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. 2024 Jun 14;19(6):e0304274. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0304274

Genetic variability of the endangered fish lake minnow (Eupallasella percnurus) in populations newly established by translocation and those existing long term in Poland

Jacek Wolnicki 1,#, Dariusz Kaczmarczyk 1,*,#, Justyna Sikorska 1,#, Rafał Kamiński 1,#, Adriana Osińska 2,#, Natalia Zawrotna 3,#
Editor: Tzen-Yuh Chiang4
PMCID: PMC11178208  PMID: 38875174

Abstract

The lake minnow Eupallasella percnurus is a small leuciscid fish. In Poland, this species has been in a continuous decline since the mid-20th century and is presently considered as a extremely endangered. According to Polish law, E. percnurus is a strictly protected species that requires active conservation measures. In Poland, one the most common and effective measure of active protection E. percnurus is initiation of new populations. For this purpose, in 2004–2012, juvenile individuals originating from aquaculture conditions were translocated to group of isolated water bodies not inhabited by this species. The juveniles were offspring of parental fish belonging to the same local population, which is extinct at present. Five of those attempts were successful. The aim of the present study was to assess the genetic variation in a group new populations and compare genetic variation indicators with 13 old populations that had existed for decades. The polymorphism of 13 microsatellite markers was investigated, significance of differences in the genetic variation indicators between the groups were tested using a one-way analysis of variance (ANOVA). The mean values of all summary statistics under study, i.e. observed heterozygosity, expected heterozygosity and the total number of alleles, were higher in the group of new populations compared to almost all old ones. A similar dependence was found for Garza—Williamson M values, where the mean for the group of new populations was higher than in almost all old populations. Our results indicate that all recently established E. percnurus populations have not yet experienced any extensive founder effects or bottlenecks. They have preserved a large part of the genetic variability typical of their maternal population, which might also have been relatively high. This feature of new populations, may give them a relatively high ability to adapt to changing environments in the future.

Introduction

Lake minnow Eupallasella percnurus (Pallas, 1814) is a small freshwater fish, a member of the Leuciscidae family, widely distributed in the Northern Hemisphere. The range of this species extends from the Oder River basin in Western Poland, throughout the northern part of Eurasia, to the Pacific coast and the Sakhalin and Hokkaido islands [1]. It is commonly accepted that this species is not at risk of extinction on a global scale [2]. In contrast, in Poland, E. percnurus belongs to the rarest and most imperiled freshwater fish species [3]. The major cause of this is the specific nature of its habitats. They are small (often 0.05–0.1 ha) and very shallow (0.5–1.0 m maximum depth) water bodies of anthropogenic or natural origin. The former constitute at least 70% of all water bodies and came into existence due to peat exploitation in the 20th century; the latter are frequently tiny pools in land depressions. All such water bodies have a limited period of existence—usually several decades—due to progressive shallowing resulting from intensive plant succession. The processes of vanishing habitats can be considerably accelerated by natural factors, such as droughts and heatwaves, and different forms of human activities, such as intentional draining, filling the water bodies with different materials and littering. As a consequence, a consistent decline in the number of E. percnurus sites in Poland has been observed since the mid-20th century [4]. Of the 100 sites described in the previous century, only around 10 survived until the onset of the present one [5]. Currently, E. percnurus populations occur at 110–120 sites in Poland [6], whereas a decade earlier their total number was assessed at 160–170 [3]. Due to the continuous disappearance of E. percnurus sites in the country, this fish has been strictly protected by law since 1975; in 2004, it became a species that formally requires active protection measures [7].

The active protection of E. percnurus commenced in 2002 within the framework of a long-term local project carried out in Central Poland, where this species was almost absent [8]. The main goal of the project was to establish several new E. percnurus populations by translocation of cultivated juvenile individuals into selected small water bodies not inhabited by this species. Fish juveniles were offspring of several tens of wild parental individuals, originating from a large local population inhabiting a vanishing mid-forest lake (52°29’31.89" N; 21°16’17.40" E). To obtain juvenile fish, standard propagation techniques were used [9, 10], and techniques for controlled rearing were developed through E. percnurus larval and juvenile stages [11, 12].

In 2004–2012, juvenile E. percnurus were released into several isolated water bodies to initiate new populations, and today five of these attempts can be considered entirely successful [8]. The annual monitoring of the new populations demonstrated that they required only 3–4 years after the final or the only translocation to stabilize both the population size and its sex structure with a strong predominance of females over males [13, 14]. However, to comprehensively evaluate the prospects of new E. percnurus populations for survival in the future, knowledge of their genetic variability is indispensable. It is especially important to consider that the vast majority of the Polish populations of this species, of an adequately long period of existence (several tens of years), might have experienced founder effects and/or strong genetic bottlenecks, resulting in a reduction in their genetic variation. In such cases, their ability to adapt to the changing environment [7] can be compromised.

