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. 2024 Apr 4;19(4):e0297638. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0297638

Occupational exposures among women beedi workers in Mysore District, India: A mixed-methods study protocol

Priyanka Ravi 1,*, Kiranmayee Muralidhar 2,3, Purnima Madhivanan 1,2, Amanda M Wilson 4, Frank A von Hippel 4, Amina Salamova 5, Eva Moya 6, Lynn B Gerald 7
Editor: Adekunle Akeem Bakare8
PMCID: PMC10994336  PMID: 38573933

Abstract

Beedi is the most common smoking form of tobacco used in India. The rolling of beedis is performed primarily by women in settings that lack occupational safeguards. The aims of this protocol are to establish methods for the study of occupational exposures among women beedi workers and their experiences and challenges working with unburnt tobacco. This protocol employs a convergent parallel mixed-methods approach. Qualitatively, we plan to explore the experiences and challenges faced by women beedi workers using photovoice, a community based participatory method. Occupational exposures to pesticides will be assessed through the use of silicone wristbands worn for seven days by workers, and exposure to toxic metals and metalloids will be assessed in dust samples collected in the homes of workers. The outcomes will be analyzed to form policy recommendations to improve the occupational health of women beedi workers.

Introduction

A hand-rolled tobacco cigarette in India and Bangladesh is called a beedi, whereas in Indonesia it is referred to as kretek [13]. The process of making beedis includes collecting tendu leaves to serve as the wrapper and then rolling the tobacco within them. The beedis are then sorted, labelled, and packaged. Most of the beedi workers are women [4]. In India, the number of beedi workers employed in the registered sector varied from 0.4 million in 2000–2001 and 2005–2006 to 0.3 million in 2010–2011 [5]. The unregistered sector numbers varied from 3.1 million workers in 2000–2001 to 4.1 million workers in 2005–2006 and 2.9 million workers in 2010–2011 [5]. In Bangladesh, the Bureau of Statistics estimated the number of beedi workers at 266,818, while the tobacco industry claimed to employ 2.5 million workers [3]. In Indonesia, the kretek manufacturing industry employed over 260,000 workers in 2006 [2]. In India, men are primarily employed in the factory system of the tobacco industry, whereas 90% of women employees work in the home-based system of beedi making [6]. The working conditions in home-based beedi rolling typically include conditions such as poor lighting, poor ventilation, and overcrowding [7]. Beedi workers earn considerably less income compared to workers in other manufacturing industries, further subjecting them to income inequality [5].

Many types of pesticides are used in tobacco farming, including some containing heavy metals and others containing toxic compounds such as organophosphates; workers are exposed to these during the beedi rolling process [8]. Pesticides used in tobacco fields are associated with numerous adverse health outcomes. For example, epigenetic alterations were reported in tobacco farmers occupationally exposed to mixtures of pesticides [9]. Beedi rollers face the occupational hazards of exposure to both pesticides and tobacco [10].

Occupational exposure to tobacco dust among women beedi workers in Mangalore, India was associated with risk of developing cervical cancer [11]. Women beedi workers in Telangana, India were found to have low literacy and poor awareness of occupational health hazards and hygienic practices [4]. Workers engaged in tobacco cultivation often suffer from an occupational illness known as “green tobacco sickness” (GTS), found to be caused by the absorption of nicotine from wet tobacco plants [12]. Beedi rolling during pregnancy reduces cord blood leptin levels independent of birthweight and induces reduced size for gestational age [13]. Low birth weight babies, treatment for infertility, and premature menopause were also reported by women working in beedi industry [7]. Women beedi workers in Patna, India were found to have low haemoglobin, neutrophils, and monocytes, and increased lymphocytes and eosinophils as compared to non-beedi workers [14].

Silicone wristbands serve as sensitive passive samplers to environmental exposures to pesticides [15, 16]. Some pesticides, including organophosphates and pyrethroids, are present in house dust near areas of use [17, 18]. Vacuum sampling is an effective means to collect residential dust samples to detect pesticides and toxic metals and metalloids [19].

Published studies on the occupational health of beedi workers are quantitative in nature and have not considered the lived experiences of women working in this industry that can be assessed using qualitative research. Most past research has not adequately involved participants and considered occupational challenges from a theoretical perspective. Mixed methods approaches are needed to incorporate exposure data with information on lived experiences of women beedi workers in order to improve working conditions and inform effective policy. The purposes of this protocol are to establish methods for the study of occupational exposures among women beedi workers and their experiences and challenges working with unburnt tobacco.

