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. 2024 Mar 8;19(3):e0299718. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0299718

New, simplified versus standard photodynamic therapy (PDT) regimen for superficial and nodular basal cell carcinoma (BCC): A single-blind, non-inferiority, randomised controlled multicentre study

Eidi Christensen 1,2,*, Erik Mørk 2, Olav Andreas Foss 3, Cato Mørk 4, Susanne Kroon 5, Lars Kåre Dotterud 6, Per Helsing 7, Øystein Vatne 8, Eirik Skogvoll 9,10, Patricia Mjønes 2,11, Ingeborg Margrethe Bachmann 12,13
Editor: Pasyodun Koralage Buddhika Mahesh14
PMCID: PMC10923430  PMID: 38457386

Abstract

Background

Topical photodynamic therapy (PDT) is an approved and widely used treatment for low-risk basal cell carcinoma (BCC), comprising two sessions with an interval of 1 week. Simplification of the treatment course can be cost-effective, easier to organize, and cause less discomfort for the patients.

Methods and findings

We performed an investigator-initiated, single-blind, non-inferiority, randomized controlled multicentre study with the objective of investigating whether a simpler and more flexible PDT regimen was not >10% less effective than the standard double PDT in the treatment of primary, superficial, and nodular ≤2 mm-thick BCC and evaluate the cosmetic outcome. With a non-inferiority margin of 0.1 and an expected probability complete response of 0.85, 190 tumours were required in each group. Histologically verified BCCs from seven centres in Norway were randomly assigned (1:1) to either receive a new regimen of single PDT with one possible re-treatment of non-complete responding tumours, or the standard regimen. The primary endpoint was the number of tumours with complete response or treatment failure at 36 months of follow-up, assessed by investigators blinded to the treatment regimen. Intention-to-treat and per-protocol analyses were performed. The cosmetic outcome was recorded. The study was registered with ClinicalTrials.gov, NCT-01482104, and EudraCT, 2011-004797-28.

A total of 402 BCCs in 246 patients were included; 209 tumours assigned to the new and 193 to the standard regimen. After 36 months, there were 61 treatment failures with the new and 34 failures with the standard regimen. Complete response rate was 69.5% in the new and 81.1% in the standard treatment group. The difference was 11.6% (upper 97.5% CI 20.3), i.e. > than the non-inferiority margin of 10%. Cosmetic outcomes were excellent or good in 92% and 89% following the new and standard regimens, respectively.

Conclusions

Single PDT with possible re-treatment of primary, superficial, and nodular ≤ 2-mm-thick BCC was significantly less effective than the approved standard double treatment. The cosmetic outcome was favorable and comparable between the two treatment groups.

Introduction

Basal cell carcinoma (BCC) is the most common type of skin cancer in the adult white population, with the highest incidence in Australia (>1000/100000 person-years) [1]. It poses a significant health issue due to the considerable patient morbidity and a substantial financial burden on healthcare systems [2,3]. Though the tumour usually grows slowly and rarely metastasises, it can cause extensive tissue destruction if inadequately treated or untreated [4]. BCCs are commonly classified into high and low risk, indicating the possibility of recurrence after treatment. The low-risk group includes primary, superficial, and nodular tumours of smaller size located outside the neck and mid-face zone [2]. Although surgical excision is widely used to treat BCC, photodynamic therapy (PDT) is an attractive modality for treatment of low-risk tumours, owing to good compliance, a high response rate, short healing time, few side effects, and favourable cosmetic outcomes [5]. PDT is not recommended for high-risk tumours. Commonly, PDT of BCC involves the use of 5-aminolevulinic acid (ALA) or its methyl ester metyl-aminolevulinate (MAL) as precursors to potent photosensitizers administered in gel or cream formulation, which causes selective accumulation of photoactive porphyrins in the tumour cells 3 h following application [6]. The porphyrins generate reactive oxygen species on illumination under red light causing cell death by necrosis and apoptosis. PDT has been extensively used as a treatment modality for non-melanoma skin cancer in the last 20 years and is approved for low-risk, superficial and small, nodular ≤ 2-mm-thick BCC administered in two sessions at an interval of 1 week [5,7]. The practice of double PDT emerges from results of early, open-label clinical studies that report increased PDT efficacy with the use of repeated treatment [8,9]. However, some single PDT studies are reported to achieve complete response rates of 64%-84% at 3–6 years following treatment [7,1013]. This indicates that several cases of BCC require only one treatment, as they may be overtreated with the current standard PDT regimen. Overtreatment constitutes a large healthcare expenditure [14], and the current PDT practice may also be less cost-effective than other non-invasive treatment options [3,15]. Randomised controlled studies are needed to compare the outcomes after single versus repeated PDT. In addition, with current practice, two time-consuming hospital visits are required, which could increase patient burden. Therefore, a more flexible PDT regimen should be explored to simplify treatment.

The aim of our study was to investigate whether a simplified and more flexible PDT regimen consisting of a single PDT session with the option of one re-treatment of those BCCs with incomplete response was not >10% less effective than the approved standard double PDT regimen in the treatment of superficial and nodular ≤2-mm-thick BCC. We also aimed to evaluate the cosmetic outcome and in addition explore prognostic factors such as the patient’s sex and age and tumour location, size, clinical, and histological subtypes, and thickness that may contribute to treatment failure in the groups.

Materials and methods

Study design

This was a single-blind, non-inferior, randomised, controlled multicentre study.

Participants, eligibility criteria and settings

Patients recruited from the participating study sites, above 18 years of age, with one or more histologically confirmed BCC clinically assessed as non-pigmented superficial or nodular subtype, and ≤2.0 mm thick, were assessed for eligibility. Patient exclusion criteria were: child-bearing potential, Gorlin syndrome, porphyria, xeroderma pigmentosum, history of arsenic exposure or known allergy to MAL, concomitant treatment with immunosuppressive medication, or physical or mental conditions that would prevent them from attending the follow-up visits. Tumours were excluded if located on the neck or within the mid-face area, having undergone prior treatment, or had the longest diameter >15 mm on the face or scalp, >30 mm on the trunk, and >20 mm on the limbs.

The study was conducted in hospital settings, including four different university hospitals, one district general hospital, and two private dermatology clinics (Table 1). The investigators were all dermatologists and members of the Norwegian PDT group with each 15–20 years of experience in PDT.

Table 1. Baseline distribution of patients and basal cell carcinoma characteristics in the two randomised groups.

