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. 2023 Jul 11;18(7):e0288471. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0288471

Avoidable diet-related deaths and cost-of-illness with culturally optimized modifications in diet: The case of Brazil

Eliseu Verly Jr 1,*, Ísis Eloah Machado 2, Adriana Lúcia Meireles 3, Eduardo A F Nilson 4
Editor: Charles Odilichukwu R Okpala5
PMCID: PMC10335669  PMID: 37432939

Abstract

Background

Dietary risk factors have an important impact on premature deaths and disabilities due to non-communicable diseases. In this study, we perform diet optimization to design different dietary scenarios taking into account food prices and preferences and evaluate the number of deaths that would be prevented as well as the economic burden and costs from the health system that would be saved in Brazil.

Methods

We used dietary intake and food prices data from the nationwide Household Budget Survey (HBS) and the National Dietary Survey (NDS) 2017–2018. Linear programming models were performed to design five scenarios which different sets of key diet modifications at the least deviation from the baseline consumption. Comparative risk assessment models were used to estimate the health impacts of optimized dietary changes on mortality and the economic impacts on morbidity (hospitalizations) and premature deaths.

Results

The optimized diets were, on average, more expensive than the baseline diets, varying from Int$ (international dollar) 0.02/day to 0.52/day/adult. The number of deaths prevented or postponed varied from 12,750 (10,178–15,225) to 57,341 (48,573–66,298) according to the different scenarios. The diet modifications would save from 50 to 219 million in hospitalizations and from 239 to 804 million yearly in productivity losses with the reduction of premature deaths.

Conclusion

A substantial number of deaths and costs due to hospitalization and productivity losses would be avoidable even with small changes in diets. However, even the cheapest intervention might be prohibitive for deprived families, yet subsidies and social policies could contribute to improving diets.

Introduction

Noncommunicable chronic diseases (NCD) are the largest cause of morbidities and mortality worldwide. The last estimate from the Global Burden of Disease Study (2019) estimated that about 74.4% of the deaths globally were due to NCD [1]. Among the main risk factors for NCD, dietary risks stand as one of the most relevant. About 18.9% of all deaths from NCD in the world could be attributable to dietary risks. The fraction of deaths attributable to dietary risks varies according to the country. According to the GBD, in 2019, 75.9% of all deaths in Brazil were due to NCD and 14.1% of the NCD deaths were attributable to dietary risks, from which the leading risks were a diet high in red meat, a diet low in whole grains, a diet high in sodium, and a diet low in vegetables [2]. The population attributable fraction concept is very useful for public health and policies once it can be used to estimate the impact of a risk factor, in terms of mortality, years of life lost (YLLs), years lived with disability (YLDs), disability-adjusted life-years (DALYs), and then provide with a more objective metric to measure the potential impact of interventions. In other words, it represents the number of deaths that would be prevented if the exposure were removed in the past.

In addition, NCD represents major costs to the health systems and economies around the world. In Brazil, the direct and indirect costs of cardiovascular diseases increased 17% from 2010 to 2015, reaching US$ 9.6 billion in 2015 [3]. Also, the attributable costs to excessive sodium intake in Brazil, including hospitalizations, outpatient care, medications, and the burden of premature deaths, totaled US$ 945 million in 2017 [4]. The yearly costs of diseases attributable to obesity to the Brazilian National Health System increased from US$ 269.6 million to US$ 636.7 million, from 2011 to 2018 [5]. Thus, key diet modifications are effective strategies to reduce the burden of disease and consequently the cost spent by the health system. However, diet modifications may not be feasible unless they are affordable and culturally acceptable [6,7].

Many studies have assessed the relationship between diet cost and quality. In general, healthier diets are more expensive compared to nutritionally poor diets [8]. Also, theoretical studies with linear programming have demonstrated that, at least for part of the population, reaching nutritional goals necessarily increases the cost [9]. In countries with marked social inequality, such as Brazil, improving diet quality might be prohibitive for many families, particularly in the last years, where the percentage of families living with some degree of food insecurity increased from 22.9% in 2013 to 55.2% in 2022 (4.2% and 9% for severe food insecurity, respectively) [10]. Although traditional diets based on staple foods can be, on average, cheaper than the current diet [9], the adequation of key items such as fats, sodium, and potassium increases the cost. In low-income families, this increase was estimated to be up to 40% in relation to the current cost. Thus, identifying feasible modifications that are effective in terms of preventing deaths and cost provides important insights for public health and policies.

Several studies have performed diet optimization to design diets to attain nutritional goals while respecting other aspects of the diets, such as food preferences and cost constraints. It has also been used to verify the lowest possible cost when moving from the current to optimum diets taking into account the variability in food prices and preferences across the population [1113]. In general, the nutritional targets of these studies are nutrient intakes or food group recommendations, such as those to prevent NCD. Although informative, it is not straightforward to translate these optimized diets into metrics that could be objectively used to define targets of interventions and policies, such as the number of avoidable deaths, since it depends on the assessment of the risk for each subpopulation at different levels of dietary exposure. In this study, we aim (i) to perform diet optimization to design different dietary scenarios taking into account food prices and preferences; (ii) to perform the comparative risk assessment approach to estimate the number of deaths that would be prevented associated with the output optimized diets; and (iii) to estimate the economic burden and costs from the health system that would be saved associated with those diets.

Methods

Data sources

We used data from the nationwide Household Budget Survey (HBS) 2017–2018, which collected information on household food purchases, and the National Dietary Survey (NDS) 2017–2018, which collected information on individual food consumption. NDS was simultaneously performed in a random subsample of ~35% of the HBS, thus food consumption and purchase were collected in the same household and time frame. Both surveys were conducted by the Brazilian Institute for Geography and Statistics. The samples included 57,920 households (HBS) and 20,112 households (NDS). Data collection in each stratum was uniformly distributed throughout the four trimesters to account for seasonal variations in both food intakes and prices. More information on the surveys and data collection can be found elsewhere [14,15].

Baseline dietary intakes

Two non-consecutive 24h recalls based on the Automated Multiple-Pass approach [16] were answered by all household members aged 25 years or older (n = 37,687). Detailed information on portion size, amount consumed, cooking method, and time and place of consumption were provided for each food reported. A total of 1591 food items were reported in the NDS (coffee, tea, and alcoholic beverages were not considered in this study). From this list, the items were aggregated if they were different types, different cooking methods, or different meat cuts of the same food (e.g., different types of orange into “orange”, different beef cuts into “beef”, etc.). The final list comprised 83 to 85 foods, depending on the age-sex group. The food list, mean food intakes, and the number of foods considered in each age-sex group are shown in (S1 and S2 Tables in S1 File).

Mean food intakes were obtained for each age-sex group and used as starting points to design optimized diets using linear programming models. Twelve age-sex subgroups were defined: 25-30y, 31-39y, 41-49y, 51-59y, 61–69, and > = 70, all age groups stratified by sex. The Brazilian Food Composition database [17] was used to obtain nutrient content in both observed and optimized diets. Nutrient composition of foods clustered from food subtypes (e.g. different types of rice into ‘rice’) was obtained as the mean composition of the food subtypes weighted by their frequency of reporting in the NDS.

