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. 2019 Apr 8;8:e40145. doi: 10.7554/eLife.40145

Extrinsic and intrinsic dynamics in movement intermittency

Damar Susilaradeya 1,, Wei Xu 1, Thomas M Hall 1, Ferran Galán 1,, Kai Alter 1, Andrew Jackson 1,
Editors: Eilon Vaadia2, Richard B Ivry3
PMCID: PMC6453565  PMID: 30958267

Abstract

What determines how we move in the world? Motor neuroscience often focusses either on intrinsic rhythmical properties of motor circuits or extrinsic sensorimotor feedback loops. Here we show that the interplay of both intrinsic and extrinsic dynamics is required to explain the intermittency observed in continuous tracking movements. Using spatiotemporal perturbations in humans, we demonstrate that apparently discrete submovements made 2–3 times per second reflect constructive interference between motor errors and continuous feedback corrections that are filtered by intrinsic circuitry in the motor system. Local field potentials in monkey motor cortex revealed characteristic signatures of a Kalman filter, giving rise to both low-frequency cortical cycles during movement, and delta oscillations during sleep. We interpret these results within the framework of optimal feedback control, and suggest that the intrinsic rhythmicity of motor cortical networks reflects an internal model of external dynamics, which is used for state estimation during feedback-guided movement.

Editorial note: This article has been through an editorial process in which the authors decide how to respond to the issues raised during peer review. The Reviewing Editor's assessment is that all the issues have been addressed (see decision letter).

Research organism: Human

Introduction

Many visually-guided movements are characterized by intermittent speed fluctuations. For example, during the tracking of slowly-moving target, humans make around 2–3 submovements per second. Although first described over a century ago (Woodworth, 1899; Craik, 1947; Vince, 1948) the cause of movement intermittency remains debated. Submovements often disappear in the absence of vision (Miall et al., 1993a) and are influenced by feedback delays (Miall, 1996), suggesting that their timing depends on extrinsic properties of visuomotor feedback loops. However, some rhythmicity persists in the absence of feedback (Doeringer and Hogan, 1998), and it has been suggested that an internal refractory period, clock or oscillator parses complex movements into discrete, isochronal segments (Viviani and Flash, 1995; Loram et al., 2006; Hogan and Sternad, 2012; Russell and Sternad, 2001). Cyclical dynamics within motor cortical networks with a time period of 300–500 ms may reflect the neural correlates of such an intrinsic oscillator (Churchland et al., 2012; Hall et al., 2014). During continuous tracking, each submovement is phase-locked to a single cortical cycle, giving rise to low-frequency coherence between cortical oscillations and movement speed (Jerbi et al., 2007; Hall et al., 2014; Pereira et al., 2017).

It has been proposed that the intrinsic dynamics of recurrently-connected cortical networks act as an ‘engine of movement’, responsible for internal generation and timing of the descending motor command (Churchland et al., 2012). However, another possibility is that low-frequency dynamics observed in motor cortex arise from sensorimotor feedback loops through the external environment. On the one hand, cortical cycles appear conserved across a wide range of behaviors and even share a common structure with delta oscillations during sleep (Hall et al., 2014), consistent with a purely intrinsic origin. On the other hand, the influence of feedback delays on submovement timing suggests an extrinsic contribution to movement intermittency. Therefore, we examined the effect of delay perturbations during visuomotor tracking in humans and monkeys, to dissociate both delay-independent (intrinsic) and delay-dependent (extrinsic) components of movement kinematics and cortical dynamics.

We interpret our findings using stochastic optimal control theory, which has emerged as an influential approach to understanding movement (Todorov and Jordan, 2002; Scott, 2004). Given noisy, delayed sensory measurements, an optimal feedback controller (OFC) continually estimates the current motor state using an internal model of external dynamics. We show that this can provide a computational framework for understanding both extrinsic and intrinsic contributions to intermittency, accounting for many puzzling features of submovements and providing a parsimonious explanation for conserved cyclical dynamics in motor cortex networks during behavior and sleep.

Results

Overview

Our results are organized as follows. First, we describe behavioral results with human subjects, examining the effects of delay perturbations on movement intermittency and feedback responses during an isometric visuomotor tracking task. Second, we introduce a simple computational model to illustrate how principles of optimal feedback control, and in particular state estimation, can explain the key features of our data. Finally, we examine local field potentials recorded from the motor cortex of monkeys performing a similar task, to show that cyclical neural trajectories are consistent with the implementation of state estimation circuitry.

Submovement frequencies are affected by feedback delays

Our first experiment aimed to characterize the dependence of submovement frequencies on feedback delays. Human subjects generated bimanual, isometric, index finger forces to track targets that moved in slow 2D circular trajectories with constant speed (Figure 1A). We measured intermittency in the angular velocity of the cursor (Figure 1B,C) using spectral analysis over a 10 s window beginning 5 s after the trial start. Under unperturbed feedback conditions, power spectra generally exhibited a principal peak at around 2 Hz (Figure 1D). This frequency was only slightly affected by target speed (Figure 1—figure supplement 1), consistent with previous reports (Miall, 1996) and perhaps suggestive of an intrinsic oscillator or clock determining submovement timing.

Figure 1. Movement intermittency during visuomotor tracking depends on feedback delays.

(A) Schematic of human tracking task. Bimanual isometric finger forces controlled 2D cursor position to track slow, circular target motion. Kinematic analyses used the angular velocity of the cursor subtended at the screen center during the middle of each trial. (B) Example force (top), angular error (middle) and cursor angular velocity (bottom) traces during target tracking with no feedback delay. Submovements are evident as intermittent fluctuations in angular velocity. (C) Example movement traces with 400 ms feedback delay. (D) Power spectra of cursor angular velocity with different feedback delays between 0 and 400 ms. Analysis based on a 10 s window beginning 5 s after trial start. Average of 8 subjects, shading indicates standard error of mean (s.e.m.). See also Figure 1—figure supplement 2. (E) Submovement periods (reciprocal of the peak frequency for each harmonic) for all subjects with different feedback delays. Lines indicate linear regression over all subjects. See Table 1 for summary of individual subject regression analysis. (F) Schematic of a simple delayed feedback controller. (G) Amplitude response of the system shown in (F), known as a comb filter.

Figure 1—source data 1. Subject information, time periods of submovement peaks and associated regression analysis.
Data for individual subjects in Experiment 1 (summarized in Figure 1E and Table 1).
DOI: 10.7554/eLife.40145.006

Figure 1.

Figure 1—figure supplement 1. Effect of target speed on movement intermittency.

Figure 1—figure supplement 1.

(A) Power spectra of cursor angular velocity for individual subjects with slow (0.1 cycles/s) or fast (0.2 cycles/s) target rotation, and no feedback delay. (B) Power spectra of cursor angular velocity with slow or fast target rotation, and 200 ms feedback delay. (C,D) Average power, showing mean ± s.e.m. for eight subjects. (E) Average ± s.e.m. frequencies of peak cursor velocity in each condition. P values calculated using a paired t-test.
Figure 1—figure supplement 2. Individual subject power spectra of cursor velocity with different feedback delays.

Figure 1—figure supplement 2.

Power spectra of cursor angular velocity for individual subjects with 0–400 ms feedback delay. The average over subjects is shown in Figure 1D.
Figure 1—figure supplement 3. Trajectory variability depends on change in isometric force.

Figure 1—figure supplement 3.

(A) Simulated pattern of trial-to-trial variability if motor noise is proportional to absolute force. (B) Simulated pattern of trial-to-trial variability if motor noise is proportional to derivative of force. (C) Variability of a typical subject during counter clockwise tracking. 2D cursor position over multiple trials and associated covariance ellipses are shown for 16 target positions. (D) Average and s.e.m. of standard deviation of force along each finger axis for the 16 target positions. Note that variability is maximal at times of maximal change in associated finger force (dashed lines).

However, submovement frequencies were markedly altered when visual feedback of the cursor was delayed relative to finger forces. With delays of 100 and 200 ms, the frequency of the primary peak reduced to around 1.4 and 1 Hz respectively (Figure 1D, Figure 1—figure supplements 1 and 2), demonstrating that submovement timing in fact depended on extrinsic feedback properties. Interestingly, a further peak appeared at approximately three times the frequency of the primary peak, and with increased delays, of 300 and 400 ms, a fifth harmonic was observed. The time-periods of the first, third and fifth harmonics were linearly related to extrinsic delay times, with gradients of 1.89 ± 0.20, 0.59 ± 0.04 and 0.33 ± 0.11 respectively (Figure 1E, Table 1).

Table 1. The dependency of submovement period on feedback delay.

Shown in the table are the gradients and intercepts of regression lines fitted to each harmonic group in Figure 1E. The time period of each spectral peak was regressed against feedback delay. Shown in square brackets are 95% confidence intervals of these values. Also shown is the estimated intrinsic time delay calculated using Equation (1).

Harmonic (N) Predicted slope = 2/N Measured slope Measured intercept (ms) R2 P τint = Intercept*N/2
1 2 1.89 [1.69,2.09] 589 ms
[539,638]
0.90 <0.00001 294 ms
[270,319]
3 0.67 0.59 [0.53,0.65] 226 ms
[211,242]
0.94 <0.00001 340 ms
[316,362]
5 0.4 0.33 [0.22,0.45] 146 ms
[106,185]
0.75 <0.00001 364 ms
[266,463]

These results are consistent with a feedback controller responding to broad-spectrum (stochastic) tracking errors introduced by noise in the motor output, for which the response is delayed by time, τ. In signal-processing terms, subtracting a delayed version from the original signal is known as comb filtering (Figure 1E). Although comb filters subtracting in either feedforward or feedback directions have qualitatively similar behavior, we illustrate only the feedforward architecture in Figure 1E, as we will later show this to match better the experimental data. For motor noise components with a time period, T=τ1,τ2,τ3, delayed corrections accurately reflect current errors, resulting in regularly spaced notches in the amplitude response of the system (Figure 1G) and attenuation in the resultant cursor movement through destructive interference. By contrast, for motor noise with a time-period, T=2τ1,2τ3,2τ5, delayed corrections are exactly out-of-phase with the current error. Thus, corrective movements exacerbate these components through constructive interference, leading to spectral peaks at frequencies:

f=1T=N2(τint+τext)WithN=1, 3, 5 (1)

Submovement frequencies in our data approximately matched this model, assuming the total feedback delay comprised the experimental manipulation τext added to a constant physiological response latency τint of around 300 ms (Table 1), comparable to visual reaction times.

Submovements occur at frequencies of constructive interference between motor errors and delayed corrections

According to this extrinsic interpretation, intermittency arises not from active internal generation of discrete submovement events, but as a byproduct of continuous, linear feedback control with inherent time delays. Submovement frequencies need not be present in the smooth target movement, nor do they arise from controller non-linearities. Instead these frequencies reflect components of broad-band motor noise that are exacerbated by constructive interference with delayed feedback corrections. To seek further evidence that intermittency arises from such constructive interference, we performed a second experiment in which artificial errors were generated by spatial perturbation of the cursor. Within individual trials, a sinusoidal displacement was added to the cursor position in a direction aligned to target motion and at a frequency between 1 and 5 Hz. Perturbation amplitudes were scaled to have equivalent peak angular velocities (equal to the angular velocity of the target). Our hypothesis was that artificial errors at submovement frequencies would be harder to track (because of constructive interference) than perturbations at frequencies absent from the velocity spectrum.

Figure 2A shows example tracking behavior with a 2 Hz perturbation. Note that the peak angular velocity of force responses (black line, calculated from the subject’s finger forces) occurred around the same time as the peak angular velocity of the perturbation (green line). As a result, the angular velocity of the cursor (yellow line, reflecting the combination of the subject’s forces with the perturbation) exhibited pronounced oscillations that were larger than the perturbation. Figure 2B shows performance in the same task when visual feedback was delayed by 200 ms. In this condition, peaks in force velocity coincided with perturbation troughs, attenuating the disturbance to cursor velocity. Figure 2C,D and Figure 2—figure supplement 1 overlay cursor velocity spectra in the presence of each perturbation frequency (with feedback delays of 0 and 200 ms), again calculated over a 10 s window beginning 5 s after the trial start. As previously, in the absence of feedback delay, the frequency of submovements was around 2 Hz. Correspondingly, perturbations at 2 Hz induced a large peak in the cursor velocity spectrum, indicating that the artificial error was not effectively tracked. By contrast, with a feedback delay of 200 ms the cursor velocity spectrum with a 2 Hz perturbation was attenuated. The largest spectral peaks were instead associated with 1 and 3 Hz perturbations, matching the frequencies of submovements in this delay condition.

Figure 2. Frequency responses and phase delays to artificial motor errors.

(A) Example force (black) and cursor (yellow) angular velocity traces in the presence of a 2 Hz perturbation (green) when no feedback delay was added. The force response and perturbation sum to produce large fluctuations in cursor velocity. (B) Comparable data with a feedback delay of 200 ms. In this condition, force responses cancel the perturbation leading to an attenuation of intermittency. (C) Power spectra of cursor angular velocity with 1–5 Hz perturbations and no feedback delay. Analysis based on 10 s windows beginning 5 s after trial start. Average of 8 subjects. See also Figure 2—figure supplement 1. (D) Power spectra of cursor angular velocity with 1–5 Hz perturbations and 200 ms feedback delay. (E) Cursor amplitude response to 1–5 Hz perturbations with no feedback delay (blue) and 200 ms feedback delay (red) for individual subjects. Also shown is the average ± s.e.m. of 8 subjects. (F) Power spectra of force angular velocity with 1–5 Hz perturbations and no feedback delay. See also Figure 2—figure supplement 2. (G) Power spectra of force angular velocity with 1–5 Hz perturbations and 200 ms feedback delay. (H) Force amplitude response to 1–5 Hz perturbations with no feedback delay (blue) and 200 ms feedback delay (red). Also shown is average ± s.e.m. of 8 subjects. (I) Intrinsic phase delay of force response to 1–5 Hz perturbations with no feedback delay (blue) and 200 ms feedback delay (red). Also shown is average ± s.e.m. of 8 subjects. (J) Power spectrum of finger forces generated in the feedforward task with auditory cues at 15 Hz. Average of 8 subjects. See also Figure 2—figure supplement 3. (K) Force amplitude response to auditory cues in the feedforward task. Also shown is average ± s.e.m. of 8 subjects. All analyses based on a 10 s windows beginning 5 s after trial start.

Figure 2—source data 1. Subject information, perturbation responses and feedforward amplitude responses.
Data for individual subjects in Experiment 2 (summarized in Figure 2C–I) and Experiment 3 (summarized in Figure 2K).
DOI: 10.7554/eLife.40145.012

Figure 2.

Figure 2—figure supplement 1. Individual subject power spectra of cursor velocity with perturbations.

Figure 2—figure supplement 1.

(A) Power spectra of cursor angular velocity for individual subjects with 1–5 Hz perturbations and no feedback delay. The average over subjects is shown in Figure 2C. (B) Power spectra of cursor angular velocity for individual subjects with 1–5 Hz perturbations and 200 ms feedback delay. The average over subjects is shown in Figure 2D.
Figure 2—figure supplement 2. Individual subject power spectra of force velocity with perturbations.

