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. 2026 Oct 5;21(10):e0359078. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0359078

Population differences in embryonic developmental timing in the lizard Diploderma swinhonis

Jung-Ya Hsu 1,2, Chun-Chia Chou 3, Chen-Pan Liao 1, Ren-Chung Cheng 2, Wen-San Huang 1,2,4,*
Editor: Renato Filogonio5
PMCID: PMC13637867  PMID: 42832536

Abstract

Geographic variation in reproductive timing can influence how embryonic development is partitioned between maternal egg retention and external incubation. We investigated population differences in embryonic developmental timing in the lizard Diploderma swinhonis by comparing eggs from Orchid Island and mainland Taiwan. Gravid females from mainland Taiwan and Orchid Island were collected and maintained under standardized laboratory conditions. Following oviposition, eggs within each clutch were sequentially dissected at 10-day intervals to minimize maternal effects and avoid pseudoreplication. Embryonic developmental stages were determined using a standardized developmental staging table, and developmental trajectories were compared between populations. Embryos from Orchid Island were deposited at significantly more advanced developmental stages, indicating that females retain eggs in the oviduct for a longer period prior to oviposition. In contrast, embryos from mainland Taiwan were laid at earlier developmental stages but subsequently exhibited faster post-oviposition developmental rates. Developmental synchrony also differed between populations, with embryos on Orchid Island showing lower synchrony and more gradual stage transitions among individuals. Despite these differences in developmental onset, rate, and synchrony, total incubation duration did not differ between populations, suggesting that embryonic development is partitioned differently between maternal retention and external incubation environments. Standardized maternal body size showed no detectable effect on developmental rate. These patterns may be associated with geographic differences in ecological conditions, including the presence of egg-eating snake predators on Orchid Island but not on mainland Taiwan. Such variation is consistent with facultative egg retention and highlights how reproductive timing can vary among populations within a species.

Introduction

Reproductive timing is a central component of life-history variation because it determines the developmental state at which offspring enter external environments [1–3]. In oviparous reptiles, the embryonic stage at oviposition reflects the duration of intra-oviductal development prior to egg laying [4,5]. Most squamate reptiles deposit eggs during relatively early stages of embryogenesis, typically when major organ systems are established but differentiation remains incomplete [6,7]. Nevertheless, variation in embryonic stage at oviposition has been documented across taxa and, in some cases, among populations within species [8,9]. Such variation provides an opportunity to examine divergence in reproductive scheduling without invoking shifts between oviparity and viviparity.

Intra-oviductal egg retention has often been discussed in the context of the evolutionary transition from egg-laying to live-bearing reproduction [10–13]. However, quantitative differences in the duration of retention can occur entirely within oviparous systems and need not imply changes in reproductive mode [14]. Instead, embryonic stage at oviposition may vary along a continuum shaped by physiological constraints [15] and ecological context [16,17]. Maternal endocrine regulation [18], uterine oxygen availability [19], and abdominal capacity [12,15] may influence how long embryos can be retained prior to laying [4,5,12]. Female body size has been proposed as an important correlate because larger females may accommodate more advanced embryos or greater clutch mass before oviposition [20–22]. Consequently, accounting for maternal morphology is essential when evaluating population differences in developmental timing.

Geographic variation in reproductive traits is widespread in reptiles and often corresponds with environmental heterogeneity [17,23]. Climatic variables such as temperature and moisture can influence incubation environments and reproductive schedules [8,24]. Habitat structure and nest-site availability may also shape reproductive timing [25]. In addition, predator assemblages can differ among regions and alter the selective landscape experienced by eggs and nesting females [26]. Insular-mainland comparisons are particularly informative in this regard because island populations frequently experience modified predator communities, resource regimes, and demographic structure relative to mainland populations [27].

Diploderma is primarily distributed throughout Myanmar, China, Vietnam, Taiwan, and Japan [28]. Diploderma swinhonis is an oviparous agamid lizard endemic to Taiwan and belongs to the order Squamata and family Agamidae [28–31]. This species inhabits tropical forests, lowland woodlands, and urban environments, including school campuses and parks, and its breeding season generally extends from late March to late September [32]. In Taiwan, D. swinhonis occurs on both mainland Taiwan and Orchid Island, which is located approximately 63–72 km off the southeastern coast of mainland. Orchid Island populations experience intense predation pressure from the egg-eating snake Oligodon formosanus, which has been reported to consume a substantial proportion of small reptile clutches during the breeding season [28–31]. Mainland populations appear to support lower densities of this specialist predator. At the same time, large-scale climatic conditions are broadly similar between regions, reducing the likelihood that extreme thermal differences alone account for reproductive divergence. Despite extensive work on predator-prey interactions in this system, population-level differences in embryonic stage at oviposition have not been formally quantified.

Because embryonic stage can be assessed using standardized developmental tables [6], it provides a tractable and comparable metric for evaluating variation in reproductive timing. Here, we compare embryonic stage at oviposition between Orchid Island and mainland Taiwan populations of D. swinhonis. We test whether populations differ in developmental stage at laying while accounting for days after oviposition and maternal body size. Rather than attributing observed differences to a single ecological driver, our objective is to document the magnitude of interpopulation variation and provide a foundation for future studies investigating the ecological and physiological correlates of oviposition timing.

Materials and methods

Ethical approval

Dedication to ethics: All procedures were approved by the Institutional Animal Care and Use Committee of National Museum of Nature Science (NMNSIACUC2024−001), all methods were carried out in accordance with the relevant guidelines and regulations of NMNS-ICAUC, AVMA, and reported in accordance with ARRIVE guidelines in the study’s ethical application to NMNS-IACUC.

Animal welfare guidelines for embryos and hatchlings

All experimental procedures were conducted in accordance with institutional animal care guidelines and approved animal use protocols. According to the Guide for the Care and Use of Laboratory Animals issued by the Ministry of Agriculture [33], euthanasia procedures for reptile embryos and hatchlings are determined according to developmental stage, with methods selected to minimize pain and distress. Early-stage embryos may be euthanized by freezing, whereas embryos at later developmental stages and hatchlings require appropriate chemical anesthesia or physical euthanasia.

Euthanasia procedure

In the present study, euthanasia was performed using a physical method (decapitation) in accordance with the applicable animal welfare guidelines. No chemical anesthetic or analgesic was administered before euthanasia.

To clarify the experimental timeline, a schematic workflow is presented in Fig 1. Briefly, gravid D. swinhonis females were collected from both populations. Upon laboratory oviposition, eggs within each clutch were sequentially dissected at 10-day intervals to minimize maternal effects and pseudoreplication. Following embryonic staging, data were integrated into statistical models to evaluate inter-population developmental trajectories and stages at oviposition (Fig 1).

Fig 1. Schematic workflow of experimental design and data analysis.

Fig 1

Sequential phases include: (1) field collection; (2) standardized housing; (3) oviposition monitoring; (4) within-clutch 10-day sequential sampling to minimize maternal effects; (5) embryo processing/staging; (6) statistical modeling; and (7) key biological output showing advanced oviposition stages and prolonged egg retention. Abbreviation: PO, post-oviposition.

Animal collection and egg incubation

Gravid females that had already mated in the field were captured in the field from Orchid Island (22°03’27” N, 121°33’30” E) (N = 39) and mainland Taiwan (24°08’53” N, 120°33’06” E) (N = 36) and later kept in the laboratory for the 2024 breeding season. Each female was housed individually in a plastic container (34 × 17 × 24 cm) with 5 cm depth of soil substrate. We offered each female fresh water and mealworms (Tenebrio molito) ad libitum in the laboratory and released them back to the original capture sites after oviposition. Every egg deposited was labeled with the time of egg depositing and the date of dissection based on expected embryonic development. We maintained the room temperature at 29 ± 1°C, coupled with a 12/12h light/dark cycle throughout the experimental period [16,34]. Eggs were usually deposited in the daytime. We inspected these containers every day to confirm egg deposition. The collected eggs were placed in independent chambers covered with moist soil at a temperature of 29 ± 1°C [34].

