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. 2024 May 3;19(5):e0302155. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0302155

Semaglutide combined with empagliflozin vs. monotherapy for non-alcoholic fatty liver disease in type 2 diabetes: Study protocol for a randomized clinical trial

Yu-Hao Lin 1,#, Zhi-Jun Zhang 1,#, Jin-Qing Zhong 2, Zhi-Yi Wang 1, Yi-Ting Peng 3, Yan-Mei Lin 1, Huo-Ping Zhang 4, Jian-Qing Tian 1,*
Editor: Ferdinando Carlo Sasso5
PMCID: PMC11068176  PMID: 38701096

Abstract

Background

Nonalcoholic fatty liver disease (NAFLD) is strongly associated with type 2 diabetes mellitus (T2DM). Lifestyle intervention remains a preferred treatment modality for NAFLD. The glucagon-like peptide (GLP-1) receptor agonists and sodium-glucose cotransporter-2 (SGLT-2) inhibitors have been developed as new glucose-lowering drugs, which can improve fatty liver via an insulin-independent glucose-lowering effect. However, studies exploring the efficacy of GLP-1 receptor agonists combined with SGLT-2 inhibitors in patients with NAFLD and T2DM are scanty. Thus, the present randomised controlled trial aims at comparing the efficacy and safety of semaglutide plus empagliflozin with each treatment alone in patients with NAFLD and T2DM.

Methods

This 52-week double-blinded, randomised, parallel-group, active-controlled trial evaluates the effects of semaglutide, empagliflozin and semaglutide + empagliflozin in 105 eligible overweight/obese subjects with NAFLD and T2DM. The primary outcome will be a change from baseline to week 52 in the controlled attenuation parameter, free fatty acid and glucagon. Secondary endpoints include changes in liver stiffness measurement, liver enzymes, blood glucose, lipid levels, renal function, electrolyte balances, minerals and bone metabolism, cytokines, high-sensitivity C-reactive protein, ferritin, anthropometric indicators, nonalcoholic fatty liver fibrosis score, fibrosis 4 score and homeostatic model assessment for insulin resistance. In addition, intention-to-treat, interim analysis and safety analysis will be performed.

Discussion

This double-blinded, randomised, clinical trial involves a multi-disciplinary approach and aims to explore the synergistic effects of the combination of semaglutide and empagliflozin. The results can provide important insights into mechanisms of GLP-1 receptor agonists and/or SGLT-2 inhibitors in patients with NAFLD and T2DM.

Trial registration

This study has been registered with Chinese Clinical Trial Registry (ChiCTR2300070674).

Introduction

Nonalcoholic fatty liver disease (NAFLD) is characterized by the presence of hepatic steatosis exceeding 5% in individuals without excessive alcohol intake or any other chronic liver diseases [1]. The prevalence of NAFLD has increased steadily by 0.7% annually, from 21.9% to 37.3% between 1990 and 2019 [2]. This rise in prevalence is associated with a growing elderly population and a rise in the incidence of type 2 diabetes mellitus (T2DM) and obesity [3]. Over 55% of T2DM patients complicated with NAFLD and suboptimal glycemic control is a prominent clinical risk factor for more advanced forms of NAFLD, including fibrosis, cirrhosis, hepatocellular carcinoma and liver failure [4,5].

T2DM and NAFLD share pathophysiological features that act synergistically to increase the risk of metabolic syndrome through dysregulation of glucose and lipid metabolism as well as insulin resistance [6]. Increased adiposity and insulin resistance contribute to the stimulation of de novo lipogenesis, resulting in elevated levels of free fatty acids [7]. Consequently, there is an accumulation of ectopic fat in liver cells, pancreas, or muscles, which ultimately results in the formation of fatty liver and pancreatic steatosis [8]. Hence, there is a high unmet need among patients with T2DM and NAFLD for efficacious pharmacotherapies to improve liver health, provide glycemic control and mitigate the risk of cardiovascular and renal morbidity. Unfortunately, no pharmacotherapies have yet been approved by the United States Food and Drug Administration (FDA) and the European Medicines Agency (EMA) for the treatment of NAFLD. Newer glucose-lowering agents, including glucagon-like peptide (GLP-1) receptor agonists and sodium-glucose cotransporter-2 (SGLT-2) inhibitors have been assessed in participants with T2DM and NAFLD, because of their multiple pleiotropic effects [9,10].

To our knowledge, semaglutide, a GLP-1 receptor agonist, has been associated with an improvement in liver-enzyme levels and amelioration of the severity of hepatic steatosis [1113]. Further, a real-world investigation has demonstrated that semaglutide can improve liver steatosis in patients with T2DM [14]. Similarly, empagliflozin, an SGLT-2 inhibitor, has been shown to improve liver steatosis in T2DM patients with NAFLD or nonalcoholic steatohepatitis (NASH) [1518]. Concomitant treatment with GLP-1 receptor agonists and SGLT-2 inhibitors may have synergistic effects due to their distinct mechanisms. Compared with monotherapy, the combination of exenatide, a GLP-1 receptor agonist, and dapagliflozin, an SGLT-2 inhibitor, showed superior efficacy in ameliorating markers of hepatic steatosis and fibrosis in patients with T2DM [19]. Currently, there is a dearth of studies that may guide the concomitant use of GLP-1 receptor agonists and SGLT-2 inhibitors, and no existing proof regarding the use of semaglutide and empagliflozin combination in treating patients with T2DM and NAFLD [20].

