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. 2023 Mar 24;18(3):e0279014. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0279014

Adapting waterpipe-specific pictorial health warning labels to the Tunisian context using a mixed method approach

Nadia Ben Mansour 1,2, Salsabil Rejaibi 1,2, Asma Sassi Mahfoudh 1, Sarra Ben Youssef 1, Habiba Ben Romdhane 1, Michael Schmidt 3, Kenneth D Ward 4,5, Wasim Maziak 5,6, Taghrid Asfar 5,7,8,*
Editor: Nabeel Al-Yateem9
PMCID: PMC10038263  PMID: 36961806

Abstract

Background

Waterpipe (WP) use is rapidly increasing among young people worldwide due to the widespread misperception that it is safer than cigarette smoking. Health warning labels (HWLs) can effectively communicate tobacco-related health risks but have yet to be developed for WP. This study aimed to optimize and adapt a set of 16 pictorial WP-specific HWLs, developed by an international Delphi study, to the Tunisian context. HWLs were grouped into four themes: WP health risks, WP harm to others, WP-specific harms, and WP harm compared to cigarettes.

Methods

Using a mixed method approach, we conducted ten focus groups combined with a survey among young WP users and nonusers (N = 63; age 18–34 years). In the survey, participants rated the HWLs on several communication outcomes (e.g., reaction, harm perception, effectiveness) and were then instructed to view all HWLs in each theme and rank them in the order of overall perceived effectiveness, from the most to the least effective. Afterward, participants provided in-depth feedback on HWLs and avenues for improvement. Mean effectiveness rating scores and percentages of participants’ top-ranked HWLs were calculated. Discussions were audio-taped, transcribed verbatim, and analyzed thematically.

Results

The top-ranked HWLs were those showing oral cancers, orally transmitted diseases, and a sick child. Focus group discussion illustrated that these selections were based on participants’ reactions to the direct impact of WP on a person’s physical appearance and evoking guilt over children’s exposure to WP smoke. Suggestions for improvement highlighted the need to use the local dialect and more affirmative statements (e.g., avoiding "may" or "can").

Conclusions

This study is the first in North Africa to attempt to advance HWLs policy as the World Health Organization recommended. The results of this study can be used as a basis for implementing WP-specific health messages in the Eastern Mediterranean Region.

Introduction

The Eastern Mediterranean Region (EMR) is recognized as a global hot spot for waterpipe (WP) use, especially among youth [1]. According to the World Health Organization (WHO) estimates in 2020, the current use of all tobacco products prevalence among men in Tunisia was 64.2%, the highest among all countries in the Middle East and North Africa (MENA) region, and it is rapidly increasing among women and adolescents [2, 3]. In particular, WP use was the highest (14%) among students aged 18–28 years old [4]. In addition, based on data from the Global Youth Tobacco Survey (GYTS) in Tunisia in 2017, the prevalence of current WP use increased from 5.8% in 2010 to 7.6% in 2017 among youth aged 13–15 years old [5, 6]. This increase is worrisome given accumulating evidence about the harmful effects of WP use on health, which in many aspects are similar to those of cigarettes (e.g., cancer, cardiovascular disease, respiratory disease, carbon monoxide poisoning) [79].

In response to the global tobacco epidemic, the WHO developed the Framework Convention on Tobacco Control (FCTC) to reduce the devastating health, social, environmental, and economic consequences of tobacco consumption by providing a framework for tobacco control measures to be implemented by its Parties at the national, regional and international levels [10]. Article 11 of the WHO FCTC requires the implementation of pictorial health warning labels (HWLs) on WP tobacco products [11, 12]. Pictorial HWLs have proven effective in communicating health risks associated with cigarettes and WP use [13, 14]. A pilot lab experiment study conducted by Maziak et al. among WP users in the US showed that placing a pictorial HWL on the WP device compared to no HWL (control) reduced users’ positive experiences and exposure to exhaled carbon monoxide [15]. Tunisia has ratified the FCTC, but as in many other developing countries, HWLs policies are still not implemented in Tunisia [12, 16]. However, in February 2022, supported by WHO and the FCTC Secretariat, the Ministry of Health in Tunisia announced its intention to implement pictorial HWLs on the external packaging of tobacco products [17]. This positive development underscores the need for research to optimize HWLs design and content to the Tunisian context.

In 2017, our team started an international project aimed at developing and testing WP-specific pictorial HWLs for two countries in the EMR, Tunisia and Lebanon. As part of this project, we developed a set of 16 WP pictorial HWLs using the Delphi method with an international expert panel (Fig 1) [18]. These HWLs were grouped into 4 themes (T): T1) WP Health effects, T2) WP Harm to others, T3) WP-specific harms, and T4) WP harm compared to cigarettes. Using a mixed method approach that combined a rating survey with focus groups [18], the current study aimed to optimize and adapt these HWLs to the Tunisian context, focusing on young adults, who have the highest WP use prevalence in Tunisia. This study reports on 1) young adults’ rating and ranking of the overall effectiveness of the 16 HWLs, stratified by WP use status (WP users vs. nonusers) and gender (male vs. female), and 2) young adults’ perceptions of HWLs’ effectiveness regarding several communication outcomes (e.g., attraction, clarity, believability, relatedness, effectiveness) as elicited during focus group discussions. While the rating and ranking analysis will provide a snapshot of the evaluation of HWLs’ effectiveness and help select and prioritize the top HWLs for further enhancement and development, focus group discussions will provide an in-depth understanding of participants’ attitudes, feelings, beliefs, experiences, and reactions to the HWLs and identify salient suggestions for further HWLs adaptation and improvements. Results will provide Tunisia and other countries in the EMR with evidence-based HWLs that they can implement or further adapt and test within their specific context.

Fig 1. Health warning labels tested in the study.

Fig 1

Methods

Study design

The Institutional Review Boards approved the study at the Faculty of Medicine of Tunis in Tunisia, Florida International University, and the University of Miami in the US. Using a mixed method approach [19, 20], we conducted 10 mixed-gender focus group discussions combined with a brief survey separately among current WP users (n = 23; defined as those who reported using WP at least once in the past 30 days) [21], and nonusers (n = 40; defined as those who have not used any tobacco/nicotine product in the past year) between January 2019 and January 2020. Participants received a $10 incentive for participating in the study.

Participants and recruitment

A combination of online and offline recruitment methods was used: circulating recruitment postings on social media, university and student associations’ websites, and distributing flyers at main university entrances. Additionally, snowball sampling was used by asking participants to refer their friends for the study. Prospective participants were screened for eligibility by phone, scheduled for a focus group session, and provided the time/place of their focus group. Eligibility requirements were being a young adult 18–34 years old and a current WP user or nonuser. This age group was selected because it is at high risk of prevalence, initiation, and progression of WP use [3]. In addition, given the important role of the HWLs regulations in preventing smoking initiation, including WP nonusers in the early stage of the HWLs development ensures maximizing their benefit for WP initiation prevention [22, 23]. Participants who reported using other tobacco products (e.g., cigarettes, e-cigarettes) were included to increase the generalizability of the results since concurrent tobacco use is common among young WP users in Tunisia [4].

Procedures

Focus group sessions were held in a private conference room at the University of Tunis El Manar. Sessions lasted approximately 150 minutes and were conducted in Arabic, and they were moderated by the Tunisian project investigators and two public health graduate students trained in qualitative research. Each session started with a discussion on the nature and confidentiality of group discussions. Written informed consent was obtained, then participants completed a baseline assessment, including demographic characteristics and smoking history, followed by a brief survey to rate and rank the HWLs. Then, the focus group discussion started. Below we describe the methods of the brief survey and focus group discussion in more detail.

Rating and ranking the HWLs

In the brief survey, participants were instructed to view each label and rate it on a 5-point Likert-type scale (from 1 = strongly disagree to 5 = strongly agree) on four primary outcomes related to the HWLs’ impact: 1) increase WP harm perception, 2) motivate users to quit, 3) prevent nonusers from initiating WP use, and 4) overall effectiveness on others [14, 24]. Participants were then instructed to view all HWLs in each theme and rank them in the order of overall perceived effectiveness, from the most to the least effective. To aid judgment of effectiveness, participants were asked to consider in their decision the effect of the HWLs in terms of attention (notice, general design); communication (clarity, understandability, believability); and effect (harm perception, intention to quit).

Focus group discussion

Focus group discussions entailed four 15- to 20-minute segments (one per theme). Each segment began with a PowerPoint presentation about the health effects of WP use relevant to the segment’s theme, followed by a discussion of each HWL in that theme. The PowerPoint presentation was provided to generate basic and common knowledge about WP’s harmful effects among participants. This knowledge can facilitate the group discussion around available evidence of WP health effects and related HWLs to which they will be exposed. Group discussions were guided by a semi-structured script based on the Message Impact Framework, which is based on communication [25, 26] and health behavior theories [27] and has been applied successfully in cigarette HWL research [14]. According to this model, focus group discussion focused on participants’ perceptions of each HWL in terms of (1) attention (attraction, notice, engagement, general design); (2) emotional reaction (fear, believability, avoidance); (3) effect (harm perception, addictiveness perception, intention to quit, intention not to initiate WP use); (4) recommendation for improvement (relatedness to participants, message clarity, language level and synergy with pictorials); and (5) optimal placement (size and visibility of HWLs for each component—tobacco, device, charcoal) [14]. The discussion guide and the baseline assessment are provided in the supplement.

