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. 2024 Apr 10;19(4):e0281571. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0281571

Determinants of adolescents’ depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms in Northwest Ethiopia: A non-recursive structural equation modeling

Zenebe Abebe Gebreegziabher 1,*, Rediet Eristu 2, Ayenew Molla 2
Editor: Ching-Fang Sun3
PMCID: PMC11006201  PMID: 38598540

Abstract

Introduction

In low and middle-income countries, adolescent mental health is not only a major public health challenge but also a development concern. Depression and anxiety are the most common mental health disorders and somatic symptoms often co-exist with them. Adolescents with common mental health problems are associated with an increased risk of suicide, future unemployment, and poor quality of life. However, little is known about the mental health of adolescents in Ethiopia. Thus, this study aimed to assess the determinants of depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms among adolescents in Northwest Ethiopia, in 2022.

Methods

An institution-based cross-sectional study was conducted from June 8 to 24, 2022. Two-stage stratified random sampling was used to select 1407 adolescents in Northwest Ethiopia. Structured and standardized self-administered questionnaires were used to collect the data. Non-recursive structural equation modeling was employed to assess the direct, indirect, and total effects of predictors. Adjusted regression coefficients and corresponding 95% confidence intervals were used to interpret the strength of the association.

Results

The prevalence of depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms were 28.21% (95% CI: 25.8, 31%), 25.05% (95%CI: 22.8, 27.5), and 25.24(95% CI: 23, 27.6%) respectively. Alcohol use had a significant positive effect on depression [β = 0.14, 95% CI: 0.073, 0.201], anxiety [β = 0.11, 95% CI: 0.041, 0.188], and somatic symptoms [β = 0.12, 95% CI: 0.062, 0.211]. Stress had a significant positive effect on depression [β = 0.76, 95% CI: 0.642, 0.900], anxiety [β = 1.10, 95% CI: 0.955, 1.264], and somatic symptoms [β = 086, 95% C: 0.700, 1.025]. Depression had a direct positive effect on anxiety [β = 0.74, 95% CI: 0.508, 1.010].

Conclusion

In this study, the prevalence of depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms was moderate. Alcohol use and stress were significantly related to depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms. The bidirectional relationship between anxiety and depression was significant. Therefore, public health interventions should focus on the bidirectional relationship between depression and anxiety, as well as on identified factors to reduce the burden of mental illness in adolescents.

Introduction

Mental health disorders account for 16% of the global burden of disease and injuries and more than 80% of people with mental health disorders live in low and middle-income countries, which is associated with an increase in incidence and mortality [1].

Adolescence marks the transition from infancy to adulthood, involving significant development in physical, psychological, social, and cognitive aspects, which has been linked to confusion, stress, and emotional instability [2]. Adolescents are especially vulnerable to developing mental illness [3]. In this populationmental health disorders increased by 32.18% from 1999 to 2019 [4]. According to the World Health Organization, mental health issues impact 10–20% of adolescents in the world [5]. In low and middle-income countries, adolescent mental health is not only a major public health challenge but also a development concern [6].

Human suffering and financial costs associated with mental health disorders are substantial and growing globally [7]. More than 12 billion working days are lost annually as a result of mental illness. More than diabetes, cancer, and respiratory diseases combined, it is predicted that between 2011 and 2030, the world economy will lose 16 trillion US dollars due to mental illness [6]. Depression and anxiety are among the most common mental health disorders [8], and often somatic symptoms coexist with them [9,10].

Anxiety is characterized by emotional feelings of excessive fear, nervousness, avoiding threats in the environment perceived by them, and physical symptoms such as fast respiration, increased blood pressure, and tightness of the chest [11,12]. Globally, 301.39 million people are affected by anxiety [13]. It is the leading cause of mental disorders in the world, accounting for approximately 28.68 million disability-adjusted life years in the global burden of disease [14]. Anxiety is the most common mental health disorder in adolescents [15], with a high prevalence in developed as well as in developing countries [16]. In adolescents, it ranges from 42.1% [17] to 80.85% in Asia [18], and in sub-Saharan Africa, 29.8% of adolescents had anxiety [3]. A study conducted in Kenya showed that 37.99% of high school adolescents had anxiety [19]. A systematic review conducted among children and youth in Ethiopia revealed that general anxiety disorder ranges from 0.5–23% [20]. In combination with depression, anxiety contributes to 45% of the overall burden of disease [21]. Different pieces of literature reported that female sex [18,22], age [17,19], smoking [23,24], alcohol use, low self-rated academic ability [17,25], family academic pressure [26], stress [27,28], somatic symptom disorder [29] and depression [30] have a positive relationship with anxiety.

Depression, which is the second most common mental health disorder in adolescents, is characterized by loss of interest or pleasure, feelings of guilt or low self-worth, feelings of tiredness, disturbed sleep or appetite, and poor concentration and sadness [31]. In 2018, over one million adolescents died from preventable causes, with depression playing a significant role [32]. In Asia, its prevalence ranges from 24.3% to 57.7% [33], and in Sub-Saharan Africa, it ranges from 15.5% [34] to 45.90% [19,35]. In Ethiopia, 28% of adolescents in Jimma [36] and 36.2% of adolescents in Aksum [37] were depressed. Previous studies documented that age [19], female sex [36,3840], being in public school [41], high family academic pressure [26,42], poor self-rated academic ability [43,44], alcohol use [45,46], cigarette smoking [24,47], stress [4850], somatic symptoms [36,38,39,48,51,52], and anxiety [53,54] had a positive relation with depression. Other factors, such as social support [43,44,51,55], and family education [52] had, negative associations with depression.

A somatic symptom is characterized by a comprehensive list of symptoms such as pain, breathlessness, numbness, palpitation, tiredness, headache, dizziness, and gastroenterological problems. Somatic symptom disorder is a disorder in which individuals excessively or disproportionally think or experience feelings about the symptoms, which results in significant disturbance in daily life [56]. Depression and anxiety often coexist with somatic symptoms [5759], widespread issues in primary health care and subspecialty settings [10]. Somatic symptoms result in more than half of the patient visits to primary health care [60]. Its prevalence is estimated to be 5 to 7% [61] in the general population and 5 to 30% [62,63] in adolescents. Somatic symptoms delay the diagnosis of depression and anxiety because most people seek medical attention for bodily symptoms. Finally, individuals with somatic symptoms may experience physical harm from unnecessary medical procedures [64]. Different scholars reported that female [6567], being in private school [65], physical inactivity [68,69], extracurricular tutoring [70], stress [7173], anxiety [66,74,75] and depression [66,76,77] had significant positive relations with somatic symptoms.

Mental health is a key part of sustainable development goals that affect every other goal [6], yet the prevalence of mental health disorders is still high [18]. To decrease the burden of mental illness, targeting adolescents is important; since more than half of mental health problems start at this age [6], and 50% of adolescent mental health problems will proceed to adulthood [78]. Although adolescents in low and middle-income countries are disproportionally affected by mental health disorders, there is limited data on the prevalence and determinants of mental illness in Sub-Saharan Africa [79,80].

In Ethiopia, although mental health services were included in the national health policy, there is a paucity of evidence on the prevalence and determinants of anxiety, somatic symptoms, and their relation with depression. Adolescents in northwest Ethiopia are especially vulnerable to mental illness, due to repeated internal conflicts in northern Ethiopia [81]. Moreover, studies conducted outside of Ethiopia had methodological flaws, as they used logistic or linear regression to assess multiple mental health outcomes, which cannot address the bidirectional relationship between outcome variables and the indirect effect of predictors. In such cases, non-recursive structural equation modeling, which is a multivariate statistical framework used to measure the complex relationships between different observed and latent variables simultaneously is preferable.

Therefore, this study aimed to assess the prevalence, and determinants of depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms and the relationship between these variables among high school and preparatory school adolescents in Gondar town by using non-recursive structural equation modeling. The findings from this study will help psychologists, psychiatrists, policymakers, students, the community, and the government to tackle the increasing burden of mental health problems. Moreover, it will be used as input for sustainable development and as baseline data for further research.

Methods and materials

Study design and context

An institution-based cross-sectional study was conducted from June 8 to June 24, 2022, among high and preparatory school adolescents in Gondar town, Northwest, Ethiopia. It is located 728 kilometers from Ethiopia’s capital city of Addis Ababa, and 180 kilometers from Bahir Dar, the capital city of the Amhara regional state. There are 395, 000 residents [82], and 48 healthcare facilities including one comprehensive specialized hospital, eight health centers, one private general hospital, fifteen specialist clinics, fifteen medium clinics, and eight primary clinics. Adolescents comprise more than 25% of the Ethiopian population and the health of adolescents determines the future development of the country. According to the town administrative educational department report, the town has seventeen (twelve public and five private high schools), with a total of 24,308 students. Among them, 2408 students were from private schools (1457 girls and 951 boys) and 21900 students were from public schools (12052 girls and 9848 boys).

Participants

All high and preparatory school adolescents in Gondar town who were registered for the second semester of the 2021–2022 academic years were included in the study. Night preparatory and high school students and students who were transferred in from other areas after January 8, 2022, were excluded.

The sample size was determined using the general rule of thumb approach for calculating sample size in structural equation modeling. This approach suggests a range of 5 to 20 times the number of free parameters [83]. In this study, a 5:1 ratio was used to obtain the minimum adequate sample size. Based on the hypothesized model Fig 1, a total of 134 free parameters were available (Fig 1).

Fig 1. Hypothetical structural equation modeling on the prevalence and determinants of depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms among high school and preparatory school adolescents in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022 (both measurement and structural model): Circles indicate latent variables or error terms or disturbances, rectangles indicate observed variables, single arrows indicate factor loadings or regression coefficients, and double arrows indicate the covariance between latent variables.

Fig 1

A1-A7 = items of anxiety, D1-D9 = items for depression, S1-S8 = items for somatic symptoms, ST1-ST10 = items for stress, and e = error term.

Considering 134 free parameters, the sample size was

134*5 = 670: Since the sampling procedure is multistage sampling with 2 stages, a design effect of 2 was considered.

Therefore, the sample size becomes 670*2 = 1340

After adjusting for 5% for non-response rate, the final sample size became

1340+1340*5% = 1407

Therefore, the sample size becomes 670*2 = 1340

After adjusting for 5% for non-response rate, the final sample size became

1340+1340*5% = 1407

To select 1407 participants, a two-stage stratified random sampling technique was employed (Fig 2). Out of 1407 randomly selected individuals, 1379 completed the questionnaire; hence, the response rate was 98%. The mean (± SD) age of the respondents was 17.23 ± 1.25 years with a range of 15 to 19 years. The majority, 1238(89.78%) of the respondents were from public schools, and regarding residence, two-thirds 915(66.35%) of respondents were from urban areas. Approximately half, (654, 47.43%) of the respondents had moderate stress. The majority, 1237(89.7%), of the respondents did not have a history of chronic illness (Table 1).

Fig 2. Diagrammatical representation of the sampling procedure that was used to assess the prevalence and determinants of depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms among high school and preparatory school adolescents in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

Fig 2

N indicates the total number of students.

Table 1. Socio-demographic and clinical characteristics of high and preparatory school adolescents in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022 (n = 1379).

Variable Frequency Percentage (%)
Sex
    Male 536 38.87
    Female 843 61.13
Age
    15 140 10.20
    16 291 21.19
    17 297 21.63
    18 405 29.50
    19 240 17.48
School type
    Public 1238 89.78
    Private 141 10.22
Grade Level
    Grade 9 544 39.45
    Grade 10 325 23.57
    Grade 11 296 21.46
    Grade 12 214 15.52
Residence
    Urban 915 66.35
    Rural 464 33.65
Physical trauma
    No 1076 78.03
    Yes 303 21.97
Medically confirmed
chronic illness
    No 1237 89.7
    Yes 142 10.3
Stress
    Low 653 47.35
    Moderate 654 47.43
    High 72 5.22
Family history of
mental illness
    No 1278 92.68
    Yes 101 7.32

Behavioral, academic, and relationship-related factors of participants

A history of alcohol consumption was reported by more than one-third of the respondents (493, 35.75%). In terms of physical activity, only a minority of the respondents (224, 16.24%) reported being physically active. The majority of respondents (656, 47.57%) rated their academic ability as good. When it comes to perceived social support, approximately two-fifths of the respondents (564, 40.9%) reported low levels of perceived social support (S1 Table).

