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. 2026 Feb 18;21(2):e0342773. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0342773

Swedish private-sector employees’ experiences of promoting and hindering factors for working while having mental health problems: A qualitative study

Anna Frantz 1,*, Iben Axén 1, Gunnar Bergström 1,2, Anna Finnes 3,4, Elisabeth Björk Brämberg 1,5
Editor: Yeon-Ha Kim6
PMCID: PMC12915946  PMID: 41706679

Abstract

Objectives

The workplace is an important arena for identifying and managing early symptoms of mental health problems. This study aimed to explore how private sector employees at risk of sickness absence due to mental health problems experienced promoting and hindering factors for working.

Methods

Semi-structured interviews were conducted with 18 employees with mental health problems (≥3 on the General Health Questionnaire or who answered yes to a question on self-predicted sickness absence in the coming year due to common mental disorders). Reflexive thematic analysis was used to analyze the data.

Results

The analysis resulted in three themes: influence of life stage on working while having mental health problems; managing mental health problems in the social and organizational context; and preserving one’s identity and agency when working while having mental health problems. Promoting and hindering factors occurred at the individual, group, leader and organizational levels. Promoting factors included social support from colleagues, a trusting relationship with the first-line manager, and engaging in leisure-time physical activity. Hindering factors included perceiving the cause of symptoms to be primarily outside work leading to delayed access to help, a cold or noisy work environment, and schedule mismatch.

Conclusion

Promoting and hindering factors occurred at multiple levels. Fostering a supportive and inclusive work environment where there is space for enjoyment can help employees manage mental health problems at work. Other promoting factors include having an active and present manager, reasonable production goals, and leisure-time physical activity. Employees who perceive the cause of their symptoms to be related to their private life tend not to seek help from the workplace, despite the impact on their work. This should be considered in the development of future interventions. Our study supports a life-course perspective on the understanding of how employees experience promoting and hindering factors for working while having mental health problems.

Introduction

Mental health problems (MHPs, including anxiety, depression, stress-related disorders and sub-threshold conditions [1]) affect nearly one in five of the working-age population in the Organisation for Economic Co-operation and Development member states [2]. Most of those affected are working despite being more prone to spells of sickness absence compared with those with other chronic conditions [3], making the workplace an important arena for early management of MHPs, (e.g., identification of early symptoms, provision of support) [2]. Working while having MHPs can be conceptualized through presenteeism – the behavior of going to work while experiencing ill-health [4]. Previous research has studied the potential negative impact of presenteeism on work productivity and employee health [4,5]. However, presenteeism has also been suggested to include potential functional or therapeutic aspects, such as being an individual strategy to maintain or regain function [6]. In this study, in line with this conceptualization, working while having mental health problems (presenteeism) is therefore seen as a behavior that may have negative or positive implications [4].

Factors in the work environment may contribute to improvement of MHPs (e.g., supportive supervision [7]), or deterioration of MHPs (e.g., lack of decision latitude [8,9]). From an organizational perspective, several job stress theories describe how work may affect individuals and be the precursor of a job situation that fosters motivation and health, or a job situation that ultimately will result in ill-health. One such framework is the Job Demands-Resources (JD-R) model, which applies across different occupations [10]. The JD-R model proposes two processes that affect well-being and job engagement: a health impairment process and a motivational process, providing an understanding of how resources and demands can affect working [11]. The relationship between workplace and private life factors should be explored to understand how employees manage working while having MHPs. With this in mind, qualitative studies may provide a rich and nuanced understanding of such relationship [12]. Only a few studies have explored experiences of working while having MHPs [13]. A previous study found that employees used a variety of strategies at an individual level to continue working, such as putting on a façade or escaping distressing emotions through social, work or health habits [14]. Employees with MHPs have described distancing themselves from work [15,16], which is not always beneficial to the employee because it can be both protective and isolating [16].

In Sweden, employers have the responsibility to systematically work to reduce risks that can lead to work-related injury or ill-health, including MHPs [17]. Hence, the workplace provides an arena for preventing sickness absence due to MHPs [18] and understanding what promotes or hinders working while having MHPs could elucidate not only individual strategies, but also factors at a group, leader, or organizational level. The aim of the study was to explore how private-sector employees at risk of sickness absence due to MHPs experienced promoting and hindering factors for working while having an MHP.

Methods

This qualitative study was inspired by constructivist epistemology. Data were collected through semi-structured interviews; the data were seen as co-constructed between the interviewer and the participant. The research group consisted of a multidisciplinary team with experience in qualitative research, as well as research on MHPs and the psychosocial work environment. Data were analyzed inductively using reflexive thematic analysis [19,20] to understand how participants made sense of promoting and hindering factors for working while experiencing MHPs. The IGLOO framework (acronym representing the levels individual, group, leader, organization, and overarching context) [21] was used to indicate the level for each promoting and hindering factor. We have appraised and aimed to follow the guidelines for reporting reflexive thematic analysis in this article [22].

Participants and procedure

Participants were recruited from a randomized controlled trial (RCT) evaluating a problem-solving intervention provided by first-line managers at three private companies in Sweden [23]. The three companies were large enterprises, covering production, warehouse logistics, and retail. Employees at risk of sickness absence due to MHPs were identified through self-reports scoring with a cut-off of ≥3 points on the General Health Questionnaire 12-item (Swedish version) validated in the general population to detect depression [24], or answering”Yes, most likely” or”Yes, quite likely” to a question on self-rated risk of sickness absence due to MHPs in the year to come (i.e., “About your health – do you think you will receive sick leave benefits because of stress, anxiety or depression in the coming 12 months?”). The response options were “Yes, most likely”, ”Yes, quite likely”, “I’m not sure”, “No, probably not”. Further inclusion criteria were 18–59 years of age, ability to understand written and spoken Swedish. Exclusion criteria were ongoing leave due to sickness or other reason, pregnancy, sickness absence due to a common mental disorder for ≥14 calendar days during the last 3 months, exposure to workplace bullying by the first-line manager; or planned long-term absence in the coming year [23]. The participants in the study all had jobs that could not be performed outside the workplace. Ethical approval was granted from the Swedish Ethical Review Authority (reference numbers 2020−03114, 2021−01748). The study followed the ethical principles of the Declaration of Helsinki for research involving human subjects [25].

Eligible participants received information about the study and the voluntary nature of participation, before consenting to take part in the study. Consent was given electronically. For the current study, all participants from the RCT were eligible to take part in an interview. A total of 95 of the 129 eligible participants were contacted by phone 1 year after enrollment in the RCT. Reasons for not contacting the remaining 34 were as follows: more than 18 months from inclusion (n = 26), changed workplace (n = 4) and lost contact details (n = 4). Eighteen participants agreed to an interview (intervention group = 7, control group = 11).

Data collection

An interview guide was developed by Anna Frantz (AFr), Elisabeth Björk Brämberg (EBB), Iben Axén (IA), and Anna Finnes (Afi) based on previous literature on psychosocial factors and work-life balance [9,26], while Gunnar Bergström (GB) read and approved the final version. The guide included probing questions to help the informants reflect on factors that promoted or hindered working during the previous year. The first draft of the interview guide was tested in two pilot interviews, not included in the dataset. Based on these interviews, AFr and EBB discussed the relevance of the questions and produced a final version of the interview guide. The interview started with a broad, open question: “Tell me about your work. What does a normal working day look like?” Examples of questions to follow were “If you think about the workplace, was there anything that made it easier to stay at work?” and “Did you use any specific strategies to be able to stay at work?”. Prompts were used to encourage elaboration, e.g., “Could you give an example of a situation?” or “Could you tell me more about that?”. The full interview guide is provided in S1 File.

Interviews were conducted by AFr between January 2023 and August 2023. One participant preferred a video-conference call, the other interviews were conducted by phone. The interviews were audio-recorded and lasted between 21 and 62 minutes. Notes were taken after each interview. These notes were not included in the analysis but were used to support reflexivity.

Data analysis

Interviews were transcribed verbatim, and the transcripts were checked for accuracy by AFr. The reflexive thematic analysis followed the six phases suggested by Braun and Clarke [19]. Reflexivity during the analysis was facilitated in multiple ways: by notetaking as a way to keep track of initial ideas and reflections, having two researchers coding data, and through continuous meetings with the entire research group to discuss the assumptions around the data and results. In the first phase of the data analysis, AFr listened to each interview and noted her initial thoughts. The transcripts were then read through multiple times by AFr to become familiarized with the data. Notes were taken on initial ideas and reflections for each interview and for the material as a whole. The notes could be a summary of “the story” of the interview, thoughts on what was said, or significant quotes.

The notes were used during the coding procedure in phase two to stimulate ideas and to check if the initial understanding was confirmed or challenged. Inductive coding was conducted in Microsoft Word using the comment function, and coding was organized in Microsoft Excel to keep track of the codes and material. Coding was performed by AFr and EBB. AFr coded the first six interviews independently; then, AFr and EBB coded two interviews together to check for similarities and differences. To enhance reflexivity, differences in coding and assumptions on the meaning of the data were discussed between AFr and EBB. These discussions helped bring assumptions to the surface and broaden the interpretation of the data. The remaining 10 interviews were coded by AFr. Thereafter, all authors met on several occasions to discuss the analysis. During these meetings, the reflective notetaking, thematic mapping, and the progress in writing the report were used to support the discussions and joint data analysis process through checking if previous interpretations of the data were challenged or supported. The meetings continued in the following four phases. In the third phase, Microsoft Excel was used to get an overview and organize the material, identifying patterns in the data and formulating potential themes. In the fourth phase, the codes and themes were reviewed by manually writing the themes on Post-it notes and organizing the codes under the themes to gain an understanding of the clarity of each theme. Fig 1 illustrates the process of coding text extracts related to promoting and hindering factors for working while having MHPs, identifying patterns and organizing codes into themes that convey a common understanding across the data. Although the overview may seem like a linear process from text to codes to themes, this process involved going back and forth through the material, coding extracts with multiple codes before deciding on the code that most clearly answered the research question, and mapping and re-mapping the codes into themes. Through an iterative process of naming themes and writing the report (phases five and six), the themes were reviewed, named, and agreed upon within the author group.