Hence, the present prospective randomised controlled trial (RCT) sought to investigate the efficacy and safety of semaglutide plus empagliflozin compared with each treatment alone in patients with T2DM and NAFLD.

Methods

Trial design and setting

A schematic diagram of the study design is displayed in Fig 1. This is a double-blinded, randomised, parallel-group, active-controlled trial of patients with T2DM and NAFLD. A total 105 participants divided in a 1:1:1 ratio will be recruited, of which 35 will be randomised to semaglutide, 35 to empagliflozin and 35 to semaglutide plus empagliflozin. All patients will be recruited from Xiamen Humanity Hospital, of Fujian Medical University. Included patients will receive the trial drug and be monitored for 52 weeks. The trial will be completed in 2025. All clinical visits will be conducted at Xiamen Humanity Hospital of Fujian Medical University. All investigators will undergo good clinical practice training and be trained in the study requirements, standardized clinical measurements and counselling for adherence. A flow chart of the study process is shown in Fig 2.

Fig 1. Schedule of enrolment, interventions, and assessments.

Fig 1

Notes: CAP, controlled attenuation parameter; FFA, free fatty acid; LSM, liver stiffness measurement; NFS, Nonalcoholic fatty liver fibrosis score; FIB-4, Fibrosis 4 score; HOMA-IR, Homeostatic model assessment for insulin resistance.

Fig 2. Flow of participants.

Fig 2

Notes: T2DM, type 2 diabetes mellitus; NAFLD, nonalcoholic fatty liver disease; CAP, controlled attenuation parameter; LSM, liver stiffness measurement.

Written informed consent will be obtained from all patients who will voluntarily agree to participate in this study. The study design and present protocol follows the guidelines of the Standard Protocol Items: Recommendations for Interventional Trials (SPIRIT) and the Declaration of Helsinki [21].

Patient and public involvement

Patients and/or the public were not involved in the design, or conduct, or reporting, or dissemination plans of this research.

Eligibility criteria

Volunteers expressing interest will undergo eligibility screening based on the inclusion and exclusion criteria.

Inclusion criteria

  1. Age of ≥18 years old at the time of enrolment.

  2. Diagnosis of NAFLD includes: evidence of excess liver fat accumulation (hepatic steatosis) on ultrasound imaging and no history of alcohol overconsumption and exclusion of other specific causes of fatty liver [22].

  3. Diagnosis of T2DM includes: glycated hemoglobin (HbA1c) ≥ 6.5% (48 mmol/mol) or fasting plasma glucose ≥ 126 mg/dl (7.0 mmol/L) or 2-h plasma glucose ≥ 200 mg/dl (11.1 mmol/L) during an oral glucose tolerance test or in an individual with classic symptoms of hyperglycemia or hyperglycemic crisis, a random plasma glucose ≥ 200 mg/dL (11.1 mmol/L). In the absence of unequivocal hyperglycemia, diagnosis requires two abnormal test results obtained at the same time or at two different time points [23].

  4. Body mass index (BMI) more than 24 kg/m2.

  5. HbA1c ≥ 6.5% and ≤ 10.5%.

  6. Liver enzyme values less than three times the upper limit of normal.

  7. Patients who had not used GLP-1 receptor agonists and SGLT-2 inhibitors within 4 weeks.

Exclusion criteria

  1. Type 1 diabetes mellitus, gestational diabetes mellitus or other types of diabetes mellitus.

  2. Previously treated with thiazolidinediones or insulin.

  3. History of cardiac, hepatic or renal insufficiency.

  4. Patients with viral hepatitis (such as hepatitis B), alcoholic liver disease, autoimmune hepatitis, drug-induced liver disease, hemochromatosis, Wilson’s disease, liver cirrhosis, inborn errors of metabolism (such as cholesterol ester storage disease), or other causes of chronic liver disease.

  5. History of cerebral stroke, malignant tumor or pancreatitis.

  6. History of medullary thyroid carcinoma or multiple endocrine neoplasia type 2 in oneself or family.

  7. Pregnancy, lactation or desire for conception during the study period.

  8. Consumed more than 140g of ethanol per week for men and more than 70g of ethanol per week for women.

  9. Known or suspected hypersensitivity to GLP-1 receptor agonists, SGLT-2 inhibitors or metformin.

  10. Known or suspected mental and psychological disorders.

  11. History of chronic anaemia (Hb hemoglobin level <100 g/L in men and <90 g/L in women).

  12. Unwilling or unable to provide informed consent.

Interventions

Following the completion of all evaluations, participants will be randomly assigned to three groups. Each group will receive either semaglutide plus placebo, empagliflozin plus placebo or semaglutide plus empagliflozin. The subcutaneous semaglutide injection will be initiated at a dosage of 0.25 mg once weekly for the first 4 weeks and the dose will be doubled every 4 weeks until 1 mg is reached (days 1–28: 0.25 mg semaglutide, days 29–56: 0.5 mg semaglutide and days 57–364: 1.0 mg semaglutide). Patients who cannot tolerate uptitration to 1.0 mg semaglutide will continue with 0.5 mg once weekly. Patients who cannot tolerate 0.5 mg/0.25 mg semaglutide plus placebo/empagliflozin plus placebo/semaglutide plus empagliflozin will be excluded from the study. Patients will receive instruction on the subcutaneous injection technique, which can be self-administered at home. Patients who cannot self-inject will be assisted by a nurse will. Patients will receive 10 mg of empagliflozin daily throughout the study in the empagliflozin plus placebo or semaglutide plus empagliflozin group. Patients will be required to report any development of adverse events (AEs) during the entire treatment period to their provider. Besides taking study medications, patients will be advised on the management of various coexisting illnesses during the trial. Before the commencement of the trial, all participants will receive nutritional and exercise counseling from an experienced dietician. In between follow-up interviews, participants will receive a reminder of scheduled study visits via WeChat.