Analysis

For the HWLs’ rating and ranking analyses, the descriptive statistical analysis was conducted using SPSS software, version 21 (Version 21.0. Armonk, NY: IBM Corp) (Table 2). Analysis of the differences in the HWLs’ ratings and rankings was stratified by WP use status (WP users vs. nonusers) and by gender (male vs. female) (Table 3). We stratified by gender because WP use prevalence, patterns, risk perceptions, and attitudes are different by gender in EMR, and because women have specific health concerns related to WP use effects on their offspring [28]. While “rating” indicates the mean index effectiveness, the “ranking” indicates the respondents’ percentage ranking of the best HWL in each theme. Internal consistency of each HWL across the four outcomes of the rating assessment was conducted using Cronbach’s alpha. The latter was demonstrated to be very high (Cronbach’s alpha range 0.88–0.94) for all HWLs, so a mean effectiveness index was computed using the four measures [29]. The top-ranked HWL was identified for each theme by calculating percentages of participants’ endorsement of HWLs in each theme. The Freidman test was used to compare effectiveness scores of HWLs per theme in each group, and Wilcoxon signed-rank test post hoc using Bonferroni correction for multiple comparisons (at p < 0.05) to examine pairwise significant differences between label effectiveness within each theme [24]. The Mann-Whitney U test was used to examine differences in HWL effectiveness ratings between WP users and WP nonusers and between females and males.

Focus groups were audio-recorded and transcribed verbatim and then translated into English in a 3-step quality control method comprising: 1) translating a completed translation back into Arabic, 2) comparing that new translation with the original text, and 3) reconciling any meaningful differences between the two [30]. Data from focus group discussions were analyzed thematically using Miner 4 Lite software (QDA Miner 4 Lite, Provalis Research) [31]. Two research team members independently reviewed transcripts and developed a consensus plan to identify recurring themes and variants for pre-defined codes within the framework of qualitative content analysis [32].

The coding of participants was stratified based on WP use status (users, nonuser) and proceeded deductively from theoretical constructs used in the main categories (reaction, harm perception, intention to quit or not to initiate WP, and improvement). Meaning units (quotes) were grouped under their respective constructs (main categories), and summaries were drafted. A second coder reviewed the summaries and compared them to the data. Differences were resolved through peer debriefing [33]. The coding of participants’ recommendations for HWL changes proceeded inductively, allowing for new main categories to emerge. The constant comparative method was used to identify patterns in the data and refine the categories [34]. Our frequent peer debriefing sessions included questioning each other’s interpretations of responses from several perspectives: ethnic and social backgrounds, personal histories, and whether and to what extent our characteristics, prior experiences, and knowledge influenced our interpretations of the data. Where potentially biased interpretations arose, we assessed the fitness of meaning units (quotes) to their main categorization and preliminary codes [3537]. This process was conducted iteratively as data analysis progressed.

Results

Participants’ characteristics

Overall, 63 young adults participated in 10 focus groups (5 groups of users, 5 groups of nonusers). Among these, 50.8% were females and 36.5% were WP users. Nearly 47.8% of WP users perceived WP as less addictive than cigarettes, 56.5% reported using WP “just for fun,” and 61% had no plan to quit WP use. Among nonusers, 46.3% reported that the main reason for not using WP is its harmful health effects, and 34.1% stated they were opposed to all types of smoking (Table 1).

Table 1. Sociodemographic characteristics and waterpipe (WP) use attitudes and perceptions stratified by WP use status.

All n = 63 WP users n = 23 Nonusers n = 40
Gender
 Females 32 (50.8) 11 (34.4) 21 (65.6)
 Males 31 (49.2) 12 (38.7) 19 (61.3)
Age
 18–20 20 (31.7) 11 (55.0) 9 (45.0)
 21–25 18 (28.6) 9 (50.0) 9 (50.0)
 26–30 20 (31.7) 3 (13.0) 17 (42.5)
 >30 5 (7.9) --- 5 (12.5)
Education
 Undergraduate degree 13 (20.6) 6 (46.2) 7 (53.8)
 Graduate degree 46 (73) 16 (34.8) 30 (65.2)
 High school 4 (6.3) 1 (25.0) 3 (75.0)
Current cigarette smoker (yes) 28 (44.4) 20 (71.4) 8 (28.6)
Perception of WP addiction compared to cigarettes
 Less addictive 18 (47.4) 11 (50) 7 (43.8)
 Equally addictive 9 (23.7) 5 (22.7) 4 (25)
 More addictive 9 (23.7) 6 (27.3) 3 (18.8)
 Don’t know 2 (5.3) --- 2 (12.5)
Perception of WP harms compared to cigarettes
 Less harmful 2 (9.1) 2 (11.1) --
 Equally harmful 6 (27.3) 5 (27.8) 1 (25)
 More harmful 11 (50) 8 (44.4) 3 (75)
 Don’t know 3 (13.6) 3 (16.7) --
Reasons for not using WP *
 Unhealthy --- --- 19 (46.3)
 Smells bad --- --- 3 (7.3)
 Makes me dizzy --- --- 4 (9.8)
 I am against WP use --- --- 14 (34.1)
Age of WP initiation **
 14–18 --- 12 (54.5) ---
 19–25 --- 7 (31.8) ---
 26–34 --- 3 (13.6) ---
Reason to use the WP **
 Relax me --- 4 (17.4) ---
 Pass time --- 13 (56.5) ---
 My friends smoke -- 3 (13.0) ---
 My family smoke --- 1 (4.3) ---
Own WP at home **
 Yes --- 7 (30.4) ---
 No --- 16 (69.9) ---
Planning to quit WP use **
 Within the next month --- 4 (22.2) ---
 Sometimes after 6 months --- 5 (27.8) ---
 Not planning to quit --- 9 (50.0) ---

* Not WP users;

** WP users

HWLs ratings

Top-rated HWLs within each theme were consistent across the four primary outcomes (harm perception, motivation to quit, preventing WP initiation, and overall effectiveness) (Table 2). The top-rated HWLs for the overall mean effectiveness score were T4-HWL13 “As with cigarettes, hookah can cause oral cancer” (Mean = 3.21 [38]) followed by T2-HWL5 “WP use during pregnancy can harm your baby” (2.92 [0.85]), T1-HWL1 “Chemicals in WP smoke can cause oral cancer” (2.90 [0.77]), and T1-HWL2 “Chemicals in WP smoke can cause lung cancer” (2.82 [0.76]) (Table 3). Only T4-HWL13 was significantly rated the highest within its theme (p = 0.02) (Table 3). In addition, males significantly rated three HWLs in Them 1 higher than females (T1-HWL1: oral cancer, p = 0.032; T1-HWL2: lung cancer, p = 0.010; T1-HWL4: the addictive nature of WP, p = 0.002). No statistically significant differences were found based on WP use status (Table 3).

Table 2. Health warning labels rating on harm perception, intention to quit waterpipe, intention to not initiate waterpipe use, and overall effectiveness stratified by themes and waterpipe use.

