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. 2024 Feb 21;19(2):e0291852. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0291852

Moonless night sky increases Isistius species (cookiecutter shark) and live human contact

Steven Minaglia 1,*,#, Melodee Liegl 2,#
Editor: Daniel M Coffey3
PMCID: PMC10880985  PMID: 38381731

Abstract

The nocturnal feeding behavior and zoogeographical habitat of cookiecutter sharks Isistius brasiliensis and Isistius plutodus (Isistius spp.) greatly reduces interaction of this species with live humans. Attacks on live humans are exceedingly rare with 7 cases reported worldwide, 6 of them in Hawaiʻi, and 5 of these occuring among channel swimmers. Published research suggests that periods of bright moonlight may increase Isistius spp. contact with live humans and does not otherwise identify significant trends or risk factors. Yet 5 of the 6 Isistius spp. bites on live humans in Hawaiʻian waters occurred with the moon set and after nautical twilight end and before nautical twilight start. From 1961–2023 in Hawaiʻi, 129 successful solo channel crosses and 5 Isistius spp. related injuries in the habitat of cookiecutter sharks were analyzed across two groups: one where both the moon and sun were set (dark group) and one where the moon and/or sun was in the sky (light group). There was a significant difference for swimmers bitten by Isistius spp. in the dark 4 (12%) versus light groups 1 (1%), p = 0.012, RR 12.6 (95% confidence interval: 1.5–108.9). Swim start time and year was also significant (Pearson correlation 0.566, p <0.001). Swimmer gender and use of shark deterrent devices and artificial illumination were not significant. The growing popularity of channel swimming in Hawaiʻi and swim start times have contributed to an increasing likelihood of live human and Isistius spp. contact and a moonless night sky is a significant risk factor for this interaction.

Introduction

The two species of cookiecutter sharks, Isistius brasiliensis and Isistius plutodus (Isistius spp.) are best known for the characteristic wound they leave on their prey items and for their “hit and run” feeding behavior recently witnessed by live humans [1, 2]. These pelagic sharks remove circular plugs of flesh by sucking onto their prey using specialized pharyngeal muscles and fleshy lips, inserting their upper jaw teeth, and sweeping their proportionately larger lower jaw teeth through the flesh often twisting in a circular motion to remove and ingest their feed [3]. The resultant circular, concave wound is a characteristic sign of an Isistius spp. bite. Cookiecutter sharks are thought to undertake diel vertical migrations with a daytime depth range between 1,000–3,500 meters in primarily warm, coastal waters near islands [4]. They typically rise near the surface at night to feed on squid, small fish, and a variety of large pelagic species and then return to the bathyal zone when daylight resumes [57]. They possess a well-developed lateral line system, bioluminescence, and large eyes that give them a competitive advantage over their prey especially in low-light settings.

Contact between Isistius spp. and deceased humans afloat in the sea has been documented [811] yet contact with live humans is exceedingly rare. Out of 7 ever-documented and confirmed attacks on live humans, 6 occurred in Hawaiʻian waters between the years 2009 and 2023 and 5 of these occurred among channel-swimmers [1, 2, 12, 13]. Channels are bodies of water that separate land forms. Channel swimming is the sport of swimming across these large bodies of water from one land form to another. Hawaiʻi is home to 9 channels with varying distances and depths. Five of these channels match the zoogeographical habitat of Isistius spp. and have been traversed by channel swimmers (Table 1). All 6 Isistius spp. bites in Hawaiʻi have occurred in two of these channels, the ʻAlenuihāhā Channel being the 2nd deepest and the Kaiwi Channel being the 4th deepest in Hawaiʻi (Table 2). The minimum surface over water depth where one of the 6 bites in Hawaiʻi occurred was estimated at 366 meters [13].

Table 1. Characteristics of Hawaii’s 5 deepest channels.

Channel Maximum Depth (meters) Successful Crosses Victims
ʻAlenuihāhā 2149 4 1
Kaʻieʻiewaho 3319 1 (relay) 0
Kaulakahi 1273 19 0
Kaiwi 680 101 (5 relays) 4
Kealaikahiki 390 5 0

Table 2. Surface over water depth during attacks.

