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. 2020 Jul 30;15(7):e0236671. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0236671

Dietary diversity and physical activity as risk factors of abdominal obesity among adults in Dilla town, Ethiopia

Tinsae Shemelise Tesfaye 1,#, Tadesse Mekonen Zeleke 2,*,#, Wagaye Alemu 1, Dirshaye Argaw 1, Tadesse Kebebe Bedane 2
Editor: Sabine Rohrmann3
PMCID: PMC7392300  PMID: 32730320

Abstract

Background

Globally, the prevalence of obesity is on the rise and has nearly tripled since 1975. In Ethiopia, despite not having well-documented evidence, abdominal obesity has been increasing dramatically, particularly in urban settings. Therefore, this study is intended to determine the prevalence and risk factors of abdominal obesity among adults in Dilla town, Ethiopia.

Methods

A community-based cross-sectional study was conducted between January and February 2018 in Dilla Town. A multi-stage sampling technique was employed to recruit 663 adults. The study was conducted in accordance with the World Health Organization (WHO) STEP wise approach. Waist circumference was measured using a flexible metric tape mid-way between the lowest rib and iliac crest with the participant standing at the end of gentle expiration. Abdominal obesity was determined using the International Diabetes Federation cutoff. A logistic regression model was fitted to identify risk factors of abdominal obesity. Adjusted odds ratio (AOR) with corresponding 95% confidence interval (CI) was calculated to show the strength of association.

Results

A total of 634 adults participated in the study with a response rate of 95.6%. This study revealed that 155 (24.4%) [95% CI: (21.50, 27.80)] adults were abdominally obese. Higher odds of being abdominally obese were noted among adults with a high [AOR = 4.61, 95% CI: (2.51–8.45)] and middle [AOR = 3.22, 95% CI: (1.76–5.88)] wealth rank, consuming less diversified diet [AOR = 2.05, 95% CI: (1.31–3.19)], physical inactivity [AOR = 2.68, 95% CI: (1.70–4.22)] and being female [AOR = 1.92, 95% CI: (1.13–3.28)].

Conclusions

The prevalence of abdominal obesity among adults in Dilla town is considerably high, and became an emerging nutrition related problem. Being in the middle and high wealth rank, physical inactivity, consuming less diversified diet, and being female were the risk factors of abdominal obesity.

Introduction

Obesity is a preventable chronic disease affecting people across all ages, sexes, and ethnicities. Globally, the prevalence of obesity is on the rise and has nearly tripled between 1975 and 2016. In 2016, overweight affects more than 1.9 billion adults; of these, over 650 million were obese [1]. The epidemiological significance of obesity has also been growing in Ethiopia; between 1990 and 2009, obesity grew substantially from 0.7 to 2% among men and 6 to 10.8% among women [2,3].

Different risk factors contribute to the development of obesity; genetic, biological, individual, social, and environmental factors, which affect weight gain through the mediators of energy intake and expenditure. Obesity is associated with an increased risk of nearly every chronic condition, from diabetes, to dyslipidemia and poor mental health. Its impact on the risk of stroke and cardiovascular disease, certain cancers, and osteoarthritis are significant [4]. Furthermore, various studies have shown that the distribution of fat is more critical than the total amount of fat alone. Increased abdominal fat accumulation was found to be an independent risk factor for type 2 diabetes mellitus and cardiovascular risk conditions, such as coronary artery disease, stroke, and hypertension. It is also known that abdominal obesity is a more important risk factor for coronary heart disease than overall obesity. Visceral fat accumulation is associated with increased secretion of free fatty acids, hyperinsulinemia, insulin resistance, hypertension, and dyslipidemia [57].

As a result of rapid epidemiological and economic transition attributed to increased urbanization and globalization, many sub-Saharan African countries are experiencing lifestyle and behavioral changes such as unhealthy diet, physical inactivity, and increased tobacco use. These behavioral risk factors are responsible for substantial increases in the prevalence of intermediate cardiovascular disease risk factors including hypertension and obesity [8,9].