Labels Harm perception Mean (SD) Intention to quit WP Mean (SD) Intention to not initiate WP Mean (SD) Overall effectiveness Mean (SD)
All user Nonuser All user Nonuser All user Nonuser All user Nonuser
Theme 1: WP Health Effects
T1-HWL1 Chemicals in hookah can cause oral cancer. 3.05 (0.80) 2.81 (0.75) 3.18 (0.81) 2.92 (0.86) 2.67 (0.85) 3.05 (0.84) 2.87 (1.02) 2.71 (1.05) 2.95 (1.01) 2.79 (0.85) 2.52 (0.92) 2.93 (0.79)
T1-HWL2 Chemicals in hookah can cause lung cancer. 2.90 (0.79) 2.82 (0.90) 2.95 (0.72) 2.87 (0.88) 2.82 (0.90) 2.90 (0.88) 2.72 (1.00) 2.64 (1.13) 2.77 (0.93) 2.80 (0.85) 2.68 (0.94) 2.87 (0.80)
T1-HWL3 Hookah smoking causes skin wrinkles; When you smoke, it shows. 2.54 (0.93) 2.59 (0.90) 2.51 (0.94) 2.49 (0.94) 2.55 (0.85) 2.46 (0.99) 2.41 (1.00) 2.36 (1.00) 2.44 (1.02) 2.56 (0.90) 2.59 (0.90) 2.54 (0.91)
T1-HWL4 Hookah is so addictive; you will keep smoking even after it makes you seriously ill. 2.70 (0.92) 2.64 (0.95) 2.74 (0.92) 2.67 (0.87) 2.64 (0.84) 2.68 (0.90) 2.72 (0.97) 2.91 (1.06) 2.61 (0.91) 2.68 (0.93) 2.68 (1.04) 2.68 (0.87)
Theme 2: WP Harm to Others
T2-HWL5 Hookah smoking during pregnancy can harm your baby. 3.12 (0.93) 3.00 (1.04) 3.19 (0.85) 2.98 (0.99) 2.91 (1.04) 3.03 (0.97) 2.53 (1.05) 2.57 (0.94) 2.50 (1.13) 3.07 (0.92) 3.22 (0.95) 2.97 (0.91)
T2-HWL6 Hookah smoking during pregnancy can harm your baby. 2.93 (0.81) 2.90 (0.71) 2.95 (0.86) 2.83 (0.84) 2.75 (0.71) 2.87 (0.90) 2.45 (1.02) 2.35 (0.74) 2.50 (1.15) 2.83 (0.97) 2.75 (0.96) 2.87 (0.99)
T2-HWL7 Hookah smoke can harm your children. 3.05 (0.80) 3.05 (0.72) 3.05 (0.85) 2.79 (0.91) 2.64 (0.90) 2.87 (0.92) 2.43 (1.00) 2.55 (0.96) 2.36 (1.03) 2.87 (0.86) 2.77 (0.81) 2.92 (0.90)
T2-HWL8 Hookah smoking during pregnancy can lead to small babies. 2.97 (0.82) 2.91 (0.73) 3.00 (0.88) 2.93 (0.82) 2.87 (0.62) 2.97 (0.92) 2.45 (1.08) 2.48 (0.94) 2.43 (1.16) 2.83 (0.86) 2.78 (0.85) 2.86 (0.88)
Theme 3: WP Specific Harms
T3-HWL9 Sharing hookah can spread mouth disease. 2.85 (0.94) 2.68 (1.08) 2.95 (0.85) 2.66 (1.01) 2.64 (1.09) 2.67 (0.98) 2.72 (1.08) 2.55 (1.18) 2.82 (1.02) 2.77 (1.05) 2.59 (1.22) 2.87 (0.95)
T3-HWL10 Burning charcoal in Hookah produces cancer causing chemicals. 2.74 (0.94) 2.65 (0.93) 2.79 (0.96) 2.70 (0.98) 2.74 (1.01) 2.68 (0.98) 2.64 (1.03) 2.52 (0.99) 2.71 (1.06) 2.62 (1.03) 2.65 (1.07) 2.61 (1.02)
T3-HWL11 The water in the hookah does not filter out toxins. 2.14 (0.98) 2.10 (0.99) 2.16 (0.98) 1.98 (0.92) 1.81 (0.87) 2.08 (0.95) 2.07 (1.02) 1.86 (1.01) 2.19 (1.02) 1.98 (0.96) 1.86 (1.01) 2.05 (0.94)
T3-HWL12 Smoking Hookah can spread infectious disease. 2.45 (0.90) 2.45 (0.94) 2.45 (0.89) 2.34 (0.84) 2.35 (0.87) 2.34 (0.84) 2.40 (1.07) 2.35 (1.13) 2.42 (1.05) 2.34 (0.90) 2.25 (1.02) 2.39 (0.85)
Theme 4: WP Harm Compared to Cigarette
T4-HWL13 As with cigarettes, hookah can cause oral cancer. 3.36 (0.81) 3.19 (0.92) 3.46 (0.73) 3.21 (0.81) 3.19 (0.92) 3.22 (0.75) 3.07 (0.93) 3.00 (1.04) 3.11 (0.65) 3.21 (0.81) 3.1 (1.04) 3.27 (0.65)
T4-HWL14 Both cigarettes and hookah cause heart disease. 2.88 (0.79) 3.00 (0.79) 2.82 (0.80) 2.72 (0.83) 2.85 (0.81) 2.66 (0.84) 2.79 (0.93) 2.90 (0.91) 2.74 (0.95) 2.72 (0.91) 2.60 (0.99) 2.79 (0.87)
T4-HWL15 Hookah smokers inhale about 100 times more smoke than cigarette smokers. 2.90 (0.90) 2.91 (0.81) 2.89 (0.96) 2.75 (0.95) 2.82 (0.79) 2.70 (1.05) 2.63 (0.96) 2.41 (0.85) 2.76 (1.01) 2.76 (1.04) 2.59 (1.00) 2.86 (1.05)
T4-HWL16 Hookah sickness is carbon monoxide poisoning. 2.99 (0.86) 2.43 (0.87) 2.79 (0.84) 2.39 (0.83) 2.19 (0.75) 2.50 (0.86) 2.46 (1.03) 2.43 (1.07) 2.47 (1.00) 2.49 (0.91) 2.29 (0.95) 2.61 (0.88)

*Participants were instructed to view each label and rate it on a 5-point Likert-type scale (from 1 = strongly disagree to 5 = strongly agree) for each outcome.

Table 3. Differences in the HWLs rating in terms of overall effectiveness stratified by gender and by waterpipe use status (users vs. nonusers).

Differences in effectiveness score by gender Differences in effectiveness score by WP use status
All Mean (SD) Male Mean (SD) Female Mean (SD) All Mean (SD) Users Mean (SD) Nonusers Mean (SD)
Theme 1: WP Health Effects
T1-HWL1 Chemicals in hookah can cause oral cancer. 2.90 (0.77) b 3.15 (0.70) 2.67 (0.79) 2.90 (0.77) 2.67 (0.73) 3.02 (0.78)
T1-HWL2 Chemicals in hookah can cause lung cancer. 2.82 (0.76) b 3.09 (0.68) 2.58 (0.77) 2.82 (0.76) 2.73 (0.84) 2.87 (0.72)
T1-HWL3 Hookah smoking causes skin wrinkles; When you smoke, it shows. 2.50 (0.84) 2.43 (0.95) 2.56 (0.73) 2.50 (0.84) 2.52 (0.80) 2.48 (0.87)
T1-HWL4 Hookah is so addictive; you will keep smoking even after it makes you seriously ill. 2.69 (0.84) b 3.02 (0.79) 2.36 (0.78) 2.69 (0.84) 2.71 (0.85) 2.67 (0.84)
Theme 2: WP Harm to Others
T2-HWL5 Hookah smoking during pregnancy can harm your baby. 2.92 (0.85) 1.03 (0.98) 2.82 (0.69) 2.92 (0.85) 2.92 (0.88) 2.92 (0.84)
T2-HWL6 Hookah smoking during pregnancy can harm your baby. 2.75 (0.82) 2.83 (0.96) 2.68 (0.69) 2.75 (0.82) 2.68 (0.63) 2.79 (0.91)
T2-HWL7 Hookah smoke can harm your children. 2.79 (0.77) 2.77 (0.92) 2.80 (0.62) 2.79 (0.77) 2.75 (0.69) 2.80 (0.82)
T2-HWL8 Hookah smoking during pregnancy can lead to small babies. 2.78 (0.79) 2.93 (0.79) 2.67 (0.79) 2.78 (0.79) 1.76 (0.63) 2.81 (0.88)
Theme 3: WP Specific Harms
T3-HWL9 Sharing hookah can spread mouth disease. 2.75 (0.94) 2.77 (1.04) 2.72 (0.86) 2.75 (0.79) 2.61 (1.06) 2.82 (0.88)
T3-HWL10 Burning charcoal in Hookah produces cancer causing chemicals. 2.67 (0.92) 2.89 (0.95) 2.46 (0.85) 2.67 (0.92) 2.64 (0.88) 2.69 (0.95)
T3-HWL11 The water in the hookah does not filter out toxins. 2.04 (0.88) 2.25 (0.98) 1.85 (0.75) 2.04 (0.88) 1.90 (0.85) 2.12 (0.90)
T3-HWL12 Smoking Hookah can spread infectious disease. 2.75 (0.94) 2.77 (1.04) 2.72 (0.86) 2.75 (0.94) 2.61 (1.06) 2.82 (0.77)
Theme 4: WP Harm Compared to Cigarette
T4-HWL13 As with cigarettes, hookah can cause oral cancer. 3.21 (0.74) 3.41 (0.56) 3.00 (0.85) 3.21a (0.74) 3.11 (0.87) 3.26 (0.66)
T4-HWL14 Both cigarettes and hookah cause heart disease. 2.78 (0.76) 2.97 (0.80) 2.59 (0.69) 2.78 (0.76) 2.83 (0.76) 2.75 (0.77)
T4-HWL15 Hookah smokers inhale about 100 times more smoke than cigarette smokers. 2.75 (0.89) 2.90 (0.96) 2.62 (0.82) 2.75 (0.89) 2.68 (0.77) 2.80 (0.96)
T4-HWL16 Hookah sickness is carbon monoxide poisoning. 2.50 (0.82) 2.53 (0.89) 2.46 (0.79) 2.50 (0.82) 2.33 (0.79) 2.59 (0.83)

a The overall effectiveness rating represents the mean score of four effectiveness domains including harm perception, intention to quit, preventing initiating WP use, and HWL’s overall effectiveness on other people.

b p value <0.05 indicates a significant difference between the two comparison groups (males vs. females, or WP users vs. nonusers) after applying Mann Whitney test.

HWLs rankings

The top ranked HWLs for perceived overall effectiveness were T3-HWL9 “Sharing WP can spread mouth disease” (87.5%), followed by T4-HWL13 “As with cigarettes, WP can cause oral cancer” (60.0%), T1-HWL1 “Chemicals in WP smoke can cause oral cancer” (57.1%), and T2-HWL7 “WP smoke can harm your children” (42.1%) (Table 4).

Table 4. Health warning labels ranking in each theme ordered from the top to the least ranked (%).