Fig 1. Example of the analysis process from identifying and coding text extracts to organizing these into themes.

Fig 1

Results

An overview of the demographic characteristics of the employees participating in the study is presented in Table 1.

Table 1. Participant characteristics (N = 18).

Characteristic Value
Age at time of interview (range) 20–61 years
Gender (n)
 Women/non-binary 7
 Men 11
Ethnicity (n)
 Born outside Sweden <5
Educational level (n)
 Secondary education 9
 Primary or higher education 7
 Missing 2
Sector (n)
 Company 1: warehouse logistics 7
 Company 2: industry 6
 Company 3: retail 5
HAD score at 12-month follow-up (median, range)
 Depression 4.5, 1–13
 Anxiety 5, 0–18

Categories containing <5 participants are combined with other categories. HAD = Hospital Anxiety and Depression scale (range 0–21, where 0 is the lowest level of symptoms and 21 is the highest).

The analysis resulted in three themes, each covering promoting and hindering factors for working while having MHPs. An overview of the promoting and hindering factors is presented in Table 2.

Table 2. Themes developed during the reflexive thematic analysis of promoting and hindering factors for working while having mental health problems from the employee’s perspective.

Theme Promoting factors Levela Hindering factors Levela
Influence of life stage when working while having MHPs Developing resilience and acceptance Individual Developing resignation Individual
Managing MHPs in the social and organizational context Reasonable personal expectations, job crafting, leisure-time physical activity Individual Unable to change work situation, low job demands, physical work environment Organizational
Support from co-leagues through humor and validation; balancing social relations outside work Group Draining relationships, work-life balance Group
Support from the first-line manager through a trusting relationship and the first-line manager’s actions Leader
Reasonable production goals, clear roles Organizational
Preserving one’s identity and agency when working while having MHPs The workplace provides an arena to be productive, be seen, and be part of a whole Organizational Perceiving the cause to be primarily outside work, avoidance, and delay in seeking help Individual
Disclosure of a dilemma and experiences of exclusion Group, leader, organizational

aRefers to level in the IGLOO framework: individual, group, leader, organizational. The overarching level is not included as there were no promoting or hindering factor at this level.

Influence of life stage on working while having MHPs

Time is a recurrent theme in the participants’ stories, as both the individual and the work evolve. A promoting factor was recognizing the temporal state of a stressful situation with high demands both at work and at home. A hindering factor was developing feelings of resignation to work due to unmanaged issues related to MHPs.

Life stage referred to different stages in both the employees’ work- and private-life. When work and private life together were a burden, e.g., having small children while working, this was seen as a phase that would pass. Over time, the participants found a way to accept feelings and situations, and to working while having MHPs. On the other hand, if the participants did not feel heard or if they lacked flexibility, this could result in them becoming distant or detached from work. The participants were at different stages in life. They reflected on how they valued and appraised work issues in relation to their motivation to work; from working to gain promotion to working to receive a salary. Life stage had an impact on how promoting and hindering factors were experienced by the worker.

I can let it go. It always works out somehow. I probably cared a bit more in the beginning when I was appointed to this role than I do now. I’ve kind of let go of it. I think it’s really nice. Because I notice that it works out anyway. (Interview 7)

Managing MHPs in the social and organizational context

Participants highlighted the crucial role of social support from colleagues in coping with MHPs. Colleagues provided opportunities to share laughter, discuss hardships, and provide emotional support, making the workday more enjoyable. This support ranged from “friendly banter” to deeper, more trusting relationships. Being able to express frustration about work or other issues and receiving recognition made it easier to cope with frustration. Supporting others through sharing one’s own experiences of MHPs was also found to be highly meaningful and helpful to oneself.

…also the group dynamics here, which we touched on a little earlier […] becomes a plus, and you get energy from it as well. From your colleagues. (Interview 12)

Taking personal responsibility for managing MHPs was discussed in different ways and involved looking inwards and setting boundaries to preserve one’s resources and energy. Active strategies at work, such as listening to music, were described as changing the meaning of work tasks, making them more enjoyable and helping reduce stress. One’s own attitude and how one tackled everyday life affected the appraisal of demands at work and in private life. The burden of being enough both at work and at home could result in feelings of guilt. Actively letting go of these thoughts and setting reasonable expectations for oneself could help make feelings less overwhelming and energy-draining.

Participants highlighted the benefits of engaging in physical activity as an outlet for feelings of frustration or stress, and when work itself was physically demanding. Physical activity also contributed to other positive health outcomes, such as better sleep. Striking a balance was key to sustainable habits.

It’s frustration and stuff probably. […] It’s been several times like this, just “no, God, what am I really doing?” And then you get on the cross-trainer, go for half an hour and then when you get off and have a shower […] something like this: “Yes, well, we’ll solve the problem tomorrow” [laughter]. (Interview 10)

MHPs could also be managed by surrounding oneself with friends and family. However, it could also mean refraining from contact with friends and family when relationships are energy-draining or destructive.

A trusting relationship between the participants and their first-line manager contributed to feeling safe and comfortable about disclosing MHPs. It was stressed that the manager did not need to understand what the participant was going through or experiencing; just being listened to without judgment was enough to feel supported. When an issue was identified, and the manager followed through in resolving it, it also strengthened the trust in the manager and supported working. Having a manager with personal experience of work tasks could legitimize the manager’s understanding of issues in the workplace.

Participants felt seen, valued, and supported through the manager’s actions, more than their words. This was experienced by participants as, for example, the manager’s active listening, calling the participant at home and expressing a wish to get them back when on sick leave, not letting go of the challenges identified, guiding the participants in getting appropriate help, being on the floor with the employees and open to questions and chats.

During everything that has happened, when I’ve my worst, and stayed at home, he has been so sweet to me, I think, and really supportive and tried to get me back to work and… It has meant a lot, actually. (Interview 11)

Scheduling could be a hindering factor to working while having MHPs. Having to work weekends and missing out on time with family created stress, as well as knowing that the burden of managing the kids’ activities was shifted to their partner. Low job demands forced participants to invent work tasks. This was not voluntary active job crafting, but a forced behavior misaligned with their perception of productive work thereby evoking distressing feelings in the participants.

The absolute hardest thing, which has been going on for quite a long time, is when there’s nothing to do. For me, it’s terribly hard. It’s absolutely horrible to go to work and there’s nothing to do […] you almost crash (Interview 9)

Being forced to work part-time also created a stressful situation. This hindering factor was discussed among employees in the retail sector. On an organizational level, having the possibility to vary work tasks was necessary if the tasks demanded high concentration, but it was also preferred because it provided some distractions and made work more interesting. Shifting focus and doing something else provided a break. Having reasonable goals for production made it possible to preserve energy. A clear role created simplicity and a sense of knowing what to do.

The warehouse logistics employees mentioned cold temperatures and noise as mentally and physically demanding in the work environment. The physical work environment posed a threat to a sustainable working life, with the potential risk of injuries because of physical strain. The prospect of injury was worrying for the participants and added to the mental load.

Sometimes I feel really cold all day. […] I don’t like those days, I can’t function 100%. I feel constantly down with a lot of … many kilos of clothes on me. (Interview 3)

Preserving one’s identity and agency when working while having MHPs

Participants were hesitant to attribute their stress or mental strain to work, despite its impact on their ability to stay or perform at work. This delayed identification of the problem and access to support in the workplace. The participants could be caught in a cycle of avoidance, unable to change the situation. Participants described eventually being on the verge of breakdown before seeking help. Another catalyst for reaching for help was when the participant had several short absences, which alerted the first-line manager. This resulted in the disclosure of MHPs and was a starting point for making changes at work. In hindsight, participants regretted not seeking help earlier; however, admitting a need for help meant being vulnerable at work, which undermined the notion of an able worker.

I worked until I couldn’t take it anymore. I was so stressed that I... I didn’t feel well. It was probably hard to kind of admit this to the boss. And I also thought it was very hard that they told me that I should take a rest as well. (Interview 14)

Participants described situations when disclosure of MHPs led to negative consequences or fear of negative treatment, resulting in non-disclosure of personal information. Being belittled as a woman in a male dominated workplace, lack of acknowledgment of individual needs such as when colleagues and managers did not use preferred pronouns, or not being taken seriously by managers, were examples of stressful situations.

Sometimes I feel like they’re not listening to me. Maybe some of them think ‘okay, she’s... she doesn’t know, like, she’s a girl’. […] I say something like, ‘you can do it like this, and it will be easier’. And I see them talking to each other as if they didn’t hear me. (Interview 3)

The workplace provided an arena to experience agency, ability and productivity. Overcoming work tasks that they or their colleagues did not think they would manage gave them energy and satisfaction. Being productive, both creating something with one’s hands and the physical exertion that resulted in bodily tiredness, could have benefits such as better sleep and feelings of satisfaction which in turn could help deal with stress and MHPs. Having a lot to do could also make time go faster, making the workday less strenuous, even though the work was physically demanding. Striking the balance between these two states of workflow and exhaustion was described as difficult.

