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. 2022 Jun 24;17(6):e0270466. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0270466

Pen-grip kinetics in children with and without handwriting difficulties

Yu-Chen Lin 1,2,3,#, Chieh-Hsiang Hsu 4,#, Cheng-Feng Lin 5, Hsiu-Yun Hsu 3,6, Jin-Wei Liu 7, Chien-Hsien Yeh 8, Li-Chieh Kuo 2,3,4,8,*
Editor: Victor Frak9
PMCID: PMC9231762  PMID: 35749546

Abstract

Introduction

Handwriting difficulty (HD) is a widely discussed issue. Previous researchers have revealed many valuable kinematics related to the handwriting performance. However, a clear understanding of the kinetics of handwriting performance in children with HD is still lacking. Therefore, this study investigated the writing performance of children with HD via a force acquisition pen (FAP), which detects the force applied from the digits and pen tip.

Methods

Data from 64 school-age children were divided into control (36 children without HD; mean age: 7.97 years) and HD (28 children with HD; mean age: 8.67 years) groups. The participants were asked to perform a tracing task using the FAP at their usual writing pace.

Results

Compared with the control group, the HD group had significantly less pen-tip force, an average amount of force (in-air) from all three digits, higher force variations (whole task) in the index finger, less force fluctuations with the index and middle fingers and a smaller force ratio.

Conclusion

The findings of this study suggest that an understanding of the handwriting kinetics and the role of digits in handwriting may be crucial for further planning strategies for handwriting training for children with HD.

Introduction

Handwriting ability is important to children as they adapt to their school life. Children with handwriting difficulty (HD) may be unwilling to write, unable to finish their homework on time, or have poor self-esteem [1], and some of them may feel physical discomfort, such as muscle fatigue and soreness, during writing activities [2]. The prevalence of HD is between 10% and 34% in school-age children [3, 4]. Typically, handwriting problems are the reason why children with special needs are referred by schools to occupational therapy practitioners [5].

Therapy practitioners use standard assessments to evaluate the performance components related to children’s handwriting. These components include kinaesthesia, motor planning, eye-hand coordination, visuomotor integration and in-hand manipulation [6]. In addition to assessing these related skills, some assessments focus on handwriting to describe the writing performance and production based on unique scoring systems, examples of which include the Evaluation Tool of Children’s Handwriting [7] and the Minnesota Handwriting Test [8].

After the general evaluation of children’s handwriting, the direct intervention of children’s grip may be a possible option if children have been determined to have evident gripping problems from a biomechanical perspective. Children may be asked to adapt their grip form and manipulation if necessary. To help therapy practitioners determine how children manipulate a writing utensil, researchers have developed methods to identify different types of grips through observation with the naked eye [9]. With advances in technology, computer-based assessments focusing on handwriting kinematics and kinetics are being commonly used by researchers to understand pen manipulation motion objectively [1012].

However, the exact amount of force applied from fingers to the writing utensil is difficult to record using the available assessments. For example, therapy practitioners may find that children exert excessive force by observing piercings on the paper, colour change in the fingertip and oral reports from children themselves rather than objectively determining the exact real-time force applied by children. This situation raises a question as to how therapy practitioners should instruct children to apply an appropriate amount of force if the correct amount to be applied remains unknown. Accordingly, a few research groups have attempted to measure the invisible force from fingers with custom-made kinetic pens to present the actual forces applied to the pen [1316].

Handwriting-related kinetics can be described with three types of forces based on the forces applied from the ‘digits’ (on the barrel), ‘pen’ (on the surface)’ and ‘hand’ (on the surface) [17]. Compared with the forces applied from the hand toward a surface, researchers have focused on the forces applied from the digits and pen tip, where therapy practitioners can directly intervene. Previous literature on this topic has suggested that pen-tip force is not grade related [13, 18]. However, it may be influenced by task demands and specific writing characteristics such as writing speed [18]. Some studies have suggested that children with poor handwriting performance exert a relatively low pen-tip force when engaged in specific writing tasks. Rosenblum and Livneh-Zirinski [10] reported that children with developmental coordination disorders (DCDs) apply less pen-tip force compared with typically developing children while performing complex writing tasks. Similar results were found in a study by Chang and Yu [11]. They collected writing data from children with HD, children without HD and children with both DCDs and HD and observed that all of the children applied less pen-tip force when writing complex strokes. Chang and Yu [19] also discovered that children with dysgraphic characteristics applied less pen-tip force in all writing tests at four different complexity levels compared with proficient writers. However, Chau and colleagues [15] showed different results in their work regarding pen-grip activity. They found no difference in the pen-tip force between children with cerebral palsy (CP) and those with typical development.

In regard to the grip force applied in children’s handwriting, two previous studies suggested that a great grip force is associated with a great tip force, but no specific trend was found in the grip force of a sample of elementary school students at different grade levels [13, 20]. In addition to directly using force to describe the amount of force applied to the act of writing, researchers have suggested the use of different parameters, such as variations in the amount of force, which represents the stability of the force applied over a period of time, and grip-to-tip ratio, which refers to the pattern of force applied from the grip and pen tip, to show how forces behave when applied by digits.

In 2010, Falk et al. indicated that children with non-proficient writing skills show fewer force variations in terms of grip force. Lin et al. [13] enrolled 181 children aged 5–12 years old and observed that the younger ones exhibited more force variations and lower frequency of adjustment in the amount of force applied from each digit. The inconsistent results in the research on force variation are thought to be related to different instructions related to whether a time constraint exists for performing the assigned writing tasks.

Regarding the grip-to-tip ratio, which is the total force applied from the grip divided by the force applied from the pen tip, Lin et al. [13] observed that older children apply force on the pen barrel rather than push the pen tip downward. Similarly, Chau et al. [15] noticed that compared with children with CP, children with typical development generate higher grip-to-tip ratios.

Previous literature has suggested role differences among the thumb, index and middle finger during handwriting [20, 21]. Ghali et al. [22] suggested that each person has a specific and recognisable force distribution on the pen barrel while writing. Shim et al. [23] also proposed a system measuring contact forces from three digits. However, a limited number of studies have reported children’s handwriting performance by investigating the forces directly applied from the digits [13, 15, 18, 20, 2426]. As studies on digit force are still limited, this study was designed as an observational study to provide insights into the issue. This study aimed to ascertain the pen-grip kinetics during writing via the use of a custom force acquisition pen (FAP) system in children with HD compared with those in children without HD. To supplement the motor performance information that may influence handwriting assessments [6, 13], we also recorded fine motor skill performances. Two research questions were asked: (1) Are there any differences in the fine motor skills and pen-grip kinetics between children with and without HD and (2) are there any role differences among the thumb, index and middle finger?

Methods

Study design

A cross-sectional design was used to observe handwriting from temporal and kinetic perspectives between children with and without HD. All children received evaluations using the Bruininks–Oseretsky Test of Motor Proficiency, second edition (BOT-2) [27] subtests to survey their fine motor skills. The FAP system was used to acquire the writing kinetics. The Chinese Handwriting Evaluation Form (CHEF) [28, 29] was used to provide additional information related to handwriting problems in the HD group.

Participants

A total of 36 children without HD (18 girls and 18 boys, mean age 7.97 ± 0.57 years and all right-handed) were recruited as the control group from regular classes in public elementary schools in southern Taiwan. Then, 28 children with HD (13 girls and 15 boys, mean age 8.67 ± 1.42 years; 3 left-handed and 25 right-handed) were recruited from public elementary schools and clinics in urban areas of southern Taiwan. They were referred by parents, teachers, or therapy practitioners. The mean age of children with HD was more than 8 months older than that of the children without HD. This condition indicated that the children with HD had almost an additional year of handwriting practice compared with their non-HD peers in this study. HDs were identified by oral reports mainly from the participants’ teachers and therapy practitioners. Furthermore, the CHEF was given to the HD group. Three subtypes of HD were reported within the HD group: a cognitive learning dysfunction subtype (25%), a motor impairment subtype (28.6%) and a severe hybrid subtype (46.4%). Owing to the small sample size and uneven percentages among the subtypes, the differences between HD subtypes were not analysed. The children and guardians who agreed to participate in this study were asked to sign a consent form approved by the Institutional Review Board at a university hospital. If the children had a history of neurological deficits or severe muscular or orthopaedic problems of the upper extremities, they were excluded from this study.

Although all the children had already been taught to use the dynamic tripod grasp to write in school, the most preferred and frequent manner in which they gripped the pencil was still recorded. The children’s pen-grip pattern was recorded as they wrote with a typical pencil. The handwriting grip type classification followed the work of Chang [30]. The sample was divided into five types as follows: a dynamic tripod grasp (HD group: 17.9%, control group: 25.7%), a lateral tripod grasp group (HD group: 50%, control group: 48.6%), a quadruped grasp group (HD group: 7.1%, control group: 5.7%), a lateral quadruped grasp (HD group: 25%, control group: 14.3%) and others (HD group: 0%, control group: 5.7%).

Instruments

FAP system

The handwriting kinetics were collected using the FAP system (Fig 1). The FAP was designed as a common ball-point pen that contains three thin-beam force sensors and one button-shaped transducer (TBS-5 and SLB-50, Transducer Techniques, Temecula LLC, CA, USA) to simultaneously detect the forces applied from three digits (thumb, index and middle fingers) and the pen tip, respectively. The positions of the three force sensors on the FAP were adjustable. The FAP weighed about 30 g and was similar in appearance to a typical pen (length of pen: 12 cm; and diameter of shank: 1.1 cm). The force data were acquired and converted with an instruNet network device (iNet-100, GW Instruments, Inc., MA, USA). The sampling rate for the force data acquisition was set at 70 Hz. A low-pass filter was applied using MATLAB programmes to remove noise, with a cut-off frequency of 6 Hz (MathWorks Ltd., Natick, MA, USA).

Fig 1. FAP system.

Fig 1

Settings of the FAP system, pen design and force data obtained in one trial from the control group.

The participants were asked to trace numbers (0–9) on a piece of A4-size paper using the same FAP at their natural writing speed. To avoid interference due to variations in character size, grey marks were printed on the writing sheet for tracing. In addition, the sequence of each stroke was fixed with visual guidance on the writing sheet.

BOT-2

The fine motor skills were evaluated using the BOT-2 subtests related to fine motor skills, including ‘fine motor precision’, ‘fine motor integration’ and ‘manual dexterity’ [31]. The BOT-2 is a standardised, norm-referenced measurement with good test-retest reliability (ICC = 0.99, 95% confidence interval) and internal consistency (Cronbach’s α = 0.92) [27]. To compare the participants’ performance fairly, we used the raw scores for the three subtests to conduct a statistical analysis rather than the standard scores, which are controlled by age.

CHEF

The information related to handwriting problems was identified using the CHEF [28]. CHEF is a questionnaire with 25 items comprising five major dimensions, including construction, accuracy, speed, grip ergonomics and directionality. Children with handwriting deficits can be classified into five subtypes: mild, moderate and severe hybrid, motor impairment and cognitive learning dysfunction [29]. In accordance with the manual, children classified into the mild hybrid subtype mainly have deficits in the grip ergonomics dimension. Opposite the mild hybrid subtype, children classified into the moderate hybrid subtype show unobvious deficits in the grip ergonomics dimension and a small amount of deficits in the motor impairment or cognitive learning dysfunction dimension. The severe hybrid subtype is the most serious subtype, reflecting severe deficits in all five dimensions and poor perceptual motor ability. The motor impairment subtype is mainly characterised with deficits in writing speed, construction of characters, DCDs, writing automation and fine motor control. Children classified into the cognitive learning dysfunction subtype lack appropriate, efficient learning strategies.

