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. 2024 Mar 27;4(3):e0003015. doi: 10.1371/journal.pgph.0003015

Why do people sell their kidneys? A thematic synthesis of qualitative evidence

Bijaya Shrestha 1,*, Luechai Sringernyuang 2, Manash Shrestha 3, Binita Shrestha 4, Anuska Adhikari 1, Dev Ram Sunuwar 5, Shiva Raj Mishra 6, Bipin Adhikari 7
Editor: Manish Barman8
PMCID: PMC10971689  PMID: 38536795

Abstract

Globally, demands for the kidneys have surpassed supply both living and deceased donors. High demands relative to the availability have made the kidney one of the most saleable human organs. The main objective was to explore the drivers of kidney selling. Literature related to kidney selling and its drivers was explored in three databases including MEDLINE (PubMed), Scopus (Elsevier), and JSTOR covering the period from 1987 to 2022. A total of 15 articles were selected, which underwent thematic analysis. Investigators independently assessed the articles for relevance and study quality to synthesize the data. The thematic analysis involved a critical approach to understanding the reasons for kidney selling by examining power disparities and social inequities. Kidney selling and the underlying reasons for it showed similarities across various geographic regions. Several factors were identified which increased individuals’ vulnerability for kidney selling. At the micro level, poverty and illiteracy emerged as significant factors. Lack of financial safety nets obliged family to resort to kidney selling which helped to alleviate poverty, resolve debt, and other urgent financial issues. Nonetheless, the revenues from kidney selling were also used to purchase luxury items (diverting away from investing in livelihood expenses) such as buying motorbikes, mobile phones and televisions. Family, and gender responsibilities also played roles in kidney selling such as obligations related to paying dowry made parents particularly vulnerable. Surprisingly, a few victims of kidney selling later adopted kidney brokering role to support their livelihood. Kidney selling was further fostered by lack of stringent policy to regulate and monitor background checks for kidney transplantation. There were myriad factors that affected individual’s vulnerability to kidney selling which stemmed from micro (poverty, illiteracy), meso (weak legal system, lacking stringent institutional policy, regulatory framework) and macro (social inequalities, corruption, organ shortage, insufficient health infrastructure) levels.

Introduction

Kidney transplantation is widely recognized as the preferred treatment for end-stage renal diseases worldwide [1]. This procedure takes place in over a hundred different countries. However, the supply of kidneys has not been able to meet the growing demand. Kidneys are in high demand globally, with low- and middle-income countries (LMICs) being major suppliers. Poverty, vulnerability, and lack of awareness have been identified as drivers that facilitate kidney selling [24]. However, the selling of kidneys is not simply a transactional act; it often serves as a means of social support to alleviate economic burdens and is driven by short-sighted impulses influenced by suggestions from peers and relatives [5]. Kidney selling could be solely initiated by the kidney sellers to an institution or a person without necessarily involving a broker. Kidney trafficking, on the other hand, can involve acts of exploitation, coercion, and inducement to sell to an institution or a person, often with the involvement of a broker [6]. Kidney sellers are often unaware about the consequences of selling kidneys such as disabilities of various extent including weaknesses, chronic kidney disease, stigma and unforeseen complications [7].

To meet the outweighing demands of kidney, the supplies often follow both legal and illegal mechanisms [3]. The primary reason for the demand has been attributed to chronic kidney diseases. Individuals from high-income countries with long waiting lists for kidney transplants may travel to countries with less stringent regulations or where organ trafficking occurs to access organs more quickly [8]. The supply of kidneys from deceased donors is limited by factors such as consent processes, medical suitability, and logistics. Living donation is tightly regulated to ensure the well-being and informed consent of the donor [9]. Unfortunately, illegal organ trafficking has been a common occurrence in LMICs which exploits vulnerable individuals facing desperate living conditions [3]. Although organ trafficking has been condemned and deemed illegal, it remains persistent because of the lack of regulatory measures [10]. The legal framework guiding kidney selling varies across countries and are dependent on the law (policy) itself and its implementation. The policies guiding kidney selling are in general deemed to regulate organ donation and thus prevent exploitation, protect vulnerable individuals, and ensure the ethical and equitable allocation of organs for transplantation [11]. The policies also guide and safeguard the terms and conditions for living organ donations, delineating the acts of voluntary and altruistic donations. In some countries, there are well regulated organ donor programs that allow kidney transplantation from living donors [7]. The legal framework for the kidney trafficking is covered under the human trafficking binding the concerns related to prosecution, protection and prevention [6].

The majority of kidney transplantation in LMICs are contributed by trafficking [4, 12]. Transplantation, trafficking and trade all run in parallel, making it hard to differentiate the associated activities. In recent years, kidney transplant technology has advanced significantly, improving its success rates [13]. The surgical techniques used in kidney transplantation have become more refined and minimally invasive. Increasingly, modern medical technologies have aided smooth transplantation thus ironically promoting the kidney transplantation [14]. Nonetheless, ethical arguments related to the kidney selling remains unaddressed by legal frameworks. Even if legal frameworks are meant to safeguard against the exploitation involved in kidney selling, the act of selling kidneys among the vulnerable poor compromises the central tenet of autonomy in the consent process. The consent itself for vulnerable donors is affected by undue inducement through incentives involved in the transaction. Simultaneously, recipients are vulnerable because their opportunity for life will be compromised if they do not accept donated organs from anyone, including vulnerable donors. For both donors and recipients, the nature and degree of vulnerability tend to cloud the ethical principles of the consent process. In addition, allowing the selling of organs from mostly poor and vulnerable donors is likely to promote inequity, as most buyers are privileged and can afford organs, while the poor with need for kidney transplantation may face inability to purchase an organ. Viewed from the perspective of the basic right to health, buyers have moral ground to afford organs for their well-being, nonetheless, this tends to support those who are privileged, leaving the poor in need of organs further vulnerable [15].

