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. 2023 Jul 19;18(7):e0280993. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0280993

Mothers’ health care seeking behavior for neonatal danger sign in southern Ethiopia: Community based cross–sectional study

Molalegn Mesele 1,*, Kelemu Abebe 1, Samuel Dessu 2, Walellign Anmut 1, Addisu Yeshambel 1, Zinabu Dawit 3, Tiwabwork Tekalign 4, Natnael Atnafu 1, Yohannes Fikadu 5
Editor: Sungwoo Lim6
PMCID: PMC10355418  PMID: 37467224

Abstract

Background

Over the previous few decades, significant progress has been made in reducing newborn mortality, but the worldwide scale of the problem remains high. A considerable number of newborn death and difficulties owing to neonatal danger signs could be avoided if mothers sought appropriate health care for common neonatal risk indications, according to a number of studies presently underway in Ethiopia. The aim of this study is to assess health care seeking behavior of mothers’ in related to neonatal danger signs.

Method

A community-based cross-sectional study was conducted among 410 participants in Wolaita Sodo, From October 1 to October 30, 2019. To collect data, structured interviewer administered questionnaire was used. Data was coded, cleaned, recoded and entered in to epi-data version 3.1 and transported to SPSS window version 21 for analysis. Multivariable logistic regression was carried out and p-value of less than or equal to 0.05 was considered statistically significant.

Result

A total of 410 mothers participated in this study, 110 (47.6%) mothers preferred health intuition for their neonate. Husband educational status (AOR = 2.4, 95% CI = 1.1, 5.5), communication media (AOR = 4.3, 95% CI = 2.4, 7.5), place of residence (AOR = 3.5, 95% C.I = 1.9, 6.7), ANC follow up (AOR = 2.8, 95% CI = 1.4, 5.8), and PNC follow (AOR = 1.7, 95% CI = 1.1, 3.1) were all factors that significantly associated with health care seeking practice neonatal dander signs.

Conclusion

Overall, there was a low degree of health-seeking practice. The educational status of the mother’s husband, communication media, residence, ANC follow-up, and PNC follow-up all predicted the mothers’ health-care seeking behavior. The study also identifies the Wolaita Zone and Sodo town health offices, the health development army, one to five local community organizations with and health extension workers as key contributors.

Introduction

A child’s survival depends on the neonatal period, which lasts for the first 28 days of life [1]. When the infant is a newborn, its chances of survival are determined. To lessen mortality in children under the age of five, newborn mortality must be reduced [2]. To increase neonates’ chances of survival and provide the groundwork for a healthy life, it is essential to give them with the right nourishment and care [3]. Preterm birth concerns, labor and delivery problems (complications connected to the intrapartum period), and infections are the main causes of newborn deaths worldwide. Three-quarters of all neonatal deaths can be attributed to these three causes when taken together [4]. By 2030, the Sustainable Development Goals (SDGs) seek to end the preventable deaths of infants and young children. All nations should work toward reducing the Neonatal Mortality Rate (NMR) to 12 deaths per 1,000 live births or less by 2030 and the under-5 mortality rate to 25 deaths per 1,000 live births or less [5].

In 2018, Sub-Saharan Africa had the highest NMR of death per 1,000 live births, which means that a child born in a low-income country is ten times more likely to die than a child born in a high-income country [6]. In Ethiopia neonatal mortality rate was 30 deaths per 1,000 live births in 2019; in 2016, Ethiopian Demographic and Health Survey, it was 29 [7, 8]. Evidences indicated that there is association between treatments seeking at health facilities and neonatal mortality [9, 10]. This indicates that, neonatal death is preventable when timely and appropriate care is given [11]. A study also indicated that one third of neonatal deaths can eliminated by caring for small and ill neonate. However, care seeking behavior for neonatal illness is low in low income and middle income countries [12].

Any action taken by people who know they have a health problem or are sick in order to obtain a proper treatment is referred to as health care seeking behavior. It entails recognizing symptoms, determining the nature of the sickness, and, most importantly, providing effective home care and monitoring. Knowledge of the illness’s cause and treatment, as well as its length and perceived significance, socioeconomic status, and cultural customs, all influence health-care seeking behavior [13]. Millions of mothers and their neonate all over the world are living in a social environment that does not support health care seeking behavior [12]. Thus, many mothers did not generally seek formal health care during pregnancy, childbirth and puerpererium, which have a major impact on health care seeking for mothers and survival of their neonate [14] Neonatal danger sign refer to occurrence of sign that would show great danger of new born mortality and morbidity and necessity for initial therapeutic intervention. Convulsions, fever, lethargy, and poor breast milk feeding, as well as chest retractions, jaundice, and vomiting, are all significant danger signs that must be addressed immediately [1518]. In Ethiopia, 40.7% of mothers reported having knowledge of newborn danger signs [19]

Ethiopia has made significant progress in the implementation of integrated health care, yet children continue to suffer from mortality and morbidities associated with danger indicators. This is mostly recognized to mother’s health care seeking behavior [2022]. In the southern nation nationalities people region (SNNPR), a number of packages of interventions target newborn care. The health extension program is very important in delivering quality neonatal, maternal and child health services through effective and efficient linkages between health post, health center and community. Limited studies remained conducted in Ethiopia with respect to mothers’ practice towards neonatal danger signs. So this research is intended to assess the mothers’ health care seeking behavior towards neonatal danger signs and factors associated with seeking modern medical care for their sick neonates.

