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. 2023 Apr 4;18(4):e0283957. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0283957

Unconsciousness and amnesia after cross-body electric shocks not involving the head–A prospective cohort study

Karin Biering 1,*, Anette Kærgaard 1, Ole Carstensen 1, Kent J Nielsen 1
Editor: James Mockridge2
PMCID: PMC10072343  PMID: 37014841

Abstract

Introduction

Little is known about how electrical current passes through the human body except that it follows the physical rule of least resistance. Whether organs remote from the shortest route of the current can be affected is unknown, as different types of tissue vary in resistance. This may explain why some people exposed to electrical injury report symptoms from the central nervous system (CNS). In this study, we examined the association between exposure to cross-body electrical current and immediate CNS symptoms.

Material and methods

In a prospective cohort study, we followed 6960 members of the Danish Union of Electricians for 26 weeks using weekly questionnaires. We identified 2356 electrical shocks, and for each shock we asked whether the exposure was cross-body or same-side. We excluded those who reported exposure to the head as well as those who could not report the entry and exit points of the current. We examined two outcomes: becoming unconscious or having amnesia of the event. We use percentages to describe the data and logistic regression to analyze the results.

Results

We found that unconsciousness and amnesia following electric shocks were rare events (0.6% and 2.2%, respectively). We found an increased risk of reporting unconsciousness and amnesia in those exposed to cross-body electrical shock exposure compared to those with same-side exposure (Odds Ratio 2.60[0.62 to 10.96] and Odds Ratio 2.18[0.87 to 5.48]).

Conclusion

Although the outcomes investigated are rare, we cannot rule out a possible effect on the CNS when persons are exposed to cross-body electrical current even though it does not pass through the head.

Introduction

Exposure to electrical current is known to affect the central nervous system (CNS) in terms of mental and cognitive problems following electrical injuries. Symptoms such as headache, migraine, concentration problems, memory problems and fatigue are frequently reported following exposure to electrical current [13]. Whether these symptoms are related to the physiological impact of the electrical current or are a reaction to the traumatic event is unknown [4]. Previous studies have often been retrospective, imposing a risk of selection bias and recall bias, and are based on populations recruited from burn units, which means that the injuries were typically rather severe.

Morse et al. describe the theoretical current pathway as the linear path from entry point to exit point, but they also refer to studies that report symptoms remote from this theoretical pathway [5]. The explanation for this could be that the current does not follow just the shortest linear line, but also follows other paths depending on the resistance in the tissue and the surface. Previous studies of current passing through the body in different paths have focused on ventricular fibrillation [6].

We examined the association between exposure to cross-body electrical current at entry points and exit points remote from the head and immediate CNS symptoms in an observational prospective study.

We hypothesize that if the current crosses the spinal cord, it may also affect the cerebrum and thus cause CNS symptoms.

Material and methods

Material

A prospective cohort study following 6960 members of the Danish Union of Electricians for 26 weeks from October 2019 using a weekly web-based questionnaire. Initially, a baseline questionnaire was answered covering health, working conditions and demographics. In the following 26 weeks, the electricians received a short questionnaire that covered health symptoms and asked them to report whether they had experienced electrical shock during the past week. If they had experienced a shock, the questionnaire provide space to include details regarding the shock (voltage, entry and exit points, severity, dry/wet conditions, physical injury, contact to health services, unconsciousness and amnesia). The data collection and a general description of the shocks are presented in Biering et al. 2021 [7].

Methods

We examined the association between cross-body exposure to the electrical current and the immediate impact on the CNS in terms of reporting loss of consciousness and amnesia among the electricians who had experienced shocks.

For each reported shock, cross-body exposure was identified through the question: “Did the current leave the body on the same or the opposite side of where it entered?” Answer categories were “same side” (non-exposed), “opposite side” (exposed) and “do not know”. We excluded those who answered “do not know- or had not answered and those where entry or exit point of the shock was reported as either “head” or “do not know” or was missing.