The medical consequences of kidney selling, both for the sellers (donors) and the recipients are different. In case of donor, kidney donation surgery carries risks inherent in any major surgical procedure, such as bleeding, infection, blood clots, and anesthesia-related complications [16]. Donors may further experience psychological and emotional challenges related to the donation process, including stress, guilt, and regret [5]. In case of recipients, despite advances in immunosuppressive medications, there is always a risk of rejection of the transplanted kidney. Transplant recipients may experience long-term complications, including cardiovascular disease, diabetes, bone disease, and an increased risk of certain cancers [17]. In illegal kidney trade in unregulated markets, there is a lack of proper medical oversight, which increases the chances of medical errors, poor surgical outcomes, and inadequate post-operative care [18]. In the compromised setting of kidney transplantation, there is a risk of acquiring HIV and Hepatitis due to potential exposure to contaminated blood or inadequate screening measures [19].

The main objective of this systematic review was to explore the reasons for kidney selling around the globe. Kidney selling is a global phenomenon, nonetheless there is a paucity on how and under what circumstances kidney selling occurs. In this review, we use a critical medical anthropological approach to explore social inequity and power differentials as the primary contributors of health and health care. Social inequalities, as viewed through the lens of Critical Medical Anthropology (CMA), encompass a consideration of the broader social, economic, and political structures that influence health outcomes and experiences [20]. Within CMA, social inequalities are defined as the unequal distribution of resources, opportunities, and power within society, which profoundly impact health and well-being. These inequalities are not merely the result of individual choices or biological differences but are deeply rooted in systemic injustices such as racism, sexism, classism, and other forms of oppression. Similarly, in CMA, power differentials refer to the uneven distribution of power within society and how these dynamics shape health experiences, outcomes, and access to healthcare. This review also analyzes the relationship between health status at an individual and societal level [21].

Materials and methods

We followed the guidelines of ENTREQ (Enhancing Transparency in Reporting the Synthesis of Qualitative Research) for this qualitative systematic review [22]. The protocol was registered in the PROSPERO database (CRD42020197541).

Search strategy

We conducted a systematic literature search in the electronic databases of MEDLINE (PubMed), Scopus (Elsevier), and JSTOR. The search strategy included the keywords “kidney” [AND] “sale” [OR] “trade” [OR] “deal” [OR] “Commerce” (S1 Table).

We also manually searched the reference lists of published reviews and used Google Scholar to identify additional studies that may have been missed in our electronic database search. The additional papers were also searched after following the references from the selected articles. Since the World Health Organization declared organ sales an illegal act in 1987 [23], we searched for studies published after 1987 and up to December 2022.

Study selection

All studies were included that offered qualitative evidence on selling kidneys for commercial reasons including motivations to sell their kidneys. Peer-reviewed qualitative research utilizing face-to-face interviews, focus group discussions, ethnography, case studies, and comparative content analysis were included. Only studies published in English language were included in this review. In the final selection, even though we found a substantial discussion about the phenomenon of kidney selling in a few quantitative studies [2426], we did not include them in the review as these studies did not elicit novel insights on how the factors contributed to kidney selling. We also excluded non-original research such as editorials, reviews, commentary, essays, arguments, debates, news, opinions, and reports.

EndNoteTM X9 (Clarivate Analytics, Philadelphia, PA) was used to import the records into a database. Two reviewers (BS and MS) independently screened the study titles and abstracts retrieved from the search and discarded the studies that did not meet the inclusion criteria. Duplicate papers were removed (n = 61), first with the help of EndNote and later by a manual check. The full texts of the remaining studies were retained and subsequently reviewed for inclusion.

Data extraction and quality assessment

Data were extracted from the selected articles using a pre-specified extraction table based on thematic synthesis for qualitative study [27]. For each selected article, we recorded the first author, year of publication, study country, duration of data collection, and method of data collection (S2 Table). To assess transparency of the reporting of each selected study, we utilized the Consolidated Criteria for Reporting Qualitative Research (COREQ), a 32-item checklist designed to promote comprehensive reporting of qualitative studies. The COREQ framework includes several important aspects related to research team and reflexivity, study design, analysis, and findings. The guidelines place a significant emphasis on the requirement to report details regarding the research team who participated in the study, including their backgrounds, areas of specialization, and any potential biases or conflicts of interest. Reflexivity is the ability of the researcher to see and accept their own impact on the research process. COREQ encourages researchers to describe their reflexivity by addressing their preconceptions, assumptions, and potential impact on data collection and analysis. On the research design; it entails outlining the research topic, the study’s goals and objectives, as well as the setting in which it was accomplished. The use of sampling techniques, participant recruitment, and any ethical considerations are also reported by the checklist. Transparency in reporting the data analysis process is also emphasized along with the techniques utilized for data coding, categorization, and topic development [28] (S3 Table).

Data synthesis and analysis

The thematic analysis took an approach outlined by Critical Medical Anthropology (CMA) to understand the reasons for kidney selling by examining power disparities and social inequities. The power disparities and social inequities among the rich and poor in societies are governed by wealth, knowledge, geographic locations, citizenship, ethnicities, gender, class and forms of stratifications. As social complexity increases, inequity tends to increase along with a widening gap between the poorest and the wealthiest members of the society [29]. We analyzed the situation at different levels, starting from the individual level to the macro-social level. Using a CMA theoretical lens, we delved deeper into the experience of the kidney sellers and understand their decisions in light of power dynamics and the influence of dominant socio-cultural and economic forces. The CMA approach also highlights the importance of political and economic forces, including the exercise of power, in shaping health, disease, illness experience, and health care, which supplements the culturally sensitive analysis of human behavior grounded in anthropological methods. It critically examines the ways in which power, inequity, and social structures shape health outcomes and the experiences of individuals and communities. Furthermore, it examines the social origin of diseases by analyzing the policy, resources allocation in terms of health and health care [21].

Participant quotations were extracted verbatim from the selected studies into MAXQDA 2020 (VERBI Software, 2019). Two reviewers (BS and MS) separately performed line-by-line coding and identified initial descriptive themes. List of themes from the analysis were refined and finalized after discussing with the third reviewer (BA). All of the authors agreed on the final themes, which are the basis of the results in this review.

Results

Study selection

A total of 2,030 articles were generated from the electronic search (Fig 1). A total of 1349 articles were excluded in the initial screening. The exclusion of articles was carried out by carefully reviewing the titles and assessing their relevance to the research question, followed by a thorough examination of the content. The clinical articles and pre-prints article were excluded in the initial screening. In addition, 681 articles were further screened of which 61 were duplicates, and thus were excluded. Out of 620 articles, 332 articles such as archive, review, non-original article, essay, including those which lacked full text were excluded. After screening for the relevance of the topic and study objectives from the title and abstracts, 288 articles were retained for full-text review. Assessment of the full text against the inclusion criteria resulted in the selection of 15 studies with qualitative evidence of commercial kidney donors’ reasons for undergoing nephrectomy.

