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. 2025 Aug 21;20(8):e0330537. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0330537

Malnutrition among under-five children in amhara and oromia regions, Ethiopia: Continuous time markov multi-state modeling

Dafa Duge Wachifo 1,*, Dereje Danbe Debeko 1, Zeytu Gashaw Asfaw 2,3
Editor: Manzur Kader4
PMCID: PMC12370122  PMID: 40839597

Abstract

Background

Ethiopia faces a high burden of undernutrition prevalence, ranking among the 15 worst-affected nations globally. So, this study aimed to find out how often and how long under-five children (U5C) in Ethiopia’s Amhara and Oromia regions move between different states of Composite Index Anthropometry Failure (CIAF) as well as what factors influence these changes.

Methods

The data used for this study was extracted from the International Food Policy Research Institute. The institute conducted a follow-up survey in three consecutive rounds: February 8, 2018–April 25, 2018; July 25, 2019–October 23, 2019; and February 8, 2021–April 25, 2021, respectively. The inclusion criteria were households that had children between the ages of 0 and 35 months, were participants in the safety net program, and had the mother or primary female caregiver during the baseline survey. A total of 3,044 households having children with at least two complete anthropometric measurements were included. A continuous-time multi-state Markov model was used to estimate transitions and their probability between CIAF’s states.

Results

Nourished children had a 71% probability of becoming undernourished. Time taken to recover from undernourished state for U5C was 41 months on average. 75% of the U5C’s life is spent in the undernourished state. Girls had a 1.824 times higher likelihood of recovering from an overnourished state and were less likely to transit from a nourished state to an undernourished state compared to boys (HR: 0.8013). Children older than two years were more likely to recover from undernourished and overnourished states respectively (HR: 1.013 & 1.036), to a nourished state and less likely to transit back to the malnutrition states (HR: 0.9693 & 0.9662). Children of educated mothers and residents in the Oromia region had lower risk of transition from a healthy to an undernourished state respectively (HR: 0.8171& 0.8074).

Conclusion

Undernutrition will affect most U5Cs. Children whose mothers had no education and live in the Amhara region are more susceptible to undernutrition. The Ministry of Health and other relevant stakeholders should develop a practical intervention to enhance adult and maternal education programs.

1. Introduction

Undernutrition can manifest in four forms: wasting, stunting, underweight, and micronutrient deficiencies. These conditions can lead to irreversible physical and cognitive damage, recent rapid weight loss-related risk of death, and reduced growth-development. However, overweight is the result of an excess intake of energy or nutrients, which can cause increased risk of diet-related non-communicable diseases in later children’s lives [1,2]. Undernutrition is linked to 45% of deaths among under-five children (U5C), primarily in sub-Saharan Africa [3]. In 2022, the global prevalence of stunting among U5C was 22.3%, with 43% of the affected children living in Africa. Ethiopia had a particularly high prevalence of stunting, at 34.4%, which is classified as “very high” according to the WHO-UNICEF Technical Advisory Group on Nutrition Monitoring thresholds established in 2018. This rate is higher than that of East Africa’s average (30.6%) and most neighboring countries such as Somalia (18%), Kenya (18.4%), Djibouti (18.7%), and South Sudan (27.9%)—except for Eritrea (50.2%) and Sudan (36%) [1,4]. Similarly, the global prevalence of wasting among U5C was 6.8%. In Ethiopia, the prevalence of wasting was equal to the global average at 6.8%, while the underweight rate stood at 21%. With these figures, Ethiopia is better than those of most neighboring countries, except for Kenya (5% wasting and 10% underweight). In terms of overweight, the global prevalence among U5C was 5.6%. Ethiopia reported a lower prevalence of 2.7%, which is below both the global average and the rates in all neighboring countries [4,5].

Ethiopia’s undernutrition rate has slightly decreased from 38% of stunting, 10% of wasting, and 24% of underweight in 2016 to 34.4% of stunting, 6.8% of wasting, and 21% of underweight in 2022. But it still lags behind the Sustainable Development Goal 2 (SDG-2) of ending all forms of undernutrition by 2030 [57]. The UN agencies were calling for urgent action on child wasting in their meeting, Ethiopia listed among the 15 worst-affected countries in the world. From these countries, over 30 million children were suffering from acute malnutrition; of these 8 million were severely wasted. Most of the listed 15 countries, such as Afghanistan, Burkina Faso, Chad, DRC, Ethiopia, Haiti, Kenya, Madagascar, Mali, Niger, Nigeria, Somalia, South Sudan, Sudan, and Yemen were from Africa except Haiti, Afghanistan, and Yemen. Moreover, Kenya, South Sudan, Sudan, and Somalia are neighboring countries of Ethiopia [8].

Previous studies in Ethiopia have attempted to identify determinants of malnutrition using conventional indicators, such as, stunting, wasting, or underweight separately [914]. However, these studies neither aggregated the indexes nor considered their transient or dynamic nature. These indicators partly overlap and therefore fail to present an accurate and convincing estimate of the total proportion of malnourished children in the population [15,16]. The conventional indicators of malnutrition such as stunting, wasting, and underweight separately fail to offer a comprehensive assessment of the overall burden of malnutrition among children. This limitation arises because children can experience multiple forms of malnutrition at the same time.

Using the composite index anthropometry failure (CIAF) approach is more effective than using conventional indicators, as it captures multiple forms of malnutrition simultaneously and provides a convincing estimate of the overall burden in the population [16]. Previous studies conducted in Ethiopia using the CIAF have not accounted for the dynamic nature of malnutrition, nor have they incorporated overnutrition into the composite index [17,18]. A recent study sought to capture the dynamic characteristics of stunting by utilizing longitudinal data and applying a multi-state model. However, the study did not incorporate other indicators of malnutrition [19]. Other studies that used longitudinal data from the International Food Policy Research Institute (IFPRI) tried to examine the influence of poultry transfers on diet diversity, the effectiveness of an aspiration intervention of telling stories of improved households experiences with other rural households for successful escapes from poverty, and whether and how the Ethiopian government’s public works program or strengthen productive safety net program institute resilience (SPIR)—which involves food or cash transfers for seasonal labor—along with complementing activities that involve both men and women—affected intense partner violence (IPV) [2022]. However, these studies have not explored the implications of the intervention on composite measures such as the CIAF. Therefore, further research is needed to evaluate the intervention’s impact on children’s nutritional status over time. To the best of our knowledge, existing studies have not comprehensively incorporated the CIAF, as they have typically excluded either the dual burden of undernutrition and overnutrition, or the dynamic aspects of malnutrition among U5C, particularly with a continuous-time multistate Markov model. Therefore, this study aimed to find out how often and how long U5C move between different states of CIAF as well as what factors influence these changes in Ethiopia’s Amhara and Oromia regions. The CIAF reflects a transient or dynamic nature, which necessitates analysis using a multi-state model (MSM). As a composite measure, the CIAF aggregates multiple forms of malnutrition, including stunting, wasting, underweight, and overweight, and serves as a tool to track overall nutritional status. A children’s status may transit between different CIAF states or recover to a healthy state over time, highlighting its dynamic characteristics. Therefore, the MSM is well-suited for analyzing such complex data structures, as it enables a comprehensive understanding of how children transition between various states, such as undernourished, nourished, or overnourished, or remission. Therefore, this study could help to simplify interpretations of conventional indicators by providing a single conclusion on the overall burden of malnutrition. It could also provide estimates for transition rates, transition probabilities, and driving factors at specific times between different states of CIAF. In addition, it could contribute to the application of MSM in nutrition.

2. Method

2.1 Study population

The target population of this study was U5C from households participating in the PSNP in the Amhara and Oromia regions of Ethiopia. As the survey did not include other regions of the country, the findings of this study are limited to these two regions.

2.2. Research design and data source

The dataset was obtained from the IFPRI. To improve outcomes related to livelihoods, food security, child nutrition, women’s empowerment, mental health, and intimate partner violence (IPV), IFPRI conducted an experimental, quantitative impact evaluation of the Strengthen PSNP Institute and Resilience (SPIR) program. This evaluation was designed to measure the causal impact of a multi-sectoral “graduation model” that integrates interventions in livelihoods, nutrition, gender equity, and mental health [23]. To support the implementation of this program, World Vision and its partners, Cooperative for Assistance and Relief Everywhere (CARE) and Organization for Rehabilitation and Development in Amhara (ORDA), have been providing services to more than 500,000 PNSP clients in 15 food-insecure districts in the Amhara and Oromia regions. This effort is funded by USAID’s Bureau for Humanitarian Assistance and carried out in close collaboration with the Government of Ethiopia [2123]. Initially, 196 kebeles from Amhara (115 kebeles) and Oromia (81 kebeles) were selected from 15 PSNP implemented districts. However, four kebeles (3 from Amhara and 1 from Oromia) were dropped due to no PSNP clients in two kebeles, and there was ongoing civil unrest in two other kebeles. Thus, the evaluation sample comprises 192 kebeles. From each kebele, 18 households were randomly selected, and then a total of 3,314 households that satisfied the inclusion criteria were included. The inclusion criteria were that households be a PSNP client, have at least one child aged 0–35 months at baseline, and have the indexed child’s (0–35-month-old) biological mother or primary female caregiver as a member of the household among the eligible households. Then the baseline, midline, and endline surveys were conducted from February 8 to April 25, 2018; July 25 to October 23, 2019; and February 8, 2021, to April 25, 2021, respectively. The standardized questionnaires were used for data collection. The mother/primary female caregiver questionnaire constitutes the nutritional practices for the indexed children and their anthropometric measures. Children whose ages were less than 36 months were designated as the baseline indexed children [23]. We accessed the required data from IFPRI according to the data access request and adhered to their data-sharing protocols. Finally, the data set was accessed on May 29, 2023. Based on the current study’s criteria, a total of 3,044 households having at least two complete anthropometric measurements for indexed children at the baseline were included in the study.

2.3. Ethical statements

IFPRI received approval from its Institutional Review Board (IRB) at baseline, and it was updated for the second-round survey. IFPRI also received ethics approval from the Institutional Review Board (IRB) at Hawassa University. Additionally, IFPRI had collected informed oral consent from all participants prior to the start of any interview. The entire field team was trained on ethical data collection, prior to the start of any interviews. Before beginning a survey, enumerators read each respondent a brief description of the study that was being conducted, informed them that their participation in the study was voluntary and that they could discontinue participating at any time, and asked whether they agreed to respond to the interview questions. The enumerator only completed a survey if they received verbal consent from the target respondent to participate in the study. Anonymized versions of the datasets that exclude personal identifiers were made available for public access. We have also received ethical clearance from the Hawassa University College of Natural and Computational Sciences Research Ethics Review Committee (RERC). Thus, no risk of harm is posed to the study participants.

