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. 2024 Feb 8;4(2):e0002892. doi: 10.1371/journal.pgph.0002892

The effect of biomass smoke exposure on quality-of-life among Ugandan patients treated for tuberculosis: A cross-sectional analysis

Sophie Wennemann 1,*, Bbuye Mudarshiru 2, Stella Zawedde-Muyanja 3, Trishul Siddharthan 4, Peter D Jackson 5
Editor: Reginald Quansah6
PMCID: PMC10852290  PMID: 38330053

Abstract

More than half the global population burns biomass fuels for cooking and home heating, especially in low-middle income countries. This practice is a prominent source of indoor air pollution and has been linked to the development of a variety of cardiopulmonary diseases, including Tuberculosis (TB). The purpose of this cross-sectional study was to investigate the association between current biomass smoke exposure and self-reported quality of life scores in a cohort of previous TB patients in Uganda. We reviewed medical records from six TB clinics from 9/2019-9/2020 and conducted phone interviews to obtain information about biomass smoke exposure. A random sample of these patients were asked to complete three validated quality-of-life surveys including the St. Georges Respiratory Questionnaire (SGRQ), the EuroQol 5 Dimension 3 Level system (EQ-5D-3L) which includes the EuroQol Visual Analog Scale (EQ-VAS), and the Patient Health Questionnaire 9 (PHQ-9). The cohort was divided up into 3 levels based on years of smoke exposure–no-reported smoke exposure (0 years), light exposure (1–19 years), and heavy exposure (20+ years), and independent-samples-Kruskal-Wallis testing was performed with post-hoc pairwise comparison and the Bonferroni correction. The results of this testing indicated significant increases in survey scores for patients with current biomass exposure and a heavy smoke exposure history (20+ years) compared to no reported smoke exposure in the SGRQ activity scores (adj. p = 0.018) and EQ-5D-3L usual activity scores (adj. p = 0.002), indicating worse activity related symptoms. There was a decrease in EQ-VAS scores for heavy (adj. p = 0.007) and light (adj. p = 0.017) exposure groups compared to no reported exposure, indicating lower perceptions of overall health. These results may suggest worse outcomes or baseline health for TB patients exposed to biomass smoke at the time of treatment and recovery, however further research is needed to characterize the effect of indoor air pollution on TB treatment outcomes.

Introduction

Burning biomass fuels for cooking, home-heating, etc. is a practice utilized by more than half of the global population and a common source of indoor air pollution, primarily in low-middle income countries [1]. In Uganda in 2021, only 0.7% of the population relied primarily on clean fuels and technologies for cooking [2]. Long-term exposure to household air pollution like biomass fuels has been linked to various pulmonary diseases including chronic obstructive pulmonary disease (COPD), pneumonia, and tuberculosis (TB) [1], and the World Health Organization (WHO) attributed 3.2 million deaths globally to household air pollution in 2019 [3]. While the effect of biomass smoke exposure on the risk of TB diagnosis is well-established, few studies have focused on patient reported outcomes (PROMS) related to post-cure TB and biomass smoke exposure. In this cohort study of TB patients in Uganda, we assessed the association between biomass smoke exposure and self-reported health outcomes using validated quality of life measures.

Methods

Ethics statement

Regulatory approval for this cross-sectional study was obtained from the Makerere University School of Medicine Research and Ethics Committee of the College of Health Sciences (Ref: MakSOMREC 2021–54) and the Virginia Commonwealth University IRB (HM20020265). All subjects who completed questionnaires by phone provided verbal consent via phone witnessed by a member of our Ugandan research team in accordance with local regulations regarding human subject interviews, consent was documented on paper records and in the REDCap database. Phone interviews were conducted by Ugandan research assistants with significant experience in medical research. Interviews were conducted in English or Luganda, the two official languages of Uganda. All QOL questionnaires were translated to Luganda by a medical interpreter and approved by the Makerere University SOMREC. All consenting procedures were approved by aforementioned regulatory bodies. During data collection authors PJ (principal investigator) and BM (study coordinator) had access to identifying information to allow additional data collection in the event of mis-keyed, missing or misclassified data. Following study completion, no author had access to identified data and all data analysis was performed on deidentified data to prevent bias.

