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. 2025 Nov 7;20(11):e0335712. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0335712

Development of the core outcome set for herbal medicine treatment of lumbar disc herniation (COS-HM-LDH): A study protocol for a systematic review and a delphi survey

Soo-Dam Kim 1, Changsop Yang 1, Mi Mi Ko 1, Kyung-Min Shin 1, Sungha Kim 1,*, Myeong Soo Lee 1,*
Editor: Richa Gupta2
PMCID: PMC12594413  PMID: 41202033

Abstract

Background

Lumbar Disc Herniation (LDH) is a common global musculoskeletal disorder that causes a significant socioeconomic burden. Nonsurgical interventions are the primary treatment; however, herbal medicines (HM) are gaining traction for their efficacy in managing LDH. Conversely, their integration into clinical settings is limited owing to inconsistencies in clinical trial methodologies, mainly stemming from a lack of standardized outcome measures. Our research, highlighting this gap, sought to develop a Core Outcome Set (COS) to consistently assess HM treatments for LDH in Korean medicine (KM) clinical institutions using a consensus-driven, multi-phased approach.

Methods

The development of the COS-HM-LDH involves four main phases: (1) a project management group (PMG) conducts a systematic review to curate an initial list of outcomes; (2) several Delphi survey rounds are administered to a selected panel of experts to validate and refine these outcomes; (3) KM clinicians are involved in a subsequent Delphi survey to further refine the outcomes; and (4) a final consensus meeting finalizes the COS.

Discussion

The lack of a standardized COS for HM treatment of LDH in KM introduces biases and discrepancies in clinical practice. The proposed COS aims to provide a unified framework, given the challenges faced in clinical trials, especially in KM institutions. This initiative is expected to strengthen evidence quality, foster greater trust, and facilitate wider clinical implementation of HM treatment for LDH.

Trial registration

The Core Outcome Measures in Effectiveness Trials (COMET) Initiative: https://www.comet-initiative.org/Studies/Details/2909

Background

Lumbar disc herniation (LDH), a prevalent medical condition globally, involves displacing the spinal disc’s inner gelatinous core, known as the nucleus pulposus, through its protective fibrous ring, predominantly in the posterolateral region [1]. Approximately 95% of disc herniations in the lumbar area occur at L4-L5 or L5-S1 [2,3]. Notably, such protrusions often compress adjacent nerve roots, causing typical clinical manifestations, such as low back pain, sciatica, muscle weakness, sensory deficits, and signs of nerve root tension, with symptoms that often radiate down the legs [3–6]. LDH affects millions globally, with an estimated 1–3% of the population experiencing symptoms [7]. This condition is most prevalent among those aged 30–50 years, and men are twice as likely to be affected as women [6,7]. According to Jung et al. (2020), South Korea reported 478,697 cases in 2016, approximately 918.2 patients per 100,000 individuals [8]. The socioeconomic implications of LDH extend beyond the health of individuals and represent a significant burden on healthcare systems and economies [9]. Direct medical costs, lost workdays and reduced productivity highlight LDH’s financial and societal toll [10,11].

Nonsurgical treatments for LDH, such as physical therapy, pain management using Non-Steroidal Anti-Inflammatory Drugs (NSAIDs), and lifestyle modifications, are typically employed as primary first-line treatments for LDH. Surgical interventions are considered when conservative treatments fail [12–14]. Herbal medicine (HM) is increasingly considered an alternative to conservative treatment. Notably, numerous studies have suggested that herbal therapies can relieve pain, reduce inflammation, and enhance the overall well-being of patients with LDH [15–19]. According to meta-analyses, patients treated with HM exhibited significant improvements in the Japanese Orthopedic Association (JOA) scores and decreased scores on the Visual Analog Scale (VAS) compared with a control group [20,21]. Furthermore, another meta-analysis highlighted the superior clinical efficacy of Shentong Zhuyu Decoction over conventional treatments in managing LDH, showing significant improvements in pain scores and a reduced incidence of adverse events [22].

However, although herbal treatments for LDH show potential, their broader acceptance and integration into clinical settings are hindered by methodological inconsistencies in clinical trials [19–22]. Consequently, this challenge stems primarily from a need for standardized measurements [23]. Notably, different studies have used diverse endpoints, methodologies, and assessment scales, resulting in a fragmented understanding of the efficacy of herbal treatments. These disparities introduce data inconsistency and potential reporting bias, leading to patient irrelevance and a lack of consensus on a standardized outcome [24]. Therefore, such inconsistencies complicate the decision-making process of healthcare practitioners and raise uncertainties regarding patients exploring alternative or complementary treatment options.