Aim 1: Explore the experiences and challenges faced by women beedi workers in Mysore, India using photovoice, a community based participatory method. Twenty participants will be recruited for the photovoice discussion.

Aim 2: Determine the occupational exposures among women beedi workers in Mysore, India. Participants will include 30 women beedi works and 30 age and socioeconomic status matched non-beedi workers. Occupational exposures will be estimated via analysis of a silicone wristband worn for seven days during working hours. In addition, dust samples will be collected at the study participants’ homes to estimate pesticide exposure in the households.

Methodology

A complex mixed method participatory design [20] with community-based participatory research (CBPR) methods such as photovoice will provide the necessary framework for the proposed study. CBPR incorporates culturally relevant research models that address issues of importance to the community. Photovoice is a CBPR method that can be used to foster trust and capacity building for community led solutions to environmental and health related issues [21]. As an emerging CBPR methodology, photovoice promotes social action by equipping communities to participate in the identification and analysis of local problems [22]. The photovoice method is premised on three core goals of the research process [23]: (1) enable people to record and reflect on their community’s strengths and concerns, (2) promote critical dialogue and knowledge about important issues through large and small group discussions of photographs, and (3) reach policy makers. In addition to employing photovoice, we will use silicone wristbands and collect dust samples from homes to examine pesticide and toxic metal exposures, respectively, among women working in beedi rolling industry.

A convergent parallel core design will be used, which is a type of study in which qualitative and quantitative data are collected in parallel, analyzed separately, and then merged [20]. The quantitative data will be used to assess exposures to pesticides and toxic metals derived from tobacco dust processed in the homes of participants. The qualitative data will explore the experiences and challenges faced by the women beedi workers handling unburnt tobacco. The combined datasets will enhance insights on occupational health concerns of women beedi workers and facilitate the development of improved policies.

Approach

A mixed methods parallel core design [20] (Fig 1) will be used to determine the occupational exposures among women beedi workers, and their experiences and challenges working with unburnt tobacco. The qualitative and quantitative data will be collected in parallel, analyzed separately, and then merged. Mysore District, Karnataka, India was chosen as the study site because Mysore has a large beedi worker community [24, 25]. The research will be facilitated by the Public Health Research Institute of India (PHRII), a non-profit organization in Mysore. PHRII has provided access to health services for women in Mysore since 2010. PHRII will assist in participant recruitment as they are known to the population of interest.

Fig 1. Mixed methods parallel core design.

Fig 1

Qualitative phase

Participants will be recruited from the beedi worker community in Mysore District. A maximum of 20 study participants will be enrolled in the study for photovoice. Two photovoice discussions will be conducted with ten individuals in each group. Inclusion criteria will be women beedi workers who are 18 years and above (one woman per household), the ability to write in either Kannada or English, the ability to text and take photos on a mobile phone or digital camera, willingness to undergo the informed consent process, and willingness to be audio-recorded during the photovoice discussion sessions. Exclusion criteria will be inability to speak Kannada or English, currently pregnant, and unwillingness to consent to participate in the study.

A representative from PHRII will first consult with community leaders to obtain permission to carry out the project in their community. Then a PHRII staff member will reach out to the community health workers (CHW) in these communities where we propose to recruit participants. The CHW living in these communities are well connected to the residents and therefore their assistance will facilitate recruitment. A flyer about the study will also be distributed through the CHW during their regular house visits. Furthermore, PHRII has conducted several studies in these communities, and has established relationships with residents. If any potential participant expresses interest to the CHW, she will be referred to the PHRII study recruiter. The study recruiter will then assess eligibility and if the woman is eligible, she will be asked to undergo the informed consent process. The informed consent form will be read aloud to the potential participants in Kannada, and the women will be encouraged to ask questions or express any doubts about the study before they are invited to sign the informed consent form.

The study will be conducted at the PHRII conference room. The photovoice discussions will be conducted outside of regular working hours, when it is convenient for the participants to actively engage and participate in the process. The photovoice participants will be reimbursed in local currency at the equivalent of USD$21 per person for their time and effort in all the photovoice sessions.

Information will be collected on demographic details, occupational history, and occupational safety practices including handwashing and wearing gloves and masks. The photovoice will be conducted over a period of four weeks (Table 1). In the first week, a one-day training on skills needed to implement photovoice will be provided for the 20 participating beedi workers. Training topics will include introduction to photovoice, principles and ethics of photography, photo consent and safety, field practice using digital cameras, and group discussion and reflection about the photovoice process and outcomes. The first component of photovoice will involve reaching consensus on the research topic with the collaborating community. This initial phase is a crucial first step to facilitate meaningful partnerships and engagement and counter power imbalances within the team [21]. The topics for photovoice will be decided after discussing with the participants during the training session. Participants will then be asked to take pictures of what for them best represents occupational health challenges in their workplace. Photos will be taken over seven days after which the participants will transfer the photos to the research team.