Fig 1. The PRISMA flowchart showing the inclusion and screening in the review.

Fig 1

The studies selected for final analysis showed considerable geographic variability: Asia-Pacific (India, Pakistan, Bangladesh, The Philippines, Indonesia, Nepal), Europe (Moldova, The Netherlands), Middle East (Israel, Iran), North America (Canada), South America (Brazil), and Africa (South Africa) (Fig 2).

Fig 2. Geographic coverage and themes from the places.

Fig 2

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Major themes from the articles in this review are displayed in the figure as speech bubbles and are detailed below:

  1. Economic conditions: Poverty was identified as the primary reason for kidney selling among individuals from the Indian Subcontinent. Economic hardships and the need to alleviate poverty were consistently observed as drivers for engaging in kidney selling.

  2. Family and societal responsibilities: The articles highlighted the influence of family and societal norms on kidney selling practices. Fulfilling family demands and adhering to societal expectations were additional factors contributing to the decision to sell a kidney.

  3. Desperation to alleviate poverty: In some cases, families were driven to sell kidneys out of desperation to fulfil debt traps, and social obligations. The articles shed light on the dire circumstances faced by these individuals and the extreme measures taken to improve their economic situation.

  4. Gender roles: Gender roles within families played a role in kidney selling. Males sometimes resorted to selling their organs to acquire money for dowry, while females sold their organs due to the physical labor expected of men in their families.

  5. To purchase material goods: Although poverty was the primary driver, the articles also highlighted instances where individuals sold their kidneys to acquire luxury items such as motorbikes, phones, or to invest in additional land deterring away from supporting livelihood expenses.

  6. Role of brokers: The presence of brokers facilitating kidney selling was noted in countries such as Bangladesh, Nepal, India, and the Philippines. These intermediaries played a significant role in connecting potential sellers with potential buyers.

  7. Inadequate policies and transnationalism: The articles emphasized the existence of lax policies that were unable to effectively address the issue of transnational kidney trafficking. Particularly in countries with open borders, the shortcomings of policies in addressing the challenges of kidney selling and cross-border organ trade were evident.

These themes offer insights into the complex factors driving kidney selling and highlight the need for comprehensive policies and interventions to address this issue effectively. Despite the reference of Canada, no themes were derived from it and it was only referred in comparison to Bangladesh [30].

Comprehensiveness of reporting

The comprehensiveness of reporting varied across the studies, with the number of reported details ranging from 6 to 25 of the 32 items required by the COREQ (S2 Table). Five out of fifteen studies provided details on less than ten of the 32 items [7, 3033]. Eight studies reported the personal characteristics but there was no information about the relationship building of the researchers with the participants [2, 3, 5, 3437]. Only one reported relationship building with the participants [38]. One study that reported policy-level content analysis was not applicable to be assessed on the items of personal characteristics of the researchers, relationship building, and data collection. The majority of the studies described the themes, quotations, consistent data findings and data collection process but there were few who described in details. Only three articles described the reasons for non-participation [5, 36, 39], while only two stated when and where the field notes were taken [5, 40]. Meanwhile, only one explained number of data coders [40], coding tree [34] and feedback from the respondents in the findings [36].

Thematic analysis

A thematic analysis utilizing the lens of power relations and social inequities has been used to conduct this review [27]. Most of the included studies have assessed the reasons of the commercial kidney sellers at an individual and societal level. However, the intermediate and macro level assessment were limited. The main themes identified in the analysis are presented in S3 Table along with participant quotes and interpretation from the author from contributing studies (Fig 3).

Fig 3. Factors influencing kidney selling in Nepal.

Fig 3

This figure was developed by authors based on the findings of this review and describes a web of multi-layered factors operating at the micro, meso and macro level. (+) sign denotes a positive link, and (−) sign denotes a negative link where a change in influencing factor is in the same direction as the influenced element. (?) sign denotes unclear direction of relationship between two causal pairs. ‘||’indicates there is a delay where a change in influencing factor produces change in influenced element only after an interval of time. ‘R’ denotes a reinforcing loop and ‘B’ denotes balancing loop. To sum up, this figure shows the complexity in interaction between factors operating at the individual, micro-social, intermediate and macro level (green circles on left). For example, financial precarity (bottom left) is contributed by a lack of social welfare system and not having basic education for livelihood. Combination of these factors highlight individual’s vulnerability for kidney selling. In another example, global transplant medicine (top left) and dysregulation therein is contributed by policy voids/loopholes and is further added by physician’s attitude towards kidney patients and lackadaisical attitude to intervene against highly corrupt medical system. Development of this causal loop diagram (CLD) is based on an interactive process of literature review incorporating author’s normative vision added by peer feedback and consultations. Combining literature reviews and authors’ and experts’ reflection complemented the analysis process. For further information in CLDs, please follow the online resource from the John Hopkins University (https://www.coursera.org/learn/systems-thinking).

Individual level

At the individual level, poverty was the major reason for kidney selling, nonetheless, there were other reasons such as lack of information, desperation to alleviate poverty, debt, buying materials after kidney selling such as motorbikes, telephone and extra piece of land, desire for financial freedom, and altruism [2, 37, 39].

Many participants sold their kidneys due to lack of better economic conditions, such as jobs, basic facilities example, houses, and education for their children, as well as to repay their debt. It was carried out to sustain the basic family conditions. Some kidney sellers were vulnerable to sell their kidney because of their state of poverty, while others tended to broker kidney selling in the community to alleviate their level of poverty as well as to foster their economic condition. The study in Indian sub-continent showed poverty as the major contributor for kidney selling [2]. Participants described selling their kidneys as a way to earn a living, manage household income, and alleviate poverty. The studies from India and Pakistan showed the kidney selling to relieve their debt and escape away from the debt trap [5, 25]. However, none of the participants were able to achieve financial freedom. Conversely, they were rather drawn into additional debt cycle and had poor health conditions which further restricted them to earn a living [2, 5, 25, 36].

Participants also shared their willingness to donate kidneys; however, they were compensated with financial deals and other benefits such as child education. Some participants claimed that their deeds were just altruistic rooted in religious beliefs [22, 41].

