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. 2025 Jun 26;20(6):e0319119. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0319119

A dose scaling antivenin protocol in treatment of Daboia palaestinae envenomation may reduce morbidity and costs

Daniel J Jakobson 1,2, Zurab Zakariashvili 3, Enzo F Galicia H 3, Mohammad Abu Issa 1, Miguel M Glatstein 4,5, Frederic S Zimmerman 1,¤,*
Editor: Timothy Omara6
PMCID: PMC12200713  PMID: 40569962

Abstract

Background

Daboia palaestinae is a leading cause of snakebite envenomation in the eastern Mediterranean, with substantial mortality in the absence of antivenin. Current recommended antivenin dose is 50 ml; however, antivenin is costly, may be difficult to obtain and is associated with substantial side effects. Thus, this study was designed to define the minimal effective antivenin dose and identify patients who can be safely managed without antivenin.

Methods

This retrospective single-center study was conducted in adults with suspected or confirmed D. palaestinae envenomation. Patients were treated via our previously developed envenomation protocol: no antivenin use for local symptoms and dose scaling for mild or severe systemic symptoms – initially 10 ml antivenin, with repeat dosing for ongoing systemic symptoms. The main outcomes measured were morbidity and mortality associated with this protocol. Secondary outcomes included assessing the demographics and clinical effects of snake envenomation and comparing between those who received antivenin and those who did not.

Results

In total, 101 patients were included. A median of 45 minutes [interquartile range: 30–61 minutes] elapsed between snakebite and hospital admission, with no differences between groups. Among 52 patients receiving antivenin, 119 [60–237] minutes elapsed between snakebite and initial antivenin administration, with a maximum of 1073 minutes to initial antivenin administration. Maximum until last antivenin was 3860 minutes.

Median antivenin dose was 15 [10–22.5] ml, with 26/52 (50.0%) requiring only 10 ml. Two (2) patients developed an early antivenin immune reaction, with one developing anaphylaxis requiring invasive ventilation. Both received a single 10 ml dose of antivenin prior to allergic reaction. Neither patient had a known history of exposure to serum or relevant allergic reaction. No patients died during hospitalization.

Conclusions

This cohort demonstrates that a dose-scaling antivenin protocol can be safely employed, reducing morbidity and costs. We recommend a randomized control trial comparing fixed dose regimen to an escalation protocol and development of similar protocols for envenomations due to other snake species.

Introduction

Snake envenomation is a widespread cause of mortality and morbidity worldwide, with snakebites resulting in 20–130,000 worldwide deaths annually. Native species of venomous snakes are found on all continents except Antarctica and some island countries, whereas non-native snakes may also be encountered as pets [13]. Clinical signs and symptoms, as well as symptom severity, differ between and within species, and are dependent on the chemical composition of the venom, which varies substantially between species, with intraspecies variation occurring as well, depending on factors including gender, age, prey availability, diet and geographic location, among others [2,4].

Daboia palaestinae (previously Vipera palaestinae or Vipera xanthina palaestinae) is a viper species endemic to the eastern coasts of the Mediterranean, especially the coastal plains and inland hills of Israel and Lebanon, and is the most common venomous snake and the leading causing of snakebite envenomation in this region [4,5], with 100–300 envenomations due to bites by this species from Israel annually [6,7]. Taxonomically, it is from the Viperinae subfamily, which is distributed widely across Africa, Europe, the Middle East and Asia, including the islands of the far east [4].

The venom of this snake primarily contains myotoxins, procoagulants and hemorrhagins, as well as neurotoxins, angioneurin growth factors, and integrin inhibitors which can cause both local and systemic effects [46,8]. Local effects include severe pain and swelling of the affected limb, whereas systemic affects include nausea, vomiting and abdominal pain, with more severe envenomizations resulting in respiratory distress, hypotension and convulsions, up to hypovolemic and vasodilatory shock which, left untreated, can lead to cardiac arrest. Neurological symptoms, coagulopathy, thrombocytopenia and necrosis have also been reported [5,911]. Effects may appear immediately after snakebite, but are often delayed, including beyond 24 hours [10].

The primary and most effective treatment of snakebite envenomation, including that resulting from D. palaestinae bite, is administration of specific or polyvalent snake antivenin, use of which drastically reduces mortality, with a reduction in morbidity as well [9,10]. Currently in Israel, including in our institution during the study period, a monovalent whole immunoglobulin D. palaestinae antivenin (Kamada, Beit-Kama, Israel) is administered with a fixed dose regimen of 50 ml of antivenin is recommended in all D. palaestinae envenomations, including both systemic manifestations and progressive local manifestations of envenomation where D. palaestinae bite is suspected or confirmed. This protocol was developed due to the feeling that a lesser dose is ineffective, though no high-quality data is available [5,9,11,12]. However, antivenin administration is costly, with a single fixed dose regimen for treating D. palaestinae in Israel estimated to cost $7000, with repeat administration sometimes required [5,6,13]; antivenin costs for other species in other locales vary significantly but remain a substantial financial burden for most health care systems [14]. Furthermore, certain antivenins have historically been in short supply. These limitations can form substantial barriers to treatment access, especially in limited-resource settings. Moreover, antivenin administration can itself be associated with substantial morbidity, including anaphylaxis, chills, fever, pain at injection site and serum sickness, including delayed reactions up to a month after administration [5,9,11]. Thus, though antivenin administration is absolutely essential in preventing morbidity and mortality in the relevant patient population, it is also important to define the minimal necessary dose to effectively treat envenomation, as well as define patient populations who can be safely treated without antivenin administration. The achievement of such objectives will minimize antivenin side effects, reduce costs and help to increase the availability of antivenin for those who truly need it.

In contrast to this fixed-dose regimen, we previously developed an envenomation treatment protocol that minimized use of antivenin in order to minimize side effects and overall morbidity, as well as reduce antivenin use in periods of scarcity [11]. This protocol involves conservative treatment of local symptoms without use of antivenin [6,7,9] and treatment of both mild and severe systemic symptoms employing dose scaling antivenin, with an initial 10 ml dose of antivenin, with repeat dosing in patients with ongoing systemic symptoms, in accordance with treatment response. This protocol has the potential to reduce antivenin morbidity as well as substantially reduce costs and increase antivenin availability [11] and is consistent with similar protocols developed for snake envenomations from other species [15,16]. It should be noted that since initial publication of this escalation protocol, quality control of antivenin production has improved, possibly contributing to reduced morbidity from antivenin administration [1,5,13]. Furthermore, we have subsequently further reduced initial antivenin dosing relative to the initial publication. Thus, the primary aim of the current study is to describe the outcomes of a snake envenomation treatment using an escalated dose antivenin protocol in terms of length of stay, morbidity and mortality. Secondary aims include assessing the demographics and clinical effects of snake envenomation and comparing between those who received antivenin and those who did not.

