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. 2024 Oct 17;19(10):e0309967. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0309967

Evidence-based dust exposure prediction and/or control tools in occupational settings: A scoping review protocol

Gebisa Guyasa Kabito 1,*, Yonatal Tefera 1,2, Chandnee Ramkissoon 1, Sharyn Gaskin 1
Editor: Pisirai Ndarukwa3
PMCID: PMC11486402  PMID: 39418247

Abstract

Background

Workplace atmospheric exposure monitoring is the standard method to assess and control hazardous dust exposure; however, feasibility and cost constraints often limit its application. In recent decades, evidence-based tools supporting exposure modelling and control banding have been developed to aid in predicting and/or controlling occupational exposure to various contaminants. However, there is limited information on the availability and applicability of evidence-based tools for predicting and/or controlling occupational dust exposure, as well as on the methods for evaluating these tools across different exposure scenarios. Therefore, this planned scoping review aims to identify existing evidence-based tools for dust exposure predicting and/or controlling and to present evaluation approaches.

Methods

We will employ the scoping review methods developed by the Joanna Briggs Institute (JBI). The search will be conducted on PubMed, Scopus, and Web of Science databases, in addition to grey literature from the National Institute for Occupational Safety and Health (NIOSH) and advanced Google searches. Studies will be included if they report evidence-based tools for predicting and/or controlling dust exposure using quantitative or semi-quantitative designs and provide a detailed explanation of the methods used for tool development. There will be no restrictions on publication date or geographical location; however, only studies published in English will be considered. Studies focusing exclusively on dust exposure in environmental settings will be excluded. Each member of the review team will screen titles, abstracts, and full texts independently and in collaboration, based on the inclusion criteria. The extracted data will encompass details such as author, title, country, accessible platforms, method/tool names, intended users, types of dust, and occupational settings. Descriptions of the identified tools will include numerical data and narrative summaries to ensure a comprehensive overview.

Trial registration

OSF (https://doi.org/10.17605/OSF.IO/S6EZJ).

Introduction

The World Health Organization (WHO) defines dust as “solid particles ranging in size from below 1 μm up to at least 100 μm, which may be or become airborne, depending on their origin, physical characteristics, and ambient conditions” [1]. Thus, exposure to dust is typically evaluated based on particle size, which is categorized into coarse (> 2.5 μm), fine (< 2.5 μm), and ultrafine particles (UFP) (< 100 nm) [2]. In occupational settings, exposure to dust primarily arises from mechanical processes such as cutting, breaking, crushing, drilling, abrasive and sand blasting, digging, or hammering [35].

Occupational respiratory diseases (ORDs) related to overexposure to dust represent a significant global public health concern, contributing to approximately one-third of all documented work-related mortality [6, 7]. Moreover, the Global Burden of Disease (GBD) reported about 4 million deaths in 2019 [8] and 13.6 million disability-adjusted life years (DALY) due to ORDs [7]. Exposure to dust has also been associated with an increased risk of cardiovascular diseases, with heightened prevalence observed among mine workers and those exposed to silica, diesel exhaust, and inorganic dust, as well as in construction, metal industries, asphalt work, and heavy equipment operation [9, 10].

The prevention of dust-related health burdens critically depends on rigorous exposure assessment and effective dust control measures in the workplace [11]. Exposure assessments, a major component of the occupational health risk assessment process, have been applied across various occupational contexts, leading to the development of numerous definitions and methods (tools) for exposure estimation and control of risks to different toxic agents [1214]. For example, conventional methods require measurements by trained professionals, such as certified occupational hygienists, who measure dust exposure levels and compare them against established Workplace Exposure Standards (WES) and recommend dust mitigation or control measures accordingly [15, 16]. While the conventional exposure monitoring method is considered the gold standard in dust exposure assessment and control, its application is not always practical for all exposure scenarios due to constraints related to time, expertise, and cost [1719].

In such scenarios, exposure modelling tools are an alternative method [20]. Considering this, there has been a significant rise in the development and implementation of evidence-based tools in recent decades. In this context, ’evidence-based’ refers to tools that are supported by exposure models, exposure data (databases), and control banding techniques for predicting and/or controlling different contaminants in the workplace [2123]. For example, exposure models are conceptual or mathematical models that enable the estimation of individual exposure parameters based on available input data from specific occupational exposure scenarios [24, 25]. Likewise, control banding employs models that provide control guidance (bands) based on input occupational exposure information [22]. Evidence-based tools can be accessed online through various platforms [26], including web-based interfaces [27, 28], software applications [29], mobile apps [30], and Microsoft Excel [22].