Treatment Regimen
Characteristics New Standard
Sex, n (%)
 Male
 Female
 Missing n (%)

65 (55.6)
52 (44.4)
0 (0)

63 (48.8)
66 (51.2)
0 (0)
Age (years), mean (min-max.)
 Missing n (%)
66 (26–92)
0 (0)
66 (37–91)
0 (0)
Previous BCC in medical history, n (%)
 Missing n (%)
108 (51.7)
6 (2.9)
96 (49.7)
2 (1.0)
Fitzpatrick skin type, median (%)
 I
 II
 III
 IV
 Missing n (%)

24 (11.5)
92 (44)
92 (44)
1 (0.5)
1 (0.5)

25 (13)
74 (38.5)
93 (48.4)
0
1 (0.5)
Tumour location, n (%)
 Head/ neck
 Trunk
 Extremities
 Missing n (%)

27 (12.9)
144 (68.9)
38 (18.2)
0 (0)

20 (10.4)
129 (66.8)
44 (22.8)
0 (0)
Tumour size, (mm.)
 Mean (SD, min-max)
 Median (25%-75%, percentile)
 Missing n (%)

11.1 (4.4, 5.0–30.0)
10.0 (8.0–13.0)
1 (0.5)

11.4 (4.4, 5.0–26.5)
10.0 (8.3–15.0)
0 (0)
Clinical tumour thickness (mm.)
 Mean (SD, min-max)
 Median (25%-75%, percentile)
 Missing n (%)

1.0 (0.5, 0.1–2.0)
1.0 (0.5–1.0)
2 (1.0)

1.0 (0.6, 0.1–2.0)
1.0 (0.5–1.1)
1 (0.5)
Clinical tumour subtype, n (%)
 Superficial
 Nodular
 Missing n (%)

150 (71.8)
56 (27.3)
2 (1.0)

149 (77.2)
42 (21.8)
2 (1.0)
Histological tumour thickness, (mm,)
 Mean (SD, min-max)
 Median (25%-75%, percentile)
 Missing n (%)

0.9 (0.8, 0.2–4.6)
0.6 (0.3–1.2)
18 (8.6)

0.9 (0.7, 0.2–3.3)
0.5 (0.3–1.3)
18 (9.3)
Histological tumours subtype, n (%)
 Superficial
 Nodular
 Aggressive
 Missing n (%)

126 (60.3)
46 (22.0)
29 (13.9)
8 (3.8)

121 (62.7)
45 (23.3)
24 (12.4)
3 (1.6)
Study sites, n (%)
 Akershus Dermatology Centre
 Districts General Hospital in Førde
 Haukeland University Hospital
 Lillehammer Dermatology Centre
 Oslo University Hospital
 Stavanger University Hospital
 St. Olav’s University Hospital
 Missing n (%)

52 (24.9)
10 (4.8)
33 (15.8)
21 (10.0)
38 (18.2)
23 (11.0)
32 (15.3)
0 (0)

50 (25.9)
2 (1.0)
28 (14.5)
21 (10.9)
37 (19.2)
25 (13.0)
30 (15.5)
0 (0)

The study was performed in compliance with the Declaration of Helsinki and the International Conference on Harmonization Guidelines for Good Clinical Practice. All patients provided written informed consent before study entry. The study protocol and consent documents were approved by the Regional Committee for Medical and Health Research Ethics (REC) Midt (reference number 2011/2048) and the Norwegian Medicines Agency (www.legemiddelverket.no, reference number 12/00273-10). The study was registered at ClinicalTrials.gov (number NCT-01482104) with EudraCT, 2011-004797-28. The Clinical Research Unit Central Norway of the Norwegian University of Science and Technology (NTNU) was responsible for randomisation and monitoring.

Clinical and histological examinations

The clinical examination defined tumour sizes as the mean value of the maximum length and width. BCCs were clinically classified as superficial or nodular subtypes based on recognized clinical features after inspection and palpation of the tumours [16,17]. Each tumour was marked on a body chart, and most were photographed before treatment for reliable identification of the treatment area at follow-up visits.

The investigating dermatologists obtained tissue samples from each tumour using a disposable 3 mm or 4 mm biopsy punch from the tumour area which clinically was evaluated as the thickest. Pathologists at the pathology laboratories affiliated with the study sites performed the initial histological examination to confirm the BCC diagnosis. After PDT and subsequent follow-ups, a second histological investigation of the biopsy samples was performed to assess tumour subtype and thickness. The original biopsy blocks were transferred to the Cellular and Molecular Imaging Core Facility (CMIC), NTNU for preparation before examination by a pathologist at St. Olav’s University Hospital with an extensive experience in evaluating BCC. The tumours were classified into three subtypes: superficial, nodular, or aggressive (morphoeaform, infiltrative, and micronodular) growth types [18]. If presenting a mixed-growth pattern, these were classified according to the most aggressive component. Tumour thickness was measured from below the stratum corneum to the deepest point of invasion using an oculometer (1 mm squares) or/and an ocular micrometre to a precision of 0.1 mm.

Interventions

Before PDT, the BCC surface and 5 mm of surrounding clinical non-involved skin were prepared using a sharp disposable curette by which the scraping was performed in a checked pattern to remove any crust and superficially hard keratotic tissue [19]. If the clinical examination identified the need for further thickness reduction, selected tumours were also debulked. A similar pre-treatment procedure was repeated before the second PDT.

PDT was performed with MAL (Metvix®) 160 mg/g cream Galderma, France), which was applied to the prepared treatment area in an approximate 1-mm-thick layer. Thereafter, the area was covered with a plastic film and a lightproof occlusive bandage. The cream was left for 3 h before being removed and the treatment area was exposed to light-emitting diodes (Aktilite®) with a peak wavelength of 630 nm, fluence rate of 70 x 100 mW/cm2 and exposure typically for 7–9 minutes giving a total light dose of about 37 J/cm2. Treatment was repeated after 1 week with the standard regimen and after 3 months for tumours with clinical treatment failure with the new regimen.

Outcomes

Treatment outcomes were evaluated at 3-, 12- and 36-months following PDT (Table 2).

Table 2. Methods used for evaluation of photodynamic therapy (PDT) outcome at follow-up.

Treatment
Regimen
Follow-up
3-month
3-month after re-PDT of tumours with initial 3-month clinical treatment failure 12-month 36-month
New
Clinical and cosmetic assessment. Clinical and cosmetic assessment.
Biopsy of clinically assessed failures.
Clinical and cosmetic assessment.
Biopsy of clinically assessed failures.
Clinical, dermatoscopic and cosmetic assessment.
Biopsy of clinical and/or dermatoscopic assessed failures.
Standard
Clinical and cosmetic assessment.
Biopsy of clinically assessed failures.
NA Clinical and cosmetic assessment.
Biopsy of clinically assessed failures.
Clinical, dermatoscopic and cosmetic assessment.
Biopsy of clinically and/or dermatoscopic assessed failures

The treatment outcome “complete response” was defined as clinical clearance of tumour in the treatment areas, including a dermatoscopic investigation at a 36-month follow-up. When in doubt, a biopsy was taken and where histological examination showed no remnants of BCC, the treatment result was recorded as a complete response. The outcome “treatment failure” was defined as clinical suspicion of failure with a following histological confirmation of remnant BCC in the treatment area during follow-up. The exception was BCC treated once in accordance with the new regimen that, after clinical suspicion of failure at a 3-month follow-up, underwent a second PDT without prior biopsy (Table 2). Tumours with observed treatment failure were terminated and further treated outside the study at the discretion of the investigators.

The cosmetic outcome was assessed at 3-, 12-, and 36-month follow-up by visual inspection and palpation of the treatment areas. For those tumours treated twice using the new regimen, the initial assessment occurred 3 months after the second PDT. Cosmetic results from areas with treatment failure were not included in the analyses. The results were categorised on a four-point ordinal scale as either excellent (absence of any stigmata other than scar formation after diagnostic punch biopsy), good (slight presence of fibrosis, atrophy, or change in pigmentation), fair (moderate presence of fibrosis, atrophy, or change in pigmentation), or poor (marked presence of fibrosis, atrophy, or change in pigmentation).

