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. 2023 Oct 5;18(10):e0292009. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0292009

A modified method to analyse cell proliferation using EdU labelling in large insect brains

Amaia Alcalde Anton 1,*, Max S Farnworth 1,#, Laura Hebberecht 1,#, C Jill Harrison 1, Stephen H Montgomery 1,*
Editor: Gregg Roman2
PMCID: PMC10553331  PMID: 37796816

Abstract

The study of neurogenesis is critical to understanding of the evolution of nervous systems. Within invertebrates, this process has been extensively studied in Drosophila melanogaster, which is the predominant model thanks to the availability of advanced genetic tools. However, insect nervous systems are extremely diverse, and by studying a range of taxa we can gain additional information about how nervous systems and their development evolve. One example of the high diversity of insect nervous system diversity is provided by the mushroom bodies. Mushroom bodies have critical roles in learning and memory and vary dramatically across species in relative size and the type(s) of sensory information they process. Heliconiini butterflies provide a useful snapshot of this diversity within a closely related clade. Within Heliconiini, the genus Heliconius contains species where mushroom bodies are 3–4 times larger than other closely related genera, relative to the rest of the brain. This variation in size is largely explained by increases in the number of Kenyon cells, the intrinsic neurons which form the mushroom body. Hence, variation in mushroom body size is the product of changes in cell proliferation during Kenyon cell neurogenesis. Studying this variation requires adapting labelling techniques for use in less commonly studied organisms, as methods developed for common laboratory insects often do not work. Here, we present a modified protocol for EdU staining to examine neurogenesis in large-brained insects, using Heliconiini butterflies as our primary case, but also demonstrating applicability to cockroaches, another large-brained insect.

1. Introduction

The study of neurogenesis is critical to understanding the evolution and development of nervous systems. Neurogenesis is the process by which neural progenitor cells (neuroblasts) divide and ultimately generate neurons, a process with common features across vertebrates and invertebrates [1]. In invertebrates, this process has been most intensely studied in the fruit fly, Drosophila melanogaster [25], owing to the exhaustive availability of genetic tools, but there are also isolated but key insights provided by other insect species that reveal conserved and divergent features of brain development [68]. For example, consistently across insect species [7, 912], so-called type I neuroblasts (NB), divide asymmetrically multiple times, generating one ganglion mother cell (GMC) with each division, and self-renewing for the next cycle. GMCs subsequently produce two identical cells, either neurons or glial cells. Adult cell number is therefore largely determined by the number of rounds of neuroblast division. Type II neuroblasts, which account for a relatively small number of cell lineages in Drosophila [13], instead divide symmetrically to generate another cell type, intermediate progenitor cells (IPCs). These IPCs subsequently divide asymmetrically leading to self-renewal and a GMC, which terminally divides symmetrically producing two neurons. Adult cell numbers in these lineages are therefore determined by the number of rounds of neuroblast and IPC division. Hence, by adding a second proliferative phase IPCs increase the final number of neurons produced by neuroblasts [1417].

Nervous systems in insects are extremely diverse in their size, structure and ontogenetic trajectories [18, 19]. This variation is likely explained by altered dynamics of cell proliferation, including variation in neuroblast number, the length of neurogenic cell division, and the propensity to produce IPCs. For instance, D. melanogaster has 4 mushroom body neuroblasts per hemisphere whereas the honey bee, Apis mellifera reportedly has 500 mushroom body neuroblasts. Another axis of interspecific variation can be seen in the timing of key neurodevelopmental events [20]. This diversity of insect neurodevelopment offers the possibility of uncovering mechanisms that govern key cellular processes, leading to a better understanding of the development and evolution of nervous systems. However, to exploit this diversity we must overcome the challenge of developing or optimising methodologies for less frequently studied organisms, for which protocols developed in more common lab insects may be ineffective.

One example of insect nervous system diversity is the size of a central brain structure called the mushroom bodies. Mushroom bodies are one of the most prominent and variable structures in the insect brain. They have a variety of functions, including sensory integration, filtering and attention [2123]. However, they are particularly implicated in learning, memory, and generally complex behaviours that require the integration of innate states and sensory stimuli [19]. Across insects, mushroom bodies have changed in size multiple times, with particularly large mushroom bodies evolving in at least four lineages [2427] providing opportunities to study the convergent evolution of expanded neural structures. This size variation reflects changes in the number of intrinsic mushroom body neurons, the Kenyon cells [24, 28]. The developmental mechanisms behind these different population sizes remain largely unclear. Studying the rate and duration of neurogenesis in a comparative context across related species with diverse neural morphologies could advance our understanding of the developmental mechanisms controlling cell production.