Despite not having well-documented evidence, abdominal obesity has been increasing dramatically, particularly among urban settings in Ethiopia. In the present study, we intended to assess the prevalence and risk factors of abdominal obesity among adults in Dilla town, Ethiopia.

Materials and methods

Study design, setting and period

This study was conducted among adults in Dilla town. The town is located in the southern part of Ethiopia. Dilla town is the capital of the Gedeo Administrative zone in South nations, nationalities, and peoples’ region at a distance of 359 kilometers from Addis Ababa, the capital city of Ethiopia. The town is divided into nine kebeles (the smallest administrative unit in Ethiopia). These include Boiti, Harsu, Weldena, Buno, Hasse Della, Haroressa, Bareda, Haroke, and Odayaa kebeles. A community-based cross-sectional study was conducted among 663 adults aged 18 to 64 years between January and February 2018.

Source and study population

Adults whose age was between 18 and 64 years in the selected kebeles were eligible for the study. We excluded adults with visible or self-reported pregnancy and body deformity around the abdomen.

Sample size and sampling technique

The sample size was determined using a single population proportion formula. The formula estimates the minimum sample size required to determine the proportion in a source population. Specifications made during the computation were: 50% expected prevalence of abdominal obesity, 95% confidence level, 5% margin of error, 15% compensation for possible non-response, and design effect of 1.5. By using these specifications, the final sample size was 663 adults. Study participants were selected using a multistage sampling technique [10]. Initially, 4 kebeles (Harsu, Odaya, Buno, and Woldena) were randomly selected from the existing 9 kebeles in Dilla town, and the total sample size was distributed to the selected kebeles, proportional to their population size. Households were chosen by systematic random sampling approach. Bottle spinning method, in the middle of each selected kebeles was used to select the first household. A random number was identified within the sampling interval and households in the direction of the bottle head were counted until the selected number was reached then. The next household was selected by adding the sampling interval to the randomly selected number. When multiple eligible adults were available within the household, an adult aged 18–64 years were chosen randomly from the same household.

Variables

Abdominal obesity was taken as the dependent variable.

Socio-demographic and lifestyle variables

The questionnaire used in this study was adapted from the WHO-STEP wise questionnaire for chronic non-communicable disease [11], consists of socio-demographic information, dietary intakes, physical activity, and health risky behavior questions.

The food frequency questionnaire modified from WHO-STEP wise approach was used to assess the dietary habits of adults. Adults were asked to report their frequency of consumption for one usual week over the past 12 months. For dietary diversity, a simple count of food groups was used to calculate dietary diversity score (DDS). DDS was ranked into two groups, those who consumed six and above (high DDS) and less than six (low DDS). Those who drank alcohol in the past 12 months at least 3 days per week and above were taken as current alcohol users. Current smokers were defined as those who smoke at least 1 cigarette per day (at least 7 cigarettes per week) [11]. Similarly, current chat chewers were defined as those who had been chew chat for more than 6 months and chew chat 30 days preceding the study.

The survey included questions about the frequency of practicing physical activity during a typical week. The Global Physical Activity Questionnaire developed by WHO was used to assess physical activity patterns among adults. The activity level of adults was evaluated according to the standard WHO total physical activity calculation guide and the level of total physical activity was categorized as physically active and physically inactive. Adults were considered to be physically active if their total physical activity MET (Metabolic Equivalent) minute/week had greater than and equal to 600 MET-minutes, whereas physically in-active if the total physical activity MET minute/week was less than 600 MET-minutes [11].

Wealth index was generated using principal component analysis. The scores of 18 selected groups of assets and utilities were translated into latent factors. The first factor that explained most of the variation was used to group study subjects into three ranked wealth groups (low, middle, and high).

Data collection and measurement

All the adults were interviewed for their socio-demographic information, dietary intakes, physical activity, and risky health behavior. Anthropometric measurement was taken at the end of the interview. Data were collected by six diploma nurses and two supervisors.

