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. 2025 Jun 30;20(6):e0307068. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0307068

Prevalence and associated factors of depression among stroke family caregivers on follow up at Jimma medical center, southwest, Ethiopia: A cross-sectional study

Muhiddin Hirpasa Jabessa 1,*, Beshir Mammiyo Adem 2, Million Girma Tekle 2, Gutema Ahmed Fata 1, Hailemariam Hailesilasie Weldemariam 3
Editor: Nega Degefa Megersa4
PMCID: PMC12208473  PMID: 40587470

Abstract

Background

Taking care of stroke patients puts a high burden on their caregivers, and this leads to emotional disturbances like depression. However, little is known about the prevalence and associated factors of depression among family caregivers of stroke patients in Ethiopia. The aim of this study was to assess the prevalence and associated factors of depression among family caregivers of patients with stroke who have follow-up in Jimma Medical Center.

Method

An institution-based cross-sectional study of 306 family caregivers of stroke patients was conducted using a consecutive sampling method. A structured interviewer-administered questionnaire was used to collect data. The Patient Health Questionnaires-9 (PHQ-9) was used to screen outcome variable (i.e., depression). The data was entered into Epi-data version 4.6 and exported to the statistical package for social science version 25 for analysis. Bivariable analyses followed by multivariable logistic regression models were performed. The association between depression and associated factors was estimated using an odds ratio of 95%CI and a p-value of less than 0.05 in the final model.

Result

From a total 310 sample size 306 family caregivers were participated, making a response rate of 98.7%. The prevalence of depression among family caregivers was found to be 35.9% (95% CI = 30.54, 41.35). Poor social support (AOR = 2.31, 95% CI: 1.05–5.08), severe physical dependence of patients (AOR = 3.09, 95% CI: 1.44–6.60), lack of medical insurance (AOR = 2.52, 95% CI: 1.34–4.75), spending more than 13 hours per day on care (AOR = 5.72, 95% CI: 2.32–8.12), and illness duration of 6 months (AOR = 3.50, 95% CI: 1.61–7.60) were factors significantly associated with depression.

Conclusions and recommendations

This study found that more than one third of family caregivers of stroke patients have depression and almost the same with similar studies conducted across different countries of the world. Poor social support of caregivers, no health insurance by caregivers, greater than 13 hours of care per day, less than six months of illness duration, and severe dependence of patients on caregivers were variables associated with depression. Early detection of depression by health professional working at outpatient service and intervention of identified risk factors among stroke family caregivers were recommended for Jimma medical center and local health sector directors were recommended.

Introduction

Globally, stroke has been detailed as one of the driving causes of mortality and disability [1]. Stroke has an impact both on the family caregivers and survivors [2]. It is a long-standing illness which has profound negative effect on their families [3]. After discharge from the hospital, about 45% of stroke patients will return to home, 24% will go to rehabilitation and 31% of them will be cared for by trained nurses [4].

Since most of the stroke patients spent most of their time at home, they need extensive physical and emotional care [5]. As a result, most caregivers suffer from emotional distress like depression, particularly during the acute stage of the illness [6].

Depression is defined as the most common form of mental illness in the general population; characterized as having cardinal symptoms either sadness, loss of interest or pleasure and four more symptoms from feelings of guilt or low self-worth, disturbed sleep or appetite, feelings of tiredness, and poor concentration and \or suicidal thought for at least two weeks [7].

Worldwide, the overall pooled prevalence of depressive symptoms among stroke family caregivers was 40.2% (95% confidence interval 30.1%–51.1%) [8].

Studies shows that over 70.4% of stroke patients are dependent on their caregivers and their level of dependency vary from moderate to severe [9]. Depression among caregivers not only affects the caregivers themselves, but also determines the care recipient’s recovery, frequent hospital visits, and multiple admissions to the hospital [10]. So, the collaborative management of both the patients and family caregivers has a significant effect on the improvement and recovery of the patient [5].

Depression has the greatest negative effect on health status of the population either be alone or in associated with other chronic medical illnesses such as Asthma, Angina, and/or diabetes. The caregiver’s related characteristics like being advanced age, being female, being a spouse and presence of other chronic medical illness could increases the risk of depression among family caregivers [11].

Most of the time, caregivers have been considered as one of the overlooked population and this could result in poor health outcomes among caregivers [12]. It is reported that stroke patients’ caregivers who developed depression and strain will have higher risk of death by 63% than general population over four years period [13].

Although depression is very common among stroke caregivers, to the best of our knowledge there is no literature done in our country up to this research was conducted. Thus, this study was aimed to assess the prevalence and associated factors of depression among family caregivers’ of patients with stroke at Jimma Medical Center (JMC) to assess the burden of this problem in our country.

Methods and materials

Study area and design

Institution based a cross-sectional study was conducted at JMC from July 15– September 15 2021, south west, Ethiopia. Jimma is located in Oromia regional state and found 357 km away to South West of the capital city of Ethiopia, Addis Ababa. Jimma Medical Center (JMC) is a university teaching hospital and is the only referral hospital for the southwestern parts of the country. Currently, it provides service for more than 15 million people. The study was conducted at a chronic disease follow-up clinic among family caregivers of stroke patients. In chronic follow-up clinic of JMC, more than 3,000 patients consist of Hypertension, Diabetes Mellites, Epilepsy, Stroke, Thyroid dysfunction and other chronic medical illness, except HIV/AIDS getting service over a month. On average, 650 stroke patients visit chronic follow-up clinic over two months period.

Source population and study population

All family caregivers (i.e., Parents, offspring, siblings, spouse, and other relatives) of stroke patients attending follow-up treatment at JMC during study period were source population. This includes any family caregivers who take a role in giving care for the stroke patients. Whereas, all consecutively selected family caregivers of stroke patient attending follow up treatment at JMC were study population. We included all family caregivers of stroke patients’ attending follow-up at JMC and ≥ 18 years old and giving care for their relatives for at least two weeks. Whereas, family caregivers who were unable to respond due to illness and those with repeated visits (more than one visit) during data collection period were excluded to avoid repetition.

Sample size and sampling technique

The sample size required for this study was calculated using single population proportion formula, by assuming “p” 24.3%, from the study conducted in Nigeria among stroke family caregivers [14]. Because we perceive that, the socio-economic status of this country is almost similar with ours. A 95% confidence interval (CI), 5% marginal of error (d) and 10% non-response rate were taken to calculate the sample size. The final sample size was 310. According to inclusion criteria participants were recruited for the data after patient’s case folder was reviewed to check their diagnosis. The participants were selected consecutively for interview based on inclusion/exclusion criteria each day until the calculated sample size was reached. In case more than one family caregivers appear at a time, only one caregiver was selected by lottery method.

Variables of the study

The dependent variable was depression among stroke family caregivers(yes/no). The independent variables incorporated in this study were include socio-demographic (Age, gender, religion, ethnicity, educational level, occupation, current residency, kinship relation to the patient and family income), psychosocial related variables (level of social support and time spent by family caregiver per day for caregiving) and Substance related variables (current use khat, alcohol and tobacco). The independent variables specific to stroke patients include: socio-demographic factors (age, gender, religion, educational level, occupation and current residency), and clinical related variables (functional status \ severity of illness, duration of illness, presence of comorbid chronic physical illness and types of strokes).

