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. 2024 Mar 7;19(3):e0299598. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0299598

Life tables in entomology: A discussion on tables’ parameters and the importance of raw data

Luca Rossini 1,*, Mario Contarini 2, Stefano Speranza 2,3, Serhan Mermer 4,5, Vaughn Walton 4, Frédéric Francis 6, Emanuele Garone 1
Editor: Ramzi Mansour7
PMCID: PMC10919640  PMID: 38451951

Abstract

Life tables are one of the most common tools to describe the biology of insect species and their response to environmental conditions. Although the benefits of life tables are beyond question, we raise some doubts about the completeness of the information reported in life tables. To substantiate these doubts, we consider a case study (Corcyra cephalonica) for which the raw dataset is available. The data suggest that the Gaussian approximation of the development times which is implied by the average and standard error usually reported in life tables does not describe reliably the actual distribution of the data which can be misleading and hide interesting biological aspects. Furthermore, it can be risky when life table data are used to build models to predict the demographic changes of the population. The present study highlights this aspect by comparing the impulse response generated by the raw data and by its Gaussian approximation based on the mean and the standard error. The conclusions of this paper highlight: i) the importance of adding more information to life tables and, ii) the role of raw data to ensure the completeness of this kind of studies. Given the importance of raw data, we also point out the need for further developments of a standard in the community for sharing and analysing data of life tables experiments.

1. Introduction

Life tables are a powerful tool, widely used since the late 1960s in the entomology and ecology communities [1] to summarise the most important parameters of the life cycles of insects. They relate the development of the individuals of the population to the conditions of the surrounding environment [2] (e.g. temperature), highlighting the ectothermic nature of insects, or to the effect of different agents such as diet, pesticides, or natural enemies [3].

Life tables values are estimated by rearing a cohort of eggs (laid on the same day or on a shorter time) in climatic chambers at a single or at a range of biologically relevant constant temperatures [2,4]. Each individual of the cohort is monitored at a specific time frequency, usually one day, when its current life stage is recorded [2]. The inspections are repeated until the death of the individuals from a population [3,5,6], and the data are usually reported in specific matrixes as described by Chi and Liu [7], Chi [5], and Chi et al. [3,6]. These experiments allow researchers to obtain various information such as the age-stage distribution of all individuals over time and, by changing the environmental conditions of the growth chamber, as a function of temperature, relative humidity, and photoperiod [4,8,9]. The age-stage distribution describes the duration, usually expressed in days, of the biological stages that compose the insects’ life cycle: such information is extremely helpful to analyse the bioecology of the insect species and to formulate mathematical models that describe their biology.

Once these experimental data are obtained, life tables are constructed by reporting, for each rearing temperature, synthetic information extracted from the raw data such as: the mean development time of each life stage, the mean number of eggs laid per female and per day, and the mean survival time for all life stages. These mean values are usually reported with the associated standard deviation or, more commonly, their standard error. Additional information that is sometimes reported in life tables studies includes the net reproduction rate [10,11], i.e., the mean number of individuals that may be born from a female at given environmental conditions, and the mean generation time [10], i.e., the mean duration between the birth of an individual and the birth of an individual of the next generation. Mathematically, the net reproduction rate R0 is defined as

R0=x=1klxmx (1)

where x is the age, k is the maximum age for each stage, lx is the age-specific survival rate, and mx is the age-specific fecundity [3]. Given this definition, the mean generation time TG can be written as follows:

TG=1R0x=1kxlxmx. (2)

Life tables have a well-defined mathematical theory to analyse the biological traits of the population, but it is efficient only in case of fixed environmental conditions [3,5,7]. Previous studies (e.g., [4,10,1216]) indicated that life tables can also be used to underline the ectothermic nature of insects that is also very interesting for pest management and population modelling purposes. Indeed, insect development occurs only within a certain thermal range. The insect development is theoretically not possible outside such thermal range. Starting from the lowest temperature threshold, the mean development time of the population decreases until reaching a minimum, coinciding with the optimal temperature for the species development. After this minimum, the development time starts to increase again until reaching the maximum temperature threshold. This particular profile aroused the interest of several authors who proposed various mathematical functions to interpolate these life tables’ trends [1725]. A similar dependency on temperature can be observed for mortality incidence and fecundity rates [2628].

The most common approach to study this profile is the following [4,29]: the mean development times Di(T) of each stage i are converted into development rates Gi(T) described by the equation

Gi(T)=1Di(T). (3)

To use development rates Gi(T) instead of mean development times Di(T) has the advantage of transforming the decreasing-increasing profile of the development times into an increasing-decreasing one, with a maximum instead of a minimum. Moreover, as temperature approaches the thermal limits, the development time increases up to infinity, while under the same conditions the development rates are more practical, as they approach zero. The profile tracked by the development rates is usually interpolated using various mathematical functions [17,19,20,25], commonly called “development rate functions” [9,21]. It is commonly accepted in the literature that, once the parameters of a given development rate function are estimated, they are species-specific [9], and that if deviations from these rates are experienced, they might be due to the effect of genetic mutations or environmental adaptations.

Although life tables have been “standardised” by the scientific community over several decades [3,57], in this paper we raise some concerns about the completeness of the information they contain. Our starting point is the observation that summarising the actual distribution of the development times using only averages and standard errors implicitly assumes that the actual form of the distribution is not relevant.

However, from a practical viewpoint it is widely understood that the shape of the distribution contains important information to describe the biology of insects. For instance, the shape of the distribution (e.g. the presence of multiple peaks) can give important information on the genetic variability of the species and might be linked to recent studies investigating intraspecific genetic variability and adaptation potential (e.g., [30]).

The actual shape of the distribution is also very useful for pest control purposes: for instance the minimum and maximum development times are fundamental to avoid useless treatments in planning pest control actions, while the shape and the range of the distribution provides an idea of the capability of the species to survive through anomalous adverse events. Indeed, the larger the distribution of development times the larger the resilience of the species against punctual anomalous events. When contextualised in terms of pest control, this aspect significantly influences the choice of the control method.

Clearly, the fact that life tables only report mean values and standard errors to describe development times is not a limiting factor whenever authors provide raw datasets on the experiments as supplementary material of their publications. However, in the entomological community, this is not yet common practice, which produces a loss of possibly precious information for the scientific community. Remarkably, the unavailability of data does not allow third parties to verify and possibly refine the provided data analysis, which is a foundation of the scientific method.

In this paper we do not raise any doubt on the rigour and validity of experimental protocols, which in our opinion represent state-of-the-art scientific methods, nor the usefulness of life tables as a tool to summarise information, but the fact that the current practice of our community of presenting only summarised data may produce a loss of relevant information, and possibly lead to erroneous conclusions. Different authors over the years overcame the issue related to the distribution by analysing the data through the bootstrap method [31], however this technique implicitly assumes that the individuals of the population are interchangeable to each other. Accordingly, we miss the information on the actual distribution of the development times, a relevant characteristic of each species.

This critical study also underlines the possible negative impact that the sole use of synthetic data in life tables has on biological information and modelling of insect populations and points out the need for further developments of a standard among entomologists for sharing the data collected in life tables experiments. This paper targets both entomologists involved in biological studies and researchers focusing on the construction of insect population models, as it demonstrates that the exclusive usage of life tables’ synthetic information might hide essential biological information and might lead to pest models that are not sufficiently predictive.

2. Materials and methods

2.1. Presentation of the problem

In order to define and explain the problem, let us consider the concrete case of a cohort of eggs developing at fixed constant temperatures. In particular, we consider the development of the eggs of the rice moth Corcyra cephalonica (Stainton) (Lepidoptera: Tortricidae), whose life tables data have been published by Rossini et al. [32] not accounting for reproduction, and for which the raw dataset is available at https://github.com/lucaros1190/DatasetCorcyra-cephalonica. The life cycle of this species is composed of an egg stage, six larval instars, a pupa stage, and adult males and females [33,34].

Based on the guidelines usually accepted in the literature [4], the experiment of Rossini et al. [32] was carried out as follows: i) cohorts of eggs provided by a continuous rearing of the species were placed in thermal-controlled growth chambers at different constant temperatures, and ii) the development of each individual has been followed for the whole life cycle [5]. The temperatures explored were 18, 21, 24, 26, 28, 30, 34, and 36°C.

Let us focus, for the sake of simplicity, on some representative temperatures (21, 26, 28, and 30°C) and only on the development from the egg stage to the adult emergence, namely: egg, larvae (with no distinction between larval instars), and pupae. To better identify the problem, we focus only on the survived individuals, with no consideration on mortality. This fact does not affect the rationale of this study, because the stage-development time in life tables is calculated based on the individuals that survive the whole stage of interest [12,32,3537].

The values listed on life tables are usually summarised by the average of the development time of each individual of the population and its standard error. An example for the species at hand is reported in Table 1 and reports the average and the standard error of the development time of the egg, larvae, and pupa stages for the four constant temperatures (21, 26, 28, and 30°C).

Table 1. Life tables parameters of C. cephalonica at constant temperatures (21, 26, 28, and 30°C).

Life stage Temperature (°C) Mean development time (days) Number of individuals (n)
Egg 21 8.0±0.1 32
26 4.8±0.1 136
28 5.0±0.0 62
30 4.2±0.1 129
Larva 21 44.5±0.9 32
26 24.4±0.4 136
28 22.7±0.3 62
30 23.6±0.5 129
Pupa 21 21.7±0.4 32
26 14.5±0.3 136
28 13.0±0.3 62
30 11.3±0.2 129

Average development times (mean ± standard error) and initial number of individuals from Rossini et al. [32]. The dataset is related only to Corcyra cephalonica egg, larvae, and pupa stages.

The main insight behind the current study is that egg hatching and stage development have characteristic time-distributions around the peak [5,12,38] which in most cases cannot be reconstructed by using only average and standard error. Indeed, the only relevant case where reporting the average and the standard error would be without loss of information is the case where the development times follow a Gaussian distribution. However, as we argue in this paper, this assumption is often incorrect and highly depends on the specific dataset. Let us take as an example the plot in Fig 1, where we overlapped the experimental distribution of the development times and the Gaussian distribution centred in its average value and width given by its standard deviation. As we can see, there is a notable shift between the peaks, which may lead to subsequent wrong interpretation of the biology of the species. For instance, this can be a problem when life table values are used to deduce the mean generation time of the population under given environmental conditions, which is fundamental during the planning of pest management strategies.

Fig 1. Gaussian distribution obtained by the average development time and the standard deviation of the experimental data [32] (red line), versus the raw experimental dataset.

Fig 1

The plot shows data specifically for the larval phase at constant temperature of 26°C, as an example of how the peak and the range indicated by the Gaussian distribution fairly differs from the real peak(s) of the population.

A more in-depth understanding of the distribution of development times specific to life stages and temperatures can significantly enhance the amount of biological information. The distribution of the times serves as macroscopic evidence of the physiological and biochemical processes underlying development, which, in turn, depend on living conditions. An additional consequence of an incorrect synthesis of the raw data is illustrated in Fig 1, where an apparently bimodal distribution of the data is approximated with a Gaussian curve.

Multimodality is a phenomenon that frequently occurs in biological datasets [3943] and it implies that individuals from a single population can have two different developmental times under the same environmental conditions. A typical example is represented by the European chestnut weevil, Curculio elephas (Gyllenhal), where a portion of the larvae become adults in the same season, and the other after one or more years [44]. Utilizing mean and standard error to synthesise the dataset in Fig 1 implies a substantial loss of information that could be valuable instead for exploring different aspects of species development. From a pest control perspective, for instance, a Gaussian approximation of bimodal datasets means neglecting the two peaks of the distribution, resulting in overestimation and underestimation, respectively, of the time of action in case of the first and the second peak.