Variables of the study

Outcome variables (endogenous constructs):

Depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms

Independent variables: summary of key variables used in the study (S2 Table).

Data collection procedures and tools

Primary data in pen and pencil format were gathered using a structured questionnaire through a self-reported questionnaire for those who could see and by face-to-face interview for 3 individuals who could not see. Four trained data collectors with a first degree in public health were assigned for data collection. The data collection took place in a classroom setting, and it required approximately 15–25 minutes to complete the questionnaire.

The questionnaire was designed to gather data on socio-demographic characteristics, behavioral factors, academic-related factors, relationship-related factors, clinical factors, depression, anxiety, somatic symptoms, and stress domains (Table 2) (S1 Dataset). All questionnaire details were supplied in the supplementary information (S3 Table).

Table 2. Tools used for the determinants of depression anxiety, somatic symptom, their description and criteria for categorization.

Variables Instruments Description Criteria for categorization Reference
Depression Patients Health Questionnaire 9 for adolescents (PHQ-9A) It is a depression screening tool with 9 items; each item was measured by a Likert scale ranging from 0 "not at all" to 3 "nearly every day" and its total score ranged from 0 to 27. Students were classified as having depression if their total score on the PHQ-9A was 10 or higher. [84]
Anxiety General Anxiety Scale-7 (GAS-7) A brief measure of anxiety contains seven items, which are rated on four-point Likert scales that range from 0 "not at all" to 3 nearly every day”. Its summed score ranges from 0–21. Students were classified as anxious if their total score on the GAS-7 was 10 or higher. [85]
Somatic symptom Somatic symptom scale-8 (SSS-8) It contains a total of 8 items, each item was measured by a Likert scale ranging from 0 “not at all” to 4”very much’; a total scoring range from minimal 0 to maximum 32. Based on the SSS-8 score, students were classified as having low 4 to 7, medium 8 to 11, high 12 to 15, and very 16 to 32 very high somatic symptom levels. [86]
Stress Perceived Stress Scale 10 (PSS-10) It contains 10 items. Each item scored with an ordinal scale of 0–4, where 0 represents “never” and 3 represents “very often”. Individual scores range from 0 to 40. Students who have a total perceived stress scale 10 scores of 0–13, 14–26, and 27–40 were categorized as having low, moderate, and high perceived stress levels respectively. [87]
Social support Oslo Social Support Scale three It has 3 items; with a Likert scale that ranges from 1 to 4 for the first item (number of people you can count if you face a great personal problem) and 1 to 5 ranges for the rest items. It’s summed score ranges from 3 to 14. Students were categorized as having poor social support 3–8 score, moderate social support 9–11 score, and strong social support 12–14 score. [88].
Alcohol use Alcohol, smoking, and substance involvement test(ASSIST) was used to assess current and ever use of alcohol Do you have a history of alcohol (like beer, Tella, Katikala, Wine) intake in your lifetime?
Do you drink alcohol within the past 3 months?
Respondents who answered yes were considered positive for ever-use of alcohol
Students who answered yes were considered as positive for current alcohol user
[89]
Physical activity Self-reported physical activity assessment for adolescents was used In the past week, how many days did you exercise for at least 60 minutes until you felt sweaty or shortness of breath Respondents who answered 2 days and above were categorized as physically active and those who answered one day and not were categorized as physically inactive. [90]

Data quality assurance

To ensure the data’s quality, several measures were taken. First, the questionnaire originally developed in English was translated into Amharic and then re-translated back into English by a different individual to ensure consistency. The face validity of the tool was reviewed by four public health experts and two psychiatrists. Reliability, construct validity, convergent validity, and omitted variable bias were all examined in the analysis process (S1 Annex).

Data processing, model building, and analysis

Collected data were coded and entered into Epi-data software version 4.6, and exported to STATA version 16 and AMOS version 21 for further analysis. Non-recursive structural equation modeling was employed to assess the complex relationship between different latent and observed variables. Model assumptions such as: specified and identified model, multivariate normality, missing, outlier, sample size adequacy, independency, common method bias, and strong and valid instrumental variable were checked. Finally model fitness evaluation and model comparison were considered.

Specified model: In this study, we specified the model after extensive literature searching and reading as presented in (Fig 1).

Identified Model: In this study, non-recursive structural equation modeling with complete correlation of error terms was employed. There are three methods of identification in non-recursive structural equation modeling; which are: the presence of unique instrumental variables, the order condition, and the rank condition. Among these, only the rank condition is sufficient for identification, and the remaining two are necessary, but not sufficient [91]. In this study, all endogenous variables in the reciprocal loop had unique instrumental variables. Order condition: the number of excluded variables for that specific endogenous variable minus the total number of endogenous variables minus one should be greater than or equal to 0 [91]. In our model, to satisfy the order condition, each endogenous variable in the recursive loop should have at least 3–1 = 2 excluded variables. For depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms 9, 8, and 11variables were excluded respectively. Therefore, the model fulfills the requirement of the order condition. Rank condition: In this particular study, there are 3 endogenous variables in the non-recursive loop 17 exogenous variables, and one endogenous variable out of the feedback loop (Fig 1). Rank conditions were determined using the system matrix. To formulate the system matrix, a separate equation for each endogenous variable in the feedback loop is mandatory. Therefore, the equations for depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms disorder are presented as follows:

Depression(y1)=x2alcoholuse+x3chronicillness+x4physicalactivity+x5familymentalilness+x7schoolty+x11deathofbelovedone+x12socialsupport+x16familypressur+x18stress+x20(y2)+x21(y3)somaticsymptom
Anxiety(y2)=x2alcoholuse+x3chronicillness+x4physicalactivity+x5familymentalilness+x7schooltype+x13physicaltrauma+x17acadamicability+x18stress+x19(y1)+x21(y3)
Somaticsymptom(y3)=x2alcoholuse+x3chronicillness+x4physicalactivity+x5familymentalilness+x7schooltype+x14studytime+x15extraschooltutoring+x18stress+x19(y1)+x20(y2)

Rank conditions in the system matrix below begin by constructing a system matrix based on the above equations. Endogenous variables are presented in the row and all variables are presented in the column. In each row, zero or one appears in the column that corresponds to that row. One indicates that the variable represented by the column has a direct effect on the endogenous variable in that row or on the endogenous variable itself, and 0 indicates the excluded variables for that specific endogenous variable in that row [91].

[x23456789101112131415161718y1y2y3y111110100011000101111y211110100000100011111y311110100000011001111]

The following steps were followed for the identification of rank condition

  1. Start with the first row of the system matrix. Cross out all entries in that row and cross out any column in the system matrix with one in that same row.

  2. Simplify the reduced matrix further by deleting any row with all zeros entries; delete any row that is an exact duplicate of another or can be reproduced by adding other rows (i.e., it is a linear combination of other rows). The number of remaining rows is the rank.

If the rank of the reduced matrix is larger than or equal to the sum of the endogenous variables in the recursive loop minus one, then the rank condition is satisfied [91].

The rank condition for this particular study became;

For depression (y1), after we cross the entire first row and the entire column that contains 1 in the row:

The reduced matrix becomes:

[1001] Rank = 2

For anxiety (y2), after we cross the entire second row and the entire column that contains 1 in that row:

The reduced matrix becomes:

[1001] Rank = 2

For Somatic symptom (y3), after we cross the entire third row and the entire column that contains one in that row:

The reduced matrix becomes:

[1001] Rank = 2

The hypothesized model was identified since all endogenous variables have a rank of two; which is equal to the number of endogenous variables in the feedback loop minus one.

Multivariate normality, outliers, and missing: Full information maximum likelihood estimation was used. Multivariate normality was assessed using Mardia’s kurtosis and its critical ratio. The data were not normally distributed, since Mardia’s kurtosis was above 7 and its critical ratio was above 5 [91]. Although item parceling and outlier deletion were attempted, there was no improvement. As a result, bootstrap maximum likelihood estimation with 3000 samples was used.

Mahalanobis distance p values less than 0.001 based on chi-square distribution were used to declare observation as a multivariate outlier [92]. There were 62 observations with Mahalanobis distance p-values less than 0.001. The data were examined to determine whether they were outliers or caused by data entry errors. However, this was not due to a data entry error, and as mentioned above, multivariate normality did not improve significantly with their exclusion. Therefore, those outlier observations were kept to maintain the study’s power.

From the total observations, there were six observations with missing values. All missing values were from predictors and had no relationship with the outcome variable; thus, list-wise deletion was performed because they constituted less than 5% of the total sample and were considered missing completely at random, so 1373 observations were used for the final analysis [93].

Sample size adequacy and strength of correlation: The critical ratio for Bartlett’s test of sphericity in this study was high and significant for all constructs. KMO was above 0.7 overall, as well as for specific constructs. Hence, the sample is sufficient, the population matrix was not identified, and factor analysis was evidenced [91] (Table 3).

Table 3. KMO and Bartlett’s test of sphericity for the measurement of depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms among high and preparatory school adolescents in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

Factors KMO Bartlett’s tests of sphericity
Chi-square P value
Anxiety 0.88 3100 0.0001
Depression 0.87 2391 0.0001
Somatic 0.85 2155 0.0001
Stress 0.86 3354 0.0001
Overall 0.94 13938 0.0001

Independency of observations: The intra-class correlation coefficients (ICCs) were used to test the independence of observations. School type and grade level were employed as clustering variables. The ICC was less than 0.1 in our study (S4 Table), and a classical structural equation model was used.

Common Method Bias: Harman’s one-factor test was used to check common method bias (CMB).There was no CMB in this study since the overall variance covered by one factor was 25.2%, which is below the suggested cut-off (50%) [94].

Strong and valid instrumental variables: The strength and validity of instrumental variables were checked by using the Cragg-Donald Wald F statistic and Sargan Hansen test, respectively. A Sargan Hansen test P-value greater than 0.05 was used to ponder valid instruments, and F-test values above 10 were used as a cut-off point to declare strong IVs [95]. In the present study, the strength and validity of the instrumental variables between anxiety and somatic symptoms, and between somatic symptoms and depression were invalid and weak. As a result, the non-recursive paths from somatic symptoms to anxiety and depression were excluded; since deleting a non-recursive path is one treatment for a weak and faulty instrument. Finally, an identified model with valid and strong instrumental variables in a non-recursive loop was preserved in (S5 Table).

Model fitness and model comparison

Confirmatory factor analysis (CFA) was conducted to evaluate the measurement model in the study. Model fit measures, including CMIN/DF, CFI, TLI, and RMSEA, were utilized to assess the overall goodness of fit of the model. However, in the hypothesized measurement model (S1 Fig), the goodness of fit fell below the acceptable threshold: CMIN/DF = 5.10, CFI = 0.81 and RMSEA = 0.05. To enhance the model fit, factorial item parceling was implemented [96] (S6 Table). Following this adjustment, the model fit improved, yielding CMIN/DF = 2.60, CFI = 0.99, TLI = 0.99, and RMSEA = 0.001 (Fig 3).

Fig 3. Final measurement model for the constructs of anxiety, depression, somatic symptoms, stress, and social support.

Fig 3

Key: a = anxiety, d = depression, SO = somatic symptoms, st = stress, SS = social support, e = error term, and bidirectional arrow indicates covariance.

In the study, model comparisons were conducted for the structural and measurement components of the model using various criteria such as AIC, CMIN/DF, TLI, CFI, and RMSEA. The model that included only significant variables with significant disturbances after parceling was chosen as the well-fitted model. This selected model exhibited desirable characteristics, including a small AIC and CMIN/DF, a small RMSEA, and a large CFI and TLI (Table 4).

