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. 2023 Oct 30;18(10):e0293524. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0293524

Sensitivity analysis of shock distributions in the world economy

Viktor Domazetoski 1,*, Maryan Rizinski 2,3, Dimitar Trajanov 2,3, Ljupco Kocarev 1,2
Editor: Emilia Lamonaca4
PMCID: PMC10615321  PMID: 37903122

Abstract

With the ever increasing interconnectedness among countries and industries, globalization has empowered economies and promoted international trade, capital flow and labor mobility, leading to improved products and services. However, the growing interdependence has also propelled an inherent reliance on joint cooperation which has considerably influenced the complexity of global value chains (GVCs). This plays a significant role in policy decisions, raising questions about trade risks that originate from such interdependence. In this paper, we study the impact of network linkage disturbances on the output supply and input demand of countries. We model the network interconnectedness of countries according to the latest 2016 release of the World Input–Output Database (WIOD) that includes data tables for the period 2000-2014 covering 43 countries as well as a model for the Rest of the World (ROW). We assess the shock distributions across the world economy by quantifying the changes in the network linkages using sensitivity analysis. Our contribution is in the definition of a shock tensor with the purpose of evaluating the impact of link sensitivity. The shock tensor is a straightforward yet comprehensive tool that allows us to obtain ample results at various levels of granularity when combining it with aggregation operators. Our study introduces a novel methodology that enables us to acquire input and output link sensitivities for all country pairings when an economic shock initiates or concludes within a country of interest. This innovative approach also facilitates the analysis of evolving trends in these link sensitivities, providing a comprehensive understanding of the dynamics of shock propagation across the global network. Taking advantage of the time-series nature of the WIOD, our results reveal illustrative visualizations and quantative measures that characterize patterns of shock distribution and relationships among countries throughout the period from 2000 to 2014. Our methodology and results not only uncover valuable trends but also establish a structured approach to better understand the aggregate effects of shock distributions. Thus, this study could be helpful for policy makers to assess trade relationships between countries and obtain quantitative insights for making informed decisions as well as explore the overall state of the globalization as a whole.

Introduction

Sensitivity analysis of a country Input-Output (IO) models has a long history and has been proceeded along three paths. The first path considers the extent to which errors interact through matrix inversion to bias the results and here we mention some results in this direction: Simonovitz [1] discusses underestimation and overestimation of the Leontief Inverse, while Lahiri and Satchel [2] derive necessary and sufficient conditions for the over- and underestimation of inverse elements, assuming that prices are the source of the stochastic errors. The second path builds on the results of Sherman and Morrison [3] who traced the effects of a discrete change in a single technical coefficient. The third path explores the feasibility of using Monte Carlo simulation to study stochastic error propagation through IO models, which has been pioneered by Clark W. Bullard and Anthony V. Sebald in a series of papers, see, for example [4, 5].

As an essential factor for growth across the world, globalization has not only helped industrialized countries to expand their exports but also provided opportunities to developing nations to diversify their economies [6]. This widespread and ongoing economic growth due to globalization has been accompanied by the rise of international competition, reshaping global production, trade and organization of industries [7, 8]. The competition landscape has been profoundly changed as a consequence of the liberalization and deregulation of international trade and investments as well as the development and wide adoption of information and communication technologies (ICT); such competitive circumstances led to sophisticated patterns of globally distributed economic activity [9]. Enabled by technological advancements, the global economic activity and production processes have naturally become more geographically fragmented which has resulted in the emergence of global value chains (GVCs). On the other hand, increased trade has been fostered by the involvement of more industries and countries in the value chains as well as the distribution of goods creation throughout different parts of the world [10]. To put it another way, just as globalization has changed the essence and scope of international competition, the competitive environment has become the driver for intensified trade which exhibits global expansion, fragmentation and structural complexity.

The study in [7] points out that “international competition is best understood by looking at the global organization of industries and how countries rise and fall within these industries”. Understanding how global industries organize and reconfigure is in the main focus of the GVC research; the GVC framework focuses on value creation and capture across diverse activities and products (goods and services) while emphasizing expansion and fragmentation of production networks [7]. Going through different phases of production, from supply of raw materials through assembly of goods to their delivery and consumption, trade dynamics among countries and industries within GVCs can be inherently modeled as networks thereby illustrating that the global economy is increasingly integrated, interdependent and specialized [11]. Major international organizations like the World Bank, the World Trade Organization, the International Labor Organization, and the U.S. Agency for International Development have utilized GVCs in their research and policy development [7].

With the widespread interconnectedness of the global economy, it becomes increasingly important to study the impact of demand and supply shocks and especially their propagation throughout the network. Shocks can negatively affect both suppliers and consumers: production declines or collapse of demand are an equal threat to supply-chain continuity and sustainability. Reference [11] draws attention that “trade openness is a double-edged sword” as it can insulate economies against domestic and regional shocks but can also leave them vulnerable by increasing the susceptibility to external shocks. From estimating supply or demand slowdown to assessing recovery capabilities, researchers and policy makers are interested in developing risk assessment strategies to analyze and mitigate the adverse consequences of supply chain disruptions. However, while the yearly trade volume among countries and industries has been known and well documented using various databases, there is yet work to be done in the literature to examine models that measure shock propagation from a sensitivity perspective, i.e. the extent to which shocks originating from a country or industry affect other countries or industries.

Sensitivity analysis of World-Input-Output models and/or multi-regional input–output (MRIO) models has also recently attracted great deal of interest due to the emergence of GVCs. To assess the impact of shocks in a world of global value chains, several models and approaches have been developed. Here we mention several, thus, for example, Caliendo and Parro [12] build a Ricardian model with sectoral linkages and trade in intermediate goods to quantify the welfare effects from tariff changes, while [13] offers a structural gravity approach to quantify output and welfare effects. The paper [14] uses the sectoral World Input–Output Database (WIOD) to evaluate the impact in terms of value added and employment of different scenarios of Brexit for 56 industries in the 27 Member States of the European Union, as well as the United Kingdom. Gerschel, Martinez & Mejean, [15] employ the WIOD dataset to measure the share of a particular sector in a particular country as a source in the gross output of a particular sector of a given country. Using the Leontief inverse matrix, the authors measure how the gross output of each sector from each country is exposed to shocks affecting China, both directly and indirectly. Using the World Input-Output Database (WIOD), Mandel and Veetil [16] study the effects of national lockdowns on global GDP in a non-equilibrium framework. Pichler and Farmer [17] combine WIOD framework and the approach of del Rio-Chanona et al. [18] to compute supply shocks for every industry during a lockdown of Covid-19 in Germany, Italy, and Spain.

This paper builds on the prior research in [19] where discrete-time absorbing Markov chains are proposed to model the structure and interdependence among country-industry pairs of the world economy. Several novel properties are designed based on the discrete-time absorbing Markov chains approach with the aim of evaluating the volatility and risk when shaping production chain lengths. In addition, the study shows that the input and output chains exhibit exactly the same quasi-stationary product distribution, meaning that the time spent in a state before absorption is invariant to the changes of the network type [19]. The paper also suggests several global metrics, including the probability distribution of global value added/final output, provide guidance for policy makers when estimating the resilience of world trading system and forecasting the macroeconomic developments. Most macroeconomic models typically derive from the Leontief’s classical work on input-output tables that characterize global production networks [20]. They are characterized with multi-regional input–output (MRIO) models and there are several independently constructed global MRIO databases such as the WIOD used in this paper in combination with numerical computations [21]. While the production network can be observed as a medium for propagating shocks throughout the economy, the risks of substantial aggregate fluctuations due to shocks is abandoned in the literature due to the “diversification argument” [19, 22]. The ‘diversification argument’ posits that within an economy comprised of n industries experiencing independent shocks, the magnitude of aggregate fluctuations would roughly scale inversely with the square root of n. This suggests that when examining highly detailed or disaggregated levels of the economy, individual shocks tend to have relatively minor effects on overall fluctuations. However, the diversification argument has several limiting assumptions such as the independence of shocks and industry homogeneity. Notably, it also takes no account of linkages between industries that can also serve as a channel for shock propagation through the network [2328].

