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. 2023 Apr 20;18(4):e0284553. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0284553

Can visual impairment impact your income potential?

Colinie Wickramaarachchi 1, Ruwan Jayathilaka 2,*, Theekshana Suraweera 2, Samantha Thelijjagoda 2, Lakshika Kollure 1, Thushya Liyanage 1, Wageesha Serasinghe 1, Samanthi Bandara 2
Editor: Pratap Chandra Mohanty3
PMCID: PMC10118095  PMID: 37079584

Abstract

People’s quality of life (QOL) has been disrupted globally in the wake of the pandemic in recent times. This was mainly due to global economic crises fuelled by the coronavirus (COVID– 19) and other related factors. Sri Lanka, too, was facing major social and economic constraints in the period 2021–2022. Thus, all communities islandwide have been economically disturbed. Among others, people with Visual Impairment and Blindness (VIB) have been pushed to severely disadvantageous positions, financially and otherwise. A sample from three geographical locations in Sri Lanka; and eleven individuals representing diverse cadres in Sri Lankan society were purposively selected for the study based on the existence of the majority of the visually impaired community using a mixed approach. Descriptive statistics were utilised to analyse the identified socio-economic characteristics. Ordered probit regression was employed to determine the mediating effect of socio-economic status on income levels. Word Cloud illustrates the factors affecting the QOL. Most severely impaired individuals are more likely to earn a lower rate of income. This situation has degraded their lives and poor QOL. Participants’ responses elucidate that facilities, resources, education, opportunities, income, employment, and government activities would enhance their QOL. The study adds value to society by recognising VIB people, helping them gain financial independence and strengthening them without marginalising the impaired community. The proposed policies in this study would be valuable for these social groups to address their wealth concerns.

Introduction

The modern world consists of diverse demarcations and the level of personal income influences life standards as per social constructs. Grappling with challenging living conditions, one should be strong regarding economic independence. ‘Health is wealth’ is an adage popular among people that highlights the importance of physical and mental stability. At present, an individual’s health benefits seem to be strongly associated with one’s income and quality of life (QOL) [1]. A segment of society specifically subjected to economic disparity in terms of health defects is identified as people with Visual Impairment and Blindness (VIB). Addressing the prevalence of people with visual disparities constitutes a sizeable portion of the public health challenge. The analysis unveils that regarding the global distribution of VIB, approximately 2.2 billion people are visually impaired, and almost 1 billion people with these disparities are curable with necessary preventive measures [2]. These visual impairments are considered bodily conditions that obstruct a person from living a good life in society [3]. The relationship between VIB and socio-economic characteristics has been discussed in many countries; in this context, some epidemiology studies have noted a significant relationship between VIB and socio-economic characteristics is particularly true in many rapidly growing countries, especially China [4]. Moreover, the global spread of VIB exemplifies that visual difficulties are generally more prevalent and severe in developing countries’ rural areas, especially Sri Lanka. The survey conducted by the VISION-2020 national workshop programme by the Government of Sri Lanka (GOSL) in 2016 in collaboration with the International Agency for the Prevention of Blindness (IAPB) South East Asia revealed the prevalence of blindness in Sri Lanka was 1.6% and 15.4%, respectively, concerning severe visual impairment and blindness. This rate varies for different provinces, where the highest was from Uva and Southern provinces (2.9% and 0.29%) [5]. Additionally, it was found that most of them experience higher financial pressure and various barriers like lack of access to healthcare, insufficient water, poor sanitation facilities and poor living conditions [6].

Exacerbating the above-mentioned conditions, today’s global catastrophe, the ‘coronavirus (COVID-19) pandemic’ has severely affected these individuals making them more vulnerable, putting them at a high exposure to the risk of increased morbidity and mortality while drastically collapsing the individuals’ income level [7, 8]. However, in assessing the extent to which VIB influences income, empirical evidence underlying this association is unknown and an under-researched topic that past researchers have not addressed.

The objective of the present study is to fill this empirical gap. In doing so, the study can be considered extensive, as it investigates the impact of different levels of vision and other socio-economic characteristics on the income of visually impaired people.

This research is significant from the existing studies and contributes to the literature in four ways. Firstly, visual impairment and the income level of these victims have become a major issue in the 21st century, in terms of health and economic aspects. In these circumstances, this issue of visual health requires the attention of regulatory authorities such as the government, health sector, policymakers, other organisations and the general public. Secondly, no previous research study has been conducted concerning the area under consideration, addressing the local scenario. According to available information, this study will be the first endeavour of this kind of econometric research study covering the impact of levels of vision and other socio-economic characteristics towards the income of visually impaired and blind persons based in Sri Lanka. Thirdly, according to the World Health Organization (WHO), over 2.2 billion people suffered from visual disorders worldwide; over 90% of them were from low and middle-income countries, which is the main cause of blindness in Asia and Africa [2]. Therefore, after completing this study, the findings can provide valuable insights to the GOSL for formulating strategies and policies. The findings will also benefit the healthcare sector and policymakers aiming to recover from the setback encountered by the COVID-19 pandemic and revive the economy and QOL of visually impaired people. In this regard, the health sector could utilise these data to spread awareness and expand its healthcare facilities regarding this pandemic, especially among individuals with VIB who are badly affected by the crisis.

The rest of the paper is structured as follows; section 2 describes the method. Section 4 examines empirical findings; finally, section 5 asserts the concluding segment with policy implications that align with this study.

Materials and methods

Study population and data collection procedure

To conduct phases one and two of the study, a cross-sectional study was conducted on a segment of the Sri Lankan population mainly consisting of the VIB people living in three different rural areas associated with three provinces. These rural locations included Polpithigama Divisional Secretariat (DS) in Kurunegala, Siyanethugama model village for VIB people in Hambanthota, and DS in Jaffna. These three locations are located in the North Western, Southern and Northern provinces, respectively, as shown in Fig 1, drawn using Geographic Information System (GIS) Software.

Fig 1. District allocation of VIB individuals.

Fig 1

Source: Authors’ demonstration using GIS.

The participants for the survey were selected through purposive and convenient sampling techniques, thus including persons with various levels of vision. Thus, the latter was determined based on the criteria of “Vision 2020” research conducted to measure the ophthalmic aspect of vision among people in Sri Lanka [9]. From samples selected from each district, a total of 313 participants were proportionately enrolled in the study resulting in 188 from Polpithigama DS in Kurunegala, 64 from the Hambanthota DS and 61 from the Jaffna DS. The socio-economic and demographic characteristics were identified through a well-designed questionnaire covering questions relating to age, gender, marital status, education status, employability, and income level.

In phase three of the study, explicit interviews were held through focus group discussions (FGDs) to capture the factors affecting the QOL of persons with VIB. Eleven individuals (four females and seven females) were purposively selected to represent the VIB community. All these participants were from various socio-economic backgrounds and distinct cadres in the society, including lawyers, undergraduates, academicians, entrepreneurs, development officers and committee members from diverse VIB voluntary organisations. The selected sample includes VIB individuals from different age categories ranging from 20 to 60 years living in rural and urban areas of the country. Their detailed information is not disclosed due to ethical reasons and privacy. Based on their fluency, the FGDs were held online through the Zoom platform using two languages (Sinhala and English). The interviews lasted, on average 3 hours and 40 minutes. All these discussions were recorded with participants’ prior consent and manually transcribed for analytical purposes.

Statistical analysis

This research consists of three phases; the first phase details the distribution of socio-economic characteristics along with the income of all participants on people with visual impairment and blindness; the second phase incorporates the mediating effect of socio-economic status on income levels of people with VIB; finally, the third phase comprehends the factors that affect the QOL and impact on income disparities. The data file used for the study is presented in S1 Appendix.

Descriptive statistics were utilised to analyse the identified socio-economic characteristics. Ordered probit regression was employed to determine the mediating effect of socio-economic status on income levels. Word Cloud illustrates the factors affecting the QOL.