Figure 2—figure supplement 2.

(A) Power spectra of force angular velocity for individual subjects with 1–5 Hz perturbations and no feedback delay. The average over subjects is shown in Figure 2F. (B) Power spectra of force angular velocity for individual subjects with 1–5 Hz perturbations and 200 ms feedback delay. The average over subjects is shown in Figure 2G.
Figure 2—figure supplement 3. Feedforward task.

Figure 2—figure supplement 3.

(A) Schematic of the feedforward isometric task. Subjects generated sinusoidal forces within a set range, at a frequency indicated by an auditory cue. (B–D) Performance of an example subject for frequencies between 1–5 Hz. (E) Power spectrum of force for individual subjects. The average over all subjects is shown in Figure 2J.

Figure 2E shows the amplitude response of cursor movements at each frequency for both delay conditions. Unlike a power spectrum, the cursor amplitude response measures only cursor movements that are phase-locked to the perturbation (normalized by the perturbation amplitude), and therefore estimates the overall transfer function of the closed-loop control system. Cursor amplitude responses greater than unity at 2 Hz (with no delay), and at 1 and 3 Hz (with 200 ms delay) indicate exacerbation of intermittencies introduced by artificial errors at submovement frequencies. Analysis of variance (ANOVA) with two factors (delay time and perturbation frequency) revealed a highly significant interaction (n = 8 subjects, F4,70=110.2, p<0.0001), confirming the interdependence of feedback delays and frequencies of constructive/destructive interference.

Intrinsic dynamics in the visuomotor feedback loop

Although submovement frequencies depended on extrinsic feedback delays, examination of the velocity spectra in Figure 1D suggests that intermittency peaks were embedded within a broad, delay-independent low-pass envelope. This envelope could simply reflect the power spectrum of tracking errors (i.e. motor noise is dominated by low-frequency components). However, an additional possibility is that the gain of the feedback controller varies across frequencies (e.g. low-frequency noise components generate larger feedback corrections). To explore the latter directly, we examined subjects’ force responses to our artificial perturbations.

Figure 2F,G and Figure 2—figure supplement 2 show power spectra of the angular velocity derived from subjects’ forces, under feedback delays of 0 and 200 ms. Note that this analysis differs from Figure 2C,D in that we now consider only the forces generated by the subjects, rather than the resultant cursor movement (which combines these forces with the perturbation). Figure 2H shows the corresponding force amplitude response for each perturbation frequency. The force amplitude response measures only force responses that are phase-locked to the perturbation (normalized by the perturbation amplitude) and is related to the transfer function within the feedback loop. Unlike the cursor amplitude responses described previously, force amplitude responses were largely independent of extrinsic delay. However, as with the velocity spectra in Figure 1D, feedback gains were also attenuated at higher frequencies. A two-factor ANOVA confirmed a significant main effect of frequency (n = 8 subjects, F4,70=36.3, p<0.0001) but not delay time (F1,70=3.1, p=0.08), and only a weakly significant interaction (F4,70=2.9, p=0.03). In other words, feedback corrections to artificial errors revealed a delay-independent filter matching the attenuation of submovement peaks at higher frequencies.

Interestingly, the phase delay of force responses was also influenced by perturbation frequency (Figure 2I). Effectively, corrections to low-frequency perturbations occurred slightly earlier than those to higher frequencies, indicating a predictive component to feedback responses. As with the amplitude response, there was a significant effect of frequency (F4,70=9.5, p<0.0001) but not extrinsic delay (F1,70 =2.6, p=0.12) on this phase delay, and no significant interaction (F4,70=0.7, p=0.6).

We next considered whether high-frequency attenuation of feedback responses was a property of motor pathways, for example reflecting filtering by the musculoskeletal system. However, it is well-known that the frequencies of feedforward movements can readily exceed submovement frequencies observed during feedback-guided behavior (Kunesch et al., 1989). We confirmed this by asking subjects to produce force fluctuations of a defined amplitude, but without providing a moving target to track. Instead we used auditory cues (a metronome) to indicate the required movement frequency. In this case, subjects could generate force fluctuations up to 5 Hz with little attenuation (Figure 2J,K and Figure 2—figure supplement 3). Therefore we concluded that filtering of corrective responses was not an inherent property of feedforward motor pathways but instead reflected intrinsic dynamics in the visuomotor feedback loop.

Intrinsic dynamics and optimal state estimation

The visual system can perceive relatively high frequencies (up to flicker-fusion frequencies above 10 Hz). However, while feedforward movements can in some cases approach these frequencies, discrepancies while tracking slowly-moving objects in the physical world are unlikely to change quickly. The limbs and real-world targets will tend (to a first approximation) to move with a constant velocity unless acted upon by a force. Moreover, even for isometric tasks, the drift in force production is dominated by low-frequency components (Baweja et al., 2009; Slifkin and Newell, 2000), possibly consistent with neural integration in the descending motor pathway (Shadmehr, 2017). Given inherent uncertainties in sensation, an optimal state estimator should attribute high-frequency errors to sensory noise (which is unconstrained by Newtonian and/or neuromuscular dynamics).

Formally, the task of distinguishing the true state of the world from uncertain, delayed measurements can be achieved by a Kalman filter, which continuously integrates new evidence with updated estimates of the current state, evolving according to a model of the external dynamics (Figure 3A). For simplicity we used Newtonian dynamics, although similar results would likely be obtained for other second-order state transition models. We assumed the 1D position of the body (cursor) relative to the target should evolve with constant velocity unless acted upon by accelerative forces, leading to the state transition model:

Figure 3. State estimation with a Kalman filter.

Figure 3.

(A) Left: Schematic of a Kalman filter. Noisy measurements are combined with an internal model of the external dynamics to update an optimal estimate of current state. Right: A dynamical system for optimal estimation of position, based on an internal model of position and velocity. (B, C) Magnitude response of transfer function from measurement to position and velocity estimates, respectively, for a Kalman filter with different ratios of process to measurement noise (ρ). (D) Imaginary component of cross-spectrum between position and velocity transfer functions. (E) Phase delay of optimal estimate of position based on delayed measurement of position. (F) Schematic of optimal feedback controller model incorporating state estimation and a Smith Predictor architecture to accommodate feedback delays. (G) Simplified rearrangement of (F), showing the feedforward relationship between motor noise and force output. This rearrangement is possible because the Smith Predictor prevents motor corrections reverberating multiple times around the feedback loop.

[xkvk]=[1Δt01][xk1vk1]+[0Δt]ak (2)

where xk and vk are the relative position and velocity of the cursor at time-step k, Δt is the interval between time-steps, and the process noise ak~N(0,σa2). Visual feedback, yk, was assumed to comprise a noisy measurement of relative position:

yk=xk+εk (3)

with measurement noise εk~N(0,σε2).

Optimal estimates of relative position and velocity, x^k and v^k are given by a steady-state Kalman filter of the form:

[x^kv^k]=[1KposΔtKvel1][x^k1v^k1]+[KposKvel]yk1 (4)

The innovation gains Kpos and Kvel depend only on the ratio of (accelerative) process to (position) measurement noise, ρ=σaσε, which in turn determines the cut-off frequency above which measurements are filtered (12πρ). Figure 3B,C shows the amplitude response for position and velocity estimates produced by the Kalman filter. Since these are out of phase with each other, their cross-spectral density (which captures the amplitude and phase-difference between frequency components common to both signals) will generally be complex. Broadband input therefore results in an imaginary component to this cross-spectrum with a characteristic low-frequency resonance peak determined by the state estimator dynamics (Figure 3D).

Feedback delays can be accommodated by projecting the state estimate forward in time:

z^k=[1τint][x^kv^k] (5)

The phase delay of the optimal position estimate of the current state, z^k, falls towards zero at low frequencies, consistent with a predictive component when interpreting low-frequency errors (Figure 3E).

Incorporating intrinsic and extrinsic dynamics in a model of movement intermittency

To illustrate how such a steady-state Kalman filter can account for the main features of our human behavioral data, we incorporated it within a simple 1D feedback controller (Figure 3F; see Materials and methods for details). We included an internal feedback loop to cancel the sensory consequences of motor commands, known as a Smith Predictor (Abe and Yamanaka, 2003; Miall et al., 1993b). This prevents corrections from reverberating around the external feedback loop, such that the resultant closed-loop behavior is formally equivalent to the simpler feedforward comb filter shown in Figure 3G. This rearrangement provides a useful intuition about our behavioral results. Tracking errors (due to motor noise) drive feedback corrections that are delayed, corrupted (by sensory noise) and filtered (by intrinsic dynamics). The power spectrum of the resultant movements reflects constructive/destructive interference between feedback corrections and the original tracking error.

The Smith Predictor model readily accounted for the main features of our human data, including the cursor amplitude response to perturbations (Figure 4A–E), and the low-pass filtering (Figure 4F–H) and phase delay (Figure 4I) of force responses. Moreover, because of frequency-dependent phase delays introduced by state estimation, the model suggested that precise frequencies of submovement peaks should deviate slightly from those calculated using a constant physiological response latency. Effectively, a predictive state estimator responding more quickly to low-frequency errors behaves like a feedback controller with a reduced loop delay. This effect was confirmed in our behavioral data by calculating (with Equation (1)) the intrinsic delay time corresponding to each spectral peak under all feedback delay conditions in our first experiment (arrows in Figure 1D). Rather than being a constant, this intrinsic delay time was positively correlated with frequency (n = 11 spectral peaks, R = 0.78, p=0.0046) and matched well the frequency-dependent phase delay predicted by our model (Figure 4J).

Figure 4. Smith Predictor model with optimal state estimation reproduces human behavioral data.

Figure 4.

(A) Simulated tracking performance of the model with a 2 Hz sinusoidal perturbation and no feedback delay. (B) Simulated tracking performance of the model with a 2 Hz sinusoidal perturbation and 200 ms feedback delay. (C) Power spectrum of simulated cursor velocity with 1–5 Hz perturbations and no feedback delay. (D) Power spectrum of simulated cursor velocity with 1–5 Hz perturbations and 200 ms feedback delay. (E) Simulated cursor amplitude response to 1–5 Hz perturbations with no feedback delay (blue) and 200 ms feedback delay (red). (F) Power spectrum of simulated force velocity with 1–5 Hz perturbations and no feedback delay. (G) Power spectrum of simulated force velocity with 1–5 Hz perturbations and 200 ms feedback delay. (H) Simulated force amplitude response to 1–5 Hz perturbations with no feedback delay (blue) and 200 ms feedback delay (red). (I) Simulated intrinsic phase delay of force responses to 1–5 Hz perturbations with no feedback delay (blue) and 200 ms feedback delay (red). (J) Intrinsic delay times corresponding to all submovement peaks/harmonics in Figure 1D, plotted against the frequency of the peak. Dashed line indicates phase delay of the simulated optimal controller (K) Top: Positional inaccuracy of human tracking for all conditions quantified as root mean squared error (RMSE). Average ± s.e.m. of 8 subjects. Bottom: RMSE of simulated tracking for all conditions.

Finally, overall tracking performance (as measured by the root mean squared positional error over time) matched well with subjects’ actual performance across conditions in our second experiment (Figure 4K). Note that, irrespective of delay, the lowest frequency perturbation was associated with the greatest positional error, since perturbations had equal peak-to-peak velocity and were therefore larger in amplitude at low frequencies. However, performance was most affected by the 1 Hz perturbation with a 200 ms delay, corresponding to a frequency of constructive interference.

Emergence of delay-specific predictive control during individual trials

While not simulating the full complexity of upper-limb control, our model was intended to illustrate the interplay between intrinsic and extrinsic dynamics during tracking. More sophisticated models would likely exhibit qualitatively similar behavior, so long as they also incorporated extrinsic, delay-dependent feedback and intrinsic, delay-independent dynamics. However, in order to generate stable tracking behavior, the Smith Predictor architecture requires accurate compensation for external delays within an internal feedback loop. For this to be a plausible model to explain our data, the controller would need to adapt quickly to new extrinsic delay conditions that varied from trial to trial in our experiment. Therefore we were interested in whether we could observe such rapid adaptation of control strategies within individual trials. Moreover, we asked whether this adaptation was delay-specific as expected for a Smith Predictor, or could perhaps be explained by a simpler delay-independent feedback controller.

Figure 5A,B compares schematics of two linear feedback controllers with and without the internal Smith Predictor loop. Both incorporate intrinsic dynamics, and as a result of extrinsic feedback delays exacerbate motor noise at frequencies given by Equation (1). However, the comb filter rearrangements in Figure 5C,D show how the two architectures predict different relationships between the feedback gain resulting from this intrinsic dynamics, G(iω), and the closed-loop force amplitude response to perturbations, Hforce(iω). We asked how each model explained the experimental data by inferring the intrinsic dynamics that would be required to generate our observed force amplitude responses under both architectures.

Figure 5. Emergence of predictive control strategies within individual trials.

Figure 5.

(A) Schematic of a simple feedback controller with intrinsic gain, GFB(iω) and time delay, τ. (B) A Smith Predictor with intrinsic gain, GSP(iω), time delay and calibrated internal feedback loop. (C,D) Rearrangements of the two model architectures to allow derivation of the cursor response function, Hcursor(iω), and force amplitude response, Hforce(iω). Note that both act as ‘comb filters’ and exhibit delay-dependent submovement peaks. However the architectures predict different relationships between intrinsic gain and force amplitude response. (E) Feedback gains inferred from experimental data assuming the simple feedback controller architecture, for 5 s windows early, middle and late in each trial. Thick line shows average over 8 subjects. Note that feedback gains for different delay conditions become less similar as the trial progresses. (F) Feedback gains inferred from experimental data assuming the Smith Predictor architecture. Feedback gains for different delay conditions become more similar as trial progresses. (G) Delay-dependence of feedback gain (mean-squared difference between delay conditions) inferred from the two architectures. The analysis used a 5 s sliding window through the entire trial. Shading indicates s.e.m. over 8 subjects. (H) Phase delay of feedback gain at 1 Hz inferred from Smith Predictor architecture through trials with 0 and 200 ms delay. (I) Average time lag between cursor and target through trials with 0 and 200 ms delay (and no spatial perturbation).

Figure 5E shows the intrinsic gain that a simple feedback controller would need to explain the amplitude responses observed during 5 s sections of experimental data taken from the start, middle and end of each trial. While the general pattern was one of low-pass filtering, the intrinsic dynamics inferred for each delay condition diverged progressively through the trial. Therefore we can conclude that the control strategy used by subjects was indeed adapting during a single trial, and that this adaptation was delay-specific. Interestingly, intrinsic feedback gains inferred using the Smith Predictor model (Figure 5F) became progressively more similar as the trial progressed. Therefore the adaptation process could parsimoniously be interpreted as the emergence of an appropriately-calibrated Smith Predictor with delay-independent intrinsic dynamics, as predicted by our optimal control model. The time-course of this adaptation (Figure 5G) was associated with a reduction in both low-frequency phase delays (Figure 5H) and the average lag of the cursor behind the target (Figure 5I), showing that subjects quickly learned to compensate for feedback delays within individual trials.