Theme 1: WP Health Effects 57.1 19.0 14.3 9.5
T1-HWL1
Chemicals in hookah can cause oral cancer.
T1-HWL2
Chemicals in hookah can cause lung cancer.
T1-HWL4
Hookah is so addictive; you will keep smoking even after it makes you seriously ill.
T1-HWL3
Hookah smoking causes skin wrinkles; When you smoke, it shows.
Theme 2: Harm to Others 42.1 26.3 15.8 15.8
T2-HWL7
Hookah smoke can harm your children.
T2-HWL6
Hookah smoking during pregnancy can harm your baby.
T2-HWL5
Hookah smoking during pregnancy can harm your baby.
T2-HWL8
Hookah smoking during pregnancy can lead to small babies.
Theme 3: WP Specific Harms 87.5 12.5 --- ---
T3-HWL9
Sharing hookah can spread mouth disease.
T3-HWL11
The water in the hookah does not filter out toxins.
T3-HWL12
Smoking Hookah can spread infectious disease.
T3-HWL10
Burning charcoal in Hookah produces cancer causing chemicals.
Theme 4: Comparison to Cigarette 60.0 20.0 13.3 6.7
T4-HWL13
As with cigarettes, hookah can cause oral cancer.
T4-HWL14
Both cigarettes and hookah cause heart disease.
T4-HWL16
Hookah sickness is carbon monoxide poisoning.
T4-HWL15
Hookah smokers inhale about 100 times more smoke than cigarette smokers.

Focus groups

Below we report the main results for each HWL according to the four themes.

Theme 1—WP health effects

T1-HWL1: Chemicals in hookah can cause oral cancer. Most participants found the text clear and provided “important information to know” (user). This HWL was found by most participants to provoke strong emotions and to be the most effective in this theme because it is “shocking, frightening and disgusting” (nonuser), and “it concerns the person’s physical appearance, inspires people’s curiosity and invites them to think about WP effects” (nonuser). However, some participants reported that because it is “too disgusting, people will avoid looking at the warning” (nonuser). Users, on the other hand, doubted the label’s credibility and thought that “this could happen only to heavy WP users” (user).

T1-HWL2: Chemicals in hookah can cause lung cancer. This HWL was seen by most participants as outdated because “the text message is too much consumed, and the photo is very well known, so it is no longer attractive” (nonuser). users, in particular, felt that this label is ineffective because “it is specific to heavy users who are over 40 years, not for young WP users” and that “unconsciously, people would think that this could happen to others, but not for them”.

T1-HWL3: Hookah smoking causes skin wrinkles; When you smoke, it shows. This HWL was judged by many participants as “not credible, because wrinkles may not be related to WP use” and that “the picture with make-up has diluted the value of the warning” (user). Besides, males felt this HWL would not be practical because this side effect is “not important for males” (nonuser).

T1-HWL4: Hookah is so addictive; you will keep smoking even after it makes you seriously ill. The picture in this HWL, a man smoking through tracheotomy as an indicator of addiction, was seen as vague, “…unclear and not easy to understand” (nonuser). In addition, some participants with a medical education background doubted its credibility because it is “too much exaggeration, you cannot keep smoking at such an advanced stage of the disease!” (nonuser).

Theme 2—WP Harm to others

T2-HWL5: Hookah smoking during pregnancy can harm your baby. Although some participants found the picture of an intubated newborn baby “attractive and successful” and touching because “you feel that the baby is in a critical situation” (nonuser), others felt that this HWL is “very specific to pregnant women” (user). In addition, female participants found the HWL provocative and recommended: “avoid using baby’s pictures to convey a health message” (user). Some participants also found that the text was not congruent with the picture because it was unclear: “How does maternal WP use affect the fetus in the picture?" (user).

T2-HWL6: Hookah smoking during pregnancy can harm your baby. This HWL was generally considered simple but ineffective in evoking emotions because “the message is purely scientific; it is not touching nor frightening” (nonuser). This explains why the effectiveness of this HWL was called into question: “It will not be effective in motivating a pregnant woman to quit WP use” (user).

T2-HWL7: Hookah smoke can harm your children. There was a consensus among participants that this HWL is very well designed and that “the black background is excellent, making it very attractive” (user). Guilt feelings were particularly stressed by nonuser females because “[they] felt sorry for the boy who is a victim of his own parents.” On the other hand, some participants considered this HWL to lack believability: “The child seems sick more than being a victim of passive smoking” (nonuser). Overall, participants perceived this warning as not effective, in the sense that the message received is to “avoid WP use around your child, but not quit WP use” (nonuser).

T2-HWL8: Hookah smoking during pregnancy can lead to small babies. Although the picture in this HWL was seen as “attractive and touching” (nonuser), participants considered this HWL to lack believability: “The photo could be related to any other pregnancy complications" (nonuser). The HWL was also considered ineffective because “low birth weight can be corrected easily” (nonuser).

Theme 3—WP-specific harms

T3-HWL9: Sharing hookah can spread mouth disease. The message was perceived as “new” and “important to know that sharing the mouthpiece is dangerous” (user). Participants (mainly user) found the photo the most attractive and repugnant and described its appearance as “shocking, disgusting and attractive.” This HWL evoked fear and was considered “…very serious as it could happen even to light users” (nonuser). However, others perceived this HWL as ineffective and sending the wrong message by “discouraging sharing WP rather than discouraging WP use” because “the first thing that comes to mind is that changing the mouthpiece will solve the problem” (user). Nevertheless, many nonuser females were not familiar with the WP components and asked, “what does the word ‘mouthpiece’ mean?” (nonuser).

T3-HWL10: Burning charcoal in Hookah produces cancer causing chemicals. This HWL was seen as the least effective in this theme and sending the wrong message because the picture of the WP is attractive and very “good looking,” to the extent that it was judged by one participant as “not effective in motivating people to stop WP use, and in contrast, it might encourage young people to try WP use” (user). Furthermore, the wording in the text was not clear and was “kind of making a scientific statement, which is hard to understand by ordinary people” (user).

T3-HWL11: The water in the hookah does not filter out toxins. Participants felt that the picture was unclear because “it is hard to distinguish the skull inside the bowl” (user). Several participants also mentioned that the picture “is attractive” and creates a favorable reaction to WP use. A user participant said, “the picture reminds me of a glass of lemonade.” In addition, most participants were skeptical about the effectiveness of the HWL and thought that “this message won’t be effective in making people stop WP use” (nonuser).

T3-HWL12: Sharing hookah can spread mouth disease. Participants were doubtful about the credibility and potential of this HWL because in their opinion, “the picture is not shocking, so it can’t be attractive” (user) and “herpes is a benign and curable lesion and it can happen to anyone, regardless of WP use” (user). For that reason, this HWL was perceived as “not effective in encouraging people to stop WP use” (user).

Theme 4—WP harm compared to cigarettes

T4-HWL13: As with cigarettes, hookah can cause oral cancer. This HWL was considered “new, clear and provides important information,” and that "comparing WP with cigarettes health effects is useful because most people generally underestimate the risk of WP use" (nonuser). According to a WP users participant, this HWL induced strong emotions—“shocking, but successful”—because “the picture is showing a disease that affects the physical appearance, which is more fearful than a picture of a damaged organ” (user). On the other hand, some participant felt that “the picture is very gruesome to the extent that people will try to avoid looking at the warning” (nonuser). One WP user was in denial and questioned the credibility of the HWL because “it is relevant only to heavy users so it will not make people stop WP use.”

T4-HWL14: Both cigarettes and hookah cause heart disease. Although this HWL did not arouse emotions and was deemed as “not touching,” and not informative because “it is very well known” (user), it was perceived as effective: “This warning presents a sudden heart attack …. it is a reminder that this can happen to anyone, especially those who are at risk for this disease” (user). Another participant indicated that “the brutality of this event ‘heart attack,’ is frightening, unlike cancer, which have long latency period” (user).

T4-HWL15: Hookah smokers inhale about 100 times more smoke than cigarette smokers. This HWL was seen as not credible and an exaggeration: “Having such a huge difference in nicotine content between cigarettes and WP—100 times—decreases the warning credibility” (user). Participants also felt that “the picture is attractive and touching; however, it is not well connected to the text” (nonuser), which directly impacted their perceived effectiveness: “… So people will not be convinced to change their behaviors and stop WP use” (nonuser).

T4-HWL16: Hookah sickness is carbon monoxide poisoning. This HWL was found to lack believability: “Not credible! Headache does not reflect exactly CO intoxication" and "the picture does not really correspond to CO intoxication” (nonuser). Adding to this, a user indicated that “the message could be taken as advice to smoke in an open space to prevent exposure to CO rather than stopping WP use” (user).

Participants’ suggestions for HWLs improvement

Overall, most participants suggested that the message must be affirmative and should avoid the use of "may lead to" because it reduces the HWLs’ effectiveness in communicating the harmful effects of WP use. Using the Tunisian dialect for the HWLs’ text supported by scientific facts was also recommended for all HWLs to improve comprehension. They also recommended improving the clarity of the pictures. Some male participants suggested adding HWLs related to WP use’s effect on men’s sexual performance. Participants did not specify a preference for the best placement for the HWLs on WP components (tobacco, device, charcoal).

Discussion

Tobacco research in Tunisia suffers from significant knowledge gaps. Despite the rise in WP use prevalence, research has not covered this important trend adequately and robustly. This study reports on the second phase of an international project aimed at helping Tunisia in developing and implementing WP-specific HWLs and provides the needed information to bridge this gap. Using a mixed-method approach, we involved young adults in a brief survey combined with focus group discussion to evaluate and adapt a battery of WP-specific pictorial HWLs to Tunisia’s specific cultural context. Our results indicated that HWLs showing external health effects, such as oral cancer and orally transmitted diseases, and harmful effects of WP use on children were the top rated and ranked HWLs in terms of overall effectiveness. Focus group discussion results mirrored the rating and ranking results and helped further explain what elements of the HWLs were prominent in determining participants’ perceptions of effectiveness the HWLs and how to improve them. Mainly, HWLs that provoked strong emotions such as fear, disgust, and guilt were perceived more effective. The least rated HWLs were those illustrating scientific facts without showing a specific disease. Compared to females, males were more receptive to HWLs in Theme 1 “WP health effect and addictive nature.” Participants recommended improving the image’s quality, using Tunisian dialect and assertive statements, and avoiding the use of complex words to improve the HWL readability.