Outcomes

After obtaining the participants’ informed consent, demographic and clinical characteristics of the participants will be collected, including age, sex, height, weight, waist circumference, medical history and medications, course of disease and family health history of T2DM, etc.

Primary outcome

Since this is an exploratory trial, primary outcomes will include: (1) controlled attenuation parameter (CAP); (2) free fatty acid; and (3) glucagon.

Secondary outcomes

Secondary endpoints include changes in (1) liver stiffness measurement (LSM), (2) liver enzymes, (3) fasting glucose, HbA1c, fasting insulin and fasting C-peptide, (4) lipid profiles, (5) renal function and electrolyte balances, (6) minerals and bone metabolism (25-hydroxyvitamin D3 (25[OH]D3) and parathyroid hormone (PTH)), (7) cytokines (interleukin-6 (IL-6) and adiponectin), (8) high-sensitivity C-reactive protein (hsCRP), (9) ferritin, (10) anthropometric indicators (body weight, BMI, the waist and hip circumference, waist-to-hip ratio, numbers of weight loss achieving at least 5% and blood pressure), (11) nonalcoholic fatty liver fibrosis score (NFS) [24]: 1.675 + 0.037 × age (years) + 0.094 × BMI (kg/m2) + 1.13 × impaired fasting glycaemia (IFG)/diabetes (yes = 1, no = 0) + (0.99 × aspartate aminotransferase (AST)/alanine aminotransferase (ALT) ratio) (0.013 × platelet [×109/L]) (0.66 × albumin [g/dl]), (12) Fibrosis 4 score (FIB-4) [25]: (age [years] × AST [U/L])/([platelets (109/L)] ×√ALT [U/L]), (13) homeostatic model assessment for insulin resistance (HOMA-IR) [26]: [fasting glucose (mmol/l) × fasting insulin (pmol/l)]/135.

Safety outcomes

Participants will be required to report any AEs, and details, including time of occurrence, severity, duration, treatment and outcome, will be recorded. AEs will be continuously monitored. In addition, all reported AEs will be explained and resolved properly.

Outcome measurements

The FibroScan is equipped with both M and XL probes, and a probe selection that depended on real-time assessment of the skin-to-liver capsule distance for each participant [27]. All participants will be required to fast for at least 2 hours before the FibroScan test. Assessment of hepatic steatosis and fibrosis in the participants will be evaluated with CAP and LSM, respectively using FibroScan at baseline and, weeks 24 and 52. After 12 hours of fasting, 10 mL of blood sample will be taken from each participant by a certified phlebotomist. The sample will be centrifuged at 3500 rpm for 10 min for serum extraction. The level of free fatty acid, glucagon, liver enzymes (ALT, AST and gamma-glutamyl transferase (GGT)), fasting glucose, HbA1c, fasting insulin, fasting C-peptide, serum lipid profiles (total cholesterol (TC), triglyceride (TG), low-density lipoprotein-cholesterol (LDL-C) and high-density lipoprotein-cholesterol (HDL-C)), renal function, electrolyte balances, 25[OH]D3, PTH, IL-6, adiponectin, hsCRP and ferritin will be measured by an accredited medical laboratory. These measurements will be conducted at baseline and weeks 12, 24 and 52. Outcomes will be assessed by independent investigators, who will be blinded to the grouping assignment. The results of the grouping will be assigned a number and then placed inside a sealed envelope.

Sample size

The Professional Association for SQL Server (PASS) 2021 software will be used for sample size calculation. This calculation will be based on the estimate of the CAP as reported by previous RCT study [28]. Considering a two-tailed test with α = 0.05 and 90% power, the total number of participants will be 93, with 31 participants in each group. Assuming a dropout rate of 10%, the total number of participants will be 105, with 35 participants in each group.

Recruitment

Participants with T2DM and NAFLD will be recruited from outpatient and inpatient of the endocrinology or gastroenterology department of the Xiamen Humanity Hospital of Fujian Medical University. Notices about recruitment are displayed on bulletin boards within the hospital, as well as on WeChat friend circle, WeChat group, Weibo and other social media platforms. The notices will encompass a concise overview of the study aims, medicines, eligibility criteria, contact information and information on how to participate in the study. The eligibility of potential participants will be evaluated by the study coordinator. Thereafter, the study coordinator will screen eligible participants based on inclusion and exclusion criteria and provide a detailed explanation of the study protocol to ensure that participants fully understand the trial. All participants will be required to sign an informed consent form if they agree to participate in the study. Recruitment started in April 14, 2023 and will continue until the end of June 30, 2024.