To address these concerns, a recent nationwide web-based survey of 500 LDH patients in South Korea investigated their real-world symptoms and priorities [25]. The most common symptoms reported were leg numbness (87.0%) and back pain (81.2%), while the most common disabilities were discomfort in sitting (64.6%) and lifting (63.6%). Back pain (48.4%) was identified as the highest priority symptom for improvement. Importantly, a majority of patients expressed preference for improvement in disability over pain (55.8%), a stable effect over a rapid effect (78.2%), and safety over treatment efficacy (56.4%). Safety (25.8%) and cost (22.2%) were also recognized as important treatment factors. Based on these findings, we aim to identify the essential outcome measures that should be prioritized in LDH management.

A core outcome set (COS) represents a consensus-driven selection of crucial outcome measures that stakeholders believe should be consistently reported in clinical trials for a given medical field [24,26]. The Core Outcome Measures in Effectiveness Trials (COMET) Initiative emphasizes the importance of standardized and consistent trial reporting to ensure robust research comparisons [26]. Using a systematic and consensus-driven approach, our research seeks to identify the essential outcomes and bolster the credibility of HM for LDH management. This effort addresses the urgent need for a standardized outcome model that can be used in both clinical settings and research. Our goal is to develop consistent evaluation criteria to assess the effectiveness of herbal treatments for LDH in both Korean Medicine (KM) clinical institutions and clinical trials.

Methods

In developing the COS-HM-LDH, we adhere to the recommendations of the Core Outcome Set-STAndards for Development (COS-STAD) and the Core Outcome Set-STAndards for Reporting (COS-STAR) [27,28]. The methodology includes four strategic phases: (1) establishment of a project management group (PMG) that undertakes a systematic review, from which an initial list of outcomes is curated and subsequently refined; (2) conducting a series of Delphi survey rounds with a chosen panel of experts to ensure the validity and relevance of the outcomes; (3) engaging KM clinicians in another Delphi survey to further refine the identified outcomes; and (4) undertaking a consensus meeting to finalize the COS. The structure and phases of this study are shown in Fig 1. This research started in September 2023 and is registered in the COMET database under the registration No. 2909, which can be accessed at https://www.comet-initiative.org/Studies/Details/2909. The recruitment of participants for the Delphi survey began in July 2024.

Fig 1. Flow chart of study design.

Fig 1

KM: Korean medicine; COS: core outcome set.

Phase 1: project management group and systematic review

Project management group.

We establish a PMG comprising six researchers from the Korea Institute of Oriental Medicine to oversee and conduct a comprehensive systematic review, extract outcomes/effect modifiers (EMs), and eliminate duplicate findings. The PMG includes researchers, physicians, statisticians, and methodologists. Having statisticians in the PMG ensures rigorous data analysis and interpretation.

Systematic review.

A systematic review comprehensively explores and catalogs the outcomes pertinent to LDH in line with the recommendations of the COMET initiative [29]. Notably, studies published in Korean (OASIS, Science-On) and English (PubMed, CENTRAL) databases are considered for all study types. The detailed search strategy for the English databases can be found in the S1 Table.

We focus on patients diagnosed with LDH who are treated with HM, either as a standalone treatment or in combination with other treatments. Inclusion is based on clear LDH diagnostic criteria, and all patients are considered, irrespective of sex, age, or ethnicity. Studies are excluded if they primarily investigate outcomes of complications associated with LDH, such as diseases caused by LDH, or involve patients with spinal stenosis or other severe spinal conditions. If a study focused more on secondary LDH conditions than on primary LDH, its complete text will be scrutinized to evaluate its eligibility for inclusion.

Two independent researchers evaluate the titles and abstracts to determine the relevance of each study. Using Microsoft Excel, data such as author(s), publication year, patient demographics, study type, intervention, comparator, outcomes, treatment duration, follow-up length, and outcome measurement methods are extracted from each study. Any extraction discrepancies or study evaluation disagreements are resolved through discussion or consultation with a third expert. Duplicate studies and those not providing comprehensive LDH outcomes are excluded. Similar outcomes are recorded only once and thoughtfully combined and condensed to maintain the content’s integrity.

In addition, previously published books and articles, such as “Korean medicine clinical practice guideline for lumbar herniated intervertebral disc” and other relevant sources [30,31], are reviewed to extract the recommended outcomes and EMs for LDH.

Development of initial list of COS.

After reviewing the collected outcomes and EMs, the PMG refines and finalizes a list consistent with the objectives of this COS. All outcomes extracted from the systematic review are included in the initial list to ensure comprehensiveness. For each outcome, the number of studies in which it was reported will also be presented, thereby providing information on the frequency and strength of use in previous research. In addition, to reflect patients’ perspectives, findings from the previously conducted nationwide survey of LDH patients are incorporated, highlighting patient-prioritized symptoms and treatment needs [25]. These combined sources form the basis of the initial COS questionnaire, which will be used for the first Delphi process.

Phase 2: expert panel and delphi survey

The Delphi method, an iterative consensus technique, gathers expert opinions and streamlines the outcomes into a prioritized list. It comprises successive surveys conducted anonymously by a diverse panel, ensuring that each participant’s perspective is vital [32].

