [2022], https://academic.oup.com/ectj/article/25/3/531/6545797). According to Table 5, the authors’ specification may include the variables of group, time, wealth, and DDD (group*time*wealth). Compared to Equation 3.1 in Olden and Møen (2022), the model in Table 5 might miss the interaction terms group*wealth and time*wealth (the interaction term of time*group may be captured as “Adjusted DID estimates among the poor”). Consequently, DDD estimator in Table 5 might cause a bias by capturing two interaction terms (group*wealth and time*wealth), in addition to the appropriate DDD (group*time*wealth). Please check the model in Table 5 to ensure if it was specified appropriately and possibly re-estimate DDD if needed.

7. Percent or percentage point change: In Figures 3 and 4, the authors presented crude DID as a percent form. However, it looks like it should have been “percentage points,” as this is the subtraction of percentages. Please find the following example for details: http://sumn.org/downloads/Percentage_Change.pdf.

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Author response to Decision Letter 1


27 Apr 2024

RESPONSES TO THE REVIEWERS’ COMMENTS

We are extremely grateful to the editor and reviewers for their comments on the manuscript. We have revised the manuscript based on those useful comments. Please refer to the following point-by-point-based responses to the respected comments, along with revised manuscript. Please note that the changes in the revised manuscript (i.e. main text, tables/figures, and reference list) have been shown in: (i) red in this file for “Responses to Reviewers” as follows; (ii) track changes in the file “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes”; and (iii) red in the cleaned revised file “Revised Manuscript”.

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COMMENTS FROM REVIEWER #1

[Comment 1-1] Line 94: please omit the "s" in the word "utilizations".

� [Response 1-1] Thanks for this suggestion. This “s” has been deleted, accordingly.

Reviewer #1: I thank the authors for their substantial revision. My final, minor suggestions are as follows.

[Comment 1-2] Line 101: please put a comma after the word "cross-sectional".

� [Response 1-2] Thanks. Yet, we have never seen the term “A cross-sectional household, survey” and we think it looks awkward. We found the term “A cross-sectional household survey” (without a comma after ”cross-sectional”) in a number of article titles. For instance “Seeking and reaching emergency care: A cross sectional household survey across two Liberian counties” (PLOS Global Public Health 3 (11): e0002629 [DOI: 10.1371/journal.pgph.0002629]). Thus, we have decided not to insert a comma.

[Comment 1-3] Line 109: please consider writing "had already been" instead of "had been already".

� [Response 1-3] Thanks for this suggestion. The order of these two words have been switched, accordingly.

[Comment 1-4] Line 113-116: please consider writing "The proportion of women completing at least four ANC visits displayed statistically significant DID in both crude and adjusted analyses. The proportions of women utilizing facility-based delivery services and post-partum care services did not display statistically significant DIDs.".

� [Response 1-4] Thanks for this suggestion. These two sentences have been replaced by "The proportion of women completing at least four ANC visits displayed significant DID in both crude and adjusted analyses. The proportions of women utilizing facility-based delivery services and post-partum care services did not display significant DIDs.", accordingly. Note that the term “statistically” was not inserted despite the reviewer’s suggestion. This is because the term “significant” in the texts on statistical analyses in any public health papers automatically means “statistically significant”. As a common practice, not “statistically significant” but simply “significant” has been used by public health papers. Hope the reviewer will agree to this view.

[Comment 1-5] Line 123-124: please consider writing "... the transition be smooth by increasing the number of ANC visits."

� [Response 1-5] Thanks for this suggestion. The phrase “... the transition be smoothly completed through ensuring the number of ANC visits” has been replaced by "... the transition be smooth by increasing the number of ANC visits ", accordingly.

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COMMENTS FROM REVIEWER #3

[Comment 3-1] Rationales of conducting this study: The authors might want to add explanations in the Background section regarding why this intervention was required in the study site where maternal health coverage was high. The authors added that “Poorer access to health facilities, inadequate quality of health services, and socio-economic/ cultural barriers are the major obstacles in increasing maternal health service utilizations. This prevents reproductive aged women from reaching life-saving services.” (Lines 164-) However, the authors might want to re-examine if this statement is valid to maternal health service provision situations in the study site. Particularly, they would need to explain that the intervention package benefited women who could not receive maternal health services while most women received these services.