Therefore, in the present work, we intended to comparing genetic diversity of old and newly established populations in order to evaluate from a conservation genetics perspective the ongoing translocation programme. Moreover, we tried to determining the genetic diversity of natural populations to identify potential sources for future captive-breeding programmes for translocation or reinforcement.

Material and methods

Study area, translocations and fish sampling

Genetic studies comprised a total of 18 E. percnurus populations from throughout its entire range of occurrence in Poland; among them, five were established recently, and 13 came into existence in the 20th century (Fig 1). The minimum age of the old populations was assessed at 30–40 years, with the maximum probably exceeding 50 years. Some of the old populations were investigated during our previous studies [7].

Fig 1. Present distribution of E. percnurus sites in Poland (grey circles).

Fig 1

Red circles indicate new populations (N01-N05) established by fish translocation; green circles indicate investigated populations existing over decades: Barłożnia (BAR), Bełcząc (BLC), Bledzewo (BLD), Chojnice (CHN), Drozdowo (DRZ), Guzy (GUZ), Mikołajki Pomorskie (MPM), Piotrowo (PTR), Podpakule (PDP), Sartowice (SRT), Siedliszcze (SDL), Sośniak (SOS), Zielonka (ZLK). The nameless five water bodies where new E. percnurus populations were initiated differed considerably in size and water reaction (pH) values but not in water depth (Table 1).

Table 1. Basic data on Eupallasella percnurus habitats, translocations and sampling.

Code name of a water body and new population Latitude/Longitude Maximum water surface (ha) Maximum water depth (m) Water reaction (pH) Number of fish translocated Year of translocation Year of sampling
N01 52°28’46.27"/21°14’51.88" 1.2 1.0 5.1–7.0 470 2012 2016
N02 52°30’11.50"/21°19’02.75" 0.2 1.2 5.5–6.5 1.000 2009 2016
N03 52°30’28.20"/21°15’19.11" 0.2 0.8 5.5–7.0 1.530 2004–2006 2012
N04 52°29’38.75"/21°19’45.45" 0.02 1.0 7.0–8.0 400 2009 2017
N05 51°30’01.71"/20°40’50.41" 0.5 1.2 6.5–7.5 3.300 2007–2008 2012

Translocations with the use of 0+ aged juveniles were performed once or repeated in consecutive years. The maternal population was situated 2–4 km away from new populations N01-N04, and about 120 km from N05. The total number of juveniles released to the individual water bodies varied between 470 and 3,300. Samples of fish from new populations for the genetic studies were taken 4–8 years after the final or the only translocation. Fish from all investigated populations were captured using baited traps with two openings (25 × 25 × 40 cm; mesh 5 mm; opening diameter 60 mm) [13]. The access to the particular water bodies in the field was based on the verbal permission of the land owners. To maintain fish welfare and minimize their stress, all manipulations with the captured fish were preceded by their anesthetization in a water solution of MS-222 (Argent Labs, USA) at a concentration of 80 mg/dm-3, and shortened to the minimum (15 min). 48 adult fish from each population were sampled. The biological materials for genetic analyses were little (3–5 mm; 10–20 mm2) tips of the left pelvic fins. The fish were awakened from anesthesia in fresh water and released immediately into their home water body. All procedures of fish catching and sampling were approved by the Local Ethics Commission in Olsztyn, Poland (Decision No. 22/2010 of January 27, 2010 for 2010–2012 and Decision No. 15/2015 of March 25, 2015 for 2015–2018). The wet fin fragments were put on a stiff 15 × 12 cm plate wrapped in aluminium foil and allowed to air dry. In a laboratory, the samples were placed in an air- dryer to remove the humidity at 30°C. Dry fin fragments were wrapped in a new piece of aluminium foil, numbered and stored separately in 1.5 ml Eppendorf tubes.

DNA extraction and microsatellite amplification

Genomic DNA was extracted from fin tissues using the Genomic Mini AX Tissue SPIN DNA Extraction and Purification Kit (A&A Biotechnology, Poland). The extraction procedure followed the manufacturer’s recommendations. The assessment of genetic variation was based on 13 polymorphic microsatellites: Z9878, 10362, 13419 (primer sequences were taken from the National Center for Biotechnology Information (NCBI; http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov), Ca3, 4 and 12, [15, 16] and Eupe1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 7 and 9 developed by Kaczmarczyk and Gadomski and included in [17]. The forward primer of each primer pair was 5’ end labelled with fluorescent dyes (6FAM, VIC, NED and PET). The composition of the PCR mixture and the thermal profiles of the PCR reaction were followed by [7]. The length of the amplified DNA fragments was determined using an Applied Biosystems 3130 Genetic Analyser against the GS500LIZ size standard. Fragment size and allele determination were performed using GeneMapper 4.0 software (Applied Biosystems). The number of genotyped samples was 48 for each population and was the same across all populations.