Embryo collection and developmental stages analyses

Gravid females were collected approximately 5–6 times, and females typically produced clutches of three to four eggs. Eggs were collected immediately after oviposition and assigned to predetermined dissection dates. The 10-day interval was selected because embryonic development in this species spans approximately 48–49 days, allowing major developmental transitions to be captured across incubation while ensuring that developmental sampling was distributed throughout the entire incubation period. Eggs were assigned to sampling dates at approximately 10-day intervals across multiple clutches. Because each female produced only 3–4 eggs, a single clutch could contribute eggs to only three or four sampling points. Sampling dates were therefore staggered among clutches; for example, eggs from one clutch were dissected on days 0, 10, 20, and 30, whereas eggs from another clutch were dissected on days 1, 11, 21, and 31. Additional clutches were similarly used to extend sampling across the incubation period. Each female contributed only one clutch, and no female contributed eggs to more than one clutch. This sequential within-clutch dissection design was used to avoid repeatedly dissecting multiple eggs from the same female on the same day, thereby minimizing maternal effects and reducing pseudoreplication in developmental time-series analyses.

Embryos were subsequently dissected and staged according to the developmental staging table of Dufaure and Hubert (1961) [6], originally developed for lacertid lizards and adapted here for staging embryonic development in D. swinhonis. During dissection, eggs were immersed in phosphate-buffered saline (PBS) and observed under a dissecting microscope (Leica MZ6). Embryos (N = 264) were fixed in 10% formalin solution for 2 hours (i.e., room temperature, RT). Egg dissections were performed under a stereomicroscope using fine dissection scissors and forceps. The eggshell was carefully opened, and surrounding extraembryonic tissues were gradually removed to expose the embryo for developmental staging. All dissections were conducted carefully to minimize mechanical damage to embryonic structures. After fixation, the embryos were stored in 75% ethanol at RT. To identify the embryo stage, we referred to the key morphological traits of different development stages of Squamata [6,35–37]. These traits included the pharyngeal clefts, brain, eyes, limbs, scale and pigmentation. We photographed embryos at different stages using a Canon EOS 850D camera equipped with either a Canon MP-E65 f2.8 1-5x Macro lens (stage 27–38) or Canon EF100mm f/2.8 Macro USM lens (stages 39–42)

Statistical analyses

Embryonic developmental stage was analyzed using a Bayesian cumulative ordinal regression implemented in the R package brms [38] (version 2.23.0). This model was used to estimate the probability of each embryonic stage for eggs from different populations at a given post-oviposition time. Embryonic stage (Y) was treated as an ordered categorical response variable in a ordinal logistic regression. To link these discrete stages to the continuous process of embryonic development, we modeled latent developmental progress (z) as

z=exp(r)(t−t0),

where r is the logarithm of the developmental rate, t is standardized post-oviposition time, and t0 is the developmental onset shift. The parameter t0 defines the estimated time point at which embryonic development begins within the maternal oviduct. This formulation allows developmental progress to increase linearly with time while constraining the developmental rate to be positive. The cumulative ordinal model estimated the probability that an egg was at or below embryonic stage k on day t:

P(Y≤k)=logit−1(d(θk−z)),

where θk is the threshold parameter separating stage k from later stages, and d is the discrimination parameter. Larger values of d indicate steeper transitions between stages and greater developmental synchrony. We modeled r, t0, and log(d) as functions of standardized maternal snout–vent length and lizard population using linear mixed models. Mother identity was included as a random intercept to account for non-independence among eggs from the same mother.

We report posterior medians and 95% equal-tailed credible intervals (CrI), probability of direction (PD) as an index of effect existence, and Bayes factors (BF), estimated using the Savage–Dickey density ratio, for the parameters of interest. Normal priors, (N (0, 1), were assigned to the regression coefficients of r, t0, and log(d). Student-(t) priors with 3 degrees of freedom, location 0, and scale 2 were assigned to the intercepts. Random-effect standard deviations were assigned half-Student-t priors with 3 degrees of freedom, location 0, and scale 2. Cutpoints in the ordinal model were assigned Student-t priors with 3 degrees of freedom, location 0, and scale 10.

Results

We observed that embryos from mainland Taiwan were generally deposited at stages 27–28, whereas embryos from Orchid Island were deposited at the more advanced stage 31. Across incubation, embryos sampled at approximately 10-day intervals showed progressive developmental advancement, with embryos reaching approximately stages 33–34 after 10 days, 36 after 20 days, 39 after 30 days, and 41–42 after 40 days. Representative embryonic images from both populations were included to facilitate direct visual comparison of developmental stages between populations.

Stage 27–30 (Fig 2)

Fig 2. Post-ovipositional embryonic development (Stages 27-30) of Diploderma swinhonis from mainland Taiwan (TW), at stages 27-30.

Fig 2

Scale bars = 1.0 mm. The stages are arranged in rows. An embryonic lateral view A-D. Abbreviations: aer, apical ectodermal ridge; cf, choroid fissure; fl, forelimb bud; hl, hindlimb bud; mes, mesencephalon; met, metencephalon; mxp, maxillary process; np, nasal pit; nt, neural tube; oc, optic capsule; ov, otic vesicle; tb, tail bud; I-III pc, I-III pharyngeal clefts; Ⅳ pc, IV pharyngeal cleft; V pc, V pharyngeal cleft.

In the stage 27, The optic cup became visible (Fig 2A). The first through third pharyngeal clefts were slightly discernible. The neural tube began to open dorsally from the metencephalon to the second pharyngeal cleft. The primordial region of hindlimbs slightly protruded. The forelimbs had not yet appeared. The tail bud without segments began to extend.

We observed that the brain size increased with every region of the brain beginning to expand in the stage 28 (Fig 2B). The nasal pit located on the side of the nose was clear. The optic cup enlarged compared to the previous stage, and the choroid fissure started to open. The otic vesicle was visible and showed signs of calcium deposits. The first through third pharyngeal clefts were visible. The hindlimb buds appeared as round protuberances, while the forelimb buds were elongated protrusions. The tail bud remained unsegmented but started to curve.

In stage 29, the edges of the choroidal fissure were visible (Fig 2C). The dorsal region of the retina started to show pigmentation and became slightly visible. The first through fourth pharyngeal clefts could be clearly defined, with the fourth cleft faintly visible, and the maxillary bud was developing. The shapes of forelimb and hindlimb buds started to diverge, developing into distinct forms.

We observed the eye pigmentation began to develop in the stage 30 (Fig 2D). The nasal pits on the nasal prominences shifted toward the ventral surface. The otic vesicle underwent further calcification. The first through fifth pharyngeal clefts were clearly visible. The apical ectodermal ridges became well-defined on both the forelimb and hindlimb buds. During this stage, the tail bud elongated and started to coil.

Stage 31–34 (Fig 3)

Fig 3. Post-ovipositional embryonic development (Stages 31-34) of Diploderma swinhonis from (A) mainland Taiwan (TW) and (B) Orchid Island (OI), at stages 31-34.

Fig 3

Scale bars = 2.0 mm. An embryonic lateral view. Abbreviations: aut, autopod; dc, digital condensation; fnm, frontonasal mass; gw, genital swelling; iris; mdp, mandibular process; sty, stylopod; tel, telencephalon; ue, upper eyelid; zeu, zeugopod.

The telencephalon expanded and differentiated into distinct left and right hemispheres in the stage 31. Pigmentation increased across the entire ring-like iris. The second pharyngeal clefts nearly fully overlapped the third and fourth, making them difficult to distinguish. The maxillary processes aligned with the anterior margin of the iris. The forelimbs extended slightly beyond the hindlimbs, with more pronounced paddle-shaped digital plates. A subtle genital swelling was visible between the hindlimbs.

In the stage 32, the iris darkened as pigmentation increased. All pharyngeal clefts had fused and were no longer visible. The maxillary processes aligned with the anterior margin of the eye, while the mandibular processes were positioned posterior to the eye’s center. The stylopod, zeugopod, and autopod were distinct and well-differentiated. The width of the paddle-shaped digital plate expanded. The paired genital swellings became slightly more developed and prominent. Distinct flexures in both the forelimbs and hindlimbs allowed for clear differentiation of the stylopod, zeugopod, and autopod.

In the stage 33, the outline of the iris was clearly defined. The upper eyelid began to extend outward. The maxillary processes moved closer to the frontonasal prominences but had not yet made contact. Digital condensations were faintly visible.

In the stage 34, the outer edge of the iris was well-defined. The maxillary processes fused with the frontonasal processes, forming an external naris above the fusion point. The mandibular process extended anteriorly, reaching the level of the lens. Digital condensations of all five digits were clearly visible, and interdigital webbing began to form.