The data quality was ensured during tool development, data collection, coding, entry, and analysis. The questionnaire was initially prepared in English and translated into Amharic and Gedeoffa and re-translated into English. The questionnaire was pretested among randomly selected adults that were not included in the main survey. Its validity was examined among 60 adults, which showed that it was acceptable and understandable. Additionally, training was given to the data collectors and supervisors on the questionnaire, methods, and procedures of taking measurements on waist circumference. Supervisors made spot checking and review of all completed questionnaires to ensure completeness and consistency of the information collected. Supervisors also re-took measurements on 10% of the study participants from each data collector to check the reliability of the measurements.

WC was measured in a standing position midway between the lower rib margin and the anterior superior iliac crest in the horizontal plane using a flexible plastic metric tape to the nearest 0.1 cm. The measurement was taken when the participant was at the end of the gentle expiration, after taking a deep inhalation with the tape snug but ensuring that it was not compressing the skin. WC was measured in duplicate and the average value was used for analyses. Abdominal obesity was defined as waist circumstance for European region recommendation as per International Diabetes Federation, greater than and equal to 94 cm for males and greater than and equals to 80 cm for females [12].

Data analysis

The data were analyzed using SPSS for Windows, version 20.0. Descriptive statistics were conducted and results were presented using tables and figures. Logistic regression was performed to assess the association between the factors of interest and abdominal obesity. Binary logistic regression was conducted to select candidate variables (P-value < 0.25) for multiple logistic regression. In the multiple logistic regression, variables having P-value < 0.05 were declared as statistically significant variables. AOR and 95% CI were calculated to measure the strength of associations.

Ethical statement

Ethical clearance was obtained from the Institutional Review Board of Dilla University. The study was also done following the declaration of Helsinki. The necessary permission was also obtained from the Gedeo Zone health and administrative offices, and from the selected kebele offices. Informed verbal consent was obtained before the start of data collection. The participants were also assured that they had the full right to participate or withdraw at any time during the study.

Results

Socio-demographic characteristics

Among the study participants, nearly half (45.0%) of them were in the age group of 25–34. More than half (56.0%) of the participants were illiterate and had not gone further than primary education. Nearly 3 out of 4 (74.9%) adults were either government or private employees and 50.9% lived in marriage. Regarding their wealth status, about 65.8% of them were in the middle and above wealth rank (Table 1).

Table 1. Socio-demographic characteristics of study participants, Dilla town, Ethiopia, 2018.

Characteristics Number (n = 634) Percent
Sex Female 362 57.1
Male 272 42.9
Age 18–24 130 20.5
25–34 285 45.0
35–44 112 17.7
45–54 80 12.6
55–64 27 4.3
Ethnicity Gedio 281 44.3
Gurage 159 25.1
Amhara 91 14.4
Oromo 71 11.2
Others 32 5.0
Educational status No formal school 119 18.8
Primary 236 37.2
Secondary 196 30.9
College and above 83 13.1
Marital status Married 323 50.9
Single 247 39.0
Divorced 34 5.4
Widowed 30 4.7
Religion Protestant 260 41.0
Orthodox 249 39.3
Muslim 96 15.1
Others 29 4.6
Occupation Gov't employee 244 38.5
Non-Gov’t employee 231 36.4
Unemployed 98 15.5
Student 61 9.6
Wealth Index Low 217 34.2
Middle 218 34.4
High 199 31.4

Dietary characteristics

Table 2 describes the participants’ dietary characteristics. More than half (56.5%) of participants consumed less diversified food, while more men (60.7) consumed less diversified food than women (53.3). About half of the women (55.2) and men (49.6) didn’t skip breakfast, while more than half (58.7) of the participants had no snack.

Table 2. Dietary characteristics of study participants, Dilla town, Ethiopia, 2018.