Table 1. Overview of photovoice timeline and activities.
Week Activity
Week 1 Photovoice Training
 • Introduction to photovoice and project goals
 • Photographic techniques
 • Confidentiality and ethics
Week 2 Photo collection
 • Each participant will collect five occupational health related theme photos and share them with research staff
Discussion 1
 • SHOWeD form completion
 • Participant presentations
 • Group discussion
Week 3 Photo collection
 • Each participant will collect five occupational health related theme photos and share them with research staff
Discussion 1
 • SHOWeD form completion
 • Participant presentations
 • Group discussion
Week 4 Photo collection
 • Each participant will collect five occupational health related theme photos and share them with research staff
Discussion 1
 • SHOWeD form completion
 • Participant presentations
 • Group discussion
Wrap-up and celebration
 • Comprehensive slideshow with all photos and final narratives will be shared with the group
 • Evaluation survey

In weeks two, three, and four participants will first share the pictures with the research team, participants will first complete a SHOWeD [26] form and then discuss their two chosen photographs to elicit in-depth discussion and narration. SHOWeD form includes photo discussion prompts questions such as: ‘What do you see?’, ‘What is really happening?’, ‘How does this relate to our life?’, ‘Why does this situation, concern, or strength exist?’, What can we do to educate others about this situation, concern, or strength?’, and What can we do about it’ [26]. Discussion sessions will begin with individual presentations of the photographs. Participants will be asked to explain the background of the picture, how it relates to the topic, and what it means for them. The facilitator will promote the group discussion by prompting: 1) strengths and weaknesses; 2) similarities and differences; and 3) identified and connected themes. During the final week, participants will be asked to vote on the pictures to be selected for the photo exhibition, and participants will be asked to complete a survey to reflect on the most and least preferred aspects of the project in Kannada language (Table 1).

Participants and facilitators will maintain contact between meetings via a WhatsApp group message thread or phone calls. In the WhatsApp group, facilitators will remind participants about meetings and check in mid-week to ask about progress with photo collection. Participants will be encouraged to actively engage in the group chat, and share health challenges at their workplace.

Later, a photovoice exhibition will be arranged within the communities. The community leaders, community members, and policy makers will be invited to view the photos. This will help to raise awareness of the challenges faced by beedi workers.

Data analysis

An inductive approach will be used to code the data, which will be analyzed using Atlas.Ti 22 software [27]. We will use a constructivist grounded theory approach [28] and SHOWeD [23] checklist for the data analysis [29]. The codes will be generated and modified to create the themes. The researchers will maintain neutrality to ensure the situations are not intentionally influenced or manipulated.

Quantitative phase

This is a pilot study to measure the pesticide and toxic metal exposures among beedi workers as compared with non-beedi workers. The study participants will include 20 women beedi workers involved in the qualitative study, an additional 10 beedi workers not involved in photovoice, and 30 non-beedi workers from the same community involved in a different occupation other than tobacco farming or beedi rolling. The participants will be matched by age and socioeconomic status. Inclusion criteria for beedi workers will be participants who are current beedi workers 18 years or older, willing to wear a silicone wristband for seven days, and allowing the collection of dust samples from their homes. Inclusion criteria for non-beedi workers from the same community will be women involved in any other home-based work (including unemployed), not previously involved in beedi rolling, willing to wear a silicone wristband for seven days, and allowing the collection of dust samples from their homes. Exclusion criteria for beedi and non-beedi workers will be women who are currently pregnant or not willing to provide written informed consent. All the participants will be reimbursed in local currency the equivalent of USD$4 for their time and effort.

Silicone wristbands

We will use forty low-cost silicone wristbands as non-invasive passive samplers to assess cumulative seven-day exposures to pesticide residues among randomly selected beedi and non-beedi workers (n = 20 in each group). Participants will be provided with a pre-cleaned silicone wristband wrapped in foil and sealed in a Ziplock bag [30]. Participants will wear the silicone wristbands on their dominant hand continuously for seven days. After seven days, PHRII team members will collect the wristbands, wrap them in foil, seal in a Ziplock bag, and store them in a -20°C freezer. The silicone wristbands will be shipped to Emory University for analysis of organochlorine pesticides.