Some of the studies have reported the discordance in respondents’ reasons for kidney selling. Even if respondents stated that they donated their kidneys to their relatives, and friends because of altruism, their inner motivations were conflicted with financial gains to compensate for employment, insecurity, and pressure to settle in urban areas which were found to be the major reasons for being drawn into kidney selling [42].

In a study conducted in the Philippines, participants compared the financial gains through kidney selling against the salary scales from jobs and also compared with how much money were made by other kidney sellers. Kidney sellers found justifications for kidney selling through such comparisons [35, 39].

Societal level

At the societal level, the studies also reported a broad communal trend of emulating each other rooted in social conformism. Conformism has been understood as a social dynamic reflecting the social cohesiveness, nonetheless, its role and impacts are also affected at an individual level. For instance, a person may act against the social norms of cohesiveness and conformity. The research carried out in Nepal highlighted the role of brokerage, while the study conducted in India highlighted the significance of social and family duties that contributed to gender roles. Furthermore, the investigations conducted in Pakistan and the Philippines emphasized the role of family obligations [2, 3, 37, 38].

Some of the studies from India showed that the male participants shared their kidney selling as their duty as they were the head of the household to fetch needs for the family. At the same time, females sold their kidneys to spare their husbands as they believed that the removal of kidney and surgical procedure could compromise their male partner’s ability to work. Women were also convinced to sell the kidneys as they were persuaded that they did not have to undertake physical responsibilities [2, 3].

Some of the participants were pressurized with the social responsibility of dowry. Indian society expected dowry during their daughter’s wedding, and males sold their kidneys to raise the funds for their daughter’s wedding. Some participants sold their kidneys to fulfill the needs of the family; as there was no social security, they had to maintain the requirements of the family [2].

Some of the participants sold their kidneys due to ignorance and unawareness regarding the function of kidneys. Brokers had special role in persuading and convincing community members to sell their kidneys by manipulating the information related to kidney and its role. For instance, brokers misinformed the potential sellers that two kidneys were unnecessary, and one kidney could perform all the required function. Brokers also offered examples of their neighbors on how they had sold their kidneys in the past and how their health has remained intact after selling the kidneys. Few brokers also lured the poor community members for the employment purpose and persuaded for the better future. Because of ignorance often in remote regions of Nepal, community members were found to be gullible leading to falling victim to the brokers [38].

Intermediate and macro level

At the intermediate and macro level, a few studies (India and the Philippines) reported how cities with advanced medical facilities functioned as facilitators and meeting point for rich and poor for kidney trade [2]. Other studies reported the lack of social welfare and the stringent policy from the government to protect the vulnerable people from selling their kidneys. However, there were no specific quotes presented for the discussion at intermediate and macro level [2, 5, 31, 34]. Study from Nepal reported the policy loopholes, the role of brokers, and unethical practices by the medical personnel as the main reasons for kidney selling [38].

Discussion

This review elucidates a multitude of factors that contribute to the selling of kidneys, which are entrenched at the individual, societal, and structural levels. Some of the salient drivers behind kidney selling encompassed impoverishment, inadequate opportunities for livelihood, subjugation by brokers, lack of awareness, deceit, familial obligations, poorly regulated medical practices, including advanced biotechnology.

In this study, qualitative evidence is synthesized using a CMA approach to explore the reasons for kidney selling. The origin of kidney selling are discussed in the literature extensively, and are often attributed to the social conditions of the individuals [2, 5, 2426, 36, 38]. Kidney selling has also been the result of short-term, impulsive decision making such as to buy ostentatious motorbikes and mobile phones in Nepal [26]. The selling of body parts to exchange with the ostentatious goods is perhaps an extreme form of transaction. The transaction of organs, blood to fulfill the daily needs are the grave situation [43]. Kidney selling was a source of earning money and obliged people to demonize poverty as a curse; hence many respondents in the articles attempted to sell their body and relieve their debt and overcome their poverty. Our review corroborates the findings of previous studies, which have identified economic factors as the primary drivers of kidney vending in India, Pakistan, Bangladesh, and Nepal [2426, 39, 42]. Furthermore, some of the studies also described vulnerability to alleviate poverty as the reason for sales [5, 31]. Breaking the debt cycle by selling kidney was other main compensatory mechanisms among poor people [2].

Context as a facilitator was highlighted by Cohen et al that reported how Chennai, India for instance was a confluence for rich and poor with advanced medical facilities to support kidney transplantation [2]. Chennai also was an example for broader structural contributor for kidney selling. The convergence of wealthy and urban impoverished individuals comprised areas where the poor individuals experienced comparable deficits [2]. As a compensation to poverty, the poor people felt motivated to sell their kidneys which was facilitated by Chennai’s advanced medical infrastructure for kidney transplantation. Increasing urbanization with poverty pockets offers a unique context for syndemics, that can foster both poverty associated diseases and life-style related diseases [21].

Study from Nepal and India identified cultural phenomena as the main reason for the kidney selling [2, 38]. The social conformism was found to be the main reasons for kidney selling in rural and remote regions in India, Nepal, and Pakistan [2, 5, 38]. In the identical research, familial gender roles were identified as the impetus for vended organs. Specifically, females were coerced into selling their kidneys by highlighting their domestic responsibilities, in contrast to males’ external employment. The enactment of customary practices like dowry in the context of a daughter’s nuptials, as well as the assumption of familial obligations, continue to exert significant societal influence among the populace of the Indian subcontinent. It is commonly acknowledged that such societal pressures are the main driving force behind the selling of kidneys [2, 38]. A study from Nepal also stated that the family responsibility their roles within the household as a reason for kidney selling [26, 38]. Similarly, gendered views on the role of kidney played critical role in kidney selling. In LMICs, a lot of High-Income Countries (HIC) patients approach for cheap kidneys. A study from Nigeria showed transplant tourism as an enabling factor for the kidney sales [34, 44].

At a macro level, the proliferation of biotechnology within LMICs has been identified as a significant factor contributing to the phenomenon of kidney selling. The rise of biomedicine has resulted in overuse and misuse of technology as is evident among the sellers who are unaware about the nature of kidney transplant and buyers who exploit the kidney transplant situation [34]. Furthermore, the dominance of biomedicine in responding to the healthcare requirements of individuals has resulted in unanticipated consequences for the people [34]. The increasing techno-ignorance among sub-population may have also contributed to increased submission to advanced medical procedures including the exploitations.