Procedures

The CHEF was provided to the participants’ parents, teachers, or therapy practitioners for the HD group. All participants in both groups were asked to complete the tracing tasks with the FAP system and take the BOT-2 subtests in a random order. Although the positions of the three force sensors on the FAP were adjustable, no participant in this study, however, requested the examiner to adjust the position of the sensors due to discomfort or an awkward hand posture when the examiners asked them if they needed to adjust the position of sensors. They were requested to trace numbers in each trial, with three trials each. They had a 1 min rest interval between each trial and sufficient time to practice using the FAP with a tripod grasp before the formal trials. Each participant sat in front of a height-adjustable desk with both arms placed comfortably on it, with a 90° knee flexion and feet resting on the floor. The entire process was completed in 1 h for each participant.

Handwriting performance parameters

Four kinetic and one temporal parameters, including average force (AF) [32, 33], task time (TT), coefficient of variations in force (CVF) [14], the number of force fluctuations per second (NFFPS) and the force ratio (FR) [15], were used to describe the children’s handwriting performance. Table 1 describes the details and clinical meanings of all of the parameters.

Table 1. Definition, computation and clinical meanings of the five kinetic parameters.

Parameters Definition Computation details Clinical meanings
Average force (AF) The mean force for one trial. Four AFs were obtained, with the AF from the pen tip being computed under only one condition, which is ‘On paper’. A high AF may lead to pale knuckles, pain or piercing of the paper. Conversely, a low AF might lead to deposition of a small amount of ink on the paper and poor writing quality.
Task time (TT) The total time from the first pen-touching action to the last pen-lifting action in one trial. The TT was set using the force data measured from the pen tip. The initiation time was defined as the first time at which the force value was 0.1 N higher than the baseline, which was the AF during the initial 0.5 s. The termination time was defined as the last time point at which the force value was 0.1 N higher than the baseline. TT indicates the writing speed.
Coefficient of variation in force (CVF) The ratio of the standard deviation (SD) of force over the AF in one trial. The measures were obtained from the computation of the SD of force over the AF. A high CVF indicates a dynamic force output from the digits or the pen tip.
Number of force fluctuations per second (NFFPS) The total number of positive peaks of force divided by the total TT in one trial. In one trial, the total number of positive peaks of force obtained from the thumb can be more than 20, based on the number of strokes and the frequency with which they changed direction. When the NFFPS increases, the frequency of pushing and pulling from the three digits also increases. The greater the NFFPSs, the more frequent were the adjustments in force exertion during writing.
Force ratio (FR) The force of the pen tip divided by the total force of the three digits. The FR was computed when the pen was touching the paper. The grip-to-normal force ratio represents the pattern of energy expended by the hand engaged in the pen-grip activity [15].

Handwriting performance consists of two components, namely, in-air and on-paper components. The in-air component has been reported in some studies related to children’s handwriting [10, 16, 34]. The finding of these studies suggested that children with non-proficient handwriting or DCDs have longer in-air time compared with proficient handwriters or typically developing children. Drotár et al. [35] suggested that in-air movement during handwriting may involve cognitive processes, such as motor planning and programming of motor sequences. Therefore, according to the pen-lifting and pen-touching status, the parameters were set to different conditions, where ‘Whole task’ represented the data calculated from the initial pen-touching action to the last pen-lifting action in one trial. ‘On paper’ implied that the data were calculated while the pen tip was touching the paper in one trial. ‘In air’ indicated that the data were calculated while the pen tip was not touching the paper in one trial.

The parameters were computed using custom MATLAB programmes. All parameter data were averaged (over three trials) for further statistical analyses.

Statistical analysis

The statistical analysis was performed using SPSS 17.0 (Statistical Package for Social Sciences Inc. Chicago, IL, USA). Descriptive statistics were used to calculate the means and standard deviations (SDs) of the demographic data. An analysis of covariance (ANCOVA) controlling for age was used to analyse the experimental data to determine the between-group differences in the parameters (AFon paper of the pen tip, TTs, CVFon paper of the pen tip and FR) and raw BOT-2 scores. A mixed-model ANCOVA, including one between-group factor (group: with HD vs. without HD) and one within-group factor (role of the digits: thumb vs. index finger vs. middle finger), was performed on the AFon paper, AFin air, AFwhole task, CVFwhole task and NFFPS whole task, with age as a covariate. Bonferroni tests were used as post-hoc tests. The level of significance was set at p < 0.05.

Results

Table 2 shows the means and SDs for all parameters and fine motor scores.

Table 2. Descriptive statistics data in two groups and the ANCOVA results for between-group difference.

Kinetics of handwriting (sources of force) Group
Control (n = 36) HD (n = 28)
Mean SD Mean SD Sig.a ηp2 a
Fine motor skills
    Fine motor precision 38.44 2.16 33.07 4.95 .000** .473
    Fine motor integration 37.22 2.04 33.86 5.67 .000** .222
    Manual dexterity 25.94 2.91 25.79 4.98 .128 .037
Average Force (AF), unit: Newton
    Thumb -on paper 3.07 1.31 2.68 0.64
    Thumb -in air 1.56 0.87 1.12 0.38
    Thumb -whole task 2.70 1.22 2.27 0.53
    Index -on paper 2.11 0.77 1.75 0.63
    Index -in air 1.15 0.55 0.67 0.26
    Index -whole task 1.87 0.72 1.51 0.53
    Middle -on paper 1.34 0.75 1.09 0.56
    Middle -in air 1.05 0.49 0.75 0.32
    Middle -whole task 1.29 0.69 1.07 0.53
    Pen Tip -on paper 0.95 0.29 0.77 0.36 .023* .082
Task Time (TT)
    TT -on paper (ratio) 0.71 0.08 0.72 0.05 .635 .004
    TT -in air (ratio) 0.29 0.08 0.28 0.05 .664 .003
    TT -whole task (s) 23.46 7.49 27.12 10.05 .040* .067
Coefficient of Variation in Force (CVF)
    Thumb -whole task 0.38 0.09 0.40 0.08
    Index -whole task 0.35 0.08 0.48 0.15
    Middle -whole task 0.42 0.14 0.43 0.12
    Pen Tip -on paper 0.36 0.05 0.34 0.06 .321 .016
Number of force Fluctuations per second (NFFPS)
    Thumb -whole task 1.34 0.24 1.26 0.17
    Index -whole task 1.36 0.17 1.26 0.22
    Middle -whole task 1.59 0.38 1.40 0.25
Force Ratio (FR) -on paper 0.16 0.05 0.11 0.06 .002** .147

Note. SD = standard deviation; HD = handwriting difficulty

*p < 0.05

**p < 0.01.

a Results of the ANCOVA correcting for age as a covariate

Table 2 also shows the ANCOVA results on the group differences for the parameters (AFon paper of the pen tip, TTs, CVFon paper of the pen tip and FR) and fine motor scores. For the fine motor skills, scores for ‘fine motor precision’ and ‘fine motor integration’ were significantly lower in the HD group. The AFon paper of the pen tip was significantly lower in the HD group. For the TTs, between-group significance was only found in the TTwhole task. For the CVFon paper of the pen tip, no significance was found between groups. Finally, the FRon paper was significantly lower in the HD group.

Table 3 shows the results for the effects of group and digit type on the AFin air, AFon paper, AFwhole task, CVFwhole task and NFFPSwhole task via the mixed-model ANCOVA controlling for age. No interaction effect was observed between the group and digit type when analysing the AFin air, AFon paper, AFwhole task and NFFPSwhole task. An interaction effect was found between the group and digit type when analysing the CVFwhole task. Therefore, the simple main effect was analysed with ANCOVA (for the group) and one-way analysis of variance (ANOVA) (for the digit type) for CVFwhole task. For the AFs and NFFPSwhole task, no significant difference among digit types was found in the AFin air, AFon paper and AFwhole task or NFFPSwhole task. The scores for AFin air, AFon paper, AFwhole task and NFFPSwhole task were significantly greater in the control group. For the CVFwhole task, the ANCOVA (for the group) result showed that only the CVFwhole task of the index in the HD group was significantly greater than that in the control group (difference between groups in three digit types [thumb], F = 1.13, p = .29, ηp2 = .018; [index], F = 20.30, p = .00, ηp2 = .250; [middle], F = 0.41, p = .53, ηp2 = .007). The one-way ANOVA (for the digit type) result showed significant differences in HD (difference among digits, F = 6.61, p = .00, ηp2 = .197) and control (difference among digits, F = 5.29, p = .02, ηp2 = .131) groups. In the control group, the post-hoc tests showed that the CVFwhole task of the thumb and middle finger were significantly higher than those of the index finger (thumb vs. index finger, p = .02; thumb vs. middle finger, p = .43; index finger vs. middle finger, p = .03). In the HD group, the CVFwhole task of the index finger was significantly higher than that of the thumb (thumb vs. Index finger, p = .01; thumb vs. middle finger, p = .43; index finger vs. middle finger, p = .14).

Table 3. ANCOVA summary table for the effects of the digit, group and their interaction.

Kinetics of handwriting Covariance (Age) Group Digit Group ⊆ Digit
F Sig. η p 2 F Sig. η p 2 F Sig. η p 2 F Sig. η p 2 Post-hoc
AFon paper 0.82 .67 .01 4.85 .03* .07 1.97 .14 .03 0.21 .81 .00 Ct > HD
AFin air 1.15 .29 .02 13.38 .00* .18 0.76 .47 .01 0.69 .50 .01 Ct > HD
AFwhole task 1.06 .31 .02 5.95 .02* .09 1.49 .23 .02 0.56 .57 .01 Ct > HD
CVFwhole task 2.40 .13 .04 7.82 .01* .11 0.58 .54 .01 7.33 .00** .11 Interactiona
NFFPSwhole task 0.39 .53 .01 5.89 .02* .09 1.75 .19 .03 1.58 .21 .03 Ct > HD

Note. AF, average force; CVF, coefficient of variation in force; NFFPS, number of force fluctuations per second; Ct, control group; HD, handwriting difficulty group.

Post-hoc type: Bonferroni

*p < 0.05

**p < 0.01

a Simple main effect(showing the significant results):

ANCOVA for group, CVFindex: HD > control (p = .00)

One-way ANOVA for digit type, CVF, HD: index finger > thumb (p = .01), control: thumb > index finger (p = .02); middle finger > Index finger (p = .03)

Discussion

HD is a wildly discussed issue that has received considerable attention from clinical and educational professionals. Previous studies have revealed valuable kinematics related to handwriting performance. However, the reports on children’s handwriting performance by investigating the force directly applied from the digit are still limited. This study discovered the pen-grip kinetics during writing via the FAP system of children with HD compared with those without HD. In addition, the relationship among three digits during writing was discussed to better understand the digits’ role.

Group differences

Based on the demographic and measured data for the two groups, although the mean age of the HD group was higher than that of the control group, which might have indicated the better motor performance of this older group, the fine motor precision and integration of the HD group were poorer than those of the control group. In addition, no between-group differences were found in manual dexterity. This result was consistent with the argument that poor handwriting is related to poor eye-hand coordination, visual motor integration, or in-hand manipulation [6, 36]. However, the data in this study were analysed in children with uneven percentages of distribution among all three subtypes of HD. As HD is very complex, and the assessment of HD classification has only been developed recently, the results obtained in this study should be interpreted with caution when generalise the findings to children with different types of HD.

The results showed that the AF from the pen tip was lower in the HD group, which is consistent with previous reports showing that children with dysgraphic characteristics [11, 19] or poor motor ability [10, 15] may apply less pen-tip force. These results may be explained by considering the difficulty that children with HD have in regard to maintaining stability when increasing the pen-tip force to exploit the degree of friction between the pen and the writing surface [12]. Nevertheless, the average between-group difference in AF from the pen tip was 0.18 N, which is rarely observed in real situations. Further, the AFs from different digits were evaluated in three different pen positions (whole task, on-paper and in-air). Moreover, in all positions, the AF from all digits was significantly lower in the HD group. Based on the result, loosening the fingers when lifting the pen may influence children’s writing performance. When the pen is picked up, the constantly applied force from the digits is unnecessary due because the ink is not made on paper. Constant force application may be unnecessary from the energy-saving perspective. On the other hand, it may reduce the frequency to enlarge the applied force. One possibility is that these children could not generate the force constantly. Another possibility is that these children do not know how to constantly apply force. However, more evidence is needed to confirm this hypothesis, such as the muscle endurance test or skill check test. To the best of our knowledge, no studies reported the applied digit force during pen lifting. This study may thus be the first to report these data based on the handwriting performance of children. However, researchers have discussed the kinematic and temporal variables that occur during writing movements.