2.4. Study variables

2.4.1. Dependent variable.

The dependent variable in this study was CIAF among U5C which is categorical. To minimize measurement errors, anthropometric data were collected using standardized procedures. The height/length, mid-upper arm circumference (MUAC), and weight of the indexed child and mother/primary female caregiver were measured twice. If the differences between the two measurements were less than 0.01 cm for height/length and MUAC and 0.01 kg for weight, the measurements were considered accurate. If the differences exceeded these thresholds, a third measurement was taken and recorded. Standard scores were computed using the zscorer R package for three anthropometric indicators: height-for-age z-score (HAZ), weight-for-height z-score (WHZ), and weight-for-age z-score (WAZ). The cut-off points for undernutrition were based on the WHO Child Growth Standards median: stunting is defined as HAZ < −2 standard deviations (SD), wasting as WHZ < −2 SD, underweight as WAZ < −2 SD, and overweight as WHZ > +1 SD [1,2]. To assess the overall nutrition status of U5C, the study employed the revised and revisited CIAF as the primary outcome variable [16]. They stated, as Svedberg in 2000 has pointed out, that stunting, underweight, and wasting are dependent entities where WAZ is often used to reflect the extent of both chronic and acute malnutrition. However, WAZ cannot distinguish between children who are with HAZ and/or WHZ due to overlapping. So, it provides an underestimate of the extent of anthropometric failure in a population; hence, CIAF is recommended as a solution [16]. The CIAF status was computed by using nine combinations of four indexes, as shown in Table 1 and Fig 1. Then it was categorized into three categories: undernourished (B-F or Y), nourished (A), and overnourished (G or H). Simplifying the CIAF into three distinct categories can reduce ambiguity from overlapping subcategories and make the results more interpretable.

Table 1. Proposed Composite Index of Anthropometric Failure Categories.
CIAF Categories Wasted Stunted Underweight Overweight
Group A – No failure No No No No
Group B – Wasted only Yes No No No
Group C – Wasted & Underweight Yes No Yes No
Group D – Wasted, Stunted & Underweight Yes Yes Yes No
Group E – Stunted & Underweight No Yes Yes No
Group F – Stunted only No Yes No No
Group G – Stunted & Overweight No Yes No Yes
Group H – Overweight only No No No Yes
Group Y – Underweight only No No Yes No
Fig 1. Revised and Revisited CIAF with nine sections [16].

Fig 1

TherevisedformulafordetectingUnder_nourished(U)=B+C+D+E+F+Y,Nourished(N)=A,Over_nourished(O)=G+HHence,CIAFcategorizedas:U=State1,N=State2,andO=Satate3

2.4.2. Independent variables.

The inclusion of explanatory variables was guided by three main criteria: the aim of the study, the availability of variables in the dataset, and recommendations from existing literature as key predictors of child malnutrition. The inclusion of covariates was not exhaustive but rather focused on variables most relevant to the study’s aim and feasible within the available data. Based on these considerations, the following covariates were included. Child characteristics: sex, age, birth weight, illness episodes, breastfeeding duration, and immunization status. Mother characteristics: age, marital status, highest education level, employment status, feeding practices, childcare activities, exposure to health, and nutrition services. Household characteristics: family size, sex of the household head, religion, zone, and region.

2.2 Method of data analysis

2.2.1 Definition and assumption of multi-state model.

A multistate model is a framework that uses continuous-time processes to describe and model subjects’ experiences over a time course. All multistate models consist of two essential components: the states and the transitions. “State” is the time-varying/longitudinal status of a subject at a given time. “Transition” is a directional movement from one state to another. A state can be transient or terminal. A state is considered transient if a transition from that state to another state is possible, whereas a state is considered terminal (absorbing) if a transition from that state to another state is not possible; that is, once a subject enters a terminal state, s/he is assumed to remain permanently in that state [24]. In biomedical applications, the states may be health conditions, disease stages, or a nonfatal complication in the course of an illness [25]. In time-to-event data, Kaplan–Meier estimators and Cox proportional hazard models are adequate to use in studies where there is only one type of event of primary interest. Competing risks models can accommodate transition between one initial state and several mutually exclusive absorbing states. The recurrent event models are appropriate when transitioning from one state to another state, either recurrent event 1 or event 2, or so on. However, when there are multiple events of interest, these methods may not provide a full picture of the relationship. In such a case, the multistate model provides a flexible and broader framework to extend familiar methods. When the process involves transitions between several well-defined distinct states, in such cases the multistate model is appropriate over other statistical models [24]. The progression of the nutritional status of U5C is an example of complex processes with intermediate events. Therefore, the multistate model is preferred over other statistical models in this specific case.

In this specific case, a multistate model described how a child’s nutritional status or CIAF moves between a series of its states. CIAF has three states: undernourished (U), nourished (N), and overnourished (O) [16]. All the states are transient or non-absorbing. The transitions are illustrated using diagrams with boxes and arrows. Boxes represent the states of CIAF, while arrows represent possible transitions between the states. As depicted in Fig 2, we have considered the 3 transient states and assumed that subjects would be in any given state at time t equal to zero (t = 0); then 6 possible transitions were identified by arrows. Transition rate denoted by

Fig 2. Model of progression between CIAF states for U5C advances between adjacent or to non-adjacent states and optionally recovery to an adjacent/ non-adjacent state.

Fig 2

αhj,where,handjarestates,cantakevalues:1,2,3, that is transition from hth state to jth state with αhj transition rate. For example: 1) from “U” to “N” by α12; 2) from “N” to “U” by α21; 3) from “N” to “O” by α23 4) from “O to “N” by α32; 5) from “U” to “O” by α13 and 6) from “O” to “U” by α31. The child in healthy state at time t can move either to under-nourished state or move to over–nourished state or stay at the same state after time t+1.

A multi-state process is a stochastic process (X (t), t∈T) with a finite state space S = {1,..., N} in this case, S={1,2,3=N} since maximum number of states of CIAF is 3 and fulfilling some simplification assumptions. Here, T= [0, τ], τ < ∞ is the time interval and the value of the process at time t, is the state occupied at that time. This process has information about the different transitions that occur to an individual over time, as well as the time at which these transitions take place. In the process of nutritional status, the exact time of transition between states is unknown. The change of state can be observed after the follow-up time or the next round survey. Thus, the process could be continuous- time multi-state model or continuous-time Markov model.

The process starts with the distribution of the initial state probability given by: Pj(0)=P[X(0)=j],jS and probabilities, Pj(t)=P[X(t)=j],jS state occupation probabilities. With the evolution of the process over time, a history H t- (a σ -algebra), would be generated consisting of the observation of the process over the interval [0, t), such as the states previously visited, times of transitions, etc. This multi-state process is fully characterized through transition probabilities and transition intensities. The transition probabilities between state h and state j at two times s and t can expressed by:

Phj(s,t)=P(X(t)=j/X(s)=h,Hs)forh,jS,s,tT,st (1)

This is the probability that a child in state h, at time s moves to state j by time t, conditional on the process history up until the time just before s, Hs-, where h, jS. This can be simplified with a Markov model, which assumes that the probability in (1) is only conditional on the state at time s and no other process history:

Phj(S,t)=P(X(t)=j|X(s)=h,Hs)=P(X(t)=j|X(s)=h) (2)

The transition intensities, from state h to state j at time t is:

αhj(t)=limΔt0Phj(t,t+Δt)Δt=P(X(t+Δt)=j|X(t)=h)Δt (3)

This represents the instantaneous rate, at which a child leaves a nourished state, h and enters an undernourished or overnourished state j at time t. Let Q(t) denote the transition matrix with (h, j) entry αhj (t) at time t for U5C and defined for 3 states as:

Q(t)=(*20cα11α12α13α21α22α23α31α32α33) (4)

Where, the diagonal element of the row is equal to negative of the sum of other entries of that row.

The estimation of MSM is started with, is the probability of being in any given state at a given time t. It can be estimated using the non-parametric Aalen-Johansen estimator and plotted over time in a similar manner to the Kaplan–Meier curves. The curves show the likelihood of a subject being in one of the states over time, [24]. The transition probability matrix helps to estimate how probable children’s nutritional status is in each state as time changes. That is how children are probable to move between states of CIAF as time passes. Let P(t) denote the transition probability matrix where each elementπhj(t) represents the probability that a child transitions from state h to state j over the time interval [s, t], given that the child was in state h at time s. Thus, the matrix P(t) is typically derived from the transition intensity matrix Q(t) under the assumption of a time-homogeneous continuous-time Markov process, [26] such that:

P(t)=exp[Q(t)]=(π11π12π13π21π22π23π31π32π33) (5)

The transition intensities can be estimated by maximum likelihood procedures as a product of probabilities of transition between observed states, overall individuals i =1, 2,.., M and observation times r which are observed n times, as shown below:

L(Q)=i=1Mr=1ni1Lir=i,rπs(tir)s(ti,r+1)(ti,r+1tir) (6)

Mean sojourn time or expected time of stay in a given state before transition and total time of stay in a given state during whole process of a child can be computed by [27]:

meansojourntime=1αrr,where,αrrdiagonalentryoftransitionmatrixtotaltime=t1t2Pik(t)dt,where,t1isinitialentrytimeofagivenstateandt2isfinaltimeoftheprocess,

2.3.2. Multi-state regression models.

To identify the significant factors of transition, it is important to relate the individual characteristics with the intensity rates through a covariate vector, Z, possibly time dependent. The inference in a MSM can be divided into several survival models, by fitting separate intensities to all possible transitions. For a general regression model of hazard or failure rate for ith child moving from state h to j is a function of time t and covariate vector Z. It could be expressed as:

αhji(t,Z)=ϕ(αhj0(t),βhjTZi), where αhj0 (t) is the baseline intensity function, βhj is the vector of regression coefficient, and Zi is the covariate vector for subject i. A popular choice that simplifies the model for inference is the proportional hazards assumption, which is obtained by:

ϕ(u(t),v)=u(t)ev implies,αhj(t,z)=αhj0(t)exp(βhjTZi) (7)

A Cox proportional hazards model of type

αhj(z)=αhjexp(βhjTZ),Where,1h<j3, (8)

Where, 3 CIAF states were considered to relate the transition intensities αhj with child’s characteristics or covariates, Z. The inclusion of covariates in these models allows the prediction of probabilities tailored to individual child. The inference is based on the ML method in (6) by replacing the transition intensities αhj by those given above in (8), [28].

2.3.3. Software.

Data clearance and analysis were performed by SPSS version 27, and R version 4.3.2 with msm 1.7.1. The standard scores of all anthropometric measure indexes were computed by zscorer 0.3.1 packages. The R codes were adapted from manual of msm 1.7.1 Package by Jackson 2023.

3. Result interpretations

3.1. Descriptive result

As presented in S1 Table, the prevalence of malnutrition at each round was identified. The prevalence of under-five stunting was 1140 (37.5%), 1560 (52.5%), and 1292 (46%) at the baseline, midline, and endline rounds, respectively. Prevalence of wasting at the baseline, midline, and endline rounds was 409 (13.5%), 185 (6.2%), and 240 (8.7%), respectively. In addition, the underweight prevalence at baseline, midline, and endline was 723 (23.8%), 811 (27.3%), and 835 (29.7%), respectively. Table 2 shows that in the baseline, midline, and endline rounds, 3,044, 2,973, and 2,813 children were measured at least twice, respectively. The prevalence of undernutrition at baseline, midline, and endline rounds, respectively, was 1207 (39.7%), 1481 (49.8%), and 1334 (47.4%), while the prevalence of overnutrition was 423 (13.9%), 269 (9%), and 219 (7.8%), at baseline, midline, and endline rounds respectively.

Table 2. Composite Index Anthropometric Failure (CIAF) at the baseline, midline and endline rounds.