Movement intermittency in a non-human primate tracking task

The amplitude and phase responses to perturbations during human visuomotor tracking provided evidence for intrinsic low-frequency dynamics in feedback corrections, which we have interpreted in the framework of optimal state estimation. The schematic on the right of Figure 3A suggests how a simple Kalman filter could be implemented by neural circuitry, with two neural populations (representing position and velocity) evolving according to Equation (4) and exhibiting a resonant cross-spectral peak (Figure 3D). To seek further evidence for the neural implementation of such a filter we turned to intracortical recordings in non-human primates. We were interested in whether cyclical motor cortex trajectories could reflect the delay-independent dynamics of the two interacting neural populations described above, and thereby account for filtering of feedback responses during visuomotor tracking.

We analyzed local field potential (LFP) recordings from monkey primary motor cortex (M1) during a center-out isometric wrist torque task, which we have used previously to characterize both submovement kinematics and population dynamics (Hall et al., 2014). Figure 6 shows example tracking behavior (Figure 6A), radial cursor velocity (Figure 6B) and multichannel LFPs (Figure 6C) as monkeys moved to peripheral targets under two feedback delay conditions. Movement intermittency was apparent as regular submovement peaks in the radial cursor velocity. Moreover, LFPs exhibited low-frequency oscillations during movement, with a variety of phase-shifts present on different channels. Principal component analysis (PCA) yielded two orthogonal components of the cortical cycle (Figure 6E), and the close coupling with submovements was revealed by overlaying the cursor velocity profile onto, in this case, the second principal component (PC) (Figure 6E).

Figure 6. Movement intermittency in a non-human primate tracking task.

Figure 6.

(A) Radial cursor position during a typical trial of the center-out isometric wrist torque task under two different feedback delay conditions. Data from Monkey U. (B) Radial cursor velocity. Arrowheads indicate time of submovements identified as positive peaks in radial cursor velocity. (C) Low-pass filtered, mean-subtracted LFPs from M1. (D) First two principal components (PCs) of the LFP. (E) The second LFP-PC overlaid on the radial cursor velocity.

Intrinsic cortical dynamics are unaffected by feedback delays

As with humans, in the absence of feedback delay the cursor velocity (after removing task-locked components, see Materials and methods) was dominated by a single spectral peak (Figure 7A,E; top red traces). A broad peak at approximately the same frequency was also observed in average LFP power spectra (Figure 7B,F). Additionally, we used coherence analysis to confirm consistent phase-coupling between LFPs and cursor velocity (Figure 7C,G). Finally, we calculated imaginary coherence spectra between pairs of LFPs (see Materials and methods). The imaginary component of coherence indicates frequencies at which there is consistent out-of-phase coupling in the LFP cross-spectrum. This effectively separates locally-varying oscillatory components from in-phase background signals (e.g. due to volume conduction from distant sources), and revealed more clearly the LFP rhythmicity (Figure 7D,H). Note that for no feedback delay, all spectra contain a single peak at around 2–3 Hz.

Figure 7. Frequency-domain analysis reveals delay-dependent and delay-independent spectral features.

Figure 7.

(A) Power spectrum of radial cursor speed with 0–600 ms feedback delay. Traces have been off-set for clarity. Arrows indicate expected frequencies of peaks from OFC model. Data from Monkey U. (B) Average power spectrum of M1 LFPs. (C) Average coherence spectrum between radial cursor speed and all M1 LFPs. (D) Average imaginary coherence spectrum between all pairs of M1 LFPs. (E–H) As above, but for Monkey S. (I–L) Simulated power and coherence spectra produced by the OFC model.

An obvious interpretation of these results would be that oscillatory activity in the motor system drives submovements in a feedforward manner. In this case, we would expect the frequency of the cortical oscillation to reliably reflect the intermittency observed in behavior. With increasing feedback delays, submovement peaks in monkeys (Figure 7A,E; lower traces) exhibited a pattern similar to that seen with human subjects. The fundamental frequency was reduced, while odd harmonics grew more pronounced as they came below about 4 Hz. Moreover, coherence spectra between cursor velocity and LFP (Figure 7C,G) revealed delay-dependent peaks at both fundamental and harmonic frequencies. Surprisingly however, the power spectrum of the LFP (Figure 7B,F) was unaffected by feedback delay, with a single broad peak in the delta band persisting throughout. Moreover, imaginary coherence spectra between pairs of LFPs were also unchanged (Figure 7D,H). These results are incompatible with the hypothesis that motor cortical oscillations drive movement intermittency directly, and instead demonstrate a dissociation between delay-dependent submovements and delay-independent cortical dynamics.

We next identified submovements from peaks in the radial cursor speed, in order to examine the temporal profile of their associated LFPs. Submovement-triggered averages (SmTAs) of LFPs exhibited multiphasic potentials around the time of movement, as well as a second feature following submovements with a latency that depended on extrinsic delay (Figure 8A, Figure 8—figure supplement 1). This feature was revealed more clearly by reducing the dimensionality of the LFPs with PCA (Figure 8B). Note that if submovements reflect interference between stochastic motor errors and feedback corrections, a submovement in the positive direction can arise from two underlying causes. First, it may be a positive correction to a preceding negative error. In this case, cortical activity associated with the feedback correction should occur around time zero. Second, the submovement may itself be a positive error which is followed by a negative correction, and the associated cortical activity will hence be delayed by the feedback latency. Since the SmTA pools submovements arising from both causes, this accounts for two features with opposite polarity separated by the feedback delay. Note also that SmTAs of cursor velocity similarly overlay (negative) tracking errors preceding (positive) feedback corrections, and (negative) feedback corrections following (positive) tracking errors, evident as symmetrical troughs on either side of the central submovement peak (Figure 8C).

Figure 8. Submovement-triggered averages of M1 LFPs.

(A) Average low-pass filtered LFPs from M1, aligned to the peak speed of submovements with 0–600 ms feedback delay. Note the second feature, which follows submovements by an extrinsic, delay-dependent latency. Data from Monkey U. See also Figure 8—figure supplement 1. (B) Average of first two LFP-PCs aligned to submovements. Shading indicates significant delay-dependent peaks in PC1 (p<0.001, Kruskal-Wallis test and post-hoc signed-ranks test across delay conditions). (C) Average low-pass filtered cursor speed, aligned to submovements. Shading indicates significant (p<0.001) delay-dependent troughs. (D) Average submovement-triggered LFP-PC trajectories, plotted over 200 ms either side of the time of peak submovement speed (indicated by circles). (E–H) Simulated submovement-triggered averages produced by the OFC model.

Figure 8.

Figure 8—figure supplement 1. Submovement-triggered averages of M1 LFPs for Monkey S.

Figure 8—figure supplement 1.

(A) Average low-pass filtered LFPs from M1, aligned to the peak speed of submovements with 0–600 ms feedback delay. Data from Monkey S. (B) Average of first two LFP-PCs aligned to submovements. Shading indicates significant delay-dependent peaks in PC1 (p<0.05, Kruskal-Wallis test and post-hoc signed-ranks test across delay conditions). (C) Average low-pass filtered cursor speed, aligned to submovements. Shading indicates significant (p<0.05) delay-dependent troughs. (D) Average submovement-triggered LFP-PC trajectories, plotted over 200 ms either side of the time of peak submovement speed (indicated by circles).

Importantly however, LFP oscillations around the time of submovements appeared largely unaffected by delay. To visualize this, we projected the SmTAs of multichannel LFPs onto the same PC plane. For all delay conditions, LFPs traced a single cycle with the same directional of rotation and comparable angular velocity (Figure 8D). The period of these cycles (approx. 300 ms) matched the frequency of imaginary coherence between LFPs (approx. 3 Hz). This is as expected, since signals with a consistent phase difference will be orthogonalized by PCA and appear as cyclical trajectories in the PC plane. In other words, although the precise frequency of submovements depended on extrinsic delays in visual feedback, the constant frequency of associated LFP cycles revealed delay-independent intrinsic dynamics within motor cortex. Note also that the resonant frequency of these dynamics matched the delay-independent filtering of feedback responses observed in our human experiments.

Modelling submovement-related LFP cycles and delta oscillations in sleep

These various observations could be understood using the same computational model that explained our human behavioral data (Figure 9). For simplicity, we simulated two out-of-phase components within the LFP by using the total synaptic input to each of the two neural populations in the state estimator. We also added common low-frequency background noise to represent volume conduction from distant sources. The simulated LFPs exhibited a broad, delay-independent spectral peak arising from the dynamics of the recurrent network (Figure 7J). By contrast, the resultant cursor velocity comprised the summation of motor noise and (delayed) feedback corrections, and therefore contained sharper, delay-dependent spectral peaks, due to constructive/destructive interference (Figure 7I). Note however, that coherence was nonetheless observed between LFPs and cursor velocity (Figure 7K). Time-domain SmTAs of the simulated data also reproduced features of the experimental recordings, including delay-dependent peaks/troughs reflecting extrinsic feedback delays (Figure 8E–G). Meanwhile, the coupling of simulated neural populations, according to conserved intrinsic dynamics, resulted in consistent LFP cycles around the time of movement (Figure 8H), and an imaginary cross-spectrum with a single delay-independent resonant peak (Figure 7L).

Figure 9. Schematic of delay-dependent and delay-independent relationships in the OFC model.

Figure 9.

The boxes show how the various frequency-domain and submovement-triggered average (SmTA) relationships are explained by the OFC model. Top row, from left to right: Broad spectrum motor noise drives intrinsic dynamics resulting in a delay-independent LFP cross-spectral resonance. The delayed motor command is combined with the original motor noise leading to delay-dependent comb filtering, evident in LFP-Cursor coherence and Cursor power spectrum. Bottom row, from left to right: submovements can arise from a positive noise peak at time-zero, or as a correction to a preceding negative noise trough. Due to intrinsic dynamics, LFPs trace consistent cyclical trajectories locked to submovements. SmTA of LFPs contains potentials associated with noise peak/troughs after feedback delay. SmTA of cursor velocity combines noise with delayed feedback corrections to yield a central submovement flanked by symmetrical troughs.

Finally, we examined whether the model could also account for cortical oscillations in the absence of behavior. Previously we have described a common dynamical structure within both cortical cycles during movement and low-frequency oscillations during sleep and sedation (Hall et al., 2014). In particular, K-complex events under ketamine sedation (Figure 10A), thought to reflect transitions between down- and up-states of the cortex, are associated with brief bursts of delta oscillation (Figure 10B) (Amzica and Steriade, 1997). The relative phases of multichannel LFPs aligned to these events matches those seen during submovements (Figure 10D,E). As a result, when projected onto the PC plane, LFPs trace similar cycles during both K-complexes (Figure 10C) and submovements (Figure 10F). We modelled the sedated condition by disconnecting motor and sensory connections between the feedback controller and the external world; instead providing a pulsatile input to the state estimator simulating a down- to up-state transition (Figure 10G). Effectively, transient excitation of the state estimator elicited an impulse response reflecting its intrinsic dynamics. The simulated LFPs generated a burst of delta-frequency oscillation around the K-complex (Figure 10H) which resembled submovement-related activity (Figure 10J,K). Projecting this activity onto the same PC plane revealed consistent cycles during simulated K-complexes (Figure 10I) and submovements (Figure 10L). Thus it appears that our computational model, incorporating the intrinsic dynamics of motor cortical networks, could also account for the conserved structure of low-frequency LFPs during movement and delta oscillations in sleep.

Figure 10. Simulated LFP dynamics during movement and sedation.

Figure 10.

(A) K-complex events in LFP from M1 recorded under ketamine sedation. (B) Average low-pass filtered multichannel LFPs aligned to K-complex events. LFPs are color-coded according to phase relative to submovements, but exhibit a similar pattern relative to K-complexes. (C) Average LFP-PC trajectories aligned to K-complexes, plotted over 200 ms either side of the time of the K-complex (indicated by a circle), using the PC plane calculated from recordings during awake behavior. (D) Average cursor speed aligned to the peak speed of submovements. (E) Average low-pass filtered multichannel LFPs aligned to submovements. (F) Average submovement-triggered LFP-PC trajectories, plotted over 200 ms either side of the time of submovements (indicated by a circle). (G) A K-complex under sedation is simulated by an impulse excitation of the OFC model, without connection to the external world. (H) Impulse response of the simulated LFP-PCs. (I) LFP-PC trajectories associated with simulated K-complexes. (J) Simulated submovement-triggered average cursor speed from the OFC model with no feedback delay. (K) Simulated submovement-triggered average LFP-PCs. (L) Simulated submovement-triggered LFP-PC trajectories. Panels A–F reproduced from Figure 4A,C,E in Hall et al. (2014) (published under a Creative Commons CC BY 3.0 license).

Discussion

Submovement kinematics are influenced by both extrinsic and intrinsic dynamics

Previous theories of intermittency have focused on either extrinsic or intrinsic explanations for the regularity of submovements, but little consensus has emerged over this fundamental feature of movement. There is good evidence for a common low-frequency oscillatory structure to motor cortex activity across multiple behavioral states (Churchland et al., 2012; Hall et al., 2014; Russo et al., 2018) but also an influence of feedback delays on submovement timing (Miall, 1996). Experimentally manipulating visual feedback with artificial time delays and spatial perturbations allowed us to dissociate both contributions to submovement kinematics. We found that precise frequencies of submovement peaks were determined by delays in the extrinsic feedback loop, but that these were embedded within a delay-independent envelope reflecting intrinsic filtering of feedback corrections. This dissociation of extrinsic and intrinsic dynamics was also evident in intracortically-recorded LFPs during tracking movements. Both delay-dependent feedback corrections and delay-independent cycles were observed in submovement-triggered averages of LFPs. Moreover, while coherence between LFPs and cursor movement exhibited delay-dependent spectral peaks, the imaginary coherence between multichannel LFPs revealed a consistent dynamical structure across behaviors.

Modelling isometric visuomotor tracking

We were able to explain these apparently contradictory results by using a continuous feedback control model, which incorporated optimal state estimation based on a second-order internal model of the external dynamics. Previously, intermittency has been implemented in optimal feedback control models by explicitly including a refractory period between submovements (Gawthrop et al., 2011; Sakaguchi et al., 2015), but theoretical justification for such an additions is lacking. In our model, submovements instead arose from constructive interference between motor errors and continuous, delayed feedback corrections. Optimal state estimation used a steady-state Kalman filter to separate process (motor) noise from measurement (sensory) noise. One free parameter was tuned to achieve correspondence between simulated and experimental data, namely the ratio of process to measurement noise, which determined the intrinsic resonance frequency around 2–3 Hz. It would be interesting in future to vary these noise characteristics experimentally (e.g. by artificially degrading visual acuity, or by extensively training subjects to produce faster or more accurate movements) and examine the effect on perturbation responses. One possible outcome would be a change to the observed resonance, although this seems to contradict the ubiquity of 2–3 Hz cortical dynamics. Alternatively, there may be other computational advantages to maintaining a consistent cortical rhythm. For example, it is notable that 2–3 Hz intrinsic dynamics matched the frequency of the primary submovement peak under unperturbed external feedback conditions, thus accentuating the fundamental submovement frequency around 2 Hz, while suppressing higher harmonics. This may be beneficial in allowing other aspects of the visuomotor machinery to be synchronized to a single rhythm, for example eye movements, which are influenced by hand movement during tracking tasks (Koken and Erkelens, 1992).