In this paper, we tackle that gap in the literature by exploring the influence of linkages between countries and industries on sensitivity of shock propagation. For that purpose, we model the network interconnectedness of countries based on the 2016 release of the World Input–Output Database (WIOD). The WIOD contains data for the period 2000–2014 and includes 43 countries as well as a model for the Rest of the World (ROW). We examine the characteristics of the network vis-à-vis the propagation of shocks in the world economy. To assess the impact of shock distributions, we focus on the changes in the network linkages using sensitivity analysis. We define a shock tensor with the purpose of evaluating the impact of link sensitivity. Using the time-series WIOD data in combination with the shock tensor, we obtain results and visualizations that reveal patterns of shock distribution and relationships among countries throughout the period from 2000 to 2014. The results show trends about the aggregate effects of shock distributions which could be helpful to policy makers in assessing risks arising from country or industry interdependence and trade relationships.

The rest of the paper is organized as follows. The section on “Materials and Methods” describes the data organization and network aggregation aspects, introducing preliminaries that serve as a foundation for the remainder of the study. This section also outlines the theoretical model underlying our analysis of network linkage disturbances and introduces the shock tensor including means for its calculation. For completeness purposes, detailed proofs of the theorems are given in the appendices. The section on “Results and Discussion” intertwines ample visualization diagrams with a discussion on sensitivity-wise findings obtained by different aggregations of the shock tensor. The last section “Conclusion” presents concluding remarks of the research.

Materials and methods

Data

World Input-Output Database

The World Input-Output Database (WIOD) [21] contains annual time-series of World Input-Output Tables (WIOT) describing the trade relationships (sales and purchases) between producers and consumers both within an individual economy (country) as well as between different economies as expressed by their respective bilateral trade data. The latest 2016 release of the WIOD, which we will use within this work, incorporates a total of 43 economies, including 28 EU member states (as of 2014) and 15 other major economies, accounting for more than 85% of the world GDP. Furthermore, it includes a residual region with data about the remaining countries of the global economy, named as Rest of World and abbreviated as “ROW”. Spanning a 15-year period, from 2000 to 2014, the WIOD classifies trade data into 56 sectors (industries) according to the International Standard Industrial Classification Revision 4 (ISIC Rev. 4) which is the United Nation’s international reference classification of productive activities.

Total Economy Database

To calculate the Hicks-neutral productivity shocks we use the April, 2022 release of the Conference Board Total Economy Database™ [29]. We start with a baseline of 100 for each country for the year 1990. Then, using the Total Factor Productivity data we calculate the productivity shocks throughout time for each country. These values are then logarithmically transformed, standardized to a unit variance and normalized to a sum of one due to the model specifications outlined below.

Data organization

A tensor is a multidimensional object which is a generalized version of a vector. The dimensionality of this object is called the order of the tensor. Within the paper we will use different symbols to indicate the order of the tensor. As such, scalars (tensors of order zero) are illustrated by lowercase or uppercase letters, e.g. x or X, while vectors (tensors of order one) will be denoted by a boldface lowercase letters, e.g., x. Matrices (tensors of order two) will be denoted by a boldface uppercase letter, e.g., X. Tensors of a higher order will be symbolized by a math calligraphy letter, e.g. X.

The information within the WIOT is organized as the following two tensors: a 4-order tensor ZRJ×J×S×S, and a 3-order tensor FRJ×J×S where J and S denote the number of countries and industries, respectively. The entries of Z describe the intermediate purchases (input flows) zijrs by industry s in country j from sector r in country i. The entries fijr denote the final use in each country j of output originating from sector r in country i.

Given the tensors Z and F, we can calculate the matrices F, X and B as follows:

fir=j=1Jfijr, (1)
xir=s=1Sj=1Jzijrs+fir, (2)
βir=firi,rfir (3)

where the element fir stands for the value of output from sector r in country i intended for final consumers worldwide, xir represents the value of gross output originating from sector r in country i and βir represents the weight of the good produced by the country-industry pair (i, r) calculated by normalizing fi^r.

World-input network

We can now define the World-input network, which is represented by the (J × S) × (J × S) adjacency matrix A(1)=[ai^j^(1)] where i^ and j^ represent industry pairs (i, r) and (j, s) respectively, such that ai^j^(1)=zijrs/xjs. In this network, the country-industry pair (i, r) sells intermediate inputs to other country-industry pairs (j, s)’s in the world economy. From the World-input network, we can further define aggregations. In the Country World-input network we sum over the sectors resulting in the J × J adjacency matrix which reads:

aij(2)=r,szijrssxjs (4)

Equivalently, in the Sector World-input network we sum over the countries resulting in the S × S adjacency matrix which reads:

ars(3)=i,jzijrssxjs (5)

Within this paper we work with the Country world-input network A(2), however the introduced methodology stands for all three variations of the World-input network and will be explored upon in future work.

Theoretical model

Let A = [aij] be either A(1), A(2), or A(3) matrix. We assume that i, j = 1, …, n, aij ≥ 0 and ∑j aij < 1, so that the largest eigenvalue of A is positive and less than 1.

Remarks and assumptions

The model we consider in this study is detailed mathematically in S1 Appendix and assumes the following three assumptions: (i) Cobb-Douglas preferences and technologies, (ii) a single factor (labor) of production, and (iii) constant returns to scale. These assumptions imply that the graph G represents a world-input network and that the productivity shocks propagate “downstream” from one industry to its customers, its customers’ customers, and so on.

Aggregate effects of network linkage disturbances

Our analysis focuses on the macroeconomic impact of the network linkage disturbances by examining the relationship between the changes of the aggregate output and the changes of network linkages. Assuming that aij are endogenous variables, we analyse the impact of a change in the network linkage aij on the Leontief-inverse matrix L = (IA)−1 [3032]. The analysis adequately answers certain counterfactual questions about the network linkages in our model. The change in the outcome X, in response to a change in a parameter θ (network linkage), can be approached via a quantity called sensitivity defined as dXdθ or a quantity called elasticity defined as dlogXdlogθ. In the case of network linkages, it is more reasonable to use, due to the fact that we are measuring the absolute change in the Leontief-inverse matrix instead of measuring a proportional change which is more suited for a elasticity analysis. The vec operator transforms an n × n matrix A into an n2-dimensional vector: vec A = [a11, a21, …, an1, a12, a22, …, ann]T. Let x and y be n × 1 vectors. The derivative of y with respect to x is defined to be the n × n matrix whose (i, j) entry is derivative of yi with respect to xj. The derivative of the n × n matrix Y with respect to the n × n matrix X is the n2 × n2 matrix defined as follows:

dvecYd(vecX)T

Theorem 1 Let L = [ij]. (i) The derivative of the Leontief-inverse matrix L with respect to the scalar aij is an n × n matrix:

LijdLdaij=[jpqi], (6)

where i, j are fixed and p, q = 1, …, n.

(ii) The derivative of the Leontief-inverse matrix L with respect to the matrix A is an n2 × n2 matrix:

dLdA=[11112121n1nn12112221n2nn1nn12nn1nnnn] (7)

Shock tensor

The celebrated theorem of [33] states that for efficient economies and under minimal assumptions, the first-order macroeconomic impact of microeconomic shocks is given by (see, for example, [25]):

dlogYdlogζi=λi (8)

where Y is the equilibrium aggregate output, ζi is Hicks-neutral technology, and λi is Domar weight. We consider the model suggested in [23] (see also S1 Appendix), for which it follows that:

log(GWP)=i=1nεiλi (9)
=i=1nεij=1nijβj (10)

where GWP is the Gross World Product as defined in [23], εi = log Ai and ij is the (i, j) entry of the Leontief-inverse matrix, L = (IA)−1 ≡ [ij], while βi ∈ (0, 1) designates the weight of the good i (produced by country-industry pair i) in the representative household’s preferences (with the normalization ∑iβi = 1). Eq (9) shows that in a competitive world economy with constant returns to scale technologies, the world aggregate output is a linear combination of country-industry level productivity shocks, with coefficients λi given by Domar weights. Moreover, as per Eq (10), the Domar weight of each country-industry pair i depends only on the preference shares, β1, …, βn, and the corresponding column of the world-economy’s Leontief-inverse matrix.