Table 4. Model selection for determinants of depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms among high and preparatory school adolescents in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.
Models AIC CMIN/DF CFI TLI RMSEA Remark
A model with all predictors and covariance after the parcel 2468 6.8 0.8 0.7 0.1

A model with only significant variables with significant disturbance after the parcel 951 3.00 0.94 0.92 0.027 selected

Ethical consideration

Ethical approval was obtained from the Institutional Review Board of University of Gondar Institute of Public Health. Permission was obtained from school directors. Parental informed consent was waived as the study had no/minimal risk [97]. Following permission from the school directors, each student was given a detailed participant information sheet and they completed an assent form to indicate their willingness to participate. A total of twenty-eight non-volunteer students were identified and subsequently excluded from the study. Students with moderate to severe anxiety, depression, or somatic symptoms were referred to the University of Gondar Comprehensive Specialized Hospital Psychiatry Clinic.

Results

Prevalence of depression

In this study, the overall prevalence of self-reported depression was 28.21(95% CI = 25.8, 31%). Regarding severity, 34.8% had mild depression, 18.5% had moderate depression, 7.72% had moderately severe depression and 2.04% o had severe depression. More than one-third,34.8% of participants had a feeling of hurting themselves or betting off dead, and more than two-thirds of the respondents (68.3%) had little interest or pleasure in doing things (S7 Table).

Prevalence of anxiety

The overall prevalence of self-reported anxiety in this study was 25.05% (95%CI: 22.8, 27.5%). Regarding the level of anxiety, 34.08% of respondents had mild anxiety, 16.82% had moderate anxiety, and 8.27% had severe anxiety. Among the total respondents, 16.61% worried too much about different things nearly every day, and 11.54%were not able to stop worrying too much nearly every day. More than half (58.38%) of the respondents had a feeling of anxiety or nervousness (S8 Table).

Prevalence of somatic symptoms

In this study, the overall prevalence of self-reported SSD was 25.24% (95% CI = 23, 27.6%). Regarding its level, among the total respondents, 27.27% had mild, 15.88% had moderate, 8.19% had high, and 6.38% had very high somatic symptoms. Regarding the response to specific indicators, approximately, two-thirds (65.42%) of the participants had headaches, more than one-half (53.68%) of the respondents had dizziness and 35.97% of the respondents had abdominal pain or gastrointestinal problems (S9 Table).

Relationship between depression, anxiety and somatic symptoms

There was a significant bidirectional relationship between anxiety and depression. Both anxiety and depression are related with high level of somatic symptoms. Anxiety had a direct positive effect [adjusted β = 0.74, 95% CI: 0.483, 1.081] on depression, and depression had a positive direct effect [adjusted β = 0.74, 95% CI: 0.508, 1.010] on anxiety. Depression had significant direct [adjusted β = 0.38, 95% CI = 0.167, 0.540] and indirect [adjusted β = 0.58, 95% CI: 0. 0.167, 3.629] positive effect on somatic symptoms resulting in a total positive effect of 0.96 [adjusted β = 0.96, 95% CI: 0.433, 1.456]. Anxiety had also a positive effect on somatic symptoms [adjusted β = 0.66, 95% CI: 0.270, 3.825].

Factors related to depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms

Self-rated academic ability, perceived social support, physical trauma, death of loved one, alcohol use, having medically confirmed chronic illness, sex, family pressure, school type, and stress were all significantly related to anxiety, depression, and somatic symptoms, either directly or indirectly. (Fig 4, Tables 57).

Fig 4. Standardized structural equation modeling for factors related to anxiety, depression, and somatic symptoms among high and preparatory school adolescents in Gondar town, Northwest, Ethiopia, 2022.

Fig 4

Table 5. Direct, indirect, and total effects of socio-demographic, behavioral, relationship-related factors and clinical factors on depression among adolescents in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022: Unstandardized estimate.

Variables Direct effect Indirect effect Total effect
DV: Depression Estimate (95%CI) Estimate(95% CI) Estimate (95%CI)
Social support -0.13[-0.229,-0.029] * ---- -0.13[-0.229,-0.029] *
Death of a loved one 0.03[0.004, 0.087] * ----- 0.03[0.004, 0.087] *
Self-rated academic ability ---- -0.05[-0.083, -0.031]* -0.05[-0.083, -0.031]*
Physical trauma ---- 0.10[0.037, 0.166] * 0.10[0.037, 0.166] *
Alcohol use 0.06[-0.004, 0.112] 0.08[0.029, 0.139] * 0.14[0.073, 0.201]*
History of chronic illness 0.04[-0.053, 0.124] 0.17[0.085, 0.265] * 0.21[0.114, 0.311]*
Sex -0.03[-0.099, 0.025] 0.09 [0.042,0.162] * 0.06[0.003, 0.109]*
School type -0.09[-0.194, -0.004]* 0.20[0.113, 0.320] * 0.11[0.016, 0.207]*
Family pressure 0.02[-0.004, 0.040] 0.02[0.002, 0.043] * 0.04[0.016, 0.060]*
Stress -0.06[-0,454, 0.247] 0.82[0.530, 1.250] * 0.76[0.642, 0.900] *
Anxiety 0.74[0.483, 1.081*] 0.74[0.483, 1.081*]

*Indicates significant variables, DV = dependent variable, SE = standard error, and CI = confidence interval.

Table 7. Direct, indirect, and total effects of socio -demographic, personal, relationship-related factors, and stress on anxiety, depression, and somatic symptom disorders among adolescents in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022: Unstandardized estimate.

Variables Direct effect Indirect effect Total effect
DV: Somatic symptoms Estimate (95%) Estimate (95%) Estimate (95%)
Self-rated academic ability ---- -0.02[-0.039, -010]* -0.02[-0.039, -010]*
Physical trauma ---- 0.04[0.012, 0.083] * 0.04[0.012, 0.083]*
Social support ---- -0.11[-0.176, -0.067]* -0.11[-0.176, -0.067]*
Death of a loved one within the past 6 months ---- 0.03[0.005, 0.067] * 0.03[0.005, 0.067] *
Alcohol use 0.03[-0.022, 0.105] 0.09[0.044, 0.144] * 0.12[0.062, 0.211]*
History of medically confirmed chronic illness 0.17[0.045, 0.290]* 0.20[0.122, 0.289]* 0.37[0.239, 0.505] *
Sex 0.11 [0.050, 0.166]* 0.03[0.002, 0.053]* 0.14[0.074, 0.198] *
School type 0.03[-0.074, 0.144] 0.13[0.053, 0.216]* 0.16[0.046, 0.292]*
Stress 0.53[0.326, 0.768]* 0.33[0.186, 0.472] * 0.86[0.700, 1.025]*
Depression 0.38[0.167, 0.540]* 0.58[0.167, 3.629] * 0.96[0.433, 3.774] *
Anxiety 0.06[-0.101, 0.212] 0.60[0.243, 3.825]* 0.66[0.270, 3.825]*

*Indicates significant variables, DV = dependent variable, SE = standard error, and CI = confidence interval.

Factors related to depression among high and preparatory school adolescents in Gondar town, 2022

Perceived social support, having a history of the death of a loved one within the past six months, and anxiety had a significant direct effect on depression. However, having medically confirmed chronic illness, having a history of alcohol use, perceived family academic pressure, sex, stress, self-rated academic ability, and having a history of physical trauma had a statistically significant indirect relationship with depression. School type and anxiety were significantly related to depression both directly and indirectly.

Perceived social support [adjusted β = -0.13, 95% CI: -0.229,-0.029] had a positive direct effect on depression. Self-rated academic ability had a significant indirect effect [adjusted β = -0.05, 95% CI: -0.083,-0.031] on depression (Table 5).

Factors related to anxiety among high and preparatory school adolescents

Self-rated academic ability and physical trauma had a significant direct effect on anxiety. However, alcohol use, and having a medically confirmed chronic illness had a significant indirect effect on anxiety. School type, sex, stress, and depression had statistically significant direct and indirect relationships with anxiety.

Having a history of physical trauma [adjusted β = 0.06, 95% CI: 0.014, 0.125] had a positive direct effect on anxiety. Self-rated academic ability had a direct negative effect [adjusted β = -0.03, 95% CI: -0.065, -0.006] on anxiety. Perceived social support had a significant negative indirect effect [adjusted β = -0.22, 95% CI: -.304, -0.139] on anxiety. Stress had both direct [adjusted β = 0.54, 95% CI: 0.293, 0.745] and indirect [adjusted β = 0.57, 95% CI: 0.379, 0.814] positive effect on anxiety, bringing a total positive effect of 1.10[adjusted β = 1.10, 95% CI: 0.955, 1.264] (Table 6).

Table 6. Direct, indirect, and total effect of socio-demographic, behavioral, relationship-related, and clinical factors on anxiety among adolescents in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022: Unstandardized estimate.
Variables Direct effect Indirect effect Total effect
DV: Anxiety Estimate (95% CI) Estimate (95%CI) Estimate (95% CI)
Self-rated academic ability -0.03[-0.065, 0.006] * ---- -0.03[-0.065, 0.006] *
Physical trauma 0.06[0.014, 0.125]* ---- 0.06[0.014, 0.125] *
Social support ---- -0.22[-0.304,-0.139] * -0.22[-0.304,-0.139] *
Death of a loved one ---- 0.06[0.010, 0.122] * 0.06[0.010, 0.122] *
Alcohol use -0.03[0.088, 0.035] 0.14[0.071, 0.213] * 0.11[0.041, 0.188] *
History of chronic illness -0.02[-0.124, 0.078] 0.27[0.165, 0.384] * 0.25[0.132, 0.371] *
Sex 0.08[0.019, 0.135] * 0.04[0.004, 0.092] * 0.12[0.059, 0.179] *
School type 0.12[0.017, 0.226] * 0.16[0.056, 0.269] * 0.28[0.159, 0.415] *
Family academic pressure ---- 0.03[0.012, 0.050] * 0.03[0.001, 0.50] *
Stress 0.54[0.293, 0.745] * 0.57[0.379, 0.814] * 1.10[0.955, 1.264] *
Depression 0.74[0.508, 1.010] * ---- 0.74[0.508, 1.010] *

*Indicates significant variables, DV = dependent variable, SE = standard error, and CI = confidence interval.

Factors related to somatic symptoms among high and preparatory school adolescents

Self-rated academic ability, perceived social support, physical trauma, and the death of a loved one in the past 6 months had a significant indirect effect on somatic symptoms. However, having a medically confirmed chronic illness, sex, stress, and depression were all directly and indirectly related to somatic symptoms.

Social support [adjusted β = -0.11, 95% CI: -0.176, -0.067] and self-rated academic ability [adjusted β = -0.02, 95%CI: -0.039, -010] had a significant negative indirect effect on somatic symptoms. Having medically confirmed chronic illness had significant direct [adjusted β = 0.17, 95% CI = 0.045, 0.290] and indirect [adjusted β = 0.20, 95% CI: 0.122, 0.289] effects on somatic symptoms, bringing a total positive effect of 0.37 [adjusted β = 0.37, 95% CI: 0.239, 0.505]. Stress had both direct [adjusted β = 0.53, 95% CI: 0.326, 0.768] and indirect [adjusted β = 0.33, 95% CI: 0.186, 0.472] positive effect on somatic symptoms resulting in a total positive effect of 0.86 [adjusted β = 086, 95% CI: 0.700, 1.025] (Table 7).

Discussion

In this study, the prevalence and determinants of depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms and their relationships were examined using non-recursive structural equation modeling. The prevalence of depression, anxiety and somatic symptoms were moderate. Sex, alcohol use, stress, self-rated academic ability, perceived social support, school type, and physical trauma were significant determinants of anxiety, depression, and somatic symptoms. The bidirectional relationship between anxiety and depression was significant. Depression and anxiety were significant determinants of somatic symptoms.

