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. 2023 Jul 28;18(7):e0284565. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0284565

Estimating age of mule deer in the field: Can we move beyond broad age categories?

Morgan S Hinton 1,*,#, Brock R McMillan 1,#, Kent R Hersey 2,#, Randy T Larsen 1,#
Editor: Jorge Ramón López-Olvera3
PMCID: PMC10381091  PMID: 37506085

Abstract

Age of individuals is an intrinsic demographic parameter used in the modeling and management of wildlife. Although analysis of cementum annuli from teeth is currently the most accurate method used to age ungulates, the age of live ungulates in the field can be estimated by examining tooth wear and tooth replacement patterns. However, there may be limitations to aging based on tooth wear as the rate of tooth wear likely varies among individuals due to factors such as age, diet, environment, and sex. Our objective was to determine the reliability of estimating age for mule deer based on tooth wear and tooth replacement patterns. We compared ages estimated by tooth wear (collected at time of capture for a statewide monitoring effort) to ages determined from cementum analysis (from teeth collected after mortalities of radio-tracked animals from the monitoring effort). Accuracy was high; ages estimated from tooth wear were within one year of cementum ages >75% of the time when aged by experienced observers. Bias in accuracy for estimates of age was low but slightly biased toward underestimation (i.e., 0.6 years on average)—especially as cementum age increased. Our results indicate that aging mule deer using patterns in tooth wear can be reliable if observers estimating age have experience using this method.

Introduction

Accurate estimates of demographic rates are essential for modeling populations and managing wildlife [1]. The collection and analysis of reliable data can provide detailed information on parameters of a population such as recruitment, reproduction, sex ratios, and survival [24]. These parameters can inform models of population change by indicating increases, decreases, or constant rates associated with each parameter, thereby improving understanding of the drivers of population dynamics [5]. Additionally, wildlife managers rely on accurate data and models to inform management decisions such as determining the number of annual hunting permits [6, 7].

Demographic rates can vary notably across ages and by sex for individuals in a population [8]. Whereas sex can typically be easily determined in the field for most large mammal species, age is often more difficult to estimate. Age structure of populations, however, can have strong influences on demographic parameters that may lead to fluctuations in population size [9, 10]. Further, age influences resistance to disease, fertility, litter size, growth rate of neonates, body size, resource selection, and patterns of movement [9, 1114]. Thus understanding the age structure of a population is helpful for conservation and management. Estimation of age structure, however, can only be determined by collecting accurate data on age from a sufficient sample of individuals within the population.

Estimating age of large mammals in the field is most commonly done by evaluating dental characteristics [1519]. For example, the first premolar in the lower or upper jaw is frequently extracted from live carnivores to more precisely determine age using cementum analysis [20]. Tooth extraction for other live large mammals including ungulates is considerably more invasive than the procedure for carnivores and is generally avoided due to the potential for reduced food intake or risk of damaging adjacent teeth during the extraction process [21]. In place of tooth extraction, patterns of tooth replacement and wear in ungulates can be used to estimate age of ungulates between 0.5 and 2.5 years of age, but the use of replacement patterns can be unreliable beyond 2.5 years of age due to the permanent formation of dental structure [19, 22, 23]. After formation of permanent teeth, degree of wear on molars and incisors can be used to estimate ages of individuals [24, 25].

Due to variation in patterns of tooth wear and difficulty in accurate estimation of age for cervids, it is common practice to place individuals into age categories such as fawn, yearling, and adult or to estimate age to 2.5 years using patterns of replacement, but then place older individuals into a category of ≥3.5 years [26, 27]. While classifying individuals into broad age categories may limit risk of inaccurately aging individuals, it does not provide detailed information regarding the age structure of a population or how age may influence demographic rates. Specifically, this practice lacks the ability to parse out older animals near the end of expected lifespans where demographic rates are generally believed to diminish with senescence [28]. Improvement over these broad categories when estimating age for live animals would enhance our understanding of cervid ecology and better inform their conservation and management. However, estimation of actual age for many ungulates is generally considered inaccurate and therefore, unreliable.

Because accurate estimation of age of cervids is fundamental to all aspects of their population ecology, our objective was to determine if estimation of actual age from experienced biologists using patterns of tooth wear could provide reliable data that would be more informative than using broad categories of age as currently recommended. Specifically, we determined the accuracy of age estimation using patterns of tooth replacement and tooth wear for mule deer (Odocoileus hemionus), a species of great social and biological interest in western North America. We predicted that the use of tooth replacement and wear to estimate age could be reliable if observers had adequate training and experience with this technique. We also predicted that as age of deer increased, accuracy of age estimation would decrease due to greater variation between individuals in tooth wear for older animals. The results of this study will help determine if using patterns in tooth replacement and wear can be a reliable method to estimate the age of mule deer beyond broad age categories.

Study area

Our study was conducted across the state of Utah, comprised of mule deer captured from 21 management units within five administrative regions of the Utah Division of Wildlife Resources (Fig 1). Latitude ranged from 37°N to 42°N and longitude ranged from 109°W to 114°W. Elevation in Utah ranged from 762 meters above sea level in Southwestern Utah to 4114 meters above sea level at King’s Peak in the Uinta mountain range located in Northeastern Utah. Annual precipitation varied from ≤10 centimeters in the deserts to 150 centimeters in higher mountain areas and was a mix of rain and snow [29]. Further, sampling occurred in seven level III ecoregions including alpine, desert, irrigated valley, mountain forest, riparian, shrubland, and woodland habitat types [30]. Generalized vegetative communities within these ecoregions frequently inhabited by mule deer included the mountain brush zone, pinyon-juniper woodlands, sagebrush steppe, and subalpine zone [31]. Other ungulate species that occured with mule deer in Utah included bighorn sheep (Ovis canadensis), bison (Bison bison), moose (Alces alces), mountain goats (Oreamnos americanus), pronghorn (Antilocapra americana), Rocky Mountain elk (Cervus canadensis), feral horses (Equus caballus), and a variety of domestic livestock. Predators of mule deer in Utah included bobcats (Lnyx rufus), black bears (Ursus americanus), cougars (Puma concolor), and coyotes (Canis latrans).

Fig 1. Locations (marked by Δ) within Utah, USA where we captured mule deer (Odocoileus hemionus) from 2014–2020 and estimated age via tooth replacement and wear.

Fig 1

Mule deer habitat denoted by shading. Map base layer can be found at https://utah.maps.arcgis.com/home/item.html?id=543fa1f073714198a3dbf8a292bdf30c.