To explore variation in Kenyon cell production we focus on one of the four noted increases of mushroom body size, which occur in passion vine butterflies, Heliconius [26, 29]. Relative to the rest of the brain, Heliconius mushroom bodies are 3-4X larger than other genera in the tribe Heliconiini [26, 28, 29]. The close relatedness of the Heliconiini [30], and the general similarity in their ecology [31] and juvenile life history [32], provides a clear opportunity for comparative studies of development. However, this system lacks basic tools to study neurogenesis.

In other insects, three methods have been used to identifying neurogenesis: i) methods based on the incorporation of chemical markers during the S phase or M phase of the cell cycle; ii) methods that use markers against specific proteins expressed in the membrane of proliferating cells; and iiii) genetic tools. The last two groups of methods have primarily been developed for Drosophila, with genetic tools currently being less tractable in other systems. We therefore focused on the first group of methods which can also provide information about cell activity.

The first method used to detect proliferating cells in this way was [3H]-thymidine autoradiography [33]. In this technique [3H]-thymidine binds to the DNA of cells undergoing mitosis and labelled DNA is detected by autoradiography [33]. With this method, Altman reported adult neurogenesis in the human dentate gyrus [34]. The main limitations of this technique are the requirement for use of a radioisotope and the time that the detection takes, which can last months [35]. A related method to label cells in mitosis uses 5-Bromo-2-deoxyuridine (BrdU), a synthetic analogue of thymidine, that binds to DNA during the S phase. This method is faster and provides higher temporal and spatial resolution. It has been widely used to mark neuroblasts in the insect brain [3639] and to study adult neurogenesis in both vertebrates [40] and invertebrates [37, 41], including moths [42]. Apart from being technically difficult, the main limitation, in this case, is that it requires a strong denaturization of the DNA which can degrade the structure of the sample and adversely affect the tissue’s morphology.

More recently a similar method has been developed that uses an alternative nucleotide analogue, 5-ethynyl-2-deoxyuridine (EdU) [35]. EdU is similar to BrdU but the nucleotide is detected by a chemical reaction. Compared with BrdU this method is more sensitive, faster and does not require DNA denaturalization which permits better conservation of cellular structure [35]. Additionally, studies comparing EdU and BrdU have indicated that EdU is more effective at detecting cell proliferation and easier to use [43, 44]. Other markers such as the anti-phospho-Histone H3 (Ser10) antibody have been used to mark cells in mitosis. The process of phosphorylation of Histone H3 starts during the G2 phase but gets reversed at the end of mitosis. Therefore, this label serves as a momentary "snapshot" rather than a long-lasting indicator. In comparison with pH3, EdU marks every cell undergoing S-phase, so it captures a wider picture of divisions instead of smaller windows of the cell cycle. It has also been used to study neurogenesis [7], but currently in a restricted range of small insect species which are commonly used as model organisms, Drosophila melanogaster and the red flour beetle, Tribolium castaneum [7, 45]. To our knowledge, in Lepidoptera and other large insects, only [3H]-thymidine, BrdU, and histological images have been used to identify dividing cells and their progeny [42, 46, 47]. Although these methods have been very useful, they are limited by the time required, lower sensitivity and, in the case of the histological images, the lack of information about cell activity. In this work, we therefore adapt existing EdU staining protocols to study neurogenesis in large-brained insects, using Heliconiini butterflies as a focal case study.

2. Material and methods

The protocol described in this peer-reviewed article is published on protocols.io (https://dx.doi.org/10.17504/protocols.io.n92ldmy69l5b/v1) and is included for printing purposes as S1 File.” Experimental variations in the protocol and their outcome are summarized in S1 Table in S2 File and EdU incorporation is further explained in this section. S1 Table in S2 File shows the different combinations trialled here, including those which were successful and unsuccessful, to increase efficiency when designing future experiments.

2.i Animal husbandry

As a positive control in early experiments we used Oregon R. wild-type flies of Drosophila melanogaster (2,500 Kenyon cells/hemisphere [48]) kept in standard laboratory conditions at 25ºC. We selected and collected flies in the prepupal stage for our experiments. We included comparisons between two Heliconiini, the red postman butterfly, Heliconius erato (52,000 Kenyon cells/hemisphere [48]) and the flame butterfly, Dryas iulia (13,000 Kenyon cells/hemisphere [48]) obtained from breeding stocks established from commercial pupae suppliers (The Entomologist Ltd, East Sussex, UK). Butterflies were maintained in ~2m x 2m x 2m cages at 24ºC– 30ºC and 80% humidity 80%. Each cage contained natural host plants for each species, Passiflora biflora and P. triloba for D. iulia, and P. biflora for H. erato. Butterflies were fed every other day with a pollen/sugar solution (5% pollen or artificial amino acids source, 20% sugar, 75% water). Fresh flowers were also provided from Lantana and Psiguria as additional sources of food. Larvae were reared in individual pots and fed every day with fresh leaves. Young pupae (0–1 days old) were collected to test EdU staining protocols. To provide an additional comparison of whether the protocol developed for Heliconiini worked in other large-brained insects, we obtained 2–4 weeks old Pacific beetle cockroach, Diploptera punctata. Cockroaches came from stock populations at the University of Bristol maintained at 26 ºC and 60% humidity.