Response States Rounds
Baseline Midline Endline
Freq % Freq % Freq %
Composite index anthropometric status of U5C U (1) 1207 39.7% 1481 49.8% 1334 47.4%
N (2) 1414 46.5% 1223 41.1% 1260 44.8%
O (3) 423 13.9% 269 9.0% 219 7.8%
Total 3044 100.0% 2973 100.0% 2813 100.0%

The descriptive result in Table 3 reveals that 85.9% of mothers or primary caregivers were married and living with a single spouse. A significant proportion (72.8%) of them had no formal education, and 67.9% of them were identified as housewives. Additionally, 84.4% reported that their spouses or partners were living with them at the time of the first-round survey. Among the U5C included in the study, 1569 (51.5%) are males. Of the households selected for the baseline survey, 1707 (56.1%) were from the Amhara region, specifically from the North Wollo (36.9%) and Waghimra (19.2%) zones. The remaining 1337 households (43.9%) were from the Oromia region, particularly from the East Hararge (9%), West Hararge (32.3%), and West Arsi (2.6%) zones. Majorities of households (56.5%) included in the study were Orthodox religion followers, followed by Muslim (41.7%). Slight changes in these proportions were observed across subsequent survey rounds, which may be attributed to loss to follow-up and other longitudinal reasons.

Table 3. Mother, Child and Household Characteristics.

Variables Categories Rounds
Baseline Midline Endline
Freq % Freq % Freq %
Marital status of the biological mother or the primary caregiver Married, Single Spouse 2613 85.9% 2534 85.2% 2424 86.2%
Married, More than one spouse 10 0.3% 18 0.6% 1 0.0%
Not together for any reason 92 3.0% 57 2.0% 40 1.4%
Divorced 228 7.5% 250 8.4% 232 8.3%
Widowed 101 3.3% 114 3.8% 116 4.1%
Education Level of biological mother or primary caregiver Did not complete any schooling 2215 72.8% 2081 70.0% 1968 70.0%
Adult, religious or other 48 1.6% 68 2.3% 56 2.0%
Primary School 707 23.2% 737 24.8% 704 25.0%
High School and above 74 2.4% 87 2.9% 85 3.0%
The main current activity of the biological mother or the primary caregiver Crop or livestock production 214 7.0% 877 29.5% 787 28.0%
business or skilled labor 673 22.1% 274 9.2% 259 9.2%
Employee 2 0.1% 12 0.4% 13 0.4%
Unpaid house work 2066 67.9% 1767 59.4% 1710 60.8%
Student, volunteer, and other 89 2.9% 43 1.5% 44 1.6%
Spouse or partner is a member of the household? Yes 2570 84.4% 2374 79.9% 2323 82.6%
No 474 15.6% 599 20.1% 490 17.4%
Sex of Baseline Indexed Child Male 1569 51.5% 1534 51.6% 1456 51.8%
Female 1475 48.5% 1439 48.4% 1357 48.2%
Region Amhara 1707 56.1% 1662 55.9% 1578 56.1%
Oromia 1337 43.9% 1311 44.1% 1235 43.9%
Zone North Wollo 1123 36.9% 1100 37.0% 1055 37.5%
Waghimra 584 19.2% 562 18.9% 523 18.6%
East Hararge 273 9.0% 267 9.0% 261 9.3%
West Arsi 80 2.6% 72 2.4% 76 2.7%
West Hararge 984 32.3% 972 32.7% 898 31.9%
Religion of household head Orthodox 1721 56.5% 1673 56.3% 1583 56.3%
Muslim 1270 41.7% 1252 42.1% 1175 41.8%
Protestant 53 1.8% 48 1.6% 55 1.9%
Main language of household head Agew (Hemrigna/Awigna) 244 8.0% 165 5.5% 144 5.1%
Amharic 1466 48.2% 1510 50.8% 1437 51.1%
Oromigna 1303 42.8% 1289 43.4% 1222 43.4%
Other Ethiopian Languages 31 1.0% 9 0.3% 10 0.4%
Sex of household head Male 2486 81.7% 2440 82.1% 2305 81.9%
Female 558 18.3% 533 17.9% 508 18.1%
Marital status of household head Married, Single Spouse 2562 84.2% 2458 82.7% 2411 85.7%
Married, more than one spouse 20 0.7% 72 2.4% 0 0.0%
Not together for any reason 75 2.5% 49 1.6% 33 1.2%
Divorced 240 7.9% 249 8.4% 229 8.1%
Widowed 147 4.8% 145 4.9% 140 5.0%
Highest class household head attended Did not complete any class 2030 66.7% 1663 55.9% 1572 55.9%
Adult/religious &other school 119 3.9% 192 6.5% 183 6.5%
Primary School 796 26.1% 1000 33.6% 945 33.6%
High School and above 99 3.3% 118 4.0% 113 4.0%
The main current activity of household Crop or livestock production 913 30.0% 2443 82.2% 2392 85.0%
business or skilled labor 1774 58.3% 248 8.3% 225 8.0%
Employee 12 0.4% 19 0.6% 15 0.5%
Unpaid house work 223 7.3% 177 6.0% 118 4.2%
Student, volunteer extra 122 4.0% 84 2.8% 63 2.2%

3.2. Multistate model result

Fig 3 illustrates the transitions between three states of CIAF over the study period. The result shows that children’s nutritional status changed over time, transitioning between the healthy, undernourished, and overnourished states. For example, the child represented by the black line was in an undernourished state at the baseline, recovered to a healthy state by 18 months, and remained healthy after the midline survey. In contrast, the yellow line represents a child who remained in the undernourished state throughout the entire study period. The gray line depicts a child who started in a healthy state at baseline, transitioned to an undernourished state at 18 months, and then moved to an overnourished state during the endline survey. Meanwhile, the pink line shows a child who was in an overnourished state at baseline, transitioned to an undernourished state at 18 months, and had no follow-up data after the midline survey. These transitions suggest that movement between all three states is possible and that individual children may improve, deteriorate, or remain in the same nutritional state throughout the study period. The figure highlights the dynamic nature of nutritional status among under five children in a longitudinal setting.

Fig 3. Spaghettis plot of CIAF for 4 unique ID selected individual children from data.

Fig 3

As shown in Table 4, among the U5C included in the study, 698 (27.4%) of them transitioned from a healthy state to an undernourished state, while 173 (6.8%) transitioned to an overnourished state. These indicate that the number of U5Cs transitioning from a healthy state to an undernourished state was approximately four times higher than the number of children transitioning from a healthy state to an overnourished state. Among those in an undernourished state, 545 (21.3%) recovered back to a healthy state. Similarly, 260 children (38.5%) from an overnourished state recovered to a healthy state, indicating a relatively higher recovery rate in the overnourished group. Additionally, a significant proportion of children remained in their current health states throughout the study period. Specifically, 1,838 children (71.82%) remained in a healthy state, 1,678 children (65.8%) remained in an undernourished state, and 137 children (20.27%) remained in the overnourished state. The aim of the study was to understand and quantify the transition rates of U5C between CIAF states. The finding suggests that while most children maintain their health status, a notable proportion experience transitions, with a higher tendency to move into the undernourished state compared to the overnourished state. The recovery rates indicate that a substantial proportion of children in both failure states manage to return to a healthy state during the study period.

Table 4. State Table or Frequency of Transition at End of Study.

To Total
From Under Failure (UF) Normal Only (NO) Over Failure (OF)
UF (1) 1838(71.82%) 545(21.3%) 176(6.88%) 2559
NO (2) 698(27.4%) 1678(65.8%) 173(6.8%) 2549
OF (3) 279(41.27%) 260 (38.46%) 137 (20.27%) 676
Total 2815 2483 486 5784

The result in Fig 4 compares the expected (red dotted line) and observed (blue line) prevalence in each nutritional state. The closeness of lines across all states suggests that the continuous-time Markov multi-state model best fits the data. In state 3, the breakpoint shows that there is a noticeable break in the data after 15 months. These indicate a lack of sufficient data for both the expected and observed percentages. The possible reason could be the households included in the study were vulnerable to food insecurity. Therefore, children are at a higher risk of undernutrition and are not stable in an overnutrition state for an extended period. This result supports the fact that the model fits well in general.

Fig 4. Prevalence plot, which indicates percentage of estimated and observed prevalence.

Fig 4

Table 5 shows the baseline hazard and model information criterion. The −2LL and AIC values are smaller for the model with covariates compared to the model without covariates, suggesting that the model with covariates provides a better fit to the data. Therefore, the interpretation is based on the model that includes covariates. Estimating the transition rates or hazard rates to either failure states or recovery from them is the primary aim of the study. Thus, the estimated result reveals that the baseline transition intensities of the nourished (state 2) to undernourished and overnourished states were 0.020298 and 0.008244, respectively. These indicate that children in a nourished state were 2.45 (0.020298/0.008244) times more likely to transit to an undernourished state (state 1) than to an overnourished state (state 3). Children in an overnourished state were 4.34 (0.063825/0.014625) times more likely to recover back to a nourished state compared to children in an undernourished state. This shows that children in the nourished state had a higher risk of transiting to an undernourished state, but a lower likelihood of recovering compared to children in an overnourished state.

Table 5. Estimated Values of Baseline Transition Intensity and Corresponding 95% Confidence Interval from the Multi-state Model with and without Covariates.

Transition Intensities without Covariate Transition Intensities with Covariate
From State to state Baseline MLE 95% CI Baseline MLE 95% CI
State 1 – State 1 −0.019736 (−0.0216, −0.018) −0.024131 (−0.0263, −0.0222)
State 1 – State 2 0.0126 (0.0111,0.0142) 0.014625 (0.0127, 0.0168)
State 1 – State 3 0.007183 (0.0057, 0.0091) 0.008735 (0.0070, 0.0109)
State 2 – State 1 0.022356 (0.0203, 0.0247) 0.020298 (0.0183, 0.0226)
State 2 – State 2 −0.030511 (−0.033, −0.0283) −0.028542 (−0.0311, −0.0262)
State 2- State 3 0.008154 (0.0063, 0.0105) 0.008244 (0.0064, 0.0106)
State 3 – State 1 0.063464 (0.0522, 0.0772) 0.046233 (0.0379, 0.0564)
State 3 – State 2 0.048562 (0.0386, 0.0612) 0.063825 (0.0511, 0.0797)
State 3 – State 3 −0.112026 (−0.1292, −0.097) −0.103829 (−0.117, −0.0922)
−2 * log-likelihood 9419.898 9194
AIC 9431.898 9230.347
Df 6 18

Table 6 depicts the estimated 1-month and 36-month probabilities of transition, mean sojourn time, and total time of subject spent in a given state. The 1-month probabilities of transition show that U5Cs staying in the current states are more probable. That means the likelihood of staying in an undernourished state, nourished state, and overnourished state was 97.63%, 97.14%, and 90.3%, respectively. Children in a nourished state were 1.35 (0.020532/0.01522) times more likely to transit to an undernourished state than to backward transition. Moreover, the transition from an overnourished state to an undernourished state is 5.6 (0.0478/0.00853) times more probable than that of backward transition. A child is sustained in a nourished state for 34 months on average. However, a child spent 41 months in an undernourished state before transitioning to any other state. A typical child in a healthy state has a 40.53% probability of becoming undernourished after 3 years. That is, the likelihood of a child moving from a nourished state to an undernourished state is 1.3 times higher than a backward transition. However, probabilities of children remaining in the same states, such as undernourished, nourished, and overnourished, in the duration of 36 months are 0.6, 0.52, and 0.1, respectively. The total time of staying in an undernourished state, nourished state, and overnourished state was 27 months with 95% CI: (26.27, 27.32), 7 months with 95% CI: (6.51, 7.49), and 2.2 months with 95% CI: (1.89, 2.48), respectively, per given period. It shows that the lifespan of U5Cs spent in undernourished, nourished, and overnourished states was 75%, 20%, and 5%, respectively. These findings highlight the predominance of undernourishment among U5C in the study area, with children spending most of their early years in this compromised health state. The finding also suggests that children tend to remain in the undernourished state for an extended period before transitioning to either nourished or overnourished states. Such patterns are indicative of this study’s aim being impactful in the manner of a multi-state model, utilized in nutrition to represent different statuses and the transitions between them. In this model, each state (nourished, undernourished, or overnourished) is associated with specific transition probabilities, and the mean sojourn time reflects the expected duration an individual stays in a particular state before moving to another.