Methods

Capture and estimation of age

During late November through early March 2014–2020 in conjunction with the Utah Division of Wildlife Resources, we captured adult mule deer via helicopter net-gunning [3235]. Deer were transported in transport bags by helicopter after capture to a central landing zone where a ground crew comprised of biologists processed the animals. All capture and collaring protocols for mule deer were approved by the Brigham Young University Institutional Animal Care and Use Committee (IACUC) (protocol 150110) and consistent with the published guidelines for use of wild animals in research by the American Society of Mammalogists [36]. We fitted each individual with a GPS tracking collar programmed with a mortality sensor to alert us in the event of a study animal mortality (model type G2110E2H, G5-2DH, or W300; Advanced Telemetry Systems, Isanti, MN, USA). We also collected basic biometric data in addition to age including several body measurements, body condition score, rump fat depth, loin thickness, lactation score, body mass, heart rate, and respiration rate prior to release [3739]. Following collection of biological data and fitting with a collar, deer were released for remote monitoring via GPS collars.

Age of each individual was estimated by experienced biologists using patterns in tooth replacement and wear for both molars and incisors [24, 25, 40]. Age was estimated using the same criteria for both males and females. We considered biologists that had previously aged over 200 individual mule deer of both sexes across all capture units to be experienced observers. We chose 200 deer as a cutoff because observers had been exposed to many deer of both sexes and of all ages, especially older individuals by that point in time. Fawns were aged in the field by the capture crew using patterns of tooth replacement and presence of temporary milk teeth. We used tooth replacement patterns to identify deer 1.5 years old to older than 1.5 years. Adult mule deer follow the dental formula (incisor/canine/premolar/molar) of 0/3, 0/1, 3/3, 3/3, making younger animals easier to identify by lack of permanent tooth eruption. Fawns under one year of age typically have three to four fully erupted teeth along each side of the jaw including three premolars and occasionally a single molar, often referred to as “milk teeth” since they are present at birth and are eventually replaced by permanent teeth. Yearling deer are characterized by three cusps on the third premolar and only partial eruptions of the third molar. Two-year-old deer have noticeably sharp lingual crests on their third premolar and first molar, as well as the eruption of the fourth and final dental formula. For animals ≥ 3 years of age, we used tooth wear to estimate age of individuals. This method uses both wear found on incisors and lingual crests on molars as well as degree of staining on lingual crests and around the gum line to estimate age. Shorter crest heights and higher degree of staining indicate progression in age. See Table 1 for general dental characteristics used to estimate ages of mule deer. These characteristics are not absolutes, but rather general guidelines that have been supported by frequent feedback determined from cementum analysis.

Table 1. Dental characteristics associated with ages (in years) of free-ranging mule deer (Odocoileus hemionus) in western North America.

Age Incisor Wear Molar Wear
1.5 No wear on incisors Deciduous teeth often present or permanent teeth only partially erupted No wear on molars. P3 with 3 cusps and partial eruption of M3
2.5 Virtually no wear on incisors Thin lines of dentin on lingual crests of molars
3.5 Virtually no wear on incisors Virtually no wear on molars with thicker dentin lines than 2.5 year olds
4.5 Slight wear on the inside of the incisors Slight wear beginning on crests of M1
5.5 Moderate wear on the inside of the incisors, but limited to no “dishing” Moderate wear beginning on crests of M1 with slight wear beginning on M2
6.5 Incisors showing both wear and evidence of starting to dish Moderate wear on crests of M1and M2 with slight wear beginning on M3
7.5 Pronounced wear on the incisors with dishing present Moderate wear on crests of M2 and M3 Flattening of M1, but tooth is not “dished out”
8.5 Heavy wear on incisors with dishing and teeth approaching gum line M1 dished out. Heavy wear or flattening on M2 and M3, but not “dished”
9.5 Dishing and incisors approaching gum line M1 dished out. M2 with very heavy wear or dished out. M3 heavy wear
10.5+ Incisors dished and often completely worn down towards gum line All molars dished out with older animals having molars approaching gum line

Incisor collection and cementum analysis

Upon receiving a mortality notification from GPS-collared mule deer, biologists examined carcasses to determine cause-specific mortality and extracted one, or both, of the I1 incisors from the lower jaw [41, 42]. All incisors were then placed in envelopes labeled with the six-digit collar code of the deer, mortality date, sex, and location. Incisors were sent to the Wildlife Ecology Research Lab at Brigham Young University (www.wildlifeecologylab.byu.edu) where we processed the teeth. Upon receipt, we soaked teeth from one to two weeks depending on size in a decalcifying solution composed of formic acid, formaldehyde, and distilled water. Once softened, we sliced teeth in horizontal cross-sections near the root using a Leica CM1850 cryostat machine (model CM 1850-3-1). We placed tooth cross-sections on glass slides and stained them for 90 seconds using Crystal Violet biological stain solution. Following staining, we examined cross sections under a microscope and counted annuli to determine age. During the cementum analysis, we assigned each age a confidence rating of A, B, or C. We used “A” for estimate of age that were clear given distinct annuli patterns. We used a “B” rating for estimates of age that were believed to be accurate within a range of ± 1 year. We used a “C” rating for ages that were less clear and believed to be accurate within ± 2 or more years. We chose to exclude any ages assigned a “C” rating from our dataset due to uncertainty. Estimation of age from cementum analysis was “blind” to estimates of age from tooth replacement and wear (essentially a ‘double-blind’ design).

We used analysis of cementum annuli to provide a benchmark for age comparison with estimates collected on live animals in the field. We selected this method because cementum analysis is the most accurate method of age determination for wild ungulates [43, 44]. Cementum is continuously deposited on permanent teeth throughout an animal’s lifetime. The rate of cementum deposition coincides with environmental conditions, consistently resulting in a large, light-colored deposition throughout spring, summer, and fall, and a thin dark band (called an annuli) in the winter due to nutritional stress in northern latitudes [44]. In these latitudes, each annular ring represents one year of life, not including the first year of life when animals have temporary adolescent teeth. The annuli may be used to estimate age by cutting, staining, and viewing cross sections of each tooth under a microscope. Literature suggests cutting teeth closest to the posterior end of the root without taking the root tip to increase accuracy in the aging process [45].

Data analysis

We compiled a record of deer that had an age assigned to them via cementum analysis following mortality of each individual deer. We compared deer ages determined from cementum analysis with the ages estimated from tooth replacement and wear after correcting for the number of intervening years between capture (wear age) and mortality (cementum age). We used a generalized linear mixed-effects model with a binomial distribution for error structure within the “lme4” package in program R to assess accuracy and evaluate the difference between age determined from cementum with age estimated in the field from tooth replacement and wear [4648]. When wear age was estimated within plus or minus 1-year of cementum analysis age, we set the response variable to 1 (accurate); when they differed by more than a year, we set the response variable to 0 (inaccurate). We chose within 1-year for accuracy because most estimates of wear on live animals occurred in either December or March, but mortalities and the subsequent age derived from cementum analysis occurred throughout the year.

