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. 2023 Nov 30;18(11):e0287970. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0287970

A study of the economic growth effects of market integration: An examination of 27 cities in the Yangtze River Delta city cluster

Jing Yang 1,*
Editor: Atif Jahanger2
PMCID: PMC10688701  PMID: 38033003

Abstract

The city cluster of the Yangtze River Delta is a highly dynamic and competitive economic region in China. The integration of the market across the 27 cities is crucial in driving economic growth in the area. This paper aims to provide policymakers with recommendations on promoting regional integration, enhancing the structure, and improving overall performance. By utilizing the benefits and resources of each community more effectively, greater economic gains can be achieved. The findings of this study can also be applied to other Chinese towns or business areas. Market integration is a necessary foundation for regional integration, as it enables the seamless movement of goods and factors throughout the region while simultaneously reducing entry barriers and supporting the creation of a unified market. Unfortunately, the "vassal economy" model has impeded the region’s economic growth. The integration of regional markets is crucial for economic growth. However, it is equally important to create industrial clusters with central towns as their hubs. The Yangtze River Delta urban agglomeration is a prime example of one of six world-class city clusters demonstrating how market integration can result in high-quality economic progress. The paper’s primary discoveries are threefold: firstly, there has been a progressive elevation in the level of market integration among the 27 cities within the Yangtze River Delta city cluster, characterized by increasingly intimate connections concerning trade, investment, and population mobility. Secondly, this heightened market integration exerts a catalytic impact on the real economic growth of the Yangtze River Delta city cluster, particularly concerning regional industrial restructuring, transformation, and upgrading. Finally, market integration is poised to expedite the industrial division of labor and synergistic development between the cities, thus promoting a concentration of advanced manufacturing and new industries in the central cities and furthering the development of profitable industries in the central individual cities.

1. Introduction

Yangtze River Delta market integration refers to the integration of the markets in the Yangtze River Delta region (including Shanghai, Jiangsu Province, Zhejiang Province, and Anhui Province) into a whole, breaking down trade barriers between the regions, promoting the free flow of goods, services, and capital, and further promoting regional integration and economic development. The impact of market integration in the Yangtze River Delta on economic growth is mainly manifested in the following aspects:

Firstly, integrating the Yangtze River Delta markets can promote the synergistic development of various regions within the economic region. With a large urban economy and a large market in the Yangtze River Delta region, the integration will further promote the agglomeration and optimal allocation of resources, promote economic synergy and complementary development among regions, and accelerate economic growth in the entire region. Secondly, integrating the Yangtze River Delta market can improve economic development’s competitiveness and innovation capacity. With many high-tech industries and renowned enterprises concentrated in the Yangtze River Delta region, the integration will be conducive to enhancing technological cooperation and experience sharing among the regions, improving the entire region’s innovation capacity and market competitiveness and further accelerating the pace of economic growth. In addition, market integration in the Yangtze River Delta will also help promote the upgrading and transformation of the economic structure. Through market integration, it will promote the upgrading and optimization of industrial structure, the transformation of traditional industries to high-end industries, the technological innovation and brand building of enterprises in the region, and the improvement of the quality and efficiency of economic development, thus further accelerating economic growth. In short, implementing market integration in the Yangtze River Delta will provide more excellent development opportunities and space for all regions and promote rapid regional economic growth. However, care needs to be taken to avoid some negative impacts during the implementation process; for example, some weaker industries and regions may face more significant challenges and pressures and therefore need to take corresponding measures to cope with them.

This study is critical because market integration in the Yangtze River Delta city cluster is integral to China’s development strategy. It is essential to drive China’s economic development and enhance its international competitiveness. Understanding the impact of market integration on economic growth can help policymakers to formulate better and adjust relevant policies to promote coordinated economic development in the Yangtze River Delta region. In addition, this study can also provide valuable references and lessons for the construction of market integration in other regions. The Yangtze River Delta region of China is one of China’s most active and vigorous economic regions. It is also one of the most critical regions for constructing market integration in China. The Yangtze River Delta region has a relatively well-developed infrastructure and transportation network, high population density, and a diversified industrial structure, all providing good conditions for economic growth and market integration building in the Yangtze River Delta region. The Yangtze River Delta region is crucial in the Chinese government’s efforts to promote market integration and coordinated regional development. In addition, there is a lack of research on the construction of market integration and economic growth in the Yangtze River Delta region, so the selection of the Yangtze River Delta region for the study can fill this gap and provide valuable references lessons for academic research and policy formulation in related fields. In summary, there are specific reasons and implications for choosing the Yangtze River Delta region of China to study the impact of market integration on economic growth. There have been several studies on market integration on economic growth in the research field, but most have been based on traditional regression or panel data models. Conversely, this study adopts a threshold effects model, which is a relatively new and practical modeling approach. In addition, this study also looks specifically at the Yangtze River Delta urban agglomeration, a region whose specificity and importance have received increasing attention in the research field. By exploring the application of the threshold effect model in the study of market integration in the Yangtze River Delta city cluster, this study aims to provide new ideas and methods for academic research in this field and to analyze in depth the mechanisms and channels of influence of market integration on economic growth in the Yangtze River Delta region, to provide valuable references and lessons for academic research and policy formulation in related fields.

This study is based on the threshold effect model to explore the impact of market integration on economic growth in the Yangtze River Delta city cluster. Therefore its theoretical framework mainly involves the threshold effect model and its related theories. Starting from the basic assumptions of the threshold effect model, the study will explore the impact of market integration in urban agglomerations on the threshold effect and the mechanism of the threshold effect on economic growth. Based on the theoretical framework, the study will combine empirical analysis with appropriate economic methods and models to further explore the specific impact of market integration in the Yangtze River Delta city cluster on economic growth and put forward corresponding policy recommendations. The study uses econometric methods such as threshold regression analysis to verify the impact of market integration on economic growth in the Yangtze River Delta city cluster and to explore the mechanism of the threshold effect on this impact. In particular, threshold regression analysis is used to investigate the non-linear characteristics of the impact of market thresholds on market integration. Through this analysis, the mechanism of the impact of market integration on economic growth in the Yangtze River Delta city cluster can be explored in depth, providing a reliable theoretical basis and policy recommendations.

The novelty of this study is reflected in the following aspects:

Firstly, by introducing a threshold effect model, this study provides an in-depth exploration of the relationship between market integration and regional economic growth. Compared with traditional econometric methods, the threshold effect model can more accurately portray the influence mechanism of market integration on regional economic growth and help reveal the micro-mechanisms behind economic growth. Secondly, this study selects the Yangtze River Delta city cluster as the research object. The Yangtze River Delta region is one of the most dynamic regions in China in terms of economic development, and the degree of market integration within the city cluster is also increasing. This study conducts in-depth research on the relationship between market integration and regional economic growth within the Yangtze River Delta city cluster, which is of great theoretical and practical significance in exploring the trends of China’s economic development and the economic development of the Yangtze River Delta region. Finally, the findings of this study have some reference value for policymakers and entrepreneurs. Studying the relationship between market integration and regional economic growth can provide a valuable basis for policymakers to make decisions to promote sustainable economic development in the Yangtze River Delta region. At the same time, entrepreneurs can also draw on the findings of this study to adjust their development strategies according to the changes in the degree of market integration to better adapt to the changing economic situation.

According to the Outline of the Integrated Development Plan for the Yangtze River Delta Region, 27 cities have been designated as members of Yangtze river delta urban agglomerations, including Shanghai, nine cities in Jiangsu Province, nine cities in Zhejiang Province and eight from Anhui Province, as is shown in Fig 1.

Fig 1. Map of 27 cities of Yangtze River Delta urban agglomeration.

Fig 1

2. Literature review and theoretical framework

2.1 Literature review

2.1.1 The impact of commodity market integration on economic growth

On market integration contributing to economic growth, Yao et al. did a cointegration study on rice prices using an error correction model (ECM) to compare and contrast how market integration affected economic growth in China and Japan during the nineteenth century. This study looked at how the merging of markets affects the growth of economies. Based on what they found [1], efficient market integration is both a cause of economic growth and a result of it. Rekiso looked into how urbanization and economic integration in Sub-Saharan Africa are connected. His research shows that regional economic integration and development help each other and go in a positive cycle [2]. In the same way, Bongers et al. did a real-world study and found that regional unity might help Southeast Asia’s economy grow. To do this, between 1970 and 2013, they got information from Southeast Asian countries. Using the generalized method of moments inside a dynamic panel framework, the authors made a cross-country economic growth model that considered the beginning levels of GDP per capita, physical and human capital, population growth, inflation, and trade openness. The study examined whether regional cooperation affects economic growth [3]. Orlowski thinks the EU’s capital market integration needs to be improved to boost economic growth. Mao and other Chinese scholars agreed with this point of view. Mao et al. looked at how economic integration affected economic growth in nine towns in the Pearl River Delta. The results show that regional economic unity is getting stronger and significantly affects economic growth [4, 5]. With the help of a fixed-effects model, Zhang et al. looked into how production component movement, regional coordination, and integration affect economic growth. The writers examined panel data from 30 provinces and regions in China from 2001 to 2016. Even though there are differences between regions, they found that increasing the mobility of production components and better regional coordination and integration will boost economic growth [6]. Also, Wang et al. found that integrating markets and moving people to cities is good for economic growth [7]. Chen et al. looked into the potential effects of labor, capital, and technology transfers on regional economic growth before using moderating route analysis to do an actual study. The writers used panel data from 31 provinces and regions in China from 2008 to 2017. Their study showed that integrating markets improves the economy roundabout way [8]. Deng and his colleagues looked at the less developed parts of the Yangtze River Delta to determine how regional unity affects economic growth. Between 2004 and 2016, the writers used a twofold difference model to look at panel data from 177 of the Yangtze River Delta’s less-developed prefecture-level areas. (DID) [9]. The results showed that the combined development of the region helped its less-developed parts grow their economies [10].

2.1.2 The negative effects of market segmentation on economic growth

Market segmentation is bad for economic growth because it can mess up economic and practical processes, distort market signals, throw off the balance of the economy as a whole, and prevent the best use of social resources. Li et al. say that the level of market segmentation has the most effect on economic unity right now [11]. Zhao et al. thought economic differences between regions would also grow as market segmentation grew [12]. Zhang et al. showed that a market segmentation approach called "beggar-thy-neighbor" makes it harder for FDI to improve the quality of economic growth [13]. Kong’s research showed that the way the labor market was split up in the Yangtze River Delta region had terrible effects on the area’s economic growth, with most of these effects happening directly. However, the secondary effect of inhibiting had little effect [14]. Tian et al. empirically studied urban sprawl’s changing spatial and temporal characteristics in the Yangtze River Delta region. They used a spatially weighted regression model and a comparative experimental analysis to examine the relationship between intercity linkages and urban sprawl. Their study was meant to provide a basis for making decisions about spatial territorial governance, management, and planning in one of China’s most economically and socially developed urban agglomerations [15]. Market segmentation makes it harder for foreign companies to invest and trade, which lowers output gains and the efficiency with which resources are used [16]. Also, it might let companies make more money from protected markets while lowering product quality, innovation, and customer choice [17]. Market segmentation also makes it harder for people and ideas to move around, makes it harder for multinational companies to be influential and develop new ideas, and slows down economic growth, especially in emerging countries that depend more on exports and foreign investment [18, 19]. Also, because of market fragmentation, domestic firms may face less competitive pressure, be less competitive, spend less on technology and processes, and have higher production costs [20, 21]. Market segmentation can also make it harder for multinational companies to go global, making it harder for them to get economies of scale and cut costs. It can also hurt their sales and job chances [22].