Data collection tools and procedure

Patients Hospital Case Folder: The patients’ (stroke survivors) hospital case folder was used to obtain information about the clinical characteristics of the stroke survivors. Data was collected by structured and pre-tested interviewer administered questionnaires. It includes socio-demographic characteristics, clinical factors, current substance use, Patient Health Questionnaire-9 (PHQ-9) and oslo-3 social support scale. Data was collected by two Bachelor of Science in psychiatry and two Bachelor of Science in nursing after they have taken one day training on the data collection procedure. Supervised by two integrated clinical and community mental health master’s students.

PHQ-9 was used to assess the level of depression among family caregivers and has nine items likert scale from zero to three. The tool score ranges from zero to 27 and used for dual purpose of screening and severity rating. Moreover, PHQ-9 has been validated in Ethiopian healthcare with sensitivity and specificity of 86.2% and 67.3% respectively at cut-off point ≥ 10 with internal consistency of Cronbach’s alpha(0.81) [15]. The internal consistency of Cronbach’s alpha of the tool from this study was 0.85.

Social support level of caregivers was assessed using Oslo 3-item Social Support (OSS-3) Scale. If the score is 3–8 it indicates poor social support, 9–11 indicates moderate social support, and 12–14 shows strong social support [16].

Modified Rankin scale (mRS) was used to assess the stroke severity/functional status of the stroke patients. It was developed in 1957 by Dr John Rankin in Glasgow, Scotland, the RS comprises 5 grades of stroke severity ranging from “no significant disability” to “severe disability). Strong inter-rater reliability(k = 0.76) and Strong test-re-test reliability was also had been reported [17]. The specificity and sensitivity of the tool on caregivers of stroke patients at 3 and above cut-off point were reported to be 88.5% and 95.7% respectively [18].

Data quality control

Questionnaires prepared in English were translated into local Languages Afan Oromo and Amharic by skilled professionals from language department. Then, back translated to English by independent skilled professionals who are blind for English version to check its consistency. Training was given for data collectors and supervisors by the principal investigator about the data collection. Pre-test was conducted among (5%) (n = 16) of the total sample size. Regular supervision was performed and filled questionnaires were checked for completeness and consistency.

Data processing and analysis

The data were edited, cleaned, coded, and entered into the computer using Epi-Data version 4.6.2 and analyzed using Statistical Package for Social Sciences (SPSS) version 25. The presence of an association between dependent and independent variables was assessed using binary logistic regression analysis. Variables with a p-value less than 0.25 at bivariable binary logistic regression were entered into multivariable binary logistic regression. Backward variable selection method was used, in order not miss important variable. Statistical significance was considered at a p-value less than 0.05, and the strength of association was estimated by odds ratio at a 95% confidence interval. Descriptive statistics including frequencies, percentages, and mean were used to describe a finding. Chi-square and odds ratio were done to determine the association of variables. The model goodness of fit was checked by Hosmer and Lemeshow with value 0.47.

Ethics approval and consent to participate

Ethical clearance was obtained from institutional ethical review board (IRB) of Jimma University Institute of Health Science with Ref. No: IHPGnD/362. The objective, purpose, and aims of the study were explained to each study participant. Written informed consent was obtained from each of the participants prior to interview. Individuals who did not volunteer to participate on the interview were not forced to participate and well gone with thanks. Only assigned participants’ identification number was used on questionnaire. Name of participants was neither mentioned during data collection nor entered into the computer for analysis. Participants who fulfilled for the depression according to assessment tool and had suicidal behavior were linked to psychiatry department for thorough evaluation and management.

Results

Socio-demographic characteristics of stroke patients and family caregivers

A total of 306 family caregivers were participated in this study making the response rate 98.7%. The mean age of family caregivers and patients in years were 34.03 ± 12.551 SD and 48.14 ± 14.751 SD respectively. Nearly two-third, 64.7% (n = 198) of family caregivers and more than half, 54.2% (n = 166) of stroke patients were males (Table 1).

Table 1. Socio-demographic characteristics of family caregivers and patients with stroke follow up at Jimma medical center chronic follow up clinic, South-west Ethiopia 2021.

Variables category C (n) C (%) P (n) P (%)
Age 18-34 114 37.3 54 17.6
35-54 80 26.1 146 47.8
≥ 55 112 36.6 106 34.6
sex Male 198 64.7 166 54.2
female 108 35.3 140 45.8
Marital status Married 122 39.9
single 122 39.9
Separate/divorced/ widowed 62 20.3
Religion Muslim 188 61.4 178 58.2
orthodox 76 24.8 86 28.1
protestant 40 13.1 40 13.1
Others* 2 0.7 2 0.7
Current residency Urban 192 62.7 182 59.5
rural 114 37.3 124 40.5
Education No formal ed 99 32.4 198 64.7
primary (1–8) 75 24.5 46 15
secondary (9–12) 84 27.5 32 10.5
collage and above 48 15.7 30 9.8
occupation Employed 113 36.9 278 90.8
unemployed 77 25.2 10 3.3
daily laborer 42 13.7 4 1.3
Others** 74 24.2 14 4.6
Relationship Parents 46 15
siblings 90 29.4
spouse 71 23.2
offspring 47 15.4
Other’s relatives 52 17
Income <2565 161 52.6
≥2565 145 47.4
Insurance No 138 45.1
yes 168 54.9

Key= C-caregivers, p-patients, others*=catholic, wake feta, Jovan, others**=students, retired.

Clinical characteristics of stroke patients

The mean illness duration of the stroke patients participated in this study was 33.46 ± 30.987 SD in months. From the total stroke patients more than one third, 41.2%(n = 126) had comorbid Hypertension followed by Diabetes Mellitus 34.6% (n = 106) (See Table 2 below).

Table 2. Bivariable and Multivariable binary logistic regression analysis for independent variables of depression among family caregivers of patients with stroke follow up treatment at Jimma medical center, southwest Ethiopia 2021.