We identified explanatory variables as cementum age (in years), a binary variable for observer experience (experienced set as 1; inexperienced set as 0), sex of the deer, and period of capture (Fall for animals captured in November and December, Spring for animals captured in February or March). We set capture unit, year, and unique ID (to account for repeated measures) as random effects (intercept only) and included each of them in all models. Unit of capture was included as a random effect because previously analyses indicated it had no significant influence on accuracy of age estimates. Because our analysis was observational in nature as opposed to experimental, we used model selection and an information-theoretical approach [49, 50]. We first formulated a set of 19 a priori models with combinations of explanatory variables representing hypotheses about which factors influence accuracy between estimates of age from cementum analysis and assessment based on tooth wear. Before formulating models, we assessed the potential for multicollinearity for explanatory variables using Pearson’s correlation coefficient for continuous variables and did not include any variables with an |r| > 0.60 in the same model. Following model selection, we further evaluated the potential for multicollinearity using variation inflation factors (VIF) and a cutoff of 10 [46, 51]. We ranked a priori models using Akaike’s Information Criteria adjusted for small sample sizes and AICc weights [49, 50]. In the event of multiple competing models and model-selection uncertainty, we averaged models that carried >5% AICc weight, consistent with much of the work in natural resources (e.g. [5261]). We assessed our ranked list of models for any evidence of uninformative parameters and did not include any models with uninformative parameters in model averaging [62, 63].

Results

Our sample included 384 unique age estimates for 251 individual mule deer (due to recapture in subsequent years for some individuals). The sample was comprised of 6, 42, 64, 79, 107, 81, and 5 deer captured in the years 2014, 2015, 2016, 2017, 2018, 2019, and 2020, respectively. Between 1 and 57 deer were sampled from the 21 management units across Utah with an average of 18 deer sampled per unit. Age estimates based on tooth wear were assigned to 347 females (including recapture events) and 37 males (no recapture events). Our sample was biased toward females given the focus of ongoing efforts to monitor survival and reproduction of females with occasional males collared for collection of survival and migration information.

Models including age of deer and observer experience carried the most AICc weight and these explanatory variables occurred in all top-ranked models (Table 2). We found less support for sex in our modelling effort as it did not occur in the most-supported model (Table 2). Additionally, models with capture period had little to no support, as the highest-ranked model with this variable was fifth with only 7% of the AICc weight (Table 2). Variance inflation factors for supported models were low (1.025–1.032), indicating there was limited correlation between explanatory variables. We judged the interaction with observer and age, the interaction between observer and sex, and also capture period to be uninformative parameters (Table 2).

Table 2. Model selection table for 19 a priori models of age estimates from live animals in the field within one year of cementum age for mule deer (Odocoileus hemionus) captured from 2014–2020 in Utah, USA.

Model Structure dfa logLikb AICcc Deltad Weighte
Observer+Age 6 -150.14 312.5 0.00 0.388
Observer+Age+Sex 7 -149.74 313.8 1.28 0.204
Age 5 -152.67 315.5 2.98 0.087
*Observer+Age+Sex+Observer*Age 8 -149.71 315.8 3.30 0.074
*Observer+Age+Sex+CapturePeriod 8 -149.74 315.9 3.37 0.072
Age+Sex 6 -152.18 316.6 4.08 0.050
*Observer+Age+CapturePeriod+Observer*Age 8 -150.10 316.6 4.10 0.050
*Age+CapturePeriod 6 -152.67 317.5 5.04 0.031
*Observer+Age+Sex+CapturePeriod+Obs.*Age 9 -149.71 317.9 5.41 0.026
*Age+Sex+CapturePeriod 7 -152.18 318.7 6.16 0.018
Observer 5 -194.08 398.3 85.80 0.00
Intercept Only 4 -195.68 399.4 86.93 0.00
Observer+Sex 6 -193.76 399.7 87.23 0.00
*Observer+CapturePeriod 6 -194.00 400.2 87.71 0.00
Sex 5 -195.38 400.9 88.39 0.00
*Observer+Sex+Observer*Sex 7 -193.44 401.2 88.68 0.00
CapturePeriod 5 -195.63 401.4 88.90 0.00
*Observer+Sex+CapturePeriod 7 -193.70 401.7 89.19 0.00
*Sex+CapturePeriod 6 -195.34 402.9 90.39 0.00

aDegrees of freedom

bLog likelihood

cAkaike’s Information Criteria

dAIC relative to the best fitting model

eAkaike weight

*Models judged to be uninformative

Due to multiple competing models (models with > 5% weight), we averaged β coefficients from the top four models, excluding any models judged to include uninformative parameters (Table 2). Observer experience influenced accuracy of estimates with experienced observers maintaining higher accuracy than inexperienced observers (model-averaged β estimate -0.8216, 85% CI -1.4885- -0.1547) (Table 3). Cementum age of deer also influenced estimates of accuracy. Accuracy of estimates decreased as cementum age increased (model-averaged β estimate -0.4810, 85% CI -0.5749 –-0.3871) (Table 3). Odds ratios from averaged coefficients showed odds of wear ages matching cementum ages decreased by a factor of 0.4397 for inexperienced observers and 0.6181 for each increase in cementum age (Fig 2). Sex did influence accuracy and was a variable in our second-ranked model (Table 2), however, 85% confidence intervals around the beta estimate overlapped zero (Table 3), suggesting it was not as influential as other variables.

Table 3. Model averages for age estimates within one year of cementum age with an 85% confidence interval for mule deer (Odocoileus hemionus) captured from 2014–2020 in Utah, USA.

Estimatea Std. Errorb Adj. SEc z-valued LCIe UCIf
Intercept 4.0265 0.4669 0.4685 8.594 3.3529 4.700
Observer -0.7975 0.3746 0.3760 2.121 -1.3381 -0.2569
Age -0.4797 0.0641 0.0643 7.455 -0.5722 -0.3872
Sex 0.4044 0.5267 0.5286 0.7650 -0.3555 1.1644

aModel-averaged β estimate

bStandard error

cAdjusted R-squared

dNumber of standard deviations from mean

eLower confidence interval

fUpper confidence interval

Fig 2. Odds ratios with standard error bars derived from model-averaged β coefficients of accuracy for age estimates within one year of cementum age for mule deer (Odocoileus hemionus) captured from 2014–2020 in Utah, USA.