Stage 35–38 (Fig 4)

Fig 4. Post-ovipositional embryonic development (Stages 35-38) of Diploderma swinhonis from (A) mainland Taiwan (TW) and (B) Orchid Island (OI), at stages 35-38.

Fig 4

Scale bars = 1.0 mm, at stages 38. Scale bars = 2.0 mm. The stages are arranged in rows. An embryonic lateral view. Abbreviations: en, external naris; le, lower eyelid; mes, mesencephalon; swp, scales without pigmentation; tel, telencephalon.

In the stage 35, the upper eyelids were visible in a lateral view, while the lower eyelid emerged but did not yet overlap the iris. The maxillary and frontonasal processes fully fused. The mandibular process developed into the lower jaw, with its anterior tip meeting the tip of the upper jaw. Initial digital size differentiation occurred. Interdigital webbing showed deeper incisions at the digit tips, with a more pronounced separation between the fourth and fifth digits.

The telencephalon and mesencephalon were situated at the same horizontal level in the stage 36. The eyelid extended ventrally, partially covering the iris. The external naris remained a narrow slit. The lower jaw was equal in length to the upper jaw. Interdigital webbing was significantly reduced and the hindlimbs exhibited a notable elongation of the fourth digit compared to the others. Unpigmented scales began to emerge on the ventral surface of the trunk and the dorsal aspect of the limbs.

In the stage 37, the telencephalic and mesencephalic vesicles grew closer together. The upper eyelid had not yet overlapped the iris, while the lower eyelid extended beyond its lower boundary. The external naris presented a rounded configuration with a slight elevation. Interdigital webbing fully receded from all digits. The initial development of claws was evident, with a faint white coloration appearing at the distal end of the digits.

In the stage 38, the mesencephalon and telencephalon were closely positioned, causing a posterior slanting of the head. Both the upper and lower eyelids aligned with the level of the pupils. Tiny, sparsely pigmented spots appeared on the head and dorsal trunk. The limbs elongated with clearly defined segmentation. The claws were well-differentiated from the adjacent digits.

Stage 39–42 (Fig 5)

Fig 5. Post-ovipositional embryonic development (Stages 39-42) of Diploderma swinhonis from (A) mainland Taiwan (TW) and (B) Orchid Island (OI), at stages 39-42.

Fig 5

Scale bars = 2.0 mm. The stages arranged in rows. An embryonic lateral view. Abbreviations: et, egg tooth; np, nasal pit.

In the stage 39, the mesencephalon and telencephalon exhibited a flattened morphology and came into direct contact. Claws on both forelimb and hindlimb reached full formation. Scale development increased on the dorsal surface of the head, neck, and trunk. The scale pattern became more defined, transitioning to a light brown hue along the body, accompanied by intensified pigmentation of the eyelids.

In the stage 40, the mesencephalon and telencephalon were no longer visible. Both the upper and lower eyelids extended beyond the level of the pupil and were nearly closed. The pigmentation on fully developed scales became dark brown with distinct black and white spots and stripe patterns along the body.

In the stage 41, both the upper and lower eyelids were fully developed and completely closed. The scales had reached their final form. The pigmentation appeared slightly lighter compared to that of hatchlings. A single egg tooth protruded from the front tip of the upper jaw.

In the stage 42, the body took on a darker coloration, resembling the pigmentation of a newly hatched neonate. At this stage, the yolk was entirely consumed.

Developmental rate, onset, and synchrony

The model revealed that embryos developed slightly more slowly on Orchid Island than on Taiwan. The estimated developmental rate was 0.68 stages per day on Orchid Island (95% CrI = 0.41–1.07) and 0.72 stages per day on Taiwan (95% CrI = 0.44–1.14). This corresponded to a 6.4% slower rate on Orchid Island (95% CrI = 2.7–10.6%), with moderate evidence for a site effect (PD = 99.9%, BF = 4.2; Fig 6). Maternal body size had no clear effect on developmental rate (β = 0.004, 95% CrI = −0.011 to 0.019, PD = 71.3%, BF = 0.009). Variation among mothers was small (SD = 0.017, 95% CrI = 0.001–0.051), suggesting that differences in developmental rate were mainly associated with population rather than individual mothers.

Fig 6. (A) Empirical sample distributions and stage proportions across sampling days: This panel presents the raw empirical distribution of sampled embryos.

Fig 6

The upper grid represents mainland Taiwan (TW) and the lower grid represents Orchid Island (OI). Circle size (N) indicates the raw number of embryos dissected on that specific post-oviposition day (ranging from 2 to 4). The color coding of the circles represents the relative proportion of individuals at that specific developmental stage within that day’s sample. The numerical values above the symbols indicate the total replicate size (N) for clearer reference. (B) Bayesian model posterior predictions and trajectories: This panel displays the estimated continuous developmental trajectories derived from our Bayesian cumulative ordinal regression model. Blue hollow circles and lines represent the mainland Taiwan population (TW), while yellow filled circles and lines represent the Orchid Island population (OI). The solid trend lines represent the most probable embryonic stage predicted for each post-oviposition day. The size of the circles indicates the posterior probability (ranging from 0.1 to 0.9) of an embryo being at a given stage on a specific day, clearly demonstrating that Orchid Island embryos initiate development earlier, progress more slowly, and exhibit lower developmental synchrony.

Developmental onset also differed between sites. Embryos from Orchid Island were already more advanced at oviposition than embryos from Taiwan. This difference corresponded to approximately 3.5 additional days of development within the maternal oviduct (95% CrI = 2.7–4.5), with strong evidence for a site effect (PD = 100%, BF = 32106; Fig 6; S1 Table). Maternal body size had no clear effect on developmental onset (β = 0.002, 95% CrI = −0.006 to 0.009, PD = 67.8%, BF = 0.004). Variation among mothers was minimal (SD = 0.007, 95% CrI = 0.000–0.019).

Embryos from Orchid Island showed lower developmental synchrony than embryos from Taiwan. This was indicated by a lower discrimination parameter, log(d), on Orchid Island (β = −1.97, 95% CrI = −3.15 to −1.01), with strong evidence for a site effect (PD = 100%, BF = 2166354; Fig 6). Because lower values of log(d) indicate more gradual transitions among stages, this result suggests that embryonic stages were more variable on Orchid Island. Maternal body size had no clear effect on developmental synchrony (β = −0.21, 95% CrI = −0.64 to 0.27, PD = 82.9%, BF = 0.37). Variation among mothers was moderate (SD = 0.51, 95% CrI = 0.05–1.14).

Taken together, embryos on Orchid Island initiated development slightly earlier, developed more slowly (Fig 6; S1 Table), and exhibited lower developmental synchrony (Fig 6; S1 Table) than those on Taiwan. Consequently, embryos on Orchid Island remained at more advanced stages until approximately 45 days after oviposition (Fig 6; S1 Table). The estimated time to reach hatching was similar between sites. Embryos on Orchid Island reached stage 43 at a median of 48.4 days after oviposition (95% CrI = 46.9 to 51.1), compared with 49.5 days after oviposition for embryos on Taiwan (95% CrI = 48.1 to 51.9).

Discussion

The present study demonstrates clear population-level differences in embryonic developmental timing in D. swinhonis. Eggs from Orchid Island were deposited at significantly more advanced developmental stages than those from mainland Taiwan, indicating prolonged intra-oviductal egg retention in the Orchid Island population. Because embryos from both populations were subsequently maintained under identical laboratory conditions, the observed differences are unlikely to result solely from post-oviposition environmental effects. Instead, these findings suggest divergence in reproductive timing and maternal regulation of embryonic development between geographically isolated populations.

Developmental staging further revealed that embryos from both populations followed broadly similar morphological trajectories during incubation, indicating that the primary difference lies in the timing of oviposition rather than major divergence in developmental patterning itself. Thus, the populations appear to differ mainly in developmental timing (heterochrony) rather than developmental sequence [39]. Such heterochronic shifts may represent an adaptive mechanism that allows populations to respond to local ecological pressures while maintaining conserved developmental pathways.