For a fixed pair (u, v), let Δauv be the disturbance of the (u, v) entry of the matrix A. This disturbance generates a change in the GWP which we assume can be written as

GWPnew=puvGWP

where puv is a multiplier of the GWP; puv can be expressed as a product of the multipliers pijuv for each link (i, j), that is:

puv=i,jpijuv (11)

Assuming no changes in εi and βj, by combining Eqs (9), (10) and (11), it is easy to verify that:

log(GWPnew)=i=1nεij=1n(ij+Δijuv)βj (12)

where Δijuv given as:

Δijuv=logpijuvβjεi (13)

We then define a tensor PRJ×J×J×J, which will be called shock tensor, as follows:

P=[pijuv] (14)

The next theorem shows the effect of the disturbance Δauv on the GWP (or GDP).

Theorem 2 The tensor P can be computed as

P=[vijuΔauvβjεi], (15)

where u and v denote the indices on the U an V axes where the disturbance originates from, while i and j denote the indices on the I and J axes which consume that disturbance.

Model implementation

We implemented the model in Python 3.9 and the implementation code and user guidelines can be found at the corresponding GitHub repository (github.com/ViktorDomazetoski/Sensitivity-Analysis-of-Shock-Distributions). The code can be used to analyze the data in more detail, such as to explore the sensitivity matrices of different countries or the trends between country-country link sensitivity. The ΔA matrix was calculated as a constant increase of 0.01 in each link auv. We focused on six economies of interest: China, USA, Germany, Russia, Japan, Rest of World with a focus on the changes between the years 2000 and 2014.

Results and discussion

The shock tensor P shown on Fig 1 allows us to analyze several results depending on the level of detail we are interested in. It should be noted that the values of all heatmap visualizations in the paper are transformed twice logarithmically to further see the details of the matrices which are otherwise dominated by a few extremely large values and that the same color scale is used within each figure to allow for a temporal comparison of the results.

Fig 1. Heatmap visualization of the shock tensor P for the years 2000 (A) and 2014 (B).

Fig 1

Each column of the matrix represents a derivative of the corresponding link of the Leontief matrix.

We define two operations to achieve the tensor representation of the shock tensor P. The first operation is introduced using the aggregation operator (:) which represents a cumulative operation along the specified axis such as the calculation of the mean or sum of the elements on that axis. In our study, unless specified otherwise, the aggregation operator uses the geometric mean operation due to the nature of the shock tensor P which is defined as a multiplicative change in Gross World Product (GWP). An example of using this operator is P:::: which represents a geometric mean across all four axes of the shock tensor. Applying such an operator allows us to get a (1 × 1) index which can be analyzed throughout time to uncover any temporal trends in the sensitivity of the World Input Output Network. The second operation consists of fixing the value of a specific index, e.g. i to a value i^. An example result of this operation is Piju^v^ meaning that we set the indices of the network disturbance to specific values. For example, if we set u^=DEU and v^=USA to represent the disturbance in the country link between Germany (Input) and USA (Output), that will result in a J × J matrix showing the effect of this disturbance on every other pair of countries within the network.

In the following sections, we will show and analyze various results that can be obtained from the shock tensor P by applying these two operators.

Disturbance start matrix sensitivity P::uv

Aggregation on the I and J axis of the P tensor, denoted as P::uv, allows us to get an understanding about the sensitivity of each link. With this approach, if a specific link with indices u and v exhibits a change, we can quantify the impact of that change on the overall world economy. The aggregation P::uv can be calculated as follows:

P::uv=[i,jpijuvJ2] (16)

and results in an J × J matrix shown in Fig 2. The matrix is characterized by row-wise and column-wise patterns. The darker color visualize lower impact (i.e. lower aggregation) while the brighter colors visualize higher impact (i.e. higher aggregation). The highest values in 2000 can be noticed in the links USA-USA and ROW-USA, while the highest values in 2014 can be noticed in the links China-China and ROW-China. We can see an overall increase in the mean sensitivity and heterogeneity in the matrix between 2000 and 2014 with a few exceptions such as Japan.

Fig 2. Heatmap visualization of the P::uv shock tensor aggregation for the years 2000 (A) and 2014 (B).

Fig 2

This matrix allows us to understand the contribution of changes in individual links on the entire world economy.

Disturbance end matrix sensitivity Pij::

Aggregation on the U and V axis of the P tensor, denoted as Pij::, provides us with another approach to analyzing the world economy from a sensitivity perspective. Unlike P::uv which focuses on understanding the contribution of changes in individual links on the world economy, Pij:: is focused in the opposite direction. In particular, Pij:: is helpful in understanding how much an average change in the overall economy will impact a specific link with indices i and j. The aggregation Pij:: can be calculated as follows:

Pij::=[u,vpijuvJ2] (17)

and results in an J × J matrix shown in Fig 3. Here we can see that most of the heterogeneity is column-wise, denoting that countries are the output in the network.

Fig 3. Heatmap visualization of the Pij:: shock tensor aggregation for the years 2000 (A) and 2014 (B).

Fig 3

This matrix allows us to understand how an average change in the world economy impacts individual links.

Disturbance end fixed matrix sensitivity Piju^v^

If we fix the starting values of the disturbance u and v, we will get a resulting matrix that shows how that disturbance will affect the entire economy. Here we are interested in the links where the input and output correspond to the same country which can be obtained u = v. We look into several countries such as China, Germany, Japan, Russia and USA as well as the ROW region for the year 2014 and then visualize how the shock propagates in Fig 4. On Fig 4, we can see that for Germany and ROW the shock is propagated more considerably throughout the network when compared with Russia and Japan where the shock is concentrated around the originating country. To quantify this, we can calculate the percentage of the shock contained within a subset of the matrix by normalizing log(piju^v^) by the sum of the matrix. We do this calculation for the sensitivity within the country puuu^u^), where the country acts as an exporter puju^u^) for j in 1, …, n and ju, where the country acts as an importer piuu^u^) for i in 1, …, n and iu. Additionally, we look at top 10 and 22 upper left values of the matrices shown in Fig 4. The results are presented in Table 1. Now we can further see how 62.3% of the shock which originates within Japan ends in Japan, while this is at 26.4% and 32.6% for ROW and Germany. If we look at the input percentages, we see how much of the shock flows into countries which import from the fixed country, with Russia’s trade partners being the most affected. Similarly, the output percentages show what percentage of the shock is distributed to countries which act as exporters in the scenario. These values are much higher than the input sensitivities across all countries, with highest values for the Rest of World Model. The top 10 and 22 percentages show us the overall distribution of the shock. Again, Japan and Russia contain 91.8% (96.2%) and 85.0% (94.1%) for the top 10 (top 22) percentages, showing a less global impact on the economy, while for ROW these values are 55.2% (77.5%) which means the disturbance would be more distributed across the entire matrix.

Fig 4. Heatmap visualization of Piju^v^ obtained with u^=v^ for China (A), Germany (B), Japan (C), Russia (D), USA (E) and ROW (F) for 2014.

Fig 4

The visualization presents how the shock originating within the mentioned countries propagates across the world economy.

Table 1. Distribution of sensitivity shocks originating in within a country.

We quantify how big of a percentage of the shock propagates within the country, in the top 10 trading partners and in the top half of the countries.