Other possible issues arise when life tables are used for pest population models. Since this is an issue common to several pest population models available in the current state-of-the-art, a more detailed explanation follows in the next section.

2.2. Life tables data and models

In recent years, the increasing demand of Decision Support System tools for the management of insect pest species is pushing the development of more reliable insect population models [4552]. Life tables play a fundamental role in the development of these models. Indeed, the most popular models describe insect population dynamics as a population developing over time and through their life stages, see e.g. [5363] and are characterised by parameters such as e.g. stage development, fecundity, and mortality, which are dependent on environmental parameters, mainly temperature [13,15,27,62,64]. In most cases, these parameters are set on the basis of the synthetic data reported in life tables studies, leading to the conclusion that better models could be devised if the raw data of these experiments were available.

To understand what we mean, we recall here that the standard protocol to construct life tables consists in placing a cohort of eggs, laid on the same day, in a climatic chamber. Then, the stage of each individual is monitored on a daily (or hourly, depending on the species) basis. The dataset resulting from this kind of experiments provides the distribution of the times the insects spend passing from a given stage to the next one (e.g., from eggs to the first larval instar), on the basis of which the various development/mortality/fecundity rates are computed according to the standard conventions. Interestingly, if we think about this protocol from the point of view of the system identification (i.e., the formulation of mathematical models based on measurements and observations of a natural phenomenon) and if the cohort of eggs is sufficiently large, it is immediate to realise that this experiment can be seen as an “impulse response” identification experiment for a discrete time system [65]. The choice of the discrete time is driven by the experimental settings that, as already mentioned, usually provide for daily (and accordingly discrete) inspections.

To clarify what we mean, let us define the input ue(t) as the number of new eggs laid at time t, and as output yl1(t) the number of larvae hatching at time t. The protocol puts at an initial time t = 0 a certain number N of eggs in the system, which is equivalent to say that ue(t) = (t) where δ(t) is the Kroeneker impulse, i.e.

δ(t)={1ift=00ift0

The recorded sequence of hatching {yl1(0),yl1(1),,yl1(T),0,0,} is the response for an impulse of amplitude N which allows to write that, on the basis of the data collected in this kind of experiments, the impulse response of the system is the sequence

we,l(t)={yl1(0)N,yl1(1)N,,yl1(T)N,0,0,} (4)

The interesting aspect of impulse responses is that for linear time-invariant systems they are themselves the input/output model of the system. In particular, given the impulse response wl1,e(t), the output is the sum of convolution between the input and the output response:

yl(t)=τ=twl,e(tτ)ue(τ).

As well known, this representation can also be rewritten in the Z-transform domain as

Yl(z)=Gl,e(z)Ue(z) (5)

where Gl,e(z)=Z{wl,e(t)} is the so-called transfer function of the system.

By repeating the procedure for the transition from each insect’s life stage to the next one (including from each stage to death) we can obtain a set of transfer functions representing the sub-model from each development stage to the next. It is thus possible to build a complete model for the dynamics for the single stages or for portions of the life cycle by composing all these transfer functions.

Following this procedure for the specific dataset of C. cephalonica, we can thus compute the impulse responses from eggs to larvae, we,l(t), from larvae to pupae wl,p(t), and from pupae to adults, wp,a(t) for each of the four constant temperatures considered in the example. Note that for eggs all the individuals start from the day zero, while for larvae and pupae the dataset needs a reorganisation to “shift” the population of the alive individuals to time zero for every stage. After the dataset is correctly organised, we can compute the transfer function (5) of each impulse response considering the overall portion of survived individuals, Si∈[0, 1], as well, i.e.

Yl(z)=SeGl,e(z)Ue(z) (6)
Yp(z)=SlGp,l(z)Ul(z)
Ya(z)=SpGa,p(z)Up(z)

were the subscript l, p, and a describe the egg hatching, pupating larvae, and emerging adult phases, respectively. Note that most of the life tables report the initial and final number of individuals for each experiment, from which it is possible to calculate the survival rate Si.

By composing these three transfer functions it is also possible to get the transfer function between eggs and each other stage

Yl(z)=SeGl,e(z)Ue(z) (7)
Yp(z)=SeSlGp,e(z)Ue(z)
Ya(z)=SeSlSpGa,e(z)Ue(z)

where Gp,e(z)=Gp,l(z)Gl,e(z) and Ga,e(z)=Ga,p(z)Gp,l(z)Gl,e(z).

Of course, the possibility to build these models relies on the availability of life tables raw dataset, justifying what we stated in Section 2.1, i.e., the importance of having access to the experimental datasets.

2.3. Methodology

To demonstrate the limits of the synthetic data in describing the insects’ life cycle we considered two aspects: i) the difference between the actual development time distribution and the Gaussian approximation resulting from the life-table synthetic data (Fig 1); ii) the difference between prediction models based on the raw dataset and the ones resulting using the life-table synthetic data.

2.3.1. Differences between the real distributions of the development times and their Gaussian approximation

We compared the real distributions of the development times for each life stage and temperature with the Gaussian approximation reported in the life tables. We recall that the Gauss distribution is defined as

f(t)=1σD2πe(tμD)22σD2 (8)

The two parameters characterising any Gaussian distribution are the mean value, μD, and the standard deviation, σD, which can be obtained by the definition of standard error, Sterr as

σD=SterrN (9)

where N is the number of specimens reared.

To assess similarity and discrepancies, we compared the real distribution and the Gaussian distribution resulting from the life tables both graphically, by plotting the dataset and the Gaussian curve, and quantitatively, by performing for each life stage and temperature a test of Shapiro-Wilk (S-W) with a threshold p-value of 0.05. We recall that in the Shapiro-Wilk test datasets with p<0.05 are considered not normally distributed [66]. The results of the Shapiro-Wilk test were further compared by visual inspection of quantile-quantile (Q-Q) plots, reported as S1 Fig.

For each experimental dataset we also computed:

  • The median value, namely the middle value separating the greater and lesser halves of the dataset;

  • The mode, namely the most frequent value of the dataset;

  • The kurtosis [67]

k=1Ni=1N(xiμD)4[1Ni=1N(xiμD)2]2 (10)

namely the thickness of the tails of the distribution;

  • The skewness [67]

s=1Ni=1N(xiμD)3[1Ni=1N(xiμD)2]3/2 (11)

namely the measure of the asymmetry of the distribution.

It is worth reminding that in the case of a Gaussian distribution mode, median, and mean assume the same value, while kurtosis is 3 and skewness is zero [68], and that deviations from these nominal values are further indicators of how far the data distribution is from the Gaussian. Additionally, kurtosis serves as an index indicating how “flat or sharp” the peak of a distribution is in comparison to a normal distribution (k>0 for a sharp peak, k<0 for a flat peak), while the skewness acts as an index of the distribution’s symmetry (s>0 for right-skewed, s<0 for left-skewed).

2.3.2. Differences between the population dynamics modelled considering the impulse responses from real data and from their Gaussian approximation

We hereby compared the population dynamics described by models (7) considering the impulse responses calculated by the life tables raw dataset and by its Gaussian approximation (8). For the sake of a better visualisation all the populations will be normalised to avoid having to consider mortality. The purpose of this part of the study is to show how the differences highlighted in Section 2.3.1 are further amplified if the evolution of the population is predicted by models.

2.3.3. Data availability and analysis

The raw data, as well as the scripts to fully reproduce the result of this study are both publicly available at https://github.com/lucaros1190/LifeTablesIssues or provided as Supporting information of this paper (S1 File). For the sake of completeness, the shared scripts extend the analysis to all the eight temperatures considered in Rossini et al. [32]. The analysis of the impulse response was carried out in Matlab (vers. R2023a, MathWorks, USA) using the tf function to calculate the transfer function and impulse for the impulse response, while the Shapiro-Wilk test was carried out using the shapiro.test() function within R Studio (vers. 4.2.3, R Core Team). We refer the most interested readers to the shared scripts (link or S1 File) for the full list of software packages and functions involved in the calculations.

3. Results and discussion

3.1. Differences between real distributions of the development times and their Gaussian approximation

In this subsection we report the difference between the actual experimental distributions and the ones obtained by considering the Gaussian distributions of the life tables’ synthetic data (Fig 2 and S1 Fig). Furthermore, the p-values of the Shapiro-Wilk normality test were reported in Table 2, as well as the additional parameters of descriptive statistics mentioned in Section 2.2. From an inspection of the figures and of the numbers, and from the Q-Q plots provided in S1 Fig, it is apparent that in almost all the cases it is not reasonable to claim that the experimental distributions are normally distributed.

Fig 2. Distribution of the single stages at 21, 26, 28 and 30°C calculated by the experimental data and by the Gaussian distribution obtained by mean and standard error of the development times of Corcyra cephalonica individuals.

Fig 2

The green line indicates the median of the experimental data. This figure is also an example of the difference between a model built using the Gaussian hypothesis and the model built using the actual distribution of the data.

Table 2. Additional parameters calculated from the raw dataset of Rossini et al. [32] listed in Table 1.

Life stage Temperature (°C) Mean development time (days) Mode (days) Median (days) Kurtosis Skewness S-W test p-value*
Egg 21 8.0±0.1 8 8 3.16 0.65 1.7⋅10−4
W = 0.83
26 4.8±0.1 5 5 3.46 −0.81 1.6⋅10−10
W = 0.85
28 5.0±0.0 5 5 18.71 4.21 2.2⋅10−16
W = 0.22
30 4.2±0.1 4 4 2.39 −0.17 1.0⋅10−11
W = 0.81
Larva 21 44.5±0.9 40 43 4.27 1.31 2.5⋅10−4
W = 0.84
26 24.4±0.4 27 27 2.13 −0.81 3.0⋅10−11
W = 0.83
28 22.7±0.3 20 22 2.96 0.89 2.0⋅10−5
W = 0.88
30 23.6±0.5 24 24 2.92 0.43 2.0⋅10−3
W = 0.96
Pupa 21 21.7±0.4 22 22 2.84 −0.43 0.10
W = 0.94
26 14.5±0.3 14 15 4.81 −0.23 7.1⋅10−7
W = 0.92
28 13.0±0.3 14 14 3.45 −0.62 2.0⋅10−3
W = 0.93
30 11.3±0.2 11 11 2.31 0.17 3.0⋅10−3
W = 0.97

This set of parameters should be applied as standard of life tables studies to report results.

* S-W means Shapiro-Wilk normality test, as described in Section 2.3.1. A p-value less than 0.05 means that the dataset does not follow a Gaussian distribution. Additional information to support the results listed in the table is the list of Q-Q plots reported as S1 Fig. For convenience, the normally distributed datasets are highlighted in bold.

Indeed, the first observation is that for the passage between egg and larvae there is a qualitatively good overlap between the raw dataset and the Gaussian distribution (Fig 2, first column of plots), even if the Shapiro-Wilk test and the Q-Q plot indicates the non-normality of the data for all the temperatures (Table 2 and S1 Fig). As the life cycle advances, some major discrepancies become more apparent in the plots as well. A clear example is the distribution of the development times of larvae at 21°C (Fig 2, second column), where the raw dataset is heavily skewed (skewness 1.31, Table 2) and where there is a time shift of 10 days, circa, between the peak of the real distribution and of the Gaussian, and of 2 days between the peak of the Gaussian and the median. Analogous situations, even if with a lower time shift, can be observed in the case of larvae and pupae at 28°C (median 22, mode 20, skewness 0.89, Table 2), and by pupae at 30°C (median and mode 11, skewness 0.17, Table 2). Finally note that the Shapiro-Wilk test and the Q-Q plots in S1 Fig indicate the non-normality of the datasets for all cases except that for the pupae at 21°C.