Method and material

Study setting and design

A community–based cross–sectional study was conducted on mothers who gave birth in the previous 12 months in Sodo town, Wolaita Zone, SNNPR, Ethiopia, from October 1 to October 30, 2019. Sodo town is 390 kilometers south of Ethiopia’s capital, Addis Ababa, and 153 kilometers south of Ethiopia’s regional capital, Hawasa. The town is divided into four administrative sub-cities. The town’s overall population in 2018 was 182,607 people (93,130 men and 89,477 women), with 28,499 children under the age of five and 4576 infants under the age of one year, according to the town administration office. In the reproductive age range, there are also 4963 women (15–49 years). Functioning health facilities in the town includes 17 medium and lower level clinics, 17 health posts, 3 health centers and two Hospitals (one private and one government).

Source and study population

All women in reproductive age group (15–49) living in Sodo town and two Sodo zurea kebele was source population and the potential study population from a list of those mothers who give birth in the last 12 months preceding the survey obtained from community health extension workers; each kebeles of the respective sub-city was study population.

Sample size determination and sampling procedure

From a study conducted in Arba Minch General Hospital, sample size was estimated using the single population proportion formula, taking into account the following factors: marginal error of 0.05, 95 percent confidence interval, and p-value 41% [23]. By adding 10% non-response rate, the final sample size was 410.

Mothers who gave birth in the previous 12 months were coded by health extension workers, and the sample size was distributed proportionally to all administrative sub-cities of Sodo town and two Sodo zurea kebele, then every 6th woman was questioned using a systematic random sampling methodology.

Measurement

Face-to-face interviews with structured questionnaires were used to collect data. The questionnaire, which includes socioeconomic and demographic characteristics, obstetric and practice of mother towards neonatal danger sign, the questionnaires were initially devised in English and then translated into Amharic. The mother and child health program of the Johns Hopkins Program for International Education in Gynecology and Obstetrics was used to prepare the questionnaire. Mothers’ health-seeking activity in reaction to newborn danger signs is one of the study’s findings [24].

Variables

The dependent variable was health care seeking practice for neonatal danger signs, while the independent variables were socio-demographic and socio-economic features, obstetrics history, and the mother’s preference seeking care for newborn danger sign.

Operational definition

Care seeking practice: seeking medical or non-medical care in response to neonatal danger sign to reduce severity and complication after recognizing the danger signs and the perceived nature of illness and it was measured by [25].

Health care seeking practice for neonatal danger signs: those mothers who have taken their neonates to health facility immediately after the neonate has developed danger sign [26].

Data processing and analysis

Data was coded, cleaned, recoded and entered in to epi-data version 3.1 and transported to SPSS window version 21 for analysis. Simple descriptive summary statistics was done. Table and statement was used to present the result of the data. Association between independent and dependent variables was analyzed first using bivariate logistic regression analysis. All variables with p-value less than 0.25 in bivariate logistic regression were entered to multivariable logistic regression for controlling possible confoundering and variable with p-value less than or equals to 0.05 considered as statistically significant.

Ethics statement

The Wolaita Sodo University College of Health Science and Medicine’s Ethical Review Board granted ethical approval.

Finally, a formal letter of permission from the Sodo Town Health Office was obtained in order to move forward with the data collecting. The study participants, as well as the parents or guardians of each participant under the age of 18, provided oral consent. Following that, participants’ assent was requested, and those who were older than or equal to 18 years old gave their verbal approval. Participation was only permitted after receiving both assent and informed oral consent. To enable thorough and sincere self-disclosure, we kept voluntary engagement and confidentiality.

Result

Socio-demographic characteristics of participants

During the data collection process, 410 moms were interviewed, yielding a 100% response rate. The average age was 26.45 years (SD 6.2). In this study, the majority of mothers 173 (42.2%) were between the ages of 25 and 34, the majority of mothers had a primary (grades 1–8) educational level, and 407 (99.3%) were married (Table 1).

Table 1. Socio demographic characteristics of mothers in Sodo town, Wolaita Zone, southern Ethiopia, 2019 (n = 410).

Variables Frequency Percentage (%)
Age of respondents
18–24 169 41.2
25–34 173 42.2
34–49 and above 68 16.6
Marital status
Married 407 99.3
Divorced 3 0.7
Mothers educational level
Never attending school 48 11.7
primary education 173 42.2
secondary education 152 37.1
college and university 37 9.0
Husbands educational status
Never attending school 44 10.7
primary education 87 21.2
secondary education 206 50.2
college and university 73 17.8
Mothers occupational status
Merchant 45 11.0
Government employee 35 8.5
Housewife 295 72.0
Daily laborer 20 4.9
Students 15 3.7
Husband’s occupation
Merchant 109 26.6
Government employee 134 32.7
Daily laborer 71 17.3
Students 6 1.5
Farmer 90 21.9
Types of communication media
Television 132 32.2
Radio 278 67.8
Residence
Urban 286 69.8
Rural 124 30.2
Family monthly income
500-1000ETB 288 70.2
1500-3000ETB 71 17.3
>3500ETB 51 12.4

Obstetrics history of participants

Regarding obstetric history of respondents; three 354 (86.3%) of respondents attend Antenatal Care (ANC) follows up for their last pregnancy. Two hundred twenty three (54.4%) have a history of Postnatal Care (PNC) services utilization (Table 2).

Table 2. Obstetrics history of mothers in Sodo town, Wolaita Zone, Southern Ethiopia, 2019(n = 410).