Victim Number Surface over water depth (meters)
1 >610
2 >610
3 >610
4 >610
5* 366
6 549

*non-channel swimmer

Published research suggests that periods of bright moonlight may increase Isistius spp. contact with live humans [1, 14]. A 2022 National Geographic documentary film focused on a spike in attacks in 2019 but did not otherwise identify significant trends or risk factors [15]. Yet 5 out of 6 documented Isistius spp. bites on live humans in Hawaiʻian waters occurred with the moon set and after nautical twilight end and before nautical twilight start. The research question therefore generated from this observation is whether absence of the sun and moon from the night sky while a human swimmer transits through the zoogeographical zone of Isistius spp. is an independent risk factor for contact with the species and potential injury.

Materials and methods

A retrospective review of the State of Hawaiʻi Department of Land and Natural Resources (DLNR) Division of Aquatic Resources (DAR) Shark Incidents List [13] identified 6 live victims of Isistius spp. one of whom was not swimming a channel. A comprehensive Web of Science and Pubmed search of the literature written in English using the terms: “Isistius species”, “Isistius sp.”, “Isistius spp.”, “cookiecutter shark”, “cookiecutter shark bite”, “shark bite”, and “Hawaiʻi” on July 1, 2023 was also performed and confirmed the above 6 victims to be the only documented and confirmed cases of Isistius spp. attacks on live humans in Hawaiʻi. The International Shark Attack File identified these victims as well as another live victim in North Queensland, Australia in 2017 [12].

This retrospective cohort study included all channel swimmers that were either injured by Isistius spp. and/or successfully completed a solo crossing of any of the 5 Hawaiʻian channels that match the zoogeographical natural habitat of Isistius spp. With the exception of one swimmer, data for all swimmers including victims of attacks was obtained from publicly available, previously published sources [1, 2, 12, 13, 15, 16]. Specifically, the date of swim, duration of swim, gender, start and end times, and use of artificial lights and/or electronic shark deterrents were known for successful swimmers and are part of an established database used to certify and celebrate the accomplishment of the swimmers [16]. Additionally, data for 4 of the victims was complete and obtained from the case report and case series that described their attacks [1, 2]. Written informed consent was obtained from the sole successful yet injured swimmer described in this report (Fig 3., Table 2: Victim 6) whom provided additional data that was not publicly available at the time this study was performed. The Institutional Review Board policy of the Queen’s Medical Center does not require approval for use of the information pertaining to the one swimmer. All successful solo crossings were included in the analysis even if they were tandem solo crossings. One successful relay swim across the Kaʻieʻiewaho Channel and 5 successful relay swims across the Kaiwi channel were excluded from analysis due to multiple swimmers swimming in series with varying speeds, varying use of artificial illumination, and varying use of shark deterrent devices. Swims across the ʻAlenuihāhā, Kaulakahi, Kaiwi, and Kealaikahiki channels were thus included in the analysis.

Fig 3. Photograph of the one successful swimmer bitten twice by Isistius spp.

Fig 3

Consent to publication was obtained from the subject.

The minimum surface over water depth where one of the 6 recorded Isistius spp. bites on live humans had occurred in Hawaiʻi was used as the benchmark to determine where the zoogeographical zone of Isistius spp. existed over the swimming course for each of Hawaiʻi’s 4 deepest and crossed-by-solo-swimmer channels [13]. Water depth was estimated from National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration (NOAA) Office of Coast Survey charts 19010 and 19380 [17, 18]. Additionally, the exact location of each of the 5 channel-swimming victims at which time their injury occurred is known and lies within this calculated zoogeographical zone [1, 2, 12, 13]. The line distance of each swim course for each channel and the total swim time was known for all 129 completed swims occurring in the 4 channels from September 1961- July 1, 2023. Speed in statute miles per hour was calculated for the entirety of each completed swim and the estimated time each swimmer entered and exited the calculated zoogeographical zone of Isistius spp. was recorded.

Additional data included nautical twilight start and end times and moon rise and set times [1921]. Swimmers transiting for any length of time through the above determined zoogeographical zone of Isistius spp. after nautical twilight end and with the moon set and before nautical twilight start were grouped as the ‘dark group’. The remaining swimmers comprised the ‘light group’ because they transited through this zone with the moon up and/or after nautical twilight start or before nautical twilight end.

Non-parametric Fisher’s exact test was performed for categorical variables (reported as N (%)). Pearson correlation coefficient was calculated to examine the relationships between start time of swim and year of channel swim. A p-value <0.05 was considered significant. SPSS version 28 (Chicago, Illinois, USA) was used for analyses.