These simple observations clearly point out that the synthetic data reported in the current life tables come with a loss of information on the form of the distribution. In line of principle, different solutions to overcome this problem could be devised, such as increasing the number of computed parameters (e.g., adding some of the parameters reported in Table 2) or using other distributions and their characteristic parameters. This observation echoes the intuition of Wagner et al. [8], which was probably the first to mention that the distribution of the development times should go beyond the Gaussian approximation. For the sake of completeness, it is worth mentioning here that over the years some alternatives to the normal distribution have been proposed. Indeed, in the same paper, Wagner et al. [8] proposed to approximate the frequency distribution of the development times with a Weibull function. Poisson or negative continuous binomial distributions were proposed [69] for continuous-time distribution, and the Erlang distribution was proposed [7072] for discrete time. Some authors have instead suggested the use of Bayesian approaches [73], to circumvent the distribution of the data, but these methods encounter challenges when dealing with multimodality.

However, it is important to underline that the wide adoption of any specific distribution would require a large amount of data on a large number of different species for its validation and wide acceptance which, given the very small amount of publicly available data, is currently not realistic. Furthermore, any synthetic parameters from descriptive statistics will always come with some loss of information and an extra burden for the analysis of the results. Any assumption and choice, including how the sampling size affects the shape of the distribution, could be the object of further discussions/doubts in the future. For the moment, we can say that the case study considered in this work leaves to suppose that the shape of the distribution might be related to the biology of the species and not only to the size of the sample. The datasets, in fact, had a conspicuous size even in case of temperatures close to the thermal limits, where usually reaching high numbers is difficult because of the high mortality rate and the long development times that significantly extend the duration of the experiments.

We believe that the most desirable approach to maximise the pool of information while minimising the efforts would be to systematically complement the life tables with plots of the experimental distributions as in Fig 2 and by publishing the raw data of the experiment as supplementary material attached to the paper. This would complete the representation and the theory of Chi and Liu [7] that, over the years, has been adopted by different authors but that, at the same time, does not consider the life history of each single individual to obtain the distribution of the development times. It is worth saying, in addition, that from the distribution of the development times of the single individuals it is possible to obtain the matrices of Chi and Liu [7], but not vice versa.

To reinforce this proposal, please note that reporting the frequency distribution of the experimental data based on the life traits of each individual is not new, and that the literature provides many examples where this is done in the fields of biology and ecology. For instance, we can look at how the length of human pregnancy is reported, a case where data are conceptually similar to the insect’s stage development analysed in life tables. The common way to report these data is by plotting the frequency distribution of the gestation times, see e.g. [74], while the synthetic representation is carried out considering the mean value, the standard error, the median, and the percentiles. A similar example can be found in [75], where instead of the frequency distribution the authors reported its cumulative probability, while the data are synthesised through the median and the inter-quartile range.

Conceptually similar approaches can be found also in zoology, see for instance the works of Nogalski and Piwczynsky [76] and Brakel et al. [77] on the gestation lengths of cattle. In this case, authors also plotted the frequency distribution of times as a result, summarising them in tables reporting the mean, the standard error, and the skewness.

To the best of our knowledge, there are only a handful of works in entomology and nematology reporting data in a similar way. For instance, a cumulative proportion of the egg hatching was reported by Young et al. [78] on nematode populations reared at different constant temperatures, while the distribution of the development times as in Fig 2 was reported by Severini et al. [71] and Yaro et al. [79]. It is worth remarking, however, that none of these works reports the raw experimental dataset as supplementary material or in repositories of public access. The stage frequency matrices proposed by Chi and Liu [7], that aimed to increase the quantitative information usually reported in the life tables studies, is of course an interesting way of representing the data. The stage frequency matrix is in fact almost comparable to the raw data, as showed for example by Severini et al. [71], where the graphical representation of the distribution of the development times was supported by the stage frequency matrix of eggs and larvae, and Candy [80] for the Chrisophtarta bimaculata (oliver) (Coleoptera: Chrysomelidae). As already stated, however, the matrices of Chi and Liu [7] are usually built by considering how many individuals are, at each sampling time, in a given stage, losing information on the life history of each single specimen. Tracking the age-stage distribution of each single individual is however a fundamental component, for instance, to investigate in depth the intra-population genetic variation from a modelling point of view.

We believe that the systematic availability of raw data and the plots of the distributions as in Fig 2 provides information of fundamental importance in applied entomology and pest control, i.e., the fields where life tables studies find the main application [81]. As a further example of the importance of having these data available, we can notice in Fig 2 that there is always a minimum delay that is respected in each stage of development. Let us take as an example the egg stage. It is known from the literature [3234] that the optimum temperature for the development of C. cephalonica is around 26–28°C. Fig 2 shows that even in the optimal conditions of growth, no eggs hatch before at least 2 days. Furthermore, this minimum delay changes over temperature, and this information is usually missing in the classical synthetic life tables representation. The minimum delay of each life stage provides relevant information on the biology of the species such as the minimum amount of time where no development (e.g., egg hatching, adult emergence) is expected for each given constant temperature. This aspect has a direct application in pest control strategy, for instance, since it can be of great support to estimate empirically the occurrence of the time one should wait to observe the life stages most susceptible to a particular control method [82].

The example of C. cephalonica suggests another interesting aspect that motivates the need of publishing the life tables raw data and of plots such as Fig 2. In fact, the environmental conditions influence not only the expected value of the development time, but it may also change its variance. From a comparison between plots (Fig 2), it seems to appear that as the temperature goes far from the optimum value, the development times of the individuals are spread over a higher range. Biologically speaking this fact is reasonable, since the higher the deviation from the optimal temperature value, the higher is the probability that extreme adverse events happen. Thus, a wider time spread of the individuals can be an advantage, because in the case where part of the population in a given stage dies because of extreme external conditions, there is still a portion of individuals in the previous or further stages that can ensure the species survival [83]. The systematic availability of plots (such as in Fig 2) and raw data would allow more in-depth studies on these aspects.

The final noteworthy aspect provided by the example of C. cephalonica is the occurrence of bimodal (or multimodal, more generally) distributions, as illustrated by the dataset of larvae at 26°C (Fig 2). Managing this type of dataset is often challenging and many solutions proposed in the existing literature involve data transformation [8486]. While transforming the dataset can facilitate the application of statistical methods such as the Analysis of Variance (ANOVA), it may not be entirely suitable for extracting information such as minimum/maximum development time, for instance. Additionally, finding a transformation law that effectively normalises the data can be difficult in some cases, as well as assigning a biological meaning to the transformed variables. The use of the impulse response faithfully reproduces the dataset, overcoming all the aforementioned issues.

3.2. Differences between the population dynamics modelled considering the impulse responses from real data and from their Gaussian approximation

In this section, we will show that, if the Gaussian distribution implicitly suggested by the data reported in life tables is used to build population models, it can lead to models whose time evolution does not reflect the actual behaviour of the population, and thus have very low predictivity. This is a quite relevant negative side effect of the discussion carried out in Section 3.1 as models are becoming more and more important for the future of precision agriculture (e.g., to decide when to carry out insect pest control) as well as for process control in insect farming [52,87]. To make our point, we compared the results of a model obtained considering as an impulse response the Gaussian distribution deducted from the life tables, and the one obtained directly by the experimental dataset.

At 21°C (Fig 3) the peak of the Gaussian distribution of development times of the larvae occurred on day 53, while the impulse response model indicates day 48. The real data were mostly concentrated in the left side of the plot, (days 47–51), with a peak on day 50. The Gaussian distribution in this case strongly anticipated the emergence of the first larvae, ten days before the real case. The pupae showed a similar scenario, with a peak of the experimental data on day 72, coinciding with the impulse response description, while the Gaussian distribution predicts day 75.

Fig 3. Impulse response compared with life tables raw dataset [32].

Fig 3

Case of Corcyra cephalonica at constant temperature of 21°C.

At 26°C (Fig 4) the situation was the opposite since the distribution of the larvae and pupae was mostly concentrated on the right side of the plot. Larvae had two peaks: one on day 21 and one on day 33, both closely represented by the impulse response model. The Gaussian distribution indicated a peak on day 30, strongly underestimating the emergence time of the greatest part of the population. The pupae showed the same pattern, well described by the impulse response model and strongly anticipated by the Gaussian representation.

Fig 4. Impulse response compared with life tables raw dataset [32].

Fig 4

Case of Corcyra cephalonica at constant temperature of 26°C.

In the cases of 28 and 30°C (Figs 5 and 6, respectively) the expected value of the Gaussian distribution was overall shifted with respect to the real distribution, overestimating or underestimating the peak of the population, respectively. If we take into account the average values listed in Table 1, accordingly, we are anticipating or postponing the mean generation time. This value is very important for the definition of pest control strategies, because empirically speaking is the most common value that farmers and technicians consider while planning treatments.

Fig 5. Impulse response compared with life tables raw dataset [32].

Fig 5

Case of Corcyra cephalonica at constant temperature of 28°C.

Fig 6. Impulse response compared with life tables raw dataset [32].

Fig 6

Case of Corcyra cephalonica at constant temperature of 30°C.

4. Conclusion

Although life tables are an important descriptive tool, they are incomplete and should be complemented by also providing:

  1. A graphical representation of the frequency distribution of the development times;

  2. The raw dataset, reporting the life traits of each single individual, as supplementary material.

This conclusion is substantiated by the fact that the Gaussian distribution which is implied by reporting only the average and standard error in the current life tables, often does not describe reliably the actual distribution of the data. This is a quite relevant problem as it might hide interesting aspects of the ectotherms’ biology (e.g., minimum development time, genetic variability, multimodal behaviour to enhance survival). In this paper we also showed that this might impact the prediction capability of models solely based on life tables parameters.

Of course, the laboratory conditions typical of life tables experiments differ significantly from natural environments, where additional factors such as agronomic practices (e.g., irrigation, pruning, harvest, fertilisation) or biotic and abiotic stresses (e.g., meteorological events, natural enemies) typically influence population development. However, the introduction and control of single factors represent the primary strength of life tables experiments providing, for instance, precise information on how plant extracts, plant metabolites, or pesticides might affect fertility, lifespan, or sex ratio [3,6].

A limit of this study is that it is based on data coming from a single species, and, although it seems highly unlikely, it could be a species-specific anomaly. This however reinforces one of the main conclusions of this paper, i.e., the importance for the community to make the raw datasets publicly accessible. Indeed, publicly accessible data would not only allow the scientific community to get the actual distribution obtained for each experiment but would also allow the development of meta-analyses (e.g., refining the distributions on a single species using experiments carried out by different laboratories, verifying similarities and differences in behaviour between organisms within the same order, genus, etc.) which at the moment are not possible.

It should also be mentioned that the experiments to complete life tables are very time consuming and require important resources, which are often provided by public agencies for the overall advancement of science and knowledge. As a consequence, making data publicly available (after a reasonable embargo period if needed) should become a standard procedure. Note that this recommendation is perfectly in line with the various Open Data policies promoted by most governmental agencies and scientific organisations.