Chang and Yu [19] reported that children with dysgraphic characteristics exhibited a higher in-air to on-paper time ratio compared with a control group in some writing tasks. Rosenblum et al. [16] observed that children with poor handwriting had a lower in-air to total time ratio and a lower speed. Our results showed no significant between-group differences for TTin air and TTon paper. However, the results for the TTwhole task showed that the children with HD needed more time compared with the control group, which concurred with the finding of Rosenblum et al. [16]. In a study conducted by Kushki et al. [32], children with dysgraphia wrote faster than those who are proficient at writing, which may be due to a speed-accuracy trade-off. The reason for the inconsistency of time may have been the different time constraints and writing tasks requirements among the examined studies. In our study, the writing time was not constrained. When children in both groups needed to complete a tracing task with similar accuracy, our results showed that children in the HD group needed more time to complete the task. Similarly, the difference in the findings of TTin air and TTon paper may also have been due to the effect of different time constraints and writing task requirements.

A low CVF represents a static way of grasping a pen in terms of the amount of force. Although not all CVFs showed significant between-group differences, the mean CVF values for the three digits were smaller in the HD group. Our results indicated that the children with HD used a less stable method by which to control the amount of force applied to manipulate the pen during writing. This result was consistent with that of a previous study, where the researchers observed that children with mature motor abilities used a static pattern to manipulate the pen in terms of the amount of force applied [13].

In this study, NFFPS, a novel parameter, was also used to describe the frequency of force adjustments. The results showed that the NFFPSs of all three digits were higher in the control group. The results were consistent with those of a previous study [13], where children with mature motor abilities exhibited higher adjustment frequencies. This result indicates that although proficient writers grip the pen in a static way in terms of the amount of force, they may still use very rapid force adjustments to manipulate the pen.

The concept of open-loop and close-loop motor control have been applied in several studies focusing on handwriting movement [11, 35, 37]. A more automated movement is executed as an open-loop and feed-forward control movement. One explanation for the different writing patterns between children with and without HD is that feedback-controlled movements have been found in children with HD. This condition suggests that the unstable amount of force exerted resulted from the processing of feedback-controlled movements, followed by less frequent adjustments. In addition, the relatively low force applied while pen lifting in the HD group can possibly be related to this feedback-control process. However, more future research is needed to support this viewpoint.

The literature shows that children with better motor abilities apply more force to the pen barrel than to the pen tip [13, 15]. However, the present study showed the opposite results for the FR. The FR in the HD group was significantly lower, which means that the HD group used more effort to manipulate the pen rather than press it downward. The most likely explanation for this result rests in the specific characteristics of the grip pattern of these children. Compared with a previous study [13], where writing data from 170 typically developing children were surveyed and where the mean FR value from kindergarten to sixth grade was between 0.17 and 0.14, the FR (0.11±0.06) in the HD group in the present study was not in this range. Nevertheless, as these studies [13, 15] evaluated different target groups (HD/ CP/ children without HD), future research is evidently required to supplement the data with related target subjects.

Given that handwriting is complex, the reasons for the resulting HD vary. Therefore, this study focused on one concept, that is, the writing kinetics, to reveal the possible and measurable factors related to children with HD. For example, asking children to strengthen or loosen the force applied from a specific digit is a relatively direct way to change the writing pattern. However, in the real world, we could not know if this step is necessary or whether asking them to change the force is correct if we do not know the amount of force considered as poor. Therefore, this study provided real force data, such as the AF value, suggested more critical situations for observing, such as pen in air, and proposed the particular digit for observing such as index finger to tentatively detect the possible and manipulatable factors related to HD. In addition, this study introduced CVF, NFFPS and FR to explain the force control pattern in children with HD. The study provided a practical method for the teachers and clinicians to assess children’s handwriting problems based on writing kinetics.

Role differences

To determine the role of each digit on pen grip, we used three parameters (AF/CVF/NFFPS) in the control and HD groups. Although, the results of the AFs showed no significant difference among digits, the mean value of the AFs still showed a similar trend (thumb > index finger > middle finger) in both groups (Table 2), which was consistent with the previous literature [13, 21]. However, the results of the CVFs were inconsistent in the two groups. The CVF of the index finger was considerably higher among the three digits in the HD group. This result may have been due to the extremely low value of the AFin air of the index finger in the HD group. One possible explanation for this was that children with HD may be unable to maintain the same pen-grip pattern during writing. This condition may result in their extending the index finger to release the pen. Meanwhile, the thumb and middle finger do not loosen the pen grip to avoid dropping the pen. Although previous studies have shown that some children change their grip pattern during writing, no evidence proved that more children with HD change their grip patterns while writing compared with children without HD [2, 38, 39]. On the contrary, the CVF of the index finger was lower than that of the thumb and middle finger in the control group. However, unlike the HD group, neither extreme data nor specific observations were found in the control group. Although the reason for the low CVF value for the index finger in the control group remains unclear, we could not ignore that the motion of the index finger in the HD group can be described based on the AF and CVF. Future research may be necessary to explore this phenomenon by acquiring related kinetic parameters or additional kinematic information.

No significant differences were observed among the three digits based on the NFFPSs. However, the mean value of the NFFPSs still exhibited the same trend in both groups (middle finger > thumb, index finger). This trend was generally compatible with results of a previous study [13] that tested the number of force fluctuations and suggested that the middle finger may be crucial to the degree of control carried out by the other two digits.

In conclusion, the highest amount of AF from the thumb suggested that it may play a steering role. In addition, the highest NFFPS value from the middle finger suggested that the ability of the middle finger may be crucial to the control carried out by the other digits.

Limitations and future studies

The first limitation in this study concerns the identification of HD used. The CHEF is widely used to assess handwriting problems in Taiwan. However, as it is a problem-based questionnaire and lacks the capability to directly score a handwriting product based on standard samples, additional measurements to evaluate handwriting should be considered. Second, the findings were limited to the tracing task used in this study and may not be directly applicable to actual writing situations. A future study can measure actual writing tasks, such as free writing or copying. Third, the tasks assigned in this work were designed to record a very natural pattern generated by children. Thus, between-group differences might have been easily induced. A future study may add a time constraint to address handwriting kinetics under different circumstances. Fourth, the FAP system can only measure a tripod grasp. Although all participants in this study can use a tripod grasp to grip the FAP, about 30% of them used a non-tripod grasp with a typical pen. Thus, the original grasp pattern may have affected the kinetic data. Further, a FAP that can detect grip kinetics from different pen grip patterns other than the tripod grasp is still needed. Fifth, the current study only examined the kinetics of handwriting. A kinematic method should be designed to analyse the motion used for handwriting in general. Finally, although children with three subtypes of HD were reported according to the CHEF classification, this study did not analyse the differences in the characteristics of writing kinetics among the various HD subtypes due to the small sample size and uneven percentages of distribution among the subtypes in the current study sample. A future study with a larger sampling scale is suggested to compare the differences in the writing features among HD subtypes.

Conclusion

In this study, handwriting kinetics were analysed using parameters describing the control of digits and exploring the differences between children with and without HD. On the basis of the results, our findings suggested that when intervening in children’s handwriting problems, children loosen the gripping digits despite the digits appearing to touch the pen barrel during writing, especially at the moment when they lift the pen to write the next stroke.

Digit role differences can also be considered when evaluating writing. Compared with the children with HD, the children without HD used a more static method by which to apply the force required to grip the pen and generated faster force adjustments to manipulate the pen from a kinetic point of view. Despite its limitations, this study still provides a number of insights into force control for clinicians and teachers in formulating evaluations and interventions for HD.

Supporting information

S1 Table. Summary table of the parameters for the three subtypes of HD group.

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Acknowledgments

We thank the students, parents, teachers and clinicians who participated in the data collection for this study. We are grateful to Dr. Chung-Ying Lin for providing the statistical consulting services from the Biostatistics Consulting Center, Clinical Medicine Research Center, National Cheng Kung University Hospital.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the paper and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

This work was financially supported by the Medical Device Innovation Center, National Cheng Kung University from the Featured Areas Research Center Program within the framework of the Higher Education Sprout Project by the Ministry of Education (MOE) in Taiwan. The authors are also honoured to acknowledge the Ministry of Science and Technology TAIWAN for partially funding this work (MOST 104-2314-B-006 -018 -MY3). The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: The article entitled “Pen-grip Kinetics in Children with and without Handwriting Difficulties” describes an experimental research. Children with and without handwriting difficulties (HD) were evaluated by means a pen with force sensors while writing numbers in a previously printed in grey sheet without any other constraints. The force applied by the three fingers – thumb, index and middle – was recorded along the period when the pen was in touch with the sheet and in the air.

The Introduction Section was well designed, and the lecture easily flows toward the objectives presented at its end. However, only one article cited in this section was published in the last five years and nine from the 23 of them were published in the last century. This selection makes us wonder the relevance of the research object and the addition that the results to be obtained can bring to what is already described in the literature.

This wondering rises when the sample is detailed. Three HD forms are found in the sample: “a cognitive learning dysfunction subtype (25%), a motor impairment subtype (28.6%), and a severe hybrid subtype (46.4%).” Further on, the text describes each of these types of HD: “The severe hybrid subtype is the most serious subtype, reflecting severe deficits in all five dimensions and poor perceptual motor ability” ... “The motor impairment subtype is mainly characterized with deficits in writing speed, construction of characters, DCD, writing automation, and fine motor control” … “Children classified into the cognitive learning dysfunction subtype lack appropriate, efficient learning strategies”. In this sense, the differences between each subtype are significant, either by severity or specificity. However, the sample is treated as a single group so that there can be statistical strength. Finally, at the beginning of the discussion, when commenting on the homogeneity of manual dexterity between the groups, it is stated that “this might be related to the fact that most of the writing difficulty subtypes were “motor impairment” and “severe hybrid,” which are both related to poor motor performance during handwriting”, which demonstrates an important reductionism of the type "severe hybrid". This statement also puts a quarter of the sample out of the discussion by assuming that the argument used for both of that types would not apply to the "cognitive learning dysfunction" type.

In addition, the study observed five different categories of handwriting grip with different intra-group and – mainly – between-groups distributions. There is no mention of the distribution of these categories of handwriting grip in the three types of HD in the sample.

There is an important phrase related to this topic whose wording is ambiguous in my opinion:

“Although the positions of the three force sensors on FAP are adjustable, in this study, all participants used the same position setting for the force sensors based on their own grip.”

What does it mean? That all children used the same position setting of the sensors in the pen, regardless of how each child grasped it? Or that each child had an individualized configuration of sensors according to their form of grasping? Or, yet, that there were several configurations, one for each form of handwriting grasping, but not one for each child according to their natural positioning?

This questioning is important because it can indicate whether there was an extra constraint factor for the HD group. If the positioning was unique, its effects on the HD group may have been greater than on the group without HD. If the positioning was determined by the way of grasping, how many subgroups were formed? And if the positioning was individualized by a child, what did you mean by "same position setting"?

Therefore, I believe that, by not adequately considering the heterogeneity of the HD sample, the authors compromised the reliability of the results. As stated by them, “due to the small sample size and uneven percentages among the subtypes, differences between HD subtypes were not analyzed”.

Some minor considerations:

The model of direct citations used in the article (citing only the first two authors) is not adequate, since it gives a single comma the power to indicate that there are other authors besides the two mentioned. Forms such as "Author and colleagues", "Author and collaborators" and even "Author et al." are preferable in these cases.