Table 6. Estimated 1-month and 36-moths Probabilities of Transitioning between CIAF States, the Mean Sojourn and Total time of stay.

CIAF Category Transition Probability Matrix (t = 1- month)1-month Mean Sojourn Time
Undernourished (1) Normal (2) Overnourished (3) MST (95%CI)
MLE (95%CI) MLE (95%CI) MLE (95%CI)
Undernourished (1) 0.976254 (0.97419,0.97808) 0.015220 (0.01352,0.01695) 0.008526 (0.00682,0.01035) 40.96 (37.6, 44.62)
Nourished (2) 0.020532 (0.01859,0.02251) 0.971391 (0.96911,0.97351) 0.008077 (0.00637,0.00995) 34.01 (31.45, 36.78)
Overnourished (3) 0.047796 (0.04001,0.05639) 0.049078 (0.04103,0.05788) 0.903125 (0.89134,0.91303) 9.77 (8.69, 10.99)
Transition Probability Matrix (t = 36 months) Total time of stay
CIAF Category Undernourished (1) Normal (2) Overnourished (3) Total time (95%CI)
Undernourished (1) 0.6020467 0.3196602 0.07829304 26.79802 (26.27, 27.32)
Nourished (2) 0.4052930 0.5177302 0.07697676 7.022167 (6.51, 7.49)
Overnourished (3) 0.4852087 0.4189034 0.09588796 2.179810 (1.89,2.48)

Table 7 reveals the probability of being in the next state. Its confidence interval was estimated by bootstrapping with boot number 1000. It was known that children were to be moved from a nourished state, and then they had a 71% chance of becoming undernourished in the next. Similarly, children in an overnourished state had a 49.2% risk of being in an undernourished state in the next. However, the children in an undernourished state had a 63.1% chance of recovering, while there is a 36.9% chance of becoming overnourished in the next.

Table 7. Probability of Children in Each state Being Next.

Undernourished (1) Nourished (2) Overnourished(3)
State 1 0 0.631 (0.5608,0.6920) 0.369 (0.3080,0.4392)
State 2 0.71 (0.6560,0.7633) 0 0.2900 (0.2367,0.3440)
State 3 0.4919 (0.4254,0.5576) (0.4424,0.5746) 0

Table 8 shows the effects of explanatory variables on transition intensities. Girls were 0.8013 times less likely to transition to an undernourished state (HR, 0.8013, 95% CI (0.6730, 0.9542)) and had 1.824 times higher likelihood of recovering from an overnourished state (HR, 1.824, 95% CI (1.3439, 2.475)) than boys. The likelihoods of transitioning from a nourished state to an undernourished and overnourished state were reduced by 0.031 and 0.034 times, respectively, as the age increased by one month. One month increase in the age of children who were in the undernourished and overnourished states was associated with higher recovery chances (HR = 1.013, 95% CI: 1.005, 1.022) and (HR = 1.036, 95% CI: 1.023, 1.050), respectively. Children of educated mothers were less likely to transition from a nourished state to an undernourished state compared to children whose mothers had no formal education (HR: 0.8171, 95% CI (0.6685, 0.9987)). Children from the Oromia region were (HR: 0.8074, 95% CI (0.6681, 0.9756)) and (HR: 0.4290 (0.2784, 0.6612)) times less likely to transition to undernourished and overnourished states, respectively, than children in the Amhara region. This result emphasizes meeting the objective of identifying the driving factors of transition. It suggests the importance of gender, maternal education, age, and regional factors in the transition between different health states in children.

Table 8. Hazard Ratios with 95% Confidence Intervals for Transition Rates across CIAF States by Covariates.

Covariates From nourished CIAF to Undernourished From Undernourished to nourished CIAF From nourished CIAF to Over-nourished From Overnourished to nourished CIAF
HR (95%CI) HR (95%CI) HR (95%CI) HR (95%CI)
Sex (Male Ref) 0.8013 (0.6730,0.9542) 0.918 (0.7346,1.147) 0.7360 (0.5019,1.0794) 1.824 (1.3439,2.475)
Age in months 0.9693 (0.9634,0.9752) 1.013 (1.005,1.022) 0.9662 (0.9538,0.9788) 1.036 (1.023,1.050)
Mother Occupation (homeworker ref) 0.8506 (0.7060,1.025) 0.9838 (0.7824,1.237) 1.2580 (0.8606,1.839) 1.0105 (0.7467,1.367)
Mother education (did not complete any school ref) 0.8171 (0.6685,0.9987) 1.196 (0.9367,1.528) 0.9332 (0.6103,1.4267 1.094 (0.7868,1.520)
Household size (five or less members ref) 0.9711 (0.7999,1.179) 0.9908 (0.7852,1.250) 1.2845 (0.8444,1.954) 0.8584 (0.6213,1.186)
Region (Amhara ref) 0.8074 (0.6681,0.9756) 1.114 (0.8878,1.399) 0.4290 (0.2784,0.6612) 1.214 (0.8781,1.677)

4. Discussion

This study sought to investigate malnutrition of U5C in the Amhara and Oromia regions. The study introduced CIAF as a response variable by aggregating nine different combinations of malnutrition categories, such as stunting, wasting, underweight, and overweight. Applying the CIAF contributes to having a single conclusion for overall malnutrition. In addition, the study also tried to incorporate the dynamic nature of children’s malnutrition. The continuous-time multi-state Markov model was applied to estimate transition dynamics and their associated factors between states. Then, the key findings were discussed in three themes as follows:

4.1. Prevalence of malnutrition

The prevalence of stunting was consistently high, peaking at midline and showing some improvement by the endline. That is, it increased from 37.5% at baseline to 52.5% at midline but decreased slightly to 46% at endline. This might suggest that interventions or changes between the midline and endline might have contributed to reducing the prevalence of stunting, but the overall prevalence remained concerning. Wasting decreased from 13.5% at baseline to 6.2% at midline but slightly increased again to 8.7% at endline. It showed a positive trend at the midline but worsened slightly at the endline, signaling the need for continuous interventions to address this issue. However, the underweight trend worsened consistently, which might indicate broader, more systemic issues affecting nutrition, growth, or health outcomes that are not being sufficiently addressed. It showed a steady increase, from 23.8% at baseline to 29.7% at endline, with a peak at 27.3% at midline. Furthermore, the prevalence of undernourishment increased from 39.7% at baseline to 49.8% at midline, then dropped slightly to 47.4% at endline. Undernourished state followed a similar trajectory as stunting and underweight, but the trend did show a slight improvement during the endline. Conversely, the overnourished rate decreased from 13.9% at baseline to 7.8% at endline, with a decrease to 9% at midline. In general, the malnutrition indexes were higher than recent national estimates. The national prevalence estimates were 34.4% for stunting, 6.8% for wasting, and 21% for underweight [5,7].

4.2. Finding of duration in malnutrition states

In the study area, the majority (65.8%) of U5C from PSNP member households remained in an undernourished state. Among the nourished children, the likelihood of transitioning to an undernourished state was four times higher than transitioning to an overnourished state. Similarly, the proportion of children moving from an overnourished to an undernourished state was 1.1 times higher than those transitioning to a healthy state. These findings are consistent with those of [19], but contrast with the results reported by [25,29,30]. The current study and the study by Oduro et al. were conducted in neighboring countries, Ethiopia and Kenya. Therefore, the consistency in findings may be due to similarities in socioeconomic status, dietary habits, and healthcare infrastructure in these countries. In contrast, the studies by Häkkänen et al., Hu et al., and Moreira et al. were conducted in developed countries, where overnutrition is the predominant form of malnutrition. So, the underlying causes, risk factors, and public health responses to malnutrition may differ significantly between these settings. Furthermore, children in the overnourished state were 1.81 times more likely to recover to normal nutritional status compared to those in the undernourished state. This may be attributed to the fact that children from the poorest households are more vulnerable to undernutrition due to limited access to adequate food and healthcare. Additionally, children in the overnourished state were more likely to transition to an undernourished state than to return directly to a nourished state, indicating instability in their nutritional condition.

The estimated 1-month transition probabilities show that the chance of staying in the current state is higher than transitioning to other states. This result is supported by previous studies in Finland, China, Portugal, and Kenya [19,25,29,30]. That is, the highest (98%) 1-month chance of staying in the current state was observed in the undernourished state. In contrast to this, the highest chance was observed in an overweight state in [25,29,30] and at nourished state in [19]. The likelihood of recovery from an undernourished state was 3.22 times lower than the likelihood of transitioning into it. Additionally, the risk of transitioning from an overnourished state to an undernourished state was 4.7 times higher than the reverse transition. This could be due to food insecurity among the households surveyed, which may have prevented children from maintaining an overnourished state. In a given time, children in either a nourished or an overnourished state faced a higher risk of falling into an undernourished state than transitioning to any other nutritional category. Once U5Cs become undernourished, it takes an average of 3.5 years to recover to normal nutritional status. Conversely, a child remains in the nourished state for approximately 34 months before transitioning to malnutrition. In contrast, [29] found that the longest duration was spent in the obesity state, while [30] reported the longest duration in the nourished state. In our findings, a child in a nourished state had a 71% higher risk of transitioning to an undernourished state than to an overnourished state in the next. Moreover, U5Cs spent approximately 75% of their lifetimes in an undernourished state. This differs from previous studies, where longer durations were observed in the obese or nourished states [29,30]. These differences may be explained by contextual factors at the time of the surveys, such as ongoing civil conflicts, locust infestations, and recurring droughts in the study areas. These combined shocks likely contributed to prolonged periods of undernutrition among U5Cs in the study area.

4.3. Finding of covariates effects

Gender Differences: Girls were less likely to transition into an undernourished state and more likely to recover from the overnourished state compared to boys. This finding is consistent with previous research [11,19,25,3032]. Cultural effects on gender perceptions may partly explain these differences. In the Ethiopian context, especially in rural communities, boys are often prioritized for what are considered “superior” feeding options. As a result, boys tend to receive complementary foods earlier than girls because breast milk is sometimes viewed as inferior. This early introduction of complementary foods—particularly in settings with poor hygiene—can increase the risk of infections. In addition, boys are often allowed more freedom to play outdoors, increasing their exposure to environmental pathogens. This greater mobility, while culturally supported, may raise the likelihood of infections that impair nutrient absorption and worsen malnutrition. Biological differences may also play a role. Research shows that male placentas are relatively smaller in proportion to birth weight compared to female ones, potentially limiting reserve capacity during periods of nutritional stress [33,34]. This makes male infants more vulnerable to food shortages. Additionally, girls may have stronger immune responses, particularly in their ability to produce antibodies, which offers them better protection against infection-related malnutrition [35]. The issue is more pronounced among households in lower socioeconomic groups and those facing higher levels of food insecurity. Older child age is positively associated with healthier nutritional status. This finding is consistent with previous studies [11,13,17,19,25,29,31,36,37].