Beside the “reporting” part, the conclusions of this paper also raise some questions concerning the practice of interpolating the mean development times reported in life tables using mathematical functions of the temperature. Indeed, the result of this paper seems to suggest that it would be much more useful and descriptive to try to interpolate the actual distributions to obtain a distribution of the development times over temperature in a 3-D surface. We believe that future explorations, possibly supported by a sufficiently large amount of publicly available data, may lead to a revision of the current interpolation framework providing a more structured theory.

Supporting information

S1 Fig. Quantile-quantile plot of the quantiles of the quantiles of the experimental data.

Crossed dot markers indicates the data points, while the solid reference line connects the first and third quartiles of the data and a dashed reference line extends the solid line to the ends of the data.

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pone.0299598.s001.pdf (75.4KB, pdf)
S1 File. Dataset and script to fully reproduce the results of this study.

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pone.0299598.s002.zip (52.5KB, zip)

Acknowledgments

The authors are grateful to the anonymous reviewers for their comments and suggestions, which have been greatly helpful for the improvement of this manuscript. The authors are grateful to Prof. Lidia Limonta and Prof. Daria Patrizia Locatelli for sharing the dataset analysed to show the core problem of this study.

Data Availability

All data utilized in this study, along with the accompanying scripts necessary for complete result reproduction, are openly accessible via the following link: https://github.com/lucaros1190/LifeTablesIssues.

Funding Statement

LR is funded by the European Commission under the Grant n. 101102281, Project “PestFinder”, call HORIZON-MSCA-2022-PF-01. Part of this work has been supported by the Fons de la Recherche Scientifique-FNRS under the Grant n. 40003443 (“Smart Testing”) and by the Brussels Institute of Advanced Studies (Grant BrIAS2024). The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: 

This paper presents a case study of the importance of raw data to the construction of life tables for modelling the development and emergence of insect pests, using a published dataset for a species of moth as a case study. The typical approach of using summary statistics (means, standard error) to model development, assuming that the data are normally distributed and therefore can be adequately represented by such values, is shown to miss important information and led to erroneous predictions. The authors therefore advocate for informing modelling efforts with raw data and that more studies in entomology to make their raw data available for future use. The points raised are valid and important, and the methods and analyses are valid, and the paper is well-written and novel. The importance of inter-individual variability, examining the actual distribution of data, and the push toward Open Data, are all in line with current trends in research. The paper will mainly be of interest to entomologists and agricultural scientists, although it will also have wider interest to developmental biologists and biostatisticians, and thus is appropriate for this journal. I believe this is an important paper that can and should be published, with some minor revisions and possible additional discussion points that I have noted below.

Title: Should be “a discussion on tables’ parameters” or “a discussion on table parameters”

Line 19: “a case of study” should be changed to “a case study”

Line 44: “Change “each temperature of rearing” to “each rearing temperature”

Line 47: Delete citation of [9] here, as it is cited below for the specific relevant points.

Lines 67-69: More importantly, the transformation from development times to rates removes the infinities that occur at developmental threshold (min/max) temperatures.

Lines 77 and 232: I think “ulteriorly” is incorrect or misleading here, it would be better to say “alternatively”.

Line 147: It might be helpful to specify here that Figure 1 shows data specifically for the larval phase at a particular temperature, as an example of the non-normal distribution of data.

Line 146: Change “accordingly” to “according”

Equations 6 and 7, and Lines 226-227, and 231: The symbols of the parameters for the Gaussian distribution and its standard error (plus the alpha symbol that should be at line 231) have disappeared from the uploaded manuscript file – please ensure that these are included and visible in the future version(s) of the paper uploaded.

Lines 241 and elsewhere: This should probably be “impulse response”, not “impulsive response”

Lines 254-256: Should restate “We remind the most interested readers to” as “We refer the most interested readers to”. Also, one wonders if maybe some of these details should be included in the main Methods section of the paper, rather than in a Supplement – not full scripts, but the packages and functions used for the tests performed may be relevant to include.

Figure 1: I was struck by the apparent bimodality of the data presented in Figure 1 – clearly this feature of the data would be lost through the use of simple Gaussian summary statistics (means, etc.) and presents a strong case for the use of raw data in this study. However, the bimodality of these data are not discussed in the paper, though multimodal behavior is mentioned briefly near the end as a general point (line 420). While somewhat beyond the main focus of the paper, one wonders how such bi/multimodality might emerge beyond just “genetic variability” – for instance, are there alternative developmental pathways or strategies (fast vs. slow growing) in the same population as a form of bet-hedging, could the eggs used have different developmental histories, etc.? Has such bi/multimodality been reported before, and how was it explained then? Perhaps the authors can draw attention to the bimodality of data in Figure 1 and provide a short (2-3 sentences) discussion of bi/multimodal development in insects in the paper?

Lines 293-303: While directly working from the actual distributions of experimental data is likely the ideal approach to capture variation and non-normality in life table parameters, as done in this study, there are some alternative (and possibly simpler) approaches that might be worth consideration. The authors mention application of alternative distributions as one alternative approach here. A related method might be data transformation – for instance, in cases where data can be made normal/Gaussian following a mathematical transformation (logarithm, square-root, etc.) it may be reasonable to use the mean and standard error values of transformed data. This approach will have limitations (for example, it likely cannot help with bi/multimodal data), but may be worth discussing. Another method was recently published using Bayesian approaches, which may be worth reading, discussing, and citing – see Studens, Bolker & Candau, 2023, “Predicting the temperature-driven development of stage-structured insect populations with a Bayesian Hierarchical Model”, Journal of Agricultural, Biological, and Environmental Statistics, https://doi.org/10.1007/s13253-023-00581-y

Line 340: There are typos in the name of this species – it should be Chrysophtharta bimaculata (Olivier, 1807) [the year may be omitted in some publications, but note the spelling of the species’ part of the name and capitalization of Olivier]

Line 344: What is “intra-genetic variability of the populations”? Maybe this should be “intra-population genetic variation”?

Lines 358-367: Often data at more extreme temperatures and/or later developmental stages can be more variability and less normally distributed due to decreased sample sizes when individuals die or fail to develop beyond earlier stages. What is interesting about this study is that the dataset used has equal sample sizes across stages (Table 1) within each temperature group and excluded extreme temperatures where nor all stages could be completed (line 128 ff.), and yet the same sorts of patterns were still found. This may speak to something intrinsic in insect development actually being captured, rather than just methodological artefacts. I suggest the authors bring these points up in the Discussion.

Reviewer #2: 

Authors provide strong arguments why the current standards around life table experiments and data may lead to important errors in models and decision support tools for pest control. Using one case study, they demonstrate that the unavailability of raw data, only publicly summarized y too coarse distribution metrics such as mean and standard errors are insufficient to accurately predict metrics of highest importance for decision support systems such as the mean generation time. This article is unambiguously of highest interest to the community of entomologists and deserves to be largely publicized. However, I have some main reservations, as well as a number of minor comments, listed below:

1/ the targeted audience is somewhat unclear, oscillating from mathematicians and modellers actually building the DSS tools and entomologists producing the primary data. While it is absolutely critical that the second group should be targeted by this paper, it somewhat misses its target at the moment, because it lacks relevant biological information: the consequences and main results should be clearly supported by illustrative examples biologically meaningful. For instance, what does it mean for an insect species if its development time distribution is bimodal versus gaussian ? Relative to the first group – DSS modellers: it is obvious that authors did not wish to push their study up to actually demonstrating the potentially catastrophic consequences of the systematic gaussian assumptions of developmental distributions on the success of pest management. However, this is a bit of a shame as it could probably have been done at minimal costs using even the most simplest DSS; one way around could be to provide more quantitative indications on how much these erroneous assumptions on distributions may crucially affect the accuracy, and therefore success of DSS tools. Put it simply: how do we care if a DSS might be 2-days wrong in predicting the peak of abundance of a pest ?

2/ how authors present the concept of distribution is somewhat limited, all mathematically (continuous), in terms of simulations (e.g., discrete individuals), and in terms of insect biology. For instance, it would be really useful and attract wider interest to relate simple characteristics of distributions to biological mechanisms. For instance, the minimum time laps between egg laying and egg hatching (ontogeny) is strongly determined genetically and biochemically due to a sequence of biochemical changes at the molecular and cellular level; injecting more biology would help entomologists understand why it matters to record and publish data in a more appropriate way.

3/ Inherent to the accuracy of the estimation of the distribution is the sampling size, which is never discussed throughout the paper, and clearly lacking. How much do the uncertainties arising from erroneous assumptions on distribution come from insufficient sampling size ? In other words, even if raw data are published, how much DSS outputs may be limited by initially insufficient sampling sizes, and therefore poor estimates around timing and other variables of key interest?

4/ the other side of the distribution/timing coin is the distribution/relative abundance aspect, never discussed either. What is more important for DSS accuracy: to predict the peak timing, or to predict the peak intensity ? The same goes to the spread of the distribution, barely touched, and which would be made more complex in a realistic scenario of overlapping generations/cohorts.

5/ The conclusion should rebound to the fact that the main conclusion most certainly hold true for other life-table metrics such as fecundity.

Detailed comments:

L20 “the Gaussian approximation of development time”

L35, L73 and elsewhere. I was surprised to see the most recent synthesis paper by Chi et al. not cited here:

Chi, H., Kavousi, A., Gharekhani, G., Atlihan, R., Özgökçe, M. S., Güncan, A., ... & Fu, J. W. (2023). Advances in theory, data analysis, and application of the age-stage, two-sex life table for demographic research, biological control, and pest management. Entomologia Generalis, 43(4), 705-35. https://doi.org/10.1127/entomologia/2023/2048

L39 “age-stage distribution” please provide a very brief definition

L47-48 “net reproduction rate” please cite (and number) the corresponding equation.

L82 What is mean by the “shape” of the distribution is unclear; in itself it may require multiple parameters to be described properly, depending on multimodality etc.

L83-85 This sentence fails its goal: of course we want to know why and how the minimal and maximal development times and shape of distribution are important for planning pest control actions, but this sentence only says that “it is important”, not “how” it is important based on a specific example. More biology is needed here !

L86-88 It is certainly not true for other related individual-based metrics such as e.g. thermal limits CTmax, and for which a bunch of studies have been / are investigating the relationship between intraspecific genetic variability and adaptation potential. It would be worth mentioning some similar examples here, emphasizing that biologists in general, and entomologists in particular, do know how to research these questions and find compelling evidence that the shape of trait distribution does matter from an ecological to an evolutionary perspective.

See e.g.,

Hoffmann AA, Chown SL, & Clusella-Trullas S (2013) Upper thermal limits in terrestrial ectotherms: how constrained are they?. Functional Ecology, 27, 934–949. https://doi.org/10.1111/j.1365-2435.2012.02036.x

but many other references are available.

L99 Mathematically and biologically, this is weird: at the individual level, there may be an experimental uncertainty on the estimate of the development time, but the mean and standard error of development times are population-level, not individual-level, metrics. This should be carefully clarified throughout.

L101-102 I read this sentence about 5 times, still can’t make sense of it. Please rewrite.

L106-113 this somewhat conclusion statement could be written more concisely: we got the point already and this will be repeated throughout.

L160 “the peak”, but also the range !!!

L169-173 This is too long and repeats information that has already been provided earlier; I suggest this should be written more concisely.