2.1.3 The non-linear relationship between market integration and economic growth

On the non-linear "U" or inverted "U" shape of the impact of market integration on economic growth, Long et al.’s evidence of an inflection point in the effect of commodities market integration on economic growth [23] shows that changes in the degree of market integration can sometimes help or hurt less developed or more developed areas. Chen et al. looked at how the integration of commodity markets affected economic growth in the Greater Bay Area of Guangdong, Hong Kong, and Macao from 2000 to 2016. They found an inverted "U"-shaped link that was not linear [24]. Liu et al. say that market segmentation can help the economy grow. On the other hand, market segmentation above a critical point slows down economic growth [25]. Between 1997 and 2015, Hong et al. made a matrix of 29 Chinese provinces’ yearly indexes of how well they were integrated into the domestic market. They used a beta convergence model and spatial econometrics to examine the link between domestic market integration and regional economic growth [26]. Before 2004, the effect of domestic market integration on regional economic growth was terrible, but after that year, it was good. Based on the environmental Kuznets curve (EKC) theory, Jahanger et al. gave important information about how the use of renewable energy sources and natural resources by North American Free Trade Agreement (NAFTA) members affected carbon emissions from 1990 to 2018. For their study, they looked at FDI inflows to see if the polluted paradise theory was true. The results supported the EKC theory by showing that the relationship between economic growth and carbon output over time is like an upside-down U. The study also found that economic growth, the use of green energy, and FDI inflows all had one-way causal relationships with CO2 emissions, but there were no feedback causal relationships. Because of these significant results, the study made important policy recommendations [27]. This study looks at the changing link between clean energy, green technology, and environmental policy in seven developing countries from 1990 to 2019. These countries are China, Turkey, India, Russia, Brazil, Indonesia, and Mexico. The dynamic common correlated effects (DCCE) cointegration method was used to figure out how much the short-run and long-run coefficients of the factors under study affected each other. Also, the Granger causality test was used to determine which factors cause each other. The results showed that environmental damage was slowed by using green energy, putting a price on pollution, and making new technologies. The E-7 countries were also known for the U-shaped EKC that was turned upside down. Also, it was found that economic growth, renewable energy, ecological innovation, and environmental rules are all directly linked to technology and CO2 emissions [28].

2.1.4 Market integration and regional economic growth: evidence and analysis

Market integration regarding economic growth is related to the level of regional economic development; Yang et al.’s price method analysis of the Pearl River Delta region’s regional market integration at different economic development levels found that market integration’s effect on economic growth was less pronounced in regions with high levels of economic development than in regions with low levels [29]. Yang et al. found that market segmentation has a positive effect on regional economic growth in places where the economy is more open and a negative effect on regional economic growth in places where the economy is less open, with the absolute value of the correlation coefficient going up [30]. Using a panel threshold model, they examined a split threshold effect between market segmentation and economic growth in Guangdong, Hong Kong, and Macau. Based on a neoclassical growth model, Jing et al. created a theoretical model with regional differences and market segmentation. They then used panel data from 29 provinces (districts and cities) from 1993 to 2016 to test the effects of market segmentation on regional economic growth at different stages of economic development [31]. Baldwin et al. examined how market integration and globalization have changed over time and their economic effects. They found that both have greatly affected economic growth and helped regional economic development [32]. In the wake of the Asian financial crisis, Huang et al. experimented to find out how market integration affected economic growth in East Asia. They found it could encourage trade and investment within the region, leading to economic growth and higher wages. Depending on historical, political, and cultural factors, the benefits would differ for different countries and regions [33]. Lu et al. used information from 31 different parts of China. With the help of a geographic panel data model, they looked at how market integration affects economic growth. They concluded it might improve business and economic ties between regional provinces, with a more considerable effect in more developed places. The writers also said that integrating markets could cause a loss of resources and skills, forcing the government to change [34]. Chakraborty et al. examined how foreign direct investment (FDI) and market integration affected India’s economic growth. They found that the economy grew more when markets opened up, and FDI became more appealing. Integration of markets can speed up the creation of new technologies, create new job opportunities, and boost productivity, all of which contribute to regional economic growth [35]. Li et al. use spatial regression methods to examine how market integration affects China’s economic development, resource allocation efficiency, and economic growth. They found that market integration can improve resource allocation efficiency and help the economy grow. The effect is evident in places with slower economic growth, which makes it essential for the government to give specific help and direction [36].

2.1.5 Challenges and opportunities in studying the relationship between market integration, market segmentation, and economic growth: a case study of the Yangtze River Delta

Lastly, much academic research has been done on how market integration affects economic growth, and the results of that research led to this study. Still, the following problems need to be solved in the present body of literature: First, different methods, data, and objects make it hard to draw consistent conclusions about how market integration affects economic growth, and there may be non-linearities. Second, most current studies only look at the relationship between commodity market integration and economic growth from an empirical perspective. They need to do more theoretical work or research on how different types of commodity markets can be integrated. Because there is little theoretical talk or study on market segment integration, it is hard to understand how it affects economic growth entirely. There needs to be more research using panel threshold models. The author will look into how market integration and different subdivision trends affect economic growth in 27 cities in the center of the Yangtze River Delta. He will then use the panel threshold model to do an empirical study. The exciting thing about this study is that it looks at the relationship between market integration, market segmentation, and economic growth in 27 cities in the Yangtze River Delta. Also, the study shows that the effect of market integration and subdivision types on economic growth is like an "inverted U." This result creates the new theoretical and empirical groundwork for future research in this area.

2.2 Theoretical framework

2.2.1 The impact of commodity market integration on economic growth

Integration of commodity markets cuts down on production and processing costs and creates economies of scale. Sitovsky and Denied’s famous market theory says that making a big, unified market within a country can make the market bigger and lead to economies of scale. On the other hand, the agreed-upon division of labor theory says that the market size can grow and production costs can go down if the two regions agree on how to divide the work. When commodity markets are connected, they may give similar results, which means that both areas can benefit from economies of scale. So, the coordination effect of integrating commodities markets leads to better growth in the area. Integration of commodity markets has made markets bigger, cut down on information gaps between regions, made it easier for goods to move around, and made it easier for businesses to get information. Under these conditions, production factors can be spread out on a larger scale in a more rational way, which improves the allocation and use of resources, cuts down on resource waste and industrial homogenization caused by too much competition, lets regions develop industries that take advantage of their strengths and promotes local economic development, all of which leads to more cooperative regional economic development. Lastly, the growth of integrated commodity markets helps the logistics system and the economy grow. As commodity market integration moves forward, local industries that specialize and unrestricted movement of goods have put more pressure on the logistics system. Chen et al. say that the growth of the logistics economy not only improves the working efficiency of firms and promotes healthy competition, but it also helps to optimize the industrial structure and grow industrial clusters, which contributes to the growth of the regional economy. Our economic system can be made stronger by giving people access to commodity markets, which will help the economy grow [37].

2.2.2 The impact of labor market integration on economic growth

As a result of labor market integration, the following factors significantly affect economic growth in the area. First of all, the union of the labor market makes the gap between the supply and demand of workers smaller. Workers can only be spread slowly and evenly when the market is more divided. Because of this, some places or businesses will need more labor. Sun says the number of people looking for jobs in China is at an all-time high. However, the difference between supply and demand in the job market slows China’s economic growth. Integration of the labor market can help solve the problem of regional labor supply, bring in talent for regional economic growth, and make better use of labor resources [38]. The second thing to talk about is how the merging of the labor market affects company optimization and transfer. Han et al. say that increasing the labor market integration can make the market more involved in industrial transfer [39]. This means that industrial transfer can align with how urban clusters are set up and the law of people’s movement. Lastly, labor market integration leads to high-quality economic growth and innovation. Talent is how people share their knowledge, and a region’s ability to be innovative depends a lot on its talent resources. A lack of labor market integration can make it harder for R&D workers to move around and for information to be shared. Han et al. say that China’s inability to use its local talent resources considerably slows technological growth. Even though there are fewer institutional barriers to the movement of skilled talent than there are for the general labor force, and even though governments around the world have put more focus on the introduction of skilled talent in recent years, the low level of labor market integration still makes it hard to use skilled talent resources in the best way, which hurts regional innovation. Lastly, it slows down good economic growth in the area [40].

2.2.3 The impact of capital market integration on economic growth

Integration of financial markets can make getting money where it needs to go easier. Economic growth can only be supported by financial development if the distribution of resources is optimized and more money is accumulated. Regional differences in China’s economic growth [41] make it harder to use resources in the best way. Local governments have much power over money, and their desire to do well politically has led them to interfere with bank loan choices, leading to much money going to a few industries or regions. This affects how well capital is allocated and makes the capital market even more fragmented. Integration of capital markets can lower barriers to the flow of capital, improve how capital is used within an area, and make the best use of capital. Integrated capital markets make it easier for governments to work together to direct funds, get a good balance of resources, and integrate financial capital on a regional scale. They also help avoid problems like too much investment or expensive financial arrangements by using the investment orientation of financial resources to encourage cross-regional and cross-industry investment, restructuring, and mergers and acquisitions[42]. Think about how integrating the capital market can help companies improve their processes. Local governments may favor lending choices that help the region’s economy in the short term, such as low-risk, high-return projects that boost local GDP, while ignoring local needs and the optimization and upgrading of industrial structures, which could be better for long-term growth. This could be because of the need to protect locals or political goals. On the other hand, increasing the degree of capital market integration can help get the best use of capital resources across sectors and improve and update industries [43].

2.2.4 The impact of market integration on economic growth

Integration of markets can make it easier to share resources and markets, lower barriers to factor movement, and help the economy grow. During market mergers, growth rates are affected by scale, factor matching, and competition [44]. First, think about the size effect. Market integration, or building a common market, eliminates differences between regional markets, expands market boundaries, and gives each area a bigger market for economic growth. Due to growing demand, free-flowing commodities, and production factors, the scale effects of industrial concentration, the professional division of labor, and industrial transformation and upgrading, production and transaction costs are higher in the region. Factor matching is the second result. Deep market segmentation makes moving between regions hard for labor, money, raw materials, and other valuable components. It also leads to the efficient allocation of resources and better matching of factors, which wastes resources. Some benefits of market integration are lower transportation and transaction costs, more freedom for factors, and a better way to share market information. This improves the efficiency of component allocation by making it easier to match factors with businesses. Third, think about how the competition will affect you. More market merging means that the market is getting bigger. Companies that lose local security may have to compete with new companies that enter the local market, and as the market gets bigger, more companies will want to join. Wang et al. say that market integration increases competition between domestic and foreign businesses, businesses that make essential goods, and businesses that sell to consumers. The intense competition in the market will push businesses to keep coming up with new ideas and improving, which will help the economy grow [45].

3. Study design

3.1 Variable description

3.1.1 Explained variables

From the existing primary literature, scholars have two main ideas about selecting the economic growth level variable: one is using the per capita GDP growth rate [46, 47], and the second is using per capita GDP. Considering that the per capita GDP indicator better reflects the goal of equity and balance pursued by economic development [48], the author uses per capita GDP to represent the economic growth indicator.

3.1.2 Selection of explanatory variables

The core explanatory variables in this paper are market integration (Intetit) and its subdivision into goods market integration (Intecoit), labor market integration (Intelit), and capital market integration (Intecait); taking into account data availability, the author draws on Liu et al to select seven types of consumer goods, including food, tobacco, alcohol and supplies, clothing, medical and health care products, transportation and communication, education, culture and entertainment, and housing-related products [49]. For the integration of the labor market, the author draws on Chen et al to measure the average wage of employees on the job; for the integration of the capital market [50], the author draws on Lv to measure the capital market by choosing the year-end RMB per capita balance of various deposits in financial institutions and the year-end RMB per capita balance of various loans in financial institutions [51].

3.1.3 Selection of explanatory variables

The core explanatory variables in this paper are market integration (Intetit) and its subdivision into goods market integration (Intecoit), labor market integration (Intelit), and capital market integration (Intecait); taking into account data availability, the author draws on Liu et al to select seven types of consumer goods, including food, tobacco, alcohol and supplies, clothing, medical and health care products, transportation and communication, education, culture and entertainment, and housing-related products [49]. For the integration of the labor market, the author draws on Chen et al to measure the average wage of employees on the job; for the integration of the capital market [50], the author draws on Lv to measure the capital market by choosing the year-end RMB per capita balance of various deposits in financial institutions and the year-end RMB per capita balance of various loans in financial institutions [51].

3.1.4 Explanation of explanatory variable measures

The pricing comparison method is widely used because it shows how well markets in different places are connected. From 2010 to 2019, the author used the same method as Gui et al. to figure out the capital market integration index and the commodity market integration index for 27 towns in the Yangtze River Delta city cluster [52]. The author also suggests using Chen et al.’s absolute deviation technique to figure out the labor market integration measure for employed people. The coefficient of variation method, which Zhou and other authors [53] support, was used to figure out weights based on these market segmentation measures. After that, someone made the Comprehensive Market Integration Indicator [54]. Fig 2 shows what happened.

Fig 2. Yangtze River Delta City Cluster Total Market Integration Index and its Trends, 2010–2019.