One puzzling feature of our results was that force amplitude responses to cursor perturbations were uniformly less than unity, which initially appears suboptimal for rejecting even slow perturbations. We first considered that proprioceptive information (which is in conflict with vision during cursor perturbations) might cause subjects to underestimate the true displacement of the cursor. However, sub-unity amplitude responses were also observed in separate experiments (not shown) when sinusoidal displacements were added to the target position. In this situation there was no discrepancy between vision and proprioception, yet subjects consistently undershot corrections to all but the lowest frequency perturbations (even in the absence of any delay). An alternative explanation is that subjects avoided making corrections requiring large changes to the motor command. This can be formalized by a cost function that is minimized by proportional-integral (PI) control, which has been used in the past to model human movement (Kleinman, 1974). It is more common in optimal control models to use cost functions that penalize the absolute motor command, leading to proportional feedback policies (Todorov and Jordan, 2002), under the assumption that this minimizes signal-dependent noise in muscles (Jones et al., 2002). However, the trajectory variability observed in our isometric tracking task appeared more correlated with large changes in finger forces, rather than the absolute force magnitude (Figure 1—figure supplement 3). Derivative-dependent motor noise was also evident as increased variability at high frequencies in our feedforward task (Figure 2—figure supplement 3). Since submovements result from constructive interference between tracking errors and feedback corrections, derivative-dependent motor noise also provides a counterintuitive, but necessary, explanation for why the amplitude of submovements increases with target speed (Figure 1—figure supplement 2). Increased intermittency cannot be a direct consequence of faster target motion, since the frequency content of this motion is nevertheless low by comparison to submovements. Rather, faster tracking requires a larger change in the motor command, leading to increased broad-band motor noise which, after constructive interference with feedback corrections, results in more pronounced peaks at submovement frequencies.

State estimation by motor cortical population dynamics

PCA of multichannel LFPs in monkey motor cortex revealed two underlying components, which we interpret as arising from distinct but coupled neural populations. The cyclical movement-related dynamics of these components resembled those described for M1 firing rates (Churchland et al., 2012), which have previously been implicated in feedforward generation of movement. Specifically, it was proposed that preparatory activity first develops along ‘output-null’ dimensions of the neural state space before, at movement onset, evolving via intrinsic dynamics into orthogonal ‘output-potent’ dimensions that drive muscles (Churchland et al., 2010). However, this purely feedforward view cannot account for our isometric tracking data, since manipulation of feedback delays dissociated delay-dependent submovements from delay-independent rotational dynamics. Instead we interpret these intrinsic dynamics as implementing a state estimator during continuous feedback control, driven by noise in motor and sensory signals. We used Newtonian dynamics to construct a simple two-dimensional state transition model based on both the cursor-target discrepancy and its first derivative. While this undoubtedly neglects the true complexity of muscle and limb biomechanics, simulations based on this plausible first approximation reproduced both the amplitude response and phase-delay to sinusoidal cursor perturbations in humans, and the population dynamics of LFP cycles in the monkey. We suggest that for discrete, fast movements to static targets, transient cursor-target discrepancies effectively provide impulse excitation to the state estimator, generating a rotational cycle in the neural space. Note that this account also offers a natural explanation of why preparatory and movement-related activity lies along distinct state-space dimensions, since the static discrepancy present during preparation is encoded differently to the changing discrepancy that exists during movement. At the same time, the lawful relationship between discrepancy and its derivative couples these dimensions within the state estimator and is evident as consistent rotational dynamics across different tasks and behavioral states.

It may seem unusual to ascribe the role of state estimation to M1, when this function is usually attributed to parietal (Mulliken et al., 2008) and premotor areas (where rotational dynamics have also been reported, albeit at a lower frequency [Churchland et al., 2012; Hall et al., 2014]). We suggest that the computations involved in optimal tracking behaviors are likely distributed across multiple cortical areas including (but not limited to) M1, with local circuitry reflecting multiple dynamical models of the various sensory and efference copy signals that must be integrated for accurate control. These could include the estimation of the position of moving stimuli based on noisy visual inputs (Kwon et al., 2015), as well the optimal integration of visual and somatosensory information, which may have different temporal delays (Crevecoeur et al., 2016).

An alternative explanation for consistent rotational dynamics has recently been proposed by Russo et al. (2018), based on the behavior of recurrent neural networks trained to produce different feed-forward muscle patterns whilst minimizing ‘tangling’ between neural trajectories. It is interesting to compare this with our OFC-based interpretation, since both are motivated by the problem of maintaining accurate behavior in the presence of noise. Minimizing tangling leads to network architectures that are robust to intrinsic noise in individual neurons, while OFC focusses on optimizing movements in the face of unreliable motor commands and noisy sensory signals. Given this conceptual link, it is perhaps unsurprising if recurrent neural network approaches learn implementations of computational architectures such as Kalman filters that minimize the influence of noise on behavior. In the future, it may be productive to incorporate sensory feedback into recurrent neural network models of movement, as well as including intrinsic sources of neural noise in optimal control models. The convergence of these frameworks may further help to reveal how computational principles are implemented in the human motor system.

Materials and methods

Subjects

Based on pilot studies, we decided in advance to use a sample size of eight subjects in each experiment. In total, we recruited 11 adult subjects at the Institute of Neuroscience, Newcastle University. Eight subjects (three females; age 23–33; one left-handed) participated in both Experiment 1 (feedback delay) and Experiment 2 (feedback delay and spatial perturbation). Eight subjects (three females; age 23–33; all right-handed) participated in Experiment 3 (feedforward task); 6 of these subjects also participated in experiments 1 and 2. Eight subjects (three females; age 23–33; all right-handed) participated in the experiment shown in Figure 1—figure supplement 2; 7 out of these subjects also participated in Experiment 3. All experiments were approved by the local ethics committee at Newcastle University and performed after informed consent, which was given in accordance with the Declaration of Helsinki.

Human tracking task

Subjects tracked a (red) target on a computer monitor by exerting bimanual, isometric, index finger forces on two sensors (FSG15N1A; Honeywell). The target underwent uniform, slow, circular motion with a pseudorandom order of clockwise and anticlockwise directions across trials. Finger forces were sampled at 50 samples/s (USB-6343; National Instruments) and mapped to (yellow) cursor position, by projecting onto two diagonal screen axes. In addition, a feedback delay (τext) was interposed between force and cursor movement. The feedback delay was kept constant throughout the duration of each trial (lasting 20 s). We express screen coordinates in terms of the radius of target motion, rtarget=100%. Tracking the target rotation thus required the generation of sinusoidal motion in the range of −100% to +100%, corresponding to finger forces of 0 to 3.26N, with a 90° phase-shift between each hand. At the end of each trial, subjects were given a numerical score from 0 to 1000, indicating how accurately they had tracked the target. Subjects were instructed to attempt to maximize this score, which was calculated as:

Score=1000 T×0T(1e|rcursor(t)rtarget(t)|δ)dt (6)

where rcursor(t) and rtarget(t) are the 2D positions of the cursor and target respectively, and δ=50%. Apart from the experiment shown in Figure 1—figure supplement 2, all experiments used a frequency of target rotation, ftarget= 0.2 rotations per second.

Experiment 1 used five delay conditions (τext= 0, 100, 200, 300, or 400 ms). Subjects performed a total of 70 trials, comprising 14 of each condition, presented in pseudorandom order.

For Experiment 2, spatial perturbations were added to the cursor position, as well as time delays. The perturbations were equivalent to sinusoidal modulation of the target angular velocity, but were instead added to the cursor. Expressed in polar coordinates r=r,θ relative to the center of the screen, the target and cursor positions were thus given by:

rtargett=rtarget,ωtargett (7)
rpertt=rtarget,ωtargett+ωtargetωpertsinωpertt-rtargett (8)
rcursor(t)=rforce(t),θforce(t)+rpert(t) (9)

where ωtarget=2πftarget is the angular velocity of the target around the centre of the screen, ωpert=2πfpert is the angular frequency of the perturbation, and rforce(t),θforce(t) is the unperturbed cursor position calculated from the subject’s forces at time t-τext.

Although the 2D cursor position was not constrained to follow the target trajectory, we did not analyze off-trajectory deviations. For simplicity, kinematic analyses were based on the time-varying angular velocity of the cursor subtended at the center of the screen:

ωcursort=ddtθcursor(t) (10)

For spatial perturbation experiments, we also calculated the angular velocity of the unperturbed cursor position subtended at the center of the screen:

ωforcet=ddtθforcet (11)

Note that since rforcertarget, the perturbation effectively adds a sinusoidal component to the angular velocity of the cursor:

ωcursortωforcet+ωtargetcosωpertt (12)

Six different spatial perturbations (fpert= 0, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 Hz) were combined with two feedback delays (τext= 0, 200 ms) yielding 12 conditions. Subjects performed a total of 144 trials, comprising 12 trials per condition, presented in pseudorandom order.

Human feedforward task

In Experiment 3, we used a unimanual isometric task in which subjects were asked to make sinusoidal forces with their right index finger. Subjects received visual feedback of the cursor, but no target was shown. Instead, subjects were shown two amplitude boundaries to move between, and the frequency of movement was cued with auditory beeps at frequencies of 1, 2, 3, 4 and 5 Hz. Subjects performed a total of 15 trials, comprising three 20 s trials per frequency condition.

Monkey experiments

Subjects

We used two purpose-bred female rhesus macaques (monkey S: 6 years old, 6.6 kg; monkey U: 6 years old, 8.8 kg). Animal experiments were approved by the local Animal Welfare Ethical Review Board and performed under appropriate UK Home Office licenses in accordance with the Animals (Scientific Procedures) Act 1986 (2013 revision).

Monkey isometric tracking task

Monkeys moved a 2D computer cursor by generating isometric flexion-extension (vertical) and radial-ulnar (horizontal) torques at the wrist, measured by a 6-axis force/torque transducer (Nano25; ATI Industrial Automation). Centre-out targets were presented at 8 peripheral positions in a pseudorandom order. Targets were positioned at 70% of the distance to the screen edge (100% corresponding to torque of 0.67 Nm). The diameter of the target and cursor ranged between 14 and 36%. A successful trial required maintaining an overlap between cursor and peripheral target for 0.6 s, after which the monkeys returned the cursor to the center of the screen to receive a food reward. Visual feedback of the cursor was delayed by τext = 0, 200, 400, 600 ms throughout separate blocks of 50–70 trials each. Monkey S performed the task with the right hand. Monkey U initially used the right hand and was then retrained for a second period of data collection with the left hand.

LFP recording

LFPs were recorded using custom arrays of 12 moveable 50 µm diameter tungsten microwires (impedance ~200 kΩ at 1 kHz) chronically implanted in the contralateral wrist area of M1 under sevoflurane anesthesia with postoperative analgesics and antibiotics. Head-free recordings were made using unity-gain headstages followed by wide-band amplification and sampling at 24.4 kilosamples/s (System 3; Tucker-Davis Technologies). LFPs were digitally low-pass filtered at 200 Hz and recorded at 488 samples/second.

Analysis of kinematics and neural data was performed on recordings over eight sessions comprising of 56 task blocks in Monkey S (no delay: 24 blocks; 200 ms delay: 13; 400 ms delay: 13; 600 ms delay: 6), and 89 sessions comprising of 356 task blocks in Monkey U (no delay: 89; 200 ms delay: 89; 400 ms delay: 89; 600 ms delay: 89). Each task block comprised 50 (monkey S) or 70 trials (monkey U).

Human data analysis

Spectral analysis used fast Fourier transforms (FFTs) performed on non-overlapping 512 sample-point windows (approx. 10 s) taken from the middle of each trial. Submovement peaks in the power spectra were measured after smoothing with a seven-point moving-average.

For perturbation experiments, we additionally defined two complex transfer functions Hcursor and Hforce:

Hcursoriωpert=2ωtargetT0Tωcursor(t)e-iωperttdt (13)
Hforceiωpert=2ωtargetT0Tωforce(t)e-iωperttdt (14)

Cursor and force amplitude responses to perturbations were calculated as the magnitude of the corresponding transfer functions, and the intrinsic phase delay of force responses was given by:

τφiωpert=-argHforceiωpertωpert-τext (15)

Additionally, tracking performance was quantified off-line using the root-mean-squared Euclidean distance between cursor and target.

Monkey data analysis

We differentiated the magnitude of the absolute 2D torque (expressed as a percentage of the distance to the edge of the screen) to obtain the radial cursor velocity. LFP channels were subjected to visual inspection to reject noisy channels prior to mean-subtraction. For time-domain analysis, LFPs and cursor velocities were low-pass filtered at 10 Hz. Submovements were defined as a peak radial cursor speed exceeding 100 %/s. For frequency-domain analysis, we took unfiltered sections of 1024 sample points from each trial (approx. 1.5 s before to 0.5 s after the end of the peripheral hold period). We subtracted the trial-averaged profile from each section before concatenating to yield long data sections without any consistent low-frequency components related to the periodicity of the task. FFTs were calculated with overlapping Hanning windows (214 sample points ≈ 34 s; 75% overlap), from which we derived the following spectra:

Cursor power: PCursor(f)=m=1MFcursorf,m.Fcursorf,m*M

LFP power: PLFPi(f)=m=1MFLFPif,m.FLFPif,m*M

LFP-cursor coherence: CohLFPi-Cursor=m=1MFLFPif,m.Fcursorf,m*2M.PCursorf.PLFPi(f)

LFP-LFP imaginary coherence: ImCohLFPi-LFPj=Imm=1MFLFPif,m.FLFPjf,m*2M.PLFPif.PLFPj(f)

where FLFPif,m and FCursorf,m represent Fourier coefficients at frequency f and window m=(1..M) from LFP channel i and cursor velocity respectively. All spectra were smoothed with a 16-point Hanning window. In addition, LFP power and LFP-cursor coherence were averaged across all LFP channels, while LFP-LFP imaginary coherence was averaged over all pairs of LFPs.

Modelling

Although both human and monkey tasks involved 2D isometric control, for simplicity we modelled only a 1D controller and assumed a one-to-one mapping from control signal, uk to position, xk. We neglected target motion and designed the controller to minimize the influence of stochastic motor errors using delayed, noisy feedback of position. We set the model time step t= 0.01 s, intrinsic feedback delay τint = 0.26 s, and the ratio of process/measurement noise ρ= 250 s−2 unless otherwise stated. Steady-state Kalman gains were calculated using the function kalman in Matlab, and the resultant discrete time dynamic system (Equation (4)) was implemented by two integrating neuronal populations representing x^k and v^k, receiving a synaptic input on each time-step equal to:

[Δx^kΔv^k]=[KposΔtKvel0][x^k1v^k1]+[KposKvel]yk (16)

Two LFP components were simulated by normalizing Δx^k and Δv^k to unity variance, before adding background common noise with a 1f spectrum.

