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. Author manuscript; available in PMC: 2015 Apr 1.
Published in final edited form as: Biling (Camb Engl). 2013 May 30;17(2):347–363. doi: 10.1017/S1366728913000163

Table 1.

Chinese composition rubric for Hong Kong third grade children.

Score
1 2 3 4
Content
1. Depth No elaboration of ideas An attempt to elaborate
on one main idea
Occasional rich
elaboration on idea(s)
Most ideas are adequately
Elaborated
Organization
2. Sentence-
level
organization
Many note-like phrases/
incomplete sentences.
Mainly short sentences.
Inadequate use of
connective/ sequencers.
OR Ideas are linked in a
confusing way in a
sentence.
Occasional good attempt
to link isolated ideas
more smoothly with
connective/ sequencers.
Good use of connective/
sequencers to link ideas
effectively.
3. Paragraph-
level
organization
No evidence of organizational
structure according to ideas.
OR Essay too short. No basis to
judge.
Relevant sentences are
partially grouped, but
overall, the flow of ideas
in not logical enough to
be followed with ease.
Relevant sentences are
mostly grouped. Minor
reordering might still be
needed for ideas to flow
naturally.
Sentences are organized
effectively to convey
meaning naturally and
logically.
4. Prominence
Of
Organizational
(“key”)
elements
Topic sentence and conclusion
are not present. OR Either topic
sentence or conclusion is
present but not standing out.
Topic sentence of
conclusion is present and
easy to identify.
Topic sentence and
conclusion are present
but either or both do not
stand out.
Topic sentence and
conclusion are present
and easy to identify.
5. Intelligibility (Almost) impossible to
understand. Purpose of writing
not accomplished.
Need some effort to
understand.
Fairly easy to understand
despite problems in
organization/ language
mechanics.
Easy to understand and
pleasant to read.