Results

Review of the State of Hawaii Department of Land and Natural Resources (DLNR)- Division of Aquatic Resources (DAR) Shark Incidents List identified 6 live victims of Isistius brasiliensis and Isistius plutodus (Isistius spp.) one of whom was not swimming a channel. The individual not swimming a channel was attacked in the ʻAlenuihāhā Channel at an estimated surface over water depth of 366 meters and similar to 4 out of 5 of the channel-swimming victims was attacked with the moon set and after nautical twilight end and before nautical twilight start. Given the individual has remained confidential and was not participating in a channel-swim he/she has been excluded from analysis. Overall, the date of swim, duration of swim, start and end times, gender, use of artificial lights and/or electronic shark deterrents, nautical twilight start and end times and moon rise and set times were obtained for all 133 swimmers either successful and/or injured.

Of the 133 swimmers the majority were male (65%). The most common channel swim was Kaiwi (78%), followed by Kaulakahi (14%), Kealaikahiki (4%) and ʻAlenuihāhā (4%). All but 2 swimmers swam from Molokaʻi to Oʻahu to complete the Kaiwi Channel, all but 3 swimmers swam from Kauaʻi to Niʻihau to complete the Kaulakahi Channel, all swimmers swam from Hawaiʻi to Maui to complete the ʻAlenuihāhā channel and all swimmers swam from Kahoʻolawe to Lānaʻi to complete the Kealakahiki channel. 123 swimmers and/or crew (92%) were successfully contacted to obtain the additional data pertaining to use of artificial illumination and/or electronic shark deterrent devices. Overall, 111 (83%) of swimmers and/or crew were able to recall the use of artificial illumination and/or the use of electronic shark deterrent devices during their swims. 73% of the swimmers used artificial illumination. Electronic shark deterrent devices were used for over half the swimmers (53%). The sun was up for 56% of the swimmers and the sky was lit by moon or sun for the majority (76%).

A total of 5 swimmers (4%) encountered 7 Isistius spp. bites (Figs 1 and 2). 3 of the bitten swimmers used electronic shark deterrent devices. 3 of the bitten swimmers used glow sticks while the other 2 did not use any form of artificial illumination. Of note, boat lights went on shortly before the latter 2 swimmers were attacked. One swimmer was injured by two distinct Isistius spp. bites and was still able to complete the Kaiwi Channel (Fig 3). There was a significant difference for the swimmers bitten by Isistius spp. in the dark group 4 (12%) versus the light group 1 (1%), p = 0.012 (Table 3). The relative risk was 12.6 (95% confidence interval) 1.5–108.9). There were no significant differences when comparing dark and light sky with gender, use of shark deterrent devices and the presence of artificial illumination (sundown only). There were no significant differences when comparing those receiving no bite versus bite with gender, electronic shark deterrent devices, artificial illumination (sundown only). All 5 (100%) bites occurred with sun down versus the 70 (55%) swimmers in the no bite group. This was marginally significant at p = 0.068 (Table 4).

Fig 1. Map with depth isobaths in fathoms showing the location of the attack in ‘Alenuihāhā Channel (Blue dot victim 1).

Fig 1

Provided by National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration (NOAA) Office of Coast Survey, nauticalcharts.noaa.gov.

Fig 2. Map with depth isobaths in fathoms showing the locations of attacks in Kaiwi Channel (Red dot victims 2,3,4; orange dot victim 6).

Fig 2

Provided by National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration (NOAA) Office of Coast Survey, nauticalcharts.noaa.gov.

Table 3. Variables by sky.

Dark (N = 32) Light (N = 101)
N Eval N (%) N Eval N (%) P-value
Gender 32 101 0.999
    Male 21 (66) 66 (65)
    Female 11 (34) 35 (35)
Bite 32 101 0.012
    No 28 (88) 100 (99)
    Yes 4 (12) 1 (1)
Shark deterrent device 29 89 0.135
    No 10 (34) 46 (52)
    Yes 19 (66) 43 (48)
Artificial illumination (sun down only) 27 38 0.507
    No 0 (0) 2 (5)
    Yes 27 (100) 36 (95)

Table 4. Variables by bite.