Materials and methods

Study site

This retrospective single-center study was conducted at Barzilai University Medical Center (BMC), a 500-bed hospital in Ashkelon, Israel. Israel is located in the eastern Mediterranean Basin and is characterized by large variety of habitats including Mt. Hermon – 2200 m above sea level with annual snow, the Dead Sea area – 400 m below sea level with Afro-tropical flora and fauna and a Saharo-Arabian eremic zone in the far south. In contrast, the north and center of the country consist of a Mediterranean habitat and in the south and east Irano-Turanian grassland and deserts are found. The city of Ashkelon sits on the coastline and its environs are characterized by the latter two habitats [17]. These are also the habitats of Daboia palaestinae (Fig 1) [18]. In fact, though nine venomous snakes are identified regularly throughout the various habitats of Israel, only Daboia palaestinae is found in the environs of Ashkelon, though numerous non-venomous snakes do occupy the same habitat [19,20]. Thus, Daboia palaestinae snakebite is most common cause of snakebite in our institution, and practically the only cause of snakebite in victims showing signs of envenomation.

Fig 1. Daboia palaestinae distribution.

Fig 1

Adapted from “Daboia palaestinae distribution” by IUCN Red List of Threatened Species, used under CC BY 3.0.

Study subjects

Study subjects included all adult patients hospitalized in BMC from 2014−2023 with an admission diagnosis of snakebite (ICD-10 code T63.0) in which D. palaestinae envenomation was suspected or confirmed. Diagnosis of D. palaestinae envenomation was made by the treating clinician by clinical symptoms, species description and, when available, by identification of the species either directly or by photograph. All patients were preferentially initially admitted to the intensive care unit, a 12-bed mixed ICU with both medical and surgical patients.

Inclusion/exclusion criteria

Patients admitted with a diagnosis of snakebite in which D. palaestinae envenomation was ruled out were excluded. Thus, of the 114 patients were admitted to BMC with a snakebite diagnosis, during the study period, 10 patients were eliminated after ruling out D. palaestinae envenomation, two more patients were eliminated due to initial treatment in another hospital and one minor patient was eliminated. Accordingly, 101 patients were included in the current study. Of these, 49 patients did not receive antivenin and 52 received antivenin (Fig 2).

Fig 2. Inclusion/ exclusion criteria.

Fig 2

Admitted patients were preferentially treated according to the protocol currently being applied in our medical center. Thus, patients exhibiting systemic signs of envenomation – including, but not limited to, nausea, vomiting, abdominal pain, diarrhea, blood pressure changes, arrhythmias, and anaphylactic shock – were immediately administered 10 ml of antivenin. Further doses of 10 ml of antivenin were administered if abatement of symptoms was not noted within a short period of time or if symptoms recurred. Patients with local symptoms and signs only did not receive antivenin. All patients were kept under observation in the intensive care unit until abatement of systemic symptoms and for at least 48 hours due to risk of delayed symptoms

Data access

Data were accessed for research on September 12, 2023 and included date and time of envenomation, age, sex, time of presentation to the hospital, clinical signs and symptoms as well as laboratory results on presentation and during hospitalization, time and dosage of antivenin administration, need for repeat administration, complications and complication management, as well as need for adjunctive therapy. Length of stay in the intensive care unit and in-hospital was also recorded. Symptoms and signs were classified as local (confined to the limb affected, e.g., swelling, pain, discoloration), mild systemic (e.g., gastrointestinal symptoms) and severe systemic (e.g., neurological or cardiovascular compromise). All subject identifiers were removed by subject coding prior to data analysis, thus authors had access to data individual participant information during data collection but not after collection and during analysis.

Study outcomes

The primary outcome of this study was in-hospital morbidity and mortality associated with an escalated dose antivenin protocol as measured by clinical signs and symptoms as well as laboratory results. Secondary outcomes included evaluation and description of the demographics and clinical effects of snake envenomation, including comparisons between those who received antivenin and those who did not.

Data analysis

The dataset includes all cases of Vipera palaestinae envenomation treated during 2014–2023, representing a consecutive, non-randomized case series. Statistical analyses were performed using R (Version 4.2.2. R Foundation for Statistical Computing. released 2022. Vienna, Austria). Descriptive statistics (i.e., numbers, proportion and means) were used to describe the study population. A secondary analysis compared subjects with local symptoms and signs only –not treated with antivenin by our protocol – to those with systemic symptoms or signs. Categorical variables (e.g., sex, chronic illness, location of envenomation, symptoms, use of supplemental treatments) were analyzed busing the Chi-square test or Fisher’s exact test when expected frequencies were less than five. Normality tests were performed (Shapiro-Wilk) on continuous variables to determine the appropriate statistical tests. Continuous variables with normal distribution (e.g., age, laboratory values) were analyzed using Student’s t-test, while non-normally distributed variables (e.g., admission times, length of ICU and hospital stay) were analyzed using the Mann–Whitney U test. In all tests, two-tailed p-values were taken and a p-value <0.05 was considered significant.

Ethical considerations

The study was approved by the BMC institutional review board prior to initiation (approval number: 0009–23-BRZ). Due to the retrospective nature of the study, informed consent was waived.

Results

101 patients were included in the current study – 49 did not receive antivenin and 52 did. The average age of the study population was 41 ± 5 years. 78/101 (77.2%) of patients were male. 24/101 (23.8%) had had a chronic condition. No demographic differences were noted between those who did and did not receive antivenin (Table 1).

Table 1. Demographics and presentation.

