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. 2023 Jun 29;18(6):e0287910. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0287910

Exploring the effect of industrial agglomeration on income inequality in China

Suhua Zhang 1,*, Yasmin Bani 1,*, Aslam Izah Selamat 1, Judhiana Abdul Ghani 1
Editor: Fuyou Guo2
PMCID: PMC10310039  PMID: 37384722

Abstract

Income inequality is a good indicator reflecting the quality of people’s livelihood. There are many studies on the determinants of income inequality. However, few studies have been conducted on the impacts of industrial agglomeration on income inequality and their spatial correlation. The goal of this paper is to investigate the impact of China’s industrial agglomeration on income inequality from a spatial perspective. Using data on China’s 31 provinces from 2003 to 2020 and the spatial panel Durbin model, our results show that industrial agglomeration and income inequality present an inverted “U-shape” relationship, proving that they are the non-linear change. As the degree of industrial agglomeration increases, income inequality will rise, after it reaches a certain value, income inequality will drop. Therefore, Chinese government and enterprises had better pay attention to the spatial distribution of industrial agglomeration, thereby reducing China’s regional income inequality.

Introduction

Income inequality within a country has widened almost everywhere in the world over the past few decades. Income inequality has become one of the important issues within most of countries in the world today [1, 2]. Based on the World Inequality Report 2020, the richest 10% account for 75% of global wealth. Due to the rapid growth of emerging economies such as China, Brazil, India and Malaysia, inequality between countries has started to decline. However, the gap within countries has been increasing. Growing income inequality within country is viewed as one of the greatest social challenges. Because income inequality will be harmful to regional development and growth, foster great social and political instability [3], and matter to the well-being of individuals [4].

Over the past 40 years of reform and opening up, China’s economy has achieved rapid development, but the problem of domestic income inequality has become more and more prominent. The Gini coefficient usually uses 0.4 as the “warning line” for income distribution gap. Based on China Statistical Yearbook (2021), China’s Gini coefficient has exceeded 0.4 and the trend is constantly rising. This is extremely dangerous for China’s stability. The Fifth Plenary Session of the 19th Central Committee of the Communist Party of China put forward long-term goals for 2035, including that all the people’s common prosperity will achieve more obvious substantive progress in China, to actively address domestic income inequality. In order to achieve common prosperity, the Chinese government implemented the development of the western region at the beginning of the 21st century, which encourages industrial agglomeration to move from the eastern region to the western region. In this regard, the study on whether industrial agglomeration has an impact on income inequality appears to be very important. If the answer is yes, to what extent does industrial agglomeration affect regional income inequality?

In recent years, some scholars have discussed the relationship between industrial agglomeration and income inequality. However, these is no universally accepted relationship between these variables. On the one hand, some scholars think that there is no significant correlation between industrial agglomeration and income inequality [5, 6]. On the other hand, some scholars believe that industrial agglomeration is the main cause of regional income inequality but there are different views on how industrial agglomeration affects income inequality. For example, Marchand [3] discovered that industrial agglomeration plays an important role in shaping income distribution and regions with high concentrations of manufacturing activities typically have lower income inequality. However, Xie et al. [7] believed that a high degree of industrial agglomeration will increase levels of inequality by attracting a large number of production factors to flow to the central area, promoting the rapid economic development of the central area, but causing relative poverty in the peripheral areas.

In light of the above opinions, this paper seeks to contribute to our understanding of the relationship between industrial agglomeration and income inequality in China from the following new perspectives. First of all, this paper presents an up-to-date portrait of the regional dimensions of income inequality across the country since the 21st century, which has been rarely depicted in the past. Secondly, most existing studies only focus on the linear impact of industrial agglomeration on income inequality, but the non-linear changes are not detailed enough. Industrial agglomeration affects income inequality through the agglomeration effect and crowding effect. It is easy to ignore the impact of the dynamic changes of the two effects on income inequality in the process of industrial agglomeration, which leads most studies to focus only on the linear relationship of the two variables. Therefore, this paper empirically investigates whether industrial agglomeration has a nonlinear relationship with income inequality. Finally, most previous studies have used traditional panel data analysis, ignoring the spatial correlation and spatial spillover effects of regional income inequality and industrial agglomeration. Thus, this paper uses global Moran’s I and local Moran’s I to test the spatial correlation of industrial agglomeration and income inequality respectively, then adopts the spatial Durbin model (SDM) to study the effect of industrial agglomeration on income inequality in China from 2003 to 2020.

The rest of this study is structured as follows. Section 2 reviews the literature on the link between industrial agglomeration and income inequality and other determinants of income inequality. Section 3 introduces the data, variables and methodology. Section 4 presents the results and discussion and in Section 5, the paper summarizes the suggestions and limitations.

Literature review

Measurement of industrial agglomeration

Industrial agglomeration has always been a hot topic in many disciplines. At present, there are many similar concepts to industrial agglomeration, such as enterprises agglomeration or cluster and industrial cluster. These three names are closely related concepts, but they have subtle differences. This paper mainly uses industrial agglomeration.

At the end of the 19th century, Marshall [8] proposed two important concepts, namely the “internal economy” and “external economy”, which pay attention to the economic phenomenon of industrial agglomeration. The concepts of “industrial concentration zone” and “Agglomeration Economies” were first proposed and used by Weber [9]. Porter [10] was the first to use “industrial agglomeration” to analyze cluster phenomena. Krugman [11] put forward that geographic agglomeration and specialization produce economies of scale, which in turn attract more companies to agglomerate and form industrial agglomerations. Han et al. [12] said that industrial agglomeration is defined as a cluster of companies in one or some interconnected industries concentrated in a certain area, which is united by common interests and complementary, and it is an important economic phenomenon in urban areas.

Based on the definition from Baidu Baike, industrial agglomeration refers to a process in which the same industry is highly concentrated in a certain geographic area, and the elements of industrial capital continue to converge within the space. To be specific, industrial agglomeration is a combination of many independent but interrelated enterprises and related supporting institutions that are highly concentrated in geographic space based on the relationship of specialized division of labor and collaboration, and form a strong and continuous competitive advantage.

Although there is consensus on the concept of industrial agglomeration, existing literature lacks a unified theory and method by which industrial agglomeration can be measured. Many scholars have devoted themselves to studying the measurement [1315]. Of the many measurement methods, there are some commonly used methods to measure industrial agglomeration. [11] used spatial Gini coefficient to measure the degree of industrial agglomeration. Its value is between 0 and 1 and this method is widely used. However, its disadvantage is that the spatial Gini coefficient greater than 0 does not necessarily indicate the existence of clustering. Ellison and Glaeser [16] proposed a new agglomeration index, the Ellison-Glaeser Index (E-G index), to measure the geographic concentration of industries based on the spatial Gini coefficient. The larger the value, the more obvious the trend of industrial agglomeration. Duranton and Overman [17] estimated the distance density of a single variable by using the Gaussian kernel function, which is the Duranton-Overman Index (D-O index). Because the D-O index has very strict data requirements, it is difficult to study China’s industrial agglomeration using the D-O index.

Although adopted by some scholars, the above methods are not suitable for this study because of the aforementioned shortcomings. Therefore, this paper employs the commonly used location quotient (LQ) to calculate the degree of industrial agglomeration. LQ is a very meaningful indicator to measure the spatial distribution of elements in a certain region and reflects the degree of specialization of a certain industrial sector. The greater the value of LQ, the greater the specialization rate. Munnich et al. [18] adopted LQ as the measurement standard. Peters [19] used LQ as the measurement standard. And he measured economic specialization for an industry in Missouri by calculating LQ for output, employment, compensation and foreign exports in 2000. Jiang and Xu [20] utilized location quotient (LQ) to measure the level of forestry industry agglomeration in Heilongjiang of China from the two perspectives of gross product and number of employees. Zhang et al. [21] employed LQ to measure the degree of industrial agglomeration taking industrial industries in different regions of China as research objects.

Linkages between industrial agglomeration and income inequality

Studying the determinants of income inequality is a hotly debated topic in governmental policy and academic inquiry. However, the literatures on the relationship between industrial agglomeration and income inequality are few. There is a relationship between the two, which cannot be ignored [3, 22].

At present, the existing empirical literature on industrial agglomeration and income inequality mainly focuses on the regional and urban-rural levels. Regarding the regional level, some empirical studies support that industrial agglomeration is not the main cause of regional income inequality. Meijers and Sandberg [6] and Maly [5] took Europe and the Czech Republic respectively as an example to empirically examine the inherent relationship between the multi-center agglomeration development model and the regional income inequality, and the results show that there is no significant correlation between the two.