Individuals with end-stage renal diseases, who are genuinely in need of kidney transplants, are being deprived of easy access to donors, thereby necessitating the involvement of brokers and resulting in needless haggling and negotiations [10]. The concept of intermediation is of significant importance and has been duly noted in the scenario. Brokers often deceived donors from LMICs and negotiated with the recipients serving their commercial interests. Few studies also reported lack of adequate information, social conformism, gullibility rooted to ignorance as major contributors of kidney selling [2]. Furthermore, kidney selling was contributed chiefly by policy loopholes which were easily evadable, implying lack of good governance as the main reasons for kidney selling [38]. The easy documentation process (preparing false kinship) [45], open-border between India-Nepal, exploitation of documents required for bureaucratic purposes are easily forged and the policies are easily manipulated [35].

Although the reviewed studies primarily focused on the economic and cultural factors influencing kidney sales, few studies took into account the impact of policy and biotechnology. This suggests that while individual and societal factors play a role in kidney selling, other factors must also be considered. Therefore, a broader structural framework is necessary to fully understand the reasons behind kidney selling, particularly the policies and the international treaties regulating such policies across the countries that allow brokers to operate. Further research is needed to address this issue, especially given recent reports indicating that bio-technology and the global transplantation business are contributing to the growth of kidney trade [46]. Also, in recent years, kidney selling has multiplied globally because of the medical ‘mafias’ who have been able to exploit the policies systematically [47]. The mal-intentions of local brokers to facilitate the kidney selling has increased often expediated by the people who work at the higher echelons within the health care structure. For instance, health workers are often drawn into illegitimate kidney transplantation inadvertently mostly because of the completeness of medical documentations organized by brokers. In addition, the kidney sellers often naïve and under the circumstantial pressure stemming from their needs, thus can affect the authenticity of informed consent. An informed consent entails 1. providing adequate information by health care workers to participants; 2. participants understanding the offered information; and 3. participants are able to make a voluntary decision to proposed intervention. In case of kidney selling, participants may simply make decision under the influence of incentives (inducement), thus violating the ethical principles of informed consent [36, 48, 49]. The induced participation is exacerbated in scenarios where kidney sellers face structural barriers such as limited access to education, healthcare, legal assistance, and other relevant safeguards compromising the authentic informed consent [50]. Power differentials embedded in social inequalities also exacerbate the kidney selling whereby kidney sellers may feel coerced or pressured to consent without fully grasping the potential consequences and alternative options. Consequently, social inequality and power imbalances not only compromise the initial consent process but also have enduring effects on the well-being of kidney sellers [51]. Individuals from disadvantaged backgrounds often lack access to quality healthcare or post-operative support, heightening their susceptibility to complications and long-term health risks associated with kidney donation [52]. Addressing these disparities is imperative to uphold ethical standards and ensure the welfare of all individuals involved in the kidney trade.

Strengths and limitations

Use of CMA approach that entails analysis at individual, micro-social, intermediate and macro-social level highlighting the factors and their relationship affecting kidney selling is a comprehensive method. This review allowed us to understand the evidence at the individual and community level and revealed lack of research on policy, politics, governance, transnational policies and medical fraternity, ethical practices, and transnational laws through visualized prominent themes by geographical location (countries) which offers a distributive landscape of the kidney selling as opposed to only thematic presentations. Nonetheless, the impact of context and mechanisms underpinning specific phenomenon is beyond its scope and may require utilization of more theoretical approaches such as realist review. This review falls short in exploring ethical implications of kidney trafficking, such as how trafficking are imbued in poverty, inducement and vulnerability, thus calls for future studies exploring the ethical analysis around kidney selling and trafficking. Moreover, it is important to acknowledge limitations which relies on qualitative data means that it does not fully capture the quantitative aspects or the relative impact of various factors on kidney selling compared to others. These limitations underscore the importance of further research to address gaps in understanding and provide a more comprehensive analysis of the ethical dimensions of kidney trafficking.

Conclusion

Despite wide spectrum of reasons to sell kidneys around the globe, there were paucities in efforts towards its mitigation. Kidney selling is a complex phenomenon and is shaped by myriad factors and their interactions. Factors and social rationales identified in this study warrant their interpretation aligning with the local social, cultural and political context and thus cannot be inferred in isolation.

Supporting information

S1 Checklist. PRISMA-ScR checklist.

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S1 Table. Search words used.

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S2 Table. Comprehensiveness of reporting of included studies (COREQ).

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pgph.0003015.s003.docx (33.9KB, docx)
S3 Table. Summary of the included studies.

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S4 Table. Thematic findings from the studies.

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Data Availability

All relevant data are contained within the manuscript.

Funding Statement

The authors received no specific funding for this work.

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Decision Letter 0

Manish Barman

20 Nov 2023

PGPH-D-23-01387

Why do people sell their kidneys? A thematic synthesis of qualitative evidence

PLOS Global Public Health

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Reviewer #1: Title and abstract:

The title effectively conveys the paper's focus on kidney selling and aligns well with the paper's content, adhering to best practices for research paper titles. The abstract provides a clear and concise summary of the paper, offering a good overview of the paper's content in a structured manner.

Introduction:

Strengths:

The introduction effectively highlights the global significance of kidney selling, its supply and demand dynamics, and the role of policies and medical perspectives involving this phenomenon. Besides providing the context by emphasizing the importance of the issue of kidney selling, it clearly outlines the paper's research objectives and scope.

Areas for Improvement:

However, the introduction lacks emphasis on the ethical implications of this practice, whether legal or illegal. Addressing ethical concerns is vital in understanding the broader implications of kidney selling and its impact on individuals and communities.

Materials and Methods:

Strengths:

The manuscript exhibits a good methodological rigor in its Materials and Methods section. It adheres to ENTREQ guidelines, registers on PROSPERO for transparency, and clearly specifies databases and the search strategy. The delineation of publication dates is well-justified, and the inclusion and exclusion criteria, along with the study selection process, are clearly articulated. The use of COREQ for quality assessment reflects a systematic approach. Furthermore, the incorporation of critical medical anthropology (CMA) provides a valuable theoretical lens to understand the socio-cultural and economic dynamics of kidney selling. Overall, most of the methodological choices adopted seem adequate for the purpose of this study.