Any adverse events (AEs) that occurred in the period from treatment to the 3-month follow-up were reported and described by their duration, severity, relationship to treatment and according to the need of other specific therapy. Serious adverse event (SAE) were to be reported according to specified procedures whether they were considered related to study treatment or not. Local reactions, such as erythema, pain, and weeping, were regarded as conceivable events and reported as number of days present. AEs could be reported spontaneously by the patient or through open (non-leading) questioning.

Sample size calculation

Sample size was determined by StatXact version 9.0 (Cytel Software Corp, Waltham, USA), based on anticipated complete response probability of 0.85 obtained from early publications [6,7] and a non-inferiority margin of 10%; thus, aiming to demonstrate that the new regimen was not >0.1 inferior to the standard regimen. With a significance level at 0.05 and power at 0.80, each group required 190 tumours. Because multiple tumours were randomised within patients, no adjustments for patient identity were made.

Randomisation

BCCs were randomised to receive the new or the standard treatment by use of a web-based system developed and administered by the Faculty of Medicine and Health Sciences, NTNU. Block randomisation was done by center where both the order of block sizes and allocation sequence of each block were generated consecutively by the system. An administrator initiated the randomisation system and the assignment was sent by email to the appointed study investigator who carried out the treatment.

To ensure unpredictability of the random allocation in patients with multiple BCCs, tumours were numbered consecutively, and recorded on the body map included in the case report forms (CRFs) before randomisation. The distance between BCCs had to be clinically ≥30 mm apart to be regarded as two individual tumours. The numbering started on the front side of the patient’s body and from top to bottom. If two tumours were located on the same horizontal line, the numbering first followed the tumour located furthest to the right side of the patient’s body. The corresponding system was then applied to the patient’s back. The first tumour was randomised to one of the two treatment regimens and the second was allocated to the other regimen. A third tumour was randomised to one of the two treatment regimens and a fourth allocated to the other regimen and so on. The new PDT regimen included one single PDT with one possible re-treatment of clinically non-complete responding tumours at the initial 3-month follow-up. The standard treatment regimen included two PDT treatments at an interval of 1 week. To reduce treatment bias, the investigators performed the tumour preparation before randomisation.

Blinding

Both treatment and cosmetic outcomes were evaluated by dermatologists working at the study centres blinded to the treatment regimen.

Statistical analyses

The final analysis was performed by StatExact version 10.0 (Cytel Software Corp.).

We used an exact non-inferiority test with a margin of 0.1 and corresponding one-sided 97.5% confidence intervals (CI) since one-sided CIs are customary in non-inferiority studies.

We considered six different scenarios to reflect various assumptions about the loss to follow-up. The first scenario represents “per-protocol” analyses, including only tumours with 36-month follow-up results. The next two scenarios represent “intention-to-treat”: a “best-case” scenario in which tumours lost to follow-up were categorised as in complete response and a “worst-case” scenario in which missing results were categorised as treatment failures. Thereafter, three similar analyses were performed but restricted to tumours histopathologically evaluated to have been suitable for PDT treatment. Thus, histological aggressive subtypes and/or tumours thicker than 2 mm were excluded. Stacked bar graphs were used to report cosmetic outcomes. Conceivable AEs were reported as median (25–75) percentiles. Descriptive statistics were used when reporting patients and tumour characteristics. Box plots were used when reporting patient age, BCC size, and thickness of tumours with complete response.

Results

Between June 2012 and April 2014, a total of 402 BCCs from 246 patients were included and randomised, 209 tumours to the new regimen, and 193 tumours to the standard regimen without any crossovers between groups during the treatment period. One tumour was treated in each of 163 patients, two tumours in each of 45 patients, three tumours in each of 18 patients, four tumours in each of 9 patients, five tumours in each of 8 patients, six tumours in each of 2 patients, and seven tumours in one patient. Data on patient demographics, tumour characteristics, and treatment centres are presented in Table 1. The distributions were similar in the two treatment groups. Fig 1 presents the flow diagram of tumours. In the new regimen group, 29 cases (14%) were evaluated clinically at the initial 3-month follow-up as treatment failures and were treated with a second PDT. Three patients asked for an unscheduled 24-month follow-up owing to suspected tumour relapse. Data on the endpoint for treatment response were not available for 22 tumours (9 in the new regimen and 13 in the standard regimen), owing to circumstances including treatment deviations (i.e., tumour receiving treatment other than PDT), withdrawal of consent to participate in the study, patients not attending follow-ups, and patient death.

Fig 1. Flow diagram of basal cell carcinoma.

Fig 1

At the 36-month follow-up, we observed 61 treatment failures by the new regimen and 34 failures by the standard regimen. Table 3 shows the results of the treatment effect at the 36-month follow-up. Complete response rate was 81.1% in the standard treatment group and 69.5% in the new treatment group, with a difference of 11.6% (upper 97.5% CI 20.3, p = 0.64), exceeding the non-inferiority margin of 10%.

Table 3. Outcomes after photodynamic therapy of basal cell carcinoma at 36-month follow-up.

Treatment regimen
Standard New
Analysis scenario Non-failure Failure Non-failure Failure Difference (% of non-failure) 97.5% CI
Upper
P value
Per protocol Number 146 34 139 61 11.6 20.3 0.64
% 81.1 18.9 69.5 30.5
ITT, best casea Number 159 34 148 61 11.6 19.8 0.65
% 82.4 17.6 70.8 29.2
ITT, worst caseb Number 146 47 139 70 9.1 18.1 0.43
% 75.6 24.4 66.5 33.5

ITT, intention-to-treat.

a outcomes in which tumours lost to follow-up were categorised as in complete response.

b outcomes in which tumours lost to follow-up were categorised as treatment failures.

The difference in the best-case scenario was 11.6 (upper 97.5% CI 19.8, p = 0.65), and in the worst-case scenario was 9.1% (upper 97.5% CI 18.1, p = 0.43), both larger than the non-inferiority margin. The 36-month complete tumour response for tumours that were histopathological suitable for PDT (subtype and thickness) is presented in Table 4, of which both exceeded the non-inferiority margin. The cosmetic outcome at the 36-month follow-up was recorded as excellent or good in 128 of 139 (92%) of the evaluated treatment areas by the new regimen and in 132 of 146 (89%) areas by the standard regimen. More detailed information on the cosmetic outcome is given in Fig 2.

Table 4. Outcomes after photodynamic therapy of basal cell carcinoma histologically suitable for treatment at 36-month follow-up.

Treatment regimen
Standard New
Analysis scenario Non-failure Failure Non-failure Failure Difference
(% of non-
failure)
97.5% CI
Upper
P value
Per protocol Number 107 22 103 37 9.3 19.2 0.47
% 82.9 17.1 73.6 26.4
ITT, best casea Number 116 22 109 37 9.4 18.9 0.47
% 84.1 15.9 74.7 25.3
ITT, worst caseb Number 107 31 103 43 7.0 17.2 0.29
% 77.5 22.5 70.5 29.5

ITT, intention-to-treat.

a outcomes in which tumours lost to follow-up were categorised as in complete response.

b outcomes in which tumours lost to follow-up were categorised as treatment failures.

Fig 2. Cosmetic outcomes presented as bars with percentages and numbers within each category.