Despite the development of different evidence-based tools for predicting and/or controlling exposure to different contaminants, it is unclear which tools in the literature are specifically relevant for occupational dust exposure. Additionally, there is a lack of information on the evaluation approaches for these tools, which could guide users in selecting the tool for specific dust exposure scenarios.

We conducted a preliminary search across different databases, including PROSPERO, MEDLINE, PUBMED, the Cochrane Database of Systematic Reviews, and JBI Evidence Synthesis, to determine whether the topic has been addressed. We identified one systematic review [31] that synthesized evidence on the reliability of models recommended by the European Chemicals Agency (ECHA), evaluating their precision, accuracy, and robustness in exposure assessment [32]. However, there is no current or ongoing scoping or systematic reviews were found on the evidence-based tools used for occupational dust exposure and the evaluation approaches for these tools. We have chosen a scoping review as a suitable and comprehensive method for synthesizing evidence, as it allows us to examine a diverse body of evidence and outline the fundamental concepts within this research domain [33].

To address this gap, the proposed scoping review will identify existing evidence-based tools for predicting and/or controlling worker dust exposure, as well as explore methodologies/approaches used for evaluating these identified tools. We anticipate that this scoping review will serve as a valuable resource by presenting relevant evidence-based tools for dust exposure prediction and/or control in occupational settings, along with the evaluation approaches for these tools. This will serve as a reference for making informed decisions when selecting the appropriate tools for various dust exposure scenarios.

Methods

This study will utilize the Joanna Briggs Institute (JBI) method for scoping reviews, recognized for its structured approach to elements such as research questions, inclusion and exclusion criteria, search strategies, and data extraction, among others [34]. The final report of this proposed scoping review will follow the reporting guidance recommended by Preferred Reporting Items for Systematic Reviews and Meta-Analyses Extension for Scoping Reviews (PRISMA-ScR), enhancing transparency through specific reporting criteria and facilitating a thorough and standardized presentation of the scoping review findings (S1 Appendix) [35].

Protocol and registration

The protocol has been registered on the Open Science Framework (https://doi.org/10.17605/OSF.IO/S6EZJ).

Review question

The specific research questions for this scoping review are:

  1. What evidence-based tools are available in the literature for predicting and/or controlling dust exposure in occupational settings?

  2. What evidence is available regarding the evaluation approaches for these tools?

Eligibility criteria

We utilized the PCC (Population/problem, Concept, and Context) framework as recommended by JBI [34].

Concept

The core focus of this proposed study is on evidence-based tools for predicting and/or controlling dust exposure, as well as the evaluation approaches relevant to these tools. According to the definition of ’evidence-based’ provided in the background section, a tool is deemed evidence-based in this review if it meets specific criteria: it must be incorporated into or based on databases (such as silica dust monitoring data from literature, exposure scenarios, measurements, or archived government data) and employ statistical, mathematical, or computational models to predict dust exposure levels and/or recommend control measures (control bands). Additionally, evaluation approaches are operationalized as the quantitative or qualitative methods used to assess the effectiveness of these tools, considering reliability, validity, applicability, and efficacy.

Problem

The study problem was occupational dust exposure, which includes respirable dust, respirable crystalline silica, and other hazardous dusts such as coal, minerals, wood, metal, and both organic and inorganic dusts generated in the workplace to which workers may be exposed during work activities.

Context

This proposed scoping review is limited to occupational settings, encompassing a wide range of work environments, including but not limited to construction sites, manufacturing plants, mining, and quarrying. This review will exclude studies conducted solely in environmental settings, which result in exposures that might occur outside of work environments (Table 1).

Table 1. Summary of problem, concept, and context framework for the evidence-based tools scoping review protocol.

Problem Dust exposure
Main concept • Evidence-based tools for exposure prediction and/or control; and evaluation approaches.
Context • All occupational settings

Information sources

The proposed scoping review will include peer-reviewed, primary, and grey literature sources that are accessible to the public and that fulfil the eligibility criteria (Table 2).