The motor command uk was generated on each time step using the Smith Predictor architecture shown in Figure 3. Based on our observation that trajectory variability was maximal at times when force output was changing (Figure 1—figure supplement 3 ), we used a linear quadratic regulator (LQR) control framework to minimize a quadratic cost function, J, incorporating the rate of change in motor command, ukt:

J=k(qxk2+r(ΔukΔt)2) (17)

For a state transition matrix in the form:

[xkvk]=[1Δt01][xk1vk1]+[01]ΔukΔt (18)

J is minimized by a state feedback policy of the form:

ΔukΔt=[KIKP].[xkvk] (19)

which can be integrated to yield a PI controller:

uk=j=1kΔui=KPj=1kvkΔtKIj=1kxjΔt=KPxkKIj=1kxjΔt

We found the proportional and integral gains KP and KI using the function lqr in Matlab with q=1 and r=Δt2. In the full model, this controller acted on the optimal estimate of position, z^k, after incorporating the delay feedback loop of the Smith Predictor. Note that the transfer function of a PI controller inside the fast feedback loop of the Smith Predictor is given by Abe and Yamanaka (2003):

HPI(iω)=KP+KIiω1+KP+KIiω (21)

which equals 1 for ω=0 but tends to KP1+KP at higher frequencies. Therefore this effectively reduces the response amplitude to perturbations. The full transfer function of the intrinsic dynamics, including time-delay is given by:

Hforce(iω)=eiω(τint+τext)HPI(iω).Hyz^(iω) (22)
Hcursoriω=1-Hforceiω (23)

where Hyz^(iω) is the transfer function of the Kalman filter relating delayed position measurement to optimal position estimate.

Data and software availability

Datasets from all human and monkey experiments, analysis code and model associated with this work are available on Dryad doi:10.5061/dryad.53sq7kn.

Acknowledgements

We thank Jenifer Tulip and Norman Charlton for technical assistance. This work was supported by the Indonesia Endowment Fund for Education (S-2648/LPDP.3/2014), the Medical Research Council (K501396) and the Wellcome Trust (106149).

Funding Statement

The funders had no role in study design, data collection and interpretation, or the decision to submit the work for publication.

Contributor Information

Andrew Jackson, Email: andrew.jackson@ncl.ac.uk.

Eilon Vaadia, The Hebrew University of Jerusalem, Israel.

Richard B Ivry, University of California, Berkeley, United States.

Funding Information

This paper was supported by the following grants:

  • Wellcome 106149 to Andrew Jackson.

  • Indonesia Endowment Fund for Education S-2648/LPDP.3/2014 to Damar Susilaradeya.

  • Medical Research Council K501396 to Thomas M Hall.

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Competing interests

No competing interests declared.

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Ethics

Human subjects: All experiments were approved by the local ethics committee at Newcastle University (000023/2008) and performed after informed consent, which was given in accordance with the Declaration of Helsinki.

Animal experimentation: Animal experiments were approved by the local Animal Welfare Ethical Review Board and performed under appropriate UK Home Office licenses (PPL 60/4410) in accordance with the Animals (Scientific Procedures) Act 1986. Surgeries were performed under sevoflurane anesthesia with postoperative analgesics and antibiotics, and every effort was made to reduce suffering.

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DOI: 10.7554/eLife.40145.023

Data availability

Datasets from the human and monkey experiments, together with sample analysis code and modelling associated with this work are available on Dryad doi:10.5061/dryad.53sq7kn.

The following dataset was generated:

Susilaradeya D, Xu W, Hall TM, Galan F. 2018. Data from: Extrinsic and Intrinsic Dynamics in Movement Intermittency. Dryad Digital Repository.

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Decision letter

Editor: Eilon Vaadia1
Reviewed by: Mark M Churchland2

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Thank you for submitting your article "Extrinsic and Intrinsic Dynamics in Movement Intermittency" for consideration by eLife. Your article has been reviewed by two peer reviewers, and by Eilon Vaadia as the Reviewing Editor. The evaluation has been overseen by Richard Ivry as the Senior Editor. One of the reviewers, Mark M Churchland (Reviewer #2), has agreed to reveal his identity.

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Summary:

The study addresses fundamental questions in motor control, using experiments (in human and monkey) and modeling (OFC) to study the phenomenon of sub-movements during bimanual isometric tracking in a circular path. The authors suggest that the intermittency observed in these continuous tracking movements is explained by an interplay of both intrinsic and extrinsic dynamics. Unlike previous studies, this work conceives of sub-movements that are observed during tracking, not as discrete entities requiring a specialized explanation, but as an interplay of both intrinsic and extrinsic dynamics, emerging as a natural consequence of a neuronal system that implements a predictive and optimal feedback control mechanism. Moreover, under conditions of delayed feedback a classic method for probing feedback control systems – sub-movement frequency content exhibits the expected shift to lower frequencies. Additional properties – the appearance of higher harmonics and a broad band-passed property – are also potentially consistent with certain kinds of continuous feedback and internal dynamics. The link to physiology is tentative but reasonable, plausible, and intriguing. For example, the finding that LFP-oscillation frequency is not delay-dependent is both interesting on its own and interconnects with behavioral observation. The overall impression of the reviewers and the reviewing editor is quite positive. However, we all feel that the paper can improve dramatically by addressing the reviewers’ concerns.

Major concerns:

See the detailed list of major and minor concerns of the two reviewers below. They strongly advise revising the style, the structure and the clarity of all sections. They also have some specific concerns. I join the reviewers' comments and encourage the authors to address all these concerns, by revising the current version of the manuscript. In particular, please note the specific comments about the modeling work.

I (E.V.) also suggest additional and special attention to the "delay perturbation" concerns. In addition to the comments made by the reviewers, I also suggest extending the short discussion of the so-called "delay-independent perturbation responses". If possible and doable, I suggest dedicating a set of experiments (human) to test adaptation to delay in your task. The first paragraph in subsection “Modelling isometric visuomotor tracking” of the discussion is problematic. My intuition fails to understand why you did not see adaptation to predictable sinusoidal perturbation. (see Sakaguchi et al., 2015) for an example a modeling work. The sentence "it would again be interesting to examine whether state estimator dynamics might adapt on a slower time-scale after extensive training with delayed feedback" suggest that the authors understand the problematics. How long is the longer timescale. The present form of the paper suggests that it was not tested. I see this as a serious drawback of an otherwise elegant study.

Separate reviews (please respond to each point):

Reviewer #1:

This paper by Susilaradeya and colleagues attempts to determine the cause of sub-movements. The place their theoretical formulation within the context of optimal feedback control and test their ideas both in human and non-human primates, both at the level of behavior and neurophysiology. This is an interesting paper. In the spirit of this review pilot, I have no comments that require essential revisions in terms of data analysis or data collection so I leave these kinds of quibbles out, but I do have some major comments in terms of conceptualization that the authors may want to consider to improve the accessibility of their ideas.

1) The Introduction is meandering and it doesn't present the logic of the present investigation in a clear enough way. This leaves the reader hanging when they get to the Results (see #3 below). I think the authors need to get to the point of the intrinsic/extrinsic interactions and optimal feedback control more quickly and make it clear what gap they are filling.

2) The sleep bits seem completely out of place until it appears near the end of the discussion. I would seriously consider dropping its mention from earlier in the manuscript because no one will have any idea what is going on anyway.

3) The results are tough to take without more narrative at the beginning of each analysis section. I think this is particularly difficult with the first section of the results because everything is coming out of nowhere. Eventually the rationale is mopped up at the end of the section but by then its too late. Lead up front with some motivation of why you are doing each of these things.

4) The authors use the intervention of increasing visual delays and visual perturbations as a means for probing the state of the system. How does this limit the generalizability of their findings? There is, for example, the following paper that describes the tradeoff of using fast but crude somatosensory inputs versus slow but acute visual ones. Might be worth considering more deeply (477-481) the interplay between many modalities in terms of the OFC framework. http://www.jneurosci.org/content/jneuro/36/33/8598.full.pdf

Minor Comments:

1) The figures are very small, it was very hard to appreciate any details in these. They need to be substantially bigger in print.

Reviewer #2:

Overall, I found this to be a strong study with compelling results and a novel interpretational perspective that could be a potential leap forward in characterizing and explaining the phenomenon of sub-movements. The phenomenon of sub-movements has always been intriguing, but the relevant subfield has been contentious and has thus perhaps not received the attention it deserves (I will here admit to being relatively ignorant of that subfield). The present study conceives of sub-movements not as discrete entities requiring a specialized explanation, but as a natural consequence of feedback control. Under conditions of delayed feedback – a classic method for probing feedback control systems – sub-movement frequency content exhibits the expected shift to slower frequencies. Additional properties – the appearance of higher harmonics and a broad band-passed property – are also potentially consistent with certain kinds of continuous feedback and internal dynamics. This view struck me as both conceptually appealing and quite successful empirically. The link to physiology is tentative, but reasonable, plausible, and intriguing. For example, the finding that LFP-oscillation frequency is not delay-dependent is both interesting on its own, and meshes nicely with behavioral observations.

Yet despite my broad enthusiasm, I found the study to be a frustrating read. It took at least five times the cognitive effort, relative to a typical study, for me to fully (ok, 85%) understand everything. I read the manuscript three times and visited multiple Wikipedia pages in the process. This is despite the fact that I have some (not a lot, but some) experience with control-theory style modeling. Some of this cognitive effort is both necessary and rewarding – the authors are bringing multiple concepts to bear on both behavioral and physiological data, in a way that is motivated by the data and helps make sense of it. It is acceptable that this produces a challenging read, and I definitely learned things in the process. Yet at the same time, aspects of the presentation could be altered to make life easier (ideally much easier) on the reader. To be blunt, the manuscript reads as if it were written by a very bright graduate student who was given too much leeway in determining how the story is structured and told. The manuscript often offers trees-centric explanations where forest-centric explanations would be more appropriate. This not only impacts readability, but also results in attempts to over-explain data with specific models that, in at least one case, seem implausible.

The central findings of the study are relatively simple and fairly easy to interpret. Artificially increasing feedback delay alters the frequency content of sub-movements. Thus, sub-movements timing is not set by an internal clock, but by feedback dynamics. Indeed, the modeling and analysis demonstrate that 'sub-movements' need not be thought of as discrete entities at all – all the data are quite compatible with purely continuous control. Analysis of the response to perturbations further supports the above view. Yet at the same time, the data reveal that there also seem to be an intrinsic mechanisms that 'likes' to operate in the 1-3 Hz range. Although feedback delay alters sub-movement frequency, when frequencies fall in this band they are potentiated (equivalently, frequencies that fall outside this band are attenuated). This finding indicates that there is some intrinsic rhythmicity / band-pass aspect to the generation of movement corrections. This behavioral-level observation is linked with the observation that LFP-based oscillations are prominent in the 1-3 Hz range. Importantly, this band is not altered by changing the feedback delay. Thus, sub-movement properties are consistent with operation of feedback control (where the delay determines frequency content) and an intrinsic system (perhaps the same one that generates the LFP oscillations) that band-passes the responsiveness of the feedback-control system.

In conveying and interpreting the above results, the authors employ control-theory style models. This is important: the models help to transcend hand-waviness and give concrete examples of how a system might work and what one would expect empirically. Certain results (e.g., a peak in frequency content, the shift in that peak with imposed delay, and the appearance of higher harmonics) are actually much easier to understand with a concrete model. Given this, I would not recommend removing the modeling. Yet at the same time, the 'full' model endorsed by the authors – and repeatedly offered as an explanation for all the observed phenomena – makes at least one critical assumption that strikes me as utterly implausible.

To see this, note that in the model in Figure 3, the authors include, in the internal loop, the FULL delay (natural plus imposed). Trials with different delays are interleaved. Thus, the model assumes that, on a single trial, the nervous system can somehow infer the correct delay. This strains credulity well past the breaking point. Indeed, the only reason to make this assumption is that otherwise, the model would not work. I simulated this model (with a few simplifications) and found that even a very modest mismatch in total and internal delay caused the model to become very unstable. In contrast, behavior does not become unstable when an artificial delay is added. Thus, for one to believe the explanation embodied in this model, one would have to imagine that the brain infers the correct delay almost instantaneously and very accurately. This is hard to swallow. The authors note the importance of this assumption in the Discussion, but do not seem to adequately appreciate how implausible it is. Are we really to believe that the cerebellum can, in under a second, correctly infer the exact delay on each trial? It is possible that I am missing some key fact here, but if not, this specific model really seems like a non-starter.

Related (but much less troubling) points can be made regarding the model element that captures the intrinsic band-passed property. For the model to work, it is critical (I think) that process noise impact not force per se, but the derivative of force (i.e., cursor velocity). This runs contrary to the most natural modeling assumption, and the one typically made: that force is corrupted by motor noise. By assuming that force is corrupted by the INTEGRAL of motor noise, the authors are basically building in the band-passed feature (high-frequency errors should be filtered out). This seems a bit like cooking the books after knowing the result. This seems unnecessary. The most important aspects of the interpretation don't depend critically on the exact model – simply on there being some internal process with appropriate band-pass properties. The authors themselves note this in the discussion. Thus, some balance needs to be struck between using a concrete model to illustrate a broader point, and not forcing the reader to dig deep to understand a specific model that is rather post-hoc and is only one of many plausible models.

I believe it likely that the authors can revise the manuscript to address these shortcomings. More of the focus should be on the general properties of the data and what they imply at a broad level. Control-theory-style models can (and probably should) be used to illustrate fundamental properties, but less should be made of specific pet models. This is especially true when the conceptual point is a fairly general one, and when many related models might show the key properties. This would also allow the manuscript to be more readable. The manuscript could better indicate which details really matter and which don't. Then the reader would know when to pause and really understand a point, and when to read on.

Along those lines, the manuscript needs to do a better job of helping the reader at key moments. When key concepts come up, we may need a bit of explanation (e.g., the interpretation of the cross-spectrum is pretty simple, but most readers will need a sentence to help them along). I would suggest having peers from slightly different fields read the manuscript and flag the junctures where they struggled and got bogged down. I am pretty close to the center of mass of the intended audience, and I struggled at times. In the end I found the struggle worth it, but would still have preferred a cleaner telling of the story.