In our study, males more than females rated three HWLs in T1 “WP health effect” as effective, including oral cancer, lung cancer, and the addictive nature of WP. This could be explained by the higher prevalence rate and more intensive pattern of WP use among males compared to females in the EMR [38]. Males suffer from WP-related adverse health effects and dependence more than females, and therefore these warning messages are more relevant to them [38, 39]. However, in contrast to results from Western countries [40], no differences in participants’ reactions to the HWLs were detected based on their WP use status. It is important to mention here that fact that WP use is widespread in the Middle East and is socially acceptable as part of the culture and history of the region. The high level of nonusers’ exposure to the habit and social interaction between users and nonusers might create a shared perception of WP’s health effects [28, 41].

Images of external bodily damage (e.g., oral cancer) were deemed more effective than images of internal damaged organs (e.g., lung cancer). These results may reflect the younger age of our study group and their concern about their physical appearance. The fear of social stigma due to the deterioration of body image is consistently used to further increase cigarette HWLs’ effectiveness [42]. These findings mirror patterns in other countries concerning cigarette warnings [43, 44]. In addition, even though the use of children’s images on HWLs was considered a kind of “psychological manipulation” by young women who are human rights activists, guilt feelings were mainly expressed when exposed to an HWL showing a child victim of an asthma attack: “Children are victims of their own parents! This result is consistent with prior research in other countries in the EMR. A recent qualitative Jordanian study showed that a HWL displaying a child in distress was the most recalled within a set of 10 HWLs [45]. Another study among university students in three countries (Jordan, Egypt, and Palestine) showed that HWLs related to protecting children from exposure to WP smoke (“Protect your children: Don’t let them be exposed to WP smoke”) was the most effective in motivating WP users to quit [46]. This research emphasizes using HWLs with children’s pictures to target users in Arab countries in the EMR. Indeed, employing guilt is commonly used in social marketing [47] and would be further effective in the middle eastern cultural context, which remains collectivist and conservative in many aspects and prioritizes the family over the individual [48]. On the other hand, the lung cancer HWL was found by most participants as outdated due to its previous overuse on cigarette packages. This result suggests that wear-out effects of common HWL themes can take place and compromise HWLs’ effectiveness. Indeed, several studies on cigarette HWLs demonstrated that regular rotation and innovation of HWL design could improve efficacy and salience [49, 50].

The results of the HWLs’ ranking and rating based on overall perceived effectiveness echoed those from the focus group discussion. For example, the top-ranked HWLs (e.g., oral cancers, orally transmitted infections, and harm to children) were also perceived as the most effective during the focus group discussions, which validates and reaffirms the potential value of these HWLs in eliciting strong emotions (e.g., disgust, fear, and guilt). Similarly, HWLs that received the least effective rating (e.g. depicting CO poisoning) were also perceived as the least believable and effective during the focus group discussions. Participants indicated that these HWLs provoked poor reaction because they are didactic, illustrating scientific facts about vague chemicals (e.g., toxins) in WP or showing illnesses that are not dangerous and easy to treat, such as herpes. In contrast to this result, these HWLs were considered important and effective by tobacco control experts in our Delphi study (19), which highlights the importance of involving the target population in the development of HWLs [51].

We believe that the part of the discussion about ways to improve the HWLs was very informative for the adaptations we need to introduce in general, regardless of the HWL message and picture. For example, improving the image’s quality was a general recommendation to improve HWLs’ effectiveness. The tobacco firms seem to be aware of image quality for the effectiveness of HWLs since they have manipulated (by tinting, darkening, and fading) HWLs’ image quality on cigarette packs in Pakistan [52]. Concerning the text message, focus group participants suggested using statements that are more assertive (e.g., “WP use causes”) rather than “may lead to” or “can cause.” However, these recommendations need to be balanced with the level of evidence concerning these associations so we do not make assertions beyond what the evidence suggests [53]. In addition, the use of the Tunisian dialect was frequently suggested during focus group discussions. Finally, participants recommended avoiding using complex language that might hamper the message clarity, especially among vulnerable groups such as children [54]. Future research on developing new HWLs in the Middle East can benefit from using the “Arabic Readability Metric and Tool” to enhance the warning text readability [55, 56].

Our next research direction is to improve the HWLs’ design and content, based on our focus group study, and to further test them in a lab experiment [57]. We will work with a public health designer to fine-tune the HWLs based on participants’ feedback. The top-ranked four HWLs that were selected from each theme will then be produced in high quality for testing in a lab study [57], while the developed HWLs will be used to advocate for the adoption of HWLs policies and disseminate knowledge about WP harmful effects to people in Tunisia and other Arab countries [58]. In the final stage of our project, we will conduct a situation analysis of the local tobacco control policy environment in Tunisia to understand the local policy context, actors, as well as support for and barriers to HWLs policy implementation [59]. The situation analysis will involve two levels: 1) analysis of official documents related to national tobacco control policy to understand policy frameworks and processes, organizational structure, and stakeholders involved in tobacco control provision and implementation, and 2) semi-structured interviews with key informants including policymakers, café owners, WP users/nonusers, civil advocates, and the media. The situational analysis results will provide a clear roadmap for effective implementation of WP HWLs.

The strengths of this study stem from being guided by a theoretical model of message impact and its originality [14]. This is the first study in Tunisia and the North African region to develop a set of HWLs that are responsive to WP’s unique harm and users’ perceptions by using a participatory approach involving young adults. In addition, using a mixed method approach was essential to provide timely feedback, maximize resources and the reliability of results (triangulation analysis) [19, 20], and deepen our understanding of young adults’ perceived effectiveness of the HWLs and how to improve their design [60]. Including both users and nonusers and males and females helped comprehensively consider prevention and cessation outcomes. However, as with all qualitative research, our findings should be interpreted with caution due to the non-representativeness of the sample studied. There was a different age distribution by WP use status (users vs. nonusers). However, given the qualitative nature of the study, the narrow-targeted age group (18–34 years), and that we used the same recruitment methods for both groups, we do not anticipate this imbalance will affect our results.

Conclusions

The WHO-FCTC has recommended including pictorial HWLs in regulatory and policy action to protect the public [11, 61]. Tunisia remains way behind all other Arab countries on FCTC implementation. HWLs regulations for both cigarettes and WP have not yet been implemented [62]. The weakness of tobacco policies highlights the urgent need to strengthen tobacco control research in Tunisia to support and inform policymakers. This study reports on the second phase of an international project to develop and adapt WP-specific pictorial HWLs to the Tunisian context. Pictorial HWLs arousing strong emotions, with visible health consequences, and depicting harm to children represent a potential target for public health WP control efforts in Tunisia. In contrast, HWLs illustrating scientific facts or exposure to chemicals without tangible harm or disease communication were perceived to be the least effective. These results will inform the implementation of WP-specific HWLs within a comprehensive tobacco policy tailored to WP use specificity in Tunisia and other countries in the Eastern Mediterranean Region.

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Acknowledgments

Declarations: We declare that the work described here has not been published previously, that it is not under consideration for publication elsewhere, that its publication is approved by all authors and tacitly or explicitly by the responsible authorities where the work was carried out, and that, if accepted, it will not be published elsewhere in the same form, including electronically, in English or in any other language, without the written consent of the copyright-holder.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the paper and its Supporting information files.

Funding Statement

This work was supported by the National Health Institute and Fogarty International Center (R01TW010654). The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: Adapting waterpipe-specific pictorial health warning labels to the Tunisian context

using mixed method approach

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Due: July 21, 2022

The article describes the first study conducted in Tunisia regarding the effectiveness of 16 graphic health warning labels previously developed by an international Delphi study. Using a combination of surveys followed by focus groups, WP smoking and nonsmoking participants (n = 63 total, aged 18-34 years) rated and ranked the HWLs based on their perceived harm, quit motivation, and likelihood to prevent WP smoking initiation. HWLs with highest effectiveness included those showing oral cancers, orally transmitted diseases, and a sick child. Subsequent focus group discussion indicated that health effects impacting a person’s physical appearance and guilt feelings over exposing children to WP smoke were critical factors in effectiveness ranking. Suggestions for improvement to the HWLs effectiveness include using more direct language in local dialect for the text, and rotating images to avoid overexposure. The study provides important information about graphic HWLs for waterpipe in the Tunisian context that can be leveraged for effective tobacco control policy designed to reduce prevalence of WP use in the EMR. The focus group results are presented very well – it is very interesting to see the participant feedback for each warning label. However, methodological detail and strong recommendations based on the evidence obtained for addressing the stubborn perception that WP is a less harmful/less addictive form of combustible tobacco smoking are missing. Tables 2 and 3 are quite confusing and require revision for better clarity.

Recommendation: revise and resubmit

General criticism

The manuscript should be reviewed by a scientific editor: for example, words like “bowel” when “bowl” is meant, need to be corrected. Saying a participant was “in denial” is not a scientific statement, but instead a judgmental one, and should be removed.