Table 2. Summary of inclusion and exclusion criteria for the evidence-based tools scoping review protocol.

Inclusion criteria
  • Publications describing evidence-based tools for dust exposure prediction and/or control will be included. These publications should include a full description of the tool’s development process.

  • Only publications in English language.

  • All publications without date and location restriction.

  • Publications must focus on dust exposure in any occupational settings.

  • Quantitative or semi-quantitative study design.

Exclusion criteria
  • Publications lacking a full description of the tool’s development process.

  • Publications missing abstract and/or full text.

  • Publications focusing solely on dust exposure in environmental settings.

Search strategy

The databases that will be searched are PubMed, Scopus, and Web of Science. Grey literature will be sourced through the National Institute for Occupational Safety and Health (NIOSH) platform and advanced Google searches. The search strategy used relevant keywords, subject headings, and MeSH terms specific to each database, incorporating Boolean operators "AND" and "OR" to construct comprehensive search strings. This strategy was developed in consultation with a qualified librarian from the University of Adelaide. Initially, a preliminary search on PubMed was conducted to identify articles using terms such as dust exposure, exposure models, occupational exposure models, exposure band, exposure scenario, exposure prediction, tools, risk assessment, risk management, control banding, evaluation methods, and exposure control. The PubMed search query was subsequently refined by integrating text words from relevant article titles and abstracts, along with MeSH terms used to classify these articles (S2 Appendix). The ’concept’ and ’context’ were combined in our search strategy due to a low yield of citations when searched separately. For advanced Google Scholar searches, the same specific terms will be used, and the first 100 articles will be included (S3 Appendix). The search strategy was designed with data charting and literature mapping in mind, as detailed in (Table 3). The search process will be iterative, allowing for the identification and incorporation of additional keywords and relevant search terms as needed.

Table 3. A logic grid of keywords structured by problem, concept, and context framework for the evidence-based tools scoping review protocol.

Search guide #1. Problem #2. Concept and context
Phenomena of interest Dust exposure Evidence-based tools for prediction and/or control of dust exposure, Evaluation approaches
Alternative keywords or Searches in each domain Dust OR Silica OR Aerosol OR Particulate matter OR wood OR metal OR Coal OR Organic OR inorganic Web-based OR Online OR Internet OR Device OR Instrument OR technology OR methods OR Models OR risk assessment OR Exposure prediction OR occupational exposure OR occupational exposure assessment OR occupational exposure model OR exposure assessment OR Exposure model OR Exposure model assessment OR exposure measurement OR exposure scenarios OR estimation OR evaluation methods OR Risk management OR exposure control OR risk control OR Exposure control plan OR Control banding OR exposure control banding OR approaches
Final search [1 AND 2]

Study selection

All records retrieved will be imported into Covidence (www.covidence.org) for screening and removing duplicates. To ensure that all members of the review team (S.G., C.R., Y.T., G.G.K.) are fully familiar with the eligibility criteria and selection process, we will pilot-test 25 articles during the title and abstract screening phase. Following this pilot test, three independent reviewers (G.G.K., C.R, S.G.) will screen all records by titles and abstract against the established eligibility criteria (Table 2). Any discrepancies between the reviewers’ assessments will be discussed and resolved, with the criteria refined as necessary. This iterative process will continue until both reviewers reach full agreement on the eligibility of the articles. After the title and abstract screening is completed, full-text screening of the selected publications will proceed. Two reviewers will independently assess the full-text articles to determine their inclusion. The team will then collaborate to reach a consensus on each article. Articles that do not meet the criteria will be excluded, with the reasons for exclusion documented and reported in the final scoping review report.

Data extraction

We customized the JBI data extraction tool to fit our study objectives, specifying the information required for each category (S4 Appendix). Two independent reviewers will extract data from the studies included using this tool and will collaborate to finalize the data. During the extraction process, the tool will be modified and revised as necessary to address any issues that arise. All modifications will be documented in the final scoping review report. The extracted data will encompass various study characteristics, including author, title, publication year, and country of origin. Additionally, it will cover details such as accessible platforms, method/tool names, intended users, types of dust, and occupational settings. Furthermore, the data will include information on the description of the methods/tools used, including control bands, databases, exposure bands, input parameters, model types, and evaluation methodologies. If further information is required, the authors of the included studies will be contacted.