Food prices

Food prices were extracted from the HBS database, where each household registered the amount and price of each food product purchased, further converted into prices per 100g of edible portion. Considering the variation in food prices throughout the collection (12 months), all prices were deflated to the same reference date (January 31st 2018) using official inflation rates (National Consumer Price Index–INPC). Prices of food items were obtained as the mean price over the food subtypes (e.g., different types of oranges into ‘orange’, or different types of fish and seafood into ‘fish and seafood’) weighted by their frequency of reporting in the budget survey, i. e., expensive, but low frequently eaten food subtype has minor importance to the food item price. Food prices were matched to the corresponding food item declared as consumed in the NDS.

Diet modeling

Linear programming models were performed to design healthier diets that most resemble the current diets. A model for each age-sex group was performed for each intervention scenario. The decision variables were the foods reported by each age-sex group as described above. Although modifications in food quantities are necessary to move the current to healthier diets, the sum of the difference between each optimized food quantity and observed food intake should be as least as possible. The objective function in the LP models was defined to minimize the sum of the absolute difference between each optimized and baseline food quantity, described as follows:

MinimizeY=i=1i=g|QioptQiobsQiobs|

Where Y represents the objective function to be minimized, Qiopt is the quantity of the food item i in the optimized diet, g is the total number of food items, Qiobs is the mean quantity of i in the observed diet. Once it is a nonlinear function, a linearization to include a set of linear constraints was performed following the procedure described in [18]. The decision variables were the foods that composed the reported diets in each age-sex group. Several types of constraints were introduced into the models as described below.

Dietary constraints (Dietary scenarios)

We designed five scenarios in which a set of key healthy dietary components were progressively increased (beneficial for health) and decreased (detrimental for health). We modeled our dietary goals using the Preventable Risk Integrated Model (PRIME). PRIME includes diet-outcome pairs from published meta-analyses of epidemiological studies: prospective cohort studies for NCD mortality and randomized controlled trials for blood cholesterol and blood pressure. In this study, we focused on dietary risk factors only. The risk factors, outcomes, and relative risks used here are shown in Table 1.

Table 1. Dietary risk factors, outcomes, unit of change and effect size of PRIME model.
Dietary risk
factor
Outcome Unit of change RRc (95% CI)
Fruit CHDa 106 g/day increase 0.93 (0.89; 0.96)
Stroke 106 g/day increase 0.89 (0.85; 0.93)
Lung cancer 80 g/day increase 0.94 (0.90; 0.97)
Vegetables CHDa 106 g/day increase 0.89 (0.83; 0.95)
Fiber CHDa 10g/day increase 0.81 (0.72; 0.92)
Stroke 7 g/day increase 0.93 (0.88; 0.98)
Colorectal cancer 10 g/day increase men: 0.88 (0.78; 0.99)
women: 0.92 (0.87; 0.98)
Saturated fat total serum cholesterol (nmol/L) 1% of total calories increase 0.052 (0.045; 0.058)d
PUFAb total serum cholesterol (nmol/L) 1% of total calories increase -0.026 (-0.034; -0.018)d
Dietary cholesterol total serum cholesterol (mg/L) 1 mg/d increase 0.001 (0.001, 0.001)d
Salt Systolic blood pressure (mmHg) 6 g/day reduction -5.80 (-2.50; -9.20)d

Source: Scarborough et al [19].

aCHD: Coronary Heart Disease; bPUFA–Poly-unsaturated fat acids; cRR–Relative Risk; d Absolute change in the outcome level (linear regression coefficient).

Dietary constraints were introduced according to the scenario as described in Table 2. These constraints indicate how much each dietary item in the optimized diets should move in relation to the baseline diets, for each age-sex group. For example, the mean baseline fruit intake in 25-30y-male was 151g, then in Sc#1, the optimized diet for this age-sex group should achieve 151g+25g (176g). For poly-unsaturated fatty acid (PUFA), saturated fat, cholesterol, and sodium, the changes were described as percentages in relation to the baseline intakes.

Table 2. Dietary constraints used in the five optimized scenarios a.
Dietary item Sc#1 Sc#2 Sc#3 Sc#4 Sc#5
Fruit (g) +25 +50 +75 +75 +75
Vegetables (g) +25 +50 +75 +75 +75
Fiber (g) +2 +4 +6 +6 +6
PUFAc (%)b - - - +20 +20
Saturated fat (%)b - - - -20 -20
Cholesterol (%)b - - - -10 -30
Sodium (%)b - - - -10

a scenarios represent the amount to change in a daily basis.

b percentage in relation to the baseline.

cPUFA: Poly-unsaturated fatty acids.

In all models, total energy content was constrained to be equal to the mean baseline energy intake estimated in each age-sex group.

Food acceptability constraints

Boundaries limiting changes in food quantities were introduced in the models to make sure that optimized food quantities are not beyond the range of intakes observed in the population. The boundaries were defined as the first and the 99th percentiles of intake of each individual food item stratified by age-sex groups. Constraints for food groups were also introduced in the models, which was defined as the 99th percentile of intake of 24 food groups, also stratified by age-sex group. Age-sex-specific food constraints are presented in S1 and S3 Tables in S1 File. The age-sex-specific optimized food items and food group quantities should not be lower or higher than the corresponding boundaries. However, the upper boundaries for some food groups are lower than the dietary goals, which is the case of FV. In this case, the upper boundary for FV was progressively extended (by every 25%) until the model finds a feasible solution compatible with the dietary goals. Linear programming models were performed using the Optmodel Procedure from the software SAS OnDemand.

Attributable deaths

The attributable deaths in each policy scenario were estimated using the Preventable Risk Integrated ModEl (PRIME), a comparative risk assessment methodology suitable to estimate the health impact of changes in the behavioral risk factors for non-communicable diseases on population and age-sex specific NCD mortality [19]. For the dietary risk factors, the PRIME model considers the impacts through associations mediating factors such as body mass index (BMI), blood pressure, and blood cholesterol, which are parametrized based on published meta-analyses of epidemiological studies. In the present study, data on mortality from NCDs and population demographics were obtained, respectively, from publicly available tables of the Brazilian Mortality Information System (SIM) for 2019 and the Brazilian Institute of Geography and Statistics (IBGE) for 2017. Demographic and mortality data were stratified by gender and 5-year age bands, and mortality data were based on the World Health Organization (WHO) International Classification of Diseases 10 (ICD 10).