L177-178 the concept of “system identification” is unclear. Please define with a practical example. The same goes to the “impulse response identification experiment in L179.

L193 Z has not been defined...

L199 “specific datasets of C. cephalonica”

L209 How does the size of the dataset comes in there ?

L213-216 This has already been said earlier

L217-218 Add reference to figure 1 here

L235-236 kurtosis and skewness in particular can be calculated mathematically in a variety of ways, what has been used here ? It would also be good to illustrate how this has been calculated based on a schematic representation or a real data distribution.

L238-239 This statement is obvious and yet uninformative: what magnitude of deviation can be considered problematic, how far is “far” ? How should it be related to other intrinsic characteristics of data such as nominal time step and sampling size ?

L251-256 This can be written more concisely: “For the sake of completeness, the shared scripts extend the analysis to all eight temperatures.. they also include the list of all software packages and functions...”

L261-264 Already said before.

L265-268 I do not think that this introduction to a sub-subsection of a relatively short paper is necessary. I suggest cut but reintroduce the missing details in the following paragraphs.

L282 but also a shift in intensity/abundance as well…

L285 “by the pupae” please check the structure of the sentence

L290 Here it would be interesting to tell more about how these false assumptions based on data deficiency could make models outputs wrong, and how much wrong.

L292&294 and other references “Wagner et al.”

L302-303 But also accuracy on distribution shape is also constrained by sampling size no matter how many descriptive summary statistics are retained.

L305 This is good, a very clear recommendation

L310-312 The point has already been made and is clear from above, this is a repetition.

L328 “gestation lengths of cattle”

L328 “In this case, authors also plotted”

L342 “missing the life traits of the single specimens”. What ? It seems to me that the English is awkward here, doubled by a nonsensical wording.

L345 “availability of raw data”

L351 “2 days” this should be related to biological knowledge

L356 this is true only in the unrealistic case of non-overlapping generations/cohorts

L363-364 this is tautological and nonsensical, and misses to provide a mechanistic explanation; simple biological stuff such as, the higher the deviation from optimal temperature, the larger the potential damage on the individual (which is often individual-dependent, e.g. in case of large inter-individual variation in size) and therefore the larger the variability in development time due to the induction of other biochemical processes (e.g., defences/protection)

L365-366 this lacks references, this is very much a description of a bet-hedging strategy. Also lacks eco-evolutionary and biological context.

L379 “the peak of the larvae occurred” is both awkward English and lacks accuracy – the word “gaussian” should be in there.

L381 “anticipated the emergence of the first larvae”

L379-383 differences in abundances – or spread /variation across individuals within the cohort should be discussed too.

L392 How sensitive are the models and DSS to timing and abundance ? When will these erroneous assumptions and data deficiency matter or not ?

L413 “Although life tables are important…”

L421-422 you did show that this might impact the prediction capability although the “very negatively” is likely too strong since there is no quantitative statement on impacts on prediction capability/accuracy; in addition you did not show the quantitative consequences for the success of pest control; it would be good to elaborate more on this.

L423 “A limit of this study is that it is based on”

L424 “This however reinforces”

FigS1 legend “quantile-quantile plot of the quantiles of the experimental data”

In addition, I suggest using different line width and/or colours for continuous versus dashed portions, since it is currently quite difficult to visualized due to overplotting data points.

Reviewer #3: 

The work questions the completedness of information provided by common life tables in the study of Entomology, using Corcyra cephalonica as case study. The experimental question posed by the authors is of paramount importance, and the data overall support the initial hypothesis that analyzing raw data and incorporating real data distribution plots is crucial to improve the accuracy and comprehensiveness of life table analyses.

I have just minor concerns/remarks:

• I believe that the manuscript would benefit from an English language revision to improve its proficiency.

• I appreciate the fact that the authors mentioned the limitation of considering only one species (Lines 423-424). However, it would be better if the authors could add data from of at least one or two additional species. This addition would strengthen their conclusions.

• I would like to emphasize the importance of considering longevity and/or mortality, given their importance in life tables. In my opinion, the inclusion of these aspects would significantly enhance the completeness of the study.

• A critical aspect authors did not stress is that their assumptions are only true under controlled growing conditions. However, under field conditions, an insect’s development rate could be influenced by other factors, encompassing not only environmental factors, but also agronomic practices, biotic and abiotic factors, and interactions with other species.

It would be appreciated if the authors add few lines in the discussion part to stress/highlight this aspect.

Here some additional suggestions/comments:

• Abstract (Lines 16-24): In my opinion, the abstract is relatively short (149 words), falling below the 300-word limit. I would like to suggest that the authors consider expanding it by highlighting the methodology adopted and the main results of the paper, in order to provide a more robust and comprehensive version.

• Introduction: Lines 109-113 report some conclusions. I suggest removing it from the introduction section.

• Acknowledgments (Lines 444-447): According to Plos One guidelines, funding sources should not be included in the Acknowledgments.

• The references should be revised to adhere to the specified style, including the abbreviation of journal names.

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25 Jan 2024

Manuscript ID: PONE-D-23-34793

Title: Life tables in entomology: a discussion on tables’ parameters and the importance of raw data.

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Thank you for your time and for the possibility to reconsider our manuscript PONE-D-23-34793 for publication in PLOS ONE after a revision. We sincerely appreciated all the positive comments and suggestions provided by the Reviewers and a point-by-point response to all the questions is provided below this document. During the revision we carefully addressed all the suggestions, with the hope to have sufficiently increased the quality of the manuscript. We renew our availability for any further question or request, if needed. Thank you again for considering our manuscript.

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Response: Thank you for your suggestion. All the data to fully reproduce the results of this study, as well as all the additional data and information that may be helpful for the scientific community is publicly available at the following link https://github.com/lucaros1190/LifeTablesIssues. The dataset is provided under Creative Common Licence CC BY 4.0 DEED - Attribution 4.0 International (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/) and has been resubmitted to PLOS ONE as Supporting Information files for this paper. There are no restrictions on the access of the dataset. The revised statement about the data availability has been provided in the cover letter as well. A sentence in the former version of the manuscript concerning data availability was misleading and has been corrected.

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Reviewers’ comments:

Response to Reviewer 1

Reviewer 1: This paper presents a case study of the importance of raw data to the construction of life tables for modelling the development and emergence of insect pests, using a published dataset for a species of moth as a case study. The typical approach of using summary statistics (means, standard error) to model development, assuming that the data are normally distributed and therefore can be adequately represented by such values, is shown to miss important information and led to erroneous predictions. The authors therefore advocate for informing modelling efforts with raw data and that more studies in entomology to make their raw data available for future use. The points raised are valid and important, and the methods and analyses are valid, and the paper is well-written and novel. The importance of inter-individual variability, examining the actual distribution of data, and the push toward Open Data, are all in line with current trends in research. The paper will mainly be of interest to entomologists and agricultural scientists, although it will also have wider interest to developmental biologists and biostatisticians, and thus is appropriate for this journal. I believe this is an important paper that can and should be published, with some minor revisions and possible additional discussion points that I have noted below.

Response: Dear Reviewer 1, thank you very much for the time you dedicated to revise our manuscript, as well as for the helpful comments and suggestions provided with your revision. We sincerely appreciate your positive idea about our study, and we are glad to know that all the key messages are clear. During the revision process we have carefully addressed all the comments and suggestions provided, and a detailed point-by-point response follows below this message. We hope that this revised version of the manuscript fits with your expectations and we renew our availability for any further question or request, if needed. Thank you again.

Reviewer 1: Title: Should be “a discussion on tables’ parameters” or “a discussion on table parameters”

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have changed the title accordingly.

Reviewer 1: Line 19: “a case of study” should be changed to “a case study”

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have corrected this sentence accordingly.

Reviewer 1: Line 44: “Change “each temperature of rearing” to “each rearing temperature”

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have corrected this sentence accordingly.

Reviewer 1: Line 47: Delete citation of [9] here, as it is cited below for the specific relevant points.

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have updated the reference citation accordingly.

Reviewer 1: Lines 67-69: More importantly, the transformation from development times to rates removes the infinities that occur at developmental threshold (min/max) temperatures.

Response: Thank you for this comment. This information is really helpful to better understand the use of the development rates, so that the revised version of the manuscript has been integrated accordingly.

Reviewer 1: Lines 77 and 232: I think “ulteriorly” is incorrect or misleading here, it would be better to say “alternatively”.

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have replaced “ulteriorly” with “further”.

Reviewer 1: Line 147: It might be helpful to specify here that Figure 1 shows data specifically for the larval phase at a particular temperature, as an example of the non-normal distribution of data.

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have integrated the information of the figure caption accordingly.

Reviewer 1: Line 146: Change “accordingly” to “according”

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. There was no word “accordingly” in line 136, but probably you were referring to line 176, where effectively the suggested correction was appropriate. Thank you.

Reviewer 1: Equations 6 and 7, and Lines 226-227, and 231: The symbols of the parameters for the Gaussian distribution and its standard error (plus the alpha symbol that should be at line 231) have disappeared from the uploaded manuscript file – please ensure that these are included and visible in the future version(s) of the paper uploaded.

Response: Thank you for pointing out this issue. The problem was probably related to the submission system, because the word document seems to not have problems, while the automated PDF provided by the system does. We hope that this issue has been fixed, we will keep an eye on this issue at submission time and in case the issue reappears we will contact the support centre.

Reviewer 1: Lines 241 and elsewhere: This should probably be “impulse response”, not “impulsive response”

Response: Thank you for pointing out this issue. We have replaced “impulsive” with “impulse” in the whole manuscript. The misprint was only in lines 241 and 369.

Reviewer 1: Lines 254-256: Should restate “We remind the most interested readers to” as “We refer the most interested readers to”. Also, one wonders if maybe some of these details should be included in the main Methods section of the paper, rather than in a Supplement – not full scripts, but the packages and functions used for the tests performed may be relevant to include.

Response: Thank you very much for this suggestion. We have addressed the suggested change and mentioned the functions/commands involved in the calculation. In our opinion, the best option is to refer directly to the code, given that the functions involved are typical of the basic environments of Matlab and R Studio. However, for the sake of completeness, we have added the main functions involved.

Reviewer 1: Figure 1: I was struck by the apparent bimodality of the data presented in Figure 1 – clearly this feature of the data would be lost through the use of simple Gaussian summary statistics (means, etc.) and presents a strong case for the use of raw data in this study. However, the bimodality of these data are not discussed in the paper, though multimodal behavior is mentioned briefly near the end as a general point (line 420). While somewhat beyond the main focus of the paper, one wonders how such bi/multimodality might emerge beyond just “genetic variability” – for instance, are there alternative developmental pathways or strategies (fast vs. slow growing) in the same population as a form of bet-hedging, could the eggs used have different developmental histories, etc.? Has such bi/multimodality been reported before, and how was it explained then? Perhaps the authors can draw attention to the bimodality of data in Figure 1 and provide a short (2-3 sentences) discussion of bi/multimodal development in insects in the paper?

Response: Thank you for this suggestion and very insightful comment. Bimodality/Multimodality is a fascinating phenomenon that has sparked our curiosity too when we analysed the data. We have added a few sentences in the introduction and results/discussion of this revised version of the manuscript to highlight the very relevant points introduced in your comment, in particular as these phenomena reinforce our argument. We also report in the manuscript that as a matter-of-fact multi-modality has been already observed for other species, which is actually an important argument to mitigate the “one-species limitation” of our study. Concerning the observation about the “causes”, we agree with the reviewer that “continuous” genetical variability is not sufficient to explain multi-modality (which is probably also only one of the phenomena involved even in simpler distributions), but that multimodality is probably due to “swich” effects that determine different developmental pathways. Unfortunately, the current empirical evidence does not allow us to go beyond some speculation, but it might be a starting point for future studies. Thank you again for this comment which allowed us to make an even stronger argument about the need to publish raw data to keep the completeness of the information.

