Table 3.
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| A, literacy style | When riding on public transportation such as buses or subways, if you touch a handle that has been contaminated by the coronavirus, you could become infected with the virus through your eyes, nose, and mouth. However, proper wearing of a mask and hand sanitization can lower the risk of COVID-19 infection. | You can catch the virus through your eyes, nose, or mouth after touching a handle that has the virus on it. However, if you wear a mask and wash your hands, you can lower your chances of contracting COVID-19. |
| B, medical jargon | Symptoms such as a fever of 37.5 ℃ or higher, cough, dyspnea, chills, muscle pain, headache, sore throat, anosmia, ageusia, pneumonia, fatigue, decreased appetite, phlegm, confusion, dizziness, and a runny or stuffy nose can indicate COVID-19. Hemoptysis, chest pain, conjunctivitis, skin symptoms, or digestive system symptoms such as nausea, emesis, and diarrhea may also indicate COVID-19. | Fever and cough are common. Having COVID-19 can make you feel cold and tired, and you may have difficulty in breathing. You may lose your appetite and have a sore throat, body aches, nausea, or diarrhea. You may not have any sense of smell or taste. Some people may not have any symptoms and feel normal, but they can still spread the virus. |
| C, unnecessary detail | Samples are collected by physicians, nurses, and medical technicians at designated locations. Upper respiratory tract sampling is mandatory, while lower respiratory tract sampling is optional for patients with sputum. You may experience discomfort or pain while the sample is being collected. The upper respiratory tract sample is a combination of a nasopharyngeal and oropharyngeal swab in one tube. A nasopharyngeal swab involves inserting a cotton swab into the nostril until it reaches the posterior nares. An oropharyngeal swab includes inserting a cotton swab to scrape the inside of the throat. A lower respiratory tract sample is collected by spitting sputum into a container, ensuring that it is not contaminated by other liquids. | You can get tested at screening centers or drive-through facilities. There is a swab and a spit test. In the swab test, a doctor or nurse inserts a cotton swab into your nose or throat. You may feel some discomfort. For the spit test, you are asked to spit thick mucus from your throat into a tube. You will receive your test results through text message. |