Introduction

• Has Tunisia adopted any warnings for cigarettes or other tobacco? The background mentions that they have not implemented much from the FCTC, but it is unclear whether warnings are on cigarettes or other tobacco. It is mentioned in the conclusions, but perhaps it should be in the introduction?

• The authors mentioned that the labels were tailored to the culture. Please provide more detail on how this was done.

• Consider including results of the Adetona review:

Adetona O, Mok S, Rajczyk J, Brinkman MC, Ferketich AK. The adverse health effects of waterpipe smoking in adolescents and young adults: A narrative review. Tobacco Induced Diseases. 2021;19.

• What is meant by a “communication domain”?

• Please explain why T4-HWL16 is in the Comparison to Cigarette theme (Theme 4) – it seems to fit better in the “WP Specific Harms” (Theme 3).

Methods

• Please provide a rationale for the age range you targeted.

• Please provide a rationale for including nonsmokers in the study design.

• Please provide a rationale for stratifying by gender?

• What was the rationale for giving a presentation on the health effects of WP smoking? In practice, such additional information will not be provided when one views a warning label.

• It is unclear what people were actually asked in the discussion. The methods talk about the framework, but how the constructs were tapped is unknown. Please provide more detail.

• Qualitative coding methods are rather vague. Please provide more detail on what the researchers coded for.

Results

• There was a different age distribution by WP smoking status (nonsmokers had many more in the two upper age categories). Any comparisons between the groups could be impacted by age. Please discuss the impact of this or if it can be controlled for.

• The title for Table 2 should indicate what is being presented in the cells. Overall, the tables need to be revised to improve clarity. It’s also hard to map the label numbers to what is being portrayed.

• Please edit Table 2 to include the rating scale (1=strongly disagree, 5 = strongly agree) so that the table can be understood when it stands alone.

• For Table 3, the N (%) doesn’t make sense: what is in the cell is not N (%) (unless the percentages are all less than 1%). The ranking % in the last column is not clear. Please better clarify what is being presented.

• Please provide a better explanation of what the double asterisks footnote means in Table 3.

• Use of the word “theme” is assigned to both the HWL themes (1-4) and the rating categories (1-3). This is confusing. Suggest exclusively using “category” for the ratings.

• For better clarity, please make the terminology for the themes used in Figure 1 and the text in pages 13-16 identical.

• What does this statement mean?

As for placement of HWLs, participants did not report noticeable locations.

Discussion

• The cited study for the following sentence is inappropriate because it is a secondary analysis of the GYTS focusing on students aged 13-15 years old. Please revise

This could be explained by the higher prevalence rate and more intensive pattern of WP use among males compared to females in the EMR [27].

• Please provide a reference to support these statements:

Males suffer from WP-related negative health effects and dependence more than females, and therefore these warning messages are more relevant to them.

• The logic of why more males rated the addictive nature of WP label as more effective isn’t clear because the reader does not know if the participants are aware of this health disparity; in fact the study data indicate that over half of the participants believe WP smoking is less addictive than cigarette smoking. Please refine.

• The studies cited regarding overexposure of HWLs are cigarette smoking studies; thus they do not demonstrate anything for waterpipe. Since overexposure and rotation are important concepts for HWLs, please revise this language to be a recommendation in the face of what is known about cigarette HWLs.

• What is meant by “advanced language”? This may be a good place to cite the Flesch Readability scale to make your point.

Reviewer #2: This is a mixed methods design that examines how waterpipe tobacco smokers and nonsmokers rated and commented on several health warnings previously developed by the team. Overall, the strengths of this paper include: identifying further warnings that may ultimately be used in a specific geographic location; use of smokers and nonsmokers; providing insightful comments from the study participants both in terms of weaknesses, strengths, and ways to improve warning in various domains, and perhaps most importantly, showing how expert opinions diverge from the intended audience. With the said there are a few issues the authors may which to address. I note these below.

1. Would be useful to provide as supplemental materials the semi-structured script.

2. Any conjecture as to why smokers and nonsmokers do not differ in their evaluations. Also, it would be useful to state why we should focus on nonsmokers (e,g., to prevent uptake and/or susceptibility to use).

3. Describe future plans given that feedback was given as to how to improve the warnings.

4. Methodologically, the warnings were obtained using the Delphi approach. This seems reasonable. However, given the large discrepancies obtained, one wonders if there is another approach that may allow investigators to match what the target audience thinks more closely. For example, one suggestion is the mental models approach. Perhaps this can be added in the discussion section for ways to improve the development of hookah warnings.

Reviewer #3: In general, I found this to be a well-written paper on a relevant topic, that could have policy utility in Tunisia as well as in other countries with similar product use. I have a few minor suggestions for the text, and my main comment is that the specific warnings supported by this research, and the implications of this, should be made more explicit in the discussion and conclusions.

Minor points:

Would it be better to talk about water pipe users than smokers? This was somewhat confusing to me.

Is it possible to use more descriptive labels in tables 2 and 3 in order to make them more interpretable for the reader? If not, can the data be summarized and move the tables to appendix materials?

Its not clear how the stratification of focus group participants was used for comparison purposes in the focus group analysis.

Is there a way to more explicitly integrate findings from the rankings and the focus group discussion? In the discussion, it is mentioned that the rankings were confirmed during focus group discussions, but it is not clear how this assessment was made.

Findings from the focus groups are mentioned in the discussion that are not explored in the results section. The discussion should be considering interpretation of findings rather than a presentation of new information. How was the theoretical model called upon in the discussion?

Line 386, I believe that the authors meant qualitative – but qualitative research is usually not intended to be representative, as extrapolation from qualitative findings is not intended to be of this type.

In the conclusion section, it would be good to see what messages/HWL were supported by this research.

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


18 Oct 2022

Thank you for giving us the opportunity to submit a revised draft of our manuscript entitled “Adapting waterpipe-specific pictorial health warning labels to the Tunisian context using mixed method approach” for publication in PLOS ONE. We appreciate the time and effort that you and the reviewers have dedicated to providing your valuable feedback on our manuscript.

We provided a detailed point-by-point response to reviewers' comments at the bottom of this letter. Changes in the manuscript in response to reviewers' comments are highlighted in the marked copy of the manuscript.

We look forward to hearing from you in due time regarding our submission and to responding to any further questions and comments you may have.

Response to reviewers and editor

Reviewer 1

Introduction

1. Has Tunisia adopted any warnings for cigarettes or other tobacco? The background mentions that they have not implemented much from the FCTC, but it is unclear whether warnings are on cigarettes or other tobacco. It is mentioned in the conclusions, but perhaps it should be in the introduction.

Response: Tunisia has ratified the FCTC, but as in many other developing countries, HWLs policies are still not implemented in Tunisia (12, 16). However, in February 2022, supported by WHO and the FCTC Secretariat, the Ministry of Health in Tunisia intended to implement pictorial HWLs on the external packaging of tobacco products. We modified paragraph 2 in the introduction to verify this information. It reads now as:

“In response to the global tobacco epidemic, the WHO developed the Framework Convention on Tobacco Control (FCTC) to reduce the devastating health, social, environmental, and economic consequences of tobacco consumption by providing a framework for tobacco control measures to be implemented by its Parties at the national, regional and international levels (11). Article 11 of the WHO FCTC requires the implementation of pictorial health warning labels (HWLs) on WP tobacco products (12, 13). Pictorial HWLs have proven effective in communicating health risks associated with cigarettes and WP smoking (14, 15). A pilot lab experiment study conducted by Maziak et al. among WP smokers in the US showed that placing a pictorial HWL on the WP device compared to no HWL (control) reduced smokers’ positive experiences and exposure to exhaled carbon monoxide (16). Tunisia has ratified the FCTC, but as in many other developing countries, HWLs policies are still not implemented in Tunisia (13, 17). However, in February 2022, supported by WHO and the FCTC Secretariat, the Ministry of Health in Tunisia announced its intention to implement pictorial HWLs on the external packaging of tobacco products (18). This positive development underscores the need for research to optimize HWLs design and content to the Tunisian context.”

2. The authors mentioned that the labels were tailored to the culture. Please provide more detail on how this was done.

Response: The original labels developed in the Delphi study were not culturally adapted to the Tunisian context. The main purpose of the focus group study was to further optimize and adapt these labels to the Tunisian context based on the feedback of Tunisians. To clarify this, we added this information in the last paragraph of the introduction:

“Using a mixed method approach that combined a rating survey with focus groups (19), the current study aimed to optimize and adapt these HWLs to the Tunisian context, focusing on young adults, who have the highest WP smoking prevalence in Tunisia.”

3. Consider including results of the Adetona review: Adetona O, Mok S, Rajczyk J, Brinkman MC, Ferketich AK. The adverse health effects of waterpipe smoking in adolescents and young adults: A narrative review. Tobacco Induced Diseases. 2021;19.

Response: We added this information and cited Adetona et al (reference # 10) at the end of the first paragraph of the introduction:

“This increase is worrisome given accumulating evidence about the harmful effects of WP smoking on health, which in many aspects are similar to those of cigarettes (e.g., cancer, cardiovascular disease, respiratory disease, carbon monoxide poisoning) (8-10).”