The outcome was defined based on the participants’ reporting of being unconscious or having amnesia of the event, under the assumption that this reflected the immediate impact on the CNS. We defined three different outcomes based on the following questions: “Did you lose consciousness in connection with the shock?” and “Did you experience amnesia in connection with the shock?” Answer categories were “yes”, “no” or “do not know” for both questions. The outcomes were unconsciousness, amnesia and a combination of unconsciousness and/or amnesia.

We used percentages to describe the data according to whether the shock resulted in the outcome or not. Furthermore, we used logistic regression to examine the association between the exposure and the outcomes. Results were presented as odds ratios with 95% confidence intervals. We conducted two additional analyses: one where we adjusted for self-reported severity, as we were in doubt whether severity could be a confounder (it could be a consequence if experiencing the outcome), and one where we included those who answered “do not know” to the questions regarding unconsciousness and amnesia because they may have experienced the outcomes but were not able to recall the event.

Each person could experience several shocks during follow-up, and we considered these events to be independent observations, although related to the same person.

Data was analyzed using Stata 17.0.

Ethics

The study was approved by the Danish Data protection Agency via Central Region Denmark #1-16-02-139-19. All participants gave written informed consent, prior to participation.

The Danish rules for which research projects that must be reported to a scientific ethics committee are clearly stated in The Committees Act. All health science studies are subject to notification, which means that every health science research project must be reported to the scientific ethics committee system, cf. §14 of the Committees Act. However, there are exceptions, cf. the Committees Act §14 subsection 2–5., which means that research projects, referred to in these exceptions, do not have to be reported to a scientific ethics committee. Questionnaire surveys are referred to in §14 subsection 2, where it states that questionnaire studies only have to be reported to the scientific ethics committee system, if the project includes human biological material. This implies that this study does not need to be reported to the committee.

Results

In total, 2356 electrical shocks were reported by 1612 electricians. Exclusion of electricians who were unable to provide information on the entry and exit points of the current left 1235 in the sample, 233 in the exposed group (cross-body shock) and 1002 in the non-exposed group (same-side shock). The most common entry point was hands/fingers (96%/n = 1180), and accordingly the most common exit point was also hands/fingers (79%/n = 973).

Both unconsciousness and amnesia were rare events among the electricians experiencing shocks (0.6%/n = 8 and 2.2%/n = 21). We found that all shocks that led to unconsciousness or amnesia were experienced by men (but very few female electricians participated in the study), and there was no clear pattern related to age. Same-side exposure was more common than cross-body exposure. Those who reported unconsciousness or amnesia often also reported that the shock was somewhat severe or worse (Table 1). Due to confidentiality issues, we do not report subgroups with less than five persons, and as only 27 persons reported unconsciousness/amnesia in connection with the shock, we could not report whether there were more shocks with high voltage, burn wounds, contact to emergency rooms and with no-let-go.

Table 1. Demographics and cross-body exposure to electrical current in relation to unconsciousness and amnesia in connection with electrical shock reported by Danish electricians (n = 1235).

Not affected CNS Affected CNS Subgroups of affected CNS
n = 1208 n = 27
Unconsciousness Amnesia
Male n (%) 1190 (98.5%) 27 (100.0%) 8 (100.0%) 21(100.0%)
Female n (%) 18 (1.5%) 0 (0.0%) 0 (0.0%) 0 (0.0%)
Age >40 years n (%) 469 (38.8%) 10 (37.0%) 2 (25.0%) 8 (38.1%)
Age ≤40 years n (%) 739 (61.2%) 17 (63.0%) 6 (75.0%) 13 (61.9%)
Somewhat severe or worse n (%) 51 (4.2%) 5 (18.5%) 3 (37.5%) 4 (19.0%)
Not severe or a little severe n (%) 1157 (95.8%) 22 (81.5%) 5 (62.6%) 17 (81.0%)
Cross-body exposure n (%) 224 (18.5%) 9 (33.3%) 3 (37.5%) 7 (33.3%)
Same-side exposure n (%) 984 (81.5%) 18 (66.7%) 5 (62.5%) 14 (66.7%)