Although it could be considered as implied, the text does not formally indicate whether the sample is composed only by right-handed children and does not comment on the consistency of manuality. They belong to a key age range regarding manuality definition, and the topic deserves to be considered in the characterization of the sample (Scharoun & Bryden, 2014).

The Cronbach’s alpha value for the BOT-2 test is 0.92; however, ideal values for Cronbach’s alpha range from 0.7 to 0.9. Values greater than 0.9 indicate test redundancy (Streiner, 2003).

Right following the phrase “There have been few studies reporting on applied force while pen-lifting” there are no references to these few studies, nor a discussion comparing the results obtained in the study with this literature, which is very relevant here.

Scharoun, S. M. and Bryden, P. J. Hand preference, performance abilities, and hand selection in children. Front Psychol. 2014; 5: 82. doi: 10.3389/fpsyg.2014.00082

Streiner, D. L. Being inconsistent about consistency: when coefficient alpha does and doesn’t matter. Journal of Personality Assessment. 2003; 80:217-222. doi: 10.1207/S15327752JPA8003_01

Reviewer #2: The aim of this study was to characterise the pen-grip kinetics profile of children with and without handwriting difficulties (HD), an issue that has received little attention to date. Despite the relevance of the topic, certain aspects limit the impact of the study, for example, the absence of an in-depth analysis of past studies; the use of a heterogeneous sample of children with handwriting difficulties; and the statistical approach to data analysis. The points that need to be clarified and strengthened are detailed below.

Introduction

The introduction requires a more detailed review of previous studies. According to the authors, “the results of previous studies related to children’s handwriting kinetics remained inconsistent” (p.7, lines 2-3), meaning that one of the main motivations of the present study was to provide more evidence in regard to the issue. According to the above, the reader would expect to be provided with possible explanations for the heterogeneity of previous results. However, only in the case of findings concerning variations in terms of grip force were certain methodological reasons mentioned as a source of inconsistency (p.6, lines 13-15). A more in-depth analysis of previous findings would make for a more compelling argument as to the specific contribution of the present study.

The research questions overlap to a certain degree. It would be advisable to reformulate them, as this would also help to improve the statistical analysis strategy.

Method

My main concerns in this section are in regard to the sample. The group of children classified as having HD is highly heterogeneous according to the profiles extracted from the Chinese Handwriting Evaluation Form (CHEF), so it is difficult to understand the implications of the differences found later with regard to the control group. The difference in the age range between the groups should also be emphasised, as the children with HD had almost an additional year of handwriting practice compared to their non-HD peers, a fact which could explain the lack of differences in some measures.

The pen-grip patterns were not distributed in the same way between the groups with and without HD. The lateral quadruped grasp was more prevalent within the HD group, while the dynamic tripod grasp was more prevalent within the control group. Do you think this could be a source of explanation for the differences found between the groups? This point is especially relevant if we consider that, as I understand it, the positions of the three force sensors were fixed with a tripod grasp pattern: “Although the positions of the three force sensors on FAP are adjustable, in this study, all participants used the same position setting for the force sensors based on their own grip. They were requested to trace numbers in each trial, with three trials each. They had a one-minute rest interval between each trial and enough time to practice using the FAP with a tripod grasp before the formal trials” (p.10, lines 18-22).

Results

This section requires a major revision.

The analysis strategy used to answer the two questions could be improved. To answer research question one (Are there any differences in the fine motor skills and pen-grip kinetics between children with HD and without HD?), a series of t-tests were used to compare the groups using variables that are correlated; this is not a good idea given the increased chance of a type I error. The differences in age should have been controlled.

To answer research question two (Are there any differences in pen-grip kinetics among different digits that indicate corresponding roles?), three one-way ANOVAs were used for each group. At this point, one wonders why the authors were not interested in the differences between the groups, although this is related to the problem of overlap in the research questions. As the comparison between groups was not of interest to the authors, they compared the force grip of the three digits for each group and parameter. A less complex and more robust approach could have been achieved using a mixed model.

Discussion

Given that the main argument of the study was based on the inconsistencies in the findings of previous studies, I would have expected a discussion reporting explicitly on how the results of the present work help to clarify these inconsistencies. However, the discussion does not address this.

The authors appropriately highlight the limitations of the work, but do not address the practical implications that the results could have for the identification and intervention of children with HD.

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PLoS One. 2022 Jun 24;17(6):e0270466. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0270466.r002

Author response to Decision Letter 0


11 Aug 2021

Reviewer #1:

The article entitled “Pen-grip Kinetics in Children with and without Handwriting Difficulties” describes an experimental research. Children with and without handwriting difficulties (HD) were evaluated by means a pen with force sensors while writing numbers in a previously printed in grey sheet without any other constraints. The force applied by the three fingers – thumb, index and middle – was recorded along the period when the pen was in touch with the sheet and in the air.

We sincerely appreciate the Reviewer’s thorough review and valuable suggestions. The authors revised the manuscript according to your constructive comments. The point-by-point responses are shown as follows:

1. The Introduction Section was well designed, and the lecture easily flows toward the objectives presented at its end. However, only one article cited in this section was published in the last five years and nine from the 23 of them were published in the last century. This selection makes us wonder the relevance of the research object and the addition that the results to be obtained can bring to what is already described in the literature.

Response: Thanks for the constructive comments. The authors have searched and added more suitable published studies as references in the Introduction Section of the revised version of the paper. Please see the following lists of the additional articles cited in this revised manuscript. While searching for these updated citations, the authors also found that the research works related to children’s handwriting kinetics have become more scarce in recent years. Therefore, in addition to classic articles related to handwriting kinetics published several decades ago, most of the studies, as the reviewer mentioned, are works from the period 2005 to 2015, which was an excellent time period for handwriting researchers to discuss the pen tip force based on the mature writing tablet (Wacom) system. However, direct evidence regarding the finger/digit forces acting on the pen barrel is still scant, so our team (and other previous works cited in this manuscript) established a Digit Forces Acquisition pen that is similar to a real pen (either shape or weight/size). With technology that can measure small forces incorporating pressure sensors as well as the 3D printing technical advancements, we believe that handwriting kinetics-related studies may be conducted easily for further the purpose of discussing the mechanisms of handwriting motor or processing functions. Thanks again for the suggestion, which motived us to updated our citations in the revised Introduction section.

� Hochhauser M, Wagner M, Shvalb N. Assessment of children's writing features: A pilot method study of pen-grip kinetics and writing surface pressure. Assist Technol. 2021. Epub 2021/07/22. doi: 10.1080/10400435.2021.1956640.

� Lin Y-C, Chao Y-L, Hsu C-H, Hsu H-M, Chen P-T, Kuo L-C. The effect of task complexity on handwriting kinetics. Canadian Journal of Occupational Therapy. 2019;86(2):158-68. doi: 10.1177/0008417419832327

� Gatouillat A, Dumortier A, Perera S, Badr Y, Gehin C, Sejdic E. Analysis of the pen pressure and grip force signal during basic drawing tasks: The timing and speed changes impact drawing characteristics. Comput Biol Med. 2017;87:124-31. Epub 2017/06/06. doi: 10.1016/j.compbiomed.2017.05.020.

2. This wondering rises when the sample is detailed. Three HD forms are found in the sample: “a cognitive learning dysfunction subtype (25%), a motor impairment subtype (28.6%), and a severe hybrid subtype (46.4%).” Further on, the text describes each of these types of HD: “The severe hybrid subtype is the most serious subtype, reflecting severe deficits in all five dimensions and poor perceptual motor ability” ... “The motor impairment subtype is mainly characterized with deficits in writing speed, construction of characters, DCD, writing automation, and fine motor control” … “Children classified into the cognitive learning dysfunction subtype lack appropriate, efficient learning strategies”. In this sense, the differences between each subtype are significant, either by severity or specificity. However, the sample is treated as a single group so that there can be statistical strength.

Response: Thanks for the comments. Considering that the original and primary purpose of this study was to reveal the difference in pen grip kinetics in the handwriting performance of an HD group and a control group, the CHEF was used in this study mainly to verify that the children in the HD group indeed had handwriting problems. Distinguishing among the differences in the writing kinetics among the HD subtypes, however, was not the original purpose of this study. Nevertheless, the authors agree with the reviewer’s comment that the differences in the writing characteristics among each HD subtype might be significant or interesting topics to be explored further. Therefore, the authors have stated this in the Discussion section and the Limitations and Future Studies part of this revised version as “However, the data in this study were analyzed in children with uneven percentages of distribution among all three subtypes of HD. Since HD is very complex, and an assessment for HD classification has only been developed recently, the results obtained in this study should be interpreted with caution when generalizing the findings to children with different types of HD” and ” Finally, although children with three subtypes of HD were reported according to the CHEF classification, this study did not analyze the differences of the characteristics of writing kinetics among the different HD subtypes due to the small sample size and uneven percentages of distribution among the subtypes in the current study sample. A future study with a larger sampling scale is suggested to compare the differences of the writing features among HD subtypes.”

Please refer to Page 16 lines 262-266 and Page 21 lines 378-383, respectively.

3. Finally, at the beginning of the discussion, when commenting on the homogeneity of manual dexterity between the groups, it is stated that “this might be related to the fact that most of the writing difficulty subtypes were “motor impairment” and “severe hybrid,” which are both related to poor motor performance during handwriting”, which demonstrates an important reductionism of the type "severe hybrid". This statement also puts a quarter of the sample out of the discussion by assuming that the argument used for both of that types would not apply to the "cognitive learning dysfunction" type.

Response: Thanks for the comments. The authors agree with the reviewer’s viewpoint. The original statement was misused to assume that the argument used for both of that types would not apply to the "cognitive learning dysfunction" type. The authors thus deleted the original sentences “This might be related to …poor motor performance during handwriting.” and added the following sentences: “However, the data in this study were analyzed in children with uneven percentages of distribution among all three subtypes of HD. Since HD is very complex, and an assessment for HD classification has only been developed recently, the results obtained in this study should be interpreted with caution when generalizing the findings to children with different types of HD.” at the end of this paragraph. As mentioned in the previous question (point 2), the characteristics of each HD subtype could be an important issue. Therefore, the authors have also stated this issue as one of the study limitations in the Limitations and Future Studies section.

Please refer to Page 16 lines 262-266 and Page 21 lines 375-376, respectively.

4. In addition, the study observed five different categories of handwriting grip with different intra-group and – mainly – between-groups distributions. There is no mention of the distribution of these categories of handwriting grip in the three types of HD in the sample.

Response: Thanks for the comments. There are two reasons why the authors did not mention the distribution of these handwriting grip categories in the three types of HD in our recruited participants. The first reason is that all the children recruited in this study could use the tripod grasp to write. This grip type was recorded as the main grip type when a child uses a regular or typical pencil to write because it is usually taught as the standard writing grip pattern by the school teachers in our education system. That is the reason all the recruited children could use the force acquisition pen (FAP) to write during the assigned tasks. According to our design rationale (to fit the size and weight of a regular pen) for the FAP, only three sensors could be installed on the pen barrel, so only a tripod pen grasp was allowed in our handwriting testing. The other reason is that all four grip types for the HD group among our recruited children were the so-called mature grip type according to the previous classifications (shown in the following lists). Since all the participants in the HD group had already become used to the mature grip type in their writing performance, the authors thus decided not to specifically mention the details of the grip patterns in the text. However, because our original statement was not clear, the authors added one sentence ”Although all the children had already been taught to use the dynamic tripod grasp to write in school, the most preferred and frequent manner in which they gripped the pencil was recorded.” to clarify the method for defining the grip types in this study. The following table also shows the distribution of these categories of handwriting grip in the three types of HD among the recruited children.

In addition, in the design of the FAP, we had to constrain the pen-grip pattern to the tripod grip type for everyone, which may have limited a full understanding of grip kinetics among different pen grip patterns. Therefore, the authors also added this issue as one of the study limitations in the Limitations and Future Studies part as “Further, a force acquisition pen that is capable for detecting grip kinetics from different pen grip patterns other than the tripod grasp is still needed.”.