2.ii EdU incorporation

The protocol is a modified version from the instructions of the Click-iT EdU Cell Proliferation Kit for Imaging, Alexa Fluor 488 dye (Thermofisher, #C10420). The first step of EdU staining protocols is the incorporation of the EdU nucleotide into the DNA of replicating cells. It therefore requires the cells to be alive for the duration of the incubation. Based on previous studies in Drosophila and Tribolium [7, 45] we diluted EdU in 0.1M PBS in three different concentrations: 10 μM, 20 μM and 50 μM. Pilot experiments in Drosophila led to a final dilution of 20 μM for subsequent trials. As an alternative medium, we tested the benefits of replacing the dilution buffer with Grace’s Medium (ThermoFisher, #11595030) which is used to maintain insect cell cultures [49].

To refine the EdU protocol we focused on larvae and early pupae, where we anticipated high rates of neurogenesis. We tested four main ways of incorporating EdU (Fig 1).

Fig 1. Different ways of incorporating EdU that were trialed during our protocol development.

Fig 1

From top to bottom: injection into the pupae, painting EdU onto plant material in larvae, and brain and whole pupa incubations.

  • Injection: We trialled injecting the solution into the thorax of young pupae using a glass capillary and a micromanipulator. We injected a volume of approximately 5–10μl, followed by incubation times of either 6 or 20 hours. After the incubation period brains were dissected out of the head and fixed.

  • Coated host plant: For larvae, we trialled covering leaves of Passiflora biflora in EdU solution using a paintbrush. We fed these leaves to fifth instar larvae over 24 or 48 hours before dissecting out the brains and fixing them.

  • Ex vivo incubation: Brains of young pupae were quickly dissected in 0.1M PBS and moved to an Eppendorf tube containing EdU solution diluted in PBS. As a variation of this step, EdU was alternatively diluted in in Grace’s medium. Incubation times were varied from 30 minutes to 4 hours.

  • In vivo incubation: Finally, we trialled incubations in intact pupae by opening a small window in the cuticle of the pupa (as indicated in the Fig 1), and then transferring the pupa upside-down into an Eppendorf tube containing the EdU solution. Incubation times were varied from 30 minutes to 4 hours.

Out of all these conditions, the ex vivo incubation of brain in EdU diluted in Grace’s Medium and the in vivo incubation were the only successful trials. We found injected larvae often displayed a strong immune response, producing large amounts of melanin, which may have inhibited the incorporation of EdU, while food preparations for larvae likely required higher concentrations of EdU which may become costly. Ex vivo incubations without Grace’s Medium also failed, which we assume reflected the low survival time for cells in extracted brains.

2.iii Immunohistochemistry (IHC)

To illustrate the compatibility of EdU and IHC, we combined our successful protocol derivation with additional antibody staining following the protocol published by Ott [50]. First, under isotonic HEPES-buffered saline (HBS; 150 mM NaCl; 5 mM KCl; 5 mM CaCl2; 25 mM sucrose; 10 mM HEPES; pH 7.4) we dissected a window in the head of a pupa or adult leaving the brain exposed. Heads were then fixed under agitation for 16–20 hours in zinc formaldehyde, ZnFA (0.25% [18.4 mM] ZnCl2; 0.788% [135 mM] NaCl; 1.2% [35 mM] sucrose; 1% formaldehyde) or 4% paraformaldehyde, PFA, in 0.1 M phosphate-buffered saline (PBS; 7.4 pH). Brains were then dissected out of the head capsule and rinsed in HBS buffer. They were subsequently incubated in PBS with normal goat serum, PBSd–NGS (NGS; 5% Normal Goat Serum; DMSO; 1% dimethyl sulfoxide; 0.005% NaN3 in [0.1 M] PBS), for 2 hours, before incubation with the primary antibody, for 3.5 days at 4ºC. As a primary antibody we used a rabbit antibody against horseradish peroxidase HRP, a common marker for neurons [51].