Fig 2

Mean accuracy of estimates within one year of cementum age was 75%. There was a negative relationship between age and accuracy resulting in a decrease in accuracy as deer age increased (Fig 3). The mean bias in accuracy of age estimates was -0.6 years (SE ± 0.086), indicating underestimation of ages of older deer. However, overall bias in estimates was low with mean age estimates falling within one year of cementum age for deer ≤ 8 years old and within two years of cementum age for deer ≤10 years old (Fig 4). Our model-averaged coefficients were influenced by models with an interaction between both cementum age and observer experience. These models suggested that experienced observers had greater accuracy in their age estimates than inexperienced observers did, especially as cementum age.

Fig 3. Accuracy of age estimates with SE bars from live animals in the field within one year of cementum age for mule deer (Odocoileus hemionus) captured from 2014–2020 in Utah, USA.

Fig 3

Shaded areas represent an 85% CI.

Fig 4. Bias in accuracy of age estimates with SE bars from live animals in the field (error bars = SE) for mule deer (Odocoileus hemionus) captured from 2014–2020 in Utah, USA.

Fig 4

Shaded areas represent an 85% CI.

Discussion

We observed high accuracy (0.75; SE ± 0.043) and low bias (-0.6 years; SE ± 0.086) using the tooth replacement and wear method to estimate age of mule deer in the field. Our overall estimate of accuracy was biased low indicating inaccuracies were most often due to underestimation, rather than overestimation, of ages. Estimates of age for deer < 4.5 years were largely accurate and unbiased, but accuracy declined linearly with age and old animals (≥ 9 years of age) were consistently underestimated in the field by about 2 years (Fig 4). Decreased accuracy in estimation of age for older animals is likely due to increased variation in tooth wear for older individuals and fewer available samples as a result of senescence [40]. Although accuracy decreased for older animals, consistent with previous findings, overall accuracy was still high and considered reliable [26, 64, 65].

We found that age estimates made by experienced observers using the tooth replacement and wear method had a higher degree of accuracy than estimates made by observers who were inexperienced. Accuracy of age estimates made by both groups was similar for deer < 4.5 years of age. However, accuracy of estimates for deer > 4.5 years of age by experienced observers remained significantly higher than estimates by inexperienced observers. The difference in accuracy between observers highlights the need for biologists to gain experience–particularly for deer > 4.5 years of age. Nonetheless, because harvest in Utah and many other locations is often composed primarily of male animals < 5.5, it can be challenging to sample an adequate number of older animals. Females tend to be longer-lived than males, but are often not a big percentage of the harvest for mule deer which limits biologists’ experience with estimation for older age classes of deer where tooth wear is more variable [66, 67]. Providing observers with adequate experience using the tooth replacement and wear method will ensure higher accuracy of age estimates.

Demography of wildlife populations is strongly influenced by age [6870]. To understand these demographic rates, however, we first need to understand age structure. Age estimates, when performed by experienced observers, can produce accurate models of age distribution within a population. Broad age categories where all animals over 3 years of age are simply labeled as > 3, however, are less informative—particularly for species like mule deer that regularly live into teenage years [43]. Such a broad categorization is less informative when assessing reproductive potential, habitat selection, disease rates, and especially survival within mule deer herds [7173]. Because our estimates of age were relatively accurate and only biased low by a couple of years at the oldest age, we recommend use of age estimates over broad categories.

Age estimates, even if biased in accuracy, produce information with greater accuracy than age categories regarding age distribution. Accurate models of age can then be used to make better-informed management decisions [40]. With estimates of age, we can accurately assess life-history traits of mule deer. Age estimates allow for analyses of age-specific survival of deer, movement behavior such as migration and dispersal, and resource selection. With age data, we can ask questions about how age influences reproductive traits including litter size, offspring survival, and frequency of pregnancy. We can also begin to determine whether mule deer experience reproductive senescence or not. We encourage both research institutions and management agencies use patterns in tooth replacement and wear to estimate ages of live mule deer in the field. Furthermore, because of the accuracy (0.75; SE ± 0.043) associated with this method, we suggest the use of age estimates can be confidently used in data analyses surrounding additional demographic rates.

Conclusions

The results of this study indicate that estimating actual age using patterns in tooth replacement and wear is a viable method. This method is preferable over incisor extraction (cementum analysis) for live deer being released back into the wild. Due to the impact of observer experience on accuracy of estimates, age estimations should be conducted by observers who have significant experience using the tooth replacement and wear method for both sexes and all age cohorts. If an observer is having difficulty choosing an estimate between two ages for an older animal (> 5 years old), it is suggested the observer select the older age due to the observed negative bias in accuracy and frequency of underestimation for older animals that we observed. Because the tooth replacement and wear method is considered reliable, estimates of age determined during current and future mule deer research efforts should be included as a covariate in future analyses. Including age in these analyses can reveal how and at what rates age influences other demographic rates within mule deer populations.

Supporting information

S1 Data

(XLSX)

Acknowledgments

We are grateful to the numerous employees of the Utah Division of Wildlife Resources, past graduate students and undergraduate student employees at Brigham Young University for their contributions to the field and laboratory work associated with this study.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the paper and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

Funding for this research was provided by the American Society of Mammalogists (https://www.mammalsociety.org/), Brigham Young University (https://www.byu.edu/), the Bureau of Land Management (https://www.blm.gov/), the Mule Deer Foundation (https://muledeer.org/), the Rocky Mountain Elk Foundation (https://www.rmef.org/), Safari Club International (https://safariclub.org/), Sportsmen for Fish and Wildlife (https://sfw.net/), the Utah Archery Association (https://www.utaharchery.org/), and the Utah Division of Wildlife Resources (https://wildlife.utah.gov/). Grant numbers 196313 and 206012 from Utah Division of Wildlife Resources were awarded to BRM and RTL. Additionally, the Utah Division of Wildlife Resources contributed to the data collection associated with this research. All other funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: This is a well-written manuscript with information that contributes to the literature of aging mule deer, which is arguably growing in importance, given mule deer populations range-wide. Just some minor questions and thought-provoking (hopefully) quibbles.

Lines 68-70; 142-144: The suggestion that aging deer (using the tooth eruption and wear technique [TEW]) at 2.5 years of age is just as accurate as aging deer at 1.5 years of age is misleading and, I would argue, false. At 2.5 years of age, mule deer and white-tailed deer have their permanent (adult) teeth and dental formula, with the only distinguishable features between deer 2.5 years and older deer being tooth wear patterns, which can sometimes be difficult to identify all necessary characteristics in the field on a live individual and can vary based on diet, size of deer, and other factors, as you know. Hamlin et al. (2000), Storm et al. (2014), and Adams & Blanchong (2020) all show error using TEW for aging deer 2.5 years and older.

Hamlin KL, Pac DF, Sime CA, DeSimone RM, Dusek GL. (2000) Evaluating the accuracy of ages obtained by two methods for Montana ungulates. Journal of Wildlife Management. 64,441–449.

