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. 2024 Nov 18;19(11):e0313831. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0313831

Patterns of primates crop foraging and the impacts on incomes of smallholders across the mosaic agricultural landscape of Wolaita zone, southern Ethiopia

Yigrem Deneke 1,2,*, Aberham Megaze 1, Wondimagegnehu Tekalign 1, Taye Dobamo 1, Herwig Leirs 2
Editor: Nickson E Otieno3
PMCID: PMC11573158  PMID: 39556545

Abstract

Crop foraging by primates is a prevalent form of human-wildlife conflict, especially near protected areas. This behavior poses significant economic challenges for subsistence farmers, jeopardizing both livelihoods and conservation efforts. This study aimed to assess patterns of primate crop-foraging events and estimate maize damage in protected and unprotected fields in southern Ethiopia. Data were collected over 12 months between 2020 and 2021 in the Sodo Zuriya and Damot Gale districts of Southern Ethiopia. A team of six field experts and 25 farmers participated in the study, during which maize damage inflicted by primates was assessed using 25 deployed camera traps. Linear mixed models were used to explore the relationship between maize damage by primates and spatio-temporal variables. Olive baboons and grivet monkeys were found to target maize more frequently during June, July, and August. Olive baboons forage in the morning, while grivet monkeys do so in the afternoon. The average maize yield losses due to primate damage were 43.1% in protected fields and 31.4% in unprotected fields. Of the total damage, 43.1% occurred in protected fields situated 50 meters from the forest edge. Conversely, unprotected fields experienced lower rates of damage: 14.4%, 13.2%, 3.7%, and 0.1% at distances of 50 m, 100 m, 200 m, and 300 m from the forest edge, respectively. Camera traps captured 47 photos of baboons, 21 photos of grivet monkeys, and documented eight primate crop-foraging events. This study revealed that maize fields within 50 meters of the forest edge faced significant damage. Despite the use of wire mesh fencing, it was largely ineffective in deterring olive baboons and grivet monkeys. Additionally, while human guarding is often considered an effective protective strategy, these findings suggest its ineffectiveness due to inconsistent implementation. Overall, this study provides valuable insights for promoting primate conservation and mitigating human-primate conflicts.

Introduction

Crop foraging occurs when wild animals leave their natural habitats to pilfer crops cultivated by farmers for household consumption [1, 2]. This issue has persisted since humans and wild animals began sharing landscapes and resources. In protected areas, human-wildlife conflict is severe and presents a growing challenge, mainly due to mismatches between conservation interests and the improvement of local residents’ livelihoods [3, 4]. The frequency of crop foraging and the resulting damage may vary along a distance gradient from natural habitats to human-modified landscapes [5, 6]. A commonly reported pattern is that wild animals move from uncultivated habitats to damage crops [7, 8]. Crops grown near forest edges are generally more susceptible to damage than those grown farther away from forests [4, 913]. Moreover, the intensity of crop foraging largely depends on the type of foraging species, the crop species grown, and the season among others [14].

Finding effective ways to resolve frequent conflicts between people and wildlife is essential for fostering coexistence outside protected areas. Identifying successful methods will significantly enhance conflict resolution and wildlife conservation [4]. Current threats to wildlife arising from such conflicts require strategies to manage and mitigate them for populations to persist and thrive [15]. Conflict resolution is also crucial in reducing the vulnerability of people affected by wildlife, by minimizing the extent of damage sustained [16]. However, the success or failure of any mitigation technique is likely to be site- and species-specific, requiring appropriate and site-specific actions. Such actions depend on factors such as the species, location, timing, and the historical and socio-ecological context [5, 17]. For example, the activity patterns and ranging behavior of different species, which influence daily and seasonal damage patterns and determine the types of crops targeted, can significantly impact the effectiveness of mitigation strategies [17].

Mammals such as baboons, monkeys, bush pigs, porcupines, and elephants are recognized as some of the most destructive crop foragers across various regions of Africa [13, 1821]. These mammals significantly impact agricultural production by causing damage to cereals, root crops, and fruits through mechanisms such as feeding and trampling, which in turn adversely affect crop yields and household incomes [5, 22]. Among the various crops foraged by primates, maize (Zea mays) was selected for this study due to its status as a major staple cereal crop that supports the livelihoods of millions of smallholders in Ethiopia [23]. Similarly, maize is the most dominant staple crop in Wolaita Zone in terms of production, occupying 42% of the land covered by grain crops [24]. It serves as a primary food source in many African countries, providing both protein and energy [25]. Consequently, primates, especially monkeys, show a strong preference for maize; once they have tasted it, they seem to highly value it, which explains their frequent forage on maize fields [26]. Primates that forage on subsistence farmers’ crops are of particular concern, as they threaten their livelihoods [1820]. Human-primate conflict has been widely studied across several African countries; including Guinea-Bissau [27, 28], Madagascar [29], Rwanda [30], South Africa [31], Tanzania [32], Ethiopia [33, 34], and Uganda [3537]. Primates are frequently identified as the most common crop foragers, particularly targeting maize crops in tropical regions of Latin America [38]. Farmers in Bengo, Indonesia, have also reported primate-induced damage to maize crops through feeding [39]. In the Kavrepalanchok District of Nepal, maize is similarly recognized as a key crop affected by the foraging activities of primate macaques [40]. A study in the Budongo Forest Reserve, Uganda, found that baboons consistently focused their foraging activities on maize throughout the year, even when other crops were available [41]. Additionally, they imposed indirect costs, such as the labor needed to protect the crops [41]. Another similar study in the same area confirmed that primates were the primary foragers of maize crops [42].

Primate maize crop foraging has also been reported in the southwestern region of Mole National Park in Ghana, which is known for its diverse species of primates [43]. In West Africa, maize has been identified as the crop most frequently consumed by primates [19]. A study conducted in the forest-agricultural landscape mosaic of Taita Hills, Kenya, also found that maize to be the most frequently attacked crop by primates [44]. In the Serengeti National Park, Tanzania, maize was identified as the crop most commonly damaged by baboons and other wild animals [45]. These studies recognize the seriousness of human-primate conflict and its drastic impact on the livelihoods of rural households. Subsistence farmers, who heavily rely on their agricultural production, face a serious threat to food security due to wildlife crop foraging, especially by primates. Additionally, the livelihoods of local communities near protected areas largely depend on agriculture, which is highly vulnerable to crop foraging [37, 44]. In Ethiopia, various wild animals, including both small and large mammals, have been reported to forage crops [18]. In the southwestern part of the country, several large mammals such as olive baboons, bush pigs, vervet monkeys, porcupines, and warthogs have been identified as significant crop foragers [6, 46]. A study in southwest Ethiopia found that maize was one of the most vulnerable crops to foraging by olive baboons and grivet monkeys [47]. Similarly, in southern Ethiopia, interviewed farmers reported that primates were the most frequent crop foragers, causing substantial damage to maize crops [48]. However, the frequency and extent of crop raiding incidents may vary along a distance gradient from wildlife habitats [5, 6]. Moreover, the consequence of such incidence on crops has varying impacts on the income of smallholder farmers across mosaic agricultural landscapes. Despite this variation, little is understood about the pattern and socio-economic impacts of crop foraging by primates in the biodiversity hotspots of Southern Ethiopia, Sodo Zuriya and Damot Gale districts.

The focus of this study was to comparatively assess the patterns of crop foraging by primates, the extent of maize damage, and its impact on the income of smallholder farmers in both protected and unprotected fields at varying distances (50m, 100m, 200m, and 300m) from the forest edges. In contrast to previous studies that emphasized farmers’ perceptions of human-primate interactions during crop foraging events in unprotected fields, this research involved direct monitoring. Consequently, a participatory approach was employed, with maize damage assessed through collaboration among field experts, farmers, and researchers. Camera-trapping techniques were used to monitor crop foraging patterns and quantify the extent of maize damage caused by primates, allowing for a comparative analysis. This study hypothesized that the extent of maize damage could be analyzed by modeling crop foraging events using linear mixed modeling (LMM), taking into account variables such as the distance of fields from the forest, the duration of foraging events, and crop phenology. Moreover, this study compared protected maize fields, safeguarded with wire mesh, human guards, scarecrows, and thorny bushes, with unprotected maize fields. The effectiveness of these protective measures was further evaluated with the goal of developing improved mitigation strategies and promoting primate conservation in the forest-agricultural mosaic of the Wolaita Damota Areas.

Materials and methods

Study area

The study was conducted in the Sodo Zuriya and Damot Gale districts, located approximately at 6.54°N 37.45°E through 6.9°N 37.75°E in the Highlands of Southern Ethiopia. The study sites included the Gurumu Woyde, Kokate Marachere, Konasa Pulasa, Damot Waja, and Dalbo Wogene sub-districts (S1 Fig). The study area covers 380 km2 and is primarily situated atop Mt. Damota. The Damota Community Managed Forest was established in January 2006 through collaboration between the Sodo community and World Vision Ethiopia. The aim was to restore and protect the montane high forest on the slopes of Mount Damota. The land is collectively owned by five Sodo Zuriya and Damot Gale Communities, who secured the site and obtained land user-rights certificates from the Ethiopian Government in 2006. Furthermore, the Ethiopian government has supported the community’s ownership of carbon rights trading, allowing them to earn revenue from carbon offsets [49]. Additionally, cooperatives were established to manage the protected areas and provide education to the local community on mitigating crop damage caused by wildlife, thereby helping them maintain their livelihoods. According to the institute’s assessment, the area also plays a role in global climate regulation [49]. This region experiences a dry period from October to March and a wet season from April to September, receiving 1450 to 1800 mm of rainfall, respectively [49]. The maximum rainfall occurs between June and September, with shorter rains falling in March and April [48]. The temperature ranges from 16°C to 24°C between the wet and dry seasons. The soil nutrients in the Damota area are suitable for growing maize [50].

The Damota Community Managed Forest is characterized by rugged topography and diverse agro-ecology, fauna, and flora. The Damota area is characterized by Dega and Woina Dega zones, with altitudes ranging from 1,480 to 2,855 meters above sea level [51]. The vegetation is marked by various types, including evergreen needle-leaved, deciduous needle-leaved, evergreen broadleaved, and deciduous broadleaved forests, mixed with shrubland, herbaceous vegetation, herbaceous wetland, moss and lichen, sparse/bare vegetation, and cropland [49]. Dominant plant species in this area include woodland waterberry (Syzygium guineense), African juniper (Juniperus procera), Broad-Leaved Croton (Croton macrostachyus), briar root (Erica arborea), common olive (Olea europaea), and Shittim Wood (Acacia hockii), [49]. These vegetation and plant species provide food and serve as suitable habitats for mammals, particularly primates. The region is home to various large and medium-sized mammals, such as olive baboons (Papio anubis), grivet monkeys (Chlorocebus aethiops), duikers (Sylvicapra grimmia), common bushbucks (Tragelaphus scriptus), Guenther’s dikdik (Madoqua guentheri), and porcupines (Hystrix cristata). Golden jackals (Canis aureus), black-backed jackals (Canis mesomelas), leopards (Panthera pardus), African civets (Civettictis civetta), and spotted hyenas (Crocuta crocuta) [49]. The entire area sustains a population of 16,342 people [52]. In Mount Damota, farmers typically possess very small plots of land. The range of landholding sizes spans from 0.06 to 1.75 hectares, with an average size of 0.5 hectares [53]. The Wolaita zone, characterized by a highland perennial farming system, supports a diverse array of crops [54]. Primary food crops in this region include maize, teff, various vegetables, and root and tuber species such as cassava, yam, potato, sweet potato, and taro [54]. Additionally, tropical and temperate fruit tree crops like banana, avocado, mango, and apple are cultivated in the Wolaita Areas [54].

Experimental setup

The experimental setup was established using 25 maize fields. Maize fields in these areas tend to be quite small, often measuring around 10m x10 m, and are interspersed with fields growing different crops. For the purposes of this study, maize fields were selected to assess the extent of damage caused by primates. Ten maize study plots were situated 50 meters from the forest edge and they were used to compare protective measures in the villages of Gurumu Woide and Kokate Marachare. The protected study plots were safeguarded using wire mesh, human guardians, scarecrows, and thorny bushes, while the unprotected fields remained open/control (S2 Fig). Two farmers in the area were hired as field guards to protect two maize fields, working seven days a week from dawn to dusk throughout the six-month maize harvest in 2020 and 2021. These farmers chase, shout at, and sometimes throw stones at wildlife entering the maize fields. Furthermore, a total of 15 unprotected maize study plots were set up (S1 Table), including Gurumu Woide, Kokate Marachare, Delbo Wogene, Damot Waja, and Konasa Pulasa. The study plots were located at varying distances: 100 meters, 200 meters, and 300 meters from the forest edge. Maize damage assessments were compared at varying distances by evaluating an open maize field located 50 meters from the forest edge, along with individual fields situated 100 meters, 200 meters, and 300 meters away from the forest edge. The distances of each study plot farthest from the forest edge were measured using a Garmin 72H Global Positioning System (GPS) device. Distances from field edges to reference features or structures (e.g. trees, paths, or huts) were recorded to aid in distance estimation (S3 Fig).