After incubation with the primary antibody, brains were washed three times, 2 hours each time in PBSd (1% DMSO in 0.1 M PBS), before incubation with Cy3-conjugated anti-rabbit antibody 1:100 in PBSd-NGS for 2.5 days. They were clarified using progressively more concentrated glycerol solutions in Tris (1% DMSO in 0.1 M Tris): 1%, 2%, 4% for 2 hours each, 8%, 15%, 30%, 50%, 60%, 70%, and 80% for 1 hour each. They were then dehydrated in 100% ethanol three times, for 30 minutes each, before ethanol was carefully replaced by methyl salicylate letting the brain absorb this solution, becoming transparent in the process.

2.iv Confocal imaging and image processing

Butterfly and cockroach brains were mounted in methyl salicylate, brains of Drosophila were mounted in 80% glycerol. Brains were imaged using a confocal laser-scanning microscope (Leica TCS SP5, and Leica SP8 AOBS) using 10x HCX PL Fluotar (Numerical aperture: 0.4) and 20x HCX PL APO (Numerical aperture: 0.75) dry objective. For higher magnification images, we used a 40x HC PL APO CS2 (Numerical aperture: 1.3) oil immersion objective. The resolution of the images was 512 x 512 pixels. Images obtained with the confocal were edited using Fiji [52]. Brightness, contrast and colours were adjusted using the colour and channel tools.

To assess EdU penetration we examined the Z-stacks of three different developmental stages and measured the distance to the nearest edge of the brain using Fiji [52]. “Measure” and “set scale” tools were used to calculate the distances. This analysis is included in the S2 Table in S2 File. Based on this analysis we do not detect any penetration issues that might limit downstream analyses.

3. Expected results

The unedited EdU protocols [35] previously applied in Drosophila melanogaster [45] and Tribolium castaneum [7] produced good results in our D. melanogaster samples (Fig 2), used here as a positive control, but failed to return stained nuclei in Heliconiini. Out of all the experimental variations tested in Heliconiini butterflies (S1 Table in S2 File), the most reliable and effective protocol was in vivo incubation in Grace’s Medium. The failure of other incubation methods, including those used in Drosophila and Tribolium highlighted the importance of the EdU incorporation step, and the increased difficulty of this step in larger brained insects. In addition to altering the protocol at the incubation stage, our protocol also includes modifications to the fixation, permeabilization solutions, and incubation times which together adapt the protocol for effective use in larger-brained insects. The main variations of the protocol are summarized in S3 Table in S2 File.

Fig 2. Positive EdU staining in Drosophila melanogaster (prepupa, control).

Fig 2

A and C, Schematic drawings of the brain of the Drosophila larvae. B, EdU staining in the central brain. D, EdU staining shown in higher magnification for one lobe. Scale bars = 200 μm in B, 50 μm in D.

By following the protocol (S1 File) one should be able to obtain similar images to Figs 36, which show Edu+ cells in large-brained insects. To ensure that EdU staining was specific to nuclei, we confirmed localised staining at higher magnification (63x) (Fig 3). EdU positive cells were seen to overlap with Hoechst 33342 stained nuclei (Fig 3).

Fig 3. Nuclei stained by EdU in the optic lobe of Dryas iulia young pupa (Day 1).

Fig 3

A, Nuclei staining with Hoechst 3342 (magenta). B, EdU staining (green). C, EdU and nuclei double staining. Scale bars = 20 μm.

Fig 6. Compatibility of EdU and immunostainings in one hemisphere of the brain of a Dryas iulia larva (5th instar).

Fig 6

Triple staining of Hoechst 33342, EdU and anti-HRP (horseradish peroxidase) in Dryas iulia late larva (5th instar). A, Schematic drawings of the brain showing the location of the imaged cells. B, F nuclei staining with Hoechst 33342 (magenta). C, G EdU staining (green). D, H, HRP staining (yellow). E, I, triple staining. Scale bars = 100 μm in B-E, 50 μm in F-I.

3.i Effects of variation in EdU incubation times

Once the method was adapted to butterflies, we focused on the effects of varying incubation times. As EdU marks every daughter cell that was produced during the incubation period (including both self-renewed progenitors and neurons), we expect shorter incubation periods to result in fewer stained cells. In the initial experiment, the incubation with EdU lasted 90 minutes. This period of incubation time was reduced to 40 minutes. As expected, brains stained for 90 minutes show a notably higher number of EdU positive cells compared with brains stained for 40 minutes (Fig 4). Further optimisation of incubation times will likely be required depending on the aims of the particular application.

Fig 4. Positive EdU staining in the mushroom body of Dryas iulia young pupae (Day 1), with lower numbers of EdU+ cells with shorter incubations.