No Bite (N = 128) Bite (N = 5)
N Eval N (%) N Eval N (%) P-value
Gender 128 5 0.163
    Male 82 (64) 5 (100)
    Female 46 (36) 0 (0)
Shark deterrent device 113 5 0.667
    No 53 (47) 3 (60)
    Yes 60 (53) 2 (40)
Artificial illumination 108 5 0.320
    No 31 (29) 0 (0)
    Yes 77 (71) 5 (100)
Sun 128 5 0.068
    Sun down 70 (55) 5 (100)
    Sun up 58 (45) 0 (0)
Sun down only 70 5 0.157
    Dark 28 (40) 4 (80)
    Light 42 (60) 1 (20)
Year of victim injury NA 6* --
    2009 -- 1 (17)
    2019 -- 3 (50)
    2022 -- 1 (17)
    2023 -- 1 (17)

*includes non-channel swimmer

The two channels, Kaulakahi and Kealaikahiki are both 17 miles and on average took swimmers 11 hours 17 minutes (range 9:25–14:28) and 11 hours 22 minutes (range 10:24–11:53) to cross, respectively. The ʻAlenuihāhā and Kaiwi Channels are 30 and 26 miles in length and have average crossing times of 17 hours 26 minutes (range 14:51–20:08) and 16 hours 40 minutes (12:02–27:33), respectively. Swim start time and year of channel swim was significant when looking at the ‘Alenuihāhā and Kaiwi channels only. During the earlier years, the start time was just after midnight versus later years (post 2010) starting closer to 6 PM. Pearson correlation was 0.566, p <0.001 (Fig 2). There was no significant correlation between moon phase in days and year of swim for ‘Alenuihāhā channel (p = 0.723) and Kaiwi channel (p = 0.140) and both combined (p = 0.225)(Fig 5). In contrast, all swim start times were between 6:00 AM and 7:33 AM for the Kealaikahiki Channel and between 4:21 AM and 6:27 AM for the Kaulakahi Channel. This effectively placed all swimmers of these two channels in the zoogeographical habitat of Isistius spp. during daytime.

Fig 5. Moon phase in days by year for ʻAlenuihāhā and Kaiwi Channels.

Fig 5

Discussion

The width of each channel determines the average time it takes for a channel swimmer to cross. The Kaiʻeiʻewaho Channel is 72 miles and has only been crossed once by a relay team of 6 swimmers with a total time of 47 hours 55 minutes. This channel is the deepest and given its length it is unlikely to be attempted by a serious solo swimmer. In 2008, the inclusion of the Kaiwi Channel to Oceans 7, a list of 7 long-distance open-water swims through some of the worlds’ most dangerous sea channels has led to a significant increase in swims across this particular channel. It is highly unlikely for any swimmer to complete either the ‘Alenuihāhā or Kaiwi channels exclusively during daylight hours given average crossing times.

Isistius spp. migrates to surface waters at night and during the day to depths up to 3500 meters. It feeds on large pelagic fishes with its unique “hit and run” feeding behavior and also consumes smaller prey including squid [47]. It is possible that this species attacks in groups as Fig 3 and numerous other reports show different diameter bites in live and deceased victims [1, 79]. The purple back squid, Sthenoteuthis oualaniensis often aggregates at night near boats where the water is illuminated and feeds on other cephalopods and myctophids [22]. S. oualaniensis is commonly caught at night in Hawaiʻian waters by shining lights into the water and jigging. Through the process of positive phototaxis the use of artificial lights at night likely contribute to feeding opportunities for Isistius spp. by attracting prey items. Anecdotally, deepwater fisherman that fish in Hawaiʻian waters at night often indicate that the darker the night sky the greater the ability of artificial lights to aggregate fish. In contrast, surface organisms are more scattered during periods of natural illumination and artificial lights do not possess the same aggregative ability. A hypothesis generated from this information is that on the darkest nights, the artificially lit human activity more effectively lures prey items of Isistius spp. to the surface thus creating an opportunity for the species to come in contact with live humans swimming at the surface. It is common for swimmers to wear artificial illumination on their suits, goggle straps, and caps and for accompanying kayakers to display artificial illumination for safety purposes and to avoid being lost at sea. It is possible that the addition of artificial illumination may contribute to aggregation of Isistius spp. prey items in otherwise dark conditions.

Fig 4 shows that around 2010 it became common for swimmers to start in the late afternoon or early evening. It is highly likely that this change in decision making intended to reduce sun exposure, the likelihood of a nighttime finish, and the impact of strong coastal winds that arise after sunrise while unintentionally increasing the likelihood that swimmers transit the zoogeographical habitat of Isistius spp. in the dark. It is clear from this analysis that swims started occurring more frequently with the sun down after 2010. An analysis of moon phase showed that there is no correlation between moon phase in days and year of swim (Fig 5). While tidal data was not collected it is unlikely to have had a significant impact on this analysis. Hawaiʻi like most of the Pacific has tides with strong and variable inequality meaning there is a difference in height between the two daily high tides and the two daily low tides. In addition, the timing of these tides changes every day. Therefore, if departing on a high or low tide was a primary objective then start times would not likely vary by year as they did and in fact be more evenly distributed across year as well as time of day.