Storm DJ, Samuel MD, Rolley RE, Beissel T, Richards BJ, Van Deelen TR. (2014) Estimating ages of white-tailed deer: age and sex patterns of error using tooth wear-and-replacement and consistency of cementum annuli. Wildlife Society Bulletin. 38,849–856.

Adams DM, Blanchong JA (2020) Precision of cementum annuli method for aging male white-tailed deer. PLoS ONE 15(5), e0233421.

Lines 242-244, Fig. 2: The odds ratios (ORs) graphed in Fig. 2 do not match those reported in Lines 242-244. From the beta-estimates, it appears the ORs reported in Lines 242-244 are correct.

Line 281: I’m uncertain that most folks would interpret 75% of TEW-CA age estimate pairings within 1 year of each other as “high accuracy”. That would imply that, using TEW aging in the field, managers would be assigning an incorrect age to greater than 25% of deer they’re aging 2.5 years and older. Depending on how different age-specific demographic parameters are from year-to-year, the potential for error could be quite large. While CA aging is not perfectly accurate either, as showed by those cited above as well as Asmus & Weckerly (2002) and Veiberg et al. (2020), CA aging is much more accurate than TEW, especially at older age classes. That’s why most recommend that if managers need ages accurate to the year for age-specific demographic parameters, that CA aging is the best bet.

Some other questions/thoughts: it would be nice to see a table of the raw TEW estimates vs the CA age estimates to see the "unmodeled" accuracy. Did you explore categories other than 3.5 and older (e.g., 2-4 years, 5-7 years, 8 years and older [not an actual suggestion, just an example, more thought would need to be given to appropriate age categories based on demographic parameters) and if those may be more useful to managers? Key to all of this is do demographic parameters for deer change at different ages? That is where age categories of importance could be identified. Maybe the answer to the question in your title is somewhere in between the 2.5 years and older category of old and the single-year category.

Reviewer #2: This manuscript evaluates the accuracy of tooth wear and replacement patterns for aging mule deer in Utah by comparing it to cementum analysis. Age information is often important for wildlife population management including estimating population demographic rates. I think the manuscript would be more useful if the authors revised it to increase specificity with respect to the background information and objectives, offer more specific detail about the data collected and how they were used in analysis, and provide a more careful discussion of the interpretation and implications of the findings that brings in the vast literature on this topic.

At the moment, the manuscript lacks important detail in numerous places that makes it difficult to evaluate the Results or the relatively strong conclusions/ recommendations provided in the Discussion and Conclusions sections. Further, in the Introduction there are generalizations made about aging using teeth that are not appropriate. These statements should be revised to more specifically speak to the taxa of interest in the study. The section is also under referenced. The Discussion is extremely under-referenced. Finally, the conclusions and recommendations are overly strong and applied too broadly relative to the data presented and without adequate evidence to support them from the literature (references). I provide specific line-by-line comments below.

Line 53-45 – Sex is not easy to determine in the wild for numerous wildlife species. So, being more specific about which taxa you are referring to would be useful.

Line 62-63 – Reference needed.

Line 66 - Clarify you mean from live animals.

Line 67-70 - This citation is for fallow deer. Is it appropriate to make such a broad generalization based on this one reference for one species?

Line 71-72- Reference needed.

Line 73-76 - You are talking about cervids here so be specific. Again, this sentence is making a broad generalization when I don't think you mean to.

Line 85-88 - Again, you are not doing this to generalize to all wildlife (or if that is your intent, I think you should not)...you have a particular taxon of focus and you should state that.

Line 91 – Clarify what you mean by “field aging” = using tooth eruption and wear patterns. Also, it should be noted that aging based on cementum annuli is not perfect. There is literature about this. So, you should be careful using it as a “true age”.

Line 133-134 – What is your basis for 200 deer as the cutoff for experienced vs inexperienced? Justify. How many people did you have in each category? What was the distribution of experience in each category? How many agers in total did you end up having in each category?

Line 134-135 - This is an awkward arrangement. Why talk about 1.5 to 2.5 year olds (without describing how) and then talk about the younger animals (fawns) and then go back to the older animals?

Line 187-188 - What does within 1 year mean in terms of what your data were? It's not clear what the age categories are for TWR vs cementum that you are using so I can't tell if within 1 year means the same age or something different. Perhaps you could provide a table with more of the actual data rather than moving straight to outputs of regression models so the reader can see for themselves exactly what you were working with.

Line 207-208 - Justify this. Model averaging is not universally agreed upon as an appropriate strategy. Also justify the choice of 5% with a reference.

Line 208-211- Why did you do this? And what was your criterion for uninformative parameters? I also don't understand what "models occurred with other competing models" means.

Line 222-223 - Your second model was within 2 AIC of your top model. The standard is generally that any model within 2 AIC of the top model is competitive. So, justify why sex is not important.

Table 1 – Is “1” the intercept only model? If so, make that clear.

Line 245-247 - Confusing as written. What age is most accurate for males and how do you know?

Table 2 - Why would you choose an 85% CI?

Fig 2. – I think this figure is mislabeled. Your experience category has error bars above and below an odds ratio of 1 (1 being no association). This does not make sense in terms of being significant. And, capture period is totally below 1 suggesting it is significant - which is not reflected in Table 2. Also, indicate in the legend what the error bars are.

Fig. 3-5 – What are the error bars and envelopes (shaded areas) on these figures?

Fig. 5 – How many deer had to be aged for someone to qualify as experienced? Methods says 200. Here 200 of each sex – so 400 total? This is unclear.

Line 280-281 - Clarify what your definition of reliable is.

Paragraph 1 (line 280-291) - I think you need to go into what this level of "reliability" pertains to. What management contexts would the level of accuracy you found be sufficient and in what contexts/questions would more accurate aging be needed? This is important and should be explored more deeply and use the literature.

Paragraph 2 (line 296-307) - This all seems really speculative and you've provided no assessment of accuracy based on experience for males so you really can't support your statements about sex based on what you’ve written here. Also, you need references to support the general statements you are making in lines 301-307.

Paragraph 3 (308-316) and 4 (line317-328) – Again, the statements in these paragraphs need references to support them.

Line 308 – What does this sentence mean?

Line 326-428 - Your "high" is subjective. Be specific about what you found.

Line 334-336 – I think this is a risky recommendation to make for all mule deer.

Reviewer #3: Hinton et al. presented a ms entitled “Estimating age of mule deer in the field: Can we move beyond broad age categories?” for publication in PLOS ONE. The paper deals with a relevant and interesting topic: age estimation (teeth eruption/wearing) versus age determination (analysis of cementum annuli from teeth) in ungulates. The ms reported the case of mule deer (Odocoileus hemionous; sample size: 384 unique age estimates for 251 individuals, 347 females and 37 males) aging across the State of Utah.