Variable All patients n = 101 (%) Antivenin n = 52 (%) No antivenin n = 49 (%) p-value
Male 78 (77.2) 37 (71.2) 41 (83.7) 0.159
Age – years ± CI 41 ± 5 41 ± 7 41 ± 6 0.793
Any chronic illness 24 (23.8) 12 (23.1) 12 (24.5) 1.000
 Diabetes 3 (3.0) 1 (1.9) 2 (4.1) 0.610
 Hypertension 13 (12.9) 7 (13.5) 6 (12.2) 1.000
 Ischemic heart disease 3 (3.0) 1 (1.9) 2 (4.1) 0.610
 Neurological disorder 3 (3.0) 1 (1.9) 2 (4.1) 0.610
 Psychiatric disorder 1 (1.0) 1 (1.9) 0 (0.0) 1.000
 Other 15 (14.9) 8 (15.4) 7 (14.3) 1.000
Location of bite
 Upper limb 77 (76.2) 36 (69.2) 41 (83.7) 0.105
 Lower limb 41 (40.6) 26 (50.0) 15 (30.6) 0.068
 Other 1 (1.0) 1 (1.9) 0 (0.0) 1.000
Local symptoms
 Pain 67 (66.3) 39 (75.0) 28 (57.1) 0.063
 Swelling 100 (99.0) 52 (100.0) 48 (98.0) 1.000
 # of large joints involved  ± CI 2 ± 0 2 ± 0 2 ± 0 0.324
 Any generalized symptom 57 (56.4) 51 (98.1) 6 (12.2) 0.000
 Reduced consciousness 1 (1.0) 1 (1.9) 0 (0.0) 1.000
 Sweating 10 (9.9) 10 (19.2) 0 (0.0) 0.001
 Hypotension 19 (18.8) 19 (36.5) 0 (0.0) 0.000
 Arrythmia 8 (7.9) 8 (15.4) 0 (0.0) 0.006
 Shortness of breath 7 (6.9) 6 (11.5) 1 (2.0) 0.113
 Desaturation 3 (3.0) 3 (5.8) 0 (0.0) 0.243
 Abdominal pain 23 (22.8) 23 (44.2) 0 (0.0) 0.000
 Nausea 33 (32.7) 28 (53.8) 5 (10.2) 0.000
 Vomiting 26 (25.7) 25 (48.1) 1 (2.0) 0.000
Laboratory values on admission
 WBC (x 103/μl) n = 98 8.5 ± 0.2 9.2 ± 0.2 7.7 ± 0.2 0.008
 Platelets (x 103/μl) n = 98 236 ± 96 246 ± 165 225 ± 147 0.092
 Creatinine (mg/dL) n = 96 0.97 ± 0.00 1.00 ± 0.00 0.95 ± 0.00 0.056
 INR n = 97 1.14 ± 0.01 1.07 ± 0.00 1.21 ± 0.02 0.672
 Fibrinogen (mg/dL) n = 35 259 ± 177 257 ± 473 263 ± 551 0.268
Admission times (minutes) – median [IQR]
 Snakebite to hospital 45 [30-61] 47 [30-78] 43 [33-60] 0.703
 Snakebite to ICU admission 183 [127-260] 169 [108-278] 183 [135-209] 0.939
 Hospital to ICU admission 121 [81-179] 133 [75-197] 110 [90-169] 0.793
 Snakebite to antivenin 119 [60-237]
 Hospital admission to antivenin 48 [24-222]
 Snakebite to last antivenin 195 [110-324]

CI: confidence interval; ICU: intensive care unit; INR: international normalized ratio; IQR: interquartile range; WBC: white blood cells.

Envenomation primarily occurred between May and November, with a small number of envenomations in the off-season and a peak at the beginning and towards the end of the season. It should be noted that the peak towards the end of the season primarily involved envenomations not requiring antivenin treatment (Fig 3).

Fig 3. Seasonal envenomation variation.

Fig 3

Note: due to missing data from July-August 2023 this data has been interpolated.

Envenomation occurred in the upper limb in 77 of 101 patients (76.2%), in the lower limb in 41 patients (40.6%) with one patient receiving a bite on the scalp. 18 patients received snakebites in multiple locations. 67 of 101 patients (66.3%) experienced pain at the location of the bite and 100 of 101 (99.0%) patients experienced local swelling. No differences were noted in bite location or local symptoms between those who received antivenin and those who did not (Table 1).

On aggregate, 57 of the 101 patients (56.4%) experienced one or more generalized symptoms. 51 of these received antivenin as per institutional protocol. Seven protocol deviations occurred, in accordance with clinical judgement of the treating physician, with one patient without generalized symptoms receiving antivenin and six patients with mild generalized symptoms not receiving antivenin (Table 1). After chart review, the latter deviations were due to clinical judgement attributing symptoms to treatment, rather than to envenomation.

White blood cell count (WBC) on admission of the antivenin group was increased versus the non-antivenin group – 9.2 ± 0.2 x 103/μl versus 7.7 ± 0.2 x 103/μl (p = 0.008). Platelet and creatinine levels on admission were also increased in the antivenin versus the non-antivenin group – 246 ± 165 x 103/μl versus 225 ± 147 x 103/μl platelets and 1.00 ± 0.00 and 0.95 ± 0.00 creatinine. However, this did not reach statistical significance (p = 0.092 and p = 0.056, respectively). Mean international normalized ratio (INR) and mean fibrinogen for the entire population on admission were 1.14 ± 0.01 and 259 ± 177, respectively, with no significant differences noted between groups.

Median time between snakebite and hospital admission was 45 [30–61] minutes, with 121 [81–179] minutes from hospital to ICU admission and 183 [127–260] minutes between snakebite and ICU admission. No differences in admission times were noted between groups. In the antivenin group, median time between snakebite and initial antivenin treatment was 119 [60–237] minutes, with a median of 48 [24–222] minutes elapsing between hospital admission and antivenin treatment. Median time from snakebite to last antivenin treatment was 195 [110–324] minutes (Table 1). Some patients developed symptoms late, thus the maximum time between snakebite and antivenin administration was 1073 minutes. Other patients developed recurrent symptoms despite early antivenin administration; thus, the maximum time between snakebite and last antivenin administration was 3860 minutes.

During the course of their hospitalization, patients who were treated with antivenin received a median of 15 [10–22.5] ml of antivenin in a median of one [1–2] administration (Table 2). 26/52 (50.0%) patients receiving antivenin required only 10 ml antivenin (one dose according to institutional protocol), with 13/52 (25.0%) requiring 20 ml and 13/52 (25.0%) requiring more than 20 ml. The maximum dose administered was 70 ml, which was received by one patient in three separate administrations. Two patients developed an early immune reaction to antivenin, with one of these developing anaphylaxes requiring invasive ventilation.

Table 2. Treatment and course of hospitalization.

Variable All patients n = 101 Antivenin n = 52 No antivenin n = 49 p-value
Total antivenin dose (ml) – median [IQR] 15 [10-22.5]
Total antivenin treatments – median [IQR] 1 [1–2]
Other treatments received – n (%)
 Vasoactive medication 7 (6.9) 7 (13.5) 0 (0.0) 0.013
 Supplemental oxygen 5 (5.0) 5 (9.6) 0 (0.0) 0.057
 Invasive ventilation 2 (2.0) 2 (3.8) 0 (0.0) 0.495
 Blood products 2 (2.0) 2 (3.8) 0 (0.0) 0.495
 Antiemetics 19 (18.8) 15 (28.8) 4 (8.2) 0.010
 Non-opiate analgesia 50 (49.5) 35 (67.3) 15 (30.6) 0.001
 Opiate analgesia 41 (40.6) 28 (53.8) 13 (26.5) 0.008
 Surgical intervention 4 (4.0) 3 (5.8) 1 (2.0) 0.618
Laboratory values – median [IQR]
 WBC max (x 103/μl) 9.6 [7.9-11.9] 11.1 [9.2-13.4] 8.4 [7-10.1] 0.001
 Platelets nadir (x 103/μl) 175 [133-213] 151 [118-188] 186 [161-240] 0.002
 Creatinine max (mg/dl) 0.96 [0.85-1.1] 0.99 [0.86-1.12] 0.95 [0.85-1.05] 0.091
 INR max 1.06 [1.02-1.15] 1.09 [1.04-1.18] 1.03 [1.01-1.11] 0.566
 Fibrinogen nadir (mg/dl) 241 [206-289] 235 [201-293] 252 [231-285] 0.414
Outcomes – median [IQR]
 ICU LOS 2 [2–3] 3 [2–3] 2 [1–2] 0.001
 Hospital LOS 3 [2–4] 4 [3–5] 3 [2–4] 0.001

ICU: intensive care unit; INR: international normalized ratio; IQR: interquartile range; WBC: white blood cells.