Fig 4. Swim start time by year for ʻAlenuihāhā and Kaiwi Channels.

Fig 4

Our data suggests that swimmers crossing the deepest portions of the Kaiwi and ʻAlenuihāhā Channels at night and during periods of no moon are at increased risk of contact with Isistius spp. This probability risk would marginally increase if the individual not swimming a channel while attacked in the ʻAlenuihāhā Channel with the moon set and after nautical twilight end and before nautical twilight start was included in the analysis. Indeed, there have never been any documented Isistius spp. bites on any other swimmers including the other 691 channel swimmers that successfully completed any of the ʻAuʻau, Pailolo, Kalohi, and Alalakeiki Channels in Hawaiʻi with a maximum surface over water depth of 251 meters [1618]. Of note, several single, double, and triple cross swims in these shorter channels have included night swimming [16, 23, 24].

Strengths of this study include the definition of the zoogeographical habitat of Isistius spp. determined by local sources and current knowledge of species behavior. The definition of this habitat could be significantly improved in the future through electronic tagging of cookiecutter sharks instead of relying on the reported surface over water depth from 6 attacks. Additional strengths include the strict criteria used to determine the “light” versus “dark” groups of swimmers transiting this area. Swimmers were placed in the “dark” group if they transited the habitat in the dark with the moon down for any length of time. This decision was made to reflect exposure to the risk variable. Limitations include a very small sample size in the ‘bite group’ rendering these data preliminary and missing data from 22 swimmers and/or crew only pertaining to the use of artificial illumination and/or shark deterrent devices. Another limitation includes the methodology used to determine when swimmers entered and exited the zoogeographical habitat of Isistius spp. Times were calculated based on the average speed of each swimmer although it is possible that speed varied due to current and tidal factors. It is unlikely that this methodology affected any particular group disproportionately. More accurate data can be made available through the use of global positioning devices to better pinpoint a swimmer’s location in the channel at each time point, however use of these devices was not consistent among crews even in recent years. Prospective collection of this data is underway.

Conclusion

Periods of no natural light when both the moon and sun are set are associated with increased frequency of live human and Isistius spp. contact compared to moonlit nights and daytime. This is in stark contrast to prior reports suggesting moonlit nights confer greater risk. These data further support Isistius spp. zoogeographical data indicating that the species lives in marine environments with depths of at least 366 meters and are nocturnal hunters. It is possible that the presence of artificial sources of illumination in the darkest conditions may lead to increased Isistius spp. and live human interaction although this retrospective cohort study did not support this assumption. In addition to considering sea and weather conditions and sun exposure duration, a strong recommendation supporting human safety can be made to structure channel swimming so that a swimmer transits through the zoogeographical habitat Isistius spp. during moonlit nights or daytime.

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Acknowledgments

The authors thank Carl Kawauchi, Michael Twigg-Smith, Bill Goding, Ivan Shigaki, Mike Spalding, Adherbal de Oliveira, Eric Schall, Isaiah Mojica, Andy Walberer, Steven Munatones, Dr. Harry Huffaker, Dr. Patrick Pedro, Dr. Darryl Takebayashi, and the swimmers of the Hawaiʻian channels for providing valuable information necessary to complete this research.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the manuscript and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

The author(s) received no specific funding for this work.

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Reviewer #1: Line 27- It can be used Isistius brasiliensis and I. plutodus (Isisitius spp.) and therefore use only Isistius spp to refer to both species along the text.

Lines 196 to 197 – The name Isisitus spp appear 3 times in the same phrase. Maybe it is possible to reduce.

Figure 1. It is possible to see two shark bites. I missed something in the discussion regarding the behavior to attack in groups or repetitive attempts by the same shark. There is some information in the available literature.

Figure 2. It looks like there is a gap between the 1980’s and 2000’s. Why? Is there any reason for that? It is clear that the presented tendency was leaded by the Kaiwi data.

I missed a map with depth isobaths showing the locations of such attacks, or even the location of the channels.

Reviewer #2: Line 53: Denote this is their daytime depth range for species thought to undertake diel vertical migrations.