Detailed comments:

1) I simulated the authors' model from Figure 3, and also a more old-fashioned control-theory style model. This second model had no explicit internal predictor but simply responded to the error and the derivative in the error. This is an old strategy which basically amounts to predicting the present error from the first two terms in the Taylor series. As has been done in many models from the oculomotor system, I incorporated non-linearities on both the error and derivative-of-error signals. This aids stability, and incidentally causes the impulse response to contain harmonics. I assumed a feedback delay of 150 ms – a more empirically defensible estimate of the delay during movement than 300 ms estimate used by the authors. This model did an adequate job of reproducing the first key result of the study. I don't wish to argue that the model I simulated is a better model overall. It surely has some deficiencies. Rather, this exercise makes the point that there are multiple related models that could work. The key point is that they are all feedback control models where the frequency content shifts leftwards with longer delays. Thus, the data argue (pretty unambiguously it seems) for some model from this class. This important broader point should not be lost in the details of particular models.

2) The term 'Optimal Control Model' is used often. I agree that the Kalman filter is an optimal estimator of the state. I'm not so sure about the whole model. I generally think of 'Optimal Feedback Control' (OFC) models as having a feedback law that is optimized based on a particular cost function. Typically that feedback law is time-varying and specific to each action (e.g., it is different when reaching right vs left). Perhaps the model presented is optimal in the case of a very simple cost function (keep the output near zero at all times). I'm not sure. I thus ask the authors to think carefully regarding whether the model is really an OFC model, or merely a good feedback controller that employs optimal state estimation.

3) I found Figure 1F confusing when first described. It isn't a feedback system, but is described as such. Only later do we learn that certain types of feedback control systems can be formally reduced to the diagram in 1F. This is one of those places where the cognitive load on the reader spikes.

4) Speaking of cognitive load, I initially found the third row of Figure 2 (panels C,D,E) rather confusing. It isn't immediately obvious exactly what is different from the above row. Even once one figures that out, the summary results in panel H seem not to obviously agree with the results in panels F and G. E.g., the peak at 2 Hz is much higher in panel F than G, yet this isn't reflected in panel H. I think I understand this in the end (after subtracting baseline and taking the square root, the difference is pretty small), but this threw me for a while.

There are other instances where I had to struggle a bit to understand figure panels. In the end I was typically able to (and satisfied when I did) but I felt I shouldn't have had to work so hard.

5) The Kalman-based explanation for the band-pass property is a reasonable one, but there are other reasonable explanations as well. This is appropriately handled in the Discussion. Yet this broader perspective comes rather late. This caught my eye because the authors connect their results (both behavioral and LFP-based) with recent findings that show ~2 Hz quasi-oscillatory dynamics in motor cortex. That is indeed a plausible connection, but not obviously consistent with the Kalman-filter-based explanation. For brisk reaches, plotting cursor position vs cursor velocity would produce an oscillation much higher-frequency than 2 Hz. Instead, it is the muscle activity that has ~2 Hz features during reaching. This is perhaps consistent with the Kalman idea, but at that point the quantity being filtered would be muscle activity not cursor position. I don't think these facts detract from the authors' findings, but they do suggest that interpretation could benefit if it were less tied to a very specific model.

6) The authors explain the band-passed property of their Kalman filter as follows: "However, for movements in the physical world, it is unlikely that high-frequency tracking discrepancies reflect genuine motor errors, since this would imply implausibly large accelerations of the body." The idea is that the feedback control system should tend to ignore high-frequency errors in the visual feedback, on the grounds that they are too high frequency to have come from the plant, and therefore don't need correcting.

This seems at odds with their previous argument that the plant "can generate force fluctuations up to 5 Hz with little attenuation (Figure 2J,K and Figure 2—figure supplement 3)." If so, then frequencies should be ignored only above 5 Hz; frequencies this high absolutely could be due to motor noise and should not be ignored.

This was another juncture where I found I had to think unnecessarily hard about the specifics of the authors model, when really I'd rather be thinking about broader interpretations.

7) On a related note, the Kalman-filter-based explanation for 'intrinsic filtering' assumes (if I understand correctly) that process noise impacts cursor velocity directly, yet impacts cursor position only through integration. This is critical as it is this fact that makes high-frequency fluctuations of cursor position something that should be filtered out. If process noise directly impacted cursor position then this would not be true and the model would not provide an explanation for the empirical band-pass property.

The assumption that noise impacts cursor velocity would make sense if the cursor were, say, the physical position of a body part. Noise at the level of force production would cause fluctuations in velocity, which would integrate to cause fluctuations in position. However, in the present task cursor 'position' is not the position of a limb, but directly reflects force. Any noise in force production should directly impact cursor position, and need not be integrated. There seems to me no justification for assuming that process noise impacts the rate-of-change-of-force. This seems like a rather unnatural and unusual assumption. Given this, I found the overall explanation not overly compelling.

Additional data files and statistical comments:

There are certainly a few places where formal statistical tests (most likely bootstraps) could be added. For example, some of the features in Figure 7AB are quite small but potentially very revealing. Backing up their presence with statistical tests is thus appropriate.

[Editors' note: further revisions were suggested, as described below.]

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This study is a compelling investigation of the phenomenon of submovements, bringing together multiple experimental approaches to produce a novel perspective. The study views submovements not as discrete entities, but the natural product of feedback control that cancels errors at some frequencies but not others. This account might seem to also predict that internal correlates of rhythmic submovements should also become slower with longer delays. Interestingly this doesn't happen. The authors relate this physiological finding to an experimental finding; Although the frequencies observed in behavior are delay-dependent, there appears to be a delay-independent windowing with a peak at 2-3 Hz. That is, the system seems to 'prefer' to operate around 2-3 Hz, and frequencies in that range are relatively accentuated. This 2-3 Hz frequency agrees with what is observed in the LFP. Enticingly, prior work has also found a prominent 2-3 Hz frequency in neural activity during rhythmic and non-rhythmic tasks. The authors present a unified model, involving internal filtering (favoring 2-3 Hz) within a feedback loop. This model successfully explains the major features of the data.

The first submission of this manuscript was a bit of a tough read (all reviewers were of this opinion). We find the revised version much improved. One reviewer does offer some minor revisions. His comments follow:

"I really only have comments regarding changes to improve readability… Even though a couple of my comments are lengthy, I have labelled all these comments as 'minor', as I feel confident they can be readily addressed. I trust the authors to digest these points and to figure out what changes should be made.

Minor comments:

The authors use the new Figure 5 to address a criticism raised in the last round. While their model does a nice job of accounting for the data, it makes the potentially implausible assumption that the internal delay (in the Smith predictor) is able to rapidly update itself to reflect the sum of internal and imposed delays. The concern is that, because delays are different on different trials, it seems implausible that internal delay would always match the imposed delay. To address this concern, the authors point out that the brain has more opportunity to adapt than we had initially supposed: subjects were able to 'get used' to the delay for 5 seconds before the section of the data being analyzed. Furthermore, the new Figure 5 demonstrates that some kind of adaptation does occur during this time: models fit to the data need different parameters for the first 5 seconds versus the last 5.

I still have my doubts that 5 seconds is enough time to recalibrate an internal estimate of the feedback delay. That said, other aspects of the model are very successful, and in general, I think the results go beyond any particular model. The paper would still be interesting and the take-home messages similar even if a somewhat different feedback model had to be proposed. For these reasons, I am largely satisfied, at a scientific level, with the way in which this concern has been addressed. That said, I found the newly added section to be confusing in multiple ways.

First, the way the section is introduced doesn't help the reader understand why the section (and the large accompanying figure) is there. The sentence beginning with 'However, since…' is helpful only if you already have thought about this problem. I would suggest that the section begin by confronting the problem head-on, and clearly stating that a challenge for the model is that it would have to adapt very rapidly. Therefore it is worth asking whether some form of rapid adaptation occurs. Fully understanding the motivating concern would help the reader understand why this section is here (and allow them to make up their own mind regarding how convinced they are).

Other aspects of this new section were also confusing to me. Subsection “Emergence of delay-specific predictive control during individual trials” states 'We asked which model could better explain the experimentally-observed force amplitude responses by inferring the associated intrinsic dynamics under both architectures.' This left me expecting more plots like those in Figure 4. But the analyses in Figure 5 don't (I think) really address this issue. Rather, they show that some kind of adaptation occurs. Given that it does, we have less reason to doubt a central modeling assumption (after all, any model would have to adapt in some way). This seems a reasonable argument, but that isn't how the section was motivated or set up.

In this context, I also found the plots in E and F to be a bit confusing. They are plots of the gains used to fit the data, not plots of gains produced by the model. The plots in F seem to be a better match to the data, which at first seems like the point of the plots. However, I think that is actually a red herring. The main point (I think) is just that some kind of adaptation has to be assumed, which addresses the concern that fast adaptation is implausible.

This section should be carefully rewritten to be more explicit regarding why the analysis was performed, how to interpret the plots, and what exactly is being concluded.

For Figure 1E, where did lines come from? Regression? This seems to be the case (it is implied by the legend of Table 1) but the actual figure legend doesn't explicitly state this and I don't think the Results do either.

Along similar lines, why not add the lines predicted by the model to Figure 1E? The info is currently presented in Table 1, but would likely be more than compelling if added to this key plot. It would be nice to see that the slopes and intercepts match fairly well (it needn't be perfect of course).

I liked the “Outline” section but the heading “Outline” is perhaps a bit heavy handed?

My impression was that the cursor is not constrained to live on the circle. E.g., there could be radial errors (unanalyzed here). If so that should be stated explicitly in the Materials and methods (my apologies if I missed this).

Subsection “Intrinsic dynamics in the visuomotor feedback loop” states 'Analyzed in this way, amplitude responses were largely independent of extrinsic delay.' When I first read this, I found it all rather confusing. Analyzing different ways gives different results? Which is correct? Is there some sort of conflict? It all makes sense in the end, but a bit of help at this critical juncture might save someone some temporary confusion.

Regarding Figure 4J. This plot has the potential to generate some confusion, as it is actually data, but presented in the context of a figure where nearly all the other panels (A-I) contain only model behavior. Also, there is a dashed line that seems like it might be a model prediction, but might in fact just be the result of a linear regression (this isn't state). This all needs to be clarified. Also, if this is an analysis of data testing a model prediction, then the model prediction should be shown. Otherwise we are comparing to a prediction that isn't illustrated.

Subsection “Intrinsic cortical dynamics are unaffected by feedback delays” paragraph four: 'the two neural population<s>'

eLife. 2019 Apr 8;8:e40145. doi: 10.7554/eLife.40145.028

Author response


We thank the reviewers and reviewing editors for their time in considering our manuscript. We are pleased that the reviewers felt our study ‘addresses fundamental questions in motor control’ (Reviewer 1) with ‘compelling results and a novel interpretational perspective’ (Reviewer 2). The reviewers also raise excellent points that have stimulated new analyses as well as clarifications to the text.

Reviewing Editor comment:

See the detailed list of major and minor concerns of the two reviewers below. They strongly advise revising the style, the structure and the clarity of all sections.

Reviewer #1 comment:

1) The Introduction is meandering and it doesn't present the logic of the present investigation in a clear enough way. This leaves the reader hanging when they get to the Results (see #3 below). I think the authors need to get to the point of the intrinsic/extrinsic interactions and optimal feedback control more quickly and make it clear what gap they are filling.

We have shortened our Introduction in an attempt to express more clearly the logic of our study, e.g.:

“It has been proposed that the intrinsic dynamics of recurrently-connected cortical networks act as an ‘engine of movement’ responsible for internal generation and timing of the descending motor command (Churchland et al., 2012). However, another possibility is that low-frequency dynamics observed in motor cortex arise from sensorimotor feedback loops through the external environment. On the one hand, cortical cycles appear conserved across a wide range of behaviors and even share a common structure with δ oscillations during sleep (Hall et al., 2014), consistent with a purely intrinsic origin. On the other hand, the influence of feedback delays on submovement timing suggests an extrinsic contribution to movement intermittency. Therefore we examined the effect of delay perturbations during isometric visuomotor tracking in humans and monkeys to dissociate both delay-independent (intrinsic) and delay-dependent (extrinsic) components of movement kinematics and cortical dynamics.”

Reviewer #1 comment:

3) The results are tough to take without more narrative at the beginning of each analysis section. I think this is particularly difficult with the first section of the results because everything is coming out of nowhere. Eventually the rationale is mopped up at the end of the section but by then its too late. Lead up front with some motivation of why you are doing each of these things.

Reviewer #2 comment:

Along those lines, the manuscript needs to do a better job of helping the reader at key moments. When key concepts come up, we may need a bit of explanation (e.g., the interpretation of the cross-spectrum is pretty simple, but most readers will need a sentence to help them along). I would suggest having peers from slightly different fields read the manuscript and flag the junctures where they struggled and got bogged down. I am pretty close to the center of mass of the intended audience, and I struggled at times. In the end I found the struggle worth it, but would still have preferred a cleaner telling of the story.

In revising our manuscript, we have endeavoured to improve readability of the results. For example, we have added an outline to the beginning of the Results on to indicate the overall structure:

“Our results are organized as follows. First, we describe behavioral results with human subjects, examining the effects of delay perturbations on movement intermittency and feedback responses during an isometric visuomotor tracking task. Second, we introduce a simple computational model to illustrate how principles of optimal feedback control, and in particular state estimation, can explain the key features of our data. Finally, we examine local field potentials recorded from the motor cortex of monkeys performing a similar task, to show that cyclical neural trajectories are consistent with the implementation of state estimation circuitry.”

In addition, we have added sentences referring to relevant steps in our approach to the beginning of each section to motivate the analyses contained within, for example:

“Our first experiment aimed to characterize the dependence of submovement frequencies on feedback delays…”

“According to this extrinsic interpretation, intermittency arises not from active internal generation of discrete submovement events, but as a byproduct of continuous, linear feedback control with inherent time delays. Submovement frequencies need not be present in the smooth target movement, nor do they arise from controller non-linearities. Instead these frequencies reflect components of broad-band motor noise that are exacerbated by constructive interference with delayed feedback corrections. To seek further evidence that intermittency arises from such constructive interference, we performed a second experiment in which artificial errors were generated by spatial perturbation of the cursor.”

“Although submovement frequencies depended on extrinsic feedback delays, examination of the velocity spectra in Figure 1D suggests that intermittency peaks were embedded within a broad, delay-independent low-pass envelope. This envelope could simply reflect the power spectrum of tracking errors (i.e. motor noise is dominated by low-frequency components). However, an additional possibility is that the gain of the feedback controller varies across frequencies (e.g. low-frequency noise components generate larger feedback corrections). To explore the latter directly, we examined subjects’ force responses to our artificial perturbations.”

“The amplitude and phase responses to perturbations during human visuomotor tracking provided evidence for intrinsic low-frequency dynamics in feedback corrections, which we have interpreted in the framework of optimal state estimation. The schematic on the right of Figure 3A suggests how a simple Kalman filter could be implemented by neural circuitry, with two neural populations (representing position and velocity) evolving according to Equ. 4 and exhibiting a resonant cross-spectral peak (Figure 3D). To seek further evidence for the neural implementation of such a filter we turned to intracortical recordings in non-human primates…”

Furthermore, we have expanded our discussion of the cross-spectrum:

“Figure 3B,C shows the amplitude response for position and velocity estimates produced by the Kalman filter. Since these are out of phase with each other, their cross-spectral density (which captures the amplitude and phase-difference between frequency components common to both signals) will generally be complex. Broadband input therefore results in an imaginary component to this cross-spectrum with a characteristic low-frequency resonance peak determined by the state estimator dynamics (Figure 3D).”