Variables Category Depression COR (95% CI) P-values AOR (95% CI) P-values
No N (%) Yes N (%)
Age 18-34 80(70.2) 34(29.8) 1
35-54 47(58.8) 33(41.3) 1.65(.91-3.0) .101* 1.25(.56-2.80) .585
≥55 69(61.6) 43(38.4) 1.47(.84-2.56) .175* 1.65(.80-3.40) .178
Sex Male 138(69.7) 60(30.3) 1
Female 58(53.7) 50(46.3) 1.98(1.22-3.22) .006* 1.51(.76-3.00) .243
Marital status Married 86(70.5) 36(29.5) 1
Single 76(62.3) 46(37.7) 1.45(.85-2.47) .176* .622 (.27-1.45) .272
Others 34(54.8) 28(45.2) 1.97(1.04-3.71) .036* .74(.33-1.68) .472
Monthly income <2565 100(62.1) 61(37.9) 1.20(.75-1.91) .156* 1.46(.78-2.75) .240
≥2565 96(66.2) 49(33.8) 1
Duration in months 0-6 47(45.2) 57(54.8) 3.42(1.9-6.15) .000* 3.50(1.61-7.60) .002**
6-18 70(71.4) 28(28.6) 1.17(.63-2.17) .618 1.26(.55-2.88) .586
≥ 18 79(76.0) 25(24.0) 1
Types of strokes Ischemic 84(47.7) 92(52.3) 1.97(1.22-3.20) .006* 1.70(.92-3.14) .092
hemorrhagic 112(86.2) 18(13.8) 1
Level of dependence Mild 84(75.0) 28(25.0) 1
moderate 70(74.5) 24(25.5) 1.08(.57-2.03) .816 1.00(.45-2.23) .994
severe 42(42.0) 58(58.0) 2.93(1.65-5.22) .000* 3.09(1.44-6.60) .004**
Time spent per day in hrs. 1-4 hrs 61(78.2) 17(21.8) 1
5-8 hrs 58(76.3) 18(23.7) 1.11(.52-2.37) .780 .583(.24-1.58) .289
9-12 hrs 48(67.6) 23(32.4) 1.72(.83-3.58) .147* 1.14(.43-2.97) .797
13 and above hrs 29(35.8) 52(64.2) 6.43(3.18-13.00) .000* 5.72(2.32-14.12) .000**
Medical insurance No 70(50.7) 68(49.3) 2.3(1.40-3.72) .001* 2.52(1.34-4.75) .004**
yes 126(75) 42(25) 1
Social support Poor 59(47.6) 65(52.4) 2.57(1.45-4.54) .001* 2.31(1.05-5.08) .038**
Moderate 72(80) 18(20) .59(.30-1.18) .134* .640(.26-1.60) .341
Strong 65(70.7) 27(29.3) 1
Current khat use No 116(70.7) 48(29.3) 1
Yes 80(56.3) 62(43.7) 1.86(1.16-2.97) .010* 1.80(.96-3.36) .065
Current alcohol use No 120(70.6) 50(29.4) 1
Yes 76(55.9) 60(44.1) 1.57(.98-2.51) .061* 1.67(.90-3.12) .107
Current tobacco use No 121(71.2) 49(28.8) 1
Yes 75(55.1) 61(44.9) 1.43(.89-2.28) .137* 1.36(.73-2.53) .334
Comorbid physical illness Kidney problem No 160(68.4) 74(31.6)
Yes 36(50.0) 36(50.0) 1.75(1.02-2.97) .041* 1.53(.75-3.13) .242
DM No 138(69.0) 62(31.0) 1
Yes 58(54.7) 48(45.3) 1.84(1.13-2.99) .014* 1.64(.84-3.20) .146
HTN No 120(66.7) 60(33.3) 1
Yes 76(60.3) 50(39.7) 1.17(.73-1.88) .113* 1.56(.82-2.96) .177
Epilepsy No 146(66.4) 74(33.6) 1
Yes 50(58.1) 36(41.9) 1.05(.63-1.74) .166* .58(.29-1.13) .110

Key = others(marital)= widowed, separated, divorced, * = p-value < 0.25 statistically significant at bivariate, ** = p-value < 0.05 statistically significant at multivariate, 1 = reference category. Hosmer and Lemeshow test: 0.47.

Psychosocial related characteristics of family caregivers

The mean time spent per day in hour by caregiver with their patients was 6.34 ± 5.866 SD and nearly one third, 26.5% (n = 81) of the caregivers were spent more than 13 hours per day for caring their care recipients (Table 2).

Substance related characteristics of family caregivers

From the total family caregivers about 46.4%(n = 142), 44.4%(n = 136) and 44.4% (n = 136) of them were used khat, tobacco and alcohol over the past three months respectively. Among users of khat, alcohol, and tobacco over the past three months, about 29.3% (n = 48), 29.4%(n = 50) and 44.9%(n = 61) were found to have depression respectively (Table 2).

Prevalence and severity of depression in family caregivers

The result of current study showed that the prevalence of depression among family caregivers of stroke patients was found to be 35.9% (95% CI = 30.54, 41.35). Based on severity level, 16.4%(n = 51), 21.6%(n = 66), 13.1%(n = 40), 1.3%(n = 4) of the family caregivers have mild, moderate, moderately severe and severe form of depression respectively (Fig 1).

Fig 1. (A) The red color of pie chart indicates caregivers with depression, while blue color represents those who are non-depressed.

Fig 1

(B) The number on each color of pie chart indicate the percentage of caregivers’ depression 35.9% (n = 110) and non-depressed 64.05%(n = 196) at 95% CI based on PHQ-9 screening tool.

Factors associated with depression

On multivariable logistic regression there were five variables which had significant association with stroke caregivers’ depression. Those variables were; having poor social support of caregivers, severe physical dependence of patients, having no health insurance by caregivers, spending more than 13 hours per day for care and illness duration less than six months were found to have positive association with family caregivers’ depression.

The result of this finding showed that family caregivers who had poor social support were 2.3 times more likely to develop depression than those with strong social support (AOR)= 2.31, 95% CI: 1.05–5.08). Caregivers with patient illness duration less than six months were 3.5 times more likely to develop depression than caregivers of patients’ illness duration more than six months (AOR)= 3.50, 95% CI: 1.61–7.60). The odds of depression among family caregivers who spend more than thirteen hours per day for caring their relatives were nearly 5.7 times more likely as compared to those spend less hours per day (AOR)= 5.72, 95% CI: 2.32–14.12). Our study finding also revealed that family caregivers who have no health insurance were 2.5 times more likely to develop depression than those who have medical insurance (AOR)= 2.52, 95% CI: 1.34–4.75). It’s also revealed that having more severe physical dependence care recipient increases odds of depression among family caregivers by three folds than having care-recipient with less severe physical dependence (AOR)= 3.09, 95% CI: 1.44–6.60) (Table 2).

Discussion

According to our study the prevalence of depression among study participants was found to be 35.9% (95% CI:30.54, 41.35). This study finding was in line with other cross-sectional studies conducted in different countries. The prevalence of depression was 37% in India [19], 39% in UK [20], in Finland ranging (30%− 33%) [5] and among Iranian was reported as 40% [21]. The Global pooled prevalence estimates the prevalence of depression among stroke family caregivers to be 40.2% [8].

However, the prevalence of depression in this study was lower than cross-sectional study done in Malaysia (63.8%). The study was conducted during six-month follow up period, and participants were assessed using PHQ-9 [22]. The discrepancy might be because of difference in socio-economic status. The other supporting reason might be in that, the study was conducted among family caregivers of stroke patient whose illness duration was less than six months in which the depression status increased during the acute phase of the illness [23]. Another cross-sectional study conducted in China found prevalence of depression 44.6% among 92 stroke family caregivers based on BDI assessment scale [2]. This might be due to different assessment tools used; in that BDI scale was used, in which overestimation of depression was reported with this tool. High level female gender respondent, in which females were more vulnerable to depression than male [4]. Similarly, a cross-sectional study done in Japanese reported magnitude of depression using GDS scale was found to be higher (52%) than this study result [24]. The discrepancy of the results might be in that majority, 191(78.6%) of the participants were female [4] and spouse 116(47.7%) in which higher depression was reported among these population than their counter parties [23].