Country Within % Input % Output % Top 10% Top 22%
CHN 56.1 3.4 38.2 76.4 87.6
DEU 32.6 9.4 45.0 70.0 88.2
RUS 48.9 19.5 22.6 85.0 94.1
JPN 62.3 17.5 15.8 91.8 96.2
USA 48.3 1.5 48.8 81.0 90.7
ROW 26.4 3.4 62.1 55.2 77.5

For USA and China, the shock is mainly concentrated around the originating country, making these two countries similar to Russia and Japan in that regard. However, some parts of the network for USA and China (i.e. the countries denoted with lighter colors in the column-wise patterns) seem to be moderately affected by the shock propagation even though the network-wide impact is not as emphasized as in the case of Germany and ROW; similarly, other parts of the network (i.e. countries with darker colors) are rather isolated from the shock even though the isolation is not as strong as in the case of Russia and Japan.

Piju^v^=[piju^v^] (18)

Disturbance start input P::u: & output P:::v sensitivity

We can further aggregate the sensitivities of each link in P::uv to obtain higher level metrics. Two options for aggregation are available in this regard. Through the aggregation along the V axis, we can get the average input sensitivity P::u: (as an exporter) of each economy u. On the other hand, by aggregating on the column along the U axis, we can get the average output sensitivity P:::v (as an importer) of economy v. The aggregations P::u: and P:::v can be calculated as follows:

P::u:=[vi,jpijuvJ3]P:::v=[ui,jpijuvJ3] (19)

This results in two indices for each economy for each year, as shown in Figs 57. Out of the analyzed countries in the dataset, we can see that ROW, China, Germany, USA and Russia exhibit the largest overall impact in terms of input sensitivity. Similarly, USA, China and ROW exhibit dominant impact in terms of output sensitivity as can be noticed on Fig 2 as well. Furthermore, on Fig 5, we can see the dominance of USA’s output sensitivity in 2000 which gradually decreases over the subsequent years until 2014. On the other hand, China’s output sensitivity steadily increased from being near the average in 2000 (when it coincided with Germany’s sensitivity) to even overtaking the USA in 2014 (Fig 6). Additionally, we can see a decrease in input sensitivity from 2008 to 2009 across all countries, likely due to outburst of the global financial crisis in 2008. Although we are focusing on 6 countries of interest within the paper, on Fig 7 we can see how the input and output sensitivity rankings for all countries in the WIOD dataset change through time.

Fig 5. Shock tensor aggregation P::u: (blue) and P:::v (green) for the years 2000 (A) and 2014 (B).

Fig 5

The visualization shows us the average impact of the shock which originates in a country as an exporter (blue) and importer (green).

Fig 7. Rankings of the shock tensor aggregation P::u: and P:::v over the period between 2000 and 2014.

Fig 7

The visualization shows us the how the rankings of the disturbance start sensitivity change through time.

Fig 6. Shock tensor aggregation P::u: and P:::v for the countries China, Germany, Japan, Russia and USA as well as ROW over the period between 2000 and 2014.

Fig 6

The world average is represented in brown, with every other country shown in gray. The visualization shows us the time series of the average sensitivity where the originating country of the shock is the exporter (A) and importer (B).

Disturbance end input Pi::: & output P:j:: sensitivities

Similarly, we can aggregate the sensitivities of each link across the U and V to Pij:: to obtain higher level metrics. By taking the geometric mean of the row J, we can get the average input volatility Pi::: (as an exporter) of each economy. Similarly, by aggregating on the column I, we can get the average output volatility P:j:: (as an importer) of a selected economy. The aggregations Pi::: and P:j:: can be calculated as follows:

Pi:::=[ju,vpijuvJ3]P:j::=[iu,vpijuvJ3] (20)

This results in two indices for each economy for each year, as shown in Figs 810. The input volatility is noticeably more balanced across the countries compared to output volatility, however, for most countries, the average volatility as an exporter is much higher than the volatility as an importer (Fig 8). Interestingly, here China has the largest input volatility throughout the entire time period. The USA starts with the largest output sensitivity by far, however, it has a significant drop over the fourteen-year period and is overtaken by the ROW and China economies which unlike most countries achieve a significant growth (Fig 9). Finally, on Fig 10 we can see the input and output sensitivity rankings for all countries in the WIOD dataset change through time. While the input volatility show a high instability through time, this is most likely due to the minute difference within the input sensitivities discussed about previously. On the other hand, output volatility show the least changes through time, with a few exceptions such as the rise in the output volatility ranking of Russia.

Fig 8. Shock tensor aggregation Pi::: (blue) and P:j:: (green) for the years 2000 (A) and 2014 (B).

Fig 8

The visualization shows us the average impact of the shock which finished in a country as an exporter (blue) and importer (green).

Fig 10. Rankings of the shock tensor aggregation Pi::: and P:j:: over the period between 2000 and 2014.

Fig 10

The visualization shows us the how the rankings of the disturbance end sensitivity change through time.

Fig 9. Shock tensor aggregation Pi::: and P:j:: for the countries China, Germany, Japan, Russia and USA as well as ROW over the period between 2000 and 2014.

Fig 9

The world average is represented in brown, with every other country shown in gray. The visualization shows us the time series of the average sensitivity where the consuming country of the shock is the exporter (A) and importer (B).

Disturbance end fixed input Pi:u^v^ & output P:ju^v^ sensitivity

The matrix Piju^v^ can be further aggregated to the input and output level, resulting in the operators Pi:u^v^ and P:ju^v^ respectively. These two aggregations can be calculated as follows:

Pi:u^v^=[jpiju^v^J]P:ju^v^=[ipiju^v^J] (21)

The results are shown on Fig 11 for the years of 2000 and 2014.

Fig 11. Shock tensor aggregation for Pi:u^v^ (top row) and P:ju^v^ (bottom row) for the years of 2000 (left column) and 2014 (right column) for China, Germany, Russia, Japan, USA and ROW.

Fig 11

The visualization presents how the shock originating within the mentioned countries as propagates across the world economy.

Overall sensitivity P::::

The aggregation to the highest level of detail is the one mentioned above where a geometric mean is taken along all axes of the tensor. This aggregation can be calculated as follows:

P::::=[i,vu,vpijuvJ4] (22)

resulting in an index for each year which as shown on Fig 12. We similarly calculate the aggregation of the tensor Z where we take the arithmetic mean along all axes resulting in an overall index for input flows over time Z::::. While the graphs of the two functions are overall similar, including the considerable downturn in 2008, there are also differences that can be noticed. For example, the first difference is hat Z:::: is higher than P:::: at the beginning of the century but decreases in 2000–2003 whereas P:::: increases slowly on the same period. Z:::: becomes higher than P:::: in 2003 when P:::: reaches its lowest value in the analyzed period 2000–2014. The second difference can be evidenced towards the end of the time period. While both functions are increasing throughout 2000–2014, it can be seen that they have different slopes towards the end of the period; Z:::: grows slower than P:::: in 2011–2014, and their values ultimately coincide in 2014. Over the periods 2003–2007 and 2009–2011 the slopes of the functions are comparable.

Fig 12. Shock tensor aggregation P:::: (brown), which shows the overall sensitivity of the world-input network, and Z:::: (teal), which shows the overall trade of the world-input network, in the period from 2000 to 2014.

Fig 12

Conclusion

We study shock distributions in the world economy by quantifying the changes in network linkages using sensitivity analysis. We model the world economy as an interconnected network according to the recent 2016 release of the World Input-Output Database (WIOD). Following this model, we define a shock tensor with the aim of evaluating the impact of link sensitivity on the shock intensity and propagation through the network. We show that the shock tensor can be used to aggregate trade data at various levels of granularity. This leads to illustrative visualization results that reveal patterns of shock distributions and relationships among different countries. The results could be helpful to policy makers when analyzing trade relationships between countries, assessing risks and making informed decisions.

Supporting information

S1 Appendix. Theoretical model.

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S2 Appendix. Proof of the theorems.

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Data Availability

All Data are from a third party. World Input-Output Data is available from the 2016 release of the World-Input-Output Database (https://www.rug.nl/ggdc/valuechain/wiod/wiod-2016-release). Total factor productivity data is available from the April, 2022 release of the Conference Board Total Economy Database™ (https://www.conference-board.org/data/economydatabase/total-economy-database-productivity).

