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. 2023 Aug 24;18(8):e0290408. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0290408

School’s out for summer–Differences in training characteristics between adolescent biathletes of different performance levels

Andreas Kårström 1,2,*,#, Marko S Laaksonen 1, Glenn Björklund 1,#
Editor: Samiullah Khan3
PMCID: PMC10449162  PMID: 37616200

Abstract

The purpose of this study was to retrospectively describe the longitudinal changes of training variables in adolescent biathletes based on performance level. Thirty biathletes (15 men and 15 women) were included in the study and categorized as either national level biathletes (NLB, n = 21) or national team biathletes (NTB, n = 9). Retrospective training data was collected from training diary covering the biathletes’ four years (Y1-Y4) as student-athletes at upper secondary school. Training data was divided into physical and shooting training variables. A linear mixed-effect model was used for comparing the difference of the performance group and year of upper secondary school on training characteristics. The NTB group achieved a greater annual training volume than the NLB group, especially during Y4 (594±71 h·y-1 vs 461±127 h·y-1, p < 0.001), through an increase in duration of each session and by completing more weekly training volume during the general phase (13.7±4.6 vs 10.0±4.9 h·w-1, p = 0.004). No difference was observed in relative training intensity distribution between the groups. The total number of shots fired was also greater for the NTB (9971±4716 vs 7355±2812 shots·y-1, p = 0.003). There was an equal frequency in illness and injury for both the NLB and NTB. Accordingly, the results of the present study describe longitudinal changes of biathlon training in adolescent biathletes that also may affect performance development.

1. Introduction

Biathlon is a winter sport that combines the physiologically challenging cross-country (XC) skiing with the fine motor skills of rifle marksmanship. To be a successful endurance athlete, such as a biathlete, the athlete must accumulate a large amount of physical training [1] along with sufficient recovery [2]. Previous studies have shown that XC skiing explains roughly 50% of the variation in biathlon performance in individual races [3] and ~ 60% in sprint biathlon races [3] while the remaining variation is explained by the shooting performance (shooting time and shooting results) [3, 4].

Biathlon training is performed using multiple types of training modes, for instance: running, roller skiing, cycling and on-snow skiing [5, 6].When monitoring physical training in biathlon, the training dose is based on duration, mode of exercise and intensity. The intensity is usually scaled based on the percentage of maximum heart rate (HRmax) [7] or as the relationship between the heart rate (HR) and lactate values [5, 8, 9]. The duration at each intensity can be allocated either as the time in zone, based on the recorded time in different intensity zones; the session goal, based on the main intensity goal of a single session; or as a combination of the time spent in each zone and the main goal for the session [10, 11]. In general, as adolescent athletes age they are encouraged to train more systematically and with greater volume and specialization in order to prepare for more training and competition later in their career [12]. There are reasons to believe that a simple copy-paste strategy from a senior athlete’s training structure is not optimal as it comes with a risk of injury or less than optimal development, due to the difference in training volume and biological maturation between adolescents and fully matured athletes [13, 14]. Endurance athletes in mid and late adolescence have been reported to exercise at least five times a week [15] or about 7 hours of endurance training [16]. Most late-adolescent athletes that aim to compete at an international level need to balance an athletic career and school simultaneously, through a double career in a school-sport system. Prior to upper secondary school (USS), most adolescent athletes choose to specialize, by choosing one sport to focus on while stopping practicing other sports, and to train and compete for > 8 months per year [12, 17]. Many USS provide resources for student-athletes to advance within a particular sport while simultaneously preparing for an academic career, for example through adequate facilities [18], coaches and adjusting the school schedule to training and competitions [19]. Many schools allow their students to extend their school attendance by one extra year to ease the double-career transition and maximize training. However only a fraction of athletes that try to maximize the outcomes of both a sporting career and an academic career actually succeed in doing so [17].

Given the limited knowledge of biathlon training in general and adolescent biathlon training in particular, the aim of this study was to retrospectively describe the longitudinal changes of training variables in adolescent biathletes based on performance level.

2. Methods

2.1 Subjects

Thirty biathletes (15 men and 15 women) were recruited, all of which were accepted as student athletes at a USS with a biathlon focus between the years of 2015 and 2019. Each subject was categorized into one of two different performance groups based on performance—either as national team biathletes (n = 9) or as national level biathletes (n = 21). At some point, either during or subsequent to their school years, those classified as NTB had been selected to the national team (development team and/or A-team) based on competition results, whereas the rest of the participants remained as NLB. Since data consisted of data on training that had already been performed, and no further intervention was carried out, no informed consent was obtained. However, all biathletes using the online training diary had agreed prior to registration that their training data may be used by the Swedish Biathlon Federation for the purpose of research. The study was approved by the Swedish Ethical Review Authority (Dnr: 2022-02826-01).