Fig 2

The mean (min -max) number of days with erythema, weeping, and pain after PDT were 7 (5–14), 1 (0–3), and 0 (0–1) for the new regimen, respectively, and 7 (7–14), 0 (0–3), and 0 (0–3) for the standard regimen, respectively. One case of SAE was reported as an episode of fall in the home, which led to hospitalization for 3 days.

Table 5 shows tumours with complete responses related to sex, tumour location, and clinical and histological evaluation of tumour subtypes. There were minor differences in these categorical data between the two regimens. Fig 3 illustrates the tumours with complete responses related to the patient’s age and tumour size, and Fig 4 shows the relationship between clinical and histological evaluation of tumour thickness of the continuous data. There were minor differences in responses between the two treatment regimens.

Table 5. Patient sex, tumour location and clinical and histological subtypes of basal cell carcinoma with complete response after photodynamic therapy at 36-month follow-up.

Treatment regimen
New Standard
Number % Number %
Gender Male 81 58.3 80 54.8
Female 58 41.7 66 45.2
Location Head-neck 16 11.5 16 11.0
Trunk 96 69.1 99 67.8
Extremities 27 19.4 31 21.2
Subtypes,
Clinical evaluation
Superficial 99 72.3 113 78.5
Nodular 38 27.7 31 21.5
Subtypes,
Histological evaluation
Superficial 90 66.7 96 66.2
Nodular 31 23.0 34 23.4
Aggressive 14 10.4 15 10.3

Fig 3. Patient’s age and tumour size in basal cell carcinomas with complete response at 36-month follow-up.

Fig 3

Fig 4. Clinical and histological tumour thickness in basal cell carcinomas with complete response at 36-month follow-up.

Fig 4

Discussion

Main findings

The main finding in this study is that a simplified regimen for PDT of BCC was inferior to the standard regimen. Both the intention-to-treat and per-protocol analyses demonstrated that complete response rates after treatment with the new regimen could be more than 10% inferior compared with the standard regimen, even though 14% of tumours randomised to the new regimen had been treated twice. The inferiority margin of a maximum of 10% difference in treatment failure between the two regimens was considered acceptable because it was expected to reduce patient burden, be practically easier to organise and be more cost-effective than the conventional double treatment. The new regimen should also provide a success rate comparable with results from other minimally invasive techniques, such as cryosurgery and imiquimod [20,21]. Additionally, the results showed no clinically important difference in the cosmetic outcome between the two regimen groups. The conceivable AEs were comparable between the two groups, and no suspected unexpected SAEs occurred.

Tumour subtype and thickness were clinically evaluated to reflect common daily practice. Several BCCs are treated without prior histopathological examination [22], and in our experience, if a biopsy is taken, a description of tumour subtype and/or thickness is irregularly included in the histology report. However, it can be argued that the use of clinical assessment for selecting BCCs suitable for PDT does not exclude the presence of histologically aggressive and thick tumours. Consequently, a sub analyses was made in which only histologically observed superficial and nodular BCCs not exceeding 2 mm thickness were included. Even with such an approach, the efficacy outcomes of the new, simplified treatment regimen exceeded the 10% non-inferiority margin.

Comparisons with other studies

The practice of two MAL-PDT sessions for BCC has been recommended for about two decades without being properly tested. To the best of our knowledge, this is the first randomised controlled study comparing a simplified regimen consisting of a single PDT session with the possibility of one re-treatment, with standard two treatments.

Complete response rates for BCC after different treatment methods depend on the length of follow-up time [23]. After PDT, most recurrences present within 3 years [7,20]. We achieved a high complete response rate of > 80% for tumours treated with two standard PDT. This is a satisfactory result compared to those from several other studies with long-term follow-up after PDT of BCC [5,24] and is superior to the outcome of a recent large randomised controlled study comparing MAL-PDT with other minimal invasive treatment methods in superficial BCC with a 3-year complete response rate of 58% for PDT [25]. Even though various patient- and BCC-related characteristics are reported to be associated with PDT failure [26], we found no significant differences of such characteristics between the groups for BCC with complete response. However, differences in study design and execution can make a direct comparison between results difficult.

Strengths and limitations

The strengths of this investigator-initiated study include a proper study design, a large sample size, few tumours (patients) lost to follow-up, and the use of combined resources across hospitals and private dermatology centres, which promotes generalizability of the outcomes. However, the results do not apply to all BCC but to tumours that met the study eligibility criteria and from a fair-skinned population Limitations also include that all BCCs were histologically verified before inclusion, which affects the generalizability of the results and the use of punch biopsies for histological examination since they only offer information from a small, selected area of the tumours [27]. Reporting of conceivable adverse events may have been incomplete due to the patient’s different ability to recall symptoms over a 3-month period. Different dermatologists may have been involved in the assessment of treatment areas at the various centres during the study period, and this may have led to a less uniform assessment of outcomes. However, the practise was carried out in accordance with common clinical practise and may thus increase the generalizability of the results.

Other approaches to optimize the standard PDT regimen

Although the double PDT practice is well established, optimization of the standard protocol is being pursued. Recently, the treatment efficacy at 60 months after a single PDT visit with two treatments on the same day was reported to be 80.6% [28]. Among other attempts to challenge the established PDT practice of two treatments one week apart are studies that have investigated the outcome of a single PDT of superficial BCC using fractionated irradiation protocols with one or more light fractions given on the same treatment day. These studies have shown promising short-term complete response rates of up to 80%–95% [15,29]. However, a recent study on the long-term efficacy of fractionated ALA-PDT versus conventional double MAL-PDT showed fractionated PDT to be less effective [30].

Conclusions

We conclude that a single session of PDT, including optional re-treatment, for primary, superficial, and nodular ≤2-mm-thick BCC was significantly inferior to the two standard treatments. Two sessions of PDT are recommended for low-risk BCC. The cosmetic outcome was highly favourable and comparable in the two groups.

Supporting information

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Acknowledgments

First, the authors thank the patients who participate in this study. We also thank the nursing staff, the pathologists, and the clinical managers of the participating hospitals for their contributions. Further, we thank the Cellular and Molecular Imaging Core Facility (CMIC) for preparing the biopsy samples.

Data Availability

The dataset generated and analyzed in the present study is not publicly available because permission has not been granted from the participants or the Ethical Committee. Requests for a minimal data set may be directed to the Head of Department at Department of Clinical and Molecular Medicine, Norwegian University of Science and Technology (kontakt@ikom.ntnu.no).

Funding Statement

This investigator-initiated study was funded by grants from the Liaison Committee for Education, Research, and Innovation in Central Norway (project numbers 2011/16822 and 2019/38881), grant from St. Olav's Hospital, Trondheim University Hospital (grant number 15/9116-128) and a grant from the Cancer Fund (Kreftfondet), St. Olav’s Hospital, Trondheim University Hospital, Trondheim, Norway. The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Decision Letter 0

Pasyodun Koralage Buddhika Mahesh

20 Nov 2023

PONE-D-23-27160New, simplified versus standard photodynamic therapy (PDT) regimen for superficial and nodular basal cell carcinoma (BCC): A single blind, non-inferiority, randomised controlled multicentre study.PLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: This presents technically sound research and the data supports the conclusions. A sub analysis between study sites can be included see any site specific variations, if any. Seems bit late in publishing as the the study was done 2012 -2014.

Reviewer #2: - Mention the objectives of the study in the abstract as well.

