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. 2024 Oct 23;19(10):e0312265. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0312265

Effects of soccer instruction on the executive functions and agility of children in early childhood

Sho Aoyama 1,*
Editor: Mario André da Cunha Espada2
PMCID: PMC11498701  PMID: 39441840

Abstract

Studies have shown that in open-skill sports the executive function of high-performing players is significantly higher than that of the control group. However, whether participation in soccer effectively improves executive function is unclear because previous studies lacked baseline measurements of executive function. Furthermore, agility, mostly developed in early childhood, is the most demanding component of physical fitness in open-skill sports, requiring sudden changes in body direction while running at full speed. However, no studies have examined the improvement in agility of young children participating in open-skill sports through comparison with a control group. This study aimed to clarify whether instruction in soccer, an open-skill sport, can effectively improve the executive function and agility of kindergarteners compared to a control group. In April 2020, 31 five-year-old children enrolled in kindergarten K in H prefecture in Japan were targeted as the intervention group and received soccer instruction for 12 weeks. In April 2020, a control group was established, consisting of 39 five-year-old children enrolled at the same kindergarten. Participants in both groups were measured for agility, inhibition, and working memory before and after (pre–post) soccer instruction for the intervention group. For each item, a two-way ANOVA of the group (intervention group・control group) x measurement period (pre–post) was performed, showing no significant interactions for working memory and agility. Because only the inhibition effect was significant, simple main effects were tested. Regarding inhibition, although the intervention group (M = 0.18, SD = 0.01) and the control group (M = 0.17, SD = 0.01) did not differ significantly in performance pre-intervention, the intervention group (M = 0.23, SD = 0.01) showed significantly better performance post-intervention compared to the control group (M = 0.19, SD = 0.01) (p < .01). Thus, soccer instruction improved kindergarteners’ inhibition, to a level significantly higher than that of the control group. Still, no differences were found between groups regarding working memory and agility.

Introduction

Exercise is important to improve physical fitness. In recent years, research suggesting that exercise is effective not only for improving physical fitness but also cognitive function, known as executive function, has been attracting attention. Executive function is the ability to achieve goals by engaging in higher-order cognitive and behavioral control and is composed of three components: inhibition, working memory, and switching [1]. Inhibition is the ability to control dominant and automatic responses according to context [1]. Working memory is the ability to store and process information temporarily and use the stored information [1]. Switching is the ability to change the perspective of attention and prepare cognitively for the next task rule [1]. Early childhood is an ideal time to provide interventions intended to improve executive function, as executive function develops considerably during this period [2]. In addition, executive function plays a crucial role in children’s future health status and socioeconomic status as well as school readiness in terms of behavior and learning [36]. Therefore, improving executive function during early childhood is critical.

Studies have suggested that aerobic exercise is effective in improving executive function in children [7]. For example, in a study of children with an average age of 9.6 years, performance on a task measuring working memory was compared between two groups, one with high aerobic capacity and the other with low aerobic capacity, based on the number of laps in a 20-meter shuttle run, which measures aerobic capacity. The results showed that the working memory of the group with high aerobic exercise capacity was significantly higher than that of the group with low aerobic exercise capacity [8]. In a study of children aged 8 to 12 years, children engaged in 12 weeks of aerobic exercise with increasing workload over time showed significantly better inhibition performance than children in a group engaged in a standard physical education class [9]. Davis et al. [10] reported that a 13-week aerobic exercise-based program for 7- to 11-year-old children who were inactive and overweight resulted in substantially improved inhibition compared to the control group.

On the other hand, in recent years, studies have indicated that performing complex exercises with high cognitive demands is more effective in improving executive function than performing simple exercises such as aerobic exercises [11]. Therefore, engagement in open-skill sports, such as soccer and tennis, defined as sports in which the sports environment is constantly changing and unpredictable, such as complex exercises with high cognitive demands, may be effective in improving executive function. Wang et al. [12] compared the performance of a task measuring inhibition between tennis players in open-skill sports, swimmers in closed-skill sports, and non-athletes as a control group. As a result, tennis players performed significantly better than swimmers and non-athletes in the task measuring inhibition. It has been reported that the performance of elite child soccer players in the task measuring inhibition was significantly higher than that of non-elite soccer players [13, 14]. In addition, a study of elite child soccer players revealed that players with higher working memory capacity had higher motor skills required for soccer [15].

Several studies have shown that in open-skill sports, particularly soccer, the performance of high-performing players on tasks measuring executive functions, such as inhibition and working memory, was significantly higher than that of the control group. However, the lack of baseline measurements is a major limitation in these previous studies. That is, because the original level of executive function prior to soccer participation is unknown, whether soccer participation is effective in improving executive function remains unclear. Establishing a causal relationship between soccer participation and improved executive function after baseline measurements is a task for future research. Due to the constant changes in the surrounding environment during a game, soccer requires players to keep abreast of constantly changing information about their surroundings and select appropriate behavior while inhibiting their pre-planned responses in response to changing circumstances [16, 17]. Therefore, participation in soccer is expected to improve inhibition and working memory abilities, which are components of executive function.