Fig 4

A, Schematic drawings of the brain of butterflies and location of the staining shown. Nuclei staining with Hoechst 33342 (magenta) after 90’ (B) and 40’ incubation period (E). EdU staining (green) after a 90’ (C) and 40’ incubation period (F). EdU and nuclei double staining after a 90’ (D) and 40’ incubation period (G). Scale bars = 50 μm.

3.ii EdU staining in other large brain insects

To test if the refined protocol developed in butterflies is applicable to other large insects we performed a series of tests in the Pacific beetle cockroach, Diploptera punctata. Cockroaches were first dissected in Grace’s Medium and later incubated in 20 μM EdU solution diluted in Grace’s Medium for 2–3 hours. EdU positive cells were observed among the Kenyon cells (KCs) of 2–4 weeks old cockroaches (Fig 5), suggesting the protocol will likely work across a range of large insect species.

Fig 5. EdU positive staining in the mushroom body of another large-brained insects, Diploptera punctata (4 weeks old).

Fig 5

A, Schematic drawings of the brain showing the location of the imaged cells. B, E, nuclei staining with Hoechst 33342 (magenta). C, F, EdU staining (green). D, G, EdU and nuclei double staining. The arrows indicate EdU+ cells. MB: Mushroom body, Ca: Calyx, KCs: Kenyon cells. Scale bars = 100 μm.

3.iii EdU staining in combination with immunohistochemistry

Finally, to demonstrate the compatibility of the altered EdU protocol with immunohistochemistry (IHC) [35], we combined this method with IHC in butterflies. Once the chemical reaction was finished, we washed heads and removed the brains, before proceeding with the antibody staining procedure. Combined staining with anti-HRP, a common neuronal marker [51], was successful, and helps orientate the EdU positive cells and identifying neurons (Fig 6). A full brain hemisphere is shown. EdU+ cells are a mix of progenitor cells and daughter cells, neurons and glia.

Supporting information

S1 File. Step by step protocol, also available on protocols.io.

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S2 File

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Acknowledgments

We thank James Chen, Alana Kelly, and Tom Pitman for their assistance with insect and plant husbandry, and Molly Beastall and Sinead English for providing the cockroaches.

Data Availability

This is a lab protocol which does not report data.

Funding Statement

This work was funded by an ERC Starter Grant (758508) and a NERC IRF (NE/N014936/1) to SHM. The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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PONE-D-23-10274A modified method to analyse cell proliferation using EdU labelling in large insect brainsPLOS ONE

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It should be explicitly pointed out what special modifications the new protocol has in comparison to the “standard EdU protocol”. The quality of Figures 4 to 6 should be improved (see comments from Reviewer #2). Furthermore, experiments to estimate the tissue penetration of the marker (buzzword: Z-stacks) as well as for autofluorescence in the nervous tissue of insects (buzzword: spectral scan) would be desirable. Finally, the reference list should be revised according to the suggestions of both Reviewers. Further suggestions for improvement can be found in the reports of the two experts (see below).

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Reviewer #1: The authors present a useful protocol for investigating neurogenesis during development of the insect nervous system using the EdU method. This method offers advantages over the main alternative, BrdU-labeling, in that denaturation of the DNA and immunolabeling are not required to identify proliferating cells. It is also likely that small fluorescent azide molecules penetrate tissues better than immunoglobulin molecules, making this method highly suitable for studying wholemount preparations of insect brains, although penetration was not directly assessed in this study and the photomicrographs included could all represent label in the superficial aspects of the tissue. If the authors collected Z-stacks and could estimate tissue penetration of the label, that would be very helpful. I appreciate the care the authors gave to identifying an effective method of delivering the marker to living tissue. My specific comments and questions follow.

1. It might be useful to non-specialists to include the common name of these butterflies (passion-vine or passion flower butterflies) and to note their Neotropical distribution.

2. I appreciate the scholarly overview provided by the citations, but was surprised to see Truman and Bate's 1988 (!) use of BrdU to study Drosophila neurogenesis not acknowledged (Truman JW, Bate M. Spatial and temporal patterns of neurogenesis in the central nervous system of Drosophila melanogaster. Dev Biol. 1988 Jan;125(1):145-57. doi: 10.1016/0012-1606(88)90067-x. PMID: 3119399.). Lovely to see the inclusion of Ruth Nordlander's and John Edwards' studies of monarch butterflies.