On the other hand, some scholars believe that industrial agglomeration will affect the regional income inequality. Fan [23] empirically examined that regional specialization and manufacturing agglomeration are important reasons for the continuous expansion of the regional income inequality. Wang and Zhou [24] empirically proved that the impact of manufacturing agglomeration on regional income inequality has a significant inverted U-shape characteristic. At present, most regions in China are located to the left of the turning point, that is, the development of industrial agglomeration will still expand regional income inequality. Tao [25] empirically found that the effect of industrial agglomeration on the core and peripheral regions depends on the intensity of knowledge spillovers and economic growth. When knowledge spillovers are relatively weak, if industrial agglomeration promotes growth sufficiently, the underdeveloped regions will also obtain agglomeration dividends, thereby narrowing the regional gap.

Additionally, some scholars believe that the relationship between industrial agglomeration and regional income inequality has obvious regional heterogeneity. The empirical research of Xie et al. [7] shows that manufacturing agglomeration in China and the eastern region can help reduce the regional income inequality, while in the central and western regions it will widen the income inequality.

The above studies are analyzed from the regional level. In addition, some scholars analyze the effect of industrial agglomeration on the income inequality from the urban-rural level. Some empirical studies believe that industrial agglomeration has strengthened the dissemination of information in urban and rural areas, promoted the diffusion of advanced technologies [26], reduced transportation costs [27], stimulated the development of rural tourism [28], and created a large number of employment opportunities [29]. It can help rural areas develop better, thereby reducing the income inequality between urban and rural areas. Based on China’s provincial panel data from 2005 to 2016, Peng and Yuan [30] used the dynamic spatial Durbin model (DSDM) to analyze the impact of industrial agglomeration on the urban-rural income inequality. They empirically tested that manufacturing agglomeration and construction industry agglomeration can narrow the urban-rural income inequality, and industrial agglomeration in coastal areas has played a significant role in narrowing the income inequality between urban and rural areas. Some scholars analyze the influence of the agglomeration of the circulation industry on the income inequality between urban and rural areas, and they also empirically discover that the higher the circulation industry agglomeration and the smaller the urban-rural income inequality [31, 32].

However, a few empirical studies hold the opposite view. They believe that the polarization effect of industrial agglomeration is in a dominant position in China [33], and various production factors in rural areas have obviously flowed to cities. When cities have been further developed, rural areas have fallen into production dilemma [34], the urban-rural income inequality will further widen.

There are currently few literatures on the relationship between industrial agglomeration and income inequality. Most studies on the determinants of income inequality focus on regional economic development level, human capital, government expenditure scale, and unemployment and so on. Regional economic development level and regional inequality show an inverted-U pattern or “Kuznets curve”. Inequality will firstly increase as a country’s economy rises and finally decrease due to structural change and equilibrium forces on capital and labor [35]. Dunford and Perrons [36], Charron [37] and Iammarino et al. [38] empirically investigated that government expenditure scale is suggested to narrow the gap among regions and the governments should adopt heterogeneous development path of regions to deal with regional disparity. Behrens and Robert-Nicoud [39] and Castells-Quintana [40] empirically proved that regional inequality and population size are a U-shape relationship. They have tested that regional inequality tends to be highest in the cities which have the largest or smallest population. What’s more, the majority of empirical studies proved that higher income inequality results from unemployment [41], and the age structure [22].

Data and methodology

Variables construction

This paper empirically analyzes the impact of industrial agglomeration on income inequality in China from 2003 to 2020. There are many indicators to measure the income inequality, the most commonly used are the Gini coefficient, the generalized entropy (GE coefficient) and the Theil index and so on. Internationally, the Gini coefficient is the most widely used, and its advantage is that it can objectively and intuitively reflect and monitor the income gap between residents, but it cannot be decomposed in groups. The GE coefficient examines the differences between individuals from the concepts of entropy and information. Better than the Gini coefficient, the GE coefficient can divide income gaps into intra-group gaps and inter-group gaps, but its calculation is cumbersome [42]. The Theil index is often used to analyze the urban-rural income gap [30], but it is not suitable for the inter-provincial income inequality studied in this paper. Therefore, based on [43], this study uses the proportion of the per capita income of each province to the national per capita income as the dependent variable to represent regional income inequality (inequit), which is a relative value not an absolute value.

The independent variable studied in this paper is manufacturing industrial agglomeration (magg). It adopts the location quotient (LQ) in calculations. The calculation formula is based on Zhang et al. [44] and Zhang and Bani [45]:

magg=LQimagg=MitPitPtMt (1)

where Mit is the manufacturing population of province i at time t. Pit is the total employment population of province i at time t. Mt and Pt respectively represent the manufacturing population and total employment population of China at time t. Generally speaking, if LQ is bigger than 1, the manufacturing industry is highly agglomerated. If LQ is equal to 1, the degree of agglomeration of manufacturing industry is average. If LQ is less than 1, it indicates a low industrial agglomeration.

Table 1 shows the value of income inequality and manufacturing industrial agglomeration in 2020 and their growth rate in China, 2003 to 2020. The characteristics of dependent variable and independent variable can be summarized as follows. First, a high income inequality belt mainly focuses on the eastern coastal provinces in 2020 such as Beijing, Shanghai, Jiangsu, Zhejiang and Guangdong. The ratio of per capita income in the eastern region to the national per capita income is significantly higher than that in the western region, because eastern region has experienced fast development due to foreign direct investment (FDI) and its spillover effect since China’s reform and opening up in 1978. Second, although regional income inequality still exists in China in 2020, based on Table 1, most eastern coastal provinces have negative growth rates in inequality, while many central and western provinces have positive growth rates. This is closely related to the great western development strategy in China at the beginning of the 21st century. Third, it is seen that manufacturing industrial agglomeration in the eastern region are significantly higher than in the central and west in China in 2020. Its positive growth rate mainly includes Guangdong, Jiangxi, Zhejiang, Anhui, Henan, Jiangsu and Xinjiang. It’s because Xinjiang is the core area of China’s “Silk Road Economic Belt”, and the government is striving to improve Xinjiang’s manufacturing capabilities. The positive growth in other provinces is mainly due to that industries tend to agglomerate in resource-rich areas and economically developed areas [12]. Finally, the growth rate, whether it is income inequality or industrial agglomeration, has seen the problem of spatial autocorrelation. Provinces experiencing rapid drops (increases) tend to be located near other provinces with similar drops (increases). In order to test this more precisely, next, this paper will calculate the Moran’s I.

Table 1. The income inequality and manufacturing industrial agglomeration in 2020 and their growth rate in China, 2003 to 2020.

Province Income inequality Industrial agglomeration
Value Growth rate Value Growth rate
Beijing 2.0455 -0.1592 0.3618 -0.5276
Tianjin 1.2956 -0.2638 1.1412 -0.2322
Hebei 0.8474 -0.0214 0.7861 -0.1585
Shanxi 0.7884 -0.0458 0.5859 -0.2533
Inner Mongolia 0.9737 0.1089 0.5157 -0.2386
Liaoning 0.9941 -0.0716 0.9618 -0.1351
Jilin 0.7874 -0.1344 0.7894 -0.1534
Heilongjiang 0.7597 -0.1933 0.3966 -0.5115
Shanghai 2.1056 -0.1930 0.9050 -0.3379
Jiangsu 1.3285 0.0068 1.5145 0.1105
Zhejiang 1.5833 -0.1693 1.3503 0.2925
Anhui 0.8754 0.2090 1.0076 0.2214
Fujian 1.1391 -0.1337 1.1979 -0.2711
Jiangxi 0.8780 0.1045 1.0783 0.2919
Shandong 1.0090 -0.0684 1.1142 -0.1337
Henan 0.7733 0.0995 1.0007 0.1930
Hubei 0.8521 -0.0764 0.9220 -0.1560
Hunan 0.9166 0.0756 0.7154 -0.0241
Guangdong 1.2422 -0.3047 1.7587 0.3153
Guangxi 0.7669 -0.0054 0.5583 -0.2842
Hainan 0.8431 -0.0895 0.2966 -0.1488
Chongqing 0.9589 0.0235 0.8106 -0.1572
Sichuan 0.8363 0.0820 0.7244 -0.1668
Guizhou 0.7206 0.2831 0.3845 -0.5140
Yunnan 0.7365 0.1216 0.5042 -0.2607
Tibet 0.7045 -0.1762 0.1862 -0.0915
Shaanxi 0.8394 0.1992 0.6920 -0.2991
Gansu 0.6612 0.0868 0.4836 -0.4657
Qinghai 0.7680 0.0405 0.5810 -0.0153
Ningxia 0.8210 0.1079 0.6027 -0.1616
Xinjiang 0.7547 -0.0209 0.4543 0.1222

The source of data in Table 1 is the China Statistical Yearbook from 2004 to 2021.