A study plot measuring 10m x 10m was designated in each study field for this research (S1 Table). Within these study plots, the high-yielding maize variety BH-546, which is well-suited for the region’s agro-ecology, was sown. Maize seeds were sown early in the rainy season, typically in April, reaching the milky stage in late July and ripening by mid-August, with harvesting in September. Prior to sowing, oxen-drawn ploughs were used to prepare the fields by creating rows. Initially, 580 seeds were sown in each study plot in both the 2020 and 2021 maize cropping seasons. However, in one field (Field No. 25) seeds were removed or added by the farmer, resulting in 532 seeds (19 rows x 28 seeds) during the 2020 maize cropping season and 627 seeds (19 rows x 33 seeds) during the 2021 maize cropping season. Each hole received one seed, with a planting distance of 40 cm x 30 cm, while maintaining a distance of at least 50 meters between one maize study plot and the next. All cultivation practices, including fertilizer application, planting, and weeding, were implemented in the maize fields. However, uneven germination of the sown maize seeds resulted in varying harvests across different plots. In this study, data were collected using (1) field experts and (2) camera traps.

Field experts

Data on crop foraging events (CFE) by primates were collected by six field experts, five of whom are agriculture and rural development office workers, and one is a village administrator. These experts were trained by researchers to ensure a thorough understanding of the subject. Each field expert was expected to monitor and assess the CFE in both olive baboons and grivet monkeys. They actively participated in the project during two maize harvest seasons (from April to August in both 2020 and 2021). Additionally, these experts were engaged in close collaboration with twenty-five local farmers during field observations and reporting. The overall data collection process was supervised by four researchers.

Researchers defined a primate crop foraging event (CFE) as occurring when one or more individuals of a species enter a field (i.e., cross a field boundary), trample or raid the crops, interact with one or more maize stems, and consume parts of the stems before leaving. The CFE begins when the first primate enters the field to feed on the maize stems and ends when the last primate leaves the field. The duration of the event was measured in seconds using a digital stopwatch. Primate age categories are defined as follows: adult (full species-sex-specific size), sub-adult (not fully grown, beyond infant development, and frequently exhibits independent behavior), and infant (developmentally small and dependent, often carried and maintaining close proximity to adults) [37]. Similarly, the extent of maize damage caused by primates was assessed based on crop phenology, focusing on the seedling, fruiting, and maturity stages. The seedling stages of maize (Zea mays) begin with the emergence of the first leaves (V1) and continue until the plant has developed around 5 to 18 leaves, culminating in the VT (Vegetative Tassel) stage. This stage occurs approximately two weeks before the flowering phase (R1), signaling the plant’s transition to reproduction. The fruiting stages encompass the reproductive phase of maize, beginning with pollination (R1 stage) and continuing through various stages of kernel development (R1 to R5) until the kernels develop a dent (R5). This marks the transition toward physiological maturity (R6). The maturity stage is reached at R6 when a black layer forms at the base of the kernel, signaling the cessation of water and nutrient flow, which indicates that the maize has achieved full grain maturity [55].

Field experts responded to the following questions: (1) What is the extent of primate damage to maize in protected versus unprotected fields? (2) When and during which months do primates forage on maize crops? (3) How long do primates typically remain during maize foraging events? (4) How frequently and at what times, do farmers report primate incursions? (5) Which crop-feeding species do farmers most commonly encounter? (6) What is the extent of primate induced maize damage in fields located at varying distances? (7) How many individual primates foraged maize and entered fields? (8) In what proportion do multiple and single primate forage events occur? (9) How many individual primates typically visit maize fields? (10) In which age categories are maize crop-raiding primates most commonly found? (11) To what extent is the income of smallholders affected by primate maize damage across mosaic landscapes?

Data were also collected regarding the presence or absence of humans on fields, the nature of on-field human activity, the extent of guarding behavior, and responses to crop-foraging primates. Crop damage was quantified by counting stems damaged by primates. Trained field experts assessed and recorded the damage caused by primates to maize daily at 18:00 hours.

Camera traps

To gather information on the timing, frequency, and location of the crop foraging behavior of olive baboons and grivet monkeys within the 25 study plots, 25 Bushnell detection cameras (Browning Trail Camera, Model No. BTC-6HDX) were utilized in this study. These motion-trigger cameras were configured to capture and store data, including the date, time, location, and temperature for each photo. The cameras were set to take only one photo per trigger, with a 2-second interval between triggers [39]. Cameras were securely housed and locked in metal cases. A potential CFE was recorded when one or more individuals of olive baboons and grivet monkeys were merely present in the field [39]. An actual CFE was documented if the photo or video indicated physical manipulation and/or consumption of crop items [39, 56]. An interval of more than an hour between captured images was considered an independent CFE [39]. During this study, different camera traps were installed and dismantled on different days, resulting in varying numbers of trap days for each unit.

Cameras were installed in each study plot to monitor crop-foraging behavior. In this study, 30mm x 30mm stainless steel wire mesh with a wire diameter of 1.6 mm and a height of 2.5 meters was used. Each camera was equipped with 16GB or 32GB Class 4 SDHC memory cards for data storage. The camera traps were monitored by farmers to prevent theft. Data from the camera traps were collected from April to September in both 2020 and 2021, with cameras installed in each of the 25 maize fields for four consecutive trapping days. The cameras operated for a total of 192 trapping days. During camera installation, the following information was collected: camera ID, GPS position, date, and altitude. Subsequently, photos and videos from the camera traps were downloaded onto a laptop. Each photo and video was checked for the presence of wildlife and other relevant information. The presence of humans and dogs, among other factors, was investigated. Photos containing baboons and monkeys that could damage the crops were numbered and placed in a digital folder. All saved photos and videos were catalogued, and the associated information was recorded in a spreadsheet.

Data analysis

Data were analyzed using SPSS Version 27 for Windows (SPSS Inc., Chicago, USA). Tests were two-tailed, and results were deemed statistically significant when p ≤ 0.05. The images captured by camera traps were interpreted to determine the frequency and timing of crop foraging events. Descriptive statistics were employed to analyze crop foraging data. A chi-square test was conducted to examine the variation in maize damage by primates across different variables, including primate species raiding duration, multiple versus single raid events, primate CFE timing, and age-category of raiding in single or group. Mann-Whitney U test was used to compare the raiding durations of primate CREs among different age categories of primate species. The Spearman correlation coefficient assessed the relationship between the number of individuals entering a field and the number at the forest edge prior to raiding. The independent sample t-test compared estimates of maize damage among variables such as the number of individuals raiding, Primate CREs, farm distance, duration of raiding, and crop phenology. One-way ANOVA and the F-test were employed to compare estimates of maize damage between preventive and non-preventive strategies during the cropping seasons, as well as between single and multiple raids. The extent of primate assaults on maize in preventive and non-preventive maize fields during different crop phenological stages was analyzed using R version 4.4.1 (bplot function in the Rlab package) [57]. Linear mixed models (LMMs) were used to analyze various spatial-temporal variables, including fixed factors (distance, duration, and phenology) and random factors (primate CREs and the number of individuals raiding). In LMMs, it is typically assumed that the data model distribution is normally distributed. The link function used was the identity link, which means that the expected value of the response variable is modeled directly as a linear combination of the fixed and random effects. The response variable was the rate of maize damage, and the analysis was conducted using R version 4.4.1 [57]. Maize damage was reported in three ways: the average number of maize stems or cobs affected, the estimated amount of maize damaged in kilograms, and the proportion of maize damage caused by primates relative to the expected harvest. To calculate monetary loss, the market price of maize per kilogram was converted to US dollars using the prevailing exchange rate at the time of the survey. Additionally, it was estimated that the seeds from a single maize stalk weighed approximately 0.2 kg, yielding around 1.5 ears (or cobs) after harvest.

Ethics statement

The study was approved by the institutional ethics committee, adhering to the established ethical guidelines of Wolaita Sodo University, under Reference number. WSU15/12/915. Subsequently, permission was obtained from the Wolaita Zone Agriculture, Environment, Forest, and Climate Change Regulatory Office, as well as the respective district authorities. Verbal consent was obtained from each study participant. All social data of the study participants were kept confidential and anonymized before analysis. In addition, there was no direct interaction between field personnel and the subjects (the primates) in such a way as to harm the animals or interfere with their freedom in nature, such as by way of capture or trapping.

Results

Farmer-reported crop foraging species and crop damage assessments in protected and open or control fields

Twenty-five farmers consistently reported that olive baboons, porcupines, and grivet monkeys were the primary culprits responsible for the most severe crop damage to maize, exhibiting a high frequency of crop foraging events. Additionally, some farmers (N = 10) suggested that bushbuck might also be involved in crop foraging. However, the reported frequency of crop foraging events for bushbuck in maize fields was notably low, occurring only 24 times (Table 1). The average percentage of maize cobs lost by olive baboons in wire mesh, human guard, scarecrow, and thorny bush setups was 8.23% (equivalent to 72.8 maize stems/cobs), 7.38% (65.3 maize stems/cobs), 9.82% (86.8 maize stems/cobs), and 9.45% (83.5 maize stems/cobs), respectively, at 50 meters from the forest edge (S2 Table). In two open/control fields, the average percentage of maize cobs lost to olive baboons was 10.04% (88.8 maize cobs) at 50 meters. In unprotected fields, the average percentage of maize cobs lost to olive baboons was 1.53% (13.5 maize cobs) at 100 meters, 0.4% (3.6 maize cobs) at 200 meters, and 0.1% (0.9 maize cobs) at 300 meters (S2 Table). For grivet monkeys, the average percentage of maize cobs lost in fields with wire mesh, human guards, scarecrows, and thorny bushes was 0%, 1.83% (6.3 maize cobs), 3.8% (13 maize cobs), and 2.63% (9 maize cobs), respectively, with these fields also located at 50 meters. In two open/control fields, the average percentage of maize cobs lost to grivet monkeys was 4.38% (15 maize cobs) at 50 meters. In unprotected fields, the average percentage of maize cobs lost to grivet monkeys was 11.65% (39.9 maize cobs) at 100 meters, 3.3% (11.3 maize cobs) at 200 meters, and 0% at 300 meters from the forest edge (S2 Table). Overall, the average percentage of maize cobs lost to these two primate species in protected and two open/control fields was 43.14% (336.7 maize cobs) and 14.42% (103.8 maize cobs), respectively, at 50 meters. In unprotected fields, the average percentage of maize cobs lost to these two primate species was 13.18% (53.4 maize cobs) at 100 meters, 3.7% (14.9 maize cobs) at 200 meters, and 0.1% (0.9 maize cobs) at 300 meters, respectively (S2 Table). The resulting average monetary losses for farmer households amounted to 1,103 ETB (equivalent to 32 US dollars) across the twenty-five maize fields (S2 Table).

Table 1. Farmer responses on crop-foraging species from April to September in 2020 and 2021 showed the following involvement: Bushbuck (n = 10), grivet monkeys (n = 17), olive baboons (n = 22), and porcupines (n = 25).

Pest species Number of farmers reporting the species Frequency of CFE
Baboon (Papio Anubis) 22 80
Grivet monkey (Chlorocebus aethiops) 17 45
Porcupine (Hystrix) cristata) 25 75
Common bushbuck (Tragelaphus scriptus) 10 24

Farmers reported that the average percentage of maize damaged by olive baboons at both the Gurumu Woide and Kokate Marachare study sites was 23.6% in fields with wire mesh, 21.0% with a human guard, 28.2% with a scarecrow, and 27.2% in thorny bush fields (Fig 1 and S1 File). The results of a one-way ANOVA indicated that damage in maize fields was significantly higher in thorny bush fields compared to damage levels in fields with wire mesh, human guards, and scarecrows (F(2,9) = 292.5, p < 0.001).

Fig 1. The average of maize stems (≈number of cobs) damaged within 10m x 10m study plots by olive baboons was examined in relation to various preventive methods at a distance of 50 meters from the forest edge during the 2020 and 2021 maize cropping seasons and crop phenology in the Gurumu Woide and Kokate Marachare (GW) sub-district.

Fig 1

The boxplot illustrates a significant difference in crop damage among different prevention methods (p < .001).

Farmers reported that the average percentage of maize damaged by grivet monkeys at the Kokate Marachare study site was 0% in fields with wire mesh, 24.1% with a human guard, 44.8% with a scarecrow, and 31.0% in thorny bush fields (Fig 2 and S2 File). The results of a one-way ANOVA indicated that the damage in maize fields was significantly higher in thorny bush fields compared to damage levels in fields with wire mesh, human guards, and scarecrows (F(2,9) = 5.4, p < 0.05).

Fig 2. The average of maize stems (≈the number of cobs) damaged within 10m x 10m study plots by grivet monkeys illustrates the relationship with various prevention methods at a distance of 50 meters from the forest edge during the 2020 and 2021 maize cropping seasons and crop phenology in the Kokate Marachare (KM) sub-district.