Data collection

This analysis was imbedded in a previously published study which begun February of 2022, medical records were reviewed for patients receiving TB care between September 2019–2020 at three urban and three rural TB clinics in Uganda [4]. The rural clinics included Jinja Regional Referral Hospital, Mubende Regional Referral hospital and Kiboga General Hospital. The urban clinics included Kiruddu National Referral Hospital-Kampala district, Kisenyi Health Centre IV-Kampala district and Mulago National Referral Hospital-Kampala district. In an effort to obtain a representative sample, these clinics represented urban and rural centers as well as smaller referral hospitals (Kiboga, Kisenyi) and large national referral hospitals (Mulago, Kirrudu). Demographic, social, and medical information was collected via chart review for 1,624 subjects. Of these subjects, 1320 had phone numbers available and phone calls were attempted. To mitigate selection bias, individuals who did not answer were called three times on different days, and family contact numbers within the charts were also called to attempt to reach them. Of these individuals, 54% (710/1320) were ultimately contacted and consented for interviews (Fig 1). During these interviews, patients reported biomass exposure within their home including years used and past history of exposure. One quarter of patients (n = 178) were randomly selected to complete three validated quality of life (QOL) questionnaires during the phone interviews: the EuroQol-5D-3L (EQ-5D-3L), the St. George Respiratory Questionnaire (SGRQ), and the Patient Health Questionnaire (PHQ-9). Every fourth patient called and consented was selected to do these surveys, and this method was chosen to reduce the length of the interviews for the majority of the subjects within the study. Although a priori sample calculations were not performed, a conservative estimate based on data from Katoto et al. suggests that a sample of 146 would be sufficient to detect an OR of 2.7 assuming with power of 80% and type 1 error of 0.05, to detect worse symptoms in subjects previously treated for TB with biomass exposure [5].

Fig 1. Consort diagram summarizing data collection and exclusion.

Fig 1

SGRQ = St. George’s Respiratory Questionnaire, EQ-5D-3L = EuroQol-5D-3L, EQ-VAS = EuroQol Visual Analog Scale, PHQ9 = Patient Health Questionnaire. *A small number of subjects were able to finish at least one survey, but not all three due to time constraints, dropped calls, etc. The SGRQ has a significantly lower number of responses than the PHQ9 and EQ-5D-3L because it requires significantly longer time to complete, and some subjects had issues with time constraints.

The EQ-5D-3L measures 5 dimensions of health (mobility, self-care, usual activities, pain/discomfort, and anxiety/depression) using 3 levels (no, some, or extreme problems), with higher scores indicating more problems [6]. A visual analog scale (EQVAS) is also used, which has been validated to be delivered via phone [7] in which patients are asked to verbally quantify their current health on a scale of 0–100, with 0 indicating “the worst health you can imagine” and 100 indicating “the best health you can imagine.” The SGRQ is a 16-question survey that calculates 3 weighted component scores including symptoms (frequency and severity), activity (activities limited by respiratory symptoms), and impacts (social/psychological disturbances of airway disease), as well as a total score. Higher scores indicate increased severity and/or frequency of symptoms, greater limitations on activities, and more severe social/psychological impacts, respectively [8]. The PHQ-9 is a 9-question survey used to quantify depression severity, with higher scores indicating increased severity [9]. Given the various facets of health that may be affected by biomass exposure and TB disease, we elected to use the EQ-5D-3L to measure overall health related quality of life; the St. George Respiratory Questionnaire (SGRQ), to specifically measure respiratory quality of life; the PHQ-9 to measure the mental health effects of TB infection. All of these questionnaires have been used in TB research previously and are validated within Uganda and used extensively in research in low-middle income countries [1015].

Statistical analysis

Patients with complete questionnaires were stratified into three groups based on their level of biomass smoke exposure, with 0 years considered “no reported exposure”, 1–19 years considered “light exposure”, and 20+ years considered “heavy exposure” (Table 1). The phrase “no reported” smoke exposure is used to describe patients who did not report burning biomass fuels indoors. This term was chosen to recognize passive exposures throughout their lifetime i.e., from public or community exposures. Twenty years was selected as the cutoff for heavy exposure as this correlated with the top quintile of our cohort. Subjects who did not complete any of the surveys were not included in the analysis. Separate analyses were run for current biomass exposure years and past biomass exposure years. Scores from each questionnaire were compared between groups using an independent-samples-Kruskal-Wallis test with post hoc pairwise comparison and the Bonferroni correction to counteract multiple comparisons.