Furthermore, in open-skill sports, athletes’ physical fitness is crucial for high performance in games [18]. Among the elements of physical fitness, agility, especially related to quick whole-body movements to change speed and direction in response to external stimuli, is the most important element, requiring sudden changes in body direction while running at full speed [19, 20]. Although it is not possible to ascertain the level of agility before engaging in open-skill sports, high levels of agility have been observed in athletes of various open-skill sports [21]. Agility is required for instantaneous responses to the constantly changing external environment of opponents, teammates, and the ball [20] and is thought to be enhanced through participation in open-skill sports. In addition, agility, which is closely related to nervous system development, is a crucial component of physical fitness that contributes considerably to motor skills in early childhood [22]. However, to date, no studies have examined the improvement in agility of young children participating in open-skill sports through comparison with a control group.

The present study

Does soccer instruction improve executive function and agility, which are markedly developed in early childhood? This study aimed to clarify, through comparison with a control group, whether soccer instruction can effectively improve executive function and agility in inexperienced open-skill sports participants in early childhood. By targeting inexperienced open-skill athletes, it was possible to examine whether engaging in open-skill sports increased executive function and agility, considering the differences in original executive function and agility not been revealed in previous studies. This study hypothesized that the intervention group that received soccer instruction would show significantly improved executive function and agility compared to the control group. This study is expected to create new value for participation in open-skill sports by effectively enhancing executive function, an important ability for school readiness in terms of behavior and learning, and agility, an important component of physical fitness, in early childhood.

Materials and methods

Participants

The intervention group consisted of 31 five-year-old children (17 boys, 14 girls; mean age: 71.21 ± 0.5 months) enrolled at K kindergarten in H prefecture, Japan, in April 2020. The control group consisted of 39 five-year-old children (18 boys, 21 girls; mean age: 72.4 ± 0.6 months) enrolled at the same K kindergarten in H prefecture as the intervention group, in April 2020. When recruiting participants, individuals with prior participation in open-skill sports, including soccer, were excluded. Therefore, all participants were children who had never previously participated in open-skill sports, including soccer. Sample size calculations with G*Power 3.1 indicated that 31 children in the intervention group and 39 children in the control group had a power (1−β) of 0.80, effect size of 0.15, the number of measurements = 3, correlation among repeated measures  =  0.5, nonsphericity correction e  =  1, and an α level of .05 [23].

Procedure

The intervention group received soccer instruction once a week for 30 minutes in the morning for 12 weeks, from May to July 2020, in a field next to their kindergarten building. Specifically, as an introduction to the first soccer lesson, the participants were told that they were to kick a soccer ball with their feet into a goal on the opposing team’s court. The same content was used in each session: 5 minutes of dribbling with a soccer ball as a warm-up, followed by 20 minutes of a soccer game. The teams consisted of four teams of seven to eight players each, and two ten-minute matches were played. The soccer court was 35m long (touchline) x 20m wide (goal line). The soccer goal used was 2m high, 3m wide, and 1m deep. A soccer ball was used in the soccer game, and the rule was that a player could score one point by kicking the ball into the goal of the opposing team’s court. If the soccer ball went out of court, one player from the team opposite to the team that kicked the ball out of the court from the place where the ball went out of the court, kicked the soccer ball, and restarted the game. Goalkeepers were not assigned to either team. Children on the team that was not playing the game were instructed to observe the team playing the game. Afterward, the children performed stretch exercises for 5 minutes as a cool-down exercise. Soccer instruction was provided by a male kindergarten teacher who had experience playing soccer and worked at the participants’ kindergarten. The decision to participate in soccer instruction was made by the parents before the first soccer instruction session based on their own free will. The intervention group consisted of young children who decided to participate in soccer instruction. Executive function and agility were measured in April 2020 (pre-), before soccer instruction was implemented, and again in August 2020 (post-), after soccer instruction was completed.

While the intervention group received soccer instruction, the control group participated in voluntary indoor play in the kindergarten classroom. The specific content of the indoor play included drawing pictures, making crafts, reading picture books, and playing with toys. The children in the control group did not receive soccer instruction. As with the intervention group, executive function and agility were measured in April 2020 (pre-) and August 2020 (post-).

Measurements

Executive function and agility were measured by the author, the researcher, in a room at the park where the subject belongs, while the participant was being filmed by a video camera. The results of each measurement were confirmed by reviewing the video recordings. To reduce study bias, the researcher conducting the evaluation was blinded to the group allocation during the evaluation phase.