Prevalence of depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms

In the current study, the overall prevalence of self-reported depression was 28.21% (95% CI = 25.8%, 31%). This is in line with the study conducted in Jimma 28% [36], but it was higher than the meta-analysis conducted in China (24.3%) [33], and lower than the studies conducted in Aksum (38.2%) [37], Nepal (44.2%) [98], Bangladesh (36%) [99], and India(57.7%) [100]. In this study, the prevalence of anxiety was 25.05% (95%CI: 22.8, 27.5%). This is consistent with the study conducted among children and youth in Ethiopia 0.5 to 23% [20]. However, it is lower than the study conducted in Kenya at 37.99% [19], Saudi Arabia at 63.5% to 66% [101,102], Jordan at 42.1% [17], and Chandigarh at 80.85% [18]. In contrast, it was higher than the worldwide estimates of anxiety among children and adolescents (6.5 to 10%). In our study, the prevalence of self-reported somatic symptom disorders was 25.24% (95% CI = 23, 27.6%). This is consistent with the study conducted among children and adolescents in Tarragona which reported 5 to 30% [62]. However, it was higher than the prevalence in the general population (5–7%) [103] and lower than that in a study conducted in Qatar (47.8% in females and 52.2% in males) [104]. The variation in the prevalence of depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms across different settings can potentially be attributed to differences in screening tools and the choice of cutoff points used for assessment [18,37,105]. Furthermore, since mental health is the combination of physical, social, cultural, and religious environments this could be explained by socio-cultural differences in different settings. Poverty, violence, and other stressful social conditions are not unique to any one region of the world, nor are the symptoms and manifestations that result from them. However, factors that are frequently associated with race or ethnicity, such as socioeconomic position or country of origin, can enhance the likelihood of being exposed to these sorts of stressors, and thus stressors may lead to depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms [106]. Furthermore, the ongoing internal conflict in northern Ethiopia may contribute to an increased prevalence of depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms. The exposure to traumatic events, displacement, and the disruption of social support systems can have profound psychological effects on individuals living in conflict-affected areas. The constant fear, uncertainty, and instability associated with conflict can lead to heightened levels of stress and psychological distress, resulting in a higher incidence of mental health issues [81].

Relationship between anxiety, depression and somatic symptoms

After controlling for other factors, we observed that depression had a direct positive effect on anxiety [adjusted β = 0.74, 95% CI: 0.508, 1.010]. This finding aligns with a study conducted in the United Kingdom [30]. It is possible that individuals with depression spend a significant amount of time worrying about their symptoms, leading to increased anxiety. Additionally, the co-occurrence of depression and anxiety could be influenced by a shared set of genes [107]. Furthermore, we observed that high level of anxiety was also significantly related to higher level of depression [adjusted β = 0.74, 95% CI: 0.483, 1.081]. This finding is compatible with other findings [53,54]. One possible explanation for this association is that individuals with anxiety may attempt to control their worries. However, if they are unable to effectively manage their anxiety, it can negatively impact their emotions, leading to feelings of sadness, hopelessness, and depression. Additionally, this relationship could be influenced by the presence of shared genetic factors and environmental influences [107].

As the level of depression increases the level of somatic symptoms will also increase [adjusted β = 0.96, 95% CI = 0.167, 3.629]. In the same way, as the level of anxiety increases the level of somatic symptoms also increases [adjusted β = 0.66, 95% CI = 0.270, 3.825]. This result is supported by other studies [66,7477]. A possible explanation for this consistency could be that in depressed individuals’ neurotransmitters such as nor-epinephrine and serotonin are low; a decrease in neurotransmitters may lead individuals to focus on physical symptoms. Moreover, it could be explained by the co-occurrence of somatic symptoms, anxiety, and depression. The sharing of common sets of gene and environmental factors may also be a possible justification.

Factors related to depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms

Female sex had a statistically significant positive effect on depression [adjusted β = 0.06, 95% CI: 0.003, 0.109], anxiety [adjusted β = 0.12, 95% CI: 0.059, 0.179], and somatic symptoms [adjusted β = 0.13, 95% CI: 0.074, 0.198]; this implies that being female increases the levels of depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms compared to being male, controlling for other factors. This finding is consistent with other studies [36,3840]. The observed differences between men and women can be attributed to various factors, including variances in brain chemistry and hormonal fluctuations. Women may experience changes in neurotransmitters due to menstrual fluctuations in progesterone and estrogen, which can contribute to symptoms of depression, anxiety, and somatic complaints. Additionally, the presence of androgen receptors in males may provide some protective effects against certain mental health disorders [108]. Another influencing factor could be the differences in reporting behavior between genders. Females may be more inclined to report and seek help for mental illnesses compared to males. Cultural factors also play a role in how men and women approach and disclose their experiences with depression and other mental health conditions. These cultural influences can shape the willingness of individuals to openly discuss and seek support for their mental health challenges [65,66,109111]. Gender role might also be the possible reason: Girls are often socialized to prioritize traits such as being nurturing, accommodating, and conforming to societal expectations. These expectations can create pressure to meet unrealistic standards, leading to increased stress and vulnerability to mental illness.

Self-rated academic ability, being in private school and perceived social support had significant association with depression, anxiety and somatic symptoms. As the self-rated academic ability of adolescents increases, the levels of depression [adjusted β = -0.05, 95% CI: -0.083,-0.031], anxiety [adjusted β = -0.03, 95% CI: -0.065, -0.006], and somatic symptoms [adjusted β = -0.02, 95% CI: -0.039, -010] decrease. This result is compatible with the study conducted in Iran [112], and Slovakia [113] and with other studies [17,25,114]. The possible explanation for this might be that students with low academic ability are terrified of negative responses from teachers, parents, and friends, which may lead to fear about their future career, which will lead them to become anxious, and anxiety will lead to depression and somatic symptoms. Learning in a private school had a statistically significant positive effect on depression [adjusted β = 0.10, 95% CI: 0.016, 0.207], anxiety [adjusted β = 0.28, 95% CI: 0.159, 0.415 and somatic symptoms [adjusted β = 0.16, 95% CI: 0.046, 0.292]. This means that participants in private schools had higher levels of depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms than their counterparts. In contrast to our finding, the study conducted in India [41] showed that public school students had a higher level of depression than private school students; this disparity may be explained by differences in sample size and method of analysis. Our study had a larger sample size than the India study, and the India study did not address the confounding effect. Higher levels of depression, anxiety and somatic symptoms in private schools may be due to parents’ expectations of high academic achievement in private schools; which leads students to be stressed when they try to meet their parents’ expectations, and stress leads to depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms. Perceived social support had a significant negative effect on depression [adjusted β = -0.13, 95% CI: -0.229,-0.029], anxiety [adjusted β = -0.22, 95% CI: -.304, -0.139], and somatic symptoms [adjusted β = - 0.11, 95% CI: -0.176, -0.067]. This means that as social support increased, the level of depression, anxiety and somatic symptoms decreased or students with low social support had higher levels of depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms than those who had high social support. This finding is compatible with different reports [43,44,51,55]. The probable reason for this might be that low social support may increase feelings of loneliness, worthlessness, and hopelessness, leading to a loss of interest in activities and depression, depression might leads to anxiety, and somatic symptom. Moreover, students with low social support are more likely to have low self-esteem and negative cognition than those with higher social support, which may lead to depression [115].

Stress had a significant positive effect on depression [adjusted β = 0.76, 95% CI: 0.642, 0.900], anxiety [adjusted β = 1.10, 95% CI: 0.955, 1.264], and somatic symptoms [adjusted β = 086, 95% C: 0.700, 1.025]. This indicates that participants with high levels of stress had higher levels of depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms, holding other predictors constant. Our finding is supported by different studies [48,49,71]. The possible justification for this could be that high-level stress impairs brain function, which may lead to fluctuations in neurotransmitters such as dopamine, which leads to depression. In addition, immune dysregulation during stressful life events leads to anxiety, and anxiety leads to depression and depression may lead to somatic symptoms.

Alcohol use had a positive effect on depression [β = 0.14, 95% CI: 0.073, 0.201], anxiety [adjusted β = 0.11, 95% CI: 0.041, 0.188], and somatic symptoms [adjusted β = 0.12, 95% CI: 0.062, 0.211]. This implied that adolescents who had a history of alcohol drinking had higher levels of depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms than those who did not drink. This finding is congruent with the study conducted in the USA [45] and in China [46,116]. This could be because alcohol affects brain chemicals such as serotonin and dopamine, which are responsible for happiness, and the decrease in these chemicals leads to feelings of depression [117]. Furthermore, alcohol consumption may contribute to sadness, anxiety, and somatic symptoms in adolescents by reducing age-appropriate activities such as physical activity and social relationships [118]. Moreover, it could be due to the direct effect of ethanol on nerve cells [119] which leads to heightened awareness of normal body sensations. It is also worth noting that alcohol use can be a potential symptom of these disorders.

Our findings showed that holding other predictors constant, having a history of physical trauma had a direct positive effect [adjusted β = 0.06, 95% CI: 0.014, 0.125] on anxiety. This indicates that students with physical trauma had higher levels of anxiety than those who did not. Our finding was supported by the study conducted in the Netherlands [120]. This consistency could be justified by the fact that in reaction to trauma, neurotransmitters such as dopamine, serotonin, and gamma amino butyric acid may be impacted by cortisol and depletion of these neurotransmitters may lead to anxiety. In addition, individuals with physical trauma may internalize the event and may have subsequent negative thoughts about themselves, which affect their emotional experience and might lead to anxiety [121].

Strengths and limitations

The study examined a bidirectional relationship between anxiety and depression, considering both direct and indirect effects of various independent variables on different dependent variables. The sample included adolescents from both private and public schools, focusing on an underrepresented segment of the population. However, it is important to acknowledge that this study is not without limitations. First, only school adolescents in Northwest Ethiopia were included in the study which may affect generalization to all adolescents in Ethiopia. Second, self-reported screening tools were used, which may overestimate the effect size. Third, we only asked about alcohol use in the last 3 months, not how much, how frequently, or for how long, which could influence the outcome. Last, the temporal relationship between predictors and outcomes was not evaluated due to the cross-sectional nature of the data.

Conclusion

In this study, a moderate prevalence of depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms was found. Self-rated academic ability, physical trauma, school type, sex, stress, alcohol use, and perceived social support were significant determinants of depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms. The bidirectional relationship between anxiety and depression was significant. Depression and anxiety were significant determinants of somatic symptoms. Based on the study findings, the authors suggest the following points: Policymakers should prioritize bolstering the prevention and management of mental health disorders among adolescents. One effective approach is to introduce and establish school-based mental health screening services. It is crucial to recognize and address the bidirectional relationship between anxiety and depression, while also considering somatic symptoms as potential indicators in individuals with these conditions. Additionally, conducting studies that encompass out-of-school adolescents is highly recommended. Furthermore, to gain a deeper understanding of the temporal relationships involved, follow-up studies should be conducted.

Supporting information

S1 Fig. Hypothetical measurement modelfor the determinants of adolescents’ depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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S1 Table. Behavioral, academics, and relationship related factorsof adolescents’ Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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S2 Table. Summary of key variables Determinants of adolescents’ depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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S3 Table. Tools for the determinants of adolescents’ depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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S4 Table. Intraclass correlation coefficients for depression, anxiet, and somatic symptoms among adolescents in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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S5 Table. Instrumental variable validity and strength for the determinants of adolescents’ depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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S6 Table. Factorial average item parceling for the determinants of adolescents’ depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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S7 Table. Depression among adolescents in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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S8 Table. Anxiety among adolescents in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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S9 Table. Somatic symptoms among adolescents in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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S1 Annex. Result of the pilot study for the determinants of adolescents’ depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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S1 Dataset. Dataset for the determinants of depression, anxiety, and somatics symptoms among adolescents in Gondar town 2022.

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Acknowledgments

The authors are grateful to the University of Gondar, data collectors, supervisors, and study participants.

Abbreviations

AIC

Akaike information Criteria

OVB

Omitted variable bias

CFI

Comparative Fix index

CMB

Common Method Bias

OVB

Omitted Variable Bias

PHQ

9A: Patent Health Questionnaire for Adolescent

RMSEA

Rooted Mean Square Error of Approximation

TLI

Tucker Lewis Index,

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the paper and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

The author(s) received no specific funding for this work.