Please refer to Page 7 lines 128-129 and Page 21 lines 375-376.

HD subtype Grip pattern Numbers of subjects (%)

Cognitive learning dysfunction Dynamic tripod 4 (57.1)

Lateral tripod 2 (28.6)

Quadruped 1 (14.3)

Total 7 (100)

Motor impairment Lateral tripod 6 (75)

Lateral quadruped 2 (25)

Total 8 (100)

Severe hybrid Dynamic tripod 1 (7.7)

Lateral tripod 6 (46.2)

Quadruped 2 (15.4)

Lateral quadruped 4 (30.8)

Total 13 (100)

Mature grips citations:

� Koziatek, S. M., & Powell, N. J. (2003). Pencil grips, legibility, and speed of fourth-graders’ writing in cursive. American Journal of Occupational Therapy, 57(3), 284-288.

� Tseng, M. H. (1998). Development of pencil grip position in preschool children. The Occupational Therapy Journal of Research, 18(4), 207-224.

5. There is an important phrase related to this topic whose wording is ambiguous in my opinion:

“Although the positions of the three force sensors on FAP are adjustable, in this study, all participants used the same position setting for the force sensors based on their own grip.” What does it mean? That all children used the same position setting of the sensors in the pen, regardless of how each child grasped it? Or that each child had an individualized configuration of sensors according to their form of grasping? Or, yet, that there were several configurations, one for each form of handwriting grasping, but not one for each child according to their natural positioning?

This questioning is important because it can indicate whether there was an extra constraint factor for the HD group. If the positioning was unique, its effects on the HD group may have been greater than on the group without HD. If the positioning was determined by the way of grasping, how many subgroups were formed? And if the positioning was individualized by a child, what did you mean by "same position setting"? Therefore, I believe that, by not adequately considering the heterogeneity of the HD sample, the authors compromised the reliability of the results. As stated by them, “due to the small sample size and uneven percentages among the subtypes, differences between HD subtypes were not analyzed”.

Response: Thanks for the comments. The sentence “Although the positions of the three force sensors on FAP are adjustable, in this study, all participants used the same position setting for the force sensors based on their own grip.” in our original text may have been too vague. To improve readability, the authors have rephrased the statement as follows: “Although the positions of the three force sensors on the FAP were adjustable, no participant in this study, however, requested the examiner to adjust the position of the sensors due to discomfort or an awkward hand posture.” in the Procedures part of this revised version. Please refer to Page 9 lines 181-182, and Page 10 line 183.

Again, the authors agree with the reviewer’s viewpoint regarding the heterogeneity of the HD participants. Unfortunately, as in our previous response, the objective of this was to reveal the differences in pen grip kinetics in handwriting performance for the HD group and control group. Although distinguishing the differences in the writing kinetics among the HD subtypes is also a critical issue to be investigated, this was not the focus of the present study. Therefore, the authors stated this issue in the Discussion section and the Limitations and Future Studies part of this revised version as follows: “However, the data in this study were analyzed in children with uneven percentages of distribution among all three subtypes of HD. Since HD is very complex, and an assessment for HD classification has only been developed recently, the results obtained in this study should be interpreted with caution when generalizing the findings to children with different types of HD.” and “ Finally, although children with three subtypes of HD were reported according to the CHEF classification, this study did not analyze the differences of the characteristics of writing kinetics among the different HD subtypes due to the small sample size and uneven percentages of distribution among the subtypes in the current study sample. A future study with a larger sampling scale is suggested to compare the differences of the writing features among HD subtypes.” Please refer to Page 16 lines 262-266 and Page 21 lines 378-383, respectively.

6. Some minor considerations:

The model of direct citations used in the article (citing only the first two authors) is not adequate, since it gives a single comma the power to indicate that there are other authors besides the two mentioned. Forms such as "Author and colleagues", "Author and collaborators" and even "Author et al." are preferable in these cases.

Response: Thanks for the reviewer’s correction. The authors have revised the description as follows: “However, Chau and colleagues [15] showed different results in their work regarding pen-grip activity.”, “Lin et al. [13] enrolled 181 children ranging in age from 5 to 12 years old and found that the younger children exhibited more force variations and lower frequency of adjustment in the amount of force applied from each digit.”, “Regarding the grip-to-tip ratio, which is the total force applied from the grip divided by the force applied from the pen-tip, Lin et al. [13] found that older children tend to apply force on the pen barrel rather than pushing the pen-tip downward. Similarly, Chau et al. [15] found that compared to children with CP, children with typical development generate higher grip-to-tip ratios.”, “Ghali et al. [22] suggested that each person has a specific, recognizable force distribution on the pen barrel while writing. Shim et al. [23] also proposed a system measuring contact forces from three digits.”, “Drotár et al. [35] suggested that in-air movement during handwriting may involve cognitive processes such as motor planning and programming of motor sequences.”, and “Rosenblum et al. [16] found that children with poor handwriting had a lower in-air to total time ratio and a lower speed.”.

Please refer to Page 4 line 66-67; Page 5 lines 78-80; Page 5 lines 83-87; Page 5 lines 89-91; Page 12 lines 202-203; Page 17 lines 282-283.

7. Although it could be considered as implied, the text does not formally indicate whether the sample is composed only by right-handed children and does not comment on the consistency of manuality. They belong to a key age range regarding manuality definition, and the topic deserves to be considered in the characterization of the sample (Scharoun & Bryden, 2014). Scharoun, S. M. and Bryden, P. J. Hand preference, performance abilities, and hand selection in children. Front Psychol. 2014; 5: 82. doi: 10.3389/fpsyg.2014.00082

Response: Thanks for the reviewer’s comment and suggestion. There were three left-handed subjects in the HD group. The authors revised the description as follows: “Thirty-six children without HD (Control group, 18 girls and 18 boys, mean age 7.97±0.57 years, all right-handed) …3 left-handed and 25 right-handed)… therapy practitioners.”.

Please refer to Page 8 line 111-113 and Page 9 line 114-116.

8. The Cronbach’s alpha value for the BOT-2 test is 0.92; however, ideal values for Cronbach’s alpha range from 0.7 to 0.9. Values greater than 0.9 indicate test redundancy (Streiner, 2003). Streiner, D. L. Being inconsistent about consistency: when coefficient alpha does and doesn’t matter. Journal of Personality Assessment. 2003; 80:217-222. doi: 10.1207/S15327752JPA8003_01

Response: Thanks for the comments. The authors agree with the reviewer’s viewpoint. There are two fine motor skill assessment tools commonly used in hospitals for evaluating children’s fine motor capability in Taiwan. One is the BOT-2, and the other one is the Movement ABC (Movement Assessment Battery for Children). Both tests are widely used in scientific studies. The BOT-2 uses the same tests for age from 4 to 21 years old. However, the content of the tests in the Movement ABC should be changed depending on the age of the subjects. In order to make further comparisons with other similar studies in the field convenient, the BOT-2 was chosen for our experiment. Although the Cronbach’s alpha value for the BOT-2 test indicates test redundancy, it seems to be one of the best choices to provide an objective assessment of children’s fine motor functions in a clinical setting, as compared to the Movement ABC.

� Croce, R. V., Horvat, M., & McCarthy, E. (2001). Reliability and concurrent validity of the movement assessment battery for children. Perceptual and motor skills, 93(1), 275-280.

9. Right following the phrase “There have been few studies reporting on applied force while pen-lifting” there are no references to these few studies, nor a discussion comparing the results obtained in the study with this literature, which is very relevant here.

Response: Thanks for the reviewer’s correction. The authors revised the statements as follows: “To the best of our knowledge, there are no studies in the literature on applied digit force during pen-lifting. This study may thus be the first to report these data based on the handwriting performance of children.”.

Please refer to Page 17 lines 276 to 278.

Reviewer #2:

The aim of this study was to characterise the pen-grip kinetics profile of children with and without handwriting difficulties (HD), an issue that has received little attention to date. Despite the relevance of the topic, certain aspects limit the impact of the study, for example, the absence of an in-depth analysis of past studies; the use of a heterogeneous sample of children with handwriting difficulties; and the statistical approach to data analysis. The points that need to be clarified and strengthened are detailed below.

We sincerely appreciate the Reviewer’s thorough review and valuable suggestions. The authors revised the manuscript according to your constructive comments. The point-by-point responses are shown as follows:

Introduction

1. The introduction requires a more detailed review of previous studies. According to the authors, “the results of previous studies related to children’s handwriting kinetics remained inconsistent” (p.7, lines 2-3), meaning that one of the main motivations of the present study was to provide more evidence in regard to the issue. According to the above, the reader would expect to be provided with possible explanations for the heterogeneity of previous results.

However, only in the case of findings concerning variations in terms of grip force were certain methodological reasons mentioned as a source of inconsistency (p.6, lines 13-15). A more in-depth analysis of previous findings would make for a more compelling argument as to the specific contribution of the present study.

Response: Thanks for the reviewer’s constructive comments and corrections. The authors agree with the reviewer’s viewpoints regarding the flaws of the description about “the inconsistent issue” in our original Introduction section. In order to concentrate on the main focus of this study, which was an attempt to present “the lack of previous works regarding comprehension of digit forces acting on a pen barrel during handwriting” and also avoid misleading the readers as to the themes addressed in this study, the authors removed the irrelevant statement “the results of previous studies related to children’s handwriting kinetics remain inconsistent, and…” in the Introduction section of the revised version of the paper. According to the context of this paragraph, we rephrased the sentence as “Since studies on digit force are still limited, this study was designed as an observational study to provide insight into the issue.” so that inconsistencies in the handwriting kinetics (especially those related to the pen-tip force) will not be the main argument in this study. Please refer to Page 6 lines 93-94.

In addition, the authors have searched and added more proper published works as the references in the revised Introduction section: Please refer to Page 6 line 93. While updating this section, the authors also found that research works related to children’s handwriting kinetics have become scarce in recent years. Besides those classic articles related to handwriting kinetics published several decades ago, most of the studies were the works around 2005 to 2015 which were the fabulous time period for the handwriting researchers to discussed the pen tip force based on the mature tablet (Wacom) system. However, the comprehension of the direct evidence regarding the finger/digit forces acting on the pen barrel was still scant so that our team (and other previous works which had been cited in this manuscript) had established a digit forces acquisition pen that was similar to the real pen (either shape or weight/size). With the technology of conducting small force or pressure sensors as well as the 3D printing technical advancements, we believe that handwriting kinetics-related studies might be conducted easily for further discussing the mechanisms of handwriting motor or processing functions. Thanks again for the reviewer’s suggestions and corrections which motived us to update our citations and improve the readability of the revised version of the paper.

2. The research questions overlap to a certain degree. It would be advisable to reformulate them, as this would also help to improve the statistical analysis strategy.

Response: Thanks for the reviewer’s constructive suggestions. The authors revised the statements of research questions as “(1) Are there any differences in the fine motor skills and pen-grip kinetics between children with HD and without HD, and (2) are there any role differences among the thumb, index, and middle finger?”. Please refer to Page 6 lines 99-101. In addition, the statistical analyses used for examining the questions were also changed to the use of ANCOVAs. The description was revised as “To address research question one, an analysis of covariance (ANCOVA) controlling for age was used to analyze the experimental data to determine the between-group differences in the parameters and raw BOT-2 scores. To address research question two, since the participants were compared in two groups, a mixed-model ANCOVA including one between factor (group: with HD vs. without HD) and one within factor (role of the digits: thumb vs. index finger vs. middle finger) was performed on the AFwhole task, the CVFwhole task, and the NFFPS whole task, with age as a covariate. Bonferroni tests were used as post-hoc tests.” Please refer to Page 12 lines 214-219; Page13 lines 220-221.

Method

3. My main concerns in this section are in regard to the sample. The group of children classified as having HD is highly heterogeneous according to the profiles extracted from the Chinese Handwriting Evaluation Form (CHEF), so it is difficult to understand the implications of the differences found later with regard to the control group. The difference in the age range between the groups should also be emphasised, as the children with HD had almost an additional year of handwriting practice compared to their non-HD peers, a fact which could explain the lack of differences in some measures.

