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. 2024 Mar 27;4(3):e0001245. doi: 10.1371/journal.pgph.0001245

Factors associated with the uptake of intermittent preventive treatment for malaria during pregnancy in Cameroon: An analysis of data from the 2018 Cameroon Demographic and Health Survey

Dominique Ken Guimsop 1,*, Ange Faustine Kenmogne Talla 1, Haoua Kodji 1, Jerome Ateudjieu 1
Editor: David Musoke2
PMCID: PMC10971583  PMID: 38536856

Abstract

Malaria in pregnancy is a major public health concern that contributes to a significant increase in maternal and child mortality and morbidity. Intermittent preventive treatment of malaria during pregnancy using sulfadoxine-pyrimethamine (IPTp-SP) is a key intervention recommended by the World Health Organization (WHO) and implemented in Cameroon to reduce the morbidity associated with malaria during pregnancy. This study aimed to assess the distribution of the poor uptake of IPTp-SP (i.e. fewer than three doses) in Cameroon and the factors associated. We conducted a secondary analysis of data extracted from the 2018 Cameroon Demographic and Health Survey. Data was collected using a face-to-face questionnaire administered to mothers with at least one child under the age of five. The participants were selected using a two-stage stratified sampling process. We estimated the frequencies of mothers receiving fewer than three doses of IPTp-SP. Multilevel logistic regression modeling was used to assess the associations between key suspected determinants and uptake of fewer than three doses of IPTp-SP. Crude and adjusted Odds-Ratio (ORs) were estimated. A total of 13,527 women of childbearing age were interviewed, of whom 5,528 (40.9%) met our selection criteria. Among them, 845 (15.3%) women had no antenatal consultation (ANC) visit, 1,109 (20%) had 1–3 visits, 3,379 (61.1%) had 4–7 visits, and only 195 (3.5%) had at least eight visits. Moreover, 3,398 (61.5%, CI: 60.2–62.8) had received fewer than three doses of IPTp-SP. Our findings show that the predictors of poor uptake of IPTp-SP include attending the first ANC visit after the third month of pregnancy (aOR = 1.52, CI: 1.30–1.77), attending fewer than four ANC visits (aOR = 1.29, CI: 1.06–1.56), and not being attended to by a healthcare professional during the prenatal period (aOR = 4.63, CI: 2.81–7.64). Residing in the Sahelian regions was not increasing the risk of poor IPTp-SP uptake on its own but was positively modifying the effect of not being attended by a healthcare professional (p < 0.001). We did not find a significant association between a higher level of education and the uptake of IPTp-SP (aOR = 1.10, CI: 0.90–1.32). Nearly two third of the pregnant women in Cameroon have a poor uptake of IPTp-SP. Interventions focused on ANC provision ought to be explored and tested to address this gap, with priority assigned to the Sahelian region.

Introduction

Malaria, caused in humans by five species of Plasmodium, remains one of the most widespread infectious diseases. The disease is primarily caused by Plasmodium falciparum and Plasmodium vivax, and poses a threat to nearly half of the global population. In 2019, 229 million cases of malaria were reported, resulting in 409,000 deaths, with over 90% occurring in Africa [1]. Malaria is known to significantly increase the risk of maternal and fetal anemia, abortion, low birth weight, and neonatal death [25]. To mitigate the impact of this disease, efforts have focused on three main strategies: intermittent preventive treatment during pregnancy using sulfadoxine-pyrimethamine (IPTp-SP), targeted use of insecticide-treated nets, and effective case management in areas with moderate to severe transmission [6]. The IPTp-SP policy recommends that each pregnant woman receive a minimum of three doses of sulfadoxine-pyrimethamine (SP) during her pregnancy, with each dose safely administered at least one month apart, starting at 13 weeks of gestation and lasting till delivery [7, 8].

Despite the implementation of proper interventions, the overall administration of the recommended three doses of IPTp-SP was only 34% in 2020 among the 33 countries that had adopted this preventive measure [1]. Several factors contribute to this poor rate, including limited access to healthcare, inadequate training of healthcare providers, drug stock-outs, and maternal and pregnancy-related factors such as the level of education and multigravidity [912].

In Cameroon, the Ministry of Health adopted IPTp in May 2002 through the administration of chloroquine as part of antenatal consultation (ANC) visits. Subsequently, in January 2004, IPTp using chloroquine was replaced by IPTp-SP following WHO recommendations [13]. Existing literature estimates that the recommended three-dose uptake coverage of IPTp-SP in Cameroon ranges from 23.5% to 54.9%, depending on socio-demographic characteristics, ANC performance, and study design [914]. These figures fall significantly short of the country’s target coverage rate of 80% by 2023. However, there is limited literature available, from a nationally representative sample, which have explored socio-demographic and antenatal parameters that may influence the uptake of IPTp-SP in Cameroon. The range of investigated factors was non-exhaustive, and we observe some mitigated results that are attributable to the use of unharmonized procedures and varying study designs. Due to the potential value of such findings in informing policymakers about strategies to improve the effectiveness of existing approaches or proposing new ones, we seek to contribute to the understanding of the mechanisms responsible for the poor uptake of IPTp-SP. Therefore, this study aims to evaluate the distribution of poor uptake of IPTp-SP among pregnant women in Cameroon and assess its determinants.

Methodology

Study design and setting

The Demographic and Health Survey (DHS) program conducts nationally representative household surveys in over 90 countries and provides indicators on a wide range of topics, including population, wealth, maternal and child health, fertility and family planning, nutrition, and education. The DHS sampling is implemented using a two (or sometimes a three)-stage stratified sampling design using censuses as sampling frames.

For this study, we conducted a secondary data analysis of the 2018 Cameroon Demographic and Health Survey [14]. The data was collected from a cross-sectional household-based survey targeting 22 territorial units in Cameroon, including the 10 regions (each divided into their respective urban and rural areas) and the two major cities in the country. A unit affected by the ongoing socio-political crisis was excluded. The households were selected using a stratified cluster random sampling process carried out in two stages. In the first stage, 470 standard enumeration areas (SEAs), also known as clusters (245 SEAs in urban areas and 225 in rural areas), were selected with probability proportional to the SEA size. In the second stage, a fixed number of 28 households per cluster were selected through equal probability systematic sampling from each cluster’s household listing. Data was collected from each visited household using a face-to-face questionnaire. A total of 11,710 households were surveyed, from which 13,527 women of childbearing age completed the interview. A detailed methodology can be found in the DHS final report [14].

Study population

Our target population included all women aged 15–49 years who resided in the selected cluster and were biological mothers of children under five years of age on the day the selected household was visited.

Participants’ data extraction from the database

The DHS uses standardized questionnaires, including those for households, women, men, and biomarkers, to collect information on household and individual characteristics. Optional modules can be added or adapted to meet country-specific needs. The DHS data undergoes thorough cleaning and anonymization, and the datasets are made publicly available to researchers upon request. For our study, we extracted cases from the CMRDHS women’s dataset, which was collected using the women’s questionnaire [15]. Information regarding the variable “area’s malaria prevalence” was obtained from the 2018 DHS geospatial covariate database [16] and incorporated into our dataset.

To identify our participants, we derived the variable “mother of an under-five-year-old child” from the variable “woman of childbearing age” through coding. From the 13,527 women of childbearing age who completed the interview, we selected the 6,463 who had a live birth in the five years preceding the survey. Among them, 1054 women were excluded from the analysis, as their responses had missing data on any of our key variables (attending ANCs and taking SP during pregnancy). Ultimately, the sample for this study comprised 5,409 cases (which increased to 5,528 after applying the weighting factors), from which we captured the responses (Fig 1).