Dietary related characteristics Female number (%) Male number (%)
DDS High 169 (46.7) 107 (39.3)
Low 193 (53.3) 165 (60.7)
Breakfast Skipping Didn’t skip 200 (55.2) 135 (49.6)
Once 35 (9.7) 38 (14.0)
Twice 67 (18.5) 41 (15.1)
Three and more times 60 (16.6) 58 (21.3)
Snack Yes 153 (42.3) 109 (40.1)
No 209 (57.7) 163 (59.9)

Behavioral characteristics

Of the total adults, one hundred fifty-five (24.4%) [95% CI: (21.50, 27.80)] had abdominal obesity. The prevalence of abdominal obesity was recorded in 99 (27.3%) females, which was higher compared to males, 56 (20.6%). Concerning behavioral risk factors by gender, nearly three quarters (73.2%) of females never chewed chat. About 14.2% and 21.1% of adults accompanied chat chewing with cigarette smoking and alcohol consumption, respectively. Only 2.8% of the women were smokers, while more than a third of the men either smoked during the survey or had smoked before. In both sexes, more than two-thirds of the participants were physically active (Table 3).

Table 3. Distribution of abdominal obesity and behavioral risk factors by gender among participants, Dilla town, Ethiopia, 2018.

Behavioral risk-related characteristics Female number (%) Male number (%)
Abdominal obesity Yes 99 (27.3) 56 (20.6)
No 263 (72.7) 216 (79.4)
Chat chewing Current and Ever 97 (26.8) 197 (72.4)
Never 265 (73.2) 75 (27.6)
Alcohol drinking Yes 113 (31.2) 121 (44.5)
No 249 (68.8) 151 (55.5)
Smoking Current and Ever 10 (2.8) 100 (36.8)
Never 352 (97.2) 172 (63.2)
Physical activity Active 251 (69.3) 202 (74.3)
Inactive 111 (30.7) 70 (25.7)

Risk factors of abdominal obesity among adults

The final multivariable logistic regression model analysis showed that being in middle and high wealth rank, consuming lower dietary diversity, physical inactivity and being female were the risk factors for abdominal obesity. Adults who consumed a less diversified diet were twice as likely to get abdominal obesity as those who were eating a more diversified diet [AOR = 2.05, 95% CI: (1.31–3.19)]. The study also showed that improvement in the distribution of wealth index increased the chance of abdominal obesity. Adults with high and middle categories of wealth rank were 4.6 [AOR = 4.61, 95% CI: (2.51–8.45)] and 3.2 [AOR = 3.22, 95% CI: (1.76–5.88)] times more likely to get abdominal obesity than those with low wealth rank, respectively. Besides, physically inactive adults were 2.7 [AOR = 2.68, 95% CI: (1.70–4.22)] times more likely to have abdominal obesity than physically active ones. Furthermore, women were almost twice [AOR = 1.92, 95% CI: (1.13–3.28)] abdominally obese as compared to men’s (Table 4).

Table 4. Risk factors of abdominal obesity among study participants, Dilla town, Ethiopia, 2018.

Abdominal obesity
Variables Yes No AOR (95%) P-Value
Sex
Female 99 263 1.92 (1.13–3.28) 0.02**
Male 56 216 1
Dietary diversity
Low 106 252 2.05 (1.31–3.19) 0.00**
High 49 227 1
Wealth index
Low 21 196 1
Middle 59 159 3.22 (1.76–5.88) 0.00**
High 75 124 4.61 (2.51–8.45) 0.00**
Physical activity
Inactive 71 110 2.68 (1.70–4.22) 0.00**
Active 84 369 1

**Significantly associated variables at p-value < 0.05, 1—Reference group.

Abbreviations: AOR—Adjusted odds ratio.

Discussion

Abdominal obesity is one of the emerging nutritional problems in developing countries, including Ethiopia. It is related to the risk of cardio-metabolic comorbidities and taking measures to control abdominal obesity will help to reduce threats of the problem.