Table 1. Characteristics of all participants by exposure group.

Chart review: 1624 Charts total    
Age in years, median (IQR): 34 (26–43)
Gender: Female: 37% (601/1624), Male 63% (1024/1623)
Completed interviews with at least 1 complete survey: 174
Variables Overall No reported exposure (n=106) Light exposure (1–19 years) (n=31) Heavy exposure (20+ years) (n=37) P-values
Age in years, median (IQR): 36 (IQR 26–47) 30 (37–23) 30 (25–40) 41 (32–50) <0.001*
Gender  
Female 62 (35.6%) 29 (27.4%) 17 (54.8%) 16 (43.2%) 0.011**
Male 112 (64.4%) 77 (72.6%) 14 (45.2%) 21 (56.8%)
Quantiles of SES  
Lower 66 (37.9%) 45 (42.5%) 13 (41.9%) 8 (21.6%) 0.092**
Middle 60 (34.5%) 38 (35.8%) 8 (25.8%) 14 (37.8%)
Upper 48 (27.6%) 23 (21.7%) 10 (32.3%) 15 (40.5%)
Smoking history (cigarettes, cigars, or pipes)
No 140 (80.5%) 86 (81.1%) 24 (77.4%) 30 (81.1%) 0.895**
Yes 34 (19.5%) 20 (18.9%) 7 (22.6%) 7 (18.9%)

SES: socioeconomic status, IQR: Interquartile Range

*Kruskal-Wallis test used

**Chi-square test used

We tested for confounding by age, income, and history of smoking cigarettes, pipes, or cigars (yes/no) using multivariate linear regression analysis with p <0.05 considered significant. These confounders were chosen for analysis as they are known to have independent effects on quality of life related to health, respiratory health and depression. Age and tobacco use are directly linked to changes in pulmonary physiology and function, which could have affected overall differences in results between groups if not assessed. Income is a common confounder for biomass exposure and QOL data in low-middle income countries. The medical charts at the TB clinics were also reviewed and queried for cardiopulmonary comorbidities that could potentially confound results, including heart failure, other heart diseases, asthma, chronic bronchitis, emphysema, and COPD. Medical history and presence of these comorbidities were also confirmed directly with the patient via phone interview. Of the subjects who had completed surveys and were included in the analysis, two had diagnosed asthma and two had diagnosed heart failure, with no other relevant comorbidities. Due to the lack of significant difference in pre-existing cardiopulmonary disease between biomass smoke groups, confounding analysis was not performed for these comorbidities.

Results

For all questionnaires, there was no significant difference between exposure groups based on past biomass smoke exposure. In all the analyses outlined below, patients were grouped based on current biomass smoke exposure years. The SGRQ was completed by 157 patients of whom the median age was 33 (interquartile range IQR 25.5–41.5) and 66.2% were male. Of these patients, 33 had heavy biomass smoke exposure (21%), 29 had light exposure (18.5%), and 95 had no reported exposure (60.5%). The total scores produced differences between groups on the initial Kruskal-Wallis test (p = 0.047) but not the adjusted pairwise comparison (SE = 9.096, adj. p = 0.057) (Table 2). There were differences in the isolated SGRQ activity scores between the heavy exposure versus no reported exposure groups (SE = 7.869 adj. p = 0.018) (Table 2, Fig 2A). Linear regression indicated age (SE = 0.155, p = 0.951), income (SE = 6.34E-6, p = 0.972), and smoking history (standard error SE = 0.176 p = 0.155) were not significant confounders. There were no significant differences between groups for isolated SGRQ impact scores (p = 0.071) or symptoms scores (p = 0.191) (Table 2).

Table 2. Analyses of differences in survey scores between exposure groups.