Analyses of genetic diversity

In each population, genetic diversity was evaluated based on the observed (Ho) and expected heterozygosity (He) at a given locus and across loci. A mean number of alleles across loci (AN) was determined. All calculations were computed using MSA software [18]. The Exact Hardy—Weinberg (H-W) test [19] was used to test the deviation from the H-W equilibrium. These calculations were performed using Arlequin 3.2.5 software [20, 21]. The likelihood of the null alleles presence at investigated loci was checked by using Hardy-Weinberg test for heterozygote deficiency with the Monte Carlo randomization [19]. The probability was assessed and the ’U’ test was performed as described by [22]. A number of iterations in this test was set to 100000. Probability of null alleles presence was evaluated as significant if p < 0.01. The monomorphic loci as well as loci almost monomorphic with very low frequency (f < 0.035) of allele different than main allele were excluded from those calculations. The tetrasomic locus CA4 was also excluded from this test. Those calculations was performed by using ML-Null Freq v.1.0 software [23]. Detection of loci under selection was based on the F-statistic, distance method for AMOVA computation and number of different alleles (FST like). Number of simulations was set on 50000 and number of demes 18. Significance level of this test was set at p ≤ 0.05. These calculations were performed using Arlequin 3.2.5 software [20, 21]. The likely occurrence of a bottleneck or founder effect and their influence on within-population genetic variability were based on the Garza—Williamson M index [24], including Excoffier’s adjustment [20, 21].

Analyses of genetic structure

Identification of factors that may contribute to genetic variations in groups of new and old populations was attempted via Bayesian analysis of population structure with STRUCTURE 2.3.4 software [25]. This analysis focused on detecting the possibility of admixtures between populations, and on assigning fish to their source population or other populations. To test the K parameter, it was increased stepwise from 8 to 20 (18 populations plus 2 suspected subpopulations). The length of the Burn-in Period was set at 100,000, and the number of Markov Chain Monte Carlo (MCMC) reps after Burn-in was also 100,000. Each of those simulations were repeated four times. The InPD values were calculated as a average of all four iterations of STRUCTURE runs at given K. The optimum K value used in the interpretation of the STRUCTURE results was calculated according to the Evanno method [26] using Structure Harvester Tool [27], available at https://taylor0.biology.ucla.edu/structureHarvester/ (accessed at 01.01.2024).

In an analysis of differences between both groups of populations we also performed a comparison of their allelic diversity, calculation of the overall number of alleles in the groups, and identification of private alleles specific for given population or group of populations. Those calculations were performed by using using GenAlEx v.6.5 [28].

Data analyses

The means of indicators of genetic variation (Ho, He, AN) and M value of the Garza—Williamson index were compared between the group of new populations and the older group of populations. Before starting a statistical analysis of differences between new and old E. percnurus populations, the distribution of means was tested using the Shapiro—Wilk test at the significance level α = 0.05. Those tests confirmed the normal distribution of all variables, so, for this reason, we used the parametric test analysis of variance (one-way ANOVA). These calculations were performed using STATISTICA 13.3 software (StatSoft Inc., USA). The number of Degrees of Freedom was 15 for the former and 17 for the latter variant. The significance threshold for the differences between the groups was set as p ≤ 0.05; differences were identified as highly significant at p ≤ 0.01.