Data analysis and presentation

Extracted data will be analysed using descriptive statistics (frequency and proportion) and a narrative summary. The results will be presented through tables and figures to facilitate clear understanding and contextualization. Additionally, the implications for future research and practical applications will be discussed.

Ethics and dissemination

Ethical approval is not required since the study is based on publicly available literature. The final report will be disseminated through peer-reviewed journals and relevant conferences.

Limitations

This planned scoping review will not assess the methodological rigor of the included studies. The diverse terminology used in exposure prediction and dust-related research may result in some relevant studies being overlooked in our search strategy. Finally, only studies published in English will be included in this review.

Conclusions

This planned scoping review will, to the best of the authors’ knowledge, be the first to address existing knowledge gaps in evidence-based tools for dust exposure prediction and/or control in occupational settings. It will systematically identify these tools and their evaluation methods. The findings from this review are expected to serve as a reference for selecting and applying evidence-based dust exposure prediction and/or control tools in various exposure scenarios.

Deviations from the study protocol

Any deviations from the study protocol will be described in the final report.

Supporting information

S1 Appendix. PRISMA-ScR checklist.

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pone.0309967.s001.docx (45.5KB, docx)
S2 Appendix. PubMed search strategy.

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pone.0309967.s002.docx (36.8KB, docx)
S3 Appendix. Search strategy for Google advanced search logic grid.

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pone.0309967.s003.docx (34.8KB, docx)
S4 Appendix. Data extraction tool.

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pone.0309967.s004.docx (35.8KB, docx)

Acknowledgments

The authors would like to thank Vikki Langton, a librarian at The University of Adelaide, for her invaluable assistance in developing a comprehensive search strategy for this proposed scoping review. G.G.K. acknowledges support from the Australian Government Research Training Program (RTP) Scholarship.

Data Availability

There are no data sets associated with this protocol.

Funding Statement

The author(s) received no specific funding for this work.

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Reviewer #1: The manuscript under review contains the key components and framework for a productive scoping review mapping existing evidence-based tools for occupational dust exposure assessment and control worthy of consideration for publication.

Overall, there are many strengths to the submission, and the authors should be commended for their proposal of this timely review.

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Across the protocol, I would recommend that greater clarity be given to how the prospective tools are framed: does the tool need to be both an assessment AND a control tool for occupational dust exposure, or can the tool fulfil only one of these functions? If there exists a tool for assessing occupational dust, but it does not contain an element or component for controlling dust, will it still be considered for inclusion (and vice versa)? There are implications of this decision from the title, through the abstract and in particular through the methods section (especially search strategy – currently reads as if you are search for one OR the other, does not have to be both). If a tool must do both assess and control, this will need to be made more explicit in the methods section. Suggest providing an operational definition for what an occupational dust assessment / control tool is

The authors are encouraged to reflect on the purpose and utility of this scoping review once completed – ambiguity appears at various points in the introduction through to the review question. In particular – is this scoping review to map the tools available and the methodologies associated with the literature utilising said tools (as it reads from line 110-114) or is it to examine the evidence to identify evidence that supports the decision-making process for selecting tools (implied in line 83-87, and line 104-106). To simplify, is the review to map the tools that exist or to map the evidence around decision making process for selecting tools or the efficacy of the tools? If it just presenting the tools, as the questions currently read, it is unclear how this will provide the foundation for clear guidance and evidence on the process through which workers etc select the appropriate tools. It can present which tools are being used where, and perhaps what evidence supports their efficacy (if RQ1 is expanded to include this), but it does not extract evidence around the selection process of the tools themselves.

Suggest considering expanding RQ1 to include what the evidence is for either a) the effectiveness of the tools and / or b) the implementation challenges (process evaluation-type variables) associated with using the various tools.

Within methods, suggest parsing out population and context (line 119) into separate paragraphs as you have stated you will use the PCC framework and further develop and clarify the nuances between each of these components, clearly articulating what will be included/excluded under each heading. Table 1 appears incongruent, as it is now ‘problems, concept, context’. Suggest revising to be consistent. With regards Table 1, if dust is extensively searched in concept 1, then adding it to some of the terms in concept 2 (tools) is redundant. The final search at the bottom of table 1 does not appear to be correct, and needs revising – is the final search [1 and 2 and (3a or 3b) and 4]? If so, the two lines above appear superfluous.