Developmental synchrony significantly differed between populations, with Orchid Island embryos exhibiting greater individual variation post-oviposition. It suggests that prolonged maternal egg retention may fundamentally alter intrinsic developmental dynamics. From an evolutionary perspective, this lower synchrony may serve as an adaptive bet-hedging strategy under intense insular predation pressure. Reptilian embryos at late stages exhibit peak metabolic rates, releasing significant volatile organic compounds that create a concentrated “olfactory target” for specialized egg-eating predators, such as O formosanus on Orchid Island [31,40]. Conversely, asynchronous development temporally staggers these individual metabolic peaks, potentially diluting the overall chemical signal to evade detection. Furthermore, such asynchrony naturally extends the hatching window among siblings, reducing the risk of cohort-wide mortality or synchronized predator swarming during emergence. Therefore, prolonged retention may function as a multi-layered reproductive strategy shaping subsequent embryogenesis to maximize offspring survival in high-risk ecosystems.

Standardized maternal body size showed no detectable effect on developmental rate, suggesting that variation in embryonic timing is unlikely to be explained simply by female morphology. Instead, the observed population differences are more consistent with ecological influences on reproductive timing. Such patterns are consistent with facultative egg retention [41,42], in which females adjust the duration of intra-oviductal embryo retention in response to local ecological conditions. Facultative egg retention has been documented in several squamate reptiles and is frequently interpreted as an intermediate reproductive strategy along the evolutionary continuum between oviparity and viviparity [14,43]. The contrasting developmental patterns observed between Orchid Island and mainland Taiwan populations therefore suggest that geographic variation in ecological conditions may shape maternal control over embryonic development and reproductive timing.

The distinctive embryonic developmental pattern observed in the Orchid Island population may also be associated with the unique ecological context of this island, particularly the exceptionally high predation pressure imposed by the egg-eating snake O. formosanus. Previous studies have demonstrated that Orchid Island supports unusually high densities of this predator due to the seasonal availability of sea turtle nests, which subsequently increases predation pressure on reptile eggs, including those of lizards. Strong egg predation pressure on Orchid Island has already been linked to several remarkable evolutionary responses in insular lizards. For example, Orchid Island populations of the long-tailed skink (Eutropis longicaudata) exhibit post-ovipositional maternal care in the form of nest guarding behavior, a trait absent in mainland populations [30]. Experimental studies further demonstrated that this maternal care behavior evolved specifically as a defense against egg predation by O. formosanus. In addition, Orchid Island skinks exhibit significantly greater bite force than mainland populations, likely as an adaptive response associated with parental defense and predator deterrence.

Environmental temperature is known to influence developmental rates and reproductive traits in reptiles. However, mainland Taiwan and Orchid Island occur at similar latitudes and share broadly comparable climatic conditions and habitats, reducing the likelihood that large-scale environmental temperature differences alone explain the observed developmental divergence. Historical climatic records support this interpretation. According to the 1991–2020 climate normals provided by the Central Weather Administration (CWA) [44], Taiwan (Taichung) and Orchid Island have broadly similar annual mean temperatures (23.3°C and 23.0°C, respectively), whereas Orchid Island receives substantially greater annual precipitation than Taiwan (Taichung) (3,237.5 vs. 1,773.0 mm). Although these precipitation differences do not directly predict the pattern of prolonged egg retention observed in our study, rainfall may influence reproductive timing through its effects on female oviposition decisions and local nesting conditions. In Anolis aeneus, females can retain shelled oviducal eggs during drought, whereas rainfall facilitates oviposition when soil moisture is sufficient [45]. Similarly, García-Collazo et al. [46] found that egg retention was negatively related to precipitation, whereas environmental temperature had no significant effect. Thus, although the higher annual precipitation on Orchid Island does not readily explain its prolonged egg retention, seasonal or local variation in rainfall and soil moisture may influence maternal reproductive timing and the developmental stage at oviposition. The subsequent embryonic developmental differences observed after oviposition are therefore more likely to reflect population-specific developmental dynamics than broad-scale climatic differences.

When integrated into this ecological context, the advanced embryonic stages observed at oviposition in Orchid Island D. swinhonis may represent another reproductive response to intense egg predation pressure. Prolonged intra-oviductal egg retention could reduce the duration of vulnerable external incubation, thereby shortening the period during which eggs remain exposed to predators. Although the present study does not directly test the adaptive fitness consequences of egg retention, the observed developmental divergence is consistent with the hypothesis that predator-driven selection on Orchid Island has shaped multiple reproductive and developmental traits in reptiles inhabiting this insular ecosystem. More broadly, these findings support the idea that reproductive timing, parental investment, and embryo retention can evolve rapidly under strong ecological pressures. The Orchid Island population therefore provides a valuable natural system for understanding how localized predation pressure may influence the evolution of reproductive strategies and embryonic developmental timing in oviparous reptiles.

Supporting information

S1 Table. Posterior estimates of developmental-stage transition times (50% threshold-crossing probability) for the Taiwan and Orchid Island populations.

Values represent posterior medians and 95% credible intervals for the estimated day at which embryos cross each developmental-stage threshold (day 0  =  oviposition). Negative values indicate that the estimated crossing occurs before oviposition.

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Acknowledgments

We sincerely thank all members of WSH’s laboratory for their invaluable assistance in both laboratory and fieldwork.

Data Availability

All data underlying the findings of this study are available in Figshare at https://doi.org/10.6084/m9.figshare.30304954.v1.

Funding Statement

This study was supported by a grant from the Ministry of Science and Technology, Taiwan (MOST 113-2621-B-178-001-MY3). The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: The manuscript "Population differences in embryonic developmental timing in the lizard Diploderma swinhonis" provides interesting information about the embryology and ecology of the species. This manuscript has potential for publication; however, some corrections need to be made. Below are some considerations regarding the text:

- Summary – Add the methodology.

- The introduction is well-written and leads the reader to the central theme of the research. I suggest only adding the distance from the orchid island to the mainland of Taiwan.

- Methodology –

Line 102: State the average incubation period of the species' eggs.

Lines 119-120: Was the first embryo collected immediately after oviposition? And then at 10-day intervals? Make this clearer in the text. Why was this collection interval chosen?

How many collections were there in total? Add this information.

Line 121: “according to a standardized developmental table.” Include the reference for this standard table.

It needs to be explained that the images used to present embryonic development were of embryos from mainland females.

- Results

Don't you think the laboratory environment influenced the time and stages of embryonic development after all the eggs were placed in the same environmental condition?

Please explain in the text which stage the embryo was in at the time of oviposition in each location. And also which stage in the embryos collected at 10-day intervals.

Figure 1 should be changed as it is out of focus.

Figure 2 – At stage 30 I can already identify the mandibular process.

Line 262: “Stage 35” – I believe this refers to stages 35 to 38. Because the description below covers these three stages.

Line 310: “In the stage 41” – the text refers to stage 42.

- Discussion

From lines 313 to 325 the text was merely a repetition of the results. The discussion should interpret and explain the meaning of the results obtained, not just repeat them. In addition to relating them to other studies already carried out.

Lines 337 and 348 describe the same information: "This pattern is consistent with the concept of facultative egg retention."

Information about embryonic development needs to be added to the discussion.

Reviewer #2: The article aims to compare the embryonic development of eggs laid by lizard females collected on Taiwan’s main island to that of eggs laid by lizard females collected on Orchid Island. The abstract and introduction are very well written, and the topic is interesting. Unfortunately, the article suffers from a lack of precision and organization, which makes it difficult to assess the validity of the conclusions. Below are some comments that should be taken into account to improve the article. As it stands, it is difficult to determine how the experimental data were used to develop the equations.

I suggest including a workflow of the experiments conducted, as I have difficulty understanding the various steps. Below are listed numerous details need to be included.

Regarding the “experiments” section, I have several questions:

When collecting the lizards, how do you distinguish the females from the males?

How long does incubation last until hatching?

According to the Methods section, eggs were opened every 10 days and the embryos were fixed. What is the protocol? What was the size/weight of the eggs? How was the dissection performed, given that I assume that the eggs are very small? How many eggs were analysed every ten days, for both groups?

It would also be helpful to include a summary table of the number of clutches per female and the size of the clutches for each females.

Presenting the equations and prediction models before even showing the obtained images is quite unusual.

To better appreciate the conclusion stating that eggs laid by lizards on Orchid Island are at a more advanced stage of development than those laid by females on the main island—which implies longer egg retention in the female— a comparison of embryonic stages at oviposition and a figure showing the obtained photos would be more informative (while including the number of replicates).