The counterfactual risk factor distributions were based on the 5 scenarios (Table 2). The mean intakes of each scenario were modeled with linear programming, and the coefficient of variation was assumed to be the same as of the baseline intakes. The counterfactual distributions were defined for each age-sex group. The PRIME first estimates the Potential Impact Fraction (PIF) which stands for the percentage of each cause-specific death due to a change in a given risk factor. PIFs were calculated for each outcome-risk pair and age-sex group using this equation:

PIF=0mRR(x)P(x)dx0mRR(x)P(x)dx0mRR(x)P(x)dx

where RR(x) is the relative risk of the outcome o at the exposure level x, P(x) is the baseline population at exposure level x, and P’(x) is the counterfactual population at exposure level x. The PIFs for different risk factors were combined multiplicatively using the equation:

PIFtotal=1i=1n(1PIFi)

Attributable cost

To estimate the direct and indirect costs related to dietary risks (salt, fats, fruits, vegetables, and fibers), we applied the corresponding age-sex-specific PIFs related to each health outcome for each counterfactual scenario as estimated previously using the PRIME. Then, we estimated the proportion of direct costs to the Brazilian National Health System (hospitalizations) and indirect costs related to premature deaths in each diet scenario, expanded from a costing tool developed for hypertension and related cardiovascular disease [20].

The costs of hospitalizations were based on a top-down approach through the identification of the direct costs of diet-related NCDs by specific International Classification of Disease (ICD) codes and valuations, based on administrative data obtained from the Hospital Information System (SIH/SUS) [21], which registers all hospitalizations provided by the Brazilian National Health System (SUS). In 2019, hospitalizations provided by the SUS corresponded to about 70% of total hospitalizations in Brazil (estimated by the Observatory of Hospital Policy and Management using data from the Hospital Information System and National Regulatory Agency for Private Health Insurance and Plans, available in Portuguese on https://observatoriohospitalar.fiocruz.br/).

The costs of premature death were based on the estimated Years of Productive Life Lost (YPLL), using the Human Capital Approach [22] to calculate the present value of potential time in the workforce (the measure of productivity) using country-specific data for 2019, such as the pension age (60 years for women, and 65 years for men), the average national wage and the labor force participation estimates [23], considering a discount rate of 2% per year [20].

All costs were converted into international dollars (Int$), based on the purchasing power parity (PPP) of Brazil for the year 2019 (1 Int$ equals 2.28 Brazilian Reals on Jan 31st 2019) [24].

Uncertainty analysis

Uncertainty intervals are calculated based on 5,000 Monte Carlo iterations which allow the relative risks to randomly vary according to the distribution described in the literature and the intake distribution of dietary inputs to randomly vary according to the sample standard error.

Results

Model feasibility

In general, no solution for any scenario was reached using the food acceptability and food group constraints derived from the population intake distribution. Thus, progressive flexibility in FV and nuts constraints were necessary. Cholesterol constraint was not attained in 70y+ Females; sodium constraint was not attained in 50-60y Females; PUFA constraints were not attained in 30-40y Males and 60y+ Females. In all these cases, the constraints were set to be equal to or higher than the baseline mean intakes.

Optimized food and nutrient quantities and diet cost

Table 3 compares food and food group mean baseline intakes with the five optimized scenarios food and food group content. In the scenarios only constrained by FV and fiber, the increase in these components led to an increased cost up to Int$ 0.33/day (increasing 150g FV/day), and was compensated mainly by a reduction in red and processed meats (from 99.8 to 84.9g at this FV increase). The other food quantities remained stable over scenarios #1, #2, and #3. In scenario #4, where fats (saturated and poly-unsaturated) and cholesterol were also constrained, the cost increase was slightly reduced compared with scenario #3 (from Int$ 0.33 to Int$ 0.24/day). This scenario was marked by a higher increase in FV (+215g/day), beans (+36g/day), nuts (+3.2g/day), and a reduction in cookies, cakes, dairy, bread, snacks, sweets, and SSB. In scenario #5, the introduction of the sodium constraint in the models led to a higher cost increase (Int$ 0,52 compared with the baseline cost), and a more drastic increase in FV (+344g/day compared with the baseline consumption) while the remaining foods kept relatively constant in comparison with the previous scenario. The mean energy, carbohydrates, fats, fiber, cholesterol, and sodium contents in the baseline and in each optimized diet are shown in Table 4.

Table 3. Food quantities (in grams/day) and diet cost in the baseline and five optimized scenarios.

Brazil, 2019.

  Baseline s.e. Sc#1 Sc#2 Sc#3 Sc#4 Sc#5
Total cost (Int$)a 3.39 0.16 3.41 3.51 3.72 3.63 3.91
FVb 166.7 3.30 216.9 266.7 324.7 381.7 510.2
Fruits 77.68 1.90 102.7 127.7 152.7 155.9 243.3
Leafy vegetables 12.20 0.50 17.20 24.17 32.80 27.16 54.92
Other vegetables 64.63 1.50 79.77 90.69 106.4 171.5 157.0
Tuber 35.60 0.80 40.72 45.60 50.60 62.17 30.79
Whole cereals 10.45 1.63 15.27 16.31 25.45 23.86 20.36
Rice 145.2 10.40 150.2 150.2 150.2 157.6 158.2
Pasta 38.88 2.60 39.06 43.88 41.38 48.24 24.50
Beans 166.3 13.20 172.6 176.3 178.2 190.9 198.1
Nuts 0.59 0.00 0.59 1.54 3.54 3.79 3.86
Dairy 94.79 2.90 92.82 90.65 85.72 80.51 80.51
Olive oil 2.63 0.10 2.63 0.27 0.12 0.12 2.03
Fish and seafood 23.91 1.40 23.91 21.58 18.92 36.73 28.94
Red meat 83.05 7.10 75.74 73.05 73.05 58.69 53.53
Processed meat 16.75 1.43 12.48 11.90 11.90 6.63 5.44
Poultry 52.21 2.30 47.21 47.21 47.21 49.73 54.45
Eggs 16.36 1.00 16.36 11.52 11.52 7.05 7.05
Butter 1.00 0.00 1.00 1.00 1.00 0.70 0.70
Margarine 9.52 0.30 10.31 8.93 7.62 13.58 13.83
Cookies 13.40 1.00 13.30 13.30 13.20 10.20 10.60
Cakes 12.29 0.40 12.29 13.77 7.72 5.87 5.64
Bread 51.81 2.80 54.85 56.53 56.02 39.45 36.78
Sweets 8.47 0.40 8.47 8.47 3.47 1.30 1.27
Snacks 4.26 1.90 4.26 4.26 3.95 4.13 3.84
SSBc 58.23 9.10 56.68 54.18 53.23 54.59 58.23

a Int$: International dollar (1 Int$ equals 2.28 Brazilian Reals in Jan 31st 2019).

b FV: Fruit and vegetables.

c SSB: Sugar-sweetened beverages.

Table 4. Mean nutrient intakes and nutrient contents (per day) in the baseline and five optimized scenarios.

Brazil, 2019.