On the other hand, our study result was found to be higher than similar studies design conducted in Nigeria and India, where both used HADS assessment scale and found prevalence of depression as 18% and 24.3% and 18%(18) [14] respectively. The difference in the results could be attributed to the smaller sample size they used and the difference in assessment tools. Obviously it’s known that whenever the sample size become it might over/underestimate the finding. Another cross-sectional study conducted in Brazil by using HADS scale, the prevalence of depression was lower (22.6%) than our study finding [25]. The first reason for the difference might be difference in health service being delivered and difference in socio-economic status. The other possible reasons may be lower level of sample size used.

Similarly, having severe physically dependent care recipients increases the odds of depression more than three times among their family caregivers than their counter parties. This finding was in line with study done in Iran [21], UK university of Glasgow [26,27], Finland [5] and America [28]. This might be explained as care recipients who are severely dependent on their caregivers may have no time for themselves and all responsibilities would be on their shoulder and this impose to family caregivers emotional disturbances [2].

In addition, family caregivers who spend more hours per day for giving a care had nearly six times odds of depression than those spend less hours per day. This is supported by studies done in Japanese [24,29] and China [30]. The possible reason for this might be family caregivers who spend more time may occupy too much private time of themselves and thus reduces their work, social participation, sleep and entertainment time [30].

Duration of the illness is also one of the associated factors that increase caregiver’s depression vulnerability by more than three folds. Similar finding were reported from studies done in India [31],China [32] and Pakistan [23]. This is probably because of unpreparedness following transition from hospital to home, dealing with new roles and these may leads to negative mood state [33]. The other possible reasons may include the decreasing stroke severity after period of time [28] and increased recovery of the illness with time change [34].

Health insurance was also one of the factors that associated with caregiver depression and those family caregivers with no health insurance has 2.5 times more likely to develop depression than their counter parties. This is supported by the findings from Uganda [35], China [30], Korea [36] and UK [37]. This might best explained as the economic burden is one of the main factor for the emotional disturbances among caregivers [35].

Furthermore, having poor social support by caregivers increases the odds of depression by 2.3 folds among family caregivers. This is supported by different findings from the literature; Ghana [38], Korea [36], Malaysia [39] and UK [37]. This is likely due to the fact that having social support reduces the perceived amount of stress in a difficult scenario and boosts caregivers’ coping capacity during emotional disturbance [40].

Limitation of the study

Since the study was interviewer-administered, social desirability bias was a potential concern. Additionally, the facility-based nature of the study may limit its generalizability. Being a cross-sectional study method makes difficult to know cause effect relationship between outcome and predictors.

Conclusion

This study found that the prevalence of depression among family caregivers of stroke patients was almost in similar range with the pooled prevalence of world report. According to the current study’s findings; having poor social support, having no medical insurance, spending greater than 13 hours to provide care per day, having duration illness less than six months and being caregiver’s of severely dependent patients were variables that increases risk of developing depression among participants.

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Abbreviations

ADHD

Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder

ASD

Autism Spectrum Disorder

BDI

Beck Depression Inventory

BI

Barthel Index

CESD

Centers for Epidemiologic Studies Depression

CI

Confidence interval

DALYs

Disability Adjusted Life-Years

DSM-5

Diagnostic and Statistical Manual Fifth Edition

HADS

Hospital Anxiety and Depression Scale

HIV

Human Immunodeficiency Virus

JMC

Jimma Medical Center

MH

Muhiddin Hirpasa

OR

Odds Ratio

PHQ-9

Patient Health Questionnaire

QOL

Quality of Life

SPSS

Statistical Package for Social Science

SRQ-20

Standardized and Validated Self-Reported Questionnaire

TBI

Traumatic Brain Injury

WHO

World Health Organization

YLD

Years Lived with Disability

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the paper and its Supporting information files.

Funding Statement

The authors received no specific funding for this work.

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It is a great honor to review the manuscript in this well-recognized journal. I am delighted.

Then I have some comments as follows

The paper is nice and tried to assess an important topic. But I have some comments.

1. The author did not make it clear who are the caregivers. The family? The wives? The paid nurses? Or others, and how did the author get those care givers….all accompanying individuals to the hospitals are not the caregivers….

2. PHQ 9 is meant for screening purposes, not for diagnosis. Then how the diagnosis of depression was made?

3. low social support is considered a predictor of depression, but is it for stroke patients or for caregivers?

4. having no health insurance is again a predictor of depression? This is not clear. Paid caregivers or family members?

6. The author did not narrate the details of the caregivers, are they professionals?... nurses,,,,

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1 Oct 2022

Rebuttal letter

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We are grateful to the reviewer for the time taken to review the manuscript, and the useful comments they provided to improve the manuscript. We have responded to the entire reviewer’ comments point-by-point, highlighting the changes in the manuscript; and they are summarized below: Once again, we thank the reviewers for the useful comments and suggestions.

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1.The author did not make it clear who are the caregivers, the family? The wives? The paid nurses Or others, and how did the author those caregivers…. all accompanying individuals to the hospitals are not the caregivers…

Thank you for the comment raised by the reviewer.

The comment accepted and corrected accordingly.

2.PHQ 9 is meant for screening purposes, not for diagnosis. Then how the diagnosis of depression was made?

Actually, PHQ 9 used for screening purpose and severity rater and the comment accepted and corrected accordingly. But when we’re reporting the caregiver’s depression, we’re not saying depression disorder, but based on assessment tool those scored 10 and above were considered as depressed which doesn’t mean that they have depression disorder. This is also supported by the literatures

3. poor social support is considered a predictor of depression, but is it for stroke patients or caregivers?

There might be an association between patients’ poor social support and caregiver depression, but in our study it caregivers poor social support was a predictor of caregivers’ depression

4. Having no health insurance is again a predictor of depression. This is not clear. Paid caregivers or family members. As our study population was stroke family caregivers, we’re stating that having no health insurance was a predictor of caregivers’ depression.

5. The author did not narrate the details of caregivers are they professionals?... nurse...

The comment accepted and corrected accordingly.

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Decision Letter 1

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12 Dec 2022

Dear Dr. Jabessa,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

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Reviewer #1: thank you for response. the authors almost responded for the concerns but I have some questions.

what is the practice of health insurance in your set up?

is there any care give who get paid?

Reviewer #2: The study has a focus; however, it lacks clarity on multiple dimensions (differentiation between variables relevant to stroke caregivers vs those of stroke survivors, page 1, keywords), inclusion/exclusion criteria, lines 95-98, 115,116, sampling techniques, lines 94-104). The data collection tool is a combination of multiple scales that adress both stroke survivors and stroke caregivers as well which creates another site of confusion, lines 111-113. Finally, an in-depth proof reading is required to ensure English language errors are fixed, lines 69, 70,71,72,86.

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Author response to Decision Letter 2


26 Dec 2022

Rebuttal letter

Dear Editor,

We are grateful to the reviewers for the time taken to review the manuscript, and the useful comments they provided to improve the manuscript. We have responded to the entire reviewer’ comments point-by-point, highlighting the changes in the manuscript; and they are summarized below: Once again, we thank the reviewers for the useful comments and suggestions.