Overall, the main objective was to determine the mediating effect of socio-economic status on income levels. Therefore, referring to numerous literature, the current study applied the ordered probit model introduced by Chester Ittner Bliss [10, 11]. According to Aitchison and Silvey [12], the ordered probit model’s purpose is to generalise more than two outcomes of an ordinal dependent variable. Therefore, with a reasonable assumption, this ordered probit model would be effective concerning validity and reliability for this study.

Before conducting the Ordered probit regression model, it is vital to contemplate three main considerations as to whether the objective fits with the regression model [10, 13,14,15,16,17]. The three main considerations are model specification, model building, and model diagnosis check. The model specifications allow the researchers to identify the dependent and independent variables identified as income and levels of vision along with other socio-economic factors such as age, gender, marital status, employability, and education. The model building allows the researchers to specify the process to build the equation concerning the variables of the present research study; further, it provides the pathway to explain the variation between income (Dependent variable) and levels of vision along with other socio-economic characteristics (Independent variables). The following equation has been used to investigate the impact of different levels of vision and other socio-economic characteristics on income.

Based on the study, the authors’ general specification of the formula related to the ordered probit model can be expressed as:

yi*=xiβ+ϵi (1)

Here, where yi* is a latent variable measure the severity of ith individual income. xi is a (k×1) vector of observed explanatory variables, β is a (k×1) vector of the unknown parameters, and ϵi is a random-error term assumed to be normally distributed with a zero mean. The ordered probit model translates the latent variable into observed ordinal-income data of the visually disabled people, y, as follows [18].

y=1ifyi*=noincomey=2ifyi*=incomeuptoSLRs.10,000y=3ifyi*=incomebetweenSLRs.10,000andSLRs.25,000y=4ifyi*=incomebetweenSLRs.25,000andSLRs.50,000y=5ifyi*=incomebetweenSLRs.50,000andSLRs.75,000y=6ifyi*=incomeoverSLRs.75,000 (2)

The income levels indicated above are derived based on Sri Lanka’s Household Income and Expenditure Survey (HIES) 2019. According to the decile groups, the per capita income share is obtained as shown in Table 1.

Table 1. Definitions of the income levels according to HIES– 2019.
Per Capita Income Range (According to HIES 2019) Share of the household per capita income by socio-economic group Derivation conducted for this study
Less than or equal SLRs. 6,222 Poorest 20% (5.8%) No income (y = 1)
SLRs. 6,223–8,245 Income up to SLRs.10,000 (y = 2)
SLRs. 8,246–10,114 Middle 60% (43.6%)
SLRs. 10,114–11,997 Income between SLRs.10,000 and SLRs.25,000 (y = 3)
SLRs. 11,998–14,095
SLRs. 14,096–16,683
SLRs. 16,684–20,165
SLRs. 20,166–25,502
SLRs. 25,503–37,287 Richest 20% (50.6%) Income between SLRs.25,000 and SLRs.50,000 (y = 4)
Income between SLRs.50,000 and SLRs.75,000 (y = 5)
Income over SLRs.75,000 (y = 6)
More than 37,287

Source: Authors’ compilation based on the Department of Census and Statistics [19].

The marginal effects of the variables obtained from the ordered probit model estimates is used to measure the impact on the probability of income levels due to changes in the various explanatory variables. The marginal effects can be calculated in accordance with [18] as follows,

Prob(Yi=1x)/x=ϕ(xiβ)βProb(Yi=2x)/x=ϕ(xiβ)ϕ(10,000xiβ)βProb(Yi=3x)/x=ϕ(10,000xiβ)ϕ(25,000xiβ)βProb(Yi=4x)/x=ϕ(25,000xiβ)ϕ(50,000xiβ)βProb(Yi=5x)/x=ϕ(50,000xiβ)ϕ(75,000xiβ)βProb(Yi=6x)/x=ϕ(75,000xiβ)β (3)

where ϕ is the standard normal cumulative distribution of ϵi. The parameters in the model specified in Eq 3 are estimated using the Maximum Likelihood method. The explanatory variables in Eq 3, such as age, employability, education, gender, marital status, geographical locations and levels of vision, are summarised in Table 2.

Table 2. Definitions of variables with the expected sign.
Variable Description Expected signs
Socio economic characteristics
Age Age of the household respondents (in years) (+)
Employability Separate dummy variables for employed, seeking a job, student, household activity, retired, unable to work and others; others are the reference category. (-/+)
Education Separate dummy for no schooling, primary education, secondary education, G.C.E Ordinary (O/L) passed, grade 12–13, Advanced Level (A/L) passed, tertiary and vocational; vocational is the reference category (+)
Gender 1 if male; 0 otherwise (-/+)
Marital status Separate dummy variables for single, married, divorced, widowed; widowed is the reference category. (-/+)
Geographical locations Separate dummy variables for districts of Hambanthota, Kurunegala and Jaffna: Jaffna is the reference category. (-/+)
Levels of vision Separate dummy variables for totally blindness, severely impaired, moderately impaired and mild impairment; mild impairment is the reference category. (+)

Source: Authors’ compilation.

Regarding the independent variables in the current study, the variables include three categories; where the first category encompassed demographics such as age, gender, and marital status. The second category included socio-economic characteristics such as education level and employment, further emphasise education in line with previous studies as the most commonly used determinants [20,21,22,23]. Lastly, the third category includes the vision levels of VIB persons.

In line with mainstream literature, this study considers that the ordered variable is linked to an underlying latent variable in Eq 2, which is divided into six intervals. Thereafter, a forward stepwise regression technique was carried out to select the significant variables. For this purpose, significant variables were selected according to the p value> 0.15; variables more than 0.15 would be removed from the model, whereas those under p value <0.1 would be retained. The goodness of fit of the model evaluated with overall goodness of fit statistics is computed as follows [24]:

ρ2=1[L(β)/L(c)] (4)

where L(β) is the maximum log-likelihood value and L(c) is the value of likelihood when it includes only constants. Based on this, the model with the highest goodness of fit value is selected for the analysis. By using ordered probit regression, the study shows significant changes with estimates, robust values, and marginal effects for all income levels.

Furthermore, to stimulate and comprehend the factors affecting the QOL influencing income disparities, a WordCloud visualisation tool was employed in this study. Therefore, in accordance with recent empirical studies, past researchers have employed Word Cloud to reveal the qualitative responses in a user-friendly manner. Even with its simple format of illustration to analyse data, many researchers profess it as a righteous qualitative technique [25,26,27,28,29].

Ethical concerns

This study was conducted once the Ethical Clearance Board of Sri Lanka Institute of Information Technology (SLIIT) granted ethical clearance approval. Accordingly, the study objectives were conveyed to respondents prior to commencing the survey and their informed consent was obtained. Participants’ data are secured with a high level of confidentiality and stored under AHEAD Project (DOR 1 HEMS) for Persons with Visual Impairment and Blindness at the SLIIT Business School, Sri Lanka Institute of Information Technology, Malabe, Sri Lanka.

Findings and discussion

Phase 1: The distribution of socio-economic characteristics along with income of all participants on people with visual impairment and blindness

A total of 313 VIB people participated from three purposively selected districts: 64 participants from Hambanthota, 188 from Polpithigama and 61 from Jaffna have been allocated as per this study’s responses. The distribution of socio-economic characteristics is displayed in Table 3. The age of participants averaged 44.96 years ranged from >10 to 60+ years and most were married (62.94%). Most participants were males (178–62.30%), out of which 101 were totally blind. Most participants (81) had a remarkably low education level, having passed Ordinary Level (26.47%) and with a monthly income of SLRs. 10,000–25,000 (25.88%). This majority was identified to be employed (42.38%) in diverse working platforms.

Table 3. Distribution of socio-economic characteristics among all participants with visual impairment and blindness.