Execution functions

The Flanker task [24] was used to measure the inhibition of executive function. Four flanker stimuli consisting of arrow tips (Congruent: < < < < <, > > > > >, Incongruent: > > < > >, < < > < <) were used as the task stimuli. The participants were asked to tap either the left or right option with their fingers according to the orientation of the central target of the flanker stimuli presented on the tablet screen. Four task stimulus patterns were performed in random order with equal probabilities for a total of eight trials. The number of correct responses, number of questions, and elapsed time were used to calculate the performance score (PS) using the formula PS = (number of correct responses/number of questions) × (number of correct responses/elapsed time) [25], with higher PS values indicating greater inhibition ability [25]. This task requires inhibition because the participants must control flanker stimuli other than the central target. The reliability and validity of the flanker task as a measure of inhibition have been confirmed by previous research [24].

To measure working memory, which is part of executive function, we administered the Kaufman Assessment Battery for Children- 2nd Edition (KABC-II) hand movement task [26]. The participants were instructed to memorize and accurately repeat combinations of the evaluator’s hand movements in sequence. This task requires visual working memory, which refers to retaining spatial information and responding quickly to the stored information. One point was awarded for each completed task, and the task was terminated after three consecutive incorrect attempts. Higher scores indicated greater working memory capacity. The reliability and validity of the hand movement task for measuring working memory have been confirmed by previous research [26].

Agility

A single-line lateral jumping task [27] was performed to measure agility. The participant stood on one side of a single line drawn facing the evaluator. On cue to start, the child performed a side hop repetition with both feet together for 5 seconds. The evaluator counted the number of times the participant jumped over the line and back. A higher number of repetitions indicated greater agility. This task requires agility because the participant must change body position or direction of movement as quickly as possible. The reliability and validity of the single-line lateral jump task in measuring agility have been confirmed in previous studies [27].

Ethics statement

This study was conducted after explaining the purpose of the study in writing to the parents of the infants who were the participants of the study and obtaining their written consent. We confirmed that they would not be disadvantaged even if they did not consent, that they could withdraw their consent even after providing it and that the personal information obtained in the study would be handled carefully so that it would not be leaked. The recruitment period for participants in this study was from March 23 to March 27, 2020. This study was conducted following the Declaration of Helsinki. This study was approved by the Research Ethics Committee of Hiroshima Jogakuin University, the author’s previous institution, on March 14, 2020 (approval number: 2019–12), before the purpose of the study was explained in writing to the participants.

Data analysis

There was no missing data for the 70 participants in the intervention and control groups combined, so analyses were conducted using data from all subjects. A t-test was used to examine the differences by gender for each measurement item. Cohen’s d for t-test was calculated for independent groups. Normality test was conducted for each measurement item to confirm the assumptions of analysis of variance. To examine the effects of the measurement items on development in the intervention and control groups, a two-factor analysis of variance (ANOVA) was conducted for each measurement item in both groups, dividing the items by group (intervention group and control group) and measurement timing (pre- and post-test). All analyses were performed using the IBM SPSS Statistics for Windows version 27 (IBM, Armonk, New York, USA).

Results

Table 1 shows the results of unpaired t-tests on gender differences in each measurement item. The results showed no significant differences in any of the measures, and no gender differences were observed.

Table 1. Results of unpaired t-tests on gender differences in each measurement item.

Measures pre t-value Effect size post t-value Effect size
Male Female Male Female
M SD M SD t d M SD M SD t d
Flanker task 0.16 0.04 0.18 0.04 1.62 0.81 0.19 0.06 0.21 0.05 1.82 0.54
Working memory 9.46 2.52 10.40 2.60 1.54 0.37 11.54 2.23 12.31 2.19 1.46 0.35
Agility 14.94 3.66 15.26 3.51 0.37 0.09 20.57 5.57 21.29 2.98 0.67 0.16

Notes. M = mean; SD = standard deviation

The Shapiro–Wilk test showed that data gathered from each measurement item did not deviate from the normal distribution. Therefore, we conducted a two-factor analysis of variance (ANOVA) for each measurement item by group (intervention group and control group) × measurement time (pre and post). The results of the analysis of variance for each measurement item for the participants are shown in Table 2.

Table 2. Analysis of variance results for each measurement item.

Measures Intervention Control Main effect (time) Main effect (group) Interaction Effect size
pre post pre post F F F η 2
M SD M SD M SD M SD
Flanker task 0.18 0.01 0.23 0.01 0.17 0.01 0.19 0.01 33.36*** 2.24 4.86* 0.07
Working memory 10.13 0.48 12.10 0.44 9.77 0.40 11.79 0.33 44.39*** 0.44 0.01 0.00
Agility 15.48 0.57 21.2 0.82 14.79 0.62 20.72 0.71 123.09*** 0.50 0.04 0.00