Results

Analyses of genetic diversity

Among the new populations, the individual values of Ho and He were similar and ranged from 0.40 (N04 population) to 0.56 (N03 population) (SD 0.07) and from 0.41 (N04 population) to 0.50 (N03 population) (SD 0.03), respectively (Table 2). In the group of old populations, the individual values of these indicators were generally lower and differed considerably, ranging from 0.16 to 0.60 (SD 0.12) for Ho and from 0.15 to 0.55 (SD 0.11) for He. In two old populations (BLC and PDP), the values of Ho and He were relatively high and close to the data recorded for the new populations. For new and old groups of populations, the mean values of Ho were: (0.49 v. 0.35, respectively) and He were (0.46 v. 0.32, respectively). The Ho values differed significantly (F-Stat = 6.8756, p = 0.0185) between both groups, but after excluding BLC and PDP populations, those differences were highly significant (F-Stat = 20.3017, p = 0.0005). The differences in the mean He values between the groups of new and old populations were highly significant (F-Stat = 8.8549, p = 0.0089), and after excluding populations BLC and PDP, their significance increased (F-Stat = 34.5104, p < 0.0001). In all populations, the mean Ho values were close to the mean He values under H-W equilibrium. When calculated across all markers, departures from this equilibrium were not significant (p > 0.05). Departures were found only at the level of individual loci. Departures at locus Z9878 were significant in most populations, but significant deviations at other loci were detected only in some populations. It is likely that departures from H-W equilibrium at locus Z9878 are the consequence of the selection process (FST p < 0.05) of a gene located near to this microsatellite and thus closely related with its alleles. Moreover, significant traces of selection processes that can affect frequency of alleles were found in three other loci: CA3, Eupe1 and Eupe9 (FST p < 0.05). In the case of other loci no significant traces of selection processes were observed. Investigated loci differed between populations in probability presence of null alleles. A significant probability of null alleles presence (p < 0.05) was observed at Z10362 (BLC, and SRT), Z13419 (BAR), CA3 (LOJ), CA12 (CHN), Eupe1 (N04), Eupe2 (N05), Eupe4 (CHN), Eupe6 (N04, N05), and Eupe7 (N05). In other populations the probability of null alleles was not significant, therefore a potential existence of null alleles at investigated loci seems to have only an limited effect to genetic characteristics of investigated populations.

Table 2. The values of genetic variation indicators and Garza-Williamson index in new populations established by fish translocations (N01-N05) and old populations existing over decades (abbreviations in alphabetical order).

Population code Observed heterozygosity (Ho) Expected heterozygosity (He) Total number of alleles (AN) Garza-Williamson index (M) Source
N02 0.53 0.49 39 0.54 this work
N01 0.49 0.45 40 0.58 this work
N03 0.56 0.50 45 0.65 this work
N04 0.40 0.41 35 0.46 this work
N05 0.45 0.46 39 0.43 this work
mean ± SD (SE) 0.49 ± 0.06 (0.03) 0.46 ± 0.04 (0.02) 40 ± 3.6 (1.60) 0.53 ± 0.09 (0.04)
BAR 0.38 0.35 31 0.44 [7]
BLC 0.47 0.47 53 0.48 [7]
BLD 0.33 0.28 34 0.57 [7]
CHN 0.25 0.27 30 0.40 [7]
DRZ 0.33 0.31 27 0.37 K & W (unpubl.)
GUZ 0.39 0.34 33 0.35 K & W (unpubl.)
MPM 0.16 0.15 23 0.38 K & W (unpubl.)
PDP 0.60 0.55 44 0.58 [7]
PTR 0.28 0.26 30 0.33 [7]
SDL 0.23 0.20 22 0.24 K & W (unpubl.)
SOS 0.41 0.25 34 0.53 [7]
SRT 0.34 0.30 36 0.43 [7]
ZLK 0.32 0.31 28 0.44 [7]
mean ± SD (SE) 0.35 ± 0.11 (0.03) 0.32 ± 0.10 (0.03) 33 ± 8.3 (2.31) 0.43 ± 0.10 (0.28)
w/o BLC and PDP mean ± SD (SE) 0.31 ± 0.08 (0.02) 0.28 ± 0.06 (0.02) 30 ± 4.5 (1.40) 0.41 ± 0.09 (0.27)

K & W (unpubl.)–Kaczmarczyk D., & Wolnicki J. unpublished data

On the level of individual populations belonging to the new group, the total number of alleles (AN) detected across all loci ranged from 35 (N04 population) to 45 (N03 population) (SD 3.6), whereas 22–53 (SD 8.3) alleles were recorded in individual populations that belong to the group of the old group (Table 2). The difference between the respective mean number of alleles for the groups (40 v. 33) was not significant (F-Stat = 3.1118, p = 0.0968); however, after excluding populations BLC and PDP, which had the highest AN value (53 and 44, respectively), they were highly significant (F-Stat = 18.0696, p = 0.0008).

A genetic variation in all investigated populations was reduced as a result of bottlenecking or founder event (Garza—Williamson M index < 0.7), but the sizes of the reductions differed. The individual values of the Garza—Williamson M index proved to be higher in new populations (range 0.43 (population N05)– 0.65 (population (N03); SD 0.09) compared to the old populations (0.24–0.58; SD 0.10). The difference in the mean M value for the group of new and old populations (0.53 v. 0.43; Table 2) was not significant (F-stat = 4.431, p = 0.0515), but it became significant (F-stat = 6.4827, p = 0.0233) when BLC and PDP were excluded.