� [Response 3-1] When the intervention package was designed and proposed in 2018-2020, the MCH service coverages in Eastern Region were overall low enough according to District Health Information System 2 (DHIMS2) (see (a) in table below). Thus, we assumed there was a critical need for the intervention package. Then, it was only after completion of data collection for this study when such high coverages of ANC, FBD and PPC as shown in Figure 3 in the manuscript were found (see also (b1) and (b2) in table below). Ghana Demographic and Health Survey 2022 whose data were collected after our study also reported equally high coverages for both Eastern Region and entire Ghana, too (see also (c1) and (c2) in table below). Though DHIMS data probably might have underestimated these coverages, they are the only available coverage data for Eastern Region we could rely on. There is no great gap between baseline data for our study (ie, (b1) and (b2)) and DHS2022 data (ie, (c1)) in Eastern Region. Similarly, there is no great gap in the coverages between Eastern Region (c1) and entire Ghana (c2) in DHS2022 data. This implies that there is definitely room and need for further improvement of these coverages in Eastern Region (incl. Suhum Municipality) as well as other regions of Ghana. Having considered the aforementioned complicated background on service utilization rates, we decided not to add any texts in the main text, to avoid unnecessarily presenting complicated local background information that may confuse the audience and rather maintain its simplicity.

(a) During intervention designing: DHIMS in Eastern Region, [2018]a (b) Our study: Baseline data of our survey in 2 districts in Eastern Region [5-29 May 2022] (c) After our study: Ghana DHS 2022 [17 Oct 2022 – 14 Jan 2023] b

(b1) Intervention group (b2) Control group (c1) Eastern Region (c2) Ghana

+4ANC 55.8% 93.1% 96.7% 88.0% 87.8%

FBD 55.9% 79.4% 85.6% 89.5% 86.2%

PPC 62.4% 78.6% 85.6% 95.0% 87.0%

a [Source] District Health Information System 2 (DHIMS2)

b [Source] Ghana Statistical Service. Ghana demographic and health survey 2022. Accra: GSS; 2024.

[Comment 3-2] Design effect: The authors set the design effect at 1.3 (Line 363) for the sample size calculation, seemingly without reference articles. As across-cluster differences may be large in an outcome of receiving health services, compared to a health outcome, this design effect might be too small. Readers may have an impression that a reason for insignificance in DID estimators at a 5% significance level might be because of insufficient sample size, not “the service coverages of the outcome variables had been already too high to have room for an increase 387 at the significance level of 0.05 (e.g., 93.1% of ANC in the intervention group at baseline).” (Lines 386-) The authors might want to justify the design effect level and add a limitation statement if the design effect was smaller than an adequate level. As the authors might have information regarding the high level of maternal health service coverage at the study site as the project funder, the high level of maternal health service coverage at baseline might not be a good reason for loosening the significance level to 10%. Rather than that, logistic or financial constraints in the impact evaluation might justify setting the significance level at 10%, particularly for behavioral studies.

� [Response 3-2] Thanks for the clarification. Despite the reviewer’s concern, we carefully set the design effect at 1.3 and further verified its validity, by referring to those reported in Ghana Demographic and Health Survey 2022. The DHS reported the values of design effect for the respective key variables specifically for Eastern Region, where we collected the data for this study. I.e., (i) 1.126 for ≥4ANC visits; (ii) 1.374 for facility-based delivery (FBD); and (iii) 1.056 for postpartum care (PPC). To ensure the adequacy of design effect for all the three outcome variables, the design effect was set at 1.3, by employing the greatest one of the three. Then, “Ghana Statistical Service. Ghana demographic and health survey 2022. Accra: GSS; 2024. https://www.dhsprogram.com/pubs/pdf/FR387/FR387.pdf (accessed April 9, 2024)” has been added as the reference for justifying the design effect of 1.3, accordingly. As the reviewer mentioned high maternal health service coverage at baseline might not be an appropriate reason for loosening the significance level to 10%. Yet, it might be, too. It is difficult to objectively judge whether high maternal health service coverage is an appropriate reason for loosening the significance level or not. This is because there is no standard method for doing so. Moreover, many DID studies use the three significance levels (i.e. 0.10, 0.05, and 0.01). For example, A El-Shal, P Cubi-Molla, M Jofre-Bonet Accreditation as a quality‑improving policy tool: family planning, maternal health, and child health in Egypt. The European Journal of Health Economics, 2021; 22 (1): 115–139.