2.2 Experimental approach and periodization

This study used a retrospective cohort design for assessing the training of late-adolescent biathletes. In Sweden, there are six USS with a specialised biathlon focus. Admission to these educational institutions is competitive and the student-athlete has to demonstrate potential in both their main sport and in school. USS is not compulsory but offers student-athletes an academic pathway if they want to apply for higher education after graduation.

Individual training data was collected with the approval of the Swedish Biathlon Federation. All data was retrieved from the training diary Maxpulse (Maxpulse, Johan Bergman, Östersund, Sweden) used by all student-athletes in the USS. Three criteria needed to be fulfilled for inclusion: 1) completed four years of Swedish USS with an additional focus on biathlon, 2) a consistently recorded training diary over four consecutive years and 3) continued to train to compete after USS for at least one year, to eliminate the risk that the training would be affected by a lack of motivation during the final year of school. A training year consisted of 13 mesocycles of four weeks per cycle, from the beginning of May until the end of April. Throughout the training year, the training shifted between designated specific training phases: transition (TRAN), general preparation (GP), specific preparation (SP), competition (COMP) and regeneration (REG). The timing of the periods and the duration of each period are illustrated in Fig 1 and are described in other studies on training characteristics in XC skiing [1, 20]. Each training year corresponded to a USS year: first year (Y1: age 16–17), second year (Y2; age: 17–18), third year (Y3: age 18–19) and fourth year (Y4: age 19–20).

Fig 1. The annual cycle described in training phases including time of year and duration of each phase.

Fig 1

2.3 Training monitoring

All training was planned using a modified session goal/time-in-zone approach, and was planned by a coach in an online training diary. The frequency of the planned training was counted and compared to the frequency of the performed training sessions. Training intensities were monitored according to the five-scale intensity scale used by the Swedish Biathlon Federation based on HRmax, previously described by Sylta et al. [11]. However, in the present study all training intensities were dichotomized to two intensity zones, (low intensity training (LIT) = zone 1–2, < 82% of HRmax and high intensity training (HIT) = zone 3–5, > 82% of HRmax), previously described by Tønnessen [1]. Illness and injury frequency were counted as training days affected per year.

The physical training characteristics were classified as session duration (h), training volume (h per week/phase/year), training frequency (sessions per week/phase/year) and training volume in either the specific or general mode. Training was categorized as either specific (e.g. classic and skating roller skiing, classic and skating on-snow skiing; both with and without rifle carriage) or general (e.g. running, cycling or “other”).

Shooting training was divided into three different categories based on whether it was done during (i) LIT training, (ii) HIT training, including competitions or (iii) precision shooting training. The precision shooting training included zeroing before a session or competition, precision-score shooting, dry shooting without live ammunition and free shooting practice separate from a main endurance session. Precision shooting could be performed both with and without XC/roller skis. Shooting training was classified as the total number of shots fired per year and number of shots per training intensity.

2.4 Statistics

Data is presented as mean ± standard deviation (SD). The Shapiro-Wilk’s test was used to test normality along with visual inspection of the residual plots. All statistical analyses were made using Jamovi (Jamovi, version 2.2.5, jamovi.org). A repeated measure design with a within-subject factor and a between-group factor was used using a linear mixed model. The model was fitted to assess the relationship between performance group and age group on the training characteristics. Performance group and age group were set as fixed effects and biathletes as a random effect, with random intercept across subjects. Each of the training characteristics was set as the dependent variable. A new statistical model was made for each of the variables. For training characteristics in different training phases, the performance group and phases were fitted as fixed effects. Due to the overall low number of participants, sex was not included as a fixed effect in any of the variables. The level of significance was set to α < .05. When the main interaction showed statistical significance, post-hoc comparison was performed using the Bonferroni correction. Effect size was calculated as omega square (ω2) for the significant post-hoc test [21] and effect size values of 0.01, 0.06 and 0.14 were considered as small, medium and large effect, respectively [22].