4. What is meant by a “communication domain”?

Response: We apologize for the confusion. The “communication domains” referred to participants’ attitudes, feelings, beliefs, experiences, and reactions to the HWLs. We added this information for more clarification. The sentence reads now:

“While the rating and ranking analysis will provide a snapshot of the evaluation of HWLs’ effectiveness and help select and prioritize the top HWLs for further enhancement and development, focus group discussions will provide an in-depth understanding of participants’ attitudes, feelings, beliefs, experiences, and reactions to the HWLs and identify salient suggestions for further HWLs adaptation and improvements.”

5. Please explain why T4-HWL16 is in the Comparison to Cigarette theme (Theme 4) – it seems to fit better in the “WP Specific Harms” (Theme 3).

Response: T4-HWL16 “Hookah sickness is carbon monoxide poisoning” was listed in the WP-specific harm theme since it is related mostly to charcoal emissions which is unique to this tobacco use method and produces level of CO exposure not seen in other combustion tobacco products (Bhatnagar, A., et al., Water pipe (hookah) smoking and cardiovascular disease risk: a scientific statement from the American Heart Association. Circulation, 2019. 139(19): p. e917-e936; Asfar, T., et al., Delphi study among international expert panel to develop waterpipe-specific health warning labels. Tobacco Control, 2020. 29(2): p. 159-167).

Methods

6. Please provide a rationale for the age range you targeted.

Response: The focus on young adults was based on two factors. First, WP smoking prevalence in Tunisia is the highest among young adults (based on the WHO FCTC, 2020 Report - Core Questionnaire of the Reporting Instrument of WHO FCTC). Second, this age group is particularly at-risk in terms of WP initiation. According to the Tunisian Health examination survey, the average age of initiation in Tunisia is 18.5. We added this information in the “Participants and Recruitment” section to clarify our rationale:

“This age group was selected because it is at high risk of prevalence, initiation, and progression of WP use (4).”

7. Please provide a rationale for including nonsmokers in the study design.

Response: HWLs policies play an important role in reducing smoking rates by de-normalizing smoking and preventing smoking initiation in addition to encouraging quitting (Hammond, D., et al., Showing leads to doing: graphic cigarette warning labels are an effective public health policy. The European Journal of Public Health, 2006. 16(2): p. 223-224). Almost 60% of youth in Canada, the United Kingdom, and Australia reported that HWLs helped prevent them from initiating smoking (Green, A. C., et al. (2014). "Investigating the effectiveness of pictorial health warnings in Mauritius: findings from the ITC Mauritius survey." Nicotine & Tobacco Research 16(9): 1240-1247). Hence, we enrolled nonsmokers to optimize the effectiveness of the HWLs for preventing WP initiation.

We added this information, along with the two references, in the “Participants and Recruitment” section to clarify our rationale:

“In addition, given the important role of the HWLs regulations in preventing smoking initiation, including WP nonsmokers in the early stage of the HWLs development ensures maximizing their benefit for WP initiation prevention (24, 25).”

8. Please provide a rationale for stratifying by gender.

Response: We stratified by gender because WP smoking prevalence, pattern, risk perception, and attitude are different by gender in the EMR and because women have some unique smoking and health concerns (e.g., WP use effects on pregnancy) (e.g. Maziak, W., et al. "Gender and smoking status-based analysis of views regarding waterpipe and cigarette smoking in Aleppo, Syria." Preventive Medicine 38.4 (2004): 479-484). We believe that paying particular attention to the gender-based differences in perceptions and attitudes related to HWLs will inform their development. This information was added in the analysis section:

“We stratified by gender because WP smoking prevalence, patterns, risk perceptions, and attitudes are different by gender in EMR, and because women have specific health concerns related to smoking effects on their offspring (30).”

9. What was the rationale for giving a presentation on the health effects of WP smoking? In practice, such additional information will not be provided when one views a warning label.

Response: The main purpose of the PowerPoint presentation of WP health effects before the discussion was to create shared baseline information that can facilitate the discussion around available evidence of WP health effects and related messages to which they will be exposed. We have added this information in the “Procedure” section in the “focus group discussion” piece.

“The PowerPoint presentation was provided to generate basic and common knowledge about WP’s harmful effects among participants. This knowledge can facilitate the group discussion around available evidence of WP health effects and related HWLs to which they will be exposed.”

10. It is unclear what people were actually asked in the discussion. The methods talk about the framework, but how the constructs were tapped is unknown. Please provide more detail.

Response: We added this paragraph in the “Focus group discussion” section to provide more information about the questions:

“According to this model, focus group discussion focused on participants’ perceptions of each HWL in terms of (1) attention (attraction, notice, engagement, general design); (2) emotional reaction (fear, believability, avoidance); (3) effect (harm perception, addictiveness perception, intention to quit, intention not to initiate WP use); (4) recommendation for improvement (relatedness to participants, message clarity, language level and synergy with pictorials); and (5) optimal placement (size and durability of HWLs for each component - tobacco, device, charcoal) (15). The discussion guide and the baseline assessment are provided in the supplement.”

For more details, we also included the supplement's discussion guide and baseline assessment.

11. Qualitative coding methods are rather vague. Please provide more detail on what the researchers coded for.

Response: We added to the Analysis section this paragraph to describe the coding process:

“The coding of participants was stratified based on WP use status (users, nonuser) and proceeded deductively from theoretical constructs used in the main categories (reaction, harm perception, intention to quit or not to initiate WP, and improvement). Meaning units (quotes) were grouped under their respective constructs (main categories), and summaries were drafted. A second coder reviewed the summaries and compared them to the data. Differences were resolved through peer debriefing (35). The coding of participants' recommendations for HWL changes proceeded inductively, allowing for new main categories to emerge. The constant comparative method was used to identify patterns in the data and refine the categories (36). Our frequent peer debriefing sessions included questioning each other’s interpretations of responses from several perspectives: ethnic and social backgrounds, personal histories, and whether and to what extent our characteristics, prior experiences, and knowledge influenced our interpretations of the data. Where potentially biased interpretations arose, we assessed the fitness of meaning units (quotes) to their main categorization and preliminary codes (37-39). This process was conducted iteratively as data analysis progressed.”

Results

12. There was a different age distribution by WP smoking status (nonsmokers had many more in the two upper age categories). Any comparisons between the groups could be impacted by age. Please discuss the impact of this or if it can be controlled for.

Response: Given the qualitative nature of the study, the narrow-targeted age group (18–34 years), and that we used the same recruitment methods for both groups, we do not anticipate that the imbalance between WP smokers and non-smokers will affect our results. We addressed the reviewer’s concern by adding this information in the limitations section.

“There was a different age distribution by WP smoking status (smokers vs. nonsmokers). However, given the qualitative nature of the study, the narrow-targeted age group (18–34 years), and that we used the same recruitment methods for both groups, we do not anticipate this imbalance affected our results.”

13. The title for Table 2 should indicate what is being presented in the cells.

Response: We revised the title per the table content (communication outcomes). It reads now:

“Table 2. Health warning labels rating on harm perception, intention to quit waterpipe, intention to not initiate waterpipe use, and overall effectiveness stratified by themes and waterpipe use”

14. Please edit Table 2 to include the rating scale (1 = strongly disagree, 5 = strongly agree) so that the table can be understood when it stands alone.

Response: We added a footnote in table 2 to add the requested information as follows:

“*Participants were instructed to view each label and rate it on a 5-point Likert-type scale (from 1 = strongly disagree to 5 = strongly agree) for each outcome.”

15. Overall, the tables need to be revised to improve clarity. It’s also hard to map the label numbers to what is being portrayed.

Response: We changed the table format to improve its clarity. Mainly, we (1) used the English version of the labels and increased the labels’ size and resolution, (2) added a row to specify each theme, and (3) added the full acronym to the labels (e.g., HWL12 instead of L12) to be consistent with our report in the text.

16. For Table 3, the N (%) doesn’t make sense: what is in the cell is not N (%) (unless the percentages are all less than 1%). b) The ranking % in the last column is not clear. Please better clarify what is being presented.

Response: We apologize for the confusion. We clarified that we are reporting the mean and standard deviation in the table.

We also improved the format of the table as we did in table 2 (please see response #15), and we added this information to the table footnote:

“a The overall effectiveness rating represents the mean score of four effectiveness domains including harm perception, intention to quit, preventing initiating WP use, and HWL’s overall effectiveness on other people.”

17. In order to declutter table 3 and better illustrate the ranking results, we suggested a new figure (Figure 2).

Response: Great suggestion. We added a new table (Table 4) to illustrate the ranking results separately.

18. Please provide a better explanation of what the double asterisks footnote means in Table 3.

Response: The double asterisks means that the difference between the two comparison groups (males vs. females, or WP users vs. nonusers) is statistically significant after applying Mann Whitney test. We added this information to the table footnote:

“b p value <0.05 indicates a significant difference between the two comparison groups (males vs. females, or WP users vs. nonusers) after applying Mann Whitney test.”

19. Use of the word “theme” is assigned to both the HWL themes (1-4) and the rating categories (1-3). This is confusing. Suggest exclusively using “category” for the ratings.

Response: We reported the “Theme” in a separate row and listed only the rating category as requested.

20. For better clarity, please make the terminology for the themes used in Figure 1 and the text in pages 13-16 identical.

Response: We reviewed the results to ensure that our terminology for the themes and HWLs is consistent in the figure, tables, and text.