[Comment 3-3] Significance testing in socio-demographic and socio-economic characteristics: The authors explained that “Significant differences were unexpectedly detected in the proportions and mean values of 10 of 12 characteristic variables between the four groups (i.e., intervention group at baseline, intervention group at follow-up, control group at baseline, and control group at follow-up).” (Lines 441-) It is unclear why these four groups should have been compared. This approach seems to mix up detecting differences in baseline characteristics between the arms, detecting differences in follow-up characteristics between the arm, and detecting changes in characteristics between baseline and follow-up within the arm. If the authors needed to check the balance of the characteristics between the arms, they might want to present significance testing results at the baseline and at the follow-up separately.

� [Response 3-3] Thank you for your insightful comments. In response to your feedback, we have revised Table 3, to more clearly delineate the comparisons made between the groups. We now present the results of significance testing for socio-demographic and socio-economic characteristics separately for both baseline and follow-up. This revision allows for a clearer assessment of the comparability between the intervention and control groups at each time point. We appreciate your guidance in enhancing the clarity and accuracy of our analyses.

[Comment 3-4] Possible contamination: Were Suhum Municipality and Atiwa West District locations close with each other? Is it possible that people in Atiwa West District used maternal health services in Suhum Municipality or received part of the intervention package? The authors might want to expand explanations on the choice of the intervention and control group sites considering contamination possibilities.

� [Response 3-4] Thanks for sharing this concern. While fully understand reviewer’s concern about possible contamination, we made careful efforts to minimize the possibilities of contaminations by taking two approaches. First, we excluded those relocated from Suhum Municipality to Atiwa West District from the control group participants. Please see “Those having been relocated from Suhum Municipality and other six intervention municipalities/districts to Atiwa West District during their pregnancies were excluded from the follow-up sampling frame for the control group (Group C2 in Figure 1). By doing so, we ensured that, in the control group, the follow-up study participants were never, even partially, exposed to the intervention during their pregnancies” (Line 289-294 “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes”; lines ● of “Revised Manuscript”). Second, we took Atiwa West District which is not adjacent to Suhum Municipality (intervention group), as control group. East Akim District is located between Atiwa West district and Shum Municipality. The road distance from Suhum- East Akim border to East Akim- Atiwa West border is 65km. Thus, contamination is least likely to occur.

[Comment 3-5] Terminology: Is the word “difference-in-differences” more common than “difference-in-difference,” which the authors used? Please disregard this comment if the authors had a good reason to call their method difference-in-difference.

� [Response 3-5] Thanks for your kind advice. It is really appreciated. Having fully agreed to the reviewer’s suggestion, now “difference-in-difference” has been replaced by “difference-in-differences” systematically in the manuscript. (see Line 107, Line 248, Line 296, Line 457, Line 465, Line 483, Line 1000, Figure 1 title, Figure 2 title, and Figure 3 title)

[Comment 3-6] Estimation of Wealth-group-specific difference-in-differences: The approach used for the analysis of heterogeneity in DID across different wealth groups is so-called difference-in-difference-in-differences, or DDD (for example, Olden and Møen [2022], https://academic.oup.com/ectj/article/25/3/531/6545797). According to Table 5, the authors’ specification may include the variables of group, time, wealth, and DDD (group*time*wealth). Compared to Equation 3.1 in Olden and Møen (2022), the model in Table 5 might miss the interaction terms group*wealth and time*wealth (the interaction term of time*group may be captured as “Adjusted DID estimates among the poor”). Consequently, DDD estimator in Table 5 might cause a bias by capturing two interaction terms (group*wealth and time*wealth), in addition to the appropriate DDD (group*time*wealth). Please check the model in Table 5 to ensure if it was specified appropriately and possibly re-estimate DDD if needed.