Line 55: Return to bathyal zone (1,000-4,000 m).

Line 145-146: Can the authors provide any more specifics regarding what type of shark deterrents (e.g., magnetic, electrical, etc.) or make/model were used?

Line 159: Marginally non-significant when p>0.05 (p = 0.068). Moreover, with such a large discrepancy in sample size between the no-bite (n = 128) and bite (n= 5) groups, even a statistically significant result may not be practically meaningful. Limitations in sample size and statistical analysis should be described in the Discussion, as these results are more preliminary than conclusive. 5/133 or 3.75% is a relatively low probability of bite risk and thus challenging to draw meaningful conclusions as to the underlying drivers of these bites. For example, the only statistically significant result was for the swimmers bitten by Isistius spp. in the dark group 4 (12%) versus the light group 1 (1%) with the 95% confidence interval of relative risk spanning 98.5% of the data (1.5-108.9%).

Lines 161-167: It is not entirely clear what the purpose of this analysis is in the context of the manuscript. While the authors report a moderately strong positive correlation between the start time of swim and year of channel swim, it is more apparent that some channel swimmers started their swim in the afternoon/evening (16:00-23:00) after ~2005, though, other channel swimmers started their swim around the same time of day (01:00-06:00) prior to 2005. Start times are more likely correlated with the timing of the sun, moon, and tides and shifts in channel swimming strategies than the year. I recommend either (1) elaborating more on the implications of this analysis, (2) conducting analyses on the timing of swim with the timing of the sun, moon, and tide, and/or (3) removing this analysis.

Lines 170-180: Most of this paragraph seems better suited for the Results section rather than the Discussion since it is reporting numerous descriptive statistics.

Line 185-186: Recommend including the following reference:

Papastamatiou YP, Wetherbee BM, O’Sullivan J, Goodmanlowe GD, Lowe CG. 2010. Foraging ecology of cookiecutter sharks (Isistius brasiliensis) on pelagic fishes in Hawaii, inferred from prey bite wounds. Environmental Biology of Fishes. 88: 361-368.

Line 203: “Goggle” straps instead of “google”?

Lines 206-208: Again, greatest risk of contact is drawn from a very low sample size (n=4/133). Therefore, the sample size limitations of this study should be raised, and I recommend weakening this statement (and Lines 232-24) a bit more.

Lines 208-210: Again, including one more individual would not make the previous statement or data any more statistically robust, but rather very marginally increase the probability risk.

Line 216: I recommend including text on how the definition of the zoogeographical habitat could be significantly improved in the future through electronic tagging of cookie cutter sharks rather than relying on the reported surface over water depth from 6 attacks, as these represent snapshots in time and space.

Lines 239-241: The timing of sea state conditions and sun exposure, as you previously described on Lines 198-201, is also very important to consider, if not the most important consideration given the relatively low Isistius spp. attacks, with regards to human safety. Thus, optimal conditions may not overlap entirely with daylight hours.

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22 Dec 2023

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The following has been inserted, “With the exception of one swimmer, data for all swimmers including victims of attacks was obtained from publically available, previously published sources 1,2,12,13,15,16. Specifically, the date of swim, duration of swim, gender, start and end times, and use of artificial lights and/or electronic shark deterrents were known for successful swimmers and are part of an established database used to certify and celebrate the accomplishment of the swimmers.16 Additionally, data for 4 of the victims was complete and obtained from the case report and case series that described their attacks. 1,2 Written informed consent was obtained from the sole successful yet injured swimmer described in this report (Fig 3., Table 2: Victim 6) whom provided additional data that was not publically available at the time this study was performed. The Institutional Review Board policy of the Queen’s Medical Center does not require approval for use of the information pertaining to the one swimmer.”

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Reviewer #1: Line 27- It can be used Isistius brasiliensis and I. plutodus (Isisitius spp.) and therefore use only Isistius spp to refer to both species along the text.

Response: We agree. Isistius spp. is used throughout the text after both species are named and collectively identified in line 27. Use of both terms has been deleted from other areas of the text.

Lines 196 to 197 – The name Isisitus spp appear 3 times in the same phrase. Maybe it is possible to reduce

Response: We have revised the prior statement to, “A hypothesis generated from this information is that on the darkest nights, the artificially lit human activity more effectively lures prey items of Isistius spp. to the surface thus creating an opportunity for the species to come in contact with live humans swimming at the surface”.