Fig 2

Fig 2 shows that most actual numbers come from the Shanghai, Zhejiang, Jiangsu, Anhui, and China City census yearbooks. From 2010 to 2019, the 27 separate cities, three provinces, and one city in the Yangtze River Delta cluster showed an "M"-shaped aggregate market integration index, with high values in 2013 and 2017. A minimum value in 2010 and 2015 means that the general market integration index follows the same upward trend as the Yangtze River Delta city cluster, as shown by the fitted trend line. However, the drop shows that the process of the market merger in the Yangtze River Delta city cluster has moved forward in recent years. However, the results need to be made even better. Also selected were the degree of economic openness (Openit), human capital (Persit), level of consumption (Conit), the size of government expenditure (Govit), and the stock of social capital (Fixedit) are control variables. All variables are described in Table 1.

Table 1. Variable descriptions.
Variable Type Variable Indicators Measurements Symbols
Explained variables Economic Growth Per capita GDP RGDP it
Explanatory variables Market Integration Total Market Integration Index Intet it
Inteco Commodity Market Integration Commodity Market Integration Index Inteco it
Intel Labor Market Integration Labor Market Integration Index Intel it
Inteca Capital Market Integration Capital Market Integration Index Inteca it
Control variables Degree of economic openness Imports and exports per capita Open it
Inpers Human Capital Number of college students per 10,000 people Pers it
Con Consumption level Regional total retail sales of consumer goods as a proportion of GDP Con it
Variable Type Variable Indicators Measurements Symbols
Explained variables Economic Growth Per capita GDP RGDP it

3.2 Construction of the model

The author made models (1) through (4) to study the possible nonlinear effects of market integration on economic growth. These models include subtypes like commodity, labor, and capital market integration. These models were based on relevant literature, such as the work by Sun et al. [55]. Below is a summary of these groups.

InRGPDit=α0+α1Intecoit+α2segIntecoit+γ1Xit+εit (1)
InRGPDit=α0+α3Intelit+α4segIntelit+γ2Xit+εit (2)
InRGPDit=α0+α5Intecait+α6segIntecait+γ3Xit+εit (3)
InRGPDit=α0+α7Intetit+α8segIntetit+γ4Xit+εit (4)

Where GGDPit denotes the first city’s year GDP per capita level. Moreover, α1 and α2 is the commodity market integration index (Intecoit) and its squared term (segIntecoit) coefficients. Moreover, α3 and α4 is the labor market integration index (Intelit) and its squared term (segIntelit) coefficients. Moreover, α5 and α6 are the indices of capital market integration (Intecait) and its squared term (segIntecait) coefficients. Moreover, α7 and α8 are the total index of market integration (Intetit) and its squared term (segIntetit) coefficients are. Xit are the control variables, including the economic openness of each city (Openit), human capital (Persit), level of consumption (Conit), the size of government spending (Govit), and the stock of social capital (Fixedit) and other indicators. γ1, γ2, γ3, and γ4, and, respectively, the coefficients of the control variables. To alleviate heteroskedasticity, the author has used the absolute values of the variables RGDPit, Openit and Persit, taking the natural logarithm treatment. εit is the random disturbance term.

We used Hansen’s (1999) panel threshold model to find more proof of the possible nonlinear effects of market integration and its subtypes on economic growth. The main types of threshold factors are market integration and subgroups. (commodity, labor, and capital market integration). A one-period-lagged variable for economic growth level is used as a control variable to account for the effect of past economic growth on subsequent periods and to avoid possible endogeneity problems.Our method is based on the static threshold regression model shown below and uses a dynamic threshold regression analysis.

Yit=αi+βYit1+zitδ+l(qitγ)xitB1+l(qit>γ)xitB2+εit (5)
l(qitγ)={1qitγ0qit>γ (6)
l(qit>γ)={1qit>γ0qitγ (7)

where is unaffected by the threshold; and Yit represents the dependent variable. αi represents individual fixed effects. zit represents other explanatory variables. qit is the threshold variable. γ is the threshold value. l is the indicator function. εit is the error term; if thereare multiple threshold effects, the model should be further extended according to the number of thresholds, for example, a three-threshold panel model.

Yit=αi+zitδ+l(qitγ1)xitB1+l(γ1<qitγ2)xitB2+l(γ2<qitγ3)xitB3+l(γ3<qit)xitB4+εit (8)

3.3 Data sources and descriptive statistics

This study is about the 27 cities located close together in the Yangtze River Delta. For most of our study, we reviewed statistical yearbooks for Shanghai, Zhejiang, Jiangsu, Anhui, and other regions in China. Table 2 presents descriptive statistics for each variable, including the number of individuals in each group, the mean, the standard deviation, the highest and lowest values, and other helpful information.

Table 2. Statistical characteristics of variables.

Variables Sample Average value Standard deviation Minimum value Maximum value
InRGDP 270 11.147 0.533 7.578 12.068
Intet 270 6.178 2.946 2.003 13.81
Inteco 270 2.826 0.536 0.963 4.005
Intel 270 0.080 0.324 0.002 3.373
Inteca 270 3.272 2.960 0.382 10.462
InOpen 270 8.081 1.192 4.853 10.405
InPers 270 5.163 0.857 2.822 7.147
Con 270 0.371 0.097 0.156 0.746
Gov 270 0.117 0.057 0.019 0.309
Fixed 270 0.744 0.301 0.237 1.838

4. Empirical analysis

4.1 Variable description

In order to avoid problems such as pseudo-regressions that may result from the non-stationarity of the variables in the model, the author first does a panel unit root test on each variable before conducting the empirical analysis; mainly using LLC, and IPS, and ADFFisher and PPFisher tests on InRGDP, and Intet, and Inteco, Intel, and Inteca, and InOpen so on. Each variable was tested,A Unit Root Test (URT) is used in Unit Root Test to assess whether a time series of data has a unit root. (i.e., non-stationarity). Im, Pesaran, and Shin, three economists, established the Im-Pesaran-Shin test, commonly known as the unit root test. This test can determine whether preprocessing, such as differencing, is required for smoothing time series data. A model is utilized to determine whether time series data has a unit root. This test allows for structural fractures and assesses whether a time series contains a unit root. (i.e., is non-stationary). (STR). This modified ADF (Augmented Dickey-Fuller) test variation is widely used when dealing with time series data. Table 3 demonstrates that all variables survived the 5% significance level test, proving smooth and suitable for regression analysis.

Table 3. Unit root test.

Variables Test methods Conclusion
LLC IPS ADFFisher PPFisher
InRGDP -3.3906*** (0.0003) -6.6935*** (0.0000) 4.7342*** (0.0000) 10.5514*** (0.0000) Stable
Intet -14.3805*** (0.0000) -6.5086*** (0.0000) 30.4337*** (0.0000) 7.8058*** (0.0000) Stable
Inteco -7.6654*** (0.0000) -5.7567*** (0.0000) 6.1434*** (0.0000) 3.8891*** (0.0001) Stable
Intel -41.9991*** (0.0000) -6.3944*** (0.0000) 2.8575*** (0.0021) 16.0669*** (0.0000) Stable
Inteca -14.9605*** (0.0000) -6.3598*** (0.0000) 26.1163*** (0.0000) 7.8357*** (0.0000) Stable
InOpen -10.8596*** (0.0000) -5.2001*** (0.0000) 7.7124*** (0.0000) 23.8210*** (0.0000) Stable
InPers -8.2511*** (0.0000) -5.9895*** (0.0000) 3.0309** (0.0012) 9.7015*** (0.0000) Stable
Con -1.6698* (0.0475) -15.1566*** (0.0000) 18.8325*** 0.0000 2.4677** 0.0068 Stable
Gov -12.3594*** (0.0000) -6.2367*** (0.0000) 12.6966*** (0.0000) 4.7000*** (0.0000) Stable
Fixed -2.9310** (0.0017) -2.8758*** (0.0020) 2.5689** (0.0051) 14.1312*** (0.0000) Stable

Note

*** p<0.01

** p<0.05

* p<0.1

4.2 Model selection

A relevant metric can indicate whether to employ a fixed or random effects model when evaluating panel data [41]. As a result, the author of this study completed this test, the results of which are shown in Tables 4 and 5. These findings imply that a model with fixed effects is better for assessment purposes.

Table 4. Impact of the type of market integration segmentation on economic growth.

(1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6) (7) (8) (9)
FE FE FE FE FE FE FE FE FE
Inteco 0.216*** 0.120*** 0.476*
(0.040) (0.041) (0.269)
segInteco -0.065
(0.048)
Inte -0.109 -0.037 0.146
(0.072) (0.067) (0.211)
segIntel -0.071
(0.077)
Inteca 0.014** 0.012* 0.069**
(0.007) (0.007) (0.028)
segInteca -0.007**
(0.003)
InOpen 0.470*** 0.473*** 0.524*** 0.538*** 0.503*** 0.476***
(0.103) (0.103) (0.103) (0.104) (0.105) (0.104)
InPers -0.127 -0.122 -0.133 -0.137 -0.100 -0.121
(0.103) (0.103) (0.106) (0.106) (0.107) (0.106)
Con 1.106* 1.071* 1.391** 1.457** 1.381** 1.237**
(0.583) (0.583) (0.585) (0.589) (0.583) (0.582)
Gov 0.283 0.356 0.315 0.246 0.365 0.858
(0.539) (0.541) (0.549) (0.554) (0.549) (0.589)
Fixed -0.010 0.006 0.030 0.017 0.039 -0.010
(0.182) (0.182) (0.184) (0.185) (0.184) (0.184)
cons 10.536*** 7.231*** 6.702*** 11.156*** 7.029*** 6.926*** 11.101*** 6.986*** 7.277***
(0.115) (0.760) (0.856) (0.022) (0.785) (0.794) (0.031) (0.765) (0.770)
N 270 270 270 270 270 270 270 270 270
R 2 0.659 0.705 0.708 0.621 0.695 0.694 0.624 0.697 0.703
AdjustR2 0.621 0.666 0.667 0.579 0.654 0.654 0.582 0.656 0.662
DW 2.029 2.318 2.302 1.850 2.325 2.342 1.872 2.353 2.363
Ftest 17.338 (0.000) 17.740 (0.000) 17.31 (0.000) 14.711 (0.000) 16.909 (0.000) 16.41 (0.000) 14.868 (0.000) 17.052 (0.000) 16.95 (0.000)
Hausman 3.130 (0.078) 25.635 (0.0003) 26.280 (0.0004) 4.147 (0.0402) 29.280 (0.0001) 29.875 (0.0001) 3.759 (0.0425) 26.612 (0.0002) 28.624 (0.0002)

Note

*** p<0.01

** p<0.05

* p<0.1

Table 5. Impact of the aggregate market integration index on economic growth.

(1) (2) (3)
FE FE FE
Intet 0.020*** 0.012* 0.107***
(0.007) (0.007) (0.040)
segIntet -0.007**
(0.003)
InOpen 0.490*** 0.447***
(0.105) (0.105)
InPers -0.089 -0.103
(0.107) (0.106)
Con 1.349** 1.124*
(0.582) (0.584)
Gov 0.381 0.829
(0.547) (0.573)
Fixed 0.038 -0.020
(0.183) (0.183)
cons 11.026*** 7.003*** 7.216***
(0.049) (0.763) (0.760)
N 270 270 270
R 2 0.629 0.699 0.706
AdjustR2 0.588 0.658 0.665
DW 1.906 2.362 2.388
Ftest 15.220 (0.000) 17.186 (0.000) 17.18 (0.000)
Hausman 2.929 (0.085) 31.356 (0.0000) 30.357 (0.0001)

Note

*** p<0.01

** p<0.05

* p<0.1

4.3 Regression analysis

As can be seen in Tables 4 and 5, since the models’ values fluctuate between 1.850 and 2.388, essentially around 2, this indicates that the parameters at adjacent points are independent of each other, i.e., a diagnosis of model parameter independence; from the values, the interval was 0.621 to 0.708, and the models’ values are significant at the 1% level, indicating a good model fit and that the impact of the total market integration index and its subdivision types on the total market integration index is significant.

Table 4 shows the regression findings of models (1), (4), and (7) after integrating the independent variables of commodity market integration, labor market integration, and capital market integration, respectively. Table 4 shows models (2), (5), and (8) with extra control variables included. In that sequence, the additional squared terms of the leading independent variables were added to the regression findings of models 3, 6, and 9. According to the regression results of models (1) through (3), commodity market integration favors economic growth. (3). Furthermore, after including the term "commodity market integration" in the model (3), the squared term coefficient becomes insignificant, showing that commodity market integration has a linear effect on economic growth. The estimated coefficients of models (4), (5), and (6) are not statistically significant, regardless of whether the squared term of the control variable and the core independent variable are re-added, or only the independent variable of labor market integration is added. Contrary to popular belief, a study shows that labor market integration does not affect economic development in the Yangtze River Delta urban cluster. According to the model’s regression results, the coefficient for the effective term of capital market integration is 0.069. (9). The term cubed coefficient is -0.007. Both are statistically significant at the 5% level, suggesting that capital market integration affects the Yangtze River Delta city cluster’s economic development in an inverted "U-shape" [42]. The agreement with Jiang et al.’s investigation shows that the findings of this paper are dependable and reproducible.