� [Response 3-6] We have carefully reviewed our model specification in light of your suggestions and the referenced article by Olden and Møen (2022). You correctly noted that our initial model omitted crucial interaction terms (group*wealth and time*wealth) that are necessary for accurately estimating the DDD approach. These terms are indeed essential for capturing the heterogeneity in effects across different wealth groups and time periods without introducing bias. In response to this, we have revised our model to include both group*wealth and time*wealth interaction terms. This amendment aligns our approach with the methodology outlined in Equation 3.1 of Olden and Møen (2022) and ensures the robustness of our DDD estimator by appropriately accounting for the multiple layers of interaction effects. The revised model and its results are now included in Table 5 of the manuscript. We believe that these changes have significantly strengthened our analysis. We highly appreciate your attention to detail and your guidance, which have been instrumental in enhancing the quality and accuracy of our work.

[Comment 3-7] Percent or percentage point change: In Figures 3 and 4, the authors presented crude DID as a percent form. However, it looks like it should have been “percentage points,” as this is the subtraction of percentages. Please find the following example for details: http://sumn.org/downloads/Percentage_Change.pdf.

� [Response 3-7] Many thanks for sharing this very careful suggestion. Having agreed to this suggestion, the sentence “Crude DID is expressed in form of percent difference.” has been added to the footnotes of Figure 3 and Figure 4.

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� [Response 3-8] Thanks for your suggestion. All the coauthors agreed to publish the peer review history.

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PONE-D-23-10669R2Effectiveness of a community-based intervention package in maternal health service utilizations: A cross-sectional quasi-experimental study in rural GhanaPLOS ONE

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1. Design effect: In the responses-to-reviewers document, the authors explained that the design effect (1.3) used for sample size calculations was based on the Ghana DHS 2022 Report. However, the data collection started on May 2022, before the data collection of the Ghana DHS 2022 (starting on October 2022), the authors might not access to the information in the report when the survey was designed. In addition, it would be noted that 1) design effect is a function of Intraclass Correlation Coefficient (ICC) and cluster size (for example, https://doi.org/10.1016/j.jeph.2024.202198) and 2) cluster size may be different between DHS and this study as it depends on the sampling design of a study. Therefore, it is possible that the design effect expected in this study was larger than the design effect in DHS (if the [average] cluster size of this study is larger than the cluster size of DHS). It is unclear about the cluster size in this study (it should be reported if it is not mentioned in the Methods section), and the cluster size (or the number of samples in the second stage) of Ghana DHS 2022 was 30 according to its report (https://www.dhsprogram.com/pubs/pdf/FR387/FR387.pdf). Thus, if the average cluster size of this study was smaller than Ghana DHS, the authors’ sample size calculation might be sufficient (even if they knew it after the DHS report was issued). Otherwise, the authors might want to add explanations on their initial sample size calculations more in details in the Methods section and a possibility of a smaller sample size than it should have been as a limitation of this study in the Discussion section.

2. Percentage points: In Figures 2 and 3, the authors added the explanation that “Crude DID is expressed in form of percentage difference.” However, the DID may be captured as a difference between the percentages. For example, in the panel (a) of Figure 2, Crude DID was 4.6 percentage points (= [93.4% – 93.1%] – [92.4% – 96.7%] = 0.3% – [-4.3%]). Therefore, in the panel (a), it may be appropriate to present “Crude DID = 4.6 percentage points” instead of “Crude DID = 4.6%.” (If this is correct, the authors might want to revise similar presentations in Figures 2 and 3.

3. Percentage points: In relation to the comment above, the explanation of the Results section might be re-examined. For example, in Lines 487-, the authors explained that “Again, ANC was the only outcome variable that produced significant crude DID (11.5%; P = 0.082 < 0.10).” This percentage presentation (11.5%) might also be 11.5 percentage points. In addition, if it referred to the result presented in Figure 4 [1a] (ANC for women from poor 33%), it would be 11.4 percentage points and p = 0.085, according to the figure. Please check if the explanation in the main text was consistent with what was presented in the figure.