Funding Statement

The authors received no specific funding for this work.

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In the context of a globalized and highly interconnected world economy, the authors explore the impact of shocks in global value chain networks on countries’ output supply and input demand. They aim to provide a new tool to assess the distribution of these impacts between countries. They model countries’ interconnectedness through a discrete-time absorbing Markov chain – for which the model is developed in a previous paper (Kostoka et al., 2020). The contribution of the present paper is to add a shock tensor to this model. This allows the authors to derive patterns of global shock distribution, which are quantified through the use of the University of Groeningen’s World Input-Output Database (WIOD). While the data is not submitted directly in the manuscript, it is publicly available for download.

The authors present an interesting analysis of the distribution of these shocks. The model is presented in a clear and concise manner and seems appropriate for GVC analysis. However, it is not clear what the authors want to highlight as their contribution in this paper. There appear to be two options here: either the contribution is methodological, or it is empirical.

If the contribution is purely methodological, then there needs to be more work done to show the advantages of their model compared to existing literature on this topic and other approaches – including compared to their own previous work (Kostoka et al., 2020). The results should then be oriented to highlight the advantages of this methodology.

If the contribution is empirical, then the results need to be interpreted a lot more and policy implications need to be drawn. In this case, it would be very helpful to use a case study of a particular country or to explore one particular industry and to answer one or two topical questions. E.g.: What kinds of repercussions would a shock in China’s textile industry have on GVCs ?

Aside from this, there are several major comments that need to be addressed before the paper can be published. These are detailed below. Minor comments are also suggested, along with a list of small language/typing corrections.

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1. The contextualization for the paper that is given in the introduction needs to be strengthened. Some elements that might make your argument stronger:

- Your literature review needs to be developed more. Currently, you just list the papers that are in the literature on shock propagation, without really going into the contributions of different authors/strands of the literature. This makes it hard to understand exactly where your paper is positioned with regards to the rest of the literature on GVCs.

- Additionally, you say (p.2, l.44-47) that “there is yet work to be done in the literature to examine … the extent to which shocks originating from a country or industry affect other countries or industries”. Said in this way, it seems to the reader that there is no literature studying the impact of shocks on GVCs. However, there is a large literature on this topic – although the methodologies that are used may differ from the one used in this paper. See for instance Wenz & Willner (2022), Climate impacts and global supply chains: an overview, a chapter in a handbook which discusses the literature on these shocks in the context of climate impacts; Qin et al. (2020) Covid-19 Shock and Global Value Chains: Is there a substitution for China? and Gershel et al. (2020) Propagation of shocks in the global value chains: the coronavirus case. that study GVC shock propagation in the case of the COVID crisis, … These are just examples, but it would be necessary to give an overview of what has been done before to study GVC shock propagation.

- When you state “Most macroeconomic models typically derive from the Leontief’s classical work on input-output tables that characterize global production networks”, you should cite some of the most important papers that have actually done this, or a literature review on this topic to support your statement.

- The “diversification argument” is just mentioned but not explained at all. However, it seems that it is an important concept to justify your research, since you state in the paragraph right after its mention that you aim to tackle the limitations of this argument (namely linkages between industries as propagation channels). Given its apparent importance, you should define this argument, provide some background literature on it and explain its limitations in more detail (+ maybe cite other authors that have worked on these limitations).

2. The policy relevance of your results is also not clear. You simply write “The results show trends about the aggregate effects of shock distributions which could be helpful to policy makers in assessing risks arising from country or industry interdependence and trade relationships” but this is quite vague and does not explain how your methodology specifically provides insights that would be useful – especially in contrast with other types of studies.

3. Your results are presented in a way that makes it unclear what exactly you want to highlight. There is almost no interpretation of the results you present, or policy implications that are derived. For example, you say for figure 2 that “The highest values in 2000 can be noticed in the links USA-USA and ROW-USA, while the highest values in 2014 can be noticed in the links China- China and ROW-China.” What does this imply for these countries? What are the risks? What kinds of policies should policymakers be thinking about applying as a response?

The same comment goes for all the figures that are presented in the results section – while they are sometimes described, they are not interpreted. This would go a long way to help the reader understand the importance of your results. Additionally, it might be interesting to take a particular case / example to illustrate how your results can be interpreted. For instance, take one of the countries you are studying and identify which of its sectors are the most sensitive to shocks from which countries – then derive policy implications for policymakers in this country.

+ the inter-country heterogeneity in your results is interesting– can you interpret it more? What does it say about the vulnerability of different countries?

+ the fact that there are differences in the impact of a shock for a country if it is an importer in the GVC and if it is an exporter is also an interesting result that is not commented at all. It is especially visible in figures 5 and 8.

4. In your description of figure 4, you state that “for Germany and ROW the shock is propagated more considerably throughout the network when compared with Russia and Japan where the shock is concentrated around the originating country”. However, this is really not clear in the figures your present. While the ROW figure does seem lighter than the others, the figure for Germany is not that much lighter than Russia for instance. If you really want to make that comparison, would it be possible to add the interpretation of quantitative results? Rather than purely basing your analysis on a visual interpretation of the color scheme, where the differences are not very pronounced.

5. There is a problem in figure 5. In your description of the figure, you state that “China’s output sensitivity steadily increased from being near the average in 2000 … to even overtaking the USA in 2014” � looking at the right-hand-side of figure 5, this is not what is shown. Indeed, your graph shows that Switzerland overtakes the USA in 2014, not China. This looks like it might just be a discrepancy in the axes and the labels of the graphs.

6. Figure 7 is not commented at all.

7. In the appendix, you could add more details to the steps described to derive your model.

8. Your references in the appendix are not correctly formatted (there are “?” in lieu of all references).

MINOR COMMENTS

1. The introduction begins with and is substantially (about a third of it) devoted to a discussion on the links between competition, globalization, and international trade dynamics. However, the competition aspects of globalization are not really addressed anywhere in the rest of the paper. It might be better to refocus the introduction on the risks of globalization – i.e., the heart of the model & results. Giving example of these risks would also be beneficial (the COVID crisis is a very obvious one).

2. You can shorten your description of the WIOD by only retaining the main elements that are useful for your model/analysis. Interested readers can refer back to the database’s documentation to get more information if needed.

3. You don’t describe the second database you use in your “Data” section – the Total Factor Productivity data from the Conference Board Total Economy Database.

4. You could explain why you work specifically within the country world-input network, rather than the other 2 possible variations. You choose this variation in particular without really detailing why it is more relevant than the others.

5. A(1) is not defined in your main paper - you only define A(2) and A(3) explicitly.

6. You don’t explain why it is “more reasonable” to use sensitivity as an indicator rather than elasticity in the case of network linkages. Is this something that is standard in the literature? What are the advantages?

7. You don’t provide any preview of your qualitative results in the introduction (or in the abstract). You should add highlights of the elements that are most significant and how they relate to existing literature (are they surprising? standard?).

8. In your comments on figure 12, you note that there is a “considerable downturn in 2008” but don’t try to explain this. It seems rather counterintuitive as one could think that during the crisis, countries were even more dependent on GVCs, and therefore more sensitive to shocks from other countries. Additionally, you describe the differences between the Z and P tensors, but do not interpret these differences. What do they tell us about overall risk sensitivity in GVC networks?

LANGUAGE / MISSPELLINGS

1. P.1, l.4: “pervasive” has a strong negative connotation that does not seem appropriate here

2. P.2, l.29: “growingly integrated” is clumsy, you might want to change to “increasingly integrated”

3. P.2 l.29-32: “GVCs have been used … for International Development.” This sentence needs to be rephrased.

4. P. 2, l.37: “draws attention that” words missing

5. P.2, l. 52: “lenghts" is misspelled

6. P.3, l. 106: you use the WIOT abbreviation without having ever defined it (should be at the beginning of that paragraph when you spell out “World Input-Output Tables”

7. P.4, l.111: “use” typed twice

8. P.6, l.174: you used the wrong epsilon symbol

9. P.7, l.203: “the specified axis such the calculation…”: missing “as”

10. P.7, l.214 + p.8, l.223 : “an J x J matrix” - should be “a J x J matrix”

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


2 Oct 2023

Dear editor,

We would like to thank the Reviewer for the very useful comments. We believe that these comments will contribute to the improvement of the overall presentation of our work. We have carefully addressed all the risen points and amended the manuscript accordingly, and believe that the revised version of our manuscript satisfies all criteria for publication in your journal. Please find the reply to the comments below. In the revised version of the paper, deletions are marked in red, and insertions are marked in blue.