Figure 1. It is possible to see two shark bites. I missed something in the discussion regarding the behavior to attack in groups or repetitive attempts by the same shark. There is some information in the available literature.

Response: Citations 1,7,8,9 all include data showing different diameter bites indicating involvement by more than one shark in a live victim and several deceased victims. The following has been added to line 220, “It is possible that this species attacks in groups as figure 1 and numerous other reports show different diameter bites in live and deceased victims. “

Figure 2. It looks like there is a gap between the 1980’s and 2000’s. Why? Is there any reason for that? It is clear that the presented tendency was leaded by the Kaiwi data.

Response: We cannot speculate on why there was a gap. It is possible that marathon swimming in Hawaii did not gain popularity until the 2000s.

I missed a map with depth isobaths showing the locations of such attacks, or even the location of the channels.

Response: Maps with depth isobaths showing locations of attacks and channels have been included as Fig 1,2.

Reviewer #2: Thank you for your comments.

Line 53: Denote this is their daytime depth range for species thought to undertake diel vertical migrations.

Line 55: Return to bathyal zone (1,000-4,000 m).

Response: Cookiecutter sharks are thought to undertake diel vertical migrations with a daytime depth range between 1,000-3,500 meters in primarily warm, coastal waters near islands.4 They typically rise near the surface at night to feed on squid, small fish, and a variety of large pelagic species and then return to the bathyal zone when daylight resumes. 5,6

Line 145-146: Can the authors provide any more specifics regarding what type of shark deterrents (e.g., magnetic, electrical, etc.) or make/model were used?

Response: 123 swimmers and/or crew (92%) were successfully contacted to obtain the additional data pertaining to use of artificial illumination and/or electronic shark deterrent devices.

Line 159: Marginally non-significant when p>0.05 (p = 0.068). Moreover, with such a large discrepancy in sample size between the no-bite (n = 128) and bite (n= 5) groups, even a statistically significant result may not be practically meaningful. Limitations in sample size and statistical analysis should be described in the Discussion, as these results are more preliminary than conclusive. 5/133 or 3.75% is a relatively low probability of bite risk and thus challenging to draw meaningful conclusions as to the underlying drivers of these bites. For example, the only statistically significant result was for the swimmers bitten by Isistius spp. in the dark group 4 (12%) versus the light group 1 (1%) with the 95% confidence interval of relative risk spanning 98.5% of the data (1.5-108.9%).

Response: Limitations in sample size and statistical analysis are further described in the discussion. The following statement has been added to the discussion, “Limitations include a very small sample size in the ‘bite group’ rendering these data preliminary and missing data from 22 swimmers and/or crew only pertaining to the use of artificial illumination and/or shark deterrent devices.”

Lines 161-167: It is not entirely clear what the purpose of this analysis is in the context of the manuscript. While the authors report a moderately strong positive correlation between the start time of swim and year of channel swim, it is more apparent that some channel swimmers started their swim in the afternoon/evening (16:00-23:00) after ~2005, though, other channel swimmers started their swim around the same time of day (01:00-06:00) prior to 2005. Start times are more likely correlated with the timing of the sun, moon, and tides and shifts in channel swimming strategies than the year. I recommend either (1) elaborating more on the implications of this analysis, (2) conducting analyses on the timing of swim with the timing of the sun, moon, and tide, and/or (3) removing this analysis.

Response:

The following has been added to the results, “There was no significant correlation between moon phase in days and year of swim for ’Alenuihāhā channel (p=0.723) and Kaiwi channel (p=0.140) and both combined (p=0.225)(Figure 3).”

The following has been added to the discussion section along with Figure 3 to Supplemental information, “Figure 2 shows that around 2010 it became common for swimmers to start in the late afternoon or early evening. It is highly likely that this change in decision making intended to reduce sun exposure, the likelihood of a nighttime finish, and the impact of strong coastal winds that arise after sunrise while unintentionally increasing the likelihood that swimmers transit the zoogeographical habitat of Isistius spp. in the dark. It is clear from this analysis that swims started occurring more frequently with the sun down after 2010. An analysis of moon phase showed that there is no correlation between moon phase in days and year of swim (Figure 3). While tidal data was not collected it is unlikely to have had a significant impact on this analysis. Hawaiʻi like most of the Pacific has tides with strong and variable inequality meaning there is a difference in height between the two daily high tides and the two daily low tides. In addition, the timing of these tides changes every day. Therefore, if departing on a high or low tide was a primary objective then start times would not likely vary by year as they did and in fact be more evenly distributed across year as well as time of day.