21. What does this statement mean? As for the placement of HWLs, participants did not report noticeable locations.

Response: As part of the focus group discussion about the HWLs improvement, we asked participants about the best placement for the HWLs on WP components (tobacco, device, or charcoal). However, participants did not specify a preference for the HWL placement. We changed the sentence for clarification. It reads now:

“Participants did not specify a preference for the best placement for the HWLs on WP components (tobacco, device, charcoal).”

Discussion

22. The cited study for the following sentence is inappropriate because it is a secondary analysis of the GYTS focusing on students aged 13-15 years old. Please revise: This could be explained by the higher prevalence rate, and more intensive pattern of WP use among males compared to females in the EMR [40].

Response: We thank the reviewer for careful editing. We cited a more appropriate reference that supports our cited data:

“Asfar, T., et al., Comparison of patterns of use, beliefs, and attitudes related to waterpipe between beginning and established smokers. BMC public health, 2005. 5(1): p. 1-9.”

23. Please provide a reference to support these statements:

Males suffer from WP-related adverse health effects and dependence more than females, and therefore these warning messages are more relevant to them.

Response: We provide two references to support our statement:

• Hamadeh RR, Lee J, Abu-Rmeileh NME, Darawad M, Mostafa A, Kheirallah KA, Yusufali A, Thomas J, Salama M, Nakkash R, Salloum RG. Gender differences in waterpipe tobacco smoking among university students in four Eastern Mediterranean countries. Tob Induc Dis. 2020 Dec 2;18:100. doi: 10.18332/tid/129266. PMID: 33299390; PMCID: PMC7720794.

• Asfar, T., et al., Comparison of patterns of use, beliefs, and attitudes related to waterpipe between beginning and established smokers. BMC public health, 2005. 5(1): p. 1-9.

24. The logic of why more males rated the addictive nature of the WP label as more effective isn’t clear because the reader does not know if the participants are aware of this health disparity; in fact, the study data indicate that over half of the participants believe WP smoking is less addictive than cigarette smoking. Please refine.

Response: The misperception that WP is less addictive than cigarettes among 50% of our participants doesn’t mean that they are not addicted to nicotine. This misperception is very common. Based on robust evidence that smoking prevalence and smoking intensity/frequency of both cigarette and WP among males in the Middle East is higher than in females, it is logical to conclude that the addiction theme is more relevant to men than women, given their personal experience with addiction.

25. The studies cited regarding overexposure of HWLs are cigarette smoking studies; thus they do not demonstrate anything for waterpipe. Since overexposure and rotation are important concepts for HWLs, please revise this language to be a recommendation in the face of what is known about cigarette HWLs.

Response: Good point. We revised the sentence to clarify that the research is related to HWL on cigarettes. It reads now:

“Indeed, several studies on cigarette HWLs demonstrated that a regular rotation and innovation of HWL design could improve its efficacy and salience (46, 47).”

26. What is meant by “advanced language”? This may be a good place to cite the Flesch Readability scale to make your point

Response: Excellent point. We apologize for using an unsuitable term. “Advanced language” refers to using complex and challenging language in the text. We added these sentences to verify this meaning. We also added the potential of using the Arabic version of the “Readability Test” to enhance the warning clarity.

“Finally, participants recommended avoiding using complex language that might hamper the message clarity, especially among vulnerable groups such as children (56). Future research on developing new HWLs in the Middle East can benefit from using the “Arabic Readability Metric and Tool” to enhance the warning text readability (57, 58).

57. El-Haj M, Rayson PE. OSMAN: A novel Arabic readability metric. 2016.

58. Nassiri N, Lakhouaja A, Cavalli-Sforza V, editors. Modern Standard Arabic readability prediction. International Conference on Arabic Language Processing; 2017: Springer.

Reviewer 2

1. Would be useful to provide as supplemental materials the semi-structured script.

Response: We appreciate this suggestion. We added the semi-structured script as supplemental materials, as requested.

2. Any conjecture as to why smokers and nonsmokers do not differ in their evaluations. Also, it would be useful to state why we should focus on nonsmokers (e.g., to prevent uptake and susceptibility to use).

Response: Good point. The similarity in the HWLs evaluation between WP users and nonusers could be explained by the fact that WP use is widespread in the Middle East and is socially acceptable as part of the culture and history of the region. The high level of nonusers’ exposure to the habit and social interaction between users and nonusers might create a shared perception of WP’s health effects.

Please see response # 7 for review 1 for the rationale to include nonsmokers.

We added this information for clarification:

“However, in contrast to results from Western countries (42), no differences in participants’ reactions to the HWLs were detected based on their WP smoking status. It is important to mention here that fact that WP use is widespread in the Middle East and is socially acceptable as part of the culture and history of the region. The high level of nonusers’ exposure to the habit and social interaction between users and nonusers might create a shared perception of WP’s health effects (29, 43).

3. Describe future plans given that feedback was given as to how to improve the warnings.

Response: Excellent point. We added this paragraph to provide an insight into our future plans:

“Our next research direction is to improve the HWLs' design and content, based on our focus group study, and to further test them in a lab experiment (59). We will work with a public health designer to fine-tune the HWLs based on participants’ feedback. The top-ranked four HWLs that were selected from each theme will then be produced in high quality for testing in a lab study (59), while the developed HWLs will be used to advocate for the adoption of HWLs policies and disseminate knowledge about WP harmful effects to people in Tunisia and other Arab countries (60). In the final stage of our project, we will conduct a situation analysis of the local tobacco control policy environment in Tunisia to understand the local policy context, actors, as well as support for and barriers to HWLs policy implementation (61). The situation analysis will involve two levels: 1) analysis of official documents related to national tobacco control policy to understand policy frameworks and processes, organizational structure, and stakeholders involved in tobacco control provision and implementation, and 2) semi-structured interviews with key informants including policymakers, café owners, WP smokers/nonsmokers, civil advocates, and the media. The situational analysis results will provide a clear roadmap for effective implementation of WP HWLs.”

4. Methodologically, the warnings were obtained using the Delphi approach. This seems reasonable. However, given the large discrepancies obtained, one wonders if there is another approach that may allow investigators to match what the target audience thinks more closely. For example, one suggestion is the mental model’s approach. Perhaps this can be added in the discussion section for ways to improve the development of hookah warnings.

Response: The main purpose of our focus group study was to optimize further the HWLs developed by experts in the Delphi study by involving the target population in the HWLs development process. This methodology is highly recommended in the guidelines for developing evidence-based HWLs for tobacco products. We clarified this point more in the discussion by adding this statement:

“In contrast, these HWLs were considered important and effective by tobacco control experts in our Delphi study (19). This highlights the importance of involving the target population in creating the HWLs as recommended by the guidelines for developing evidence-based HWLs (53).”

Reviewer 3

1. Would it be better to talk about water pipe users than smokers? This was somewhat confusing to me.

Response: Good point. Both terms are used in the waterpipe literature. We changed “smokers” to “users” throughout the manuscript.

2. Is it possible to use more descriptive labels in tables 2 and 3 in order to make them more interpretable for the reader? If not, can the data be summarized and moved the tables to the appendix materials?

Response: Please see our response # 15 to Reviewer 1. We improved the two tables by increasing the size of the labels. We also used high-resolution pictures to enhance their quality.

3. It’s not clear how the stratification of focus group participants was used for comparison purposes in the focus group analysis.

Response: The coding of participants was stratified based on WP use status (users, nonuser) Please see our response # 11 to reviewer 1, where we clarify this point.

4. Findings from the focus groups are mentioned in the discussion that are not explored in the results section. The discussion should consider the interpretation of findings rather than presenting new information. How was the theoretical model called upon in the discussion?

Responses: We listed our results and ensured that our discussion highlighted the important results.

5. Is there a way to integrate findings from the rankings and the focus group discussion more explicitly? In the discussion, it is mentioned that the rankings were confirmed during focus group discussions, but it is not clear how this assessment was made.

Responses: Excellent point. We added this paragraph to address this comment:

“The results of the HWLs’ ranking and rating based on overall perceived effectiveness echoed those from the focus group discussion. For example, the top-ranked HWLs (e.g., oral cancers, orally transmitted infections, and harm to children) were also perceived as the most effective during the focus group discussions, which validates and reaffirms the potential value of these HWLs in eliciting strong emotions (e.g., disgust, fear, and guilt). Similarly, HWLs that received the least effective rating (e.g. depicting CO poisoning) were also perceived as the least believable and effective during the focus group discussions. Participants indicated that these HWLs provoked poor reaction because they are didactic, illustrating scientific facts about vague chemicals (e.g., toxins) in WP or showing illnesses that are not dangerous and easy to treat, such as herpes. In contrast to this result, these HWLs were considered important and effective by tobacco control experts in our Delphi study (19), which highlights the importance of involving the target population in the development of HWLs (54).”

6. Line 386, I believe that the authors meant qualitative – but qualitative research is usually not intended to be representative, as an extrapolation from qualitative findings is not intended to be of this type.

Response: Correct. We changed the word “Quantitative” to “Qualitative.”

7. In the conclusion section, it would be good to see what messages/HWL were supported by this research.

Response: Excellent comment. We added this information in conclusions to specify the potential messages based on our results:

“Pictorial HWLs arousing strong emotions, with visible health consequences, and depicting harm to children represent a potential target for public health WP control efforts in Tunisia. In contrast, HWLs illustrating scientific facts or exposure to chemicals without tangible harm or disease communication were perceived to be the least effective.”

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