It is interesting to read that the authors are proposing to follow both JBI and PRISMA requirements for scoping reviews, and this is slightly confusing to the reviewer. For instance, the framing of the approach under the methods heading from line 115-118, and the methods heading from 135-140 appears redundant and should be clarified – are the approaches complementary or can one be adopted more wholeheartedly?

The development of the search strategy appears fairly adhoc – was there any formal structure used to guide this development? Would there be scope to audit using established tool, such as PRESS guidelines (McGowan et al., 2016) to ensure rigour? Regarding the strategy itself, the fields for the pubmed search strategy have not been specified across each of the lines (in particular 1). There are no MeSH terms specified in 1, have these been considered? Are any date limiters going to be used? Language or other filters? Provide clarity here. There appears to be a discrepancy between Table 1 brainstorm of terms and the search in PubMed, consider aligning. Running this search in PubMed yields a few errors (in particular line 2), but still produces only 166 results. Are you confident that this search will yield sufficient results? This reviewer wonders if the terms around the tools are too specific or maybe overlapping (line 2-3). Search strategy for additional databases and details around searching grey sources would be recommended to include (in particular, how will you search in google scholar).

Through study selection – clarify whether you mean two independent reviewers means that their decisions will be blinded from each other.

It is unclear which types of study designs will be included – assuming it is all quantitative methodologies of tool assessment, but will you also include qualitative evaluations of tools? This should be made explicit within the protocol.

Figure 1 is not needed in a protocol paper and should be removed.

While it is acknowledged that a risk of bias appraisal (quality appraisal) is not always required in scoping reviews, they can be called for in certain instances. In this proposed review, as RQ2 seeks to map the methodologies and approached reported for evaluating occupational dust exposure assessment and control tools, it is recommended that a formal tool be employed to assess the methodological quality of the included studies as this would lend additional rigour and context to the answer for RQ2. If both qual/quant studies are to be included, suggest perhaps the MMAT (Hong 2018)?

Regarding data extraction tool, it appears that what is presented might only apply to RQ1, what data regarding RQ2 will be extracted?

Final minor comments: recommend revising the entire manuscript to ensure the proper tense throughout for a protocol paper, at times ebbing between past (line 86) and future (line 110, for example). Line 139-140 is confusing and requires revision.

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14 Aug 2024

Authors’ Response to Reviewers’ Comments

Manuscript Number: PONE-D-24-08686

Submission Title: Occupational Dust Exposure Assessment and Control Tools: A Scoping Review Protocol

Authors: Gebisa Guyasa Kabito, Yonatal Tefera, Chandnee Ramkissoon, Sharyn Gaskin

16th August 2024

Dear Dr. Pisirai Ndarukwa,

We are thankful for the opportunity to submit a revised version of our manuscript originally titled "Occupational Dust Exposure Assessment and Control Tools: A Scoping Review Protocol" to PLOS ONE (now titled “Evidence-based dust exposure prediction and/or control tools in occupational settings: A scoping review protocol”). We sincerely appreciate the thorough review and the constructive feedback provided by you and the reviewer(s). We have carefully considered all the comments and suggestions and have made comprehensive revisions to the manuscript accordingly. The changes have been tracked for your convenience. We believe that the manuscript has significant improvement as a result of the changes made.

Our detailed responses to the reviewer’ and editors' comments are provided in the Table of Revisions below, with references corresponding to the track-changed manuscript.

We declare that all authors have read and approved the revised manuscript and it has not been published previously, nor is it being considered by any other Journal.

Kind regards,

Gebisa Kabito

Manuscript ID: PONE-D-24-08686

Table 1: Table of Revisions corresponding to Editor and Reviewer’s comments made to manuscript (line references correspond to the track-changed manuscript)

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Reviewer #1

The manuscript under review contains the key components and framework for a productive scoping review mapping existing evidence-based tools for occupational dust exposure assessment and control worthy of consideration for publication. Overall, there are many strengths to the submission, and the authors should be commended for their proposal of this timely review.