The figures included in the main text of the article are those obtained for the lizard from the main island, but the lack of a visual comparison with those of the lizard from Orchid Island (which are relegated to the supplementary data) makes it impossible to appreciate the differences. As they stand, the figures in the article resemble an atlas of embryonic development and do not provide any original information compared to what is available in the literature. Similarly, the presentation of the results and their analysis lack clarity, as the equations provided to predict development and hatching synchrony are too complicated for non-experts.

It would have been interesting to weigh the lizard females and embryos at each stage and see whether there is a difference between the two groups.

The incubation of eggs have been performed under standardized conditions but difference of temperature between the two geographical regions may also play a role in the retention in females and kinetics of development. You do not discuss this aspect.

Minor remarks:

I suggest moving lines 96-104 to the introduction section.

In Figure 1, there are a A and B that lack description in the figure legend.

Supporting information 10: Figure S1.I-L. The stage 39 appears twice (I and J).

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Manuscript ID: ONE-D-26-13257

Title: Population differences in embryonic developmental timing in the lizard Diploderma swinhonis

Dear Academic Editor and Reviewers,

We sincerely thank the Academic Editor and both reviewers for their constructive comments and valuable suggestions. We have carefully revised the manuscript according to all comments received.

All changes in the revised manuscript are highlighted in the tracked-changes version.

Detailed responses to each comment are provided below.

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Response: Thanks for your reminder. We have updated the formatting of our manuscript to meet PLOS ONE’s style requirements.

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Response: Thanks for your suggestion. We have updated the Methods section to provide detailed information regarding the animal experiments, including the methods of sacrifice, and the efforts made to alleviate suffering.

“All experimental procedures were conducted in accordance with institutional animal care guidelines and approved animal use protocols. According to the Guide for the Care and Use of Laboratory Animals issued by the Ministry of Agriculture [34], the guiding principles for handling reptile embryos and hatchlings to minimize pain are as follows: Early Incubation Stage (Development < 20%): The nervous system is not yet fully developed, so they are generally considered insensible to pain. Unhatched eggs or those in early developmental stages can be directly frozen to achieve euthanasia. Late Incubation Stage (Development > 20%): The embryonic nervous system is more mature, making them capable of experiencing pain and distress. Regulations require breaking the eggshell to remove the embryo. Pain must be mitigated through chemical methods, such as anesthetic injections (e.g., Pentobarbital), or physical methods, such as decapitation. Lizard hatchlings must receive the same treatment as mature individuals. They must undergo standard chemical anesthesia or physical euthanasia; under no circumstances shall direct freezing be permitted.”

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Response: Thanks for your reminder. We confirm that the statement provided by the journal is entirely correct. The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

As requested, we have included this exact "Role of Funder" statement in our revised Cover Letter.

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Response: Thanks for your suggestions. We have revised the Data Availability Statement and clarified our data sharing plan. Data are available to editors and reviewers during peer review through a Figshare review link and will remain publicly accessible following publication.

“All data underlying the findings of this study are available in Figshare at https://doi.org/10.6084/m9.figshare.30304954.v1.”

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Response: Relevant references have been incorporated into the revised manuscript where appropriate.

Responses to Reviewer #1

We thank Reviewer #1 for the positive evaluation and constructive suggestions.

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Comment 1:

Summary – Add the methodology.

Response: As suggested, we have expanded the Abstract to include the methodology used in this study.

“Gravid females from mainland Taiwan and Orchid Island were collected and maintained under standardized laboratory conditions. Following oviposition, eggs within each clutch were sequentially dissected at 10-day intervals to minimize maternal effects and avoid pseudoreplication. Embryonic developmental stages were determined using a standardized developmental staging table, and developmental trajectories were compared between populations.”

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Comment 2:

Introduction

Add the distance from Orchid Island to mainland Taiwan.

Response: As suggested, we have specified the distance in the Introduction, noting that Orchid Island is located approximately 63 to 72 kilometers off the southeast coast of mainland Taiwan.

(Line 146-149)

Comment 3:

Methodology

Line 102: State the average incubation period of the species' eggs.

Response: As suggested, we have specified the egg incubation period in the Methodology section. We noted that under our laboratory conditions, the average incubation period of D. swinhonis eggs was approximately 48-49 days.

(Line 144-156)

Comment 4:

Methodology

Lines 119-120: Was the first embryo collected immediately after oviposition? And then at 10-day intervals? Make this clearer in the text. Why was this collection interval chosen? How many collections were there in total? Add this information. Line 121: “according to a standardized developmental table.” Include the reference for this standard table.

Response: Thank you for these excellent and detailed questions. We have thoroughly revised the Methodology section to clarify the egg collection protocol, the rationale behind the 10-day sampling interval, the total number of collections, and the reference for the developmental staging table. These comprehensive details have been added to the Methodology section. For your convenience, the updated text is provided below:

“Gravid females were collected approximately 5-6 times, and females typically produced clutches of three to four eggs. Eggs were collected immediately after oviposition and assigned to predetermined dissection dates. The 10-day interval was selected because embryonic development in this species spans approximately 48-49 days, allowing major developmental transitions to be captured across incubation while ensuring that developmental sampling was distributed throughout the entire incubation period. For example, if the first egg from a clutch was dissected on a given sampling day, the remaining eggs from that clutch were dissected 10, 20, 30, and 40 days later, respectively. This sequential within-clutch dissection design was used to avoid repeatedly dissecting multiple eggs from the same female on the same day, thereby minimizing maternal effects and reducing pseudoreplication in developmental time-series analyses. Embryos were subsequently dissected and staged according to the developmental staging table of Dufaure and Hubert (1961) [6], originally developed for lacertid lizards and adapted here for staging embryonic development in D. swinhonis.”

(Figure 2-5)

Comment 5:

It needs to be explained that the images used to present embryonic development were of embryos from mainland females.

Response: Thank you for pointing this out. To maximize clarity and facilitate direct visual comparison between the two populations, we have updated Figure 2-5. Representative embryos from mainland Taiwan (upper row) and Orchid Island (lower row) are now shown side-by-side. The figure legend has been revised accordingly.

Comment 6:

- Results

Don't you think the laboratory environment influenced the time and stages of embryonic development after all the eggs were placed in the same environmental condition?

Response: We completely agree with the reviewer that the incubation environment plays a critical role in embryonic development. Indeed, environmental temperature and moisture typically exert strong influences on developmental rates in reptiles. However, the fact that population-level differences persisted despite all eggs being maintained under identical, standardized laboratory conditions is one of the key findings of our study.

If the post-ovipositional environment were the sole determinant of developmental timing, both populations should have displayed identical trajectories and highly synchronized development under the same laboratory conditions. Instead, our data revealed distinct, population-specific traits.

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Comment 7:

Please explain in the text which stage the embryo was in at the time of oviposition in each location. And also which stage in the embryos collected at 10-day intervals.

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. We have revised the Results section to explicitly state the embryonic developmental stages at the time of oviposition for both locations, as well as the progressive stages observed at each 10-day sampling interval. For your convenience, the updated text reads as follows:

“We observed that embryos from mainland Taiwan were generally deposited at stages 27-28, whereas embryos from Orchid Island were deposited at the more advanced stage 31. Across incubation, embryos sampled at approximately 10-day intervals showed progressive developmental advancement, with embryos reaching approximately stages 33-34 after 10 days, 36 after 20 days, 39 after 30 days, and 41-42 after 40 days. Representative embryonic images from both populations were included to facilitate direct visual comparison of developmental stages between populations.”

(Figure 6)

Comment 8:

Figure 1 is out of focus.

Response: As suggested, Figure 6 (Figure 1 is changed to Figure 6) has been replaced with a higher-resolution image reaching 600 ppi.

(Figure 3)

Comment 9:

Figure 2 – At stage 30 I can already identify the mandibular process.

Response: Thank you for the observation. We believe there might be a slight misunderstanding regarding the structures. In Stage 30 (Figure 2 is changed to Figure 3), the visible lateral structures are actually the pharyngeal clefts ("The first through fifth pharyngeal clefts were clearly visible"), as described in manuscript (Line 231). According to the criteria of Dufaure and Hubert (1961), the mandibular process (mdp) in our specimens becomes distinct and is formally labeled later at Stage 32 (as shown in Figure 3). Therefore, based on the overall suite of diagnostic characters, the specimen remains accurately staged as Stage 30.