Variables Total Means if(%) Standard deviation
N = 313(%)
Levels of vision
    • Totally blind 154 (53.10)
    • Severely impaired 53 (18.28)
    • Moderately impaired 42 (14.48)
    • Mild impairment 41 (14.14)
Age (years) 313 44.96 19.21
Gender
    • Male 195 (62.30)
    • Female 118 (37.70)
Marital status
    • Single 98 (31.31)
    • Married 197 (62.94)
    • Divorced 8 (2.56)
    • Widowed 10 (3.19)
Employability
    • Employed 128 (42.38)
    • Seeking a job & available to work 15 (4.97)
    • Student 71 (23.51)
    • Household activity 20 (6.62)
    • Retired 8 (2.65)
    • Unable to work 30 (9.93)
    • Others 30 (9.94)
Education level
    • No schooling 31 (10.13)
    • Primary education 80 (26.14)
    • Secondary education 58 (18.95)
    • G.C.E O/l passed 81 (26.47)
    • Grade 12–13 9 (2.94)
    • Passed A/L 21 (6.86)
    • Tertiary 16 (5.23)
    • Vocational 1 (0.33)
Monthly income
    • No income 20 (6.39)
    • Up to 10000 75 (23.96)
    • 10000–25000 81 (25.88)
    • 25000–50000 56 (17.89)
    • 50000–75000 23 (7.35)
    • Over 75000 4 (1.28)
Geographical location
    • Hambanthota 64 (20.45)
    • Kurunegala 188 (60.06)
    • Jaffna 61 (19.49)

Source: Author’s calculation based on the primary data.

Phase 2: The mediating effect of socio-economic status on income levels of people with vision impairment and blindness

To analyse more specifically on vision levels and socio-economic factors and its impact on income, the study has undergone a (four step) stepwise regression method. As the first step, authors regressed these variables through multiple regression to explore the relevant significance in each income level, as depicted in Table 4. Specifically, according to socio-economic characteristics, in the gender variable, the risk of being a male having visual impairment was not found to be associated with income penetrations. Similarly, regarding a person seeking a job, having passed grades 12 and 13 was also not proved to be associated with income. Furthermore, the marital status of a VIB person being a single, married, or divorced person does not associate with income earnings. As depicted in Table 4, additionally discussing the vision levels, being severely or moderately impaired, neither totally blinded was not associated with income penetrations.

Table 4. Initial regression results of all variables (Step 1 and 2).

Regression Stepwise
Variable Estimate Robust SE Estimate Robust
Constant -0.1229 0.3129
Socio-economic and demographic variables
Age -0.0248*** 0.0050 -0.0212*** 0.0038
Male 0.1697 0.1604
Employment status
Employed 1.2859*** 0.2597 1.3473*** 0.2053
Seeking a job 0.3207 0.3588
Student 0.9427*** 0.2894 0.9023*** 0.2618
Household activity 1.5667*** 0.3477 1.4960*** 0.3198
Retired 3.0186*** 0.4201 2.9957*** 0.4146
Unable to work 1.2016*** 0.3501 1.2107*** 0.3103
Education
No schooling 1.4891*** 0.4094 1.1583*** 0.3661
Primary education 1.2838*** 0.3353 1.0490*** 0.2949
Secondary education 1.5523*** 0.3468 1.3453*** 0.3096
G.C.E O/l passed 1.6798*** 0.3481 1.4684*** 0.3014
Grade 12–13 0.7318 0.5809
Passed A/L 2.0249*** 0.4177 1.7253*** 0.3845
Tertiary 2.3976*** 0.3938 2.1834*** 0.3336
Marital status
Single -0.1240 0.4467
Married 0.1726 0.4049
Divorced 0.0984 0.5468
Geographical location
Hambanthota 1.3457*** 0.2365 1.4346*** 0.2310
Kurunegala 0.9429*** 0.2058 0.9081*** 0.1997
Levels of vision
Total blindness 0.2350 0.2013
Severely impaired 0.3799 0.2427
Moderately impaired -0.0395 0.2417
F(23, 289) 16.02 25.53
Prob>F 0.0000 0.0000
R2 0.4360 0.4181
No of observation 313

Note: *** Significant at 1% level

Table 5 demonstrates the third step of the study, which evaluates ordered probit results of the visually incapacitated individual’s socio-economic characteristics and the impact towards income. Estimations assert different variations with each income level depicting significance at 1%, 5% and 10% levels, respectively. Furthermore, it reveals the appropriate estimations and how each characteristic significantly describes an impact relevant to the six types of income levels.

Table 5. Initial ordered probit regression results for all variables (Step 3).

Variable Estimate Robust SE (y = 1) (y = 2) (y = 3) (y = 4) (y = 5) (y = 6)
Socio-economic & demographic characteristics
    Age -0.0217*** 0.0042 0.0015*** 0.0034*** -0.0028*** -0.0043*** -0.0014*** -0.0000
Marital status
    Single 0.0150 0.4490 -0.0010 -0.0024 0.0019 0.0030 0.0009 0.0000
    Married 0.3107 0.4154 -0.0220 -0.0462 0.0430 0.0604 0.0188 0.0009
    Divorced 0.2742 0.5673 -0.0182 -0.0499 0.0250 0.0579 0.0224 0.0014
Employment levels
    Employed 1.2535*** 0.2600 -0.0772*** -0.1935*** 0.1017*** 0.2410*** 0.1096*** 0.0095
    Seeking a job 0.3294 0.3217 -0.0217 -0.0607 0.0280* 0.0699 0.0278 0.0018
    Student 0.9836*** 0.2810 -0.0580*** -0.1808*** 0.0417* 0.2016*** 0.1041** 0.0097
    Household activity 1.4149*** 0.3190 -0.0620*** -0.2574*** -0.0788 0.2393*** 0.2263*** 0.0388
    Retired 3.0333*** 0.4928 -0.0665*** -0.3258*** -0.3137*** -0.0199 0.3841*** 0.4498**
    Unable to work 1.1231*** 0.3272 -0.0574*** -0.2143*** -0.0150 0.2201*** 0.1516** 0.0187
Education level
    No schooling 1.6574*** 0.4657 -0.0692*** -0.2858*** -0.1033 0.2515*** 0.2736** 0.0557
    Primary education 1.4267*** 0.4156 -0.0769*** -0.2473*** 0.0230 0.2688*** 0.1730** 0.0215
    Secondary education 1.6628*** 0.4241 -0.0780*** -0.2848*** -0.0472 0.2777*** 0.2437** 0.0419
    G.C.E O/L passed 1.7841*** 0.4260 -0.0881*** -0.2890*** -0.0092 0.2996*** 0.2400*** 0.0392
    Grade 12–13 0.9960* 0.5713 -0.0505** -0.1946* -0.0184 0.1988** 0.1363 0.0163
    G.C.E A/L passed 2.0926*** 0.4692 -0.0701*** -0.3155*** -0.1993*** 0.1970*** 0.3783*** 0.1290
    Tertiary 2.4606*** 0.4641 -0.0698*** -0.3259*** -0.2581*** 0.1177 0.4257*** 0.2274
    Male 0.1428 0.1415 -0.0101 -0.0221 0.0191 0.2827 0.0089 0.0004
Geographical location
    Hambanthota 1.2493*** 0.2183 -0.0675*** -0.2275*** 0.0140 0.2436*** 0.1535*** 0.0180
    Kurunegala 0.9277*** 0.1906 -0.0625*** -0.1163*** 0.1295*** 0.1693*** 0.0550*** 0.0032
Levels of vision
    Total blindness 0.2237 1.1762 -0.0157 -0.0355 0.0287 0.0446 0.0146 0.0007
    Severely impaired 0.3868* 0.2134 -0.0257* -0.0697* 0.0352*** 0.0813* 0.3166 0.0020
    Moderately impaired -0.0330 0.2130 0.0023 0.00510 -0.0043 -0.0065 -0.0020 -0.0001
Ancillary Parameters Marginal effects after ordered probit
    y^1 1.6060** 0.6760 0.0610 0.3153 0.3428 0.1564 0.0290 0.0010
    y^2 1.9073*** 0.6870
    y^3 2.8476*** 0.7007
    y^4 3.8120*** 0.7177
    y^5 4.8004*** 0.7345
    y^6 6.0012*** 0.7693
Pseudo R2 0.1704
Log likelihood -448.29
Number of observations 313

Note: a)***significant at 1% levels

**significant at 5% levels

*significant at 10% levels

b) ‘y’ means income. These are categorised as (y = 1: no income, y = 2: up to 10,000, y = 3: 10,000–25,000, y = 4: 25,000–50,000, y = 5: 50,000–75,000, y = 6: above 75,000).