Comments of the reviewers and editors Reply by the author(s)

Editor #1

1 Your sampling methodology is unclear on whether multiple participants (family members) were selected from the same patient household/family. You need to clarify accurately and clearly.

I also recommend a language and grammar check.

Reply by the author(s)

Thank you for your constructive comments.

The comment is accepted and corrected accordingly.

Regarding the case in which multiple caregivers were appear together, only one caregiver was selected based on lottery mothed, as it can be found on the manuscript. Page # 5, line 111,112.

Reviewer #1

Reply by the author(s)

Thank you for response. the authors almost responded for the concerns but I have some questions:

1. What is the practice of health insurance in your set up?

#response by author(s)

Here, in our setup the purpose of health insurance is that; those with health insurance will have free services like: medication, hospital admission bed, and other payment related services.

As economic burden is one of the risk factors for stroke caregiver depression, those with health insurance were less vulnerable for depression. So that, health insurance was considered as one of independent variable in our study as it can be supported by different literature.

2. Is there any care giver who get paid?

response by author(s)

As it is mentioned on the response for question # 1, our study was on stroke family caregivers and there is no any payment for the caregiving service of their relatives. And our study participants were limited to stroke family caregivers.

Reviewer #2: Thank you for your constructive comments. The comment was accepted and corrected accordingly.

1.The study has a focus; however, it lacks clarity on multiple dimensions (differentiation between variables relevant to stroke caregiver’s vs those of stroke survivors, page 1, keywords),

inclusion/exclusion criteria, lines; 95-98, 115,116, sampling techniques, lines 94-104).

response by author(s)

#Regarding the sample size calculation, we took “p” 24.3%, from the study conducted among stroke family caregivers in Nigeria. Because we perceived that, the socio-economic status of this country is almost similar with ours.

#The variables were separated as that of patients and caregivers.

# Regarding sampling techniques, the comment was accepted and corrected accordingly.

2. The data collection tool is a combination of multiple scales that address both stroke survivors and stroke caregivers as well which creates another site of confusion, lines 111-113. The comment was accepted and corrected accordingly.

The data collection has discussed for the patients and caregivers separately.

3. Finally, an in-depth proof reading is required to ensure English language errors are fixed, lines 69, 70,71,72,86. The comment was accepted and corrected accordingly.

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Decision Letter 2

Saurav Basu

5 Apr 2023

Dear Dr. Jabessa

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In paragraph Data processing and analysis, please explain with more detail how you built the muktivariate regression model, was it backward or forward?

In the Discussion section, please provide the limitations due to the sampling (facility-based), how Berkson's bias can be present in the study and the overall effect on the OR estimation that this study provides, compared to a population-based study.

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Author response to Decision Letter 3


9 May 2023

Reviewer # 3

1.Inparagraph data processing and analysis, please explain with more detail how you built the multivariate regression model, was it backward or forward?

Thank you for your constructive comments.

The comment was accepted and corrected accordingly.

2. In the Discussion section, please provide the limitations due to the sampling (facility-based), how Berkson's bias can be present in the study and the overall effect on the OR estimation that this study provides, compared to a population-based study.

That’s good and constructive comments that, as our study design is cross-sectional we can’t generalize about cause-effect relationship as compered to berkson’s bias on case control group(clinical trial).

In addition to what has been mentioned in the body of manuscript, the facility that we had took the sample is giving service for more than fifteen millions of individuals from different classification and its more representative.

Decision Letter 3

Nega Megersa

12 Sep 2023

Dear Dr. Jabessa,

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Additional Editor Comments:

1. Avoid italicizing your text in the abstract section unless particularly requested.

2. Consider the proper and consistent use of analysis method in your study. I think the difference between multivariate and multivariable logistic regression analysis be noted and used accordingly.

3. Line (30): you can make it, the association between depression and associated factors was estimated using odds ratio with its 95%CI and p-value.

4. Line (32): a total of 306 family caregivers participated in the study, making a response rate of 98.7%.

5. Line (39): it is good to put the meaning of your finding in the conclusion. What does more than 1/3rd prevalent mean in the study’s context. It is also good to highlight the implication of this finding to the study’s context.

6. Line 57: It is a long-standing and weakening condition that has a profound negative effect on their families. It looks grammatically incorrect, please make sure the sentence is coherent with preceding one.

7. Line72: Although depression is very common among stroke caregivers, little is found in literature. Since most stroke patients spend most of their time at home, they need extensive physical and emotional care. Correct as underlined and red marked in the sentence.

Line 76: The finding revealed that every year around 33% of people left uunemployed due to depression, more than non-depressed. Correct the spelling as unemployed. The background doesn’t adequately address context of the problem in an orderly pattern (from global, to local)

Line 83: So, our study was aimed to assess the prevalence and associated factors of depression among study participants at specified area. Put the area instead.

Line 81: Worldwide, the overall pooled prevalence of depressive symptoms among stroke family caregivers was 40.2%, this is a report from a systematic review, which seems inconsistent with the idea on line 72, which states that little is found on literature (Although depression is very common among stroke caregivers, little is found on literature). So, I advise the authors to resolve this inconsistency.

Line (168): Chi-square and odds ratio were done to determine the association of variables. The model goodness of fit was checked by Hosmer and Lemeshow.

Suggestion to improve clarity.

The association between the outcome and explanatory variables were measured using Chi-square and odds ratio.

Please specify the value of the model fitness test, to show whether the model adequately fits the data.

Line (184): Avoid reciting referenced table by using indicative terms like see table1. I think it is enough to cite the table or figure like (table 1) or (figure 1).

Line (77): I think you need to extend you’re the limitation of your study by adding the nature of your sampling method (consecutive sampling) and the generalizability of your study as well as the geographical limitation of your study which is not representative of the wider context.

Line (82): suggestion to improve your conclusion.

Make sure your conclusion captures the interpretation and the possible implication of the finding instead of putting the value as indicated in the result. Instead of mentioning as more than one third which is vague, you can present the finding as high, consistent or low relative to the previous study, which highlights the trend and relative importance of the finding.

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Reviewer #4: Title: Prevalence and associated factors of depression among stroke family caregivers on follow up at Jimma medical center, southwest, Ethiopia: A cross-sectional study

Thank you for considering me to review this manuscript. The paper raises a significant problem since caretakers pass through several challenges, including mental issues, while caring for patients with stroke. I put my concerns as follows:

Abstract

The background section of the abstract must show the burden of the problem, the gap, and the intention of this study. You can merge the objective here.

Add the study period under the method section. Appropriately use words like "multivariate and multivariable." The sample size you put under the method and result sections are the same; if so, why is the response rate 98.7%?

Correct the upper limit of the confidence interval for the factor "spending more than 13 hours per day on care (AOR = 5.72, 95% CI: 2.32-1.12)."