It’s still nice to have a pace and be up and working and such. It’s very physical, that work, you’re quite... Most people there say, you’re quite exhausted afterwards. (Interview 5)

Discussion

The aim of this study was to explore how private-sector employees at risk of sickness absence due to MHPs experienced promoting and hindering factors for working while having MHPs. Promoting and hindering factors were identified on multiple levels (Table 2), underscoring the importance of applying a systems approach when addressing issues related to MHPs in blue- and pink-collar workplaces. Promoting factors included social support from colleagues, a trusting relationship with the first-line manager, and engaging in leisure-time physical activity. Hindering factors were perceiving the cause of MHPs to be primarily outside work leading to delayed access to help, cold or noisy work environment, and a schedule mismatch. In addition, the results point to the influence of life stage and career phase in how employees with MHPs view the possibility of working and how they assess factors related to their work and their private life.

The theme, ‘Managing MHPs in the social and organizational context’, encompassed support from both colleagues and first-line managers; colleagues contribute to the psychosocial work climate and first-line managers provide guidance and work adaptations. Social support, including support from colleagues and first-line managers, has been identified in previous research as having a moderating effect on work stressors [27] and promoting continued work participation for employees with MHPs [28]. There were several descriptions in the data on the various roles that colleagues played in terms of supporting their ability to work while having MHPs. Colleagues could be the sole reason for enduring work, providing friendship, and playing a role in creating a positive work atmosphere. Although research on interventions targeting efforts to improve the social environment, such as peer support programs, is lacking, there is reason to believe that this may help build a mentally healthy workplace [29].

The workplace is one arena where participants could be valued, productive, and able; all of which contributed to capacity to work while having MHPs. Bringing up MHPs, however, conflicted with the notion of being a good worker. This notion was described in terms of one’s own image of what a good worker is, likely to be influenced by a collective understanding at work and in society. In our study, participants described that disclosing MHPs to the first-line manager could have negative consequences, such as a feeling of being treated differently afterwards. The European Agency for Safety and Health at Work has provided guidance on how to support employees with MHPs, emphasizing the need for an inclusive environment where there is awareness of the stigma that can surround MHPs [30]. After disclosing MHPs to colleagues, the employees were generally surprised by the relief it could bring, and how colleagues responded. Colleagues who may have been seen as “hard” or “cold” could be the ones who showed the most compassion. An open climate in the workplace where it is possible to discuss MHPs could mean that these problems can be managed at an early stage.

The theme ‘Preserving one’s identity and agency when working while having MHPs’ included the hindering factor of delayed help-seeking behavior if the perceived cause of MHPs was ascribed to the private sphere and not work. The first-line manager was not involved until symptoms had become too difficult to conceal and had started to have a greater impact at work, such as frequent short-term sickness absence. Although stigma or fear of negative treatment was not discussed among our participants in relation to the hindering factor of perceiving the cause of MHPs as related to the private sphere, it could be an underlying obstacle [31]. MHPs can have multiple causes. Regardless of the cause, managers have expressed difficulties in identifying early symptoms of MHPs [32] and managers are often made aware through self-disclosure from the employee or from colleagues [33]. If managers were able to detect MHPs that could be resolved and managed early, this could potentially promote working. Educating managers on mental health among employees has the potential to improve their support to employees experiencing MHPs [34].

The results also shine light on the demarcation between what is the responsibility of the employer and the employee. This study shows that this is not clear, at least for the employee. Raising awareness of MHPs among employees may be a good start. However, how this should be delivered to help the employee receive the organizational support available needs to be further developed. In addition, handling employees with symptoms of MHPs could also add to the burden of the manager [35]. In a review focusing on male-dominated workplaces, the authors conclude that mental health literacy and help-seeking behavior can be modified through interventions, although mechanisms are still unclear [36].

The physical work environment related to the organizational level in the IGLOO framework, (e.g., noise and cold temperatures) was identified as a hindering factor for working while having MHPs. A systematic review of small and medium-sized enterprises in the healthcare sector found that interventions targeting the physical work environment could reduce burnout and improve mental well-being among employees [37]. A scoping review focusing on sources of stress for emergency telecommunicators found that the working environment, e.g., lighting, noise or temperature, was a commonly reported source of negative impact on mental well-being [38]. Working towards a good physical work environment may therefore have an impact not only on physical health but also on mental health. The physical work environment is determined by several factors, but first and foremost the type of work that is to be performed in the work environment. Introducing changes into the work environment must consider the specific context.

In our study, work hours interfering with private life or work hours resulting in inadequate recuperation were hindering factors for working while having MHPs. A recent study on Swedish employees with common mental disorders found that flexible working hours were associated with decreased risk of sickness absence [39]. Adjusting working hours may be a preventive measure to consider, although this may be difficult for certain jobs.

Other incentives to working while having MHPs, such as economics or difficulty changing jobs due to educational level or the labor market, were mentioned in the interviews but are not included in the results. These processes may promote working in the short term, but it is not known if they could become a hindering factor in the longer term.

The results from this study support the conceptualization of presenteeism as a dynamic and adaptive behavior [6]. Although the study did not aim to assess whether this behavior was beneficial for the employees’ health, whether it depleted their health resources, or how it affected performance at work, the results provide valuable insight into factors that may promote or hinder presenteeism and its potential implications for employee well-being.

The results in relation to the JD-R model

Understanding how our results correspond to health impairment and motivational process of the JDR model could provide further knowledge on the processes that promote or hinder working while having MHPs.

The theme ‘Influence of life stage on working while having MHPs’ highlights how different phases in a person’s private-life and career shape the perception and management of job demands. This has not been extensively researched in relation to the JD-R model. A previous study suggests that a life-course perspective, i.e., how an individual’s job and personal demands and resources vary across the life-span, could be integrated with the JD-R model, because it provides insights into how job demands and resources change and influence the motivational and health-impairment processes during different career stages [40]. In our study, we found that over time, situations and individual priorities/motivation changed, which led to re-evaluation of one’s work situation. Furthermore, caring for young children in early life and career stages and parents during later stages could be hindering factors for working while having MHPs. Therefore, our study supports adopting a life-course perspective in relation to the JD-R model. The theme ‘Managing MHPs in the social and organizational context’ included support from both colleagues and supervisors. In our study, support from colleagues, both in terms of the social culture at work and trusting relationships, was highlighted as a resource and buffer for job demands. This could be seen as an act of job crafting, as described in relation to the JD-R model [41]. The employees are not merely passive receivers of elements in the work environment, but actively shape their work environment and thereby their job demands and resources [41].

Within the theme ‘Preserving one’s identity and agency when working while having MHPs’, the workplace was an arena for the employee to be seen and be capable. Coming to work was used as a coping strategy for maintaining function while experiencing MHPs. Conversely, the strategy of not seeking help at the workplace due to perceiving the symptoms to be related to private-life hindered working while having MHPs. Bakker and de Vries [42] suggest that different strategies can moderate either the health impairment or motivational pathways, which is corroborated by the results of our study. When the organization provides resources such as autonomy, influence, and social support, the workplace itself can become a resource for the employee. This may lead to a positive cycle where employees feel empowered and supported, making them more likely to show up for work and seek help when needed.

It has been suggested that personal resources be added to the JD-R model. Leisure time physical activity as a means of dealing with stress or frustration was emphasized as a personal resource for working while having MHPs. Higher levels of leisure-time physical activity have been found to be associated with a lower risk of cardiovascular and all-cause mortality across occupations with different levels of physical activity [43]. Promoting physical activity in the workplace could have positive health effects, although should this be implemented during work hours, hindering factors for implementation still need to be addressed [44].

Methodological considerations

This study has several strengths. First, the study included participants of different genders and age groups, providing varied experiences of working while having MHPs. The use of a semi-structured interview guide developed within the research group increased the credibility of the findings. During the interview, the interviewer used open probing questions and summarized statements to allow the respondent to elaborate on what had been said. The members of the research group came from a range of backgrounds and had extensive knowledge on workplace mental health and intervention development, which adds to the dependability of the analysis. All authors had previous experience in qualitative analysis. The detailed description of the study design, context, and analysis process allows the reader to assess the transferability of findings to other settings.

This study also has some limitations. Although the research team attempted to contact participants from the RCT (129 participants) through an initial phone call, only 18 participants agreed to take part in an interview. Non-response to the phone call was the most common reason for not participating. However, the sample included participants from all three companies, with diverse representation regarding gender, ages, and educational level. The relatively small sample size may raise questions about whether the dataset contained sufficient information to support our results. Although qualitative studies do not require a fixed number of participants, the concept of information power offers a useful framework for evaluating the adequacy of the sample [45]. In this study, the focused research question, the relevance of the research aim for the participants, and interpretation of the findings through the JD-R model all contribute to the trustworthiness and depth of the results.

The interviews were conducted one year after the baseline measurement, and symptoms likely changed between baseline and the interview. The interview questions were posed retrospectively to elicit participants’ experiences in the year preceding the interview. Participants with more severe symptoms may find it too burdensome to participate in interviews, which may limit the transferability of our findings to employees with less severe symptoms. Additionally, most participants in the study were born in Sweden, which may limit the possibility to transfer findings to employees born outside Sweden or Europe. It is possible that other modes of data collection, such as observing participants at work, could have yielded more insight into the social context of the workplace and structures that may influence employees working while having MHPs.