As regards to primary concerns, the following are recommended for consideration:

1. Across the protocol, I would recommend that greater clarity be given to how the prospective tools are framed: does the tool need to be both an assessment AND a control tool for occupational dust exposure, or can the tool fulfil only one of these functions? Authors agree. Accordingly, we have clarified the focus of the study. In our manuscript, the evidence-based tools refer to both functions: as exposure prediction components, exposure control components, or both. We have operationalized and applied necessary changes throughout the manuscript to ensure clarity, as per the reviewer's recommendations. Abstract section

(Line 36- 37)

Introduction section

(Line 79-81)

Method section

(Line 132-137)

2. If there exists a tool for assessing occupational dust, but it does not contain an element or component for controlling dust, will it still be considered for inclusion (and vice versa)? Thank you for your question. Yes, tools for assessing occupational dust exposure will be considered for inclusion in our study even if they do not include components specifically for controlling dust. Similarly, tools focused solely on dust control will also be eligible for consideration. Our aim is to comprehensively review all relevant tools related to occupational dust exposure, whether they address assessment, control, or both aspects. We have added information in the text to clarify this point . method section

(Line 132-137)

3. There are implications of this decision from the title, through the abstract and in particular through the methods section (especially search strategy – currently reads as if you are search for one OR the other, does not have to be both). If a tool must do both assess and control, this will need to be made more explicit in the methods section. Authors agree.

We acknowledge that our current approach implies searching for tools that fulfill either assessment or control functions. Consequently, we have made necessary modifications throughout, including the title, inclusion criteria and search strategy to require tools that perform either assessment, control, or both. Table 2

Line 153

Table 3

Line 177

Appendix II

Line 378

4. Suggest providing an operational definition for what an occupational dust assessment / control tool is Authors agree, and we have now provided an operational definition as suggested. method section

(Line 132-137)

5. The authors are encouraged to reflect on the purpose and utility of this scoping review once completed – ambiguity appears at various points in the introduction through to the review question. In particular – is this scoping review to map the tools available and the methodologies associated with the literature utilising said tools (as it reads from line 110-114) or is it to examine the evidence to identify evidence that supports the decision-making process for selecting tools (implied in line 83-87, and line 104-106). To simplify, is the review to map the tools that exist or to map the evidence around decision making process for selecting tools or the efficacy of the tools? Authors accept the suggestion.

Accordingly, we have now modified and provided a clear focus of the scoping review throughout the manuscript, which is to map existing tools available for occupational dust prediction and/ or control, and to present evaluation approaches applied to these identified tools.

Introduction

Section

103-105

Method section

Line 123-125

6. If it just presenting the tools, as the questions currently read, it is unclear how this will provide the foundation for clear guidance and evidence on the process through which workers etc select the appropriate tools. It can present which tools are being used where, and perhaps what evidence supports their efficacy (if RQ1 is expanded to include this), but it does not extract evidence around the selection process of the tools themselves. Authors partly agree.

Authors acknowledge the importance of extracting direct evidence around the selection process of the tools, but this aspect is not included in our review, and will be addressed in future work.

However, this scoping review is designed to do more than just list available tools. It incorporates evaluation approaches that detail the validity, applicability, and suitability of each tool for specific types of dust in various occupational settings.

By systematically mapping both the tools and their evaluation approaches, we plan to provide a detailed analysis that supports or provides a basis for further work related to informed decision-making.

7. Suggest considering expanding RQ1 to include what the evidence is for either a) the effectiveness of the tools and / or b) the implementation challenges (process evaluation-type variables) associated with using the various tools. We thank the reviewer for their valuable suggestion. The authors believe this is a very important point and will aim to address it in a separate scope of work but will not be expanding the current scope.

We anticipate being able to address certain aspects of this point through our examination of existing evaluation approaches, which will include validation methods applied to these identified tools.

Method section

Line 137-139

8. Within methods, suggest parsing out population and context (line 119) into separate paragraphs as you have stated you will use the PCC framework and further develop and clarify the nuances between each of these components, clearly articulating what will be included/excluded under each heading. That you for your suggestion. We agree.

Accordingly, we made necessary amendments to clarify the nuances of the framework. Table 2

Line 153

9. Table 1 appears incongruent, as it is now ‘problems, concept, context’. Suggest revising to be consistent. With regards Table 1, if dust is extensively searched in concept 1, then adding it to some of the terms in concept 2 (tools) is redundant. We agree.

We have revised Table 1 to avoid redundancy in the search terms and to ensure consistency with the structure of 'problems, concept, context'.

Method section

Table 3

Line 177

10. The final search at the bottom of table 1 does not appear to be correct, and needs revising – is the final search [1 and 2 and (3a or 3b) and 4]? If so, the two lines above appear superfluous. Authors agree.