Expert panel.

There are no specific guidelines for determining the number of participants in a Delphi panel [33]. However, it is generally accepted that larger sample sizes in Delphi studies enhance reliability [34]. Therefore, we aim to include as many panelists as feasible, drawing on the sample sizes from previous COS studies [35–37]. We convene a comprehensive panel of stakeholders, targeting an expected number of 15–30 participants. This panel includes researchers from various fields (such as KM experts, statistics, nursing, and policy experts) and specialized clinicians directly involved in the care and management of patients in the region where the COS is being developed (Table 1).

Table 1. Overview of stakeholder participation.
Key stakeholders Expected Number Allocation (%) Selection Criteria
Researchers (various fields including KM experts, statistics, nursing, policy experts) 10-20 67% Conducted at least one clinical study related to lumbar disc herniation in the past five years, or be registered in the clinical trials registry system to conduct related studies within the next two years.
Specialized Clinicians (directly involved in the care and management of patients in the COS development region) 5-10 33% Must have at least 5 years of clinical experience related to lumbar disc herniation and handle more than 30 patients annually.
Patients or Their Representatives – – Replaced by the survey results from previous research [25].

COS: core outcome set; KM: Korean medicine

The selection of participants is based on recommendations from professional societies associated with LDH, such as The Korean Acupuncture & Moxibustion Medicine Society and the Society of Rehabilitation Medicine of Korean Medicine. Additionally, the identified experts are encouraged to recommend other individuals they consider suitable for inclusion in this initiative. The criteria for selection follow the COS-STAD guidelines, which provide a set of 11 minimum standards for the development of core outcome sets [28].

First round Delphi.

We employ a structured Delphi survey to achieve a consensus on pertinent outcomes and EMs. The initial list of outcomes is methodically grouped by topic and sorted alphabetically within each group to minimize bias. Using a 9-point Likert scale [38], where 1–3 signifies an outcome of “limited importance,” 4–6 “important but not critical,” and 7–9 “critical,” recommended by the COMET Initiative [39], panelists rate items based on their significance. During the initial round, participants evaluate the importance of pre-identified outcomes while suggesting any additional outcomes they deem vital. Any outcomes suggested as new are incorporated into the second round of Delphi. Notably, all scored outcomes from the first round are also included in the second round of Delphi. Subsequent rounds consider feedback from earlier stages to ensure a comprehensive review and discussion of all outcomes.

In the case of patients or their representatives, feedback is substituted with results from previous survey research that examined the actual symptoms and needs of lumbar disc herniation patients [25]. During the expert Delphi process, the results of this research are presented, ensuring that the perspectives of patients are adequately considered.

Second round Delphi.

Panelists who participated in the first round of Delphi are invited to participate in the second round. At this stage, they are presented with Questionnaire 2, in which they rescore the previously evaluated outcomes. We provide them with the scores assigned during the first round for informed decision-making. In addition, a detailed descriptive statistical analysis from the first round is provided, encompassing each outcome’s responses and score distribution. This approach ensures that the panelists can reevaluate and adjust their scores by considering the perspectives and insights of their respective stakeholder groups. We plan to convene a panel of KM clinicians based on the outcomes of the second round of Delphi. This panel aims to review and assess the clinical relevance and validity of the identified COS, ensuring that our research is robust and directly applicable to clinical settings.

Phase 3: KM clinician panel and Delphi survey

We plan to implement this unique step to ensure the feasibility and relevance of the identified outcomes in a real-world clinical setting. KM clinicians chosen to represent key stakeholder perspectives review the proposed outcomes and use a Delphi survey. At the PMG request, the Association of Korean Medicine (https://akom.org/English/Index) recommends KM clinician panels with at least 5 years of clinical experience in LDH. It is anticipated that these clinicians possess expertise in treating and managing LDH. The Delphi survey of these KM clinicians focuses on reviewing and evaluating the derived outcomes concerning their feasibility in KM clinical institutions. Notably, all evaluations are performed using a 9-point scale to ascertain the relevance and applicability of each outcome.

Following the completion of the third round of the Delphi survey, the identified outcomes are categorized into one of three domains recommended by the COMET initiative [39]: “consensus out,” “consensus in,” or “without consensus,” based on the criteria provided in Table 2. Adopting these predetermined definitions reduces the risk of post-hoc consensus determination and limits biases from the preconceived notions of the research team [40]. Subsequently, the findings from this phase are forwarded to a consensus meeting for further deliberation and finalization.

Table 2. Definition of consensus.

Category Description Criteria
Consensus out The outcome is agreed upon to be excluded from the core outcome set At least 70% rated 1–3, and <15% rated 7–9 across stakeholders
Consensus in The outcome is agreed upon to be included in the core outcome set <15% rated 1–3, and at least 70% rated 7–9 across stakeholders
Without consensus There is no clear agreement on the inclusion/exclusion of the outcome Other conditions

Phase 4: consensus meeting

To obtain a holistic perspective on LDH, we ensure that representatives from all stakeholder groups participate in the consensus meeting. Those who diligently complete the Delphi survey are invited. The consensus group comprises the PMG, Delphi expert panel, and a KM clinician panel.