Response: Thanks for the comments. The authors agree with the comment regarding the heterogeneity of children in the HD group. Considering the original and main purpose of this study was to reveal the difference in pen grip kinetics in handwriting performance between an HD group and a control group, the details of the characteristics of the children in HD group were not specifically analyzed. However, since there are very few studies that discuss the digit force in children with HD, the authors believe this study provides new evidence and concept as a pilot study. Again, the authors agree with the reviewer’s concerns. Therefore, the authors stated this issue in the Discussion section and the Limitations and Future Studies part of this revised version as follows: “However, the data in this study were analyzed in children with uneven percentages of distribution among all three subtypes of HD. Since HD is very complex, and an assessment for HD classification has only been developed recently, the results obtained in this study should be interpreted with caution when generalizing the findings to children with different types of HD.” and ” Finally, although children with three subtypes of HD were reported according to the CHEF classification, this study did not analyze the differences of the characteristics of writing kinetics among the different HD subtypes due to the small sample size and uneven percentages of distribution among the subtypes in the current study sample. A future study with a larger sampling scale is suggested to compare the differences of the writing features among HD subtypes.” Please refer to Page 16 lines 262-266 and Page 21 lines 378-383, respectively.

4. The pen-grip patterns were not distributed in the same way between the groups with and without HD. The lateral quadruped grasp was more prevalent within the HD group, while the dynamic tripod grasp was more prevalent within the control group. Do you think this could be a source of explanation for the differences found between the groups? This point is especially relevant if we consider that, as I understand it, the positions of the three force sensors were fixed with a tripod grasp pattern: “Although the positions of the three force sensors on FAP are adjustable, in this study, all participants used the same position setting for the force sensors based on their own grip. They were requested to trace numbers in each trial, with three trials each. They had a one-minute rest interval between each trial and enough time to practice using the FAP with a tripod grasp before the formal trials” (p.10, lines 18-22).

Response: Thanks for the comments. The authors agree with the comments that the pen-grip patterns could provide an explanation for the between-group differences. While looking carefully at the distribution of pen-grip patterns between groups, the difference in the dynamic tripod was about 8%, and in the lateral quadpod, it was about 11%. However, considering the small difference and the small sample size, the issue of the distribution of these categories of handwriting grip in the two groups was not discussed. Again, the authors deeply appreciate the reviewer’s constructive comments and understand this issue is worthy of further investigation. The authors thus added the statement regarding the influence of pen-grip type into the study limitations in the Limitations and Future Studies part as “Further, a force acquisition pen that is capable for detecting grip kinetics from different pen grip patterns other than the tripod grasp is still needed.” Please refer to Page 21 lines 375-376.

Results

5. This section requires a major revision.

The analysis strategy used to answer the two questions could be improved. To answer research question one (Are there any differences in the fine motor skills and pen-grip kinetics between children with HD and without HD?), a series of t-tests were used to compare the groups using variables that are correlated; this is not a good idea given the increased chance of a type I error. The differences in age should have been controlled.

Response: Thanks for the comments and suggestions. Previous studies (see the following lists) usually examined the handwriting performance with different parameters in different periods or under different conditions to determine the specific writing control pattern. Although the variables were correlated, each variable could represent its specific control patterns and writing features. Therefore, the authors used these variables to present their specific control patterns and clinical meanings in Table 1.

Since the age was not controlled well, the authors revised the discussion as follows: “The mean age of children with HD was more than 8 months older than the age of the children without HD. This indicated that the children with HD had almost an additional year of handwriting practice compared to their non-HD peers in this study.” to emphasize the age difference between groups. In addition, as mentioned in the previous question (point 2.), the authors now use ANCOVAs to control for age to address both research questions.

Please refer to Page 7 lines 116-118.

Citations:

� Rosenblum, S., & Livneh-Zirinski, M. (2008). Handwriting process and product characteristics of children diagnosed with developmental coordination disorder. Human movement science, 27(2), 200-214.

� Chang, S. H., & Yu, N. Y. (2013). Handwriting movement analyses comparing first and second graders with normal or dysgraphic characteristics. Research in developmental disabilities, 34(9), 2433-2441.

� Horie, S., & Shibata, K. (2018). Quantitative evaluation of handwriting: factors that affect pen operating skills. Journal of physical therapy science, 30(8), 971-975.

6. To answer research question two (Are there any differences in pen-grip kinetics among different digits that indicate corresponding roles?), three one-way ANOVAs were used for each group. At this point, one wonders why the authors were not interested in the differences between the groups, although this is related to the problem of overlap in the research questions. As the comparison between groups was not of interest to the authors, they compared the force grip of the three digits for each group and parameter. A less complex and more robust approach could have been achieved using a mixed model.

Response: Thanks for the comments and suggestions. The authors revised the statements related to the research questions to clarify the study questions of interest. In addition, owing to the clarification of our research questions, the authors also revised the statistical analysis for this second research question from a one-way ANOVA to a mixed-model ANCOVA. This is explained in the paper as follows: “To address research question one, an analysis of covariance (ANCOVA) controlling for age was used to analyze the experimental data to determine the between-group differences in the parameters and raw BOT-2 scores. To address research question two, since the participants were compared in two groups, a mixed-model ANCOVA including one between factor (group: with HD vs. without HD) and one within factor (role of the digits: thumb vs. index finger vs. middle finger) was performed on the AFwhole task, the CVFwhole task, and the NFFPS whole task, with age as a covariate. Bonferroni tests were used as post-hoc tests.” The Results and Discussion sections related to the role differences in the digits have also been revised accordingly.

Please refer to Page 12 lines 214-219 and Page 13 lines 220-221; Page 19 lines 333-345 and Page 20 lines 346-361.

Discussion

7. Given that the main argument of the study was based on the inconsistencies in the findings of previous studies, I would have expected a discussion reporting explicitly on how the results of the present work help to clarify these inconsistencies. However, the discussion does not address this.

The authors appropriately highlight the limitations of the work, but do not address the practical implications that the results could have for the identification and intervention of children with HD.

Response: Thanks for the comments and suggestions. As the authors mentioned in their answer to question #1, the main argument in the revised version was changed. The inconsistency in the handwriting kinetics (pen-tip force) is not the main argument in this study. The main focus is more on ‘the lack of studies regarding digit force.’ Therefore, the statement reporting on how the results of the present work might help to clarify these inconsistencies is not explicitly addressed in the Discussion section.

Since the recruited group of HD children could have been heterogeneous in this study, this may lead to it being difficult to directly generalize the findings to all children with HD. This is why the authors have carefully concluded and tried not to overexplain the findings of this study. The implications are mentioned in the Conclusion section as follows: “On the basis of the results, our findings suggested that when intervening in children’s handwriting problems, it should be noted if the children loosen the gripping digits even when the digits appear to be touching the pen barrel during writing, especially at the moment when they lift the pen to write the next stroke. Digit role differences could also be considered when evaluating writing. Compared to the children with HD, the children without HD used a more static method by which to apply the force required to grip the pen and generated faster force adjustments to manipulate the pen from a kinetic point of view.”. Please refer to Page 21 lines 386-391 and Page 22 lines 392-394.

Since there are very few studies discussing digit force in children with HD, the authors believe this study provides new evidence and concept as a pilot study. This study was an attempt to explore the digit force quantitatively in children with HD via the use of a force acquisition pen. Although the limitations, such as the heterogeneity of the sample, applicability of the FAP, and the comparison of grip-types exist, this study still provides evidence on the role of force control among digits and a pen during a writing task. Furthermore, the HD classification is still a critical issue to be further explored. As for the CHEF, which is the only published and purchasable standard tool in the traditional Chinese handwriting system, the limitations of this tool, such as the small number of published studies regarding its use or the fact that it is a questionnaire rather a pencil paper test, indicate a need for more research evidence and in-depth discussion. Once the relationship between digits and a pen are revealed for a specific handwriting style or for a specific handwriting problem, standard principles for digit force control patterns can be constructed. Therefore, this study has shown the difference in the digit kinetics between children with and without HD. In future studies, the development of an understanding of different HD subtypes as well as grip patterns during handwriting tasks should be explored.

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Reviewer #2: Partly

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Reviewer #2: No

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: The authors did a good job of reviewing the proposed article following the 1st round of revision. The changes regarding the bibliography used and the statistical analysis raised the quality of the work and the importance of the results presented here.

Since the control group had 25 children, I believe the HD group would be a little less heterogeneous if the three left-handed children were removed from the sample and from the statistics. That leaves two groups of 25 children, all of them right-handed. However, since the data set are provided with the article, I do not believe that the presence of these children in the sample invalidates the results obtained. It is up to the authors and the editor to assess whether this change is necessary.

The discussion benefited from the changes made to the statistics. However, the three articles added to the Introduction could certainly have been taken up in the discussion, since they are recent and relevant to the discussion of this work.

Reviewer #2: The authors have adequately addressed earlier comments about the introduction section. They have also adjusted the research questions and included “age” as a covariate in the analyses, as suggested. However, limitations remain that have not been properly addressed.

Results section

• With regard to the split-plot analysis for AF, why was it used for the “whole task” condition but not for the “in air” and “on paper” conditions?

• If I have understood correctly, the Group x Digit type interaction is explained by dividing the interaction into two main effects: “Therefore, the simple main effect was then analyzed with ANCOVA (for the group) and One-Way ANOVA (for the digit type)” (lines 244-245). This approach breaks with the logic of an interaction analysis. It needs to be explained by making (orthogonal) contrasts between the levels of the different factors (e.g., differences between HD and control in level 1 [thumb] and 2 [index] vs level 3 [middle]). This may have been done, but the statistical effects associated with the contrasts are not described.

• No effect size is described in any of the analyses.

• The analyses generate redundant results. If CVF, NFFPS and AF (whole task condition) are included in the mixed design, they should not be included in the first analysis.

Another two issues remain unclear:

• The first concerns the heterogeneity of the HD group. The authors include this aspect as a limitation, but it would be necessary to show the descriptive statistics of the study variables for each subtype, perhaps in supplementary material. This would help to explain how the variables work in each subtype and could provide a better understanding of the differences between HD and control.

• The second is related to the procedure, specifically, to the fact that the positions of the three force sensors were fixed with a tripod grasp pattern. The authors state: “Although the positions of the three force sensors on the FAP were adjustable, no participant in this study, however, requested the examiner to adjust the position of the sensors due to discomfort or an awkward hand posture” (lines 181-183). However, they do not indicate whether within the task instructions participants were told that if they are uncomfortable, the position can be adjusted.

In the discussion section, a number of points need to be addressed in depth. For example, the results concerning AF-in-air and AF-in-paper are not interpreted. What are the implications of the fact that the differences between the groups in AF are found in the “in air” condition but not “on paper”?

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PLoS One. 2022 Jun 24;17(6):e0270466. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0270466.r004

Author response to Decision Letter 1


18 Feb 2022

Reviewer #1:

The authors did a good job of reviewing the proposed article following the 1st round of revision. The changes regarding the bibliography used and the statistical analysis raised the quality of the work and the importance of the results presented here.

Since the control group had 25 children, I believe the HD group would be a little less heterogeneous if the three left-handed children were removed from the sample and from the statistics.

That leaves two groups of 25 children, all of them right-handed. However, since the data set are provided with the article, I do not believe that the presence of these children in the sample invalidates the results obtained. It is up to the authors and the editor to assess whether this change is necessary.

The discussion benefited from the changes made to the statistics. However, the three articles added to the Introduction could certainly have been taken up in the discussion, since they are recent and relevant to the discussion of this work.