Randomization

Participants who enrolled in the study and provided their written informed consent will complete the baseline assessment. Afterwards, participants will be randomly assigned to each of the matched groups in a 1:1:1 allocation ratio using permutation blocks with a block size of 4, stratified according to age, gender and BMI. A randomisation list will be generated by an independent researcher using the Sealed Envelope online randomization program. The randomisation sequence and block sizes will be concealed in a sealed opaque envelope until after enrollment. The allocation assignment will be performed by an independent researcher who will not be involved in the outcome assessment. Similarly, participants, healthcare providers, data analysts and outcome assessors will be blinded to the treatment allocation.

Data collection and management

Data entry, coding, security, and storage will be performed by a well-trained study coordinator throughout the trial. Data will be collected at baseline, and weeks 12, 24 and 52. All participants will first undergo a point-of-care FibroScan to assess the degree of fatty liver, followed by blood sample collection to assess metabolic parameters, renal function, electrolyte balances, inflammatory cytokines, minerals and bone metabolism, as well as biometric assessments to evaluate demographic information. Clinical research coordinators will collect all required data from participants’ self-administered questionnaire. Clinical data and viral test results of the participants will be collected in a standardised electronic case report forms and transferred to a uniform electronic data capture (EDC) system. To ensure confidentiality, all data will be anonymised before being submitted to other project staff. The database will be locked until completion of the study. All data will be archived at Xiamen Humanity Hospital for at least 5 years or longer after completion of the study.

Statistical analysis

The Shapiro-Wilk test will be used to evaluate the normal distribution of continuous variables. Normally distributed data will be represented as mean ± standard deviation (SD), while nonnormally distributed data will be expressed as medians and interquartile ranges (IQRs). Data for categorical variables will be summarized using numbers, percentages and frequencies. Mixed-effect model for repeated measures (MMRM) will be applied to examine the effect of treatment on longitudinal assessments of continuous efficacy end-points, with the corresponding end point and baseline value in the model. Analysis of covariance (ANCOVA) will be used for within-group comparisons among three treatment groups with age and sex as factors, and baseline body weight and baseline biomarker as covariates. For categorical efficacy endpoints, logistical regression with fixed effects of treatment and baseline as a covariate will be used. Safety analyses of AEs in both groups and the comparison among three groups will be conducted using the Chi-squared test or Fisher’s exact test. Additionally, statistical analyses will be performed using a modified intention-to-treat (mITT) principle, which includes all patients who received at least one dose of study drug and had at least one postbaseline measurement of any outcome. Missing data for change from baseline in outcomes was estimated by longitudinal integrated two-component prediction model. Statistical analysis will be performed using R statistical software V.4.3.1. Statistical significance will be set as two-sided p-values of ≤0.05. An interim analysis is planned for this study when a 50% enrollment is reached. Patient information and clinical data will remain confidential on a professional data platform.

Trial monitoring

Data monitoring

A Data Monitoring Committee (DMC) has been established, encompassing one endocrinologist, one hepatologist and one biostatistician who are familiar with clinical trial design. The DMC will regularly review the study progress and advise on study continuation and/or any changes to the protocol. Results from interim analysis will be reported to the DMC and blinded to the investigators. Further, the DMC is independent of the trial sponsor and has no conflicting interests.

Harms

Information about AEs will be collected on a questionnaire throughout the intervention period plus two additional weeks and recorded in case report forms with details such as occurrence time, duration, severity, treatment, outcome, and relevance to the treatment. AEs will be assessed by the study team via out-patient hospital visits, phone calls or WeChat. Overall, semaglutide and empagliflozin is relatively safe and may be associated with gastrointestinal adverse effects and urinary infections. If this occurs, consider taking symptomatic treatment. AEs are defined as serious if they result in adverse reactions requiring intensive treatment or fatality. Any AEs and serious AEs will be immediately reported to the DMC and the principal investigator. Afterwards, the principal investigator will immediately take appropriate measures in response to serious AEs. For other significant AEs, a case-by-case discussion will be conducted.

Auditing

Data auditing will be conducted by an independent auditor trimonthly throughout the trial and near the time that is planned for interim analyses. Specifically, 10% of the questionnaires will be randomly drawn and inspected regarding their degree of matching with the database input.

Ethics and dissemination

Research ethics approval

This clinical trial has been approved by the Research Ethics Committee of Xiamen Humanity Hospital of Fujian Medical University (HAXM-MEC-20230105-002-01). All trial associated procedures will be conducted to comply with the Declaration of Helsinki principles.

Protocol amendments

Protocol amendments will be carried out according to Good Clinical Practice requirements and approved by the Research Ethics Committee. Any protocol amendments will be documented and explained.

Consent or assent

A trained investigator will be responsible for obtaining informed assent and consent from potential participants before participating in the study. Informed consent will be provided to participants in written and verbal. If requested, verbal translation will also be provided. The consent process will include providing the participants with a detailed introduction to the study and fully answering any questions raised by the participants.

Confidentiality

Personal information for both potential and enrolled participants will be kept confidential before, during and after the trial. Standardised paper forms will be used to collect personal information from participants. To ensure confidentiality, each enrolled participant will be assigned a personal identification number, which will also be used for subsequent data analysis. Participant’s personal information will be stored on a secure password-protected server and will not be included in any study forms, reports, publications or any other disclosures unless legally mandated.

Declaration of interests

No competing interests or conflicts of interest to be disclosed.