Impact of Maternal Education: Children of mothers with formal education are less likely to transition from a healthy nutritional state to an undernourished state compared to children whose mothers had no formal education. This finding aligns with the results of previous studies [10,11,1719,25,31,32,3638]. This may be because educated mothers are generally more aware of child nutrition, diet diversity, hygiene practices, and appropriate childcare. As a result, they are better equipped to prevent malnutrition and promote healthy growth in their children.

Regional Differences: Children living in the Oromia region had less risk of transitioning from a healthy nutritional state to malnutrition compared to children in the Amhara region. This finding is consistent with previous studies [10,11,13,18]. The observed difference may be attributed to several contextual factors affecting the Amhara region during the data collection period. These include the civil conflict in northern Ethiopia, widespread locust infestations, and recurring droughts. The zones selected from Amhara were particularly affected by these overlapping shocks, which likely had a more severe impact on child nutritional status in Amhara compared to Oromia.

4.4. Strength and limitation of the study

The strengths of this study include the utilization of a larger dataset collected by an international organization. The sample includes rural households affected by food insecurity, which highlights areas in need of targeted interventions based on the study findings. The study utilized the CIAF as an indicator of child malnutrition, aggregating conventional indexes to provide a more comprehensive conclusion. In addition, the response exhibits a transient or dynamic nature. To estimate the varying risks of transition and their associated covariate effects, the study employed a continuous-time multistate Markov model (CTMSM). The application of a CTMSM in studying child nutritional dynamics is not only methodologically novel but also offers significant practical implications for public health planning and policy. First, unlike traditional models, in CTMSMs, the transition between nutritional states at any point in continuous time aligns with the real-world nature of child growth and health deterioration, which do not occur at fixed intervals. This allows for more accurate modeling of when and how children are likely to shift between nutritional states. Second, the model handles intermediate, multiple, and recurrent transitions, making it particularly useful in capturing the complexity of nutritional status over time. It enables practitioners to distinguish between temporary deterioration and persistent malnutrition. Third, the use of CTMSMs in settings affected by conflict, drought, or food insecurity (such as Ethiopia) provides a more nuanced understanding of how such environmental shocks influence both the direction and speed of nutritional transitions. Importantly, CTMSMs provide quantitative estimates such as transition probabilities, sojourn times, and state occupation probabilities, which can be used to forecast future malnutrition trends under different scenarios. For instance, health planners can simulate how nutritional outcomes might evolve under improved food access or the continuation of environmental shocks like drought. This makes the model a valuable decision-support tool for long-term planning. Furthermore, by identifying states where children are most likely to remain for prolonged periods (e.g., undernourished states), the model can help prioritize resource allocation to high-risk groups or regions. It can guide where to focus limited nutrition resources, such as supplementary feeding programs or health education campaigns, and when to intervene for maximum impact. While CTMSMs have been widely used in areas like oncology and infectious disease progression, their application in child malnutrition research is still emerging. Applying CTCSMs in the field of nutrition represents a methodological innovation; it could offer a robust, flexible framework for informing evidence-based policies and interventions in complex, resource-limited settings and dynamic nutrition issues. However, this study could not be considered conclusive for all households at the country level or even across all study areas. The sample was limited to households participating in the social safety net program, so the results may not fully represent the entire population. Nevertheless, this study serves as a useful starting point for national surveys and related studies at the country level, particularly for applying the CIAF and multi-state models. Due to convergence issues, only a limited number of explanatory variables were included in the analysis.

4.4. Policy Implications

The current study revealed that U5Cs in the study area had an increased risk of transitioning to an undernourished state than transitioning to any other state. In addition, three-fourths of observed children’s lifespans were spent in an undernourished state before transitioning to other states (Tables 5–6, and 7). Furthermore, being male, children under two years of age, mothers who had no education, and living in the Amhara region, particularly in the Waghimra and North Wollo zones, were significantly aggravating the risk of transitioning into malnutrition among U5C in the study area (Table 8). These results call for planning for policies of intervention on nutrition and dietary improvement strategies like poultry rearing, adopting and scaling up nutrition-sensitive agriculture, increasing productivity in the study areas, and setting other poverty reduction activities to improve nutrition and increase diet diversity in study areas beside PSNP [20] and planning for policies for adult education and training campaigns to boost knowledge and awareness of parents on cultural views of gender, childcare, and dietary diversity, especially fasting time among rural communities in the two regions and beyond. Unless interventions are implemented, it has a high impact on children’s health and development, like irreversible physical and cognitive damage and recent rapid weight loss-related risk of death [1,2,4].

5. Conclusions and recommendations

5.1. Conclusions

The prevalence of undernourishment was above the national average. It increased from 39.7% at baseline to 47.4% at endline. The findings of this study reveal that transitions in the CIAF among U5C are bidirectional, indicating that children can move between different nutritional states over time. However, children in the study areas demonstrated a higher likelihood of transitioning into undernutrition than recovering back to a nourished state. It was evidenced by the fact that children who were initially in a nourished state had the highest probability of becoming undernourished in the subsequent period. Moreover, three-fourths of the lifespan of children was spent in an undernourished state. The study also identified several risk and protective factors that influence the likelihood of both forward (deterioration) and backward (recovery) transitions in children’s CIAF status. Factors associated with an increased likelihood of transitioning to a nourished state include being female, being older than two years, and having a mother with formal education. These findings emphasize the importance of demographic and socioeconomic factors in shaping children’s nutritional trajectories.

5.2. Recommendations

Based on the current findings, the identified risk factors need broad, targeted interventions and policies by governmental and non-governmental organizations (GO/NGOs) in rural communities. GO/NGOs should develop special intervention strategies to mitigate the impacts of recurrent shocks such as droughts, locust infestations, and conflicts, aiming to shorten the duration children remain in a state of undernourishment. Furthermore, GO/NGOs or relevant stakeholders could implement targeted literacy campaigns, either community-based group sessions or mobile health interventions, that focus on enhancing maternal knowledge and skills related to improving child nutrition, dietary diversity, childcare, hygiene, and family planning. These campaigns should also aim to address and transform cultural beliefs and practices related to feeding habits, especially during fasting periods, and to challenge harmful cultural attitudes surrounding gender roles and their impact on family health and well-being. Utilizing health extension workers or other trained health and nutrition professionals can help effectively deliver these messages at the community level. In the long run, the Ministry of Health, the Ministry of Agriculture, and other relevant stakeholders should strengthen efforts to reduce poverty and improve the nutritional status of children, in addition to enhancing the existing safety net programs.

Supporting information

S1 Table. Prevalence of malnutrition among under-five children.

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Acknowledgments

We would like to express our heartfelt gratitude to Professor Amber Peterman/International Food Policy Research Institution, for helping us in providing “Strengthen PSNP4 Institutions and Resilience (SPIR) Development Food Security Activity (DFSA)” data set. We are thankful to Hawassa University for giving a chance to enroll in a PhD program in Applied Statistics.

Abbreviations

AIC

Akaike Information Criterion

BMI

Body Mass Index

CARE

Cooperate Assistance and Relief Everywhere

CIAF

Composite Index Anthropometry Failure

CI

Confidence Interval

Df

Degrees of Freedom

EPHI

Ethiopia Public Health Institute

GO

Governmental Organization

HAZ

Height for Age Standard |Score

HMM

Homogeneous Markov Models

HR

Hazard Ratio

IFPRI

International Food Policy Research Institute

IPV

Intimate Partner Violence

IRB

Institutional Review Board

ML

Maximum Likelihood

MLE

Maximum Likelihood Estimator

MSM

Multi State Models

CTMSM

Continuous-Time Markov Multistate Model

NHM

Non-Homogenous Model

NGO

None Governmental Organization

ORDA

Organization for Rehabilitation and Development in Amhara

PSNP

Productive Safety Net Program

RERC

Research Ethics Review Committee

SD

Standard Deviation

SDG

Sustainable development goal

SPSS

Statistical Package for Social Science

SSA

Sub-Saharan Africa

U5C

Under five children

UN

United Nations

UNICEF

United Nations Children’s Fund

WAZ

Weight for age standard score

WHO

World Health Organization

WHZ

Weight for height standard score

Data Availability

https://dataverse.harvard.edu/dataset.xhtml?persistentId=doi:10.7910/DVN/MBRDZ7.

Funding Statement

The author(s) received no specific funding for this work.

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1. The background section of the article needs to be modified. 1) Certain repetitive expressions should be simplified, such as the harm of undernutrition to children's growth and development. 2) Please simplifying and merging the first and second paragraphs into one paragraph in the background. 3) The website is not recommended to be shown in the third paragraph and can be used as a reference. 4) Please explain the statement 'The CIAF of children has a transient nature, which needs to be addressed using a multi-state model.' 5) I don't quite understand the theoretical and practical basis of this study. The author listed many studies in detail in the last section, but it seems that the connection to the theme of this study is not so direct. I personally strongly agree with the author's viewpoint of that more research is required to determine the effects of improved food diversity on children's nutritional status and to examine the intervention's consequences. However, this study did not directly address this issue. Please elaborate on the theoretical and practical basis that is more directly related to the purpose of this research. For example, regarding the topic of changes in nutritional status and influencing factors, what problems have been solved in previous research, what problems have not been solved, and what social significance does solving this problem have.

2. Methods section: 1) Please show some details about the process of sampling. 2) I am very confused about what the authors want to say by citing many references when describing the independent variables. Is the selection of independent variables based on these references, or are the definitions of these independent variables referenced from these literature sources? 3) Please describe the specific version of the statistical software, including R and SPSS. You should even specify which R package program was used.

3. The results section needs to be streamlined and reorganized. 1) There are so many tables and figs shown in the results section, so that the result appears to be without focus. Here are my some suggestions. Table 2 can be presented as an appendix and briefly described in the main text. The results section should present the basic characteristics of the sample at first to the readers. Table 4 and Table 5 can be merged into one table. Figures 3 and 4 provide too little information for readers. In other words, readers cannot interpret useful information from the Figures. Delete these two figs. If the authors think they are very important, they can be attached in the appendix. 2) The description of Figure 5 needs to be modified. What kind of result does Figure 5 want to express. 3) In the table 4, "Spouse or partner is a member of the hh?", what's meaning for 'hh'? 4) I'm not sure what kind of result the author wants to describe in Figure 6? Many of the results statement described are the author's speculations and should not be included in the results. The description of the results should be objective. 5) The results of Table 10 are difficult to be understood. For example, a child at normal only state has probability 0.71 being in under-nutrition in the next , and 0.29 being in over-failure, What is the probability of the state remaining unchanged? The author should provide the total probability of transitioning to the next state (not including unchanged state).

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Reviewer #1:  Thanks for the opportunity to review this manuscript.

The study analyzes transition rates, durations, and factors influencing the movement between different nutrition states using data from three survey rounds conducted by the International Food Policy Research Institute.