Besides antivenin, 7/101 patients (6.9%) required vasoactive medication, five (5.0%) required supplemental oxygen and, of these, two (2.0%) required invasive ventilation. Two (2.0%) required blood products. All these were in the group that received antivenin. Additionally, 15/52 (28.8%) in the antivenin group and 4/49 (8.2%) in the non-antivenin group, were treated with antiemetics (p = 0.010), 35/52 (67.3%) and 15/49 (30.6%) – respectively – required non-opiate analgesia (p < 0.001), 28/52 (53.8%) and 13/49 (26.5%) required opiate analgesia (p = 0.008) and 3/52 (5.8%) and 1/49 (2.0%) received surgical intervention (p = 0.618); surgical intervention was carried out in deviation from standard protocol [1,21].

In terms of laboratory values, mildly increased maximal leukocytes were noted in the antivenin group relative to the non-antivenin group (median 11.1 [9.2–13.4] x 103 per μl versus 8.4 [7.0–10.1] x 103 per μl, p < 0.001). A reduction in platelets was noted in most patients over the course of the hospitalization, with 49/52 (94.2%) patients in the antivenin group and 33/49 (67.3%) of patients in the non-antivenin group developing a platelet reduction relative to admission (p = 0.001), with a median nadir of 151 [118–188] x 103 per μl in the antivenin versus 186 [161–240] x 103 per μl in the non-antivenin group, p < 0.001. Three patients in the antivenin group developed a severe thrombocytopenia of less than 50 x 103 per μl, with no cases of severe thrombocytopenia in the non-antivenin group. No patients developed major bleeding or required platelet transfusion.

No substantial pathologies or differences in coagulation factors were noted between groups, with a median maximal INR of 1.06 [1.02–1.15] and a median fibrinogen nadir of 241 [206–289] mg/dl for the cohort. One patient presented with an INR of 10.4, which was thought to be due to laboratory error and, in fact, normalized without treatment upon repeat collection. One patient on chronic warfarin anticoagulation presented with an INR of 3.49 and another patient developed an INR of 1.88 during course of hospitalization which normalized without treatment. None of these patients received antivenin or blood products. No patient developed clinically significant fibrinogen abnormalities.

Median maximal creatinine was 0.96 [0.85–1.1] with no differences between groups. No patient developed acute kidney injury during their hospitalization.

Median length of stay in the ICU was three [23] days for the antivenin and two [12] days for the non-antivenin group (p < 0.001). Median hospital length of stay was four [35] days for the antivenin group and three [24] days for the non-antivenin group (Table 2). No patients died during the course of their hospitalization.

Discussion

This study of 101 patients diagnosed with D. palaestinae envenomation is the largest published cohort of human D. palaestinae envenomations to date. It shows that a dose-scaling antivenin protocol can be safely used in the treatment of envenomation, thus minimizing side effects and overall morbidity compared to the currently accepted fixed-dose protocol [5], reducing costs and reducing antivenin use, especially in periods of scarcity [11].

In the current study, local symptoms were treated conservatively, without use of antivenin [6,7,9] and treatment of both mild and severe systemic symptoms employed dose scaling antivenin, with an initial 10 ml dose of antivenin and repeat dosing in patients with ongoing systemic symptoms, in accordance with treatment response. In our study, 52 of 101 (51.5%) patients received antivenin, with 26 of those receiving 10 ml of antivenin and another 13 receiving 20 ml. This is in contrast with the standard protocol, in which most or all of these patients would have received 50 ml of antivenin [5,6,13]. This protocol resulted in an estimated cost saving of over $500,000, as well as an estimated two fewer allergic reactions, including one less anaphylaxis, with no increased morbidity or mortality related to the reduced dose protocol.

In the current study, nearly all patients diagnosed with D. palaestinae envenomation develop swelling and a majority suffering from site pain, with a higher percentage of pain reported among those requiring antivenin. We also report abdominal symptoms, respiratory distress, hypotension and with one case of reduced consciousness associated with envenomation. This is similar to previous studies [5,911]. Unlike those studies, our patients did not develop convulsions, coagulopathy or necrosis, possibly due to early antivenin treatment when necessary, with a median time between snakebite and initial antivenin treatment of 119 [60–237] minutes. Similar to previous studies, a majority of our cohort showed a reduction in platelets over the course of the hospitalization [22]. This was true whether or not the patient was treated with antivenin (though patients who received antivenin had a more substantial platelet reduction), and, similar to some [23], but unlike other [24], reports in other Viperidae species, there was no apparent response to antivenin. This may be due to venom-induced macrophage and hepatocyte sequesterization and clearance of platelets, as shown in other species of Viperidae [25,26].

Similar to previous studies [10], we show that some patients show a latent development of symptoms and repeat symptom occurrence. Thus, the maximum time between snakebite and first antivenin administration was 17.8 hours and the maximum time until last antivenin administration (due to repeat symptoms) was 64.3 hours.

This study has several limitations. Firstly, it is a retrospective data analysis of an unmatched cohort, and, therefore, its conclusions should be approached with caution. Furthermore, though, in our institution, D. palaestinae is the most common cause of snakebite and practically the only cause of snakebite envenomation, species identification was made by the treating clinician and an expert in snake taxonomy was not available for species confirmation. This may have lead to species misidentification. Finally, though a comparison has been made between those who did and did not receive antivenin, due to the inherent clinical differences between these groups, no true control group was employed. Rather, in order to evaluate the antivenin protocol of the current study, historical controls from the scientific literature were employed, which also has substantial limitations. Nevertheless, we demonstrated no morbidity or mortality related to the protocol.

Conclusions

A dose-scaling antivenin protocol can be safely used in the treatment of D. palaestinae envenomation, thus reducing morbidity related to antivenin administration as well as reducing costs. This suggests the need for a randomized control trial comparing a fixed dose regimen to the escalation protocol described in this study and suggests the development of similar sliding scale protocols for envenomations due to other snake species.

Data Availability

All data files are available from the Open Science Foundation database (accession number osf.io/2p685).

Funding Statement

The author(s) received no specific funding for this work.

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  3. Distribution of venomous snakes: To my knowledge, venomous snakes are indeed found on all continents except Antarctica, as the extreme cold environment there is unsuitable for reptiles. However, some island countries (Iceland, Ireland, Greenland, and New Zealand) are other likely exceptions; they naturally lack native (and venomous) snake species.