3. To assist investigators just entering the field, define technical terms as fully as possible. Instead of "In comparison with other proliferation markers like pH3," make sure the reader knows the reference is to the use of anti-phospho-Histone H3 (Ser10) antibody as a marker for mitosis. Phosphorylation of Histone H3 begins during G2 but is reversed at the end of mitosis, so this label is a "snapshot," not a persisting marker. (Line 122)

4. Along the same lines, help the novice reading line 123 by replacing replication with S-phase.

5. The test mentions both PFA and ZnFA, but the table, if I am reading it correctly, indicates that ZnFA never produced positive results. Can the authors clarify? The provided protocol is based on PFA but the authors mention that ZnFA can also be used. This is confusing.

6. Did the authors perform a spectral scan to select markers that would minimize autofluorescence in insect nervous tissue?

Reviewer #2: This paper describes the adaptation of EdU protocol specifically for big insect species, EdU being very commonly used to label proliferating cells in many animal species including small insects.

Although a very clear description of the protocol is given in supplementary materials, that will be useful for any researcher willing to use this technique, the manuscript suffers from weaknesses:

- The modifications performed compared to standard EdU protocol are not well underlined. It would help to point out in the text what was modified compared to standard EdU protocol to better emphasize the specificities of this new protocol

- It would be interesting to illustrate the result of your protocol on Drosophila to compare the efficacy with standard protocol (identical results, better or worse?)

- Fig4: labeling is blurred, does not look like confocal image (specially for Hoechst)

- Fig 5 (cockroach) please add higher magnification picture

- Fig 6 : the size of EdU labeled spots is too small to be nuclei. Does not look like in Fig3, where EdU clearly labels nuclei. Add Hoechst labeling to clarify

- Discussion: Any idea why EdU incorporation fails in big insect species while BrdU incorporation works (ex in Locusta migratoria, Periplaneta americana)? This first step (injection / incubation) is not different, only the revelation is.

- Introduction : it would be fair to cite the first papers using BrdU to label neuroblasts in insect brain (Cayre et al Nature 1994 et Malaterre et al J Comp Neurol 2002)

- Error in references: ref 50 (Weng M, Komori H, Lee CY. 2013) cited page 7 does not mention the use of EdU

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10 Jul 2023

Additional Editor Comments:

• It should be explicitly pointed out what special modifications the new protocol has in comparison to the “standard EdU protocol”. The quality of Figures 4 to 6 should be improved (see comments from Reviewer #2). Furthermore, experiments to estimate the tissue penetration of the marker (buzzword: Z-stacks) as well as for autofluorescence in the nervous tissue of insects (buzzword: spectral scan) would be desirable. Finally, the reference list should be revised according to the suggestions of both Reviewers. Further suggestions for improvement can be found in the reports of the two experts (see below).

Many thanks for this summary. We have responded to all these points below which we believe has improved the clarity and quality of the manuscript.

Reviewer #1:

• The authors present a useful protocol for investigating neurogenesis during development of the insect nervous system using the EdU method. This method offers advantages over the main alternative, BrdU-labeling, in that denaturation of the DNA and immunolabeling are not required to identify proliferating cells. It is also likely that small fluorescent azide molecules penetrate tissues better than immunoglobulin molecules, making this method highly suitable for studying wholemount preparations of insect brains, although penetration was not directly assessed in this study and the photomicrographs included could all represent label in the superficial aspects of the tissue. If the authors collected Z-stacks and could estimate tissue penetration of the label, that would be very helpful. I appreciate the care the authors gave to identifying an effective method of delivering the marker to living tissue. My specific comments and questions follow.

This is an interesting point. We note that in insect brains the majority of cell bodies are around the outside of the neuropils, so penetration is unlikely to be an issue for most cell types. Indeed, all scans were indeed from whole brains, so penetration has already occurred over reasonable distances. We have checked these images to identify cells within deeper tissue in the central brain. We now include a comment on this in the discussion (lines 249-253) and a table (S2 Table) showing the penetration of EdU staining at different stages of development.

• It might be useful to non-specialists to include the common name of these butterflies (passion-vine or passion flower butterflies) and to note their Neotropical distribution.

We have added this to lines 95, and 158-159. We have also added the common names of the other species mentioned: fruit fly, line (line 50), honey bee, (line 70) and red flour beetle (137).

• 2. I appreciate the scholarly overview provided by the citations, but was surprised to see Truman and Bate's 1988 (!) use of BrdU to study Drosophila neurogenesis not acknowledged (Truman JW, Bate M. Spatial and temporal patterns of neurogenesis in the central nervous system of Drosophila melanogaster. Dev Biol. 1988 Jan;125(1):145-57. doi: 10.1016/0012-1606(88)90067-x. PMID: 3119399.). Lovely to see the inclusion of Ruth Nordlander's and John Edwards' studies of monarch butterflies.

Many thanks for pointing out this omission, we have added this reference to the line119.