The current study revealed that one-fourth of adults 24.4% [95% CI: (21.50, 27.80)] had abdominal obesity. It has been demonstrated in a previous study conducted in Addis Ababa, Ethiopia, that the prevalence of abdominal obesity was 19.6% [13], which is lower as compared to the current study. Similar lower findings were reported in Benin (15.5%) and Uganda (11.8%) [14,15]. However, the prevalence of abdominal obesity was much higher in studies conducted in various countries [1620] as compared to this study. Similar to the previous studies [1317,19,20], this study also found a higher prevalence of abdominal obesity in females (27.3%) than in males (20.6%).

Although genetics play an important role in the obesity epidemic, other factors play an important role too, including nutritional transition as a result of urbanization and westernization, which promotes the neglect of traditional healthy diets, less physical activity and the consumption of westernized, energy-dense foods and sugar-sweetened beverages [16].

In the present study, middle and higher wealth rank, eating a less diversified diet, physical inactivity and being female were independent risk factors for abdominal obesity. Similarly, women had higher measures of abdominal obesity compared to men. Our findings confirm what has been reported in other studies [17,1921]. Likely reasons for this observation include that women are physiologically more predisposed to overweight and obesity due to the changes occurring during the reproductive years, and women have been reported to engage in less physically strenuous/demanding activities in the moderate to vigorous range compared to men in the same setting [21].

Most importantly, as the economic status improved, the prevalence of abdominal obesity also increased, and it was found to be statistically significant (P<0.00). The prevalence of abdominal obesity was significantly higher in the second and third quartiles of household wealth rank as compared to the first quartile. This finding was consistent with the studies done in India and Cameroon [2224]. Economic inequalities in health have been attributed to several different mechanisms, including change in lifestyle (unhealthy behaviors, consumption of energy-dense foods, and sedentary way of life) and inadequate access to health care.

Regarding the relationship between physical activity and abdominal obesity, the result showed an indirect association. Physically inactive adults were more likely to have abdominal obesity than physically active ones. This finding is supported by plenty of literature. For instance, studies done in Ghana, adults with lower levels of physical activity demonstrated a higher likelihood of abdominal obesity [25] and Nigeria [26]. Moreover, another study done in Poland revealed that the risk of abdominal obesity was significantly lower among adolescents who declared higher physical activity [27]. On the contrary, a study conducted among Spanish adults reported that more time spent in vigorous physical activity, but not in moderate-vigorous physical activity, was associated with a lower risk of abdominal obesity [28]. Physical activity is a key determinant of energy expenditure. Therefore, based on our findings, it is highly advisable to be physically active, which includes light to high intensity, to prevent abdominal obesity.

Consumption of a diversified diet is another factor that has been explored in this study. Interestingly, adults who consumed less diversified diets were more likely to be abdominally obese than those who were eating a more diversified diet. A finding from the NHANES study in the United States supports this finding, dietary diversity score has an inverse association with indicators of body adiposity in both sexes and indicated that healthy food varieties can protect against excess adiposity [29]. Furthermore, a cross-sectional study among Iranian women aged 18 to 28 years old found that a higher dietary diversity quartile was associated with lower odds of both general and abdominal obesity [30] and another study among Iranian adults with pre-diabetes revealed that DDS was inversely associated with metabolic syndrome [31]. Moreover, a study among urban South Indians showed that increased intake of fruits and vegetables could play a protective role against obesity-associated metabolic risk factors [32]. However, community-based cross-sectional studies conducted among rural Asian Indians [18] and Sri Lankan [33] showed a positive association between abdominal obesity and DDS. In both studies, abdominally obese participants had a higher DDS score compared to non-abdominally obese groups. These different results could be due to different methods and populations used in assessing abdominal obesity, dietary intake, and determination of DDS [34].

Even though significant association was noted between abdominal obesity and risk factor like age [35]. Our study revealed no significant association between abdominal obesity and age, marital status, smoking status, alcohol consumption, or chat chewing.

Strength and limitation of the study

This study has several strengths including the use of calibrated instrument, standardization during training, and close supervision and spot checking during data collection. Our study also has some limitations that need to be considered. First, as the scope of this study is limited to behavioral and physical measurements, and does not include biochemical measurements. Second, there could be differences in abdominal obesity by season in which the current study was not able to assess. Third, the cross-sectional design of our study only allowed the assessment of the associations between abdominal obesity and risk factors rather than causal links.