  4. Clinical signs, symptoms and symptom severity of envenomation: This depends on the composition of the venom, which is in turn dependent on the species (snake’s gender, age, prey availability, diet, geographic location, among other factors).

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General

This article addresses the knowledge gap on D palaestinae bite treatment in Mediterranean regions. This article provides suggestions strategies for improvement in snakebite control in Israel, which can be translated into other countries in the east Mediterranean regions where this snake species inhabits and envenoms humans often. Hence, this paper can be a reference for snakebite management in the eastern Mediterranean countries where snakebite problem due to the species discussed in this article is noticeable. However, authors need to revise this manuscript particularly introduction, methods, and discussion sections extensively.

Overall, this manuscript is well written. However, the English use needs to improve in several occasions. Please, use continuous line number to make peer-review and your revisions followed by reviewers' comment easy. There should be a single space between words [e.g., toDaboia would be to Daboia in the fifth reference: 5. Wang AH, Gordon D, Drescher MJ, Shiber S. Is there a benefit for administration of antivenom following local and mild systemic reactions toDaboia (Vipera) Palaestinaesnake bites? Toxin Reviews. 2018;39(1):52-6. doi: 10.1080/15569543.2018.1477162.]

Please, italicize all genus and species names (initial letter of species name is never a capital letter), in the main body of the manuscript as well as in the reference section. For example: see: 5. Wang AH, Gordon D, Drescher MJ, Shiber S. Is there a benefit for administration of antivenom following local and mild systemic reactions toDaboia (Vipera) Palaestinaesnake bites? Toxin Reviews. 2018;39(1):52-6. doi: 10.1080/15569543.2018.1477162.

Please, spell all numbers below 10 [e.g., 2 for two] in Abstract and throughout the mainbody of the manuscript.

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Abstract

Please, replace " Results

101 patients were included. 45 minutes [median; interquartile range: 30-61 minutes]" with " Results

101 patients were included. A median of 45 minutes [interquartile range: 30-61 minutes]".

Introduction

The first two lines of the first paragraph need clarification and use of proper reference.

In "Snake envenomation is a widespread cause of mortality and morbidity worldwide, with snake bites resulting in 50 – 130,000 deaths annually", where these deaths occurred? Is it incidence in the eastern Mediterranean countries where the species focused in this study envenom people commonly? Globally, it is reported that severe envenoming results in between 81,000 and 138,000 deaths annually. Please, follow up " Kasturiratne A, Wickremasinghe AR, de Silva N, Gunawardena NK, Pathmeswaran A, Premaratna R, Savioli L, Lalloo DG, de Silva HJ: The global burden of snakebite: a literature analysis and modelling based on regional estimates of envenoming and deaths. PLoS Med 2008, 5(11):e218." to know about the most comprehensive and recent global or regional impact of snakebite.

Please, replace "poisonous" with "venomous" in the second paragraph and elsewhere in this manuscript it is because poison and venom are different terminology.

Please, merge the fourth and the fifth paragraph. Also, the 11th reference did not focus on shortage of antivenom. So, please, improve the section "[4, 5, 11]. Furthermore, certain

antivenins have historically been in short supply [11]. Moreover," with the precise referencing. Isn't this study "11. Tirosh-Levy S, Solomovich-Manor R, Comte J, Nissan I, Sutton GA, Gabay A, et al.

Daboia (Vipera) palaestinae Envenomation in 123 Horses: Treatment and Efficacy of

Antivenom Administration. Toxins (Basel). 2019;11(3). Epub 20190319. doi:

10.3390/toxins11030168. PubMed PMID: 30893807; PubMed Central PMCID:

PMCPMC6468471." focused to effectiveness of antivenom use in horses? So, referencing use looks irrelevant herein. Please, reconfirm and improve it accordingly.

Please, merge the second last and the last paragraph.

Methods

The method section needs improvement further. Create a subsection for study sites and vulnerable human population in the service area of study hospital. The distribution of snakebite cases across the service area of this hospital should be linked with the climatic conditions, topography, and the variety of medically relevant snake species inhabiting these areas. It is better to illustrate these areas in Figure. You aimed to illustrate antivenom dosing which depend on venom and antivenom quality and geographical variations of snake species distribution and the use of venom from snake inhabiting a certail locality. To discuss on this issue, you need to provide its temperature, altitude, and the dominant snake species (is D plaestinae a dominant one in Israel?).

Further, please, briefly mention about the "identification of snake specimens and their vouchers" in this cohort study. Were those snakes identified by expert in snake taxonomy? Were these a list of non-expert identified snake, too? Please, mention about the identification issues as there are several report of misidentification of snake species by medical professionals in other nations. e.g., Namal Rathnayaka, R. M. M. K., Nishanthi Ranathunga, P. E. A., and Kularatne, S. a. M. (2021). Paediatric cases of Ceylon Krait (Bungarus ceylonicus) bites and some similar looking non-venomous snakebites in Sri Lanka: misidentification and antivenom administration. Toxicon, 198: 143–150.

The second last paragraph would be subsection: Data analysis. This section needs re-writing after the normality tests of data and ensuring the representativeness of samples (SBE cases by this particular species). Median would be better descriptive statistics if data were skewed than the means to describe the study population. Please, list the categorical variables used in the Chi square test or Fisher's exact test and Students T-test or Mann-Whitney U tests in the parentheses, respectively. This increases the repeatability of this study.

Results

"During the study period, 114 patients were admitted to Barzilai University Medical Center

with a snake bite diagnosis. After chart review, 10 patients were eliminated after ruling out

D. palaestinae envenomation, 2 more patients were eliminated due to initial treatment in

another hospital and 1 minor patient was eliminated. Thus," goes to method section under the subsection: Inclusion exclusion criteria. This is the place to present only the cases included in this study.

Discussion

This section needs re-writing. Please, improve the first paragraph " The primary and most effective treatment of snake bite envenomation, including that

resulting from D. palaestinae bite, continues to be administration of specific or polyvalent

snake antivenin, which drastically reduces mortality and morbidity [8, 9]. However, antivenin

administration is costly, with a single fixed dose regimen estimated cost of $7000, with

repeat administration sometimes required [4, 5, 11]. Furthermore, certain antivenins have

historically been in short supply [11]. These limitations can form substantial barriers to

treatment access, especially in limited-resource settings. Moreover, antivenin administration

can itself be associated with substantial morbidity, including delayed reactions up to a

month after administration [4, 8, 10]. Thus, it is important to define the minimal necessary

dose for effective reversal of envenomation, as well as to define patient populations who can be safely treated without antivenin administration. ".