I suggest to put multi state among the keywords

Abstract

In the method section there is a minor grammatical issue in "The institute was performed the three consecutive follow-up surveys rounds." Consider revising to "The institute conducted three consecutive follow-up survey rounds."

The results section is detailed, but some of the findings could be presented more concisely. For example, the phrase "The results indicated that the probability being in the under-failure state in the next time for a healthy infant is higher (0.71)" could be revised to "The probability of a healthy infant transitioning to the under-failure state is high (0.71)."

Introduction

- The introduction is lengthy and could benefit from being more concise. Consider breaking it into shorter paragraphs to enhance readability and separating the background information from the study's objectives.

- There are repeated references to data from UNICEF, WHO, and other organizations. Condense the references to these organizations by summarizing the main points.

- The study's objective is introduced at the end of a very long paragraph. Consider moving it earlier for better context and rephrasing for simplicity.

Research method

- The detailed description of the IFPRI data collection process, including the virtual meeting dates and contacting procedures could be simplified

- The section describing the inclusion criteria and sample selection is clear but could be streamlined for readability.

- The description of the Multi-state Markov Model is technically dense. Consider breaking it into smaller paragraphs with simple explanations before diving into the complex equations.

- Under independent variables, provide a brief rationale for why each variable was selected. This will highlight their relevance to the study.

Equations

- The equations are not consistently formatted and use a mixture of symbols, parentheses, and notation that makes them hard to follow.

- Some symbols are not clearly defined before they are used. For instance, " ℎ ( )" appears in the equations without a prior explanation of what each component represents.

- The text mentions " ( )" as part of the multi-state model but does not define what " " specifically represents (e.g., the state of the child's nutritional status).

- The equation “(3)” is introduced, but there seems to be a mismatch between the equation numbering and the accompanying text, making it confusing to follow the derivation or steps.

- Each equation is presented without sufficient explanation of its purpose or the meaning of the symbols.

- When equations are introduced, provide a sentence that connects the mathematical expression to the research context (e.g., how the transition rates are used in analyzing children’s nutritional states).

Results

- I suggest to Move the interpretation of key findings (e.g., transition probabilities, covariate effects) into the discussion section, where you can explore the implications more thoroughly.

- The statement "Indexes in all rounds were much greater than the current national estimates" is valuable but would benefit from specifying what the national estimates are for comparison.

- For each table, provide a brief, clear interpretation of its data. For example,

- While the results provide detailed statistical outputs, there is a need to better link these findings back to the study's objectives. For example, the study aims to understand the transition rates, durations, and drivers of under-nutrition states. Explicitly stating how the results address these goals would clarify the narrative and emphasize the study's contributions.

Discussion

- Organize the discussion around key themes or findings, such as the prevalence of malnutrition, transition probabilities, and the influence of covariates. This structure will help readers easily grasp the main points

- the finding that female children are less likely to transition to under-nutrition is mentioned but not fully explained. Including possible reasons, such as differences in care or cultural practices, would provide more context and depth.

- The explanation of probabilities and transition rates is often overly technical. While it's important to be precise, translating these findings into real-world implications (e.g., the risk and duration of under-nutrition in children) would make the discussion more accessible and impactful.

- the statement, "This result is consistent with (Oduro et al., 2024) but it is in contrast with (Häkkänen et al., 2020; Hu et al., 2022; Moreira et al., 2019)" does not explain why there might be differences between these studies. Discussing possible reasons for these inconsistencies.

- The discussion section focuses heavily on the Composite Index of Anthropometric Failure (CIAF) rather than exploring the full potential and unique insights provided by the multi-state model. While the CIAF is an essential part of the study, the use of a multi-state Markov model is one of the study's most novel and complex aspects, and it deserves more thorough discussion.

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Fix grammatical error

Reviewer #2:  In the introduction section, it is explained that Ethiopia faces high burden of under-nutrition prevalence, ranking among 15 worst affected nations, perhaps short-term or long-term targets in that field in Ethiopia can be explained as a reference.

While the prevalence of malnutrition in Ethiopia is discussed, could comparisons to neighboring countries or regions add further perspective to the problem?

The methodology mentions anthropometric measurements as a key data source. How were these measurements standardized across different survey rounds, and what steps were taken to minimize measurement errors?

The study uses a continuous time Markov multistate model. Could the authors briefly describe why this model was chosen over other statistical models.

The results indicate that children under 5 spend 75% of their time in under-failure states. Could the authors elaborate on why recovery times are so long and suggest factors that may contribute to this? ¬

In the results section, it is explained that Girl had 1.824 times higher likelihood of recovering from an over failure state and less likely to go from a healthy state to an under-failure state compared to boy, perhaps the factors influencing this can be mentioned.

The authors can strengthen the practical recommendation section by elaborating on specific interventions for policymakers. For example, what types of maternal education programs would be most effective?

In the discussion section, it is explained that the child being live in Oromia region is less likely transit from healthy state to malnutrition as compared with child in Amhara region, perhaps the factors influencing this can be mentioned.

Considering the long recovery periods highlighted in the study, could the authors propose emergency interventions to prevent children from remaining in under-failure states for extended periods?

In the discussion section, related to the limitations mentioned, it is possible to explain recommendations for further research so as not to encounter similar limitations that can be in line with the recommendations from the research results in the conclusion section.

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Author response to Decision Letter 1


27 Mar 2025

Response to Reviewers Comments

Journal: PLOS ONE

Manuscript: Ref: Submission ID: PONE-D-24-37812

Title: Malnutrition of Under-Five Children in Amhara and Oromia Regions, Ethiopia: Continuous Time Markov Multi-State Modeling

Dafa Duge Wachifo, Dereje Danbe and Zeytu Gashaw Asfaw

Dear Editor,

We are grateful to you and the reviewers for taking the time to read our article and offer insightful criticism. The current version may be improved as a result of your insightful and important feedback. The authors have given the feedback great thought, and we have done our best to respond to each and every one. The entire section of the manuscripts has been read through, and a careful revision has been undertaken. We now anticipate a significant improvement in the overall writing quality and readability. Each reviewer issue has been thoroughly read and corrected, rewritten, or rephrased. Our point by point responses are enclosed below.

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� Author Response: we all agreed to make data available on acceptance of manuscript.

3. Your ethics statement should only appear in the Methods section of your manuscript. If your ethics statement is written in any section besides the Methods, please move it to the Methods section and delete it from any other section. Please ensure that your ethics statement is included in your manuscript, as the ethics statement entered into the online submission form will not be published alongside your manuscript.

� Author Response: Thank you very much for suggestion we did it as commented.

Additional Editor Comments

1. The background section of the article needs to be modified. 1) Certain repetitive expressions should be simplified, such as the harm of under-nutrition to children's growth and development.

Author Response: we tried to simplify them and have revised it by rewriting as presented page 2 in track change file.

2) Please simplifying and merging the first and second paragraphs into one paragraph in the background.

Author Response: very good suggestion, we have revised it by rewriting and merging paragraph 1, 2 and 3 and presented in page 2 & 3 of track change file.

3) The website is not recommended to be shown in the third paragraph and can be used as a reference.

Author Response: Good comment, we have improved it by substituting reference with meeting minute report of five UN agencies (Mitchell & Catherine, 2023).

4) Please explain the statement “The CIAF of children has a transient nature, which needs to be addressed using a multi-state model.”

� Author Response: we revised it by elaborating like: The CIAF of children reflects a transient or dynamic nature which needs to be analyzed using a multi-state model. That is, children’s nutritional status can change over time due to a variety of factors such as dietary changes or intervention, health condition, natural and manmade random shocks (drought, locust infestation, pandemic, and war so on). CIAF is composite measure that aggregates the different status of malnutrition (stunting, wasting, underweight and over-weight) and can be used to track the overall malnutrition. A child’s status can move from one CIAF state to another or recovery back healthy state, making it a dynamic. Thus multi-state model allows for understanding of how children might move between different states of CIAF ( under failure, healthy, over failure or remission to these states).

5) I don't quite understand the theoretical and practical basis of this study. The author listed many studies in detail in the last section, but it seems that the connection to the theme of this study is not so direct. I personally strongly agree with the author's viewpoint of that more research is required to determine the effects of improved food diversity on children's nutritional status and to examine the intervention's consequences. However, this study did not directly address this issue. Please elaborate on the theoretical and practical basis that is more directly related to the purpose of this research. For example, regarding the topic of changes in nutritional status and influencing factors, what problems have been solved in previous research, what problems have not been solved, and what social significance does solving this problem have.

• Authors Response: Thank you for comments and question asked for, we tried to revise based on question and presented at page 3 to 5 in track change file as “Previous studies have attempted to identify determinants of under-nutrition using anthropometric measures such as stunting, wasting or underweight separately, but they neither aggregate the indexes nor consider its transient or dynamic nature ( Mohammed & Asfaw, 2018; Amare et al., 2019; Fenta et al., 2020; Belay et al., 2023; Bitew et al., 2021; Raru et al., 2022). Comparing stunting, under-weight, and wasting separately cannot provide a single conclusion on the overall burden of malnutrition among children. Composite index anthropometry failure (CIAF) is preferable to address malnutrition, as WHO criteria and Waterlow's classification which do not discriminate between distinct conditions of indices of malnutrition, (Kuiti & Bose, 2018). The studies conducted by (Fenta et al., 2021a; Kassie & Workie, 2020) in Ethiopia tried to indentify determinants of under-nutrition using composite index; but they did not consider dynamic characteristics of the response nor include overnutrition in their composite index. More recently, Oduro et al., (2024) had studied dynamic characteristics of stunting by using longitudinal data at Nairobi, Kenya and applied multi-state model but they did not include other indicators of malnutrition. As to authors’ knowledge, the studies conducted so far have not fully integrated CIAF in a way that it includes neither under-nutrition and over-nutrition components, nor the dynamic nature of the malnutrition.

2. Methods section: 1) Please show some details about the process of sampling.

Author Response: very good suggestion, were revised as “initially, 196 kebeles from Amhara (115 kebeles) and Oromia (81 kebeles) were selected from 15 productive safety net program (PSNP) implemented districts. However, four kebeles (3 from Amhara and 1 from Omromia) regions were dropped due to two kebeles had no PSNP clients and two kebeles were experienced ongoing civil unrest. Thus, the evaluation sample comprises 192 kebeles. From each kebele 18 households were randomly sampled and final samples those satisfied inclusion criteria were 3,314 households. The inclusion criteria for the sample were that households had to be a PSNP client household, had to have at least one child aged 0–35 months at baseline to have child with under-five age after 2 years follow up, and had to have the mother or primary female caregiver of the 0–35-month-old child as a member of the household.”

2) I am very confused about what the authors want to say by citing many references when describing the independent variables. Is the selection of independent variables based on these references, or are the definitions of these independent variables referenced from these literature sources?

Author Response: NO. Definitely right question and comment; it was technical error of author we revised it by removing all references listed there.

3) “Please describe the specific version of the statistical software, including R and SPSS. You should even specify which R package program was used.”

� Author Response: very good suggestions, we revised it like: Data clearance and analysis were performed by SPSS version 27, and R version 4.3.2 with msm 1.7.1. The standard scores of all anthropometric measure indexes were computed by zscorer 0.3.1 packages.