*Affected CNS is a combination of reporting of unconsciousness and/or amnesia. Two persons reported both outcomes

We found an increased risk of reporting affected in those with cross-body exposure compared to those without CNS symptoms (OR: 2.20 [0.97 to 4.95] (Table 2). In this group there was a slightly higher estimate for unconsciousness (OR:2.60 [0.62 to 10.96]) than amnesia (OR:2.18 [0.87 to 5.48]). The estimates were slightly reduced when we adjusted for self-reported severity and if we included those who did not know/recall whether they experienced unconsciousness or amnesia in the outcomes (Table 2). The risk estimates were not statistically significant.

Table 2. Sensitivity analysis of the association between cross-body exposure and affected CNS in terms of unconsciousness and/or amnesia.

Affected CNS* Unconsciousness Amnesia
OR [95%CI] OR [95%CI] OR [95%CI]
Same-side exposure (reference) 1 1 1
Cross-body exposure 2.20 [0.97 to 4.95]. 2.60 [0.62 to 10.96] 2.18 [0.87 to 5.48]
Cross-body exposure adjusted for severity 1.67 [0.71 to 3.95]. 1.38 [0.30 to 6.28] 1.66 [0.63 to 4.40]
Cross-body exposure with inclusion of those uncertain of the outcome 1.68 [0.80 to 3.54]. 1.92 [0.59 to 6.31] 1.94 [0.83 to 4.53]

OR: Odds Ratio 95%CI: 95% confidence interval

Affected CNS*: Unconsciousness and/or amnesia

Discussion

In a prospective cohort study of 6960 Danish electricians, we identified 2356 electrical shocks during 6 months’ follow-up. Among the 1235 who had shocks that met the criteria for analysis in this study (sufficient data on the entry and exit points of the current), 1208 did not report symptoms from the CNS, whereas 27 did (eight with unconsciousness and 21 with amnesia, two reported both). We found that cross-body exposure to electrical current increased the risk of reporting symptoms from the CNS (OR: 2.20 [0.97 to 4.95]). Risk of reporting unconsciousness (OR: 2.60 [0.62 to 10.96]) was higher than that of reporting amnesia (OR: 2.18 [0.87 to 5.48]). This may indicate that electrical current passing through the human body between two contact points remote from the head and across the body can affect the CNS. To our knowledge, this is the first study to examine this association. A few limitations should be mentioned. First, the limited number of persons with unconsciousness and amnesia, despite the large cohort followed for 6 months and the large number of reported shocks. This limitation may have had negative effect on the precision of the estimates. In previous studies, reporting of symptoms from the CNS was frequent, but previous literature was based on an injured population, and did not report all types of electrical shocks as we did in our study. Many of the participants (36%) were unable to report the exit point of the current, and thus, it was not possible to determine whether cross-body exposure had taken place. In an additional analysis, we adjusted for severity, but whether or not this could be considered a confounder is dubious because the outcomes (unconsciousness and amnesia) would be considered as high in severity and thus part of the outcome. Although the study was prospective, both the exposure (path of the current) and the outcomes (unconsciousness and amnesia) were reported cross-sectionally, but the respondents were not aware of the hypotheses and did not always describe the shocks in sufficient detail. Another possible explanation for the outcomes could be that the electrical shock was due to an epileptic seizure. However, none of those who reported either unconsciousness or amnesia suffered from epilepsy. Recall bias is most likely not a problem for the outcomes, but could have affected the reporting of exposure because amnesia and/or unconsciousness could affect the ability to report details regarding the shock. But if this were the case, the participant would most likely end up in the non-exposed group because of the absent information regarding entry and exit points, and this would have had an effect on the sample size of this study and possibly underestimate the association. We made additional analyses where we included those who were uncertain whether they had experienced CNS symptoms, and this reduced the estimates slightly.