  Baseline s.e. Sc#1 Sc#2 Sc#3 Sc#4 Sc#5
Energy (kcal) 1724 77 1724 1724 1724 1724 1724
Carbohydrates (%Kcal) 54.8 50.0 56.8 59.3 59.6 60.2 60.3
Protein (%Kcal) 19.2 0.8 18.4 18.2 18.2 17.4 17.0
Total fats (%Kcal) 28.8 1.6 27.9 25.9 25.8 26.3 26.9
Saturated Fat (%Kcal) 9.3 1.0 8.8 8.1 8.1 7.5 7.5
MUFAa (%Kcal) 9.5 1.0 9.1 8.0 7.8 7.6 8.2
PUFAb (%Kcal) 7.0 1.0 7.0 7.0 7.0 8.4 8.4
trans-fats (%Kcal) 0.6 0.1 0.6 0.6 0.5 0.5 0.5
Cholesterol (mg) 271.9 14.9 254.1 222.8 219.3 201.6 186.5
Fiber (g) 22.8 1.2 24.8 26.8 28.8 30.7 33.4
Sodium (mg) 2295.1 132.9 2273.2 2291.8 2279.0 2295.1 2065.6

aMUFA: Mono-unsaturated fatty acids.

b PUFA: Poly-unsaturated fatty acids.

The estimated deaths preventable or postponable in each optimized diet scenario are detailed in Table 5, ranging from 12,750 (Scenario 1) to 57,341 deaths (Scenario 5), in 2019. Most deaths preventable or postponable in all scenarios are related to the increase in the consumption of fruits and vegetables and fibers, followed by changes in saturated fat, PUFA, cholesterol, and salt. Age-sex-specific, dietary risk-factor-specific, and cause-specific numbers of deaths preventable or postponable according to the intervention scenario are presented in S1, S4, S5 and S6 Tables in S1 File.

Table 5. Preventable or postponable deaths (uncertainty intervals) in the five optimized scenarios.

Brazil, 2019.

  Sc#1 Sc#2 Sc#3 Sc#4 Sc#5
Men 5,858 11,746 16,736 17,953 30,351
(4,707; 6,973) (9,578; 13,826) (13,652; 19,759) (14,668; 21,053) (25,745; 35,035)
Women 6,902 12,098 16,014 19,373 27,001
(5,202; 8,447) (9,432; 14,568) (12,632; 19,026) (15,568; 23,066) (22,674; 31,405)
Total 12,750 23,830 32,739 37,317 57,341
  (10,178; 15,225) (19,241; 28,200) (26,354; 38,589) (30,468; 43,987) (48,573; 66,298)

The changes in the optimized diets are reflected in the economic impacts of morbidity (hospitalizations) and premature deaths. By gradually increasing the nutritional profile of the diets, the direct cost savings in hospitalizations from diet-related NCDs almost quadrupled (Table 6) and the savings related to the indirect costs of premature deaths increased by 3.3 times (Table 7) from Scenario 1 to Scenario 5. Total savings considering direct and indirect costs of disease with the optimized diets ranged from approximately Int$ 289 million to Int$ 1.023 billion, in 2019. Cause-specific and dietary risk-factor-specific cost save according to the intervention scenario are presented in S1 and S7 Tables in S1 File.

Table 6. Estimated saving costs (uncertainty intervals) in hospitalizations by the National Health System (Int$ million) in the five optimized scenarios.

Brazil, 2019.

  Sc#1 Sc#2 Sc#3 Sc#4 Sc#5
Men 25 54 74 79 129
(20.3; 30.1) (44.2; 62.7) (60.3; 86.6) (64.9; 92.1) (107.7; 147.5)
Women 25 44 56 68 91
(17.9; 30.2) (34.4; 53) (44.6; 66.6) (54.9–78.9) (76; 103.8)
Total 50 59 130 146 219
  (40.1; 58.9) (78.6; 115.7) (104.9; 153.3) (121.2–171.0) (183.7; 251.2)

Table 7. Estimated saving costs (uncertainty intervals) of productivity losses with the reduction of premature deaths (Int$ million) in the five optimized scenarios.

Brazil, 2019.

  Sc#1 Sc#2 Sc#3 Sc#4 Sc#5
Men 167 265 375 465 565
(129.8; 202.6) (211.5; 316.6) (302.3; 444.4) (379.7; 548.1) (470.8; 649.9)
Women 72 57 94 130 240
(56.1; 87.6) (45.3; 67.9) (76; 111.7) (106.1; 153.1) (199.8; 275.9)
Total 239 322 470 595 804
  (185.9; 290.2) (256.8; 384.5) (378.3; 556.1) (485.8; 701.2) (670.6; 925.7)

With scenario 1, about 1,450 deaths [12,750/(0.023*365)] would be avoided and Int$ 33 million [(50+239)/(0.023*365)] would be saved for each 1 Int$/day increase in diet over a year; in scenario 5, these values would be 308 deaths and Int$ 5.4 million.

Discussion

In this study, we estimated the cost of dietary intervention in different scenarios and how it would impact the number of diet-related deaths and health assistance spending in Brazil. In all cases, the optimized diets were, on average, more expensive than the baseline diets, varying from Int$ 0.02/day (BRL 0.45) to Int$ 0.52/day (BRL 1.18) per adult according to the nutritional targets introduced in each scenario. Number of deaths avoided also varied according to the scenario, from 12,750 (10,178; 15,225) to 57,341 (48,573; 66,298), which represent 1.03% and 4.63% of the total deaths registered in 2019 for the causes considered in this study. The reduction in deaths preventable by diet modifications would impact the health spending from the public health service, saving from 289 to 1,023 billion a year.

These results represent the cost for the lowest deviation from the observed to the optimized scenarios. We opted to focus on the food preference constraints instead of cost constraints. Both dimensions have been described as having an important role in food choices [25]. However, once they are measured on different scales, it is difficult to distinguish which one would play the highest influence on the individuals’ choice. We assume that, while people’s decisions take into account the price, maybe mostly in low-income households, people also do not buy what they are not willing to eat, even if they can afford it. It is in line with the fact that healthy foods such as fruit and vegetables in Brazil and most of the world are, in general, low regardless of the family income level in middle- and high-income countries. Thus, the actual dietary intakes (food quantities in the current diets) stand, at the most, for the balance between price and preferences. In the context of these analyses, it means that the overall optimized diets should be as close as possible to the baseline diets; in other words, people would be able to meet the dietary targets by keeping as close as possible to their current food habits. Scenarios with no cost increment or even at a lower cost compared with the baseline cost would be feasible, however, they would demand higher diet modifications [11,18], which might not be acceptable or realistic.

It must be clear, however, which intervention would be more cost-effective, once cost increment compared with the baseline cost was observed in all scenarios. This cost increase may not be feasible for families in low socioeconomic status; thus, it should take place via price reduction of key foods (for example, subsiding fruit and vegetables). The cost for the government would be offset by the reduction in the spending on health assistance and the productivity gains due to the reduction in deaths and diseases. All scenarios have shown to be somewhat cost-effective; in the first two scenarios, increasing only FV and fiber, the cost increments were the lowest as well as the number of deaths prevented and the cost savings by the health system, when compared with the other scenarios. Besides the cost-effectiveness in scenarios 4 and 5 being lower, they also rely on the assumption that, in addition to the higher cost increment, people would need to tolerate more changes in their current diet.