Introduction

The introduction section lacks critical components, and intensive revisions are mandatory. The figures (prevalence of depression among caretakers of stroke patients) from previous studies must be addressed in a global-to-local context approach. Keep coherence and avoid contradicting ideas. For example, in line 72, you write, "…little is found on literature…" On the other hand, you put the pooled prevalence of depression from lines 81 to 83. In addition, the risk factors are not well addressed. Furthermore, some information is about stroke patients and others about their caretakers; be focused on your title.

The risk factors of depression among caretakers must also be included,and add citations appropriately. Previously proposed solutions at the national level or in any means, if any, should be included. The limitations of previously published studies and the gaps identified must also be included.

Furthermore, it is better to start with the global and national burden and impacts of stroke in different dimensions, including the economic consequences.

Methods

There are critical problems in this section. The source and study population are not appropriately defined. You write parents, offspring, siblings, spouse, and other relatives are the sources population, and if you get two during the visit, you select one of them by lottery method. Imagine if the stroke patient is married and his partner and his relative come together for the follow-up visit their relative has a 50% chance to be included in this study. I think this is unacceptable because his partner lives with him and she suffers a lot more than the relative. So, from the outset, the lottery method must be for equal relationships; otherwise, the findings are either over or underestimated. You tried to see it as a factor; however, the sampling approach is unacceptable.

Sampled and study populations are different; hence, you must modify your study population.

Appropriately organize the headings and the information within each header. For example, the information under the data collection and procedure from lines 131 to 149 does not align with the title. You have to modify it with other appropriate headings. Moreover, how did you organize your tool? Several missed variables may affect depression, so why do you extensively include them from the outset? Some variables were not appropriately measured, e.g. How did you assess alcohol use? In general, the method section needs further detailed clarification.

Results and discussion

Paraphrase the sentences and appropriately link the tables and figures; do not write as see Table 1 below; instead, put like (Table 1). Where is figure one?

Modify fragmented paragraphs under the discussion section. The majority of the references are outdated; please replace them with recent ones.

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Author response to Decision Letter 4


14 Sep 2023

1. Avoid italicizing your text in the abstract section unless particularly requested.

Thank you for your constructive comments.

The comment was accepted and corrected accordingly.

2. Consider the proper and consistent use of analysis method in your study. I think the difference between multivariate and multivariable logistic regression analysis be noted and used accordingly.

That’s good and constructive comments.

We have corrected accordingly and it’s highlighted

3. Line (30): you can make it, the association between depression and associated factors was estimated using odds ratio with its 95%CI and p-value. It's modified accordingly.

4.Line (32): a total of 306 family caregivers participated in the study, making a response rate of 98.7%.

The total sample size of this study was 310 as it’s mentioned on method part of the documents. Of which only 306 was participated in the study which make response rate 98.7%.

5. Line (39): it is good to put the meaning of your finding in the conclusion. What does more than 1/3rd prevalent mean in the study’s context. It is also good to highlight the implication of this finding to the study’s context.

That’s good comment and we have modified accordingly

6. Line 57: It is a long-standing and weakening condition that has a profound negative effect on their families. It looks grammatically incorrect, please make sure the sentence is coherent with preceding one.

Modified and highlighted

8.the other comments Other comments are modified accordingly

9.The background section of the abstract must show the burden of the problem, the gap, and the intention of this study. Thank you for your constructive comments dear reviewer.

# As the abstract section of the manuscript shows the summary, we only included the world report as the burden of the problem. And we merge the background and objective of the study as highlighted

10. The sample size you put under the method and result sections are the same; if so, why is the response rate 98.7%?

Correct the upper limit of the confidence interval for the factor "spending more than 13 hours per day on care (AOR = 5.72, 95% CI: 2.32-1.12)."

Introduction

The total sample size was 310 as mentioned in the method part. Out of which 306 were involved in the study which make the response rate 98.7%

Comment accepted and corrected accordingly

11.The introduction section lacks critical components, and intensive revisions are mandatory. The figures (prevalence of depression among caretakers of stroke patients) from previous studies must be addressed in a global-to-local context approach.

we accepted the comments and addressed it accordingly. Regarding the magnitude of the problem, we have mentioned the global prevalence as the summary of the report. Otherwise to the best our knowledge there is no local finding and, even in the African continent only 1 report we had found and mentioned in discussion part.

We also try to address risk factors we got from literature and scientific finding, which doesn’t mean that all risk factors are addressed. As its difficult to address all at once additional study might be indicated making this as source. Otherwise, other comments regarding grammatical errors and ideas out of our title has been omitted

#11.The source and study population are not appropriately defined. You write parents, offspring, siblings, spouse, and other relatives are the sources population, and if you get two during the visit, you select one of them by lottery method. Imagine if the stroke patient is married and his partner and his relative come together for the follow-up visit their relative has a 50% chance to be included in this study. I think this is unacceptable because his partner lives with him and she suffers a lot more than the relative. So, from the outset, the lottery method must be for equal relationships; otherwise, the findings are either over or underestimated. You tried to see it as a factor; however, the sampling approach is unacceptable.

Sampled and study populations are different; hence, you must modify your study population. #Source population is to whom we generalize our finding and the study population is from which we select our study participant, thus we define accordingly.

# The reason why we used lottery method was just to avoid over/underestimation of our finding. If we select the one who spent more time with the patient obviously it will overestimate the finding, so this was the only chance we had to use.

# as mentioned earlier JMC was one of the organization giving service for more than fifteen million diversified population living in south western part of the country. This will somewhat representative, even though not as that of national level-based study.

#12. For example, the information under the data collection and procedure from lines 131 to 149 does not align with the title. You have to modify it with other appropriate headings. Moreover, how did you organize your tool? Several missed variables may affect depression, so why do you extensively include them from the outset? Some variables were not appropriately measured, e.g. How did you assess alcohol use? In general, the method section needs further detailed clarification.

Comments accepted and addressed accordingly

# comments regarding tools we have mentioned the psychometric properties of the tools we have used including the validation. But what we have mentioned in this manuscript was those variables statistically significant at binary multivariable regression model. Example alcohol, other substances were measured using adopted ASSIST substance use scale. Since substance were not significant according to our study we didn’t mention it in the manuscript. Otherwise, other comments are modified accordingly.

#13. Paraphrase the sentences and appropriately link the tables and figures; do not write as see Table 1 below; instead, put like (Table 1). Where is figure one?

Modify fragmented paragraphs under the discussion section. The majority of the references are outdated; please replace them with recent ones

Comment accepted and modified

Regarding the reference we are obligated to use out of dated reference since we didn’t found literature inline with our study objective/title

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Decision Letter 4

Nega Megersa

19 Sep 2023

Dear Dr. Jabessa, 

Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 03 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.

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Additional Editor Comments:

Line #20: So, our aim was to assess.

Suggestion: make it; the aim of this study was to assess.

Line #23: An institution-based cross-sectional study involving 306 family caregivers of stroke patients selected through a consecutive sampling method were employed.

Suggestion: an institution-based cross-sectional study of 306 family caregivers of stroke patients was conducted using a consecutive sampling method.

Line #24: An interviewer- administered technique using a structured questionnaire was conducted.

Suggestion: A structured interviewer-administered questionnaire was used to collect data.