The regression results of model (1) are shown in Table 5, followed by models (2) and (3), which include control variables and the squared term of the core independent variables, respectively. The complete market integration index has a strong and positive impact on economic growth, according to models (1) and (2); according to model (3), the total market integration index’s primary term coefficient is 0.107, and its squared term coefficient is -0.007. Both pass the 1% significance test, which shows a link between market integration and economic development in Yangtze Delta urban agglomerations [43].

Control variables such as economic openness and consumption level positively and considerably impact economic growth, as demonstrated in Tables 4 and 5. (commodity market integration, labor market integration, and capital market integration). On the other hand, human capital, government spending, and social capital stock have little impact on economic growth.

5. Further discussion of non-linearity: Analysis of threshold effects

5.1 Static threshold effect analysis

5.1.1 Threshold effects and threshold tests

The potential threshold effect and multiple thresholds connected with market integration and its subdivision kinds on economic development in the Yangtze River Delta urban cluster are investigated in this study. The merger of labor and commodity markets, according to Table 6, has no threshold effect on economic development. Even though double and triple thresholds fail the test, capital market integration shows a 1% significant single threshold effect. At a significance level of 10%, similar results are obtained for market integration, with double and treble thresholds falling short of requirements. These data imply no nonlinear link between economic development, labor market integration, and product integration. Market integration, on the other hand, particularly its subdivision-type capital market integration, has a nonlinear effect on economic development. Additional research, such as estimating and testing thresholds, is required after identifying the threshold impact and finding the exact number of thresholds for market integration and its subtypes of capital market integration. The solitary threshold number for capital market integration that satisfies the 1% significance level test, as shown in Table 7, is 1.2271. Furthermore, the single market integration threshold value is 8.5517, which passes the test at a significance level of 10%. Figs 3 and 4 show likelihood ratio function diagrams for the threshold variables to visualize the threshold estimates and confidence intervals for the influence of market integration and its subcategorization into capital market integration types on economic development.

Table 6. Results of the threshold effect test.
Mode Number of thresholds F−statistic PValue Threshold values Bootstrap
10% 5% 1%
Intel Single 8.53 0.4367 16.4923 21.1963 37.1574 300
Double 40.30 0.0000 13.7017 16.3234 20.4726 300
Triple 5.88 0.6267 23.5400 33.7710 59.73021 300
Inteco Single 6.80 0.4800 18.0028 22.1084 30.9419 300
Double 4.60 0.5633 12.2136 15.2143 21.2572 300
Triple 1.42 0.9733 19.2033 28.0369 181.9882 300
Inteca Single 23.43*** 0.0000 11.7849 14.4430 16.8243 300
Double 5.94 0.3067 9.5675 12.1525 16.8814 300
Triple 3.88 0.5500 10.2060 12.3967 22.7182 300
Intet Single 13.62** 0.0433 10.7995 13.1971 18.6288 300
Double 5.88 0.1900 6.9768 8.8106 15.2391 300
Triple 4.25 0.6133 17.5773 20.2600 29.9346 300

Note

*P<0.1

**P<0.05

***P<0.01.

Table 7. Static threshold estimation results.
Threshold Threshold P-value 95% confidence interval
Integration of commodity markets
labor market integration
Capital market integration Single Threshold 1.2271 *** 0.0033 [1.1581, 1.3197]
Market integration overall Single Threshold 8.5517* 0.0667 [8.0651, 8.7405]

Note

*P<0.1

**P<0.05

***P<0.01.

Fig 3. Estimates of capital market integration thresholds and their confidence intervals.

Fig 3

Fig 4. Estimates of market integration thresholds and their confidence intervals.

Fig 4

5.1.2 Threshold model estimation results and analysis

Table 8 shows Model 1, the outcome of the threshold model’s evaluation of the influence of capital market integration on economic development. When the capital market integration score is less than 1.2271, the capital market integration regression coefficient is -0.408 and significant at the 1% level. The coefficient equals -0.020 when the capital market integration index surpasses 1.2271 and is significant at 5%. According to these findings, capital market integration stifles economic growth, but this effect reduces as integration levels rise. This tendency can be explained by the fact that in cases of inadequate capital market integration, the government has greater control over capital, and optimal capital allocation may be more successful. Due to local security concerns, the government may subsidize efforts that stimulate corporate expansion while neglecting industrial structure optimization and modernization, impeding high-quality local economic expansion. However, capital market integration’s effect on economic growth reduces once the barrier is exceeded. This conclusion implies that higher levels of integration boost the efficiency of capital factor allocation and industrial structure optimization, minimizing the detrimental effects of capital market segmentation on regional economic growth [56].

Table 8. Threshold model estimation results and analysis.
Model 1 Model 2
Variables InRGDP InRGDP
InOpen 0.393*** 0.458***
(3.79) (4.46)
InPers -0.128 -0.138
(-1.24) (-1.31)
Con 0.507 0.938
(0.85) (1.62)
Gov 0.367 0.955*
(0.69) (1.71)
Fixed -0.096 -0.004
(-0.54) (-0.02)
Inteca_1 -0.408***
(-4.33)
Inteca_2 -0.020**
(-2.19)
Intet_1 0.054***
(3.94)
Intet_2 0.023 ***
(3.11)
Constant 8.637*** 7.445***
(10.47) (9.85)
Observations 270 270
R-squared 0.269 0.251
Number of cities 27 27
F test 0 0
r2_a 0.166 0.147
F 12.39 11.31

Note

*** p<0.01

** p<0.05

* p<0.1

Model 2 shows the findings of the threshold estimation for the effect of market integration on economic development. When the capital market integration score is less than 8.5517, the capital market integration regression coefficient reveals a significance at the 1% level coefficient of 0.054. When the capital market integration index hits 8.5517, the coefficient rises to 0.023 and remains statistically significant at 1%. These findings suggest that market integration favors economic development on both sides of the barrier, but its contribution diminishes once the threshold is crossed. When the market integration index goes below a certain level, the scale, factor matching, and competition effects of market integration express themselves. However, if the threshold is crossed, the degree of market integration becomes excessive, resulting in "resource crowding," which limits innovation and reduces the effectiveness of the promotion [57].

5.2 Analysis of dynamic threshold effects

5.2.1 Threshold effects and threshold tests

Table 9 shows that at the threshold level, integrating the labor and commodities markets has no discernible impact on economic development. With a significance level of 10%, the impact of capital market integration on economic development passes the single threshold effect test. In comparison, at a significance level of 1%, the twofold threshold test for the influence of market integration on economic development is passed. Table 10 shows that the capital market integration threshold is 1.2271 at a 10% significance level, passing the test. The first market integration threshold, 8.9206, outperforms the testing standards by 10%, while the second market integration threshold, 9.2053, outperforms the testing standards by 1%. Figs 5 and 6 provide likelihood ratio function diagrams for threshold variables, which allow you to see threshold values and confidence intervals [58].

Table 9. Results of the dynamic threshold effect test.
Mode Number of thresholds F−statistic PValue Threshold values Bootstrap
10% 5% 1%
Intel Single 7.68 0.4533 16.7102 23.0020 34.2550 300
Double 50.03 0.0000 13.0250 15.7384 21.5460 300
Triple 3.66 0.8233 18.8419 23.1209 59.1799 300
Inteco Single 8.93 0.3167 13.9282 17.2628 22.9202 300
Double 3.51 0.7100 11.3749 13.3342 16.5320 300
Triple 0.84 0.9900 15.7335 31.3130 249.6857 300
Inteca Single 18.46* 0.0700 16.9445 19.5709 25.6475 300
Double -1.18 1.0000 10.8651 14.6502 18.0516 300
Triple 10.89 0.7000 52.8680 58.5059 72.4354 300
Intet Single 12.12* 0.0733 10.8372 12.6672 16.8864 300
Double 33.97*** 0.0000 12.0223 14.3013 19.2748 300
Triple 14.83 0.2933 48.4769 63.0842 91.3972 300

Note

*** p<0.01

** p<0.05

* p<0.1

Table 10. Results of dynamic threshold estimation.
Threshold Threshold P-value 95% confidence interval
Integration of commodity markets
labor market integration
Capital market integration Single Threshold 1.2271* 0.0867 [1.1581, 1.31979]
Market integration overall First threshold 8.9206* 0.06 [8.8792, 8.9483]
Second threshold 9.2053*** 0 [9.1574, 9.2421]

Note

*** p<0.01

** p<0.05

* p<0.1

Fig 5. Estimates of dynamic thresholds for capital market integration and their confidence intervals.

Fig 5

Fig 6. Estimated dynamic thresholds for overall market integration and their confidence intervals.

Fig 6

5.2.2 Threshold model estimation results and analysis

As indicated in Table 11, when the capital market integration index falls below the threshold value of 1.2271, the coefficient of capital market integration is -0.395. It passes the significance test with a 1% level of significance. Similarly, when the index crosses the 1.2271 thresholds, the coefficient of capital market integration equals -0.022 and meets the testing conditions at a significance level of 5%. These findings suggest that capital market integration hinders economic progress on both sides of the threshold. However, after exceeding the threshold, the suppressive impact gradually fades, and the significance declines, consistent with the static model analysis results [59].

Table 11. Results of the dynamic threshold model.
Model 3 Model 4
Variables InRGDP InRGDP
InOpen 0.284** 0.258*
(2.03) (1.95)
InPers -0.111 -0.075
(-0.98) (-0.69)
Con 0.599 0.548
(0.90) (0.88)
Gov 0.740 1.093*
(1.25) (1.86)
Fixed -0.053 0.150
(-0.26) (0.79)
Inteca_1 -0.395***
(-3.75)
Inteca_2 -0.022**
(-2.22)
Intet_1 0.036***
(2.72)
Intet_2 -0.085***
(-4.43)
Intet_3 0.018**
(2.41)
L.lnrgdp -0.082 -0.025
(-1.21) (-0.39)
Constant 10.248*** 9.137***
(8.24) (8.26)
Observations 243 243
R-squared 0.175 0.265
Number of cities 27 27
F test 2.38e-06 1.64e-10
r2_a 0.0406 0.140
F 5.532 8.282

Note

*** p<0.01

** p<0.05

* p<0.1

Furthermore, when the market integration index falls below the 8.9206 thresholds, the coefficient of market integration is 0.036 and passes the 1% significance test. When the index falls between 8.9206 and 9.2053, the market integration coefficient equals -0.085 and passes the significance test at 1%. When the index exceeds the threshold value of 9.2053, the coefficient of market integration rises to 0.018 and passes the 1% significance test. Notably, the market integration coefficient also passes the significance test at the 5% level. These findings suggest that when the index is less than 8.9206 or larger than 9.2053, the influence of market integration on economic growth is facilitated. However, the impact is hampered when the index is between 8.9206 and 9.2053. This is in contrast to the static model’s results [60].

6. Conclusions and policy recommendations

The conclusions of this investigation agree with Yang’s [30] research, indicating its dependability and precision. Furthermore, the findings of this investigation are repeatable. This paper investigates the effects of labor, capital, and commodity market integration on the economic development of the Yangtze River Delta urban cluster.

The conclusions of this paper are: The relationship between market integration, capital market integration, and economic development is inverted "U-shaped," with commodities market integration having a significant favorable influence but labor market integration having a minimal effect.

An inverted U-shaped association exists between market and capital market integration and nonlinear influences on economic growth. As expected, although labor market integration has little to no influence on economic growth, product market integration has a significant beneficial effect. Economic openness and consumption levels, which act as brakes on growth, have a considerable positive impact. On the other hand, no association appears to exist between economic progress and human capital, government spending, or social capital stock.

The integration of labor and commodities markets needed more influence on economic growth. On the other hand, the influence of market and capital market integration on economic development demonstrated a threshold effect. In the latter case, it was revealed that a single threshold dampened the effect on both participants. However, after the barrier was crossed, the damping effect was reduced. Market integration enhanced economic growth on both sides of a single threshold, with the negative effect lessening once the threshold was crossed, according to an examination of the static threshold effect. In contrast, the dynamic threshold effect demonstrated a twofold threshold between market integration and economic development: below 8.9206 and above 9.2053. The static and dynamic model evaluations produce dramatically different outcomes.