Reviewer #4: Introduction

1. “This is largely because they are not necessarily interactive and friendly enough to local omen” line 178. Who is this sentence referring to?

2. “Peer education has been often employed” – line 180 – grammar??

3. “a study needs to be conducted in Ghana”. Line 216 and 217 – this sentence should be re-stated. The study is done now, apparently.

4. “This is because the implementation of the Program was less affected by the pandemic of SARS-CoV-2 (COVID-19) pandemic in Ghana, compared with other three countries.” Line 218 – why? Unless this can be explained with evidence, the statement is more or less a conjecture and should be revised.

5. at least four ANC visits; (ii) FBD; and (iii) PNC. National Health Insurance Scheme (NHIS) line 218. Why use abbreviation in stating your objectives?

Methods

1. “Ghana was targeted for the study. i.e. Group I1 as the intervention group at baseline, Group I2 as the intervention group at follow-up, Group C1 as the control group at baseline, and Group as the control group at follow-up (Figure 1)”. – line 253. It does not clear to me whether baseline and follow up groups for both intervention and control had same of member for the time difference. Otherwise, how did you manage the difference in characteristics if each group had different participants?

2. “Atiwa West District was appropriate as the control group also because its socio-economic and socio-demographic characteristics, and maternal health service coverages at the baseline were reportedly at the similar level to those of Suhum Municipality.” – line 269, 270 – Atiwa West district is close to Suhum. They share border. How did you manage spillover effect?? If you did not, state it as a limitation.

Design and intervention

1. Ghana and indeed the WHO had abandoned 4 plus visit, even before 2018. What was the motivation for setting your outcome variable at 4+ instead of 8+?

Results

2. Data collection was conducted during the period from 5th to 29th May 2022, the final stage of the five-year Program – line 433. Authors may take this sentence away from results section and move it to methods section.

Discussion

“Of the three types of essential maternal health service utilizations (ANC, FBD and PPC), the intervention package improved only ANC visit coverage. A positive impact of the intervention package on FBD and PPC was not observed” – line 507 to 509 – it appears to me that analysing with 8+ plus in accordance WHO current recommendation even before this intervention was rolled out would have given different results altogether. Authors can re-run with 8+ or offer strong explanation n to support their choice of 4+

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11 Aug 2024

RESPONSES TO THE REVIEWERS’ COMMENTS

We are extremely grateful to the editor and reviewers for their comments on the manuscript. We have revised the manuscript based on the useful comments. Please refer to the following point-by-point-based responses to the respective comments, along with revised manuscript. Please note that the changes in the revised manuscript (i.e. main text, tables/figures, and reference list) have been shown in: (i) red in this file for “Responses to Reviewers” as follows; (ii) track changes in the file “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes”; and (iii) red in the cleaned revised file “Revised Manuscript”.

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COMMENTS FROM REVIEWER #3

[Comment 3-1] The authors addressed most of the comments made in the previous round of peer review appropriately. Please consider the following remaining comments:

� [Response 3-1] Thanks for recognizing the responses and revision we have made for the previous version.

[Comment 3-2] 1. Design effect: In the responses-to-reviewers document, the authors explained that the design effect (1.3) used for sample size calculations was based on the Ghana DHS 2022 Report. However, the data collection started on May 2022, before the data collection of the Ghana DHS 2022 (starting on October 2022), the authors might not access to the information in the report when the survey was designed. In addition, it would be noted that 1) design effect is a function of Intraclass Correlation Coefficient (ICC) and cluster size (for example, https://doi.org/10.1016/j.jeph.2024.202198) and 2) cluster size may be different between DHS and this study as it depends on the sampling design of a study. Therefore, it is possible that the design effect expected in this study was larger than the design effect in DHS (if the [average] cluster size of this study is larger than the cluster size of DHS). It is unclear about the cluster size in this study (it should be reported if it is not mentioned in the Methods section), and the cluster size (or the number of samples in the second stage) of Ghana DHS 2022 was 30 according to its report (https://www.dhsprogram.com/pubs/pdf/FR387/FR387.pdf). Thus, if the average cluster size of this study was smaller than Ghana DHS, the authors’ sample size calculation might be sufficient (even if they knew it after the DHS report was issued). Otherwise, the authors might want to add explanations on their initial sample size calculations more in details in the Methods section and a possibility of a smaller sample size than it should have been as a limitation of this study in the Discussion section.