It illustrates tremendously high costs which is highly contrasting to similar cost of treating envenomation in Nepal (Pandey, D. P., Adhikari, B., Pandey, P., Sapkota, K., Bhusal, M., Kandel, P., Shrestha, D. L., and Shrestha, B. R. (2024). Cost of snakebite and its impact on household economy in southern Nepal. Am J Trop Med Hyg, 10.4269/ajtmh.24-0399.). The first paragraph should discuss on the core findings of this study. Accordingly, you need to attract your readers with similar or contrasting findings and your insight regarding this uniqueness.

Conclusions

Please, re-write the conclusion as:

A dose-scaling antivenin protocol can be safely used in the treatment of D. palaestinae envenomation, thus reducing the treatment costs and morbidity of envenomed patients. This suggests the need for a randomized control trial comparing a fixed dose regimen to the escalation

protocol as described in this study and for developing similar sliding scale protocols for envenomations due to other snake species, too.

Acknowledgement:

Did you miss this section?

Please, check and mention it if you find it relevant.

Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript. The authors present a retrospective study of over 100 patients with D. palaestinae envenomation and conclude that the sliding scale antivenom administration was effective and safe. Although this study does not directly compare with the classic protocol or patients without antivenom for systemic signs of envenomation (as acknowledged in the limitations), the findings appear helpful for considering future antivenom treatment strategies. However, I have several concerns with the current version of the manuscript.

Major Concerns:

1. Please clarify if "time between envenomation and hospital" refers to time between bite and hospital visit. Did the authors determine the time of onset of envenomation signs?

2. The classic protocol for antivenom with a fixed dose of 50ml - how was this established? The authors should describe the rationale.

3. Please provide more details about the antivenom: was it monovalent or polyvalent? What antivenoms are available in the region, who are the producers, and which specific antivenom was used in this study?

4. Although the proposed protocol is described in the main text, a figure with an algorithm might help facilitate understanding.

5. How many patients were definitively identified as having D. palaestinae envenomation, and by what means were they identified?

6. For patients with adverse reactions, what amount of antivenom was given before the reaction occurred? Was there any history of equine serum exposure or allergic reactions previously?

7. While no difference in mortality between groups was noted, were there any after-effects of local envenomation such as deformity, functional impairment, or chronic pain?

Minor Concerns:

1. In the Introduction, more information about the geographical distribution of prevalent snakes other than D. palaestinae would be helpful to understand the regional situation.

2. In the study hospital, did all patients stay in the ICU after being hospitalized? What were the discharge criteria?

3. Regarding bite site location, is "Hand/Leg" the correct classification? Does "Hand" include forearm/upper arm, and does "Leg" include foot or toe?

4. Some sentences in the Methods section are repetitive and should be consolidated.

5. The first paragraph of the Discussion is redundant and should be omitted or relocated to the Introduction.

6. Are there any previous reports of sliding scale protocols for snakebite antivenom elsewhere?

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Reviewers have advised that your manuscript could be reconsidered after substantial revision. May I also ask you to:

1. Review the suggestions I have made in the attached manuscript file.

- The suggestions have been reviewed, and the manuscript has been updated accordingly. We accept changes made via track changes.

2. Revise the following statements in the INTRODUCTION:

3. Distribution of venomous snakes: To my knowledge, venomous snakes are indeed found on all continents except Antarctica, as the extreme cold environment there is unsuitable for reptiles. However, some island countries (Iceland, Ireland, Greenland, and New Zealand) are other likely exceptions; they naturally lack native (and venomous) snake species.

- The paragraph has been updated accordingly

4. Clinical signs, symptoms and symptom severity of envenomation: This depends on the composition of the venom, which is in turn dependent on the species (snake’s gender, age, prey availability, diet, geographic location, among other factors).

- The paragraph has been updated accordingly

3. Ask a proficient colleague or use an English language editing service to check the draft for grammatical fixes and English language

- the draft has been reviewed and corrected by a proficient English speaker.

Reviewers' comments:

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Comments to the Author

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Reviewer #2: Yes

- Thank you for feedback. The paper has been revised according to reviewer comments.

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Reviewer #2: Yes

- Thank you for feedback. The statistical analysis section has been revised in accordance with reviewer comments.

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Reviewer #1: Review Comments to the Author

General

This article addresses the knowledge gap on D palaestinae bite treatment in Mediterranean regions. This article provides suggestions strategies for improvement in snakebite control in Israel, which can be translated into other countries in the east Mediterranean regions where this snake species inhabits and envenoms humans often. Hence, this paper can be a reference for snakebite management in the eastern Mediterranean countries where snakebite problem due to the species discussed in this article is noticeable. However, authors need to revise this manuscript particularly introduction, methods, and discussion sections extensively.

Overall, this manuscript is well written. However, the English use needs to improve in several occasions. Please, use continuous line number to make peer-review and your revisions followed by reviewers' comment easy. There should be a single space between words [e.g., toDaboia would be to Daboia in the fifth reference: 5. Wang AH, Gordon D, Drescher MJ, Shiber S. Is there a benefit for administration of antivenom following local and mild systemic reactions toDaboia (Vipera) Palaestinaesnake bites? Toxin Reviews. 2018;39(1):52-6. doi: 10.1080/15569543.2018.1477162.]

- This has been corrected

Please, italicize all genus and species names (initial letter of species name is never a capital letter), in the main body of the manuscript as well as in the reference section. For example: see: 5. Wang AH, Gordon D, Drescher MJ, Shiber S. Is there a benefit for administration of antivenom following local and mild systemic reactions toDaboia (Vipera) Palaestinaesnake bites? Toxin Reviews. 2018;39(1):52-6. doi: 10.1080/15569543.2018.1477162.

- This has been corrected

Please, spell all numbers below 10 [e.g., 2 for two] in Abstract and throughout the mainbody of the manuscript.

- This has been changed

Specific

Abstract

Please, replace " Results

101 patients were included. 45 minutes [median; interquartile range: 30-61 minutes]" with " Results

101 patients were included. A median of 45 minutes [interquartile range: 30-61 minutes]".

- This has been changed

Introduction

The first two lines of the first paragraph need clarification and use of proper reference.

In "Snake envenomation is a widespread cause of mortality and morbidity worldwide, with snake bites resulting in 50 – 130,000 deaths annually", where these deaths occurred? Is it incidence in the eastern Mediterranean countries where the species focused in this study envenom people commonly? Globally, it is reported that severe envenoming results in between 81,000 and 138,000 deaths annually. Please, follow up " Kasturiratne A, Wickremasinghe AR, de Silva N, Gunawardena NK, Pathmeswaran A, Premaratna R, Savioli L, Lalloo DG, de Silva HJ: The global burden of snakebite: a literature analysis and modelling based on regional estimates of envenoming and deaths. PLoS Med 2008, 5(11):e218." to know about the most comprehensive and recent global or regional impact of snakebite.

-The paragraph has been clarified and new references reviewed and added.

Please, replace "poisonous" with "venomous" in the second paragraph and elsewhere in this manuscript it is because poison and venom are different terminology.