Fig 2

The boxplot shows a significant difference in crop damage with different prevention methods (p < .005).

Camera trap results

The cameras recorded 47 photographs of baboons and 21 photographs of grivet monkeys (S2 Table). Of the 47 photographs of baboons, only 3 were confirmed as actual CFE, while the remaining 44 were potential CRE. Similarly, out of the 21 photographs of grivet monkeys, only 2 were confirmed as actual CFEs, with the remaining 19 being potential CREs. Notably, the longest CRE event, recorded by camera IDs A3 and E1, occurred in scarecrow and open maize fields (Table 2, S4 Fig, S3 Table and S1 video).

Table 2. Camera trap data from 25 maize fields during 2020 and 2021 captured images of olive baboons (n = 47) and grivet monkeys (n = 21).

Of the baboons, 3 images were CFEs and 44 were CREs. For grivet monkeys, 2 images were CFEs and 19 were CREs.

Study sites Camera ID Distance to forest edge Preventive and Non-preventive measures Olive baboon Grivet monkey
CRE CFE CRE CFE
Gurumu Woide A1 50m Wire mesh 4 0 0 0
A2 50m Human guard 10 0 0 0
A3 50m Scarecrow 12 3 0 0
A4 50m Thorny bushy 6 0 0 0
A5 50m Open/control 9 0 0 0
A6 100m Open 3 0 0 0
A7 200m Open 0 0 0 0
A8 300m Open 0 0 0 0
Kokate Marachare B1 50m Wire mesh 0 0 0 0
B2 50m Scarecrow 0 0 1 0
B3 50m Thorny bush 0 0 1 0
B4 50m Open/control 0 0 1 0
B5 50m Human guard 0 0 0 0
B6 100m Open 0 0 1 0
B7 200m Open 0 0 0 0
B8 300m Open 0 0 0 0
Delbo Wogene C1 100m Open 0 0 1 0
C2 200m Open 0 0 0 0
C3 300m Open 0 0 0 0
Damot Waja D1 100m Open 0 0 1 0
D2 200m Open 0 0 0 0
D3 300m Open 0 0 0 0
Konasa Pulasa E1 100m Open 0 0 11 2
E2 200m Open 0 0 2 0
E3 300m Open 0 0 0 0
Total 44 3 19 2

Determinants of maize damage: Field distance, duration, phenology, and timing of crop foraging events

In this study, the spatial-temporal variables affecting maize damage by primates were analyzed using a linear mixed model. The model indicated that farms located 200 meters from the forest edge experienced significantly fewer maize foraging incidents compared to farms located 50 meters from the forest edge (LMM: t = -2.728, DF = 256.9, p < 0.007). The duration of maize foraging incidents was significantly longer, lasting 6.1–9 minutes, compared to durations of 0.1–3 minutes (LMM: t = -1.993, DF = 182.9, p < 0.04). Similarly, maize foraging incidents were significantly higher during both the fruiting stage (LMM: t = -11.656, DF = 98.9, p < 2e-16) and the maturity stage (LMM: t = -13.53, DF = 176.05, p < 2e-16) compared to the seedling stage (Table 3 and S4 Table).

Table 3. A linear mixed model (LMM) analyzed maize damage caused by primates during CREs (n = 95) with the following significance results: Distance (P < 0.007), duration (P < 0.04), fruiting stage (P < 2e-16), and maturity stage (P < 2e-16).

Parameters Estimate Std. Error DF t value Pr (>|t|)
(Intercept) 66.646 4.424 30.611 15.064 1.06e-15 ***
distance_farm100m 1.848 2.004 256.286 -0.922 0.357
distance_farm200m -10.088 3.698 256.976 -2.728 0.007 **
distance_farm300m -6.388 4.196 257.913 -1.523 0.129
duration of_raiding3.1–6 minute -3.276 2.312 257.931 -1.417 0.158
duration of_raiding6.1–9 minute -6.466 3.244 182.907 -1.993 0.048 *
duration of_raiding9.1–12 minute -3.517 4.119 217.458 -0.854 0.394
duration of_raiding12.1–15 minute -7.025 5.300 147.578 -1.325 0.187
duration of_raiding15.1–18 minute -9.031 5.434 218.392 -1.662 0.098
duration of_raiding18.1–21 minute -6.752 6.370 232.020 -1.060 0.290
duration of_raiding21.1–24 minute -8.664 6.813 248.224 -1.272 0.205
duration of_raiding24.1–27 minute -11.756 7.637 245.037 -1.539 0.125
duration of_raiding27.1–30 minute -11.639 8.685 228.281 -1.340 0.182
duration of_raiding>30 minute -8.555 10.282 227.031 -0.832 0.406
crop_phenology_fruiting -46.620 3.999 98.983 -11.656 < 2e-16 ***
crop_phenology_maturity -55.256 4.084 176.050 -13.530 < 2e-16 ***

Significance codes: 0 ‘***’ 0.001 ‘**’ 0.01 ‘*’ 0.05 ‘.’ 0.1 ‘ ‘ 1

The median raid duration ranged from 15.1 to 18 minutes, with a mean of 3.78 and a standard deviation of 0.66 for primates (S5 Fig). Raid durations were significantly shorter when carried out by single individuals (median 1 minute, SD = 0.42) compared to raids by two or more individuals (median 3 minutes, SD = 2.42), as confirmed by the Mann-Whitney U test (n (single) = n (two+) = 38, U = 34.0, p < 0.001). The majority of CREs, approximately 70%, lasted between 0.1 and 12 minutes (S5 Fig).

According to responses from twenty-five farmers, a higher frequency of maize cobs was reported to be plucked by primates in July, with 524 ± 3.8 cobs in 2020 and 539 ± 4.6 cobs in 2021. Moderate frequencies of maize cobs were reported to be plucked by primates in June and August, with 216 ± 4.6 and 64 ± 2.1 cobs in 2020, and 240 ± 5.2 and 25 ± 1.6 cobs in 2021, respectively. The lowest frequencies of maize cobs were reported to be plucked by primates in April and May for both 2020 and 2021 (Fig 3). Farmers observed that baboons typically fed on crops early in the morning, while grivet monkeys fed on crops throughout the day. According to farmers, neither baboons nor grivet monkeys were seen eating on crops at night. Baboon crop feeding events (CFEs) occurred throughout the day but not in a uniform distribution, as revealed by photographic data from five locations (Chi-square goodness of fit: χ2 = 32.36, df = 12, p < 0.001). Similarly, grivet monkey CFEs occurred throughout the day, also with a non-uniform distribution, based on photographic data from five locations (Chi-square goodness of fit: χ2 = 35.86, df = 8, p < 0.001). Morning CFEs were more common in baboons (6:00–7:00 a.m.) than afternoon CFEs (2:00–3:30 p.m.). In contrast, CFEs were more common in the early afternoon (11:00 a.m.–12:00 p.m.) for grivet monkeys than in the morning (6:00–7:00 a.m.) during both 2020 and 2021 years. Farmers reported no baboon CFEs in all five locations between 11:00 a.m. and 6:00 p.m. during both 2020 and 2021 years (Fig 4).

Fig 3. The primate maize raiding frequency shows 524 ± 3.8 cobs in 2020 and 539 ± 4.6 cobs in 2021 recorded in July.

Fig 3

In June, 216 ± 4.6 cobs (2020) and 240 ± 5.2 cobs (2021) were recorded, while August saw 64 ± 2.1 cobs (2020) and 25 ± 1.6 cobs (2021) plucked. The lowest raiding was occurred in April and May for both years.

Fig 4. The frequency of CFEs by baboons and grivet monkeys (N = 95) from April to September 2020 and 2021 shows non-uniform distributions (p < 0.001).

Fig 4

Baboons had more CFEs in the morning (6:00–7:00 a.m.) than in the afternoon (2:00–3:30 p.m.), while grivet monkeys peaked in the early afternoon (11:00 a.m.–12:00 p.m.). No baboon CFEs were recorded between 11:00 a.m. and 6:00 p.m. in both years.

Primate crop raiding events, field visits, and age category composition of crop-raiding primates

A total of 367 primates were observed at the forest edges immediately before or during crop raiding events (CREs). Out of these, 367 individuals, accounting for 75%, ventured into fields (Table 4). Among 95 crop raiders, 75 CREs were attributed to olive baboons (79%), while 20 CREs were attributed to grivet monkeys (21%). Notably, olive baboons were significantly more likely to be found near the forest edge than grivet monkeys, as indicated by the Kruskal-Wallis test (χ2 = 263.1, df = 1, p < 0.001). The number of individuals entering a field showed a positive correlation with the number at the forest edge prior to raiding, which was confirmed by the Spearman’s rank correlation coefficient (rs = 0.434, n = 95, p = 0.006). This correlation persisted even when humans were present in the field, with a Spearman’s rank correlation coefficient of rs = 0.324, n = 59, and p = 0.04. Regarding the composition of CREs, the majority (36.1%) involved three or fewer individuals, while 47.8% consisted of a single individual or a pair. Only 16.1% of CREs involved more than five individuals (S6 Fig). It’s worth noting that baboons raided in significantly larger groups than grivet monkeys. Most olive baboon raiding groups, comprising fewer than five individuals, accounted for 78% of the total raids. In comparison, grivet monkey raiding groups were even smaller, with 84% consisting of fewer than five individuals (S6 Fig).

Table 4. During CREs (n = 367), 75% of on-field primates ventured into the fields: 79% (n = 75 CREs) were olive baboons and 21% (n = 20 CREs) were grivet monkeys.

Olive baboons were located closer to the forest edge than grivet monkeys (p < 0.001).

Species Total number of individuals on fields
Adults Sub-adults Infants Total
Olive baboon 151 (57.6%) 78 (29.8%) 33 (12.6%) 262
Grivet monkey 65 (61.9%) 40 (38.1%) 0 (0%) 105
Total 216 118 33 367

A significantly greater proportion of raids (64%; n = 61) occurred in groups rather than as single raids (χ2 = 15.9, df = 4, p = 0.003). Among the group raids, 67% consisted of either 2-CRE or 3-CRE groupings, indicating a diverse pattern of multiple-CRE profiles for both grivet monkeys and baboons (Fig 5). On the other hand, single raids accounted for 36% (n = 34) and were more likely to involve a single raiding individual. It’s worth noting that the extent of maize crop damage per CRE differed significantly between single raids and group raids, as evidenced by the F-test (F = 22.17, df = 1, p < 0.001). Seventy-five percent of primate field visits (comprising 22.3% olive baboons and 26.2% grivet monkeys) did not involve crop raiding (S7 Fig). Among the field visits that did include crop raiding, it was observed that 76% of olive baboon visits involved multiple CREs. In the case of grivet monkeys, 53% of visits involved multiple CREs (S8 Fig).

Fig 5. The frequency distribution of CREs among primates (n = 95) shows 64% of raids occurred in groups and 36% were single raids (p = 0.003).

Fig 5

Among group raids, 67% involved 2-CRE or 3-CRE groupings. The extent of maize crop damage per CRE significantly differed between single and group raids (p < 0.001).

Significantly more adults than sub-adults and more sub-adults than infants were observed in the study maize fields during CREs. These differences were statistically significant (Mann-Whitney U tests: n (sub-adult) = 118, n (adult) = 216, U = 1653.5, p < 0.001; n (infant) = 33, n (sub-adult) = 118, U = 952.0, p = 0.510). This age category distribution was consistent for each primate species (χ2 = 71.4, df = 1, p < 0.001) (Table 5). Nearly 58% (n = 55) of raiders were single adults, and the majority of adults were present in 42% of CREs involving multiple individuals (n = 40). Baboons exhibited mixed age-category raiding groups significantly more frequently than grivet monkeys (Kruskal-Wallis test, χ2 = 58.05, df = 1, p < 0.001). Most baboon and grivet raiders were accompanied by an adult during their raids. Almost two-thirds of baboon raiding groups included one or more sub-adults. Infants occasionally interacted with crops by pulling or biting stems; they often traveled or rested near an adult female. There was no significant difference between the number of male (n = 38) and female (n = 14) adult baboons observed in the fields during CREs (χ2 = 29.45, df = 1, p < 0.001). While significantly more maize stems were damaged by mixed-age groups than by adults-only groups, the former groups also comprised more individuals, traveled further onto fields, and raided for longer durations (Mann-Whitney U tests (n (adults) = 10.0, n (mixed) = 36: stems U = 2840.5, p = 0.021; individuals U = 20.5, p = 0.367; maximum distance U = 24.5, p = 1.000; median distance U = 429.0, p = 1.000; duration U = 528.5, p < 0.001).

Table 5. During CREs (n = 95), 36% of olive baboons were adult raiders and 64% were mixed raiders.

For grivet monkeys, 68% were adult raiders and 32% were mixed raiders. This age category distribution was consistent across both species (p < 0.001).