� [Response 3-2] Thanks for sharing the detailed insights on design effect and two-stage sampling. As Reviewer #3 assumed, the design effect of 1.3 reported in Ghana DHS 2022 Report was accessed only after our data collection was completed. That was why this point and its reference (i.e. Ghana DHS 2022 Report) were not inserted into the main text when revising the manuscript last time. In view of this comment from Reviewer #3, the phrase “where mean cluster size was 25” has been inserted into the main text (see Line 373 in revised manuscript with TC; and Line 369 in revised manuscript without TC). We have reservation about adding more explanations on the sample size calculation in relation to design effect, for the three reasons: (i) the number of words of the main text has already great enough (i.e. 5,030) though PLoS One does not specify the word count limit; (ii) this study is not intended to focus on the detailed on sampling technique; and (iii) this manuscript has been submitted to PLoS One which is the journal not specialized in the journal specialized in epidemiology and/or biostatistics.

[Comment 3-3] 2. Percentage points: In Figures 2 and 3, the authors added the explanation that “Crude DID is expressed in form of percentage difference.” However, the DID may be captured as a difference between the percentages. For example, in the panel (a) of Figure 2, Crude DID was 4.6 percentage points (= [93.4% – 93.1%] – [92.4% – 96.7%] = 0.3% – [-4.3%]). Therefore, in the panel (a), it may be appropriate to present “Crude DID = 4.6 percentage points” instead of “Crude DID = 4.6%.” (If this is correct, the authors might want to revise similar presentations in Figures 2 and 3.

� [Response 3-3] Thanks for suggesting this correction. Accordingly, the phrase “Crude DID = X.XX percentage points” has been used for each figure in Figure 3 and Figure 4. Moreover, “Crude DID is expressed in form of percentage difference” has been replaced by “Crude DID is expressed in form of percentage points” (the footnotes for both Figure 3 and Figure 4 in the revised manuscript with TC and revised manuscript without TC).

[Comment 3-4] 3. Percentage points: In relation to the comment above, the explanation of the Results section might be re-examined. For example, in Lines 487-, the authors explained that “Again, ANC was the only outcome variable that produced significant crude DID (11.5%; P = 0.082 < 0.10).” This percentage presentation (11.5%) might also be 11.5 percentage points. In addition, if it referred to the result presented in Figure 4 [1a] (ANC for women from poor 33%), it would be 11.4 percentage points and p = 0.085, according to the figure. Please check if the explanation in the main text was consistent with what was presented in the figure.

� [Response 3-4] Many thanks for suggesting this correction in line with the above [Comment 3-3]. Accordingly, “……significant crude DID (11.5 %; P = 0.082).” has been replaced by “……significant crude DID (11.4 percentage points; P = 0.085).” (see Line 500-501 in revised manuscript with TC; and Line 495-496 in revised manuscript without TC)

[Comment 3-5] Line 123-124: please consider writing "... the transition be smooth by increasing the number of ANC visits."

� [Response 3-5] Thanks for identifying this typo by carefully reviewing the revised manuscript. Accordingly, the phrase "... the transition be smooth by increasing in the number of ANC visits." has been replaced by "... the transition be smooth by increasing the number of ANC visits." (see Line 122-123 in revised manuscript with TC; and Line 122-123 in revised manuscript without TC).

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COMMENTS FROM REVIEWER #4

[Comment 4-1] Introduction 1. “This is largely because they are not necessarily interactive and friendly enough to local women” line 178. Who is this sentence referring to?

� [Response 4-1] Thanks for this clarification. Accordingly, “This is largely because they are not necessarily interactive and friendly enough to local women” has been replaced by “This is largely because the formal health workers' way of demand creation is not necessarily interactive and friendly enough to local women” (see Line 177 in revised manuscript with TC; and Line 177 in revised manuscript without TC). Hope this will help Reviewer #4 and the audience of the article will more clearly understand this part.

