Table 1.
Category of
Design Issue |
Provider Round 1 | Provider Round 2 | ||
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Concerns | Edits | Concerns | Edits | |
Specific steps needed or information suggested | How to Download: Need “how to connect to Wi-Fi or use cellular data for download” in first step. | + | How to Download: Some patients may need a cue to use the keyboard to search for app in step 3. | − |
App Guides: Need to define mindfulness. Explain that these products have training paired with them. | + | App Guides: Include instructions on using the “back button” to get to the previous screen(s). PTSD Coach guide mentions this under “things to remember,” but other guides do not. | + | |
All: Include mobilementalhealth@va.gov email in addition to mobile helpdesk phone number | + | |||
Clarifying information needed (e.g., descriptions of information, explanation of steps) | How to Download: Make more explicit how Bluetooth is used for accessibility (hearing aid). Improve specific description of steps. | + | ||
Mobile Ref.: “definitions seem a bit techy.” Edits recommended for definition of cellular plan, data plan, agreeing to EULA, how data are collected (FAQs). | + | Mobile Ref.: Improve readability, use 8th grade level or below. Glossary defines “broad concepts that may or may not be useful for folks who have already gotten as far as getting a cell phone.” | −, Seek Vet. feedback | |
User/Device Fit | All: Users would have to have good cognitive function. Apps may be better used with iPad as screen is bigger. | +, p | All: Veterans with cognitive support may need additional assistance, some may still benefit from 1:1 assistance (n = 5), particular with downloads | −, p |
Layout and copy editing | How to Download: Some Android screenshots have small print. Need for more copy editing and consistency in ordering of steps. | Seek Vet. feedback | How to Download: Improve layout, add white [space]. Consider booklet vs. accordion folded pamphlet (n = 2). | + |
Mobile Ref.: Lost color, pop, engagement. | - | Mobile Ref.: Looks like a user manual. | - | |
Only mention App Store in iOS and Play Store in Android. Include pictures of symbols. | + | |||
App Guides: Spacing is tight on some pages. Needs a table of contents. A lot of content and pictures which may be overwhelming. “Simplify, but may take away from effectiveness of guide.” Need for consistency with copy and terms (post-traumatic vs. posttraumatic). Simplify language. | + | App Guides: Very “busy” pages. Appreciate screen shots in guides, but the font size on the screen shots for the Mindfulness Coach Android version is small. Readability could be improved. | + |
Notes. + = change made, − = left as is, p = add to provider manual. Mobile Device pages not ordered correctly with some round 2 booklets.