Line #39: This study found that the prevalence of depression among family caregivers of stroke patients was almost in similar range with the pooled prevalence of world report.

Suggestion: I suggest that it is important to present the meaning of your findings in the context of your study. This means explaining what your findings mean for the participants in your study, and for the broader field of research.

As your study focuses on a specific population, it is not appropriate to make general comparisons to the global context.

Line #80: So, our study was aimed to assess the prevalence and associated factors of depression among study participants at Jimma Medical Center.

Suggestion: This study aimed to assess the prevalence and associated factors of depression among family caregivers of patients with stroke at Jimma Medical Center.

Line #182 and 195: Nearly two-third, 64.7% (n=198) of family caregivers and more than half,

182 54.2% (n=166) of stroke patients were males. (See table 1 below). Among users of khat, alcohol, and tobacco over the past three months, about 29.3% (n=48), 29.4%(n=50) and 44.9%(n=61) were found to have depression respectively. (See table 2 below)

Consider my former comment and make it (table 1) and (table 2).

Line #251; UK university of 251 Glasgow (29)(30).

Suggestion: consider merging the citations. Apply the same format to line 256; this is supported by study done in Japanese (27)(32)

Line #275: As it was interviewer administered social desirability bias might be evident and being facility-based study may decrease the generalizability of the result of the finding.

Suggestion: consider re-writing as since the study was interviewer-administered, social desirability bias was a potential concern. Additionally, the facility-based nature of the study may limit its generalizability.

Line #276: Some of the information was gathered from the patient's hospital case folder, which is secondary data.

Yes, using secondary data can be a limitation, but it is not necessarily a limitation in and of itself. The quality and reliability of secondary data can vary broadly. Instead, it is good to consider some of the potential limitations of using secondary data in research including:

- The data may not have been collected in a way that is fitting for your research question.

- The data may be incomplete or inaccurate.

- The data may be biased.

- The data may not be generalizable to your population of interest.

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Author response to Decision Letter 5


21 Sep 2023

Reviewer # 4 and academic editor

1. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references.

Thank you for your constructive and on time comments. T

he comment was accepted and corrected accordingly.

2. comments of academic editor regarding grammatical and structural correction of sentences.

That’s good and constructive comments.

We have corrected accordingly and it’s highlighted

3. Line #276: Some of the information was gathered from the patient's hospital case folder, which is secondary data.

Yes, using secondary data can be a limitation, but it is not necessarily a limitation in and of itself.

Actually, what we have gathered from patients’ folder was diagnosis, comorbid medical illness, type of stroke and other clinical factors. We put our concern as limitation only because of secondary data. otherwise, we didn’t face any missing data, gaps etc. so we have removed that we have considered as limitation previously.

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Decision Letter 5

Nega Megersa

26 Feb 2024

Dear Dr. Jabessa,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 11 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.

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If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols .

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Nega Degefa Megersa, Msc

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Additional Editor Comments:

Comments to authors

The document still contained some grammatical errors, typos, and punctuation mistakes. Here are some of the flaws:

Line # 24: capitalize “a” in the beginning of the sentence.

Line # 28: The association between depression and associated factors was estimated using an odds ratio at 95%CI and p-value of 0.05 on the final model. The sentence has grammatical problems. Modifications should be considered as follows:

The association between depression and associated factors was estimated using an odds ratio of 95%CI and a p-value of 0.05 in the final model.

Line # 31: conclusion and recommendation.

Look at the manuscript formatting and give a heading accordingly. For instance, there is no portion, namely the conclusion and recommendation. Instead, it is a conclusion.

Line # 84: from July 15–Sept 15, 2021. Make it September.

Line #88: Currently it provides service for more than 15 million populations.

Modify the sentence as follows: Currently, it provides service for over 15 million people.

Line #89: The study was conducted at a chronic disease follow up clinic, among family caregivers of stroke patients. The sentence has erroneous use of punctuation. Omit the comma and include a hyphen, as follows:

The study was conducted at a chronic disease follow-up clinic among family caregivers of stroke patients.

Line #115: The independent variables associated with caregivers include socio-demographic.

The independent variables in the study are sociodemographic variables,...

Though technically independent in nature, these factors were not specifically tested for their association with the outcome variable in this study. Instead of implying a potential relationship, it's best to simply refer to them as independent variables included in the research.

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Reviewer's Responses to Questions

Comments to the Author

Reviewer #5: (No Response)

Reviewer #6: All comments have been addressed

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Reviewer #5: (No Response)

Reviewer #6: Yes

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Reviewer #5: Yes

Reviewer #6: No

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??>

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Reviewer #5: Yes

Reviewer #6: Yes

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5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??>

Reviewer #5: No

Reviewer #6: Yes

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Reviewer #5: General comment: The authors assessed the prevalence and associated factors of depression among caregivers of patients with stroke in South West Ethiopia. The authors used standardized measures to meet their objectives. They are commended for coming up with this study. The manuscript has a number of typos and grammatical errors. The Authors are advised to do a detailed proof reading before the manuscript is published.

Please see my specific comments below.

Abstract:

Is well written

Background.

Line 69 is not clear, please modify

Check line 72, 75 and 77 (grammatical errors and typos).

Line 78 that starts with “Worldwide” should have come earlier in the background.

Generally, the authors have tried to review the previous literature on the subject. However, the whole background lacks coherence and the rhetoric connection to create a compelling story for carrying out this study. The authors can do better.

Line 87 “Now a day it become under federal Ministry………This sentence makes no sense at all.

Line 94: what do the author mean by source of Population.

97 Whereas,” w should be capital

Line 1115: Caregivers were include?

The results and analysis appear to be well and good.

Reviewer #6: Reviewer comments to authors:

The authors structured the paper nicely to assess the prevalence and associated factors of depression among stroke family caregivers on follow-up at Jimma Medical Center, southwest Ethiopia. I found that this paper intends to fill a gap in the literature related to depression among stroke family caregivers on follow-up. However, I found some issues discussed below:

1. In the introduction:

- There are grammar and/or typing errors in your manuscript. For instance, on line 75, "hahigher..." Please correct it with “have a higher.”.

2. In the methods:

- There are many kinds of logistic regression models. I realized that you have used binary logistic regression. Thus, please replace logistic regression by binary logistic regression analysis in your manuscript.

3. In the results:

- On Table 2, have you presented the results of bivariable and multivariable binary logistic regression analyses together? What does it mean? Please correct the table. If it’s the result of multivariable binary logistic regression analysis, say, “Table 2: Multivariable binary logistic regression analysis for factors associated with depression among family caregivers of patients with stroke follow-up treatment at Jimma Medical Center, southwest Ethiopia, 2021.”.

- What does independent factor mean? Please say either independent variables or factors.

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Reviewer #5: No

Reviewer #6: No

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PLoS One. 2025 Jun 30;20(6):e0307068. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0307068.r013

Author response to Decision Letter 6


28 Mar 2024

We are grateful to the reviewers and academic editor for the time taken to review our manuscript, and the useful comments they provided to improve the manuscript. We have responded to the entire reviewer’ comments point-by-point, highlighting the changes in the manuscript; and they are summarized below: Once again, we thank the reviewers for the useful comments and suggestions.