Variables Frequency (%) Percentage (%)
Gravidity
Two 157 38.3
Three 105 25.6
>Three 148 36.1
Parity
One 163 39.8
Two 104 25.4
>Two 143 34.9
ANC follow up
Yes 354 86.3
No 56 13.7
PNC follow up
Yes 323 78.8
No 87 21.2
Place of delivery
Home 7 1.7
Health center 71 17.3
Hospital 332 81.0
Mode of delivery
Spontaneous vaginal delivery 288 70.2
Instrumental delivery 110 26.8
Ceserian section 12 2.9

Health care seeking practice of mothers for neonatal danger signs

231 (56.3%) mothers of all respondents said their newborns had encountered at least one of the WHO-recognized neonatal danger signs. In regarding of danger signs, the majority of neonates 98 (42.4%) had persistent vomiting, 64 (27.7% had convulsions, and 46 (20.1%) had breathing problems (Fig 1).

Fig 1. Danger signs that new-born in experienced in Sodo town, Wolaita Zone, southern Ethiopia, 2019 (n = 231).

Fig 1

From a total of 231 neonates who experienced danger signs, 110 (47.6%) mothers preferred to seek care for their sick neonate at a health facility, 75 (32.4%) preferred traditional healers, and 18 (7.8%) gave home therapy (Fig 2). “Damakesie,” garlic, “tenadam,” honey, a mixture of lemon and ash put on the neonate’s head for tonsillitis, match stick for convulsions, tepid sponging for fever, exposure to sunlight for jaundice, and rubbing with coconut oil for cold body were some of the home treatments mothers used for their sick children.

Fig 2. Care seeking practice of mothers for their sick neonate in Sodo town, Wolaita Zone, southern Ethiopia, 2019 (n = 231).

Fig 2

Mothers are not seeking medical care for a variety of reasons, including 54 (44.9%) expensive treatment costs, 22 (18.2%) minor illnesses, and 15 (12.4%) believing that home remedies are more effective (Table 3). The majority of mothers, 210 (51.2%), continued to breastfeed their ill neonates. The reasons for not continuing to breastfeed were 96 (48%) vomiting, 72 (36%) choke, and 22 (11%) diarrhea.

Table 3. Reasons for not seeking medical care for neonatal danger signs in Sodo town, Wolaita Zone, southern Ethiopia, 2019 (n = 121).

Variable Categories Frequency Percent (%)
Reasons for not seeking medical care High treatment cost 54 44.9
Illness was not serious 22 18.2
Considering that home remedies are more effective 15 12.4
Didn’t trust facility/poor quality of care 14 11.5
Lack of knowledge about danger signs 13 10.7
No reason 3 2.6

Factors associated with maternal health care seeking practice about neonatal danger signs

Husband educational status, communication media, residence, ANC follow up, and PNC follow up were the factors that significantly affected maternal health care seeking practice for neonatal danger signals in multivariable logistic regression. The educational level of the husband is a significant factor in the mothers’ health-care seeking practice. When compared to mothers’ husband with no formal education, those with a husband’s educational level of college and above were 2.4 times (AOR = 2.4, 95% CI = 1.1, 5.5) more likely to seek medical treatment for neonatal danger signs. Another factor that influences maternal health care seeking practice for neonatal danger signs is residency. Participants who lived in an urban area were more than 3.5 times (AOR = 3.5, 95% C.I = 1.9, 6.7) more likely than those who lived in a rural location to seek medical care for neonatal danger signs. Participants who had access to the media were more likely to seek medical care for newborn danger signs. When compared to participants who do not have access to mass media, those who do have access to mass media are 4.3 times (AOR = 4.3, 95% CI = 2.4, 7.5) more likely to seek medical treatment for newborn danger signals. Another factor that is strongly linked to mothers’ health-care seeking practice for newborn danger signs is ANC follow-up. When compared to mothers who had no history of ANC follow up, mothers who had ANC follow up were more than twice as likely to seek medical attention for neonatal danger signals (AOR = 2.8, 95% CI = 1.4, 5.8). Another characteristic that is strongly linked to mothers’ health-care seeking behavior for newborn danger signs is PNC follow-up. When compared to mothers who had no history of PNC follow up, mothers who had PNC follow up were more than 1.7 times more likely to seek medical care for neonatal danger signals (AOR = 1.7, 95% CI = 1.1, 3.1) (Table 4).

Table 4. Factors associated with mothers health care seeking practice for neonatal danger signs in Sodo town, Wolaita Zone, southern Ethiopia, 2019 (n = 410).

Variables Health care seeking practice Odds ratio with 95% CI
Seeking medical care Not seeking medical care Adjusted
Husbands educational status
No formal education 25(56.8%) 19(43.2%) 1
Primary education 41(47.1%) 46(52.9%) 1.8(0.7,4.9)
Secondary education 107(51.7%) 99(48.1%) 2.9(0.8,4.8)
College and above 56(76.7%) 17(23.3%) 2.4(1.1,5.5)*
Residence
Urban 171(59.8%) 115(40.2%) 3.5(1.9,6.7)*
Rural 58(46.8%) 66(53.2%) 1
Communication media
Television 103(72%) 40(26%)
Radio 126(47.2%) 141(52.8%) 4.3(2.4,7.5)
ANC follow up
Yes 211(59.6%) 143(40.4%) 2.8(1.4,5.8)*
No 18(32.1%) 38(67.9%) 1
PNC follow up
Yes 195(60.4%) 128(39.6%) 1.7(1.1,3.1)*
No 34(39.1%) 53(60.9%) 1

