12. Cohesion
0 points – Unsatisfactory	- No use of cohesive conjunctions
1 point – Needs Improvement	- Cohesive conjunction attempts are made, but significant error(s) exists - Story sounds choppy
2 points – Satisfactory	- Cohesive conjunctions are used correctly and when appropriate, but the story is short and simple - Or the story is longer and more complex, but cohesive conjunctions are used incorrectly and/or not as often as they could be
3 points – Excellent	- Story is longer and more complex, and cohesive conjunctions are used correctly and the narrative is easy to follow - Must have a Plot score of 3 to get a 3 in this category