Access to data

Access to the final trial dataset will be restricted to the data managers and study investigators. However, to ensure confidentiality, any identifying participant information will be blinded from project team members.

Ancillary and post-trial care

No ancillary or post-trial care is planned.

Dissemination policy

The results from the research will be submitted for publication in a peer-reviewed journal and will also be presented at relevant scientific conferences with personal information omitted. And the trial results will be communicated collectively to the participants, who will then be given the option to request a copy of the final report or a simplified version thereof, which will be provided upon their preference. As part of our media outreach efforts, the findings will be shared with healthcare professionals and the public via our webpages, WeChat, and Micro-blog. Eligibility for authorship will be determined following the guidelines set by the International Committee of Medical Journal Editors (ICMJE).

Discussion

NAFLD is a major public health concern with an increasing prevalence worldwide. The coexistence of this condition with diabetes poses a considerable threat, exacerbating the likelihood of cirrhosis, liver cancer and mortality [29]. Since there are currently no effective therapies for T2DM with NAFLD yet, the identification of safe and efficacious pharmacological treatments poses a significant challenge. Therefore, we will conduct a 52-week double-blinded randomised trial to compare the efficacy of semaglutide plus empagliflozin versus semaglutide or empagliflozin monotherapy.

Nowadays, histopathological evaluation of liver biopsy is regarded as the gold standard for diagnosing NAFLD, determining disease stage and predicting prognosis [30]. However, liver biopsy presents several limitations, such as the invasive nature of sampling, patient reluctance, and postoperative risks, especially when repeated sampling is required. Given the limitations of repeated liver biopsy, ultrasound will be used to observe changes in CAP and LSM among patients with T2DM and NAFLD in our study. In addition, patients’ free fatty acid, glucagon, relevant indexes for glucose and lipid metabolism, insulin sensitivity, noninvasive scores, adiponectin and other indicators will be evaluated.

GLP-1 receptor agonists and SGLT-2 inhibitors exert beneficial effects on hepatic lipotoxicity and inflammation through mechanisms that may, in part, be independent of weight reduction [16,31]. However, the dominant underlying mechanism by which GLP-1 receptor agonists and SGLT-2 inhibitors reduce liver fat remains elusive. Recently, Pedersen et al. found that NAFLD impair the liver–alpha cell axis and cause glucagon resistance [32]. Hepatic glucagon resistance towards amino acid catabolism and lipid metabolism follows. This results in increased plasma levels of amino acids and free fatty acids, contributing to further secretion of glucagon [33]. We hypothesize that GLP-1 receptor agonists and SGLT-2 inhibitors improve glucagon resistance, thereby increasing β-oxidation and decreasing lipogenesis, resulting in a reduction of hepatic triglyceride content [34]. It has been recently suggested that SGLT-2 inhibitors downregulate miR-34a-5p expression and inhibit the expression of genes related to the transforming growth factor beta (TGFβ) signaling pathway in hepatic stellate cells to ameliorate NAFLD-associated fibrosis [35]. Our study seeks to explore the synergistic effects of GLP-1 receptor agonist and SGLT2 inhibitor combination.

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Acknowledgments

We would like to thank Medical and Health Guidance Projects of Xiamen, China for funding this work.

Data Availability

No datasets were generated or analysed during the current study. All relevant data from this study will be made available upon study completion.

Funding Statement

This work was supported by the Medical and Health Guidance Projects of Xiamen, China (Grant No.3502Z20224ZD1106). The sponsors or funders not involved in the study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Decision Letter 0

Ferdinando Carlo Sasso

30 Jan 2024

PONE-D-23-41958Comparison of semaglutide in combined with empagliflozin versus semaglutide and empagliflozin monotherapy in non-alcoholic fatty liver disease with type 2 diabetes: study protocol for a randomised controlled clinical trialPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: Dear Editor, I’ve read with interest the draft called “Comparison of semaglutide in combined with empagliflozin versus semaglutide and empagliflozin monotherapy in non-alcoholic fatty liver disease with type 2 diabetes: study protocol for a randomised controlled clinical trial” by Yu-Hao Lin et al. However, some issues need to be raised.

- Acronyms need corresponding full word when compare firstly. Please, check throughout the entire manuscript.

- Abstract: The sentence “As the glucose-lowering agents…with NAFLD and T2DM” is not completely clear. I would suggest revising this period.

- Introduction: “Increased adiposity and insulin resistance contribute… of free fatty acids”. This period lacks reference. I would suggest seeing this recent review (Non-alcoholic Fatty Liver Disease (NAFLD), Type 2 Diabetes, and Non-viral Hepatocarcinoma: Pathophysiological Mechanisms and New Therapeutic Strategies. Biomedicines. 2023 Feb 6;11(2):468. doi: 10.3390/biomedicines11020468.).

- Methods: “trail”, please correct the typing error and revise throughout all the manuscript.

- Methods: I would suggest adding “Insulin treatment” among Exclusion Criteria.

- An English language revision is required.

Reviewer #2: The manuscript “Semaglutide Combined with Empagliflozin vs. Monotherapy for Non-Alcoholic Fatty Liver Disease in Type 2 Diabetes: A Randomized Clinical Trial” by Lin et al.

Overall, the use of English in the provided text is clear and formal, though a revision is necessary. The content is presented in a logical manner. The abstract provides a concise summary of the study's objectives, methods, key findings, and conclusions.