Viktor Domazetoski,

on behalf of the authors

Reviewer #1:

1. In the context of a globalized and highly interconnected world economy, the authors explore the impact of shocks in global value chain networks on countries’ output supply and input demand. They aim to provide a new tool to assess the distribution of these impacts between countries. They model countries’ interconnectedness through a discrete-time absorbing Markov chain – for which the model is developed in a previous paper (Kostoka et al., 2020). The contribution of the present paper is to add a shock tensor to this model. This allows the authors to derive patterns of global shock distribution, which are quantified through the use of the University of Groeningen’s World Input-Output Database (WIOD). While the data is not submitted directly in the manuscript, it is publicly available for download.

The authors present an interesting analysis of the distribution of these shocks. The model is presented in a clear and concise manner and seems appropriate for GVC analysis. However, it is not clear what the authors want to highlight as their contribution in this paper. There appear to be two options here: either the contribution is methodological, or it is empirical.

If the contribution is purely methodological, then there needs to be more work done to show the advantages of their model compared to existing literature on this topic and other approaches – including compared to their own previous work (Kostoka et al., 2020). The results should then be oriented to highlight the advantages of this methodology.

If the contribution is empirical, then the results need to be interpreted a lot more and policy implications need to be drawn. In this case, it would be very helpful to use a case study of a particular country or to explore one particular industry and to answer one or two topical questions. E.g.: What kinds of repercussions would a shock in China’s textile industry have on GVCs ?

Aside from this, there are several major comments that need to be addressed before the paper can be published. These are detailed below. Minor comments are also suggested, along with a list of small language/typing corrections.

Answer: The main contribution of the paper is to propose a novel methodology for evaluating shock distributions across the global economy as modeled by the WIOD dataset. The methodology consists of two new theorems. The experimental results are included to show that various insights can be obtained from applying the methodology on the WIOD dataset. To help position our model within the broader literature we added 5 references and the following paragraph in the introduction of the manuscript:

“Sensitivity analysis of a country Input-Output (IO) models has a long history and has been proceeded along three paths. The first path considers the extent to which errors interact through matrix inversion to bias the results and here we mention some results in this direction: Simonovitz (1975) discusses underestimation and overestimation of the Leontief Inverse, while Lahiri and Satchel (1985) derive necessary and sufficient conditions for the over- and underestimation of inverse elements, assuming that prices are the source of the stochastic errors. The second path builds on the results of Sherman and Morrison (1950) who traced the effects of a discrete change in a single technical coefficient. The third path explores the feasibility of using Monte Carlo simulation to study stochastic error propagation through IO models, which has been pioneered by Clark W. Bullard and Anthony V. Sebald in a series of papers, see, for example (Bullard and Sebald, 1977) and (Bullard and Sebald, 1978).”

Simonovits, A., A Note on the Underestimation and Overestimation of the Leontief Inverse, Econometrica 43 (1975) 493-498.

Lahiri, Sajal and Steve Satchell, Underestimation and Overestimation of the Leontief Inverse Revisited, Economics Letters 18 (1985), 181-186.

Sherman, Jack, and Winifred J. Morrison, Adjustment of an Inverse Matrix Corresponding to a Change in One Element of a Given Matrix, Annals of Mathematical Statistics 21 (1950), 124-127.

Bullard, Clark W., and Anthony V. Sebald, Effects of Parametric Uncertainty and Technological Change on Input- Output Models, The Review of Economics and Statistics (1) (1977), 75-81.

Bullard, Clark W., and Anthony V. Sebald, “Monte Carlo Sensitivity Analysis of Input-Output Models”, The Review of Economics and Statistics, Vol. 70, No. 4 (Nov., 1988), pp. 708-712.

While previous work in Kostoska et al. worked with global value chains and used the same data, it utilized discrete-time absorbing Markov chains to measure the positioning of countries and industries in GVC, and didn’t include any sensitivity analysis. To make this information clearer, we expanded on our text in the introduction by adding more information on the Kostoska et al. paper:

“This paper builds on the prior research in [7] where discrete-time absorbing Markov chains are proposed to model the structure and interdependence among country-industry pairs of the world economy. Several novel properties are designed based on the discrete-time absorbing Markov chains approach with the aim of evaluating the volatility and risk when shaping production chain lengths. In addition, the study shows that the input and output chains exhibit exactly the same quasi-stationary product distribution, meaning that the time spent in a state before absorption is invariant to the changes of the network type [7]. The paper also suggests several global metrics, including the probability distribution of global value added/final output, provide guidance for policy makers when estimating the resilience of world trading system and forecasting the macroeconomic developments.”

2. The contextualization for the paper that is given in the introduction needs to be strengthened. Some elements that might make your argument stronger:

- Your literature review needs to be developed more. Currently, you just list the papers that are in the literature on shock propagation, without really going into the contributions of different authors/strands of the literature. This makes it hard to understand exactly where your paper is positioned with regards to the rest of the literature on GVCs.

Answer: “To help position our model within the broader literature we added the following paragraph in the introduction of the manuscript mentioned also in the first answer:

“Sensitivity analysis of a country Input-Output (IO) models has a long history and has been proceeded along three paths. The first path considers the extent to which errors interact through matrix inversion to bias the results and here we mention some results in this direction: Simonovitz (1975) discusses underestimation and overestimation of the Leontief Inverse, while Lahiri and Satchel (1985) derive necessary and sufficient conditions for the over- and underestimation of inverse elements, assuming that prices are the source of the stochastic errors. The second path builds on the results of Sherman and Morrison (1950) who traced the effects of a discrete change in a single technical coefficient. The third path explores the feasibility of using Monte Carlo simulation to study stochastic error propagation through IO models, which has been pioneered by Clark W. Bullard and Anthony V. Sebald in a series of papers, see, for example (Bullard and Sebald, 1977) and (Bullard and Sebald, 1978).”

3. Additionally, you say (p.2, l.44-47) that “there is yet work to be done in the literature to examine … the extent to which shocks originating from a country or industry affect other countries or industries”. Said in this way, it seems to the reader that there is no literature studying the impact of shocks on GVCs. However, there is a large literature on this topic – although the methodologies that are used may differ from the one used in this paper. See for instance Wenz & Willner (2022), Climate impacts and global supply chains: an overview, a chapter in a handbook which discusses the literature on these shocks in the context of climate impacts; Qin et al. (2020) Covid-19 Shock and Global Value Chains: Is there a substitution for China? and Gershel et al. (2020) Propagation of shocks in the global value chains: the coronavirus case. that study GVC shock propagation in the case of the COVID crisis, … These are just examples, but it would be necessary to give an overview of what has been done before to study GVC shock propagation.