Comment 10:

- Discussion

1. Line 262: “Stage 35” – I believe this refers to stages 35 to 38. Because the description below covers these three stages.

2. Line 310: “In the stage 41” – the text refers to stage 42.

Line 260

Response to Line 262: Thank you for pointing this out. We have corrected "Stage 35" to "stages 35-38".

Line 288

Response to Line 310: Thank you for your careful reading. We have corrected the typographical error and changed "In the stage 41" to "In stage 39-42" to correctly match the referenced text.

(Line 358-431)

Comment 11:

- Discussion

From lines 313 to 325 the text was merely a repetition of the results. The discussion should interpret and explain the meaning of the results obtained, not just repeat them. In addition to relating them to other studies already carried out. Lines 337 and 348 describe the same information: "This pattern is consistent with the concept of facultative egg retention." Information about embryonic development needs to be added to the discussion.

Response: As suggested, these revisions substantially changed the Discussion from a descriptive summary of results to a more interpretation-driven framework.

“The present study demonstrates clear population-level differences in embryonic developmental timing in D. swinhonis. Eggs from Orchid Island were deposited at significantly more advanced developmental stages than those from mainland Taiwan, indicating prolonged intra-oviductal egg retention in the Orchid Island population. Because embryos from both populations were subsequently maintained under identical laboratory conditions, the observed differences are unlikely to result solely from post-oviposition environmental effects. Instead, these findings suggest divergence in reproductive timing and maternal regulation of embryonic development between geographically isolated populations.

Developmental staging further revealed that embryos from both populations followed broadly similar morphological trajectories during incubation, indicating that the primary difference lies in the timing of oviposition rather than major divergence in developmental patterning itself. Thus, the populations appear to differ mainly in developmental timing (heterochrony) rather than developmental sequence [40]. Such heterochronic shifts may represent an adaptive mechanism that allows populations to respond to local ecological pressures while maintaining conserved developmental pathways.

Developmental synchrony significantly differed between populations, with Orchid Island embryos exhibiting greater individual variation post-oviposition. It suggests that prolonged maternal egg retention may fundamentally alter intrinsic developmental dynamics. From an evolutionary perspective, this lower synchrony may serve as an adaptive bet-hedging strategy under intense insular predation pressure. Reptilian embryos at late stages exhibit peak metabolic rates, releasing significant volatile organic compounds that create a concentrated "olfactory target" for specialized egg-eating predators, such as O formosanus on Orchid Island [31, 41]. Conversely, asynchronous development temporally staggers these individual metabolic peaks, potentially diluting the overall chemical signal to evade detection. Furthermore, such asynchrony naturally extends the hatching window among siblings, reducing the risk of cohort-wide mortality or synchronized predator swarming during emergence. Therefore, prolonged retention may function as a multi-layered reproductive strategy shaping subsequent embryogenesis to maximize offspring survival in high-risk ecosystems.

Standardized maternal body size showed no detectable effect on developmental rate, suggesting that variation in embryonic timing is unlikely to be explained simply by female morphology. Instead, the observed population differences are more consistent with ecological influences on reproductive timing. Such patterns are consistent with facultative egg retention [42, 43], in which females adjust the duration of intra-oviductal embryo retention in response to local ecological conditions. Facultative egg retention has been documented in several squamate reptiles and is frequently interpreted as an intermediate reproductive strategy along the evolutionary continuum between oviparity and viviparity [44, 45]. The contrasting developmental patterns observed between Orchid Island and mainland Taiwan populations therefore suggest that geographic variation in ecological conditions may shape maternal control over embryonic development and reproductive timing.

The distinctive embryonic developmental pattern observed in the Orchid Island population may also be associated with the unique ecological context of this island, particularly the exceptionally high predation pressure imposed by the egg-eating snake O. formosanus. Previous studies have demonstrated that Orchid Island supports unusually high densities of this predator due to the seasonal availability of sea turtle nests, which subsequently increases predation pressure on reptile eggs, including those of lizards. Strong egg predation pressure on Orchid Island has already been linked to several remarkable evolutionary responses in insular lizards. For example, Orchid Island populations of the long-tailed skink (Eutropis longicaudata) exhibit post-ovipositional maternal care in the form of nest guarding behavior, a trait absent in mainland populations [30]. Experimental studies further demonstrated that this maternal care behavior evolved specifically as a defense against egg predation by O. formosanus. In addition, Orchid Island skinks exhibit significantly greater bite force than mainland populations, likely as an adaptive response associated with parental defense and predator deterrence.

Environmental temperature is known to influence developmental rates and reproductive traits in reptiles. However, mainland Taiwan and Orchid Island occur at similar latitudes and share broadly comparable climatic conditions and habitats, reducing the likelihood that large-scale environmental temperature differences alone explain the observed developmental divergence. Nevertheless, we cannot exclude the possibility that fine-scale environmental variation contributes to population differences in reproductive timing and egg retention.

When integrated into this ecological context, the advanced embryonic stages observed at oviposition in Orchid Island D. swinhonis may represent another reproductive response to intense egg predation pressure. Prolonged intra-oviductal egg retention could reduce the duration of vulnerable external incubation, thereby shortening the period during which eggs remain exposed to predators. Although the present study does not directly test the adaptive fitness consequences of egg retention, the observed developmental divergence is consistent with the hypothesis that predator-driven selection on Orchid Island has shaped multiple reproductive and developmental traits in reptiles inhabiting this insular ecosystem. More broadly, these findings support the idea that reproductive timing, parental investment, and embryo retention can evolve rapidly under strong ecological pressures. The Orchid Island population therefore provides a valuable natural system for understanding how localized predation pressure may influence the evolution of reproductive strategies and embryonic developmental timing in oviparous reptiles.”

Responses to Reviewer #2

We thank Reviewer #2 for the detailed and thoughtful comments, which significantly improved the organization and clarity of the manuscript.

Comment 1:

As it stands, it is difficult to determine how the experimental data were used to develop the equations.

Response: Thank you for your comment. We have simplified the statistical analyses section while maintaining its accuracy.

(Figure 1)

Comment 2:

I suggest including a workflow of the experiments conducted, as I have difficulty understanding the various steps. Below are listed numerous details need to be included.

Response: We completely agree that a visual workflow is highly beneficial for clarifying the experimental timeline. As suggested, we have created a comprehensive schematic diagram from and integrated it directly into the main text as Figure 1 at the beginning of the Materials and Methods section.

This figure explicitly outlines all experimental phases requested, including field sampling, laboratory housing, the sequential within-clutch 10-day egg dissection design, embryo staging, and statistical analyses.

Comment 3:

When collecting the lizards, how do you distinguish the females from the males?

Response: Thank you for this question. Lizards were collected during the breeding season when gravid females are reproductively active. Sexes were distinguished based on external morphology. Males are generally larger and possess broader heads, longer limbs, brighter coloration, and distinct yellow flank stripes. Females are typically smaller, duller in coloration, and exhibit more slender body shapes. Behavioral differences were also used as supplementary cues, with males more frequently perching higher on tree trunks and females occurring closer to the ground within vegetation.

(Line 146-149)

Comment 4:

How long does incubation last until hatching?

Response: Thank you for this question. Under our laboratory conditions, the average incubation period of D. swinhonis eggs was approximately 48-49 days.

(Line 144-156)

Comment 5:

According to the Methods section, eggs were opened every 10 days and the embryos were fixed. What is the protocol?

Response: Thank you for this question. We have updated the Methods section and the specific protocol text reads as follows:

“Gravid females were captured in the field and maintained under controlled laboratory conditions until oviposition. During the breeding season, gravid females were collected approximately 5-6 times, and females typically produced clutches of three to four eggs. Eggs were collected immediately after oviposition and assigned to predetermined dissection dates. The 10-day interval was selected because embryonic development in this species spans approximately 48-49 days, allowing major developmental transitions to be captured across incubation while ensuring that developmental sampling was distributed throughout the entire incubation period. For example, if the first egg from a clutch was dissected on a given sampling day, the remaining eggs from that clutch were dissected 10, 20, 30, and 40 days later, respectively. This sequential within-clutch dissection design was used to avoid repeatedly dissecting multiple eggs from the same female on the same day, thereby minimizing maternal effects and reducing pseudoreplication in developmental time-series analyses. Embryos were subsequently dissected and staged according to the developmental staging table of Dufaure and Hubert (1961), originally developed for lacertid lizards and adapted here for staging embryonic development in D. swinhonis.