Reviewer 1: Lines 293-303: While directly working from the actual distributions of experimental data is likely the ideal approach to capture variation and non-normality in life table parameters, as done in this study, there are some alternative (and possibly simpler) approaches that might be worth consideration. The authors mention application of alternative distributions as one alternative approach here. A related method might be data transformation – for instance, in cases where data can be made normal/Gaussian following a mathematical transformation (logarithm, square-root, etc.) it may be reasonable to use the mean and standard error values of transformed data. This approach will have limitations (for example, it likely cannot help with bi/multimodal data) but may be worthy of discussion. Another method was recently published using Bayesian approaches, which may be worth reading, discussing, and citing – see Studens, Bolker & Candau, 2023, “Predicting the temperature-driven development of stage-structured insect populations with a Bayesian Hierarchical Model”, Journal of Agricultural, Biological, and Environmental Statistics, https://doi.org/10.1007/s13253-023-00581-y

Response: Thank you for this consideration and for the interesting reference that have been added and discussed in the manuscript. As an “offline” comment, we agree that data transformation and Bayesian approaches can be a valuable tool to analyse the data and try to extract useful information, but in many cases (at least from our personal experience) it is very difficult to find a mathematical expression that properly transforms the dataset. Moreover, it is difficult to associate an actual meaning to the transformation, which in the end often makes the approach more a “data compression tool” rather than an analysis tool.

Reviewer 1: Line 340: There are typos in the name of this species – it should be Chrysophtharta bimaculata (Olivier, 1807) [the year may be omitted in some publications, but note the spelling of the species’ part of the name and capitalization of Olivier]

Response: Thank you for pointing out this issue. We have corrected the name accordingly.

Reviewer 1: Line 344: What is “intra-genetic variability of the populations”? Maybe this should be “intra-population genetic variation”?

Response: Thank you for spotting this. Yes, the meaning of this sentence is exactly what you mean. To avoid any potential misunderstanding, we have corrected this part of the text accordingly.

Reviewer 1: Lines 358-367: Often data at more extreme temperatures and/or later developmental stages can be more variability and less normally distributed due to decreased sample sizes when individuals die or fail to develop beyond earlier stages. What is interesting about this study is that the dataset used has equal sample sizes across stages (Table 1) within each temperature group and excluded extreme temperatures where nor all stages could be completed (line 128 ff.), and yet the same sorts of patterns were still found. This may speak to something intrinsic in insect development actually being captured, rather than just methodological artefacts. I suggest the authors bring these points up in the Discussion.

Response: Thank you for this consideration. We have added in the discussion a comment highlighting that with this specific dataset extreme temperature are sufficiently covered to be reasonably confident that the non-gaussian distribution are not artifacts due to a low sample size.

Response to Reviewer 2

Reviewer 2: Authors provide strong arguments why the current standards around life table experiments and data may lead to important errors in models and decision support tools for pest control. Using one case study, they demonstrate that the unavailability of raw data, only publicly summarized y too coarse distribution metrics such as mean and standard errors are insufficient to accurately predict metrics of highest importance for decision support systems such as the mean generation time. This article is unambiguously of highest interest to the community of entomologists and deserves to be largely publicized. However, I have some main reservations, as well as a number of minor comments, listed below.

Response: Dear Reviewer 2, thank you for the time dedicated to revise our manuscript, as well as for the helpful comments and suggestions provided with the revision. We sincerely appreciate your positive opinion, and a point-by-point answer to all your questions and issues follows below. We hope that this revised version of the manuscript better reflects your expectations, and we renew our availability for any further question or request, if needed.

Reviewer 2: 1) the targeted audience is somewhat unclear, oscillating from mathematicians and modellers actually building the DSS tools and entomologists producing the primary data. While it is absolutely critical that the second group should be targeted by this paper, it somewhat misses its target at the moment, because it lacks relevant biological information: the consequences and main results should be clearly supported by illustrative examples biologically meaningful. For instance, what does it mean for an insect species if its development time distribution is bimodal versus gaussian? Relative to the first group – DSS modellers: it is obvious that authors did not wish to push their study up to actually demonstrating the potentially catastrophic consequences of the systematic gaussian assumptions of developmental distributions on the success of pest management. However, this is a bit of a shame as it could probably have been done at minimal costs using even the most simplest DSS; one way around could be to provide more quantitative indications on how much these erroneous assumptions on distributions may crucially affect the accuracy, and therefore success of DSS tools. Put it simply: how do we care if a DSS might be 2-days wrong in predicting the peak of abundance of a pest?

Response:

Thank you for your comment. Reading again the paper we see your point. Indeed, the main message of this paper (i.e. the need for publishing raw data and the possible deceptive information given by relying only on mean and standard error) is meant for both publics: on the one hand this paper targets people interested in building models (e.g. for DSSs) to warn about the dangers of using gaussian interpretation of the data which might lead to models that are not predictive; on the other hand it wants to point out at possible missed analysis opportunities for “descriptive” entomologists as information like min and max development rate, possible unimodal/bimodal/multimodal distribution etc might give biological insight on certain species. In the new version of the manuscript these two aspects have been stressed from the very beginning of the paper.

Concerning the specific dangers for DSS modelling, following the reviewers’ suggestion we have better commented Figure 1 which clearly shows the difference between a model built using the gaussian hypothesis and the model built using the actual distribution. In this figure we comment as the peak time of a model based on the gaussian assumption had no practical meaning and could lead to wrong conclusions.

Reviewer 2: 2) how authors present the concept of distribution is somewhat limited, all mathematically (continuous), in terms of simulations (e.g., discrete individuals), and in terms of insect biology. For instance, it would be really useful and attract wider interest to relate simple characteristics of distributions to biological mechanisms. For instance, the minimum time laps between egg laying and egg hatching (ontogeny) is strongly determined genetically and biochemically due to a sequence of biochemical changes at the molecular and cellular level; injecting more biology would help entomologists understand why it matters to record and publish data in a more appropriate way.

Response: Thank you for this comment. During the revision we have warmly welcomed the suggestion of injecting more biology to provide a more practical explanation to the concerns highlighted by our study. There are different integrations throughout the text, with the hope to have sufficiently increased the biological content of the manuscript.

Reviewer 2: 3) Inherent to the accuracy of the estimation of the distribution is the sampling size, which is never discussed throughout the paper, and clearly lacking. How much do the uncertainties arising from erroneous assumptions on distribution come from insufficient sampling size? In other words, even if raw data are published, how much DSS outputs may be limited by initially insufficient sampling sizes, and therefore poor estimates around timing and other variables of key interest?

Response: Thank you for this very relevant comment. This is a major open question concerning the experiment design of life tables. Somehow, answering this question is one of our long-term ambitions and this study is placed one step before tackling this question. Indeed, if by sufficient experience we might identify the shapes of the most typical distributions for insect development, we could plan the sample size of the experiments accordingly. However, at the moment not sufficient information is available in the literature to tackle this issue in a serious way. We believe that data sharing is fundamental to this goal: the authors have first-hand experience on the human and economic costs to rear large numbers of individuals, and getting enough data on enough different species to identify the shapes of the most common distribution is clearly unfeasible for a single research group (even for the largest ones). We strongly believe that open data is the solution, and of course, once the shape of the distribution is known it is fundamental to define the number of eggs to rear by considering the mortality and the classes of the distribution itself. We hope to have sufficiently answered your question, and that it fits your expectations. Part of these long-term ambitions are now discussed in the revised version of the manuscript.

Reviewer 2: 4) the other side of the distribution/timing coin is the distribution/relative abundance aspect, never discussed either. What is more important for DSS accuracy: to predict the peak timing, or to predict the peak intensity? The same goes to the spread of the distribution, barely touched, and which would be made more complex in a realistic scenario of overlapping generations/cohorts.

Response: Thank you for this comment. The core of this study is the distribution of the development times, not the abundance. We decided to not mention this aspect to not generate confusion: even if they are strictly related from a pest control perspective, they are independent problems to treat. Of course, the timing (i.e., the peak of the population) is important to set up a control strategy, but the abundance defines if the control action will be carried out. The greatest part of the thresholds is defined as “X number of individuals per plant”, “X number of individuals per hectare” (or similar definitions), so of course the abundance is important. From a modelling perspective, the abundance, above all in open field conditions, is of difficult estimation for different reasons, as for example migration of individuals, uncontrolled effects, and/or approximations in the model formulations. We were among the firsts to face this problem and the details and motivations are widely explained in https://doi.org/10.1016/j.ifacol.2022.11.128 and https://doi.org/10.1016/j.ecoinf.2023.102310. For the sake of completeness, we have mentioned the problem in the manuscript, but without going into the details. We hope that these changes fit your expectations.

Reviewer 2: 5) The conclusion should rebound to the fact that the main conclusion most certainly hold true for other life-table metrics such as fecundity.

Response: Thank you for this comment which allowed to extend the scope of this paper. This aspect is now mentioned in the conclusion as suggested by the reviewer.

Detailed comments:

Reviewer 2: L20 “the Gaussian approximation of development time”

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have corrected this part of the text accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L35, L73 and elsewhere. I was surprised to see the most recent synthesis paper by Chi et al. not cited here:

Chi, H., Kavousi, A., Gharekhani, G., Atlihan, R., Özgökçe, M. S., Güncan, A., ... & Fu, J. W. (2023). Advances in theory, data analysis, and application of the age-stage, two-sex life table for demographic research, biological control, and pest management. Entomologia Generalis, 43(4), 705-35. https://doi.org/10.1127/entomologia/2023/2048

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. At the time the first final version of the manuscript (before the first submission) was prepared, we were not aware of this paper. We have cited this paper in this revised version of the manuscript.

Reviewer 2: L39 “age-stage distribution” please provide a very brief definition

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have added a brief definition after the first appearance of “age-stage distribution”.

Reviewer 2: L47-48 “net reproduction rate” please cite (and number) the corresponding equation.

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have numbered the equation.

Reviewer 2: L82 What is mean by the “shape” of the distribution is unclear; in itself it may require multiple parameters to be described properly, depending on multimodality etc.

Response: Thank you for this comment. This part of the manuscript has been integrated with additional information that would better introduce all the general overview. We hope that the changes fit your expectations.

Reviewer 2: L83-85 This sentence fails its goal: of course we want to know why and how the minimal and maximal development times and shape of distribution are important for planning pest control actions, but this sentence only says that “it is important”, not “how” it is important based on a specific example. More biology is needed here !

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have revised this part of the text by “injecting” more biology to justify the concepts discussed. We hope that our corrections fit your expectations.

Reviewer 2: L86-88 It is certainly not true for other related individual-based metrics such as e.g. thermal limits CTmax, and for which a bunch of studies have been / are investigating the relationship between intraspecific genetic variability and adaptation potential. It would be worth mentioning some similar examples here, emphasizing that biologists in general, and entomologists in particular, do know how to research these questions and find compelling evidence that the shape of trait distribution does matter from an ecological to an evolutionary perspective.