3. Results

3.1 Physical training

The annual training volume, distribution of LIT and HIT, training specificity and number of performed sessions are all reported in Table 1. The NTB group accumulated ~18% more physical training compared to the NLB group during USS (p < 0.01, ES = 0.29), mainly explained by the extended session duration for the NTB (p = 0.001, ES = 0.26) and the fact that the NTB increased their training volume, especially during Y4 (594 ± 71 vs 461 ± 127, t(39.3) = -3.61, p = 0.003, ES = 0.34). Annual physical training volumes including volumes for LIT and HIT distribution are presented in Fig 2.

Table 1. Annual training characteristics for adolescent biathletes during four years of upper secondary school (mean ± SD).

Group Y1 Y2 Y3 Y4
Sessions performed (n) NTB 311 ± 47 263 ± 23 293 ± 26 328 ± 33 359 ± 40
NLB 298 ± 64 253 ± 40 294 ± 45 327 ± 55 320 ± 84
LIT (%) NTB 89 ± 2 87 ± 2 89 ± 1 90 ± 1 89 ± 1
NLB 89 ± 2 87 ± 3 87± 2 90 ± 1 90 ± 2
HIT (%) NTB 10 ± 1 11 ± 2 10 ± 1 10 ± 1 11 ± 1
NLB 10 ± 2 11 ± 2 10 ± 2 10 ± 2 10 ± 2
Specific (%) NTB 68 ± 27 * 66 ± 31 70 ± 26 68 ± 27 69 ± 26
NLB 63 ± 29 63 ± 31 61 ± 30 62 ± 28 64 ± 28
General (%) NTB 32 ± 27 * 34 ± 31 30 ± 26 32 ± 27 31 ± 26
NLB 37 ± 29 36 ± 31 38 ± 30 38 ± 28 36 ± 28

LIT, Low-intensity training. HIT, High-intensity training. Y1, age group 16–17. Y2, age group 17–18. Y3, age group 18–19. Y4, age group 19–20. NTB, National team biathletes. NLB, National level biathletes

*Difference between national team biathletes and national level biathletes, p < 0.05.

Fig 2. Training volume and relative sport-specific training during different training phases and weeks for the national team biathletes and the national level biathletes.

Fig 2

(A) Training volume per week during different training phases. (B) Distribution of specific training in different training phases. (C) Annual training volume and intensity. (D) Annual training volume of specific training forms. * Difference between groups, p < 0.05. NTB, National team biathletes; NLB, national level biathletes.

The relative specific training was greatest for both groups during COMP (~90%), with a 40% increase in specific training distribution from GP (p < 0.001, ES = 0.98) and a 10% increase from SP (p < 0.001, ES = 0.78). The NTB accumulated a greater volume of training for all specific training forms–on-snow skating skiing (p < 0.001, ES = 0.33) and classic skiing (p = 0.013, ES = 0.16), roller skiing skating (p = 0.013, ES = 0.31) and classic (p = <0.001, ES = 0.16)–during USS, see Fig 2.

The NTB accumulated a greater weekly training volume during the GP phase compared to the NLB (p = 0.004, ES = 0.35), explained by more LIT performed by the NTB during this phase compared to the NLB (1.8 ± 0.40 h·week-1, t(32) = -4.46, p = 0.004, ES = 0.39) while the HIT volume was similar (p = 0.255) between the groups. The difference in training volume by group during the GP phase is mainly explained by the training performed in Y4, when the NTB trained 27% more compared to the NLB during GP (p < 0.001, ES = 0.61). The NTB also had a higher proportion of specific training during the SP phase compared to the NLB (p = 0.008, ES = 0.34).

3.2 Shooting training

The total number of shots fired during training and competitions was greater for the NTB compared to the NLB (p = 0.003, ES = 0.22), mainly explained by the higher number of shots in both LIT and HIT (p < 0.001, ES = 0.45 and p < 0.001, ES = 0.34, respectively) between the two groups during Y4. The number of precision shots remained similar from Y1 to Y4 for both groups. The number of shots fired by NTB and NLB in different age groups is presented in Table 2.

Table 2. Shooting characteristics for national team biathletes and national level biathletes across four age-groups at upper secondary school (mean ± SD).