[Comment 4-2] Introduction 2. “Peer education has been often employed” – line 180 – grammar??

� [Response 4-2] Thanks for this clarification. This way of using the verb “employ” is common. For example, “The peer education program has been employed as one of the strategies for HIV prevention” (Hayashi M, Evaluation of the Peer Education Program in the Central Region of Vietnam. Journal of the National Institute of Public Health. 2009; 58 (4): 408) and “Peer education interventions are commonly employed to prevent HIV” (Abdi F, Simbar M. The Peer Education Approach in Adolescents- Narrative Review Article. Iran J Public Health. 2013; 42 (11): 1200-1206). Many other earlier publications used “employ” in this manner. Moreover, in fact, none of the three other reviewers for our manuscript raised this clarification. This implies the sentence “Peer education has been often employed” is well understood. Thus, no change has been made in the manuscript.

[Comment 4-3] Introduction 3. “a study needs to be conducted in Ghana”. Line 216 and 217 – this sentence should be re-stated. The study is done now, apparently.

� [Response 4-3] Thanks for this suggestion. We agreed to make a necessary change in this sentence. Now, “… a study needs to be conducted in Ghana” has been replaced by “… this study was conducted in Ghana” (see Line 220 in revised manuscript with TC; and Line 217 in revised manuscript without TC).

[Comment 4-4] Introduction 4. “This is because the implementation of the Program was less affected by the pandemic of SARS-CoV-2 (COVID-19) pandemic in Ghana, compared with other three countries.” Line 218 – why? Unless this can be explained with evidence, the statement is more or less a conjecture and should be revised.

� [Response 4-4] Thanks for this clarification. There is some evidence for the phrase “… the Program was less affected by the SARS-CoV-2 (COVID-19) pandemic in Ghana” compared with three other countries. First, the Ghanaian government established partial lockdowns in COVID-19 hotspots, primarily in Greater Accra Region and Greater Kumasi Region on 30th March 2020. Thus, Eastern Region in which both Suhum Municipality (intervention group) and Atiwa West District (control group), the target areas of this study, were not included in the partial lockdown areas. Second, Ghana was one of the first African countries that lifted the lockdowns (Knott S. Ghana’s decision to lift partial COVID lockdown criticized by some. VOA News. April 20, 2020. https://www.voanews.com/a/africa_ghanas-decision-lift-partial-covid-19-lockdown-criticized-some/6187869.html).

[Comment 4-5] Introduction 5. at least four ANC visits; (ii) FBD; and (iii) PNC. National Health Insurance Scheme (NHIS) line 218. Why use abbreviation in stating your objectives?

� [Response 4-5] Thanks for clarification. First, “PNC” was the typo of “PPC”. Second, the three abbreviations “ANC”, “FBD” and “PPC” have appeared before this part in Line 160-162. I.e. “To reduce a significantly greater number of maternal deaths in Sub-Saharan Africa, timely and quality antenatal care (ANC) and facility-based delivery (FBD), post-partum care (PPC) ….” (see Line 160-162 in revised manuscript with TC; and Line 160-162 in revised manuscript without TC). Fully spelling out an abbreviation should be done only once, when it appears for the first time. Thus, no change has been made in Line 235-236.

[Comment 4-6] Methods 1. “Ghana was targeted for the study. i.e. Group I1 as the intervention group at baseline, Group I2 as the intervention group at follow-up, Group C1 as the control group at baseline, and Group as the control group at follow-up (Figure 1)”. – line 253. It does not clear to me whether baseline and follow up groups for both intervention and control had same of member for the time difference. Otherwise, how did you manage the difference in characteristics if each group had different participants?