A consensus meeting is convened at a dedicated location to finalize the COS for LDH. The discussions are informed by the results collated from each Delphi round, focusing on the outcomes of the last Delphi survey. Outcomes that reached a “consensus in” status are subjected to the anonymous vote of either “yes” or “no.” Outcomes receiving approval from at least 70% of the participants are integrated into the final COS for LDH. Conversely, outcomes designated as “consensus out” are excluded.

A thorough discussion follows for outcomes marked as “without consensus” in the third round. Participants then anonymously rescore these outcomes during the meeting using the familiar 9-point Likert scale. Outcomes achieving scores of 1–3 from at least 70% of the participants, with a maximum of 15% of the participants giving them scores of 7–9, are discarded. Conversely, outcomes rated 7–9 by a minimum of 70% of participants and receiving 1–3 scores by ≤15% are included in the final LDH COS. This repetitive rescoring process is repeated until a consensus on all outcomes is reached.

Ethics approval

Ethical approval to conduct this study has been granted by The Institutional Review Board of the Korea Institute of Oriental Medicine (IRB approval no. I-2312/012-003-04). All individuals participating in the Delphi rounds will provide informed consent prior to their involvement in the study.

Discussion

The need for a standardized COS for HM treatment of LDH has posed significant challenges in clinical settings, where consistent outcomes are vital. Since more than 80% of KM institutions operate as primary care clinics, the emphasis on standardizing outcomes has become even more urgent [41]. The absence of a consistent COS can lead to potential reporting biases and discrepancies, emphasizing the need for outcomes that fit various treatment strategies [30]. However, conducting clinical trials in these settings presents challenges, such as human resource shortages, equipment limitations, and policy restrictions [42]. Introducing a COS tailored to herbal treatments for LDH in KM would provide a robust framework for future clinical trials that ensures consistent and relevant outcomes, enhancing the clarity and reliability of their findings. This progress can significantly improve the quality of evidence, building more confidence in herbal treatments for LDH and making it easier for broader use in KM institutions.

While previous studies have explored various outcomes in LDH treatment using HM, there remains no consensus on which outcomes should be prioritized or standardized [43–45]. Several reviews have reported heterogeneity in outcome selection, making it difficult to compare or synthesize findings across studies [20,46]. To date, no COS has been proposed specifically for HM in the context of LDH. This study addresses that gap by systematically developing a COS in accordance with established guidelines [27,28], aiming to improve the consistency, comparability, and relevance of future clinical research in KM. By grounding the COS in both expert consensus and real-world clinical settings, this protocol contributes to bridging the gap between research and clinical practice.

Trial status

The COS-HM-LDH is presently at the stage of systematic review in its development process.

Supporting information

S1 Table. Search strategy for English databases.

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S1 File. PRISMA-P-checklist.

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Abbreviations

LDH

Lumbar Disc Herniation

HM

herbal medicines

COS

Core Outcome Set

KM

Korean medicine

COMET

Core Outcome Measures in Effectiveness Trials

VAS

Visual Analog Scale

COS-STAD

Core Outcome Set-STAndards for Development

EMs

effect modifiers

NSAID

Non-Steroidal Anti-Inflammatory Drug

JOA

Japanese Orthopedic Association

COS-STAR

Core Outcome Set-STAndards for Reporting

PMG

Project management group

Data Availability

No datasets were generated or analysed during the current study. All relevant data from this study will be made available upon study completion.

Funding Statement

This study was supported by the Korea Institute of Oriental Medicine (grant number KSN2122211). Dr. Changsop Yang is the Principal Investigator (PI) of the funding award. The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Decision Letter 0

Richa Gupta

21 Mar 2025

Dear Dr. Kim,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

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EDITORIAL COMMENTS

Editor’s comments:

  • In this study, the authors intend to develop a Core Outcome Set for Herbal Medicine Treatment of Lumbar Disc Herniation (COS-HM-LDH). However, the methodology section is entirely in the future tense, indicating that the proposed steps have yet to be established and standardized.

  • This raises questions about the study's foundation; it seems to focus on potential future actions rather than presenting a concrete protocol.

  • To enhance clarity, the authors should address this concern directly, providing a rationale for their approach and the relevance of discussing future methodologies.

  • An expanded discussion on the purpose of the study and its significance in the context of existing literature would also strengthen their argument.

  • This would help clarify the study's objectives and the importance of developing standardized outcomes for herbal treatments in this area.

Decision – Accepted with major revision

Please find enclosed Reviewer’s comments:

Reviewer 1- Accept

Well constructed manuscript.

Looking forward for your valuable contribution to the scientific community.