Response: We sincerely appreciate the Reviewer’s thorough review and valuable suggestions. The authors have done a sensitivity analysis by removing three left-handed children. The result is similar to the original data without removing left-handed children. In addition, we have consulted the Biostatistics Consulting Center, Clinical Medicine Research Center, National Cheng Kung University Hospital for the rationality and applicability of the statistics used in this study. For the statistics results after removing three left-handed children, please refer to the following Table A and Table B.

Table A. ANCOVA summary table for determining the effect of the digit, group, and their interaction— removed 3 left-handed children

Kinetics of handwriting Covariance

(Age) Group Digit Group � Digit

F Sig. ηp2 F Sig. ηp2 F Sig. ηp2 F Sig. ηp2 Post-hoc

AFon paper 0.55 .46 .01 4.87 .03* .08 2.57 .08 .04 0.44 .65 .01 Ct>HD

AFin air 0.53 .47 .01 12.74 .00** .18 1.63 .20 .03 1.08 .34 .02 Ct>HD

AFwhole task 0.69 .41 .01 5.94 .02* .09 2.18 .12 .04 0.91 .40 .02 Ct>HD

CVFwhole task 2.02 .16 .03 6.75 .01 .10 1.36 .26 .02 8.94 .00** .13 Interactiona

NFFPSwhole task 0.27 .61 .01 5.73 .02* .09 1.60 .21 .03 1.46 .24 .03 Ct>HD

Note. AF, average force; CVF, coefficient of variation in force; NFFPS, number of force fluctuations per second; Ct, control group; HD, handwriting difficulty group. Post-hoc type: Bonferroni, *p < 0.05 ,**p < 0.01

a Simple main effect:

ANCOVA for group difference between digitse(three levles):

level 1[Thumb], F=1.06, p=.31, ηp2 =.018; level 2[Index], F=20.73, p=.00, ηp2 =.263; level 3[Middle], F=.09, p=.77, ηp2 =.001;

One-way ANOVA for digit type difference between groups:

[HD], F=8.18, p =.00, ηp2 =.254; Post-hoc: Thumb vs Index, p =.01; Thumb vs Middle, p =1.00; Index vs Middle, p =.02

[Ct], F=5.29, p =.02, ηp2 =.131; Post-hoc: Thumb vs Index, p =.02; Thumb vs Middle, p =0.43; Index vs Middle, p =.03

Table B. Descriptive statistics parameters in two groups and the ANCOVA result for between group difference after removing 3 left-handed children

Kinetics of handwriting

(sources of force) Group

Control (n=36) HD (n=25)

Mean SD Mean SD Sig.a ηp2 a

Fine motor skills

Fine motor precision 38.44 2.16 33.20 5.13 .000** .484

Fine motor integration 37.22 2.04 33.96 5.74 .000** .237

Manual dexterity 25.94 2.91 25.80 5.19 .141 .037

Average Force (AF), unit: Newton

Thumb -on paper 3.07 1.31 2.62 0.61

Thumb -in air 1.56 0.87 1.08 0.30

Thumb -whole task 2.70 1.22 2.21 0.53

Index -on paper 2.11 0.77 1.68 0.62

Index -in air 1.15 0.55 0.63 0.22

Index -whole task 1.87 0.72 1.42 0.47

Middle -on paper 1.34 0.75 1.13 0.57

Middle -in air 1.05 0.49 0.77 0.32

Middle -whole task 1.29 0.69 1.11 0.54

Pen-Tip -on paper 0.95 0.29 0.75 0.33 .012* .105

Task Time (TT)

TT -on paper (ratio) 0.71 0.08 0.72 0.05 .672 .003

TT -in air (ratio) 0.29 0.08 0.28 0.05 .708 .002

TT -whole task (s) 23.46 7.49 27.29 10.61 .046* .067

Coefficient of Variation in Force (CVF)

Thumb -whole task 0.38 0.09 0.40 0.08

Index -whole task 0.35 0.08 0.49 0.15

Middle -whole task 0.42 0.14 0.41 0.12

Pen-Tip -on paper 0.36 0.05 0.34 0.07 .245 .023

Number of Force Fluctuations per second (NFFPS)

Thumb -whole task 1.34 0.24 1.25 0.17

Index -whole task 1.36 0.17 1.26 0.23

Middle -whole task 1.59 0.38 1.39 0.27

Force Ratio (FR) -on paper 0.16 0.05 0.10 0.04 .000** .229

Note. SD = standard deviation; HD = handwriting difficulty; *p < 0.05,**p < 0.01

a Results of the ANCOVA correcting for age as a covariate

Reviewer #2:

The authors have adequately addressed earlier comments about the introduction section. They have also adjusted the research questions and included “age” as a covariate in the analyses, as suggested. However, limitations remain that have not been properly addressed.

Response: We sincerely appreciate the Reviewer’s thorough review and valuable suggestions. The authors revised the manuscript according to your constructive comments. In addition, we have consulted the Biostatistics Consulting Center, Clinical Medicine Research Center, National Cheng Kung University Hospital for the rationality and applicability of the statistics used in this study. The point-by-point responses are shown as follows:

1. Results section

With regard to the split-plot analysis for AF, why was it used for the “whole task” condition but not for the “in air” and “on paper” conditions?

Response: Thanks for the Reviewer’s constructive comments and correction.

The authors overlooked the analysis for AF for “in air” and “on paper” conditions for research question 2. Since the condition may represent different control or writing patterns during handwriting, it should be analyzed in both research questions. Thanks to the Reviewer’s correction again. The authors added these two conditions into the analysis and revised the manuscript and also Table 3. The description was revised as “A mixed-model ANCOVA including one between factor (group: with HD vs. without HD) and one within factor (role of the digits: thumb vs. index finger vs. middle finger) was performed on the AFon paper, the AFin air, the AFwhole task, the CVFwhole task, and the NFFPS whole task, with age as a covariate.”; “The results of the mixed-model ANCOVA showed significant differences in the AFon paper, the AFin air, and the AFwhole task of the three digits. All these AFs were significantly lower in the HD group.”; “Table 3 shows the results for the effects of group and digit type on the AFin air, AFon paper, AFwhole task, CVFwhole task, and NFFPSwhole task. There was no interaction effect between the group and digit type when analyzing the AFin air, AFon paper, AFwhole task and NFFPSwhole task via the mixed-model ANCOVA controlling for age. No significant difference among digit types was found on the AFin air, AFon paper, and AFwhole task or NFFPSwhole task. The scores for the AFin air, AFon paper, AFwhole task and NFFPSwhole task were found to be significantly greater in the control group.”.

Please refer to Page 12 lines 215-220; Page 13 line 221; Page 13 lines 229-231; Page 15 lines 242-247; Page 16 Table 3.

2. If I have understood correctly, the Group x Digit type interaction is explained by dividing the interaction into two main effects: “Therefore, the simple main effect was then analyzed with ANCOVA (for the group) and One-Way ANOVA (for the digit type)” (lines 244-245). This approach breaks with the logic of an interaction analysis. It needs to be explained by making (orthogonal) contrasts between the levels of the different factors (e.g., differences between HD and control in level 1 [thumb] and 2 [index] vs level 3 [middle]). This may have been done, but the statistical effects associated with the contrasts are not described.

Response: Thanks for the Reviewer’s constructive comments and corrections. The authors added the descriptions in the revised manuscript as “The ANCOVA result showed that only the CVFwhole task of the index in the HD group was significantly greater than in the control group (difference between groups in three digit types [Thumb], F=1.13, p=.29, ηp2 =.018; [Index], F=20.30, p=.00, ηp2 =.250; [Middle], F=0.41, p=.53, ηp2 =.007). The One-Way ANOVA result showed that significant differences were found in HD (difference among digits, F=6.61, p =.00, ηp2 =.197) and control (difference among digits, F=5.29, p =.02, ηp2 =.131) group. The post-hoc tests showed that the CVFwhole task of the thumb and middle finger were found to be significantly higher than the CVFwhole task of the index finger in the control group (Thumb vs. Index finger, p =.02; Thumb vs. Middle finger, p =.43; Index finger vs. Middle finger, p =.03), and the CVFwhole task of the index finger was found to be significantly higher than the CVFwhole task of the thumb in the HD group (Thumb vs. Index finger, p =.01; Thumb vs. Middle finger, p =.43; Index finger vs. Middle finger, p =.14).”. Please refer to Page 15 lines 250-261.

3. No effect size is described in any of the analyses.

Response: Thanks for the Reviewer’s constructive suggestion. The authors added the effect size (ηp2) in the analyses. Please refer to Page 14 Table 2 and Page 15 lines 252-255 and Page 16 Table 3.

4. The analyses generate redundant results. If CVF, NFFPS and AF (whole task condition) are included in the mixed design, they should not be included in the first analysis.

Response: Thanks for the Reviewer’s corrections. The authors revised the parameters used in the two different ANCOVA analyses to avoid generating redundant results. The description was revised as “An analysis of covariance (ANCOVA) controlling for age was used to analyze the experimental data to determine the between-group differences in the parameters (the AFon paper of the pen-tip, the TTs, the CVFon paper of the pen-tip, and the FR ) and raw BOT-2 scores. A mixed-model ANCOVA including one between factor (group: with HD vs. without HD) and one within factor (role of the digits: thumb vs. index finger vs. middle finger) was performed on the AFon paper, the AFin air, the AFwhole task, the CVFwhole task, and the NFFPS whole task, with age as a covariate.”. Table 2 and Table 3 were also revised. Please refer to Page 12 lines 215-220, Page 13 line 221; Page 14 Table 2; Page 16 Table 3.

5. Another two issues remain unclear:

The first concerns the heterogeneity of the HD group. The authors include this aspect as a limitation, but it would be necessary to show the descriptive statistics of the study variables for each subtype, perhaps in supplementary material. This would help to explain how the variables work in each subtype and could provide a better understanding of the differences between HD and control.

Response: Thanks for the Reviewer’s constructive comments. The authors have added a summary table to show the descriptive statistics of the study variables for each subtype in the supplementary material.

Please refer to the supporting information, S1 Table. Summary Table of the Parameters in Three Subtypes of HD Group.

6. The second is related to the procedure, specifically, to the fact that the positions of the three force sensors were fixed with a tripod grasp pattern. The authors state: “Although the positions of the three force sensors on the FAP were adjustable, no participant in this study, however, requested the examiner to adjust the position of the sensors due to discomfort or an awkward hand posture” (lines 181-183). However, they do not indicate whether within the task instructions participants were told that if they are uncomfortable, the position can be adjusted.

Response: Thanks for the Reviewer’s constructive comments and corrections. Yes, all the participants were told that the position could be adjusted if uncomfortable. However, the original manuscript was not well stated. Therefore, the authors revised the statements as ” Although the positions of the three force sensors on the FAP were adjustable, no participant in this study, however, requested the examiner to adjust the position of the sensors due to discomfort or an awkward hand posture when the examiners asked them if they needed to adjust the position of the sensors.” Please refer to Page 9 lines 181-182, and Page 10 lines 183-184.

7. In the discussion section, a number of points need to be addressed in depth. For example, the results concerning AF-in-air and AF-in-paper are not interpreted. What are the implications of the fact that the differences between the groups in AF are found in the “in air” condition but not “on paper”?

Response: Thanks for the Reviewer’s constructive comments.

The authors revised the manuscript and added new statements as “Based on the result, loosening the fingers when lifting the pen might influence children’s writing performance. When the pen is picked up, the constantly applied force from the digits is not necessary due to not making the ink on paper. It may not be necessary to constantly apply the force in the energy-saving perspective. On the other hand, it may reduce the frequency to enlarge the applied force. Therefore, one possibility is that these children could not generate the force constantly. Another possibility is that these children do not know how to constantly apply force. However, more evidence is needed to confirm this hypothesis, such as the muscle endurance test or skill check test.”, and “Since handwriting is complex, the reason resulting HD is various. Therefore, this study focused mainly on one concept, the writing kinetics, to reveal the possible and measurable factors related to children with HD. For example, asking children to strengthen or loosen their force applied from a specific digit is a relatively direct way to change the writing pattern. However, in the real world, we could not know if this is necessary or correct to ask them to change the force if we do not know how much force is poor. Therefore, this study provided the real force data such as the AF value, suggested the more critical situation for observing such as pen in air, and proposed the particular digit for observing such as index finger to tentatively bring out the possible and manipulatable factors related to HD. In addition, this study introduced CVF, NFFPS, and FR to explain the force control pattern in children with HD. The study provided a practical method for the teachers and clinicians to assess children’s handwriting problems based on writing kinetics.”.