Symptom severity may also influence how participants view their ability to work. Job demands may be appraised differently due to the severity of MHPs [46]. Participants with more severe symptoms may view the work as more demanding and identify fewer promoting factors for working while they had MHPs. Similarly, employees with lower symptom severity may overlook hindering factors. However, the participants in this study experienced a range of symptoms, so this has likely led to a nuanced dataset with a broad range of promoting and hindering factors for working while having MHPs.

Face-to-face interviews can provide rich content in terms of, e.g., body language or facial expressions that may be hard to capture through phone interviews. Participants in this study could choose between a phone or video-conferencing call and were encouraged to find a place and time that suited them and where they would be undisturbed. It is not known how this affected the interviews; however, phone interviews may be well suited for talking about sensitive topics [47]. We chose to conduct interviews remotely to lower the threshold for participating and make it more convenient for the participants. Based on the many detailed descriptions provided by the participants, we believe that interviewing by phone did not affect the richness of the data.

The participants and the interviewer had minimal contact before the interview, which also may have influenced the willingness to talk about sensitive topics. The detailed descriptions of situations in the data suggest that the participants felt comfortable talking about the topic. The focus of the interviews was limited to the previous year, during which the participants were included in the RCT.

The richness of the data, combined with a rigorous coding process and interdisciplinary team reflections, enabled a nuanced understanding of working while having MHPs among employees in the private sector. Organizational contexts may vary across countries, but the alignment of our findings with previous research suggests that our results may be transferable beyond the Swedish setting. The detailed description of the setting and participants supports assessments of transferability.

Directions for future research

Future research could focus on what organizational support is needed to detect early signs of MHPs in the workplace and how interventions can be tailored to the individual, paying particular attention to life stage and career phase. In addition, research is needed on how to foster a positive workplace culture to prevent deterioration and improve mental health.

Concluding remarks

Employees at risk of sickness absence due to MHPs may perceive promoting and hindering factors for working while having MHPs at individual, group, leader and organizational levels. Thus, a multilevel approach should be considered when designing interventions aimed at employees working while having MHPs. Furthermore, the life-course perspective highlights that an employee’s needs can vary depending on their life- and career-stages. These needs may differ but fostering an inclusive and supportive work environment could help reduce hindering factors to accessing help at work and potentially promote working while having MHPs.

Supporting information

S1 File. Interview guide.

(DOCX)

pone.0342773.s001.docx (19.3KB, docx)

Acknowledgments

The authors would like to gratefully acknowledge the participants who took part in the study.

Abbreviations

HAD

Hospital anxiety and depression scale

IGLOO

Individual, group, leader, organization, overarching context

JD-R

Job demands resources model

MHP

Mental health problems

RCT

Randomized controlled trial.

Data Availability

The data are not publicly available as they include information that could compromise the privacy of the study participants (data contain potentially identifying and sensitive study participant information). Reasonable inquiries about access may be sent to Karolinska Institutet, Institute of Environmental Medicine, Unit of Intervention and Implementation Research for Worker Health, Box 210, 171 77 Stockholm or by contacting the Research and Data Office at Karolinska Institutet: rdo@ki.se. The Swedish Ethical Review Authority will then be contacted for permission.

Funding Statement

EBB no. 190134 AFA Insurance https://fou.afaforsakring.se/sv The funding body had no role in the study design; data collection and analysis; interpretation of data and results; writing of the paper; or decision to submit for publication.

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The following points should be addressed:

1. Introduction

The phrase "facilitators of, and barriers to" in the title essentially refers to identifying promoting and hindering factors. Therefore, I suggest revising the wording for clarity and conciseness.

The introduction requires clearer organization. The explanation regarding the PRIME study would be more appropriately placed in the Methods section, particularly under participant recruitment.

Although the authors provide a theoretical framework for defining "staying at work" (SAW), this section currently reads more like a conclusion rather than a theoretical positioning. The subheading used for this section should be removed, and the discussion should instead be integrated into the main flow of the introduction.

In addition, the conceptual distinction between SAW and presenteeism remains unclear and should be explicitly addressed. It is also important to more clearly articulate the rationale and unique contribution of this study within the existing body of research.

2. Methods

As a qualitative study, greater methodological rigor is needed. Qualitative research demands that the researcher maintain objectivity, demonstrate contextual understanding of participants, and ensure the trustworthiness of the findings.

First, the limited number of participants raises questions about whether the study achieved sufficient data saturation. A more cautious interpretation of the results is warranted, and the limitations should be clearly acknowledged.

Second, additional information is needed regarding the data analysis process. Specifically, how many researchers were involved in analyzing the interview data, and what procedures were followed to ensure analytical reliability?

The final sample of 18 participants was drawn from a larger pool within the PRIME study. Rather than detailing the selection process, this could be briefly summarized, with the emphasis placed on describing the final sample and its characteristics. Demographic and occupational details of participants should be included in the Results section.

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Abbreviations such as AFr, EBB, IA, and AFi should be written out in full upon first use.

The manuscript currently lacks information about participant characteristics, which should be clearly presented.

In summary, while the topic is timely and important, revisions are needed to improve the structure, theoretical clarity, and methodological transparency of the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review your manuscript, which addresses a timely and important topic: the experiences of private-sector employees with mental health problems in relation to staying at work (SAW). Your study contributes to the understanding of workplace mental health by focusing on facilitators and barriers from the employee perspective, particularly in blue- and pink-collar occupations, a population often underrepresented in such research.

The manuscript is well organized and clearly written. The use of reflexive thematic analysis is appropriate, and the application of the JD-R and IGLOO frameworks offers valuable potential for interpretation. However, to enhance the methodological rigor and interpretive strength of your study, the following major revisions are recommended:

Major Points

1. Sample Representativeness and Self-selection Bias

The study included 18 interview participants from a pool of 129 eligible individuals (14% response rate). While small samples are acceptable in qualitative research, this low participation rate introduces concerns about potential self-selection bias and limits the transferability of the findings. Please discuss this limitation more explicitly in the Methods and Discussion sections.

2. Participant Mental Health Status and Heterogeneity

While GHQ-12 and a predictive item on sickness absence were used for inclusion, there is limited discussion of the severity or heterogeneity of participants' mental health problems. More information or reflection on this point would provide helpful context for interpreting the findings.

3. Theoretical Integration

Although the manuscript references both the JD-R and IGLOO frameworks, their integration into the analysis appears superficial. The study would benefit greatly from a clearer mapping between themes and theoretical constructions. Consider adding a summary table or diagram to illustrate how each identified theme relates to specific elements of the frameworks.

4. Conceptual Clarity: SAW vs. Presenteeism

The terms “staying at work” and “presenteeism” are used somewhat interchangeably, yet they are conceptually distinct. Please clarify how you define and distinguish these concepts in the context of your study or justify their use as overlapping constructs.

Minor Suggestions

5. Language and Tone: The manuscript is generally written in clear and standard English. However, a few expressions may benefit from refinement for tone and clarity. For instance, consider replacing "battered" (p. XX) with a more neutral term like "exhausted" or "fatigued."

6. Use of Visual Aids: Figure 1 and Figure 2 are helpful but could benefit from additional explanation in the main text to maximize their contribution to the reader’s understanding.

7. Abbreviations: Consider providing a list of abbreviations (e.g., SAW, MHPs, JD-R) for reader reference and ensure that all terms are defined upon first use.

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In sum, this is a promising and well-conceived manuscript that addresses a significant issue in occupational health. With revisions to strengthen the theoretical grounding, clarify key concepts, and address methodological limitations, the manuscript will be considerably improved and may be suitable for publication in PLOS ONE.

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Major comments

1. Adverse job stressors that negatively affect mental health have already been well established in prior research. Your study is predicated on the idea that employees with mental health problems face different factors, yet the theoretical basis for why these factors should differ needs to be reinforced. Please strengthen the Introduction with a clear rationale for why these alternative factors are expected in this population.

2. Lines 84–92 do not belong in the Introduction and should be relocated to the Methods section.

3. Isn’t “staying at work” essentially the inverse of job leave (turnover)? Please clarify how your exploration of “stay at work” differs from existing studies that examine predictors of job leave.

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Author response to Decision Letter 1


21 Aug 2025

Dear Editor,

Thank you for the possibility to revise and resubmit our manuscript with the title “Swedish private-sector employees’ experiences of facilitators of, and barriers to, staying at work with mental health problems: a qualitative study.”, submission ID PONE-D-25-25048. We would also like to thank you and the reviewers for your valuable comments. We believe these have contributed to improving our manuscript greatly. You will find our point-by-point response below. Changes in the manuscript are indicated with row number in the point-by-point response.

On behalf of the authors,

Yours sincerely,

Anna Frantz

Additional Editor Comments:

The following points should be addressed:

1. Introduction

The phrase "facilitators of, and barriers to" in the title essentially refers to identifying promoting and hindering factors. Therefore, I suggest revising the wording for clarity and conciseness.

Response: We agree with your suggestion of replacing the wording “facilitators of, and barriers to” and have replaced this with promoting and hindering factors throughout the document.

The introduction requires clearer organization. The explanation regarding the PRIME study would be more appropriately placed in the Methods section, particularly under participant recruitment.

Response: Regarding the description of the PRIME-study, we have moved this to the methods section, line 142-146.

Although the authors provide a theoretical framework for defining "staying at work" (SAW), this section currently reads more like a conclusion rather than a theoretical positioning. The subheading used for this section should be removed, and the discussion should instead be integrated into the main flow of the introduction. In addition, the conceptual distinction between SAW and presenteeism remains unclear and should be explicitly addressed.