Table 6 represents the final ordered probit model estimations carried forward as the fourth step, where it asserts the estimations using the independent variables. These results are based on the variables selected for the final ordered probit model where the forward stepwise technique was adopted with p-value <0.10 and removal of variables with p-value ≥0.15. As depicted in Table 5, insignificant variables were excluded from the final estimated models. The marginal effects were separately calculated for no income, up to SLRs.10,000, SLRs.10,000–25,000, SLRs.25,000–50,000, SLRs.50,000–75,000 and above SLRs.75,000 where it provides the interpretation of the effects of the independent variables on income. According to estimates of coefficients illustrated in Table 5, these variables have a contrasting (negative and positive) effect on the income of visually disabled people. Each income level shows significant variations. However, according to Table 3, mainly the income level of SLRs.10,000–25,000 (25.88%) was the highest earned by visually impaired individuals.

Table 6. Ordered probit regression results.

Variable Estimate Robust SE (y = 1) (y = 2) (y = 3) (y = 4) (y = 5) (y = 6)
Socio-economic & demographic characteristics
Age -0.0214*** 0.0038 0.0014*** 0.0033*** -0.0027*** -0.0043*** -0.0013*** -0.0000
Married 0.2704* 0.1581 -0.0190 -0.4051* 0.0367 0.0531* 0.0166 0.0008
Employment levels
Employed 1.1844*** 0.2156 -0.0732*** -0.1839*** 0.0978*** 0.2305*** 0.1023*** 0.0087
Student 0.8911*** 0.2407 -0.0534*** -0.1632*** 0.0437** 0.1850*** 0.0909* 0.0080
Household activity 1.2547*** 0.2862 -0.0585*** -0.2342*** -0.0512 0.2301*** 0.1884*** 0.0215
Retired 2.9705*** 0.4679 -0.0661*** -0.3230*** -0.3114*** -0.0115 0.3911*** 0.4294**
Unable to work 1.0403*** 0.2944 -0.0545*** -0.1990*** -0.0055 0.2089*** 0.1352** 0.0158
Education level
No schooling 1.5867*** 0.4667 -0.0677*** -0.2766*** -0.0928 0.2512*** 0.2574** 0.0498
Primary education 1.3779*** 0.4118 -0.0746*** -0.2391*** 0.0248 0.2631*** 0.1649** 0.0201
Secondary education 1.6259*** 0.4201 -0.0766*** -0.2789*** -0.0444 0.2758*** 0.2364** 0.0400
G.C.E O/L passed 1.7447*** 0.4225 -0.0864*** -0.2833*** -0.0076 0.2974*** 0.2330*** 0.0375
Grade 12–13 0.9375 0.5708 -0.0485** -0.1831* -0.0113 0.1905** 0.1245 0.0144
G.C.E A/L passed 1.9957*** 0.4646 -0.0690*** -0.3080*** -0.1854** 0.2087*** 0.3599*** 0.1127
Tertiary 2.4418*** 0.4547 -0.0693*** -0.3232*** -0.2571 0.1192 0.4233*** 0.2249
Geographical location
Hambanthota 1.2810*** 0.2206 -0.0682*** -0.2310*** 0.0087 0.2480*** 0.1602*** 0.0196
Kurunegala 0.9220*** 0.1916 -0.0616*** -0.1154*** 0.1272*** 0.1694*** 0.0551*** 0.0033
Levels of vision
Total blindness 0.2207 0.1480 -0.0154 -0.3491 0.0279 0.0443 0.0145 0.0008
Severely impaired 0.3765** 0.1905 -0.0249* -0.0674* 0.0339*** 0.0794* 0.0308 0.0020
Ancillary Parameters Marginal effects after ordered probit
y^1 1.3758 0.5235 0.0607 0.3130 0.3425 0.1580 0.0293 0.0010
y^2 1.6743 0.5332
y^3 2.6079 0.5453
y^4 3.5693 0.5617
y^5 4.5601 0.5847
y^6 5.7562 0.6256
Pseudo R2 0.1680
Log likelihood -449.62803
Number of observations 313

An individual’s age is one crucial component contemplated mainly in the visual disorder category. This is evidenced by literature that most people at different stages of their age face visual impairment issues. Lusardi and Mitchell [30] emphasised that young and old people have greater financial literacy and the middle-aged have less financial literacy. This can be further demonstrated with results that emphasise significant income level estimations. Regarding the ‘no income’, it can be construed that increasing age will increase the probability of ending up with no income and income ‘up to SLRs.10,000’ under a significant portion of 0.0014 and 0.003 percentage points, respectively. Mohammed M. Abdull, Selvaraj Sivasubramaniam [31] also proved this situation that increasing age was mainly associated with the increasing prevalence of all conditions that cause blindness. Furthermore, Table 6 depicts the income levels of SLRs.10,000–25,000, SLRs.25,000–50,000 and SLRs.50,000–75,000 lead to a significant estimation where increasing age decreases the probability of earning higher income levels with a proportion of 0.0027, 0.0043, and 0.0013 percentage points, respectively.

Being compatible with other marital status, VIB people in the married category are restricted to earning an income of up to SLRs.10,000 and SLRs.25,000–50,000 with a significant portion of 0.4051 and 0.0531 percentage points, respectively. Enhancing the analysis into employment levels of the visually disabled individuals, namely employed, student, household activity, retired and people unable to work, have various significant levels with each income type. Besides, these individuals are not restricted to earning only up to an income level of ‘no income’ and income ‘up to SLRs.10,000’ with a significant portion, as depicted in Table 6. Further, employed persons and student category are likely to earn an income between SLRs.10,000–25,000, SLRs.25,000–50,000 and SLRs.50,000–75,000, with relevant percentage points depicted in Table 6. Moreover, visually incapacitated individuals in the category of household workers are estimated to have a probability of earning an income between SLRs.25,000–50,000 and SLRs.50,000–75,000 comparable with the income of others, with a significant portion of 0.2301 and 0.1884 percentage points, respectively.

Additionally, the income generating ability of retired persons is restricted to earn an income between SLRs.10,000–25,000 but has the possibility to earn an income between SLRs.50,000–75,000 and above SLRs.75,000 with 0.3911 and 0.4294 percentage points, respectively. People with VIB who are unable to work have the possibility to earn an income between SLRs 25,000–50,000 and 50,000–75,000 with percentage points of 0.2089 and 0.1352, respectively. Concluding based on all employment categories considered in the present study, it is evident that each employment level has a significant impact with no income and income up to SLRs.10,000 but not significant with the income level of above SLRs.75,000.

The education level of visually disabled people can be determined as a significant variable which has a far greater impact on income. Variables as no schooling, primary education, secondary education, O/L passed, grade 12–13, A/L passed, and tertiary education levels have a significant variance with income levels. Findings further denote a significant probability among all these education segments to fall on to no income and income up to SLRs.10,000 with percentage points (Table 6). Moreover, for these individuals qualified with G.C.E.O/L, their possibility is tightened, thereby restricting them to earn an income of SLRs.10,000–25,000 with 0.1854 percentage points, respectively, compared to other segments. Except for the tertiary qualified group of visually disabled individuals, for other education groups, a significant probability exists to earn an income of SLRs.25,000–50,000. Except for individuals who have passed A/L, persons with other education qualifications have a possibility to earn an income of SLRs.50,000–75,000 and percentage points, as illustrated in Table 6.

When ascertaining the marginal effect of the geographical location of household units, if the individual is situated in Hambanthota, the probability of heading to a no income level is likely to be restricted with a significant percentage point of 0.0682. Moreover, the probability of earning an income up to SLRs.10,000 will be restricted by 0.2310 percentage points. Nevertheless, a probability exists for visually disabled people located in Hambanthota to earn income levels of SLRs.25,000–50,000 and SLRs.50,000–75,000 with 0.2480 and 0.1602 percentage points, respectively. If situated in Polpithigama, the probability of leading to a no income level and income up to SLRs.10,000 is likely to be restricted with a significant percentage point of 0.0616 and 0.1154, respectively. A probability exists among the Polpithigama visually incapacitated people to earn an income of SLRs.10,000–25,000, SLRs.25,000–50,000 and SLRs.50,000–75,000 with 0.1272, 0.1694 and 0.0551 percentage points, correspondingly.