The control variables of this study are as follows. Regional economic development level (pergdpit) is the actual per capita GDP after the deflation by the consumer price index (CPI) in 2003. Unemployment rate (unempit) is expressed by the ratio of unemployed persons to labor force in the region. Gross dependency ratio (GDRit) refers to the ratio of non-working-age population to the working-age population, describing in general the number of non-working-age population that every 100 people at working ages will take care of. Human capital (humanit) is represented by the average years of education. Government expenditure scale (govit) is measured by the proportion of government fiscal expenditures in the region’s GDP. Population size (sizeit) is expressed by the number of people in each region. Because the control variables about pergdpit, GDRit and sizeit vary greatly from 2003 to 2020 and their maximums and minimums are very different, the empirical studies will take the logarithm of these variables, such as lnpergdpit, lnGDRit and lnsizeit.

The descriptive statistics with 558 observations for each variable in this paper are discussed in Table 2.

Table 2. Descriptive statistics.

Variable Mean Std.Dev Minimum Maximum Source
inequ 1.013 0.439 0.511 2.750 CSY
magg 0.835 0.362 0.0938 1.828 CSY
lnpergdp 10.11 0.649 8.190 11.59 CSY
unemp 3.490 0.701 1.210 6.500 CSY
lnGDR 3.609 0.193 2.959 4.057 CSY
human 10.83 1.479 4.516 16.83 CLSY
gov 0.247 0.187 0.0768 1.379 CSY
lnsize 8.096 0.855 5.599 9.443 CPESY

Note: CSY, CLSY and CPESY represent China Statistical Yearbook, China Labour Statistical Yearbook and China Population and Employment Statistics Yearbook respectively.

Spatial correlation analysis

According to the previous content, there may be spatial autocorrelation between the dependent and independent variables in this study. If there is spatial autocorrelation of observations, spatial econometric models should be adopted to analyze the problem because ignoring the spatial autocorrelation can lead to biased results. Therefore, this section adopts Moran’s I to test their spatial autocorrelation. Helbich et al. [46] concluded that many scholars adopt index Moran’s I to test the spatial correlation of objects. There are two kinds of Moran’s I, including the global spatial autocorrelation index and local spatial autocorrelation index. The formula of global spatial autocorrelation index Moran’s I is expressed as follows:

GlobalMoransI=ni=1nj=1nWij×i=1nj=1nWijxix¯xjx¯i=1nxix¯2 (2)
Wij=1,ifprovinceiandjareadjacent0,ifnot (3)

where n is the total number of provinces, Wij is the spatial matrix, xi and xj represent the observation in the ith province and jth province respectively, and x¯ is the average of xi and xj. The value of Moran’s I is between -1 and 1. When the value is equal to 0, this means no spatial relationship. If the value is less than 0, the correlation between samples is negative, which shows that a negative spatial correlation exists in the variable. If the value is greater than 0, the correlation between samples is positive, which indicates that the variable represents a positive spatial correlation. When the value is closer to -1, the diffusion effect is stronger. On the other hand, the closer the value to 1, the more intense the agglomeration effect is. This paper conducts global space-related tests of income inequality and industrial agglomeration for 31 provinces in China from 2003 to 2020, analyzing the spatial interaction in income inequality or industrial agglomeration between provinces. The results are given in Table 3.

Table 3. Global Moran’s I for income inequality and industrial agglomeration.

Years Income inequality Industrial agglomeration
Moran’s I p-value Moran’s I p-value
2003 0.388 0.000 0.189 0.060
2004 0.388 0.000 0.233 0.023
2005 0.395 0.000 0.270 0.010
2006 0.407 0.000 0.288 0.006
2007 0.418 0.000 0.341 0.002
2008 0.428 0.000 0.344 0.001
2009 0.434 0.000 0.312 0.004
2010 0.449 0.000 0.318 0.003
2011 0.452 0.000 0.290 0.007
2012 0.451 0.000 0.308 0.004
2013 0.406 0.000 0.192 0.055
2014 0.406 0.000 0.181 0.068
2015 0.405 0.000 0.179 0.070
2016 0.406 0.000 0.194 0.053
2017 0.406 0.000 0.222 0.030
2018 0.403 0.000 0.235 0.022
2019 0.402 0.000 0.247 0.017
2020 0.402 0.000 0.260 0.013

Table 3 shows the test results of global Moran’s I of income inequality and industrial agglomeration in China from 2003 to 2020. Results show that the Moran’s I values of income inequality are statistically significant at the 1% level and the values are positive. The Moran’s I values of industrial agglomeration are also positive at a significant level of 5%, except in 2003, 2013, 2014, 2015 and 2016. The results illustrate that, at a significant level, China’s income inequality or industrial agglomeration between provinces is not completely random. A spatial autocorrelation of income inequality or industrial agglomeration exists, which indicates the larger value is adjacent to the larger and the smaller value is adjacent to the smaller value in China.

In the above global correlation analysis, global Moran’s I is significant, especially for income inequality. Therefore, income inequality is spatially correlated among the provinces in China. However, it is still unknown where the spatial agglomeration phenomenon exists. Therefore, this study uses the local Moran’s I index to help explain the results further. Zhang et al. [44] put forward that the local Moran’s I index is used to test the cluster-localized situation between observations. The formula for the local spatial autocorrelation index Moran’s I is displayed as follows:

LocalMoransI=xix¯S2j1nWijxix¯ (4)

A local Moran’s I › 0 shows that a smaller value is surrounded by other small values (small—small), or a larger value is surrounded by other large values (large—large). What’s more, Moran’s I ‹ 0 indicates that a larger value is surrounded by small values (large–small), or a smaller value is surrounded by large values (small–large).

This paper uses Moran scatterplots to further verify the spatial correlation between income inequality and manufacturing industrial agglomeration. Figs 1 and 2 present the Moran scatterplots of income inequality and industrial agglomeration for 31 Chinese provinces in 2003, 2009, 2014 and 2020 respectively. The sample value of 31 provinces is not randomly distributed in four quadrants but rather in a regular gathering distribution. Regarding the distribution of Moran scatterplots of income inequality, there are 24 provinces located in the first and third quadrant in 2003, 2009 and 2020, and 22 in 2014, where income inequality is low and the surrounding provinces’ inequalities are also low, such as Guizhou, Yunnan and Tibet, and those provinces with higher income inequality have neighboring provinces with higher income inequality, such as Fujian, Tianjin and Beijing. Additionally, the number of the provinces in the first and third quadrants accounts for about 77% in these four years. For the independent variable industrial agglomeration, the numbers of scattered points from 2003 to 2020 located in the first and third quadrants are 18, 20, 23 and 21 respectively. Compared with the Moran’s I values of income inequality, the Moran’s I values of industrial agglomeration in recent years are not very big, but it can not be ignored either. Thus, Figs 1 and 2 again confirm that significant spatial autocorrelation of income inequality exists.

Fig 1. Moran scatterplots of income inequality in 2003, 2009, 2014, and 2020.

Fig 1

Fig 2. Moran scatterplots of manufacturing industrial agglomeration in 2003, 2009, 2014, and 2020.

Fig 2

Model specification

The initial OLS model is based on Xie et al. [7] and Wang and Zhou [24].

inequit=alit+β1maggit+β2maggit2+δ×CVit+εit (5)

where i and t represent the province and time period respectively. The dependent variable inequit is income inequality. lit is a vector of constant terms. maggit is manufacturing industrial agglomeration. The independent variables are maggit and maggit2. According to Petrakos et al. [47], Cuaresma et al. [48], Breau [22], Essletzbichler [41], Charron [37], Jiang and Kim [49], Castells‐Quintana [40] and Iammarino et al. [38], CVit is a series of control variables, including lnpergdp, unemp, lnGDR, human, gov and lnsize. α, β1 and β2 are the coefficients and εit is the error term.

This paper studies the industrial agglomeration that not only affects income inequality in the province, but also income inequality of surrounding provinces. Income inequality between neighboring provinces also has spatial correlation and spatial spillover effects. Therefore, this paper will adopt a spatial panel model, the spatial Durbin model (SDM), which can take into account the spatial dependence of the dependent variable and the independent variables at the same time. The spatial econometric model was first proposed by Cliff and Ord [50], initially aimed at cross-sectional data and then expanded into a panel model by Anselin [51], Lee and Yu [52] and Zhao et al. [53]:

inequit=ρj=1nWijinequit+alit+β1maggit+β2maggit2+θj=1nWijmaggit+δ×CVit+φj=1nWijCVit+εit (6)

where Wij is the spatial weight matrix, which sets the weight matrix of 0 and 1 according to whether the space between the two regions is adjacent. ρ, θ and φ are the spatial coefficients. For instance, ρj=1nWijinequjt is the interactive relationship between the dependent variables in adjacent regions. If ρ › 0, there is a spatial spillover effect of the dependent variable in the neighboring area. If ρ ‹ 0, there is a siphon effect in the neighboring area–that is, the region with stronger economic strength–and development potential attracts the superior resources from the neighboring region.