Group Y1 Y2 Y3 Y4
Total shots (n) NTB 9971 ± 4716 * 8761 ± 4892 8961 ± 5645 10538 ± 4660 11624 ± 3682 *
NLB 7355 ± 2812 5696 ± 2295 7634 ± 2487 8260 ± 3060 7828 ± 2817
Precision shots (n) NTB 6166 ± 3582 5568 ± 3826 5512 ± 4105 6615 ± 3753 6968 ± 2953
NLB 4778 ± 2282 3438 ± 1777 4961 ± 2215 5629 ± 2512 5083 ± 2111
LIT shots (n) NTB 2587 ± 1256 * 2186 ± 1252 2361 ± 1539 2608 ± 1069 * 3192 ± 1081*
NLB 1742 ± 670 1505 ± 520 1811 ± 685 1774 ± 680 2005 ± 759
HIT shots (n) NTB 1219 ± 524 * 1007 ± 413 1089 ± 579 1315 ± 345 1464 ± 416 *
NLB 835 ± 331 753 ± 290 862 ± 204 857 ± 345 867 ± 447

Y1, age 16–17. Y2, age 17–18. Y3, age 18–19. Y4, age 19–20. NTB, national team biathletes. NLB, national team biathletes. LIT, Low-intensity training. HIT, high-intensity training.

* Significant difference between groups, p < 0.05.

3.3 Illness and injury data

An equal amount of training days was affected due to illness between the two groups (NLB: 20.5 ±16.8 days, NTB: 15.1 ±12.2 days, p > 0.106). Injuries did not occur more frequently in either of the two groups (NLB: 1.9 ± 5.0 days, NTB: 0.3 ± 0.8 days, p > 0.119).

4. Discussion

This study is the first to retrospectively describe the longitudinal changes of training variables in adolescent biathletes based on performance level, in a structured training environment. The NTB had a greater volume of training than the NLB during USS. While the NTB managed to increase their training on a linear basis, the NLB did not further increase the volume of their training during Y4. NTB also showed a greater use of more sport specific training modes compared to NLB a well as a greater number of shots fired during both LIT and HIT.

The linear increase in training volume for NTB is mainly explained by the training they did during the GP, since the two groups did not differ in training volume over the other training phases. Given that the GP stretches over the summer months, the vast majority of the phase covers the summer vacation when no common structured training is performed. Consequently, more of the training needs to be self-motivated by the biathlete. Previous research has showed that athletes who successfully adhere to a training plan had a greater level of self-motivation compared to those who were less successful in adhering to the planned training [23]. Heavy training periods have been reported to increase the risk of mood disturbance in adolescent athletes, resulting in periods of staleness and loss of motivation [24]. Mood disturbance in athletes has previously been shown to increase linearly with training load [25]. Since the GP is generally considered to be the toughest training period in biathlon, the increased training load during this period could affect some biathletes negatively with mood disturbance and a loss of motivation to train. Other psychological factors such as the athlete-coach relationship have been suggested to play a major role for sport drop-out in adolescent athletes [26] and their ability to respond to training [27]. The desire to further develop in a main sport is also an important personal attribute for an athlete’s motivation [28]. In a study by Karlsson et al., [20], adolescent national-team XC skiers aged 16 trained approximately 450 hours and then increased their training volume in a linear fashion over their final adolescent years. Since linear increase in the training volume seems to be a factor for further success in skiing sports, and both performance groups are part of the same school system, with the same opportunity to train equally for the majority of the time, the result of this study should be of interest to USS from a supportive perspective, as well as to coaches. The annual training volume reported by the NTB is similar to other studies examining the training characteristics of international-level biathletes [5, 8, 29].The distribution of ~ 90% LIT is similar to that of international senior-level athletes in XC-skiing and biathlon [1, 8]. Notably both the age and level of performance are considered greater in those papers [30]. The similarities in training characteristics between studies despite the age and performance level can partly be explained by the variety of tools (e.g. training diary, method of reporting, technology etc.) used by athletes, coaches and associations to plan and monitor training.

The number of training sessions performed by late-adolescent athletes of different performance groups has previously been reported to not be a factor for further success [31]. In accordance with the present results, the greater training volume of the NTB with the same training frequency can be partly explained by the longer duration of each session, leading to more total accumulated training time. Training volume in biathlon is affected by the time spent on shooting practice, which gives less time to accumulate endurance training to the same extent when training is combined with shooting practice compared to unmitigated endurance training. This may indicate that the NTB assesses their physical training differently compared to the NLB, hence adding more physical training for compensating for the combined training.