Kruskal-Wallis Test Pairwise comparison*
Survey N Test Statistic Asymptotic Sig. (2-sided-test) Comparison groups Test Statistic Std. Error Std. Test Statistic Sig. Adj. Sig.**
SGRQ Activity score 157 8.357 0.015 No reported-Light exposure -12.785 8.262 -1.547 0.122 0.365
No reported-Heavy exposure -21.617 7.869 -2.747 0.006 0.018
Heavy exposure-Light exposure -8.833 9.913 -0.891 0.373 1
SGRQ Total score 157 6.118 0.047 No reported-Light exposure -12.756 9.551 -1.336 0.182 0.545
No reported-Heavy exposure -21.342 9.096 -2.346 0.019 0.057
Heavy exposure-Light exposure -8.586 11.458 -0.749 0.454 1
EQ5D3L Activity domain 173 12.022 0.002 No reported-Light exposure -1.714 6.637 -0.258 0.796 1
No reported-Heavy exposure -21.208 6.208 -3.416 <0.001 0.002
Heavy exposure-Light exposure -19.494 7.906 -2.466 0.014 0.041
EQ-VAS score 173 14.355 <0.001 No reported-Light exposure 2.957 12.069 0.245 0.806 1
No reported-Heavy exposure 30.521 9.477 3.221 0.001 0.004
Heavy exposure-Light exposure 27.563 10.132 2.72 0.007 0.02
PHQ9 score 174 4.923 0.085 - - - - - -

SGRQ = St. George’s Respiratory Questionnaire, EQ-5D-3L = EuroQol-5D-3L, EQ-VAS = EuroQol Visual Analog Scale, PHQ9 = Patient Health Questionnaire

*Each row tests the null hypothesis that the Sample 1 and Sample 2 distributions are the same.

Asymptotic significances (2-sided tests) are displayed. The significance level is 0.050.

**Significance values have been adjusted by the Bonferroni correction for multiple tests.

Fig 2.

Fig 2

(A) St. George Respiratory Questionnaire (SGRQ) activity scores in patients with heavy, light, and no-reported biomass smoke exposure. The heavy exposure group had significantly higher scores than the no reported exposure group (SE = 7.869 adj. p = 0.018), indicating greater activity limitations. (B) Distribution of scores on the EuroQol-SD-3L Usual Activities questionnaire between heavy, light, and no reported exposure groups. The heavy exposure group reported significantly higher scores than both the no reported exposure (SE = 6.208, adj. p = 0.002) and light exposure (SE = 7.906, adi. p = 0.041) groups, indicating more activity limitations.

The EQ-5D-3L was completed by 173 patients of whom the median age was 33 (IQR 26–42) and 64.7% were male. Of these patients, 37 had heavy biomass smoke exposure (21.4%), 31 had light exposure (17.9%), and 105 had no reported exposure (60.7%). There were increases in the EQ1 mobility domain scores between groups (p = 0.001), but linear regression showed age (SE = 0.001, p = 0.004) and biomass exposure (SE = 0.009, p = 0.004) both had significant contributions to these differences. There were increases in usual activity domain scores (EQ3) between heavy exposure and both no reported exposure (SE = 6.208, adj. p = 0.002) and light exposure (SE = 7.906, adj. p = 0.041) groups (Table 2, Fig 2B). Linear regression showed no confounding by age (SE = 0.003, p = 0.102), income (SE = 1.265 E-7, p = 0.252) or smoking history (SE = 0.077, p = 0.110). The remaining EQ-5D-3L domains showed no significant differences.

There was a decrease in EQ-VAS scores in the light (SE = 9.123, p = 0.017) and heavy (SE = 8.533, p = 0.007) exposure groups compared to the no-reported exposure group (Table 2, Fig 3). Age (SE = 0.117, p = 0.195), income (SE = 4.9E-6, p = 0.744), and smoking history (SE = 2.943, p = 0.063) were not significant confounders.

Fig 3. EuroQol Visual Analogue Scale (EQ6-VAS) scores in patients with heavy, light. and no-reported biomass smoke exposure.

Fig 3

Patients in heavy (SE = 8.533, p = 0.007) and light (SE = 9.123, p = 0.017) exposure groups had significantly lower scores compared to the no exposure group, indicating worse perception of their overall health.

The PHQ-9 was completed by 174 patients, of whom the median age was 36 (IQR 26–46.75) and 13.2% were male. Of these patients, 37 had heavy biomass smoke exposure (21.3%), 31 had light exposure (17.8%), and 106 had only no-reported smoke exposure (60.9%). There was no significant difference in mean PHQ-9 scores between biomass smoke exposure groups in the initial test (p = 0.085).