The mediating effect of different levels of vision towards income concentrations

Individuals who suffer from total blindness do not indicate significance with any income. This situation signals the society about the income earning vulnerability of the VIB and hence, the importance of earning at least an income of SLRs 10,000 due to their disorder. However, severely impaired persons show a significant variation in levels of income. The results denote that even after being severely impaired, they have the possibility to earn an income without being no income earners. As per the analysis, the majority of the severely impaired community can earn an income of at least up to SLRs.10,000 by 0.0249 and 0.0674 percentage points. A few of them have the probability to earn an income between SLRs.10,000–25,000 and SLRs.25,000–50,000 with 0.0339 and 0.0794 percentage points. As per the authors’ observations, the majority who suffer from severe visual impairment disorders earn an income in the range of SLRs.10,000–25,000. It can be concluded that even with such disorders, this community has the probability of earning an income to satisfy their daily needs.

This situation aligns with the existing literature where certain empirical studies explored people’s income generating ability shapes their economic position. This is proved by the researcher Lynch, Harper [32] who opined that a positive relationship exists between income and health; it can be explained that even though being an impaired person limits a person from earning a higher income, such people can at least earn a limited income to fulfil their day-to-day requirements.

Phase 3: The qualitative analysis on the exploration of factors affecting the QOL

In accordance with the above conclusion, the study further comprehended what factors influence the QOL, leading to understanding the major reasons for these income disparities among people with severe vision imparities. The World Health Organization (WHO) defines QOL “as an individual’s perception of their position in life in the context of the culture and value systems in which they live and concerning their goals, expectations, standards and concerns” [33, p.3]. It relates to life satisfaction, including a broad range from physical health, family, education, employment, wealth, safety and security to freedom, religious beliefs, and the environment [34]. The qualitative analysis was conducted by visualising keywords with Word Cloud illustration, which applied responses in detail, as shown in Fig 2.

Fig 2. WordCloud illustration.

Fig 2

Source: Authors’ illustration based on qualitative responses.

Accordingly, Fig 2 depicts that the factors such as resources, facilities, education, opportunities, income, employment, and government explicate the common belief–i.e. persons with VIB, mainly those severely impaired, face issues associated with their QOL and also highly impacts on their income levels.

For example, these visually incapacitated individuals’ dependency on government support is highlighted as a major keyword. This is because they believed that the government’s proactive intervention could provide them with a feasible solution to improve their income levels alongside increasing their QOL. Conclusively based on all these keywords, it can be inferred that concepts such as resources, facilities, education, opportunities, income, employment, and government are related to the driving forces of the QOL among the participants.

Conclusion

Sri Lanka being a much untapped indicator in terms of visually impaired people, has become a significant and growing issue. Within such a conundrum, this unseen territory of the impaired community faces the burden of earning a worthwhile income for their living. This situation is evidently proven through the results of this study. It was discovered that only one-fourth (25%) of VIB people achieve an income level of SLRs 10,000–25,000/- as the highest earned, flagging a serious concerning point. This means the majority (75%) of visually impaired people are vulnerable to lower QOL, poor living conditions, compromised well-being etc. Much complex future issues can stem from this adverse scenario. In this setting, it is recommended to effectively handle the issue to ‘nip it from the bud’. Or else, the problem may not be manageable for governments, authorities and policymakers, community and stakeholders (such as sponsors, development organisations).

Allowing VIB people to not only gain financial independence and see the brighter side of their dark world but to strengthen them emotionally and mentally, is the call of the hour. In doing so, it makes them aware that they are not being marginalised, underprivileged or forgotten. Regardless of gender, empowerment of VIB people is recommended for both males and females. E-commerce can be a strong platform for VIB people to market their products, where the physical presence of shops is not required, thus saving cost on rent/cash unnecessarily tied up in large stocks of raw materials of finished goods. This effort needs to be supported through regional coordination; this is because, due to visionary conditions, the VIB community needs support in terms of building their business presence and product promotions/customer relationship management. These include tasks related to computers, smartphones/related devices for frequent product updates that align with approaches of social media/online and e-commerce platforms. Concepts like good market, CAN market etc., in Colombo city, Sri Lanka, can be extended for VIB entrepreneurs/self-employed VIB people to secure markets and help them fetch good prices for their products.

The married category achieves an income level of SLRS 25,0000–50,000. However, as mentioned previously, this portion does not represent the bulk of VIB. Hence, it is vital to enhance the earning potential of VIB, considering their household expenses are relatively high compared to single, divorced or widowed VIB people.

Priority should also be given to VIB people with increasing age. Further, the VIB population ageing, and the rising trend of the ageing population can aggravate several social issues. Income security becomes a burning issue amidst intensifying socio-economic variables. Therefore, Sri Lanka should formulate policies to minimise such risks and social costs.

The present study has some limitations which can be addressed in future studies. The survey was restricted to three highly ranked districts with visually impaired people. Another drawback is that the feedback of some respondents has not been incorporated well enough to provide the most accurate information. Even with these limitations, the study reveals the rising social issue of the inability of this community to generate a worthwhile/reasonable income due to their visual incapacities. Therefore, the proposed policies would be worth catering to this social group to address the barriers/root causes of wealth prosperity.

Supporting information

S1 Appendix. Data file.

(XLSX)

Acknowledgments

Authors acknowledge the contributions of following institutions and people involved. This is an outcome of research project on ‘Quality of Life and Employability potential of Persons with Visual Impairment and Blindness in Sri Lanka’ of Business School of the Sri Lanka Institute of Information Technology, Colombo Sri Lanka under the Accelerating Higher Education Expansion and Development (AHEAD) project in Sri Lanka, which is coordinated by the Operations Monitoring and Support Team (OMST) of the Ministry. The authors also would like to thank Ms. Gayendri Karunarathne for proof-reading and editing this manuscript.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the paper and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

This work was supported by the World Bank, Sri Lanka (AHEAD DOR Grant number 09). The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: The authorps present a paper on income and visual impairment/blindness in a sample of adults from Sri Lanka. The following are some comments for consideration and potential improvement of the manuscript:

-There were many points in the manuscript where the language used felt awkward or interferred with my ability to understand the points that the authors were trying to convey. Assistance from an outside editior may be helpful in improving the readability and clarity of the manuscript. For example, I am not sure what the follwing paragraph means:

"From the standpoint of total individuals, it was discovered that persons who suffer

from some sort of visual impairment are more vulnerable to be tagged mainly with earning

income levels of up to SLRs.10,000 and SLRs.10,000-25,000. Remarkably, it was further

identified that most severely impaired persons earn a significant income comparable to the

above-mentioned income levels. It can be concluded that persons with severe vision disorders

have the probability of earning at least up to an income level of up to SLRs.10,000 and

SLRs.10,000 to 25,000 correspondingly."

-In the introduction, more information on prevalence of blindness and visual impairment in Sri Lanka specifically would be appreciated.

-More context for what these income levels mean in the Sri Lankan context (e.g., poverty, lower class, middle class, upper class would be helpful) in contextualizing the results.

-The qualitative portion of the study(Phase 3) was extremely under-developed in its presentation. Qualitative methodology is rich and complex and yet no information was given on the interview content and methods, the coding methods and approaches for the qualitative data, how inter-coder agreement was assessed, how translation occured if needed, etc. This makes it more or less impossible to truly understand the rigour or meaningfulness of the Phase 3 results.

Reviewer #2: I would like to thank all authors for their effort on producing this manuscript. However I have some major concerns.

1.Authors have been mention in the abstract "Due to this excruciating elevated rate on medication and treatments to cure the optical concerns, the visual disorders of people keep rising day by day." I have my doubts on this point. Many different eye conditions can cause low vision, but the most common causes are: Age-related macular degeneration (AMD) , Cataracts.