Wij=1,ifprovinceiandjareadjacent0,ifnot (7)

Additionally, a combination of LM_Error, RLM_Error (spatial error robustness test), LM_Lag and RLM_Lag (spatial lag robustness test) is adopted to further validate why this study uses the spatial Durbin model (SDM) rather than other common spatial models. The results are shown in Table 4. Based on the model without spatial effect (except LM_Lag), all the null hypotheses are rejected. Thus, SDM model is usually given priority because both the spatial autoregressive model (SAR) and the spatial errors model (SEM) can be accepted [54]. This paper also uses LR test and Wald test to prove whether SDM model can be degenerated into SAR model or SEM model. It is obvious that both LR value and Wald value reject the null hypothesis. Therefore, SDM model is suitable to study the effect of industrial agglomeration on income inequality from a spatial perspective.

Table 4. Spatial econometric model testing.

Model LM_Error RLM_Error LM_Lag RLM_Lag LR_SAR LR_SEM Wald_SAR Wald_SEM
Spatial model 51.348*** 61.492*** 0.155 10.3*** 75.11*** 68.18*** 81.53*** 73.22***

Note:

*** p < 0.01,

** p < 0.05,

* p < 0.1.

To choose between a fixed effects model and random effects model, many scholars use the Hausman test to evaluate whether there is a systematic difference between the coefficients by FE and RE [55]. Based on the Hausman test, this paper chooses the fixed effects model instead of random effects model. In addition, the correlation coefficients between independent variables and control variables are low, which shows they have no strong correlations and there is no multicollinearity. Thus, our proposed models are expressed as follows.

inequit=ρj=1nWijinequit+alit+β1maggit+β2maggit2+θj=1nWijmaggit+δ1Inpergdpit+δ2Inpergdpit2+δ3umempit+δ4InGDRit+δ5humanit+δ6govit+δ7Insizeit+φ1j=1nWijInpergdpit+φ2j=1nWijgovit+εit (8)

Results and discussion

Empirical results

Based on the previous section, this paper uses fixed effects of the spatial Durbin model (SDM) to study the impact of manufacturing industrial agglomeration on regional income inequality. The results are shown in Table 5. Among them, (I), (II) and (III) use spatial Durbin model (SDM), and (IV) adopts ordinary least square (OLS). In regression (I), independent variables include industrial agglomeration (magg) and its quadratic term (magg2) to test whether income inequality and industrial agglomeration are the non-linear relationship. Additionally, it adds a control variable, regional economic development level (lnpergdp). R2 value in regression (I) is only 0.2788, which explains that the goodness of fit is relatively low. Regression (II) adds the quadratic term of regional economic development level (lnpergdp2) to investigate whether “Kuznets curve” exists. Its goodness of fit is not the best. Therefore, in regression (III), we add more control variables, including unemployment rate (unemp), gross dependency ratio (lnGDR), human capital (human), government expenditure scale (gov) and population size (lnsize). It can be seen that R2 value in regression (III) is higher than those in regression (I), (II) and (IV), indicating that the goodness of fit in (III) is the best and that SDM model used in this paper has strong explanatory power. In Table 5, the spatial coefficients ρ pass the test at a significance level of 1% and they are significantly positive, which means that the spatial Durbin model estimation is effective. What’s more, income inequality in neighboring provinces has a positive spillover impact on the province under study. Specifically, in regression (III), if the value of income inequality in neighboring provinces increases by 0.1, that in the province under study will increase 0.0351.

Table 5. The impacts of manufacturing industrial agglomeration on income inequality.

Inequ (I) (II) (III) (IV)
Magg 0.148* 0.267*** 0.189*** 0.366*
(1.90) (3.80) (2.89) (1.81)
magg2 -0.0599* -0.121*** -0.0812*** -0.133
(-1.81) (-4.01) (-2.91) (-1.18)
Lnpergdp 0.347*** 1.643*** 1.211*** 0.969**
(15.15) (15.27) (8.07) (2.09)
lnpergdp 2 -0.0672*** -0.0476*** -0.0465*
(-12.24) (-6.26) (-1.92)
Unemp -0.0247*** -0.0241*
(-3.81) (-2.03)
lnGDR 0.0805*** 0.0618
(3.58) (0.90)
Human -0.00930 -0.00849
(-1.57) (-0.70)
Gov -0.170*** -0.178
(-3.00) (-1.56)
Lnsize -0.370*** -0.659***
(-6.85) (-3.29)
Cons 1.123
(0.31)
Ρ 0.549*** 0.446*** 0.351***
(14.25) (11.44) (8.94)
W*magg 0.266*** 0.203*** 0.172***
(6.35) (5.30) (4.58)
W*lnpergdp -0.343*** -0.315*** -0.254***
(-14.59) (-14.86) (-11.60)
W*gov 0.222***
(3.01)
R 2 0.2788 0.4568 0.5868 0.5188

Note: t statistics in parentheses.

*** p < 0.01,

** p < 0.05,

* p < 0.1.

The values of the coefficients of the independent variables magg and magg2 in Table 5 are significant in regression (I), (II) and (III), especially at the 1% level in (III). Although the independent variables in regression (IV) are not significant, the signs of magg and magg2 are the same as (I), (II) and (III). Therefore, regarding the effect of manufacturing industrial agglomeration on income inequality, the results show that industrial agglomeration and income inequality present an inverted “U-shape” relationship, which proves that they are the non-linear change. As the degree of manufacturing industrial agglomeration increases, income inequality will rise, and when it reaches a certain value, income inequality will drop as the degree of industrial agglomeration increases. According to the calculation of the data in regression (III), when industrial agglomeration is estimated to be approximately 1.1638, the effect of industrial agglomeration on income inequality reaches its maximum. Holding control variables fixed, if the degree of industrial agglomeration increases from 0 to 1, the predicted rise in income inequality is 0.189 based on regression (III). However, if the degree of industrial agglomeration increases from 1 to 2, the predicted rise in income inequality is just 0.0266. Additionally, regression (I), (II) and (III) add the spatial spillover effect of manufacturing industrial agglomeration. It is obvious that the spatial spillover effect of industrial agglomeration is significantly positive at the 1% level. This means that industrial agglomeration in the neighboring provinces will promote income inequality in the province under study.

In Table 5, the signs of all control variables, either SDM model or OLS model, in their effects on income inequality are the same. Based on regression (III), the impact of regional economic development level on income inequality is significant at the 1% level and it presents an inverted “U-shape” change, which is consistent with “Kuznets curve”. Unemployment rate, government expenditure scale and population size have significantly negative effects on income inequality at the 1% level, indicating that these factors can dampen the growth of income inequality. The effect of gross dependency ratio on income inequality is significantly positive at the 1% level, which is in line with the actual situation. The impact of human capital on income inequality in China is not significant according to Table 5. In addition, regression (III) adds the spatial spillover effects of two control variables, including regional economic development level and government expenditure scale. The result shows that the spatial spillover effect of regional economic development level is significantly negative at the 1% level, which suggests that economic development level in the surrounding provinces contributes to reduce income inequality in the province under study. The spatial spillover effect of government expenditure scale is positive at a significance level of 1%, indicating that government expenditure scale in the surrounding provinces will increase income inequality in the province under analysis.