“Finally, we calculated imaginary coherence spectra between pairs of LFPs (see Materials and methods). The imaginary component of coherence indicates frequencies at which there is consistent out-of-phase coupling in the LFP cross-spectrum. This effectively separates locally-varying oscillatory components from in-phase background signals (e.g. due to volume conduction from distant sources), and revealed more clearly the 2-3 Hz LFP oscillation (Figure 7D,H).”

Evidence for Smith Predictor and time-course of adaptation:

Reviewer #2 and the Reviewing Editor both had concerns about the computational model, and whether there was evidence for delay-dependent adaptation during the course of the trial. We have addressed these concerns with an additional analysis and a new Figure 5. We have grouped the reviewers’ comments below, in order to best explain how our new analyses address all these concerns.

Reviewer #2 comment:

Yet at the same time, the 'full' model endorsed by the authors – and repeatedly offered as an explanation for all the observed phenomena – makes at least one critical assumption that strikes me as utterly implausible.

To see this, note that in the model in Figure 3, the authors include, in the internal loop, the FULL delay (natural plus imposed). Trials with different delays are interleaved. Thus, the model assumes that, on a single trial, the nervous system can somehow infer the correct delay. This strains credulity well past the breaking point. Indeed, the only reason to make this assumption is that otherwise, the model would not work. I simulated this model (with a few simplifications) and found that even a very modest mismatch in total and internal delay caused the model to become very unstable. In contrast, behavior does not become unstable when an artificial delay is added. Thus, for one to believe the explanation embodied in this model, one would have to imagine that the brain infers the correct delay almost instantaneously and very accurately. This is hard to swallow. The authors note the importance of this assumption in the Discussion, but do not seem to adequately appreciate how implausible it is. Are we really to believe that the cerebellum can, in under a second, correctly infer the exact delay on each trial? It is possible that I am missing some key fact here, but if not, this specific model really seems like a non-starter.

First, we apologise that an important piece of information needed to interpret our analyses was buried in the Materials and methods section of the previous submission. Since it was not our original intention to study adaptive processes, we focussed only a 10s window in the middle of each trial (from 5-15s after trial start). Therefore subjects have at least 5 s to adjust to the new delay before the analysis window starts. We now state this important information multiple times in the text of the Results section, as well as in the legends of the relevant figures. We did not feel that the inclusion of the internal efference copy loop when interpreting our data was particularly controversial as it is often included in OFC-type models. However, the reviewer raises an interesting point as to whether it is actually justified by our data, and whether there is evidence for adaptive changes through the trial, which we now address (see next point).

Reviewer #2 detailed comment:

1) I simulated the authors' model from Figure 3, and also a more old-fashioned control-theory style model. This second model had no explicit internal predictor but simply responded to the error and the derivative in the error. This is an old strategy which basically amounts to predicting the present error from the first two terms in the Taylor series. As has been done in many models from the oculomotor system, I incorporated non-linearities on both the error and derivative-of-error signals. This aids stability, and incidentally causes the impulse response to contain harmonics. I assumed a feedback delay of 150 ms – a more empirically defensible estimate of the delay during movement than 300 ms estimate used by the authors. This model did an adequate job of reproducing the first key result of the study. I don't wish to argue that the model I simulated is a better model overall. It surely has some deficiencies. Rather, this exercise makes the point that there are multiple related models that could work. The key point is that they are all feedback control models where the frequency content shifts leftwards with longer delays. Thus, the data argue (pretty unambiguously it seems) for some model from this class. This important broader point should not be lost in the details of particular models.

It is worth noting that the 300 ms delay time is confirmed in our perturbation experiments, and does not seem unfeasible based on human visual reaction times. However, we agree with the general point that it is not helpful to get bogged down in the details of particular models. Our approach was to choose the simplest model compatible with our findings, while acknowledging that many more complex models may equally fit the data. However, this raises an important point – is the Smith Predictor necessary to explain our data or would a simpler non-adaptive feedback controller suffice? We now analyse this explicitly in a new Figure 5 and describe the resultant analysis in the section “Emergence of predictive control during individual trials”. We show that adaptation clearly occurs early in the trial. If a simple feedback controller model is assumed, then this adaptation appears as a rather complex pattern of sharp peaks and troughs emerging in the controller dynamics. By contrast, if a Smith Predictor is assumed, then the associated intrinsic dynamics converges to broad, delay-independent filter. We conclude that:

“Therefore adaptation culminated in a control strategy that could parsimoniously be interpreted as an appropriately-calibrated Smith Predictor with delay-independent intrinsic dynamics.”

Reviewing Editor comment:

I (E.V.) also suggest additional and special attention to the "delay perturbation" concerns. In addition to the comments made by the reviewers, I also suggest extending the short discussion of the so-called "delay-independent perturbation responses". If possible and doable, I suggest dedicating a set of experiments (human) to test adaptation to delay in your task. The first paragraph in subsection “Modelling isometric visuomotor tracking” of the discussion is problematic. My intuition fails to understand why you did not see adaptation to predictable sinusoidal perturbation. (see Sakaguchi et al., 2015) for an example a modeling work. The sentence "it would again be interesting to examine whether state estimator dynamics might adapt on a slower time-scale after extensive training with delayed feedback" suggest that the authors understand the problematics. How long is the longer timescale. The present form of the paper suggests that it was not tested. I see this as a serious drawback of an otherwise elegant study.

This section of the discussion was misleading and has now been removed. It is not the case that we do not see adaptation, nor that perturbation responses are delay-independent. As outlined above, our main analyses cover a time window after most of the adaptation has taken place, and the delay-dependence can parsimoniously be explained by a simple Smith Predictor architecture with a delay-independent state estimator. However, as requested we have added new analyses to determine the time-course of adaptation. These are included in the new Figure 5 and show clear adaptation within a single trial including:

1) Force response profiles that progressively resemble those expected from a Smith Predictor with a delay-independent feedback gain and a correct internal delay model.

2) A progressive reduction in low-frequency phase delay consistent with predictive state estimation.

3) A progressive decrease in the lag between cursor and target in the presence of artificial feedback delay.

Since these time-courses appear to asymptote during the trial, we have removed speculations about longer time-course adaptation. We have added reference to the relevant Sakaguchi et al., 2015, study and thank the reviewing editor for bringing this to our attention. However, it is worth noting that this study explicitly neglects modelling of motor (process) noise. Since our study shows that submovements arise from constructive interference between motor noise and continuous feedback corrections, this may account for their modelling results suggesting that continuous control does not generate intermittency.

Justification for Kalman filter

Reviewer #2 comment:

Related (but much less troubling) points can be made regarding the model element that captures the intrinsic band-passed property. For the model to work, it is critical (I think) that process noise impact not force per se, but the derivative of force (i.e., cursor velocity). This runs contrary to the most natural modeling assumption, and the one typically made: that force is corrupted by motor noise. By assuming that force is corrupted by the INTEGRAL of motor noise, the authors are basically building in the band-passed feature (high-frequency errors should be filtered out). This seems a bit like cooking the books after knowing the result.

Reviewer #2 detailed comment:

6) The authors explain the band-passed property of their Kalman filter as follows: "However, for movements in the physical world, it is unlikely that high-frequency tracking discrepancies reflect genuine motor errors, since this would imply implausibly large accelerations of the body." The idea is that the feedback control system should tend to ignore high-frequency errors in the visual feedback, on the grounds that they are too high frequency to have come from the plant, and therefore don't need correcting.

This seems at odds with their previous argument that the plant "can generate force fluctuations up to 5 Hz with little attenuation (Figure 2J,K and Figure 2—figure supplement 3)." If so, then frequencies should be ignored only above 5 Hz; frequencies this high absolutely could be due to motor noise and should not be ignored.

This was another juncture where I found I had to think unnecessarily hard about the specifics of the authors model, when really I'd rather be thinking about broader interpretations.

7) On a related note, the Kalman-filter-based explanation for 'intrinsic filtering' assumes (if I understand correctly) that process noise impacts cursor velocity directly, yet impacts cursor position only through integration. This is critical as it is this fact that makes high-frequency fluctuations of cursor position something that should be filtered out. If process noise directly impacted cursor position then this would not be true and the model would not provide an explanation for the empirical band-pass property.

The assumption that noise impacts cursor velocity would make sense if the cursor were, say, the physical position of a body part. Noise at the level of force production would cause fluctuations in velocity, which would integrate to cause fluctuations in position. However, in the present task cursor 'position' is not the position of a limb, but directly reflects force. Any noise in force production should directly impact cursor position, and need not be integrated. There seems to me no justification for assuming that process noise impacts the rate-of-change-of-force. This seems like a rather unnatural and unusual assumption. Given this, I found the overall explanation not overly compelling.

We accept that a Newtonian dynamics model is a simplifying assumption, although it is perhaps not as unreasonable as the reviewer suggests. First, the Kalman filter is estimating the discrepancy between target and cursor, and therefore includes a model of the target dynamics. Of course, the target dynamics in a neuroscience experiment could be arbitrary, but it is not implausible that subjects might expect moving targets to tend to continue moving in the same direction. Second, it is well known that noise in isometric force production is not uncorrelated, but is instead dominated by low-frequency components. Third, we show in Figure 1—figure supplement 3 that motor noise is not proportional to force level but instead to the change in force – such a result is at least consistent with some kind of integration of a noisy motor command instructing a change in force level and there is increasing evidence such integration – see for example the arguments made in Shadmehr, 2017, that even during isometric contractions, motor cortex (but not spinal) activity tends to be highly phasic. Alternatively, many other aspects of the true, complex neuromuscular dynamics may require state estimation of both forces and their first derivatives. To avoid getting bogged down in details, we have summarised our arguments in the text:

“The visual system can perceive relatively high frequencies (up to flicker-fusion frequencies above 10 Hz). However, while feedforward movements can in some cases approach these frequencies, discrepancies while tracking slowly moving objects in the physical world are unlikely to change quickly. The limbs and real-world targets will tend (to a first approximation) to move with a constant velocity unless acted upon by a force. Moreover, even for isometric tasks the drift in force production is dominated by low-frequency components (Baweja et al., 2009, Slifkin and Newell, 2000), possibly consistent with neural integration in the descending motor pathway (Shadmehr, 2017). Given inherent uncertainties in sensation, an optimal state estimator should attribute high-frequency errors to sensory noise (which is unconstrained by Newtonian and/or neuromuscular dynamics).

Formally, the task of distinguishing the true state of the world from uncertain, delayed measurements can be achieved by a Kalman filter, which continuously integrates new evidence with updated estimates of the current state, evolving according to a model of the external dynamics (Figure 3A). For simplicity we used Newtonian dynamics, although similar results would likely be obtained for other second-order state transition models.”

Reviewer #2 comment:

In conveying and interpreting the above results, the authors employ control-theory style models. This is important: the models help to transcend hand-waviness and give concrete examples of how a system might work and what one would expect empirically. Certain results (e.g., a peak in frequency content, the shift in that peak with imposed delay, and the appearance of higher harmonics) are actually much easier to understand with a concrete model. Given this, I would not recommend removing the modeling…

The most important aspects of the interpretation don't depend critically on the exact model – simply on there being some internal process with appropriate band-pass properties. The authors themselves note this in the Discussion. Thus, some balance needs to be struck between using a concrete model to illustrate a broader point, and not forcing the reader to dig deep to understand a specific model that is rather post-hoc and is only one of many plausible models… More of the focus should be on the general properties of the data and what they imply at a broad level. Control-theory-style models can (and probably should) be used to illustrate fundamental properties, but less should be made of specific pet models. This is especially true when the conceptual point is a fairly general one, and when many related models might show the key properties. This would also allow the manuscript to be more readable. The manuscript could better indicate which details really matter and which don't. Then the reader would know when to pause and really understand a point, and when to read on.

We agree that the model should serve solely to illustrate the main conceptual points of our study, and is not intended to be a full simulation. As described above and documented in the new Figure 5, a linear feedback controller without delay-dependent adaptation does not appear to fit our data. We feel that the Smith Predictor model we use represents the simplest model that captures the key features of our data, but we do not deny that more complex models could also fit the data. We now explain this in the text:

“While not simulating the full complexity of upper-limb control, our model was intended to illustrate the interplay between intrinsic and extrinsic dynamics during tracking. More sophisticated models would likely exhibit qualitatively similar behavior so long as they also incorporated extrinsic, delay-dependent feedback and intrinsic, delay-independent dynamics.”

As well as in the Discussion:

“We used Newtonian dynamics to construct a simple two-dimensional state transition model based on both the cursor-target discrepancy and its first derivative. While this undoubtedly neglects the true complexity of muscle and limb biomechanics, simulations based on this plausible first approximation reproduced both the amplitude response and phase delay to sinusoidal cursor perturbations in humans, and the population dynamics of LFP cycles in the monkey.”

Remaining comments:

Reviewer #1 comment:

2) The sleep bits seem completely out of place until it appears near the end of the discussion. I would seriously consider dropping its mention from earlier in the manuscript because no one will have any idea what is going on anyway.

We hope that our revised Introduction explains more clearly the importance of the observation that cortical dynamics are consistent across multiple behaviours and sleep. This provides evidence for an ‘intrinsic’ origin for these dynamics, as opposed to the alternative hypothesis that these dynamics reflect feedback loops from the environment (which are absent in sleep). We therefore included ‘sleep’ in our manuscript as it seems relevant to the present study, and may also provide inspiration to potential readers.

Reviewer #1 comment:

4) The authors use the intervention of increasing visual delays and visual perturbations as a means for probing the state of the system. How does this limit the generalizability of their findings? There is, for example, the following paper that describes the tradeoff of using fast but crude somatosensory inputs versus slow but acute visual ones. Might be worth considering more deeply (477-481) the interplay between many modalities in terms of the OFC framework.

http://www.jneurosci.org/content/jneuro/36/33/8598.full.pdf

Although not a focus of our study, the optimal state estimation framework we used in our modelling does indeed generalise to the integration of different sensory modalities. We have added reference to the Crevecoeur study and the issues involved in optimal state estimation to the discussion:

“We suggest that the computations involved in optimal tracking behaviors are likely distributed across multiple cortical areas including (but not limited to) M1, with local circuitry reflecting multiple dynamical models of the various sensory and efference copy signals that must be integrated for accurate control. These could include the estimation of the position of moving stimuli based on noisy visual inputs (Kwon et al., 2015), as well the optimal integration of visual and somatosensory information which may have different temporal delays (Crevecoeur et al., 2016).”

Reviewer #1 minor comment:

1) The figures are very small, it was very hard to appreciate any details in these. They need to be substantially bigger in print.

Some of the figures were inadvertently resized when embedding into the text. We have substantially enlarged all figures in this resubmission.