The NTB had a greater volume of training in all specific training forms, showing the increased importance of sport-specific stimuli during both summer and winter conditions for selection as an NTB. The distribution of specific vs general training in the present study is similar to the previously reported results of a world-class XC skier [32]. It has previously been reported that highly skilled athletes accumulated more hours of structured training during late adolescence compared to less skilled athletes [33]. A high volume of year-round training with the primary aim to improve performance is the typical definition of sport specialization [34, 35]. Schooling in a structured training environment at a sport-focused USS should therefore be considered as an active sport-specialization. However, biathlon training is based on several different types of training forms [5, 6], diversifying the stimuli while still defining it as the main sport. In XC skiing, which has a very closely related training regime to biathlon, late adolescent XC skiers reported that 98% of their training is main-sport specific [36]. Previous studies have raised concerns about the increased risk of injury and psychological burnout from too-early sport specialization in adolescent athletes [13, 37], however the risk of injury from specialization in late-adolescent athletes is not as clear [38].

The greater volume of specific training simultaneously reflects the difference in number of shots fired in both LIT and HIT. Accordingly, the NTB spent a greater amount of their training on skis and thus fired more shots. In this study, the total number of shots fired by both groups is well under the reported number of shots reported in previous studies of international level biathletes [6, 8]. The vast majority (> 60%) of the shots in the present study were fired during precision exercises in various states of unloaded training. Precision shooting is often the back-bone of all shooting training with the goal to improve technical factors for accuracy and speed of preparation [6]. Technical factors such as stability of hold, shooting accuracy, triggering [39], minimal body sway and rifle movement [40, 41] are all associated with better shooting performance. However, shooting performance has been shown to decrease with elevated physical intensity. After high-intensity exercise, the stability of hold [42] along with postural balance and aiming accuracy [43] are all impaired. Thus, there is a need to train during conditions that are similar to those of a competition to improve performance. Greater skill acquisition in fine motor tasks induced by training has been shown to affect neural function and connectivity in the brain [44]. Since the NTB training consisted of significantly more shots fired during HIT compared to the NLB, prospective NTB could have improved their technical shooting skills during intense exercise and competitions. In previous studies, the number of missed targets has been shown to influence the final ranking at world cup competitions [45, 46]. Since selection to a national team is mainly based on competition results, the shooting accuracy during HIT and competitions is of great importance.

Illness and injury occurred equally frequently in both groups and did not explain the difference between the NTB and NLB. Differences in performance level have previously been reported to not affect the risk of becoming ill or injured [38]. Adolescent biathletes seemed to be ill to the same degree as other adolescent winter athletes [20]. The prevalence of training cessation due to injury was not frequently reported in the present study (~1–2 days/year). One explanation could be that biathlon training can be fitted around many types of injuries through alternative training [47]. Types of injuries are not reported in this study, however previous studies of biathlon and XC skiing have shown that injuries are more frequent in the lower extremities compared to other body parts [47, 48].

There are some limitations that should be considered in the present study. The use of a new system for training planning and registration, together with self-reported data, should be considered when interpreting the data. The potential limitation of a retrospective study should be noted, as the data doesn’t present any cause-effects relationship. The generalization that all biathletes will be of the same performance level if performing the same training may not be applicable. Furthermore, the dataset did not include other training forms such as strength or power that have been recorded in other studies of XC skiers [49, 50] due to the inconsistency on how to quantify these variables over this time period.

5. Practical application

This study has highlighted that it is important for adolescent biathletes to achieve a greater volume of training and to fire more shots during shooting practice, in order to increase their chance of being selected to a national team. This seems to be even more important during periods when the school system does not provide a structured training environment, such as school breaks. Adolescent biathletes that aim to be selected to a national team should also strive to increase their training volume on a linear basis over the full four-years of school attendance. This should mainly be done by increasing the duration of each session. The specific training should also be prioritized prior to the competition season. These findings should be applied by coaches and USS to create more suitable training plans and training conditions.

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Acknowledgments

The authors would like to thank the Swedish Biathlon Federation for access to the data, as well as all participating biathletes and upper secondary schools. A special thanks goes to Gerold Sattlecker for his input to this manuscript. The authors have no conflict of interest to report.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the paper and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

The author(s) received no specific funding for this work.

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PONE-D-23-04315School’s out for summer – Training characteristics of adolescent biathletes at upper secondary schoolPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: Good contribution to winter sports experimental study at upper school level.As in Sweden, there are six USS with a specialised biathlon focus. Admission to these educational institutions is competitive and the student-athlete has to demonstrate potential in both their main sport and in school. USS is not required, but offers student-athletes an academic background if they need to apply for higher education after graduation.This study is to examine late-adolescent biathletes in different performance groups based on their training characteristics, in a structured training environment. This study has highlighted that it is important for adolescent biathletes to achieve a greater volume of training and to fire more shots during shooting practice, in order to increase their chance of being selected to a national team. This study may help coaches and USS to create more suitable training plans and training conditions.