*Significant association at P-value <0.05

Discussion

The use of health-care seeking behaviors for neonatal danger signs holds great potential for lowering newborn mortality and morbidity. Improving mothers’ health-seeking behavior for newborn danger signs can lower child morbidity and mortality; research suggest that delaying or refusing treatment contributes to a significant proportion of child mortality in underdeveloped nations [27, 28]. The current study indicates that 110 (47.6%) participants sought health care institution for their children during neonatal danger signs. The finding of the current study is in line with a study done in North West Ethiopia (48.8%) [29], Enugu state, Nigeria (47.7%) [30], but higher as compared with a study done in Wolkite town, Gurage Zone (32%) [31], northern India (23%) [32], and urban slum of India (18.1%) [33]. The finding of the current study is lower as compared with a study done in Bahrdar 82.7% [34]. The difference might be due to the time and socio-economic and socio-demographic difference.

One of the factors that was strongly linked to the mother’s health-care seeking behavior for newborn danger signs was her husband’s educational status. Those who had a husband with a college education or above were more likely to seek medical treatment for neonatal danger signs than those who had a husband with no formal education. The current study’s findings supported by a study conducted in Wolkite Town [31]. The reason for this could be that husbands with a higher level of education (college and above) have a better chance of accessing knowledge and comprehending the benefits of seeking medical care because husbands are the head of the house, the decision maker, and the primary source of income in most families. The educational status of the husband has influenced the mother’s health care seeking practice for neonatal danger signs.

Residency is another element that influences maternal health care seeking for newborn danger signs. Participants who lived in an urban area were more likely to seek medical care for newborn danger signs than those who resided in a rural area. A study conducted in Ethiopia’s Derra District, North Shoa Zone, Oromia Regional State, found that urban inhabitants are more likely than rural ones to seek medical treatment for neonatal danger signs [20].

Participants with media access were more likely to seek medical attention for neonatal danger signs, when compared to individuals who did not have access to the media, those who did have a higher likelihood of seeking medical attention for newborn danger signals. The possible reason might be those who have mass media access information that helps the mother to medical care for their sick neonate.

ANC follow-up is another characteristic that is highly associated with mothers’ health-care seeking practice for infant danger signs. ANC follow-up mothers were more likely to seek medical assistance for newborn danger signs than mothers who had no history of ANC follow-up. A study conducted in Fiche town, Oromia region, Ethiopia, supported with the findings of the current study [35]. PNC follow-up is another factor that is closely associated to mothers’ health-care seeking behavior for newborn danger signs. PNC follow-up mothers were more likely to seek medical care for neonatal danger signals than moms who had no history of PNC follow-up. Several investigations, including Fiche town in Ethiopia’s Oromia region, supported with the current study’s findings [35], Wolkite town in the Gurage Zone in southern Ethiopia [30] and Ambo town in central Ethiopia [25]. The likely reason is that at PNC follow-ups, a mother may receive newborn care counseling before discharge, which may enhance the mother’s health-seeking behavior for neonatal risk indicators.

The high sample size, well-trained research assistants who interviewed the participants, and the community-based study were all strengths of this study. Because the study’s cross-sectional design makes determining a temporal relationship between the dependent and independent variables difficult, a prospective follow-up study can provide more information than a cross-sectional study.

Conclusion

The percentage of mothers who sought health care for neonatal danger signs was relatively low. The factors that substantially affected mothers’ health care seeking practice for neonates were husband educational status, communication media, residence, ANC follow up, and PNC follows up. The current study’s findings point to the necessity for intervention focused on increasing mother health-care seeking behavior for common neonatal danger signs. The findings additionally implicate the Wolaita Zone and Sodo town health officials, the health development army, and one to five local community groups as major players. This could be accomplished through a variety of community-based platforms, such as gatherings, home visits, and existing community service.

Supporting information

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S1 Dataset. Underlying data set.

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Acknowledgments

We would like to express our heartfelt thanks for Wolaita Sodo University, all individual for their contribution and cooperation.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the paper and its Supporting information files.

Funding Statement

The authors received no specific funding for this work.

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Reviewer #1: TITLE: edit to read maternal health seeking behavior.....

INTRODUCTION: focus your literature on WHO danger signs. which danger signs were studied and why? specify and justify.Wat guidelines are used in Ethiopia for neonatal care? how does a mother learn about these signs, if they don't attend anc/pnc? are there community health workers in Ethiopia?

METHODS: is it a retrospective study? how do you deal with recall bias? indicate ethical approval number.

RESULTS: ensure all percentages add to 100%, seen many errors.summarize the tables- combine column 2 and 3 eg. 169(41.2%). quantify herbal use meds. how is husband s education important in this study?

DISSCUSSION: discuss the results and don't repeat results here. requires to be re written focusing on neonate, danger signs and mother. which danger sign was highly missed and why? this will help to implement better guidelines and health seeking behaviour.

Reviewer #2: Review for:

Mothers’ Health Care Seeking Practice for Neonatal Danger Sign in Southern Ethiopia: Community Based Cross–Sectional Study

General comment:

This is an important topic that the study tries to investigate, and a community based study that potentially includes community members that might could easily be excluded from healthcare by their social or economic status. However, there could still be some improvements to the study. An assessment of the knowledge, and the attitudes in addition to the practice would have added a significant lot of value to validate the results. And to assess the practice, the mothers actually needed to have a knowledge of the danger of these danger signs. The factors associated with health care seeking practice identified in the study such as husband’s education status, access to media, urban residence, ANC follow ups etc, clearly point towards access ‘Knowledge’.