Here are some suggestions for improvement:

1. Title: I would change it as follows: “Semaglutide Combined with Empagliflozin vs. Monotherapy for Non-Alcoholic Fatty Liver Disease in Type 2 Diabetes: A Randomized Clinical Trial”

2. Abstract: revise English to streamline the language for improved readability while maintaining the essential information.

3. Introduction: please discuss this article as well doi: 10.3390/biomedicines11020322

4. Offer a brief context or explanation about FibroScan

5. Statistical analysis: Specify the variables that will be used in the ANCOVA model, particularly the covariates. For example, mention whether baseline values will be included as covariates.

6. Modified Intention-to-Treat Principle: Clarify the specific criteria for the modified intention-to-treat analysis, especially any rules for handling missing data or participants who deviate from the protocol.

7. Modified Intention-to-Treat Principle: Clarify the specific criteria for the modified intention-to-treat analysis, especially any rules for handling missing data or participants who deviate from the protocol.

8. Discussion: modify concurrent with coexistence

9. In the second paragraph, explain briefly why ultrasound is chosen to observe changes in CAP and LSM. Mention its advantages over liver biopsy in the context of the study: "Given the limitations of repeated liver biopsy, we have opted for ultrasound to observe changes in CAP and LSM among patients with T2DM and NAFLD in our study. Ultrasound is a noninvasive alternative that mitigates the invasive nature of sampling, addresses patient reluctance, and reduces postoperative risks, especially when repeated sampling is required."

10. Methods: correct trail with trial.

11. Exclusion criteria: the role of insulin and of other medications for type 2 diabetes, as well as dietary and physical activity intervention should be taken into account.

Reviewer #3: This is a protocol paper of a study comparing the efficacy of a GLP1 receptor agonist and a SGLT2 inhibitor in combination with each other and with a single agent in the treatment of NAFLD with type 2 diabetes.

The impact of the combination of the two drugs on the treatment of NAFLD is very interesting.

Major points

1. In the context of the study, it is understandable that CAP was selected as the primary outcome. However, the rationale for FFA and glucagon is not clear, and it should be clearly stated in the paper why they were selected as primary outcomes rather than secondary outcomes.

2. There is no mention of diet and exercise, and if these differ between groups, it may affect the results.

3. In the "interventions" paragraph, it is stated that patients who cannot sustain semaglutide 0.5 mg are excluded from the study. Considering that this is a double-blind study, shouldn't patients who cannot sustain treatment in all groups during the semaglutide 0.5 mg dosing period be excluded? Also, it is unclear how to handle cases in which doses other than semaglutide 0.5 mg cannot be sustained (i.e., 0.25 mg and 1 mg). What are the cases in which the dose cannot be tolerated?

Minor points

1. Inclusion criteria should specify the diagnostic basis for NAFLD and type 2 diabetes mellitus.

2. It should also be stated whether there are no restrictions on the lower and upper limits of HbA1c as well as liver enzymes. If there are no restrictions, can we say that a patient has type 2 diabetes with the same NAFLD whether the HbA1c is 5% or 12%?

Reviewer #4: Authors plan to conduct a 52-week double-blinded, randomized controlled trial to evaluate the efficacy and safety of semaglutide plus empagliflozin with each treatment alone in patients with NAFLD and T2DM. They will recruit 105 overweight/obese subjects with NAFLD and T2DM. They will evaluate the change from baseline to week 52 in primary outcome as well as several secondary endpoints.

1. Why only overweight/obese subjects?

2. Is there any safety concern to use semaglutide and empagliflozin at the same time?

3. Patients who cannot tolerate 0.5mg semaglutide will be excluded. What proportion of sample is expected to be dropped due to this? How will this affect the power?

4. Since the dosage of semaglutide is potentially different, will this affect the evaluation?

5. How to deal with adverse events during the trial? Will this affect the evaluation results?

6. Recruitment started in April 14, 2024. In other words, it has started! So how will the review affect the earlier recruitment?

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Reviewer #3: No

Reviewer #4: No

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


13 Mar 2024

We are appreciated the comments of the reviewers. Then we responded to the reviewers’ and editor's comments point by point. And we have marked the changes in “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes” by red text.

Editor's comments:

1. A rebuttal letter that responds to each point raised by the academic editor and reviewer(s). You should upload this letter as a separate file labeled ‘Response to Reviewers&’.

Reply: We have addressed the comments raised by the reviewers and the amendments, and uploaded this letter as a separate file labeled ‘Response to Reviewers&’.

2. A marked-up copy of your manuscript that highlights changes made to the original version. You should upload this as a separate file labeled ‘Revised Manuscript with Track Changes’.

Reply: We have marked the changes in “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes” by red text and uploaded this as a separate file labeled ‘Revised Manuscript with Track Changes’.

3. An unmarked version of your revised paper without tracked changes. You should upload this as a separate file labeled ‘Manuscript’.

Reply: We have uploaded a separate file labeled ‘Manuscript’.

Reviewer: 1

1. Acronyms need corresponding full word when compare firstly. Please, check throughout the entire manuscript.

Reply: Thanks for the suggestion. We have checked the entire manuscript and revised the acronyms to their corresponding full word when compare firstly.

2. Abstract: The sentence “As the glucose-lowering agents…with NAFLD and T2DM” is not completely clear. I would suggest revising this period.