Discussion

This cross-sectional study compared self-reported QOL scores in a cohort of Ugandan patients with varying degrees of biomass smoke exposure previously treated for TB. Our analysis centered specifically on the interplay of QOL after TB infection in those with biomass smoke exposure due to the growing interest in post-TB lung disease, which is defined as respiratory symptoms and pulmonary dysfunction after microbiologic cure. Our results show that previous TB patients with current heavy biomass smoke exposure in this sample reported worse symptoms related to activity on both the SGRQ and EQ-5D-3L, and those with any level of current biomass smoke exposure reported worse overall health than those with no-reported exposure on the EQVAS.

Pulmonary disease from biomass smoke is likely due to airway inflammation mediated by reactive oxygen species and proinflammatory cytokines. Similar to cigarette smoke, biomass smoke induces increased expression of matrix metalloproteases linked to obstructive lung disease [1618]. Previous studies have shown structural lung defects (i.e., reduced pulmonary small vessel area, small airway remodeling) on CT scans of healthy individuals with biomass smoke exposure [19]. Increased prevalence of pulmonary symptoms and airway inflammation have also been found in patients with long-term biomass smoke exposure [20]. These effects of biomass smoke increase the pre-test probability of lung disease within this population and thus may affect TB outcomes, however, alternate explanations including impaired immunity from biomass smoke exposure may also contribute to QOL following TB treatment [21].

There are very few published studies investigating quality of life in Ugandan TB patients after cure. To our knowledge, this is one of the first studies investigating this in the specific context of biomass smoke exposure. In a cross-sectional study of obstructive lung disease and QOL after cure of multi-drug-resistant TB at one rural and one urban hospital in Uganda, Nuwagira et al., found that patients reported high rates of COPD and poor mental and physical health as assessed by the Medical Outcomes Survey for HIV (MOS-HIV). They also found the median total score on the St. George’s Respiratory Questionnaire (SGRQ) to be normal, but did not report data about the individual domains of the SGRQ [22]. It is important to note that this study reported median QOL scores in a standalone fashion without comparison to another group, whereas our study used these scores as a relative measure to compare QOL between groups with different risk profiles. However, the overall results of this study highlight the possible lasting impact of TB on perceived quality of life, even post-cure. A similar finding was reported by Daniels et al. in their study of quality of life in post-cure TB patients in Breede Valley District, South Africa [23].

Given the cross-sectional nature of this study, we are unable to determine if differences in survey results represent pre-existing poor health related to biomass smoke or worse treatment outcomes in previous TB patients. Key limitations of this study include the lack of a control group without previous TB with varying rates of biomass exposure to determine the magnitude of our findings within previous TB patients specifically. Given the lack of baseline spirometric data for this cohort, we cannot determine their pulmonary health prior to TB to exclude baseline lung disease as a confounder. While this is a significant limitation, the logistical challenges of obtaining pulmonary function testing prior to data collection in a random sample of tuberculosis patients is significant and beyond the scope of this study. Of note, subjects with a reported history of exposure did not have significant differences in their QOL surveys indicating that current exposure and not past history and baseline lung disease may be contributing to this finding.

Selection of our sample raises several limitations in that only 53.7% of charts with phone numbers were able to be contacted and consented to interview; additionally, within the 178 randomly selected to complete QOL surveys, 12% (21 subjects) were unable to successfully complete all three surveys due to time constraints, dropped calls, etc. As a result, the SGRQ ended up having a much lower completion rate than the EQ-5D-3L and the PHQ9 due to its length. These discrepancies could represent selection bias if systematic differences (i.e., lower SES, more demanding employment, comorbid conditions) in the characteristics of individuals who were eligible and participated in the study differed from those who were eligible but did not participate in the study. Collecting surveys during in-person meetings or appointments may have mitigated this issue, however in-person collection was limited in our study period due to COVID-19 restrictions. Other possible sources of bias include recall bias both while completing the questionnaires and when asked about numbers of years exposed to biomass smoke. This limitation is inherent to such work however, and collecting longitudinal personal information on objective biomass smoke exposure in a cohort of subjects who will go on to have TB is logistically challenging. Finally, other factors such as ambient air pollution, stove type, stove age, and ventilation factors, which provide great variation in air pollutant concentrations and therefore degree of exposure [24], were not included in our analysis. While basic details about these factors were collected, the number of subjects within each group when separated by fuel type, ventilation, and stove type were too small to have adequate power for analysis.