Please refer to Page 17 lines 291-298; Page 20 lines 353-364.

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Decision Letter 2

Victor Frak

6 Apr 2022

PONE-D-21-12263R2

Pen-grip Kinetics in Children with and without Handwriting Difficulties

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Reviewer #2: Partly

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: I believe that the authors did an excellent job of reviewing and readjusting the manuscript. I consider the article complies Plos One's publishing standards.

Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed earlier comments concerning the results and discussion sections and the overall quality of the manuscript has increased. However, the writing of these two particular sections needs to be improved through better organization of the information.

Results section

• The authors state: “An analysis of covariance (ANCOVA) controlling for age was used to analyze the experimental data to determine the between-group differences in the parameters (the AF on paper of the pen-tip, the TTs, the CVF on paper of the pen-tip, and the FR) and raw BOT-2 scores. A mixed-model ANCOVA including one between factor (group: with HD vs. without HD) and one within factor (role of the digits: thumb vs. index finger vs. middle finger) was performed on the AF on paper, the AF in air, the AF whole task, the CVF whole task, and the Handwriting difficulties and handwriting kinetics NFFPS whole task, with age as a covariate” (pp 12-13, Lines 215-221).

The reader would therefore expect the findings to be described in the same order: the ANCOVA results and then the mixed-model ANCOVA results. However, the description is not clear because the results of the two analyses are described together in the same paragraph. Regarding the ANCOVA, the results concerning “fine motor skills” and “AF on paper” are described correctly; however, the results concerning “TTs”, “CVF on paper of the pen-tip”, and the “FR” are not mentioned (see p.13, lines 227-230). Instead, these results are mentioned under the description of the mixed-model ANCOVA findings (p. 13, lines 229-235).

Furthermore, information concerning the mixed-model ANCOVA results is repeated in the “Group differences” and “Role differences” sub-sections.

Discussion section

• The same organizational problems occur as in the results section. For example, AF-in-air results are addressed on lines 286-300, but suddenly appear again on lines 316-317. Similarly, the interaction Group x Digit on CVF whole task is described on lines 318-321 and appears again on lines 371-373.

• Lines 287-290 are difficult to follow: “The AF-whole task and AF-on paper results revealed statistically significant but less practical significance (p=0.02 and 0.03; effect size ηp2 =0.09 and 0.07) between-group differences for any of the three digits. However, the AF-in air in all digits was practically and significantly (p=0.00; effect size ηp2 =0.18) lower in the HD group”.

• It is suggested that some introductory lines be included in the first paragraph to remind the reader of the objective of the study.

• It is also suggested that the statistical data be removed from the discussion and introduced in the results section instead.

There remain a number of unclear sentences and instances where information could be presented more clearly. The manuscript would therefore benefit from a careful review by a native speaker.

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Reviewer #1: Yes: Ronaldo Luis da Silva

Reviewer #2: No

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PLoS One. 2022 Jun 24;17(6):e0270466. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0270466.r006

Author response to Decision Letter 2


3 May 2022

Reviewer #1:

I believe that the authors did an excellent job of reviewing and readjusting the manuscript. I consider the article complies Plos One's publishing standards.

Response: We sincerely appreciate the Reviewer’s thorough review and comment.

Reviewer #2:

The authors have addressed earlier comments concerning the results and discussion sections and the overall quality of the manuscript has increased. However, the writing of these two particular sections needs to be improved through better organization of the information.

Response: We sincerely appreciate the Reviewer’s thorough review and valuable suggestions. The authors revised the manuscript according to your constructive comments. In addition, a native English speaker, who is also a professional proofreader, was invited to help with English editing of the revised manuscript. The point-by-point responses are shown as follows:

Results section

1. The authors state: “An analysis of covariance (ANCOVA) controlling for age was used to analyze the experimental data to determine the between-group differences in the parameters (the AF on paper of the pen-tip, the TTs, the CVF on paper of the pen-tip, and the FR) and raw BOT-2 scores. A mixed-model ANCOVA including one between factor (group: with HD vs. without HD) and one within factor (role of the digits: thumb vs. index finger vs. middle finger) was performed on the AF on paper, the AF in air, the AF whole task, the CVF whole task, and the Handwriting difficulties and handwriting kinetics NFFPS whole task, with age as a covariate” (pp 12-13, Lines 215-221).

The reader would therefore expect the findings to be described in the same order: the ANCOVA results and then the mixed-model ANCOVA results. However, the description is not clear because the results of the two analyses are described together in the same paragraph.

Response: Thanks for the Reviewer’s constructive comments and correction. The authors have changed the order according to reviewer’s suggestion. The subtitles as “group differences” and “Role differences” were also removed. Please refer to Page 13 line 221 to Page 14 line 248.

The results of the two analyses were described in different paragraph in the revised manuscript. The description was revised as “Table 2 shows the means and SDs for all parameters and fine motor scores.

Table 2 also shows the ANCOVA results on the group differences for the parameters (AFon paper of the pen tip, TTs, CVFon paper of the pen tip and FR) and fine motor scores. For the fine motor skills, scores for ‘fine motor precision’ and ‘fine motor integration’ were significantly lower in the HD group. The AFon paper of the pen tip was significantly lower in the HD group. For the TTs, between-group significance was only found in the TTwhole task. For the CVFon paper of the pen tip, no significance was found between groups. Finally, the FRon paper was significantly lower in the HD group.”. Please refer to Page 13 lines 221-228.

2. Regarding the ANCOVA, the results concerning “fine motor skills” and “AF on paper” are described correctly; however, the results concerning “TTs”, “CVF on paper of the pen-tip”, and the “FR” are not mentioned (see p.13, lines 227-230). Instead, these results are mentioned under the description of the mixed-model ANCOVA findings (p. 13, lines 229-235).

Response: Thanks for the Reviewer’s comments. The authors have changed the order by mentioning the results of ANCOVA first and then the results of mixed-model ANCOVA according to reviewer’s suggestion. Therefore, the results concerning “TTs”, “CVF on paper of the pen-tip”, and the “FR” were now under the description of the ANVOVA.

The description was revised as “Table 2 shows the means and SDs for all parameters and fine motor scores.

Table 2 also shows the ANCOVA results on the group differences for the parameters (AFon paper of the pen tip, TTs, CVFon paper of the pen tip and FR) and fine motor scores. For the fine motor skills, scores for ‘fine motor precision’ and ‘fine motor integration’ were significantly lower in the HD group. The AFon paper of the pen tip was significantly lower in the HD group. For the TTs, between-group significance was only found in the TTwhole task. For the CVFon paper of the pen tip, no significance was found between groups. Finally, the FRon paper was significantly lower in the HD group.”. Please refer to Page 13 lines 221-228.

3. Furthermore, information concerning the mixed-model ANCOVA results is repeated in the “Group differences” and “Role differences” sub-sections.

Response: Thanks for the Reviewer’s constructive comments and correction. The authors have changed the order by mentioning the results of ANCOVA first and then the results of mixed-model ANCOVA according to reviewer’s suggestion. The subtitles as “group differences” and “Role differences” were also removed.

Therefore, the information concerning the mixed-model ANCOVA results was not repeated in the “Group differences” and “Role differences” sub-sections anymore. Please refer to Page 13 line 221 to Page 14 line 248.

Discussion section

4. The same organizational problems occur as in the results section. For example, AF-in-air results are addressed on lines 286-300, but suddenly appear again on lines 316-317. Similarly, the interaction Group x Digit on CVF whole task is described on lines 318-321 and appears again on lines 371-373.

Response: Thanks for the Reviewer’s constructive comments and correction.

For the AF-in-air results, the description on lines 316-317 has been removed. The description of AF-in-air results have been revised as “Although the differences were found in all pen positions, only the difference of AFin air in all digits between groups was practically significant because its effect size is large enough to be meaningful in practice. The AFin air in all digits was practically and significantly lower in the HD group.”, and “A low CVF represents a static way of grasping a pen in terms of the amount of force. Although not all CVFs showed significant between-group differences, the mean CVF values for the three digits were smaller in the HD group. Our results indicated that the children with HD used a less stable method by which to control the amount of force applied to manipulate the pen during writing.”. Please refer to Page 17 lines 282-285; Please refer to Page 18 lines 311-315.

For the interaction Group x Digit on CVF whole task, the description on lines 318-321 has been removed. The description was revised as “A low CVF represents a static way of grasping a pen in terms of the amount of force. Although not all CVFs showed significant between-group differences, the mean CVF values for the three digits were smaller in the HD group. Our results indicated that the children with HD used a less stable method by which to control the amount of force applied to manipulate the pen during writing.”. Please refer to Page 18 lines 311-315.

5. Lines 287-290 are difficult to follow: “The AF-whole task and AF-on paper results revealed statistically significant but less practical significance (p=0.02 and 0.03; effect size ηp2 =0.09 and 0.07) between-group differences for any of the three digits. However, the AF-in air in all digits was practically and significantly (p=0.00; effect size ηp2 =0.18) lower in the HD group”.

Response: Thanks for the Reviewer’s constructive comments. The authors have revised the description and the statistical data were also removed according to the reviewer’s suggestion. The description was revised as “Although the differences were found in all pen positions, only the difference of AFin air in all digits between groups was practically significant because its effect size is large enough to be meaningful in practice. The AFin air in all digits was practically and significantly lower in the HD group.”. Please refer to Page 17 lines 282-285.

6. It is suggested that some introductory lines be included in the first paragraph to remind the reader of the objective of the study.

Response: Thanks for the Reviewer’s constructive comments. The introductory lines were added in the first paragraph of the Discussion part according to reviewer’s suggestion. The description was revised as “HD is a wildly discussed issue that has received considerable attention from clinical and educational professionals. Previous studies have revealed valuable kinematics related to handwriting performance. However, the reports on children’s handwriting performance by investigating the force directly applied from the digit are still limited. This study discovered the pen-grip kinetics during writing via the FAP system of children with HD compared with those without HD. In addition, the relationship among three digits during writing was discussed to better understand the digits’ role.”. Please refer to Page 16 lines 257-263.

7. It is also suggested that the statistical data be removed from the discussion and introduced in the results section instead.

Response: Thanks for the Reviewer’s constructive comments. The authors have removed the statistical data according to the reviewer’s suggestion and also revised the related description. The description was revised as “Although the differences were found in all pen positions, only the difference of AFin air in all digits between groups was practically significant because its effect size is large enough to be meaningful in practice. The AFin air in all digits was practically and significantly lower in the HD group.”, and “A low CVF represents a static way of grasping a pen in terms of the amount of force. Although not all CVFs showed significant between-group differences, the mean CVF values for the three digits were smaller in the HD group. Our results indicated that the children with HD used a less stable method by which to control the amount of force applied to manipulate the pen during writing.”. Please refer to Page 17 lines 282-285; Please refer to Page 18 lines 311-315.

8. There remain a number of unclear sentences and instances where information could be presented more clearly. The manuscript would therefore benefit from a careful review by a native speaker.

Response: We appreciate the reviewer’s suggestion. A native English speaker, who is also a professional proofreader, was invited to help with English editing of the revised manuscript.

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• p.17, lines 281-285. The sentences “Although the differences were found in all pen positions, only the difference of AFin-air in all digits between groups was practically significant because its effect size is large enough to be meaningful in practice. The AFin-air in all digits was practically and significantly lower in the HD group” are still confusing. I suggest indicating that differences between groups were found to be significant in all pen positions; at least, this is what can be deduced from the p-values in Table 3.

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