Reply: As suggested, we have replaced the sentence “As the glucose-lowering agents…with NAFLD and T2DM” by the sentence of “The glucagon-like peptide (GLP-1) receptor agonists…via an insulin-independent glucose-lowering effect” in “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes” (Abstract section, page 2 line 4-7).

3. Introduction: “Increased adiposity and insulin resistance contribute… of free fatty acids”. This period lacks reference. I would suggest seeing this recent review (Non-alcoholic Fatty Liver Disease (NAFLD), Type 2 Diabetes, and Non-viral Hepatocarcinoma: Pathophysiological Mechanisms and New Therapeutic Strategies. Biomedicines. 2023 Feb 6;11(2):468. doi: 10.3390/biomedicines11020468.).

Reply: Thanks for the suggestion. We have observed and referenced this review (Non-alcoholic Fatty Liver Disease (NAFLD), Type 2 Diabetes, and Non-viral Hepatocarcinoma: Pathophysiological Mechanisms and New Therapeutic Strategies. Biomedicines. 2023 Feb 6;11(2):468. doi: 10.3390/biomedicines11020468) in the Introduction section.

4. Methods: “trail”, please correct the typing error and revise throughout all the manuscript. - Methods: I would suggest adding “Insulin treatment” among Exclusion Criteria.

Reply: Thank you for your advice. We have checked the entire manuscript and corrected the typing error. The trial did not include patients who were undergoing insulin treatment prior to its onset. Therefore, we added the "Insulin treatment" as one of the exclusion criteria, which will not impact the results.

5. An English language revision is required.

Reply: Thanks for the suggestion. We have tried our best to correct the spelling and grammar mistakes. And because English is not our native language, if there is still left some mistakes, we hope you point them again. And thank you very much.

Reviewer: 2

1. Title: I would change it as follows: “Semaglutide Combined with Empagliflozin vs. Monotherapy for Non-Alcoholic Fatty Liver Disease in Type 2 Diabetes: A Randomized Clinical Trial”.

Reply: Thank you for your advice. We have replaced the title “Comparison of semaglutide … a randomised controlled clinical trial” by the sentence of “Semaglutide Combined with … for A Randomized Clinical Trial” in “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes”.

2. Abstract: revise English to streamline the language for improved readability while maintaining the essential information.

Reply: Thanks for the suggestion. We have tried our best to correct the spelling and grammar mistakes. And because English is not our native language, if there is still left some mistakes, we hope you point them again. And thank you very much.

3. Introduction: please discuss this article as well doi: 10.3390/biomedicines11020322.

Reply: Thanks for the suggestion. We have observed and referenced this article (10.3390/biomedicines11020322) in the Introduction section.

4. Offer a brief context or explanation about FibroScan.

Reply: According to the suggestion, we have added sentences “The FibroScan is equipped with both M and XL probes, and a probe selection that depended on real-time assessment of the skin-to-liver capsule distance for each participant.” in “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes” (Methods section, page 8 line 4-6).

5. Statistical analysis: Specify the variables that will be used in the ANCOVA model, particularly the covariates. For example, mention whether baseline values will be included as covariates.

Reply: Thanks for the suggestion. We included the age and sex as factors, and baseline body weight and baseline biomarker as covariates in the ANCOVA model. And we have added sentences in “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes” (Methods section, page 10 line 12-13).

6. Modified Intention-to-Treat Principle: Clarify the specific criteria for the modified intention-to-treat analysis, especially any rules for handling missing data or participants who deviate from the protocol.

Reply: According to the suggestion, we have clarified the specific criteria for the modified intention-to-treat analysis. And we have added sentences in “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes” (Methods section, page 10 line 19-23).

7. Discussion: modify concurrent with coexistence.

Reply: Thanks for the suggestion. We have modified concurrent with coexistence.

8. In the second paragraph, explain briefly why ultrasound is chosen to observe changes in CAP and LSM. Mention its advantages over liver biopsy in the context of the study: "Given the limitations of repeated liver biopsy, we have opted for ultrasound to observe changes in CAP and LSM among patients with T2DM and NAFLD in our study. Ultrasound is a noninvasive alternative that mitigates the invasive nature of sampling, addresses patient reluctance, and reduces postoperative risks, especially when repeated sampling is required.".

Reply: Thanks for the suggestion. We have explained briefly why ultrasound is chosen to observe changes in CAP and LSM.

9. Methods: correct trail with trial.

Reply: Thanks for the suggestion. We have corrected trail with trial.

10. Exclusion criteria: the role of insulin and of other medications for type 2 diabetes, as well as dietary and physical activity intervention should be taken into account.

Reply: Thank you for your advice. We have added the "Insulin treatment" as one of the exclusion criteria. To eliminate medication-related effects, patients underwent 6-weeks of washout period after the recruitment. To eliminate dietary and physical activity intervention-related effects, all participants will receive nutritional and exercise counseling from an experienced dietician before the commencement of the trial.

Reviewer: 3

Major points:

1. In the context of the study, it is understandable that CAP was selected as the primary outcome. However, the rationale for FFA and glucagon is not clear, and it should be clearly stated in the paper why they were selected as primary outcomes rather than secondary outcomes.

Reply: The reviewer’s opinion is right. We have added the sentences “Recently, Pedersen et al. found that NAFLD impair… reduction of hepatic triglyceride content” to explain FFA and glucagon was chosen as primary outcome in “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes” (Discussion section, page 13 line 26 to page 14 line 3).