Analyses of genetic structure

The analysis performed using STRUCTURE 2.3.4. software (at K values from 8 to 17) revealed a similarity of genetic characteristics of fish in new populations N01 –N05. Differences between them and populations N05 started at K11 and N03 at K = 13. Admixture traces at K range (8–20) were recorded in populations BLC and PDP, but the former turned out to be the only one with distinct traces of admixtures at K values ranging from 13 to 20. In other populations, admixture traces were not clear. Some of the traces started at K = 16 or K = 17 and disappeared at higher K values. K = 11 was identified as the optimum value of this parameter because at this level the population structure, their relationship and admixture status were very close to field observations and results of our previous studies. On the other hand, the Delta K analysis performed by using Evanno method (Fig 2) indicated optimal K = 13, which shows own clusters for N03 and N05 populations. Over analyzed K values group of new populations remain in the same cluster up to K = 10. Starting from K = 11 the population N05 that had five private alleles (specific for this population and not observed in the others from this group) starts its own cluster. The population N03 had four private alleles and starting from K = 13 became different from other new populations. The other three new populations stay in the same cluster up to K = 17 when population N04 creates its own cluster. The analysis performed by GenAlEx software revealed that in new populations only five out of 59 alleles were private and not observed in old populations. Among them only one allele was detected in all new populations, one allele was identified in three out of five populations, and other three alleles in one of the new populations. As reported above, only a few alleles were identified as population specific. Most of the alleles detected in this group were common alleles and were found in the majority of populations belonging to this group. Consequently, the populations inside this group differed mostly in the frequency of common alleles than in the presence of population specific alleles. Inside the old populations 93 alleles were identified, but 25 of them were private for this group. Moreover none of them was observed across the entire group of 13 populations that comprise the old group. Only one of them was detected in seven out of 13 populations. Most private alleles were population specific and detected in one population or in two, maximum three of them. Summarising, genetic differences inside this group came from the existence of numerous private alleles and differences in frequency of common alleles, resulting in a high genetic distance between them.

Fig 2. Results of Delta K analysis performed by using Evanno method.

Fig 2

Those two bar plots as well as other showing the probability of assigning an individual fish to a given population at K 8, 10, 11, 13, 15, 17 were shown in Fig 3.

Fig 3. Results of admixture analysis performed using STRUCTURE software.

Fig 3

New populations: N02, N01, N03, N04, N05; old populations: Barłożnia (BAR), Bełcząc (BLC), Bledzewo (BLD), Chojnice (CHN), Drozdowo (DRZ), Guzy (GUZ), Mikołajki Pomorskie (MPM), Piotrowo (PTR), Podpakule (PDP), Sartowice (SRT), Siedliszcze (SDL), Sośniak (SOS), Zielonka (ZL). Average lnPD values are given in the brackets.

Discussion

The origin and age of E. percnurus populations and habitats that presently exist in Poland are well documented only in very rare cases. It is generally accepted, however, that the vast majority appeared as a result of human activity connected with peat extraction in the middle part of the 20th century [3, 29]). This makes it possible to assess the age of most E. percnurus populations at close to 50 years and about 25 fish generations. It seems then very likely that most of them, occurring in highly variable habitats (i.e. small, extremely shallow, vanishing water bodies), had to experience strong founder and/or bottleneck effects in the past. These effects resulted in a decline in their effective size and an increase in the rate of inbreeding, eventually resulting in a gradual decrease in their genetic variability. This phenomenon was favored by factors such as the distinct geographical isolation of most of the populations, the non-migratory nature of the species and a general lack of translocation of the fish, excluding translocations over very short distances carried out by members of the local communities [7].

The results of genetic studies performed at the onset of the present decade [3] and those obtained quite recently (present work) are in good agreement with the findings mentioned above. The 13 old E. percnurus populations included in the present study were characterized by relatively low genetic variation indicators: observed and expected heterozygosity and the total number of alleles. Moreover, they all had an M index value lower than 0.6, which is additional evidence that old populations experienced severe genetic bottlenecks that resulted in a reduction in their size with further negative genetic consequences [22].

In the group of old E. percnurus populations, all indicators of genetic variation differed considerably. Two populations, BLC and PDP, presented the highest values of heterozygosity, and the largest allelic diversity detected. Moreover, the traces of admixtures suggest and confirm the fact that both populations might be parts of larger metapopulations. The reason for this can be their incomplete isolation from other closely located populations of the species and subsequent gene flow. In fact, their habitats are parts of small complexes of several water bodies where populations of this fish existed a decade ago (BLC) or exist at present (PDP). Presumably, during spring flood events, gene flow can occur among local populations within their complexes. If genetic flow between them occurs quite often, the spatial isolation of the resistant patches of the metapopulation does not affect the consequences of genetic drift and reduces the rate of their genetic divergence to that typical for one large and stable population. Moreover, the genetic variability of each patch of the metapopulation declines more slowly than in an isolated population of a similar size. Consequently, the current level of genetic variation in the former population can result from the founder effect rather than from population bottlenecks [30]. The status of a metapopulation may have a mitigating effect on declines in heterozygosity and allele number caused by genetic bottlenecks. If lake minnow populations are part of larger metapopulations, such situations should not be considered exceptional. The two discussed here (BLC and PDP) are the only identified metapopulations among those investigated in this paper, and they had a disproportional impact on the results of the statistical analysis. Therefore, their particular status could explain some bias in the comparison of the genetic variation indicators between the groups of new and old populations. This justifies why we tested the significance of differences in values of the genetic variation for the population groups in two variants that included all old populations or excluded BLC and PDP.