Comments of the reviewers and editors

Comments raised by academic editor regarding typing, punctuation and grammatical error

Thank you for your constructive and on time comments. The comment was accepted and corrected accordingly.

Reviewer # 5 We have great thanks for the comments and the comment was accepted and corrected accordingly.

Comment regarding line # 78 was taken to the beginning of introduction part.

The background section has been modified as its highlighted.

Some typing and grammatical error has been corrected accordingly

Reviewer # 6 Thank you for the guiding comments you gave us. For the comments regarding to typing and grammatical error we tried to correct as highlighted.

We have used binary logistic regression analysis and it is mentioned throughout the document.

We presented the bivariable and multivariable result with single table, because it is recommended previously to merge the tables. To identify the result of each binary logistic analysis, its indicated separately by single and double “*” at the bottom of the table.

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Decision Letter 6

Nega Megersa

21 May 2024

PONE-D-22-12677R6

prevalence and associated factors of depression among stroke family caregivers on follow up at Jimma medical center, southwest, Ethiopia: A cross-sectional study

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Additional Editor Comments:

Line 25: A structured interviewer-administered was used to collect data.

Do you mean a structured interviewer-administered questionnaire was used to collect data?

Line 28: The association between depression and associated factors was estimated using an odds ratio of 95%CI and a p-value of 0.05 in the final model.

Logistic regression is a common method to estimate the association between outcomes and independent variables. But it's important to note that a p-value less than 0.05 (not exactly 0.05) is typically used as evidence of a statistically significant association. Additionally, the strength of this association can be measured by an odds ratio, along with its 95% confidence interval.

Line 85 to 90: Although depression is very common among stroke caregivers, little is found on literature regarding to our country.

Generally, the caregivers’ are more vulnerable to develop emotional, physical related problems 88 and limited social life than the general population (14). This study was aimed to assess the 89 prevalence and associated factors of depression among family caregivers’ of patients with stroke 90 at Jimma Medical Center (JMC).

To strengthen your writing, consider combining the existing paragraphs into a single, unified one. This new paragraph should clearly explain the gap in current research (what's missing) and how your study aims to fill that gap (the purpose). Additionally, you might want to review the paragraphs for any grammatical errors to ensure clarity and readability.

Although depression is very common among stroke caregivers, little is found in literature regarding our country. Generally, caregivers are more vulnerable to developing emotional, physical related problems and limited social life than the general population (14). This study was aimed at assessing the prevalence and associated factors of depression among family caregivers of patients with stroke at Jimma Medical Center (JMC).

Line 112: sample size determination

To ensure adequate power for both objectives in your study,

Did you calculate the sample size needed to identify significantly associated factors for your second objective? Compare this sample size to the one calculated for your first objective? If the sample size required for the first objective is larger, then you should use the larger sample size for your entire study.

Consider clearly outlining these steps in your sample size determination.

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Reviewer #7: (No Response)

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Reviewer #7: Yes

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Reviewer #7: Yes

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Reviewer #7: Yes

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Reviewer #7: No

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Reviewer #7:  Dear editor,

Thank you very much for giving me the chance to read and review this important manuscript. Overall, the authors reported important findings, but the English language and grammar should be improved.

Abstract:

“A structured interviewer-administered (What?)…………was used to collect data” Please improve this sentences.

“The Patient Health Questionnaires-9 (PHQ-9) was used to screen outcome variables (i.e., depression)” It's good to say variable instead of variables since your outcome variable one/depression.

“This study found that the prevalence of depression among family caregivers of stroke patients was 35.9% and almost the same with similar study design conducted across different countries of the world.” Please remove 35.9% here and modify the sentences. In addition, could you please write a specific and applicable recommendation (who will be responsible for detecting it early)?

Introduction

Overall, it needs proofreading in language and grammar. “Depression has the greatest decrement in the health status of the population either alone or in conjunction with other chronic medical illnesses such as Asthma, Angina, and/or diabetes.” Please make this sentence clear and meaningful.

“Most of the time, caregivers have been considered as one of the overlooked patients and this could result in poor health outcomes among caregivers (10).” Caregivers are not patients; it is also an offensive word. Please modify it.

Please explain the gap in the study since there are multi center studies in Ethiopia, for example https://doi.org/10.2147%2FNDT.S418074). Your study is limited to an institution and a specific place. What is new about this study?

Methods

What is the reason behind including caregivers who attend for two weeks or more?. Do you believe the degree of depression is similar between the different groups of family members, for example, the mother and other relatives?

Why did you use the Nigerian study to calculate the sample since there is a study in Ethiopia?.

Result and discussion:

“From the total family caregivers about 46.4%(n=142), 44.4%(n=136) and 44.4% (n=136) of them were used khat, tobacco and alcohol over the past three months respectively” Please see your data again for this report, since you are reporting that 44.4% of caregivers are smokers.

Please proofread the grammar in your discussion. While interpreting your findings with other literature, please give clear justification for why your study is lower or higher than other studies. For example, consider how socioeconomic differences between countries contributed to depression. How using PHQ-9 and BDI varies on prevalence of depression, etc.

“The other supporting reason might be in that, the study was conducted among family caregivers of stroke patient whose illness duration was less than six months in which the depression status increased during the acute phase of the illness(26).” Modify sentences and no need of coma.

Conclusion

“This study found that the prevalence of depression among family caregivers of stroke patients 295 was almost in similar range with the pooled prevalence of world report” Why do you compare it with a global study since there are local studies? If there is a pooled study, what is the value of doing this single study?

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PLoS One. 2025 Jun 30;20(6):e0307068. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0307068.r015

Author response to Decision Letter 7


27 Jun 2024

Comments of the reviewers and editors

Comments raised by academic editor on spelling and grammatical

Thank you for your constructive and on time comments.

The comment was accepted and corrected accordingly.

Regarding sample size calculation we didn’t calculate sample size for associated factors considering that it’s optional.

This can be taken as a limitation

Reviewer # 7

Dear reviewer we have great thanks for the comments you have raised and we try to address one by one.

Regarding to spelling error the comment was accepted and corrected accordingly.

Regarding the prevalence the previous reviewers commented me to include the prevalence in abstract part.

Comments in introduction part regarding abusive words and grammatical error was corrected accordingly

Methodology

#Regarding this study, up to this research was conducted no published research conducted in our country regarding this title, thus being the first finding for this country may fill the gaps in our country and that is why we used the Nigerian finding.

#Even most of the researches done outside the country were conducted before five years.

#The reason why we include the caregivers who at least spent two weeks was; in order to diagnose depression at least two weeks is mandatory, even if this is for screening purpose.

# Kinship relation was one of the factors that we have used as independent factor and associated with depression at bivariable binary logistic regression, but fail to associate at final model.

Reviewer # 7 Discussion

We accepted the comments and try to address and modify the discussion parts

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Decision Letter 7

Nega Megersa

1 July 2024

prevalence and associated factors of depression among stroke family caregivers on follow up at Jimma medical center, southwest, Ethiopia: A cross-sectional study

PONE-D-22-12677R7

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Nega Megersa

PONE-D-22-12677R7

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