Robustness test

This paper will conduct a robustness test from two aspects, replacing independent variables and the spatial weight matrix. First, the robustness test is performed by selecting other indicators as explanatory variables and the independent variable manufacturing industrial agglomeration (magg) is replaced with manufacturing employment density (mden) which is the ratio of manufacturing employment to the area. Furthermore, based on the empirical evidence of Zhang et al. [56], including the one-period lagged independent and control variables can alleviate the potential endogeneity problem. Thus, the robustness is also tested by adopting the one-period lagged manufacturing industrial agglomeration (maggt−1) instead of manufacturing industrial agglomeration. In addition, some scholars believe that different spatial weight matrices can be constructed to verify whether the spatial model design is reasonable [57]. Thus, this paper introduces the economic distance weight matrix to test its robustness. The economic distance weight matrix: the main diagonal elements are 0. (i, j) of the non-main diagonal is Wij=1Y¯iY¯j (i≠j), Y¯i is the average real GDP per capita of region i in the sample from 2003 to 2017. Y¯j is the average real GDP per capita of region j in the sample. The results are shown in Table 6 Regression (III) is the estimation of the above SDM model (III) in Table 5. Regression (V) and (VI) are the estimations after replacing the independent variables by the one-period lagged manufacturing industrial agglomeration and manufacturing employment density respectively. Regression (VII) is the estimation after changing the spatial weight matrix using the economic distance weight matrix. W*magg, W*maggt−1, W*lnmden, W*lnpergdp and W*gov are the spatial coefficients. The estimation results of regression (III), (V), (VI) and (VII) show that all of the spatial coefficients ρ pass the test at the 1% significance level, which indicates that the four spatial models are effective. Regression (V) and (VI) show that the coefficients of the one-period lagged manufacturing industrial agglomeration and manufacturing employment density are significant, proving the results are still robust. The signs of the coefficients of magg and magg2 in regression (III) and (VII) are the same and they are all significant at the 1% level, indicating again that manufacturing industrial agglomeration and income inequality are the non-linear relationship.

Table 6. Robustness test of the spatial Durbin model.

Inequ (III) (V) (VI) (VII)
Magg 0.189*** 0.163***
(2.89) (2.65)
magg 2 -0.0812*** -0.0764***
(-2.91) (-2.91)
magg t−1 0.169**
(2.55)
maggt12 -0.0752***
(-2.67)
lnmden 0.0271*
(1.92)
lnmden 2 -0.0173***
(-7.25)
lnpergdp 1.211*** 1.405*** 0.933*** 0.938***
(8.07) (8.40) (6.24) (6.26)
lnpergdp 2 -0.0476*** -0.0568*** -0.0347*** -0.0354***
(-6.26) (-6.75) (-4.63) (-4.64)
Unemp -0.0247*** -0.0242*** -0.0282*** -0.0181***
(-3.81) (-3.61) (-4.48) (-2.91)
lnGDR 0.0805*** 0.0810*** 0.0502** 0.0836***
(3.58) (3.52) (2.10) (3.82)
human -0.00930 -0.00768 -0.00953 -0.00291
(-1.57) (-1.27) (-1.63) (-0.51)
Gov -0.170*** -0.157*** -0.195*** -0.0234
(-3.00) (-2.77) (-3.53) (-0.46)
Lnsize -0.370*** -0.350*** -0.472*** -0.438***
(-6.85) (-6.32) (-8.74) (-8.63)
P 0.351*** 0.365*** 0.299*** 0.308***
(8.94) (8.97) (7.48) (4.93)
W*magg 0.172*** 0.500***
(4.58) (7.47)
W*magg t−1 0.168***
(4.51)
W*lnmden 0.0572***
(3.64)
W*lnpergdp -0.254*** -0.261*** -0.233*** -0.206***
(-11.60) (-11.22) (-10.20) (-10.63)
W*gov 0.222*** 0.194*** 0.140*
(3.01) (2.59) (1.91)
R 2 0.5868 0.5828 0.6308 0.6536

Note: t statistics in parentheses.

*** p < 0.01,

** p < 0.05,

* p < 0.1.

Discussion

This study is aimed at investigating the impact of manufacturing industrial agglomeration on regional income inequality in China. Firstly, we adopt a relative value, the proportion of the per capita income of each province to the national per capita income, as the dependent variable. When the dependent variable is closer to 1, it shows the more equal regional income, which is also our goal. Based on Moran’s I of income inequality, this paper finds that income inequality in different provinces of China is not randomly distributed, but has a significant positive spatial correlation. This result is consistent with Peng and Yuan [30] and Wang and Liu [28] who examined the spatial autocorrelation of urban and rural income inequality in China. Most previous studies on income inequality, such as Bengtsson and Waldenström [58] and Heimberger [59], had paid little attention to its spatiality. However, in our study, both the spatial coefficient of income inequality and its Moran’s I are positive. The result indicates that income inequality in a province will be affected by income inequality of neighboring provinces.

Secondly, in our study, the impact of manufacturing industrial agglomeration on regional income inequality shows an inverted U-shape relationship which is similar to the result of Wang and Zhou [24]. In the initial stage, there is a positive correlation between manufacturing industrial agglomeration and income inequality. As industrial agglomeration increases, regional income inequality also rises. This is mainly because the agglomeration effect of manufacturing industrial agglomeration in the initial stage will be beneficial to the increase of per capita income of some regions, exceeding the national per capita income, while other regions are not so lucky, and the per capita income of these regions will be lower than the national per capita income, which results in an increase in income inequality in China as industrial agglomeration increases. However, when industrial agglomeration reaches a certain value, industrial agglomeration will contribute to reduce regional income inequality, because the crowding effect will dominate instead of the agglomeration effect. When some regions develop to a certain extent, limited resources will promote industrial agglomeration to spread to other regions, increase per capita income of other regions, and thus effectively reduce regional income inequality. The result is not consistent with most of literatures, such as Peng and Yuan [30] and Tao [25]. They ignored the nonlinear relationship between industrial agglomeration and income inequality. Additionally, manufacturing industrial agglomeration in the neighboring regions will increase income inequality in the region. This is because unbalanced industrial agglomeration in and around the region will contribute to income inequality in the region.

Thirdly, based on the results of the control variables, unemployment rate, government expenditure scale and population size have significantly negative effects on income inequality, explaining that these three factors can help reduce income inequality. The result of government expenditure scale is in line with that of Dunford and Perrons [36], Charron [37] and Iammarino et al. [38]. However, the effects of unemployment rate and population size on income inequality are not consistent with most of studies. This is because our study uses the proportion of the per capita income of each province to the national per capita income as income inequality. When unemployment rate and population size increase, it will dilute per capita income, thereby reducing income inequality in a country. The result of regional economic development level on income inequality shows an inverted “U-shape” change, which is consistent with Kuznets [35] and Soava et al. [60] but not consistent with Kavya and Shijin [61] who thought that only high-income countries support the existence of a Kuznets curve while both middle and low-income countries support U shaped pattern between economic development and income inequality. The effect of gross dependency ratio on income inequality is positive, which is in line with Breau [22]. He believed that the greater shares of the elderly and young will put pressure on the work force, resulting in the increase of income inequality. The spatial spillover effect of regional economic development level and government expenditure scale are in line with the actual situation.

Conclusions

Industrial agglomeration has accelerated economic growth, but it may also widen regional income inequality to a certain extent. This paper explores the effect of manufacturing industrial agglomeration on regional income inequality from a spatial perspective and measures their spatial relationship. According to the literatures about the relationship of industrial agglomeration and income inequality, using data from 31 provinces in China from 2003 to 2020, this study verifies and discusses the impact of manufacturing industrial agglomeration on income inequality. The following suggestions and limitations can be drawn.

When we attempt to cut down income inequality in this study, the values of income inequality in 31 provinces should be close to 1. How to make income inequality approach 1? First, based on Table 1, the values of income inequality more than 1 are concentrated in coastal provinces, while those less than 1 focus on inland provinces. Additionally, the spatial distribution of industrial agglomeration in 2020 is similar to that of income inequality in 2020, which shows that manufacturing industrial agglomeration focuses on coastal provinces. Thus, to reduce regional income inequality, the Chinese government should transfer some manufacturing industrial agglomerations in coastal provinces to inland provinces, which can cultivate and develop manufacturing industries in inland provinces and improve their per capita income. Second, from the previous sections, the relationship of industrial agglomeration and income inequality presents an inverted U-shape relationship. Therefore, the coastal provinces should exert the diffusion effect of their manufacturing industrial agglomeration, drive the development of the surrounding provinces, and better improve the per capita income of the surrounding provinces. These provinces had better improve the quality and efficiency of their manufacturing industries. They should strive to develop high-end manufacturing so as to drive the qualitative leap of the entire Chinese manufacturing industry. Third, all provinces had better try their best to continue to improve regional economic development level, increase government expenditure scale and lower gross dependency ratio to effectively reduce income inequality. At the same time, the Chinese government should pay attention to balancing government expenditure scale in various regions in order to avoid the spatial spillover effect of government expenditure scale leading to an increase in income inequality.