Comment 6:

What was the size/weight of the eggs?

Response: Thank you for this critical point. We agree that it is important to clarify the source of these morphological data. These measurements were obtained from previous records of the same populations prior to the current experiment, rather than from the exact clutches used for embryonic staging in this study.

Following oviposition, egg length (mm), egg width (mm), and egg mass (g) from previous breeding records are presented here to characterize egg morphology. Eggs from mainland Taiwan measured 12.77 ± 0.81 mm in length, 7.60 ± 0.73 mm in width, and weighed 0.442 ± 0.073 g, whereas eggs from Orchid Island measured 13.71 ± 1.17 mm in length, 8.69 ± 1.64 mm in width, and weighed 0.593 ± 0.181 g (mean ± SD).

(Line 159-163)

Comment 7:

How was the dissection performed, given that I assume that the eggs are very small?

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have clarified the dissection procedure in the revised manuscript.

“Egg dissections were performed under a stereomicroscope using fine dissection scissors and forceps. The eggshell was carefully opened, and surrounding extraembryonic tissues were gradually removed to expose the embryo for developmental staging. All dissections were conducted carefully to minimize mechanical damage to embryonic structures.”

Comment 8:

How many eggs were analysed every ten days, for both groups?

Response: Thank you for this comment. To provide full transparency regarding our sample sizes across the time-series, we have compiled these details into a new table and integrated it directly into the main text as Table 1 within the Materials and Methods section (subsection: Embryo Collection and Embryo developmental stages Analyses). As shown in Table 1, a total of 132 embryos from Orchid Island and 132 embryos from mainland Taiwan were analyzed across the sequential developmental intervals, demonstrating an identical and balanced sampling effort between the two groups:

Number of D. swinhonis embryos analyzed across developmental intervals.

Developmental interval (days) Orchid Island (n) Mainland Taiwan (n)

Days 0-9 40 40

Days 10-19 34 34

Days 20-29 20 20

Days 30-39 20 20

Days 40-48 18 18

Total embryos analyzed 132 132

Comment 9:

It would also be helpful to include a summary table of the number of clutches per female and the size of the clutches for each female.

Response: Thank you for this suggestion. Each gravid female captured for this study contributed only a single clutch to the analyses. Following oviposition, all females were promptly returned and released at their original field collection sites to minimize ecological disturbance and reduce the duration of captivity.

Comment 10:

Presenting the equations and prediction models before even showing the obtained images is quite unusual.

Response: We sincerely apologize for the unconventional presentation in the previous version. We fully agree with the reviewer that presenting abstract equations and model predictions prior to describing the actual empirical baseline data (the obtained embryonic images and morphological staging) is logically counterintuitive. To correct this, we have thoroughly reorganized the Materials and Methods and Results sections.

Comment 11:

1. To better appreciate the conclusion stating that eggs laid by lizards on Orchid Island are at a more advanced stage of development than those laid by females on the main island—which implies longer egg retention in the female— a comparison of embryonic stages at oviposition and a figure showing the obtained photos would be more informative (while including the number of replicates).

2. The figures included in the main text of the article are those obtained for the lizard from the main island, but the lack of a visual comparison with those of the lizard from Orchid Island (which are relegated to the supplementary data) makes it impossible to appreciate the differences. As they stand, the figures in the article resemble an atlas of embryonic development and do not provide any original information compared to what is available in the literature.

Response:

We completely agree with the reviewer that providing a direct, comprehensive visual comparison across the entire developmental spectrum—rather than limiting the Orchid Island series to the supplementary data—is fundamental to showcasing the population-level divergence. We realize that our previous figure arrangement resembled a descriptive "atlas" for a single population, which obscured the dynamic heterochrony and altered synchrony between mainland Taiwan and Orchid Island embryos.

To address this comprehensively across the entire developmental process, we have implemented two major structural enhancements in the revised manuscript:

1. Integration of Figure 6 (Full Time-Series Empirical Data and Trajectories):

� This figure provides an immediate, population-level visual comparison of the entire post-oviposition timeline (N = 264 total embryos).

� It explicitly highlights the initial gap at oviposition (Day 0), where mainland embryos exhibit high variability across early Stages 27–29 (n = 4 for each stage), whereas Orchid Island embryos initiate development at an advanced, tightly clustered baseline of Stages 31–32 (n = 4 for each stage).

Crucially, the figure tracks how these developmental trajectories dynamically diverge and shift across the entire incubation period, validated by our Bayesian cumulative ordinal regression model.

2. Complete Restructuring of Embryonic Series Layout (Figures 2 to 5):

To facilitate direct morphological comparison throughout embryogenesis as

requested, we have completely overhauled the layout of our main-text

figures:

� Figure 2 (Stages 27–30): This figure features only a single row representing the mainland Taiwan population. This accurately reflects our empirical findings (as shown in Figure 6); no Orchid Island embryos were ever captured at these early stages because their oviposition window consistently initiates at Stage 31.

� Figures 3, 4, and 5 (Stages 31–42): These figures have been reorganized from separate population views into a side-by-side comparative matrix consisting of two parallel rows (Row A: mainland Taiwan; Row B: Orchid Island). This alignment allows readers and reviewers to easily track and contrast the synchronized morphological progression, visually demonstrating how prolonged egg retention fundamentally reshapes subsequent developmental dynamics throughout the entire process.

Comment 12:

Similarly, the presentation of the results and their analysis lack clarity, as the equations provided to predict development and hatching synchrony are too complicated for non-experts

Response: We appreciate your suggestion. We have revised the Results section by reducing complex statistical terminology and removing repeated sentences to improve clarity and readability for a broader audience.

Comment 13:

It would have been interesting to weigh the lizard females and embryos at each stage and see whether there is a difference between the two groups.

Response: Thank you for this valuable suggestion. Female body mass was not systematically recorded in the present study because the primary objective was to examine population differences in embryonic developmental timing rather than variation in maternal morphology. Instead, maternal body size was standardized using morphological measurements to account for potential maternal effects. We agree that incorporating female body mass and embryo mass across developmental stages could provide additional insight into maternal investment and developmental trajectories and consider this an important direction for future studies.

(Line 413-418)

Comment 14:

The incubation of eggs have been performed under standardized conditions but difference of temperature between the two geographical regions may also play a role in the retention in females and kinetics of development. You do not discuss this aspect.

Response: Thank you for this important comment. We agree that environmental temperature may influence embryonic development and egg retention in reptiles. However, mainland Taiwan and Orchid Island occur at similar latitudes and share broadly comparable climatic conditions and habitat characteristics, which was one reason these populations were selected for comparison. Furthermore, all eggs were incubated under standardized laboratory conditions after oviposition, minimizing post-ovipositional environmental effects on embryonic development.

Therefore, although we cannot completely exclude the possibility that local thermal environments contribute to population divergence, the observed differences in developmental stage at oviposition are more likely to reflect differences occurring prior to oviposition, including variation in maternal reproductive timing and egg retention. We have added this discussion to the revised manuscript.

“Environmental temperature is known to influence developmental rates and reproductive traits in reptiles. However, mainland Taiwan and Orchid Island occur at similar latitudes and share broadly comparable climatic conditions and habitats, reducing the likelihood that large-scale environmental temperature differences alone explain the observed developmental divergence. Moreover, because all eggs were incubated under standardized laboratory conditions following oviposition, differences observed during incubation are more likely to reflect developmental processes occurring prior to oviposition. Nevertheless, we cannot exclude the possibility that fine-scale environmental variation contributes to population differences in reproductive timing and egg retention.”

(Line 73-79)

Comment 15:

Minor remarks:

I suggest moving lines 96-104 to the introduction section.

Response: Thank you for this excellent suggestion. As recommended, we have moved the indicated text (previously lines 96-104) from the Methods section to the Introduction section.

(Figure 6, Line 340-357)

Comment 16:

In Figure 1, there are a A and B that lack description in the figure legend.