Fig 1. Flow diagram of sample selection from the 2018 Cameroon Demographic and Health Survey data.

Fig 1

Variable of interest

For the analysis, we extracted data based on variables that were theoretically and empirically linked to the uptake of three or more doses of IPTp-SP:

(a) The dependent variable was the uptake of IPTp-SP, which comprised two categories: fewer than three doses (also referred to as “poor uptake”) and three or more doses.

(b) The independent variables consisted of both individual-level variables and cluster (or community)-level variables. The individual-level variables included a woman’s age, length of stay in the place of residence, level of education, religion, literacy (ability to read a written phrase in the language of choice), wealth (categorized by DHS into quintiles, numbered 1–5 in order of increasing wealth, based on a composite measure of the household cumulative living standard) [17], health insurance coverage, occupational status, marital status, partner’s level of education, desire for pregnancy, parity, history of pregnancy termination, qualification of the ANC attendant, and number of ANC visits. The community-level variables included region (including the 10 official regions and separate categories for the two largest urban areas, Douala and Yaoundé, resulting in 12 regional categories), area of residence (rural, defined as a population density of < 20,000 people), and the area’s malaria prevalence. Variables pertaining to pregnancy and prenatal care were specific to the most recent live birth.

Data management

Data extraction, cleaning, and analysis were carried out using IBM SPSS Statistics version 26 (International Business Machines Corp., New York, USA). The sampling design of the survey was accounted for by using the “Complex Samples” package of IBM SPSS for the analyses. This package allows for the specification of the sample scheme parameters, including stratification, clustering, weighing, and inclusion probabilities, in order to accurately estimate standard errors. Sample weights were provided by the “weight” variable from the database. Unless otherwise specified, only weighted data was presented in the results.

Statistical analysis

Categorical variables were summarized as frequencies and proportions. The Rao-Scott chi-square test was used to compare the distribution of the independent variables between the two levels of our dependent variable. This analysis tested for differences within groups while adjusting for sample design using an F statistic and was done using independents categorical variables in their initial (non-dichotomized) form (Tables 1 and 2). All independent variables were subsequently dichotomized, and bivariate logistic regression was used within the multilevel modelling framework to measure the independent variables’ association with the uptake of fewer than three doses of IPTp-SP (Table 3). The independent variables that were associated with the outcome at a significance level of p < 0.20 were selected as candidates for the main effects in the multilevel binary logistic regression model. Two independent variables (“length of stay in the place of residence” and “current occupation”) did not reach that significance level in the bivariate regression analysis and were, therefore, excluded from the multilevel model. Collinearity was checked by calculating the variance inflation factors (VIF). Covariates with a VIF greater than 4, indicating a twofold increase in the standard error of a regression coefficient in the presence of collinearity, were considered to have high collinearity. The variable “illiteracy” was removed from the model due to suspected collinearity with “level of education.”

Table 1. Socio-demographic characteristics and comparison between those who took fewer than three doses of IPTp-SP and the others (N = 5,528).

Variable Total IPTp-SP uptake, n (row %) Rao-Scott F(df1, df2) p
n (col %) N = 5528 < 3 doses n = 3398 3 + doses n = 2130
Woman’s age (years)
    15–19 521 (9.4) 333 (63.9) 188 (36.1) 0.93 (4.53, 1846.71). 0.457
    20–24 1205 (21.8) 760 (63.1) 445 (36.9)
    25–29 1496 (27.1) 918 (61.4) 578 (38.6)
    30–34 1161 (21.0) 703 (60.6) 459 (39.5)
    35–39 727 (13.1) 421 (57.9) 305 (42)
    40–49 416 (7.5) 262 (63) 155 (37.3)
Length of stay in the place of residence
    Visitor 121 (2.2) 79 (65.3) 42 (34.7) 0.26 (2.83, 1158.50) 0.844
    0–19 years 3454 (62.5) 2119 (61.3) 1334 (38.6)
    20–40 years 219 (4.0) 140 (63.9) 79 (36.1)
    Always 1734 (31.4) 1060 (61.1) 674 (38.9)
Level of education
    None 1425 (25.8) 996 (69.9) 429 (30.1) 16.24 (2.77, 1130.29) <0.001
    Primary 1647 (29.8) 1058 (64.2) 590 (35.8)
    Secondary 2121 (38.4) 1185 (55.9) 936 (44.1)
    Higher 334 (6.1) 160 (47.9) 175 (52.4)
Religion
    Animism/Other 212 (3.8) 145 (68.4) 67 (31.6) 4.70 (1.97, 805.91) 0.010
    Christianity 3786 (68.5) 2246 (59.3) 1540 (40.7)
    Islam 1530 (27.7) 1007 (65.8) 523 (34.2)
Illiteracy 2016 (36.5) 1391 (69) 625 (31) 30.88 (1.0, 408.0) <0.001
Combined wealth index
    Poorest 1111 (20.1) 779 (70.1) 331 (29.8) 22.38 (3.75, 1531.02) <0.001
    Poorer 1215 (22) 842 (69.3) 374 (30.8)
    Middle 1135 (20.5) 734 (64.7) 401 (35.3)
    Richer 1100 (19.9) 587 (53.4) 514 (46.7)
    Richest 967 (17.5) 457 (47.3) 510 (52.7)
Health insurance coverage 99 (1.8) 45 (45.5) 54 (54.5) 7.62 (1.0, 408.0) 0.006
Current occupation 3769 (68.3) 2306 (61.2) 1463 (38.8) 0.21 (1.0, 408.0) 0.650
Union involvement at any point 4448 (80.5) 2767 (62.2) 1681 (37.8) 3.74 (1.0, 408.0) 0.054
Partner’s level of education, secondary and above 3636 (65.8) 2336 (64.2) 1299 (35.7) 21.87 (1.0, 408.0) <0.001
Region
    Sahelian region 2025 (36.6) 1326 (65.5) 699 (34.5) 20.0 (1.94, 793.42) <0.001
    Southern region 2528 (45.7) 1611 (63.7) 917 (36.3)
    Douala/Yaoundé 975 (17.6) 461 (47.3) 515 (52.8)
Residing in a rural area 2911 (52.6) 2000 (68.7) 911 (31.3) 48.75 (1, 41) <0.001
Area’s malaria prevalence (%)
    0–7 594 (10.7) 76 (12.8) 518 (87.2) 26.64 (4.11, 1677.85) 0.000
    8–15 1165 (21.1) 195 (16.7) 970 (83.3)
    16–23 1645 (29.8) 695 (42.2) 950 (57.8)
    24–31 1041 (18.8) 417 (40) 624 (60)
    32–40 818 (14.8) 440 (53.8) 378 (46.2)
    41+ 265 (4.8) 131 (49.5) 134 (50.5)

Intermittent preventive treatment of malaria during pregnancy using sulfadoxine-pyrimethamine (IPTp-SP)

Note: all presented sample sizes and frequencies are weighted

Table 2. Obstetrical history and comparison between those who took fewer than three doses of IPTp-SP and the others (N = 5,528).