6) The results section needs to be streamlined and reorganized. 1) There are so many tables and figs shown in the results section, so that the result appears to be without focus. Here are my some suggestions. Table 2 can be presented as an appendix and briefly described in the main text. The results section should present the basic characteristics of the sample at first to the readers. Table 4 and Table 5 can be merged into one table. Figures 3 and 4 provide too little information for readers. In other words, readers cannot interpret useful information from the Figures. Delete these two figs. If the authors think they are very important, they can be attached in the appendix.

� Author response: We accept all editor suggestions as they are because we are agree to minimize number of Tables and figures from main body of manuscript without sacrificing much information. Since, Tables 4 & 5 are revealed the same output but author had separated it in to two as Table 4 and Table 5 to avoid long Table which is appearing more than one page. So, it can be merged in to one as suggested. Again Figures 3-5 indicate that the movements of children’s nutritional status (CIAF) among 3 specific states. They showed that there were transitions from each state or transitions are bidirectional. That is specific child can transits forward or backward among any of 3 states during study period. Their difference was number of children in process. For instance, in Figure 3, we had plotted transitions of sampled children all together, in Figure 4, we had plotted male and female separately and in Figure 5, we had plotted 4 unique selected children. Therefore, if we delete Figures 3 & 4 and retain Figure 5 as suggested by editor; It is very good insight, here we will benefit with précising the idea. Hence, all suggestions were accepted and improved as shown in track change file from page 9-14.

2) The description of Figure 5 needs to be modified. What kind of result does Figure 5 want to express.

� Authors Response: We have modified the interpretation of Figure 5 and presented in track change file page 14. It shows the same things as Figure 3 & 4 but transitions in it were more clear and simple to visualize since sample is small. It indicates that the transition of nutritional status (CIAF) of children or its dynamic characteristics that is it changes as time passes. For example, a child in normal only state at time t can transit to either under failure state or over failure state or stay at normal only state at t+1.

3) In the table 4, "Spouse or partner is a member of the hh?", what's meaning for 'hh'?

� Authors Response: In Table 4, “Spouse or partner is a member of the hh?” question is right we accepted comment and modified it as “Spouse or partner is a member of the household (hh)?”

4) I'm not sure what kind of result the author wants to describe in Figure 6? Many of the results statement described are the author's speculations and should not be included in the results. The description of the results should be objective.

� Authors Response: We have modified the description of Figure 6 as it, revealed that whether the multi-state model is good fit to the data or not. Based on the result the estimated prevalence rate and observed prevalence approximately equal. Hence, model is good fit to the data.

5) The results of Table 10 are difficult to be understood. For example, a child at normal only state has probability 0.71 being in under-nutrition in the next , and 0.29 being in over-failure, What is the probability of the state remaining unchanged? The author should provide the total probability of transitioning to the next state (not including unchanged state).

� Authors Response: Table 10, “….The author should provide the total probability of transitioning to the next state (not including unchanged state).” Really, we appreciate editor’s view and question on probability of remain unchanged in the same state. But the theoretical basis for probability in next state is different from probability of transition. Its aim is to answer the question that, if movement of subject/object is must then where he/she is more probable to move? In our case we know that specific child had transition from health state then we want to estimate how more probable he/she transit to either of states. That is healthy child is more probable (0.71) to transit under failure state than over failure state.

Reviewer #1

Thanks for the opportunity to review this manuscript. The study analyzes transition rates, durations, and factors influencing the movement between different nutrition states using data from three survey rounds conducted by the International Food Policy Research Institute. I suggest to put multi state among the keywords

1. Abstract: In the method section there is a minor grammatical issue in "The institute was performed the three consecutive follow-up surveys rounds." Consider revising to "The institute conducted three consecutive follow-up survey rounds." The results section is detailed, but some of the findings could be presented more concisely. For example, the phrase "The results indicated that the probability being in the under-failure state in the next time for a healthy infant is higher (0.71)" could be revised to "The probability of a healthy infant transitioning to the under-failure state is high (0.71). "

Author Response: Thank you very much for your valuable suggestions, we tried to modify each of them. At the beginning we included “Multi-State Model” among key words but latter author excluded after reading general guideline for key words which suggests that not to include words in the title. The guideline that I have read may be view of scholars so; I am happy to include “Multi-State Model” in key words and also we have revised suggestions to improve the abstract.

2. Introduction: The introduction is lengthy and could benefit from being more concise. Consider breaking it into shorter paragraphs to enhance readability and separating the background information from the study's Objectives: There are repeated references to data from UNICEF, WHO, and other organizations. Condense the references to these organizations by summarizing the main points.

- The study's objective is introduced at the end of a very long paragraph. Consider moving it earlier for better context and rephrasing for simplicity.

• Author Response: very good suggestions; we tried to improve them by separating background information into paragraph1 and objectives into paragraph2 at same time tried to minimize reference repletion by summarizing points.

3. Research method: 1) The detailed description of the IFPRI data collection process, including the virtual meeting dates and contacting procedures could be simplified

Author Response: thank you for comment, we revised by moving statement in to last part of next paragraph at page 6 &7 in track change file and simplified as: “By presenting brief objectives of the current study, the authors contacted and requested IFPRI to get access of the data set. Finally, the data set was accessed on May 29, 2023.”

2) The

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Decision Letter 1

Manzur Kader

26 Jun 2025

Dear Dr. Wachifo,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

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Please address the issues further raised by the reviewer. Moreover, here are some other key areas where the manuscript can be improved to enhance its scientific rigor, clarity, and impact:

1. Abstract Clarity and Conciseness

  • Issue : The abstract is information-dense and includes some awkward phrasing (e.g., “under failure,” “over failure”), which may be unclear to non-specialists.

  • Suggestion :

  • Avoid jargon like “under failure” and “over failure.” Consider using

  • Undernutrition or Anthropometric failure, instead of Under failure

  • Overnutrition instead of Over failure

  • Anthropometric failure (for CIAF) instead of Under failure

  • Nourished / No anthropometric failure instead of Normal only

    Example Rewrite for Clarity:

  • Original :

  • “Children in the under failure group had higher transition probabilities.”

  • Revised :

  • “Children in the undernutrition group (i.e., those with anthropometric failure) had higher transition probabilities.”

  • Original :

  • “Over failure children had a lower likelihood of reverting to a normal state.”

  • Revised :

  • “Overnourished children (classified as overweight) had a lower likelihood of reverting to a normal nutritional status.”

  • Streamline sentences. E.g., “The probability of a healthy infant transitioning to the under-failure state is high (0.71)” can be simplified to “Healthy infants had a 71% probability of becoming undernourished.

 2. Theoretical and Practical Framing

  • Issue : The rationale for using the Composite Index of Anthropometric Failure (CIAF) and the Markov model is presented, but the articulation of the research gap is buried in repetition and general statements.

  • Suggestion : Integrate or refer the following relevant articles regarding CIAF

I.Chowdhury M, Billah B, Rashid M, Almroth M, Kader M. Prevalence and factors associated with severe undernutrition among under-5 children in Bangladesh, Pakistan, and Nepal: A comparative study using multilevel analysis. Scientific Reports 2023 Jun 22;13(1):10183.

II.Anik AI, Chowdhury MR, Khan M, Khan TA, Perera NK, Kader M. Urban-rural differences in the risk factors of severe under-5 child undernutrition based on CISAF in Bangladesh. BMC Public Health. 2021 Nov 23;21(1):2147

  • Create a sharper distinction between what is already known and what is novel in this study.

  • Explicitly state (if so) : “To our knowledge, no previous study in Ethiopia has used a continuous-time multistate Markov model to analyze both under- and over-nutrition transitions among under-five children using CIAF.”

 3. Methods Section

  • Strength : Ethical procedures and data source are well described.

  • Improvement needed :

  • Clarify the logic behind grouping CIAF categories into three states (UF, NO, OF). If possible consider using a flow diagram for clarity.

  • Equations need better formatting and definition. Symbols such as ℎ, , Q(t), etc., should be defined immediately when first introduced.

  • The transition matrix and equations (3) and (5) lack intuitive explanation. A sentence like “This represents the instantaneous rate at which a child leaves state h and enters state j” can aid understanding.

4. Results Presentation

  • The results are numerically rich but difficult to digest due to too many tables and minimal synthesis as suggested by reviewers

 5. Interpretation and Discussion

  • Issue : Discussion is technically sound but lacks integration of findings into a real-world context .

  • Suggestions :

  • Use subsections to structure discussion around key findings: e.g., “Gender Differences,” “Duration in Malnutrition States,” “Impact of Maternal Education” .

  • When discussing girls’ lower transition to undernutrition, tie findings to Ethiopian sociocultural contexts more carefully — some statements currently seem speculative (e.g., boys are prioritized but receive riskier food).

  • Add more emphasis on the novelty of using a Markov model and its practical implications (e.g., forecasting malnutrition trends, guiding resource allocation).

6. Language and Grammar

  • Issue : Recurrent grammar and syntax errors, such as:

“Girl had 1.824 times higher likelihood…” → should be “Girls had a 1.824 times higher likelihood…”

“Child who was older than two years of age had more likelihood…” → should be “Children older than two years were more likely…”

Suggestion : A professional language edit is strongly recommended before final acceptance.

 7. Conclusion and Policy Implication

  • Issue : The conclusion is assertive but lacks specificity.

  • Suggestion :

  • Offer specific recommendations. Instead of “enhance adult and maternal education programs,” state what kind: “Implement targeted nutrition literacy campaigns for mothers through health extension workers.”

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Reviewer #3: Yes

Reviewer #4: Yes

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Reviewer #4: Yes

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Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

Reviewer #4: Yes

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Reviewer #3: Yes

Reviewer #4: Yes

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Reviewer #2: I think the author did not answer some of the questions i asked, including :

1. In the introduction section, it is explained that Ethiopia faces high burden of under-nutrition prevalence, ranking among 15 worst affected nations, perhaps short-term or long-term targets in that field in Ethiopia can be explained as a reference. In this question the author did not answer what i asked.

While the prevalence of malnutrition in Ethiopia is discussed, could comparisons to neighboring countries or regions add further perspective to the problem?

2. The authors can strengthen the practical recommendation section by elaborating on specific interventions for policymakers. For example, what types of maternal education programs would be most effective? in this question i asked the author to give an example of the concrete program

Reviewer #3: Thank you for the opportunity to review the revision of this manuscript. The revised version focuses on addressing critical public health challenges related to child undernutrition in Ethiopia using a continuous-time Markov multistate model. This methodological choice, combined with longitudinal data, contributes meaningfully to understanding the dynamic nature of child nutritional status transitions and the broader implications for targeted interventions.

The respected reviewer has provided thoughtful and insightful feedback, and the author has responded in a structured and reflective manner. Particularly commendable is the reviewer’s question regarding the rationale behind choosing the multistate model, which allowed the author to clarify its advantage over other statistical approaches in capturing intermediate events. Another notable point is the reviewer’s comment on gender-based differences in recovery, which encouraged the author to delve into cultural and biological factors—this reflects a strong level of critical engagement by the reviewer and a well-appreciated elaboration by the author.

While the author has addressed the reviewer’s comments diligently, a couple of aspects could be further considered. For instance, the response to the suggestion on regional comparisons could be improved with quantitative data comparing Ethiopia’s malnutrition rates to neighboring countries like Kenya or Sudan to offer clearer regional context. Additionally, while the discussion around interventions was improved, specific examples of maternal education program formats (e.g., community-based group sessions vs. mobile health interventions) would make the recommendations more actionable.