The writing could also be improved with the help of a native English editor.

Specific comments:

Abstract:

Online 34, the authors need to indicate what statistical tests were carried out before the sentence “A p-value of less than or equal to 0.05 in a multivariable……..”

Introduction:

On pg 10, line 91, the sentence that starts with “Solitary limited studies remained conducted in Ethiopia with respect to mothers’ practice towards neonatal danger signs” should be referenced. The findings in this solitary study should be mentioned and other studies in the region could be reviewed as well. The gaps in those other studies should then be outlined that this particular study promises to close. The real scientific addition from the study should then be articulated after this sentence: “ So this research is intended to assess the ……” lines 92-94

Methods sections

If the authors insist on only assessing the practice of health seeking for danger signs, then the study population should only include those mothers who recognized danger signs in their babies, and the sample size calculated should only be for these population. There is no need to include the mothers whose babies had no danger signs in the initial interviews and in the analysis.

The sampling procedure on Pg 11, lines 116-19 is not clear, how the coding was done and every 6th woman is selected- these need to be explained in more detail.

Results

As already stated above, the effective sample size in this study so far is 231 NOT 410. If it is logistically difficult to get more participants into the study, perhaps the authors should acknowledge this as a limitation in the discussion sections.

Is it possible that care seeking practice could also vary by the particular danger sign, it would be nice to see if there any particular signs for which mothers would most likely seek for care compared to others?

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Please include study limitations in the discussions as they could be several, add the strengths of the study as well.

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


11 Aug 2022

Response letter

Dear editors and reviewers:

Thank you for considering my manuscript for publication in your reputable journal. I have noted that your comments are valuable and make my research article well improved. I have made appropriate changes in the main document. Here in below are the point by point responses for your concern.

Academic Editor Comments to the Author

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Author’s response: the manuscript revised and written with PLOS ONE's style

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a) Did participants provide their written or verbal informed consent to participate in this study?

b) If consent was verbal, please explain i) why written consent was not obtained, ii) how you documented participant consent, and iii) whether the ethics committees/IRB approved this consent procedure.

Author’s response: participants get verbal informed consent to participate in this study. I have no special reason to give verbal informed consent to participants. It is well explained on ethical approval and consent to participate section. During data collection respondents were requested their willingness to participate; those who were willing to participate were included in this study, but those who were not willing to participate were excluded from the study. Ethical approval was obtained from Wolaita Sodo University College of health science and medicine Ethical review board

3. You indicated that you had ethical approval for your study. In your Methods section, please ensure you have also stated whether you obtained consent from parents or guardians of the minors included in the study or whether the research ethics committee or IRB specifically waived the need for their consent.

Author’s response: Oral informed consent was obtained from the parents of the minors

4. Please include additional information regarding the survey or questionnaire used in the study and ensure that you have provided sufficient details that others could replicate the analyses. For instance, if you developed a questionnaire as part of this study and it is not under a copyright more restrictive than CC-BY, please include a copy, in both the original language and English, as Supporting Information.

Author’s response: I will include a copy of questionnaire as Supporting Information.

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“This study did not obtain any particular funding from govern.ent, commercial, or non-profit funding agencies.”

At this time, please address the following queries:

a) Please clarify the sources of funding (financial or material support) for your study. List the grants or organizations that supported your study, including funding received from your institution.

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Author’s response: This study did not obtain any particular funding from government, commercial, or non-profit funding agencies

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Author’s response: I will complete your Competing Interests on the online submission

Reviewer Comments to the Author

1. edit title to read maternal health seeking behavior

Author’s response: the title edited as health seeking behavior

2. focus your literature on WHO danger signs. Which danger signs were studied and why? specify and justify.Wat guidelines are used in Ethiopia for neonatal care? how does a mother learn about these signs, if they don't attend anc/pnc? are there community health workers in Ethiopia?

Author’s response: Convulsions, fever, lethargy, and poor breast milk feeding, as well as chest retractions, jaundice, and vomiting are neonatal danger signs this study focus. Most of the time children death because of the above listed neonatal danger signs. INTEGRATED MANAGEMENT OF NEWBORN AND CHILDHOOD ILLNESS and guidelines are used in Ethiopia for neonatal care. Health extension workers play a great role in Ethiopia to teach mothers about the neonatal danger signs and mothers who have ANC/PNC follow up get information from health care providers.

3. METHODS: is it a retrospective study? how do you deal with recall bias? indicate ethical approval number.

Author’s response: data was collected from mothers who give birth in the last 12 months preceding the survey so I have not face with recall bias. Mothers mostly didn’t forget what happened on their children. ethical approval reference number is CHSM/ERC/08

4. RESULTS: ensure all percentages add to 100%, seen many errors.summarize the tables- combine column 2 and 3 eg. 169(41.2%). quantify herbal use meds. how is husband s education important in this study?

Author’s response: all percentages were added to 100%. In Ethiopia husbands have a great influence on all aspects of their wife.

5. Discuss the results and don't repeat results here. requires to be re written focusing on neonate, danger signs and mother. which danger sign was highly missed and why? this will help to implement better guidelines and health seeking behavior.