- Some details of the design are not clearly stated, i.e. who generated the random allocation sequence, who enrolled participants, and who assigned participants to

Interventions.

- For binary outcomes, presentation of both absolute and relative effect sizes is recommended (Table five)

- Sources of potential Bias need to be addressed in the discussion section.

Reviewer #3: Congratulations to the authors for this important study.

My suggestions to further improve the manuscript are as follows:

Abstract -

Methods: sample size calculation details need to be given.

Prognostic factors assessed for cosmetic outcomes, not mentioned.

Results: The range of the 97.5% CI needs to be given for informed decision making.

Conclusion: Without knowing the CI, cannot conclude the significance of the findings.

Methods -

Criteria considered for sample size calculation need to be mentioned.

Table 1:Since tumor size (based on the site) and thickness were considered in the eligibility criteria for the study, how can you justify having missing data about these variables?

Since tumour subtype was essentially important to the treatment (PDT), how can you justify of having missing data? Also, according to lines 136 and 137, BCC clasification was based on clinical examination. Hence, justify having missing values on tumor sub type.

Remove fullstops after mm (mm.)

Line 169 - ".. curette in which.." needs to be corrected as " ... curette by which.."

Results:

Line 252:Please provide the range of the CI, including the lower value, to get an informed decision by the reader, on the significance and inferiority.

Figure 2: Please provide axis titles

Discussion: need to provide more comparison with other studies, to have a rich discussion critically analyzing the global knowledge available

Reviewer #4: This manuscript presents data analysis from a investigator-initiated, single-blind, non-inferiority, randomized controlled, multicentre-study. The topic is of importance, the study was registered as a RCT (with a valid NCT number), and was approved by the respective IRB/Ethics Committee. While the study objectives sound interesting, is important, and on target, some shortcomings were observed, in regards to abiding by the CONSORT guidelines for conducting and reporting results of high-quality randomized controlled trials (RCTs). Some other (statistical) comments were also provided.

1. Methods:

Methods reporting need some work. An orderly manner is suggested, following CONSORT guidelines, without repeating information, such as Trial Design, Participant Eligibility Criteria and settings, Interventions, Outcomes, sample size/power considerations, Interim analysis and stopping rules, Randomization (details on random number generation, allocation concealment, implementation), Blinding issues, etc, should be mentioned. The authors are advised to create separate subsections for each of the possible topics (whichever necessary), and that way produce a very clear writeup. They are advised to write it carefully, following nice examples in the manuscript below:

https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0889540619300010

Specific comments:

(a) For instance, the randomization and allocation concealment should be made very clear (they are NOT the same thing); the trial staff recruiting patients should NOT have the randomization list. Randomization should be prepared by the trial statistician, and he/she would not participate in the recruiting. The manuscript generates randomization via "computer-generated e-message". More details needed. Any reasoning, why a block randomization was not used, which is often recommended to ensure a balance in sample size across groups?

https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2267325/

(b) Sample size/power: A sample size/power statement is made available, but its recommended to place it as a separate subsection within the Methods section, following CONSORT guidelines. Also, it is not clear what sample size formula was used to power the non-inferiority trial. Some relevant material might be here: https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC7808096/

(c) Statistical Analysis: Very straightforward, but with sketchy descriptions.

(c1) Not clear, what statistical test was used to test for non-inferiority.

(c2) Sample size was decently large; I was wondering why any formal regression analysis was also not performed.

(c3) Not clear, whether the associated test statistic in robust under possible non-Gaussian assumptions; however, with the large sample sizes, it might be working! Some clarifications would be helpful.

2. Results & Discussions/Conclusions:

(a) The authors should check that any statement of significance should be followed by a p-value in the entire Results section. Otherwise, the Results section look OK.

(b) Discussion section should state that the current findings are ONLY based on the random samples derived from this specific population, and should allude to future (larger) studies collected at other geographical areas to confirm the non-inferiority findings.

Reviewer #5: The authors are commended for conducting this trial in par with oncological concepts and research guidelines. In general, the conduct of the trail is scientifically sound. The following comments are given with the hope that these will be beneficial for the authors.

1. If there is a possibility, the reviewer prefers to request for a subgroup analysis of main outcomes of the participants with multiple lesions. Results of response of the lesions in same person would get affected by background factors. Therefore, subgroup analysis lesions in the same individual would increase the robustness of the findings.

2. Please provide more data on minimum distance of each close by lesions in the same person as there would be overlapping of treatment field.

3. Seems all the patients got treatment with photosensitizers target mitochondria rather than ER. Please confirm this. Otherwise needs a subgroup analysis for both types.

4. Please provide what measures were taken in minimization of bias in response assessment as It has been done by several individuals with their clinical experience.

5. Adverse effect profile need to be more descriptive.

6. If available please provide details on dose prescription of the beam with the duration of delivery, hemoglobin level and optimization prior to treatment etc, as these factors may potentially influence the response.

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


3 Jan 2024

Response to editor and reviewers

We thank you for reviewing our paper and greatly appreciate the effort and comments provided.

The original manuscript has been revised according to the response to the comments. Our answers to the each reviewer can be found under each comment and in italics.

Changes in the the manuscript are shown in quotation marks. The line numbers are according to the clean manuscript.

Comments to the Author

1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Partly

Reviewer #4: Yes

Reviewer #5: Yes

Answer: More details on the statistical approach and the randomization process has been provided in the revised version of the manuscript.

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2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: I Don't Know

Reviewer #3: Yes

Reviewer #4: Yes

Reviewer #5: N/A

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3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: No

Reviewer #3: Yes

Reviewer #4: Yes

Reviewer #5: Yes

Answer:

We recognize the benefit of being able to share data, but there are ethical restrictions on sharing raw data used this study according to requirements given by our Research Ethics Committee.

The patients consented the data to be used for this particular study only, thus data cannot be used in other studies. By including data regarding study centers, anonymization may be breached since some treatment centers had a relative small number of included patients.

However, a minimal data set, not including treatment centers may be requested.

The contact information to which data requests may be sent is: kontakt@ikom.ntnu.no

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

Reviewer #4: Yes

Reviewer #5: Yes

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Reviewer #1:

A sub analysis between study sites can be included see any site specific variations, if any.

Answer: This was not the aim of the study and we have not taken such sub-analysis into account when calculation the number of tumours to be included. However, to accommodate the question, we have performed an analysis in which neither treatment center nor patient ID had any impact on the outcome (mixed model, p=0.7 for random effects). This is to be expected from the design, as we randomized individual lesions. We therefore did not pursue any study site sub analysis.

Seems bit late in publishing as the the study was done 2012 -2014.

Answer: We would like to provide some background information as to why this study has taken so long to complete. This is an investigator-initiated study where funding for implementation of all aspects of the study was dependent on grants from non-commercial sources and the application processes associated with this has been very time-consuming. Inclusion of lesions (patients) was made from 2012 to 2014 with the last 3-year follow-up carried out in 2017. In 2018-19, the study-affiliated pathology departments were contacted for retrieval and sending of biopsy wax blocks to St. Olavs’s Hospital for preparation before assessment of histological BCC subtype and thickness could take place. The corona pandemic slowed down work from the beginning of 2020. Later, with a PhD candidate associated with the project, the final analysis of data and writing of the manuscript were completed.