-This has been corrected

Please, merge the fourth and the fifth paragraph. Also, the 11th reference did not focus on shortage of antivenom. So, please, improve the section "[4, 5, 11]. Furthermore, certain

antivenins have historically been in short supply [11]. Moreover," with the precise referencing. Isn't this study "11. Tirosh-Levy S, Solomovich-Manor R, Comte J, Nissan I, Sutton GA, Gabay A, et al.

Daboia (Vipera) palaestinae Envenomation in 123 Horses: Treatment and Efficacy of

Antivenom Administration. Toxins (Basel). 2019;11(3). Epub 20190319. doi:

10.3390/toxins11030168. PubMed PMID: 30893807; PubMed Central PMCID:

PMCPMC6468471." focused to effectiveness of antivenom use in horses? So, referencing use looks irrelevant herein. Please, reconfirm and improve it accordingly.

The paragraphs have been merged and the references corrected

Please, merge the second last and the last paragraph.

- Paragraphs have been merged

Methods

The method section needs improvement further. Create a subsection for study sites and vulnerable human population in the service area of study hospital. The distribution of snakebite cases across the service area of this hospital should be linked with the climatic conditions, topography, and the variety of medically relevant snake species inhabiting these areas. It is better to illustrate these areas in Figure. You aimed to illustrate antivenom dosing which depend on venom and antivenom quality and geographical variations of snake species distribution and the use of venom from snake inhabiting a certail locality. To discuss on this issue, you need to provide its temperature, altitude, and the dominant snake species (is D plaestinae a dominant one in Israel?).

Further, please, briefly mention about the "identification of snake specimens and their vouchers" in this cohort study. Were those snakes identified by expert in snake taxonomy? Were these a list of non-expert identified snake, too? Please, mention about the identification issues as there are several report of misidentification of snake species by medical professionals in other nations. e.g., Namal Rathnayaka, R. M. M. K., Nishanthi Ranathunga, P. E. A., and Kularatne, S. a. M. (2021). Paediatric cases of Ceylon Krait (Bungarus ceylonicus) bites and some similar looking non-venomous snakebites in Sri Lanka: misidentification and antivenom administration. Toxicon, 198: 143–150.

- Issues of climatic conditions, topography, relevant snake species and snake identification have now been addressed, and a relevant figure has been added.

The second last paragraph would be subsection: Data analysis. This section needs re-writing after the normality tests of data and ensuring the representativeness of samples (SBE cases by this particular species). Median would be better descriptive statistics if data were skewed than the means to describe the study population. Please, list the categorical variables used in the Chi square test or Fisher's exact test and Students T-test or Mann-Whitney U tests in the parentheses, respectively. This increases the repeatability of this study.

- The relevant paragraph has been labeled as subsection: Data analysis.

- As further clarified in Methods, Daboia palaestinae represents the only relevant SBE in the environs of our institution. Since all SBEs admitted to our institution during the study period were included in the current study, our sample represents the entire incidence of SBE in our region.

- Statistical tests used for each variable have now been clarified.

- Medians are used to describe skewed data (admission times) whereas means are used to describe normally distributed data (age, laboratory values)

Results

"During the study period, 114 patients were admitted to Barzilai University Medical Center

with a snake bite diagnosis. After chart review, 10 patients were eliminated after ruling out

D. palaestinae envenomation, 2 more patients were eliminated due to initial treatment in

another hospital and 1 minor patient was eliminated. Thus," goes to method section under the subsection: Inclusion exclusion criteria. This is the place to present only the cases included in this study.

- This has been moved to the Methods section under the relevant subsection.

Discussion

This section needs re-writing. Please, improve the first paragraph " The primary and most effective treatment of snake bite envenomation, including that

resulting from D. palaestinae bite, continues to be administration of specific or polyvalent

snake antivenin, which drastically reduces mortality and morbidity [8, 9]. However, antivenin

administration is costly, with a single fixed dose regimen estimated cost of $7000, with

repeat administration sometimes required [4, 5, 11]. Furthermore, certain antivenins have

historically been in short supply [11]. These limitations can form substantial barriers to

treatment access, especially in limited-resource settings. Moreover, antivenin administration

can itself be associated with substantial morbidity, including delayed reactions up to a

month after administration [4, 8, 10]. Thus, it is important to define the minimal necessary

dose for effective reversal of envenomation, as well as to define patient populations who can be safely treated without antivenin administration. ".

It illustrates tremendously high costs which is highly contrasting to similar cost of treating envenomation in Nepal (Pandey, D. P., Adhikari, B., Pandey, P., Sapkota, K., Bhusal, M., Kandel, P., Shrestha, D. L., and Shrestha, B. R. (2024). Cost of snakebite and its impact on household economy in southern Nepal. Am J Trop Med Hyg, 10.4269/ajtmh.24-0399.). The first paragraph should discuss on the core findings of this study. Accordingly, you need to attract your readers with similar or contrasting findings and your insight regarding this uniqueness.

- The Discussion section has been changed as suggested and reference to costs in other locales has been added.

Conclusions

Please, re-write the conclusion as:

A dose-scaling antivenin protocol can be safely used in the treatment of D. palaestinae envenomation, thus reducing the treatment costs and morbidity of envenomed patients. This suggests the need for a randomized control trial comparing a fixed dose regimen to the escalation

protocol as described in this study and for developing similar sliding scale protocols for envenomations due to other snake species, too.

- This has been changed as suggested.

Acknowledgement:

Did you miss this section?

Please, check and mention it if you find it relevant.

- The acknowledgements section is not relevant for the current paper

Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript. The authors present a retrospective study of over 100 patients with D. palaestinae envenomation and conclude that the sliding scale antivenom administration was effective and safe. Although this study does not directly compare with the classic protocol or patients without antivenom for systemic signs of envenomation (as acknowledged in the limitations), the findings appear helpful for considering future antivenom treatment strategies. However, I have several concerns with the current version of the manuscript.

Major Concerns:

1. Please clarify if "time between envenomation and hospital" refers to time between bite and hospital visit. Did the authors determine the time of onset of envenomation signs?

-The time refers to time between bite and hospital visit. This has now been clarified. Time of onset of envenomation signs was not noted.

2. The classic protocol for antivenom with a fixed dose of 50ml - how was this established? The authors should describe the rationale.

-This has now been described and references.

3. Please provide more details about the antivenom: was it monovalent or polyvalent? What antivenoms are available in the region, who are the producers, and which specific antivenom was used in this study?

-This has now been provided

4. Although the proposed protocol is described in the main text, a figure with an algorithm might help facilitate understanding.

-This has been presented in Figure 2

5. How many patients were definitively identified as having D. palaestinae envenomation, and by what means were they identified?

-Unf

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General

Authors have improved the manuscript noticeably. However, method section needs further improvement. I would suggest authors for minor revise of introduction and method section.

Overall, this manuscript is well written. I would suggest authors to spell all numbers below 10 [e.g., 2 for two].