If the impact on the CNS in terms of unconsciousness and amnesia were not caused by the electrical shock itself but by the trauma of receiving a shock, then we would not find an association between cross-body exposure and the outcomes. We were not able to identify similar studies, and thus we were not able to compare our findings with previous findings, but several other studies and reviews report that both neurological and mental symptoms can occur following exposure to electrical shock [13, 8, 9]. However, these reports build almost solely on case studies and other retrospective designs, whereas the prospective studies lack detailed information regarding the shock. The present study may contribute to the debate regarding whether electrical current can affect the CNS even if the direct entry or exit point is not through the head. Although the analysis is based on a small sample, we conclude that cross-body electrical exposure remote from the head can affect the CNS.

Acknowledgments

We wish to thank the members of the Danish Union of Electricians for their participation in the study.

Data Availability

Data cannot be shared publicly because of the very few persons with the outcomes, that makes anonymisation impossible. Data are available from Redcap Aarhus University Institutional Data Access (contact via arbejdsmedicin@goedstrup.rm.dk) for researchers who meet the criteria for access to confidential data.

Funding Statement

KB, AK, OC and KJN received a shared grant from the Danish Working Environment Research Fund, grant number 22-2017-09 Website: https://amff.dk/about-the-fund/ The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Reviewer #2: The manuscript addresses the topic whether immediate CNS symptoms (i.e. unconsciousness, amnesia) might occur in electrical shocks without direct entry or exit point on the head. I appreciate the hypothesis of the study that electric currents flowing through the body and crossing the spinal cord may induce CNS symptoms, even if the head (brain) is not directly affected. This is the first study on this topic. The main strength of the study is the study population because it is based on a prospective cohort of electricians with weekly follow-up.

The data collection and a general description of the shocks are presented in a previous study of the authors including details on the type of electrical shock in terms of current types (AC versus DC) and voltages (low versus high voltage). I recommend to present additionally the numbers for the current types and voltages and to discuss the proportions (e.g., in Table 1) in the present manuscript. Thus, it may be possible to associate the circumstances of the electrical shocks and the outcome further.

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Title: ‘a prospective cohort study’ should be added as an important feature of the study.

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


7 Feb 2023

Dear Editor and reviewers,

Thank you very much for valuable corrections, comments and suggestions.

We have now revised the manuscript according to the reviews and specific answers to each point are presented below. We hope you find the provided changes and answers satisfactory.

On behalf of the authors

Karin Biering

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Review Comments to the Author

Reviewer #1: The authors address in a satisfactory way the gap of the examined issue at the introduction section but they should clearly refer the aim of their study at the last paragraph as well as the hypothesis in different sentence.

Authors reply: This is now rewritten to highlight the aim and hypothesis clearly

The methodology design (experimental tests, measurements etc) needs more details. The methodology has important details missing. Subsection for materials and methodology could help the flow.

Authors reply: We have added these subheadings and provided more detail regarding the study, that we originally left out to avoid self-plagiarism

The results of the study are presented in a satisfactory way

The authors should present the main findings of their study at the first paragraph of the discussion section and also compare their findings to similar studies of the literature. Discussion section is to poor. The authors discuss their findings with no other studies.

Authors reply: We have added the main findings to the beginning of the discussion, and have tried to elaborate the discussion. However, comparing our findings to previous studies is difficult as mentioned by reviewer #2, this is the first study on this topic, so direct comparison is not possible..

Reviewer #2: The manuscript addresses the topic whether immediate CNS symptoms (i.e. unconsciousness, amnesia) might occur in electrical shocks without direct entry or exit point on the head. I appreciate the hypothesis of the study that electric currents flowing through the body and crossing the spinal cord may induce CNS symptoms, even if the head (brain) is not directly affected. This is the first study on this topic. The main strength of the study is the study population because it is based on a prospective cohort of electricians with weekly follow-up.