• 3. To assist investigators just entering the field, define technical terms as fully as possible. Instead of "In comparison with other proliferation markers like pH3," make sure the reader knows the reference is to the use of anti-phospho-Histone H3 (Ser10) antibody as a marker for mitosis. Phosphorylation of Histone H3 begins during G2 but is reversed at the end of mitosis, so this label is a "snapshot," not a persisting marker. (Line 122)

This is an important point, we have taken care to correct this and other instances.

• 4. Along the same lines, help the novice reading line 123 by replacing replication with S-phase.

Done.

• 5. The test mentions both PFA and ZnFA, but the table, if I am reading it correctly, indicates that ZnFA never produced positive results. Can the authors clarify? The provided protocol is based on PFA but the authors mention that ZnFA can also be used. This is confusing.

Thanks for spotting this, we have clarified this in the table. We have had positive results with ZnFA and PFA.

• 6. Did the authors perform a spectral scan to select markers that would minimize autofluorescence in insect nervous tissue?

There is a degree of autofluorescence in our images, insect neuropils are known to autofluorescence around 480nm, and the Edu fluorescence was at 488nm. However, the autofluorescence does not appear in the cell nuclei, so this does not interfere with the use of Edu to label nuclei.

Reviewer #2:

• 1. This paper describes the adaptation of EdU protocol specifically for big insect species, EdU being very commonly used to label proliferating cells in many animal species including small insects. Although a very clear description of the protocol is given in supplementary materials, that will be useful for any researcher willing to use this technique, the manuscript suffers from weaknesses:

We appreciate this positive comment. Indeed, we hope it will save other researchers working on large insects from unnecessarily investing time repeating the lengthy protocol optimisation that we had to perform. Indeed, we invested ~8 months trying alternative approaches before finalising the current approach.

• 2. The modifications performed compared to standard EdU protocol are not well underlined. It would help to point out in the text what was modified compared to standard EdU protocol to better emphasize the specificities of this new protocol

Thank you for raising this, we have added a table (Table S3) introducing the main variations of this protocol and comparing the main steps with the manufacturer’s protocol and the protocol used in the Drosophila literature (e.g. Daul et al., 2010). The most important changes involve the incorporation of EdU, the fixation and permeabilization solutions, and the incubation times. The table is introduced in lines 245-246.

• 3. It would be interesting to illustrate the result of your protocol on Drosophila to compare the efficacy with standard protocol (identical results, better or worse?)

We appreciate this point, but we are not aiming to present a more efficient protocol for all insects including Drosophila. Indeed, the Drosophila protocol seem to work well for that species and is more efficient in some regards, so it would seem unnecessary for Drosophila researchers to use our protocol. Several steps are also quite different because of the size of the tissue and the nature of the dissections, and this means a direct comparison with efficiency in Drosophila and large insects would be difficult to make. Our main goal is instead to present a working protocol for large insects, in other words in increase the breadth of efficacy rather than efficiency.

• 4. Fig4: labeling is blurred, does not look like confocal image (specially for Hoechst)

Apologies, the images are somewhat pixelated due to insufficient resolution. We have replaced these images in a revised figure, and done the same for figure 3. We have also increased the magnification so the differences are clearer.

• 5. Fig 5 (cockroach) please add higher magnification picture

Our intention was to show the overall cell cluster and the position of labelled cells within it. We therefore think the current figure meets this purpose. We have nevertheless also added higher resolution images of the nuclei as insets.

• 6. Fig 6 : the size of EdU labeled spots is too small to be nuclei. Does not look like in Fig3, where EdU clearly labels nuclei. Add Hoechst labeling to clarify

Thank you, we have imaged other brains stained with Hoechst, EdU and HRP were the nuclei are marked more clear and revised the figure accordingly. We also include a higher resolution image.

• 7. Discussion: Any idea why EdU incorporation fails in big insect species while BrdU incorporation works (ex in Locusta migratoria, Periplaneta americana)? This first step (injection / incubation) is not different, only the revelation is.

We note both do work, but with Edu the challenge has primarily been to increase uptake of the relevant chemicals. We are not sure why the success of the delivery differs between the methods. BrdU involves a lot of denaturisation steps which the Edu protocol does not and perhaps it is possible these steps help with the penetration of the secondary antibody. But if the reviewer has any suggestions to explain this difference we would be happy to discuss these in the manuscript.

• 8. Introduction : it would be fair to cite the first papers using BrdU to label neuroblasts in insect brain (Cayre et al Nature 1994 et Malaterre et al J Comp Neurol 2002)

Indeed it would, apologies for that oversight. We have added these references on lines 119 and 120.