*p < .05

***p < .001

Analysis of variance revealed that the interaction was not significant for working memory (F (1,68) = 0.01, p = .92, η2 = 0.00) and agility (F (1,68) = 0.04, p = .84, η2 = 0.00). On the other hand, the interaction for the inhibition was significant (F (1,68) = 4.86, p < .05, η2 = 0.07). According to conventional benchmarks, a small effect size is η2 = 0.01, a medium effect size is η2 = 0.06, and a large effect size is η2 = 0.14 [28]. Thus, the effect size of the interaction for the inhibition was medium to large. A simple main-effect test was conducted because the interaction was significant for the inhibition. As a result, in terms of inhibition, although there was no significant difference in the performance of the intervention group (M = 0.18, SD = 0.01) and the control group (M = 0.17, SD = 0.01) at the pre-intervention stage, the intervention group (M = 0.23, SD = 0.01) showed significantly better performance post-intervention compared to the control group (M = 0.19, SD = 0.01) (p < .01). In terms of inhibition, post (M = 0.23, SD = 0.01) was significantly higher (p < .001) than pre (M = 0.18, SD = 0.01) in the intervention group, and post (M = 0.19, SD = 0.01) was significantly higher (p < .01) than pre (M = 0.17, SD = 0.01) in the control group, too.

The results of the analysis of variance for inhibition showed a significant interaction, indicating a difference in the development of the two groups. Although no significant difference between the two groups was observed pre-intervention, the intervention group’s post-intervention performance improved significantly more than the control group. However, the results of the analysis of variance for working memory and agility showed no significant interaction. Thus, soccer instruction for kindergarteners with no experience in open-skill sports can significantly improve inhibition but not working memory and agility, where no effect was observed.

Discussion

This study aimed to investigate whether soccer instruction provided to five-year-old children improved their executive function and agility through comparison with a target group. The results showed that the intervention group, which received soccer instruction, showed significantly enhanced inhibition performance in executive function compared with the control group. However, there was no difference in the improvement of working memory and agility in the executive function of the intervention group that received soccer instruction compared with the control group.

Several previous studies [12, 14, 15] have reported that players with a higher soccer ability have a higher inhibition ability than those with a lower ability. The present results, in which inhibition was significantly improved by coaching soccer to young children compared with the control group, are similar to those of previous studies. However, the present study revealed that soccer instruction significantly increased inhibition in inexperienced soccer players compared to the control group, considering their ability to inhibit before participating. Soccer requires quick reactions to the movements of the outside world, including the ball, teammates, and opponents. It also requires inhibition because of the need to control one’s intended action to select a new and better action among options, such as passing, dribbling, and shooting, in response to constantly changing surroundings [12]. Even beginners who have difficulty handling the ball with their feet and only follow the path of the ball during a soccer game require inhibition to control their behavior according to the path of the ball [12]. Therefore, the inhibition in the intervention group, which received continuous soccer instruction, likely improved to the point where it was significantly higher than that in the control group.

Because soccer requires working memory to constantly update changing information about the surroundings [17], we expected that the development of working memory in the intervention group, which received soccer instruction, would be significantly improved compared to the control group. However, the results of the present study showed no significant differences in the development of working memory between the intervention and control groups. Soccer requires special skills compared to other ball games, mainly in terms of handling the ball with the feet [29]. In addition, feet are less sensitive than hands, and long-term training is required to stop the ball, pass it, and shoot accurately during soccer [29]. When the participants in this study were observed playing a soccer game, some children had difficulty controlling the ball and were desperate to follow its path from start to finish. In this situation, it is difficult for them to update information about their surroundings, such as their opponents and peers, when focusing only on the whereabouts of the ball. Therefore, we suspect that the intervention group, which received soccer instruction, did not show significantly improved development of working memory compared with the control group. Previous studies [13, 15] have reported that the working memory of high-performing soccer players is significantly better than that of controls. However, most studies were conducted on skilled soccer players who had been playing soccer continuously since childhood when they were older than infants. To improve working memory, it may be necessary to provide soccer instruction for a longer period so that the players can control the ball to some extent and thus update information about the movements around them, in addition to paying attention to where the ball is going.

The results showed that soccer instruction was effective in improving the inhibition of executive function in young children but not effective in improving working memory. Executive function develops substantially in the early preschool years. On the other hand, the developmental timing of each component of the executive function is not the same owing to different developmental pathways. In contrast to inhibition, which develops rapidly during infancy, switching and working memory have important developmental periods between the ages of 7 and 9 years [4]. Accordingly, the intervention effects of soccer instruction might have been more pronounced than those of working memory because the five-year-old children who participated in this study were undergoing a critical period in the development of inhibition. A previous study [30] that examined the effects of an intervention program intended to improve executive function in five-year-old children reported that the effects on inhibition were pronounced, in contrast to working memory, where no intervention effects were observed, showing results similar to those of the present study.