Reviewer #2: Comments to the Author

In this retrospective training study, the authors investigated training characteristics between late-adolescent Swedish biathletes of different performance groups The conclusion is that the best performing biathletes performed greater annual training volumes (with more progression) than their lower-performing peers, mainly caused by longer sessions in the general preparation period (when the schools are closed and thus having less structured training). Also, the best performing biathletes performed a greater volume (number of shots) of shooting training. Although the manuscript is well-written and of high relevance for (adolescent) biathlon training, I’m a bit concerned of the novelty and generalization of the findings. First, the findings can be considered rather “unsurprising” and second, such retrospective data does not provide any solid information (cause-effect) on how lower-performing biathletes actually should train to close the gap to higher performing biathletes. For this purpose, you need something prospective and ideally a training intervention to say something about actual training effects. Therefore, I have some questions and suggestions that needs to be addressed before the manuscript can be considered for publication.

Title

I’m not sure how good the title actually reflects the content of the study and it does not provide information on the different performance levels compared. Could it for example be something like “Differences in training characteristics between adolescent biathletes at different performance levels/of different performance groups”?

Abstract

L14: What is meant by seasonal effect? You are (IMO) not measuring the actual effect of something (providing cause-effect) but retrospectively describing differences in longitudinal training characteristics between biathletes of different performance levels. I think this must be revised throughout the manuscript to better suit your study design and related data.

L20: Again, I don’t like the word effect, could it be changes to influence of performance group and school?

L24: Is it possible to include some data here as well, not only p-value?

L25-26: Same here, is it possible to include actual data on the between-group differences, the p-value provides little information on its own.

L28-31: I find the conclusion a bit too unnuanced with too much generalization of the findings, although there are retrospectively observed differences between two groups of biathletes, it is not evident that the lower performing biathletes will close the gap to the higher performing biathletes by doing the same as they do. This can be included in the discussion with more focus on practical applications of the findings, but I suggest writing a conclusion that to a greater extent summarizes your findings rather then generalizing them too much into a practical context (particularly in the abstract).

Introduction

L42-44: The sentence “Low-intensity training (LIT) accounts for most of the physical training time in several endurance sports” seems a bit out of context considering the sentence before and after. I would have briefly summarized how biathletes train to meet the demands written above before finishing with the sentence that there are limiting training data in biathlon, and particular for adolescents.

L71-72: I would have changed the order here as the main emphasis is biathlon training. For example, “Given the limited knowledge of adolescent training and training of adolescent biathletes in particular, the aim of this study was”

L73-75: The purpose of the study here does not match the purpose written in the abstract (the seasonal effect). I suggest using (almost) the same purpose throughout the manuscript, and could it include something more “simple” like differences in training characteristics between adolescent biathletes at different performance levels/of different performance groups”?

Methods

L86-87: Didn’t the athletes provide any written consent to participate/share their data to the research project? This seems a bit strange..and unethical?

121: What was the rationale for using a two-zone intensity scale instead of a more nuanced 3-zone scale most common in retrospective training studies or just the original 5-zone scale to get an even more nuanced picture of the athletes intensity distribution?

L126: Is classical skiing and roller-skiing specific training for biathletes?

L129: is it possible to nuance/categorize the shooting training even more? There are many different parts of biathlon shooting training within the category precision shooting as it is now.

Results

General: You have included 15 men and 15 women in the study. Did you do any comparison between sexes for training characteristics and progression in training? Was the differences observed similar for both men and women? I think some sub-analyses on this would have strengthened your study, particularly considering that there are different development processes between sexes during such stages of their career.

Table1. I can not see the number of sessions planned as stated in L153?

The resolution of both Figure 1 and Figure 2 seems to be of low quality?

Discussion

Generally, the introduction is well written with several relevant for the study included. However, is it possible to have a more clear summary of the main findings, now there are many sentences and a bit hard to follow. Could also be useful with line spacing after the section summarizing the purpose and main findings.

L204-205: The purpose should be more consistent with the purpose in the abstract and introduction.

L205-206: The comparison of 90% LIT with previous literature in biathlon and xc skiing seem a bit out of context and should be moved to a later part of the discussion.

