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Ovarian suppression can be used irrespective of egg or embryo freezing (LTH1) |
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Ovarian transposition as an option (KS2) |
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But not in the graph |
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Add sections about how partner feels about options (STH1) |
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Dotted line to say not all treatments are available in all clinics (STH4) |
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Question: “I am getting symptoms of menopause post CT, where can I go for help?” (STH4) |
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Need a separate small leaflet to say that things can affect your fertility but unfortunately in your case we can’t do anything to preserve for these reasons (LTH2) |
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But not as separate leaflet |
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Despite already simplified, might still be too much for ‘average’ patient (STH4) |
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Tried modifying, Flesch reading age |
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Better to not give success vs failure rates due to differences in clinics (LTH1) |
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Consider revising statistic that menopause in cancer survivors can occur 5-10 years early; p.12 (KS3) |
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Ovarian suppression not new (KS2) |
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We already said ‘newer’ not ‘new’ |
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Text: Consistency, i.e. side-effects or side effects, throughout the booklet (KS4) |
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Avoid italics as it makes it harder to read (KS4) |
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Some corrections regarding grammar and spelling (KS4) |
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Don’t’ make it shiny paper, so that patients can write on it (STH4) |
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Language issue: ‘loss of fertility’ as too dramatic? (STH3); subfertility possibly? (LTH3) |
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Too clinical |
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Use ‘eggs’ not ‘follicles’ (LTH2, STH5) |
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Graph 2, page 12, needs correcting (LTH3) |
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Yes to cancer treatment, edited this graph significantly |
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Change the axes on Table 1 (LTH5) |
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Link p.24 with purple section (STH7) |
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Unclear |
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Make the graphs and tables less academic (STH7) |
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Yes, e.g. replaced chemotherapy/radiation with cancer treatment, modified language |
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Some graphs repetitive, e.g. page 11 (STH7, STH1) |
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Not correct |
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Don’t put ovarian suppression in dotted line (STH4) |
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Questions for reflections too theoretical? (LTH3 |
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Did cut down number of questions |
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Less space for questions (STH4) |
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Add: “Questions to discuss with other people you are close with, not just partner” (STH5) |
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Abridged version for some? (LTH2) |
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Too long, too complex, too long-winded (LTH3; STH7) |
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We did cut down from 60 pages to 40 |
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Break booklet up in individual sections, give out what’s appropriate? (LTH5) |
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Emphasise that it’s a workbook, not another bunch of leaflets |
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All cancer background (LTH3) |
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Unsure if summary tables add value (LTH6) |
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Investigated in Evaluation Phase |
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Diagram p12 too technical, take out (STH3 |
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Modified this slightly |
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P.17: make outline stand out, bold (KS4) |
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Grey boxes: ensure they are within the same margins, on same part of the pages (KS4) |
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Decision pictures: Could omit, but best keep (STH1) |
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Flowcharts possibly redundant, as text says the same (LTH1) |
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Could out some space potentially (STH3) |
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Yes, reduced overall length |
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Cut questions, add extra sheet (LTH3) |
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Cut some questions, no extra sheet |
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Cut down different treatment information (LTH5) |
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Get rid of option table (STH5) |
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