Author’s response: the discussion part have revised

6. An assessment of the knowledge, and the attitudes in addition to the practice would have added a significant lot of value to validate the results. And to assess the practice, the mothers actually needed to have a knowledge of the danger of these danger signs. The factors associated with health care seeking practice identified in the study such as husband’s education status, access to media, urban residence, ANC follow ups etc, clearly point towards access ‘Knowledge’.

The writing could also be improved with the help of a native English editor.

Author’s response: prior to assess the practice or behavior the knowledge and the practice part have assessed separately. The manuscript had revised with native English editor.

7. Online 34, the authors need to indicate what statistical tests were carried out before the sentence “A p-value of less than or equal to 0.05 in a multivariable……..”

Author’s response: on abstract, before writing about p-value the statistical test indicated.

8. On pg 10, line 91, the sentence that starts with “Solitary limited studies remained conducted in Ethiopia with respect to mothers’ practice towards neonatal danger signs” should be referenced. The findings in this solitary study should be mentioned and other studies in the region could be reviewed as well. The gaps in those other studies should then be outlined that this particular study promises to close. The real scientific addition from the study should then be articulated after this sentence: “ So this research is intended to assess the ……” lines 92-94

Author’s response: the term used ‘Solitary’ is not to stat only but to explain as little or no enough study have conducted in Ethiopia. Please understand what I want to say.

9. If the authors insist on only assessing the practice of health seeking for danger signs, then the study population should only include those mothers who recognized danger signs in their babies, and the sample size calculated should only be for these population. There is no need to include the mothers whose babies had no danger signs in the initial interviews and in the analysis.

The sampling procedure on Pg 11, lines 116-19 is not clear, how the coding was done and every 6th woman is selected- these need to be explained in more detail. As already stated above, the effective sample size in this study so far is 231 NOT 410. If it is logistically difficult to get more participants into the study, perhaps the authors should acknowledge this as a limitation in the discussion sections.

Author’s response: even if the authors intention is to see health care practice of mother for neonatal danger sign, from 410 we get 231(56.3%) of mothers had encountered at least one of the WHO-recognized neonatal danger signs. So we observe the prevalence of neonatal danger sign which is 56.3% prior talking about practice of mothers who face neonatal danger sign.

Response letter

Dear editors and reviewers:

Thank you for considering my manuscript for publication in your reputable journal. I have noted that your comments are valuable and make my research article well improved. I have made appropriate changes in the main document. Here in below are the point by point responses for your concern.

Academic Editor Comments to the Author

1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming.

Author’s response: the manuscript revised and written with PLOS ONE's style

2. Please amend your current ethics statement to address the following concerns:

a) Did participants provide their written or verbal informed consent to participate in this study?

b) If consent was verbal, please explain i) why written consent was not obtained, ii) how you documented participant consent, and iii) whether the ethics committees/IRB approved this consent procedure.

Author’s response: participants get verbal informed consent to participate in this study. I have no special reason to give verbal informed consent to participants. It is well explained on ethical approval and consent to participate section. During data collection respondents were requested their willingness to participate; those who were willing to participate were included in this study, but those who were not willing to participate were excluded from the study. Ethical approval was obtained from Wolaita Sodo University College of health science and medicine Ethical review board

3. You indicated that you had ethical approval for your study. In your Methods section, please ensure you have also stated whether you obtained consent from parents or guardians of the minors included in the study or whether the research ethics committee or IRB specifically waived the need for their consent.

Author’s response: Oral informed consent was obtained from the parents of the minors

4. Please include additional information regarding the survey or questionnaire used in the study and ensure that you have provided sufficient details that others could replicate the analyses. For instance, if you developed a questionnaire as part of this study and it is not under a copyright more restrictive than CC-BY, please include a copy, in both the original language and English, as Supporting Information.

Author’s response: I will include a copy of questionnaire as Supporting Information.

5. . Thank you for stating the following financial disclosure:

“This study did not obtain any particular funding from govern.ent, commercial, or non-profit funding agencies.”

At this time, please address the following queries:

a) Please clarify the sources of funding (financial or material support) for your study. List the grants or organizations that supported your study, including funding received from your institution.

b) State what role the funders took in the study. If the funders had no role in your study, please state: “The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.”

c) If any authors received a salary from any of your funders, please state which authors and which funders.

d) If you did not receive any funding for this study, please state: “The authors received no specific funding for this work.

Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf.

Author’s response: This study did not obtain any particular funding from government, commercial, or non-profit funding agencies

6. Thank you for stating the following in your Competing Interests section:

“There is no competing interest”

Please complete your Competing Interests on the online submission form to state any Competing Interests. If you have no competing interests, please state ""The authors have declared that no competing interests exist."", as detailed online in our guide for authors at http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submit-now

This information should be included in your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf.

Author’s response: I will complete your Competing Interests on the online submission

Reviewer Comments to the Author

1. edit title to read maternal health seeking behavior

Author’s response: the title edited as health seeking behavior

2. focus your literature on WHO danger signs. Which danger signs were studied and why? specify and justify.Wat guidelines are used in Ethiopia for neonatal care? how does a mother learn about these signs, if they don't attend anc/pnc? are there community health workers in Ethiopia?

Author’s response: Convulsions, fever, lethargy, and poor breast milk feeding, as well as chest retractions, jaundice, and vomiting are neonatal danger signs this study focus. Most of the time children death because of the above listed neonatal danger signs. INTEGRATED MANAGEMENT OF NEWBORN AND CHILDHOOD ILLNESS and guidelines are used in Ethiopia for neonatal care. Health extension workers play a great role in Ethiopia to teach mothers about the neonatal danger signs and mothers who have ANC/PNC follow up get information from health care providers.