� [Response 4-6] Thanks for this clarification. Needless to say, the women who were pregnant at the time of the baseline (from 1st January 2018 to 28th February 2019) could be generally expected not to be pregnant again at the time of the follow-up (from 1st August 2021 to 30th April 2022), too. Thus, the study participants in baseline and follow-up groups were different. Yet, there were a few possibilities that some women having been pregnant at the time of both baseline and follow-up. For this reason, we systematically checked the presence of those women. At the result, it was found that no women who were pregnant at the time of both baseline and follow-up were selected for any of the four groups. Please refer to the two sentences “All the women who delivered between 1st January 2018 and 28th February 2019 before the Program’s launch in March 2019 were included in the baseline sampling frames for both intervention and control groups (Group I1 and Group C1 in Figure 1). Similarly, all the women who delivered between 1st August 2021 and 30th April 2022 after the 10 months had passed since the Program’s launch were included in the follow-up sampling frames for both intervention and control groups (Group I2 and Group C2 in Figure 1).” (see Line 289-295 in revised manuscript with TC; and Line 282-288 in the revised manuscript without TC).

[Comment 4-7] Methods 2. “Atiwa West District was appropriate as the control group also because its socio-economic and socio-demographic characteristics, and maternal health service coverages at the baseline were reportedly at the similar level to those of Suhum Municipality.” – line 269, 270 – Atiwa West district is close to Suhum. They share border. How did you manage spillover effect?? If you did not, state it as a limitation.

� [Response 4-7] Thanks for this clarification. The possibilities of contamination of a series of interventions into Atiwa West District (control group) must have been limited for the two reasons. First, Atiwa West District (control group) is closely located to Suhum Municipality (intervention group) but without sharing their boarder (see the map below). Since the total number of tables and figures is too many (i.e. 9 = 5 tables and 4 figures), we decided not to add this map to the revised manuscript.

Second, during COVID-19 pandemic, people’s mobility and internal migration within Ghana were regulated and refrained from. For example, the graph below (https://www.exemplars.health/emerging-topics/ecr/ghana/how-did-ghana-respond) shows the reduction in people’s movements during the COVID-19 pandemic. Nevertheless, we cannot negate some possibilities of contamination. Therefore, an additional paragraph has been inserted into the final part of Discussion section. I.e. “Fourth, there are limited possibilities of contamination of a series of interventions into the control group. This is because: (i) Atiwa West District (control group) and Suhum Municipality (intervention group) are not mutually adjacent; and (ii) people’s movement was regulated and voluntarily refrained from during COVID-19 pandemic. Yet, a certain level of the possibilities of contamination cannot be negated.” (see Line 648-652 in revised manuscript with TC; and Line 638-642 in the revised manuscript without TC).

[Comment 4-8] Design and intervention 1. Ghana and indeed the WHO had abandoned 4 plus visit, even before 2018. What was the motivation for setting your outcome variable at 4+ instead of 8+?

Results

� [Response 4-8] Thanks for raising this point. As Reviewer #4 mentioned, Ghana Health Service (GHS) recommended all pregnant women make at least eight ANC visits in Ghana National Safe Motherhood Protocol 2017. Yet, in view of this unrealistic and infeasible target of eight or more NC visits, GHS relaxed the target figure for the minimum number of ANC visits from eight back to four in 2020. In fact, Ghana National Safe Motherhood Protocol 2021 employs at least four ANC visits as the minimum number of ANC visits (GHS, Ghana National Safe Motherhood Protocol 2021. Accra: GHS; 2021. page 3) 4+ANC has been serving as the only monitoring indicator of frequency of ANC visits in GHS (GHS, Health Information Management System. Standard Operating Procedure 4th edition 2020. Accra: GHS; 2017. page 337). Even, Ghana DHS 2022 employed exclusively at least four ANC visits by excluding at least eight ANC visits as the variable, through respecting this GHS’s relaxing the national standard (Ghana Statistical Service, Ghana Demographic and Health Survey 2022. Accra: Ghana Statistical Service; 2022. Page 158.) To avoid unnecessary complicated explanation which is not essential to this study, we decided not to insert any additional sentences and phrases on this topic into the main text.

[Comment 4-9] final stage of the five-year Program – line 433. Authors may take this sentence away from results section and move it to methods section.

� [Response 4-9] Thanks for this suggestion. The phrase “, the final stage of the five-year Program” has been simply deleted without moving it to Methods section. This is because this phrase is essential neither in Results section nor in Methods section. (see Line 445 in revised manuscript with TC; and Line 438 in revised manuscript without TC).

[Comment 4-10] Discussion: “Of th

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