Conclusions

In conclusion, the findings revealed a high prevalence of abdominal obesity in the study area. Being in the middle and high wealth rank, physical inactivity, consuming less diversified diet, and being female were the risk factors of abdominal obesity. The findings highlight that there is an urgent need for evidence-based prevention and management of abdominal obesity and its associated factors among adults in Dilla town. Consequently, all concerned stakeholders need to strengthen existing strategies related to the delivery of nutrition services for non-communicable diseases with especial attention to women.

Supporting information

S1 Appendix. Wealth index assets and utilities, Dilla town, Ethiopia, 2018.

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Acknowledgments

We would like to express our deepest gratitude to Dilla University, participants, and field staff.

Data Availability

All the relevant data are within the manuscript and its supporting information files.

Funding Statement

TST and WA received funding from Dilla University, which is provided only for staff. There is no grant number or URL website for this funding. TST, WA and DA received a salary from the funding institution, yet it is not for the purpose of conducting this study. The funder had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Dietary diversity and physical activity as predictors of abdominal obesity among adults in Dilla town, Ethiopia

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Reviewer #1: Manuscript PONE-D-20-08295: Dietary diversity and physical activity as predictors of abdominal obesity among adults in Dilla town, Ethiopia

It is interesting that the authors assessed obesity in such an area where obesity is often not considered a problem. However, obesity is a global issue today. Appreciating the good efforts made, I have some concerns about the study that are outlined below.

- Throughout the document, it would be good to replace predictors with risk factors, associated factors, influencing factor, etc… Predictors sounds that the authors are developing a prediction model, not performing a regression model.

Line 15- Background/abstract: change “…mortality” to morbidity, obesity doesn’t cause mortality directly

- What was the obesity prevalence by sex, which I think is important to reflect? Obesity is not the same by sex, and this is all known. It would thus be good to present all results stratified by sex.

Lines 30-31: The results of the regression are strange. You reported that the wealth index was positively associated with an increase in obesity, with the OR of 4.75 (>1), which is okay. This is consistent with other studies in developing countries although the association may be the opposite in some other countries, especially in Europe. In the same model, I expected that the protective effect of food diversity and physical activity would be <1 but it is now >1. I got it where it went wrong. For example, you interpreted "physically active is protective with an OR of 2.53" This is not correct. What you have tested in your model is "being inactive", instead of “being active”; that is why you got OR of 2.53 which is >1. The interpretation is wrong as well and also that you would have to reverse the code of "physically active and inactive" and "high food variety and low food variety" in your model. Then you should find <1 OR, where (1-OR) would be the percentage that could be averted due to activity and high food variety.

- Line 80: “…whose ages was”

- Your sample should have been estimated on the basis of the assumption that the prevalence of obesity is different in men and women, rather than with a single proportion assumption–in other words, with two prevalence assumptions. This now seems irreversible. But well, it still seems the size you have already is sufficient to estimate the sample size for men and women separately. This is because you have used a prevalence of 0.5, which is much higher than the actual prevalence leading a larger sample size. If you did it correctly, i.e. taking two prevalence points for men and women, you would get a similar sample size (i.e. with a prevalence of, say 0.25, not just 0.5. I don’t see any stratified results by sex, especially for prevalence. Please do so.

- Lines 151-152: What is the point of performing a logistic regression for each risk factor one by one? It makes no sense, except if you are in a critical situation where the sample size is small given that you have many variables to enter into your model. In fact, it is not recommended that you run this regression for each risk factor one by one. In some cases, a variable may not be significantly associated with an outcome if you fit it in the model alone, but it could be an effect modifier (and its effect could be significant and clinically important) when you fit the variable in your model with other covariates. If you have excluded some variables in that step, please include them in your model and see the results.

- Line 180: “chewed”

- Line 181: accompanied”

- Line 182: Only 2.8% of the women were smokers, while more than a third of the men either smoked during the survey or had smokers before.