Variable Total IPTp-SP uptake, n (row %) Rao-Scott F(df1, df2) p
n (col %) N = 5528 < 3 doses n = 3398 3+ doses n = 2130
Desired pregnancy 5280 (95.6) 3244 (61.4) 2036 (38.6) 0.02 (1, 408) 0.886
Parity ≤ 5 4432 (80.2) 2682 (60.5) 1750 (39.5) 4.56 (1, 408) 0.033
Event of a prematurely terminated pregnancy 1023 (18.5) 584 (57.1) 439 (42.9) 5.29 (1, 408) 0.022
Qualification of the ANC attendant
    No care 845 (15.3) 816 (96.6) 29 (3.4) 88.04 (3.21, 1310.16) <0.001
    Doctor 1495 (27) 753 (50.4) 742 (49.6)
    Nurse/midwife 3012 (54.5) 1734 (57.6) 1278 (42.4)
    Auxiliary midwife 169 (3.1) 89 (52.7) 80 (47.3)
    Others* 7 (0.1) 6 (85.7) 1 (14.3)
First ANC visit after the third month 3253 (58.9) 2283 (70.2) 970 (29.8) 172.31 (1, 408) <0.001
Number of ANCs
    0 845 (15.3) 816 (96.6) 29 (3.4) 67.40 (4.61, 1880.81) <0.001
    1 83 (1.5) 59 (71.1) 24 (28.9)
    2 233 (4.2) 167 (71.7) 66 (28.3)
    3 793 (14.3) 469 (59.1) 324 (40.9)
    4–7 3379 (61.1) 1792 (53) 1586 (46.9)
    8 + 195 (3.5) 95 (48.7) 100 (51.3)

Intermittent preventive treatment of malaria during pregnancy using sulfadoxine-pyrimethamine (IPTp-SP); antenatal consultation (ANC)

*“Others” includes traditional birth attendants and community/village worker; Note: all presented sample sizes and frequencies are weighted

Table 3. Factors associated with the uptake of fewer than three doses of IPTp-SP.

Variable IPTp-SP uptake, n (row %) Bivariate analysis Multivariate analysis
< 3 doses n = 3398 3 + doses n = 2130 OR (95% CI) p aOR (95% CI) p
Individual-level characteristic
Level of education
    None/primary 2053 (66.8) 1019 (43.2) 1.66 (1.43–1.93) < 0.001 1.08 (0.89–1.32) 0.425
    Secondary and higher 1345 (54.8) 1111 (65.2) Ref.
Christian
    Yes 2246 (59.3) 1540 (40.7) 0.74 (0.61–0.91) 0.004 1.00 (0.79–1.29) 0.957
    No 1152 (66.1) 590 (33.9) Ref.
Combined wealth index
    Poor 1621 (69.7) 705 (30.1) 1.84 (1.54–2.20) < 0.001 1.08 (0.87–1.33) 0.500
    Middle to rich 1777 (55.5) 1425 (44.5) Ref.
Health insurance coverage
    Yes 45 (45.5) 54 (54.5) 0.51 (0.32–0.83) 0.007 0.75 (0.47–1.20) 0.230
    No 3353 (61.8) 2076 (38.2) Ref.
Union involvement at any point
    Yes 2767 (62.2) 1681 (37.8) 1.17 (0.99–1.37) 0.054 1.04 (0.85–1.28) 0.682
    No 631 (58.4) 449 (41.6) Ref.
Partner’s level of education: secondary and above
    Yes 1062 (56.1) 831 (43.9) 1.41 (1.21–1.62) < 0.001 0.92 (0.77–1.10) 0.377
    No 2336 (64.3) 1299 (35.7) Ref.
Desired pregnancy
    Yes 3244 (61.4) 2036 (38.6) 0.89 (0.74–1.05) 0.182 1.01 (0.71–1.45) 0.950
    No 154 (62) 94 (38) Ref.
Parity ≤ 5
    Yes 2682 (60.5) 1750 (39.5) 0.81 (0.67–0.98) 0.033 1.02 (0.82–1.26) 0.861
    No 716 (65.3) 380 (34.7) Ref.
Prematurely terminated pregnancy
    Yes 584 (57.1) 439 (42.9) 0.80 (0.66–0.96) 0.022 0.88 (0.72–1.09) 0.255
    No 2814 (62.5) 1691 (37.5) Ref.
ANC from a healthcare professional
    No 822 (96.5) 30 (3.5) 4.59 (2.81–7.51) < 0.001 4.63 (2.81–7.64) < 0.001
    Yes 2576 (55.1) 2100 (44.9) Ref.
First ANC visit after the third month
    Yes 2283 (70.2) 970 (29.8) 2.45 (2.14–2.80) < 0.001 1.52 (1.30–1.77) < 0.001
    No 1115 (49) 1160 (51) Ref.
Number of ANCs
    < 4 1511 (77.3) 443 (22.7) 3.05 (2.53–3.66) < 0.001 1.29 (1.06–1.56) 0.009
    ≥ 4 1887 (52.8) 1687 (47.2) Ref.
Community-level characteristic
Region
    Sahelian regions 1326 (65.5) 699 (34.5) 2.12 (1.66–2.70) < 0.001 0.52 (0.39–0.68) < 0.001
    Douala/Yaoundé 461 (47.2) 515 (52.8) 1.96 (1.57–2.45) < 0.001 0.65 (0.51–0.85) 0.001
    Southern regions 1611 (63.7) 917 (36.3) Ref.
Type of place of residence
    Rural 2000 (68.7) 911 (31.3) 1.91 (1.59–2.30) < 0.001 1.25 (0.97–1.63) 0.088
    Urban 1398 (53.4) 1219 (46.6) Ref.
Malaria prevalence (%)
    0–7 76 (12.8) 518 (87.2) Ref.
    8–15 195 (16.7) 970 (83.3) 1.03 (0.77–1.38) 0.837 1.16 (0.87–1.54) 0.312
    16–23 695 (42.2) 950 (57.8) 1.44 (1.11–1.88) 0.006 1.20 (0.90–1.60) 0.221
    24–31 417 (40) 624 (60) 1.36 (1.04–1.78) 0.027 1.05 (0.45–1.46) 0.792
    32–40 440 (53.8) 378 (46.2) 1.52 (1.15–2.01) 0.003 0.83 (0.60–1.53) 0.265
    40 + 131 (49.5) 134 (50.5) 2.05 (1.27–3.30) 0.003 1.15 (0.64–2.06) 0.631
Interaction term
ANC from a healthcare professional by Sahelian regions* 1324 (63.7) 755 (36.3) –2.263 (0.457) <0.001 –2.345 (0.468) <0.001

Intermittent preventive treatment of malaria during pregnancy using sulfadoxine-pyrimethamine (IPTp-SP); Antenatal Care (ANC); Reference (ref.)

* Interaction effect (s.e); Note: all presented sample sizes and frequencies are weighted

Next, the two-level (multilevel) binary logistic regression analysis was performed to examine the association (measure of effect) between the outcome and each independent variable while controlling for the effects of the other variables. This model estimated the adjusted odds ratio (aOR) (exp(β)) while accounting for the unobserved characteristics at the community level during the data collection in addition to the women’s individual characteristics. The notation of the model is as follows:

log(πij1πij)=β0+β1x1ij+β2x2j+uj

where, uj ~N(0, σu2) and πij = the probability of an event occurring for the i level-1 unit in the j level-2 unit; β0 is the log-odds that y = 1 when x = 0 and u = 0; β1 is the effect on log-odds of a 1-unit increase in x for individuals in the same group; uj is the effect of being in group j on the log-odds that y = 1, also known as a level-2 residual; σu2 is the level-2 (residual) variance or the between-group variance in the log-odds that y = 1 after accounting for x; x1ij is a generic level 1 nested within a level-2 independent variable; and x2j indicates a level-2 independent variable.