Diabetic retinopathy (a condition that can cause vision loss in people with diabetes). Its mainly modifiable and non modifiable risk factors associated with NCDs.

2. The objective of this study is to "identify the impact of different levels of vision and socio-economic characteristics towards income of people". I am not very clear about this point weather authors have demonstrated the relevant results. Regression analysis was mainly conducted different Income levels as dependent variable. I am unable to find out confounding effect on socioeconomic characteristics towards impaired vision and income.

3. Authors have mentioned "Majority of severely impaired individuals are more likely to earn a lower rate of income leading them to have a degraded quality of life." It is not clear how quality of life has been measured.

4. To my understanding visual impairment has always direct effect/impact on income and quality of life. The different visual impalement levels could have different levels of quality of life values/levels.Are there any socio-economic characteristics which significantly associated with theses different stages. This can be very important for policy decisions.

5. If possible performing a diamention reduction methods and path analysis will help to assess the hypothesis on above mention points. I believe identifying few unique risk factors which can improved in a developing country with minimal financial input will be more benefited to the community and practically applicable.

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11 Jan 2023

Point by point response to editor and reviewers

Dear editor and the reviewers,

We would like to express our profound appreciation to the editor and the reviewers for the valuable comments and suggestions made on our manuscript which were very helpful in revising and improving it.

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Authors’ Response: Noted on this comment made, with many thanks! The title is corrected as suggested by the editor in the revised manuscript

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Authors’ Response: Duly noted on the comment with thanks. The funding information/disclosure is now in the same format as follows,

“This work was supported by the World Bank, Sri Lanka (AHEAD DOR Grant number 09). The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript”

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“Authors acknowledge the contributions of following institutions and people involved. This is an outcome of research project on ‘Quality of Life and Employability potential of Persons with Visual Impairment and Blindness in Sri Lanka’ of Business School of the Sri Lanka Institute of Information Technology, Colombo Sri Lanka. This project is supported by the World Bank funded Accelerating Higher Education Expansion and Development (AHEAD) programme implemented through the Ministry of Higher Education and the University Grants Commission (UGC) of Sri Lanka, which is coordinated by the Operations Monitoring and Support Team (OMST) of the Ministry. The authors also would like to thank Ms. Gayendri Karunarathne for proof-reading and editing this manuscript.”

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Authors’ Response: Well noted and many thanks for notifying about this information. The acknowledgement section mentioned in the revised manuscript is updated as follows,

“Authors acknowledge the contributions of following institutions and people involved. This is an outcome of research project on ‘Quality of Life and Employability potential of Persons with Visual Impairment and Blindness in Sri Lanka’ of Business School of the Sri Lanka Institute of Information Technology, Colombo Sri Lanka under the Accelerating Higher Education Expansion and Development (AHEAD) project in Sri Lanka, which is coordinated by the Operations Monitoring and Support Team (OMST) of the Ministry. The authors also would like to thank Ms. Gayendri Karunarathne for proof-reading and editing this manuscript”.

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Reviewer 1 General Comment : The authors present a paper on income and visual impairment/blindness in a sample of adults from Sri Lanka. The following are some comments for consideration and potential improvement of the manuscript:

Authors’ Response: Thank you very much for sparing your valuable time on reviewing this manuscript. The comments given are very well appreciated and they have been incorporated accordingly.

Reviewer 1 Comment 1: There were many points in the manuscript where the language used felt awkward or interfered with my ability to understand the points that the authors were trying to convey. Assistance from an outside editor may be helpful in improving the readability and clarity of the manuscript. For example, I am not sure what the following paragraph means:

"From the standpoint of total individuals, it was discovered that persons who suffer from some sort of visual impairment are more vulnerable to be tagged mainly with earning income levels of up to SLRs.10,000 and SLRs.10,000-25,000. Remarkably, it was further identified that most severely impaired persons earn a significant income comparable to the above-mentioned income levels. It can be concluded that persons with severe vision disorders have the probability of earning at least up to an income level of up to SLRs.10,000 and SLRs.10,000 to 25,000 correspondingly."

Authors’ Response: Thank you for indicating this point for improvement. The paper has been revised thoroughly and in-depth proofreading check has been performed by a linguistic professional.

The following paragraph was strengthened with further elaboration in the revised manuscript in page number 25 from line 50 to 54 as follows,

…….“As per the authors' observations, the majority who suffer from severe visual impairment disorders earn an income in the range of SLRs.10,000-25,000. It can be concluded that even with such disorders, this community has the probability of earning an income to satisfy their daily needs”.

Reviewer 1 Comment 2: In the introduction, more information on prevalence of blindness and visual impairment in Sri Lanka specifically would be appreciated.

Authors’ Response: Thank you very much and the revised version has intensified the introduction. The information on the “prevalence of blindness and visual impairment in Sri Lanka” are stated in the introduction section from line 81 to 85 in page 5

…..“ The survey conducted by the Government of Sri Lanka (GOSL) in 2016 revealed the prevalence of blindness in Sri Lanka was 1.6% and 15.4%, respectively, concerning severe visual impairment and blind conditions. This rate varies for different provinces, where the highest was from Uva and Southern provinces (2.9% and 0.29%)”.

Reviewer 1 Comment 3: More context for what these income levels mean in the Sri Lankan context (e.g., poverty, lower class, middle class, upper class would be helpful) in contextualizing the results.

Authors’ Response: Thank you for the insightful comment. The methodology section of the paper has been improved by adding the meaning of income levels in the Sri Lankan context. The detail information is available in Table 1. The explanation starts from line 208 to 212 in page 11 and 12.

Reviewer 1 Comment 4: The qualitative portion of the study (Phase 3) was extremely under-developed in its presentation. Qualitative methodology is rich and complex and yet no information was given on the interview content and methods, the coding methods and approaches for the qualitative data, how inter-coder agreement was assessed, how translation occurred if needed, etc. This makes it more or less impossible to truly understand the rigour or meaningfulness of the Phase 3 results.

Authors’ Response: Well noted with many thanks for the comment. The authors agree with the reviewer’s comment and the qualitative portion of the study is now developed with the necessary information as suggested by this reviewer. The detailed explanation is available in the revised manuscript from line 157 to 174 in page 9 as follows,

“In phase three of the study, explicit interviews were held through focus group discussions (FGDs) to capture the factors affecting the quality of life of persons with VIB. Eleven individuals (four females and seven females) were purposively selected to represent the VIB community. All these participants were from various socio-economic backgrounds and distinct cadres in the society, including lawyers, undergraduates, academicians, entrepreneurs, development officers and committee members from diverse VIB voluntary organisations. The selected sample includes VIB individuals from different age categories ranging from 20 to 60 years living in rural and urban areas of the country. Their detailed information is not disclosed due to ethical reasons and privacy. The FGDs were held online through zoom platform using two languages (Sinhala and English) based on their fluency. The interviews lasted on average 3 hours and 40 minutes. All these discussions were recorded with participants’ prior consent and manually transcribed for analytical purposes”.

Reviewer 2 General Comment : I would like to thank all authors for their effort on producing this manuscript. However, I have some major concerns.

Authors’ Response: Thank you very much for reviewing this paper and we have addressed the valuable comments given in the revised manuscript.

Reviewer 2 Comment 1: Authors have been mentioned in the abstract "Due to this excruciating elevated rate on medication and treatments to cure the optical concerns, the visual disorders of people keep rising day by day." I have my doubts on this point. Many different eye conditions can cause low vision, but the most common causes are: Age-related macular degeneration (AMD), Cataracts.

Diabetic retinopathy (a condition that can cause vision loss in people with diabetes). It’s mainly modifiable and non-modifiable risk factors associated with NCDs.

Authors’ Response: Thank you for the valuable comment! We agree with the point raised by this reviewer. Many eye conditions can cause low vision as you highlighted like AMD, Cataracts and Diabetic retinopathy.

But even with such reasons one can increase his/her low vision issues, when there is a higher price rate on medication and treatments to cure the optical concerns.

This was what we wanted to emphasise from that sentence. However, since the reviewer had a doubt, and we amended the sentence and it is available in the revised manuscript from line number 36 to 39 in page number 3 as follows,

“Different eye conditions can cause low vision. Apart from all other reasons, due to the unbearable higher price rates on medication and treatments, people's visual disorders keep rising daily keep rising daily.”