Response: We have removed the sub-heading for the section ‘Theoretical underpinnings’ and integrated the description of theoretical frameworks into the introduction (line 67-68). With regards to the conceptual distinction between SAW and presenteeism, we find that it would fit better in the discussion, line 504-515.

It is also important to more clearly articulate the rationale and unique contribution of this study within the existing body of research.

Response: We have added a clarification of the study’s unique contribution in relation to previous studies, line 88-89 in the introduction.

2. Methods

As a qualitative study, greater methodological rigor is needed. Qualitative research demands that the researcher maintain objectivity, demonstrate contextual understanding of participants, and ensure the trustworthiness of the findings.

First, the limited number of participants raises questions about whether the study achieved sufficient data saturation. A more cautious interpretation of the results is warranted, and the limitations should be clearly acknowledged.

Response: Regarding the number of participants – we agree that it raises questions about whether enough data was collected. We have extended the discussion of limitations related to the number of participants on line 477-484. It is possible that a certain group was self-selected into this study – the additional information about the study participants included in the results section allows for a more nuanced interpretation of the transferability of the findings and the possible limitations of the study group.

We have reformulated the concluding remarks to make a more cautious interpretation of the results, line 523-532.

Second, additional information is needed regarding the data analysis process. Specifically, how many researchers were involved in analyzing the interview data, and what procedures were followed to ensure analytical reliability ?

Response: A clarification of how the authors contributed to the data analysis process, as well as a clarification of the procedure to ensure analytical reliability, is provided on lines 201, 203-207.

(The final sample of 18 participants was drawn from a larger pool within the PRIME study. Rather than detailing the selection process, this could be briefly summarized, with the emphasis placed on describing the final sample and its characteristics . Demographic and occupational details of participants should be included in the Results section.

Response: We have summarized the selection process more briefly in the methods section and removed redundant information (line 168-170). A table with participant demographics has been added to the results section (line 226).

3. Other Points

Abbreviations such as AFr, EBB, IA, and AFi should be written out in full upon first use.

Response: We have written out these abbreviations upon first use (lines 177-179) and reviewed all abbreviations throughout the manuscript.

The manuscript currently lacks information about participant characteristics, which should be clearly presented.

Response: A table with participant characteristics has been added (line 226)

Reviewer 1

Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review your manuscript, which addresses a timely and important topic: the experiences of private-sector employees with mental health problems in relation to staying at work (SAW). Your study contributes to the understanding of workplace mental health by focusing on facilitators and barriers from the employee perspective, particularly in blue- and pink-collar occupations, a population often underrepresented in such research.  The manuscript is well organized and clearly written. The use of reflexive thematic analysis is appropriate, and the application of the JD-R and IGLOO frameworks offers valuable potential for interpretation. However, to enhance the methodological rigor and interpretive strength of your study, the following major revisions are recommended:

Major Points

1. Sample Representativeness and Self-selection Bias

The study included 18 interview participants from a pool of 129 eligible individuals (14% response rate). While small samples are acceptable in qualitative research, this low participation rate introduces concerns about potential self-selection bias and limits the transferability of the findings . Please discuss this limitation more explicitly in the Methods and Discussion sections.

Response: Thank you for commenting on this. We have considered your suggestion and extended the discussion regarding our sample and transferability in the methodological discussion (lines 477-484).

2. Participant Mental Health Status and Heterogeneity

While GHQ-12 and a predictive item on sickness absence were used for inclusion, there is limited discussion of the severity or heterogeneity of participants' mental health problems . More information or reflection on this point would provide helpful context for interpreting the findings.

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have added information about symptom levels of anxiety and depression as measured with the Hospital anxiety and depression scale at 12 month follow-up corresponding to the time of the interview (Table 1, line 226). We have also extended the methodological discussion with regard to symptom severity (line 477-484), see text extract below.

“The interview was conducted one year after the baseline measurement, and symptoms have likely changed during the year between baseline and the interview. The interview questions were posed in a retrospective manner to elicit participant’s experiences from the year preceding the interview. Participants with more symptoms may find it too burdensome to participate in interviews which may limit transferability of findings to these individuals. Additionally,most participants in the study were born in Sweden, which may limit the transferability of findings to employees born outside Sweden or Europe”

3. Theoretical Integration

Although the manuscript references both the JD-R and IGLOO frameworks , their integration into the analysis appears superficial. The study would benefit greatly from a clearer mapping between themes and theoretical constructions. Consider adding a summary table or diagram to illustrate how each identified theme relates to specific elements of the frameworks.

Response: Thank you for this comment. Our intention was to use the IGLOO framework to identify on what level each promoting/hindering factor was situated on – individual level, group level, leader level, organizational level or overarching level. The JD-R is not used specifically in the data analysis, as the data analysis was inductive and not guided by a theory. The JD-R was used as a framework to discuss our results. We have extended the discussion of our results in relation to the JD-R (lines 433-443) and clarified our use of the IGLOO framework in Table 2 (line 348)

4. Conceptual Clarity: SAW vs. Presenteeism

The terms “staying at work” and “presenteeism” are used somewhat interchangeably, yet they are conceptually distinct. Please clarify how you define and distinguish these concepts in the context of your study or justify their use as overlapping constructs .

Response: We agree that there is room for improvement in the description of the concepts. We have added a clearer definition for staying at work in the introduction (line 67-68 ) After careful consideration, we have decided to move the section concerning presenteeism to the discussion to improve the clarity of the introduction. (line 505-516)

Minor Suggestions

5. Language and Tone:

The manuscript is generally written in clear and standard English. However, a few expressions may benefit from refinement for tone and clarity. For instance, consider replacing "battered" (p. XX) with a more neutral term like "exhausted" or "fatigued."

Response: We have reviewed the manuscript with consideration of tone and clarity. We have replaced the wording “battered” with exhausted (line 345).

6. Use of Visual Aids:

Figure 1 and Figure 2 are helpful but could benefit from additional explanation in the main text to maximize their contribution to the reader’s understanding.

Response: We have added additional explanation in the text for Figure 1, lines 211-216, and Figure 2, line 229.

7. Abbreviations:

Consider providing a list of abbreviations (e.g., SAW, MHPs, JD-R ) for reader reference and ensure that all terms are defined upon first use.

Response: Thank you for this suggestion! We have added a list of abbreviations at the end of the manuscript and defined terms upon first use.

Conclusion

In sum, this is a promising and well-conceived manuscript that addresses a significant issue in occupational health. With revisions to strengthen the theoretical grounding, clarify key concepts, and address methodological limitations, the manuscript will be considerably improved and may be suitable for publication in PLOS ONE.

Response: Thank you for your encouraging words.

Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review the manuscript titled “Swedish private-sector employees’ experiences of facilitators of, and barriers to, staying at work with mental health problems: a qualitative study.” The conclusions you draw are highly important for future academic debate in occupational health and represent a valuable contribution. However, there are still several points that need clarification:

Major comments

1. Adverse job stressors that negatively affect mental health have already been well established in prior research. Your study is predicated on the idea that employees with mental health problems face different factors, yet the theoretical basis for why these factors should differ needs to be reinforced. Please strengthen the Introduction with a clear rationale for why these alternative factors are expected in this population.

Response : Thank you for your valuable comment. The rationale behind our study is the lack of knowledge on how employees with mental health problems experience what hinders or promotes stay at work, especially in blue collar sectors. We have added a clarification of the study’s unique contribution in relation to previous studies, line 88-89 in the introduction.

2. Lines 84–92 do not belong in the Introduction and should be relocated to the Methods section

Response: We have moved this section from the introduction to methods (line 142-146)

3. Isn’t “staying at work ” essentially the inverse of job leave (turnover)? Please clarify how your exploration of “stay at work” differs from existing studies that examine predictors of job leave.

Response: Thank you for raising this question. We have added a clarification to the definition of staying at work (line 67-68) and extended the discussion (lines 505-516). To the best of our knowledge, staying at work is not necessarily the inverse of job leave or turnover, as it potentially could be reported regardless of changing workplace or not.

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Decision Letter 1

Yeon-Ha Kim

12 Sep 2025

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Additional Editor Comments:

Introduction:

The rationale for the study is not clearly conveyed. The section would benefit from clearer organization. Currently, the introduction flows from "workplace MHP" to "studies of SAW" to "qualitative methods as an appropriate approach" and then to the "JD-R model," but the overall structure lacks coherence. In particular, the part on "studies of SAW" should be described more clearly and smoothly—at present, it is difficult to understand what the authors are aiming to communicate. I recommend emphasizing the need for the present study by identifying gaps in previous research. Furthermore, the JD-R model appears abruptly and its relevance to the research aims is unclear; please elaborate on its connection more clearly.

Participants:

The description of the participants should be more specific. While it is stated that the participants are first-line managers, it is not clear whether their companies belong to the production industry, warehouse logistics, or retail sector. Please provide additional information in Table 1, such as the number of employees in each company and the departments to which the participants belong. Also, please clarify how these characteristics are reflected in the findings.

Results:

Although Figure 2 and Table 2 present the themes, as well as promoting and hindering factors, there is no table presenting the themes, sub-themes, and meaningful statements derived through reflexive thematic analysis of the interviews. Please include such a table to enhance clarity and transparency of the analytical process.

Thank you for your efforts in revising the manuscript in accordance with the reviewers’ comments. However, the manuscript still appears to be insufficiently developed for publication at this stage.

Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer's Responses to Questions

Comments to the Author

Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: N/A

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Overall assessment

The authors have made commendable efforts to address most of the previous reviewer comments, particularly by clarifying the methods, expanding the discussion of limitations, and refining terminology. These revisions have improved the manuscript. However, several important issues remain unresolved. To strengthen the scientific rigor and conceptual clarity, I recommend further revisions before the manuscript can be considered for publication.

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1. Sample size, response rate, and transferability

The authors acknowledge the small sample and low participation rate (14%). While this is noted as a limitation, the discussion remains somewhat general. More explicit reflection on how this limited response may have influenced data saturation, representativeness, and potential self-selection bias would strengthen the trustworthiness of the findings.

2. Conceptual clarity: Staying at Work (SAW) vs. Presenteeism

The authors responded to earlier comments about the overlap between SAW and presenteeism. Nonetheless, the distinction is still insufficiently clear. Please articulate more explicitly how SAW differs from presenteeism in terms of definition, implications, and relevance for workplace interventions.

3. Theoretical integration (JD-R and IGLOO frameworks)

The manuscript now references the JD-R and IGLOO frameworks more clearly. However, their integration into the analysis remains limited. Consider providing a stronger mapping between empirical themes and theoretical constructs (e.g., a summary table or figure) to demonstrate how these frameworks meaningfully guided interpretation.

4. Heterogeneity of participants and severity of mental health problems

Although inclusion criteria are explained, there is still limited discussion of the variability in participants’ mental health conditions. This heterogeneity could significantly shape their experiences of staying at work. Further reflection on how severity of symptoms may have influenced responses is needed.

5. Analytical rigor and reflexivity

The use of reflexive thematic analysis is appropriate. Still, details about coding and reflexivity remain vague. For example, how were coder disagreements handled? In what ways was reflexivity actively applied throughout analysis? Clarifying these points would enhance methodological transparency.

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6. Terminology and neutrality: While some terms have been adjusted, a few expressions still risk sounding value-laden. Please review wording carefully to ensure consistent neutrality.

7. Figures: Figures 1 and 2 are helpful but require more explanation in the text to clarify their relevance.

8. Abbreviations: Ensure that all abbreviations (e.g., SAW, MHPs, JD-R) are defined at first appearance in the text, even if they appear in the abbreviation list.

9. Repetition: Background details (e.g., PRIME study) remain somewhat repetitive across sections. Streamlining would improve readability.

The manuscript has improved, and the authors have addressed many earlier concerns. Nevertheless, additional clarification regarding sample limitations, conceptual distinctions, theoretical integration, and analytical rigor is still required. With these revisions, the paper has strong potential to make a meaningful contribution.</minor></major>

Reviewer #2: Thank you for revising the manuscript. I believe the manuscript has been sufficiently revised in response to the comments. I have no additional comment.

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Author response to Decision Letter 2


27 Oct 2025

Dear Editor,

Thank you for the possibility to further revise and resubmit our manuscript with the title “Swedish private-sector employees’ experiences of promoting and hindering factors for staying at work with mental health problems: a qualitative study”, submission ID PONE-D-25-25048. We would also like to thank you and the reviewers for your valuable comments. We believe these have contributed to improving our manuscript greatly. You will find our point-by-point response below. Changes in the manuscript are indicated with row number in the point-by-point response.

On behalf of the authors,

Yours sincerely,

Anna Frantz

Additional Editor Comments:

Introduction:

The rationale for the study is not clearly conveyed. The section would benefit from clearer organization. Currently, the introduction flows from "workplace MHP" to "studies of SAW" to "qualitative methods as an appropriate approach" and then to the "JD-R model," but the overall structure lacks coherence. In particular, the part on "studies of SAW" should be described more clearly and smoothly—at present, it is difficult to understand what the authors are aiming to communicate. I recommend emphasizing the need for the present study by identifying gaps in previous research. Furthermore, the JD-R model appears abruptly and its relevance to the research aims is unclear; please elaborate on its connection more clearly.

Author response:

Thank you for the helpful feedback! We have revised the introduction to improve clarity and to convey the rationale more clearly. We have also integrated the JD-R model into the introduction (lines 89-96) and the section on stay at work has been revised (lines 73-82) to make a clearer connection to the aim of the study and connect to the research gaps in previous literature.

Participants:

The description of the participants should be more specific. While it is stated that the participants are first-line managers, it is not clear whether their companies belong to the production industry, warehouse logistics, or retail sector. Please provide additional information in Table 1, such as the number of employees in each company and the departments to which the participants belong. Also, please clarify how these characteristics are reflected in the findings.

Author response:

Thank you for your valuable comments. We have updated table 1 to include the sector in which each participant belong (line 239). To preserve participant anonymity, we have not specified which department each employee worked in. Where applicable, we have added two sentences on results that were specific for sector, see lines 314-315 and 320.

Results:

Although Figure 2 and Table 2 present the themes, as well as promoting and hindering factors, there is no table presenting the themes, sub-themes, and meaningful statements derived through reflexive thematic analysis of the interviews. Please include such a table to enhance clarity and transparency of the analytical process.

Author response:

The findings were summarized in the three themes, without sub-themes. Within each theme we identified promoting and hindering factors, presented in Table 2. Figure 1 represents the analytical process with an example of moving from meaningful statements identified in the texts, codes, and themes. Figure 1 has been clarified with arrows marking the path from meaning units to themes.

Reviewers' comments:

6. Review Comments to the Author

Reviewer #1: Overall assessment

The authors have made commendable efforts to address most of the previous reviewer comments, particularly by clarifying the methods, expanding the discussion of limitations, and refining terminology. These revisions have improved the manuscript. However, several important issues remain unresolved. To strengthen the scientific rigor and conceptual clarity, I recommend further revisions before the manuscript can be considered for publication.

1. Sample size, response rate, and transferability

The authors acknowledge the small sample and low participation rate (14%). While this is noted as a limitation, the discussion remains somewhat general. More explicit reflection on how this limited response may have influenced data saturation, representativeness, and potential self-selection bias would strengthen the trustworthiness of the findings.

Author response:

Our study employed reflexive thematic analysis in line with Braun and Clarke [1]. As suggested by Braun and Clarke, information power instead of data saturation is discussed in our study, such as the narrow focus of the research question, participants relevant for the research aim, and the use of existing theoretical frameworks [1, 2]. We have elaborated on this in the limitations section (lines 520-528).

As the aim of the study was to explore promoting and hindering factors to working with mental health problems, the richness of the interviews and contextual detail provided was a way to ensure transferability of our findings. We have clarified this in the revised discussion and emphasized how these factors support the transferability of the findings to similar workplace contexts (lines 532-538).

We acknowledge the relatively low participation rate (14%) and have extended the methodological discussion addressing potential self-selection bias on lines 518-523. Importantly, our sample did not differ from the total study population in terms of key characteristics (age, gender), which suggests that self-selection may not have substantially influenced the findings. Nonetheless, we recognize that those who chose to participate may have had particular experiences or incentives, and we have reflected on this in the limitation (lines 539-545).

We hope these additions strengthen the methodological transparency and trustworthiness of the manuscript.

2. Conceptual clarity: Staying at Work (SAW) vs. Presenteeism

The authors responded to earlier comments about the overlap between SAW and presenteeism. Nonetheless, the distinction is still insufficiently clear. Please articulate more explicitly how SAW differs from presenteeism in terms of definition, implications, and relevance for workplace interventions.

Author response:

We appreciate the reviewer’s continued attention to the distinction between SAW and presenteeism. We acknowledge that our earlier explanation may not have sufficiently clarified the concerns raised regarding this issue. We have decided to use presenteeism in our study to improve clarity.

Our use of the term ‘stay at work’ was intentional, to take a more neutral stance in exploring promoting and hindering factors. In response to the reviewer’s comment, and upon further reflection, we have decided to replace the use of Stay at work to maintain a clearer focus on the aim of the study; exploring promoting and hindering factors for working with mental health problems. We believe the use of “working with MHPs” to better align with the exploratory nature of our study.

The concept of presenteeism has been researched and theorized, with two main lines of research defining presenteeism as (1) reduced productivity due to working while ill, and (2) as the behavior of attending work despite health problems . The latter has been suggested as it does not conflate predictors and outcomes. In line with Ruhle et al [3], we don’t label presenteeism per se as being either positive or negative for the employee or the organization. This decision keeps the focus on the behavior of working with MHPs including both positive and negative experiences, which is more in line with the aim of the study. Therefore, we choose to use the concept of presenteeism defined as working with ill-health [3].

We have revised the section on presenteeism in the discussion, lines 446-450.

3. Theoretical integration (JD-R and IGLOO frameworks)

The manuscript now references the JD-R and IGLOO frameworks more clearly. However, their integration into the analysis remains limited. Consider providing a stronger mapping between empirical themes and theoretical constructs (e.g., a summary table or figure) to demonstrate how these frameworks meaningfully guided interpretation.

Response to reviewers:

Thank you for your encouraging words. As our analysis was inductive, these frameworks were not used to guide the coding or theme development, but rather to support the interpretation of findings in the discussion section. This approach allowed us to remain open to participants’ experiences during the analysis without imposing predefined theoretical concepts on the data.

We recognize the value of more explicitly mapping empirical themes to theoretical constructs, and we have expanded the discussion to better articulate how the constructed themes relate to key elements of the JD-R model. We have also clarified how the IGLOO framework offers a useful lens for understanding the multi-level nature of the factors influencing SAW.

Given the inductive approach to the analysis, we opt not to include a summary table or figure including the theoretical constructs, as it may suggest a level of theoretical integration that was not present in the analytical process. Fitting the data to existing models would suit a more deductive analysis, instead we intended to use these frameworks to enrich the interpretation of the empirical results and highlight potential avenues for future research.