The design effect, which represents the ratio of the variance of the estimate to the variance obtained by assuming that the sample is a simple random one, was first checked on an intercept-only model. We found a significant design effect of 128.01, indicating the substantial impact of accounting for the complex design. Random intercepts were retained. The full model was then ran by entering all the selected independent variables simultaneously.

Substantive cross-level interactions among our independent variables were explored through a trial-and-error process to capture the potential effect of community-level characteristics on the individual-level associations. Only one interaction was found to be significant and was consequently retained in the model. The final model achieved a Nagelkerke R2 of 0.201, indicating a moderate level of explanatory power. The level of significance used was 5% (0.05), two-tailed at the 95% confidence interval (CI).

Ethical consideration

The Cameroon DHS protocol, which included measurement procedures and biological tests, underwent review, and obtained approval from the Cameroonian Ministry of Health, the National Ethical Committee for Research and Human Health (CNERSH), and the Inner-City Fund (ICF) Institutional Review Board. Informed consent for the survey was obtained from each participant before their interview. Permission to access the Cameroon DHS 2018 survey dataset was obtained from the DHS program. The surveyors ensured confidentiality by using an anonymization technique that assigned a code to each included case. The accessed dataset was securely stored on a computer protected by password authentication.

Results

Socio-demographic characteristics of the study population and comparison with the uptake of IPTp-SP

We included 5,528 participants from the database. Nearly half of them (48.1%, n = 2,657) were aged between 25 and 35 years, and 44.5% (n = 2,455) had obtained a secondary school education at least. More than half of the women (52.6%, n = 2,911) resided in rural areas, and there was a relatively even distribution across different wealth classes. Finally, 3,398 (61.5%, CI: 60.2–62.8) participants had taken fewer than three doses of IPTp-SP (Table 1).

Up to 845 (15.3%) women did not attend any ANCs. Among the 3,574 (64.6%) women who attended the recommended number of ANCs, 1,686 (47.2%) received three or more doses of IPTp-SP (Fig 2).

Fig 2. Uptake of fewer than three doses of IPTp-SP according to the number of ANC visits.

Fig 2

Table 1 presents comparative analyses to show no significant association between the length of stay in the place of residence and the uptake of IPTp-SP (p = 0.844). However, we observe a significant variation in the uptake of the recommended three doses of IPTp-SP across the different levels of education (p < 0.001). Women who had higher levels of education were more likely to take three or more doses. Illiterate participants had a significantly lower uptake of IPTp-SP compared to their literate counterparts (31% vs. 69%, p < 0.001). Health insurance coverage was limited (1.8%, n = 99); however, among the insured participants, a greater proportion took three or more doses of IPTp-SP (p = 0.006). Women who had ever been in a formal union had a slightly lower uptake of IPTp-SP compared to those who had not (62.2% vs. 37.8%), but this difference was not statistically significant (p = 0.054). Women whose partners had secondary or higher education had a lower uptake of IPTp-SP compared to those whose partners had lower levels of education (35.7% vs. 64.2%, p < 0.001). Women residing in the Sahelian regions had a significantly lower uptake of IPTp-SP compared to those living in other regions (50.5% vs. 65.5%, p < 0.001). The uptake of IPTp-SP was also found to be significantly associated with the distribution of women across areas with different levels of endemicity (p = 0.002) (Table 1).

Obstetrical history of the study population and comparison with the uptake of IPTp-SP

Table 2 presents data on the obstetrical history of the participants. Women with a parity ≤ 5 had a lower uptake of IPTp-SP than those with a higher parity (p = 0.033). Similarly, women with a history of terminated pregnancies also had a lower uptake of IPTp-SP (p = 0.022). There was a significant association between the qualification of the ANC attendant and the uptake of IPTp-SP (p < 0.001). Among the participants who did not attend a single ANC, 96.6% had poor uptake of IPTp-SP. The majority of women (58.9%) did not attend their first ANC until their fourth month of pregnancy; this group had a generally poor uptake of IPTp-SP (p < 0.001). Most women (61.1%) had 4–7 ANCs. Additionally, the proportion of women with poor uptake of IPTp-SP progressively decreased with the number of ANCs (p < 0.001) (Table 2).

Factors associated with the uptake of IPTp-SP

The logistic regression analyses presented in Table 3 identified independent predictors of the poor uptake of IPTp-SP. Women residing in areas of lower endemicity had a higher risk of receiving fewer than three doses of IPTp-SP (aOR = 1.26, p = 0.047), while those residing in the Sahelian regions (aOR = 0.52, p < 0.001) had a lower risk. Delay in the first ANC after the third month of pregnancy (aOR = 1.52, p < 0.001) also increased the risk of poor uptake of IPTp-SP. Similarly, attending fewer than four ANCs (aOR = 1.29, p = 0.009) and not being attended to by a healthcare professional (comprising medical doctors, nurses, and midwives) during the prenatal period (aOR = 4.63, p < 0.001) were identified as independent risk factors for the poor uptake of IPTp-SP. Additionally, the model revealed a significant positive cross-level interaction effect between not being attended to by a healthcare professional during the prenatal period and residing in the Sahelian regions (p < 0.001) (Fig 3). We found no significant association between an area’s malaria prevalence and poor IPTp-SP uptake.

Fig 3. Cross-level interaction (ANC highest attendant × Sahelian regions) plot.

Fig 3

Discussion

In Cameroon, IPTp-SP has been a critical strategy for preventing malaria among pregnant women since 2004. As efforts continue, a better understanding of the parameters of this service utilization can help improve its performance and inform the implementation of novel strategies. This study aimed to examine the current levels and factors associated with the uptake of the recommended three or more doses of IPTp-SP among pregnant women in Cameroon. We found that a high proportion (61.5%) of women of childbearing age did not receive the recommended three or more doses of IPTp-SP. The factors associated with the poor uptake of IPTp-SP included residing in areas of lower malaria endemicity, attending the first ANC after the third month of pregnancy, attending fewer than four ANCs, and not being attended to by a healthcare professional during the prenatal period. In line with the Roll Back Malaria Partnership, Cameroon’s Ministry of Health aimed to achieve 80% coverage of the recommended three or more doses of IPTp-SP by 2023 [18]. Although the coverage rate of 38.5% observed in our study represents a substantial improvement from the 12.9% reported in 2011 [10], the country is still facing significant challenges in meeting the desired target. However, a cross-country DHS analytical study conducted in 2013 found a wide variation in the coverage of three or more doses of IPTp-SP, ranging from 0.3% to 43% across sub-Saharan African countries, placing Cameroon among countries with a relatively high IPTp coverage. Countries with lower coverage rates of IPTp-SP typically experience factors such as ambiguous or delayed adoption of relevant policies, lower levels of ANC attendance with a greater proportion of missed opportunities for IPTp-SP administration, and systemic issues with healthcare provision, such as drug stock-outs and high user fees [1922].

In Cameroon, similar to many other sub-Saharan African countries, the distribution of IPTp-SP is primarily facilitated through the ANC program and has become an integral part of it. Consequently, as demonstrated in our results, women who delay their initial contact with healthcare providers and attend a limited number of subsequent consultations are less likely to receive the recommended IPTp-SP dosage. This finding aligns with previous research suggesting that early initiation of ANC improves the uptake of IPTp-SP [20, 2325] and that the possibility of completing the recommended doses increases with the number of ANCs attended [10, 11, 2628]. However, only 47.2% of the women who attended four or more visits in our study actually received the recommended doses, indicating a high frequency of missed opportunities for the administration of IPTp-SP.

