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. 2023 Oct 9;18(10):e0291803. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0291803

Assessing swallowing disorders in adults on high-flow nasal cannula in critical and non-critical care settings. A scoping review protocol

Ruvistay Gutierrez-Arias 1,2,*, Gabriel Salgado-Maldonado 1,3,4, Paola Letelier Valdivia 1, Francisco Salinas-Barahona 1,5, Carmen Echeverría-Valdebenito 1, Pamela Seron 6,7; on behalf of INTRehab Research Group
Editor: Silvia Fiorelli8
PMCID: PMC10561841  PMID: 37812649

Abstract

Introduction

The high-flow nasal cannula (HFNC) has become a widely used respiratory support system, which has proven to be effective in different populations. The facilitation of oral communication and feeding have been described as advantages of this support. Nevertheless, swallowing disorders associated with the use of HFNC have been postulated. However, such evidence is scattered in the literature, not systematically searched, and needs to be adequately summarised. This review aimed to explore the literature, to identify and map the evidence, regarding the frequency and methods of assessment of swallowing disorders in adult HFNC users, in both critical and non-critical units.

Materials and methods

A scoping review will be conducted. A systematic search in MEDLINE (Ovid), Embase (Ovid), CENTRAL, CINAHL (EBSCOhost), and other resources will be conducted. Primary studies, in any language or publication status, assessing the incidence of swallowing disorders in adults with HFNC support will be included. Two reviewers will independently select studies and extract data. Disagreements will be resolved by consensus or a third reviewer. The results will be reported narratively, using tables and figures to support them.

Discussion

Positive end-expiratory pressure generated in the airway by HFNC could impair the proper swallowing performance. Knowing the methodological characteristics, the instruments or scales used to assess the presence of dysphagia, and the results of the studies may contribute to considering swallowing assessment in this population on a routine basis, as well as to guide the conduct of new studies that may respond to less researched areas in this topic.

Registration

Registration number: INPLASY2022110078.

Introduction

The high-flow nasal cannula (HFNC) has become a widely used respiratory support system [1], increasing in use due to the COVID-19 pandemic [2]. A number of studies have reported the effectiveness of HFNC, especially in hypoxemic respiratory failure, to avoid invasive mechanical ventilation [35] and the weaning process to avoid respiratory failure post-extubation [3, 6, 7]. The main mechanisms that explain its effects are airway humidification, decreased resistance, flushing of the upper airway dead space, ability to deliver O2 at planned concentrations, and the possibility of generating positive end-expiratory pressure [8].

Several advantages of using HFNC compared to conventional oxygen masks [911] and non-invasive mechanical ventilation have been described [1214]. Increased comfort is frequently mentioned by people undergoing HFNC, as adequate communication and oral feeding are allowed during its use [1517].

Despite the advantages of using HFNC, some minor adverse effects have been reported, the most common being epistaxis and nasal discomfort associated with dryness [18]. However, the possibility of more serious adverse events, such as aspiration pneumonia associated with using HFNC, has been postulated [19].

Most of the research related to the research question posed in this protocol has focused on pediatrics, probably because the evidence supports the use of HFNC in this population [20, 21]. Evidence synthesis studies that have considered this topic in the adult population have not focused on methods of assessment disorders and have not been conducted using a systematic methodology [22, 23]. In addition, have limited the inclusion of studies by publication status [22], and have presented findings by summarizing studies separately rather than in an integrative analysis [22].

There are currently different primary studies using diverse assessment methodologies, which report disparate results on the incidence of swallowing disorders. However, such evidence is scattered in the literature, not systematically searched, and needs to be adequately summarized. Therefore, the findings of this scoping review would provide insight into the methodological characteristics, the frequency of swallowing disorders, and the instruments or scales used to assess their presence. This could be used as a basis for further analytical studies, or systematic diagnostic reviews, that could address this less researched area, and ultimately contribute to considering swallowing assessment in this population on a routine basis.

This review aimed to explore the literature to identify and map the evidence regarding the frequency and methods of assessing swallowing disorders in adult HFNC users in critical and non-critical units.

Materials and methods

A scoping review will be conducted following the updated recommendations of the Joanna Briggs Institute (JBI) [24]. The protocol for this review was registered on the International Platform of Registered Systematic Review and Meta-analysis Protocols (INPLASY) under the number INPLASY2022110078, and it was reported following Preferred Reporting Items for Systematic Review and Meta-analysis Protocols (PRISMA-P) (S1 Checklist) [25]. The results will be reported following the Extension for Scoping Reviews of the Preferred Reporting Items for Systematic Reviews and Meta-analyses statement (PRISMA-ScR) [26].