The policy recommendations of this paper are: To fully leverage the Yangtze River Delta city cluster’s potential for fostering economic development, comprehensive measures must be taken to improve commodity market integration. As demonstrated in Table 2, the region’s average degree of commodities market integration was already high from 2010 to 2019, demonstrating significant improvement. Since the 18th National Congress, the government has passed several critical laws fostering regional development that are efficient and coordinated. The necessity for a new method to attain this goal was underlined at the 19th National Congress. Despite gains in the Yangtze River Delta’s integrated development strategy, considerable barriers to market integration in the region’s commodities flow remain. As a result, the Yangtze River Delta city cluster must develop regional commodities market integration, maximize existing transportation resources, accelerate construction and upgrading projects, and coordinate commodity market and transportation integration. The adoption of cutting-edge technologies such as 5G has the potential to result in the convergence of commodity markets and information networks. Furthermore, efforts should be made to jointly design commodity circulation legislation, execute joint market supervision, and promote mergers and acquisitions of comparable commodity trading markets. The exhibition economy must also be actively fostered, with commodity market exhibits having a more significant influence and international exhibition participation encouraged. These actions will undoubtedly open up new avenues for regional economic development by facilitating commodities market integration in the Yangtze River Delta city agglomeration.

It is critical to take coordinated measures to strengthen labor market integration in the Yangtze River Delta urban agglomeration and optimize its contribution to economic growth. According to the study, labor market integration does not affect regional economic development. This may be explained by the fact that labor market integration is significantly lower than market integration on average. Its subcategories, such as commodity market integration and capital market integration, show a relatively low level of labor market integration in the Yangtze River Delta city cluster from 2010 to 2019. This is primarily due to the enormous number of brilliant people lured to Shanghai, Zhejiang, and Jiangsu, three dynamic economic powerhouses in the eastern littoral provinces and cities. Anhui, a core province with a developing economy, is experiencing a brain drain as people migrate to the above locations. As a result, the Yangtze River Delta’s urbanization necessitates increased labor market integration, which will have a limited impact on economic growth. To change this, local governments must invest more in luring talent, promoting labor mobility, and modernizing the household registration system. It is critical to remove impediments to the flow of talent in the region by building viable pathways for high-level talent exchange. By recognizing professional qualifications, offering a decent education for children, and providing commercial health insurance, the Yangtze River Delta region can attract high-caliber talent.

Comprehensive measures must be implemented to improve capital market integration and fully realize its potential to stimulate economic growth in the Yangtze River Delta city cluster. Integration of capital markets is critical for regional economic growth since it provides financing services for industrial expansion and allows resources to be transferred to competitive industries. The development of high-quality integrated capital markets is aided by establishing synergistic financial service organizations between cities, which can improve service efficacy and optimize resource allocation. It is critical to note that capital market integration can impact economic growth by affecting how the economy is opened up. While the Yangtze River Delta city cluster works to improve internal openness, exterior openness must be emphasized by strengthening the local business climate and aggressively pursuing foreign direct investment. Improving foreign investment structure and quality can also help boost economic growth. Furthermore, it is critical to maintain and expand the Yangtze River Delta’s export trade organization and international service commerce. Economic growth can be stimulated by encouraging Yangtze River Delta city cluster capital market integration. It is critical to focus on enhancing efficiency, opening up to the outside world, and optimizing the structure of export trade and service institutions to achieve this.

This paper’s research outlook and shortcomings are: The paper’s approach to measuring labor, capital, and commodity market integration may need to be improved. For example, using average city wages as a deviation to gauge labor market integration may not adequately reflect disparities in specific industries. In order to capture more detailed aspects of labor market integration, future studies should look into industry-specific wage indices. Similarly, measuring capital market integration based on financial institutions’ RMB loan and deposit balances may provide an imperfect picture of regional capital flows. In capital market integration, "capital" includes fixed asset investments, government spending, and foreign investment. Future studies should widen the definition of "capital" and examine how regional capital movements affect capital market integration. By fixing these challenges, we can assess market integration in the Yangtze River Delta city cluster more accurately and precisely and better understand how it drives economic growth.

Data Availability

This paper takes 27 core cities of the Yangtze River Delta Urban Agglomeration as the research object, and the relevant data mainly come from the statistical yearbook of Shanghai, Zhejiang, Jiangsu and Anhui over the years and the statistical yearbook of Chinese cities.Data source website: https://data.cnki.net/yearbook/Single/N2019040068.

Funding Statement

The authors received no specific funding for this work.

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Reviewer #1: Dear Editor,

This is an interesting topic of relevance and would potentially make a contribution to the related literature. In addition, it has significant research findings and important policy implications. In my opinion, it also represents an unexplored, interesting topic to be investigated. However, the manuscript is well-articulated and presented but it has also some minor concerns to be incorporated before considering it for publication.

1- The introduction section is a little unfocused and too many references and old. It is proposed to revise the paragraphs according to the main ideas and be rewritten to highlight the contribution it is making to the extant literature. In its present form it is little bland and does not engage the reader. I think the introduction needs to focus on the topic and set up a story that highlights the purpose of the research, and there should be cohesion between the paragraphs.

2- The authors are required to rewrite the literature review section. The novelty of this paper should be further justified by highlighting main contributions to the existing literature. I can give the author some references as sample, the author can see and feel them:

Energy-related CO2 emissions and structural emission reduction in China’s agriculture: An input-output perspective

Energy carbon emission reduction of China’s transportation sector: An input–output approach

Structural emissions reduction of China's power and heating industry under the goal of "Double Carbon":A Perspective of Input-Output Analysis

Energy-related carbon emissions and structural emissions reduction of China's construction industry: the perspective of input-output analysis

3- The empirical results look weak. The author(s) need to deep and systematic analysis about the results should highlight the novelty of this manuscript.

4- The authors should increase policy recommendations aimed to articulate policy decisions.

5- Include limitations and further research.

6- Please unify font and format. It looks terrible.

7- The typesetting of formulas and equations is very poor. For example, p12...

8- Kindly follow the right style of citation (references) throughout the manuscript by checking the guidelines of (Plos one) journal or any previously published paper in the journal.

9- Overall, the quality of English used in this study requires significant improvement.

Reviewer #2: This manuscript reports on "Effect of Market Integration on Economic Growth: Evidence from the Yangtze River Delta urban agglomeration of China" My comments are listed as follows:

1. The English language needs more work. There are many grammatical and typo mistakes in this manuscript. The paper needs to be edited by a native English speaker.

2. The abstract should state in concise form, the purpose of the research, the principal results, and major conclusions.

3. Authors should motivate more their study and present the practical implications. Contribution to the existing literature should be improved.

4. Theoretical framework section is missing.

5. The authors should increase the Pixel size of Figure 1.

6. All equations should be referenced in the main text.

7. The empirical findings are not discussed well. If these findings advocate the existing literature's outcome, then what is new?

8. It would be more constructive if the authors discuss their empirical findings in graphical form.

9. R-square value is very low in Tables 8 and 11.

10. The author(s) need to compare their results (Each Finding) with past studies (what was provided in the article is not compares of result but an explanation of views from past authors) and in comparing the result from the empirical investigations the author(s) should as much as possible provide a recast of the comparison made and the supposed implications or advantages of the new finding made with those discovered by past authors. This will ensure justice to the extant literature and also evincing the superiority of the current findings over the past findings.

11. The conclusion and policy recommendations are not well written. Authors should add more to this section, especially in the aspect of policy framing and implementation.

Reviewer #3: The authors have attempted to test the effect of regional market integration on the economic development in a panel setting in China within a fixed effect model framework. The overall work is good. However, I feel that there is still some room to improve the paper before it can be published. My suggestions are attached in a separate file.

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Reviewer #1: Yes: Yang Yu

Reviewer #2: No

Reviewer #3: No

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


8 Nov 2022

A study of the economic growth effects of market integration: an examination of 27 cities from the Yangtze River Delta city cluster in

China

Modification instructions

Hello, editors and experts of 《PLOS ONE》:

Thank you very much for your seriousness and responsibility! I want to thank the experts for their valuable comments; I have read each comment carefully and revised them one by one; given the limited level, I hope the experts will forgive me if there is still something not in place or inappropriate and propose revisions again, I will take them seriously and be willing to make further revisions, thanks again to your journal and experts!

Reviewer I

Expert opinion 1: The introduction section is a little unfocused and too many references and old. It is proposed to revise the paragraphs according to the main ideas and be rewritten to highlight the contribution it is making to the extant literature. In its present form it is little bland and does not engage the reader.I think the introduction needs to focus on the topic and set up a story that highlights the purpose of the research, and there should be cohesion between the paragraphs.

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments. Based on the comments made by the experts, the author has revised the introduction section to focus more on the study of the effects of market integration on economic growth in the Yangtze River Delta of China and to reorganize the innovations in this paper, with the changes highlighted in blue.

Expert opinion 2: The authors are required to rewrite the literature review section. The novelty of this paper should be further justified by highlighting main contributions to the existing literature.I can give the author some references as sample, the author can see and feel them:

Energy-related CO2 emissions and structural emission reduction in China's agriculture: An input-output perspective

Energy carbon emission reduction of China's transportation sector: An input-output approach

Structural emissions reduction of China's power and heating industry under the goal of "Double Carbon":A Perspective of Input-Output Analysis

Energy-related carbon emissions and structural emissions reduction of China's construction industry: the perspective of input-output analysis

Revision note: I would like to thank the reviewers for their comments. Based on the comments made by the experts, the author has revised the literature review section to highlight the paper's addition to existing research and highlight the innovative nature of the paper. The revised sections are highlighted in blue.

Expert opinion 3: The empirical results look weak. The author(s) need to deep and systematic analysis about the results should highlight the novelty of this manuscript.

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments. Based on the comments made by the experts, the author has revised the results section to highlight the innovative nature of the paper, and the changes are highlighted in blue.

Expert opinion 4: The authors should increase policy recommendations aimed to articulate policy decisions.

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments. Based on the comments made by the experts, the author has revised the policy section to provide policy advice in terms of integration of commodity, labour and capital markets, respectively, and the changes are highlighted in blue.

Expert opinion 5: Include limitations and further research.

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments. Based on the comments made by the experts, the author has revised the policy section to provide policy advice regarding the integration of commodity, labor, and capital markets, respectively, and the changes are highlighted in blue.

Expert opinion 6: Please unify font and format. It looks terrible.

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments and based on the comments made by the experts, the author has revised the full text to follow the format of 《PLOS ONE》.

Expert Opinion 7: The typesetting of formulas and equations is very poor. For example, pl2...

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments. Based on the comments made by the experts, the author has revised the formulae and equations following the format of 《PLOS ONE》.

Expert Opinion 8: Kindly follow the right style of citation (references) throughout the manuscript by checking the guidelines of(Plos one) journal or any previously published paper in the journal.

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments. Based on the comments made by the experts, the author has made changes to the citation following the format of 《PLOS ONE》, and the changes are highlighted in blue.

Expert opinion 9: Overall, the quality of English used in this study requires significant improvement.

Revision note: I want to thank the reviewers for their comments. Based on the comments made by the experts, the author has used Grammarly to revise the entire text.

Reviewer II

Note

Expert opinion 1: The English language in this paper needs rigorous improvement. I strongly advice to use Grammarly or A/E digital editing service to improve the English. Please consult with a native speaker or someone with professional edliting experience to fix the pitfalls. Another thing is that, professionalism is expected from authors submiting papers in frontier jourmals. The authors have not followed the manner of writing at all including the referencing style. Please improve these issues.

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments. Based on the notes raised by the experts, the author has applied Grammarly throughout and revised the references following the 《PLOS ONE》 format, with the changes highlighted in blue.

Abstract

Expert opinion 1: The abstract is very general and it does not represent the big picture of allthe findings.I recommend that the authors incorporate the importance of this work(why the author feels that this work is important) in a sentence in the beginning of the abstract.

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments, and based on the comments made by the experts, and the author has revised the abstract section. Due to the tilt of Chinese national policies towards the Yangtze River Delta market integration and economic growth, as well as the attention paid to it, thus the author's study of the effects of the Yangtze River Delta market integration on economic growth has become significant, and most studies now focus on the national inter-provincial level and ignore the study of the Yangtze River Delta city cluster, revisions are highlighted in blue.

Expert opinion 2: Please include the major findings in detail, make them crispier and interesting.