Barriers to the uptake of three or more doses of IPTp-SP can be categorized into health system-related factors, ANC attendant-related factors, and maternal-related factors. Our results show that the qualifications of ANC attendants can determine the uptake of three or more doses of IPTp-SP, with medical doctors generally providing better care compared to other attendants. A study conducted in the north-west region of the country reported that up to 35.9% of health providers had not received any training on IPT and that approximately 30% were unaware of the appropriate timing for IPT initiation [9]. These findings are consistent with those of numerous studies demonstrating healthcare providers’ inadequate knowledge on IPT [20]. We notice that the effect of the ANC attendant’s qualification is modified by region such that women who received no care from a healthcare professional in the Sahelian regions had an even higher risk of poor IPTp-SP uptake compared to those in the Southern regions. The Sahelian regions contain three out of the five administrative regions where women face significant challenges in accessing healthcare services [14]. Moreover, the weaker socio-economic situation of these regions contributes to deficiencies in healthcare delivery. The far north, for instance, only has 8% of all Cameroonian doctors despite holding 18% of the population [29]. These findings underscore the surplus value of assigning additional healthcare professionals to obstetric care in Sahelian regions, as suggested by our cross-level interaction analysis. By enhancing the availability of healthcare providers in underserved regions, we can improve the uptake of IPTp-SP and address disparities in maternal healthcare access.

Previous research also reports several maternal-related factors that contribute to the poor uptake of IPTp. We found no association between maternal age and poor uptake of IPTp-SP. Our findings oppose those of a study conducted in the south-west region of Cameroon, which suggested that, although not statistically significant, younger women were showing a limited interest in IPTp-SP [12]. A Nigerian study found similar results [24]. Hence, the effect of age on the uptake of IPTp-SP is uncertain across studies [20]. As a continuous factor, it may be difficult to sufficiently adjust for age using widespread statistical techniques. The association found by certain studies may be a result of the residual confounding due to the improper handling of the independent variable, such as by classification into a limited number of categories [30], rather than a true association, suggesting a probable treatment negligence issue with younger women.

Strengths and limitations

The representativeness of our findings was ensured by the use of a large sample size and weighted data from a national-level household survey. The data was collected through standardized procedures using validated questionnaires, ensuring the internal and external validity of the results.

This study, however, has several limitations that should be considered while interpreting the results. First, causation cannot be asserted, as the cross-sectional design of the study does not allow for a temporal relationship between the independent variables and the outcome of interest. Second, most measures were self-reported, which may be subject to social desirability bias and recall bias considering the fact that some women were asked to recall pregnancy-related events that occurred up to five years before the survey. Third, the study was limited by the available variables in the CMRDHS questionnaire and did not investigate other potentially relevant factors, such as access to healthcare facilities, service provider performance, and women’s perceptions and social attitudes toward IPTp. Additionally, some of the data collected, such as wealth and place of residence, reflected the women’s conditions at the time of the survey and not at the time of childbirth, which may have caused misclassification of some women. However, the probability is low, with equal chances of a backward and forward shift from the actual category of classification; hence, these conditions should not affect the overall interpretation and implications of our findings. Finally, it is important to note that this study focused on Cameroon and used data from 2018. Therefore, the conclusions drawn from this study may not be generalizable to other countries, and the results may be outdated by the time of publication.

Conclusion

Despite tremendous progress in the past decades, the coverage of three doses of IPTp-SP in Cameroon remains low. Maternal age, malaria endemicity, place of residence, number of ANCs attended, timing of first ANC, and qualification of ANC attendant (which has a significantly different effect for women residing in the Sahelian regions) were identified as important predictors of IPTp-SP uptake in our study. This finding highlights the importance of early initiation of ANC and consistent attendance for optimal IPTp-SP uptake. The qualification of the ANC attendant also emerged as a significant determinant, emphasizing the necessity for the comprehensive training of and knowledge dissemination among healthcare providers to ensure the appropriate administration of IPTp-SP. However, further studies should be conducted to explore ANC attendant-related factors that could explain the high frequency of missed opportunities for IPTp-SP administration. Policymakers must prioritize the Sahelian regions and address the regional disparities in service availability. Developing targeted strategies that overcome these challenges is essential for improving IPTp-SP uptake and reducing the burden of malaria in pregnancy.

Acknowledgments

We are grateful to The DHS Program team, who granted us access to the 2018 Cameroon Demographic and Health Survey database.

Data Availability

https://doi.org/10.6084/m9.figshare.21308949.

Funding Statement

The authors received no specific funding for this work.

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PLOS Glob Public Health. doi: 10.1371/journal.pgph.0001245.r001

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13 Dec 2022

PGPH-D-22-01640

Coverage and factor associated to the uptake of Intermittent preventive treatment for malaria during pregnancy (IPTp) in Cameroun in 2018: an analysis from the 2018 Cameroon Demographic Health Survey data

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Lines 29-30: you mentioned, "Frequencies of mother exposed to less than 3 doses of IPTp-SP were estimated with a 95% CI". However, I went through all the results but did not see where you presented these frequencies with their confidence intervals

Line 32: you did not specify the statistical model used to estimate the crude and adjusted odd ratios, but this should be mentioned in the Abstract's method section.

Line 45: This is the conclusion and cannot be started with the word "Therefore." It would be best if you replaced it with an appropriate term for a conclusion like to sum up, In conclusion, or even to conclude.

Line 47: You did within comparison for the Sahelian region, but it would be more interesting to compare the sahelians to the others regions and not within the same region.

Line 66: can you provide more data on the overall range of the coverage in terms of the minimum and the maximum?

Line 76 – 77: You mentioned that the gap was to understand the limitation of the health care system in achieving its objectives; meanwhile, in this current study, the main targets was to determine the coverage and understand the socio-demographics parameters that affect the uptake of IPTp-SP in Cameroon. In other words, you did not collect any healthcare system parameters in your study. Therefore, there is a need to re-formulate this sentence

Line 89: can you elaborate more on the two-stage sampling process, I mean, the primary sampling unit, the secondary sampling unit, and so on?

Line 95: There is a missing word cause you mentioned "A living child less than at the day the selected household is visited. I think the missing word is five. Cause you mean less than 5 years old?

Lines 110: The definition of the dependent variables is not clear. The dependent variable is the uptake of IPTp-SP and comprises two categories, < 3 doses and ≥ 3 doses. Therefore, there is a need to rewrite this sentence.

Line 122: you mentioned that you used the complex sample's functionality in SPSS due to the structure of your data. Does this account for the cluster sampling aspect of your study? In other words, does this complex sample functionality account for mixed effects models?

Line 128: You used binary logistic regression to analyze your data. I don't think it is appropriate because you used clustered data, so using mixed effects models to account for this cluster effect is more appropriate.

Line 130: You mentioned, "Dependent that had an association with the outcome." Dependent, outcome, and response variables are the same. Therefore, there is a need to correct this. I think you mean independent, which had an association with the outcome.

Line 157: Table 1: I prefer the Mother's age (years) instead of Age groups (years). Also, it is better to present the proportions row-wise instead of column-wise. In addition, you should compare the proportions between levels instead of within levels.

Lines 169: You started describing the data without indicating in which Tables we can find these data. In the first sentence of this paragraph, you should introduce the Table and then follow with the data description.

Line 180: You should provide a between-regions comparison and not within regions.

Line 184: You should first introduce the tables, and the proportion should be presented row-wise instead of column-wise as you did.