• 9. Error in references: ref 50 (Weng M, Komori H, Lee CY. 2013) cited page 7 does not mention the use of EdU

Corrected, many thanks.

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Decision Letter 1

Wolfgang Blenau

20 Jul 2023

PONE-D-23-10274R1A modified method to analyse cell proliferation using EdU labelling in large insect brainsPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #2 asks for information about the labelled cell types. Appropriate markings could be added to the illustrations. Furthermore, some specific explanations would be helpful for the non-specialist reader, e.g. what exactly is labelled by HRP and why the number of labelled cells is so different in the different images. If you respond adequately to these suggestions, I can probably accept the manuscript without inviting Reviewers again.

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Reviewer #1: I enjoyed reading this manuscript a second time. I did not re-read with the intent to check every line, but I did note that there is a typographical error on line 289 (minutess instead of minutes).

Neuroanatomical studies on non-model organisms can be very challenging. I appreciate very much these investigators' careful work. I believe other research groups will find these methods useful.

Reviewer #2: Thank you for providing better picture quality in this revised manuscript.

It is quite difficult for the reader to appreciate labeling efficiency since no explanations are provided concerning labeled cells: what are these labeled cells in which brain structure (mushroom bodies are mentioned in the introduction bot obviously cells labeled in Fig.6 are not Kenyon cells)? Why so few cells in figs 4,5 and som many in fig. 6? What does HRP label? Such information would help make sense of what is shown.

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PLoS One. 2023 Oct 5;18(10):e0292009. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0292009.r004

Author response to Decision Letter 1


31 Aug 2023

Reviewer #1:

• I enjoyed reading this manuscript a second time. I did not re-read with the intent to check every line, but I did note that there is a typographical error on line 289 (minutess instead of minutes).

Corrected, Thanks!

• Neuroanatomical studies on non-model organisms can be very challenging. I appreciate very much these investigators' careful work. I believe other research groups will find these methods useful.

Many thanks, that is our intention with this paper.

Reviewer #2:

• Thank you for providing better picture quality in this revised manuscript.

Thanks for the positive feedback.

• It is quite difficult for the reader to appreciate labeling efficiency since no explanations are provided concerning labeled cells: what are these labeled cells in which brain structure (mushroom bodies are mentioned in the introduction bot obviously cells labeled in Fig.6 are not Kenyon cells)?

Thank you for your response. Different figures show different brain regions. We have clarified this in the figure legends, lines: 279/fig 3 (the cells shown are in the developing optic lobes), line 295/fig 4 (shows the mushroom body) and lines 325-329/fig 6 shows a complete brain hemisphere of a 5th instar larvae. The main point of this figure is to show that the protocol is compatible with immunohistochemistry.

To further elaborate, our goal is to validate the effectiveness of the protocol across large-brained insects, regardless of their brain structure. The cell identity is not a major concern as EdU marks every cell that undergoes the S-phase. This will be progenitor cells like neuroblasts, ganglion mother cells and intermediate proliferating cells; and their daughter cells, mainly neurons and glia. The efficiency should not be different in different cell types. The only potential limitation would be if the cell cycle duration exceeded the EdU incubation time, in which case some cell types might remain unmarked. In the present case we illustrate the protocol primarily by focusing on the mushroom body, while demonstrating that it works elsewhere in the brain, in different developmental stages and different insects. Other researchers could use it to mark cells anywhere in the brain of a large insect, or potentially other organs.

• Why so few cells in figs 4,5 and so many in fig. 6?

Thanks, that’s a good observation. This is because these figures are showing different developmental stages and different areas of the brain. We want to show that the protocol works in pupae but also in larvae. In figure 4, we are showing the mushroom body of a young butterfly pupa. We are here shortening the incubation, and this results in less cells marked. In contrast, in figure 6, we are showing a late larva (5th instar). During this stage of development, a lot of proliferative cells are dividing and these are detected by EdU. It is a stage where many brain structures are changing/developing. Additionally, we show a full brain hemisphere with focus on the ventral part which still comprises several brain structures.

In figure 5, we are showing the mushroom body of a 4 week old cockroach, a different species and stage, so potentially fewer cells are proliferating, but this is not the intention of the comparison. We merely intend to show the protocol works in other large species.

• What does HRP label? Such information would help make sense of what is shown.

We indicated this in the methods section “As a primary antibody we used a rabbit antibody against horseradish peroxidase HRP, a common marker for neurons [52]. ”. We have also clarified this on the lines 323-324.

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11 Sep 2023

A modified method to analyse cell proliferation using EdU labelling in large insect brains

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26 Sep 2023

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A modified method to analyse cell proliferation using EdU labelling in large insect brains

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