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19 Apr 2023

PONE-D-23-02244Depression, Anxiety, Somatic symptom and their determinants among High School and Preparatory School Adolescents  in Gondar Town, Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.Non-recursive Structural Equation Modeling.PLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: General Feedback!

The write up, grammar and integrity is good

Eligibility criteria

� Was there no exclusion criteria used?

Operational Definition

� Do you consider the person with PHQ-9A score of less than 9 have no depression? A person with a PHQ-9A score of 5-9 has mild depression. Do you think missing these segments of the population has effect on your result?

Strength and Limitation of the study

� ‘Assed’: Good to write in full assessed on line 955

Reviewer #2: To the best of my knowledge the study was well executed, the data sound and the analyses appropriate (though I leave the final judgement on analysis to reviewers more expert than me in SEM). The manuscript is on an important topic, it is reasonably well-written and the study findings ought to be brought to light. However, considerable re-organization and making the paper far more concise will be required to meet the standards for publication, in any journal.

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


22 Jun 2023

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

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Decision Letter 1

Ching-Fang Sun

17 Jul 2023

PONE-D-23-02244R1Determinants of  adolescence depression, anxiety and somatic symptom in northwest EthiopiaPLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Zenebe Abebe Gebreegziabher,

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Additional Editor Comments:

Title:

Please change the title into “…Ethiopia: A Non-recursive structural…”

Abstract:

Please see the recommended change as attached.

Methodology and Discussion:

I agree with the paper organization issue pointed out by reviewer 2. The current version is still satisfactory. Please see detailed comments as attached.

Discussion:

Please condense the 3 paragraphs in “Magnitude of depression, anxiety and somatic symptoms” into a single paragraph. It is unnecessary for the author to repeat the same logic three times despite different outcomes (report finding, compare findings with multiple previous studies, explained the difference might be a result of screening tools). It is also unnecessary for the author to elaborate on details of previous studies. The reviewer 2 pointed out the result is too long. So is discussion. Please see the rest of comments as attached.

General:

  • Specific terms need to be better defined:

    The author used the term “magnitude” and “prevalence” alternatively to describe the outcomes including depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms. Please clarify the definition of these two terms and use the correct one. The author may find it beneficial to consult a statistician for better description.

  • Participants:

    Please define the participant’s age in both the text and tables. (Grades are not satisfactory in this case) If the author includes any participants aged under 12, the participant description should be revised into “children and adolescent” through the whole manuscript.

  • Logic of clinical application:

    It is suggested that the author invite a clinical practitioner working with the investigated population to go through the study. The author highlights the correlation between depression-anxiety-somatic symptoms as the main outcome; alcohol use, sex and more are correlated with unfavorable mental health situation. However, these findings did not provide novelty to the field. The value of this study is the unique study population. The author could have better elaborate how the results could be explained by environmental factors specific in Northwest Ethiopia and how that could affect policy making/clinical practice.

  • Writing quality:

    Please correct all the typos, lower case/upper case, repetitive content, inconsistent font, content generated during the reversing process which supposed to be deleted from the formal manuscript. These are the red flags for the editor that suggested lacking effort in proofreading.

  • Language:

    The syntax is confusing. Please consider having a senior author or peer to help with better expression.

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Author response to Decision Letter 1


16 Aug 2023

1. Response to chief academic editor

Manuscript title: Depression, Anxiety, somatic symptom and their determinants among high school students in North West Ethiopia: Non-recursive structural equation modeling

Manuscript ID: PONE-D-23-02244

Authors’ response: Dear Editors and Reviewers, Thank you for your constructive feedback regarding our manuscript. The authors are appreciative of the editors' and reviewers' helpful criticism, insight, time, and positive assessments of our work. Based on the chief editor's and reviewers' comments, we made numerous new and clarifying statements throughout the entire document. The revised text was marked and attached as a separate file. These changes have improved the manuscript considerably and we hope that it can be published without delay. All authors have read the revised version of the manuscript and do not have any conflict of interest. We appreciate the editors and reviewers for their time and critical comments to improve our manuscript and we addressed the comments point by point as follows. We hope the revised manuscript satisfies the chief editor as well respected reviewers. If there are any unresolved questions, please do not hesitate to contact us again.

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Author response: We reviewed and corrected the formatting in accordance with the PLOS ONE criteria.

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Author response: Dear PLOSONE journal editors, thank you for your suggestion to include the data availability statement in the manuscript. We accepted your comment and included it in the supplementary file on the revised submission.

Editor: If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols.

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Editor: 3. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice.

Authors’ response: We appreciate the editors' for their use full insight to check the presence of retracted papers in our reference list, we revised our references and there is no reference list from retracted paper in our manuscript.

Additional Editor Comments:

The study is well-designed. However, the expression style has to be modified for better clarity.

Please adjust the reviewers' comments. (See attachment from reviewer 2)

Authors’ response: Thank you for your advice on how to make our work better. We have incorporated these into the revised manuscript along with the second reviewers' ideas, and the language used throughout the manuscript, notably in the result and discussion sections has been amended accordingly.

Title:

Editor: Please change the title into “…Ethiopia: A Non-recursive structural…”

Authors’ response: Accepted and corrected (line number 2-3).

Abstract:

Editor: Please see the recommended change as attached.

Authors’ response: Thank you for the suggestion, we accepted it and modified accordingly (line number 12, 25, 33).

Methodology and Discussion:

Editor: I agree with the paper organization issue pointed out by reviewer 2. The current version is still satisfactory. Please see detailed comments as attached.

Authors’ response: We appreciate your feedback on how to make our paper better, and we have addressed all of your concerns in the amended version (example: line number 45-47, 151,217 and like).

Discussion:

Editor: Please condense the 3 paragraphs in “Magnitude of depression, anxiety and somatic symptoms” into a single paragraph.

Authors’ response: Accepted and modified (line number 441-452).

Editor: It is unnecessary for the author to repeat the same logic three times despite different outcomes (report finding, compare findings with multiple previous studies, explained the difference might be a result of screening tools). It is also unnecessary for the author to elaborate on details of previous studies. The reviewer 2 pointed out the result is too long. So is discussion. Please see the rest of comments as attached

Authors’ response: Accepted and modified (line number 454-462).

General:

Editor: Specific terms need to be better defined:

The author used the term “magnitude” and “prevalence” alternatively to describe the outcomes including depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms. Please clarify the definition of these two terms and use the correct one. The author may find it beneficial to consult a statistician for better description.

Authors’ response: We appreciate the wise advice you provided. We consulted statistician regarding the terms magnitude and prevalence; in our instance, prevalence was the more acceptable term, thus we replaced magnitude with prevalence throughout the entire document (Example: line number 25, 33, 331, 337, and 343).

Editor: Participants:

Please define the participant’s age in both the text and tables. (Grades are not satisfactory in this case) If the author includes any participants aged under 12, the participant description should be revised into “children and adolescent” through the whole manuscript.

Authors’ response: We appreciate your wonderful view, and we've accepted and incorporated it in the revised version (line number 316 and table 3 page 18).

Editor: Logic of clinical application:

It is suggested that the author invite a clinical practitioner working with the investigated population to go through the study. The author highlights the correlation between depression-anxiety-somatic symptoms as the main outcome; alcohol use, sex and more are correlated with unfavorable mental health situation. However, these findings did not provide novelty to the field. The value of this study is the unique study population. The author could have better elaborate how the results could be explained by environmental factors specific in Northwest Ethiopia and how that could affect policy making/clinical practice.

Authors’ response: We acknowledged your advice, and in the amended paper, we attempted to reflect the particular destiny of adolescents in Northwest Ethiopia (line number 106-107 and 461-462).

Editor: Writing quality:

Please correct all the typos, lower case/upper case, repetitive content, inconsistent font, content generated during the reversing process which supposed to be deleted from the formal manuscript. These are the red flags for the editor that suggested lacking effort in proofreading

Authors’ response: Thank you for your intelligent idea; based on it, we proofread the paper several times and attempted to eradicate all mistakes, upper and lower case differences, and inconsistencies.

Editor: Language:

The syntax is confusing. Please consider having a senior author or peer to help with better expression.

Authors’ response: Thank you for your comments; we consulted senior authors and attempted to adjust the syntax based on their suggestions.

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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2. Response to Reviewer #1:

Authors’ response: First of all, we would like to say thank you for your great effort, commitment, humility, and time to comment our manuscript. Next, we would like to respond to the comments point-by-point. All the points raised are corrected accordingly in the main manuscript and put in track change.

General Feedback!

Reviewer 1: The write up, grammar and integrity is good

Eligibilitycriteria

Reviewer #1: Was there no exclusion criteria used?

Author response: We appreciate the reviewer's suggestion, night preparatory and high schools students, as well as those who moved in from other areas after January 8, 2022, were excluded; this was already covered in the initial submission's lines 155, 156, and 157. We've also included it from line 137 to 139 in the updated version..

Operational Definition

Reviewer #1: Do you consider the person with PHQ-9A score of less than 9 have no depression? A person with a PHQ-9A score of 5-9 has mild depression. Do you think missing these segments of the population has effect on your result?

Author response: Thank you for the input. We used the cut-off point above 9, as originally specified in line 217 to 218 of the initial submission. We used the cut-off point above 9, as described in lines 217 to 21 of the first submission. We were also concerned about missing people with mild depression, but we made an effort to read many papers on the threshold for diagnosing depression in the general population. Even though the cut-off point used by clinicians and researchers varies depending on the clinical group, a PHQ-9 score of 10 or higher is more consistently and strongly recommended for community depression diagnosis (Gilbody, Richards et al. 2007), since it is consistent with DSM V criteria for depression diagnosis..

Strength and Limitation of the study

Reviewer #1: ‘Assed’: Good to write in full assessed on line 955

Author response: Thank you, we have accepted and modified it (Line number 543).

3. Response to Reviewer #2:

Authors’ response: First of all, we would like to say thank you for your great effort, commitment, humility, and time to comment on our manuscript. Next, we would like to respond to the comments point-by-point. All the points raised are corrected accordingly in the main manuscript and put in track change.

Reviewer #2: To the best of my knowledge the study was well executed, the data sound and the analyses appropriate (though I leave the final judgement on analysis to reviewers more expert than me in SEM). The manuscript is on an important topic, it is reasonably well-written and the study findings ought to be brought to light.

However, considerable re-organization and making the paper far more concise will be required to meet the standards for publication, in any journal.

Author response: Thank you for your insightful suggestion. We modified and corrected the document in the revised manuscript according to your general and specific comments putted in the attached document as follow:

Reviewer #2: General comments:

It would be much easier to read and review if you used the usual conventions for manuscript preparation e.g. the use subtitles/sections such as Introduction (which does not require a subtitle) Methods (with subsections Study Design and Context, Participants [including all details regarding sampling], Measures/Instruments (choose one and see note below about how to organize), Results (with subsection “Plan for Analysis” then report the actual analysis and results) and finally Discussion. Please see for example, the APA version 7 for how to prepare the document (although you would want to use numeric referencing as required by PLoSONE).

The following link may be helpful.

https://www.apa.org/pubs/journals/resources/manuscript-submission-guidelines

Using the conventional section for a manuscript will help to avoid redundancy or making reference to things not yet described, which occurs fairly frequently in the paper.

Authors Response: Thank you for your thoughtful suggestions. We amended our article in response to your comments and in the revised paper; we followed the standard manuscript writing conventions: introduction, methods and materials (research design and context, participants, measurement), results, discussion and conclusion (IMRDC).

Reviewer #2: Please also note that indenting each new paragraph makes the manuscript much easier to read, especially to review.

Author Response: Thank you. We accepted your comments and modified them in the revised manuscript.

Reviewer #2: Another main consideration here is the paper organization – this applies to all aspects of the paper (though much less so the introduction, which is sensibly written) but even more to the methods, results and discussion. The reporting of measures, results and discussion are far to piece-meal and list-like. It makes it very hard for the reader to digest or to grasp the big picture of the findings, let alone to make sense of them.

Author Response: We corrected the above comments in the updated article and tried to organize the methodology, results, and discussion section in accordance with the precise remarks comments provided for us.