Nevertheless, it is still plausible to consider how biomass smoke exposure could worsen post TB-cure lung impairment and contribute to worse outcomes in previous TB patients. Up to half of cured TB patients already experience ongoing symptoms and have abnormal spirometric tests post-cure [18], which could reasonably affect their ability to perform daily life tasks that require more physical exertion. Given the proposed mechanism of biomass smoke related pulmonary disease, it is possible that greater exposure to biomass smoke could act as potential risk factor for ongoing pulmonary symptoms and suboptimal treatment outcomes for TB. While this study is not definitive, it provides insight into the potential contribution of biomass smoke exposure as a risk factor for worse QOL after TB treatment. Additional research may be warranted to further investigate the interplay between biomass smoke exposure and post-TB lung disease.

Supporting information

S1 Checklist. STROBE statement—checklist of items that should be included in reports of observational studies.

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S1 Data. De-identified data.

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S1 Datakey. Data key.

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Data Availability

All data used as well as a key have been included in the submission as supporting information files.

Funding Statement

Funder Name: NIH, CTSA award No. UL1TR002649 from the National Center for Advancing Translational Sciences to support data collection (P.J.) Funder Name: CHEST Foundation Grant Number: Chest Foundation/ATS Research Grant in COVID and Diversity Grant Recipient: Dr Peter Durham Jackson Funder Name: American Thoracic Society Grant Number: Chest Foundation/ATS Research Grant in COVID and Diversity Grant Recipient: Dr Peter Durham Jackson Funder Name: School of Medicine, Virginia Commonwealth University Grant Number: DOIM Pilot Grant Grant Recipient: Dr Peter Durham Jackson The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: The article meets a recognized need of patient related data on quality of life of Uganda patients with TB exposure and treatment who might have concomitant exposure to indoor air pollution from biomass fuel.Unfortunately, in its current state it partially fails to meet the criteria for PLOS Global public health journal publication and has a flawed manuscript with conclusions that are supported by a seemingly compromised data collection process. The cross sectional study design for the primary research question posed projects an ethically and methodologically sound design with limitations and weaknesses that can be fully analyzed and presented. However, In my opinion, data collection process is a science which needs mastery execution to validate the data collected.

An attempt at statistical analysis of the data is seen through the mathematical formulas to infer or defer any data correlation or association but its meaning remain tainted with the aforementioned shortcomings. Additionally, a comment on data availability cannot be made at this point as the reviewer failed to access the supplementary data in its .xlx format.

In attempt to revise the aforementioned shortcomings, the following recommendations can be considered.

Line 32- the use of three data collection tools is commendable particularly in consideration of the type and quality of data that needs to be gathered to answer the posed question, however, a critical analysis of the data collection tools themselves needs to be provided in the form of a rationale for why they were selected and their advantages and disadvantages to the task they are being set to accomplish e.g how the tool depends on recall bias, language and understanding etc.

Line 63- author’s access to unblinded data is mentioned but is not acknowledged as a weakness in the limitations section. This mention as a weakness is validated by the potential author report bias that could affect the data collection and synthesis process. Additionally a detailed mentioning of which authors had access to the information would strengthen evidence based on a critical analysis of the data collectors skill/qualification to do so.

Line 72 and 92- there is paucity of information on the high attrition rate of 46% eg why 46% did not complete the interview and what was or could be done to reduce this high rate.

Line 74- provide an adequate description and rationale of the randomization process to select the 1/4 selected to complete questionnaires AND detail on the implementation of the phone interviewing eg call duration, language used, data collector’s qualifications etc because this helps judge the quality of evidence collected especially considering how a ‘visual’ analog scale was conducted through a phone interview(line80).

Line 95- provide rationale why the selected confounders were selected from a very wide range of confounders that could potentially misrepresent the meaning of the collected data. eg the recognized and mentioned limitations that lack of spirometric data, pre-existing pulmonary function etc could also confound the result’s interpretation. in the same vein, the ‘chart review’ process for data collection on cardiopulmonary comorbidities was no fully described and might need clarification on which chart was reviewed and if it was the best one to use for such relevant data seeing as this would affect interpretation of the results.