I enjoyed reading this ms and I think that this study is a valuable contribution to improve the knowledge/management of this species.

However, despite the interesting topic and the potential of management implications for the target species, I believe that a revision is required (please, see my comments below).

General comments:

1) A first flaw that I found concerns the absence of an accurate description of the age estimation method. The conclusions of this ms open up the possibility of using age estimation in future analyzes but do not describe how ages were estimated.

The Authors refer to two old studies and a book (Severinghaus 1949, Robinette 1957, Heffelfinger 2006). However, the experience in age estimation resulted an important variable.

I believe this is a fundamental point: the Authors must describe how ages were estimated by expert biologists through the use of detailed descriptions and photographs. Only in this way their findings can be useful to the scientific community.

2) The sample of males is very low. I suggest to carry out the analyzes separately for the two sexes.

3) Is the age of these animals estimated using the same criteria for males and females?

4) I believe it is important to compare animals in which age was estimated by tooth eruption stages and those in which it was evaluated by tooth wear. I have no direct experience on this species but for many other ungulates species the estimation of age by eruption is very different from the wear processes. Is the experience important also using eruption stages?

5) Another very important issue is related to the use of animals coming from very different areas (21 management units within five administrative regions of the Utah Division of Wildlife Resources). These areas have very different altitudinal ranges, vegetation communities, etc etc…

The Authors should take into account the “data collection area” in their models, not only as a random factor (e.g., altitudinal range, vegetation, …). This analysis could help to understand if the underestimation is the same over the whole large study area or if this is true only for certain areas (for example areas with lower altitudes).

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Reviewer #1: This is a well-written manuscript with information that contributes to the literature of aging mule deer, which is arguably growing in importance, given mule deer populations range-wide. Just some minor questions and thought-provoking (hopefully) quibbles.

Lines 68-70; 142-144: The suggestion that aging deer (using the tooth eruption and wear technique [TEW]) at 2.5 years of age is just as accurate as aging deer at 1.5 years of age is misleading and, I would argue, false. At 2.5 years of age, mule deer and white-tailed deer have their permanent (adult) teeth and dental formula, with the only distinguishable features between deer 2.5 years and older deer being tooth wear patterns, which can sometimes be difficult to identify all necessary characteristics in the field on a live individual and can vary based on diet, size of deer, and other factors, as you know. Hamlin et al. (2000), Storm et al. (2014), and Adams & Blanchong (2020) all show error using TEW for aging deer 2.5 years and older.

-We are a little confused by this comment because Figure 3 shows decreased accuracy for 2.5 year-old deer compared to 1.5 year-old deer. For both ages, accuracy was high, however, the point estimate for accuracy of 2.5 year olds is lower. Does the comment refer to Figure 4 regarding bias? Language in the introduction and methods sections has been added to provide clarity.

Lines 242-244, Fig. 2: The odds ratios (ORs) graphed in Fig. 2 do not match those reported in Lines 242-244. From the beta-estimates, it appears the ORs reported in Lines 242-244 are correct.

-We are also confused by this comment. The estimates in lines 242-244 are beta estimates on the logit scale as shown in Table 2. Figure 2 reports odds ratios which are easily calculated from the beta estimates. We’ve adjusted the language in the caption for Figure 2 to more clearly articulate that the figure refers to odds ratios. This change should clarify for the reader.

Line 281: I’m uncertain that most folks would interpret 75% of TEW-CA age estimate pairings within 1 year of each other as “high accuracy”. That would imply that, using TEW aging in the field, managers would be assigning an incorrect age to greater than 25% of deer they’re aging 2.5 years and older. Depending on how different age-specific demographic parameters are from year-to-year, the potential for error could be quite large. While CA aging is not perfectly accurate either, as showed by those cited above as well as Asmus & Weckerly (2002) and Veiberg et al. (2020), CA aging is much more accurate than TEW, especially at older age classes. That’s why most recommend that if managers need ages accurate to the year for age-specific demographic parameters, that CA aging is the best bet.

-We agree that CA is the most accurate method for aging ungulates. This method, however, is invasive and impractical for a live animal being released back into the wild (Festa-Bianchet 2002). Following suggestions from reviewer 2, we have added the term “live” to highlight the TRW method being the most commonly used method for live animals.

Some other questions/thoughts: it would be nice to see a table of the raw TEW estimates vs the CA age estimates to see the "unmodeled" accuracy. Did you explore categories other than 3.5 and older (e.g., 2-4 years, 5-7 years, 8 years and older [not an actual suggestion, just an example, more thought would need to be given to appropriate age categories based on demographic parameters) and if those may be more useful to managers? Key to all of this is do demographic parameters for deer change at different ages? That is where age categories of importance could be identified. Maybe the answer to the question in your title is somewhere in between the 2.5 years and older category of old and the single-year category.

-The raw data for ages estimated by TRW compared to estimates derived from CA for each individual are available for this manuscript. We agree that more specific age categories as mentioned could be beneficial to managers than 3.5+, however, such categories are not yet suggested in the literature. However, categories cannot precisely indicate at which ages demographic parameters change for deer. If such categories are to be determined, further research needs to be conducted to indicate the ages at which demography of mule deer changes.

Reviewer #2: This manuscript evaluates the accuracy of tooth wear and replacement patterns for aging mule deer in Utah by comparing it to cementum analysis. Age information is often important for wildlife population management including estimating population demographic rates. I think the manuscript would be more useful if the authors revised it to increase specificity with respect to the background information and objectives, offer more specific detail about the data collected and how they were used in analysis, and provide a more careful discussion of the interpretation and implications of the findings that brings in the vast literature on this topic.

At the moment, the manuscript lacks important detail in numerous places that makes it difficult to evaluate the Results or the relatively strong conclusions/ recommendations provided in the Discussion and Conclusions sections. Further, in the Introduction there are generalizations made about aging using teeth that are not appropriate. These statements should be revised to more specifically speak to the taxa of interest in the study. The section is also under referenced. The Discussion is extremely under-referenced. Finally, the conclusions and recommendations are overly strong and applied too broadly relative to the data presented and without adequate evidence to support them from the literature (references). I provide specific line-by-line comments below.

-Thank you for the comments. Taxa clarity was added both in wording and in references. Additional references were added to both the introduction and discussion.

Line 53-45 – Sex is not easy to determine in the wild for numerous wildlife species. So, being more specific about which taxa you are referring to would be useful.

-Changed to Cervids.

Line 62-63 – Reference needed.

-References added to support the sentence.

Line 66 - Clarify you mean from live animals.