Search strategy

A systematic search will be conducted in MEDLINE, through the Ovid platform; Embase, through the Ovid platform; Cochrane Collaboration Central Register of Controlled Trials (CENTRAL), through the Cochrane Library; and Cumulative Index of Nursing and Allied Literature(CINAHL), through the EBSCOhost platform. The strategy will consider a sensitive approach, controlled language (MeSH, EMTREE, CINAHL Subject Heading), and natural language. The strategy to be used for MEDLINE-Ovid will be adapted to construct the search in the other databases (Table 1).

Table 1. Search strategy for MEDLINE using the Ovid platform.

Search term
1 exp Oxygen/
2 exp Oxygen Inhalation Therapy/
3 Cannula/
4 (1 or 2) and 3
5 ((high flow or highflow or high-flow or high frequency or nasal$) adj6 can?ul$).af.
6 ((high flow or highflow or high-flow or high frequency or prong$) adj6 nasal$).af.
7 ((high flow or highflow or high-flow or high frequency) adj4 oxygen$).af.
8 (HFNC or HFNP or Vapotherm or Optiflow, or Respircare).af.
9 transnasal insufflation.af.
10 or/4-9
11 Deglutition/
12 exp Deglutition Disorders/
13 (swallow$ or deglutit$ or dysphag$).af.
14 exp Respiratory Aspiration/ or exp Pneumonia, Aspiration/
15 (inhal$ or aspirat$ or ingest$).af.
16 Pharynx/ or pharyngeal muscles/ or esophageal sphincter, upper/ or exp Esophagus/
17 (throat or oesophag$ or esophag$ or pharyn$ or oropharyn$).af.
18 or/11-17
19 10 and 18

In addition, clinical trial registries will be searched (https://clinicaltrials.gov/ and https://trialsearch.who.int/), and references from reviews related to the objective of this scoping review and included studies will be evaluated.

Eligibility criteria

Eligibility criteria for study selection will be divided into participants or populations included in the studies, the concept or phenomenon involved, and the context in which the studies were conducted (PCC framework) [24]. In addition, the design of the studies will be considered for inclusion in this review.

Participants

We will include studies that have recruited adults (18 years or older). These may be healthy people who have voluntarily participated in studies to evaluate the use of HFNC or have a disease requiring acute or chronic use of HFNC.

Concept

Studies evaluating swallowing disorders during the application of HFNC will be included. The tools or scales used to assess dysphagia, the programmed flows in HFNC, and the resulting inspired O2 fraction will not limit the inclusion of studies. Any HFNC device or equipment will be considered eligible.

Context

Studies conducted in the hospital, post-discharge care, or home care settings will be included. Studies conducted in research centers will also be considered. If HFNC is used as a method to avoid invasive mechanical ventilation or in the context of preventing post-extubation failure, it will not limit the inclusion of studies.

Study designs

Primary studies (clinical trials, cohort studies, case-control, cross-sectional, and case reports) will be included. Regarding publication status, studies reported as full text or abstracts presented in conference proceedings will be included. The language, as well as the publication date of the studies, will not limit their inclusion. For the translation of studies published in languages other than English and Spanish, researchers who are native speakers of the language of publication will be contacted to resolve doubts regarding the general context of the study.

Selection of studies

Once the studies have been searched, duplicates will be removed using the Mendeley® reference manager (Mendeley Desktop Version 1.19.8 ‐ Elsevier Inc.) and the Rayyan® app [27]. Titles and abstracts will be independently screened by two research team members, who will discard studies irrelevant to this review. Subsequently, the full texts of the potential investigations to be included will be analyzed to determine which articles meet all the eligibility criteria. The Rayyan® app will be used for this stage [27].

In the first instance, disagreements will be resolved by consensus, and if they persist, a third reviewer will determine the inclusion of the studies.

Information extraction

Two reviewers will independently extract information from the included studies. An extraction form specifically designed to meet the objectives of this review will be used and developed in a Microsoft Excel® spreadsheet.

The information to be extracted will include aspects related to the characteristics of the publications and studies, as well as the population, HFNC devices or equipment, HFNC therapy programming, frequency (prevalence or incidence) of swallowing disorder and their assessment instruments or scales, and authors’ findings or conclusions (Table 2).

Table 2. Description of data to be extracted.