L293: Limitations, as stated above, I think the (potential) limitation of a retrospective design should be included. Although these data reveal interesting differences between biathletes of different performance levels, it does not provide any cause-effect relationship. Training and performance development is a complex process included by a variety of factors. Therefore, it is not evident (or it cannot be generalized) that lower performing biathletes will reach the same performance level as better performing ones by conducting the same training. Although it is likely that it will contribute positive to that if conducted with a sufficient level of progress and recovery etc. These aspects should be addressed in the discussion.

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


12 Jul 2023

Reviewer #2: Comments to the Author

In this retrospective training study, the authors investigated training characteristics between late-adolescent Swedish biathletes of different performance groups The conclusion is that the best performing biathletes performed greater annual training volumes (with more progression) than their lower-performing peers, mainly caused by longer sessions in the general preparation period (when the schools are closed and thus having less structured training). Also, the best performing biathletes performed a greater volume (number of shots) of shooting training. Although the manuscript is well-written and of high relevance for (adolescent) biathlon training, I’m a bit concerned of the novelty and generalization of the findings. First, the findings can be considered rather “unsurprising” and second, such retrospective data does not provide any solid information (cause-effect) on how lower-performing biathletes actually should train to close the gap to higher performing biathletes. For this purpose, you need something prospective and ideally a training intervention to say something about actual training effects. Therefore, I have some questions and suggestions that needs to be addressed before the manuscript can be considered for publication.

Response: Thank you for your time reviewing this manuscript and providing valuable feedback. We have reflected upon the insightful comments and have been able to incorporate changes on most of the reviewer’s suggestions. Changes in the manuscript are highlighted in bold and red text. Minor grammatical errors are corrected without notice.

Title

I’m not sure how good the title actually reflects the content of the study and it does not provide information on the different performance levels compared. Could it for example be something like “Differences in training characteristics between adolescent biathletes at different performance levels/of different performance groups”?

Response: Thank you for this comment. The title is provocative with an intention since the majority of the difference between the two performance groups happens during the summer break from school. We have modified the title slightly and hope it is more straight forward and consistent with our findings

Abstract

L14: What is meant by seasonal effect? You are (IMO) not measuring the actual effect of something (providing cause-effect) but retrospectively describing differences in longitudinal training characteristics between biathletes of different performance levels. I think this must be revised throughout the manuscript to better suit your study design and related data.

Response: Thanks for pointing this out. We have change it to retrospectively describe the longitudinal changes of training variables in adolescent biathletes based on performance level accordingly to your suggestion. (P2: L16-17)

L20: Again, I don’t like the word effect, could it be changes to influence of performance group and school?

Response: We agree with the reviewer and have changed the word effect to differences instead. (P2: L22)

L24: Is it possible to include some data here as well, not only p-value?

L25-26: Same here, is it possible to include actual data on the between-group differences, the p-value provides little information on its own.

Response: We understand the reviewers point and we have now included the data in both sections where there was previous only p-values (P2: L26-29)

L28-31: I find the conclusion a bit too unnuanced with too much generalization of the findings, although there are retrospectively observed differences between two groups of biathletes, it is not evident that the lower performing biathletes will close the gap to the higher performing biathletes by doing the same as they do. This can be included in the discussion with more focus on practical applications of the findings, but I suggest writing a conclusion that to a greater extent summarizes your findings rather then generalizing them too much into a practical context (particularly in the abstract).

Response: Thank you for comment. We have tried to make the conclusion a clearer. (P2:L30-32)

Introduction

L42-44: The sentence “Low-intensity training (LIT) accounts for most of the physical training time in several endurance sports” seems a bit out of context considering the sentence before and after. I would have briefly summarized how biathletes train to meet the demands written above before finishing with the sentence that there are limiting training data in biathlon, and particular for adolescents.

Response: Thank you for pointing this out. That part of introduction is now scratched since it did not fit as well as intended. Instead there is a brief explanation about biathlon training (P2: L44-45).

L71-72: I would have changed the order here as the main emphasis is biathlon training. For example, “Given the limited knowledge of adolescent training and training of adolescent biathletes in particular, the aim of this study was”

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. The aim has now been modified to include the word “biathlon” as suggested. (P4: L 71)

L73-75: The purpose of the study here does not match the purpose written in the abstract (the seasonal effect). I suggest using (almost) the same purpose throughout the manuscript, and could it include something more “simple” like differences in training characteristics between adolescent biathletes at different performance levels/of different performance groups”?