Reviewer 2 Comment 2: The objective of this study is to "identify the impact of different levels of vision and socio-economic characteristics towards income of people". I am not very clear about this point whether authors have demonstrated the relevant results. Regression analysis was mainly conducted different Income levels as dependent variable. I am unable to find out confounding effect on socioeconomic characteristics towards impaired vision and income.

Authors’ Response: Thank you for the comment. As per the objective of the study, we only discovered whether there is an effect from vision impairment and socio-economic characteristics towards income.

To further clarify, this study does not find the confounding effect on socio-economic characteristics towards impaired vision and income as it goes beyond the objective of this study.

In the results and discussion section, under phase two section from line 284 to 295 in page number 16 explains the mediating effect of vision levels and socio-economic status on income levels of this community.

Reviewer 2 Comment 3: Authors have mentioned "Majority of severely impaired individuals are more likely to earn a lower rate of income leading them to have a degraded quality of life." It is not clear how quality of life has been measured.

Authors’ Response: Whilst thanking for the comment, we would like to highlight that there is no specific tool to measure the quality-of-life dimension. Since the reviewer has a doubt on the clarity of the quality-of-life dimension, we would like to bring out this valuable comment into consideration. This part is added to the results and discussion section under the phase three in page 26 from line 72 to 77 in the revised manuscript as follows,

….“The World Health Organization (WHO) defines Quality of Life “as an individual’s perception of their position in life in the context of the culture and value systems in which they live and concerning their goals, expectations, standards and concerns” [28, p.3]. It relates to life satisfaction, including everything from physical health, family, education, employment, wealth, safety, security to freedom, religious beliefs, and the environment…”

Reviewer 2 Comment 4: To my understanding visual impairment has always direct effect/impact on income and quality of life. The different visual impairment levels could have different levels of quality-of-life values/levels. Are there any socio-economic characteristics which significantly associated with these different stages. This can be very important for policy decisions.

Authors’ Response: Thank you for indicating this point for enhancement. As per the objective of the study, we investigated the impact of socio-economic characteristics and vision levels towards income. For this study, we didn’t find the association of how socio-economic characteristics are associated with different impairment stages.

Therefore, as per the reviewer’s valuable suggestion, to identify how socio-economic characteristics associate with different impairment levels, we will be conducting another study. It is with great thanks; we would like to incorporate this significant comment into consideration for our next study which is currently under the drafting process.

Reviewer 2 Comment 5: If possible, performing a dimension reduction methods and path analysis will help to assess the hypothesis on above mention points. I believe identifying few unique risk factors which can improved in a developing country with minimal financial input will be more benefited to the community and practically applicable.

Authors’ Response: Thank you very much for indicating this point for development. Currently we are in the process of collecting an island wide data collection from the VIB community of Sri Lanka which will be completed by the year 2024. We will be incorporating a larger sample size for the next study and for that we are planning to apply the recommended dimension reduction method and path analysis.

We highly believe that it can be helpful to identify the unique risk factors for the development of the country.

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Decision Letter 1

Pratap Chandra Mohanty

20 Mar 2023

PONE-D-22-15053R1Can Visual Impairment Impact Your Income Potential?PLOS ONE

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Reviewer #2: I thank all the authors for there responses. Authors have address all the review comments raised by me. There is a significant improvement and and clarity added to the manuscript.

Reviewer #3: This manuscript needs more extensive editing.

Introduction is not clear and gives misleading information, objectives not clearly written, methods not described adequately, trying to highlight the statistics made it less understandable, more importantly no clear statement on Ethical clearance for human subject research...

Do you have evidence to confirm your first sentence in the abstract?

I am not sure about it. On the other hand I am also not sure on which medications you talk about medications which prevent visual impairment and blindness.

Regarding the objective; Everybody know that socio-economic characteristics will adversely affect towards the income of people. So why do you want to study that?

I recommend getting help from a public health specialist and ophthalmologist to write this article and need more concise writing. Please get help from English editing services as well.

This sentence cannot be clearly understood, “The survey conducted by

the Government of Sri Lanka (GOSL) in 2016 revealed the prevalence of blindness in Sri

Lanka was 1.6% and 15.4%, respectively, concerning severe visual impairment and blind

conditions.”

Blind conditions = blindness

What do you want to say here ? “The survey conducted by

the Government of Sri Lanka (GOSL) in 2016 revealed the prevalence of blindness in Sri

Lanka was 1.6% and 15.4%, respectively, concerning severe visual impairment and blind

Conditions”

Have you got the clearance from an ethical review committee as this study involves human subjects? It is not clear in your statements that you have got is. If yes give the reference numbers and details.

The readers are not in a position to understand the statistics. Kindly make it clear and simple.

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2 Apr 2023

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Dear Reviewers,

We would like to express our profound appreciation to the reviewers for the valuable comments and suggestions made on our manuscript which were very helpful in revising and improving it. Please note that the line numbers referred in this document is aligned with the revised manuscript which has track changes.

Reviewer 1 comment 1: I thank all the authors for there responses. Authors have address all the review comments raised by me. There is a significant improvement and and clarity added to the manuscript.

Authors' Response to Reviewer 1 comment 1: Thank you very much for the comment and we highly appreciate your time and effort contributed to this manuscript to grow into a success.

Reviewer 2 comment 1: This manuscript needs more extensive editing.

Authors' Response to Reviewer 2 comment 1: Thank you very much and well noted for raising this point. The comment is well addressed with the below suggested comments in the revised version.

Reviewer 2 comment 2: Introduction is not clear and gives misleading information, objectives not clearly written, methods not described adequately, trying to highlight the statistics made it less understandable, more importantly no clear statement on Ethical clearance for human subject research...

Authors' Response to Reviewer 2 comment 2: Well noted and thank you for raising these points.

Since the objectives are not clearly written, we have re-structured and is now stated from line number 95 to 98 as follows,

“The objective of the present study is to fill this empirical gap. In doing so, the study can be considered extensive, as it investigates the impact of different levels of vision and other socio-economic characteristics on the income of visually impaired people”

We do agree that the methodology is not described adequately in the version one. In the 2nd round of revision, the same comment was raised, and we incorporated, and the methodology is now in a more understandable and clear flow according to the below structure,

1. Study population and data collection process

2. Statistical analysis with in detail instructions of all types of methodologies used in the study

3. Definitions of each variable

4. Ethical statements

The ethical sentence is further updated (From line number 267 to 276) with the accessed grant numbers to understand the ethical protection of human utilized in the study as follows,

“This study was conducted once the Ethical Clearance Board of Sri Lanka Institute of Information Technology (SLIIT) granted ethical clearance approval. Accordingly, the study objectives were conveyed to respondents prior to commencing the survey and their informed consent was obtained. Participants’ data are secured with a high level of confidentiality and stored under AHEAD Project (DOR 1 HEMS) for Persons with Visual Impairment and Blindness at the SLIIT Business School, Sri Lanka Institute of Information Technology, Malabe, Sri Lanka”

Reviewer 2 comment 3: Do you have evidence to confirm your first sentence in the abstract?

I am not sure about it. On the other hand I am also not sure on which medications you talk about medications which prevent visual impairment and blindness.

Regarding the objective; Everybody know that socio-economic characteristics will adversely affect towards the income of people. So why do you want to study that?

Authors' Response to Reviewer 2 comment 3: Well noted and many thanks for notifying about this information. Since the first sentence is doubtful, we have changed it to a more globalized setting regarding the persons with visual impairment and blindness from line number 29 to 42 as follows,

“People’s quality of life (QOL) has been disrupted globally in the wake of the pandemic in recent times. This was mainly due to global economic crises fueled by the coronavirus (COVID – 19) and other related factors. Sri Lanka, too, was facing major social and economic constraints in the period 2021 –2022. Thus, all communities island wide have been economically disturbed. Among others, people with Visual Impairment and Blindness (VIB) have been pushed to severely disadvantageous positions, financially and otherwise.”