Species Composition of crop-raiding group
Adults only Adults and sub-adults Adults and infants Adults, sub-adults, infants
% CREs % CREs % CREs % CREs
Olive baboon 36 45 4.4 14.6
Grivet monkey 68 32 0.0 0.0

Discussions

Numerous primate species have been involved in crop-raiding activities, as documented in various studies [37, 5862]. In this study, the average maize yield loss due to primate damage was estimated at 67.9 kg per timad (quarter hectare), representing 43.1% in protected fields at 50 m from the forest edge. Unprotected fields experienced yield losses of 14.4%, 13.2%, 3.7%, and 0.1% at distances of 50, 100, 200, and 300 m from the forest edge, respectively. In comparison, a study by [3] reported maize yield losses of 243 kg (34.2%) and 80 kg (11.5%) per hectare due to crop-raiding by baboons and pigs in villages closer to and farther from forests, respectively. In Uganda’s Budongo Forest Reserve, farmers reported that 73% of crop damage was caused by primates [9]. Additionally, in Kenya’s Taita Hills, a forest-agricultural mosaic landscape, 87% of maize crops were damaged by primates [44]. The resulting average monetary losses for farmer households amounted to 1,103 ETB (equivalent to 32 US dollars), from an expected income of 8,125 ETB (equivalent to 233 US dollars) per timad [63].

In this study, the linear mixed model provides parameter estimates of maize crop loss during primate crop foraging events, while the fitted linear model serves as a reliable predictor for estimating the total number of crop loss events caused by wildlife [64]. Conversely, multiple regression models offer an improved estimate of maize crop loss during primate CREs by focusing on crop prevalence, with maize being most frequently raided by olive baboons and vervet monkeys [37]. Similarly, the maize model maintains broad applicability while capturing a significant proportion of local stem damage [37]. Considering that primate raiding behavior is often context-dependent [9], it is unlikely that CRE parameters contribute equally to maize crop loss during a raid [37]. This study demonstrates the value of strategically positioned camera traps in providing insights into various aspects, including recording primate species, their targeted crop types and growth phases, daily and seasonal patterns of crop-feeding activity, and whether crop-feeding occurs individually or in groups [39]. Our identifications were likely biased toward more conspicuous individuals, primarily adult males [39]. Additionally, while camera traps may capture evidence of primate groups’ presence in fields, they may not consistently provide photographic evidence of actual crop manipulation and consumption [39]. Therefore, many events identified as crop feeding events through camera traps may not indeed be actual CFEs. Baboons raided the crops that are available close to the forest edge. Primates predominantly raided crops within 10 meters of the farm-forest edges [60, 65, 66]. However, baboons still visited farms located 300 meters from the forest edge, even though maize crop feeding events were infrequent at this distance. In Uganda, vervet monkeys ventured up to 55 meters into crop fields, while baboons reached up to 110 meters [67]. The highest distance observed was over 700 meters, notably in the Ngangao Forest in the Taita Hills, Kenya [44]. This variation may be influenced by the distribution of households and the number of farms investigated at different distances [44].

In this study, maize raids by primates were observed during the maturation of maize cobs. The findings suggest that scarecrows and thorn bushes were generally ineffective in preventing baboons and grivet monkeys from returning to the fields. While wire mesh protection reduced maize damage, it did not fully deter baboons, as they quickly habituated to it. At the Kokate Marachare site, the wire mesh fence was somewhat effective in discouraging olive baboons and grivet monkeys, likely due to the presence of a single raider. However, at the Gurumu Woide site, where multiple baboons were present, they remained vigilant and determined to raid the maize crops, even though the fields were fenced with wire mesh. Similarly, wire mesh fences showed limited effectiveness against primate raiding in the Budongo Forest Reserve, Uganda [42]. Indeed, field guards were often absent due to other (social) activities, school attendance, etc. However, continuous guarding is a key strategy for effectively mitigating crop damage by pests [3]. The extended protection duration was particularly necessary in villages at higher altitudes where maize takes longer to mature [3]. Both olive baboons and grivet monkeys are frequently observed foraging for crops in human-dominated settings in the study area, with olive baboons causing more damage than grivet monkeys. Similarly, olive baboons and vervet monkeys in the study area were damaging maize crops through feeding, trampling, and the destruction of stems and roots. This has significantly impacted maize yields and household incomes. Despite the abundance of forest fruits, the primates’ appetite for maize remains undiminished, and they continue to forage on the crops [68].

The time of day had differing effects on the crop-foraging patterns of the two species, with olive baboons foraging more frequently in the morning and grivet monkeys in the afternoon. This variation in the time of activity might be related to the presence of baboons, which appeared to deter grivet crop-foraging behavior [69]. Similarly, the time activity pattern varied in different areas; [70] recorded a peak in baboon crop foraging in Zimbabwe between 8 and 10 am, potentially driven by the need to find food upon walking. In contrast, primates in Uganda foraged on crops more frequently between noon and sunset than between sunrise and noon [9].

To access crops, baboons were observed using a ’sit and wait’ strategy near the edge of crop fields [71]. The more time olive baboons and grivet monkeys spent close to the fields, the more probability they were to forage crops. Furthermore, when they entered crops during these visits, they were more likely to enter multiple times. Crop raiding was not a foraging pattern practiced by all members of primate social groups, with baboon raiding parties typically averaging five individuals [60].

In this study, more adults were observed on maize fields during CREs compared to sub-adults. This varies in different areas; in some studies, adult primates were the main crop raiders, as referenced in [6062, 69], while in other studies, sub-adults were identified as the primary raiders, as cited in [7275]. However, this behavior was rare and observed only in baboons [37]. Additionally, perceptions of risk may influence the age composition of primate raiding groups, with adult females accompanied by infants raiding less frequently, likely due to increased caution [62, 76].

Conclusion

The significant crop losses observed underscore the need for continuous vigilance in maize fields, from sowing to harvest, to deter wild primate pests. The parameters of crop foraging events can serve as quantifiable measures for assessing the effectiveness of various techniques aimed at deterring primate crop foraging. In this study, wire mesh fencing and guarding were found to have limited effectiveness in preventing raids by olive baboons and grivet monkeys. Therefore, no single mitigation method proved completely effective in preventing primate crop raiding during this study, implying the need to apply a combination of mitigation strategies. The participatory approach, combined with camera traps, was proven to be an appropriate method for assessing primate-induced maize damage. The linear mixed model (LMM) was a suitable choice for analyzing the extent of maize damage by primates across various spatio-temporal factors. Understanding the spatio-temporal patterns of wildlife-induced crop losses, as well as evaluating key parameters related to crop foraging events, is essential for mitigating the socio-economic impacts of primate pests originating from forest edges.

Supporting information

S1 Fig. Location map of the study area (created with ESRI ArcGIS Desktop 10.8).

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S2 Fig

Various prevention strategies (wire mesh (A), human guardian tower (B), scarecrow (C), and thorny bush (D)) were assessed in eight experimental maize field sites to evaluate their effectiveness in deterring crop raiders. The study was conducted in maize field sites located in Gurumu Woide and Kokate Marachare (Photo credit: Yigrem Deneke).

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S3 Fig. Diagrammatic example of a field map used by observers.

HSE = house. GH = guard hut. SH = storage hut. Solid black lines = field boundary. Green objects = trees.

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S4 Fig

The images above depict camera trap captures of various wildlife species observed in maize field sites located in Damota Mountain, Southern Ethiopia: (A) Olive baboons (Papio anubis); (B) Grivet monkeys (Chlorocebus aethiops); (C) Porcupines (Hystrix cristata); and (D) Bushbucks (Tragelaphus scriptus).

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S5 Fig. Relative frequency of raid durations by primate CREs (n = 95).

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S6 Fig. Relative frequency of raiding by primate CREs (n = 95).

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S7 Fig. The number of baboon and grivet monkey field visits that did and did not involve crop-raiding events on maize fields in the highlands of Damota mountain, April to September 2020 and 2021 years (n = 367).

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S8 Fig. The number of baboon and grivet monkey field visits that involved single- and multi-crop raiding events on maize fields in the highlands of Damota mountain, April to September 2020 and 2021 years (n = 189).

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S1 Table. Maize field and study plot size on the protective and non-protective maize fields.

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S2 Table. Farmer observation and reported of maize damage assessments (580 maize stem expected per plot except field no. 25 (see the text).

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S3 Table. Camera traps recorded the CREs and CFEs of olive baboons and grivet monkeys among twenty-five selected maize fields.

Each field comprised study plots measuring 10mx10 meters, observed during the maize cropping seasons of 2020 and 2021.

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S4 Table. A linear mixed model of the maize damage rate by primates, considering different spatio-temporal variables, was analyzed using R code.

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S1 File. The rate of maize damage by olive baboons in different crop phonological stages was analyzed in both protected and open/control fields using R code.

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S2 File. The rate of maize damage by grivet monkeys in different crop phenological stages was analyzed in both protected and open/control fields using R code.

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S1 Video. Maize crop foraging events by olive baboons, October 15, 2021 at 7:42am (UTC).

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Acknowledgments

We would like to express our gratitude to VLIR-UOS, the University of Antwerp in Belgium, and Wolaita Sodo University in Ethiopia for their technical and administrative support. We are also grateful to the Environment Protection, Forest and Climate Change Regulatory Office of Wolaita Zone, Ethiopia, for granting us permission to conduct this research. Additionally, we extend our thanks to the administrators of the respective districts and villages, as well as the agriculture and rural development office workers of Sodo Zuriya and Damot Gale, and the local farmers for their unwavering technical support, enthusiasm, and hospitality throughout our research. Finally, we would like to thank all the reviewers and editors for their valuable comments, which greatly improved this manuscript.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the manuscript and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

This work was funded by the Flemish Interuniversity Council (VLIR-UOS, ET2019TEA485A102). The funders had no role in study design, data collection, and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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PONE-D-23-43746Crop Damage by Nonhuman Primates: Quantifying the Keys Parameters of Crop-Raiding events on the Livelihoods of Smallholders in an Agriculture- Forest Mosaic Landscape, Wolaita Zone, Southern EthiopiaPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: Title: Please make your title concise and precise; it is now unnecessarily long and complex

I would suggest to be modified as: ‘Patterns of Primates’ Crop Raiding and the impacts on incomes of Smallholders across Mosaic agricultural Landscape of Wolaita Zone, Southern Ethiopia’

Introduction: this section is too shallow, lacks strong evidence from bodies of literature. Instead, it seems the description of the study area. Hence, I would recommend major revisions by scanning more literature review. For example, you can refer: Lemessa, D., Hylander, K., & Hambäck, P. (2013). Composition of crops and land-use types in relation to crop raiding pattern at different distances from forests. Agriculture, Ecosystems and Environment, 167, 71–78. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.agee.2012.12.014

Materials and methods

Study area

Please include the ecosystem type and farming systems in the description of the study areas. Refer to this doc regarding the farming system: Amede, T., Auricht, C., Boffa, J.-M., Dixon, J., Mallawaarachchi, T., Rukuni, M., & Teklewold-Deneke, T. (2015). The Evolving Farming and Pastoral Landscapes in Ethiopia: A Farming System Framework for Investment Planning and Priority Setting. September.

Line 146-148, how can famers identify the age categories of the crop raiders? It is not clear!

Experimental setup: you need to show experimental setup by drawing schematic sketch, it is not entirely clear from the texts you wrote??

Data analysis

This is entirely less clear and has a lot of shortfalls. The study was undertaken across a landscape and hence, it is expected that there random factors besides the data considered as fixed factors. The data analysis undertaken did not take into account this issue. This means that such dataset can strongly be analyzed using mixed models such as LMM or GLMM. Now, simple non-parametric statistical tests were used and even are not clearly described how and for what type of response variables they used. For example, Ch-square for what kind of frequency distribution? Mann Whitney test for what type of data? and F-test?

Line 188-190, For the analysis of primate assaults on maize within both preventive and non-preventive maize fields at different seasons and crop phenology, we utilized R-Software [13]. But, what package and function were used is not mentioned.

Moreover, there are statistical tools mentioned in the result but not in data analysis section. Why the authors used two statistical software is also not clear? Hence, I would strongly suggest to run the analysis based on these comments and reciprocally present the results.

Results

I was a bit confused how the authors described the crop damage from maize stems and cobs.

- Is it stems/cob or cobs/stems?

Discussion section

Since some results may be changed after the revision of the analysis, at this stage it is not sensible to comment on this section.

Reviewer #2: Comments and suggestions to the Authors

This paper is good and can be strengthened for your audience to benefit even more from your study. I made some minor comments and suggestions. The authors should use the separate file to correct the suggested comments. In addition, there are some comments and suggestions that require clarification.

Title:

1. The title is very long. It should be shorter than the present and to the point accordingly.

2. The title is similar with the work titled “Crop Damage by Primates: Quantifying the Key Parameters of Crop-Raiding Events” in western Uganda and published in PLOS ONE although it is in different countries. Would you modify your title?

Abstract:

1. Line -13- “This study aims to assess primates foraging behavior” Is assessing primates foraging behavior was one of the objective of the paper? If yes where is the method and result of the objective?