4. Heterogeneity of participants and severity of mental health problems

Although inclusion criteria are explained, there is still limited discussion of the variability in participants’ mental health conditions. This heterogeneity could significantly shape their experiences of staying at work. Further reflection on how severity of symptoms may have influenced responses is needed.

Author response:

Thank you for highlighting symptom variability among participants. We agree that the severity of mental health problems could shape individual’s experiences of SAW and have expanded the discussion to reflect this more explicitly (see lines 539-545).

In particular, we now address how symptom severity may influence participants’ perceptions of their work environment and available resources. As noted in the revised discussion:

“Symptom severity may also influence how participants view their ability to work. Job demands may be appraised differently due to severity of MHPs. Participants with more severe symptoms may view the work as more demanding and identify fewer promoting factors for working with MHPs. Similarly, employees with lower symptom severity may overlook hindering factors. As the participants in this study experienced a range of symptoms, this has likely led to a nuanced dataset with a broad range of promoting and hindering factors for working with MHPs.”

5. Analytical rigor and reflexivity

The use of reflexive thematic analysis is appropriate. Still, details about coding and reflexivity remain vague. For example, how were coder disagreements handled? In what ways was reflexivity actively applied throughout analysis? Clarifying these points would enhance methodological transparency.

Author response: Thank you for highlighting the need for greater clarity regarding our coding process and reflexivity. We have revised the methods section to provide a more detailed account of how these aspects were addressed during the analysis (see lines 199-202). Specifically, clarification has been added in how differences in coding was handled, and how reflexivity was enabled during the analysis process.

“Reflexivity during the analysis was facilitated in multiple ways; by notetaking as a way of keeping track of initial ideas and reflection, by having two researchers coding data, and through continuous meetings with the entire research group discussing assumptions around the data and results.”

6. Terminology and neutrality: While some terms have been adjusted, a few expressions still risk sounding value-laden. Please review wording carefully to ensure consistent neutrality.

Author response:

Thank you for your careful reading and thoughtful comment. We have reviewed the manuscript with particular attention to expressions that could be perceived as value-laden. While we fully appreciate the importance of maintaining a neutral and balanced tone, we were unable to identify specific instances where wording may unintentionally convey value judgments.

We do acknowledge that the results section includes direct quotes from participants, some of which may naturally evoke emotional or evaluative responses. These quotes were selected to illustrate themes and reflect the experiences of participants. As they are translated from the original language, we have reviewed them carefully to ensure that the translations remain faithful to the original meaning and tone. Additionally, the manuscript underwent professional language review.

7. Figures: Figures 1 and 2 are helpful but require more explanation in the text to clarify their relevance.

Author response:

Thank you for this comment. We have added an additional explanation of figure 1, lines 223-227. We have removed figure 2 after consideration.

8. Abbreviations: Ensure that all abbreviations (e.g., SAW, MHPs, JD-R) are defined at first appearance in the text, even if they appear in the abbreviation list.

Author response:

Thank you for your observation. We have carefully reviewed the manuscript regarding abbreviations. All abbreviations mentioned in your comment) are defined upon first appearance in the text, in addition to being listed in the abbreviation section. We have also defined IGLOO at first appearance and added it to the abbreviation list.

We also decided to remove the acronym PRIME, as it appeared redundant and did not add clarity to the manuscript.

9. Repetition: Background details (e.g., PRIME study) remain somewhat repetitive across sections. Streamlining would improve readability.

Author response:

We have followed your recommendation and attempted to focus all information about the context of the study (the PRIME trial) in one place in the manuscript (lines 141-163).

“Participants were recruited from a randomized controlled trial (RCT) evaluating a problem-solving intervention provided by the first-line manager at three private companies in Sweden (19). The three companies were large enterprises, covering the sectors of production industry, warehouse logistics and retail. Inclusion criteria were private sector employees aged 18-59 years; scoring with a cut-off ≥3 points on the General Health Questionnaire 12-item (Swedish version); answering ‘Yes, most likely’ or ‘Yes, quite likely’ on a question on self-rated risk of future sickness absence (i.e. ‘About your health – do you think you will receive sick leave benefits because of stress, anxiety or depression in the coming 12 months?’. The response format is a 4-point scale, ranging from ‘Yes, most likely’, ‘yes, quite likely’, ‘I’m not sure’, ‘no, probably not’); and understanding written and spoken Swedish. The cut-off of 3 on the General Health Questionnaire 12-items has been validated in the general population (20). Exclusion criteria were ongoing leave due to sickness or other reason, pregnancy, sickness absence due to a common mental disorder≥14 calendar days during the last 3 months; exposure to workplace bullying by the first-line manager; or planned long-term absence in the coming year. The participants in the study all had jobs that could not be performed outside the workplace. Ethical approval was granted from the Swedish Ethical Review Authority (reference numbers 2020-03114, 2021-01748). The study followed the ethical principles of the Declaration of Helsinki for research involving human subjects (21).”

Reviewer #2: Thank you for revising the manuscript. I believe the manuscript has been sufficiently revised in response to the comments. I have no additional comment.

Author response: Thank you for your encouraging words!

References

1. Braun V, Clarke V. To saturate or not to saturate? Questioning data saturation as a useful concept for thematic analysis and sample-size rationales. Qualitative Research in Sport Exercise and Health. 2021;13(2):201-16.

2. Malterud K, Siersma VD, Guassora AD. Sample Size in Qualitative Interview Studies: Guided by Information Power. Qualitative Health Research. 2016;26(13):1753-6

Decision Letter 2

Yeon-Ha Kim

24 Nov 2025

Dear Dr. Frantz,

Thank you for your efforts in revising the manuscript in accordance with the reviewers’ comments. However, the Introduction and Methods sections still require further strengthening. In addition, the manuscript needs overall English proofreading.

There were no conflict between the reviewers.

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Additional Editor Comments:

The manuscript needs overall English proofreading. For example, the phrase “for working with mental health problems” may be better expressed as “when working while having mental health problems.”

Introduction

The Introduction and the study objectives remain insufficiently clear.

As the objectives are clearly articulated in the abstract, I recommend incorporating the same level of clarity into the Introduction.

Please further develop lines 81–86 on page 5.

The concept of presenteeism appears abruptly without any supporting rationale, which makes it difficult for readers to understand.

Methods

The criteria for participant selection are unclear.

When recruiting workers experiencing MHPs, please specify which conditions are included under MHPs and clarify whether these were medically diagnosed or self‑reported.

You also mention presenteeism criteria, but additional details are needed, such as the name of the instrument used and whether criteria (e.g., at least 3 out of 12 items) were applied.

Furthermore, while the Methods section describes data collection and analysis procedures, it does not provide the main interview questions or follow‑up probes.

These should be presented for clarity.

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?>

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??>

The PLOS Data policy

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??>

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Thank you for your careful revisions and for addressing the previous comments in depth. The manuscript has improved substantially in clarity, methodological transparency, and conceptual consistency. Your refinements—particularly regarding terminology, reflexive thematic analysis, and the elaboration of limitations—have strengthened the scientific rigor of the study. The manuscript is now very close to being ready for publication.

Below are a small number of minor suggestions that would further improve clarity and coherence.

Major (Minor) Points

1. Clarify the research gap more explicitly in the Introduction.

Although the Introduction has been improved, adding one or two sentences that clearly state why private-sector, low-skilled employees are underrepresented in prior qualitative research would strengthen the rationale for the study.

2. Add a brief statement linking Table 2 to the Results section.

Table 2 is useful, but including a sentence early in the Results to highlight that the table summarizes promoting and hindering factors across the themes would help guide readers.

3. Ensure conceptual consistency in the use of “presenteeism.”

Since you have moved away from “stay at work,” a brief explanation in the Introduction about why “presenteeism” is used as a neutral behavioral concept would strengthen coherence across sections.

4. Reflexive thematic analysis: further clarification.

Add one sentence explaining how coding discussions enhanced reflexivity (e.g., surfacing assumptions and broadening interpretation).

Consider adding a brief note on researcher positionality to increase transparency.

5. Clarify the classification of physical work environment factors.

A short explanatory sentence in the Discussion (e.g., that cold/noisy environments are organizational-level factors within the IGLOO framework but relate specifically to physical working conditions) would prevent confusion.

Minor Points

・Check for minor inconsistencies in terminology (e.g., “first-line manager” vs. “first line manager”).

・Consider briefly clarifying that “life-stage” in Theme 1 includes both family responsibilities and career stage.

・Conduct a final check for consistent citation formatting.

Your manuscript is strong, relevant, and well developed. The remaining issues are minor and can be addressed with modest revisions. I look forward to seeing the revised version.

Reviewer #2: Thank you for giving the opportunity to review the revised manuscripts.

I have no additional comments, same as the first round.

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Author response to Decision Letter 3


9 Jan 2026

Thank you for your efforts in revising the manuscript in accordance with the reviewers’ comments. However, the Introduction and Methods sections still require further strengthening. In addition, the manuscript needs overall English proofreading.

Author response: Thank you for your encouraging words! In addition to revising the manuscript, we followed your advice on English proofreading. The current version has now undergone a thorough English language review by a professional language editor.

Additional Editor Comments:

The manuscript needs overall English proofreading. For example, the phrase “for working with mental health problems” may be better expressed as “when working while having mental health problems.”

Author response: Thank you for this suggestion. The manuscript has now undergone a thorough English language review by a professional language editor. In addition to revising the wording in accordance with your suggestion above, minor changes have been made throughout the manuscript to increase clarity.