However, this study does not communicate about any preventive medications. It previously discussed about the medicine price escalation due to high inflation (Dabare et al., 2014)

Therefore, in such a condition, if there is any person who have less vision and can be treatable as per the World Health Organization Statistics, will find it difficult to get the treatments and medicines due to the price escalation.

(“Globally, at least 2.2 billion people have a near or distance vision impairment. In at least 1 billion – or almost half – of these cases, vision impairment could have been prevented or has yet to be addressed”)

(https://www.who.int/news-room/fact-sheets/detail/blindness-and-visual-impairment)

(Dabare, P.R.L., Wanigatunge, C.A. & Beneragama, B.H. A national survey on availability, price and affordability of selected essential medicines for non-communicable diseases in Sri Lanka. BMC Public Health 14, 817 (2014). https://doi.org/10.1186/1471-2458-14-817)

As per your second comment, we admit that everybody knows socio-economic characteristics will adversely affect towards the income of people. Yet, the effect of how persons with visual impairment grapple with the above condition is unknown which led us to conduct this study. Furthermore, there are multiple significances for conducting this kind of a study as follows,

1. It can enlighten the growth of personalized assistance and training programs that deliver the special needs of visually impaired individuals.

2. This study can offer valuable knowledge to employers and policy makers about the economic benefits of hiring and supporting visually impaired workers.

3. It can help to identify and address discrepancies in income and employment prospects between visually impaired individuals and their sighted peers.

4. The study can expand research into the broader societal influences of visual impairment and the significance of addressing this issue from an economic, as well as a social, perspective.

5. This study can further support to challenge stereotypes and misconceptions about the visually impaired individual’s abilities and potentials in the workplace and society more broadly.

As per your valuable comment we have strengthen the significance of the study from line number 99 to 119 follows,

“This research is significant from the existing studies and contributes to the literature in four ways. Firstly, visual impairment and the income level of these victims have become a major issue in the 21st century, in terms of health and economic aspects. In these circumstances, this issue of visual health requires the attention of regulatory authorities such as the government, health sector, policymakers, other organisations and the general public. Secondly, no previous research study has been conducted concerning the area under consideration, addressing the local scenario. According to available information, this study will be the first endeavour of this kind of econometric research study covering the impact of levels of vision and other socio-economic characteristics towards the income of visually impaired and blind persons based in Sri Lanka. Thirdly, according to the World Health Organization (WHO), over 2.2 billion people suffered from visual disorders worldwide; over 90% of them were from low and middle-income countries, which is the main cause of blindness in Asia and Africa [2]. Therefore, after completing this study, the findings can provide valuable insights to the GOSL for formulating strategies and policies. The findings will also benefit the healthcare sector and policymakers aiming to recover from the setback encountered by the COVID-19 pandemic and revive the economy and QOL of visually impaired people. In this regard, the health sector could utilise these data to spread awareness and expand its healthcare facilities regarding this pandemic, especially among individuals with VIB who are badly affected by the crisis.”

Reviewer 2 comment 4: I recommend getting help from a public health specialist and ophthalmologist to write this article and need more concise writing. Please get help from English editing services as well.

Authors' Response to Reviewer 2 comment 4: Noted with many thanks for these two valuable suggestions!

This study comes as a sub project of the AHEAD research project for persons with visual impairment and blindness. Therefore, prior to writing this article, the data collection questionnaires for quantitative and qualitative investigations, was reviewed and finalized, with medical consultations and ophthalmologists and also the study data was further validated by an entire team consisting different specialist from different areas.

Furthermore, for the second comment, the authors would like to appreciate your valuable suggestion. The paper has been revised thoroughly and in-depth proofreading check has been performed by a linguistic professional.

Reviewer 2 comment 5: This sentence cannot be clearly understood, “The survey conducted by

the Government of Sri Lanka (GOSL) in 2016 revealed the prevalence of blindness in Sri

Lanka was 1.6% and 15.4%, respectively, concerning severe visual impairment and blind

conditions.”

Authors' Response to Reviewer 2 comment 5: Thank you very much for indicating this point for improvement. The following sentence was used to strengthened with further elaboration in the revised manuscript in page number 04 from line 77 to 82 as follows,

“The survey conducted by the VISION-2020 national workshop programme by the Government of Sri Lanka (GOSL) in 2016 in collaboration with the International Agency for the Prevention of Blindness (IAPB) South East Asia revealed the prevalence of blindness in Sri Lanka was 1.6% and 15.4%, respectively, concerning severe visual impairment and blindness”.

Reviewer 2 comment 6: Blind conditions = blindness

Authors' Response to Reviewer 2 comment 6: Duly noted and thank you very much for the suggestion. The suggested comment was well addressed in the revised manuscript in page 4 in line number 82 as follows,

“The survey conducted by the VISION-2020 national workshop programme by the Government of Sri Lanka (GOSL) in 2016 in collaboration with the International Agency for the Prevention of Blindness (IAPB) South East Asia revealed the prevalence of blindness in Sri Lanka was 1.6% and 15.4%, respectively, concerning severe visual impairment and blindness”.

Reviewer 2 comment 7: What do you want to say here ? “The survey conducted by

the Government of Sri Lanka (GOSL) in 2016 revealed the prevalence of blindness in Sri

Lanka was 1.6% and 15.4%, respectively, concerning severe visual impairment and blind

Conditions”

Authors' Response to Reviewer 2 comment 7: Noted with thanks! As per the suggestion given in the second revision by reviewer 01, we included the recent survey statistics of persons with visual impairment and blindness in the Sri Lankan perspective conducted by the vision 2020 program to show the prevalence of these individuals. That is the reason behind including this statement. However, since the statement had some confusions in the previous comment, we revised it and is shown in the above comments 05 and 06.

Reviewer 2 comment 8: Have you got the clearance from an ethical review committee as this study involves human subjects? It is not clear in your statements that you have got is. If yes give the reference numbers and details.

Authors' Response to Reviewer 2 comment 8: Well noted and thank you very much for the comment. This research paper is based on a specific study under the World Bank funded comprehensive research project entitled quality of life and employability potential of persons with visual impairment and blindness in Sri Lanka. The ethical clearance application was submitted to the Dean – Postgraduate Studies and Research and Chairman of the Ethics Committee of Sri Lanka Institute of Information Technology on 16th March 2021. The approval of the ethics committee was obtained on December 5th, 2021. Accordingly, all research activities were conducted strictly under ethical guidelines. This ethical clearance refers to quantitative and qualitative data collections from the persons who are visually challenged and blind in Sri Lanka.

The ethical clearance paragraph is further updated (line number 267 to 276) in page number 14 as follows,

“This study was conducted once the Ethical Clearance Board of Sri Lanka Institute of Information Technology (SLIIT) granted ethical clearance approval. Accordingly, the study objectives were conveyed to respondents prior to commencing the survey and their informed consent was obtained. Participants’ data are secured with a high level of confidentiality and stored under AHEAD Project (DOR 1 HEMS) for Persons with Visual Impairment and Blindness at the SLIIT Business School, Sri Lanka Institute of Information Technology, Malabe, Sri Lanka”

Reviewer 2 comment 9: The readers are not in a position to understand the statistics. Kindly make it clear and simple.

Authors' Response to Reviewer 2 comment 9: Thank you for raising this information. As per your valuable suggestion, in order to make the statistics more precise and simpler, the authors incorporated detailed information about the methodology used to investigate the impact of the variables in the revised manuscript and we also incorporated textbooks and different articles to further understand the statistics

in page number 10 from line 193 to 204 as follows,

“Before conducting the Ordered probit regression model, it is vital to contemplate three main considerations as to whether the objective fits with the regression model [10, 13-17]. The three main considerations are model specification, model building, and model diagnosis check. The model specifications allow the researchers to identify the dependent and independent variables identified as income and levels of vision along with other socio-economic factors such as age, gender, marital status, employability, and education. The model building allows the researchers to specify the process to build the equation concerning the variables of the present research study; further, it provides the pathway to explain the variation between income (Dependent variable) and levels of vision along with other socio-economic characteristics (Independent variables)….”

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