- Line 183-84: more than two-third of the participants were physically active

- Have you checked if your covariates were correlated? They seem to be quite a few of them.

Reviewer #2: Thank you for the manuscript. The authors conducted a cross-sectional study in southern Ethiopia, investigating prevalence and determinants of abdominal obesity. They observed a roughly 25% prevalence of obesity; wealth, dietary diversity and physical activity were its determinants. I have some comments and suggest major revision before acceptance.

Abstract:

I would suggest to add “waist circumference” in the methods. The authors mention abdominal obesity but no parameter.

I would expect to read AOR < 1 if the authors write about protectivity (higher dietary diversity and being physically active), however the authors state that “having higher dietary diversity (AOR = 1.89…) and performing physical activity (AOR=2.53…) were found to be protective against abdominal obesity.= I would suggest to rewrite the sentence or invert the AOR.

Introduction

Reference 1 does not seem to be appropriate here (the reference mainly reflects China, but the authors first sentence talks globally). A WHO reference might be more adequate here.

Line 46: Cancer is also one of the major possible consequences of obesity, please do add that to the list of metabolic complications associated with obesity (although cancer is not a metabolic complication but a complex disease, and obesity one of the major risk factors globally speaking).

Line 50: more critical for what? Please detail.

Materials and Methods

Line 89: Would the authors have a reference available for their choice of sampling technique? It seems to be the most appropriate in this setting but a reference would strengthen the authors choice and handling. And how was the one adult from a household chosen, if several adults belonged to a household and were generally eligible? I fear that specific members were chosen (either overweight, underweight or – to be on the safe side – normal weight) – and if this occurred several times, I would question the validity of the current study (and also the 25% prevalence of obesity in the population).

Line 122: What were the 18 selected assets and utilities to calculate the wealth index? This might be a possible supplementary table.

Line 130: I appreciate the tremendous efforts undertaken by the authors/personal to strengthen data and study quality. This was very well done.

Results:

In general, I would suggest to write numbers with two digits, the authors are mixing the number of digits (i.e. OR and AOR with two, 95%CI with three, p-values even more).

Line 168: Wealth Index: As depicted in Table 1, distribution across the three wealth indices was roughly equal. However, the authors write that two thirds were in the middle or above wealth rank – the other view would also be correct, i.e. two thirds were in the middle or below wealth rank. Both are subjective and I would refrain from applying subjective descriptions in the results section.

Table 3: Why not add prevalence and % of obesity into this table?

Line 191: As depicted in Table 4, sex and martial, smoking and chat chewing status never were associated with abdominal obesity, please correct.

Discussion:

The discussion would benefit from a native English reader correcting the grammar.

Thank you for comparing your baseline characteristics to other studies conducted in Ethiopia or further comparable countries.

Line 263: Please add your strengths here, such as your study and data quality protocol. And a limitation might be the cross-sectional design of the study, i.e. causality cannot be investigated. Which adds to further research that is needed.

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


11 Jun 2020

Reviewer #1

Throughout the document, it would be good to replace predictors with risk factors, associated factors, influencing factor, etc… predictors sounds that the authors are developing a prediction model, not performing a regression model.

Well accepted and addressed in the whole parts of the document including the title.

Line 15- Background/abstract: change “…mortality” to morbidity, obesity doesn’t cause mortality directly

Well said, obesity is linked to mortality rather than directly causing death. Yet the whole paragraph is modified with the latest WHO reference.

What was the obesity prevalence by sex, which I think is important to reflect? Obesity is not the same by sex, and this is all known. It would thus be good to present all results stratified by sex.

Agreed and prevalence of abdominal obesity is stratified by sex (Table 3). Variables under dietary-related characteristics are stratified as well (Table 2).