Reviewer 2 - Accept

Well-articulated, and a good initiative to establish standard guidelines.

This study can serve as a guiding document for any further works based on complementary and alternative medicine, globally.

Reviewer 3 – Minor Revision

  • Table 1 Patients or Their Representatives why this data is originally not collected ?, graphical abstract is requird

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Kind regards,

Richa Gupta

Academic Editor

PLOS ONE

Additional Editor Comments:

EDITORIAL COMMENTS

EDITORIAL COMMENTS

Editor’s comments:

� In this study, the authors intend to develop a Core Outcome Set for Herbal Medicine Treatment of Lumbar Disc Herniation (COS-HM-LDH). However, the methodology section is entirely in the future tense, indicating that the proposed steps have yet to be established and standardized.

� This raises questions about the study's foundation; it seems to focus on potential future actions rather than presenting a concrete protocol.

� To enhance clarity, the authors should address this concern directly, providing a rationale for their approach and the relevance of discussing future methodologies.

� An expanded discussion on the purpose of the study and its significance in the context of existing literature would also strengthen their argument.

� This would help clarify the study's objectives and the importance of developing standardized outcomes for herbal treatments in this area.

Decision – Accepted with major revision

Please find enclosed Reviewer’s comments:

Reviewer 1- Accept

Well constructed manuscript.

Looking forward for your valuable contribution to the scientific community.

Reviewer 2 - Accept

Well-articulated, and a good initiative to establish standard guidelines.

This study can serve as a guiding document for any further works based on complementary and alternative medicine, globally.

Reviewer 3 – Minor Revision

� Table 1 Patients or Their Representatives why this data is originally not collected ?, graphical abstract is requird

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Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer's Responses to Questions

Comments to the Author

1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses??>

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable??>

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete??>

The PLOS Data policy

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??>

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Well constructed manuscript. Looking forward for your valuable contribution to the scientific community.

Reviewer #2: Well-articulated, and a good initiative to establish standard guidelines. This study can serve as a guiding document for any further works based on complementary and alternative medicine, globally.

Reviewer #3: Table 1 Patients or Their

Representatives why this data is originally not collected ?, graphical abstract is requird

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: No

Reviewer #3: Yes:  Dr. Saurabh Singh Professor , Ayurvedic Pharmacy , School of Pharmaceutical Sciences, Lovely Professional University, Punjab

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Author response to Decision Letter 1


18 Apr 2025

Editor’s Comments

o In this study, the authors intend to develop a Core Outcome Set for Herbal Medicine Treatment of Lumbar Disc Herniation (COS-HM-LDH). However, the methodology section is entirely in the future tense, indicating that the proposed steps have yet to be established and standardized.

o This raises questions about the study's foundation; it seems to focus on potential future actions rather than presenting a concrete protocol.

o To enhance clarity, the authors should address this concern directly, providing a rationale for their approach and the relevance of discussing future methodologies.

o An expanded discussion on the purpose of the study and its significance in the context of existing literature would also strengthen their argument.

o This would help clarify the study's objectives and the importance of developing standardized outcomes for herbal treatments in this area.

Response:

- Thank you for your thoughtful comments. In response, we have revised the methodology section by changing the tense from future to present to clearly reflect the protocol nature of the study and to distinguish between ongoing and completed components. Additionally, we have expanded the discussion section to better articulate the significance of this study in the context of existing literature, emphasizing the current lack of standardized outcome measures for herbal medicine treatment of LDH and how this study addresses that gap. Revised parts have been marked in red in the manuscript.

Reviewer 1 - Accept

Well constructed manuscript. Looking forward for your valuable contribution to the scientific community.

Response:

- We sincerely thank the reviewer for their positive and encouraging feedback.

Reviewer 2 - Accept

Well-articulated, and a good initiative to establish standard guidelines. This study can serve as a guiding document for any further works based on complementary and alternative medicine, globally.

Response:

- We are grateful for the reviewer’s kind words and appreciation of our efforts. We hope this study will contribute meaningfully to future standardization in herbal medicine research.

Reviewer 3 – Minor Revision

Table 1 Patients or Their Representatives – why this data is originally not collected?, Graphical abstract is required.

Response:

- We appreciate the reviewer’s valuable suggestions. In this study, we aimed to reflect patient perspectives by incorporating data from a previously published nationwide survey that investigated the real-world symptoms and needs of patients with LDH (Kim et al., 2023), rather than recruiting patients or their representatives directly. This approach enabled us to ensure the inclusion of patient-centered outcomes while avoiding duplication of efforts and addressing feasibility constraints within the current research scope. To further enhance the clarity and accessibility of the study, we have also created and included a graphical abstract that visually summarizes the background, aim, methodological phases, and expected impact of the COS-HM-LDH development.