2. An abstract should show slightly how to collect the data of the work. However, this manuscript didn’t show how to collect the data.

Introduction

1. The authors described as the study area contains endemic animal and plant species. Would you please list some of them?

2. The gap of the study should describe at the introduction part. However, I didn’t see a research gap in your introduction section.

3. Line-39- 47- It will be better if this part moved to the description of the study area section.

4. Lines -55- Please remove the method from the introduction part.

5. The introduction part is very short. It didn’t highlight what is done and what is the gap. I recommend writing strong introduction.

Study area

1. Line-68- remove the word “see”

Experimental setup

1. What do 25 fields mean? Would you clarify in detail?

2. Line -122- “Data collection was carried out by farmers who had received training from researchers”. I doubt about this. How farmers can collect data? The work is on crop damage by Nonhuman Primates. If yes how farmers can collect actual data. I strongly believe that the data collected by farmers might be biased. Why didn’t participate field experts rather than the farmers.

3. Line-127-128- The data collectors (farmers) received incentives. However, this may makes them biased on the data.

4. I have doubt on the data collection method (Farmer observation and reports). Thus, the authors should give scientific evidence on the doubt why they use farmers as data collectors by giving incentives.

Data analysis

Result

1. Line-213- remove the word “as detailed in”

2. The result of the manuscript is very shallow. Please try to make it strong result.

Discussion

1. Line -349- 354- this is a repetition of the result. Please don’t repeat your result in the discussion section. Instead try to discuss your result (the meaning and application of your result).

2. Your discussion is very broad and general. I suggest you to give emphasis on the interpretation of your result and comparing your result with recent publications similar to your work.

Conclusion

1. Would you please add the application of your work in the introduction section?

2. Make it strong conclusion based on your findings.

General Comments

1. Grammar and structure of sentences should be revised for better improvement.

I hope this helps to make the paper better.

Best wishes.

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Reviewer #2: No

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


3 Mar 2024

Title: Crop Damage by Nonhuman Primates: Quantifying the Keys Parameters of Crop Raiding events on the Livelihoods of Smallholders in an Agriculture- Forest Mosaic Landscape, Wolaita Zone, Southern Ethiopia

Manuscript Number: PONE-D-23-43746

Response to Reviewers

We are great full to the editors and reviewers for their insightful and valuable comments on our paper. We have carefully considered the comments and tried our best to address every one of them. We hope the manuscript after careful revisions meet your higher standard journal. The authors welcome further constructive comments if any. We provided the point by point responses. All modifications in the manuscript have been highlighted in yellow color.

Sincerely,

Yigrem Deneke

Response to Reviewer 1

Title: Please make your title concise and precise; it is now unnecessarily long and complex

I would suggest to be modified as: ‘Patterns of Primates’ Crop Raiding and the impacts on incomes of Smallholders across Mosaic agricultural Landscape of Wolaita Zone, Southern Ethiopia’

Response: The title has been modified to "Patterns of Primates Crop Raiding and the Impacts on Incomes of Smallholders across Mosaic Agricultural Landscape of Wolaita Zone, Southern Ethiopia."

Introduction: this section is too shallow, lacks strong evidence from bodies of literature. Instead, it seems the description of the study area. Hence, I would recommend major revisions by scanning more literature review. For example, you can refer: Lemessa, D., Hylander, K., & Hambäck, P. (2013). Composition of crops and land-use types in relation to crop raiding pattern at different distances from forests. Agriculture, Ecosystems and Environment, 167, 71–78. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.agee.2012.12.014

Response: The introduction has been revised according to the comments and some points are move to description of the study area.

Materials and methods

Study area

Please include the ecosystem type and farming systems in the description of the study areas. Refer to this doc regarding the farming system: Amede, T., Auricht, C., Boffa, J.-M., Dixon, J., Mallawaarachchi, T., Rukuni, M., & Teklewold-Deneke, T. (2015). The Evolving Farming and Pastoral Landscapes in Ethiopia: A Farming System Framework for Investment Planning and Priority Setting. September.

Response: The introduction has been revised to incorporate the comments:

"The Wolaita zone, characterized by a highland perennial farming system, supports a diverse array of crops (Amede et al., 2017). Primary food crops in this region, as reported by Amede et al. (2017), include maize, teff, various vegetables, and root and tuber species such as cassava, yam, potato, sweet potato, and taro. Additionally, tropical and temperate fruit tree crops like banana, avocado, mango, and apple are cultivated in the Wolaita areas (Amede et al., 2017)."

Line 146-148, how can famers identify the age categories of the crop raiders? It is not clear!

Response: Most of the farmers had completed secondary school, and some of them had received bachelor's degrees in related fields such as plant science and biology. They possess indigenous knowledge regarding the identification of primate species and age categories of the crop raiders. Additionally, they were trained by the researchers to become more familiar with using scientific methods for identifying the age categories of the crop raiders.

Experimental setup: you need to show experimental setup by drawing schematic sketch, it is not entirely clear from the texts you wrote??

Response: I depicted the experimental setup by including a schematic sketch in this manuscript.

Data analysis

This is entirely less clear and has a lot of shortfalls. The study was undertaken across a landscape and hence, it is expected that there random factors besides the data considered as fixed factors. The data analysis undertaken did not take into account this issue. This means that such dataset can strongly be analyzed using mixed models such as LMM or GLMM. Now, simple non-parametric statistical tests were used and even are not clearly described how and for what type of response variables they used. For example, Ch-square for what kind of frequency distribution? Mann Whitney test for what type of data? and F-test?

Response: We chose a multiple regression model over LMM or GLMM models because it is suitable for analyzing spatio-temporal data of the dependent variable (maize rate of damage) along with multiple independent variables, such as the number of individuals raiding, primate CREs, field distance, duration of raiding, and crop phenology. This statistical model is supported by Wallace and Hill (2012). A chi-square test was employed to examine the variation in the amount of maize damage by primates across different variables, including primate species raiding duration, multiple versus single raid events, primate CFE in time of day, and age-category of raiding in single or group. The Mann-Whitney U test was utilized to compare primate CREs of raiding durations and different age categories of primate species on CREs. Additionally, the F-test was applied to compare estimates of maize damage between preventive and non-preventive strategies, as well as between single and multiple raids.

Line 188-190, For the analysis of primate assaults on maize within both preventive and non-preventive maize fields at different seasons and crop phenology, we utilized R-Software [13]. But, what package and function were used is not mentioned. Moreover, there are statistical tools mentioned in the result but not in data analysis section. Why the authors used two statistical software is also not clear? Hence, I would strongly suggest to run the analysis based on these comments and reciprocally present the results.

Response: In R software, we utilized the bplot function in the Rlab package. We found that creating graphics such as boxplots is more effective and easier to use for data interpretation compared to SPSS. Therefore, we employed two statistical tests.

Results

I was a bit confused how the authors described the crop damage from maize stems and cobs.

- Is it stems/cob or cobs/stems?

Response: It was observed that maize stems were damaged and cobs were plucked (stems/cobs).

Discussion section

Since some results may be changed after the revision of the analysis, at this stage it is not sensible to comment on this section.

Response: Ok. It is modified based on results

Response to Reviewer 2

This paper is good and can be strengthened for your audience to benefit even more from your study.

Response: Thank you very much.

Title

1. The title is very long. It should be shorter than the present and to the point accordingly.

2. The title is similar with the work titled “Crop Damage by Primates: Quantifying the Key Parameters of Crop-Raiding Events” in western Uganda and published in PLOS ONE although it is in different countries. Would you modify your title?

Response: It is modified

Abstract:

1. Line -13- “This study aims to assess primates foraging behavior” Is assessing primates foraging behavior was one of the objective of the paper? If yes where is the method and result of the objective?

2. An abstract should show slightly how to collect the data of the work. However, this manuscript didn’t show how to collect the data.

Response: I have modified it to "primate crop foraging/raiding events (CFE/CRE)." The method is described in the manuscript, and the data collection was conducted through farmer observation and reports, as well as camera traps. The data collection method is also incorporated into the abstract.

Introduction

1. The authors described as the study area contains endemic animal and plant species. Would you please list some of them?

2. The gap of the study should describe at the introduction part. However, I didn’t see a research gap in your introduction section.

3. Line-39- 47- It will be better if this part moved to the description of the study area section.

4. Lines -55- Please remove the method from the introduction part.

5. The introduction part is very short. It didn’t highlight what is done and what is the gap. I recommend writing strong introduction.

Response: The introduction has been revised based on the comments. The research gap is indicated, and the description of endemic animal and plant species, as well as the detailed description of the study area, has been removed from the manuscript.

Study area

1. Line-68- remove the word “see”

Response: I removed the word “see”

Experimental setup

1. What do 25 fields mean? Would you clarify in detail?

2. Line -122- “Data collection was carried out by farmers who had received training from researchers”. I doubt about this. How farmers can collect data? The work is on crop damage by Nonhuman Primates. If yes how farmers can collect actual data. I strongly believe that the data collected by farmers might be biased. Why didn’t participate field experts rather than the farmers.

3. Line-127-128- The data collectors (farmers) received incentives. However, this may makes them biased on the data.

4. I have doubt on the data collection method (Farmer observation and reports). Thus, the authors should give scientific evidence on the doubt why they use farmers as data collectors by giving incentives.

Response: Twenty-five maize fields were selected for this study, comprising 8 protective and 17 non-protective maize fields. Most of the farmers involved had completed secondary school, and some of them had received bachelor's degrees in related fields. The farmers managed their own maize fields during the day and night, drawing on their indigenous knowledge and practices concerning human-wildlife conflict assessments. All these farmer participants in data collection are members of Damota Community Managed Forest, and they are developing knowledge and skills from the forest managers and local NGOs (World Vision of Ethiopia) on how to manage and protect the forest, as well as assessing human-wildlife conflict and mitigating strategies. Additionally, all farmers were trained by the researchers to familiarize themselves more with scientific data collection protocol. Moreover, researchers supervised the data collection process. The farmers received per diem payments for guarding the camera traps during four consecutive trapping nights per month, and they also received compensation fees at the end of the project period.

Data analysis

Result

1. Line-213- remove the word “as detailed in”

2. The result of the manuscript is very shallow. Please try to make it strong result.

Response: I removed the phrase "as detailed in." Additionally, I included an additional result that highlights the strength of using multiple regression models for the analysis.

Discussion

1. Line -349- 354- this is a repetition of the result. Please don’t repeat your result in the discussion section. Instead try to discuss your result (the meaning and application of your result).

2. Your discussion is very broad and general. I suggest you to give emphasis on the interpretation of your result and comparing your result with recent publications similar to your work.

Response: I have revised this section by eliminating the repetition of the result. Additionally, I compared our findings with those of similar works, including recent publications.

Conclusion

1. Would you please add the application of your work in the introduction section?

2. Make it strong conclusion based on your findings.

Response: I have described this section based on my findings.

Grammar and structure of sentences should be revised for better improvement.

Response: Grammar and structure of sentences have been improved

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Decision Letter 1

Sharon E Kessler

1 Apr 2024

PONE-D-23-43746R1Crop Damage by Nonhuman Primates: Quantifying the Keys Parameters of Crop-Raiding events on the Livelihoods of Smallholders in an Agriculture- Forest Mosaic Landscape, Wolaita Zone, Southern EthiopiaPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: 1. ‘it is easier to make visualizations of the results, e.g. plotting box plot using SPSS instead of R’, but you have used R to run lm analysis which is even more difficult when compared to making box plot graph using e.g., boxplot<-boxplot(damage~ locations). This does not convince me and I strongly suggest using R instead of SPSS to produce high quality graph.

2. ‘We chose a multiple regression model over LMM or GLMM models because it is suitable for analyzing spatio-temporal data of the dependent variable (maize rate of damage)’ over the LMM. However, you have random factors which, due to the variations among sites/seasons, unnecessarily inflate the impacts of noises in the model and subsequently the results. To intuitively analyze the data and thereby enhance the novelty of your study, I still insist to run the analysis using LMM which is the extension of lm (that you have used now) to take into account both fixed factors (that you measured or recorded) and the random factors (sites/seasons) that you cannot do this with ordinary linear model.

Reviewer #2: Comments and suggestions to the Authors

Although most of the previous comments and suggestions are corrected, there are still some comments and queries that require improvements and clarification.

Title

1. Modified according the comments

Abstract:

1. I didn’t see the highlight how to collect the data of the work in the abstract section. Yes, it is described in detail in the MS. However, abstract should highlight the method of data collection.

Introduction

1. Corrected and improved.

Study area

1. Line 107, According to reference [25], delete the word reference

2. Line 13 and 111, 10x10 meters, correct as 10 x10 meters

Farmer observation and reports

1. Farmer? Only one farmer or farmers?

2. Line -141- “The data collection was conducted by twenty five farmers who had received training from researchers…..” Still, this concern is serious. How farmers can collect data? Although they completed secondary school or above, they are already farmers. Thus, how farmers can collect actual data. This may lead to biasness. Why didn’t participate field experts rather than the farmers?