Revision Note: Thanks to the reviewers' comments and based on the experts' comments, the author investigates the impact of regional market integration and its factors on economic growth and its mechanisms using a fixed-effects model based on panel data of 27 prefecture-level and above cities in the Yangtze River Delta region of China from 2010 to 2019. Using the threshold effect model, the paper further analyses the non-linear relationship between regional market integration and its factors and economic growth.

Introduction

Expert opinion 1: On page 2, for the first citation, please only include the family name of the author. Follow this pattern for all citations across the whole paper. Also, for the following sentence,"A typical case in point is that qualifications for entering the Direct-Selling market have been established for non-local brand-new energy vehicles", it seems that the authors fail to establish a cohesion in the development of structured meaning. Please provide some more background for the context of this sentence.

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments. Based on the comments made by the experts, the author has made changes to the citation following the format of 《PLOS ONE》, and the changes are highlighted in blue.

Expert opinion 2: Please provide reference for the statistics provided in the end of page 3.

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments, and in response to the experts' comments, the author has removed them to make the introduction more crisp and concise, with the changes highlighted in blue.

Expert opinion 3: On page 5, what do the authors mean by "Bu Maoliang etc.(2010) studied....?"

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments. Based on the comments made by the experts, the author has removed this section and revised it to follow the format of 《PLOS ONE》, with the changes highlighted in blue.

Expert opinion 4: The introduction section fails to convey adequate background information. To me, it more looks like a literature review than a background study.I suggest to curtail the detailed literature review in the intro section and merge them to the next section. In the intro, please try to establish a robust link between the core of the problem and how you can address the issues empiricaly.

Revision note: I thank I thank the reviewers for their comments. Based on the comments made by the experts, the author has removed the introduction and revised it following the format of 《PLOS ONE》, with the changes highlighted in blue.

Expert opinion 5: The novelty statement is missing. Please highlight how the paper is about to enrich the current literature. The marginal contributions are not sufficient to get published.

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments, and based on the comments made by the experts, the author has revised this marginal contribution, and the changes are highlighted in blue.

Literature Review

Expert opinion 1: Rename section 2 as Theory and literature review. Please add the current gaps in the literature in a single paragraph.

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments, and following the comments made by the experts, the title of the author's second section has been renamed Position Theory and Literature Review, with the changes highlighted in blue.

Expert opinion 2: The pattern of citation has to be homogenous across the paper. In the section 2, the authors have ignored the pattern as they mentioned the first and last name while citing from other works. Please fix this.

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments. Based on the comments made by the experts, the author has made changes to the citation following the format of 《PLOS ONE》, and the changes are highlighted in blue.

Methods

Expert opinion 1: Get rid of the full stops after each sub heading in section 3. On page 9,"(Zhao Ruyu etc,2019; Sun Bowen etc,2019))", why are you puting ETC??

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments and, based on the comments made by the experts, the full stop after each subheading in the author's section 3 has been removed, and the changes are highlighted in blue.

Expert opinion 2: There is no name of Fig 2. And please mention the source of the data used to construct the figure.

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments. Based on the comments made by the experts, the author has added the name of Figure 2. The relevant data are mainly obtained from the statistical yearbooks of Shanghai, Zhejiang, Jiangsu, and Anhui in previous years, the China Urban Statistical Yearbook, and so on. The revised parts are marked in blue.

Expert opinion 3: Be careful about the punctuation marks. Always put a comma before the word "respectively".

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments, and based on the comments made by the experts, and the author has made changes, which are highlighted in blue.

Expert opinion 4: Rewrite the equations 5,6,7, and 8 using the equation command of MS Word. They seem to be copied and pasted from another source.

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments. Based on the comments made by the experts, the author has made changes to the equation following the format of 《PLOS ONE》, with the changes highlighted in blue.

Expert opinion 5: Add a section for the unit root tests.

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments, and based on the comments made by the experts, the author has added a unit root test, and the changes are highlighted in blue.

Empirical analysis and conclusions

Expert opinion 1: For the Unit Root test results, indicate the significance level by’***’

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments. Based on the comments made by the experts, the author has used '***' to indicate the level of significance in the unit root test results, and the revision is highlighted in blue.

Expert opinion 2: The author should show that his findings are replicable and comparable with others. When discussing the outcomes,the author should cite from the recent literature to show that his findings are comparable. Please try to incorporate the recent progress in the literature in your discussion section.

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments, and based on the comments made by the experts, the author has made changes in the conclusion, with the changes highlighted in blue.

Expert opinion 3: There are so many typos and grammatical erors in the discussion section. The authors do not follow the simple rules of writing in English. There is a mixture of capital and small letters. For Table 6 and Table 9, please start the headings and other components of the Table with a capital letter.

Revision note: Thanks to the reviewers' comments, the author has revised it with Grammarly based on the comments made by the experts.

Summary

Expert opinion 1: Rename this section as "Conclusion and policy recommendations". Get rid of all the sub-sections of this section.You can write your concluding remarks first and then mention the policies step by step. Lastly, you can mention the limitations and prospect for future research.

Revision note: I thank the reviewers for their comments and based on the comments made by the experts; the author has made changes in the conclusion, which are highlighted in blue.

Decision Letter 1

Atif Jahanger

6 Dec 2022

PONE-D-22-23121R1A study of the economic growth effects of market integration: an examination of 27 cities from the Yangtze River Delta city cluster in

ChinaPLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Yang,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 20 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.

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Academic Editor

PLOS ONE

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Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer's Responses to Questions

Comments to the Author

1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.

Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #3: (No Response)

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2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: (No Response)

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: (No Response)

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.

Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: (No Response)

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5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.

Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: (No Response)

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6. Review Comments to the Author

Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)

Reviewer #1: After the detailed the modification, the comments of the reviewers have been considered and executed carefully by the authors, and the manuscript now shows good topic expression, academic writing, logical essay structure, and adequate quantitative methods with meticulous results discussions, most of the deficiencies have been solved and the depth is deepened.

However, there are still a few minor problems.

1. Please proofread for small grammatical errors and misspelled words.

2. Try to cite some of latest articles instead of the older ones. For example,

The effect of regional integration on urban sprawl in urban agglomeration areas: A case study of the Yangtze River Delta, China

The explanation of "U" curve can refer to the following literature

Achieving Carbon Neutrality Pledge through Clean Energy Transition: Linking the Role of Green Innovation and Environmental Policy in E7 Countries

Going away or going green in NAFTA nations? Linking natural resources, energy utilization, and environmental sustainability through the lens of the EKC hypothesis

3. Please note the coordination of the tables, some of which look too large.

4. kindly follow the right style of citation (references) throughout the manuscript by checking the guidelines of (PLOS ONE) journal or any previously published paper in the journal.

5. Overall, the quality of English used in this study requires significant improvement.

Reviewer #2: My comments have been addressed accordingly. Therefore, this paper is suitable for publication in this journal.

Reviewer #3: I thank the authors for submitting a revised version of their work. However, it is a complete disappointment that the authors have submitted the work naively and it is difficult to follow. The author is supposed to incorporate all the highlighted changes in the main submission. Instead of doing that the authors have submitted the changes in a different file, NOT in the main submission. This is not the appropriate manner of submitting the revised version of a paper.

I did not find any notable modifications in the abstract section. The authors have only written two sentences. This is not acceptable. Please address why the work is important, what is the implication of the findings and why do they matter. Write a sentence or two detailing the main message to the wider audience of Plos One.

There are still so many typos. I have also seen that the authors are mixing capital and small alphabets. I can also see that the authors have not followed the citation style recommend for the main body. The first and last names coming together with the etc.

I ask for another major revision by detailing all the comments made in the previous round. Submit a revised paper including all the changes in it (NOT Separately). Mark them in red.

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: No

Reviewer #3: No

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Author response to Decision Letter 1


15 Feb 2023

A study of the economic growth effects of market integration: an examination of 27 cities from the Yangtze River Delta city cluster in

China

Modification instructions

Hello, editors and experts of 《PLOS ONE》:

Thank you very much for your seriousness and responsibility! I want to thank the experts for their valuable comments; I have read each comment carefully and revised them one by one; given the limited level, I hope the experts will forgive me if there is still something not in place or inappropriate and propose revisions again, I will take them seriously and be willing to make further revisions, thanks again to your journal and experts!

Reviewer I

Expert opinion 1: Please proofread for small grammatical errors and misspelled words.

Revision note:Many thanks to the reviewers for their comments, the author proofread the whole text for minor grammatical errors and spelling mistakes, and modified sections are marked in red in the revision mode.

Expert opinion 2: Try to cite some of latest articles instead of the older ones. For example,

The effect of regional integration on urban sprawl in urban agglomeration areas: A case study of the Yangtze River Delta, China

The explanation of "U" curve can refer to the following literature

Achieving Carbon Neutrality Pledge through Clean Energy Transition: Linking the Role of Green Innovation and Environmental Policy in E7 Countries

Going away or going green in NAFTA nations? Linking natural resources, energy utilization, and environmental sustainability through the lens of the EKC hypothesis

Revision note:Many thanks to the reviewers for their comments, the author has added relevant and recent literature to the literature review. The modified parts are marked in red in the revision mode.

Expert opinion 3:Please note the coordination of the tables, some of which look too large.

Revision note:Many thanks to the reviewers for their comments, the author has adjusted the tables in the text to make them harmonize. The modified parts are marked in red in the revised model.

Expert opinion 4:kindly follow the right style of citation (references) throughout the manuscript by checking the guidelines of (PLOS ONE) journal or any previously published paper in the journal.

Revision note:Many thanks to the reviewers for their comments, the author revised the citations in the text and also revised and adjusted the references, and the revised parts are marked in red in the revised model.

Expert opinion 5:Overall, the quality of English used in this study requires significant improvement.

Revision note:Many thanks to the reviewers for their comments, the author has touched up the English used in the text, and the changes are marked in red in the revision mode.

Reviewer II

Expert opinion : My comments have been addressed accordingly. Therefore, this paper is suitable for publication in this journal.

Revision note:Many thanks to the reviewers for their approval!

Reviewer III

Expert opinion 1: I thank the authors for submitting a revised version of their work. However, it is a complete disappointment that the authors have submitted the work naively and it is difficult to follow. The author is supposed to incorporate all the highlighted changes in the main submission. Instead of doing that the authors have submitted the changes in a different file, NOT in the main submission. This is not the appropriate manner of submitting the revised version of a paper.

Revision note:The comments made by the reviewers are greatly appreciated, and the author will submit a revised manuscript that includes three documents, a rebuttal letter, a marked copy of the manuscript, and an unmarked revised paper, based on the comments made by PLOS ONE as well as the reviewers.

Expert opinion 2:I did not find any notable modifications in the abstract section. The authors have only written two sentences. This is not acceptable. Please address why the work is important, what is the implication of the findings and why do they matter. Write a sentence or two detailing the main message to the wider audience of Plos One.

Revision note:Many thanks to the reviewers for their suggestions, the author has revised the abstract section to indicate the importance of this study, etc. The changes are highlighted in red in the revised model.

Expert opinion 3:There are still so many typos. I have also seen that the authors are mixing capital and small alphabets. I can also see that the authors have not followed the citation style recommend for the main body. The first and last names coming together with the etc.

Revision note:Many thanks to the reviewers for their suggestions, the author will standardize the format of the article, and the revised parts are marked in red in the revision mode.

Expert opinion 4:I ask for another major revision by detailing all the comments made in the previous round. Submit a revised paper including all the changes in it (NOT Separately). Mark them in red.

Revision note:Many thanks to the suggestions made by the reviewers, the author has made significant changes and uploaded the files to the system separately, with the changes highlighted in red in the revision mode.

Decision Letter 2

Atif Jahanger

4 Apr 2023

PONE-D-22-23121R2A study of the economic growth effects of market integration: an examination of 27 cities from the Yangtze River Delta city cluster in

ChinaPLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Yang,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

Please submit your revised manuscript by May 18 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.

Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:

  • A rebuttal letter that responds to each point raised by the academic editor and reviewer(s). You should upload this letter as a separate file labeled 'Response to Reviewers'.

  • A marked-up copy of your manuscript that highlights changes made to the original version. You should upload this as a separate file labeled 'Revised Manuscript with Track Changes'.

  • An unmarked version of your revised paper without tracked changes. You should upload this as a separate file labeled 'Manuscript'.

If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter.

If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols.

We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript.

Kind regards,

Atif Jahanger, Ph.D

Academic Editor

PLOS ONE

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Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer's Responses to Questions

Comments to the Author

1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.

Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #3: (No Response)

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2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Partly

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: No

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5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: No

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6. Review Comments to the Author

Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)

Reviewer #1: After the detailed two rounds of & modification, the comments of the reviewers have been considered and executed carefully by the authors, and the manuscript R2 now shows good topic expression, academic writing, logical essay structure, and adequate quantitative methods with meticulous results discussions, most of the deficiencies have been solved and the depth is deepened. Thereafter, I do not have any more comments for manuscript R2, but I suggest the Tables should be properly displayed according to the requirement of Plos one. Please refer to the already published articles from plos one journal to perfect the format of every element in this manuscript.

Summing up the above, my recommendation is ACCEPT.

Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed by the authors. The current manuscript reads well and worth considering for publication.

Reviewer #3: Review Report

Paper Title: A study of the economic growth effects of market integration: an examination of 27 cities from the

Yangtze River Delta city cluster in China

This is the second revision that the author has submitted and I expected a substantial improvement in the quality of the writing. However, the improvements made are trivial and does not satisfy the rigor of the journal to be published. I will ask for a major revision again; however, if the author fails to adhere to my comments, this article should be rejected from publication. I strongly recommend the author to present a similarity check report using a plagiarism detector software such as Turnitin. My suggestions are as follows:

NOTE: The English language in this paper needs rigorous improvement. I strongly advice to use Grammarly or AJE digital editing service to improve the English. Please consult with a native speaker or someone with professional editing experience to fix the pitfalls. Another thing is that, professionalism is expected from authors submitting papers in frontier journals. The authors have not followed the manner of writing at all including the referencing style. Please improve these issues.

Abstract:

1. The abstract is very general and it does not represent the big picture of all the findings. I recommend that the authors incorporate the importance of this work (why the author feels that this work is important) in a sentence in the beginning of the abstract.

2. Please include the major findings in detail. At this moment, these are missing, and it will not attract any audience to read it.

Introduction

1.The introduction section fails to convey adequate background information. It is too concise to address the key points of why this research has been undertaken. Please enrich the background info. In the intro, please try to establish a robust link between the core of the problem and how you can address the issues empirically.

5. The novelty statement is missing. Please highlight how the paper is about to enrich the current literature. The marginal contributions are not sufficient to get published. Currently, the novelty section is missing.

Literature review

1.This section is written very monotonously without any break or sub-sections/headings, which is completely unprofessional. Please include sub-headings and try to write in moderately sized paragraphs.

2. Also, remove the marginal contribution section from literature review and add it using a point-by-point framework in the introduction.

3. Please include line number or page number. Change “Theory” as “Theoretical Framework”.

4. The author has overused “firstly”, “secondly” and so on…Please find alternatives of these overused words to simplify your writing.

Methods

1. Under Fig 1, “As can be seen from Fig 1, The relevant data are mainly from the statistical”…..You are mixing capital and small letters again. Fix this error.

2. Please include source of the variables in Table 1. There are several grammatical errors and typos. Please fix all. You have been warned about these mistakes in the first round of revision.

3. Please number the sections and sub-sections consecutively for a better reading experience.

5. Add a section for the unit root tests.

Empirical Analysis and Conclusion

1. Discuss the results posted in table 2. For the Unit Root test results, indicate the significance level by ‘***’

2. Please elaborate all abbreviations at their first mention (what are IPS and LLC unit root tests)

2. The author should show that his findings are replicable and comparable with others. When discussing the outcomes, the author should cite from the recent literature to show that his findings are comparable. Please try to incorporate the recent progress in the literature in your discussion section.

Conclusion

1. Conclusion needs to be more structured with the gist of what has been done and what has been achieved in this article. At this stage the major conclusions and the major findings are missing.

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7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: No

Reviewer #3: No

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Author response to Decision Letter 2


16 Apr 2023

A study of the economic growth effects of market integration: an examination of 27 cities in the Yangtze River Delta city cluster

Dear editors and experts of 《PLOS ONE》,

I appreciate your seriousness and responsibility in reviewing my article. Thank you for providing valuable comments, which I have read and addressed individually. However, as my expertise is limited, I would like your forgiveness if something still needs improvement or if any of my revisions are inappropriate. Please feel free to propose further revisions, and I will take them seriously and make the necessary changes. Once again, thank you to your journal and experts for their valuable contributions.

Reviewer I

Expert opinion :After the detailed two rounds of & modification, the comments of the reviewers have been considered and executed carefully by the authors, and the manuscript R2 now shows good topic expression, academic writing, logical essay structure, and adequate quantitative methods with meticulous results discussions, most of the deficiencies have been solved and the depth is deepened. Thereafter, I do not have any more comments for manuscript R2, but I suggest the Tables should be properly displayed according to the requirement of Plos one. Please refer to the already published articles from plos one journal to perfect the format of every element in this manuscript.

Summing up the above, my recommendation is ACCEPT.

Revision note:Thank you very much to the reviewers for your careful review and conscientious suggestions; I am honoured and encouraged to receive your acceptance. I have referred to published articles in plos one to refine the formatting of each element of this manuscript. I sincerely appreciate your time and effort in this process; your expertise and feedback have positively impacted my article. This article is the culmination of years of hard work by our team, and it means a lot to us to have it pass the rigorous review of the reviewers. Thank you again for your support and recognition!

Reviewer II

Expert opinion : All comments have been addressed by the authors. The current manuscript reads well and worth considering for publication.

Revision note:Thank you very much to the reviewers for your careful review and conscientious suggestions; I feel honoured and encouraged to receive your acceptance. I have referred to published articles in plos one to refine the formatting of each element of this manuscript. I sincerely appreciate your time and effort in this process; your expertise and feedback have positively impacted my article. This article is the culmination of years of hard work by our team, and it means a lot to us to have it pass the rigorous review of the reviewers. Thank you again for your support and recognition!

Reviewer III

Expert opinion 1: This is the second revision that the author has submitted and I expected a substantial improvement in the quality of the writing. However, the improvements made are trivial and does not satisfy the rigor of the journal to be published. I will ask for a major revision again; however, if the author fails to adhere to my comments, this article should be rejected from publication. I strongly recommend the author to present a similarity check report using a plagiarism detector software such as Turnitin. My suggestions are as follows:

NOTE: The English language in this paper needs rigorous improvement. I strongly advice to use Grammarly or AJE digital editing service to improve the English. Please consult with a native speaker or someone with professional editing experience to fix the pitfalls. Another thing is that, professionalism is expected from authors submitting papers in frontier journals. The authors have not followed the manner of writing at all including the referencing style. Please improve these issues.

Revision note:Thank you very much for your careful review and serious suggestions; I have submitted a similarity check report using plagiarism detection software (e.g. Turnitin) and used Grammarly to improve the English language as you requested, and I have refined the formatting of each element in this manuscript by referring to published articles in the journal plos one.

Abstract:

Expert opinion 2: The abstract is very general and it does not represent the big picture of all the findings. I recommend that the authors incorporate the importance of this work (why the author feels that this work is important) in a sentence in the beginning of the abstract.

Revision note:Based on the comments made by experts, the author begins the abstract by explaining the importance of this study, which can provide policymakers with suggestions on how to promote integrated regional development better, optimize the industrial structure, and strengthen urban collaboration, so that the resources and advantages of each city can be used more effectively to maximize economic benefits. At the same time, this study can also provide lessons and insights for developing other Chinese cities or economic regions. Revisions are highlighted in red.

Expert opinion 3:Please include the major findings in detail. At this moment, these are missing, and it will not attract any audience to read it.

Revision note:Based on the comments made by experts, the author concludes the abstract by stating the main findings of this study; firstly, the degree of market integration among the 27 cities in the Yangtze River Delta urban agglomeration has been increasing, with increasingly close ties in terms of trade, investment and population movement. Secondly, market integration has contributed to the overall economic growth of the Yangtze River Delta city cluster, especially in terms of regional industrial restructuring and transformation and upgrading. Finally, market integration will accelerate the industrial division of labour and synergistic development among cities, promoting the agglomeration of new industries and advanced manufacturing industries to the central cities and facilitating the development of profitable industries in individual cities. Revisions are highlighted in red.

Introduction

Expert opinion 4:The introduction section fails to convey adequate background information. It is too concise to address the key points of why this research has been undertaken. Please enrich the background info. In the intro, please try to establish a robust link between the core of the problem and how you can address the issues empirically.

Revision note:Based on the comments made by experts, the author adds in the citation section to explain that the critical issue of this study is to explore the impact of market integration on economic growth in the Yangtze River Delta and its development path because the Yangtze River Delta region is one of the important economic centers in China. The market integration process has been strengthened under policy guidance in recent years. The study aims to provide theoretical support and policy recommendations to achieve the economic integration of the Yangtze River Delta and to promote the economic development of the Yangtze River Delta. It also enriches the research background that the Yangtze River Delta region has an important position in the Chinese economy. The Yangtze River Delta region, which includes Shanghai, Jiangsu Province, Zhejiang Province and parts of Anhui Province, is one of the most developed and dynamic economic regions in China and one of the most competitive city clusters in the world, etc. while trying to establish a reliable link between the core of the problem and how you solve it empirically, by collecting and analyzing data adequately and using scientific methods to conduct empirical research in order to understand better the mechanism and path of the impact of market integration on economic growth and provide scientific basis and policy recommendations to promote the economic integration of the Yangtze River Delta. Revisions are highlighted in red.

Expert opinion 5:The novelty statement is missing. Please highlight how the paper is about to enrich the current literature. The marginal contributions are not sufficient to get published. Currently, the novelty section is missing.

Revision note:The novelty of this paper lies in the fact that it investigates the impact of market integration and its segmentation types on economic growth by empirically testing 27 cities in the Yangtze River Delta. Moreover, this paper finds that market integration and its subdivision types have an "inverted U" shape impact on economic growth, which provides a new theoretical and empirical basis for related research. Revisions are highlighted in red.

Literature review

Expert opinion 6:This section is written very monotonously without any break or sub-sections/headings, which is completely unprofessional. Please include sub-headings and try to write in moderately sized paragraphs.

Revision note:According to the comments made by experts, the author divided the literature review into four parts to elaborate and added relevant literature reviews on market integration contributing to economic growth, on market segmentation detrimental to economic growth, on market integration on economic growth in a non-linear "U" or inverted "U" shape, on market integration on economic growth related to the level of regional economic development, the modified part is marked in red.

Expert opinion 7:Also, remove the marginal contribution section from literature review and add it using a point-by-point framework in the introduction.

Revision note:Based on the comments made by the experts, the marginal contribution part of the author's literature review was deleted, and the marginal contribution was added in the introduction using a point-by-point framework, with the modified part highlighted in red.

Expert opinion 8:Please indicate the line number or page number. Replace "theory" with "theoretical framework".

Revision note:According to the expert's opinion, the author indicates the page number according to the journal requirements of plos one and changes the word "theory" to "theoretical framework," The revised part is marked in red.

Expert opinion 9:The writer overuses "firstly", "secondly", etc. Find alternatives to these overused words to simplify your writing.

Revision note:According to the expert's opinion, I deleted some "firstly" and "secondly" and replaced them to simplify my writing, and the revised parts are highlighted in red.

Methods

Expert opinion 10:Under Fig 1, “As can be seen from Fig 1, The relevant data are mainly from the statistical”…..You are mixing capital and small letters again. Fix this error.

Revision note:According to the comments made by the experts, the modified parts are marked in red.

Expert opinion 11:Please include source of the variables in Table 1. There are several grammatical errors and typos. Please fix all. You have been warned about these mistakes in the first round of revision.

Revision note:Based on the comments made by the experts, the author has corrected the grammatical and spelling errors in Table 1, including the sources of variables, and the corrected parts are marked in red font.

Expert opinion 12:Please number the sections and sub-sections consecutively for a better reading experience.

Revision note:According to the comments made by experts, the author of this paper's chapters and sub-chapters numbered consecutively for a better reading experience; the modified part is marked in red font.

Expert opinion 13:Add a section for the unit root tests.

Revision note:According to the experts' opinions, the author has added the part of the unit root test in "IV. Empirical Analysis (I) Unit Root Test," and the modified part is marked in red.

Empirical Analysis and Conclusion

Expert opinion 14:Discuss the results posted in table 2. For the Unit Root test results, indicate the significance level by ‘***’

Revision note:According to the comments made by experts, the contents of Table 2 in this paper are data sources, and descriptive statistics are not unit root test results. Data sources refer to the channels or ways the data was collected or obtained, such as experiments, surveys, observations, simulations, etc. On the other hand, descriptive statistics are methods of summarizing and presenting these data, including statistics and graphs such as mean, median, variance, standard deviation, frequency distribution tables, histograms, etc. Descriptive statistics can help one better understand the characteristics and distribution of data and provide a basis for subsequent data analysis. Using "***" to indicate the significance level is not necessary, and the modified part is marked in red font.