Line 186: You mentioned parity below 6, but in the Table, we only have parity ≤ 5.

Line 217: You omitted to add Table 3 before the title "Determinants of the uptake ....

Reviewer #2: Comments

In this paper the authors describe the coverage and factors associated with the uptake of intermittent preventive treatment for malaria in pregnant women in Cameroon. This is an important topic because the available body of evidence has shown that in malaria endemic settings the uptake of IPT-SP of � 3 significantly improves the pregnancy outcomes. This manuscripts will help to inform the policy makers in Cameroon on the prevailing gaps in the uptake of IPT-SP � 3 doses, and therefore, assist in making decisions.

Major comment

The authors should find a native English speaker to assist correcting the language.

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Line 21: Change …..increasing mother and children mortality…….to…..increasing pregnant women/mothers and children mortality…..

Line 23: WHO is mentioned for the first time, thus it should be written in full followed by the abbreviations in brackets, thereafter, you can continue using the abbreviations.

Line 24: Present study aimed…and not…aims.

Line 27: Change…administered in face to face…to….administered face to face…or ,..administered directly.

Line 28:….one child under 5…what is the unit of measurement, years or months?

Line 30: …..A case-control design….Can you explain how this was a case control design study?

Line 43: ……were preventing factors for poor uptake of IPTp-SP 3+. This statement is not clear, change it to …were factors associated with inadequate uptake of ……. In addition change….highest level….to….high/higher level…..

Line 44:…..not found associated to……not found to be associated with…..

Line 45: The conclusion is not clear, re-write to increase its clarity.

Line 65: Despite implemented…..to….Despite the implementation of…..

Line 68: …..factors as level…..to….factors such as /or including…….

Line 70: The sentence is not clear, re-write to increase its clarity…e.g.,…the Ministry of Health adopted IPTp using chloroquine since 2002….

Line 71: ANC….write in full, followed by the abbreviations in brackets, thereafter, you can continue using the abbreviation.

Line 72: The sentence is not clear, rephrase.

Line 95: ……biological mothers of a living child aged less than….less than what? Also, ……household is visited…….change to…..household was visited.

Line 100: ….a under 5 years old….to…an under 5 years old….

Line 102: …..and those did not have…..to….and those who did not have…..

Line 111: …..stay in the place of residence……change to……residents of the catchment area…..

Line 112:Why have both “woman’s highest education level” and “literacy”? These two assess the same thing.

Line 115: ANC highest attendant….this is not clear. I believe you meant the cadres of the attendants i.e., nurse, doctor, etc. Find a good way to express it to increase clarity.

Line 130-131: Dependents that…..were selected for multivariate logistic regression model. This sentence is not clear, rephrase to increase clarity.

Line 151:……instead of (48.1%, n=2657)…..change to…..48.1% (2657/5528). Change throughout the results section.

Line 151-52:….with almost half of aged…to….with almost half of them aged…., also add a comma between “old” and “and”.

Line 152: ….., and 44.5% having….to…and 44.5% of them having…..

Line 153: About half (52.6% (2911/5528)…..this is more than half, not about half. Also change….and they seem to….to……and they seemed to….

Table 1: -Why the age group of 40-49 has a range of 9 years while all other age groups have a range of 4 years?

-Stay in the place of residence…to.. reside/or resident of the catchment area.

-Highest education level…..to level of education.

-Illiterate is part of the level of education, so it should be combined with no formal education.

-Current occupation…….I was expecting to see different groups of occupation i.e., peasants, petty traders, government employee etc.

Table 2: ANC highest attendant…….change to …Cadre of the ANC attendant…

Line 167: Subheading….Sociodemographic characteristics of participants and uptake of �3 doses of IPTp-SP……refers to the same things as the subheading…..Determinants of the uptake of less than 3 doses of IPTp-SP. These two sections should be combined and streamlined to avoid repetition.

Line 227: Since 2004 in Cameroon……to…In Cameroon, since 2004 IPTp-SP…..

Line 275: ….service overwhelming……to….health system overwhelmed…..

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PLOS Glob Public Health. doi: 10.1371/journal.pgph.0001245.r003

Decision Letter 1

Orvalho Augusto

23 Feb 2023

PGPH-D-22-01640R1

Coverage and factor associated to the uptake of Intermittent preventive treatment for malaria during pregnancy (IPTp) in Cameroun in 2018: an analysis from the 2018 Cameroon Demographic Health Survey data

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Orvalho Augusto, MD, MPH

Academic Editor

PLOS Global Public Health

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Reviewer #4: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #3: I don't know

Reviewer #4: Yes

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Reviewer #4: No

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Reviewer #4: Yes

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Reviewer #3: General

1. Title: ‘Coverage and factor associated to the uptake of Intermittent preventive treatment for malaria during pregnancy (IPTp) in Cameroun in 2018: an analysis from the 2018 Cameroon Demographic Health Survey data’ could be revised to ‘Factors associated with the uptake of Intermittent preventive treatment for malaria during pregnancy (IPTp) in Cameroun in 2018: an analysis from the 2018 Cameroon Demographic Health Survey data’ as Coverage is implied in the ‘uptake’.

2. Generally, it would be good to have a fluently speaking English health personnel edit the manuscript for general improvement in the expression of the language in the manuscript as there are some few errors in some of the sentences. For example, the first sentence of the Abstract in lines 20-21 ‘Malaria in pregnancy is a major public health issue, contributing to a significant increase in pregnant women and children mortality and morbidity’ could read as follows: ‘Malaria in pregnancy is a major public health issue, contributing to a significant increase in maternal and child mortality and morbidity’. And in lines 27-28, ‘Data were collected using a questionnaire administered in face to face to mothers with at least one child under 5, selected using a 2-stage stratified sampling process.’ Could read ‘Data were collected using a questionnaire administered face to face to mothers with at least one child under 5, selected using a 2-stage stratified sampling process.’ I recommend a thorough reading through the manuscript to correct minor typographical and grammatical errors.

Abstract

3. Authors mention in line 30 that ‘a case-control design was used to assess…’. Could the study design be an analytical cross-sectional design instead? Demographic and Health surveys are cross-sectional studies.

Introduction

4. Line 64: ‘once month apart’ should read ‘one month apart’

5. Line 71: ‘u’ is missing from ‘sing’ to read ‘using’ chloroquine… Line 78, antenatal is spelt wrongly at the beginning of the sentence, t is also missing from ‘that’.

6. Line 80: poor uptake has been referred to as IPTp-SP ≥ 3 doses. This should be corrected.

Study population

7. Do Authors mean biological mothers of children less than five years who were between the ages of 15-49 years? The statement in lines 101 – 103 is not clear.

Data management

8. Data grooming is not the same as data cleaning. Did Authors mean data cleaning in line 126?

Statistical analysis

9. Line 137: ‘our’ should be replaced by ‘the’. Better still, the outcome of interest could be repeated here.

10. Line 143: What do Authors mean by ‘interactions among our dependents were explored’? Are they referring to (in)dependent variables?

Results

11. Line 167: Is that sentence a heading?

12. Line 173: The caption of Figure 2 needs modification. Proportion of uptake does not read well as ‘uptake’ means the proportion of women who have taken a specific number of IPTp-SP doses.

13. Lines 180-183: The interpretations Authors are giving to the figures here are not correct. Authors should interpret the results carefully. Secondly, the degrees of freedom that are reported in Table 1 are very wide; Authors need to state cautiously what the findings are at this stage.