It has been reported that skilled players of open-skill sports, including soccer, have higher agility ability [21, 31]; however, the present results revealed no difference in the development of agility between the intervention and control groups instructed to play soccer. It takes considerable training time for inexperienced soccer players to control the ball and establish a game [32]. Even after 12 weeks of soccer instruction, it was difficult for the inexperienced soccer players to control the ball sufficiently well enough to win a game. In situations where ball control is difficult, it is challenging for young children to demonstrate agility [33], which is required when responding instantaneously to changing external conditions, such as opponents, teammates, and the ball. Therefore, 12 weeks of soccer instruction likely did not improve the agility of inexperienced soccer players compared with the control group. Future research is needed to determine whether a longer period of soccer instruction would improve children’s agility to gain control over the ball to compete in a game.

In the present study, inhibition was shown to be more effective than agility for which soccer instruction was ineffective. Inhibition, the ability to contextualize and control dominant, automatic responses, is required when discontinuing intended actions and making new behavioral decisions in response to rapidly changing game situations [1, 14]. Therefore, soccer instructions are expected to improve inhibition. However, even if players can inhibit their intended behaviors, they still need ball control skills to demonstrate agility in executing new behaviors such as passing, dribbling, and shooting. As mentioned earlier, soccer instruction did not lead to improved agility because it was difficult for the participants with no soccer experience to control the ball with their feet, making it challenging for them to demonstrate agility.

Executive function is a cognitive ability whose development can be promoted by intervention and training [34, 35]. Intervention studies intended to improve children’s executive function have been conducted worldwide [36]. While it is argued that executive function develops rapidly in early childhood, which is the ideal time to conduct interventions to effectively enhance it [2], few intervention studies have been conducted on young children to improve executive function through exercise. In addition, studies have shown that the executive function of athletes in open-skill sports, particularly soccer, is significantly higher than that of the control group. However, because the original level of executive function before soccer participation cannot be determined, whether soccer participation is effective in improving executive function has not been examined. Regarding these points, the present study revealed that the inhibition of executive function was significantly improved in five-year-old children with no experience of learning open-skill sports, who had never played soccer before, after 12 weeks of continuous soccer instruction compared to the control group. This study is important because it provides new scientific evidence on the value of young children’s participation in open-skill sports in terms of the improvement of inhibition of executive function. The transition from kindergarten to elementary school is fraught with various difficulties, and children’s inhibition is an essential ability that leads to successful school adjustment, as adjustment to the classroom and learning is a more important issue in elementary school than it was in kindergarten [37]. This study is significant as it demonstrates that participation in open-skill sports can effectively enhance inhibition, which is a critical executive function ability crucial for elementary school readiness.

The results of this study highlight the significance of including open-skill sports such as soccer in the design of physical education programs conducted during nursery hours in the hope of improving inhibition. In recent years, extracurricular activities outside nursery hours, including soccer, have become common worldwide. The results demonstrate the significance of parents choosing soccer as an extracurricular activity for their children in terms of improving inhibition, which is part of the executive function playing a key role in behavioral and academic readiness for school. A study comparing the executive functions of talented youth soccer players belonging to a youth academy of a professional soccer club with those of amateur youth soccer players reported that although there was no significant difference in working memory, the talented youth soccer players had significantly better inhibition than the amateur youth soccer players [17]. The results of the present study, which targeted kindergarteners with no soccer experience, also suggested that inhibition, one of the executive functions, is particularly required when playing soccer. This result creates new knowledge that inhibition may be essential for success in soccer in various divisions, such as professional and amateur soccer teams.

The present study had several limitations. First, the sample size was relatively small, and the children were from kindergartens in the same area, which limits generalizability. Second, parents choose whether their children would receive soccer instruction as members of an intervention group, which could lead to self-selection bias. Third, this study measured inhibition and working memory, but other aspects of executive function, such as switching, were not evaluated, which limits the results. Future studies are needed to secure a large sample size from a wide range of regions and randomly assign children to the intervention and control groups to examine the effects of participation in open-skill sports on improving executive function and agility.

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Acknowledgments

The authors are grateful to the participants for their cooperation.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the paper and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

This work was supported by a Grant-in-Aid for Early-Career Scientists Research from the Japan Society for the Promotion of Science [Grant Number 24K20638]. The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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PONE-D-24-26769Effects of soccer instruction on the executive functions and agility of children in early childhoodPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: Overall, the study is an interesting idea but for better readability it needs improvements in writing and improve particularly in the study's methodology and results that will be discussed in the relevant section.

Abstract:

The abstract could be better structured to enhance readability.

The abstract does not mention the outcome related to agility, even though it is a central focus of the study.

In the results sentences: Clarify the comparison of pre- and post-test scores within the intervention and control groups, as the current phrasing might confuse readers.

In overall, by improving the clarity, structure, and inclusion of all relevant results, the abstract would be more comprehensive and aligned with the standards of the journal.

Introduction:

The introduction provides a comprehensive overview of the relevance of exercise, particularly open-skill sports like soccer, in enhancing executive function and agility in children. Meanwhile, there are some comments for improving clarity and the flow:

The introduction repeats some information, particularly regarding inhibition and the advantages of open-skill sports. Condensing these points would improve readability, e.g., the paragraph discussing the benefits of open-skill sports (line 86-97) could be streamlined by merging similar ideas and avoiding redundancy in discussing inhibition tasks across different studies.