Answer: “We apologize on the oversight, we agree with the reviewer that the review of shocks on GVCs was inadequate. To show previous work on how the impact of shocks on GVCs has been studied, we added 7 references the following paragraph in the introduction:

“Sensitivity analysis of World-Input-Output models and/or multi-regional input–output (MRIO)

models has also recently attracted great deal of interest due to the emergence of GVCs. To assess the impact of shocks in a world of global value chains, several models and approaches have been developed. Here we mention several, thus, for example, (Caliendo and Parro, 2014) build a Ricardian model with sectoral linkages and trade in intermediate goods to quantify the welfare effects from tariff changes, while (Anderson et al., 2015) offers a structural gravity approach to quantify output and welfare effects. The paper (Vandenbussche, Connell and Simons, 2020) uses the sectoral World

Input–Output Database (WIOD) to evaluate the impact in terms of value added and employment of different scenarios of Brexit for 56 industries in the 27 Member States of the European Union, as well as the United Kingdom. Gerschel, Martinez & Mejean, (2020) employ WIOD dataset to measure the share of a particular sector in a particular country as a source in the gross output of a particular sector of a given country. Using the Leontief inverse matrix, the authors measure how the gross output of each sector from each country is exposed to shocks affecting China, both directly and indirectly. Using the World Input-Output Database (WIOD), Mandel and Veetil (2020b) study the effects of national lockdowns on global GDP in a non-equilibrium framework. Pichler and Farmer (2022) combine WIOD framework and the approach of del Rio-Chanona et al. (2020) to compute supply shocks for every industry during a lockdown of Covid-19 in Germany, Italy, and Spain.”

Caliendo, L., & Parro, F. (2014). Estimates of the trade and welfare effects of NAFTA. The Review of Economic Studies, 82(1), 1–44. https://doi.org/10.1093/restu d/rdu035

Anderson, J. E., Larch, M., & Yotov, Y. V. (2015). Growth and trade with frictions: A structural estimation framework. Technical report. National Bureau of Economic Research.

Vandenbussche, H., Connell, W., & Simons, W. (2022). Global value chains, trade shocks and jobs: An application to Brexit. The World Economy, 45(8), 2338-2369.

Gerschel, E., Martinez, A., & Mejean, I. (2020). Propagation of shocks in global value chains: the coronavirus case. Notes IPP, (53).

Pichler, A., & Farmer, J. D. (2022). Simultaneous supply and demand constraints in input–output networks: the case of Covid-19 in Germany, Italy, and Spain. Economic Systems Research, 34(3), 273-293.

Mandel A., & Veetil V. P. (2020b). The economic cost of Covid lockdowns: An out-of-equilibrium analysis. Economics of Disasters and Climate Change, 4(3), 431–451. https://doi.org/10.1007/s41 885-020-00066-z

del Rio-Chanona R. M., Mealy P., Pichler A., Lafond F., & Farmer J. D. (2020). Supply and demand shocks in the Covid-19 pandemic: An industry and occupation perspective. Oxford Review of Economic Policy, 36(1), 94–137. https://doi.org/10.1093/oxrep/graa033

4. When you state “Most macroeconomic models typically derive from the Leontief’s classical work on input-output tables that characterize global production networks”, you should cite some of the most important papers that have actually done this, or a literature review on this topic to support your statement.

Answer: To support our statement, we refer to the added paragraph in the introduction section mentioned in the first our answer.

5. The “diversification argument” is just mentioned but not explained at all. However, it seems that it is an important concept to justify your research, since you state in the paragraph right after its mention that you aim to tackle the limitations of this argument (namely linkages between industries as propagation channels). Given its apparent importance, you should define this argument, provide some background literature on it and explain its limitations in more detail (+ maybe cite other authors that have worked on these limitations).

Answer: As per your request, we have added the following additional information on the diversification argument in the introduction:

“…The 'diversification argument' posits that within an economy comprised of n industries experiencing independent shocks, the magnitude of aggregate fluctuations would roughly scale inversely with the square root of n. This suggests that when examining highly detailed or disaggregated levels of the economy, individual shocks tend to have relatively minor effects on overall fluctuations. However, the diversification argument has several limiting assumptions such as the independence of shocks and industry homogeneity. Notably, it also takes no account of linkages between industries that can also serve as a channel for shock propagation through the network.”

6. The policy relevance of your results is also not clear. You simply write “The results show trends about the aggregate effects of shock distributions which could be helpful to policy makers in assessing risks arising from country or industry interdependence and trade relationships” but this is quite vague and does not explain how your methodology specifically provides insights that would be useful – especially in contrast with other types of studies.

Answer: As the paper’s main focus is primarily methodological and not experimental, we mostly stick to a methodological and descriptive interpretation of the results. However, we also release the source code and several illustrative examples so that interested readers can obtain results of their choice that would help them in policy decisions.

7. Your results are presented in a way that makes it unclear what exactly you want to highlight. There is almost no interpretation of the results you present, or policy implications that are derived. For example, you say for figure 2 that “The highest values in 2000 can be noticed in the links USA-USA and ROW-USA, while the highest values in 2014 can be noticed in the links China- China and ROW-China.” What does this imply for these countries? What are the risks? What kinds of policies should policymakers be thinking about applying as a response?

The same comment goes for all the figures that are presented in the results section – while they are sometimes described, they are not interpreted. This would go a long way to help the reader understand the importance of your results. Additionally, it might be interesting to take a particular case / example to illustrate how your results can be interpreted. For instance, take one of the countries you are studying and identify which of its sectors are the most sensitive to shocks from which countries – then derive policy implications for policymakers in this country.

+ the inter-country heterogeneity in your results is interesting– can you interpret it more? What does it say about the vulnerability of different countries?

+ the fact that there are differences in the impact of a shock for a country if it is an importer in the GVC and if it is an exporter is also an interesting result that is not commented at all. It is especially visible in figures 5 and 8.

Answer: Given the fundamental nature of this paper, which primarily centers around elucidating our methodology, we opted not to engage in an in-depth discussion of result interpretations or policy implications. Our primary concern was to maintain the paper's readability and accessibility for our readers. Expanding upon these aspects would have significantly extended the paper's length, potentially making it less approachable for its intended audience. However, it's important to note that while we refrained from delving into these areas in this particular manuscript, we recognize their significance. We therefore have plans to address these facets in future research endeavors, both at the level of different aggregations and of different countries of interest.

8. In your description of figure 4, you state that “for Germany and ROW the shock is propagated more considerably throughout the network when compared with Russia and Japan where the shock is concentrated around the originating country”. However, this is really not clear in the figures your present. While the ROW figure does seem lighter than the others, the figure for Germany is not that much lighter than Russia for instance. If you really want to make that comparison, would it be possible to add the interpretation of quantitative results? Rather than purely basing your analysis on a visual interpretation of the color scheme, where the differences are not very pronounced.

Answer: We thank the reviewer for this comment. We agree that it would be beneficial to also include some quantitative results on top of the illustrative examples. Therefore, we added the following paragraph and table within the above-mentioned section:

“… To quantify this, we can calculate the percentage of the shock contained within a subset of the matrix by normalizing log(pˆuˆv ij ) by the sum of the matrix. We do this calculation for the sensitivity within the country pˆuˆu uu), where the country acts as an exporter pˆuˆu

uj ) for j in 1, ..., n and j 6 = u, where the country acts as an importer pˆuˆu iu ) for i in 1, ..., n and i 6 = u. Additionally, we look at top 10 and 22 upper left values of the matrices shown in Fig. 4. The results are presented in Table 1. Now we can further see how 62.3% of the shock which originates within Japan ends in Japan, while this is at 26.4% and 32.6% for ROW and Germany. If we look at the input percentages, we see how much of the shock flows into countries which import from the fixed country, with Russia’s trade partners being the most affected. Similarly, the output percentages show what percentage of the shock is distributed to countries which act as exporters in the scenario. These values are much higher than the input sensitivities across all countries, with highest values for the Rest of World Model. The top 10 and 22 percentages show us the overall distribution of the shock. Again, Japan and Russia contain 91.8% (96.2%) and 85.0% (94.1%) for the top 10 (top 22) percentages, showing a less global impact on the economy, while for ROW these values are 55.2% (77.5%) which means the disturbance would be more distributed across the entire matrix.”

9. There is a problem in figure 5. In your description of the figure, you state that “China’s output sensitivity steadily increased from being near the average in 2000 … to even overtaking the USA in 2014” ◊ looking at the right-hand-side of figure 5, this is not what is shown. Indeed, your graph shows that Switzerland overtakes the USA in 2014, not China. This looks like it might just be a discrepancy in the axes and the labels of the graphs.