Areas for Improvement:

1. The section would benefit from a brief explanation of the reasons for choosing the specific databases and search terms.

2. There is a mismatch between the keywords provided in the body text and the supplementary table 4. For example, “commerce” (not “deal”) is included in the PubMed search, yet not included in the other databases search. If there is a reason for this choice, this should be mentioned in the manuscript.

3. It is not clear how the Google Scholar search was conducted. This should be better detailed.

4. There is a duplicated word (“studies”) on line 127 that should be corrected.

5. While the description of data extraction and quality assessment is clear, more detail regarding potential discrepancies in study classification or quality assessment between the two reviewers should be provided. Elaboration on how these discrepancies were resolved would enhance transparency and robustness.

6. On supplementary table 1, the reporting lacks uniformity. For instance, for most studies, the authors mention only countries, while in study 2, they also included cities. The reporting of dates should also follow a pattern.

7. The manuscript should adopt same wording for core concepts, such as “social inequality” and power differentials (line 107) or power disparities (line 166).

8. Moreover, the manuscript would gain clarity if it clearly delimitates the core concepts adopted by this study, particularly expressing which definitions were adopted and why.

Results:

Strengths:

The Results section is well-organized, presenting findings from the selected studies in a clear and structured manner. The section effectively summarizes the key themes and factors influencing kidney selling based on the selected studies. Findings are supported by quotes from participants, enhancing the credibility of the results. Geographic variability is clearly highlighted though the map, providing a facilitated view of the issue on a global scale. The use of a causal loop diagram (CLD) in Figure 3 offers a visual representation of the complex factors influencing kidney selling and how they are interrelated, enhancing the clarity of the results.

Areas for Improvement:

1. Providing a brief summary or introductory paragraph at the beginning of the "Results" section could offer readers an overview of the key findings and their significance.

2. Consider relocating the description of CLD development to the "Materials and Methods" section to improve the flow and alignment with the study's methodology.

3. The manuscript would benefit from a cohesive visual identity. For instance, using a consistent color palette for diagrams and figures could enhance the overall presentation. The CLD currently employs contrasting colors and a small font size, which might impede readers in easily grasping the intended message.

4. To enhance open science practices in this manuscript, the authors might consider providing access to their literature records database stored in EndNote. This would improve transparency and support validation, replication, reanalysis, and study reproducibility.

5. Please note that after page 8, the formatting of page numbers and line numbers become inconsistent. Consider correcting it to facilitate further reviews.

Discussion and Conclusion:

Strengths:

The "Discussion" section effectively draw upon the study results to analyze the multifaceted factors influencing kidney selling, providing a comprehensive understanding of this complex issue. The discussion includes relevant contextual information about kidney selling, particularly within low- and middle-income countries, and adequately emphasizes the need for a more comprehensive approach to understanding and addressing this phenomenon. The conclusion provides a concise summary, effectively highlighting the complex nature of kidney selling.

Areas for Improvement:

1. Consider aligning the discussion more clearly with the concepts presented in the research question in the introduction section. While the authors addressed the aspect of "social inequality" in kidney selling, the discussion of "power differentials" appears to be less prominent or not clearly articulated. Ensuring a stronger link between these concepts can strengthen the overall coherence of the analysis and guarantee better robustness to the study.

2. While not the main research question, the "Discussion" section could benefit from greater emphasis on the ethical implications of kidney selling. Exploring ethical aspects, such as exploitation, informed consent, and the well-being of kidney sellers, would provide a more comprehensive analysis, especially regarding how these ethical considerations relate to "social inequality" and "power differentials," which are the central research focus.

3. To enhance the discussion, consider examining the study results while taking into account the inherent biases in the analyzed studies. This approach would add depth to the interpretation of findings and acknowledge potential limitations.

Final consideration: to ensure transparency to this process, please note that I used ChatGPT-3.5 for proofreading my review, but I am the sole author of the content of this peer review.

Reviewer #2: The tools and materials used in the data search, extraction, synthesis and analysis are quite relevant and of good standard that gives a clear picture of the designs, analysis, and findings from the literatures that were explored. Categorization of the analysis into geographical variation was also a very good approach as this was able to clearly point out different perspectives, based on different societal context, of why people sell their kidneys. Hence, I recommended this paper to be published.

Reviewer #3: I greatly enjoyed reading the manuscript, which sheds light on a relevant public health issue that requires being properly addressed by authorities worldwide. Appendices are very rich in information. I am attaching detailed review in PDF.

Reviewer #4: I appreciate the effort made by the authors team.

Author had followed all standard scientific methods and study submitted inline with the prospero protocol. However, the topic looks very simple and repetation of well known research question.

Some suggestion,

1.Introduction need little more clarity and citation in line number 57 & 72

2. Author had failed to establish the concepts related to power disparities and social inequalities, political and sociocultural aspects role in kidney selling-Introduction

3.Concept of stigma was unclear-63 line number

4. Repeated word line-127

5. What is the difference between line number 205-207 & 211-213

6.Supplementary-3, is not appropriately reflected in result section

Reviewer #5: Major issues

1) The introduction lacks a clear motivation for the topic, a review of the literature, and the added value of this particular paper. Furthermore, the introduction is sometimes repetitive and does not follow a clear line of argumentation, but often drifts into background description. I.e.

a. It is not clear how big the issue is; how does it vary between countries? Further, it would also be useful to provide the reader with some figures.

b. It is not clear what the evidence is on legal and illegal kidney selling; how do they differ? Furthermore, what is the difference between illegal kidney selling with and without consent?

c. As the paper states that the majority of transplants in LMICs come from illegal trafficking, it would be beneficial to have more emphasis on how this was done.

d. The first and second paragraphs are repetitive. Overall, the introduction would benefit from a clearer line of argumentation.

e. The background description of e.g., transplantation techniques, health consequences, and legal framework should be kept to a minimum; but should be expanded in an additional background/context section.

f. It is not very clear what the contribution of the paper is. The following two sentences in the last paragraph of the introduction are confusing because it is not explained why this is the scope in particular: “In this review, we use a critical approach to explore social inequality and power differentials as the primary contributors of health and health care. This review also analyzes the relationship between health status at an individual and societal level (16).”