Reviewer #2:

- Mention the objectives of the study in the abstract as well.

Answer: The objectives of the studies are included in the material section of the revised manuscript.

- Some details of the design are not clearly stated, i.e. who generated the random allocation sequence, who enrolled participants, and who assigned participants to

Interventions.

Answer: More details are now added into the manuscript.

Patents were recruited from the dermatological centres participating in the study and were screen for study eligibility. Randomization was performed by a web-based randomization system developed and administered by the faculty of Medicine and Health Sciences, Norwegian University of Science (NTNU) and Technology, Trondheim, Norway. Tumours were randomized to receive the new or the standard treatment by use of the randomization module in WebCRF2, a program for data collection and randomisation administered by NTNU. Block randomization was used by treatment center. The block sizes were set by the system administrators and were set to vary. Both the order of block sizes and allocation sequence in each block were generated consecutively by the system. An administrator at NTNU initiated the randomization of each tumour in the program and the outcome was sent by email to the appointed study investigator who carried out the treatment. To ensure unpredictability of the random allocation in patients with multiple tumours, the investigators numbered each tumour according to a predetermined arrangement before the randomization took place. The numbering of tumours was recorded on the bodymap in the controlled report forms (CRFs).

Text from the “clean” manuscript, line 217 to 232:

“BCCs were randomised to receive the new or the standard treatment by use of a web-based system developed and administered by the Faculty of Medicine and Health Sciences, NTNU. Block randomisation was done by center where both the order of block sizes and allocation sequence of each block were generated consecutively by the system. An administrator initiated the randomisation system and the assignment was sent by email to the appointed study investigator who carried out the treatment.

To ensure unpredictability of the random allocation in patients with multiple BCCs, tumours were numbered consecutively, and recorded on the body map included in the case report forms (CRFs) before randomisation. The distance between BCCs had to be clinically ≥30 mm apart to be regarded as two individual tumours. The numbering started on the front side of the patient’s body and from top to bottom. If two tumours were located on the same horizontal line, the numbering first followed the tumour located furthest to the right side of the patient’s body. The corresponding system was then applied to the patient’s back. The first tumour was randomised to one of the two treatment regimens and the second was allocated to the other regimen. A third tumour was randomised to one of the two treatment regimens and a fourth allocated to the other regimen and so on.”

- For binary outcomes, presentation of both absolute and relative effect sizes is recommended (Table five)

Answer: We perceive the question as applying to Tables 3 and 4. We have considered reporting relative risk (RR) as well as risk differences. However, to avoid confusion we would prefer to not add more columns to Table 3 and 4. The interested reader may easily calculate the RR themselves from available data E.g., for the first row of Table 3, the RR for non-failures is 139/(139+61) / (146/(146+34) = 0.86 in “favour” of the new treatment.

- Sources of potential Bias need to be addressed in the discussion section.

Answer: We have added information on this area in the discussion section. The study results cannot be generalized to all BCCs but apply to tumours that met the study eligibility criteria and from a fair-skinned population.

Furthermore, we have added that reporting of conceivable adverse events may have been incomplete due to the patient’s varying ability to remember symptoms over a 3-month period. Also, that several dermatologists could be involved in the assessment of treatment results during the study period at the various centres, and that this may have led to a less uniform assessment of the findings. However, this practice is in accordance with common clinical practice and may thus increase the generalizability of results.

Text from the “clean” manuscript, line 374 to 383:

“However, the results do not apply to all BCC but to tumours that met the study eligibility criteria and from a fair-skinned population. Limitations also include that all BCCs were histologically verified before inclusion, which affects the generalizability of the results and the use of punch biopsies for histological examination since they only offer information from a small, selected area of the tumours[27]. Reporting of conceivable adverse events may have been incomplete due to the patient’s different ability to recall symptoms over a 3-month period. Different dermatologists may have been involved in the assessment of treatment areas at the various centres during the study period, and this may have led to a less uniform assessment of outcomes. However, the practise was carried out in accordance with common clinical practise and may thus increase the generalizability of the results.”

Reviewer #3: Congratulations to the authors for this important study.

My suggestions to further improve the manuscript are as follows:

Abstract -

Methods: sample size calculation details need to be given.

Answer: sample size calculation details is added in the abstract of the revised manuscript

Text from the “clean” manuscript, line 45 to 47:

“With a non-inferiority margin of 0.1 and an expected probability complete response of 0.85, 190 tumours were required in each group.”

Prognostic factors assessed for cosmetic outcomes, not mentioned.

Answer: When reviewing the manuscript, we realize that the end sentence of the abstract may cause confusion. Prognostic factor refers to patient and tumour characteristics and not cosmetic outcome. The sentence has been altered and is hopefully now more comprehensible.

Text from the “clean” manuscript, line 11 to 104.

“We also aimed to evaluate the cosmetic outcome and in addition explore prognostic factors such as the patient’s sex and age and tumour location, size, clinical, and histological subtypes, and thickness that may contribute to treatment failure in the groups.”

Results: The range of the 97.5% CI needs to be given for informed decision making.

Answer: To improve precision where it matters, a one-sided CI is commonly reported for non-inferiority studies as the lower end is not of interest. E.g., the 97.5 % CI for the difference reported in the first row of Table 4 is actually (-1.00 , 0.192) meaning that the new treatment is compatible with a lot better but also 19.2 % worse than the standard. The latter still extends beyond the 10 % non-inferiority margin. The traditional 95 % CI (not presented in the manuscript) is (0.03, 0.20) so the one-sided CI is about 1 absolute percent more precise then the two-sided.

Conclusion: Without knowing the CI, cannot conclude the significance of the findings.

Answer: See the above (previous) answer

Methods -

Criteria considered for sample size calculation need to be mentioned.

Answer: The criteria for sample size calculation is given in a separate section under Material and Methods. A two-sided sample size calculation was used ,(significant level of 0.05 and power of 0.80). The final statistical analyses was performed with an one-sided test and by this, it is possible to present one CI (97.5%) only. This improves precision where it matters.

A one-sided CI is commonly reported for non-inferiority studies as the lower end is not of interest. E.g., the 97.5 % CI for the difference reported in the first row of Table 4 is actually (-1.00 , 0.192) meaning that the new treatment is compatible with a lot better but also 19.2 % worse than the standard. The latter still extends beyond the 10 % non-inferiority margin. The traditional 95 % CI (not presented in the manuscript) is (0.03, 0.20) so the one-sided CI is about 1 absolute percent more precise then the two-sided.

Text from the “clean” manuscript, line 209 to 214.

“Sample size was determined by StatXact version 9.0 (Cytel Software Corp, Waltham, USA), based on anticipated complete response probability of 0.85 obtained from early publications [6, 7] and a non-inferiority margin of 10%; thus, aiming to demonstrate that the new regimen was not >0.1 inferior to the standard regimen. With a significance level at 0.05 and power at 0.80, each group required 190 tumours. Because multiple tumours were randomised within patients, no adjustments for patient identity were made.”

Text from the “clean” manuscript, line 242 to 244:

“The final analysis was performed by StatExact version 10.0 (Cytel Software Corp.). We used an exact non-inferiority test with a margin of 0.1 and corresponding one-sided 97.5% confidence intervals (CI) since one-sided CIs are customary in non-inferiority studies.”