3. Furthermore, the data the farmers received incentives. However, this may makes them biased on the data.

4. Dear authors, you didn’t give a scientific response on the above two serious issues (2 and 3).

Results

1. In the results in the testing of significance level, there is writing error. For instance, line 288: (F=292.5, df=11, p < .001, see Figure 5). Here, it should rewrite as follows: (F = 292.5, df = 11, p < .001, see Figure 5). Your writing style should consistency throughout the MS.

2. There is inconsistency in the writing style of the MS. For example, Line 288 (F=292.5, df=11, p < .001, see Figure 5) and line 299 (χ² = 58.62, d.f. = 10, P < 0.05). Here, look the degree of freedom (df). In the first degree of freedom written as df while in the second degree of freedom written as d.f. You have to correct such inconsistencies throughout the manuscript.

General Comments

1. There is inconsistency in the writing style in the MS (as described as the results section in the above).

2. Furthermore, I have observed other inconsistencies in the MS. For instance, line 77 (Fig. 1), line 118 (Figure 2), line 124 (see figure 3), line 280 (Fig. 5), line 285 (as illustrated in Fig. 6), line 295 (as illustrated in Fig 7), line 303 (see Fig 8) …… Please correct these and other inconsistencies throughout the manuscript.

Accordingly, the MS requires serious editing once again before go to the production for publication.

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Author response to Decision Letter 1


10 Apr 2024

Title: Patterns of Primates Crop Raiding and the impacts on incomes of Smallholders across Mosaic agricultural Landscape of Wolaita Zone, Southern Ethiopia

Manuscript Number: PONE-D-23-43746-R2

Response to Reviewers

We are great full to the editors and reviewers for their insightful and valuable comments on our paper. We have carefully considered the comments and tried our best to address every one of them. We hope the manuscript after careful revisions meet your higher standard journal. The authors welcome further constructive comments if any. We provided the point by point responses. All modifications in the manuscript have been highlighted in yellow color.

Sincerely,

Yigrem Deneke

Response to Reviewer 1

Introduction

Q1. The authors have now made revisions and enhanced the clarities of their manuscript. However, still the introduction is too shallow or very short at least.

Response: Thank you very much. The introduction has been revised based on the comments and it is included additional literature review on the subject

Data analysis

Q2. ‘it is easier to make visualizations of the results, e.g. plotting box plot using SPSS instead of R’, but you have used R to run lm analysis which is even more difficult when compared to making box plot graph using e.g., boxplot<-boxplot(damage~ locations). This does not convince me and I strongly suggest using R instead of SPSS to produce high quality graph.

Response: I have revised it and making plotting box plot using SPSS

Q3. ‘We chose a multiple regression model over LMM or GLMM models because it is suitable for analyzing spatio-temporal data of the dependent variable (maize rate of damage)’ over the LMM. However, you have random factors which, due to the variations among sites/seasons, unnecessarily inflate the impacts of noises in the model and subsequently the results. To intuitively analyze the data and thereby enhance the novelty of your study, I still insist to run the analysis using LMM which is the extension of lm (that you have used now) to take into account both fixed factors (that you measured or recorded) and the random factors (sites/seasons) that you cannot do this with ordinary linear model.

Response: I revised it and I run the analysis using LMM by taking in to account both fixed factors (that you measured or recorded) and the random factors (sites/seasons)

If he authors willing to revise their manuscript based on these points, I think the paper can be relevant to be published in PLOS ONE journal.

Response: Thank you very much.

Response to Reviewer 2

Although most of the previous comments and suggestions are corrected, there are still some comments and queries that require improvements and clarification.

Response: Thank you very much.

Title

1. Modified according the comments

Response: Thank you very much.

Abstract:

1. I didn’t see the highlight how to collect the data of the work in the abstract section. Yes, it is described in detail in the MS. However, abstract should highlight the method of data collection.

Response: I highlight the method of data collection as per the comment.

Introduction

1. Corrected and improved.

Response: Thank you very much.

Study area

1. Line 107, According to reference [25], delete the word reference

2. Line 13 and 111, 10x10 meters, correct as 10 x10 meters

Response: It is modified

Farmer observation and reports

1. Farmer? Only one farmer or farmers?

2. Line -141- “The data collection was conducted by twenty five farmers who had received training from researchers…..” Still, this concern is serious. How farmers can collect data? Although they completed secondary school or above, they are already farmers. Thus, how farmers can collect actual data. This may lead to biasness. Why didn’t participate field experts rather than the farmers?

3. Furthermore, the data the farmers received incentives. However, this may makes them biased on the data.

4. Dear authors, you didn’t give a scientific response on the above two serious issues (2 and 3).

Response: It is modified the method of the data collection in the manuscript based on the given comments

Results

1. In the results in the testing of significance level, there is writing error. For instance, line 288: (F=292.5, df=11, p < .001, see Figure 5). Here, it should rewrite as follows: (F = 292.5, df = 11, p < .001, see Figure 5). Your writing style should consistency throughout the MS.

2. There is inconsistency in the writing style of the MS. For example, Line 288 (F=292.5, df=11, p < .001, see Figure 5) and line 299 (χ² = 58.62, d.f. = 10, P < 0.05). Here, look the degree of freedom (df). In the first degree of freedom written as df while in the second degree of freedom written as d.f. You have to correct such inconsistencies throughout the manuscript.

Response: It is modified. I consistently and properly used the testing of significance level or degree of freedom (df) throughout the manuscript.

English grammer is also improved throughout the manuscript

General Comments

1. There is inconsistency in the writing style in the MS (as described as the results section in the above).

2. Furthermore, I have observed other inconsistencies in the MS. For instance, line 77 (Fig. 1), line 118 (Figure 2), line 124 (see figure 3), line 280 (Fig. 5), line 285 (as illustrated in Fig. 6), line 295 (as illustrated in Fig 7), line 303 (see Fig 8) …… Please correct these and other inconsistencies throughout the manuscript.

Response: It is modified. I consistently and properly wrote the figure and table on the manuscript through adhered to the journal guidelines regarding figures and table formatting style.

Accordingly, the MS requires serious editing once again before go to the production for publication.

Response: Ok, thank you very much.

Decision Letter 2

Miquel Vall-llosera Camps

31 Jul 2024

PONE-D-23-43746R2Patterns of Primates Crop Raiding and the impacts on incomes of Smallholders across Mosaic agricultural Landscape of Wolaita Zone, Southern EthiopiaPLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Deneke,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

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Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

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Reviewer #1: Partly

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Thank you once again for inviting me to review further this manuscript. It is clear that the study is interesting and has some novelty. However, I think the authors need strong support for the statistical analysis part. With my previous comments, I was trying to encourage them to analyze their data in a robust way using LMM with the inclusion of random factors using R program instead of SPSS. The authors are stating that they used SPSS to do so and they even took out the R now from their data analysis section with this version. Still how they used the different statistical tools for the analysis is crude and not explicitly described. If the authors are willing to improve their manuscript by including these comments, I think the manuscript may be accepted for the publication without further review process.

Reviewer #2: You corrected all the comments and suggestions that I gave you in the second round. Hence, I suggest to the editor that it be published in the journal.

Good luck.

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Author response to Decision Letter 2


5 Aug 2024

Title: Patterns of Primates Crop Raiding and the impacts on incomes of Smallholders across Mosaic agricultural Landscape of Wolaita Zone, Southern Ethiopia

Manuscript Number: PONE-D-23-43746-R3

Response to Reviewers

We are great full to the editors and reviewers for their insightful and valuable comments on our paper. We have carefully considered the comments and tried our best to address every one of them. We hope the manuscript after careful revisions meet your higher standard journal. The authors welcome further constructive comments if any. We provided the point by point responses. All modifications in the manuscript have been highlighted in yellow color.

Sincerely,

Yigrem Deneke

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Response

The following reference was removed from the manuscript in the first-round revision (R1):

The linear regression model results are reported as R2 values (proportion of variance accounted for), beta values (contribution to the model), t statistics (statistical significance of the contribution), and regression equations (the combination of variables best accounting for observed outcomes) (Sokal RR & Rohlf FJ, 1995). This was removed from the data analysis because the linear model only analyzes data with fixed factors. In contrast, the linear mixed model analyzes data with both fixed and random factors, along with the response variables.

The following nine references were added to the manuscript in the second-round revision (R2):

Hill, CM, Webber, AD, 2010; Hockings, KJ, Sousa, C, 2013; Freed, BZ, 2012; McGuinness, S, Taylor, D, 2014; Findlay, LJ, 2016; Gillingham, S, Lee, PC, 2003; Aharikundira, M, Tweheyo, M, 2011; Ango, TG, Börjeson, L, Senbeta, F, Hylander, K, 2014; Fang L, Hong, Y, Zhou Z, Chen, W, 2021. This is added to the manuscript because it includes important additional background information for this study.

The following reference was removed from the manuscript in the second & third-round revision (R2 &R3):

R core team. R, 2020. This reference was removed because the data were only analyzed using SPSS in the manuscript.

The following reference was added to the manuscript in the third round revision (R4):

R core team. R, 2024. I used the latest version of the R program because it is robust for analyzing various datasets. This reference is now included to highlight the effectiveness and reliability of R in handling the spatio-temporal datasets.

� I have replaced Table 5 and text, Figure 5, and Figure 6, which were analyzed using SPSS, with new versions that can be analyzed using the R program.

� I have included the number of field experts and local farmers participated in this study

� I have included a relevant remarks in the conclusion section

� I have included the following supporting documents in the manuscript (R3):

� S2 file. The rate of maize damage by olive baboons in different crop phonological stages was analyzed in both protected and open/control fields using R code.

� S3 file. The rate of maize damage by grivet monkeys in different crop phenological stages was analyzed in both protected and open/control fields using R code.

� S4 table 2. A linear mixed model of the maize damage rate by primates, considering different spatio-temporal variables, was analyzed using R code.

Response to Reviewer 1

Reviewer #1: Thank you once again for inviting me to review furthers this manuscript. It is clear that the study is interesting and has some novelty. However, I think the authors need strong support for the statistical analysis part. With my previous comments, I was trying to encourage them to analyze their data in a robust way using LMM with the inclusion of random factors using R program instead of SPSS. The authors are stating that they used SPSS to do so and they even took out the R now from their data analysis section with this version. Still how they used the different statistical tools for the analysis is crude and not explicitly described. If the authors are willing to improve their manuscript by including these comments, I think the manuscript may be accepted for the publication without further review process.

Response: Thank you very much for the comments. I included the analysis done with R, running the analysis using LMM to account for both fixed and random factors and response variables. This analysis is clearly indicated in the supporting documents. The different statistical tools used for the analysis are also explicitly described in the data analysis section.

Reviewer #2: You corrected all the comments and suggestions that I gave you in the second round. Hence, I suggest to the editor that it be published in the journal.

Good luck.

Response: Thank you very much.

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Decision Letter 3

Nickson E Otieno

11 Sep 2024

PONE-D-23-43746R3Patterns of Primates Crop Raiding and the impacts on incomes of Smallholders across Mosaic agricultural Landscape of Wolaita Zone, Southern EthiopiaPLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Deneke,

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The first reviewer recommended the article for acceptance and the second one had concerns about the quality of what is presented as the background to the study within the introduction section. I agree with this and urge that the authors make a solid case for where there study fits within the body of knowledge existing on human-primate conflicts within the framework of crop raiding, not only in Ethiopia or Africa but actually throughout the tropical region. In short, a more thorough literature review, preferably with citations of research conducted within the past 1-6 years.

The third reviewer had even more serious concerns regarding the analytical and conceptual framework of the study, specifically feeling that some analyses were largely still unsound, many of them repetitive; that there was little justification for the large array of analytical tools employed by the authors. For instance could the authors try and reduce the number of statistical tools or more clearly explain how the various analyses do not duplicate each other? In addition, state what data model distribution  and link functions were applied to the LMMs

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Reviewer #3: (No Response)

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Reviewer #5: All comments have been addressed

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Reviewer #4: Yes

Reviewer #5: No

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Reviewer #4: Yes

Reviewer #5: No

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Reviewer #3: While the manuscript is generally well-written, there are a few concerns. The introduction requires structural revisions for improved clarity and coherence. It should begin with a broader discussion of global human-wildlife conflict, particularly focusing on primates' effects on agriculture, to better establish the study's relevance. Additionally, the sections on the Sodo Zuriya and Damot Gale areas need to be integrated more effectively, highlighting their ecological significance and the importance of these regions for studying human-wildlife conflict. The introduction should also better articulate the problem statement, linking it to existing literature and identifying the research gap this study addresses. Methodologies such as camera traps and community-based studies should be reserved for the methods section. At the same time, the introduction should succinctly outline the study's objectives and emphasize the importance of the findings for conservation and conflict management. Improving the flow and ensuring a logical progression from general to specific information will enhance the introduction's impact. Another concern is the annotation of statistical results and terminology, which needs to be addressed for greater accuracy and clarity.