Dust samples

We will collect dust samples from the homes of all 60 participants. All the samples will be collected from entirety of the living room and bedroom and the dimensions of the room will be measured. The dust sample will be collected over a 40 minute sampling period in each home with a vacuum outfitted with dust collection paper bags. The bags containing dust samples will be wrapped in foil and stored in a Ziplock bag at -20°C. Each dust sample will be labelled with sampling location and date. The dust samples will be shipped to the University of Arizona for quantification of toxic metals.

Data analysis

We will estimate the exposure to organochlorine pesticides from the silicone wristbands and to toxic metals from the dust samples. We will compare exposures between beedi and non-beedi rolling participants using a variety of parametric and non-parametric approaches, depending upon characteristics of the data. The quantitative and qualitative study findings will be compared in order to inform effective policies to protect the health of women beedi workers. At the end of the study, we will go back to the community and share the study results with the participants and community leaders.

Limitations

The non-beedi workers (control group) could experience different environmental exposures to pesticides and toxic metals, which could bias our study findings. We will attempt to minimize bias by matching age and socioeconomic status. The participants will be asked to wear the silicone wristbands for seven continuous days. We will try to minimize non-compliance by checking in with participants during the seven-day period. We will collect dust samples at one point in time so if the participant had cleaned the house recently then the dust would represent an underestimation of metal exposures in the home; therefore, we will ask participants not to clean the house one day prior to the dust sample collection.

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Data Availability

No datasets were generated or analysed during the current study. All relevant data from this study will be made available upon study completion.

Funding Statement

NIOSH ERC Pilot Project Research Training (PPRT) Program Grant, UCLA and Deans Dissertation Grant, University of Arizona.

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Reviewer #1: a) Line 71&73: as the study is proposed in a subnational unit of India; Bangladesh, and Indonesia, data seems unconnected in this context. In case you still feel it is needed, mention why these two countries are taken as references.

b) Line 90: ‘Occupational exposure to tobacco dust among women beedi workers in Mangalore, Karnataka’.

Kindly mention the country; international readers may be unable to locate the place. The same applies to Telangana (92) and Patna, Bihar (100). Alternatively, you can also mention all studies together saying, ‘studies conducted in India…’ and then mention all three studies one by one in the existing format.

c) 127: instead of explaining the goals of the photovoice method, it is better to explain the photovoice method and how the study is conducted using it. Although you have mentioned it under ‘Approach’ in detail, it is unclear for a first-time reader what exactly photovoice is.

d) You have not stated why Mysore is selected for the study.

All the best.

Reviewer #2: 1.The sample size is relatively small, and it might be better to have the same sample size among all groups.

2. Beedi workers working duration may differ for each person. It is preferable to select participants with similar work experience.

3. Mentioning the participants' marital status for the specific age group could be more suitable. If married, please mention whether pregnant ladies are included or not in the study group.

4. You could provide more details about the control group and include them in the methodology.

5. In inclusion criteria participants age from 18 to particular age will be more suitable for the study

Reviewer #3: The manuscript is strictly on protocol and essentially on the use of photovoice. Protocol cannot be published in isolation unless the outcomes of the study are included. Much as the protocol will achieve the set objectives, the results of the protocol should be included. The references should also be current.

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


2 Jan 2024

14th December 2023

Tucson, USA

Dear Dr. Adekunle Akeem Bakare,

Thank you for your thoughtful review of our manuscript PONE-D-23-17775, and for the helpful comments of the three reviewers. I sincerely appreciate and thank you all for taking your valuable time to help us to substantially improve the paper. We have made substantial edits to the entire manuscript, as shown in the revised version with changes highlighted. Below please find our responses to the reviewers' specific comments.

Reviewer #1

Comments Reply

a) Line 71&73: as the study is proposed in a subnational unit of India; Bangladesh, and Indonesia, data seems unconnected in this context. In case you still feel it is needed, mention why these two countries are taken as references.

We referred to rolled tobacco workers in Bangladesh and Indonesia because we would like to highlight that occupational tobacco exposure is not only a problem in India. We revised the text for clarity.

b) Line 90: ‘Occupational exposure to tobacco dust among women beedi workers in Mangalore, Karnataka’.

Kindly mention the country; international readers may be unable to locate the place. The same applies to Telangana (92) and Patna, Bihar (100). Alternatively, you can also mention all studies together saying, ‘studies conducted in India…’ and then mention all three studies one by one in the existing format.