2) The paper would benefit from a clearer explanation of study selection decisions and a discussion of the consequences of selection:

a. Only studies published after 1987 are included in the sample, because the WHO declared organ selling illegal in 1987. The authors should make this clear in the introduction and explain how this affects their results.

b. The selection of studies excludes three quantitative studies because they did not provide new evidence. As these studies are based on a survey of kidney sellers, the authors' argument does not seem obvious. The authors should explain in more detail why they did not provide new evidence and why they cannot contribute to the results.

3) It is not clear which results are based on how many articles and from which countries. It would be beneficial to provide more detailed information. I.e.,

a. In the list of major themes of the articles, it would be beneficial to indicate how many and which countries address these themes. Furthermore, sometimes country examples are mentioned (e.g., themes 1. And 6.) and sometimes not, which is not transparent for the reader.

b. In the discussion of the individual level and societal levels, mainly studies from the Asia continent are mentioned. However, Figure 1, shows that studies from South America, Europe and Africa are also evaluated. It would be beneficial to have a transparent discussion of the results to avoid a bias of over-reporting Asian results.

c. It is not clear to the reader why Figure 3 only looks at factors influencing kidney selling in Nepal. How would it be different in other countries based on the reviewed papers? Additionally, the figure is not embedded in the text. It is highly recommended to explain how this figure was generated (based on what data), what it can show, and what its limitations are.

4) The overall interpretation and reporting of the results throughout the paper is often not inconsistent and lacks explanation. They should be coherent, well structured and well explained. I.e.,

a. The abstract states that the paper shows various similarities across different geographical regions, but the authors only mention countries on the Asian continent rather than comparing them with the other American, European and African countries.

b. The results in the abstract do not summarise well the overall results of the paper, e.g. they do not give insights into the meso and micro level, they mention illiteracy as a micro factor which is not mentioned at all in the rest of the paper.

c. Usually, reference is made to the individual and societal levels. However, the discussion also refers to the structural level, which was not discussed before.

d. As concluded in the "Thematic Analysis" section, the assessment of the intermediate and macro levels was limited. I would therefore recommend that it be stated less prominently that the analysis provides insight into the intermediate and macro-social levels.

e. It would be more transparent if the authors also discussed the limitation of the sample in the sense that only a few countries were observed and that the mainly Asian countries were mentioned in the results and discussion section.

Minor issues

1) The figures should be in the order in which they are presented in the text. They should also be made more readable.

2) It would be useful for the reader to see in Supplementary Table 1 the number of observations/interviews for each of the studies.

3) There are several typographical errors.

Reviewer #6: Overall, the paper is well-written and easy to follow, and the aims are well-formulated and clearly communicated. However, I have some concerns about some sections as well as some other less substantial questions and comments. My comments are ordered in two sections below: Major comments and minor comments.

The major comments are specifically for the method and result sections which should be reconsidered. Although studies from all over the world have been included in the systematic review, most of the discussion/explanations are based on the Asian countries only.

Also, there are lots of formatting issues which should be corrected.

Reviewer #7: This is a very interesting systematic review (qualitative) in the field of public health. It describes why kidney trade occurs and how it is also affecting the health of most people in developing countries. The manuscript is well-written showing empirical evidence.

Authors should address these attached minor issues before the editor-in-chief will accept this manuscript. The Reviewer's comments are attached.

Reviewer #8: The paper is very interesting and has wonderful insights. It is well written clear and easy to understand. The methodological approach is very well explained and is easily replicable in an objective manner.

Reviewer #9: Overall Comment: The authors have systematically reviewed published qualitative studies on motivators and facilitators of Kidney selling globally. This important study synthesizes the factors that aggravate kidney selling and has the potential for policy reform. I have provided a few comments. The authors may want to consider them before publication.

Abstract: In the Result section, micro-level factors were presented only; however, the Conclusion section includes meso, & macro-level factors. I suggest including some meso and macro factors in the Results of the Abstract as well.

Introduction: The Last sentence of 1st paragraph (Line no. 61-63, Page.3) fits better in line no. 93 (Page.4).

Materials and Methods: The authors should explain more about ENTREQ (Line no.111, Page.4) as they have done for the COREQ. It is unclear how those two were utilized in this study, especially how ENTREQ differed from COREQ.

Data synthesis and analysis: The sentence starting with "It critically examines the ways in which power, ..........."(Line no. 77-79 in Page.6 & Line no. 180-181 in Page.7) doesn't fit much with the research topic. The topic is Kidney selling, but this paragraph only talks about healthcare access and policy things. So, I suggest to edit this sentence.

Results: In the 7th major theme, the word lax policies is not clear to me. What is it? Just check whether this is a typo error.

Results: Thematic analysis: The 1st sentence (Line no.16-17, Page.2; Don't confuse, the line no. & page no. are not sequential. So, check line no. of Result section) is about methods which was already reported in the Methods section. Hence, for me, it is not necessary to rewrite here. After the last sentence, authors need to add some text to connect with the following subheadings so that readers will understand that "Individual level" is the subheading of results from the Thematic analysis.

Results: Societal Level: Capitalization of 'L' in level is not consistent with Individual level. Please make uniform capitalization.

In Figure 3, the description of the photo is long. I am confused about whether the paragraph is an interpretation or description of the photo. It looks like the authors wrote everything in the caption. If the paragraph is about interpretation, please write in a paragraph rather than a caption.

Reference: The short form of the journal name is inconsistent. Journal names in some references were shortened, and the majority were kept as it is. I suggest authors make a consistent referencing style. Furthermore, the Nepali name in reference no.43 should be standardized. Please check how to cite references in a foreign language in the PLOSGP style and correct it.

Thank you.

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PLOS Glob Public Health. doi: 10.1371/journal.pgph.0003015.r003

Decision Letter 1

Manish Barman

22 Feb 2024

Why do people sell their kidneys? A thematic synthesis of qualitative evidence

PGPH-D-23-01387R1

Dear Mr Shrestha,

We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript 'Why do people sell their kidneys? A thematic synthesis of qualitative evidence' has been provisionally accepted for publication in PLOS Global Public Health.