The data collection and a general description of the shocks are presented in a previous study of the authors including details on the type of electrical shock in terms of current types (AC versus DC) and voltages (low versus high voltage). I recommend to present additionally the numbers for the current types and voltages and to discuss the proportions (e.g., in Table 1) in the present manuscript. Thus, it may be possible to associate the circumstances of the electrical shocks and the outcome further.

Authors reply: Thank you for these kind words. We have elaborated on the methods section as also reviewer#1 suggested to provide more information regarding the study. We would also have provided more details regarding the circumstances of the shock. However, in when using data from Statistics Denmark it is custom not to report subgroups containing less than 5 persons, so not all details could be reported in the group with affected CNS in table 1. Instead, we have now added a sentence including these characteristics without presenting the exact numbers in the results section

Additionally, there are some minor points:

Title: ‘a prospective cohort study’ should be added as an important feature of the study.

Authors reply: This is added to the Title

The abstract should be structured with the headers ’Introduction’, ‘Material and Methods’, ‘Results’ and ‘Conclusion’.

Authors reply: The abstract has been provided with the suggested headers

Line 40: Please provide the risk estimate (i.e. odds ratio (OR).

Line 56: A dot is missing at the end of the sentence.

Line 63: Please add the year in which the study was conducted.

Line 70: Please move the comma to ‘same side’ (non-exposed), ‘opposite side’.

Lines 71-74: These two sentences should be moved to the result section.

Line 83: The risk estimate and confidence interval (95%?) should be provided.

Line 93 and Line 95: Please add the numbers to facilitate reading.

Line 94: A dot is missing at the end of the sentence.

Lines 99: Please delete the dot before the parenthesis.

Lines 101-102 Header of the Table 1: ‘Danish electricians (n=1235)’ is a bit misleading, because 1,235 is the number of events, not of the electricians.

Authors reply: All of these suggestions has been added/changed

Table1: There is probably a mistake with the numbers in the table because the four columns of gender, age, severity and exposure do not sum up to 1,235, but to 1,264. Please check it. - In column ‘unconsciousness’ and row ‘somewhat severe or worse’ and ‘Not severe or a little severe’ is an error because the sum is not 100%.

Authors reply: The numbers are actually correct, but we realize that the presentation of them were not elegant. In the original Table 1, we present three columns of outcome (unconsciousness(n=8), amnesia(n=21) and a combination of unconsciousness and/or amnesia (n=27, two persons reported both outcomes). This means that the last column include all with either unconsciousness or amnesia and those with both. We have made a new layout of the table and added a longer footnote, to make this clear.

Lines 103 and 112: Is the explanation of ‘Combined’ beneath the table correct or should the logical operator only be ‘and’ instead of ‘and/or’?

Authors reply: Please refer to our reply regarding table 1 above

Line 104-107: Please provide the risk estimates and note the non-significant confidence intervals.

Line 105: Please delete the dot before the parenthesis.

Line 109 Table 2: Please add [CI95%] after OR in the second row and add the abbreviation below the table.

Line 114: Please start the discussion with a sentence on the key results (i.e., number of persons and events).

Line 155: Please use ‘Ann N Y Acad Sci.’ to be consistent.

Authors reply: All of these suggestions has been added/changed

The manuscript lacks from several punctuation and may benefit from some closer proofreading by a native speaker.

Authors reply: We have now had professional British proof-reading, thus several minor changes in wording has been changed on top of the suggestions provided by the reviewers.

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Unconsciousness and amnesia after cross-body electric shocks not involving the head – a prospective cohort study

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James Mockridge

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PONE-D-22-22946R1

Unconsciousness and amnesia after cross-body electric shocks not involving the head – a prospective cohort study

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