The section discussing the limitations of previous studies in establishing a causal relationship between soccer participation and improved executive function could be more precise (line:64-70 and 79-85). It might help to explicitly state that the lack of baseline measures is a significant limitation in previous research.

The purpose of the study is clear, but it could be emphasized more by separating it into its own paragraph and explicitly stating the research questions or hypotheses.

Method:

To report average and mean of the age for five years old, by months or year ±SD, Refer to the PLOS one priority format (line 110- 114).

The methodology is well-structured and covers essential aspects of the study, but it has several weaknesses that could affect the study's validity, reliability, and generalizability. Addressing these issues would support the study design and improve the strength of the findings, e.g.,:

As a Small Sample Size study: The intervention group consists of only 31 children, and the control group has 39. While this might be sufficient for a pilot study, the small sample size limits the generalizability of the findings. The results may not be representative of the broader population of five-year-old children. Then it needs to be considered as the study limitation.

As a Single Study Location: All participants are from the same kindergarten in the same prefecture, which further limits generalizability. The study’s findings might not apply to children in different geographical locations, cultural settings, or educational environments. If there is not any confidential conflict, it is better to write fully name of kindergarten (line 110 and 113).

It needs to clarify the randomization. Since the decision to participate in soccer instruction was made by the parents, leading to a potential self-selection bias. Then, a randomized controlled trial (RCT) design would be stronger, if children were randomly assigned to either the intervention or control group to minimize selection bias.

To control group activity, it needs to provide a detailed description of the control group’s activities or consider using an active control group that participates in another structured, non-soccer activity.

Blinding the researcher to group allocation during the assessment and analysis phases would support lessen the study bias.

Outcome Measures: The study measures inhibition and working memory, but other aspects of executive function, such as cognitive flexibility and planning, are not assessed that can be considered as limitation of the study findings.

Statistical Analysis: Lack of Detail on Statistical Methods: Include a more detailed description of the statistical methods used, such as the type of tests (e.g., t-tests, ANOVA, regression analysis), how assumptions were checked, and how missing data were handled. While the methodology mentions using a two-way ANOVA, it’s important to ensure that the assumptions of ANOVA (e.g., homogeneity of variances, normality) are met.

No Mention of Effect Size or Power Analysis: The section does not mention whether effect sizes were calculated or whether a power analysis was conducted to determine the appropriate sample size.

Ethic: Include the name of the institution, the approval number, and the date of approval.

Results:

The results section provides a solid foundation for presenting the study's findings, but there are several areas where clarity and detail could be improved.

Clarify the interpretation of the interaction effect. Explain what the significant interaction means in the context of the study. For example, discuss whether the intervention was more effective for certain groups or conditions and how this relates to the overall study objectives.

Provide a brief interpretation of the effect sizes, explaining whether they are small, medium, or large according to conventional benchmarks. This will help readers understand the practical significance of the findings. Ensure that the comparison between pre and post-intervention within the control group is clearly stated, without unnecessary repetition or ambiguity

Discussion

Discussion is well-structured and provides a comprehensive analysis of the study's findings. However, I have a few suggestions to improve clarity, coherence, and flow:

The discussion touches on the practical implications of the findings, particularly for early childhood education, but these points could be more clearly articulated.

Improvement: Expanding on how these findings could influence the design of physical education programs, or how educators and parents might apply these insights, would strengthen the practical relevance of the study.

Reviewer #2: Abstract (line 30-32): is this correct” In the intervention group, the “post-” score was significantly higher than the “pre-” score, whereas in the control group, the “post-” score was significantly higher than of the “pre-” score. Please reword.

Study needs a hypothesis.

Did participants in the intervention group have any previous experience in playing soccer---this is briefly mention in the Discussion (line 224)? Were they naïve to soccer playing until this study started? Was this performed on a regular sized soccer field? What about the size of the goal posts—same as in adult soccer?

Unclear if both or only the control group played indoor soccer?

The description of the statistics used is very limited. What is “T-value”? How was effect size calculated? The results section should better describe the two groups in terms of their characteristics. What were the inclusion / exclusion criteria sued when recruiting participants?

What are the implications of these findings for professional vs amateur teams, and also for different divisions in professional leagues?

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


5 Sep 2024

Rebuttal Letter

Dear Editor,

Thank you for the opportunity to revise my manuscript entitled “Effects of soccer instruction on the executive functions and agility of children in early childhood” (PONE-D-24-26769). In revised manuscript, I have carefully considered reviewers’ comments and suggestions. As instructed, I have attempted to succinctly explain changes made in reaction to all comments and replied to each comment point-by-point, and those responses are provided below. I have color-coded the appropriate text in the revised manuscript. The reviewers’ comments were very helpful in revising the manuscript, and I appreciate receiving such constructive feedback on my original submission. After addressing the issues raised, the quality of the paper is much improved.