Introduction

The Introduction and the study objectives remain insufficiently clear.

As the objectives are clearly articulated in the abstract, I recommend incorporating the same level of clarity into the Introduction.

Please further develop lines 81–86 on page 5.

The concept of presenteeism appears abruptly without any supporting rationale, which makes it difficult for readers to understand.

Author response: Thank you for these suggestions. We have revised the introduction to clarify the study rationale. We have also elaborated on the presenteeism concept. We agree that it appeared abruptly and we have moved the section on presenteeism to enhance the flow in the introduction.

“Working while having MHPs can be conceptualized through presenteeism – the behavior of going to work while experiencing ill-health [4]. Previous research has studied the potential negative impact of presenteeism on work productivity and employee health [4, 5]. However, presenteeism has also been suggested to include potential functional or therapeutic aspects, such as being an individual strategy to maintain or regain function [6]. In this study, in line with this conceptualization, working while having mental health problems (presenteeism) is therefore seen as a behavior that may have negative or positive implications [4].

Methods

The criteria for participant selection are unclear.

When recruiting workers experiencing MHPs, please specify which conditions are included under MHPs and clarify whether these were medically diagnosed or self reported.

Author response: We have clarified the criteria for selection in the first paragraph under the heading “Participants and procedures”.

“Employees at risk of sickness absence due to MHPs were identified through self-reports scoring with a cut-off of ≥3 points on the General Health Questionnaire 12-item (Swedish version) validated in the general population to detect depression [24], or answering ”yes, most likely” or ”yes, quite likely” to a question on self-rated risk of sickness absence due to MHPs in the year to come (i.e. “About your health – do you think you will receive sick leave benefits because of stress, anxiety or depression in the coming 12 months?”. The response options were “Yes, most likely”,” Yes, quite likely”, “I’m not sure”, “No, probably not”. Further inclusion criteria were 18–59 years of age, ability to understand written and spoken Swedish.”

You also mention presenteeism criteria, but additional details are needed, such as the name of the instrument used and whether criteria (e.g., at least 3 out of 12 items) were applied.

Author response: Thank you for this comment. Presenteeism was included as a theoretical construct to describe the behavior of working while ill, but we did not include any instrument as selection criteria for the sample. The inclusion criteria were based on risk for sickness absence due to mental health problems operationalized as stated above. We therefore consider the sample to be at work while also having mental health problems.

Furthermore, while the Methods section describes data collection and analysis procedures, it does not provide the main interview questions or follow up probes.

These should be presented for clarity.

Author response: We agree that presenting the questions and probes within the article could add clarity. Sample questions from the interview guide have been added to the manuscript in the first paragraph under the heading “Data collection” with referral to the full interview guide as supporting information (S1 Appendix. Interview guide).

“The interview started with a broad, open question: “Tell me about your work. What does a normal working day look like?” Examples of questions to follow were “If you think about the workplace, was there anything that made it easier to stay at work?” and “Did you use any specific strategies to be able to stay at work?”. Prompts were used to encourage elaboration, e.g., “Could you give an example of a situation?” or “Could you tell me more about that?”. The full interview guide is provided in S1 Appendix.”

Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer #1: Thank you for your careful revisions and for addressing the previous comments in depth. The manuscript has improved substantially in clarity, methodological transparency, and conceptual consistency. Your refinements—particularly regarding terminology, reflexive thematic analysis, and the elaboration of limitations—have strengthened the scientific rigor of the study. The manuscript is now very close to being ready for publication.

Below are a small number of minor suggestions that would further improve clarity and coherence.

Major (Minor) Points

1. Clarify the research gap more explicitly in the Introduction.

Although the Introduction has been improved, adding one or two sentences that clearly state why private-sector, low-skilled employees are underrepresented in prior qualitative research would strengthen the rationale for the study.

Author response: Thank you for this suggestion! We have revised the introduction to clarify the rationale for the study, with the beforementioned clarification of presenteeism, and a focus on the workplace as an arena for qualitative research on hindering and promoting factors for working while having mental health problems.

“In Sweden, employers have the responsibility to systematically work to reduce risks that can lead to work-related injury or ill-health, including MHPs [17]. Hence, the workplace provides an arena for preventing sickness absence due to MHPs [18] and understanding what promotes or hinders working while having MHPs could elucidate not only individual strategies, but also factors at a group, leader, or organizational level.”

2. Add a brief statement linking Table 2 to the Results section.

Table 2 is useful, but including a sentence early in the Results to highlight that the table summarizes promoting and hindering factors across the themes would help guide readers.

Author response: We have added a sentence to the first paragraph of the Results section referencing Table 2.

“An overview of the promoting and hindering factors is presented in Table 2.”

3. Ensure conceptual consistency in the use of “presenteeism.”

Since you have moved away from “stay at work,” a brief explanation in the Introduction about why “presenteeism” is used as a neutral behavioral concept would strengthen coherence across sections.

Author response: We have clarified the use of the presenteeism concept in the introduction, at the end of the first paragraph.

“Working while having MHPs can be conceptualized through presenteeism – the behavior of going to work while experiencing ill-health [4]. Previous research has studied the potential negative impact of presenteeism on work productivity and employee health [4, 5]. However, presenteeism has also been suggested to include potential functional or therapeutic aspects, such as being an individual strategy to maintain or regain function [6]. In this study, in line with this conceptualization, working while having mental health problems (presenteeism) is therefore seen as a behavior that may have negative or positive implications [4].

4. Reflexive thematic analysis: further clarification.

Add one sentence explaining how coding discussions enhanced reflexivity (e.g., surfacing assumptions and broadening interpretation).

Author response: We have reviewed the formulation around reflexivity in the coding process and added a sentence in the second paragraph of the Methods section on how discussions enhanced reflexivity.

“To enhance reflexivity, differences in coding and assumptions on the meaning of the data were discussed between AFr and EBB. These discussions helped bring assumptions to the surface and broaden the interpretation of the data.”

Consider adding a brief note on researcher positionality to increase transparency.

Author response: To increase transparency, ‘Notes on authors’ have been added at the end of the manuscript.

Notes on authors

Anna Frantz is a PhD student at Karolinska Institutet. She is also a licensed physiotherapist. Her PhD project focuses on sickness absence due to mental health problems with both a rehabilitative perspective in a primary healthcare setting, and a secondary preventive perspective among private-sector employees.

Iben Axén, PhD, licensed chiropractor, is an Associate Professor in Musculoskeletal Health with a specific interest in back pain and musculoskeletal disorders. She also has an interest in intervention development and conduct.

Gunnar Bergström, PhD, Professor in Occupational health conducts research in areas such as stress and mental ill health in working life, the impact of sick leave on health and work performance, being at work despite health problems, and the importance of the organizational and social work environment for health and illness.

Anna Finnes, PhD, licensed Psychologist. Anna’s research includes developing and evaluating interventions for mental health problems with a specific return to work-focus.

Elisabeth Björk Brämberg, PhD, Reg. Nurse, is Associate Professor in Occupational Medicine at Karolinska Institutet and senior lecturer in Insurance Medicine at the University of Gothenburg. Her expertise covers quantitative and qualitative methods. She has extensive experience of intervention development with prevention of sick-leave and return-to-work focus.

5. Clarify the classification of physical work environment factors.

A short explanatory sentence in the Discussion (e.g., that cold/noisy environments are organizational-level factors within the IGLOO framework but relate specifically to physical working conditions) would prevent confusion.

Author response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have added a sentence referencing the organizational level of the IGLOO framework in the fourth paragraph of the discussion section.

“The physical work environment related to the organizational level in the IGLOO framework, (e.g., noise and cold temperatures) was identified as a hindering factor for working while having MHPs”

Minor Points

・Check for minor inconsistencies in terminology (e.g., “first-line manager” vs. “first line manager”).

・Consider briefly clarifying that “life-stage” in Theme 1 includes both family responsibilities and career stage.

・Conduct a final check for consistent citation formatting.

Author response: We have conducted an English language review by a professional language editor, checking for inconsistencies throughout the manuscript. We have also clarified that theme 1 includes both private- and work-life domains (in the Results section and the Discussion). We have also checked the citation formatting for consistency.

Your manuscript is strong, relevant, and well developed. The remaining issues are minor and can be addressed with modest revisions. I look forward to seeing the revised version.

Reviewer #2: Thank you for giving the opportunity to review the revised manuscripts.

I have no additional comments, same as the first round.

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Decision Letter 3

Yeon-Ha Kim

28 Jan 2026

Swedish private-sector employees’ experiences of promoting and hindering factors for working while having mental health problems: a qualitative study

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The manuscript is now well organized, with improvements made to the Introduction and Methods sections.

We appreciate the authors’ considerable efforts in revising the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: General comments

This manuscript presents a well-conducted qualitative study exploring promoting and hindering factors for working while having mental health problems among private-sector employees. The topic is timely and highly relevant to occupational health research, particularly in relation to presenteeism and workplace mental health.

The authors have addressed the previous review comments thoroughly, and the manuscript has improved substantially in terms of conceptual clarity, methodological transparency, and overall coherence. The study aim is clearly articulated, the use of reflexive thematic analysis is appropriate, and the findings are presented in a clear and meaningful way.

The integration of a life-course perspective and the multilevel (IGLOO) framework adds conceptual depth, while remaining well aligned with the data. The discussion is balanced and adequately grounded in previous literature.

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I have no further substantive comments. The remaining issues, if any, are minor and editorial in nature.

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