See e.g.,

Hoffmann AA, Chown SL, & Clusella-Trullas S (2013) Upper thermal limits in terrestrial ectotherms: how constrained are they?. Functional Ecology, 27, 934–949. https://doi.org/10.1111/j.1365-2435.2012.02036.x

but many other references are available.

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have modified this part of the manuscript accordingly, providing the integrations and changes suggested. We hope that this revised part of the text better suits your expectations.

Reviewer 2: L99 Mathematically and biologically, this is weird: at the individual level, there may be an experimental uncertainty on the estimate of the development time, but the mean and standard error of development times are population-level, not individual-level, metrics. This should be carefully clarified throughout.

Response: Thank you for this comment. There was an error in the sentence: the word “individual” is actually “life stage”. We changed this sentence accordingly providing its original meaning.

Reviewer 2: L101-102 I read this sentence about 5 times, still can’t make sense of it. Please rewrite.

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have modified the sentence accordingly to make it simpler and more comprehensible. We hope that this correction fits with your expectations.

Reviewer 2: L106-113 this somewhat conclusion statement could be written more concisely: we got the point already and this will be repeated throughout.

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have shortened this part of the text, following the suggestion of the other reviewers as well. We hope that this revised part of the text better suits your expectations.

Reviewer 2: L160 “the peak”, but also the range !!!

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have modified this part of the text accordingly. We hope that now it is clearer.

Reviewer 2: L169-173 This is too long and repeats information that has already been provided earlier; I suggest this should be written more concisely.

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have modified this part of the text accordingly to synthesise the above-mentioned rows.

Reviewer 2: L177-178 the concept of “system identification” is unclear. Please define with a practical example. The same goes to the “impulse response identification experiment in L179.

Response: Thank you for this comment. During the revision we added a brief definition of “system identification”. We hope that this change fits with your expectations.

Reviewer 2: L193 Z has not been defined...

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have modified this part of the text accordingly rephrasing as “Z -transform domain” to avoid confusion.

Reviewer 2: L199 “specific datasets of C. cephalonica”

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have modified this part of the text accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L209 How does the size of the dataset comes in there ?

Response: Thank you for this comment. Being a model, the impulse response is normalised and thus independent on the sample size. In line of principle, if one wants to add in the model a measure of the uncertainty (which is related to the size of the sample) the model should be complemented by a “disturbance term” whose role is to take into account of the uncertainty (which comes from the size of the sample). However, we felt that adding such an extra model (whose parameters at the current stage cannot be estimated) would decrease dramatically the understandability of the paper distracting from the main message.

Reviewer 2: L213-216 This has already been said earlier

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have removed the above-mentioned lines.

Reviewer 2: L217-218 Add reference to figure 1 here

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have introduced the reference to Fig. 1.

Reviewer 2: L235-236 kurtosis and skewness in particular can be calculated mathematically in a variety of ways, what has been used here ? It would also be good to illustrate how this has been calculated based on a schematic representation or a real data distribution.

Response: Thank you for this comment. The calculation has been carried out according to the definitions of skewness and kurtosis reported in https://doi.org/10.1016/B978-190399655-3/50011-6, already included in the “kurtosis()” and “skewness()” Matlab functions. We have added the explicit formulae and the citation into the text. In our opinion, a schematic representation of the calculation is redundant, since there is the full dataset and code publicly available to the readers that want more information on this aspect. We hope that this change fits with your expectations.

Reviewer 2: L238-239 This statement is obvious and yet uninformative: what magnitude of deviation can be considered problematic, how far is “far”? How should it be related to other intrinsic characteristics of data such as nominal time step and sampling size ?

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have integrated this part of the text with a brief description of skewness and kurtosis w.r.t. some limit values. We hope that this part of the text has been sufficiently improved.

Reviewer 2: L251-256 This can be written more concisely: “For the sake of completeness, the shared scripts extend the analysis to all eight temperatures.. they also include the list of all software packages and functions...”

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. During the revision we have compressed this part of the text. We hope to have sufficiently increased the readability of this subsection.

Reviewer 2: L261-264 Already said before.

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have removed the aforementioned lines.

Reviewer 2: L265-268 I do not think that this introduction to a sub-subsection of a relatively short paper is necessary. I suggest cut but reintroduce the missing details in the following paragraphs.

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. Following the previous comment, we have shortened all the aforementioned lines, maintaining the information that in our opinion should be highlighted.

Reviewer 2: L282 but also a shift in intensity/abundance as well…

Response: Thank you for this comment. As we have explained in previous comments, talking about abundance is misleading in this case. It is obvious that if the number of total individuals is the same (normalisation factor of the distribution) and the distributions are different, one may look “higher” than the other. In our opinion there is no need to refer to the abundance, simply because the normalisation factor of the distributions is the same (Gaussian vs actual), but the shape makes the difference.

Reviewer 2: L285 “by the pupae” please check the structure of the sentence

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have corrected this sentence accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L290 Here it would be interesting to tell more about how these false assumptions based on data deficiency could make models outputs wrong, and how much wrong.

Response: Thank you for this comment. Actually, your request is the whole Section 3.2! The structure of the manuscript divides the part of the life tables experiments/analysis and of the implication of the life tables value on modelling purposes. In this line we are still talking about the data analysis, the modelling part comes after.

Reviewer 2: L292&294 and other references “Wagner et al.”

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We corrected the citations accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L302-303 But also accuracy on distribution shape is also constrained by sampling size no matter how many descriptive summary statistics are retained.

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have modified this sentence in order to include your consideration.

Reviewer 2: L305 This is good, a very clear recommendation

Response: Thank you for this very positive comment. Actually, this is one of our main recommendations, besides sharing the raw data. Accessing the source of information is fundamental for double checking and reproducing the results of the experiments, as we have repeatedly stated within the manuscript.

Reviewer 2: L310-312 The point has already been made and is clear from above, this is a repetition.

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have removed the mentioned sentence.

Reviewer 2: L328 “gestation lengths of cattle”

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have corrected this sentence accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L328 “In this case, authors also plotted”

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have corrected this sentence accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L342 “missing the life traits of the single specimens”. What ? It seems to me that the English is awkward here, doubled by a nonsensical wording.

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have modified this sentence accordingly, with the hope to have improved its readability and meaning.

Reviewer 2: L345 “availability of raw data”

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have corrected this sentence accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L351 “2 days” this should be related to biological knowledge

Response: Thank you for this comment. Yes, it is the biological information that one can extract from the raw data or from a plot of the actual distribution.

Reviewer 2: L356 this is true only in the unrealistic case of non-overlapping generations/cohorts

Response: Thank you for this comment. Yes, of course there are more complicated cases such as overlapping generations, but in this sentence, we wanted to address the key message in a very simple way.

Reviewer 2: L363-364 this is tautological and nonsensical, and misses to provide a mechanistic explanation; simple biological stuff such as, the higher the deviation from optimal temperature, the larger the potential damage on the individual (which is often individual-dependent, e.g. in case of large inter-individual variation in size) and therefore the larger the variability in development time due to the induction of other biochemical processes (e.g., defences/protection).

Response: Thank you for this comment. We rephrased this sentence to make it clearer.

Reviewer 2: L365-366 this lacks references, this is very much a description of a bet-hedging strategy. Also lacks eco-evolutionary and biological context.

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have added references to support the statement.

Reviewer 2: L379 “the peak of the larvae occurred” is both awkward English and lacks accuracy – the word “gaussian” should be in there.

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have corrected this sentence accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L381 “anticipated the emergence of the first larvae”

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have corrected this sentence accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L379-383 differences in abundances – or spread /variation across individuals within the cohort should be discussed too.

Response: Thank you for this comment. As motivated before, talking about abundance is misleading for the readers and potentially out of the scope of this manuscript.

Reviewer 2: L392 How sensitive are the models and DSS to timing and abundance? When will these erroneous assumptions and data deficiency matter or not?

Response: Thank you for this question. As we showed in the simulations (Fig. 3 and section 3.2) erroneous assumptions and data deficiency matter. The abundance is a relatively solvable problem, as we explained in previous comments. A wrong estimation of the development time, instead, can be a problem because it can cause a compression/dilatation of the mean generation times. For instance, if we use the models to simulate three, four, etc.. generations and the mean development time is underestimated or overestimated, we are accumulating an anticipation or a delay in our simulation.

Reviewer 2: L413 “Although life tables are important…”

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have corrected this sentence accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L421-422 you did show that this might impact the prediction capability although the “very negatively” is likely too strong since there is no quantitative statement on impacts on prediction capability/accuracy; in addition you did not show the quantitative consequences for the success of pest control; it would be good to elaborate more on this.

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have modified this sentence to make the statements softer.

Reviewer 2: L423 “A limit of this study is that it is based on”

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have modified this sentence accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L424 “This however reinforces”

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have corrected this sentence accordingly.

Reviewer 2: FigS1 legend “quantile-quantile plot of the quantiles of the experimental data”. In addition, I suggest using different line width and/or colours for continuous versus dashed portions, since it is currently quite difficult to visualized due to overplotting data points.

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have corrected the legend and the figure accordingly.

Response to Reviewer 3

Reviewer 3: The work questions the completedness of information provided by common life tables in the study of Entomology, using Corcyra cephalonica as case study. The experimental question posed by the authors is of paramount importance, and the data overall support the initial hypothesis that analyzing raw data and incorporating real data distribution plots is crucial to improve the accuracy and comprehensiveness of life table analyses.

Response: Dear Reviewer 3, thank you for the time dedicated to revise our manuscript, as well as for the helpful comments and suggestions provided with the revision. We have sincerely appreciated your positive comments and we have carefully addressed all the comments. A point-by-point response to all the comments follows below in this letter. We hope that the revision has sufficiently increased the quality of the manuscript, and we renew our availability for any further question or request, if needed.

I have just minor concerns/remarks:

Reviewer 3: I believe that the manuscript would benefit from an English language revision to improve its proficiency.

Response: Thank you very much for this comment. During the revision we have paid particular attention to correct the English language and style, with the hope that now the manuscript is more readable.

Reviewer 3: I appreciate the fact that the authors mentioned the limitation of considering only one species (Lines 423-424). However, it would be better if the authors could add data from of at least one or two additional species. This addition would strengthen their conclusions.

Response: Thank you for this remark. We totally agree with this comment, and we have also pointed this issue in the conclusion. However, finding row data from a different species that allows us to carry out exactly the same analysis is difficult and goes slightly out of the scope of this study. However, we extended the discussion and the insights that our dataset provided from a biological point of view as, for instance, the bimodality of larvae at 26 °C. We hope that in future we can delve into the different open questions highlighted in this study by referring to different case studies.

Reviewer 3: I would like to emphasize the importance of considering longevity and/or mortality, given their importance in life tables. In my opinion, the inclusion of these aspects would significantly enhance the completeness of the study.

Response: Thank you for this comment. Actually, the inclusion of mortality and fertility was in our initial planning, however we had to adapt the study on the data we had, which only include the overall mortality of the stages but not their temporal distribution. From the same methodology we applied for the development, it is possible to describe mortality, but it should be demonstrated with proper experimental data. Accordingly, this aspect is among the open questions that we left with this manuscript, and we hope to provide an answer soon. Following this comment, however, we have modified the impulse response model to account for the stage mortality (eqs. 6, 7).

Reviewer 3: A critical aspect authors did not stress is that their assumptions are only true under controlled growing conditions. However, under field conditions, an insect’s development rate could be influenced by other factors, encompassing not only environmental factors, but also agronomic practices, biotic and abiotic factors, and interactions with other species.