Overall, the author’s responsiveness and the reviewer’s depth of analysis are both commendable. The paper has improved significantly in clarity and relevance.

Reviewer #4: The manuscript is clearly written and the study is well conceived and methodologically rigorous, offering an important addition to the area of child nutrition by using continuous-time multi-state Markov model rarely used in this area. The application of CIAF in measuring these dynamic nutritional shifts among children under the age of five in Ethiopia is particularly novel and adds practical value to the study. The authors are very responsive to reviewer comments, and much of the writing has been improved for clarity, justification and organization in key sections. Ethical approval is well recorded and data management seems to be appropriate and transparent. If published, this study will provide reasonable information for policy makers to act for malnutrition in vulnerable groups.

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Author response to Decision Letter 2


28 Jul 2025

Response to Reviewers Comments

Journal: PLOS ONE

Manuscript: Ref: Submission ID: PONE-D-24-37812

Title: Malnutrition of Under-Five Children in Amhara and Oromia Regions, Ethiopia: Continuous Time Markov Multi-State Modeling

Dafa Duge Wachifo, Dereje Danbe and Zeytu Gashaw Asfaw

Dear Editor,

We are grateful to you and the reviewers for taking the time to read our article and offer insightful criticism. The current version may be improved as a result of your insightful and important feedback. The authors have given the feedback great thought, and we have done our best to respond to each and every one. The entire section of the manuscripts has been read through, and a careful revision has been undertaken. We now anticipate a significant improvement in the overall writing quality and readability. Each reviewer issue has been thoroughly read and corrected, rewritten, or rephrased. Our point by point responses are enclosed below.

ACADEMIC EDITOR:

1. Abstract Clarity and Conciseness

• Issue: The abstract is information-dense and includes some awkward phrasing (e.g., “under failure,” “over failure”), which may be unclear to non-specialists.

• Suggestion:

• Avoid jargon like “under failure” and “over failure.” Consider using

• Undernutrition or Anthropometric failure, instead of Under failure

• Overnutrition instead of Over failure

• Anthropometric failure (for CIAF) instead of Under failure

• Nourished / No anthropometric failure instead of Normal only

Example Rewrite for Clarity:

• Original:

• “Children in the under failure group had higher transition probabilities.”

• Revised:

• “Children in the undernutrition group (i.e., those with anthropometric failure) had higher transition probabilities.”

• Original:

• “Over failure children had a lower likelihood of reverting to a normal state.”

• Revised:

• “Overnourished children (classified as overweight) had a lower likelihood of reverting to a normal nutritional status.”

• Streamline sentences. E.g., “The probability of a healthy infant transitioning to the under-failure state is high (0.71)” can be simplified to “Healthy infants had a 71% probability of becoming undernourished.

Authors Response: Thank you very much for your kind suggestions and insightful comments on the abstract. We have accepted all of them and made the improvements accordingly. Both the track changes and clean versions of the revised file are attached.

2. Theoretical and Practical Framing

• Issue: The rationale for using the Composite Index of Anthropometric Failure (CIAF) and the Markov model is presented, but the articulation of the research gap is buried in repetition and general statements.

• Suggestion: Integrate or refer the following relevant articles regarding CIAF

I.Chowdhury M, Billah B, Rashid M, Almroth M, Kader M. Prevalence and factors associated with severe undernutrition among under-5 children in Bangladesh, Pakistan, and Nepal: A comparative study using multilevel analysis. Scientific Reports 2023 Jun 22;13(1):10183.

II.Anik AI, Chowdhury MR, Khan M, Khan TA, Perera NK, Kader M. Urban-rural differences in the risk factors of severe under-5 child undernutrition based on CISAF in Bangladesh. BMC Public Health. 2021 Nov 23;21(1):2147

• Create a sharper distinction between what is already known and what is novel in this study.

• Explicitly state (if so) : “To our knowledge, no previous study in Ethiopia has used a continuous-time multistate Markov model to analyze both under- and over-nutrition transitions among under-five children using CIAF.”

Authors Response: Thank you very much for your valuable suggestions and comments to improve our manuscript. We have carefully considered and accepted your recommendations. The suggested articles provided us with insightful perspectives, which we used to enhance the quality of our writing and address the identified issues. All revisions have been made and are reflected in both the track-changed (on page 3 at last paragraph) and clean versions of the manuscript.

3. Methods Section

• Strength: Ethical procedures and data source are well described.

• Improvement needed:

• Clarify the logic behind grouping CIAF categories into three states (UF, NO, OF). If possible consider using a flow diagram for clarity.

Authors Response: Thank very much again for comment on the logic behind grouping CIAF in to three. The decision to classify children's nutritional status into three broad categories—under-nourished, over-nourished, and nourished (normal)—was guided by the following considerations:

1) Simplification Based on Nutritional Status:

Children's nutritional status can be broadly categorized as normal, under-nourished, or o ver-nourished. In our classification, a child was considered under-nourished or over-nourished if he/she exhibited at least one anthropometric indicator (stunting, wasting, or underweight). That is the corresponding z-score <-2SD and Z-score > +1 SD for over-nutrition. Children not falling into either extreme were considered to have a normal or nourished status.

2) Avoiding Complex and Ambiguous Subcategories:

While it is theoretically possible to define more granular categories—such as severely under-nourished, moderately under-nourished, overweight, and obese—this approach introduces several practical challenges. Many children present with overlapping anthropometric failures (e.g., stunting and overweight; wasting and underweight; stunting, wasting, and underweight simultaneously), making it difficult to assign them unambiguously to discrete severity-based categories. Therefore, a more aggregated approach was adopted to reduce complexity and ambiguity.

3) Modeling Requirements – Application of Multistate Models:

The use of a continuous-time multistate Markov model to analyze the transitions between nutritional states requires a well-defined and manageable number of states. Reducing the classification into three distinct categories facilitates the modeling of dynamic changes in nutritional status over time, ensuring robustness and interpretability of the model outcomes. Graphically, these models are illustrated using diagrams with boxes representing the CIAF states and with arrows presenting possible transition between the states. Here, it was considered the 3-states for child CIAF transition model depicted in Figure 2, and assumed that subjects would be in any given state at time t equal to zero (t=0). The 6 possible transitions were identified by arrows for child CIAF model: 1) from “under-nourished” to “nourished”; 2) from “nourished” to “under-nourished”; 3) from “nourished” to “over-nourished” 4) from “over-nourished to “nourished”, 5) from “under-nourished” to “over-nourished” and 6) from “over-nourished” to “under-nourished”. The child in normal or healthy state at time t can move either to under-nourished (U) state or move to over-nourished (O) state or stay at the same state after time t+1.

Fig 1: Revised and revisited CIAF with nine sections (Kuiti & Bose, 2018)

A=normal status, B=wasting only, C=wasting and underweight, D=stunting + wasting + underweight, E=Stunting + underweight, F=stunting only, Y=underweight only,

G=Stunting + Over-weight, H = Over-weight only

Nourished (N) = A

Under-nourished (U) = B +C + D + E + F+Y

Over-nourished (O) = G + H

• Equations need better formatting and definition. Symbols such as ℎ, Q(t), etc., should be defined immediately when first introduced.

• The transition matrix and equations (3) and (5) lack intuitive explanation. A sentence like “This represents the instantaneous rate at which a child leaves state h and enters state j” can aid understanding.

Authors Response: Thank you very much for your valuable suggestions and comments to improve our manuscript. We have carefully considered all the feedback, accepted the suggestions, and revised the manuscript accordingly as presented in both tack change and clean file at page 10.

4. Results Presentation

• The results are numerically rich but difficult to digest due to too many tables and minimal synthesis as suggested by reviewers

Authors Response: Thank you again for your insightful review. We acknowledge that the MSM output generates numerous important tables. In response to the reviewers’ suggestions, we carefully reviewed all tables and made a concerted effort to reduce redundancy. We merged several tables and moved others to the supplementary material where appropriate during first review. However, we are concerned that further reductions might compromise the clarity and completeness of the findings. We believe the current balance maintains the integrity of the results while improving readability.

5. Interpretation and Discussion

• Issue: Discussion is technically sound but lacks integration of findings into a real-world context.

• Suggestions:

o Use subsections to structure discussion around key findings: e.g., “Gender Differences,” “Duration in Malnutrition States,” “Impact of Maternal Education”.

o When discussing girls’ lower transition to undernutrition, tie findings to Ethiopian sociocultural contexts more carefully — some statements currently seem speculative (e.g., boys are prioritized but receive riskier food).

o Add more emphasis on the novelty of using a Markov model and its practical implications (e.g., forecasting malnutrition trends, guiding resource allocation).

Authors Response: Thank you once again for your valuable suggestions. Your comments provided us with an opportunity to broaden our perspective and significantly improve the manuscript. We have carefully considered all your suggestions and revised the manuscript accordingly. Both a tracked-changes version and a clean version of the revised manuscript have been submitted. Notably, we have made substantial revisions to clarify and strengthen the novelty of the MSM at last part of discussion, strength and limitation part the study.

6. Language and Grammar

• Issue: Recurrent grammar and syntax errors, such as:

“Girl had 1.824 times higher likelihood…” → should be “Girls had a 1.824 times higher likelihood…”

“Child who was older than two years of age had more likelihood…” → should be “Children older than two years were more likely…”

Suggestion: A professional language edit is strongly recommended before final acceptance.

Authors Response: Thank you very much for your valuable suggestions and comments to improve our manuscript. We have accepted all the suggestions and made revisions accordingly. We also carefully reviewed the manuscript to correct grammatical errors to the best of our ability.

7. Conclusion and Policy Implication

• Issue: The conclusion is assertive but lacks specificity.

• Suggestion:

o Offer specific recommendations. Instead of “enhance adult and maternal education programs,” state what kind: “Implement targeted nutrition literacy campaigns for mothers through health extension workers.”

Authors Response: Thank you very much for valuable suggestions. We carefully include all the suggestions and tried to rewrite recommendation section like: GO/NGO/relevant stakeholders could implement targeted literacy campaigns focus on enhancing maternal knowledge and skills related to improve child nutrition, dietary diversity, childcare, hygiene, and family planning. These campaigns should also aim to address and transform cultural beliefs and practices related to feeding habits, especially during fasting periods and to challenge harmful cultural attitudes surrounding gender roles and their impact on family health and well-being. Utilizing health extension workers or other trained health and nutrition professionals can help effectively deliver these messages at the community level. In the long run, Ministry of Health, Ministry of Agriculture, and other relevant stakeholders should strengthen efforts to reduce poverty and improve the nutritional status of children, in addition to enhancing the existing safety net programs.

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Decision Letter 2

Manzur Kader

4 Aug 2025

Malnutrition among Under-five Children in Amhara and Oromia Regions, Ethiopia: Continuous Time Markov Multi-State Modeling

PONE-D-24-37812R2

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PONE-D-24-37812R2

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Associated Data

    This section collects any data citations, data availability statements, or supplementary materials included in this article.

    Supplementary Materials

    S1 Table. Prevalence of malnutrition among under-five children.

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    Data Availability Statement

    https://dataverse.harvard.edu/dataset.xhtml?persistentId=doi:10.7910/DVN/MBRDZ7.


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