Response: We apologize for this oversight. We have thoroughly revised the figure legend to provide explicit, detailed descriptions for both Panel A and Panel B to ensure complete clarity for the readers.

The figure legend has been updated in the revised manuscript as follows: Figure 6. Posterior predictions of embryonic developmental trajectories and empirical data distributions for mainland Taiwan (TW) and Orchid Island (OI) populations of Diploderma swinhonis.

“(A) Empirical sample distributions and stage proportions across sampling days: This panel presents the raw empirical distribution of sampled embryos. The upper grid represents mainland Taiwan (TW) and the lower grid represents Orchid Island (OI). Circle size (N) indicates the raw number of embryos dissected on that specific post-oviposition day (ranging from 2 to 4). The color coding of the circles represents the relative proportion of individuals at that specific developmental stage within that day's sample. The numerical values above the symbols indicate the total replicate size (N) for clearer reference.

(B) Bayesian model posterior predictions and trajectories: This panel displays the estimated continuous developmental trajectories derived from our Bayesian cumulative ordinal regression model. Blue hollow circles and lines represent the mainland Taiwan population (TW), while yellow filled circles and lines represent the Orchid Island population (OI). The solid trend lines represent the most probable embryonic stage predicted for each post-oviposition day. The size of the circles indicates the posterior probability (ranging from 0.1 to 0.9) of an embryo being at a given stage on a specific day, clearly demonstrating that Orchid Island embryos initiate development earlier, progress more slowly, and exhibit lower developmental synchrony.”

Comment 18:

Supporting information 10: Figure S1.I-L. The stage 39 appears twice (I and J).

Response: Thank you for catching this error. We have corrected the labeling mistake and completely restructured the figure layout.

These developmental stages have been moved from the Supporting Information into the main text as Figure 5. In this revised figure, representative embryonic photos from mainland Taiwan and Orchid Island are placed together side-by-side to facilitate a direct visual comparison across synchronized stages.

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Decision Letter 1

Renato Filogonio

19 Aug 2026

Dear Dr. Huang,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS One. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS One’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

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ACADEMIC EDITOR:

While I understand that this version was greatly improved, Reviewer 3 suggests that authors should consider the differences in climatic conditions between sites, if they exist. This is briefly mentioned in the introduction and I agree with the reviewer´s assessment that this should not be overlooked.

Additionally, I have two minor points to add:

1) Lines 112-116: Please indicate the exact method of anesthesia utilized during euthanasia, indicating which anesthetic was used, procedence (supplier, country) and the dose used.

2) Lines 150-151: The authors mention that the eggs were dissected at sampling day (day 0), than again at days 10, 20, 30 and 40. This accounts for a total of 5 eggs, although the authors inform that clutches had 3-4 eggs (line 145). Additionally, in the new Figure 1, the authors indicate that eggs were dissected only until day 30. Please correct accordingly.

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Reviewer #1: I appreciate the authors' responses regarding the manuscript "Population differences in embryonic developmental timing in the lizard *Diploderma swinhonis*." The suggestions and considerations have been incorporated into the text, which has improved the work and made it suitable for publication.

Reviewer #3: The study is interesting, and the information it provides is presented in a clear and concise manner. However, I believe that the study should not overlook the climatic conditions under which these females live (both on Orchid Island and in Taiwan). I think it is necessary to add to the manuscript and briefly discuss (using historical records) the climatic conditions that could be affecting both egg retention and environmental incubation. Perhaps rainfall or temperature can better explain the slower development of the embryos on Ochid Island during (external) incubation.

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Decision Letter 2

Renato Filogonio

1 Sep 2026

Dear Dr. Huang,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS One. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS One’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

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ACADEMIC EDITOR:

The reviewer and myself were satisfied with the responses and changes to the text and commend the authors for the study. Reviewer 3 suggests one small addition to the discussion regarding the effects of the rain on the females (see below). I ask that the authors add this aspect to the discussion before accepting the manuscript.

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Reviewer #3: The study is interesting, and the results are significant. However, I find it hard to believe that the fact that it rains almost twice as much in Orchid as in Taiwan isn't just another variable affecting egg retention. And it’s very clear that it doesn’t directly affect the eggs, since they’re incubated under laboratory conditions, but it is affecting the females. I think the authors should make it sufficiently clear that it is the females who would be affected by the rains and the abundance of predators, which would cause them to retain their eggs. These Orchid eggs accelerate their embryonic development so that they hatch in the same number of days as they do in Taiwan.

I recommend publishing the study, and I would even suggest that the authors review the final table they present to see if it might be better to present it as a line or scatter plot (with the respective standard deviations).

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Response to Reviewers

Manuscript ID: ONE-D-26-13257

Title: Population differences in embryonic developmental timing in the lizard Diploderma swinhonis

Dear Academic Editor and Reviewers,

We sincerely thank the Academic Editor and the reviewers for their constructive comments and valuable suggestions. We have carefully considered all of the comments and revised the manuscript accordingly. All revisions are indicated in the tracked-changes version of the manuscript, and our detailed responses to each comment are provided below.

Responses to Reviewer #3

Comment 1:

The study is interesting, and the results are significant. However, I find it hard to believe that the fact that it rains almost twice as much in Orchid as in Taiwan isn't just another variable affecting egg retention. And it’s very clear that it doesn’t directly affect the eggs, since they’re incubated under laboratory conditions, but it is affecting the females. I think the authors should make it sufficiently clear that it is the females who would be affected by the rains and the abundance of predators, which would cause them to retain their eggs. These Orchid eggs accelerate their embryonic development so that they hatch in the same number of days as they do in Taiwan.

Response to reviewer:

Thank you for this important comment. We agree that rainfall may indirectly influence egg retention and oviposition decisions through its effects on females and local nesting conditions. We have therefore added a brief discussion of previous studies showing that rainfall and soil moisture can influence egg retention and oviposition timing in lizards [45,46]. We now acknowledge that seasonal or local variation in rainfall may contribute to maternal reproductive timing and the developmental stage at oviposition.

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Discussion

“Environmental temperature is known to influence developmental rates and reproductive traits in reptiles. However, mainland Taiwan and Orchid Island occur at similar latitudes and share broadly comparable climatic conditions and habitats, reducing the likelihood that large-scale environmental temperature differences alone explain the observed developmental divergence. Historical climatic records support this interpretation. According to the 1991–2020 climate normals provided by the Central Weather Administration (CWA)[44], Taiwan (Taichung) and Orchid Island have broadly similar annual mean temperatures (23.3°C and 23.0°C, respectively), whereas Orchid Island receives substantially greater annual precipitation than Taiwan (Taichung) (3,237.5 vs. 1,773.0 mm). Although these precipitation differences do not directly predict the pattern of prolonged egg retention observed in our study, rainfall may influence reproductive timing through its effects on female oviposition decisions and local nesting conditions. In Anolis aeneus, females can retain shelled oviducal eggs during drought, whereas rainfall facilitates oviposition when soil moisture is sufficient [45]. Similarly, García-Collazo et al. [46] found that egg retention was negatively related to precipitation, whereas environmental temperature had no significant effect. Thus, although the higher annual precipitation on Orchid Island does not readily explain its prolonged egg retention, seasonal or local variation in rainfall and soil moisture may influence maternal reproductive timing and the developmental stage at oviposition. The subsequent embryonic developmental differences observed after oviposition are therefore more likely to reflect population-specific developmental dynamics than broad-scale climatic differences.”

Comment 2:

I recommend publishing the study, and I would even suggest that the authors review the final table they present to see if it might be better to present it as a line or scatter plot (with the respective standard deviations).

Response to reviewer:

Thank you for this helpful suggestion. We carefully considered whether Fig 6 would be better presented as a line or scatter plot with standard deviations. However, we believe that the format is more appropriate for our study because Fig 6 is intended to provide the developmental data and statistical comparisons across sampling stages and populations, rather than to emphasize a continuous relationship or trend. We therefore retained Fig 6 in its current format to allow readers to directly compare the developmental stages and associated variation among populations.

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    S1 Table. Posterior estimates of developmental-stage transition times (50% threshold-crossing probability) for the Taiwan and Orchid Island populations.

    Values represent posterior medians and 95% credible intervals for the estimated day at which embryos cross each developmental-stage threshold (day 0  =  oviposition). Negative values indicate that the estimated crossing occurs before oviposition.

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    Data Availability Statement

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