In conclusion, the study provides valuable insights into primates' foraging behaviour and maize damage across 25 small maize fields, both protected and non-protected. Overall, I was inclined to agree with the idea that this research is crucial for understanding the impacts on maize crops and developing strategies to mitigate wildlife conflict and support the livelihoods of smallholder farmers in the region. Additional comments are detailed in the attached PDF. Should these be addressed, I recommend the manuscript be accepted for publication.

Reviewer #4: (No Response)

Reviewer #5: This manuscript describes the results of a study of patterns of crop foraging by primate species and the impacts on the incomes of smallholders across the mosaic agricultural Landscape of Wolaita Zone.in Ethiopia. I recognize the hard work it has taken to conduct the fieldwork presented in this paper and the time authors have put into analyzing their data and writing the manuscript. However, the manuscript has several conceptual and analytical problems. The introduction lacks conceptual ideas. It should be seriously rewritten on the current Knowledge of crop foraging by wild animals worldwide. Therefore, the paper needs major revision to be accepted by PlOS ONE. It should be written based on the guidelines of PlOS ONE.

I included all my comments within the PDF file. The authors should use this file to correct those comments. I stated some crucial comments here.

1. The authors use a lot of statistical packages. I advise the authors to consult a statistician about their data for better analysis.

2. Some of the statistical values are not correct and clear too.

3. Why did the authors use two different kinds of statistical software? SPSS and R

4. Once the authors abbreviate phrases, they should use that abbreviation afterward. It is unnecessary to abbreviate here and there.

5. The author should say crop foraging instead of crop raiding as well as forage instead of raid throughout the paper

6. The authors should use a similar common name for baboons; olive baboons instead of anubis baboons

7. The method lacks clarity

8. I am so unhappy with the citation system. The authors seem no experience or they are careless. For example, a study conducted by, according to a paper by, as stated in reference

9. There are many tables and figures. Some of them are unnecessary. Please trim your study as short and understandable as possible.

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PLoS One. 2024 Nov 18;19(11):e0313831. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0313831.r008

Author response to Decision Letter 3


23 Sep 2024

Title: Patterns of Primates Crop Foraging and the impacts on incomes of Smallholders across Mosaic Agricultural Landscape of Wolaita Zone, Southern Ethiopia

Manuscript Number: PONE-D-23-43746-R4

Response to Reviewers

We are great full to the editors and reviewers for their insightful and valuable comments on our paper. We have carefully considered the comments and tried our best to address every one of them. We hope the manuscript after careful revisions meet your higher standard journal. The authors welcome further constructive comments if any. We provided the point by point responses. All modifications in the manuscript have been highlighted in yellow color.

Sincerely,

Yigrem Deneke

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Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice.

Response

The following four references were added to the manuscript in the fourth-round revision (R4):

Cuesta Hermira, AA, Michalski, F, 2022; Kifle, Z., Bekele, A, 2020; Kifle, Z., Bekele, A, 2021; Mesfin Matusal et al., 2023. This is added to the manuscript because it includes important additional background information for this study.

The following reference was removed from the manuscript in the fourth-round revision (R4):

Hansen, LK, 2003.

I have moved the following previously reported results to the supporting information section of the manuscript (R4):

� S1 Fig. Location map of the study area (created with ESRI ArcGIS Desktop 10.8)

� S2 Fig. Various prevention strategies (Wire mesh (A), Human guardian tower (B), Scarecrow (C), Thorny bush (D)) were assessed in eight experimental maize field sites to evaluate their effectiveness in deterring crop raiders. The study was conducted in maize field sites located in Gurumu Woide and Kokate Marachare (Photo credit: Yigrem Deneke).

� S3 Fig. Diagrammatic example of a field map used by observers. HSE = house. GH = guard hut. SH = storage hut. Solid black lines = field boundary. Green objects = trees.

� S4 Fig. The images above depict camera trap captures of various wildlife species observed in maize field sites located in Damota Mountain, Southern Ethiopia: (A) olive baboons (Papio anubis) (B) Grivet monkeys (Chlorocebus aethiops), (C) Porcupine (Hystrix cristata), and (D) Bushbuck (Tragelaphus scriptus)

� S5 Fig. Relative frequency of raid durations by primate CREs (n = 95).

� S6 Fig. Relative frequency of raiding by primate CREs (n = 95)

� S7 Fig. The number of baboon and grivet monkey field visits that did and did not involve crop-raiding events (CRE) on maize fields in the Highlands of Damota Mountain, April to September 2020 and 2021 years (n=367)

� S8 Fig. The number of baboon and grivet monkey field visits that involved single- and multi-crop raiding events on maize fields in the Highlands of Damota Mountain, April to September 2020 and 2021 years (n=189).

� S1 Table. Maize field and study plot size on the protective and non-protective maize fields

� S2 Table. Farmer observation and reported of maize damage assessments (580 maize stem expected per plot except field no. 25 (see the text)

Response to Reviewer #1

Abstract: The author stated that “…..while guarding is assumed to be an efficient protective strategy…when not implemented continuously.” What does it mean?? I don’t think it is scientific as such. You should be clear with the definition of guarding? Unless it is continuous keeping of crop fields in accordance with the animals’ activity time, it will not be guarding. So, rephrase this statement???

Response: It has been revised and properly rephrased.

Keywords/Phrases: Most journals require keywords to be listed alphabetically and they should be chosen from the abstract itself and should not be identical to words used in the title.

Response: It has been corrected and listed alphabetically.

Introduction: Page 3 Paragraph 2: the author hypothesized that ….frequency of crop raiding by large wild primates …..crop damage decrease with the distance from the forest edges ..” The hypothesis assumes a linear or predictable relationship between distance from the forest edge and primate behavior. Although the hypothesis presents a reasonable starting point, it simplifies complex ecological and behavioral relationships. For instance, primates might not always follow such a pattern due to factors like availability of food in the forest, group dynamics, and habituation to human activity, the size of the crop field, types of crops, seasonal variations, and weather conditions could also impact raiding behavior. However, the authors did not mention these factors in the hypothesis and overemphasized on distance.

Response: It has been revised.

Methods

Page 5 Paragraph 3: The authors stated that they established 10 maize plots within 50 meters of the forest, while only 15 plots were set up at three different distance ranges: 100 meters, 200 meters, and 300 meters (with 5 plots per range). This means that the plots closest to the forest (at 50 meters) were twice of the number of plots to those in the subsequent distance ranges (100 meters, 200 meters, and 300 meters). Consequently, it is possible that a higher incidence of crop raiding might be observed on these more number of plots closest to the forest. This uneven distribution of plots could potentially lead to biased conclusions. Thus, caution should be taken.

Page 5 Paragraph 4: The authors stated that “... we planted the high-yielding maize variety …” Did authors engage in planting maize seeds to the study plots???

Response: It has been revised. We compared maize damage assessments at varying distances by evaluating an open maize field located 50 meters from the forest edge, along with individual fields situated 100 meters, 200 meters, and 300 meters away from the forest edge.

Data analysis

Is there any scientific reason to use the old version of the SPSS software (16)??

Response: We used SPSS Version 16 because the results are consistent with those from more recent versions. The core statistical algorithms have remained largely unchanged across different releases. Key statistical computations in SPSS, such as the Chi-square test, Mann-Whitney U test, Spearman’s Rank Correlation Coefficient, t-test, one-way ANOVA, and F-test, have not significantly differed between versions. This means that when using SPSS Version 16 for standard statistical analyses, the results should match those obtained from more recent versions like SPSS 28, provided the same data and settings are used. The underlying statistical algorithms for these common tests have remained stable, so outputs such as p-values, confidence intervals, and coefficients will be consistent across versions under the same conditions

Results

The result section is staffed with large sized tables and too many figure. I recommend revising the larger tables (Table 1 and 3) or consider them for supplementary attachments.

Response: We used 5 tables and figures in the Results section; the remaining Table 1 and Table 3 have been moved to the supporting information.

Discussion

This section is well presented.

Response: Thank you very much

Conclusion

The conclusion is a short remarking of the key findings where the authors provided a concise overview of the main findings.

Response: Ok

Response to Reviewer #2

Introduction

The introduction lacks conceptual ideas. It should be seriously rewritten on the current Knowledge of crop foraging by wild animals worldwide.

Response: It has been revised based on the current research on crop foraging by primates worldwide

I included all my comments within the PDF file. The authors should use this file to correct those comments. I stated some crucial comments here.

1. The authors use a lot of statistical packages. I advise the authors to consult a statistician about their data for better analysis.

2. Some of the statistical values are not correct and clear too.

Response: Some of the statistical values have been revised and refined all the analysis throughout the manuscript. We consult a statistician for some analysis.

3. Why did the authors use two different kinds of statistical software? SPSS and R

Response: We use both SPSS and R for our analyses. SPSS is ideal for users who prefer a point-and-click interface and need to perform standard statistical analyses without learning to code. It is well-suited for researchers conducting routine analyses that do not require extensive customization. On the other hand, R is especially useful for handling complex data analysis tasks, such as spatio-temporal ecological datasets. It supports advanced statistical techniques (e.g., linear mixed models with random and fixed effects) and offers highly customizable visualizations (e.g., box plots, bar charts), providing far greater flexibility than SPSS.

4. Once the authors abbreviate phrases, they should use that abbreviation afterward. It is unnecessary to abbreviate here and there.

Response: It has been revised.

5. The author should say crop foraging instead of crop raiding as well as forage instead of raid throughout the paper

Response: It has been revised and corrected throughout the manuscript.

6. The authors should use a similar common name for baboons; olive baboons instead of anubis baboons

Response: It has been revised to consistently use 'olive baboons' throughout the manuscript.

7. The method lacks clarity

Response: It has been revised, and this section is now clearly written.

8. I am so unhappy with the citation system. The authors seem no experience or they are careless. For example, a study conducted by, according to a paper by, as stated in reference

Response: It has been revised throughout the manuscript.

9. There are many tables and figures. Some of them are unnecessary. Please trim your study as short and understandable as possible.

Response: It has been revised. We used 5 tables and 5 figures in the Results section

In addition:

Please ensure that towards the end of the abstract, you indicate the significant potential application of your findings

Response: The significant potential of this study has been included in the manuscript.

To the declaration section on ethical statement, please add/confirm explicitly that: “In addition, there was no direct interaction between field personnel and the subjects (the primates) in such a way as to harm the animals or interfere with their freedom in nature such as by way of capture or trapping”

Response: It has been incorporated in Ethics statement of the manuscript.

Several subsections within Results and Discussion sections could be consolidated and merged so as to yield a maximum of no more than 4 subsections in each of them. This will make for easier reading

Response: All the Results and Discussion sections have been consolidated, merging several headings into four main subsections.

Please try and pay much more close attention to the quality or writing in terms of language, grammar, spelling and logical flow within paragraphs and the interconnections amongst paragraphs and sections. Seek the services of a professional English language Editor.

Response: We have improved the language, grammar, spelling, and logical flow within paragraphs and sections throughout the manuscript.

The formatting of the reference list and figure as well as table captions and legends must strictly follow the guidelines of PLOSONE. If not, this alone will lead to rejection of the paper, which would be unfortunate, given the considerable time and effort the authors already invested in revising the manuscript so far

Response: It has been revised, and the manuscript has been written according to the PLOS ONE guidelines.

Consolidate and minimize the number of illustrations: Aim for a maximum of 5 tables and 5 figures, and provide information regarding the extra illustrations within the text or leave them out altogether

Response: We used 5 tables and 5 figures in the Results section, with the remaining tables and figures included in the supporting information.

Take note that the reviewers have uploaded PDFs of the manuscript in which they have indicated additional specific comments, and that you need to look at these and address all such issues in your revision.

Response: We have addressed and carefully corrected both the tracked changes and comments in the PDF made by the reviewers, providing point-by-point responses to each comment.

Finally, we would like to thank all the reviewers and editors for their comments and questions, which have greatly contributed to improving the quality of the paper.

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Decision Letter 4

Nickson E Otieno

29 Sep 2024

PONE-D-23-43746R4Patterns of Primates Crop Foraging and the impacts on incomes of Smallholders across Mosaic Agricultural Landscape of Wolaita Zone, Southern EthiopiaPLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Deneke,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

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Additional Editor Comments:

Abstract

  • Needs a brief statement of the study’s objectives, and a brief outline of the general methods used to collect information. Please ensure that in the first part of the abstract, there is something (1-2 sentences)outlining how the study was conducted, before mentioning the findings

Introduction

  • Needs to be expanded with more literature review of recent studies on crop damage by primates in the tropics generally but in Africa in particular (especially maize). Ensure you mention how your study fills in any gap left by such studies i.e, what is new about your findings. This was clearly emphasized by Reviewer #1 but the authors have not addressed it. Many studies related to this have been conducted in many parts of the tropics. The introduction part needs to be at least 2 pages long

  • Needs a statement towards the end, of hypotheses to justify linear modeling. Mention at least one hypothesis and what you expected to find out from the sudy

  • Remove the statement in which insects are mentioned as crop raiders. This study is bout primates

Tables and figures

  • Remove vertical lines in tables

  • Within tables, center all texts and numbers within columns and rows except column titles

  • Standardize font types and size in all tables according to journal guidelines

  • Table legends and figure captions must contain enough details to be able to stand alone

  • If abbreviations are used in figure axes such as in Fig 5, they must be fully defined in the captions text

In general

  • The language is still below par, and needs professional editing for English. (There are very many affordable but effective ones available ones which can be contacted online to complete editing within 48 hours). Therefore, in the revised edition of the MS, a professional English proof reading certificate must be submitted.