Answer:

This was due to a bug in the visualization code, and it also occurs in the same kind of visualization in Fig. 8. Updated the code to fix the bug and now the visualization correctly shows that it is the economy of China growing throughout time and not Switzerland.”

10. Figure 7 is not commented at all.

Answer: Our initial approach to the figures was to preview the different kinds of results that can be done. However, according to your comment, we added the following description of Fig. 7:

“Although we are focusing on 6 countries of interest within the paper, on Fig. 7 we can see how the input and output sensitivity rankings for all countries in the WIOD dataset change through time.

We additionally increased the descriptions of Fig. 8-10 by adding the following paragraph:

“The input volatility is noticeably more balanced across the countries compared to output volatility, however, for most countries, the average volatility as an exporter is much higher than the volatility as an importer (Fig. 8). Interestingly, here China has the largest input volatility throughout the entire time period. The USA starts with the largest output sensitivity by far, however, it has a significant drop over the fourteen-year period and is overtaken by the ROW and China economies which unlike most countries achieve a significant growth (Fig. 9). Finally, on Fig. 10 we can see the input and output sensitivity rankings for all countries in the WIOD dataset change through time. While the input volatilities show a high instability through time, this is most likely due to the minute difference within the input sensitivities discussed about previously. On the other hand, output volatilities show the least changes through time, with a few exceptions such as the rise in the output volatility ranking of Russia.”

11. In the appendix, you could add more details to the steps described to derive your model.

Answer: This particular model is quite well-established and has been utilized in various academic works, including those by prominent scholars like Acemoglu. In our study, we extended this model to incorporate the World Input-Output Database (WIOD). However, we didn't emphasize it as a original contribution in our research as it is an elementary extension of the original model. However, we specify the extension nonetheless in Appendix A of the supplementary material. Furthermore, we explain how the theorems can be derived based on this model in Appendix B. We do recognize the importance of clearly elucidating the rationale behind our research choices and are grateful for your feedback on this matter.

12. . Your references in the appendix are not correctly formatted (there are “?” in lieu of all references).

Answer: The appendix is fixed and now correctly corresponds to the references.

13. The introduction begins with and is substantially (about a third of it) devoted to a discussion on the links between competition, globalization, and international trade dynamics. However, the competition aspects of globalization are not really addressed anywhere in the rest of the paper. It might be better to refocus the introduction on the risks of globalization – i.e., the heart of the model & results. Giving example of these risks would also be beneficial (the COVID crisis is a very obvious one).

Answer: We've rewritten the introduction of the paper to align it more closely with the paper's content and its primary objective: presenting a novel methodology for conducting sensitivity analyses. Furthermore, we've incorporated several references mentioned in response 1, which offer comprehensive insights into the advantages and challenges associated with globalization.

14. You can shorten your description of the WIOD by only retaining the main elements that are useful for your model/analysis. Interested readers can refer back to the database’s documentation to get more information if needed.

Answer: Deleted the following: “In terms of sector classification, ISIC Rev. 4 is similar to the Statistical Classification of Economic Activities in the European Community, commonly referred to as NACE, which is the standard nomenclature of the European Commission for productive economic activities. revision 2 is also based on underlying WIOTs covering 56 sectors.”

15. You don’t describe the second database you use in your “Data” section – the Total Factor Productivity data from the Conference Board Total Economy Database.

Answer: We deleted the part of the Model Implementation section where the database was introduced and added the following subsubsection in the Data section:

“Total Economy Database

To calculate the Hicks-neutral productivity shocks we use the April, 2022 release of the Conference Board Total Economy Database™. We start with a baseline of 100 for each country for the year 1990. Then, using the Total Factor Productivity data we calculate the productivity shocks throughout time for each country. These values are then logarithmically transformed, standardized to a unit variance and normalized to a sum of one due to the model specifications outlined below.”

16. You could explain why you work specifically within the country world-input network, rather than the other 2 possible variations. You choose this variation in particular without really detailing why it is more relevant than the others.

Answer: We randomly choose one network and work on it. However, as explained in the methods, the exact same analysis can be done for any other network.

17. A(1) is not defined in your main paper - you only define A(2) and A(3) explicitly.

Answer: Changed the introduction of the original A matrix as the A(1) matrix in the World-Input Network:

“We can now define the World-input network, which is represented by the (J × S) × (J × S) adjacency matrix A(1) = [a(1)_ˆiˆj ] where ˆi and ˆj represent industry pairs (i, r) and (j, s) respectively, such that a(1) ˆiˆj = z^rs_ij /x^s_j”

18. You don’t explain why it is “more reasonable” to use sensitivity as an indicator rather than elasticity in the case of network linkages. Is this something that is standard in the literature? What are the advantages?

Answer: Sensitivity is better suited as it measures the absolute change in the dependent variable in response to a given percentage change in an independent variable. Comparatively, elasticity measures the proportional change in the dependent variable. Due to the additive nature of the Leontief-inverse matrix, we specify that it is “more reasonable” to use sensitivity for this specific scenario. To clarify this within the paper, we rephrase the following sentence:

” In the case of network linkages, it is more reasonable to use sensitivity, due to the fact that we are measuring the absolute change in the Leontief-inverse matrix instead of measuring a proportional change which is more suited for a elasticity analysis”

19. You don’t provide any preview of your qualitative results in the introduction (or in the abstract). You should add highlights of the elements that are most significant and how they relate to existing literature (are they surprising? standard?).

Answer: As our analysis is methodological and our findings are primarily quantitative, we have refrained from drawing direct implications within the abstract. Nevertheless, to underscore the potential relevance of our analytical results for informing future research, particularly in the context of economic analyses and policy implications, we have included the following in the abstract:

“… Our study introduces a novel methodology that enables us to acquire input and output link sensitivities for all country pairings when an economic shock initiates or concludes within a country of interest. This innovative approach also facilitates the analysis of evolving trends in these link sensitivities, providing a comprehensive understanding of the dynamics of shock propagation across the global network…”

20. In your comments on figure 12, you note that there is a “considerable downturn in 2008” but don’t try to explain this. It seems rather counterintuitive as one could think that during the crisis, countries were even more dependent on GVCs, and therefore more sensitive to shocks from other countries. Additionally, you describe the differences between the Z and P tensors, but do not interpret these differences. What do they tell us about overall risk sensitivity in GVC networks?

Answer: As previously emphasized, we aim to maintain a methodological focus in this paper and limit extensive discussions regarding the economic interpretations of our findings. Consequently, our approach will predominantly involve providing a descriptive interpretation of the results. This ensures that our primary objective, presenting and explaining the methodology, remains the central theme of the paper.

LANGUAGE / MISSPELLINGS

1. P.1, l.4: “pervasive” has a strong negative connotation that does not seem appropriate here

Answer: Changed to “widespread”.

2. P.2, l.29: “growingly integrated” is clumsy, you might want to change to “increasingly integrated”

Answer: Changed to “increasingly integrated”.

3. P.2 l.29-32: “GVCs have been used … for International Development.” This sentence needs to be rephrased.

Answer: Changed to “Major international organizations like the World Bank, the World Trade Organization, the International Labor Organization, and the U.S. Agency for International Development have utilized GVCs in their research and policy development.”

4. P. 2, l.37: “draws attention that” words missing

5. P.2, l. 52: “lenghts" is misspelled

Answer: Changed to “lengths”.

6. P.3, l. 106: you use the WIOT abbreviation without having ever defined it (should be at the beginning of that paragraph when you spell out “World Input-Output Tables”

Answer: Added “WIOT” abbreviation on first use.

7. P.4, l.111: “use” typed twice

Answer: Deleted second “use”.

8. P.6, l.174: you used the wrong epsilon symbol

Answer: Changed to correct epsilon symbol.

9. P.7, l.203: “the specified axis such the calculation…”: missing “as”

Answer: Changed to “…along the specified axis such as the calculation…”

10. P.7, l.214 + p.8, l.223 : “an J x J matrix” - should be “a J x J matrix”

Answer: Changed to “a JxJ matrix”

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