Attachment

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Decision Letter 1

Emma Campbell

21 May 2025

PONE-D-24-26777R1

Development of the Core Outcome Set for Herbal Medicine Treatment of Lumbar Disc Herniation (COS-HM-LDH): A Study Protocol for a Systematic Review and a Delphi Survey

PLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Kim,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript for review by PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we have decided that your manuscript does not meet our standards for systematic and scoping reviews. We are therefore rejecting your manuscript.

PLOS ONE considers protocols for systematic reviews, scoping reviews and meta-analyses for publication; however, these submissions must address a clear and defined research question; outline a systematic and comprehensive literature review; and describe clearly reported, reproducible, and systematic methods to identify, select, and critically appraise relevant research. Our author guidelines for systematic reviews are at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-systematic-reviews-and-meta-analyses.

In this case, we note that there is no planned assessment of the quality or risk of bias of the included studies. Conclusions in a systematic review or meta-analysis should be related to the quality of the included publications. Without this critical assessment of the included studies, we do not feel that your systematic review currently fulfills our requirements for consideration (for more information, we would refer you to the following source: Boutron I, Page MJ, Higgins JPT, Altman DG, Lundh A, Hróbjartsson A. Chapter 7: Considering bias and conflicts of interest among the included studies [last updated August 2022]. In: Higgins JPT, Thomas J, Chandler J, Cumpston M, Li T, Page MJ, Welch VA (editors). Cochrane Handbook for Systematic Reviews of Interventions version 6.5. Cochrane, 2024. Available from www.training.cochrane.org/handbook).

Additionally, there is no assessment of the certainty of the body of evidence for each outcome planned. This is distinct from assessments of the quality or risk of bias of the included studies, and is essential to inform further healthcare decisions based on the results of the review. We do not feel that valid conclusions can be drawn from your review without this assessment  (for more information, please see Schünemann HJ, Higgins JPT, Vist GE, Glasziou P, Akl EA, Skoetz N, Guyatt GH. Chapter 14: Completing ‘Summary of findings’ tables and grading the certainty of the evidence [last updated August 2023]. In: Higgins JPT, Thomas J, Chandler J, Cumpston M, Li T, Page MJ, Welch VA (editors). Cochrane Handbook for Systematic Reviews of Interventions version 6.5. Cochrane, 2024. Available from www.training.cochrane.org/handbook). 

As a result of these concerns we are unable to consider your manuscript. I am sorry that we cannot be more positive on this occasion, but I hope you understand the reasons for this decision.

Kind regards,

Emma Campbell, Ph.D

Staff Editor

PLOS One

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Author response to Decision Letter 2


14 Jul 2025

Editor’s Comments

o In this study, the authors intend to develop a Core Outcome Set for Herbal Medicine Treatment of Lumbar Disc Herniation (COS-HM-LDH). However, the methodology section is entirely in the future tense, indicating that the proposed steps have yet to be established and standardized.

o This raises questions about the study's foundation; it seems to focus on potential future actions rather than presenting a concrete protocol.

o To enhance clarity, the authors should address this concern directly, providing a rationale for their approach and the relevance of discussing future methodologies.

o An expanded discussion on the purpose of the study and its significance in the context of existing literature would also strengthen their argument.

o This would help clarify the study's objectives and the importance of developing standardized outcomes for herbal treatments in this area.

Response:

- Thank you for your thoughtful comments. In response, we have revised the methodology section by changing the tense from future to present to clearly reflect the protocol nature of the study and to distinguish between ongoing and completed components. Additionally, we have expanded the discussion section to better articulate the significance of this study in the context of existing literature, emphasizing the current lack of standardized outcome measures for herbal medicine treatment of LDH and how this study addresses that gap. Revised parts have been marked in red in the manuscript.

Reviewer 1 - Accept

Well constructed manuscript. Looking forward for your valuable contribution to the scientific community.

Response:

- We sincerely thank the reviewer for their positive and encouraging feedback.

Reviewer 2 - Accept

Well-articulated, and a good initiative to establish standard guidelines. This study can serve as a guiding document for any further works based on complementary and alternative medicine, globally.

Response:

- We are grateful for the reviewer’s kind words and appreciation of our efforts. We hope this study will contribute meaningfully to future standardization in herbal medicine research.

Reviewer 3 – Minor Revision

Table 1 Patients or Their Representatives – why this data is originally not collected?, Graphical abstract is required.

Response:

- We appreciate the reviewer’s valuable suggestions. In this study, we aimed to reflect patient perspectives by incorporating data from a previously published nationwide survey that investigated the real-world symptoms and needs of patients with LDH (Kim et al., 2023), rather than recruiting patients or their representatives directly. This approach enabled us to ensure the inclusion of patient-centered outcomes while avoiding duplication of efforts and addressing feasibility constraints within the current research scope. To further enhance the clarity and accessibility of the study, we have also created and included a graphical abstract that visually summarizes the background, aim, methodological phases, and expected impact of the COS-HM-LDH development.