Thank you for your comments. We have made these recommended changes.

c) 127: instead of explaining the goals of the photovoice method, it is better to explain the photovoice method and how the study is conducted using it. Although you have mentioned it under ‘Approach’ in detail, it is unclear for a first-time reader what exactly photovoice is.

We are introducing the term photovoice in the beginning of the methodology section, so we felt it is important for the readers to know what photovoice tries to achieve. We provided more details on the methods of photovoice, including a table of the week-by-week methods, and clarified the language.

d) You have not stated why Mysore is selected for the study. We have now included the reason for selecting the study site.

Reviewer #2

Comments Reply

1.The sample size is relatively small, and it might be better to have the same sample size among all groups.

The sample size is small because this is a pilot study and the results from this study will help us to plan future studies with large sample sizes. The sample size is different for the participants who will wear silicone wristband (n=40) vs. dust sample collection (n=60) because

1. Previous studies on passive air sampling using silicone wristbands (Donald et. al., 2016) and indoor dust sampling (Tashakor et. al., 2022) have mostly used 40 to 60 as the sample size.

2. We are getting the silicone wristbands from our collaborator at Emory University and due to the limited funding available we are only able to analyze 40 wristbands.

Donald CE, Scott RP, Blaustein KL, Halbleib ML, Sarr M, Jepson PC, Anderson KA. Silicone wristbands detect individuals' pesticide exposures in West Africa. R Soc Open Sci. 2016 Aug 17;3(8):160433. doi: 10.1098/rsos.160433. PMID: 27853621; PMCID: PMC5108971.

Tashakor M, Behrooz RD, Asvad SR, Kaskaoutis DG. Tracing of Heavy Metals Embedded in Indoor Dust Particles from the Industrial City of Asaluyeh, South of Iran. Int J Environ Res Public Health. 2022 Jun 28;19(13):7905. doi: 10.3390/ijerph19137905. PMID: 35805563; PMCID: PMC9265302.

2. Beedi workers working duration may differ for each person. It is preferable to select participants with similar work experience. We plan to capture the different work experiences, for example those with more than 10 years beedi rolling experience might have different occupational health concerns compared to those rolling beedi for only 2 years.

3. Mentioning the participants' marital status for the specific age group could be more suitable. If married, please mention whether pregnant ladies are included or not in the study group.

Thank you for the suggestion. The marital status of the participants is recorded in the demographics, but this is not part of our inclusion criteria. We will exclude participants who are currently pregnant because they are a vulnerable population. We have clarified this in the text.

4. You could provide more details about the control group and include them in the methodology. The control group are matched by age and socioeconomic status. Inclusion criteria for non-beedi workers will be women involved in any home-based work, housewife, never involved in beedi rolling, who agree to wear a silicone wristband for seven days and allow the collection of dust samples from their homes (and from the same community). Exclusion criteria for beedi and non-beedi workers will be participants who are currently pregnant or not willing to give written informed consent. We have clarified the text on this section.

5. In inclusion criteria participants age from 18 to particular age will be more suitable for the study We do not have an upper limit for the age because we would like to capture the data on the occupational experience of different ages. This will provide us an opportunity to understand the recent and past health concerns among beedi rolling women.

Reviewer #3

Comments Reply

The manuscript is strictly on protocol and essentially on the use of photovoice. Protocol cannot be published in isolation unless the outcomes of the study are included. Much as the protocol will achieve the set objectives, the results of the protocol should be included. The references should also be current. Thank you for your comments.

1. This manuscript is submitted under the protocol publication category of PLOS ONE. We will include the results once the study is completed and cite this manuscript as a published protocol. The goal of publishing this protocol is to establish study guidelines prior to data collection as part of the movement in science to ensure research transparency (guidelines that encompass "a range of open practices including registering studies, sharing study data, and publicly reporting research findings"; this will ensure that we remain in line with the proposed methodology.

2. We have included references such as Rustagi et. al., 2001, Yasmin et. al., 2010, and Khanna et. al., 2014 because they justify the need for this study in beedi workers.

3. We have added new beedi workers studies conducted in Myore, India: Bhat et. al., 2018 and Aliya et. al., 2018.

4. Wang & Burris, 1997 and Wang 2007 are included because they provide the concept and methodology for photovoice.

Once again, we thank you and the reviewers for your thoughtful review process and for helping us to significantly improve the manuscript.

Sincerely,

Priyanka Ravi

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Occupational exposures among women beedi workers in Mysore District, India: A mixed-methods study protocol

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