Information Description
Identification of the studies Title of the study, journal name, year of publication, authors’ names, and authors’ nationality.
Population Age, condition that led to the use of HFNC, and time of use of HFNC
HFNC Device and parameters (flow, temperature level, FiO2)
Dysphagia assessment Professional conducting the assessment, assessment protocol, assessment tool, or scale.
Author’s findings Incidence and severity of dysphagia according to flow used and authors’ conclusions.

HFNC: High-flow nasal cannula; FiO2: Fraction inspired of O2

Data extraction will be carried out by 4 researchers in pairs of one experienced and one novice reviewer. In the first instance, disagreements will be resolved by consensus, and if they persist, a third reviewer will determine the inclusion of the studies.

Synthesis of information

The search results and selection of studies will be reported through a PRISMA flow chart [28]. In addition, the reasons for excluding full-text evaluated studies will be reported in a table. Findings will be reported for all studies and separated by those conducted in critical and non-critical settings. The critical setting will comprise the intensive critical units, and the non-critical setting will comprise all other units and the out-of-hospital.

The results will be reported in narrative form, and tables and figures will synthesize the information. Waffle charts [29], or similar, will represent the different primary study designs included.

Ethics and dissemination

As a synthesis of evidence, this study does not involve the participation of people whose rights may be violated. However, this scoping review will be developed rigorously and systematically to achieve valid and reliable results.

The findings of scoping review will be presented at conferences and published in a peer-reviewed journal related to critical care or speech therapy.

Discussion

Positive end-expiratory pressure generated in the airway by HFNC, with varying values depending on the flow used, could impair the proper swallowing performance, altering synchronization of breathing and swallowing [22]. This could be explained by the fact that during normal swallowing, the contact time phase of the vellum against the posterior pharyngeal wall is delayed. It is possible that positive pressure increases this delay and causes aspiration through the vellum and opening of the rear pharyngeal wall [19].

The results of this scoping review will provide insight into published studies to determine a possible relationship between the use of HFNC and the presence of swallowing disorders. Knowing the methodological characteristics, the relative dysphagia frequency and the instruments or scales used to assess the presence of dysphagia and the results of the studies may guide the conduct of new studies that may respond to less researched areas in this topic and contribute to considering swallowing assessment in this population on a routine basis.

Supporting information

S1 Checklist. PRISMA-P 2015 checklist.

(DOCX)

Acknowledgments

The members of the INTRehab Research Group are Adriana Lastra Morales, Mauricio Contador Pastene, Marjorie Valdés Araneda, Osvaldo Cabrera Román, Cristián Olave Contreras, Paula Herrera Torres, Francisco Salinas Barahona, Rocío Salazar Invernizzi, Ruvistay Gutiérrez Arias, Valeria Rivas Gálvez, Macarena Cerda Magna, Roberto Vergara Cabezas, Geraldine Castañeda Ayala, Paulina Wilson Meyer, Teresita Cortés Trivelli, Martina Angulo Henríquez, Carmen Echeverría Valdebenito, Mathias Olivares Álvarez, Sebastián Calderón Fuentes, Victoria González Berrios, Iván Ramírez Venegas, Ariela Moreno Huircaleo, Ignacio Cortéz Barriento, Karim Alul Araya, Melanin Aldunce Saavedra, Sofía Keppeler Bertolotto, Natalia Gahona Estay, Andrea Cárdenas Castaño, Sthephanie Rodriguez Norambuena, Natalia Guajardo Latorre, Olenka Villlalón Banderas, Angel Castro Becerra, Diego Ibacache Huerta, Pablo Gómez Soto, María Paz Riquelme Velásquez, Constanza Toro García, Sthefany Quezada Hernández, Gabriel Salgado Maldonado, Paola Letelier Valdivia, Catalina Orellana Molnar & Katherine Peralta Arancibia.

Data Availability

No datasets were generated or analysed during the current study. All relevant data from this study will be made available upon study completion.

Funding Statement

The authors received no specific funding for this work.

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Reviewer #1: 1. Please descibe in full the methodology. Will any reference manager be used? What is the time frame? How is the distinction between critical and non-critical setting done? Are there two or three researchers engaged in the analysis of publications?

2. Figure 1 is not mentioned int the text, it also does not add any value to the publication.

3. The protocol requires english editing.

4. Line 32 and line 33 - two consecutive sentences start with "However". Please replace it with a different vocabulary.

5. Line 40 - the authors declare the research in any language will be considered. How are the authors planning to perform translation to understant the full context of the publication?