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Submitted filename: response_to_reviewers_auresp_2.docx

pone.0335712.s004.docx (18.4KB, docx)

Decision Letter 2

Richa Gupta

11 Sep 2025

Dear Dr. Kim,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

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Richa Gupta

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PLOS ONE

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Additional Editor Comments (if provided):

This is an interesting and timely manuscript in which the authors aim to develop a Core Outcome Set for Herbal Medicine Treatment of Lumbar Disc Herniation (COS-HM-LDH). The idea is indeed innovative and has the potential to establish much-needed uniformity in outcome reporting, thereby opening new avenues for research and clinical practice in this area. If successfully conceptualized and translated into practical application, such a standardized set could greatly enhance the comparability of future studies, reduce reporting bias, and ultimately improve evidence synthesis for clinical decision-making.

However, after a careful and critical review, there remain several important issues that need to be adequately addressed before the manuscript can be considered ready for publication. These issues not only pertain to methodological clarity and robustness but also to the practical feasibility of implementing the proposed Core Outcome Set in real-world clinical settings. Moreover, reviewers have raised certain specific concerns and questions that warrant a more detailed response from the authors. Addressing these points comprehensively will strengthen the credibility, reproducibility, and eventual impact of this important work.

Decision – Accepted after major changes

Please find attached reviewer’s comments below

Thank you so much for the opportunity to review your manuscript.

Background: offers clear rationale to the study, highlighting the need for establishing a COS to evaluate the effectiveness of herbal medicine in lumbar disc herniation management.

Methodology – The four-phase development process (systematic review, Delphi surveys with experts and clinicians, and a consensus meeting) is well organized and follows established COS development frameworks. The consensus method is described here a priori. The figure offers visual summary of the proposed protocol.

Development of the Initial COS List: this step is not very clear.

What is the criteria that will be used to synthesis the initial set of COS? Will the PMG employ theme saturation or another qualitative research method?

The patients’ perspective should be considered in this step, as per standard 8 of COS-STAD.

The authors note that patient participation has been replaced by reference to a previously published patient survey on the same topic. Including a brief summary of this survey in the introduction would enhance the manuscript’s value. Furthermore, can the survey findings be objectively integrated into the Delphi process outcomes? If not, the inclusion of patient representatives in the Delphi rounds perhaps should be considered?

I commend the authors for their thorough and well-structured approach and hope to see the results of their effort published out soon.

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Reviewer's Responses to Questions

Comments to the Author

1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions?

Reviewer #4: Yes

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2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses??>

Reviewer #4: Yes

**********

3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable??>

Reviewer #4: Yes

**********

4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete??>

The PLOS Data policy

Reviewer #4: Yes

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5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??>

Reviewer #4: Yes

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Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics.

You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study.

Reviewer #4: Thank you so much for the opportunity to review your manuscript.

Background: offers clear rationale to the study, highlighting the need for establishing a COS to evaluate the effectiveness of herbal medicine in lumbar disc herniation management.

Methodology – The four-phase development process (systematic review, Delphi surveys with experts and clinicians, and a consensus meeting) is well organized and follows established COS development frameworks. The consensus method is described here a priori. The figure offers visual summary of the proposed protocol.

- Development of the Initial COS List: this step is not very clear.

What is the criteria that will be used to synthesis the initial set of COS? Will the PMG employ theme saturation or another qualitative research method?

The patients’ perspective should be considered in this step, as per standard 8 of COS-STAD.

The authors note that patient participation has been replaced by reference to a previously published patient survey on the same topic. Including a brief summary of this survey in the introduction would enhance the manuscript’s value. Furthermore, can the survey findings be objectively integrated into the Delphi process outcomes? If not, the inclusion of patient representatives in the Delphi rounds perhaps should be considered?

I commend the authors for their thorough and well-structured approach and hope to see the results of their effort published out soon.

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Reviewer #4: No

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Author response to Decision Letter 3


22 Sep 2025

Journal Requirements

Comment: Your ethics statement should only appear in the Methods section of your manuscript. If your ethics statement is written in any section besides the Methods, please delete it from any other section.

Response: Thank you for this important reminder. We have removed the “Ethics declarations” section from the end of the manuscript and relocated the corresponding content to the Methods section under a new subsection titled “Ethical approval.” This revision ensures that the ethics statement appears only in the Methods section, in line with the journal’s requirements.

Revised Sentence (Page 13):

“Ethical approval to conduct this study has been granted by The Institutional Review Board of the Korea Institute of Oriental Medicine (IRB approval no. I-2312/012-003-04). All individuals participating in the Delphi rounds will provide informed consent prior to their involvement in the study.”

Reviewer #4

Comment 1: Background: offers clear rationale to the study, highlighting the need for establishing a COS to evaluate the effectiveness of herbal medicine in lumbar disc herniation management.

Response: We thank the reviewer for this positive feedback.