Expert opinion 15:Please elaborate all abbreviations at their first mention (what are IPS and LLC unit root tests)

Revision note:According to the comments made by the experts, the author details what IPS and LLC unit root tests are in the unit root test, and the modified part is marked in red font.

Expert opinion 16:The author should show that his findings are replicable and comparable with others. When discussing the outcomes, the author should cite from the recent literature to show that his findings are comparable. Please try to incorporate the recent progress in the literature in your discussion section.

Revision note:Based on the comments made by the experts, the author cited the relevant recent literature in the empirical analysis and conclusions, ensuring the reproducibility of the findings is one of the basic requirements in scientific research. Therefore, the authors should provide enough information and experimental details so that others can reproduce their findings. In addition, to demonstrate the comparability of their findings with other studies, authors should also cite recent literature to show the latest advances in the field. This can help readers better understand and place the findings in a broader context. Revisions are highlighted in red.

Conclusion

Expert opinion 17:Conclusion needs to be more structured with the gist of what has been done and what has been achieved in this article. At this stage the major conclusions and the major findings are missing.

Revision note:Based on the comments made by the experts, the author divides the structured points, etc., in the conclusion section to clearly articulate the main conclusions and findings, and the modified parts are marked in red font.

Decision Letter 3

Atif Jahanger

2 May 2023

PONE-D-22-23121R3A study of the economic growth effects of market integration: an examination of 27 cities from the Yangtze River Delta city cluster in

ChinaPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #3: (No Response)

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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Reviewer #3: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Last time I suggested the authors to arrange the tables appropriately as required by Plos one journal, I found that this version was still a little messy. Please take note of this point.

For English standard, it is suggested to use professional language editing services.

At the same time, the last chapter is about the key findings and policy recommendations. It is suggested to revise the content, that is, 6.1 is the conclusion and 6.2 is the policy recommendations. Or, instead of using subheadings, a paragraph is the conclusion of the study, and two or three paragraphs are the policy recommendations. It is suggested to look at how papers in similar fields have been published in Plos one for final chapters.

Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed my comments well. Therefore, this study can be accepted in this journal.

Good Luck

Reviewer #3: The authors have addressed the issues raised during the earlier stages of revision. However, there are still some loopholes that need to be addressed to be accepted for publication. As such, I recommend a major revision again. My points are as follows:

1. The abstract is too long now. Please make it concise. "The Yangtze Delta region, known for its economic dynamism and openness, is not immune to constraints. Administrative and trade barriers, as well as market segmentation caused

by local protection, all hinder development in this area. The June 2021 release of the 14th Five-Year

Plan for the Yangtze Delta Region identifies existing challenges and emphasizes the urgency of removing

institutional barriers that hinder the free movement of factors within the region. The plan

also calls for improving the current logistics system and eliminating obstacles and disruptions in

transporting goods and services between provinces". These lines are redundant, get rid of them. Keep the word limit below 300 words.

2. The main issue still remains with the introduction section. It does not make any sense why the author is having difficulty in understanding the way of writing introduction. Now this section is written monotonously, without any breaks and paragraphs. There is no background information and nothing has been mentioned as per the empirical findings. There is no novelty section as well.

3. Please write the intro section by introducing the problem. Discuss in paragraphs how market integration affect the regional economic growth. Discuss in a separate paragraph why this study is important. Discuss in paragraphs why did you select China and the regions. Discuss in separate paragraphs which work has been done in the respective domain of research. Discuss in separate paragraphs how you want to address the issue based on the theoretical framework. Also include a few lines about the econometric approaches used in this article.

4. After writing above points, write a novelty section in a point-by-point framework.

5. Add sub-headings for each of the paragraphs under the Literature review section.

6. Please proofread the paper again. Under section 2.2, you have written sections 2.1.1, 2.12..... "The impact of commodity market integration economic growth"

7. Please incorporate a map of the selected cities for easy reference.

8. What is "Aut" above section 3.2??

9. Line number 419 and 420 show that there are grammatical errors and typos. Please fix the issues.

10. For the Unit Root test results, indicate the significance level by ‘***’. Do it for ALL tables. Table name should be above the table.

11. Why there is a sub-section 3.1.1 under section 4????

12. Incorporate citations for the discussion under section 5. There is no citation at this moment.

13. Name section 6 as Conclusions and policy recommendations. Delete the subheadings in this section. Apart from discussion the main conclusions, incorporate the policies in a separate section. Also discuss the limitations of this paper.

14. Please include a similarity check report. I did not find any such report.

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Reviewer #2: No

Reviewer #3: No

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Author response to Decision Letter 3


25 May 2023

A study of the economic growth effects of market integration: an examination of 27 cities in the Yangtze River Delta city cluster

Dear editors and experts of 《PLOS ONE》,

I appreciate your seriousness and responsibility in reviewing my article. Thank you for providing valuable comments, which I have read and addressed individually. However, as my expertise is limited, I would like your forgiveness if something still needs improvement or if any of my revisions are inappropriate. Please feel free to propose further revisions, and I will take them seriously and make the necessary changes. Once again, thank you to your journal and experts for their valuable contributions.

Reviewer I

Expert opinion :Last time I suggested the authors to arrange the tables appropriately as required by Plos one journal, I found that this version was still a little messy. Please take note of this point.

For English standard, it is suggested to use professional language editing services.

At the same time, the last chapter is about the key findings and policy recommendations. It is suggested to revise the content, that is, 6.1 is the conclusion and 6.2 is the policy recommendations. Or, instead of using subheadings, a paragraph is the conclusion of the study, and two or three paragraphs are the policy recommendations. It is suggested to look at how papers in similar fields have been published in Plos one for final chapters.

Revision note:Many thanks to the reviewers for their suggestions, and I have amended the title of 6.2 to read Policy Recommendations, with the changes highlighted in red.

Reviewer II

Expert opinion :The authors have addressed my comments well. Therefore, this study can be accepted in this journal.

Good Luck

Revision note:Thank you very much to the reviewers for your careful review and conscientious suggestions; I feel honoured and encouraged to receive your acceptance. I have referred to published articles in plos one to refine the formatting of each element of this manuscript. I sincerely appreciate your time and effort in this process; your expertise and feedback have positively impacted my article. This article is the culmination of years of hard work by our team, and it means a lot to us to have it pass the rigorous review of the reviewers. Thank you again for your support and recognition!

Reviewer III

The authors have addressed the issues raised during the earlier stages of revision. However, there are still some loopholes that need to be addressed to be accepted for publication. As such, I recommend a major revision again. My points are as follows:

Expert opinion 1: The abstract is too long now. Please make it concise. "The Yangtze Delta region, known for its economic dynamism and openness, is not immune to constraints. Administrative and trade barriers, as well as market segmentation caused

by local protection, all hinder development in this area. The June 2021 release of the 14th Five-Year Plan for the Yangtze Delta Region identifies existing challenges and emphasizes the urgency of removing institutional barriers that hinder the free movement of factors within the region. The plan also calls for improving the current logistics system and eliminating obstacles and disruptions in transporting goods and services between provinces". These lines are redundant, get rid of them. Keep the word limit below 300 words.

Revision note:Many thanks to the reviewers for their suggestions, I have removed the references made by the reviewers and the abstract is now exactly 300 words long.

Expert opinion 2: The main issue still remains with the introduction section. It does not make any sense why the author is having difficulty in understanding the way of writing introduction. Now this section is written monotonously, without any breaks and paragraphs. There is no background information and nothing has been mentioned as per the empirical findings. There is no novelty section as well.

Revision note:Many thanks to the reviewers for their suggestions, and the author has rewritten the introduction section, with the changes highlighted in red.

Expert opinion 3:Please write the intro section by introducing the problem. Discuss in paragraphs how market integration affect the regional economic growth. Discuss in a separate paragraph why this study is important. Discuss in paragraphs why did you select China and the regions. Discuss in separate paragraphs which work has been done in the respective domain of research. Discuss in separate paragraphs how you want to address the issue based on the theoretical framework. Also include a few lines about the econometric approaches used in this article.

Revision note:Many thanks to the reviewers for their suggestions, and the author has rewritten the introduction section, with the changes highlighted in red.

Expert opinion 4:After writing above points, write a novelty section in a point-by-point framework.

Revision note:Many thanks to the reviewers for their suggestions, the author has rewritten the introduction followed by a note on novelty, with the changes highlighted in red.

Expert opinion 5:Add sub-headings for each of the paragraphs under the Literature review section.

Revision note:Many thanks to the reviewers for their comments, the author has added subheadings to each paragraph in the literature review section, with the changes highlighted in red.

Expert opinion 6:Please proofread the paper again. Under section 2.2, you have written sections 2.1.1, 2.12..... "The impact of commodity market integration economic growth"

Revision note:Many thanks to the reviewers for their comments, and I have proofread the title section of the paper, with the changes highlighted in red.

Expert opinion 7: Please incorporate a map of the selected cities for easy reference.

Revision note:Many thanks to the reviewers for their comments, I have placed the map of the Yangtze River Delta urban agglomeration after the introduction and the changes are highlighted in red.

Expert opinion 8:What is "Aut" above section 3.2??

Revision note:Many thanks to the reviewers for their comments, I have removed Aut from 3.2 and the changes are highlighted in red.

Expert opinion 9:Line number 419 and 420 show that there are grammatical errors and typos. Please fix the issues.

Revision note:Many thanks to the reviewers for their comments and I have corrected lines 419 and 420 which show grammatical errors and typos, with the corrections highlighted in red.

Expert opinion 10:For the Unit Root test results, indicate the significance level by ‘***’. Do it for ALL tables. Table name should be above the table.

Revision note:Many thanks to the reviewers for their comments, I have taken the results of the unit root test and marked the significance level using "***". This has been done for all tables and the names of the tables have been placed at the top of the tables, with the changes highlighted in red.

Expert opinion 11:Why there is a sub-section 3.1.1 under section 4????

Revision note:Many thanks to the reviewers for their comments, I have removed clause 3.1.1 under clause 4 and the changes are highlighted in red.

Expert opinion 12:Incorporate citations for the discussion under section 5. There is no citation at this moment.

Revision note:Many thanks to the reviewers for their comments, and the author has included a citation in section 5, with the changes highlighted in red.

Expert opinion 13:Name section 6 as Conclusions and policy recommendations. Delete the subheadings in this section. Apart from discussion the main conclusions, incorporate the policies in a separate section. Also discuss the limitations of this paper.

Revision note:The reviewer's comments are greatly appreciated and the author has named Section 6 as Conclusions and Policy Recommendations. Delete the subtitle of this section. Combine these strategies in a separate section, in addition to discussing the main conclusions. Also discusses the limitations of this paper. Changes are highlighted in red font.

Expert opinion 14:Please include a similarity check report. I did not find any such report.

Revision note:Thank you very much for the reviewer's feedback. I have attached a similarity check report in the other column of the upload system.

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Decision Letter 4

Atif Jahanger

19 Jun 2023

A study of the economic growth effects of market integration: an examination of 27 cities from the Yangtze River Delta city cluster in

China

PONE-D-22-23121R4

Dear Dr. Yang,

We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements.

Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication.

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Atif Jahanger, Ph.D

Academic Editor

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Reviewer #3: (No Response)

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Reviewer #3: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #3: Yes

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

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Reviewer #3: Yes

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5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

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Reviewer #3: Yes

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Reviewer #3: The work as it stands now looks well. The authors have done a great job. However, please address the following comments to polish the quality of your work.

1. Make sure that the keywords are written following the journal referred style. Do not mix capital and small letters.

2. This is very crucial, please make sure that ALL headings and sub-headings are written Either in Sentence Case OR Each word Capital Case. Right now, you have mixed it all throughout your manuscript.

3. Another critical issue is the paragraphing. The authors need to show minimum sense of paragraphing while writing a paper. In the introduction, there are too many small paragraphs, which can be merged to make reasonably sized paragraphs. Please make sure that you have at least 200 words in each of the paragraphs.

4. Please mention the statistical significance levels under EACH of the tables that has ***.

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Reviewer #3: Yes: Mohammad Razib Hossain

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Atif Jahanger

20 Nov 2023

PONE-D-22-23121R4

A study of the economic growth effects of market integration: an examination of 27 cities in the Yangtze River Delta city cluster

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