In contrast, the lowest heterozygosity and very low values of AN and M, recorded for the old MPM population, seemed to be caused by total isolation throughout its long existence. It should be stressed that it occurs in a highly isolated mid-forest water body in an area where no other E. percnurus populations are likely to have ever occurred. Therefore, in its history, the feasibility of any gene exchange with another population of this fish should be considered extremely low. The effect of such a situation is a clear tendency to worsen the genetic variation observed during the last decade. A comparison of the heterozygosity indicators determined in 2011 [7] and 2016 (present paper) showed that in the meantime, the values declined from 0.21 to 0.16 (Ho) and from 0.18 to 0.15 (He), at the same very low total number of alleles (23).

Surprisingly, all newly established E. percnurus populations were of relatively high heterozygosity and allelic diversity, higher than almost all old populations. However, the differences between the former and the latter were not always significant. They become highly significant only when two old populations (BLC and PDP) were excluded from the group of old populations. These two populations were in fact metapopulations, rather than individual populations strongly isolated from others. This phenomenon seems to arise from three different reasons. The first is the relatively high genetic variation in the population that served as a source of maternal fish used to obtain the progeny for translocation. This assumption cannot be verified because this population unexpectedly became extinct together with its habitat before genetic investigations could have been carried out. However, a comparable level of genetic diversity recorded in all new populations and in two old populations, BLC and PDP, with the highest genetic variation, can suggest the existence of high genetic diversity in the now extinct maternal population used for obtaining progeny for translocations. The second reason seems to be the short period of the existence of new populations prior to the genetic analyses in relatively stable habitats, which is known from monitoring. Hence, presumably, none of the new populations have experienced any serious genetic bottlenecks that could have strongly reduced their genetic diversity. The third reason may be the fact that to initiate new populations of this species, juveniles at relatively high number were translocated. This made it possible to preserve a relatively large part of the genetic diversity of the maternal population in all-new populations. It is noteworthy, that N04 population was initiated by translocation of the lowest number of fish, and consequently it proved to have the lowest values of genetic variation indicators in this group.

Despite a progressive increases in genetic differences in the group of five new populations, they still maintain their general similarity. Most of the differences seem to result from random changes in allele frequency known as genetic drift. They seem to have a stronger effect than the existence population specific alleles. The increased rate of genetic divergence is especially noticeable between populations N03 and N05 where it overlaps with possible founder effect, thus resulting in a slightly different set of alleles detected in those populations. These differences could have resulted from the use of different sets of spawners in each year as well as from their individual reproductive success. It should be stressed that N03 and N05 populations are the only ones where repeated translocations were used. Thus, two (N05) or three (N03) years of translocations combined with relatively high number of fish used could have increased the genetic diversity as well as the differences between them and the remaining new populations. The differences between the latter seem to be caused by environmental factors that affect the genetic variation of each of them [31] and strong genetic drift that is typical for this species [7].

Although the genetic characteristics of fish used for translocations are unknown, a significantly higher M value in the new populations versus old ones (without BLC and PDP) may suggest that both bottleneck effect in the source population and the founder effect inside new populations were relatively weak. This feature should positively affect their genetic viability in the future.

To the best of our current knowledge, all new lake minnow populations are strictly isolated from other populations of the species. Thus, gene flow between new and any other populations of this fish could not have been the factor contributing to their genetic variation. Consequently, the environmental factors and genetic drift are probably the key factors that determine the rate of differentiation inside new lake minnow populations and differences among them detected in these studies as well.

In the present work, the group of 13 old E. percnurus populations constitute approximately 11% of all its populations currently existing in Poland, so it can be regarded as a sample representative of the Polish genetic state of this species. This means that populations of this species of relatively high genetic variability that might be used for success in active protection programs are a considerable minority in the country. This makes knowledge of the genetic diversity of a potential maternal population decisive for the successful conservation of this species through translocations of its cultivated juveniles or wild individuals.

Acknowledgments

We would like to thank G. Radtke (National Inland Fisheries Research Institute, Poland) for his valuable field assistance.