The findings of this paper could be used to investigate the impacts of manufacturing industrial agglomeration on income inequality in other countries which suffer from regional income inequality. However, this paper exists its limitations. First, we use the proportion of the per capita income of each province to the national per capita income as the dependent variable because it is a good proxy for regional income inequality. We do not use the commonly used proxies for income inequality, such as the Gini coefficient and the Theil index and so on. When studying other determinants of income inequality, such as unemployment rate, we can consider the Gini coefficient as income inequality in the future studies. Second, we do not use other methods to calculate the degree of manufacturing industrial agglomeration, such as the spatial Gini coefficient, which could have different influences on regional income inequality. Hence, future studies on the degree of manufacturing industrial agglomeration may want to consider other methods.

Acknowledgments

The authors would like to thank Gareth and Sarocha for their language assistance and the anonymous reviewers for their constructive comments.

Data Availability

All dataset files are available from the Dryad database (https://doi.org/10.5061/dryad.z08kprrht).

Funding Statement

The authors received no specific funding for this work.

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: I Don't Know

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Income inequality is one of the major social issues in China at this stage, and industrial agglomeration helps to promote the mobility of technology and people. This manuscript explores the nonlinear relationship and spatial effects of industrial agglomeration from the perspective of its association with income inequality.The manuscript has content compliance, system integrityand reasonable result. However, there are still some insufficiencies:

1.Abstract: The abstract section should contain the research background, motivation, questions, methods, conclusions and insights, etc. The elaboration of the research gap can be briefly elaborated or deleted.

2.Introduction: The introduction section, as the beginning of the article, answers the question of "why research". It is enough to explain the background, the history and status of previous research in the relevant field and the research gap, the value and the purpose of the research, the author uses five paragraphs to elaborate, which will lead to too much content and illogicality in this section, please delete unnecessary content. In addition, the introduction section lacks a description of the research objectives.Then, please add the corresponding references.e.g.line80-line82.

3.Literature review: In the literature review section, the author divided into three parts, the definition and measurement of industrial agglomeration, the relationship between industrial agglomeration and income inequality, and other factors that affect income inequality. The content is abundant, but it does not summarize and condense the literature combing, the literature is seriously piled up, and the classification of each scholar's view is not sufficiently summarized.Then, please add the corresponding references.e.g.line146.

4.Data and methodology : In the variable construction section, where the author compares and contrasts measures of income inequality, please insert appropriate citations to enhance the power of persuasion. In the section on control variables, please give appropriate citations to justify and demonstrate their usefulness. Also, in the “Other determinants of income inequality section” of the literature review, the factors mentioned that affect income inequality also include “economic growth, human capital, transportation, economic structure, government intervention, and unemployment”. Do they have any influence on this research and are they all included in the consideration of the control variables. This leads me to question the scientific validity and reasonableness of the third part of the literature review in the manuscript. The format of equation (2) and equation (3) is not uniform, please revise. The p-value of the indicator used to express the significance of the variables should be italicized, pleace check and correct it. In addition, I suggest that the spatial correlation analysis be placed in the results and discussion section.

5.Results and discussion: First, discuss results in detail and mention the innovative outcome. Further results should be backed with appropriate literature. Results should be further elaborated in detail. Usually, relevant tests need to be performed on the data before conducting empirical analysis. Considering that this manuscript uses data from 31 provinces in China, here is a question: When the authors processed the data, were the data for Tibet, Hong Kong, Macau and Taiwan complete? If not, how were you processed? If non-equilibrium panel data are used, do the corresponding tests of the data meet the requirements? Please show the results of the tests in the manuscript to prove the scientific validity of the manuscript. Moreover, Table 3 demonstrates a low R2, which confirms the possible inappropriateness of the author's choice of control variables.Also, please fix the formatting problems in Table 3.

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7.References: Too many references cited, please make appropriate deletions.

8.Avoid grammatical and typo errors and revise the manuscripts for corresponding concerns.

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5. Abbreviations should be written in full form at the first place. E.g GE coefficient is not clear.

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7. An explanation about the method used to analyze the data in the study is missing.

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PLoS One. 2023 Jun 29;18(6):e0287910. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0287910.r002

Author response to Decision Letter 0


15 Feb 2023

February 8, 2023

PLOS ONE

Dear Editors and Reviewers:

Thank you for your letter and for the reviewers’ comments concerning our manuscript (PONE-D-22-32289). Those comments are all valuable and very helpful for revising and improving our paper, as well as the important guiding significance to our researches. We have studied comments carefully and have made correction which we hope meet with approval. Revised portion are marked up using the “Track Changes” function in the paper. The main corrections in the paper and the responses to the reviewer’s comments are as following:

Response to Reviewer 1 Comments:

Point 1: Abstract: The abstract section should contain the research background, motivation, questions, methods, conclusions and insights, etc. The elaboration of the research gap can be briefly elaborated or deleted.

Response 1: Based on the reviewer’s comments, we have deleted “A number of studies show that if income inequality in a country is too large, it will not be conducive to the development and growth of the country, and will result in great social and political instability” and “Industrial agglomeration has accelerated economic growth, but it may also widen regional income inequality” which are not very important when we elaborate the gap in the abstract. Thanks for your valuable comments.

Point 2: Introduction: The introduction section, as the beginning of the article, answers the question of "why research". It is enough to explain the background, the history and status of previous research in the relevant field and the research gap, the value and the purpose of the research, the author uses five paragraphs to elaborate, which will lead to too much content and illogicality in this section, please delete unnecessary content. In addition, the introduction section lacks a description of the research objectives. Then, please add the corresponding references.e.g.line80-line82.

Response 2: We gratefully appreciate for your comment. We have deleted some unnecessary content. Regarding the research objective, it can be reflected in line75-line76. Additionally, several contributions in line93-line114 also explain the goals of this paper. The corresponding references in contributions have been elaborated in the following sections. Thanks for your valuable comments.

Point 3: Literature review: In the literature review section, the author divided into three parts, the definition and measurement of industrial agglomeration, the relationship between industrial agglomeration and income inequality, and other factors that affect income inequality. The content is abundant, but it does not summarize and condense the literature combing, the literature is seriously piled up, and the classification of each scholar's view is not sufficiently summarized. Then, please add the corresponding references.e.g.line146.

Response 3: We appreciate for your valuable comments. In the literature section, the beginning of each paragraph summarizes the content and reflects the classification of scholars’ view. According to the reviewer’s suggestions, we have rewritten the content in line190-line213. The literature by Maure and Sedilbt (1999) is not important in the paper. Therefore, we have deleted this literature based on the reviewer’s comments. Thanks for your valuable comments.

Point 4: Data and methodology : In the variable construction section, where the author compares and contrasts measures of income inequality, please insert appropriate citations to enhance the power of persuasion. In the section on control variables, please give appropriate citations to justify and demonstrate their usefulness. Also, in the “Other determinants of income inequality section” of the literature review, the factors mentioned that affect income inequality also include “economic growth, human capital, transportation, economic structure, government intervention, and unemployment”. Do they have any influence on this research and are they all included in the consideration of the control variables. This leads me to question the scientific validity and reasonableness of the third part of the literature review in the manuscript. The format of equation (2) and equation (3) is not uniform, please revise. The p-value of the indicator used to express the significance of the variables should be italicized, please check and correct it. In addition, I suggest that the spatial correlation analysis be placed in the results and discussion section.

Response 4: It is really true as Reviewer suggested. We have added citations to enhance the power of persuasion in line298-line301. Appropriate citations on control variables are written in the literature’s third part “Income inequality and its determinants” and the model specification’s line470-line473. Most of factors including “economic growth, human capital, transportation, economic structure, government intervention, and unemployment and so on” are considered in the control variables. For example, economic growth elaborated in the literature section is also expressed by regional economic development level in our model which is a very important control variable. However, some factors such as transportation are not significant in our empirical study in China although maybe significant in other countries. The choice of control variables in this study is seriously checked and based on China’s situation and some important literature. We appreciate for your valuable suggestions about the place of the spatial correlation analysis. In this paper, the empirical model, the spatial Durbin model is put forward after proving that dependent variable or independent variable is correlated spatially. Thus, we made the spatial correlation analysis be placed before the model specification section. Thanks for your valuable comments.

Point 5: Results and discussion: First, discuss results in detail and mention the innovative outcome. Further results should be backed with appropriate literature. Results should be further elaborated in detail. Usually, relevant tests need to be performed on the data before conducting empirical analysis. Considering that this manuscript uses data from 31 provinces in China, here is a question: When the authors processed the data, were the data for Tibet, Hong Kong, Macau and Taiwan complete? If not, how were you processed? If non-equilibrium panel data are used, do the corresponding tests of the data meet the requirements? Please show the results of the tests in the manuscript to prove the scientific validity of the manuscript. Moreover, Table 3 demonstrates a low R2, which confirms the possible inappropriateness of the author's choice of control variables. Also, please fix the formatting problems in Table 3.