Response: Thank you for pointing this out. We have now revised this section, and it is also similar to the abstract. (P4: L72-73)

Methods

L86-87: Didn’t the athletes provide any written consent to participate/share their data to the research project? This seems a bit strange..and unethical?

Response: Each athlete who uses the training diary gives their permission that their training data is stored by the Swedish Biathlon Federation in accordance with GDPR and that their data can be of subject for evaluation and/or research used strictly confidential. We have not searched permission from each individual athlete to participate in this specific study, but have gotten the permission and access by the federation. Please see P:5 L84-86.

121: What was the rationale for using a two-zone intensity scale instead of a more nuanced 3-zone scale most common in retrospective training studies or just the original 5-zone scale to get an even more nuanced picture of the athletes intensity distribution?

Response: We understand the reviewers point of view, while the main reason to use LIT/HIT model is explained by the reason that during some years, it was not custom to train or monitor zone-3 training on all upper secondary school. Thereof, we choose the binary model presented by Tonnessen et al 2014.

L126: Is classical skiing and roller-skiing specific training for biathletes?

Response: Thank you for a thoughtful question. We reasoned that both classic and skate skiing (on skis or roller skis) is a whole-body workout, and also sport specific physical training modes. It also helps when comparing our data with other studies that have combined classic and skate skiing as just skiing or roller-skiing.

L129: is it possible to nuance/categorize the shooting training even more? There are many different parts of biathlon shooting training within the category precision shooting as it is now.

Response: Due to the registration system in the training diary it’s not possible to further categorize the shooting.

Results

General: You have included 15 men and 15 women in the study. Did you do any comparison between sexes for training characteristics and progression in training? Was the differences observed similar for both men and women? I think some sub-analyses on this would have strengthened your study, particularly considering that there are different development processes between sexes during such stages of their career.

Response: We have run the data with sex as a fixed effect, but there were no sex differences in any of the statistics. Further, due to the overall low number of participants we removed sex as a fixed effect. We understand the reviewer’s point of view and have added this information in the method section. (P7:L144-145)

Table1. I can not see the number of sessions planned as stated in L153?

Response: This was a typing error. Thank you for pointing this out!

The resolution of both Figure 1 and Figure 2 seems to be of low quality?

Response: Thank you for clarifying this. The files are in the correct format and dpi.

Discussion

Generally, the introduction is well written with several relevant for the study included. However, is it possible to have a more clear summary of the main findings, now there are many sentences and a bit hard to follow. Could also be useful with line spacing after the section summarizing the purpose and main findings.

Response: Thank you for your feedback on the discussion. We have tried to make the main findings clearer and to use line spacing when appropriate. Please see P11, L208- 210.

L204-205: The purpose should be more consistent with the purpose in the abstract and introduction.

Response: Thank you for addressing this issue. We have rewritten the purpose to match the purpose in the abstract. (P11, L204-205)

L205-206: The comparison of 90% LIT with previous literature in biathlon and xc skiing seem a bit out of context and should be moved to a later part of the discussion.

Response: This information has now been moved to a later section where it fits more appropriate to the surrounding texts. (P12: 234-236)

L293: Limitations, as stated above, I think the (potential) limitation of a retrospective design should be included. Although these data reveal interesting differences between biathletes of different performance levels, it does not provide any cause-effect relationship. Training and performance development is a complex process included by a variety of factors. Therefore, it is not evident (or it cannot be generalized) that lower performing biathletes will reach the same performance level as better performing ones by conducting the same training. Although it is likely that it will contribute positive to that if conducted with a sufficient level of progress and recovery etc. These aspects should be addressed in the discussion.

Response: Thank you for your feedback on this section. We have made the statements clearer for the reader and added text about the potential limitations related to the study design (P15: L297-300)

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Decision Letter 1

Samiullah Khan

8 Aug 2023

School’s out for summer – Differences in training characteristics between adolescent biathletes of different performance levels

PONE-D-23-04315R1

Dear Dr. Andreas ,

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Reviewer #1: The author has incorporated the changes suggested by the reviewer. This study retrospectively describes the longitudinal changes of training variables in adolescent biathletes based on performance level which may help upcoming athletes to improve their performance.

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Acceptance letter

Samiullah Khan

16 Aug 2023

PONE-D-23-04315R1

School’s out for summer – Differences in training characteristics between adolescent biathletes of different performance levels

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