14. Again, the interpretation of results in lines 201 to 203 is faulty. Authors should kindly look carefully at these. For example, saying that ‘a greater proportion of women having a poor uptake of IPTp-SP among those who received no care (96.6%)’ is not the same as saying that ‘15.3% of the respondents did not receive any ANC with 96.6% of these having a poor uptake of IPTp-SP.’

15. Table 3: Women’s age category should be 15-25 years according to previous categorization in table 1 and not 0-25 years.

16. Line 220: Could Authors consider stating the positive finding instead of the double negative as stated in the sentence? This would state the finding more clearly.

Discussion

17. Lines 287 to 291: These are very valid reasons that have been written in this paragraph. Could Authors clarify/simplify the sentences in these lines and possibly add some references? Does ‘increase in drug shortage’ mean SP stockouts? What does ‘an overwhelmed health system from the elevated demand’ mean? And does ‘dodging of preventive doses because of recent treatment received for frequent infections’ mean ‘treatment of malaria infections among the pregnant women because they report with signs and symptoms of malaria during ANC rather than giving IPTp presumptively? The policy demands that pregnant women who show signs and symptoms of malaria get tested and those positive treated using ACTs instead of giving IPTp hence the potential reduction in IPTp-SP. This could be elaborated in the discussion.

Reviewer #4: Manuscript PGPH-D-22-01640: Coverage and factor associated to the uptake of Intermittent preventive treatment for malaria during pregnancy (IPTp) in Cameroun in 2018: an analysis from the 2018 Cameroon Demographic Health Survey data

General comments - The manuscript addresses an important of prevention of malaria in pregnancy, using existing large population-level data; the national demographic health survey.

Specific Comments

Abstract – The abstract is well written and summarizes the rationale for the study, methodology, key findings, and conclusions.

Introduction - The authors have cited relevant studies and provided good background, focusing on the main focus of the manuscript. It flows well.

Materials and Methods –General: Given that this paper is based on secondary analysis of data collected for another purpose, the details provided on how the original data were cleaned, transformed and manipulated to fit the objectives of the present analysis are missing. Expand description on what figure 1 is showing as well, especially explaining the exclusions of the “unweighted”. I would recommend that authors should review some DHS-based papers to see how they have structured the methods sections.

- Lines 109-111: (a) the dependent variable 110 was the number of women who had received less than three doses of IPTp-SP (Poor uptake of 111 ≥3 doses of IPTp-SP). The inclusion of the words in bracket may confuse some readers; consider leaving it out.

- Line 111: The use of the word “grooming” seems inappropriate; consider changing to cleaning, preparation for analysis, etc.

Results – Findings presented well.

- Tables 1&2: The presentation of “Rao-Scott-F(df1, df2)” and “p-value” columns for categorical variables is a bit confusing; it seems to be linked to the first row of the variable, while it applies to the entire variable. Merge the spaces.

- “The 3rd table is not properly labeled as “Table 3”; correct this. In the same table, consider using “REF/Reference” instead of the value “1” in the OR column.

Discussion – This section can be improved/ strengthen by:

- Avoid repeating the presentation of results especially the 1st paragraph.

- Include a few sentences either at the beginning or at the end describing the strengths of this study, such as use of a large set of database that is nationally representative, etc.

- Include the limitations of the study; this information is missing.

References – Relevant and recent.

Other comments – Minor language editing required to improve clarity and conform to English grammar.

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Reviewer #3: No

Reviewer #4: Yes: Mark M Kabue

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Decision Letter 2

Orvalho Augusto

20 Jun 2023

PGPH-D-22-01640R2

Factors associated with the uptake of Intermittent preventive treatment for malaria during pregnancy (IPTp) in Cameroon: an analysis of data from the 2018 Cameroon Demographic Health Survey

PLOS Global Public Health

Dear Dr. Guimsop,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS Global Public Health. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS Global Public Health’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 04 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at globalpubhealth@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pgph/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.

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Kind regards,

Orvalho Augusto, MD, MPH

Academic Editor

PLOS Global Public Health

Journal Requirements:

Additional Editor Comments (if provided):

IPTp is an important strategy for malaria prevention in pregnancy. The authors analyzed recent Cameroon DHS data to identify the level of low uptake of IPTp in Cameroon and try to identify important factors. There are a few shortcomings in the report.

1. Somewhere in the abstract, it is said that the author conducted a multilevel analysis. However, we have no details of such a procedure in the methods, neither the tables (eg table 3) with associations suggest such a procedure has ever been used here.

- Please add more details in the statistical analysis of what was done to perform this analysis.

2. The abstract is too long. Please add the subsections (background, methods, results, and conclusions to help the reader follow).

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Reviewer #5: (No Response)

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2. Does this manuscript meet PLOS Global Public Health’s publication criteria? Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe methodologically and ethically rigorous research with conclusions that are appropriately drawn based on the data presented.

Reviewer #5: Partly

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #5: No

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Reviewer #5: Yes

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Reviewer #5: No

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Reviewer #5: 1. According to the manuscript, the objective was to determine factors contributing to the low uptake of IPTp. But the authors presented factors for both high and low uptake of IPTp in results, discussion and conclusion sections; this may confuse readers of the article. I recommend the authors to put their focus on the factors for low uptake of IPTp.

2. The authors should consider revising the analysis (especially the logistic regression). In most cases, the multivariate logistic regression analysis includes independent variables that have attained a certain level of significance (usually a p-value of less than 0.2) during the univariate logistic regression analysis. This will enable authors to (1) consider only significant variables and (2) adjust for confounders.

3. Authors should rewrite the references appropriately and consistently both in text (using brackets instead of parentheses) and the reference list, e.g., reference number 2. Authors should adhere to the journal guidelines for writing references (Vancouver style).

4. To improve the manuscript's language, the authors should send it to a professional English editor.

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Decision Letter 3

Orvalho Augusto

25 Sep 2023

PGPH-D-22-01640R3

Factors associated with the uptake of Intermittent preventive treatment for malaria during pregnancy (IPTp) in Cameroon: an analysis of data from the 2018 Cameroon demographic and health survey

PLOS Global Public Health

Dear Dr. Guimsop,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS Global Public Health. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS Global Public Health’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 25 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at globalpubhealth@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pgph/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.

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Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter.

We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript.

Kind regards,

Orvalho Augusto, MD, MPH

Academic Editor

PLOS Global Public Health

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1. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice.

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Reviewer #5: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #6: All comments have been addressed

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Reviewer #5: Yes

Reviewer #6: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #5: Yes

Reviewer #6: No

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Reviewer #5: Yes

Reviewer #6: Yes

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Reviewer #5: No

Reviewer #6: Yes

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Reviewer #5: Title for table 1, what are the environmental characteristics presented in the table? Revise the title using appropriate terminology.

Revise the titles for subsections in the result section, for example the first subsection may be "Demographic Characteristics of Study population".

Reviewer #6: Title: Factors associated with the uptake of Intermittent preventive treatment for malaria during pregnancy (IPTp) in Cameroon: an analysis of data from the 2018 Cameroon demographic and health survey.

GENERAL COMMENTS:

The manuscript presents findings from a secondary data analysis of the 2018 Cameroon Demographic and Health Survey, which involved 5409 (unweighted) childbearing women from across Cameroon, all of whom had at least one child under five years old at the time of the study. This research addresses a crucial aspect of public health by examining the distribution and determinants of poor uptake of Intermittent Preventive Treatment for malaria during pregnancy (IPTp-SP), particularly in cases where pregnant women received fewer than three doses. While the manuscript is well-written, there is room for improvement in certain areas.