  • Only the first word of each title or subtitle should be capitalized

  • For decimal numbers, standardize  and round off to a maximum of 3 decimal points

  • Throughout the manuscript, adopt a third-party  stance in presentation of the write-up  e’g “the study was conducted …” instead of “We conducted the study …”;  and “The experimental set up … “ instead of “Our experimental set up …”

  • Do not rush to resubmit the revised manuscript, if these issues are nit addressed. You have until te end of October 2024.

In summary, this is a good opportunity for the authors to rescue the paper after the previous efforts at revision, but still, if any of the above concerns and issues are not addressed in full, the revised paper will be rejected outright.

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PLoS One. 2024 Nov 18;19(11):e0313831. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0313831.r010

Author response to Decision Letter 4


25 Oct 2024

Title: Patterns of Primates Crop Foraging and the Impacts on Incomes of Smallholders across the Mosaic Agricultural Landscape of Wolaita Zone, Southern Ethiopia

Manuscript Number: PONE-D-23-43746-R5

Responses to reviewers

We are grateful to the editors and reviewers for their insightful and valuable comments on our paper. We have carefully considered the comments and tried our best to address every one of them. We hope the manuscript after careful revisions meets your higher standard journal. The authors welcome further constructive comments if any. We provided the point-by- point responses. All modifications in the manuscript have been highlighted in yellow.

Sincerely,

Yigrem Deneke

Journal Requirements:

Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice.

Response

The following four references were added to the manuscript in the fourth-round revision (R4):

Naughton-Treves L, Treves A. 2005

Alemu M, Berihun DC, Lokossou J, Yismaw, B. 2024

Abate T, Shiferaw B, Menkir A, Wegary D, Kebede Y, Tesfaye K, Keno T. 2015

Prasanna BM, Palacios-Rojas N, Hossain F, Muthusamy V, Menkir A, Dhliwayo T, Ndhlela T, San Vicente FM, Nair SK, Vivek BS, Zhang X, Olsen M, Fan, X. 2020

Ikhuluru WE, Imboma ME, Liseche SE, Milemele MJ, Shilabiga SD, Cords M. 2023

Koirala S, Garber PA, Somasundaram D, Katuwal HB, Ren B, Huang C, Li M. 2021

Hill CM. 2020

Wiafe ED. 2019

Mwakatobe A, Nyahongo J, Janemary NJ, Røskaft E. 2014

Jaleta M, Tekalign W. 2023

Masha M, Yirgu T, Debele M, Belayneh M. 2021

Abendroth LJ, Elmore RW, Boyer MJ, Marlay SK. 2011

Wolaita District Agricultural Office (WDAO). 2021. This is added to the manuscript because it includes important additional background information for this study.

Responses to reviewers

Abstract

• It needs a brief statement of the study’s objectives and a brief outline of the general methods used to collect information. Please ensure that in the first part of the abstract, there is something (1-2 sentences)outlining how the study was conducted, before mentioning the findings

Response: It has been revised accordingly

Introduction

• It needs to be expanded with more literature review of recent studies on crop damage by primates in the tropics generally but in Africa in particular (especially maize). Ensure you mention how your study fills in any gap left by such studies i.e, what is new about your findings. This was clearly emphasized by Reviewer #1 but the authors have not addressed it. Many studies related to this have been conducted in many parts of the tropics. The introduction part needs to be at least 2 pages long

• It needs a statement towards the end, of hypotheses to justify linear modeling. Mention at least one hypothesis and what you expected to find out from the study

• Remove the statement in which insects are mentioned as crop raiders. This study is bout primates

Response: The manuscript has been revised to include an expanded literature review on recent studies of crop damage caused by primates in tropical regions, with a particular focus on Africa and maize. We have addressed the gap in previous research and highlighted the novel aspects of our findings. Additionally, we incorporated a hypothesis involving linear mixed modeling and removed references to insect-related crop damage.

Tables and figures

• Remove vertical lines in tables

• Within tables, center all texts and numbers within columns and rows except column titles

• Standardize font types and size in all tables according to journal guidelines

• Table legends and figure captions must contain enough details to be able to stand alone

• If abbreviations are used in figure axes such as in Fig 5, they must be fully defined in the captions text

Response: The manuscript has been revised to ensure that the font types and sizes in all tables adhere to the PLOS ONE guidelines. The table legends and figure captions have been modified to stand alone, and the caption text for Figure 5 has also been corrected.

In general

• The language is still below par, and needs professional editing for English. (There are very many affordable but effective ones available ones which can be contacted online to complete editing within 48 hours). Therefore, in the revised edition of the MS, a professional English proof reading certificate must be submitted.

• Only the first word of each title or subtitle should be capitalized

• For decimal numbers, standardize and round off to a maximum of 3 decimal points

• Throughout the manuscript, adopt a third-party stance in presentation of the write-up e’g “the study was conducted …” instead of “We conducted the study …”; and “The experimental set up … “ instead of “Our experimental set up …”

• Do not rush to resubmit the revised manuscript, if these issues are nit addressed. You have until to end of October 2024.

Response: The manuscript has been revised with professional English editing, and the editor certificate is included as supporting information. All other issues have been thoroughly addressed, resulting in significant improvements to the manuscript.

Comments about the PDF and word documents

Question # 1. Is there any difference between CRE and CFE? If not why didn’t take one of them.

Response: This is a valid point raised by the reviewer. The two terms differ in context: Actual crop feeding events (CFEs) refer to instances where primates actively enter a field and feed on crops, including observations of animals consuming leaves, fruits, seeds, and other plant parts. In contrast, potential crop raiding events (CREs) refer to situations where primates enter or approach a field but do not necessarily feed on the crops. In these cases, the animals may trample the field, cause stem or root damage, investigate, or simply pass through without consuming any crops. By categorizing both actual CFEs and potential CREs under the umbrella of crop foraging events, we can explore the overall interaction of primates with agricultural systems, capturing both active feeding behaviors and exploratory actions that may lead to crop damage.

Question # 2. Your respondents are too small in number. Why? Are they enough for this study

Response: Our experimental study involved 25 maize plots, with one farmer assigned to each plot (a total of 25 farmers) to conduct field observations and record maize damage caused by primates. This arrangement effectively minimized disturbances by primates and allowed for more accurate assessments of primate-related maize damage. The number of farmers was adequate, as the primates had easy access to the fields. The selected farmers, who lived in the surrounding Damota community-managed areas, were long-time residents with extensive experience in managing human-primate conflicts, particularly related to crop damage. As members of the Damota Forest Protection group, they provided valuable insights, enabling us to gather comprehensive information on the patterns and extent of crop foraging events by primates.

All the other comments in the track changes (PDF) and the Word documents have been thoroughly revised and addressed in the manuscript.

Finally, we would like to thank all the reviewers and editors for their comments and questions, which have greatly contributed to improving the quality of the paper.

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Decision Letter 5

Nickson E Otieno

1 Nov 2024

Patterns of Primates Crop Foraging and the impacts on incomes of Smallholders across Mosaic Agricultural Landscape of Wolaita Zone, Southern Ethiopia

PONE-D-23-43746R5

Dear Dr. Deneke,

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Additional Editor Comments (optional):

Before the article can be considered for acceptance towards publication, the authors must  either address these few additional outstanding concerns that the reviewers had, and which the authors did not mention in their response document to the reviewers’ comments or in the revised article. Or provide good solid reasons as to why they think those issues are not worthy of being addressed/ Please answer them point by point (i.e from point 1 to point 4, NOT A ONE GENERAL PARAGRAPH ANSWER):

  1. The authors compared the extent of crop damage by primate species in protected and non-protected maize fields. These two types of fields should have been found at an equal distance from the forest edge of the primate habitat. If they were found at different distances, how can you be sure to answer your research questions? I.e., Okay you can measure the extent of crop damage by considering distances. But to measure the extent of crop damage between protected and unprotected fields, the two types of crop fields should be located at equal distances from the forest edges.  

  2. In all distances 50m, 100m, 200m, and 300m each protected fields method (wire mesh, human guardians, scarecrows, and thorny bushy) for maize fields should be available. If not your experiment did not identify the better protection method and provide mitigation measures. You can evaluate those protection methods.  

  3. The authors set up 15 non-protected maize fields and 10 protected maize fields. Why did you set up different numbers of maize fields? You should set up equal numbers for both protected and non-protected maize fields.

  4. Why did you guard the maize field only for seven days? Maize took at least three months to harvest?.

In addition,

Please strictly follow, adhere to and effect the following points in improving the structuring  and outlay of the article:

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  2. Every page must have “continuous  line-numbering”, including pages with tables figures and supplementary material

  3. Test must be formatted to leave a margin of at least 1.5 inches on both sides

  4. Ensure that all co-authors, especially the one listed last (H. L.) read the manuscript and help with final corrections in language and structure before it is resubmitted to PLOS ONE. It appears they were not contacted by you in the last round of revision

  5. In adherence to journal guidelines, Avoid capitalizing first letters of worlds in the titles and subtitles unless they are names of places of common names of animals

  6. Remove all text in italics unless used for animal scientific names

  7. Define GPS in full when fist mentioned. Do this for all other abbreviations in the manuscript

  8. Avoid using italic font in the text except for animal scientific names of local-dialect words

  9. Format the article to fit in the page and leave at least 1.5 inch margins. Some tables have been seen to be overlapping pages. Seek support from someone  experienced In document layout formatting

  10. Tables must not have an vertical lines

Please look at the article, which has been attached for you, and which bears the specific comments from the editor (some of which overlap with the ones outlined above).

Reviewers' comments:

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Acceptance letter

Nickson E Otieno

7 Nov 2024

PONE-D-23-43746R5

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    This section collects any data citations, data availability statements, or supplementary materials included in this article.

    Supplementary Materials

    S1 Fig. Location map of the study area (created with ESRI ArcGIS Desktop 10.8).

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    S2 Fig

    Various prevention strategies (wire mesh (A), human guardian tower (B), scarecrow (C), and thorny bush (D)) were assessed in eight experimental maize field sites to evaluate their effectiveness in deterring crop raiders. The study was conducted in maize field sites located in Gurumu Woide and Kokate Marachare (Photo credit: Yigrem Deneke).

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    S3 Fig. Diagrammatic example of a field map used by observers.

    HSE = house. GH = guard hut. SH = storage hut. Solid black lines = field boundary. Green objects = trees.

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    S4 Fig

    The images above depict camera trap captures of various wildlife species observed in maize field sites located in Damota Mountain, Southern Ethiopia: (A) Olive baboons (Papio anubis); (B) Grivet monkeys (Chlorocebus aethiops); (C) Porcupines (Hystrix cristata); and (D) Bushbucks (Tragelaphus scriptus).

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    S5 Fig. Relative frequency of raid durations by primate CREs (n = 95).

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    S6 Fig. Relative frequency of raiding by primate CREs (n = 95).

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    S7 Fig. The number of baboon and grivet monkey field visits that did and did not involve crop-raiding events on maize fields in the highlands of Damota mountain, April to September 2020 and 2021 years (n = 367).

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    S8 Fig. The number of baboon and grivet monkey field visits that involved single- and multi-crop raiding events on maize fields in the highlands of Damota mountain, April to September 2020 and 2021 years (n = 189).

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    S1 Table. Maize field and study plot size on the protective and non-protective maize fields.

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    S2 Table. Farmer observation and reported of maize damage assessments (580 maize stem expected per plot except field no. 25 (see the text).

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    S3 Table. Camera traps recorded the CREs and CFEs of olive baboons and grivet monkeys among twenty-five selected maize fields.

    Each field comprised study plots measuring 10mx10 meters, observed during the maize cropping seasons of 2020 and 2021.

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    S4 Table. A linear mixed model of the maize damage rate by primates, considering different spatio-temporal variables, was analyzed using R code.

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    pone.0313831.s012.docx (17.8KB, docx)
    S1 File. The rate of maize damage by olive baboons in different crop phonological stages was analyzed in both protected and open/control fields using R code.

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    S2 File. The rate of maize damage by grivet monkeys in different crop phenological stages was analyzed in both protected and open/control fields using R code.

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    S3 File. English language proficiency 1st editor certificate.

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    S4 File. English language proficiency 2nd editor certificate.

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    S1 Video. Maize crop foraging events by olive baboons, October 15, 2021 at 7:42am (UTC).

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