Table 2.
Criteria | Exceeds expectations 3 points |
Meets expectations 2 points |
Below expectations 1 point |
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Control of syntax and mechanics | Uses graceful language that skillfully communicates meaning to readers with clarity and fluency, and is error-free. | Uses straightforward language that generally conveys meaning to readers. The language has few errors. | Uses language that sometimes impedes meaning because of errors in usage. Multiple errors detected in language. |
Quality of comments | Comments are nonjudgmental and descriptive rather than evaluative (focus on description rather than judgment). Eg,: “Providing examples would help to understand the concept you were explaining.” | Comments are nonevaluative but are judgmental, Eg,: “Please add more examples.” | Comments are both judgmental and evaluative in nature, Eg,: “Poor work.” |
Balance of comments | Comments provide a good balance of positive and negative feedback. Eg,: “You include a thought provoking topic, but it seems to me that it needs more elaboration with examples.” | Comments are more negative than positive and are provided with no reinforcement of appropriate actions, Eg,: “Will you elaborate on the topic?” | Comments are negative, dismissive, and discouraging, no reinforcement of appropriate actions, Eg,: “Needs elaboration.” |
Positive feedback phrasing | Attribute positive feedback to internal causes and give it in the second person (you), Eg,: “You worked hard to explain the material well using relevant sources.” | Attribute positive feedback to third person, Eg,: “This was a relevant exercise.” | Positive feedback is not attributed or tied to any accomplishment, Eg,: “Good job.” |
Negative feedback phrasing | Give negative information in the first person (I) and then shift to third person (s/he), or shift from a statement to a question that frames the problem objectively, Eg,: “I thought I understood the organization of the material from the lecture, but then I was not sure . . .” | Give negative information in the first person (I) only, Eg,: “I was not sure where you were going in this assignment.” | Give negative information in an accusatory and subjective delivery, Eg,: “This is very poor . You lost me.” |
Appropriate suggestions | Offer specific suggestions that model appropriate behavior, Eg,: “Have you considered trying . . .? How do you think that would work?” | Offer specific suggestions that directs the blame on the person, Eg,: “Why haven’t you tried . . .?” | Offer specific suggestions that are negative in tone and directs the blame at the person, Eg,: “This was a waste of time.” |