-Changed with reviewer recommendation

Line 67-70 - This citation is for fallow deer. Is it appropriate to make such a broad generalization based on this one reference for one species?

-Additional citations added and language changed to provide clarity.

Line 71-72- Reference needed.

-References added to the sentence.

Line 73-76 - You are talking about cervids here so be specific. Again, this sentence is making a broad generalization when I don't think you mean to.

-Changed to reviewer recommendation, specified cervids.

Line 85-88 - Again, you are not doing this to generalize to all wildlife (or if that is your intent, I think you should not)...you have a particular taxon of focus and you should state that.

-Changed to reviewer recommendation, specified cervids

Line 91 – Clarify what you mean by “field aging” = using tooth eruption and wear patterns. Also, it should be noted that aging based on cementum annuli is not perfect. There is literature about this. So, you should be careful using it as a “true age”.

-Changed with reviewer recommendation to “tooth replacement and wear method” and changed “true age” to cementum age.

Line 133-134 – What is your basis for 200 deer as the cutoff for experienced vs inexperienced? Justify. How many people did you have in each category? What was the distribution of experience in each category? How many agers in total did you end up having in each category?

-We have added wording to this section to justify this using this number as a cutoff.

Line 134-135 - This is an awkward arrangement. Why talk about 1.5 to 2.5 year olds (without describing how) and then talk about the younger animals (fawns) and then go back to the older animals?

-Changed to reviewer recommendation, changed sentence arrangement to follow ages

Line 187-188 - What does within 1 year mean in terms of what your data were? It's not clear what the age categories are for TWR vs cementum that you are using so I can't tell if within 1 year means the same age or something different. Perhaps you could provide a table with more of the actual data rather than moving straight to outputs of regression models so the reader can see for themselves exactly what you were working with.

-We aged each animal to the year for both CA and TWR (age categories = “1.5, 2.5, 3.5. etc.). We’ve adjusted the wording of lines in the data analysis section to be more clear about the meaning of within 1 year.

Line 207-208 - Justify this. Model averaging is not universally agreed upon as an appropriate strategy. Also justify the choice of 5% with a reference.

-References have been added to support the choice of 5%.

Line 208-211- Why did you do this? And what was your criterion for uninformative parameters? I also don't understand what "models occurred with other competing models" means.

-Thanks for the note. We have added a reference and rewritten the sentence to clarify.

Line 222-223 - Your second model was within 2 AIC of your top model. The standard is generally that any model within 2 AIC of the top model is competitive. So, justify why sex is not important.

-Yes. We model averaged given our results showed multiple competing models. The confidence intervals around the beta estimate for sex, however, overlapped zero suggesting it was not as influential as other variables. We’ve adjusted the language to clarify.

Table 1 – Is “1” the intercept only model? If so, make that clear.

-Changed to Intercept Only in the table.

Line 245-247 - Confusing as written. What age is most accurate for males and how do you know?

-Reworded for clarity.

Table 2 - Why would you choose an 85% CI?

-Because model selection uses a “weight of evidence” approach as opposed to an up or down vote based on a p-value, recommendations now suggest using 85% confidence intervals around beta estimates to assess direction and strength of effect sizes (see Arnold 2010).

Fig 2. – I think this figure is mislabeled. Your experience category has error bars above and below an odds ratio of 1 (1 being no association). This does not make sense in terms of being significant. And, capture period is totally below 1 suggesting it is significant - which is not reflected in Table 2. Also, indicate in the legend what the error bars are.

-Thank you for catching this. The figure labels have been corrected to the appropriate ones, which align with the data shown in Table 2. Figure caption has been changed to denote SE bars.

Fig. 3-5 – What are the error bars and envelopes (shaded areas) on these figures?

-Added language to figure legends to indicate SE bars and confidence intervals.

Fig. 5 – How many deer had to be aged for someone to qualify as experienced? Methods says 200. Here 200 of each sex – so 400 total? This is unclear.

-Thank you for catching this. We have corrected this in the figure caption to reflect the correct number of animals.

Line 280-281 - Clarify what your definition of reliable is.

-Thank you for this comment. Language was added to the sentence for clarity.

Paragraph 1 (line 280-291) - I think you need to go into what this level of "reliability" pertains to. What management contexts would the level of accuracy you found be sufficient and in what contexts/questions would more accurate aging be needed? This is important and should be explored more deeply and use the literature.

-Thank you for this comment. The management contexts associated with the accuracy found in this study are reported, with citations, in lines 321-330.

Paragraph 2 (line 296-307) - This all seems really speculative and you've provided no assessment of accuracy based on experience for males so you really can't support your statements about sex based on what you’ve written here. Also, you need references to support the general statements you are making in lines 301-307.

-Paragraph has been rewritten for clarity. References have been added to these lines.

Paragraph 3 (308-316) and 4 (line317-328) – Again, the statements in these paragraphs need references to support them.

-References have been added to these lines.

Line 308 – What does this sentence mean?

-Reworded and changed language for clarity.

Line 326-428 - Your "high" is subjective. Be specific about what you found.

-We agree that the term high is subjective. We removed the word.

Line 334-336 – I think this is a risky recommendation to make for all mule deer.

-Thank you for the comment. We reworded our conclusions to more accurately reflect the usefulness of this method.

Reviewer #3: Hinton et al. presented a ms entitled “Estimating age of mule deer in the field: Can we move beyond broad age categories?” for publication in PLOS ONE. The paper deals with a relevant and interesting topic: age estimation (teeth eruption/wearing) versus age determination (analysis of cementum annuli from teeth) in ungulates. The ms reported the case of mule deer (Odocoileus hemionous; sample size: 384 unique age estimates for 251 individuals, 347 females and 37 males) aging across the State of Utah.

I enjoyed reading this ms and I think that this study is a valuable contribution to improve the knowledge/management of this species.

However, despite the interesting topic and the potential of management implications for the target species, I believe that a revision is required (please, see my comments below).

General comments:

1) A first flaw that I found concerns the absence of an accurate description of the age estimation method. The conclusions of this ms open up the possibility of using age estimation in future analyzes but do not describe how ages were estimated.

The Authors refer to two old studies and a book (Severinghaus 1949, Robinette 1957, Heffelfinger 2006). However, the experience in age estimation resulted an important variable.

I believe this is a fundamental point: the Authors must describe how ages were estimated by expert biologists through the use of detailed descriptions and photographs. Only in this way their findings can be useful to the scientific community.

-Thank you for this comment. We have added a table in the methods section outlining the general dental characteristics associated with each age of mule deer.

2) The sample of males is very low. I suggest to carry out the analyzes separately for the two sexes.