It is worth noting that the epidemiological and economic dimensions of this study are subject to important time lag. The potential impact fraction estimated stands for a proportion of deaths that would be avoided if the exposure had been modified in the past, but we cannot predict how much would have cost the diet in each of the scenarios if they were adopted several years ago for two reasons. First, our optimized diets were designed to resemble the current diets as much as possible, which is likely to be somewhat different from diets in the past [26]. Second, price variation is determined, among other variables, by the demand and supply over the years. FV supply, for example, should have followed the increased demand for the quantities in the modeled scenarios to not increase the prices. The implication of these results in the future follows the same rationale. We don’t know, indeed, how much will be the diet cost and the spending saved in the future once prices might vary for many reasons.

There are several studies assessing the impact of simulated dietary interventions. However, according to a review performed by Grieger et al [27], most were conducted with North American and European data, and most interventions were based on changes in nutrients or foods consumed in excess. Similarly, in Brazil, the studies on simulated interventions are mostly focused on critical nutrients, particularly on sodium [4,20,28], or on health outcomes, such as obesity, cancer, diabetes, and cardiovascular disease.

Few studies have assessed intervention with several dietary items at once, and usually, they do not account for the impact of food substitution when changing the target items. Food substitution modeling allows us to estimate the effect of replacing foods (healthy with unhealthy and vice-versa) that may impact nutrient intakes. According to Grieger et al [27], this is a clear gap in the studies included in the review once healthy foods are expected to have a different nutrient profile when compared to unhealthy ones. In our analysis, the modeled higher intake of FV led to a reduction in saturated fat content (scenario 3). Conversely, changing PUFA, saturated fat, and sodium content in diets led to an increase in FV (scenarios 4 and 5). All of these changes were considered when estimating the cost and the preventable deaths. In addition, the comparison with other studies is not straightforward once there are important variations in the assumptions, inputs, and interventions. The outcomes considered for each dietary risk, the systematic reviews or individual studies considered to obtain the relative risks, and the intervention set affect the population attributable fraction and consequently the number of deaths and the economic burden. As an example, Krueger et al [29] estimated the economic benefits of attaining FV recommendation in Canada. Unlike our analysis, they focused on FV for which the counterfactual scenario was the official FV consumption by everyone. As expected, the economic burden (US$ 4.39 billion) was much higher than we found in our most optimistic scenario (150g increase of FV).

Strengths and limitations

Our study innovates by estimating the potential cost of the interventions for the households. It is critical to know to which degree families would afford healthy choices, besides providing information for supporting taxation, subsiding, and any other related policies.

One common limitation when modeling the mean intakes is that the distribution is assumed to be the same as before the intervention. In a real scenario, an increase in mean intake would be more feasible if the intake increased more among low consumers, compared to the high consumers at the baseline, which would reduce the variance of the intake distribution in a group. It would ultimately increase the population attributable fraction (PAF) once fewer people will be at the highest risk (low consumption) and fewer people will be over the theoretical maximum risk exposure level (high consumers).

Another important limitation is the underreporting, commonly observed in self-reported instruments to collect dietary intakes. A pooled analysis of several validation studies with biomarkers found a mean energy underreporting of 18% [30]. However, we do not know how much is the underreporting over age-sex groups. It is apparent that there is a substantial underreporting of energy intake in older groups, where the reported energy intakes were 1418 kcal and 1374 kcal for males and females 70y and older, respectively. It makes it more difficult to change the food quantities in such a restricted caloric set, that’s why we relaxed the caloric content in some models. Underreporting in dietary intake also leads to underestimation in the diet cost. While the cost estimate is not accurate, the cost difference between the baseline and the interventions is still informative once they are subject to the same effect of the measurement error in dietary intakes (the scenarios are isocaloric).

Comparative risk assessment models such as PRIME for simulating the attributable deaths are adaptable to different settings and require inputs available in multiple settings, such as population-level estimates of risk factor distributions and disease-specific mortalities. Nevertheless, the estimated deaths delayed or averted do not consider the lifetime exposure to risk factors nor the time-lag effect between exposure and disease outcome. Therefore, the estimates in this study are not intended to predict the future but rather to estimate the difference between two or more policy or epidemiological scenarios.

Regarding the attributable direct and indirect costs of disease, the estimates are conservative because they only consider hospitalizations in the public health system and the costs of premature deaths. For example, other direct costs such as primary health care, outpatient consultations and procedures, and private or out-of-the-pocket payments, and the indirect costs of the study do not include the effects of presenteeism, absenteeism, sick leaves, and early retirements.

We concluded that a substantial number of deaths and costs due to hospitalization and productivity losses would be avoidable even with small changes in diets. However, even the cheapest intervention might be prohibitive for deprived families, yet subsidies and social policies could contribute to improving diets.

Supporting information

S1 File. S1–S7 Tables.

(PDF)

Data Availability

The datasets analyzed during the current study are available on the Brazilian Institute of Geography and Statistics (IBGE) website, [https://www.ibge.gov.br/en/statistics/social/population/25610-pof-2017-2018-pof-en.html?=&t=o-que-e]. Variable names, description, and contents are in Portuguese. The Excel file used for running the PRIME is available on https://www.euro.who.int/en/health-topics/disease-prevention/tobacco/publications/2019/ncdprime-modelling-the-impact-of-national-policies-on-noncommunicable-disease-ncd-mortality-using-prime-a-policy-scenario-modelling-tool-2019. SAS codes used for diet optimization are available from the corresponding author on reasonable request.

Funding Statement

EVJ was funded by FUNDAÇÃO CARLOS CHAGAS FILHO DE AMPARO À PESQUISA DO ESTADO DO RIO DE JANEIRO (FAPERJ - www.faperj.br), grant number E26/201.332/2021. IEM was funded by CONSELHO NACIONAL DE DESENVOLVIMENTO CIENTÍFICO E TECNOLÓGICO (CNPq - www.cnpq.gov.br) and Coordenação Geral de Alimentação e Nutrição do Departamento de Promoção da Saúde da Secretaria de Atenção Primária à Saúde do Ministério da Saúde (CGAN/DEPROS/SAPS/MS), grant number 442636/2019-9. The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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This study looked at optimized diet components that were accounted for food prices and preferences and estimated the number of deaths and economic burden and their cost saving from the health system. The methodology is very crucial for credibility of the results. The estimation of these important results for policy decision requires complex approached. However, the approaches were not well described in the current status of the manuscript, especially the attributable cost. In general, important parameters put into the modelling and their corresponding data sources should be listed in the manuscript. The authors often provided the reference of the particular methods used and this leads to insufficient knowledge that readers could earn.

Page 2, line 9, 10: This requires adding more references. (i.e., There was only reference no. 9.)

9 Several studies have performed diet optimization to design diets attaining nutritional goals

10 while respecting other aspects of the diets, such as food preferences and cost constraints.

Page 5, line 21-22: According to the sentence below, the number of sample, number of food subtypes that were diet risk factors, and observed nutrient components of each age-sex subgroup should be presented.