6. Line 44, line 166 - the term "hurt" seems to be ambiguous, please consider different term.

7. Line 45-48 - this sentence is too long and unclear, please consider rephrasing.

9. Line 56 - please consider adding a subject, e.g "especially in patients with hypoxemic respiratory failure" instead of effectivenes in [...], especially in hypoxemic respiratory failure

9. Line 59 - please consider using a different term instead of "known", "set" or "planned" seems to be more adequate verb here

10. Line 63 0 please consider adding "its" or "HFNC" before the word "use"

11. Line 70 - none of the cited studies [19-21] concerns newborns. In study 19 & 20 pediatric population is being studied, however very few newborns are included. Study 21 reffers mainly to adults.

12. Line 76 - please refrain from repeating an adjective "different" in one sentence.

13. Line 77-78 - the sentence "The flow used in HFNC needed to trigger them in adults with and without diseases in incomprehensible

14. Line 98 - 99 - repeated phrase "through the Ovid platform"

15. Line 116-118 phrase "adults [...] who may be healthy or have a disease requiring acute or chronic use of HFNC" is unclear. Are patents requiring HFNC without any underlying diseases or with acute or chronic resp. diseases included? Please clarify

16. Line 166-167 - "altering the preathing and swallowing pattern" - is altering the synchronization of breathing and swallowing ment?

17. Line 168-170 - the sentence "This could be explained [...]." is unclear, the term "vitellus" stands for an egg yolk, what was ment?

Reviewer #2: The authors present the protocol for a narrative review on swallowing disorders in adult patients with ongoing high flow nasal therapy. Authors properly state pitfalls of previous similar studies: not systematic searches or not adequately summarized.

Authors aim to review the frequency of swallowing disorders and scales used for assessment. Some confoundings are commented: flow, oxygen fraction, device, location of patients (critical vs non-critical), age.

My main concern is about management of these confoundings to present the results. Could authors detail?

Authors state that aspiration pneumonia has been associated with HFNC, but a cite is lacking.

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Reviewer #1: Yes: Joanna Maria Jassem-Bobowicz

Reviewer #2: No

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PLoS One. 2023 Oct 9;18(10):e0291803. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0291803.r002

Author response to Decision Letter 0


11 Jul 2023

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Response: The manuscript was edited according to PLOS ONE style requirements.

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Response: In the “Rebuttal Letter” we requested the change of the funding statement to “The authors received no specific funding for this work.”

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Response: Our Supporting Information subheading was included at the end of the manuscript and cited in the Methods section.

Reviewer #1

Comment: Please descibe in full the methodology. Will any reference manager be used? What is the time frame? How is the distinction between critical and non-critical setting done? Are there two or three researchers engaged in the analysis of publications?

Response: Thank you for your questions. Several methodological clarifications have been added to the manuscript:

* “Once the studies had been searched, duplicates will be removed using the Mendeley® (Mendeley Desktop Version 1.19.8 - Elsevier Inc.) reference manager and the Rayyan® app”.

* “Data extraction will be carried out by 4 researchers in pairs of one experienced and one novice reviewer”.

* “Findings will be reported for all studies and separated by those conducted in critical and non-critical settings. The critical setting will comprise the intensive critical units, and the non-critical setting will comprise all other units and the out-of-hospital”.

Comment: Figure 1 is not mentioned int the text, it also does not add any value to the publication.

Response: Thank you for your comment. We have replaced the figure with a table to detail the data that will be extracted from the included studies.

Comment: The protocol requires english editing.

Response: The protocol was reviewed and edited by a native English speaker.

Comment: Line 32 and line 33 - two consecutive sentences start with "However". Please replace it with a different vocabulary.

Response: Thank you for your comment. “However” has been changed to “Nevertheless”.

Comment: Line 40 - the authors declare the research in any language will be considered. How are the authors planning to perform translation to understant the full context of the publication?

Response: Thank you for your comment. In the Methods section, the following idea was added:

“For the translation of studies published in languages other than English and Spanish, researchers who are native speakers of the language of publication will be contacted to resolve doubts regarding the general context of the study.”

Comment: Line 44, line 166 - the term "hurt" seems to be ambiguous, please consider different term.

Response: Thank you for your comment.

Comment: Line 45-48 - this sentence is too long and unclear, please consider rephrasing.

Response: The term "hurt" was changed to "impair" in both sections of the manuscript.

Comment: Line 56 - please consider adding a subject, e.g "especially in patients with hypoxemic respiratory failure" instead of effectivenes in [...], especially in hypoxemic respiratory failure.

Response: Thanks for the suggestion. The sentence was replaced by “A number of studies have reported the effectiveness of HFNC”.

Comment: Line 59 - please consider using a different term instead of "known", "set" or "planned" seems to be more adequate verb here

Response: Thanks for the suggestion. “Known” has been changed to “planned”.