Data Availability

The data is held in a public repository include genotyping data submitted as a pdf file: Lake-minnow_genotyping_MSA_ready.pdf This file is available at https://osf.io/62tby/?view_only=513c41b6d7e547c0a558b116a0a8374e.

Funding Statement

1. Ministry of Science and Higher Education, Poland, Grant Number: N N304 324839 for 2010–2013; (financial support of: collection of samples, lab analysis, chemicals, NGS sequencing), 2. National Science Centre, Poland, Grant Number: 2014/15/B/NZ9/05240 for 2015–2019; (financial support of: collection of samples, lab equipment, lab analysis, lab plastics, chemicals) 3. Statutory Research Topics of the National Inland Fisheries Research Institute, Poland, Grants Numbers: Z-005 and Z-020 for 2024-2026. (financial support of: prepare the manuscript, publication costs).

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PONE-D-24-01902Genetic variability of the endangered fish lake minnow (Eupallasella percnurus) in populations newly established by translocation and those existing long term in PolandPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: Line 122: Please revised Eupallasella percnurus to E. percnurus.

Line 248: Please change K 8-17 to K 8, 10, 11, 13, 15, 17. In line 240, why authors reported that K=11 was identified as the optimum value?

Reviewer #2: The manuscript contains an interesting study on the genetic diversity of the translocated populations of lake minnow Eupallasella percnurus in Poland. The topic is worthy of investigation, and the manuscript is particularly interesting in that it investigates the effect of conservation activities. In principle, the design of the study could be appropriate, but I have some questions that need to be clarified before publication.

The study aimed to investigate the conservation genetics of the populations resulting from the translocation program concerning the surviving original populations. Although the manuscript indicates that information on genetic diversity and structure of the original populations has already been published, this information should play a greater role in both the introduction and the evaluation. This is particularly true for the original population that is the source of the five new populations. There is practically no data available on this population in the manuscript, only its location and distance from the new populations, the number of individuals translocated, and the time of translocation are included. The strength and relevance of the manuscript to the broader interest is that translocations from known populations have been made with known numbers of individuals, and genetic analysis could show how successfully new populations can maintain diversity and the structure of the original population; at what initial size genetic drift, founder effects occur. However, it is not the other original populations that are needed to know this, but the genetic data of the source population.

The material and method are adequate for DNA extraction and microsatellite amplification. Still, the resulting database should allow for much more detailed analysis (unfortunately the raw data are not available in the submitted material, although the statement suggests that they will be available after publication.)

Before examining diversity and genetic structure, the presence of null alleles and loci under selection should have been investigated. The latter would also provide additional information for the objective.

In addition to calculating diversity indices, detecting private alleles and their frequencies in populations could provide important information. If data on the original source population are available, allele distributions can provide additional information on the changes in diversity. It would be important to know the diversity of the source population since each of the new populations mostly showed higher diversity than the 13 old populations.

Values of the G-W index less than 0.70 suggest that all of the new and old populations have experienced a bottlenecking or founder event.

Based on the genetic structure and diversity data, it appears that the translocations did not occur from a single source population in all cases. (The original lnPD values should be also presented for the Stucture analysis.) The delta K method indicated 13 clusters in the analysis, resulting in N03 and N05 being different from the other three new populations. Moreover, N03 shows the origin of the BLD population and N05 is a unique cluster, based on Figure 3. This latter one could be the result of private alleles remaining from the original population which are absent from the other three due to the founder effect; or the admixture with a local population that was not detected before the translocation. The results should be re-evaluated according to the findings from the Structure analysis.

The diversity data could be correlated with the translocated individual number (founder population size) to estimate its effect.

Although several issues need to be clarified to evaluate the results, in my opinion, once the details are provided and worked out, a valuable publication can be produced.

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


9 Apr 2024

Dr Dariusz Kaczmarczyk Olsztyn, 18. 03. 2024

Department of Pond Fisheries

National Inland Fisheries Institute in Olsztyn

Editor of PLOS ONE Journal

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A. The Methods section was supplemented with information about investigation of fish. This information was included in the manuscript in lines 126-135. A details of permits given by Local Ethics Commission in Olsztyn were added in Methods section (lines 132-135). Moreover, we gave some additional information in Section Study area, translocations and fish sampling

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Reviewer#1

1. Line 122: Please revised Eupallasella percnurus to E. percnurus.

A. This fragment was changed according to reviewer’s suggestion and is now at Line 108.

2. Line 248: Please change K 8-17 to K 8, 10, 11, 13, 15, 17.

A. This fragment was changed according to reviewer’s suggestion and is now at Line 288.

3. In line 240, why authors reported that K=11 was identified as the optimum value?

A. “K=11 was identified as the optimum value of this parameter because at this level the population structure, their relationship and admixture status were very close to field observations and results of our previous studies. “ This fragment is now at Line 259-261 in the revised version of this manuscript.