1591 Food items—115 Food subtypes---26 Food subtypes that were diet risk factors (Table 3)----food quantities (Table 3), energy intake and nutrient component (Table 4)

21 Mean food intakes were obtained for each age-sex group and used as starting points to design

22 optimized diets using linear programming models. Twelve age-sex subgroups were defined: < 30y, 31-

23 39y, 41-49y, 51-59y, 61-69, and >=70, all age groups stratified by sex. The Brazilian Food Composition

24 database (13) was used to obtain nutrient content in both observed and optimized diets. Nutrient

25 composition of foods clustered from food subtypes (e.g. different types of rice into ‘rice’) was obtained

26 as the mean composition of the food subtypes weighted by their frequency of reporting in the NDS.

Page 6, line 18, 19: Spell out for LP and “minimized” should be “minimize”

18 xxxxxxx. The objective function in the LP models was defined to minimized the sum of

19 the absolute difference between each optimized and baseline food quantity, described as follows:

Page 8: Table 1: Please check mmHG should be “mmHg”

Page 8, line 2: Add the abbreviation for PUFAs, and mmHG should be “mmHg”

Page 9: Table 2: In Table 2, please check the unit and consistency with Table 1 and line 7, and the correctness of line 7. For sodium in Table 4, the unit was mg. In addition, the unit per day should be labeled.

7 a percentage in relation to the baseline, in grams for fats and milligrams for cholesterol and sodium.

Page 10, line 25: The calculation of attributable death was based on “outcome-risk pair and age-sex group.” Therefore, the results of these should be shown in the manuscript.

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9 xxxxxxxxxxx model and the Trans Fat Macrosimulation Model is a comparative risk

10 assessment methodology suitable to estimate the health impact of changes in the behavioral risk factors

11 for non-communicable diseases on population and age-sex specific NCD mortality.

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12 The attributable costs were estimated through a comparative risk assessment macrosimulation

13 model to estimate the proportion of direct costs to the Brazilian National Health System

14 (hospitalizations) and indirect costs related to premature deaths in each diet scenario, expanded from a

15 costing tool developed for hypertension and related cardiovascular disease (16).

Page 11, line 15-18: “Sugar was never been stated before in the method section about how were they related to fruit or vegetable”

15 xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx. The estimation of the

16 direct and indirect costs related to dietary risks (salt, fats, sugars, fruits, vegetables, and fibers) applied

17 the same PAFs related to each health outcome in each age-sex group for each counterfactual scenario

18 as estimated previously using the PRIME.

Page 12, line 8-9: only the relative risks were varied. Were there other parameters that were also varied for sensitivity analysis.

8 Uncertainty intervals are calculated based on 5,000 Monte Carlo iterations which allows the

9 relative risks to randomly vary according to the distribution described in the literature.

Which software was used for each calculation?

Page 12, line 17-19: 1) Spell out for PUFA; 2) All results of each age sex group pertaining this issue should be presented in the Table so that the contents in these lines can be understood.

17 constraints was necessary. Cholesterol constraint was not attained in 70y+ Females; sodium constraint

18 was not attained in 50-60y Females; PUFA constraints were not attained in 30-40y Males and 60y+

19 Females. In all these cases, the constraints were set to be equal or higher than the baseline mean intakes.

Table 3 and Table 4: The unit per day should be labeled.

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Page 16, line 1-2: Spell out MUFA and PUFA. However, MUFA was not stated in Table 1.

1 fibers, followed by the changes in fats (lowering total, saturated and trans fats, and cholesterol, while

2 increasing MUFA and PUFA) and salt.

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Yes - all data are fully available without restriction (The datasets analyzed during the current study are available on the Brazilian Institute of Geography and Statistics (IBGE) website, [https://www.ibge.gov.br/en/statistics/social/population/25610-pof-2017-2018-pof en.html?=&t=o-que-e]. Variable names, description, and contents are in Portuguese. The Excel file used for running the PRIME is available on https://www.euro.who.int/en/health-topics/disease prevention/tobacco/publications/2019/ncdprime-modelling-the-impact-of-national policies-on-noncommunicable-disease-ncd-mortality-using-prime-a-policy-scenario modelling-tool-2019. SAS codes used for diet optimization are available from the corresponding author on reasonable request.)

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This is an interesting study. The study evaluated the impact of change in dietary risk factors on health outcomes and economic burden related to noncommunicable chronic diseases in Brazil by setting the goal at optimized diet. This study used linear programming model to design healthier diet and introduced both dietary constraints and food acceptability constraints into the model. The data sources were based on the national survey. The paper is generally well structured and provided valuable information however there are some points that should be added more explanation.

Method section:

1. Is the study sample for baseline dietary intakes equal to 20,112 households (from NDS)?

2. The total number of study sample and the total number of food items of each age-sex subgroup should be provided in Supplementary section.

3. The final list of food items in each age-sex subgroup ranged from 112 to 119. The author should explain why the total number of food items shown in Table 3 was 26.

4. In Diet modeling section (line 26), the author should add more explanation about how many food items were put into the linear programming model and how to select the food items that were put into the model.

5. The topic of Dietary constraints and Food acceptability constraints should be the subtopic of Diet modeling.

6. In Dietary constraint section, the author should add more details about how to develop a set of key healthy dietary component. The food items that are considered as the dietary risks for NCD based on PRIME model are selected (as shown in Table 2), isn’t it? In addition, the author should add more explanation about the differences among the five scenarios, whether it is gradually increased the nutritional profile of diet and which scenario that were assumed to provide the maximum benefit on health outcome.

7. Table 1 should be moved to Supplementary section.

8. In Attributable death section, the author should add more details about how TFA macrosimulation model were used for calculation attributable death. Why was it used as complementary to PRIME model?

9. In Attributable cost section, comparative risk assessment macrosimulation model refer to TFA macrosimulation model, isn’t it?

10. In Attributable cost section, line 16, why was sugar also considered?

11. In Attributable cost section, line 22, the author should provide how much the data from the Brazilian National Health System represent hospitalizations of NCD patients in Brazil.

12. The author should add the reference for discount rate (2% per year).

Result section:

13. In Table 5 and 6, the author should show the data by NCD diseases such as preventable mortality and hospitalization among patients with CHD, stroke, cancer.

14. Unit of preventable deaths should be clarified in Table 5 (per day or per year). In addition, Page 16, line 13-15, the author should add more explanation about how to calculate the number of deaths would be avoided, for example, 0.023 refer to….

15. In Table 6, trend of saving costs in hospitalizations should be similar to trends of preventable death (Table 5) and saving costs of productivity loss (Table 7). Why saving costs in hospitalization in Scenario #4 was equal to zero?