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After extensively going through the reviewers’ comments, I am of the opinion that the authors have now incorporated the much-required changes/ suggestions in their revised manuscript. Authors have duly followed the guidelines of ENTREQ for this qualitative systematic review and the protocol is duly registered in the PROSPERO database (CRD42020197541). Google scholar search has been done additionally to not miss any important grey literature. Choosing search terms and important databases selection is adequate and there is no further need for any explanations by the authors. Data extraction and the quality is explicitly clear and does not need to be addressed any further.

Further recommendations made by one of the reviewer using terms as - establishing stronger links-" greater emphasis"- are quite subjective terms and difficult to be incorporated by any writer/ author. The authors have emphasized their observations with reasonable evidence. In my view the authors have adequately addressed all the major concerns and meticulously tabulated the changes for clarity.

The revised script has been recommended as ACCEPT by four reviewers except one.

I would also recommend acceptance and publication of the manuscript.

Reviewer Comments (if any, and for reference):

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Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #7: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #8: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #9: All comments have been addressed

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2. Does this manuscript meet PLOS Global Public Health’s publication criteria? Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe methodologically and ethically rigorous research with conclusions that are appropriately drawn based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #7: Yes

Reviewer #8: (No Response)

Reviewer #9: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: N/A

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #7: Yes

Reviewer #8: (No Response)

Reviewer #9: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #7: Yes

Reviewer #8: (No Response)

Reviewer #9: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #7: Yes

Reviewer #8: (No Response)

Reviewer #9: Yes

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6. Review Comments to the Author

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Reviewer #1: Dear authors,

I am glad that you decided to continue the improvement of your article since this is a very important topic and you conducted a commendable research study that should indeed be published. I noticed an improvement based on other reviewer's comments and I appreciate it. Unfortunately, I have not noticed you addressing my comments from the previous round. I understand that you may disagree with my comments, but they need to be addressed so you can also give me the opportunity to reflect on my decision and comments. Therefore, I copy and paste my comments from the previous round below and I highlight the ones which were already corrected by you and the ones that were not yet addressed.

Introduction: the introduction lacks emphasis on the ethical implications of this practice, whether legal or illegal. Addressing ethical concerns is vital in understanding the broader implications of kidney selling and its impact on individuals and communities. (nicely included in paragraph lines 91-110).

Materials and Methods:

1. The section would benefit from a brief explanation of the reasons for choosing the specific databases and search terms. (NOT addressed.)

2. There is a mismatch between the keywords provided in the body text and the supplementary table 4. For example, “commerce” (not “deal”) is included in the PubMed search, yet not included in the other databases search. If there is a reason for this choice, this should be mentioned in the manuscript. (NOT addressed.)

3. It is not clear how the Google Scholar search was conducted. This should be better detailed. (NOT addressed.)

4. There is a duplicated word (“studies”) on line 127 that should be corrected. (OK, corrected.)

5. While the description of data extraction and quality assessment is clear, more detail regarding potential discrepancies in study classification or quality assessment between the two reviewers should be provided. Elaboration on how these discrepancies were resolved would enhance transparency and robustness. (NOT addressed.)

6. On supplementary table 1, the reporting lacks uniformity. For instance, for most studies, the authors mention only countries, while in study 2, they also included cities. The reporting of dates should also follow a pattern. (NOT addressed. Also, something changed and now there is a conflict of naming, e.g., supplementary table 3.docx is named Supplementary table 1 within the file text.)

7. The manuscript should adopt same wording for core concepts, such as “social inequality” and power differentials (line 107) or power disparities (line 166). (NOT addressed.)

8. Moreover, the manuscript would gain clarity if it clearly delimitates the core concepts adopted by this study, particularly expressing which definitions were adopted and why. (NOT addressed.

Discussion and Conclusion:

1. Consider aligning the discussion more clearly with the concepts presented in the research question in the introduction section. While the authors addressed the aspect of "social inequality" in kidney selling, the discussion of "power differentials" appears to be less prominent or not clearly articulated. Ensuring a stronger link between these concepts can strengthen the overall coherence of the analysis and guarantee better robustness to the study. (NOT addressed.)

2. While not the main research question, the "Discussion" section could benefit from greater emphasis on the ethical implications of kidney selling. Exploring ethical aspects, such as exploitation, informed consent, and the well-being of kidney sellers, would provide a more comprehensive analysis, especially regarding how these ethical considerations relate to "social inequality" and "power differentials," which are the central research focus. (NOT addressed. Included in the introduction, but not recalled for reflection in the Discussion section.)

3. To enhance the discussion, consider examining the study results while taking into account the inherent biases in the analyzed studies. This approach would add depth to the interpretation of findings and acknowledge potential limitations. (NOT addressed.)

Reviewer #2: (No Response)

Reviewer #7: The authors have appropriately addressed all the comments.

Reviewer #8: All the comments have been addressed. I have no other issues with the revised version of the paper.

Reviewer #9: Majority of issues were addressed by authors. Thank you very much, and good luck with the publication.

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: Yes: Buba Darboe

Reviewer #7: Yes: Silas Adjei-Gyamfi

Reviewer #8: No

Reviewer #9: No

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Associated Data

    This section collects any data citations, data availability statements, or supplementary materials included in this article.

    Supplementary Materials

    S1 Checklist. PRISMA-ScR checklist.

    (PDF)

    pgph.0003015.s001.pdf (291.7KB, pdf)
    S1 Table. Search words used.

    (DOCX)

    pgph.0003015.s002.docx (13.3KB, docx)
    S2 Table. Comprehensiveness of reporting of included studies (COREQ).

    (DOCX)

    pgph.0003015.s003.docx (33.9KB, docx)
    S3 Table. Summary of the included studies.

    (DOCX)

    pgph.0003015.s004.docx (16.3KB, docx)
    S4 Table. Thematic findings from the studies.

    (DOCX)

    pgph.0003015.s005.docx (20.7KB, docx)
    Attachment

    Submitted filename: review.pdf

    pgph.0003015.s006.pdf (73KB, pdf)
    Attachment

    Submitted filename: Manuscript Review PGPH-D-23-01387.docx

    pgph.0003015.s007.docx (20.8KB, docx)
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    Submitted filename: Reviewers comments_PGPH.docx

    pgph.0003015.s008.docx (15.9KB, docx)
    Attachment

    Submitted filename: Response to reviewers.docx

    pgph.0003015.s009.docx (42.6KB, docx)

    Data Availability Statement

    All relevant data are contained within the manuscript.


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