Reviewer #2 comment:

2) The term 'Optimal Control Model' is used often. I agree that the Kalman filter is an optimal estimator of the state. I'm not so sure about the whole model. I generally think of 'Optimal Feedback Control' (OFC) models as having a feedback law that is optimized based on a particular cost function. Typically that feedback law is time-varying and specific to each action (e.g., it is different when reaching right vs left). Perhaps the model presented is optimal in the case of a very simple cost function (keep the output near zero at all times). I'm not sure. I thus ask the authors to think carefully regarding whether the model is really an OFC model, or merely a good feedback controller that employs optimal state estimation.

For finite-horizon tasks (e.g. discrete reaches), optimal feedback laws have time-varying gains. However, for infinite-horizon tasks (e.g. continuous tracking), feedback laws converge to a steady-state solution with a constant gain (i.e. an LQR regulator). In this sense, our model is an Optimal Control Model (Kalman Filter + LQR regulator), albeit only under linear-quadratic-gaussian assumptions.

Reviewer #2 comment:

3) I found Figure 1F confusing when first described. It isn't a feedback system, but is described as such. Only later do we learn that certain types of feedback control systems can be formally reduced to the diagram in 1F. This is one of those places where the cognitive load on the reader spikes.

We agree that this is slightly confusing, but feel that showing the feedback comb filter would be even more confusing since we later show that such feedback controller does not (easily) fit the force responses in our perturbation expt (Figure 5). Instead we have included a sentence of explanation:

“In signal processing terms, subtracting a delayed version from the original signal is known as comb filtering (Figure 1E). Although comb filters subtracting in either feedforward or feedback directions have qualitatively similar behavior, we illustrate only the feedforward architecture in Figure 1E as we will later show this to match better the experimental data.”

Reviewer #2 comment:

4) Speaking of cognitive load, I initially found the third row of Figure 2 (panels C,D,E) rather confusing. It isn't immediately obvious exactly what is different from the above row. Even once one figures that out, the summary results in panel H seem not to obviously agree with the results in panels F and G. e.g., the peak at 2 Hz is much higher in panel F than G, yet this isn't reflected in panel H. I think I understand this in the end (after subtracting baseline and taking the square root, the difference is pretty small), but this threw me for a while.

There are other instances where I had to struggle a bit to understand figure panels. In the end I was typically able to (and satisfied when I did) but I felt I shouldn't have had to work so hard.

We have modified the text to explain more clearly the differences between cursor and force responses, as well as the fact that these are not derived directly from the power spectra, but instead from the components of these responses that are phase-locked to the perturbations.

“Figure 2C,D and Figure 2—figure supplement 1 overlay cursor velocity spectra in the presence of each perturbation frequency (with feedback delays of 0 and 200 ms), again calculated over a 10 s window beginning 5 s after the trial start…”

“Figure 2E shows the amplitude response of cursor movements at each frequency for both delay conditions. Unlike a power spectrum, the cursor amplitude response measures only cursor movements that are phase-locked to the perturbation (normalized by the perturbation amplitude), and therefore estimates the overall transfer function of the closed-loop control system.”

“Figures 2F,G and Figure 2—figure supplement 2 show power spectra of the angular velocity derived from subject’s forces, under feedback delays of 0 and 200 ms. Note that this analysis differs from Figure 2C,D in that we now consider only the force generated by the subjects, rather than the resultant cursor movement (which combines these forces with the perturbation). Figure 2H shows the corresponding force amplitude response for each perturbation frequency. The force amplitude response measures only force responses that are phase-locked to the perturbation (normalized by the perturbation amplitude) and is related to the transfer function within the feedback loop.”

Reviewer #2 comment:

5) The Kalman-based explanation for the band-pass property is a reasonable one, but there are other reasonable explanations as well. This is appropriately handled in the Discussion. Yet this broader perspective comes rather late. This caught my eye because the authors connect their results (both behavioral and LFP-based) with recent findings that show ~2 Hz quasi-oscillatory dynamics in motor cortex. That is indeed a plausible connection, but not obviously consistent with the Kalman-filter-based explanation. For brisk reaches, plotting cursor position vs cursor velocity would produce an oscillation much higher-frequency than 2 Hz. Instead, it is the muscle activity that has ~2 Hz features during reaching. This is perhaps consistent with the Kalman idea, but at that point the quantity being filtered would be muscle activity not cursor position. I don't think these facts detract from the authors' findings, but they do suggest that interpretation could benefit if it were less tied to a very specific model.

We did not train our monkeys to make especially brisk (or slow) movements so we cannot comment on the effect that would have on the cortical dynamics we observed. However, our understanding of Churchland et al., 2012, is that the frequency of cortical cycles is not greatly altered in this case. This is at least what our simple model would predict. Fast/slow movements could be accommodated in our model by increasing/decreasing the controller gain. Nonetheless, in our interpretation, the rotational dynamics arises in the Kalman filter which we assume to be independent of the controller. Note that the cycles reflect the state estimates, not the actual discrepancies which may under some circumstances change more abruptly. Moreover, since the state estimator drives corrective movements, these frequencies might then show up in muscle activity. Since we were modelling a continuous tracking task, excitation to the state estimator was broadband motor noise. However, in the case of a discrete reach, the input to the state estimator would be a sudden jump in target position. This would act as an impulse into the state estimator, but the resultant evolution would nonetheless be governed by the same dynamics and exhibit the same rotational structure as in the case of tracking. We have added this to the discussion:

“Instead we interpret these intrinsic dynamics as implementing a state estimator during continuous feedback control, driven by noise in motor and sensory signals. We used Newtonian dynamics to construct a simple two-dimensional state transition model based on both the cursor-target discrepancy and its first derivative. While this undoubtedly neglects the true complexity of muscle and limb biomechanics, simulations based on this plausible first approximation reproduced both the amplitude response and phase delay to sinusoidal cursor perturbations in humans, and the population dynamics of LFP cycles in the monkey. We suggest that for discrete, fast movements to static targets, transient cursor-target discrepancies effectively provide impulse excitation to the state estimator, generating a rotational cycle in the neural space. Note that this account also offers a natural explanation of why preparatory and movement-related activity lies along distinct state-space dimensions, since the static discrepancy present during preparation is encoded differently to the changing discrepancy that exists during movement. At the same time, the lawful relationship between discrepancy and its derivative couples these dimensions within the state estimator and is evident as consistent rotational dynamics across different tasks and behavioral states.”

Of course, it could be argued that with extensive training on fast reaches, the state estimator might be expected to adapt to filter less of the high-frequency state changes. We discuss a related point:

“It would be interesting in future to vary these noise characteristics experimentally (e.g. by artificially degrading visual acuity or by extensively training subjects to produce faster or more accurate movements) and examine the effect on perturbation responses.”

Additional data files and statistical comments:

There are certainly a few places where formal statistical tests (most likely bootstraps) could be added. For example, some of the features in Figure 7AB are quite small but potentially very revealing. Backing up their presence with statistical tests is thus appropriate.

Statistical tests have now been added to the (renumbered) Figure 8 and Figure 8—figure supplement 1.

[Editors' note: further revisions were suggested, as described below.]

[…] The first submission of this manuscript was a bit of a tough read (all reviewers were of this opinion). We find the revised version much improved. One reviewer does offer some minor revisions. His comments follow:

"I really only have comments regarding changes to improve readability… Even though a couple of my comments are lengthy, I have labelled all these comments as 'minor', as I feel confident they can be readily addressed. I trust the authors to digest these points and to figure out what changes should be made.

Minor comments:

The authors use the new Figure 5 to address a criticism raised in the last round. While their model does a nice job of accounting for the data, it makes the potentially implausible assumption that the internal delay (in the Smith predictor) is able to rapidly update itself to reflect the sum of internal and imposed delays. The concern is that, because delays are different on different trials, it seems implausible that internal delay would always match the imposed delay. To address this concern, the authors point out that the brain has more opportunity to adapt than we had initially supposed: subjects were able to 'get used' to the delay for 5 seconds before the section of the data being analyzed. Furthermore, the new Figure 5 demonstrates that some kind of adaptation does occur during this time: models fit to the data need different parameters for the first 5 seconds versus the last 5.

I still have my doubts that 5 seconds is enough time to recalibrate an internal estimate of the feedback delay. That said, other aspects of the model are very successful, and in general, I think the results go beyond any particular model. The paper would still be interesting and the take-home messages similar even if a somewhat different feedback model had to be proposed. For these reasons, I am largely satisfied, at a scientific level, with the way in which this concern has been addressed. That said, I found the newly added section to be confusing in multiple ways.

First, the way the section is introduced doesn't help the reader understand why the section (and the large accompanying figure) is there. The sentence beginning with 'However, since…' is helpful only if you already have thought about this problem. I would suggest that the section begin by confronting the problem head-on, and clearly stating that a challenge for the model is that it would have to adapt very rapidly. Therefore it is worth asking whether some form of rapid adaptation occurs. Fully understanding the motivating concern would help the reader understand why this section is here (and allow them to make up their own mind regarding how convinced they are).

Other aspects of this new section were also confusing to me. Subsection “Emergence of delay-specific predictive control during individual trials” states 'We asked which model could better explain the experimentally-observed force amplitude responses by inferring the associated intrinsic dynamics under both architectures.' This left me expecting more plots like those in Figure 4. But the analyses in Figure 5 don't (I think) really address this issue. Rather, they show that some kind of adaptation occurs. Given that it does, we have less reason to doubt a central modeling assumption (after all, any model would have to adapt in some way). This seems a reasonable argument, but that isn't how the section was motivated or set up.

In this context, I also found the plots in E and F to be a bit confusing. They are plots of the gains used to fit the data, not plots of gains produced by the model. The plots in F seem to be a better match to the data, which at first seems like the point of the plots. However, I think that is actually a red herring. The main point (I think) is just that some kind of adaptation has to be assumed, which addresses the concern that fast adaptation is implausible.

This section should be carefully rewritten to be more explicit regarding why the analysis was performed, how to interpret the plots, and what exactly is being concluded.

We have reworded this section to clarify that our analysis in fact demonstrates three points: (1) there is fast adaptation during the course of a trial, (2) this adaptation is specific to different delay conditions, and (3) adaptation results in behaviour consistent with an appropriately calibrated internal Smith Predictor loop. This third point is important and justifies our use of a Smith Predictor to model our main results. We do not agree that ‘different feedback models’ (i.e. without a Smith Predictor loop) would equally well explain these results, since any such model would need to exhibit the strange delay-dependent gain peaks seen in Figure 5E. Moreover, these would need to emerge over exactly the same fast time-course that troubles the reviewer! Finally, it would be difficult to explain why such delay-dependent gain peaks should emerge in the first place. By contrast, the Smith Predictor model does not require delay-dependent gain peaks (Figure 5F), is consistent with our data, and is amply justified from a theoretical perspective as an effective strategy for dealing with feedback delays. However, we agree that it is up to readers to decide how convinced they are.

For Figure 1E, where did lines come from? Regression? This seems to be the case (it is implied by the legend of Table 1) but the actual figure legend doesn't explicitly state this and I don't think the Results do either.

These are indeed regression lines and this is now stated in the figure legend.

Along similar lines, why not add the lines predicted by the model to Figure 1E? The info is currently presented in Table 1, but would likely be more than compelling if added to this key plot. It would be nice to see that the slopes and intercepts match fairly well (it needn't be perfect of course).

This is perhaps a philosophical point, but we prefer the approach of deriving confidence intervals for key metrics (slopes/intercepts) directly from the data, and then showing that these are consistent with a particular model. The approach suggested by the reviewer may be equally valid but would not provide as informative a description of the data.

I liked the “Outline” section but the heading “Outline” is perhaps a bit heavy handed?

We have renamed this section “Overview”.

My impression was that the cursor is not constrained to live on the circle. E.g., there could be radial errors (unanalyzed here). If so that should be stated explicitly in the Materials and methods (my apologies if I missed this).

This is correct and now stated explicitly in the Materials and methods:

“Although the 2D cursor position was not constrained to follow the target trajectory, we did not analyze off-trajectory deviations. For simplicity, kinematic analyses were based on the time-varying angular velocity of the cursor subtended at the center of the screen”

Subsection “Intrinsic dynamics in the visuomotor feedback loop” states 'Analyzed in this way, amplitude responses were largely independent of extrinsic delay.' When I first read this, I found it all rather confusing. Analyzing different ways gives different results? Which is correct? Is there some sort of conflict? It all makes sense in the end, but a bit of help at this critical juncture might save someone some temporary confusion.

We have reworded this section:

“Unlike the cursor amplitude responses described previously, force amplitude responses were largely independent of extrinsic delay.”

Regarding Figure 4J. This plot has the potential to generate some confusion, as it is actually data, but presented in the context of a figure where nearly all the other panels (A-I) contain only model behavior. Also, there is a dashed line that seems like it might be a model prediction, but might in fact just be the result of a linear regression (this isn't state). This all needs to be clarified. Also, if this is an analysis of data testing a model prediction, then the model prediction should be shown. Otherwise we are comparing to a prediction that isn't illustrated.

We have replaced the dashed line with the model prediction (which is the same as the phase delay shown in Figure 4I). Note that in altering this figure, we realised a slight inaccuracy in our previous figure. Previously we had averaged the frequencies of peaks seen in individual subject velocity spectra. We now use the frequencies of the peaks seen in the average velocity spectra (i.e. Figure 1D), as was stated in the legend. This gives a slightly better fit to the model, although the overall pattern is unchanged.

Subsection “Intrinsic cortical dynamics are unaffected by feedback delays” paragraph four: 'the two neural population<s>'

This has been corrected.

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    Data Citations

    1. Susilaradeya D, Xu W, Hall TM, Galan F. 2018. Data from: Extrinsic and Intrinsic Dynamics in Movement Intermittency. Dryad Digital Repository. [DOI] [PMC free article] [PubMed]

    Supplementary Materials

    Figure 1—source data 1. Subject information, time periods of submovement peaks and associated regression analysis.

    Data for individual subjects in Experiment 1 (summarized in Figure 1E and Table 1).

    DOI: 10.7554/eLife.40145.006
    Figure 2—source data 1. Subject information, perturbation responses and feedforward amplitude responses.

    Data for individual subjects in Experiment 2 (summarized in Figure 2C–I) and Experiment 3 (summarized in Figure 2K).

    DOI: 10.7554/eLife.40145.012
    Source code 1. MATLAB implementation of feedback controller model.

    Code used to generate Figure 4.

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    DOI: 10.7554/eLife.40145.022
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    DOI: 10.7554/eLife.40145.023

    Data Availability Statement

    Datasets from all human and monkey experiments, analysis code and model associated with this work are available on Dryad doi:10.5061/dryad.53sq7kn.

    Datasets from the human and monkey experiments, together with sample analysis code and modelling associated with this work are available on Dryad doi:10.5061/dryad.53sq7kn.

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    Susilaradeya D, Xu W, Hall TM, Galan F. 2018. Data from: Extrinsic and Intrinsic Dynamics in Movement Intermittency. Dryad Digital Repository.


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