It would be appreciated if the authors add few lines in the discussion part to stress/highlight this aspect.

Response: Thank you for this comment. Of course, this is a relevant aspect of pest populations and poikilothermic individuals in general. The anthology of this work, however, it is based on discussions we had looking at laboratory data. We realized, in fact, that most of the models describing pest populations fails in representing laboratory datasets, where the condition is supposed to be optimal and less affected by uncontrolled factors. The paradox, is that these models have been successfully validated with open field data, arising the question of “where is the problem”. After some attempts, we realized that this discordance between model simulations and laboratory data is given by a compression of the generations, striking the spark from which this study was born. We think that a step back is necessary to provide a better mathematical description (maximising the amount of biological information) of insect populations. This step back is to critically re-think how to collect and analyse the experimental data from life tables studies, basic operation to investigate the essential biological traits of the species.

We have added a few lines to remark that the growth under laboratory conditions is an extremely controlled environment that may be far from the field, where more natural conditions occur. We decided to avoid mentioning the open field conditions in the first draft of the paper to not generate misunderstanding to potential readers, but during the revision we have warmly welcomed your suggestion. We hope that the integration fits with your expectations.

Here some additional suggestions/comments:

Reviewer 3: Abstract (Lines 16-24): In my opinion, the abstract is relatively short (149 words), falling below the 300-word limit. I would like to suggest that the authors consider expanding it by highlighting the methodology adopted and the main results of the paper, in order to provide a more robust and comprehensive version.

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. During the revision we have expanded the abstract with more information about the methodology and the conclusion. We hope that this revised part of the text fits your expectations.

Reviewer 3: Introduction: Lines 109-113 report some conclusions. I suggest removing it from the introduction section.

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. During the revision we have modified this part of the manuscript accordingly. More specifically, we moved part of the above mentioned text in the final part of the abstract, given that an extension was requested.

Reviewer 3: Acknowledgments (Lines 444-447): According to Plos One guidelines, funding sources should not be included in the Acknowledgments.

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have carefully revised all the aspects related to the journal settings, including the acknowledgements and fundings.

Reviewer 3: The references should be revised to adhere to the specified style, including the abbreviation of journal names.

Response: Thank you for this comment. As explained in the previous comment, we have carefully revised all the text settings, according to the journal guidelines.

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Decision Letter 1

Ramzi Mansour

9 Feb 2024

PONE-D-23-34793R1Life tables in entomology: a discussion on tables' parameters and the importance of raw data.PLOS ONE

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Authors made a great effort to address all reviewers’ comment and incorporate changes in their article, which I believe are a significant improvement. I only have very minor comments below.

L25 “the benefits”

L30 “biological aspects”

L31 avoid using “evolution” in a demographic sense. I recommend “changes in the population”, or even “demographic changes”.

L31 “highlights this by” or “highlights this aspect by” sounded better

L46 “the individuals in a population” or “from a population”

L49 why did you remove “a” before cohort ? Are you sure this is correct English in current form?

L54 “to obtain various information”

L56 “The age-stage distribution describes… that compose the insect’s life cycle.”

L76 “outside such thermal range”

L123 “this is not yet common practice, which produces a loss”

L124 “Remarkably, the unavailability of data”. A more offline comment here: a lot of papers publish a statement similar to “data are available from authors upon request”, notably because publishing data still remains a quite tedious, non straightforward and sometimes slow process, but most importantly also costly, and the community lacks general guidelines of the multiple ways to publish data. First, while this requires lots of efforts to collect data a posteriori from authors, I wonder how often authors do respond to these post-publication queries, is it something that the authors of the present paper have a sense of ? Second, wouldn’t it also be the role of publishers and journals to build up tools and guidelines about the so many available ways to publish data beyond the gold standards (e.g., Dryad), how are all the alternative (free github repositories, as supplementary materials of a publication, etc.) valid

L135 does it really assume “identical”, or instead “interchangeable” as random draws of a single population ? A random draw does not assume identity, but representativeness. The distribution will be imperfect (unrealistic) in case the draw is too small relative to the size of the population, and in case the population itself is not representative of the species. I’m not very sure I agree with the following argument L135-137; bootstrapping will smooth-out the distribution and a distribution is always based on individuals’ traits, this last sentence as currently written seems to oppose bootstrapping to individual-based data, so I don’t understand…

L147 “of insect population models”, I assume not all modellers deal with pests.

L148 “exclusive usage of life tables’ synthetic information”

L200 is it instead “implies that individuals from a single population can have two different developmental times” ?

L316 “are both publicly”

L369 “Furthermore, any synthetic parameters from descriptive statistics will always come with some loss of information”

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Manuscript ID: PONE-D-23-34793R1

Title: Life tables in entomology: a discussion on tables’ parameters and the importance of raw data.

Journal: PLOS ONE

Decision letter and response to the Editor

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Response:

Dear Dr. Mansour,

Thank you very much for your time and for the continued interest in our manuscript PONE-D-23-34793R1 entitled “Life tables in entomology: a discussion on tables’ parameters and the importance of raw data” for publication in PLOS ONE after a minor revision.

We sincerely appreciated all the positive comments and suggestions provided by the Reviewers and a point-by-point response to all the questions is provided below this document. During the revision we carefully addressed all the suggestions, with the hope to have sufficiently increased the quality of the manuscript. We renew our availability for any further question or request, if needed. Thank you again for considering our manuscript.

Sincerely,

Luca Rossini, on behalf of the co-authors.

Reviewers' comments

Reviewer 1

Reviewer 1: The authors have adequately addressed my comments and (in my opinion) those of the other reviewers, and the paper can now be accepted in its revised form. I commend them on putting together a great piece of work - I'm sure this will be an important paper in the field.

Response: Dear Reviewer 1, thank you once again for your time dedicated to revise our manuscript. We are sincerely grateful for the very positive comment, it means much to us. We hope to reach soon the next steps in this important research, that we believe is very important to improve the data collection and sharing in Entomology, Ecology, and Biological Sciences at large.

Thank you again for helping us to improve this manuscript and for the very helpful suggestions provided during the revision.

Reviewer 2

Reviewer 2: Authors made a great effort to address all reviewers’ comment and incorporate changes in their article, which I believe are a significant improvement. I only have very minor comments below.

Response: Dear Reviewer 2, thank you once again for your time dedicated to revise our manuscript, and for the helpful comments and suggestions provided during the rounds of review. We sincerely appreciated the very positive comment about our study, and we hope to have reached, during this revision, a form that is acceptable for publication. A point-by-point response to all the questions follows below this document, and we hope that our changes fits with your expectations. We also renew our availability for any further change or request, if needed.

Thank you again for helping us to improve this manuscript and for the very helpful suggestions provided during the revision.

Reviewer 2: L25 “the benefits”

Response: Thank you very much for this suggestion. We have corrected the text accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L30 “biological aspects”.

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have corrected the text accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L31 avoid using “evolution” in a demographic sense. I recommend “changes in the population”, or even “demographic changes”.

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have changed the text using the suggested alternative “demographic changes”.

Reviewer 2: L31 “highlights this by” or “highlights this aspect by” sounded better

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have corrected the text accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L46 “the individuals in a population” or “from a population”

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We corrected the text accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L49 why did you remove “a” before cohort ? Are you sure this is correct English in current form?

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have restored the “a” before “cohort”.

Reviewer 2: L54 “to obtain various information”

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have changed the text accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L56 “The age-stage distribution describes… that compose the insect’s life cycle.”

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have changed the text accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L76 “outside such thermal range”

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have modified the text accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L123 “this is not yet common practice, which produces a loss”

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have modified this part of the text accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L124 “Remarkably, the unavailability of data”. A more offline comment here: a lot of papers publish a statement similar to “data are available from authors upon request”, notably because publishing data still remains a quite tedious, non straightforward and sometimes slow process, but most importantly also costly, and the community lacks general guidelines of the multiple ways to publish data. First, while this requires lots of efforts to collect data a posteriori from authors, I wonder how often authors do respond to these post-publication queries, is it something that the authors of the present paper have a sense of ? Second, wouldn’t it also be the role of publishers and journals to build up tools and guidelines about the so many available ways to publish data beyond the gold standards (e.g., Dryad), how are all the alternative (free github repositories, as supplementary materials of a publication, etc.) valid.

Response: Thank you for this very interesting comment. We totally agree with you, and it is an aspect that we wanted to highlight with this paper as well. Data sharing in many fields of Life Sciences, as Entomology or Ecology, is strongly limited by the lack of a standard for the data collection and sharing. This work is a starting point for a common goal that we should achieve all together as a community. We should talk more about the problem of data sharing, and we should propose solutions in order to reach a standard, as already carried out in other fields of research. Presenting the problem is of course the first step, but much work is still needed, and we hope that the readers will support our long-term mission. Of course, Journals can enhance the data sharing, but before we need a standard. Having a common database to share entomological data would be the best option, but also if the data are published on public and free repositories (such as GitHub) following a given standard guideline would be a good option. Well, we have still much work to do and many challenges to cope, but we are sincerely glad to know that there are other researchers that have our same feelings. We found these two rounds of review very constructive not only for the feedback received on the manuscript content, but also for the personal opinions of the Reviewers, including yours, that are a source of inspiration for the future. To answer the question, we do not have a clear idea of how frequently the corresponding authors respond to requests of data sharing, but we think that it depends on the research groups. An alternative statement that we often find in many published papers is “The data are available from the authors under reasonable request”: well, what is “reasonable” or not is very hard to understand..!

Reviewer 2: L135 does it really assume “identical”, or instead “interchangeable” as random draws of a single population? A random draw does not assume identity, but representativeness. The distribution will be imperfect (unrealistic) in case the draw is too small relative to the size of the population, and in case the population itself is not representative of the species. I’m not very sure I agree with the following argument L135-137; bootstrapping will smooth-out the distribution and a distribution is always based on individuals’ traits, this last sentence as currently written seems to oppose bootstrapping to individual-based data, so I don’t understand…

Response: Thank you very much for this comment. We have modified the lines 135-137 accordingly, to make this part of the text clearer. The bootstrap technique hides the actual distribution of the development times, this was the meaning behind this part of the text. We hope that now the sentence is clearer and that our change fits with your expectations.

Reviewer 2: L147 “of insect population models”, I assume not all modellers deal with pests.

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have changed the text accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L148 “exclusive usage of life tables’ synthetic information”

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have modified the text accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L200 is it instead “implies that individuals from a single population can have two different developmental times” ?

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. Yes, the meaning is correct, and the sentence was modified accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L316 “are both publicly”

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have modified this sentence accordingly.

Reviewer 2: L369 “Furthermore, any synthetic parameters from descriptive statistics will always come with some loss of information”.

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have modified this sentence accordingly.

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Life tables in entomology: a discussion on tables' parameters and the importance of raw data.

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Ramzi Mansour

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Associated Data

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    Supplementary Materials

    S1 Fig. Quantile-quantile plot of the quantiles of the quantiles of the experimental data.

    Crossed dot markers indicates the data points, while the solid reference line connects the first and third quartiles of the data and a dashed reference line extends the solid line to the ends of the data.

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    S1 File. Dataset and script to fully reproduce the results of this study.

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    Data Availability Statement

    All data utilized in this study, along with the accompanying scripts necessary for complete result reproduction, are openly accessible via the following link: https://github.com/lucaros1190/LifeTablesIssues.


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