Table 1: Since tumor size (based on the site) and thickness were considered in the eligibility criteria for the study, how can you justify having missing data about these variables?

Since tumour subtype was essentially important to the treatment (PDT), how can you justify of having missing data? Also, according to lines 136 and 137, BCC clasification was based on clinical examination. Hence, justify having missing values on tumor sub type.

Answer: Assessment of clinical tumour size, thickness and subtype was carried out by the investigators and, as pointed out, all these parameters are included in the eligibility criteria for this study. Therefore, the investigators had to be in possession of all these parameters to allow inclusion of tumours into the study, However, in a few cases, investigators have failed to record these parameters into the patient’s case report form (CRF) which forms the basis of the study data file. Data that are not recorded in the patient’s CRF will thus appear as missing in the file.

Line 169 - ".. curette in which.." needs to be corrected as " ... curette by which.."

Answer: this has been corrected

Results:

Line 252:Please provide the range of the CI, including the lower value, to get an informed decision by the reader, on the significance and inferiority.

Answer: We hope this has been answered satisfactory earlier.

Figure 2: Please provide axis titles

Answer: “Cosmetic outcome” has been provided to the y-axis of the figure.

Discussion: need to provide more comparison with other studies, to have a rich discussion critically analyzing the global knowledge available

Answer: We understand the question and lack of “equivalent” research was an inspiration to carry out this study. This is the first randomized controlled study comparing a simplified regimen to the standard two treatments of MAL-PDT in BCC. The practice of two treatment session at an interval of 1 week emerges on results from early, open-label studies which reported generally a higher effect than results from studies with one treatment. This has been addressed in the introduction of the manuscript and we do not wish to repeat this information in the discussion. The practice of two treatments has been recommended over many years without being appropriately tested, thus, to the best of our knowledge, there are no previous directly comparable studies available. This is now stated in the discussion section. However, we have included recent studies on alternative approaches to try optimizing the standard PDT regime in the discussion.

Text from the “clean” manuscript, line 354 to 357:

“The practise of two MAL-PDT sessions for BCC has been recommended for about two decades without being properly tested. To the best of our knowledge, this is the first randomised controlled study comparing a simplified regimen consisting of a single PDT session with the possibility of one re-treatment, with standard two treatments.”

Reviewer #4: This manuscript presents data analysis from a investigator-initiated, single-blind, non-inferiority, randomized controlled, multicentre-study. The topic is of importance, the study was registered as a RCT (with a valid NCT number), and was approved by the respective IRB/Ethics Committee. While the study objectives sound interesting, is important, and on target, some shortcomings were observed, in regards to abiding by the CONSORT guidelines for conducting and reporting results of high-quality randomized controlled trials (RCTs). Some other (statistical) comments were also provided.

1. Methods:

Methods reporting need some work. An orderly manner is suggested, following CONSORT guidelines, without repeating information, such as Trial Design, Participant Eligibility Criteria and settings, Interventions, Outcomes, sample size/power considerations, Interim analysis and stopping rules, Randomization (details on random number generation, allocation concealment, implementation), Blinding issues, etc, should be mentioned. The authors are advised to create separate subsections for each of the possible topics (whichever necessary), and that way produce a very clear writeup. They are advised to write it carefully, following nice examples in the manuscript below:

https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0889540619300010

Answer: Additional subsections for specific topics have been included to the methods section of the revised manuscript.

Specific comments:

(a) For instance, the randomization and allocation concealment should be made very clear (they are NOT the same thing); the trial staff recruiting patients should NOT have the randomization list. Randomization should be prepared by the trial statistician, and he/she would not participate in the recruiting. The manuscript generates randomization via "computer-generated e-message". More details needed. Any reasoning, why a block randomization was not used, which is often recommended to ensure a balance in sample size across groups?

Answer (a): We have in the revised manuscript included more detailed information in the material section regarding the points made. Randomisation was performed by a web-based randomisation system developed and administered by the Faculty of Medicine and Health Sciences, Norwegian University of Science (NTNU) and Technology, Trondheim, Norway. Tumours were randomized to receive the new or the standard treatment by use of the randomization module in WebCRF2, a program for data collection and randomization administered by NTNU. Block randomisation was used by treatment center. The block sizes were set by the system administrators and were set to vary. Both the order of block sizes and allocation sequence in each block were generated consecutively by the system. An administrator at NTNU initiated the randomization of each tumour in the program and the outcome was sent by email to the appointed study investigator who carried out the treatment.

In patients with multiple tumours the first tumour was

randomized to one of the two regimes and the second was allocated to the other regime. In the case of a third tumour, it was randomized to one of the two regimes and in case of a a fouth, this would be allocated to the other regime and so forth. To ensure unpredictability of the random allocation in patients with multiple tumors, each tumour was numbered according to a predetermined arrangement before the randomization took place and the numbering of tumours was recorded to the bodymap in the controlled report forms (CRFs). Different BCCs within each patient were numbered the following way: numbering started from the patient’s frontside of the body and from top to bottom. If two tumours were located on the same horizontal line, the numbering first followed the tumour located furthest to the right side of the patient’s body. When all tumours on the pasients frontside were numbered, the same system applied for numbering tumours on the patient’s back.

https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2267325/

Text from the “clean” manuscript, line 217 to 232:

“BCCs were randomised to receive the new or the standard treatment by use of a web-based system developed and administered by the Faculty of Medicine and Health Sciences, NTNU. Block randomisation was done by center where both the order of block sizes and allocation sequence of each block were generated consecutively by the system. An administrator initiated the randomisation system and the assignment was sent by email to the appointed study investigator who carried out the treatment.

To ensure unpredictability of the random allocation in patients with multiple BCCs, tumours were numbered consecutively, and recorded on the body map included in the case report forms (CRFs) before randomisation. The distance between BCCs had to be clinically ≥30 mm apart to be regarded as two individual tumours. The numbering started on the front side of the patient’s body and from top to bottom. If two tumours were located on the same horizontal line, the numbering first followed the tumour located furthest to the right side of the patient’s body. The corresponding system was then applied to the patient’s back. The first tumour was randomised to one of the two treatment regimens and the second was allocated to the other regimen. A third tumour was randomised to one of the two treatment regimens and a fourth allocated to the other regimen and so on.”

(b) Sample size/power: A sample size/power statement is made available, but its recommended to place it as a separate subsection within the Methods section, following CONSORT guidelines. Also, it is not clear what sample size formula was used to power the non-inferiority trial. Some relevant material might be here: https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC7808096/

Answer (b): Sample size/power is now placed under a separate subsection in the revised manuscript. We apologize for some confusion probably caused by a "copy-paste" error in relation to the description of sample size that was determined by Cytel Studio version 9.0 and not Stata. We have changed the mansucript text accordingly. Cytel studio employs an iterative algorithm for the calculation, thus a formula is not available"

(c) Statistical Analysis: Very straightforward, but with sketchy descriptions.

Answer (c): We have aimed to present the results in a clear and comprehensible manner.

(c1) Not clear, what statistical test was used to test for non-inferiority.

Answer: This is known as "Unconditional test of non-inferiority using difference of two binomial proportions", with the exact option (i.e. an iterative procedure) by Cytel Studio.

(c2) Sample size was decently large; I was wondering why any formal regression analysis was also not performed.