I could not track the given database in author response section. Please, give the url to enable accessing these data files.

Specific

Introduction

Minor improvement is needed in this section. Please, replace

"... with 100-300 snakebites reported in Israel annually [6, 7]"

with

"... with 100-300 envenomations due to bites by this species from Israel annually [6, 7]".

Based on citation of 6th and 7th references, the 100 to 300 cases would be envenomed cases not snakebites in general. If this figure represent both venomous and nonvenomous cases, please, re-write this section more clearly.

Methods

The method section still needs improvement.

Authors have mentioned to address about the confirmation of snake species involved in bite in response to the reviewer section. But, they have not implemented it in the main body of the draft. Did they conform 101 cases by using symptomatic diagnosis or confirmed with involved snake species or snake venom detection kit or others? So, please, mention about the "identification of snake specimens and their vouchers" in this study. Were those snakes identified by expert in snake taxonomy? Were these a list of non-expert identified snake, too? Please, mention about the identification issues as there are several report of misidentification of snake species by medical professionals.

The data analysis (page 10-11) section still needs improvement. Authors look that they did not use the normality tests which orient authors to conform parametric or nonparametric tests. Additionally, they have not addressed the logics needed to use inferential statistics without explaining about the sampling strategies, sample size, and representativeness of populations by the selected cases envenomed by this particular species.

Authors compared proportions of certain variables using the χ2-score or the Fisher’s exact test. Please, list the categorical variables that you used in the Chi square test and Fisher's exact test distinctly. This helps to follow up the results that you present in another section.

Also, they compared continuous variables using Student’s t-test or the Mann-Whitney-Wilcoxon test. If statistical assumption to use these inferential tests meet with your data set, please, list the particular variables used in the Students T-test and the Mann-Whitney U tests in the parentheses.

To increases the repeatability of this study, improvement of method is still necessary.

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Author response to Decision Letter 2


26 May 2025

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- The statistical analysis has been updated as per comment below

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General

Authors have improved the manuscript noticeably. However, method section needs further improvement. I would suggest authors for minor revise of introduction and method section.

Overall, this manuscript is well written. I would suggest authors to spell all numbers below 10 [e.g., 2 for two].

-All numbers below 10 have been spelled

I could not track the given database in author response section. Please, give the url to enable accessing these data files.

- All anonymized data is fully available without restriction at https://osf.io/2p685/

Specific

Introduction

Minor improvement is needed in this section. Please, replace

"... with 100-300 snakebites reported in Israel annually [6, 7]"

with

"... with 100-300 envenomations due to bites by this species from Israel annually [6, 7]".

Based on citation of 6th and 7th references, the 100 to 300 cases would be envenomed cases not snakebites in general. If this figure represent both venomous and nonvenomous cases, please, re-write this section more clearly.

-The sentence has been modified as per suggestion

Methods

The method section still needs improvement.

Authors have mentioned to address about the confirmation of snake species involved in bite in response to the reviewer section. But, they have not implemented it in the main body of the draft. Did they conform 101 cases by using symptomatic diagnosis or confirmed with involved snake species or snake venom detection kit or others? So, please, mention about the "identification of snake specimens and their vouchers" in this study. Were those snakes identified by expert in snake taxonomy? Were these a list of non-expert identified snake, too? Please, mention about the identification issues as there are several report of misidentification of snake species by medical professionals.

- Diagnosis of D. palaestinae envenomation was made by the treating clinician by clinical symptoms, species description and, when available, by identification of the species either directly or by photograph. Unfortunately, an expert in snake taxonomy was not available for species confirmation. Identification has now been discussed in methods and the limitations in identification have now been noted in the limitations section.

The data analysis (page 10-11) section still needs improvement. Authors look that they did not use the normality tests which orient authors to conform parametric or nonparametric tests. Additionally, they have not addressed the logics needed to use inferential statistics without explaining about the sampling strategies, sample size, and representativeness of populations by the selected cases envenomed by this particular species.

Authors compared proportions of certain variables using the χ2-score or the Fisher’s exact test. Please, list the categorical variables that you used in the Chi square test and Fisher's exact test distinctly. This helps to follow up the results that you present in another section.

Also, they compared continuous variables using Student’s t-test or the Mann-Whitney-Wilcoxon test. If statistical assumption to use these inferential tests meet with your data set, please, list the particular variables used in the Students T-test and the Mann-Whitney U tests in the parentheses.

To increase the repeatability of this study, improvement of method is still necessary.

- Thank you for your insightful comments regarding the statistical analysis. We have revised the Methods section accordingly to improve transparency and reproducibility:

1. We have now performed normality tests (Shapiro-Wilk) on continuous variables to determine the appropriate statistical tests. Variables that followed a normal distribution were analyzed using Student’s t-test, while non-normally distributed variables were analyzed using the Mann–Whitney U test.

2. We compared categorical variables using the Chi-square test, or Fisher’s exact test where expected cell counts were <5.

3. Specifically:

o Continuous variables were analyzed using:

� Student’s t-test for: age, laboratory values

� Mann–Whitney U test for: admission times, length of ICU stay and length of hospital stay

o Categorical variables analyzed using:

� Chi-square: Demographics, location of bite, symptoms, supplemental treatments

� Fisher’s exact: Antivenin vs no-antivenin in low-frequency months

4. We clarified our sampling strategy: all envenomation cases by D. palaestinae during the study period (2014–2022) were included. Thus, the dataset represents a consecutive case series, not a random sample.

5. An expert in statistical analysis has re-reviewed the manuscript for accuracy and reproducibility.

Decision Letter 2

Timothy Omara

PONE-D-25-04569R2A dose scaling antivenin protocol in treatment of Daboia palaestinae envenomation may reduce morbidity and costs.PLOS ONE

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Authors have adequately improved the manuscript. This manuscript can be accepted after minor revisions that I suggest authors below:

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Methods

Were data collected from 2014-2023 OR from 2014-2022? Please, be consistent.

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Author response to Decision Letter 3


4 Jun 2025

Dear Editor,

We respectfully resubmit our manuscript: A dose scaling antivenin protocol in treatment of Daboia palaestinae envenomation may reduce morbidity and costs.

Below are our responses to requested changes in the manuscript. We hope the revised manuscript is found suitable for publication in PLOS ONE.

With thanks,

Frederic S. Zimmerman

Critical Care Unit

Shaare Zedek Medical Center

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Jerusalem 91031, Israel

Tel +972-2-564-5922

Email: fzimmer@szmc.org.il

Daniel J. Jakobson

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Barzilai University Medical Center

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Were data collected from 2014-2023 OR from 2014-2022? Please, be consistent.

"five. . ": remove additional full stop herein.

-The data were collected from 2014-2023. The errors have now been corrected,

Decision Letter 3

Timothy Omara

A dose scaling antivenin protocol in treatment of Daboia palaestinae envenomation may reduce morbidity and costs.

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