Reviewer#2

General comment. This manuscript was constructed around the questions of how a genetic variation in a group of populations established through a conservation program of this species differs between a group of decades-old populations, and what the perspectives are of using them in ongoing conservation programs. Although tracking individual differences between lake minnow populations is always interesting, this subject is the primary aim of this manuscript, likewise, the technical aspects of molecular method (null alleles presence) used and molecular markers selection (loci under selection). Following the reviewer’s suggestions, appropriate tests were performed, their details and results were given in the Methods section but they were reported briefly in the Results section and discussed shortly in the discussion section.

The materials and methods are adequate for DNA extraction and microsatellite amplification. Still, the resulting database should allow for much more detailed analysis (unfortunately the raw data are not available in the submitted material, although the statement suggests that they will be available after publication.)

1. Before examining diversity and genetic structure, the presence of null alleles and loci under selection should have been investigated. The latter would also provide additional information for the objective.

A. Following reviewer’s suggestions we tested a probability of null alleles presence and loci under selection. In the revised version of this manuscript the details of null alleles presence test were given at lines 159-167 and identification of loci under selection at lines 184-188. The results of those test were reported in Results section at line 226-231.

2. In addition to calculating diversity indices, detecting private alleles and their frequencies in populations could provide important information.

A. Following reviewer’s suggestion we added those calculations to the manuscript text in the sections: Methods line 187-190, Results 264-267, 269-283, and discussion 375-376 and 378-399

3. If data on the original source population are available, allele distributions can provide additional information on the changes in diversity. It would be important to know the diversity of the source population since each of the new populations mostly showed higher diversity than the 13 old populations.

A. Unfortunately no data of original source population is available, because it was lost shortly after conservation program was started.

4. Values of the G-W index less than 0.70 suggest that all of the new and old populations have experienced a bottlenecking or founder event.

A. Thank you for this comment, I have added this information to the Results section line 239-241.

5. Based on the genetic structure and diversity data, it appears that the translocations did not occur from a single source population in all cases.

A. Those populations were established by used the progeny obtained during different periods of time and spawning. Although all spawners were taken from the same population, Its likely that some of differences between populations can be a consequence of using different sets of spawners in production of stocking material at given year. This topic was discussed in Discusion section (line 376-384)

6. The original lnPD values should be also presented for the Stucture analysis.

A. The InPD values were calculated as an average for all iteration of Structure runs at given K were introduced to Figure 3. The methods of their calculation was mentioned in Methods section at line 182-183 and caption of Figure 3 at line 294.

7. The delta K method indicated 13 clusters in the analysis, resulting in N03 and N05 being different from the other three new populations.

A. Probably due the founder effect, some population specific alleles and genetic drift the populations N03 and N05 differs to other new populations. This was indicated in the Results section at line 264 – 267 results. A possible explanation of those differences was added to Discussion section at line 376-284.

8. Moreover, N03 shows the origin of the BLD population and N05 is a unique cluster, based on Figure 3.

A. We checked for similarities between these populations using genetic distance estimation based on the fixation index (FST) and variation average allelic size (δμ2). The results of these calculations have not confirmed the similarity of the N03 and BLD populations. Both models show large and very large differences between these populations. Possibly this similarity is an artifact of STRUCTURE software.

9. This latter one could be the result of private alleles remaining from the original population which are absent from the other three due to the founder effect;

A. Indeed, this population had five private alleles that were not observed in any other populations from the new populations. This information was added to the Results section line 264-267 and was discussed in the Discussion section at line 376-384

10. or the admixture with a local population that was not detected before the translocation.

A. To the best of our current knowledge, all new populations are strictly isolated from other lake minnow populations. Thus, gene flow between new and other populations of this fish is not a factor that contributes to their genetic variation. This topic was introduced to the Discussion section at lines 392-394.

10. The results should be re-evaluated according to the findings from the Structure analysis.

A. Results section was supplemented by results of STRUCTURE analysis and other analysis.

11. The diversity data could be correlated with the translocated individual number (founder population size) to estimate its effect.

A. Thank you, reviewer for this suggestion. Indeed a new population N04 is that one where the number of fish used to establish it was lowest. This population had the lowest heterozygosity and number of alleles. This information was added to the discussion (line 370-372) and this population was marked in results where values of genetic variation indicators are given at line 205, 233.

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Genetic variability of the endangered fish lake minnow (Eupallasella percnurus) in populations newly established by translocation and those existing long term in Poland

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