Response 5: We appreciate for your valuable comments. There are some appropriate literature to support the further results in the discussion section. The data are for Tibet but not for Hong Kong, Macau and Taiwan. Because Hong Kong, Macau and Taiwan have different systems with China mainland. Additionally, we used equilibrium panel data in our study which include 31 provinces from 2003 to 2020. Therefore, the corresponding tests of the data meet the requirements. Regarding R2, when we chose the appropriate control variables, we have run the regressions from (I) to (III) and the R2 is improved greatly from 0.2788 to 0.5868, which proves the possible appropriateness of control variables. We have fixed the formatting problems in all tables. Thanks for your valuable comments.

Point 6: Please differentiate with the discussion section, condense the core conclusions of this manuscript and delete some contents that belong to the discussion section.

Response 6: We have deleted some not important contents in the conclusions section. Thanks for your valuable comments.

Point 7: References: Too many references cited, please make appropriate deletions.

Response 7: We have deleted some not important references based on the reviewer’s comments. Thanks for your valuable comments.

Point 8: Avoid grammatical and typo errors and revise the manuscripts for corresponding concerns.

Response 8: We have checked and revised the entire paper. Thanks for your valuable comments.

Point 9: Corresponding author information needs to be confirmed. (title page )

Response 9: The title page has been included into the beginning of our manuscript. There are two corresponding authors which have been added in the title page. Thanks for your valuable comments.

Response to Reviewer 2 Comments:

Point 1: Manuscript needs to follow the journal guideline and template.

Response 1: Based on the journal guideline and template, we have checked and revised the entire paper. Thanks for your valuable comments.

Point 2: Use initial capitals for each key word and separate them with a comma.

Response 2: We have used initial capitals for each key word and separate them with a comma based on the reviewer’s comments. Thanks for your valuable comments.

Point 3: Try to start the abstract by interdicting why are you envisioned to do this research, the abstract is very long try to write it in a precise and comprehensive way.

Response 3: We have deleted “A number of studies show that if income inequality in a country is too large, it will not be conducive to the development and growth of the country, and will result in great social and political instability” and “Industrial agglomeration has accelerated economic growth, but it may also widen regional income inequality” to make the abstract shorter according to the reviewer’s comments. Thanks for your valuable comments.

Point 4: Headings mentioned in the literature section are not appropriate, try to rewrite. E.g, “Defining and measuring industrial agglomeration” this heading can be written as “Measurement of industrial agglomeration”. Instead of “The link between industrial agglomeration and income inequality” you can write “Linkages between industrial agglomeration and income inequality”. “Other determinants of income inequality” “income inequality and its determinants”.

Response 4: We appreciate for your valuable suggestions. Thus, we have rewritten the headings in the literature section based on your comments. Thanks for your valuable comments.

Point 5: Abbreviations should be written in full form at the first place. E.g GE coefficient is not clear.

Response 5: Considering the Reviewer’s suggestion, we have added the full form of abbreviations at the first place in line162, line170-line171, line290-line291 and line327. Thanks for your valuable comments.

Point 6: Instead of writing “Table 1. Data”, write “Table 1. Variable descriptions”.

Response 6: Based on the reviewer’s suggestion, we have rewritten the title of this table. Thanks for your valuable comments.

Point 7: An explanation about the method used to analyze the data in the study is missing.

Response 7: An explanation about the method used to analyze the data is written in the section of “Data and Methodology” and concluded in line476-line486. Thanks for your valuable comments.

Other changes:

1. There are two corresponding authors, Suhua Zhang and Yasmin Bani. We have revised this information in the title page. Additionally, the title page has been included into the beginning of our manuscript based on your requirements.

2. The data are publicly accessible at (doi:10.5061/dryad.z08kprrht).

3. Based on the editor’s suggestions, we have changed the Figure which contains map images to Table 1 in line318-line357.

4. We have deleted some not important references in this paper according to your comments.

5. We have checked and revised the formatting problems based on the PLOS ONE style templates.

We appreciate for editors and reviewers’ warm work earnestly, and hope that the correction will meet with approval. Once again, thank you very much for your comments and suggestions.

Sincerely,

Suhua Zhang

zhangsuhua1023@gmail.com

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Decision Letter 1

Fuyou Guo

16 May 2023

PONE-D-22-32289R1Exploring the effect of industrial agglomeration on income inequality in ChinaPLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Zhang,

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Additional Editor Comments:

Reviewer Comments:

Point 1: confusion of important concepts. For example, “Industrial agglomeration” and “Industrial cluster” are not the same concept. The author must carefully read some important literature about “industrial agglomeration”, and enhance the ability of concept discrimination. What’s more, some crucial statements lack preciseness. For example, “few have studied the impacts of industrial agglomeration on income inequality, and even fewer have studied the spatial correlation of income inequality”.

Point 2: Literature review: the part of “Measurement of industrial agglomeration” needs to be simplified. This part focuses on the main measurement methods of industrial agglomeration (brief introduction), “why does this paper choose ‘location quotient’ to measure industrial agglomeration”, and other important content. The part of “Linkages between industrial agglomeration and income inequality”: It is suggested that the logical relationship and mechanism between them should be effectively analyzed, rather than the stacking statement of the existing literature. The part of “Income inequality and its determinants”: why write this part? Some variables are not effectively reflected in the empirical analysis of this paper. So, it is not recommended to state them as a separate part. What’s more, the Literature review should focus on "income inequality ", "industrial agglomeration" and "the relationship between them".

Point3: Results and discussion: why was SPDM chosen as the empirical model of this paper? There are many models for testing nonlinear relationship. “Spatial effect of industrial agglomeration on income inequality” should be supplemented, especially, in the part of literature review. Lack of necessary testing analysis (e.g., Likelihood ratio test, Wald test, and etc.). The robustness test is unreasonable. Why is “service industry agglomeration” chosen to replace the independent variable? Does industry heterogeneity need further consideration? Why not choose other variables (e.g., manufacturing employment density) to substitute for the independent variable? You can also select some variables to substitute for the explained variable. The regression model of industrial agglomeration affecting income inequality will inevitably be troubled by the endogeneity problem to a certain extent. So, Endogeneity test may be warranted. Standardization also needs to be strengthened.

Piont4: The paper is not innovative enough, and the research conclusions are not novel enough.

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Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #3: (No Response)

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2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: (No Response)

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: (No Response)

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

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Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: (No Response)

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5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

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Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: (No Response)

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Reviewer #2: Authors have improved the manuscript and the current version is good to be published in Plos One.

Good luck.

Reviewer #3: Point 1: confusion of important concepts. For example, “Industrial agglomeration” and “Industrial cluster” are not the same concept. The author must carefully read some important literature about “industrial agglomeration”, and enhance the ability of concept discrimination. What’s more, some crucial statements lack preciseness. For example, “few have studied the impacts of industrial agglomeration on income inequality, and even fewer have studied the spatial correlation of income inequality”.

Point 2: Literature review: the part of “Measurement of industrial agglomeration” needs to be simplified. This part focuses on the main measurement methods of industrial agglomeration (brief introduction), “why does this paper choose ‘location quotient’ to measure industrial agglomeration”, and other important content. The part of “Linkages between industrial agglomeration and income inequality”: It is suggested that the logical relationship and mechanism between them should be effectively analyzed, rather than the stacking statement of the existing literature. The part of “Income inequality and its determinants”: why write this part? Some variables are not effectively reflected in the empirical analysis of this paper. So, it is not recommended to state them as a separate part. What’s more, the Literature review should focus on "income inequality ", "industrial agglomeration" and "the relationship between them".

Point3: Results and discussion: why was SPDM chosen as the empirical model of this paper? There are many models for testing nonlinear relationship. “Spatial effect of industrial agglomeration on income inequality” should be supplemented, especially, in the part of literature review. Lack of necessary testing analysis (e.g., Likelihood ratio test, Wald test, and etc.). The robustness test is unreasonable. Why is “service industry agglomeration” chosen to replace the independent variable? Does industry heterogeneity need further consideration? Why not choose other variables (e.g., manufacturing employment density) to substitute for the independent variable? You can also select some variables to substitute for the explained variable. The regression model of industrial agglomeration affecting income inequality will inevitably be troubled by the endogeneity problem to a certain extent. So, Endogeneity test may be warranted. Standardization also needs to be strengthened.

Piont4: The paper is not innovative enough, and the research conclusions are not novel enough.