Answer: According to study design and endpoints, a regression analysis was not warranted. However, we checked for importance of centre and patient ID by entering these as random factors in mixed model but found no evidence of such effects (see also above).

(c3) Not clear, whether the associated test statistic in robust under possible non-Gaussian assumptions; however, with the large sample sizes, it might be working! Some clarifications would be helpful.

Answer: A difference between two binomial proportions may well be approximated by a Gaussian distribution with large sample sizes. In this case an iterative exact solution is employed, by Cytel Studio.

2. Results & Discussions/Conclusions:

(a) The authors should check that any statement of significance should be followed by a p-value in the entire Results section. Otherwise, the Results section look OK.

Answer: Additional p-values has been added in the results section.

(b) Discussion section should state that the current findings are ONLY based on the random samples derived from this specific population, and should allude to future (larger) studies collected at other geographical areas to confirm the non-inferiority findings.

Answer: We agree and have in the revised manuscript added a sentence about limitation of generalization of results related to the study eligibility criteria and population.

Text from the “clean” manuscript, line 374 to 375:

“However, the results do not apply to all BCC but to tumours that met the study eligibility criteria and from a fair-skinned population.”

Reviewer #5: The authors are commended for conducting this trial in par with oncological concepts and research guidelines. In general, the conduct of the trail is scientifically sound. The following comments are given with the hope that these will be beneficial for the authors.

1. If there is a possibility, the reviewer prefers to request for a subgroup analysis of main outcomes of the participants with multiple lesions. Results of response of the lesions in same person would get affected by background factors. Therefore, subgroup analysis lesions in the same individual would increase the robustness of the findings.

Answer: We have avoided this possible bias by randomizing BCCs within each patient in cases where the patient had more than one tumour. This is described in the randomization section of the manuscript.

Text from the “clean” manuscript, line 213 to 214:

“Because multiple tumours were randomised within patients, no adjustments for patient identity were made.”

2. Please provide more data on minimum distance of each close by lesions in the same person as there would be overlapping of treatment field.

Answer: The distance between BCCs in patients with multiple tumours had to be clinically ≥ 30 mm apart to be regarded as two individual tumours. This information has been added to the randomization section of the revised manuscript.

Text from the “clean” manuscript, line 225 to 226:

“The distance between BCCs had to be clinically ≥30 mm apart to be regarded as two individual tumours.”

3. Seems all the patients got treatment with photosensitizers target mitochondria rather than ER. Please confirm this. Otherwise needs a subgroup analysis for both types.

Answer: We can confirm that all tumours were treated with topical metylaminolevulinate which through intracellular formation of photoactive porphyrins together with oxygen and light primarily target mitochondria.

4. Please provide what measures were taken in minimization of bias in response assessment as It has been done by several individuals with their clinical experience.

Answer: We thank you for bringing this to our attention. The point is now addressed in the revised version of the manuscript. For valid assessment of the treatment results, dermatologists working at the various centres carried out this assignment. All the study centres had offered patients PDT of BCC over many years, thus the dermatologist were well acquainted with the method and with clinical assessment of results. Many dermatologists could be involved in assessment of the treatment outcomes during the study period, but one examiner assessed each individual outcome. No courses were conducted or brochures material prepared in advance for this specific assignment that could have contributed to a more uniform assessment. However, we believe that the assessments of the treatments results were carried out in accordance with common clinical practice and thus increase the generalizability of the results.

Text from the “clean” manuscript 380 to 383:

“Different dermatologists may have been involved in the assessment of treatment areas at the various centres during the study period, and this may have led to a less uniform assessment of outcomes. However, the practise was carried out in accordance with common clinical practise and may thus increase the generalizability of the results.”

5. Adverse effect profile need to be more descriptive.

Answer: One serious adverse event was recorded during the study. One incident provides too limited of a basis to be able to present an adverse event profile in the manuscript. PDT for BCC has for two decades been approved for two treatments at an interval of one week. An increase of adverse events after use of a simplified regime (possibility of less treatment) was not expected. However, in accordance with good clinical practice, accounts were taken of the possible occurrence of any such events, Adverse events occurring in the period from treatment to the 3-month follow-up were recorded. More details regarding adverse events and serious adverse events have been added to the material section of the revised manuscript.

Text from the “clean” manuscript line 200 to 206:

“Any adverse events (AEs) that occurred in the period from treatment to the 3-month follow-up were reported and described by their duration, severity, relationship to treatment and according to the need of other specific therapy. Serious adverse event (SAE) were to be reported according to specified procedures whether they were considered related to study treatment or not. Local reactions, such as erythema, pain, and weeping, were regarded as conceivable events and reported as number of days present. AEs could be reported spontaneously by the patient or through open (non-leading) questioning.”

6. If available please provide details on dose prescription of the beam with the duration of delivery, hemoglobin level and optimization prior to treatment etc, as these factors may potentially influence the response.

Answer: For this study we used the Aktilite CL128 lamp with light-emitting diodes (LEDs). The LED array is placed in a rectangular pattern and the lamp emits a light with a narrow spectrum at approximately 630 nm and a fluence rate of 70 x 100 mW/cm2. The light exposure is commonly 7-9 min giving a light dose of approximately 37 J/cm2. More details of the light source are added to the material section of the revised manuscript. All BCC’s were treated with topically applied metylaminolevuninate before light exposure.

The international PDT guidelines have no recommendation on the use of the optimization of haemoglobin before PDT of skin cancer, nor is such a procedure common practice. As this was a clinical study, such a procedure was not performed.

Text from the “clean” manuscript line 168 to 171:

“The cream was left for 3 h before being removed and the treatment area was exposed to light-emitting diodes (Aktilite®) with a peak wavelength of 630 nm, fluence rate of 70 x 100 mW/cm2 and exposure typically for 7-9 minutes giving a total light dose of about 37 J/cm2.”

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Comments from reviewer #3:

Page 3 line 43: "...with objective to.." better to correct as "..with the objective of investigating.."

Table 4: per protocol analysis: the difference need to be corrected as 9.3%

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Decision Letter 2

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New, simplified versus standard photodynamic therapy (PDT) regimen for superficial and nodular basal cell carcinoma (BCC): A single blind, non-inferiority, randomised controlled multicentre study.

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    Supplementary Materials

    S1 Checklist. Reporting checklist for randomised trial.

    (DOCX)

    pone.0299718.s001.docx (25.9KB, docx)
    S2 Checklist. SPIRIT 2013 checklist: Recommended items to address in a clinical trial protocol and related documents*.

    (DOC)

    pone.0299718.s002.doc (124.5KB, doc)
    S1 File

    (DOCX)

    pone.0299718.s003.docx (26.3KB, docx)
    S2 File

    (PDF)

    pone.0299718.s004.pdf (239.8KB, pdf)
    Attachment

    Submitted filename: Response to reviewers.docx

    pone.0299718.s005.docx (41.1KB, docx)
    Attachment

    Submitted filename: Response to editor and reviewer.docx

    pone.0299718.s006.docx (12.5KB, docx)

    Data Availability Statement

    The dataset generated and analyzed in the present study is not publicly available because permission has not been granted from the participants or the Ethical Committee. Requests for a minimal data set may be directed to the Head of Department at Department of Clinical and Molecular Medicine, Norwegian University of Science and Technology (kontakt@ikom.ntnu.no).


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