Line 104- There is an obvious discrepancy on the total patients who completed each questionnaire and the existence of this difference is not explained. This might challenge the comparability of the tools used for data collection (line 148) if not challenging the accuracy and validity of the actual result concluded for each tool.

Reviewer #2: Rationale

• It is not clear why study was done among TB patients. QoL due to biomass fuel can be poor irrespective of the TB status.

• Is the objective descriptive or analytical?

Methods

• The rationale for light/heavy exposure cut-offs not clear

• What was the objective for which sample size was calculated?

• What were the assumptions for sample size calculation?

• Was sample size adequate for analytical study?

Results

• The first para should describe QoL as per various scales. Objectives seem descriptive, but the results seem like an analytical study.

• Whether the biomass fuel exposure was current or in the past? With access to clean fuels, people might have changed their cooking fuel in the recent years.

• Describe the data as per various domains

• Too many models with no clear message. It is not clear if sample size is sufficient for such analysis.

Discussion

• If the objective was to see whether TB patients with biomass exposure had worse outcomes, a comparison group of non-TB patients should have been included in the study design. In the absence of control group, no interpretation can be made whether QoL is any different for TB patients.

• Discussion should focus on how the QoL compared with other TB studies in the same country/ similar settings.

Reviewer #3: 1. Concern about study design :

The study design is announced in the the discussion section (Lines 145, 157). Isn't it better to specify this at an earlier stage, to fix the reader's mind?

Suggested places : abstract, methodology and eventually in the title.

2. Concerns about samples and discrepancies between some sections

a. What population is studied ?

The authors say: « Beginning in February of 2022, Medical records were reviewed for patients receiving TB care from September, 2019 to September, 2020 at three urban and three rural TB clinics in Uganda ». lines 65 to 67

The first idea that emerge from this paragraph is that the studied group is TB patients (i.e. currently undergoing treatment). However, the dates seem to point towards previous patients. If Uganda applies the same treatment durations as we know (6 or 12 months), the cohorts from September 2019 to September 2020 are expected to complete their treatment before data collection in February 2022. Your discussion seems to support my point of view when you write "... previously treated for TB (L145-146)...". However, immediately afterwards, you refer again to patients with TB L146-148...". Isn't TB curable? So people who have been treated and declared cured from TB are no longer patients. In my opinion, these two concepts cannot be used for each other, as they refer to very different study populations.

Suggestions: it's important to make a choice and maintain consistency by talking about either "TB patients" or " previous patients" and not both.

b. sample representativeness

The authors state that subjects were selected from 6 structures (3 urban and 3 rural). However, the authors do not say anything about the number of medical centers that care for TB patients in Uganda, or about the selection technique used to select these 6 structures (whether random or not). At the same time, the title, objective and conclusion seem to suggest that the study results are applicable to Ugandan TB patients (or previous TB patients).

Questions: Is the sample of TB patients drawn from these 6 medical centers representative of Ugandan TB patients? The secondary questions to which we would like to find answers in the methodology are: Are the 6 selected facilities representative of the facilities that care for TB patients in Uganda? What weight do the patients cared for in these 6 facilities represent on a national scale? What is the spatial distribution of these 6 facilities across Uganda?

Suggestion: It may be necessary to provide more details on sampling or to adapt the title, objective and conclusion.

c. Sample size

How was the sample size estimated ? If exhaustive sample, please specify it.

Line 72 « Of these individuals, 54% (710/1320) and 672 completed interviews ». Is this sentence complete ? Finally, how much completed interviews :710 or 672 ?

Suggestion : It may be useful to add a flow chart showing the steps used to select the subjects included in the study and the stratification of respondents into the 3 groups.

3. Exposure concerns

Curiosity: what exactly does "zero exposure" mean? We know that there are many places of exposure, and that people can be passively exposed, for example in transport, in public places, during bush fires, ..... I don't personally believe that there are people with zero exposure. But if a threshold value has been used, if certain exposures have been minimized, this should be clearly indicated.

Exposure to smoke was investigated by starting from the interview period and working backwards, but the backward period was not defined in the paper. How was recall bias controlled? Similarly, the way in which years are counted needs to be clarified in the methodology, given that there may be periods of non-exposure due to travel, for example.