Comment: Line 63 0 please consider adding "its" or "HFNC" before the word "use"

Response: Thanks for the suggestion. Added the term “its”.

Comment: Line 70 - none of the cited studies [19-21] concerns newborns. In study 19 & 20 pediatric population is being studied, however very few newborns are included. Study 21 reffers mainly to adults.

Response: Thank you for your comment. Reference 21 was deleted, and the sentence was left as follows:

“Most of the research related to the research question posed in this protocol has focused on pediatrics, probably because the evidence supports the use of HFNC in this publication.”

Comment: Line 76 - please refrain from repeating an adjective "different" in one sentence.

Response: Thank you for your comment. “different” has been changed to “diverse”.

Comment: Line 77-78 - the sentence "The flow used in HFNC needed to trigger them in adults with and without diseases in incomprehensible

Response: The phrase was deleted.

Comment: Line 98 - 99 - repeated phrase "through the Ovid platform"

Response: According to the PRISMA-S and PRESS declaration, the search platform is required for each database. In this case, we report that we will use OVID to search MEDLINE and Embase, as well as other platforms for the remaining databases.

Comment: Line 116-118 phrase "adults [...] who may be healthy or have a disease requiring acute or chronic use of HFNC" is unclear. Are patents requiring HFNC without any underlying diseases or with acute or chronic resp. diseases included? Please clarify

Response: Thank you for your comment. Let us explain the next sentence better:

“These may be healthy people who have voluntarily participated in studies to evaluate the use of HFNC or have a disease requiring acute or chronic use of HFNC.”

Comment: Line 166-167 - "altering the preathing and swallowing pattern" - is altering the synchronization of breathing and swallowing ment?

Response: Thanks for the suggestion. “Altering the breathing and swallowing pattern” was changed by “synchronization of breathing and swallowing.”

Comment: Line 168-170 - the sentence "This could be explained [...]." is unclear, the term "vitellus" stands for an egg yolk, what was ment?

Response: We change the term "vitellus" to “vellum”.

Reviewer #1

Comment: Some confoundings are commented: flow, oxygen fraction, device, location of patients (critical vs non-critical), age. My main concern is about management of these confoundings to present the results. Could authors detail?

Response: The purpose of a scoping review is to describe what the literature says or what research has been done on a specific topic. Our aim is not to provide recommendations for clinical practice, which is rather the aim of systematic reviews and clinical practice guidelines, but to identify what has been studied regarding the possible association between the use of HFNC and swallowing disorders. Therefore, our study will serve to identify gaps in knowledge and provide recommendations for future research.

All possible variables that could confound the relationship between swallowing disorder and HFNC use will be discussed for future primary studies to consider.

Comment: Authors state that aspiration pneumonia has been associated with HFNC, but a cite is lacking.

Response: A reference was added to support the possibility that the use of HFNC may generate aspiration.

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Decision Letter 1

Silvia Fiorelli

6 Sep 2023

Assessing swallowing disorders in adults on high-flow nasal cannula in critical and non-critical care settings. A scoping review protocol

PONE-D-23-04634R1

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Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer's Responses to Questions

Comments to the Author

1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions?

The research question outlined is expected to address a valid academic problem or topic and contribute to the base of knowledge in the field.

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses?

The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory.

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable?

Descriptions of methods and materials in the protocol should be reported in sufficient detail for another researcher to reproduce all experiments and analyses. The protocol should describe the appropriate controls, sample size calculations, and replication needed to ensure that the data are robust and reproducible.

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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6. Review Comments to the Author

Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics.

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Reviewer #2: All my comments were adequately answered. The protocol has been clearly improved. I have no further comments.

Reviewer #3: Many thanks for asking me to review the above Scoping Reveiw.

The authors aimed to explore the literature to identify and map the evidence regarding the frequency and methods of assessing swallowing disorders in adult HFNC users in critical and non critical units.

It is a well written manuscript and the findings, provide insight into the methodological characteristics, the frequency of swallowing disorders, and the instruments used to assess their presence.

The authors have clearly and precisely responded to the comments of previous Reviewers, thus clarifying some "grey" areas of the Study's methodology.

Not having to point out any additional comment or correction, I think the Manuscript should be published in its current form.

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Reviewer #2: No

Reviewer #3: No

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Acceptance letter

Silvia Fiorelli

29 Sep 2023

PONE-D-23-04634R1

Assessing swallowing disorders in adults on high-flow nasal cannula in critical and non-critical care settings. A scoping review protocol

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