-The results show that sex was not a significant variable in the model selection process, indicating that there is not a significant difference in age estimates for males vs. females.

3) Is the age of these animals estimated using the same criteria for males and females?

-Yes. An additional sentence was added to clarify the same criteria was used to estimate age of both sexes.

4) I believe it is important to compare animals in which age was estimated by tooth eruption stages and those in which it was evaluated by tooth wear. I have no direct experience on this species but for many other ungulates species the estimation of age by eruption is very different from the wear processes. Is the experience important also using eruption stages?

-These are two different processes used to estimate two different age classes of animals. Estimation using tooth eruption is only applicable to deer 2.5 years old and younger and estimation using tooth wear is only applicable to deer 3.5 years old and greater.

5) Another very important issue is related to the use of animals coming from very different areas (21 management units within five administrative regions of the Utah Division of Wildlife Resources). These areas have very different altitudinal ranges, vegetation communities, etc etc…

The Authors should take into account the “data collection area” in their models, not only as a random factor (e.g., altitudinal range, vegetation, …). This analysis could help to understand if the underestimation is the same over the whole large study area or if this is true only for certain areas (for example areas with lower altitudes).

-Analyses were performed to determine the effect of unit of capture and ecoregion on accuracy of age estimates. Results indicated there was no significant influence of either variable on accuracy of estimates. We added a sentence in the methods section to summarize this finding.

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Reviewer #1: The manuscript was improved from its previous version with statements that added clarity. However, after further review, I have concerns about the statistical analyses and the subsequent presentation/interpretation of those results.

Line 140: “…to identify deer 1.5 years old from deer older than 1.5 years.”

Table 1: This table is unnecessary as it is described in your citations [24-25,40]. Additionally, it insinuates that it is a straight-forward method, which it’s known that it isn’t, and that the authors point out in Lines 299-301 (“…due to increased variation in tooth wear for older individuals…”). I would just leave it as it is in Line 148 that older deer were aged based on wear patterns.

Lines 217-220: The sentences beginning on Line 217 and Line 219 effectively say the same thing. Combine the two.

Lines 219-220: Although I don’t agree with the model-averaging technique used, if the statement of “much of the work in natural resources” is to be used, more citations would be necessary.

Lines 220-221: If the models were assessed for evidence of uninformative parameters, why were they still included them in the final model?

Lines 234-235: Again, if a parameter wasn’t statistically supported in any of the models, why was it still included in the final model?

Lines 252-254: Typically, if there’s a significant interaction term included in a model, the two coefficients (Observer & Age, in this case) are nearly meaningless by themselves, as they would be dependent on the other. However, since the interaction term itself is nearly 0 and insignificant, I suppose these are fine. Although I’d again question the inclusion of these terms that are nearly 0. We strive to find the simplest model that explains the most about our data (i.e., the basis of AIC), so why include all these uninformative parameters when two models with 3 different predictor variables were found that best describe the data?

Fig. 2: Why is the interaction term not included when all other variables are?

Figs. 3 & 5: One of these is unnecessary. Going back to the comments about Lines 252-254: typically, Fig. 3 would not be warranted because the plot of the interaction would illustrate the two variables. But since the interaction is uninformative, the interaction plot isn’t needed either.

Throughout the paper: Choose and stick with one of the commonly used phrases of the “tooth eruption and wear method”, as it is inconsistent throughout (e.g., TRW, TEW, etc.). Line 315 uses “dental wear and eruption method” and Lines 340-341 use “tooth wear and replacement” method, for example.

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Author response to Decision Letter 1


30 Mar 2023

Reviewer #1: The manuscript was improved from its previous version with statements that added clarity. However, after further review, I have concerns about the statistical analyses and the subsequent presentation/interpretation of those results.

Line 140: “…to identify deer 1.5 years old from deer older than 1.5 years.”

- Changed to reviewer recommendation.

Table 1: This table is unnecessary as it is described in your citations [24-25,40]. Additionally, it insinuates that it is a straight-forward method, which it’s known that it isn’t, and that the authors point out in Lines 299-301 (“…due to increased variation in tooth wear for older individuals…”). I would just leave it as it is in Line 148 that older deer were aged based on wear patterns.

- This table was added to the manuscript per request of Reviewer #3: “I believe this is a fundamental point: the Authors must describe how ages were estimated by expert biologists through the use of detailed descriptions and photographs. Only in this way their findings can be useful to the scientific community.” Lines 152-154 caution readers “These characteristics are not absolutes, but rather general guidelines that have been supported by frequent feedback determined from cementum analysis.”

Lines 217-220: The sentences beginning on Line 217 and Line 219 effectively say the same thing. Combine the two.

- Thank you for the comment. Sentences were combined as the reviewer suggested.

Lines 219-220: Although I don’t agree with the model-averaging technique used, if the statement of “much of the work in natural resources” is to be used, more citations would be necessary.

- Added several more citations of studies using model-averaging to this statement.

Lines 220-221: If the models were assessed for evidence of uninformative parameters, why were they still included them in the final model?

- Thank you for catching this. Models judged to be informative were removed from the final model and noted in the model list as uninformative.

Lines 234-235: Again, if a parameter wasn’t statistically supported in any of the models, why was it still included in the final model?

- Same as reply above, uninformative models were removed from final model.

Lines 252-254: Typically, if there’s a significant interaction term included in a model, the two coefficients (Observer & Age, in this case) are nearly meaningless by themselves, as they would be dependent on the other. However, since the interaction term itself is nearly 0 and insignificant, I suppose these are fine. Although I’d again question the inclusion of these terms that are nearly 0. We strive to find the simplest model that explains the most about our data (i.e., the basis of AIC), so why include all these uninformative parameters when two models with 3 different predictor variables were found that best describe the data?

- Same as reply above, uninformative models were removed from final model.

Fig. 2: Why is the interaction term not included when all other variables are?

- Interaction term added to this figure. Thank you for the comment.

Figs. 3 & 5: One of these is unnecessary. Going back to the comments about Lines 252-254: typically, Fig. 3 would not be warranted because the plot of the interaction would illustrate the two variables. But since the interaction is uninformative, the interaction plot isn’t needed either.

- Thank you for this feedback. Removed Figure 5 from manuscript, as the age and observer interaction was found to be uninformative.

Throughout the paper: Choose and stick with one of the commonly used phrases of the “tooth eruption and wear method”, as it is inconsistent throughout (e.g., TRW, TEW, etc.). Line 315 uses “dental wear and eruption method” and Lines 340-341 use “tooth wear and replacement” method, for example.

- Thank you for catching this. All terminology for this method has been changed to “tooth replacement and wear method” to create consistency and align with the most commonly used term for the method.

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Estimating age of mule deer in the field: Can we move beyond broad age categories?

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