Other issues required minor change:

o In Table 1, head row in column #1, “Risk factor” should be replaced by “Dietary risk factor”.

o In Table 1, the values in the fourth column for saturated fat, PUFAs, Dietary cholesterol, salt is regression parameter.

o In Table 1, unit of change of dietary cholesterol should be 1 mg/day.

o In Table 2, the author should add the quantities of each dietary item as per day or per…

o In Table 3, order of food items was based on type of food, isn’t it?

o In Table 3, why FV (fruits and vegetables) were grouped?

o In Table 4, there were two type of data, the first part presented total Kcal (nutrient intake) and %Kcal from each nutrient and the second part presented mg or g (nutrient content). The author should add the topic such as nutrient intake and nutrient content in each part. In addition, why sum of %Kcal from each nutrient is approximately 128.66%, which is greater than 100%?

References:

o Introduction section, please add reference in Line 23-24 page 3, line 10 page 4.

o The author should format the references according to the guideline of the journal.

Typing error:

o In Discussion section, page 18, line 5 (0,02/day), line 8 (1,03% and 4,63%), the comma used in the numbers should be revised.

o In Discussion section, page 21, the word “under-reporting” and underreporting” should be consistent.

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PLoS One. 2023 Jul 11;18(7):e0288471. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0288471.r002

Author response to Decision Letter 0


4 Jun 2023

This study looked at optimized diet components that were accounted for food prices and preferences and estimated the number of deaths and economic burden and their cost saving from the health system. The methodology is very crucial for credibility of the results. The estimation of these important results for policy decision requires complex approached. However, the approaches were not well described in the current status of the manuscript, especially the attributable cost. In general, important parameters put into the modelling and their corresponding data sources should be listed in the manuscript. The authors often provided the reference of the particular methods used and this leads to insufficient knowledge that readers could earn.

Answer: Thank you very much for your careful reading and for the several observations and suggestions for this manuscript. We also i) reviewed the analysis thoroughly and updated some numbers throughout the text; ii) replaced PAF (population attributable fraction) with PIF (potential impact fraction) because it is the appropriate term in this context. Much of the information required by the reviewers was provided as Supplementary Information. We hope this new version brings a clearer description of the procedures and results.

Page 2, line 9, 10: This requires adding more references. (i.e., There was only reference no. 9.)

Answer: Done.

Page 5, line 21-22: According to the sentence below, the number of sample, number of food subtypes that were diet risk factors, and observed nutrient components of each age-sex subgroup should be presented.

Ok – Done. This information was included in Supplementary Information.

Page 6, line 18, 19: Spell out for LP and “minimized” should be “minimize”

Answer: Done.

Page 8: Table 1: Please check mmHG should be “mmHg”

Answer: Done.

Page 8, line 2: Add the abbreviation for PUFAs, and mmHG should be “mmHg”

Answer: Done.

Page 9: Table 2: In Table 2, please check the unit and consistency with Table 1 and line 7, and the correctness of line 7. For sodium in Table 4, the unit was mg. In addition, the unit per day should be labeled.

Answer: The unity for sodium is mg. In table 2 the scenarios 4 and 5 represent change in % in relation to the baseline intake. The same for PUFA, saturated fat, and cholesterol. That is why they are not presenting in mg or %kcal.

Page 10, line 25: The calculation of attributable death was based on “outcome-risk pair and age-sex group.” Therefore, the results of these should be shown in the manuscript.

Answer: We agree that these results should also be presented. We included in Supplementary Information.

Page 10, line 9-11: How was the Trans Fat Macrosimulation used in this study? Please provide more explanation

Thanks for this observation. It was a mistake when describing the procedure. We corrected it throughout the text.

Page 11, line 12-15: Please provide brief explanation of the comparative risk assessment macrosimulation model and its use/parameters to calculate the attributable cost.

Answer: Done. To estimate the attributable cost, we applied the same PIF (potential impact fraction) applied to estimate the number of deaths. We made it clearer in the manuscript.

Page 11, line 15-18: “Sugar was never been stated before in the method section about how were they related to fruit or vegetable”

Thanks for this observation. It was a mistake when describing the procedure. We corrected it throughout the text.

Page 12, line 8-9: only the relative risks were varied. Were there other parameters that were also varied for sensitivity analysis.

Answer: It considered the variation in the RR and the dietary inputs. We made it clearer in the manuscript.

Which software was used for each calculation?

Answer: The SAS software was used to run the linear programming models and descriptive analysis. The Microsoft Excel was used to run the PRIME spreadsheet. This information was described in the main text.

Page 12, line 17-19: 1) Spell out for PUFA; 2) All results of each age sex group pertaining this issue should be presented in the Table so that the contents in these lines can be understood.

Answer: Done.

Table 3 and Table 4: The unit per day should be labeled.

Answer: Done.

Page 15, Table 4: Please provide the abbreviation list for Cho., MUFAs and PUFAs

Answer: Done.

Page 16, line 1-2: Spell out MUFA and PUFA. However, MUFA was not stated in Table 1.

Answer: MUFA was not included in the optimization model. However, MUFA content varied across the scenarios due to changes in other fat compounds as indicated in Table 2, i.e., due to food and fats replacement to meet the dietary constraints. “Spontaneous” changes in MUFA content across the scenarios were accounted when computing the attributable fraction.

Page 16, Table 5: According to Table 1, could the results be broken down by the individual diseases?

Answer: Done. Presented in Supplementary Information

Reviewers' comments:

Overall summary

This is an interesting study. The study evaluated the impact of change in dietary risk factors on health outcomes and economic burden related to noncommunicable chronic diseases in Brazil by setting the goal at optimized diet. This study used linear programming model to design healthier diet and introduced both dietary constraints and food acceptability constraints into the model. The data sources were based on the national survey. The paper is generally well structured and provided valuable information however there are some points that should be added more explanation.

Answer: Thank you very much for your careful reading and for the several observations and suggestions for this manuscript. We also i) reviewed the analysis thoroughly and updated some numbers throughout the text; ii) replaced PAF (population attributable fraction) with PIF (potential impact fraction) because it is the appropriate term in this context. Much of the information required by the reviewers was provided as Supplementary Information. We hope this new version brings a clearer description of the procedures and results.

Method section:

1. Is the study sample for baseline dietary intakes equal to 20,112 households (from NDS)?

Answer: Yes, the total of households visited for dietary intake collection was 20,112. However, for this study, dietary information was used only for individuals 25y or older (n=37,687). We made it clearer in the text.

2. The total number of study sample and the total number of food items of each age-sex subgroup should be provided in Supplementary section.

Answer: Done.

3. The final list of food items in each age-sex subgroup ranged from 112 to 119. The author should explain why the total number of food items shown in Table 3 was 26.

Answer: In table 3, food list was aggregated in main foods or food groups. Also, we revised the analysis thoroughly and corrected the number of foods, which now varies from 83 to 85.

4. In Diet modeling section (line 26), the author should add more explanation about how many food items were put into the linear programming model and how to select the food items that were put into the model.

Answer: All the reported foods (after initial aggregation, as described in line 21, pg 5) were included into the model with exception to coffee, tea, and alcoholic beverages. The number of foods varied according to the age-sex group because not every food was reported by individuals in all age-sex groups. The number of foods put into the model varied from 83 to 85.

5. The topic of Dietary constraints and Food acceptability constraints should be the subtopic of Diet modeling.

Answer: Done.