Accordingly, we have now revised as per suggestion. Method section

Table 3

Line 177

11. It is interesting to read that the authors are proposing to follow both JBI and PRISMA requirements for scoping reviews, and this is slightly confusing to the reviewer. For instance, the framing of the approach under the methods heading from line 115-118, and the methods heading from 135-140 appears redundant and should be clarified – are the approaches complementary or can one be adopted more wholeheartedly? Authors agree.

Accordingly, we have now amended and provided clarity. The JBI framework provides a structured approach tailored for scoping reviews, emphasizing clarity in research questions, comprehensive search strategies, and systematic data extraction. To compliment, PRISMA-ScR enhances transparency by delineating specific reporting criteria, facilitating a thorough and standardized presentation of scoping review findings. Method section

Line 111-117

12. The development of the search strategy appears fairly adhoc – was there any formal structure used to guide this development? Thank you for your question.

Yes, we followed the JBI framework. We have clarified this point in the manuscript.

Line 111-117

13. Would there be scope to audit using established tool, such as PRESS guidelines (McGowan et al., 2016) to ensure rigour? Thank you for your question.

Yes, we can audit our review using the PRESS checklist, and have added this element to the manuscript. Appendix I

Line 362

14. Regarding the strategy itself, the fields for the pubmed search strategy have not been specified across each of the lines (in particular 1). There are no MeSH terms specified in 1, have these been considered? Are any date limiters going to be used? Language or other filters? Provide clarity here. Authors agree.

We have now made the necessary amendments to help clarify the search strategy. Appendix II

Line 378

15. There appears to be a discrepancy between Table 1 brainstorm of terms and the search in PubMed, consider aligning. Authors agree.

Accordingly, we have now revised for better alignment of Table 1 (now Table 3) brainstorm of terms and the search in PubMed. Table 3

Line 177

Appendix II

Line 378

16. Running this search in PubMed yields a few errors (in particular line 2), but still produces only 166 results. Are you confident that this search will yield sufficient results? Authors agree.

We have corrected the error and amended the search strategy as suggested. Now, we are confident that with these refinements, the search yields 890 retrieved citations, providing sufficient citations for the scoping review from a single database. Appendix I

Line 521

17. This reviewer wonders if the terms around the tools are too specific or maybe overlapping (line 2-3). Thank you for the question.

We have now provided clarity to address any potential overlap or specificity issues related to terms throughout the search strategy Table 3

Line 177

18. Search strategy for additional databases and details around searching grey sources would be recommended to include (in particular, how will you search in google scholar). Authors agree.

We have now provided the search strategy for grey literature e.g., the NIOSH database and advanced Google Scholar Appendix III

Line 387

19. Through study selection – clarify whether you mean two independent reviewers means that their decisions will be blinded from each other.

Authors agree. We have made the necessary clarity edits, as outlined below.

Accordingly, in our study selection process, two independent reviewers will assess articles separately to ensure unbiased evaluation. While they will review articles independently, their decisions will not be blinded from each other; instead, they will collaborate to reach a consensus on which articles meet the inclusion criteria. Study selection

Line 190-191

20. It is unclear which types of study designs will be included – assuming it is all quantitative methodologies of tool assessment, but will you also include qualitative evaluations of tools? This should be made explicit within the protocol. Authors agree.

Accordingly, we have now modified the protocol to include eligibility criteria specifying which study designs will be considered Table 2

Line 153

21. Figure 1 is not needed in a protocol paper and should be removed. Authors agree. We have removed Figure 1 as suggested.

22. While it is acknowledged that a risk of bias appraisal (quality appraisal) is not always required in scoping reviews, they can be called for in certain instances. In this proposed review, as RQ2 seeks to map the methodologies and approached reported for evaluating occupational dust exposure assessment and control tools, it is recommended that a formal tool be employed to assess the methodological quality of the included studies as this would lend additional rigour and context to the answer for RQ2. If both qual/quant studies are to be included, suggest perhaps the MMAT (Hong 2018)? We thank the reviewer for their valuable suggestion

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Decision Letter 1

Pisirai Ndarukwa

22 Aug 2024

Evidence-based dust exposure prediction and/or control tools in occupational settings: A scoping review protocol

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