Sincerely

Sho Aoyama, PhD

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Reviewer: 1

Thank you for the time to review this manuscript for improvement. I have revised the manuscript based on your comments, and I believe they have all been thoroughly addressed. In the file titled “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes,” the revised text is highlighted in yellow. I have included my responses to your comments below.

Abstract:

The abstract could be better structured to enhance readability. The abstract does not mention the outcome related to agility, even though it is a central focus of the study. In the results sentences: Clarify the comparison of pre- and post-test scores within the intervention and control groups, as the current phrasing might confuse readers. In overall, by improving the clarity, structure, and inclusion of all relevant results, the abstract would be more comprehensive and aligned with the standards of the journal.

A: Thank you for your suggestions. I added the results of the ANOVA for agility and working memory to the abstract. I also clarified the comparison of pre-test and post-test scores within the intervention and control groups. I improved the clarity of the abstract by revising it to clearly express the limitations from previous studies, the purpose of this study, and the main results of this study.

Introduction:

The introduction provides a comprehensive overview of the relevance of exercise, particularly open-skill sports like soccer, in enhancing executive function and agility in children. Meanwhile, there are some comments for improving clarity and the flow:

The introduction repeats some information, particularly regarding inhibition and the advantages of open-skill sports. Condensing these points would improve readability, e.g., the paragraph discussing the benefits of open-skill sports (line 86-97) could be streamlined by merging similar ideas and avoiding redundancy in discussing inhibition tasks across different studies.

The section discussing the limitations of previous studies in establishing a causal relationship between soccer participation and improved executive function could be more precise (line:64-70 and 79-85). It might help to explicitly state that the lack of baseline measures is a significant limitation in previous research.

The purpose of the study is clear, but it could be emphasized more by separating it into its own paragraph and explicitly stating the research questions or hypotheses.

A: Thank you for sharing your concerns. In the introduction section, I have revised the article to avoid redundancy by summarizing previous studies which show that elite open skill sports athletes have significantly higher inhibition than control groups (lines 61–69).

I have also revised the article to clearly state that the lack of baseline measurements was a challenge in previous studies in establishing a causal relationship between soccer participation and improved executive function (lines 73–77).

I have revised the article to separate the purpose of this study into its own paragraph and explicitly state the research questions and hypotheses (lines 98–102 and 105–107).

Method:

To report average and mean of the age for five years old, by months or year ±SD, Refer to the PLOS one priority format (line 110- 114).

The methodology is well-structured and covers essential aspects of the study, but it has several weaknesses that could affect the study's validity, reliability, and generalizability. Addressing these issues would support the study design and improve the strength of the findings, e.g.,:

As a Small Sample Size study: The intervention group consists of only 31 children, and the control group has 39. While this might be sufficient for a pilot study, the small sample size limits the generalizability of the findings. The results may not be representative of the broader population of five-year-old children. Then it needs to be considered as the study limitation.

As a Single Study Location: All participants are from the same kindergarten in the same prefecture, which further limits generalizability. The study’s findings might not apply to children in different geographical locations, cultural settings, or educational environments. If there is not any confidential conflict, it is better to write fully name of kindergarten (line 110 and 113).

It needs to clarify the randomization. Since the decision to participate in soccer instruction was made by the parents, leading to a potential self-selection bias. Then, a randomized controlled trial (RCT) design would be stronger, if children were randomly assigned to either the intervention or control group to minimize selection bias.

To control group activity, it needs to provide a detailed description of the control group’s activities or consider using an active control group that participates in another structured, non-soccer activity.

Blinding the researcher to group allocation during the assessment and analysis phases would support lessen the study bias.

Outcome Measures: The study measures inhibition and working memory, but other aspects of executive function, such as cognitive flexibility and planning, are not assessed that can be considered as limitation of the study findings.

Statistical Analysis: Lack of Detail on Statistical Methods: Include a more detailed description of the statistical methods used, such as the type of tests (e.g., t-tests, ANOVA, regression analysis), how assumptions were checked, and how missing data were handled. While the methodology mentions using a two-way ANOVA, it’s important to ensure that the assumptions of ANOVA (e.g., homogeneity of variances, normality) are met.

No Mention of Effect Size or Power Analysis: The section does not mention whether effect sizes were calculated or whether a power analysis was conducted to determine the appropriate sample size.

Ethic: Include the name of the institution, the approval number, and the date of approval.

A: Thank you for your suggestion. In the method section, the mean and standard deviation of participants’ ages in months were corrected to be stated in years ± SD (lines 114–117).

As you pointed out, the relatively small sample size, participant recruitment from the same region, and the parental decision (rather than the participant’s decision) to participate in soccer instruction, which may have led to self-selection bias, are limitations of this study that need to be considered. I have added these as limitations to the Discussion section (lines 376–379). Unfortunately, confidentiality requirements prevent me from sharing the full name of the kindergarten.