Comment 2: Methodology – The four-phase development process (systematic review, Delphi surveys with experts and clinicians, and a consensus meeting) is well organized and follows established COS development frameworks. The consensus method is described here a priori. The figure offers visual summary of the proposed protocol.

Response: We thank the reviewer for this positive and encouraging feedback on our methodological framework.

Comment 3: Development of the Initial COS List: this step is not very clear. What is the criteria that will be used to synthesis the initial set of COS? Will the PMG employ theme saturation or another qualitative research method? The patients’ perspective should be considered in this step, as per standard 8 of COS-STAD.

Response: Thank you for this important comment. We have clarified that the PMG will include all outcomes from the systematic review, merge similar items, and report their frequency across studies to form the initial COS list. To meet COS-STAD standard 8, we also incorporated findings from a nationwide patient survey, ensuring that patient-prioritized symptoms and treatment needs are reflected in the initial questionnaire for the Delphi process.

Revised Sentence (Page 7-8):

“After reviewing the collected outcomes and EMs, the PMG refines and finalizes a list consistent with the objectives of this COS. All outcomes extracted from the systematic review are included in the initial list to ensure comprehensiveness. For each outcome, the number of studies in which it was reported will also be presented, thereby providing information on the frequency and strength of use in previous research. In addition, to reflect patients’ perspectives, findings from the previously conducted nationwide survey of LDH patients are incorporated, highlighting patient-prioritized symptoms and treatment needs [25]. These combined sources form the basis of the initial COS questionnaire, which will be used for the first Delphi process.”

Comment 4: The authors note that patient participation has been replaced by reference to a previously published patient survey on the same topic. Including a brief summary of this survey in the introduction would enhance the manuscript’s value.

Response: As suggested, we have added a concise summary of the nationwide patient survey in the Background section, highlighting priority symptoms (e.g., back pain, leg pain, functional disability) and treatment preferences (e.g., safety and stable effect).

Revised Sentence (Page 4-5):

“To address these concerns, a recent nationwide web-based survey of 500 LDH patients in South Korea investigated their real-world symptoms and priorities [25]. The most common symptoms reported were leg numbness (87.0%) and back pain (81.2%), while the most common disabilities were discomfort in sitting (64.6%) and lifting (63.6%). Back pain (48.4%) was identified as the highest priority symptom for improvement. Importantly, a majority of patients expressed preference for improvement in disability over pain (55.8%), a stable effect over a rapid effect (78.2%), and safety over treatment efficacy (56.4%). Safety (25.8%) and cost (22.2%) were also recognized as important treatment factors. Based on these findings, we aim to identify the essential outcome measures that should be prioritized in LDH management.”

Comment 5: Furthermore, can the survey findings be objectively integrated into the Delphi process outcomes? If not, the inclusion of patient representatives in the Delphi rounds perhaps should be considered?

Response: Thank you for this helpful comment. We revised the Methods section to state that the findings from the nationwide patient survey have been incorporated into the development of the initial COS list. These patient-prioritized outcomes form part of the first Delphi questionnaire, ensuring that patient perspectives are objectively reflected in the Delphi process.

Revised Sentence (Page 7-8):

“…In addition, to reflect patients’ perspectives, findings from the previously conducted nationwide survey of LDH patients are incorporated, highlighting patient-prioritized symptoms and treatment needs [25]. These combined sources form the basis of the initial COS questionnaire, which will be used for the first Delphi process.”

Comment 6: I commend the authors for their thorough and well-structured approach and hope to see the results of their effort published out soon.

Response: We sincerely thank the reviewer for the encouraging comments.

We are encouraged by this feedback and will strive to ensure that the study produces meaningful results.

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Decision Letter 3

Richa Gupta

15 Oct 2025

Development of the Core Outcome Set for Herbal Medicine Treatment of Lumbar Disc Herniation (COS-HM-LDH): A Study Protocol for a Systematic Review and a Delphi Survey

PONE-D-24-26777R3

Dear Dr. Kim,

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I have carefully reviewed the revised version of the manuscript entitled “Development of the Core Outcome Set for Herbal Medicine Treatment of Lumbar Disc Herniation (COS-HM-LDH): A Study Protocol for a Systematic Review and a Delphi Survey” (Manuscript ID: [PONE-D-24-26777R3] which was resubmitted following the reviewers comments. I am pleased to note that the authors have made extensive and meaningful revisions in accordance with all the suggestions provided during the review process. I appreciate the authors’ diligent efforts in addressing all points raised during the review and commend them for significantly improving the quality of their work.

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Associated Data

    This section collects any data citations, data availability statements, or supplementary materials included in this article.

    Supplementary Materials

    S1 Table. Search strategy for English databases.

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    pone.0335712.s001.doc (33.5KB, doc)
    S1 File. PRISMA-P-checklist.

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    Data Availability Statement

    No datasets were generated or analysed during the current study. All relevant data from this study will be made available upon study completion.


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