3. METHODS: is it a retrospective study? how do you deal with recall bias? indicate ethical approval number.

Author’s response: data was collected from mothers who give birth in the last 12 months preceding the survey so I have not face with recall bias. Mothers mostly didn’t forget what happened on their children. ethical approval reference number is CHSM/ERC/08

4. RESULTS: ensure all percentages add to 100%, seen many errors.summarize the tables- combine column 2 and 3 eg. 169(41.2%). quantify herbal use meds. how is husband s education important in this study?

Author’s response: all percentages were added to 100%. In Ethiopia husbands have a great influence on all aspects of their wife.

5. Discuss the results and don't repeat results here. requires to be re written focusing on neonate, danger signs and mother. which danger sign was highly missed and why? this will help to implement better guidelines and health seeking behavior.

Author’s response: the discussion part have revised

6. An assessment of the knowledge, and the attitudes in addition to the practice would have added a significant lot of value to validate the results. And to assess the practice, the mothers actually needed to have a knowledge of the danger of these danger signs. The factors associated with health care seeking practice identified in the study such as husband’s education status, access to media, urban residence, ANC follow ups etc, clearly point towards access ‘Knowledge’.

The writing could also be improved with the help of a native English editor.

Author’s response: prior to assess the practice or behavior the knowledge and the practice part have assessed separately. The manuscript had revised with native English editor.

7. Online 34, the authors need to indicate what statistical tests were carried out before the sentence “A p-value of less than or equal to 0.05 in a multivariable……..”

Author’s response: on abstract, before writing about p-value the statistical test indicated.

8. On pg 10, line 91, the sentence that starts with “Solitary limited studies remained conducted in Ethiopia with respect to mothers’ practice towards neonatal danger signs” should be referenced. The findings in this solitary study should be mentioned and other studies in the region could be reviewed as well. The gaps in those other studies should then be outlined that this particular study promises to close. The real scientific addition from the study should then be articulated after this sentence: “ So this research is intended to assess the ……” lines 92-94

Author’s response: the term used ‘Solitary’ is not to stat only but to explain as little or no enough study have conducted in Ethiopia. Please understand what I want to say.

9. If the authors insist on only assessing the practice of health seeking for danger signs, then the study population should only include those mothers who recognized danger signs in their babies, and the sample size calculated should only be for these population. There is no need to include the mothers whose babies had no danger signs in the initial interviews and in the analysis.

The sampling procedure on Pg 11, lines 116-19 is not clear, how the coding was done and every 6th woman is selected- these need to be explained in more detail. As already stated above, the effective sample size in this study so far is 231 NOT 410. If it is logistically difficult to get more participants into the study, perhaps the authors should acknowledge this as a limitation in the discussion sections.

Author’s response: even if the authors intention is to see health care practice of mother for neonatal danger sign, from 410 we get 231(56.3%) of mothers had encountered at least one of the WHO-recognized neonatal danger signs. So we observe the prevalence of neonatal danger sign which is 56.3% prior talking about practice of mothers who face neonatal danger sign.

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Decision Letter 1

Sungwoo Lim

19 Sep 2022

PONE-D-21-24134R1Mothers’ Health Care Seeking Behavior for Neonatal Danger Sign in Southern Ethiopia: Community Based Cross–Sectional StudyPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #2: (No Response)

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Reviewer #2: No

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: No

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: this is an important study , the corrections ahve been done adequately and the manuscript can be accepted now.

Reviewer #2: Comments:

1. While the subject matter in this study is important, the grammar still needs a lot of improvement at least to show some of the missing references and an understanding of definitions. For example in introduction: The first sentence line 54 requires an addition of a reference. The sentence is also technically confusing. Which is the newborn period? As far as I know, this period is up to one month while the infants are up to one year.

2. Many comments are not yet adequately addressed:

a. The authors acknowledge on line 77 pg13 that the ‘knowledge’ of danger signs influence the ‘practice’ of health seeking and their response is simply that this has been assessed separately. I suggest the authors include this in their literature review under introduction and provide the knowledge levels that currently exist.

b. The response “the term used ‘Solitary’ is not to stat only but to explain as little or no enough study have conducted in Ethiopia. Please understand what I want to say” is still not adequate in my view. I see the word ‘solitary’ has been changed to ‘limited’ but the issue raised in the comment was actually to discuss the findings of these limited studies and identify the gaps that this study would like to address. This is usually the origin of new studies covering the same subject.

c. In methods section: The issue of sampling and sample size remains largely unaddressed. Yes, the prevalence of danger signs is 56.3% but this is not what the study is set up for. It is the those who developed these danger signs we are interested in- how many sought care and what influenced their behavior?

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Author response to Decision Letter 1


6 Oct 2022

Response letter

Dear editors and reviewers:

Thank you for considering my manuscript for publication in your reputable journal. I have noted that your comments are valuable and make my research article well improved. I have made appropriate changes in the main document. Here in below are the point by point responses for your concern.

Reviewer Comments to the Author

1. The first sentence line 54 requires an addition of a reference. The sentence is also technically confusing. Which is the newborn period? As far as I know, this period is up to one month while the infants are up to one year.