Reviewer #2: I understand this is primarily an exploratory paper (no apparent hypotheses are being tested) but suggest the authors consider 2-3 primary predictors and then perhaps others that are secondary. Report the results (and also address in the discussion) the primary predictors first looking at impact on all outcomes (depression, anxiety and somatic illness) simultaneously, not in different paragraphs. Then summarize these findings (in the discussion, discuss them). Then concisely report the picture for the secondary predictors, also looking at impact on all outcomes simultaneously, followed by a brief summary. Readers can consult the tables for the different outcomes if they want the specific findings for each predictor and outcome combination.

Author Response: We accept the provided suggestions and corrected them in the revised manuscript (example: line number 464-465).

Reviewer #2: In other words, the results and discussion need to be better and more tightly organized. The authors need to consider what are the most important findings to share, to paint the big picture and how it fits into the rest of the literature, and then organize the paper to highlight these findings.

Authors’ response: your comment is accepted and we tried to refine the most important findings and tried to compare with the existed body of knowledge and literature (example: page 23 from the result part and page 29 from discussion part).

Reviewer #2: Specific recommendations:

Title:

Depression, Anxiety, Somatic symptom and their determinants among High School

and Preparatory School Adolescents in Gondar Town, Northwest Ethiopia: Non-recursive

Structural Equation Modeling.

Suggested Revised Title:

Determinants of adolescent depression, anxiety, somatic symptoms in Northwest Ethiopia. Authors’ response: Thank you, we have corrected the title as per the recommendation (line number 1-3).

Abstract

Reviewer #2: In general (throughout the paper), care should be taken to guard the anonymity and confidentiality of the participating sample. See e.g. the suggested revised title. In the abstract, 2ndparagraph “…to 1407 adolescents in northwest Ethiopia”.

Authors’ response: We took your excellent advice. We modified it in the revised manuscript (example: line 20).

Reviewer #2: Please remove all names of particular schools and keep description to the region where the study was conducted, the two different types of schools and how they differ and keep sample demographics and so on in Participants section. Comment to remove the names of particular schools applies throughout the paper.

Authors’ response: thank you for your insightful suggestion, based on your advice, the names of the schools have been deleted from the entire version of the amended manuscript in order to maintain the confidentiality of the participants.

Results section in the abstract:

Reviewer #2: It would be better to organize and to make more concise the results reported. Perhaps according to outcomes? Determinants of anxiety, then of depression, then interrelated findings for these variables.

Authors’ response: We appreciate the reviewer's suggestions to improve the quality of our article. The comment is accepted and modified (line number 25 to 30).

Reviewer #2: Introduction (Does not need to be labeled “Introduction”)

Authors’ response: We appreciate your suggestion. The introduction is listed as one of the publication's components in the submission rules for the PLOSONE journal. We corrected it according to the journal’s manuscript preparation guideline (line 41).

Reviewer #2: At line 68, please place a comma after “…adolescents, is characterized…”

Authors’ response: Thank you for the comment, we accepted the comment and corrected it in the revised manuscript (line number 58).

Reviewer #2: Lines 70-71 Suggest move the sentence on the impact of depression combined with anxiety to the end of the next para on anxiety.

Authors’ response: Thank you for your comment; we have accepted and modified it (line number 80-81).

Reviewer #2: Line 76, I think you mean “threats” and not “treats”

Authors’ response: Yes, it to mean threats, and we corrected it in the revised manuscript (line 71).

Reviewer #2: Line 90 “..think or experience feelings about symptoms…”

Authors’ response: Thank you for the suggestion and we have corrected it in the revised manuscript (line number 88).

Reviewer #2: Line 101-102, the sentence is not complete. Please attach sentences starting at 101 and 104 to the para above.

Authors’ response: We acknowledged the suggestion and we corrected it in the revised manuscript (line number 64, 81 and 95).

Reviewer #2: Line 104-106 What is the nature of the relation? Positive or negative?

Authors’ response: Thank you for the comment. We have accepted and modified it (line 98).

Reviewer #2: Line 113-114 Suggest, “Finally, individuals with… may experience physical harm from unnecessary medical procedures”

Authors’ response: thank you for your suggestion, we agreed with your suggestion and we corrected it in the revised manuscript (line number 94 -95).

Reviewer #2: Line 135 Not clear here what you mean by “as an input toward sustainable development”.

Authors’ response: Thank you for your question, an input towards the sustainable development goal is to say; the slogan of the SDG is "no health without mental health," and in the SDG focusing on adolescents, mental health is the main target, because more than half of mental health disorders begin in adolescence and progress to adulthood. SDG agenda includes research as one of the initiatives to address the mental health problem. In light of this, our study will help to accomplish the Sustainable Development Goal. That is why you say it is a contribution to sustainable development.

Methods (Include this major subtitle)

Reviewer #2: Line 138 Suggest “Study Design and Context” as first subsection.

Authors’ response: Thank you for the suggestion, we accepted your suggestion and it is modified in the revised manuscript (line number 123).

Reviewer #2: Sample Description – Label as Participants

Authors’ response: Thank you for the suggestion, we accepted the suggestion and it is corrected (line number 135).

Reviewer #2: Please justify the use of this particular population of Ethiopian adolescents. How might this contribute to or constrain generalization of study findings? Is this a convenience sample?

Authors’ response: Thank you for the comments and questions, based on your suggestion we included an idea related with the use of particular population of Ethiopian adolescents in the revised manuscript from line number 129 to 130 and the sampling is stratified random sampling rather than convenient sampling.

Reviewer #2: Line 149, suggest remove the section on population as this information is given elsewhere.

Authors’ response: we accepted the suggestion and population section was omitted in the revised manuscript.

Reviewer #2: Lines 162-169 please correct the use of parentheses, 1 set with commas between different types of free parameters). Currently, very hard to follow.

Authors’ response: thank you for the comment; we simplified it in the revised manuscript (line number 140-143).

Reviewer #2: Line 171, if the sampling was stratified by the 2 different types of schools, say so here or above under context. If stratified first by type of school and then grade, at this point please include “(see below)” otherwise the comment here about a 2-stage sampling procedure seems out of place.

Authors’ response: Thank you for the suggestion, we accepted your idea and in the revised manuscript we have corrected it (line 162).

Reviewer #2: Line 183, under sampling procedure, I would not name the particular schools involved in the study as this poses a risk to participant confidentiality. Knowing the names of particular schools does not enhance the study reporting.

Authors’ response: We acknowledge the comment of the reviewer, in the rewritten version as a whole; names of specific schools are omitted.

Reviewer #2: Line 201, please place these variables in a table, and move them to supplementary text. Place a footnote or in the text refer the reader to the table for a summary of the key variables in the study.

Authors’ response: We accepted the suggestion and modified it according to the feedback(line number 170).

Reviewer #2: Line 216, suggest remove the section on “Operational definitions” and instead place the relevant information in the next section, immediately after you describe the measurement instruments. So after describing the depression measure very briefly, then say the criteria you used for categorization in the study.

Authors’ response: Thank you for the insightful suggestion, the section operational definition was omitted in the revised manuscript and information’s in the operational definition is incorporated in measurement section (page 10).

Reviewer #2: Line 245 Suggested “self-reported questionnaire”.

Authors’ response: Your suggestion is acknowledged and we have corrected it (line number 173).

Reviewer #2: Please be sure that in the sample description you indicate the percentage/proportion/number of sighted and sight challenged individuals and proportion by school type and gender perhaps? Sight capabilities of participants should not suddenly appear here.

Authors’ response: We thank the reviewer for the comment; we accepted and incorporated it (line number 173-174).

Reviewer #2: Clarify if the questionnaires were administered in paper and pencil format or on a computer or other device.

Authors’ response: thank you for the comment, we accepted your comment; it was administered in pencil and paper format and it is included in the revised manuscript (line number 172).

Reviewer #2: 249-251, I do not understand the use of “The tool for this study here”. Do you mean “Questionnaires were designed to gather data on…” (insert your list of domains here).

Authors’ response: Thank you for the suggestion. yes it is to mean, questionnaire were designed to gather data on socio-demographic characteristics, behavioural factors......and we have corrected it in the revised manuscript (line number 176-178).

Reviewer #2: Suggest place all of your measures in a table with columns for 1. Instrument name and citation 2.Brief description and 3. Criteria for categorization you included above.

Authors’ response: We accepted your suggestion and in the revised manuscript all of the measures are placed in the table (table 1, page 9-10).

Reviewer #2: Line 268, there should be a subheading for results.

Authors’ response: Thank you for your feedback, we accepted the comment and corrected it in line number 181 of the revised manuscript.

Reviewer #2: Line 271, does the translation apply to all of the questionnaires (were they arranged into one long document?)

Authors’ response: thank you for the question, yes translation was applied for the entire questionnaire after we arrange it in subheading.

Reviewer #2: Although the Data Quality and Management efforts are laudable, this section is long and superfluous here.

Authors’ response: In the revised manuscript, after we put very essential parts in the main document, the remaining data quality assurance parts were moved to supplementary file (line 194).

Reviewer #2: Suggest, remove lines 269 to first part of 271, you already mentioned trained data collectors above.

Authors’ response: We accepted the wise advice you provided, in the revised manuscript we have corrected it (line 182).

Reviewer #2: Great that you checked face validity, construct validity and reliability. For the latter to please indicate very briefly how you checked these.

Authors’ response: Thank you for your suggestions to improve our manuscript, the construct validity was checked by using Average variance extracted and reliability was checked by using Cronbach’s alpha (line number 186-187 and 191-192).

Reviewer #2: On second thought; perhaps you could have a “Measures” section, where you include the table suggested above. Before the table, include all information related to the measures such as translation and also efforts to get at validity and reliability. Include a footnote there and describe the pilot study briefly in the footnote. What was done? What did you find? Or place the pilot study in supplementary materials and refer to it in the paper.

Authors’ response: Thank you for the suggestion; based up on your idea the detailed part of the pilot study was placed in the supplementary material (S3 annex 1) (line 194).

Reviewer #2: Note, it is not clear in what sense the pilot study constituted “participatory” research. Needs to be clarified wherever you put the pilot study description.

Authors’ response: Thank you, according to our search, there are two categories of pilot studies: participatory and non-participatory. So a participatory pilot study is a form pilot study in which participants are aware that they are taking part in a preliminary study and are invited to provide feedback to improve the questionnaire.

Reviewer #2: Lines 279-286 Suggest remove the rest of this paragraph. What does it mean to say “After data entry, data recoding, and missing value management were considered accordingly.” If important, it could go at the start of the Results section, perhaps right before “Plan for Analysis”.

Authors’ response: Thank you, in the revised manuscript that unnecessary information’s from line number 279 to 286 are omitted.

Reviewer #2: Are the Results given on page 14 for the pilot study? If yes, suggest the entire pilot study goes in Supplementary Material. Simply say in the manuscript that you did a pilot study to further investigate the validity of the questionnaire. Then refer the reader to Supplementary Material.

Authors’ response: We express gratitude for the reviewer's suggestions to improve our manuscript; yes it was for the pilot study and in the revised manuscript the detail part the pilot study was placed in the supplementary material (line number 194).

Reviewer #2: The pilot study takes up a lot of space in the manuscript but, if I understand correctly, it is meant to convey background information to support the use of the questionnaire in the main study. The manuscript body should focus on the main study.

Authors’ response: Thank you for your suggestion, sure the manuscript body should focus on the main study and we tried to minimize pilot study part and we moved majority of pilot findings to supplementary file.

Reviewer #2: Remove the sentence end of line 320 to 321. Connect the sentence at line 34 to the previous paragraph.

Authors’ response: Accepted and modified (line number 201).

Results?

Reviewer #2: The results section is generally far too long, with too many explanatory details about how structural equation modeling works. If you aim to show your thoroughness in carefully undertaking this analysis, only mention the specific ways in which you did this in the paper. Assume the audience knows something about SEM.

Authors’ response: We acknowledged your recommendation, and in the updated manuscript, we attempted to minimize information about how the model works.