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PLoS One. 2023 Jun 29;18(6):e0287910. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0287910.r004

Author response to Decision Letter 1


29 May 2023

May 30, 2023

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Dear Editors and Reviewers:

We would like to thank the editor for giving us a chance to revise the manuscript, and thank the reviewers’ comments concerning our manuscript (PONE-D-22-32289R1). Those comments are all valuable and very helpful for revising and improving our paper, as well as the important guiding significance to our researches. We have studied comments carefully and have made correction which we hope meet with your approval. Revised parts are marked up using the “Track Changes” function in the paper. The main corrections in the paper and the responses to the reviewer’s comments are as following:

Response to Reviewer #2 Comments:

Point: Authors have improved the manuscript and the current version is good to be published in Plos One. Good luck.

Reply: We gratefully appreciate for your comments and encouragement.

Response to Reviewer #3 Comments:

Point 1: Confusion of important concepts. For example, “Industrial agglomeration” and “Industrial cluster” are not the same concept. The author must carefully read some important literature about “industrial agglomeration”, and enhance the ability of concept discrimination. What’s more, some crucial statements lack preciseness. For example, “few have studied the impacts of industrial agglomeration on income inequality, and even fewer have studied the spatial correlation of income inequality”.

Reply 1: Thanks to the reminding of the reviewer. Because our expression about the correlation between industrial agglomeration and industrial cluster is not accurate. Based on your suggestion, we have revised the content from “These three names are much the same” to “These three names are closely related concepts, but they have subtle differences”. Additionally, we have rewritten the content on “few have studied the impacts of industrial agglomeration on income inequality, and even fewer have studied the spatial correlation of income inequality”. The current content is “few studies have been conducted on the impacts of industrial agglomeration on income inequality and their spatial correlation”.

Point 2: Literature review: the part of “Measurement of industrial agglomeration” needs to be simplified. This part focuses on the main measurement methods of industrial agglomeration (brief introduction), “why does this paper choose ‘location quotient’ to measure industrial agglomeration”, and other important content. The part of “Linkages between industrial agglomeration and income inequality”: It is suggested that the logical relationship and mechanism between them should be effectively analyzed, rather than the stacking statement of the existing literature. The part of “Income inequality and its determinants”: why write this part? Some variables are not effectively reflected in the empirical analysis of this paper. So, it is not recommended to state them as a separate part. What’s more, the Literature review should focus on "income inequality ", "industrial agglomeration" and "the relationship between them".

Reply 2: Thanks for your valuable comments. The part of “Measurement of industrial agglomeration” concentrates on explaining why this paper choose ‘location quotient’ and introducing this method. Thus, we have added three literatures on location quotient and adjusted the expression in this part. The new content is “Although adopted by some scholars, the above methods are not suitable for this study because of the aforementioned shortcomings. Therefore, this paper employs the commonly used location quotient (LQ) to calculate the degree of industrial agglomeration. LQ is a very meaningful indicator to measure the spatial distribution of elements in a certain region and reflects the degree of specialization of a certain industrial sector. The greater the value of LQ, the greater the specialization rate. Munnich et al. (1998) adopted LQ as the measurement standard. Peters (2004) used LQ as the measurement standard. And he measured economic specialization for an industry in Missouri by calculating LQ for output, employment, compensation and foreign exports in 2000. Jiang and Xu (2016) utilized location quotient (LQ) to measure the level of forestry industry agglomeration in Heilongjiang of China from the two perspectives of gross product and number of employees. Zhang et al. (2016) employed LQ to measure the degree of industrial agglomeration taking industrial industries in different regions of China as research objects”. The main measurement methods of industrial agglomeration are also important. Because we discussed the shortcomings of every methods after introducing these methods, for example, “the D-O index has very strict data requirements”. Finally, we decided not to delete the content on main methods. Regarding the part of “Linkages between industrial agglomeration and income inequality”, based on your suggestion, we have slightly adjusted the paragraphs to make the summaries clear. Additionally, for the part of “Income inequality and its determinants”, we have deleted the content on some variables not reflected in the empirical analysis. We also revised some variables’ names, such as “economic growth” to “regional economic development level” because both of them actually adopt the same index, to be consistent with the variables names in the empirical analysis of this paper. Based on your suggestion, the modified part of “Income inequality and its determinants” has been merged into the back of the part “Linkages between industrial agglomeration and income inequality”.

Point 3: Results and discussion: why was SPDM chosen as the empirical model of this paper? There are many models for testing nonlinear relationship. “Spatial effect of industrial agglomeration on income inequality” should be supplemented, especially, in the part of literature review. Lack of necessary testing analysis (e.g., Likelihood ratio test, Wald test, and etc.). The robustness test is unreasonable. Why is “service industry agglomeration” chosen to replace the independent variable? Does industry heterogeneity need further consideration? Why not choose other variables (e.g., manufacturing employment density) to substitute for the independent variable? You can also select some variables to substitute for the explained variable. The regression model of industrial agglomeration affecting income inequality will inevitably be troubled by the endogeneity problem to a certain extent. So, Endogeneity test may be warranted. Standardization also needs to be strengthened.

Reply 3: Thanks for your valuable comments. There are several reasons mentioned in the paper why this study chooses the spatial Durbin model. First, according to Moran’s I, the spatial autocorrelation of dependent and independent variables exists. Second, the industrial agglomeration not only affects income inequality in the province, but also income inequality of surrounding provinces. Income inequality between neighboring provinces also has spatial correlation and spatial spillover effects. Third, based on the suggestions of the reviewer, we have added testing analysis, such as Likelihood ratio test and Wald test, to verify why the spatial Durbin model is adopted. We present it in Table 4. (added manuscript: Additionally, a combination of LM_Error, RLM_Error (spatial error robustness test), LM_Lag and RLM_Lag (spatial lag robustness test) is adopted to further validate why this study uses the spatial Durbin model (SDM) rather than other common spatial models. The results are shown in Table 4. Based on the model without spatial effect (except LM_Lag), all the null hypotheses are rejected. Thus, SDM model is usually given priority because both the spatial autoregressive model (SAR) and the spatial errors model (SEM) can be accepted (Ellison et al., 2010). This paper also uses LR test and Wald test to prove whether SDM model can be degenerated into SAR model or SEM model. It is obvious that both LR value and Wald value reject the null hypothesis. Therefore, SDM model is suitable to study the effect of industrial agglomeration on income inequality from a spatial perspective.). There are few literatures on “Spatial effect of industrial agglomeration on income inequality”, thus, this is one of reasons that this paper investigates the impact of industrial agglomeration on income inequality from a spatial perspective. Regarding the robustness test, according to the reviewer’s suggestions, we have deleted “service industry agglomeration” and added manufacturing employment density to replace the independent variable. This paper uses maximum likelihood estimation (MLE) and the fixed effects to weaken the endogeneity problem. Furthermore, thanks for the reminding of the reviewer, we have added the one-period lagged manufacturing industrial agglomeration instead of the independent variable in robustness test to alleviate the potential endogeneity problem based on the research of Zhang et al. (2022). The revised robustness test is shown in Table 6. To make the description of variables clear and detailed, we have revised the table of variable description as follows. Some control variables’ maximums and minimums are very different, this study takes the logarithm of these variables. In Table 2, it can be seen that all variables’ standard deviations are small to meet standardization to a certain extend.

Point 4: The paper is not innovative enough, and the research conclusions are not novel enough.

Reply 4: Thanks for your valuable comments. This paper mainly has the following innovations: Firstly, this paper presents an up-to-date portrait of the regional dimensions of income inequality across the country since the 21st century, which has been rarely depicted in the past. Secondly, most existing studies only focus on the linear impact of industrial agglomeration on income inequality, but the non-linear changes are not detailed enough. Industrial agglomeration affects income inequality through the agglomeration effect and crowding effect. It is easy to ignore the impact of the dynamic changes of the two effects on income inequality in the process of industrial agglomeration, which leads most studies to focus only on the linear relationship of the two variables. Therefore, this paper empirically investigates whether industrial agglomeration has a nonlinear relationship with income inequality. Thirdly, most previous studies have used traditional panel data analysis, ignoring the spatial correlation and spatial spillover effects of regional income inequality and industrial agglomeration. Thus, this paper uses global Moran’s I and local Moran’s I to test the spatial correlation of industrial agglomeration and income inequality respectively, then adopts the spatial Durbin model (SDM) to study the effect of industrial agglomeration on income inequality in China from 2003 to 2020. The research conclusions are based on employing the spatial models which are different from those of previous studies. Finally, based on the reviewer’s comments, we will make further efforts to optimize this paper.

We really appreciate for editors and reviewers’ warm work, and hope that the corrections will meet with approval. Once again, thank you very much for your comments and suggestions.

Sincerely,

Suhua Zhang

zhangsuhua1023@gmail.com

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15 Jun 2023

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