To control for group activities, I added a detailed description of the control group's activities (lines 148–151).

I have added that, to reduce study bias, researchers were blinded to group allocation during the evaluation phase (lines 158–159).

As you point out, this study was unable to assess other aspects of executive function, such as switching, so I have added this as a limitation in the Discussion section (lines 379–381).

I added details about the types of tests, how assumptions were checked, how missing data were handled, and statistical methods, such as effect sizes and power analyses (lines 121–124, 203–213, and 223–224).

I have added the name of the institution that conducted the ethical review for this study, the approval number, and the approval date to the text (lines 199–202).

Results:

The results section provides a solid foundation for presenting the study's findings, but there are several areas where clarity and detail could be improved.

Clarify the interpretation of the interaction effect. Explain what the significant interaction means in the context of the study. For example, discuss whether the intervention was more effective for certain groups or conditions and how this relates to the overall study objectives.

Provide a brief interpretation of the effect sizes, explaining whether they are small, medium, or large according to conventional benchmarks. This will help readers understand the practical significance of the findings. Ensure that the comparison between pre and post-intervention within the control group is clearly stated, without unnecessary repetition or ambiguity.

A: Thank you for sharing your concerns. I have added an explanation of the interaction effect to clarify its meaning considering the purpose of this study (lines 238–254). I have also added an explanation of the effect size (lines 235–237).

After clearly explaining the main results of the ANOVA on inhibition, I revised the section to report only the results of the pre–post comparisons for the intervention and control groups, respectively (lines 243–246).

Discussion

Discussion is well-structured and provides a comprehensive analysis of the study's findings. However, I have a few suggestions to improve clarity, coherence, and flow:

The discussion touches on the practical implications of the findings, particularly for early childhood education, but these points could be more clearly articulated.

Improvement: Expanding on how these findings could influence the design of physical education programs, or how educators and parents might apply these insights, would strengthen the practical relevance of the study.

A: Thank you for sharing your concerns. In the discussion section, I have added a clear explanation of how the results of this study can be applied to teachers and parents, including the design of physical education programs (lines 360–366).

Reviewer: 2

Thank you for the time to review this manuscript. I have completed revisions based on your comments, and I believe they have been fully addressed. In the file titled “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes,” the revised text is highlighted in yellow. Responses to each of your comments are included below.

Abstract (line 30-32): is this correct” In the intervention group, the “post-” score was significantly higher than the “pre-” score, whereas in the control group, the “post-” score was significantly higher than of the “pre-” score. Please reword.

A: Thank you for your suggestion. I have revised the wording in the abstract as follows to avoid misunderstandings among readers regarding the results of the analysis of variance on inhibition as the main result of this study.

‘Regarding inhibition, although the intervention group (M = 0.18, SD = 0.01) and the control group (M = 0.17, SD = 0.01) did not differ significantly in performance pre-intervention, the intervention group (M = 0.23, SD = 0.01) showed significantly better performance post-intervention compared to the control group (M = 0.19, SD = 0.01) (p < .01).’

Study needs a hypothesis.

A: Thank you for sharing your concerns. I have added the hypotheses of this study in the introduction section (lines 105–107).

Did participants in the intervention group have any previous experience in playing soccer---this is briefly mention in the Discussion (line 224)? Were they naïve to soccer playing until this study started? Was this performed on a regular sized soccer field? What about the size of the goal posts—same as in adult soccer?

A. Thank you for your suggestion. In the methods section, I noted that the study participants had no prior participation in open skill sports, including soccer (lines 118–120). The soccer played by the intervention group is different from soccer played by adults. I added details about the size of the court and goal size on which the intervention group played soccer (lines 132–134).

Unclear if both or only the control group played indoor soccer?

A. Thank you for noting this issue. Only the intervention group received soccer instruction; I have added a note to the methods section indicating that the children in the control group did not receive soccer instruction (line 151).

The description of the statistics used is very limited. What is “T-value”? How was effect size calculated? The results section should better describe the two groups in terms of their characteristics. What were the inclusion / exclusion criteria sued when recruiting participants?

A. Thank you for highlighting your concerns. I have added explanations of the statistics used, including t-tests, analysis of variance, missing data, how assumptions were checked, and calculations of effect sizes in the data analysis section (lines 121–122 and 203–213).

In the results section, I have added a description of the characteristics of the two groups regarding inhibition for which the interaction was significant (lines 238–246).

In the methods section, I have added a description of the exclusion criteria used to recruit participants who had never participated in soccer, including open skill sports (lines 118–120).

What are the implications of these findings for professional vs amateur teams, and also for different divisions in professional leagues?

A. In the discussion section, I have added information about the impact the results of this study have on various sectors, includi

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4 Oct 2024

Effects of soccer instruction on the executive functions and agility of children in early childhood

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14 Oct 2024

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