ABSTRACT, TITLE

The abstract is well-structured, but I have a question regarding the focus of conclusion section. It seems the authors are emphasizing the determinants of optimal uptake of IPTp-SP (≥ 3 doses) rather than the factors associated with poor IPTp-SP uptake, which aligns better with the study's aim. I suggest that they maintain consistency with the study's objectives in presenting the conclusion.

Title is relevant and informative and the aim is clear

MAIN MANUSCRIPT CONTENTS

1. Background

In lines 73-76, the authors have mentioned the prevalence range of optimal IPTp-SP uptake in relation to socio-demographic characteristics, ANC (Antenatal Care) utilization, and study design in Cameroon. They also pointed out that there have been few studies conducted in Cameroon that explored the association of socio-demographic factors and “antennal parameter” (what is the antennal?) with IPTp-SP uptake (as seen in lines 77-78). Given this information, I am not entirely convinced about the novel contribution of this present study to the literature on IPTp-SP uptake in Cameroon. The authors have not thoroughly critiqued previous studies conducted in Cameroon to establish the specific gap that this study aims to address.

2. Methods

Statistical analysis

In line 161, the authors have stated that all independent variables were dichotomized to assess their association with IPTp uptake. It is important to note that logistic regression can be applied to independent variables with various levels of measurement, not just dichotomous variables. Dichotomizing variables is a well-known practice, but it can lead to a loss of information and potentially introduce residual confounding. Therefore, I have reservations about the rationale behind this extensive dichotomization.

Statistical model used

In lines 160-161, the manuscript mentions the use of bivariate logistic regression. It is not clear whether this analysis is within a multilevel modelling (MLM) framework or standard logistic regression. If it's standard logistic regression, an explanation for this choice would be beneficial.

Additionally, in line 172, it is indicated that MLM was applied for each covariate. The rationale for employing standard regression in the initial stage and MLM in the second stage should be clarified.

Furthermore, in lines 188-189, the manuscript states that the analysis accounted for the survey design. If multilevel modelling analysis incorporated weights, it would be valuable to provide a brief description of the methods used in this regard.

In line 192, the manuscript mentions the fitting of interaction terms. It would be beneficial to clarify whether these interaction terms were pre-planned as part of the study's hypothesis and design or if they were determined through a trial-and-error process during the analysis. Understanding the rationale behind the inclusion of interaction terms can provide useful insight.

3. Results

In the methods section, the authors state that all independent variables were dichotomized (line 161). However, upon reviewing Table 1, it is evident that not all variables are dichotomized. The methods section should be revised for accuracy and consistency.

Additionally, in Table 1, it would be beneficial for the authors to include a footnote indicating that the sample sizes presented are weighted, as this is important information for the readers to understand.

Furthermore, in line 233, the authors claim a statistically significant difference between higher education and secondary education, even though there are four levels of education mentioned. It is unclear which specific level(s) of education are driving this statistical significance. In my opinion, it is difficult for the authors to specify the particular education levels for which a statistically significant difference was found. The way conclusions are drawn involving more than two levels of variable measures should be revised in this manuscript.

Does the Table 3 include the MLM bivariable logistic regression or the standard logistic regression?

4. Discussion

I recommend that the statements found in lines 292-299 be incorporated into the 'strengths of the study' section, as they seem to highlight specific strengths or advantages of the research.

Results in lines 342-343 should be interpreted with caution because the p-value is weak as evidence with 95% confidence.

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Reviewer #5: No

Reviewer #6: Yes: Steven Chifundo Azizi

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Decision Letter 4

David Musoke

15 Jan 2024

PGPH-D-22-01640R4

Factors associated with the uptake of Intermittent preventive treatment for malaria during pregnancy (IPTp) in Cameroun: an analysis of data from the 2018 Cameroon demographic and health Survey

PLOS Global Public Health

Dear Dr. Guimsop,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS Global Public Health. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS Global Public Health’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

Please submit your revised manuscript by 3rd February 2024. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at globalpubhealth@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pgph/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.

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We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript.

Kind regards,

David Musoke, PhD

Academic Editor

PLOS Global Public Health

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Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice.

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Thank you for sharing your revised manuscript. The reviewers have identified some areas that still need to be addressed.

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Reviewer #5: (No Response)

Reviewer #6: (No Response)

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Reviewer #5: Yes

Reviewer #6: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #5: Yes

Reviewer #6: Yes

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available (please refer to the Data Availability Statement at the start of the manuscript PDF file)?

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Reviewer #5: Yes

Reviewer #6: No

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5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

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Reviewer #5: Yes

Reviewer #6: Yes

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Reviewer #5: Congratulation to the authors, there is great improvement from previous versions.

Line 278 – 282: “This indicates ......... Specifically, ......... “. These statements should be moved to discussion section.

I believe there is still a need for improvement in terms of language. Hence, I recommend that an English editor revise the manuscript.

Reviewer #6: ABSTRACT, TITLE

The abstract is well-structured, but I have a question regarding the focus of conclusion section. It seems the authors are emphasizing the determinants of optimal uptake of IPTp-SP (≥ 3 doses) rather than the factors associated with poor IPTp-SP uptake, which aligns better with the study's aim. I suggest that they maintain consistency with the study's objectives in presenting the conclusion.

Your response on the above suggestion shows that you did not understand what I meant. It is not about the mere word “determinant” but your aim and conclusion are not matching. You aimed to investigate the distribution and factors associated with poor uptake of IPTp-SP… but your conclusion is highlighting the optimal uptake of IPTp-SP.

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1. Background

In lines 73-76, the authors have mentioned the prevalence range of optimal IPTp-SP uptake in relation to socio-demographic characteristics, ANC (Antenatal Care) utilization, and study design in Cameroon. They also pointed out that there have been few studies conducted in Cameroon that explored the association of socio-demographic factors and “antennal parameter” (what is the antennal?) with IPTp-SP uptake (as seen in lines 77-78). Given this information, I am not entirely convinced about the novel contribution of this present study to the literature on IPTp-SP uptake in Cameroon. The authors have not thoroughly critiqued previous studies conducted in Cameroon to establish the specific gap that this study aims to address.

I remain unconvinced by the new justification. You have cited only two studies (DHS and Diengou et al, 2020) as your evidence, yet there are numerous studies conducted in Cameroon on this subject. Perhaps it would have been more accurate to mention the limited literature available on this topic from a nationally representative sample, which the Demographic and Health Survey provides.

3. Results

In the methods section, the authors state that all independent variables were dichotomized (line 161). However, upon reviewing Table 1, it is evident that not all variables are dichotomized. The methods section should be revised for accuracy and consistency.

Based on your response, why can you not add the statement that you used to respond to my query? I suggest that you include the statement that you used to respond to my query.

Additionally, in Table 1, it would be beneficial for the authors to include a footnote indicating that the sample sizes presented are weighted, as this is important information for the readers to understand.

Information presented in Tables should provide comprehensive details without relying on references to other parts of the document. It is concerning to find a table containing information that depends on definitions found in specific sections of the document. Tables should be self-contained and independent. I am not impressed with your response.

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PLOS Glob Public Health. doi: 10.1371/journal.pgph.0001245.r011

Decision Letter 5

David Musoke

4 Mar 2024

Factors associated with the uptake of intermittent preventive treatment for malaria during pregnancy in Cameroon: An analysis of data from the 2018 Cameroon Demographic and Health Survey

PGPH-D-22-01640R5

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