Reviewer #2: Suggest re-ordering reporting of results to follow same order as mentioned in introduction and as the order of measures described in the methods section – depression, anxiety, somatic symptoms, then interrelated of these.

Authors’ response: Thank you for your suggestions to improve our manuscript, we accepted the suggestion and in the revised manuscript we follow the same pattern as the introduction; depression, anxiety and somatic symptom. (Example: see line 331, 337 and 343 for the prevalence of depression, anxiety and somatic symptom respectively).

Reviewer #2: It is difficult the follow the list of findings in the paragraphs for each of these outcomes. Could you organize into direct effects only, unpack these, then indirect effects, unpack these and then perhaps deal with variables with both direct and indirect effects on the outcome that is the focus of that paragraph (depression, anxiety or somatic symptoms).

Authors’ response: Thank you, we accepted and modified it according to your feedback; (page 23-26).

Reviewer #2: Line 677. “…Bangladesh use a cutoff above five…” please add “whereas in the current study, we used a cutoff on the X measure of Y”. Fill in X and Y accordingly.

Authors’ response: Thank you for the comment; we accepted it. However, based editors’ suggestion specific details about previous studies were not included in the revised manuscript.

Reviewer #2: Interesting point. Please elaborate briefly on how socio-cultural factors might help to account for discrepancies in findings here.

Authors’ response: We acknowledge the reviewer comments to improve the quality of our manuscript, in the revised manuscript we tried to elaborate how socio cultural factors may account for the discrepancy in mental health illness (line number 455 to 461).

Reviewer #2: Line 683, It could also be that females are more likely to report on their depression!

Cultures vary in terms of how males and females ought to deal with things such as depression and this might have an impact on how willing or unwilling males and females are report being depressed or having other mental health challenges.

Authors’ response: Thank you for the suggestion, we accepted your suggestion and it is included in the revised manuscript (line number 473-476).

Reviewer #2: Line 689, regarding the following sentence:

“Besides, adolescent girls are more likely to have negative life events in relation to their parents and peers, and females are more emotion focused and have a distracting coping style than males”

Please unpack these findings so the reviewer can understand exactly what the authors of the cited paper found. It is not clear to me why adolescent girls are more likely to have negative life events in relation to their parents and peers. What does it mean to be “more emotion focused and to have a distracting coping style than males”?

Authors’ response: We respect your thoughtful observation, after we dig out different source, there is no tangible evidence which help us to elaborate this idea and in the revised manuscript the justification adolescent girls are more likely to have negative life events in relation to their parents and peers, and females are more emotion focused and have a distracting coping style than males are omitted

Reviewer #2: Line 699 – 700, these claims need supporting references.

Authors’ response: Accepted and cited (line number 513).

Reviewer #2: Line 701, it is also possible that people who are more depressed are more likely to use alcohol as a coping mechanism.

Authors’ response: We appreciate your suggestion and agree with your worry. People who are depressed are more inclined to use alcohol as a coping strategy. It is difficult to tell whether alcohol usage or depression develops first, and this is one of our study's shortcomings (line number 546-547).

Reviewer #2: Line 707. It could also be that being depressed means you have low motivation to study or even that you do not see any point in striving in school given low or no expectations regarding a well-adjusted, productive or successful future.

Authors’ response: Thank you for your thoughtful comment. As with the link between drinking and depression, bad academic performance may be caused by depression, and the two conditions may be correlated in both directions. However, because of the cross-sectional nature of the data, we are unable to determine which comes first in our study and you failed to consider how depression affects academic performance. We included it to the study's limitations in order to concern future researchers (line number 547-547).

Reviewer #2: In reporting results, it would be group according to outcome e.g. depression. Then review of the variables with a direct effect, briefly unpack, those with indirect effects, briefly unpack and then with both direct and indirect impact, then describe – in other words follow the same list and organization suggested for reporting results.

Authors’ response: We accepted the wise advice you provided, and in the revised manuscript we unpack the direct effect first, then indirect effect and finally both direct and indirect effect were unpacked (page 23-26).

Reviewer #2: Losing a loved one is a traumatic and by definition a sad experience. This is not a surprising finding and does not seem to require much more unpacking. Respondents could still be recovering from this loss.

Authors’ response: Even though the depressive symptoms persist in some individuals with a history of death loved one, majority of the individuals may recover from it by themselves. So we accepted your suggestion and the justification related with death of loved one is omitted in the revised manuscript.

Reviewer #2: Line 743 and 744, interesting finding re: private school and higher rates of depression but in the results you report both direct (negative) and indirect (positive) with a small net positive effect. It’s worth referring to this and elaborating briefly here.

Authors’ response: We respect your thoughtful observation, being in private increase the likelihood of depression both directly and indirectly with a small net positive effect. Even though the net effect is little, it is still important; although it is important to prioritize and elaborate on aspects that have a greater impact, we still believe that it is important to examine or explore small but important significant effects.

Reviewer #2: Line 777-778, if you are going to suggest that cultural differences might account for inconsistencies in results across studies, good to give an example of exactly how this might play out.

Authors’ response: We appreciate the reviewer's efforts to enhance the quality of our research; the updated manuscript describes the role of cultural variation to the inconsistencies (line number 455-461 and 474 -476).

Reviewer #2: Lines 786-788, “…students with high self-rated academic ability will be more

likely to make decisions, express their feelings without feeling embarrassed” Doing better academically is likely to increase confidence compared to doing poorly and these might lead to more confidence in decision making but it is not clear to me why this would increase the willingness to express feelings without being embarrassed and necessarily to more optimism.

Authors’ response: We appreciate your query and your agreement that adolescents who excel academically will be more valued by their family, friends, and teachers, which will help them gain the confidence to communicate their feelings. It is essential for young people's successful social development. Students who do well in school have a lower risk of suicide, which makes them more prepared to transition into adulthood. Additionally, adolescent who have excelled academically will say, "I can do anything," and those around them will support and encourage them with resources and ideas, which will improve their decision-making abilities.

Reviewer #2: Lines 799-805, again it could be that women are more likely to disclose struggles with anxiety compared to men.

Authors’ response: Accepted and incorporated (line number 473-476).

Reviewer #2: The point above about organizing study findings in the results and discussion applies to all of the outcomes. Another way to organize might be to treat each predictor in turn and then consider the impact on all three outcomes. There were some common findings for predictors with different outcomes e.g. alcohol consumption and private school both had a positive relationship with depression and also with anxiety. The explanations for the impact on different outcomes might be the same, so would only need to be mentioned once.

Authors’ response: We took your wise advice into account. As we already indicated for previous comment, we attempted to break down the direct effect first, followed by the indirect effect, and then both the direct and indirect effects in the result part. In the discussion section, we first talk about the factors that affected all of the outcomes, and then we talk about the factors that had a particular impact on one of the outcome (page 23-25 for result part and page 27-31 for discussion part).

Reviewer #2: Study Strengths and Limitations

Generalizability is also constrained by the specific, targeted sample. The authors should recognize and address this point. Is the sample nonetheless diverse and representative of Ethiopian adolescents and if yes, how do you know this and what then does this mean for study generalizability but also for policy and practice in Education, in Ethiopian society?

Authors’ response: Your thoughtful suggestion was accepted, and it has been incorporated in to the limitation part (line number 543 to 544).

Reviewer #2: In several places in the discussion, the authors raise the point of cultural differences and how these might account for discrepancies in study findings across studies conducted in different cultures. But they never really expand on the nature of those differences. Yet this would be so interesting here and contribute to the literature on factors that contribute to mental health outcomes and their context specificity or universality, which has knock on effects for how to mitigate these struggles or how to approach treatment.

Authors’ response: Acknowledged, and we provide a justification (line number 455-461 and 474 -476).

Reviewer #2: It would be better if the recommendations were not stated in bullet form.

Authors’ response: Thank you, we have accepted and modified it in the revised manuscript (line number 555 -562).

Line 987 and on

Reviewer #2: To avoid the possibility of stigma surrounding coping with and addressing mental health issues, preventative and coping strategies at every level might be better if offered to everyone, not targeting those with certain characteristics highlighted by the study findings. Targeted treatment might invoke stigma which could actually negatively impact mental health.

Authors’ response: Thank you accepted and updated in the revised manuscript (line number 556 to 557).

Reviewer #2: Line 991, see suggestion above

Authors’ response: Accepted and modified (line number 557-558).

Reviewer #2: Line 999, I do not think you established that drinking alcohol caused mental health issues. If this is a coping mechanism or addiction is in play, it might be better to seek treatment for the mental health issues as alcohol consumption is likely to come up as part of this. Parental sudden restriction but exacerbates symptoms without expert treatment.

Authors’ response: Thank you for your comments. Due to the cross-sectional nature of the data, we did not establish a causal relationship between alcohol intake and mental illness and we have putted it in the limitation (line number 547-548).

Reviewer #2: Line 1001, again alcohol consumption might be a coping mechanism or indeed a symptom of struggles rather than causally related. Not as well that you only asked about “ever consumption” not about how much or how frequently or for how many years consumed (another study limitation).

Authors’ response: Accepted, and we incorporate it in the limitation (line number 546-547).

Reviewer #2: Line 1006, interesting suggestion regarding out-of-school adolescents. It would be good to provide prevalence data – these might be indicators of struggles with mental health in themselves.

Authors’ response: Thank you for your suggestion; since we did not collect data on out-of-school adolescents, we are unable to give prevalence information at this time. However, we will conduct another study on them in the future.

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Decision Letter 2

Ching-Fang Sun

4 Sep 2023

PONE-D-23-02244R2Determinants of adolescent’s depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms in Northwest Ethiopia: A Non-recursive structural equation modeling.PLOS ONE

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Reviewer #2: In general the paper is greatly strengthened and I appreciate the close attention to the reviewers' comments and the changes made to the manuscript. My main remaining comments are 1. As another reviewer/editor has pointed out, the occurrence of anxiety, depression and somatic symptoms in adolescence is not a new hypothesis or finding. The unique contribution of the paper is documenting these issues in an Ethiopian adolescents and the exploration of potential contributing factors in that population. Hence, I would start the paper by making this point before moving on to define anxiety, depression (I would use this order) and somatic disorders, their prevalence in other regions, other parts of Africa and then Ethiopia, perhaps pointing out the dearth of research on Ethiopian adolescents in the conclusion of this section of the introduction. and 2. Efforts at writing in English which may not be the native language of the authors is alway admirable, in my view, and should not prohibit the publishing of important and interesting data as we have here. However, for maximum impact, it would make sense for the authors to have a reviewer read the paper for smooth flow in the English language as a final polish before submitting. In general, the paper is clear but this is scientific writing and precision in language counts. No criticism of the authors, just a suggestion to "professionalize" the writing further before being considered for acceptance. I wish the authors the best of luck in getting the paper accepted for publication.

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7 Sep 2023

eviewer #2: In general the paper is greatly strengthened and I appreciate the close attention to the reviewers' comments and the changes made to the manuscript. My main remaining comments are 1. As another reviewer/editor has pointed out, the occurrence of anxiety, depression and somatic symptoms in adolescence is not a new hypothesis or finding. The unique contribution of the paper is documenting these issues in an Ethiopian adolescents and the exploration of potential contributing factors in that population. Hence, I would start the paper by making this point before moving on to define anxiety, depression (I would use this order) and somatic disorders, their prevalence in other regions, other parts of Africa and then Ethiopia, perhaps pointing out the dearth of research on Ethiopian adolescents in the conclusion of this section of the introduction. and 2. Efforts at writing in English which may not be the native language of the authors is alway admirable, in my view, and should not prohibit the publishing of important and interesting data as we have here. However, for maximum impact, it would make sense for the authors to have a reviewer read the paper for smooth flow in the English language as a final polish before submitting. In general, the paper is clear but this is scientific writing and precision in language counts. No criticism of the authors, just a suggestion to "professionalize" the writing further before being considered for acceptance. I wish the authors the best of luck in getting the paper accepted for publication.