4. Results presentation

Is it not important to present some descriptive and inferential statistics in the tables?

Reviewer #4: Wenneman et al, in their paper “The effect of Biomass Smoke Exposure on Quality-Of-Life among Ugandan Patients treated for Tuberculosis” aimed to investigate the association between biomass smoke exposure and self-reported quality of life scores in a cohort of TB patient in Uganda. For this study, participants had been taken from the sample of a cohort study in Uganda on the effect of biomass smoke exposure on the risk of TB diagnosis. Here, researchers reviewed medical records of patients who were taking TB care from September, 2019 to September, 2020 from three unban and three rural TB clinics in Uganda. With verbal consent from the participants over phone, researchers randomly selected participants to complete three validated quality-of-life surveys including the St. Georges Respiratory Questionnaire (SGRQ), the EuroQol 5 Dimension Level system (EQ-5D-3L) and Patient Health Questionnaire 9 (PHQ-9). They also compared the self-reported quality-of-life of the TB patients with the exposure to biomass smoke that categorized into three groups depending on years of smoke exposure – no exposure (0-years), light exposure (1-19 years), and heavy exposure (20+ years). In aiming to obtain the result, analyzers performed independent-samples-Kruskal-Wallis testing with post-hoc pairwise comparison and the Bonferroni correction. In this paper they revealed significant relationship of the quality-of-life of TB patients on treatment with exposure of biomass smoke. After critical analysis of the findings of the survey and bio-statistical analysis, they were able to discover the relationship of biomass smoke exposure and quality of life of TB patients.

The strength of this paper is that it addressed an interesting and contemporary question, and was able to identify the pessimistic impacts of biomass smoke on the quality of life of TB patients. This article also inspired us to think about the adverse consequences of other factors on health outcomes of TB patients even those are on anti-Tubercular medications. This study also clearly demonstrated its limitations and suggested for further evaluation through another similar studies.

However, this study includes some deficiencies. One of the weaknesses of this article is occasional incomprehensiveness which establishes unclear logical links between concepts. In addition to this, method of sampling seems to be little confusing, particularly in line no 72. Another possible weakness could be the discussion part which might be more descriptive and topic oriented.

In spite of having some weaknesses of this article, it is published worthy as it has added a new concept in the field of research.

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PLOS Glob Public Health. doi: 10.1371/journal.pgph.0002892.r004

Decision Letter 1

Reginald Quansah

8 Jan 2024

PGPH-D-23-01407R1

The Effect of Biomass Smoke Exposure on Quality-Of-Life among Ugandan Patients treated for Tuberculosis: a cross-sectional analysis

PLOS Global Public Health

Dear Dr. Sophie Wennemann,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS Global Public Health. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS Global Public Health’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

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Reviewer #3: Yes

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Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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Reviewer #1: A significant improvement from the original submission. The revision addressed proposed recommendations and remains with a few areas for more improvement as pointed out below.

Line 99- “ although no a priori sample calculations were performed “ possible grammatical error.

Line 111- grammatical error, The EQ-5q-3l

Line 140- Give the meaning of the acronym IQR at the bottom of the table like what is done for SES.

line 173- The table format is not showing the last column after standard error (on the reviewer’s screen it appears just cut off from the end of the page).

Line 166- The kruskal-wallis one way analysis of variance results are missing the number before the decimal point and your reader may not know this is automatically a zero so a recommendation would be to be uniform.

Reviewer #2: (No Response)

Reviewer #3: I congratulate the authors who addressed my comments. I am satisfied.

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Reviewer #1: Yes: Benson Tarisai Gombe

Reviewer #2: No

Reviewer #3: Yes: Gabriel Kyomba Kalombe

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PLOS Glob Public Health. doi: 10.1371/journal.pgph.0002892.r006

Decision Letter 2

Reginald Quansah

18 Jan 2024

The Effect of Biomass Smoke Exposure on Quality-Of-Life among Ugandan Patients treated for Tuberculosis: a cross-sectional analysis

PGPH-D-23-01407R2

Dear Dr. Sophie Wennemann,

We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript 'The Effect of Biomass Smoke Exposure on Quality-Of-Life among Ugandan Patients treated for Tuberculosis: a cross-sectional analysis' has been provisionally accepted for publication in PLOS Global Public Health.

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