6. In Dietary constraint section, the author should add more details about how to develop a set of key healthy dietary component. The food items that are considered as the dietary risks for NCD based on PRIME model are selected (as shown in Table 2), isn’t it? In addition, the author should add more explanation about the differences among the five scenarios, whether it is gradually increased the nutritional profile of diet and which scenario that were assumed to provide the maximum benefit on health outcome.

Answer: Thanks for this comment. Yes, we defined the scenarios based on the dietary risks of PRIME model. The main rationale for the changes across the scenarios was to evaluate moderate and gradual modifications in the current dietary intakes. There is no evidence on what is in fact moderate, feasible or acceptable in a population, thus we increased or decrease the amount of each dietary risk in small to moderate amounts that, at our best judgment, are potentially achievable at the population level. More drastic changes would provide more benefits; however, they would cost more, which is, itself, a barrier to being adopted.

7. Table 1 should be moved to Supplementary section.

Answer: Thanks for this suggestion. However, we opted to keep the table in the main text because it summarizes the dietary risks and outcomes, which, to our judgment, are essential information for the readers.

8. In Attributable death section, the author should add more details about how TFA macrosimulation model were used for calculation attributable death. Why was it used as complementary to PRIME model?

Thanks for this observation. It was a mistake when describing the procedure. We corrected it throughout the text.

9. In Attributable cost section, comparative risk assessment macrosimulation model refer to TFA macrosimulation model, isn’t it?

Answer: It was a mistake when describing the procedure. We corrected it throughout the text.

10. In Attributable cost section, line 16, why was sugar also considered?

Answer: Thanks for this observation. It was a mistake when describing the procedure. We corrected it throughout the text.

11. In Attributable cost section, line 22, the author should provide how much the data from the Brazilian National Health System represent hospitalizations of NCD patients in Brazil.

Answer: Done. However, there is no data on how Much it represents by cause of deaths. The available data is regarding to the total of hospitalization, which is about 70% provided by the National Health System.

12. The author should add the reference for discount rate (2% per year).

Answer: Done.

Result section:

13. In Table 5 and 6, the author should show the data by NCD diseases such as preventable mortality and hospitalization among patients with CHD, stroke, cancer.

Answer: We agree that these results should also be shown. We included in Supplementary Information.

14. Unit of preventable deaths should be clarified in Table 5 (per day or per year). In addition, Page 16, line 13-15, the author should add more explanation about how to calculate the number of deaths would be avoided, for example, 0.023 refer to….

Answer: Done. We clarified this sentence in the text.

15. In Table 6, trend of saving costs in hospitalizations should be similar to trends of preventable death (Table 5) and saving costs of productivity loss (Table 7). Why saving costs in hospitalization in Scenario #4 was equal to zero?

Answer: Thanks for noticing this mistake. We corrected the table.

Other issues required minor change:

o In Table 1, head row in column #1, “Risk factor” should be replaced by “Dietary risk factor”.

Answer: Done.

o In Table 1, the values in the fourth column for saturated fat, PUFAs, Dietary cholesterol, salt is regression parameter.

Answer: Thanks. Done.

o In Table 1, unit of change of dietary cholesterol should be 1 mg/day.

Answer: The “unit of change” column refers to the changes in dietary intakes (gram or milligram/day) and the “outcome” column, in this case, refers to the total serum cholesterol, in nmol/L.

o In Table 2, the author should add the quantities of each dietary item as per day or per…

Answer: Done.

o In Table 3, order of food items was based on type of food, isn’t it?

Answer: Yes.

o In Table 3, why FV (fruits and vegetables) were grouped?

Answer: We opted to aggregate them because FV is a marker of healthy diet and there is general intake recommendation for this group. We also presented them apart.

o In Table 4, there were two type of data, the first part presented total Kcal (nutrient intake) and %Kcal from each nutrient and the second part presented mg or g (nutrient content). The author should add the topic such as nutrient intake and nutrient content in each part. In addition, why sum of %Kcal from each nutrient is approximately 128.66%, which is greater than 100%?

Answer: A very little variation around 100% is expected due to methodological issues. In this case, summing up the macronutrients (carbohydrates, total fats, and protein) results in (54.8+28.8+19.2) = 102.8%. The percentage from saturated fat, MUFA, PUFA, and trans-fats should not be summed up with the other macronutrients because they are types of fat, therefore accounted in the energy contribution of fats.

References:

o Introduction section, please add reference in Line 23-24 page 3, line 10 page 4.

Answer: Done. A reference in line 10 page 4 was placed at the end of the next sentence.

o The author should format the references according to the guideline of the journal.

Answer: Done.

Typing error:

o In Discussion section, page 18, line 5 (0,02/day), line 8 (1,03% and 4,63%), the comma used in the numbers should be revised.

Answer: Thanks. Done.

o In Discussion section, page 21, the word “under-reporting” and underreporting” should be consistent.

Answer: Thanks. Done.

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Decision Letter 1

Charles Odilichukwu R Okpala

25 Jun 2023

PONE-D-22-29107R1Avoidable diet-related deaths and cost-of-illness with culturally optimized modifications in diet: the case of Brazil.PLOS ONE

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Author response to Decision Letter 1


26 Jun 2023

Additional Editor Comments:

Please authors, kindly address the minor concerns. Please also re-check the grammar of text throughout, to sharpen it further ok.

Answer: thank you very much. We carefully revised the manuscript thoroughly (grammar and other unobserved typos). We also identified and corrected few inconsistencies between the results in the text and tables.

Thank you for the opportunity to review the revised manuscript. The author has thoroughly revised the manuscript in accordance with the comments from the reviewers in the first round and also added relevant information in supplementary material.

Minor concern is about typing error.

Example:

Page 5: Line 20: From this list, the items were aggregated if they were different type, different cooking method, or different meat cut of the same food or (e.g., different types of orange into 21 “orange”, different beef cuts into “beef”, etc.).

Table 4: Charbohydrates (%Kcal)

Answer: thank you very much for observing these mistakes. We carefully revised the manuscript thoroughly (grammar and other unobserved typos).

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Decision Letter 2

Charles Odilichukwu R Okpala

29 Jun 2023

Avoidable diet-related deaths and cost-of-illness with culturally optimized modifications in diet: the case of Brazil.

PONE-D-22-29107R2

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    Data Availability Statement

    The datasets analyzed during the current study are available on the Brazilian Institute of Geography and Statistics (IBGE) website, [https://www.ibge.gov.br/en/statistics/social/population/25610-pof-2017-2018-pof-en.html?=&t=o-que-e]. Variable names, description, and contents are in Portuguese. The Excel file used for running the PRIME is available on https://www.euro.who.int/en/health-topics/disease-prevention/tobacco/publications/2019/ncdprime-modelling-the-impact-of-national-policies-on-noncommunicable-disease-ncd-mortality-using-prime-a-policy-scenario-modelling-tool-2019. SAS codes used for diet optimization are available from the corresponding author on reasonable request.


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