Author’s response: The sentence and the reference have corrected. As WHO define, ‘A newborn infant, or neonate, is a child under 28 days of age’. The reviewers saying as it is written in revised version.

2. The authors acknowledge on line 77 pg13 that the ‘knowledge’ of danger signs influence the ‘practice’ of health seeking and their response is simply that this has been assessed separately. I suggest the authors include this in their literature review under introduction and provide the knowledge levels that currently exist

Author’s response: The aim of this research is to assess health care seeking behavior of mothers’ in related to neonatal danger signs. Knowledge level is not the aim of this study and it is possible to assess separately. On line 77 it says “Knowledge of the illness's cause and treatment” influence health-care seeking behavior

3. The response “the term used ‘Solitary’ is not to stat only but to explain as little or no enough study have conducted in Ethiopia. Please understand what I want to say” is still not adequate in my view. I see the word ‘solitary’ has been changed to ‘limited’ but the issue raised in the comment was actually to discuss the findings of these limited studies and identify the gaps that this study would like to address. This is usually the origin of new studies covering the same subject.

Author’s response: dear reviewer I understand what you want to say. Some research has done in Ethiopia but it is not enough regarding this very critical area because most women loss their children due to neonatal danger sign.

4. In methods section: The issue of sampling and sample size remains largely unaddressed. Yes, the prevalence of danger signs is 56.3% but this is not what the study is set up for. It is the those who developed these danger signs we are interested in- how many sought care and what influenced their behavior?

Author’s response: numbers of mothers seeking care from health institution and factors influenced their behavior have stated in the manuscript

Attachment

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Decision Letter 2

Sungwoo Lim

23 Nov 2022

PONE-D-21-24134R2Mothers’ Health Care Seeking Behavior for Neonatal Danger Sign in Southern Ethiopia: Community Based Cross–Sectional Study

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1. While the subject matter in this study is important, the grammar still needs a lot of improvement at least to show some of the missing references and an understanding of definitions. For example in introduction: The first sentence line 54 requires an addition of a reference. The sentence is also technically confusing. Which is the newborn period? As far as I know, this period is up to one month while the infants are up to one year.

2. Many comments are not yet adequately addressed:

a. The authors acknowledge on line 77 pg13 that the ‘knowledge’ of danger signs influence the ‘practice’ of health seeking and their response is simply that this has been assessed separately. I suggest the authors include this in their literature review under introduction and provide the knowledge levels that currently exist.

b. The response “the term used ‘Solitary’ is not to stat only but to explain as little or no enough study have conducted in Ethiopia. Please understand what I want to say” is still not adequate in my view. I see the word ‘solitary’ has been changed to ‘limited’ but the issue raised in the comment was actually to discuss the findings of these limited studies and identify the gaps that this study would like to address. This is usually the origin of new studies covering the same subject.

c. In methods section: The issue of sampling and sample size remains largely unaddressed. Yes, the prevalence of danger signs is 56.3% but this is not what the study is set up for. It is the those who developed these danger signs we are interested in- how many sought care and what influenced their behavior?

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PLoS One. 2023 Jul 19;18(7):e0280993. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0280993.r006

Author response to Decision Letter 2


6 Jan 2023

Response letter

Dear editors and reviewers:

Thank you for considering my manuscript for publication in your reputable journal. I have noted that your comments are valuable and make my research article well improved. I have made appropriate changes in the main document. Here in below are the point by point responses for your concern.

Reviewer Comments to the Author

1. The first sentence line 54 requires an addition of a reference. The sentence is also technically confusing. Which is the newborn period? As far as I know, this period is up to one month while the infants are up to one year.

Author’s response: The sentence and the reference have corrected. As WHO define, ‘A newborn infant, or neonate, is a child under 28 days of age’. The reviewers saying as it is written in revised version.

2. The authors acknowledge on line 77 pg13 that the ‘knowledge’ of danger signs influence the ‘practice’ of health seeking and their response is simply that this has been assessed separately. I suggest the authors include this in their literature review under introduction and provide the knowledge levels that currently exist

Author’s response: the current knowledge level have been incorporated under introduction from a systematic review conducted in Ethiopia

3. The response “the term used ‘Solitary’ is not to stat only but to explain as little or no enough study have conducted in Ethiopia. Please understand what I want to say” is still not adequate in my view. I see the word ‘solitary’ has been changed to ‘limited’ but the issue raised in the comment was actually to discuss the findings of these limited studies and identify the gaps that this study would like to address. This is usually the origin of new studies covering the same subject.

Author’s response: dear reviewer I understand what you want to say. Some research has done in Ethiopia but it is not enough regarding this very critical area because most women loss their children due to neonatal danger sign.

4. In methods section: The issue of sampling and sample size remains largely unaddressed. Yes, the prevalence of danger signs is 56.3% but this is not what the study is set up for. It is the those who developed these danger signs we are interested in- how many sought care and what influenced their behavior?

Author’s response: numbers of mothers seeking care from health institution and factors influenced their behavior have stated in the manuscript

Attachment

Submitted filename: Response lette.docx

Decision Letter 3

Sungwoo Lim

13 Jan 2023

Mothers’ Health Care Seeking Behavior for Neonatal Danger Sign in Southern Ethiopia: Community Based Cross–Sectional Study

PONE-D-21-24134R3

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Sungwoo Lim

30 Mar 2023

PONE-D-21-24134R3

Mothers’ Health Care Seeking Behavior for Neonatal Danger Sign in Southern Ethiopia: Community Based Cross–Sectional Study

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