2. There is no mention of diet and exercise, and if these differ between groups, it may affect the results.

Reply: The reviewer’s opinion is right. To eliminate diet and exercise-related effects, all participants will receive nutritional and exercise counseling from an experienced dietician before the commencement of the trial.

3. In the "interventions" paragraph, it is stated that patients who cannot sustain semaglutide 0.5 mg are excluded from the study. Considering that this is a double-blind study, shouldn't patients who cannot sustain treatment in all groups during the semaglutide 0.5 mg dosing period be excluded? Also, it is unclear how to handle cases in which doses other than semaglutide 0.5 mg cannot be sustained (i.e., 0.25 mg and 1 mg). What are the cases in which the dose cannot be tolerated?

Reply: The reviewer’s opinion is right. According to the suggestion, patients who cannot tolerate 0.5 mg/0.25 mg semaglutide plus placebo/empagliflozin plus placebo/semaglutide plus empagliflozin will be excluded from the study. The dropout rate of non-tolerated 0.5 mg/0.25 mg semaglutide was estimated to be approximately 5%. And we have added sentences in “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes” (Methods section, page 6 line 25-26).

Minor points:

1. Inclusion criteria should specify the diagnostic basis for NAFLD and type 2 diabetes mellitus.

Reply: We thank for your suggestion. We have specified the diagnostic basis for NAFLD and type 2 diabetes mellitus and have added sentences in “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes” (Methods section, page 5 line 13-21).

2. It should also be stated whether there are no restrictions on the lower and upper limits of HbA1c as well as liver enzymes. If there are no restrictions, can we say that a patient has type 2 diabetes with the same NAFLD whether the HbA1c is 5% or 12%?

Reply: Thank you for your advice. We have added the restrictions on the lower and upper limits of HbA1c as well as liver enzymes in “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes” (Methods section, page 5 line 23-24). Include patients’ HbA1c were at 6.5% to 10.5 and liver enzymes less than three times the upper limit of normal before this review. Therefore, we added these to the inclusion criteria will not impact the results.

Reviewer: 4

1. Why only overweight/obese subjects?

Reply: We are so grateful for your kind question. The pathogenesis of nonalcoholic fatty liver disease is complex and differs between lean (normal weight) nonalcoholic fatty liver disease and non-lean (overweight/obese) nonalcoholic fatty liver disease. So, we sole inclusion of overweight/obese subjects.

2. Is there any safety concern to use semaglutide and empagliflozin at the same time?

Reply: We are so grateful for your kind question. There are some studies suggested that semaglutide plus empagliflozin treatment is clearly safe treatment option for patients.

3. Patients who cannot tolerate 0.5mg semaglutide will be excluded. What proportion of sample is expected to be dropped due to this? How will this affect the power?

Reply: We are so grateful for your kind question. The dropout rate of non-tolerated 0.5mg semaglutide was estimated to be approximately 5%. This probably has a negligible effect.

4. Since the dosage of semaglutide is potentially different, will this affect the evaluation?

Reply: We are so grateful for your kind question. The dose adjustment of semaglutide is according to many randomized clinical trials. The different dosage of semaglutide will negligibly affect the evaluation.

5. How to deal with adverse events during the trial? Will this affect the evaluation results?

Reply: We are so grateful for your kind question. We will take symptomatic treatment to deal with adverse events and have added sentences in “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes” (Methods section, page 11 line 11-23). The study coordinator, who is blind to the study, will deal with adverse events. It will not affect the evaluation results.

6. Recruitment started in April 14, 2024. In other words, it has started! So how will the review affect the earlier recruitment?

Reply: We are so grateful for your kind question. The patients included in this trial are consistent with those pre‐specified. So, we think this review will not affect the earlier recruitment.

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Decision Letter 1

Ferdinando Carlo Sasso

28 Mar 2024

Semaglutide Combined with Empagliflozin vs. Monotherapy for Non-Alcoholic Fatty Liver Disease in Type 2 Diabetes: Study Protocol for A Randomized Clinical Trial

PONE-D-23-41958R1

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1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions?

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Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

Reviewer #4: Yes

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2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses?

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Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

Reviewer #4: Yes

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3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable?

Descriptions of methods and materials in the protocol should be reported in sufficient detail for another researcher to reproduce all experiments and analyses. The protocol should describe the appropriate controls, sample size calculations, and replication needed to ensure that the data are robust and reproducible.

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

Reviewer #4: Yes

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Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

Reviewer #4: Yes

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Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

Reviewer #4: Yes

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Reviewer #2: I have no further comments. In my opinion the paper can be further processed for publication. English has improved.

Reviewer #3: The authors have been courteous in revising the manuscript. I am satisfied that my questions have been replied appropriately.

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Reviewer #2: No

Reviewer #3: No

Reviewer #4: No

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Associated Data

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    Supplementary Materials

    S1 Checklist. Reporting checklist for protocol of a clinical trial.

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    pone.0302155.s001.docx (29.7KB, docx)
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    Attachment

    Submitted filename: Response to Reviewers.docx

    pone.0302155.s004.docx (30.3KB, docx)

    Data Availability Statement

    No datasets were generated or analysed during the current study. All relevant data from this study will be made available upon study completion.


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