Author:We tried to address the comments point by point

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Decision Letter 3

Ching-Fang Sun

7 Nov 2023

PONE-D-23-02244R3Determinants of adolescents’ depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms in Northwest Ethiopia: A Non-recursive structural equation modeling.PLOS ONE

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Reviewer #2: This paper is so very much improved from my previous reading of it. The study is well executed, the writing so much improved and the analysis thorough and responsibly reported. I have made suggestions for further tightening of writing only - I sincerely hope to be helpful here not to delay the manuscript processing further. My comments have been made on the manuscript PDF directly. Please see the attachment that bears my initials TS at the end. If the authors attend to these minor suggestions the paper will be in fine shape for publishing in my view.

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Author response to Decision Letter 3


7 Dec 2023

Reviewer 2

Reviewer #2: This paper is so very much improved from my previous reading of it. The study is well executed, the writing so much improved and the analysis thorough and responsibly reported. I have made suggestions for further tightening of writing only - I sincerely hope to be helpful here not to delay the manuscript processing further. My comments have been made on the manuscript PDF directly. Please see the attachment that bears my initials TS at the end. If the authors attend to these minor suggestions the paper will be in fine shape for publishing in my view.

Authors’ response: Dear Dr. Tracy Solomon, First and foremost, we would like to extend our sincere gratitude for your exceptional effort, dedication, humility, and the significant amount of time you devoted to reviewing and providing comments on our paper. We highly value your feedback, and we would like to address each comment point by point as follow.

1. ABSTRACT

Reviewer 2: line number 25% missing

Author response: Thank you for your suggestion. We have made the necessary corrections in the revised manuscript (Kindly look at line number 25).

Reviewer 2: Line number 27: Ever use of alcohol, change it to alcohol use

Author response: We appreciate your insightful suggestion, and we have addressed it in the revised manuscript. We kindly request you to review line number 27 for the specific changes made.

2. INTRODUCTION

Reviewer 2: line number: which is associated with increased …?

Authors’ Response: Thank you for your valuable comments. We have incorporated them into the revised manuscript, and we kindly request you to review the end of line 42 to 43 for the specific changes made.

Reviewer 2: involving significant

Authors’ Response: We greatly appreciate your valuable input. Taking your feedback into consideration, we have made the necessary corrections in the revised manuscript (kindly look at line number 44 in the revised manuscript).

Reviewer 2: Line number 46: This has been linked to…

Author response: Accepted and modified (kindly looks at line 45 in the revised manuscript).

Reviewer 2: Line number 56: add most

Author response: Thank you for your feedback. We have accepted your suggestions and made the appropriate modifications in the revised manuscript (kindly looks at line number 55 ) Reviewer 2: line 58: As mentioned in the earlier review, why not start with the most common anxiety and then move to the second common depression. Odd start to this paragraph if the next one is about anxiety

Author response: Thank you for providing your comments once again. We have carefully considered your suggestions and made the necessary amendments in the revised manuscript. We kindly request you to review lines 57-83 for the specific changes implemented.

Reviewer 2: line number 96: Female sex: female

Author response: Accepted and modified (kindly looks at line 95 in the revised manuscript).

Reviewer 2: line number 97: Extra school change to extra curricular

Author response: Thank you for providing your feedback. We have carefully corrected it in the revised manuscript (line number 95).

Reviewer 2: Line 99: remove although and add yet after the comma

Author response: thank you, accepted and modified (kindly looks at line number 98-99 in the revised manuscript)

Reviewer 2: Line 103: although adolescents

Author response: thank you for your feedback; we have corrected it according to your suggestion (kindly looks at line number 102).

Reviewer 2: Line 108: replace moreover..And make it the third sentence

Author response: We greatly appreciate your suggestion. It has been accepted, and we have made the necessary modifications in the revised manuscript accordingly (kindly look line in the 108).

Reviewer 2: Adolescents in northwest Ethiopia are especially vulnerable to mental illness, due to repeated internal conflicts in northern Ethiopia: Suggest making this your second sentence in paragraph.

Author response: Thank you for your input. We have accepted your suggestions and made the appropriate modifications (line 107-108).

Reviewer 2: Line 116: Therefore, this study will assess the prevalence and determinants of … and the relationship between these variables.

Author response: accepted and corrected (line 115).

3. METHODS AND MATERIALS

Participants:

Reviewer 2: line 141suggests gives total sample size here, put information regarding sample size calculation in footnote or in supplementary material. Then give description of the sample, perhaps in summary table. Proportion private and public schools, identified as male and female, by grade include average age with range or sd, any other demographic info if available such as SES, sighted vs blind individuals

Author response: Thank you for providing your invaluable comments. We have accepted and incorporated your suggestions into the revised version (kindly looks at page 7-9).

Reviewer 2: Line 159: this paragraph fine to include in the sample

Author response: thank you, we have accepted your feedback and made the necessary modifications (line number 140-141).

Reviewer 2: Line 169: I don’t know that you need both figure and textual description here.

Author response: Thank you for your suggestion and feedback. As per your advice, we have decided to omit the textual description (kindly looks at line 141) from the revised version.

Data collection procedures and tools

Reviewer 2: Line 178: did participants complete the questionnaire in group setting or were they assessed individually. Where were they assessed? In the school library? Classroom? Quite area in the school? How long was the test session? Were breaks taken as needed?

Author response: Thank you for your feedback, which allowed us to incorporate this information. In the revised manuscript, we have included the details that the participants completed the questionnaire in classroom setting, and the completion time varied between 15 and 25 minutes (kindly look line 175-176).

Reviewer 2: Page 10, table 1: ever use of alcohol: please change to alcohol use?

Author response: We appreciate your suggestion, and we have taken it into account in the revised manuscript. The term "alcohol use" has been included consistently throughout the entire document, as you recommended.

Data quality assurance

Reviewer 2: Line 185: suggest place this section in supplementary material

Author response: Thank you for your input. In the revised manuscript, we have moved this section to the supplementary material as per your suggestion (kindly look at line 187).

Ethical consideration

Reviewer 2: Line 311: as judged by …? State if they were excluded from the study. What was the resulting effective sample?

Author response: Dear Dr. Tracy Solomon, We would like to express our gratitude for bringing this issue to our attention. In our study, non-volunteer individuals were indeed excluded (line number 314-315 in the revised manuscript). However, we did not exclude individuals with moderate to severe depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms, as their status became known only after they completed the questionnaire.

4. RESULTS

Reviewer 2: Line number 318: suggest place all of this section under participants, at the start of method section.

Author response: Thank you for your suggestion. We have taken it into consideration and made the necessary modifications accordingly (page 7-9).

Reviewer 2: Line 327: I would also include under sample description-text only. Move the table here to supplementary materials

Author response: Thank you for your suggestion. We have accepted it and made the necessary modifications in the revised manuscript. Kindly refer to lines 150-155 in the revised version for the specific changes implemented.

Reviewer 2: Line 336: suggest for this section:

“Results “The subtitle:”plan for analysis” then subtitles for each of your study goal “prevalence” “contributing factors “you could combine the last 2 sub-sections. If you will speak to them simultaneously.

Author response: Dear Dr. Tracy Solomon, Thank you for your suggestion. We appreciate your recommendation and acknowledge that including the plan of analysis in the result section is one of the possible options. However, in health science writing, it is also common to present the plan for analysis in the method section, which is the approach we have chosen to follow in this study. In the previous manuscript, we had already incorporated the plan for analysis under the section titled "Data Processing, Model Building, and Analysis" (line 188). Therefore, we did not specifically include the plan of analysis in the result section. Instead, we opted to start the result section with the title "Results," followed by subsections that cover the prevalence of depression, anxiety, somatic symptoms, and contributing factors.

Reviewer 2: Line 356: best under plan for analysis. Condense this section as much as possible, describe in sufficient detail for the reader to understand what you did but micro stuff in supplementary material section. Such a good paper, so thoroughly in approach but this gets lost in overwhelming the reader with all of details in the main manuscript. You don’t have to scarify by cutting all your work but consider moving to supplementary material.

Author response: We appreciate your suggestion, and as per your recommendation, we have incorporated this section into the subsection titled "Data Processing, Model Building, and Analysis." Thank you for your valuable input, which has helped us improve the organization of the manuscript (kindly look line 289-295).

DISCUSSION

Reviewer 2: Line number 439: we were also interested in the inter-relation between these factors

Author response: accepted and modified (kindly look line 410 in the revised manuscript).

Reviewer 2: Line 440: “moderate” leave details to the next paragraph

Author response: Thank you for your valuable comment, which has greatly contributed to strengthening our paper. We have carefully considered your feedback and made the necessary modifications accordingly (line 411).

Reviewer 2: Line 460: do you mean only somatic disorders here or disparity for depression, anxiety to?

Author response: Thank you for bringing this issue to our attention. We intended to highlight the variation in depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms, and we have now incorporated this information into the revised document (line 430).

Reviewer 2: Line 468: ongoing internal conflict

Author response: and made the necessary modifications in the revised manuscript. Kindly refer to line 439 in the revised version to see the specific changes that have been implemented.

Reviewer 2: Line 470: suggest you discuss findings with respect to predictors as follow:

1. Higher incidence in female and why?

2. Group academic ability, private school and perceived social support together. For example have an opening statement that all of these had an impact on all 3 of your outcomes , then unpack for each of these, the stress of being in private school with high academic ability….

Authors’ response: Dear Tracy Solomon, We would like to express our sincere appreciation for your valuable efforts in improving our paper. Your feedback has been invaluable, and we have accepted your comment and made the necessary modifications accordingly (kindly looks at page 27 -29).

Reviewer 2: line 483: good here to also mention gender roles, if there are greater disparities in male and female expectation, and these do not favor female, they would have more reason to experience depression, anxiety and possibly somatic disorders.

Author response: Thank you for bringing this issue to our attention. We have accepted your feedback and incorporated the necessary changes in the revised manuscript. Please refer to lines 483-486 in the revised version to review the specific modifications that have been made.

Reviewer 2: Line 484: Please use "alcohol use" throughout your paper

Author response: Thank you for your comment. We have taken your suggestion into account and used the term "alcohol use" consistently throughout the entire revised manuscript.

Reviewer 2: Line 494: could alcohol be the symptom of these disorders?

Author response: Thank you for guiding us in this direction. We acknowledge that your suggestion could indeed be beneficial, and we have included it in the revised manuscript (kindly loot line 537-538).

Reviewer 2: Line 539: subtitle here for relation between variables. Suggest place after the paragraph on prevalence and before the long section predictors.

Author response: Thank you for your suggestion. We have accepted your suggestion and implemented the required changes accordingly. Please refer to line 445 in the revised manuscript.

5. STRENGTHS AND LIMITATIONS

Reviewer 2: Line 551: public and private schools included and data on under-represented sample in the broader literature are the strengths.

Author response: We have taken your recommendation into account and integrated it into our work (kindly look line 551-552).

Reviewer 2: Line 554: question says “in the last 3 months”

Author response: We have embraced your suggestion and implemented the required edits accordingly (kindly looks at line 556).

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Determinants of adolescents’ depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms in Northwest Ethiopia: A Non-recursive structural equation modeling.

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    Supplementary Materials

    S1 Fig. Hypothetical measurement modelfor the determinants of adolescents’ depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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    S1 Table. Behavioral, academics, and relationship related factorsof adolescents’ Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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    S2 Table. Summary of key variables Determinants of adolescents’ depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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    S3 Table. Tools for the determinants of adolescents’ depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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    S4 Table. Intraclass correlation coefficients for depression, anxiet, and somatic symptoms among adolescents in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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    S5 Table. Instrumental variable validity and strength for the determinants of adolescents’ depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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    S6 Table. Factorial average item parceling for the determinants of adolescents’ depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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    S7 Table. Depression among adolescents in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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    S8 Table. Anxiety among adolescents in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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    S9 Table. Somatic symptoms among adolescents in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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    S1 Annex. Result of the pilot study for the determinants of adolescents’ depression, anxiety, and somatic symptoms in Northwest Ethiopia, 2022.

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    S1 Dataset. Dataset for the determinants of depression, anxiety, and somatics symptoms among adolescents in Gondar town 2022.

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