Lines 170-180: Most of this paragraph seems better suited for the Results section rather than the Discussion since it is reporting numerous descriptive statistics.

Response: The following two paragraphs were edited based on these recommendations, “The two channels, Kaulakahi and Kealaikahiki are both 17 miles and on average took swimmers 11 hours 17 minutes (range 9:25-14:28) and 11 hours 22 minutes (range 10:24-11:53) to cross, respectively. The ʻAlenuihāhā and Kaiwi Channels are 30 and 26 miles in length and have average crossing times of 17 hours 26 minutes (range 14:51-20:08) and 16 hours 40 minutes (12:02-27:33), respectively. Swim start time and year of channel swim was significant when looking at the ’Alenuihāhā and Kaiwi channels only. During the earlier years, the start time was just after midnight versus later years (post 2010) starting closer to 6 PM. Pearson correlation was 0.566, p <0.001 (Figure 2). In contrast, all swim start times were between 6:00 AM and 7:33 AM for the Kealaikahiki Channel and between 4:21 AM and 6:27 AM for the Kaulakahi Channel. This effectively placed all swimmers of these two channels in the zoogeographical habitat of Isistius spp. during daytime.

1. Discussion

The width of each channel determines the average time it takes for a channel swimmer to cross. The Kaiʻeiʻewaho Channel is 72 miles and has only been crossed once by a relay team of 6 swimmers with a total time of 47 hours 55 minutes. This channel is the deepest and given its length it is unlikely to be attempted by a serious solo swimmer. In 2008, the inclusion of the Kaiwi Channel to Oceans 7, a list of 7 long-distance open-water swims through some of the worlds’ most dangerous sea channels has led to a significant increase in swims across this particular channel. It is highly unlikely for any swimmer to complete either of the ’Alenuihāhā and Kaiwi channels exclusively during daylight hours given average crossing times.”

Line 185-186: Recommend including the following reference:

Papastamatiou YP, Wetherbee BM, O’Sullivan J, Goodmanlowe GD, Lowe CG. 2010. Foraging ecology of cookiecutter sharks (Isistius brasiliensis) on pelagic fishes in Hawaii, inferred from prey bite wounds. Environmental Biology of Fishes. 88: 361-368.

Response: Included as reference #7 given earlier mention of a similar statement in the text- thank you for this citation.

Line 203 changed to goggle straps.

Lines 206-208: Again, greatest risk of contact is drawn from a very low sample size (n=4/133). Therefore, the sample size limitations of this study should be raised, and I recommend weakening this statement (and Lines 232-24) a bit more.

Response: We changed the statement to, “Our data suggests that swimmers crossing the deepest portions of the Kaiwi and ʻAlenuihāhā Channels at night and during periods of no moon are at increased risk of contact with Isistius spp.”

Lines 208-210: Again, including one more individual would not make the previous statement or data any more statistically robust, but rather very marginally increase the probability risk.

Response: This statement was changed to, “This probability risk would marginally increase if the individual not swimming a channel while attacked in the ʻAlenuihāhā Channel with the moon set and after nautical twilight end and before nautical twilight start was included in the analysis.”

Line 216: I recommend including text on how the definition of the zoogeographical habitat could be significantly improved in the future through electronic tagging of cookie cutter sharks rather than relying on the reported surface over water depth from 6 attacks, as these represent snapshots in time and space.

Response: “Strengths of this study include the definition of the zoogeographical habitat of Isistius spp. determined by local sources and current knowledge of species behavior. The definition of this habitat could be significantly improved in the future through electronic tagging of cookiecutter sharks instead of relying on the reported surface over water depth from 6 attacks.”

Line 232-234

Response: We changed the statement to, “Periods of no natural light when both the moon and sun are set are associated with increased frequency of live human and Isistius spp. contact compared to moonlit nights and daytime.”

Lines 239-241: The timing of sea state conditions and sun exposure, as you previously described on Lines 198-201, is also very important to consider, if not the most important consideration given the relatively low Isistius spp. attacks, with regards to human safety. Thus, optimal conditions may not overlap entirely with daylight hours.

Response: “In addition to considering sea and weather conditions and sun exposure duration, a strong recommendation supporting human safety can be made to structure channel swimming so that a swimmer transits through the zoogeographical habitat Isistius spp. during moonlit nights or daytime.”

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Moonless night sky increases Isistius species (cookiecutter shark) and live human contact

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