Lines 30-31: The results of the regression are strange. You reported that the wealth index was positively associated with an increase in obesity, with the OR of 4.75 (>1), which is okay. This is consistent with other studies in developing countries although the association may be the opposite in some other countries, especially in Europe. In the same model, I expected that the protective effect of food diversity and physical activity would be <1 but it is now >1. I got it where it went wrong. For example, you interpreted "physically active is protective with an OR of 2.53" This is not correct. What you have tested in your model is "being inactive", instead of “being active”; that is why you got OR of 2.53 which is >1. The interpretation is wrong as well and also that you would have to reverse the code of "physically active and inactive" and "high food variety and low food variety" in your model. Then you should find <1 OR, where (1-OR) would be the percentage that could be averted due to activity and high food variety.

We agree that interpretation of our result appears contrary to the finding and we have now rewritten with the following statement in the whole parts of the document (abstract, results and discussion), “The higher odds of being abdominally obese were noted among adults with a higher [AOR = 4.75, 95% CI: (2.62-8.60)] and middle [AOR = 3.12, 95% CI: (1.74-5.59)] categories of wealth rank, having lower dietary diversity [AOR = 1.89, 95% CI: (1.22-2.90)] and physical inactivity [AOR = 2.53, 95% CI: (1.64-3.90)].”

Line 80: “…whose ages was”

Has been changed accordingly.

Your sample should have been estimated on the basis of the assumption that the prevalence of obesity is different in men and women, rather than with a single proportion assumption–in other words, with two prevalence assumptions. This now seems irreversible. But well, it still seems the size you have already is sufficient to estimate the sample size for men and women separately. This is because you have used a prevalence of 0.5, which is much higher than the actual prevalence leading a larger sample size. If you did it correctly, i.e. taking two prevalence points for men and women, you would get a similar sample size (i.e. with a prevalence of, say 0.25, not just 0.5. I don’t see any stratified results by sex, especially for prevalence. Please do so.

Thank you for the information regarding sample size determination and the issue of stratifying the prevalence by sex is already addressed together with the comment given under result.

Lines 151-152: What is the point of performing a logistic regression for each risk factor one by one? It makes no sense, except if you are in a critical situation where the sample size is small given that you have many variables to enter into your model. In fact, it is not recommended that you run this regression for each risk factor one by one. In some cases, a variable may not be significantly associated with an outcome if you fit it in the model alone, but it could be an effect modifier (and its effect could be significant and clinically important) when you fit the variable in your model with other covariates. If you have excluded some variables in that step, please include them in your model and see the results.

Thank you very much for pointing it out and we really appreciate it. As per your valuable suggestion, we have tried to include those variables which were excluded initially based on their p-value (i.e <0.25 during bivariate). Consequently, sex (being women) became one of the variables in final model. And all the necessary modification was undertaken throughout the document.

Line 180: “chewed”

Line 181: accompanied”

Line 182: Only 2.8% of the women were smokers, while more than a third of the men either smoked during the survey or had smokers before.

Line 183-84: more than two-third of the participants were physically active

Thank you for your suggestion and corrections are made.

Have you checked if your covariates were correlated? They seem to be quite a few of them.

Yes, we have checked it and they didn’t. Even we have tried to check for multicollinearity for each independent variable and their values range between 1 and 1.5.

Reviewer #2

Abstract:

I would suggest to add “waist circumference” in the methods. The authors mention abdominal obesity but no parameter.

We appreciate your suggestion. We have added the following sentence to the method part of the abstract. “waist circumference was measured using a flexible metric tape mid-way between the lowest rib and iliac crest with the participant standing at the end of gentle expiration.”

I would expect to read AOR < 1 if the authors write about protectivity (higher dietary diversity and being physically active), however the authors state that “having higher dietary diversity (AOR = 1.89…) and performing physical activity (AOR=2.53…) were found to be protective against abdominal obesity.= I would suggest to rewrite the sentence or invert the AOR.

Well taken and it has been rewritten in the whole parts of the document (abstract, results and discussion) as “The higher odds of being abdominally obese were noted among adults with a high [AOR = 4.75, 95% CI: (2.62-8.60)] and middle [AOR = 3.12, 95% CI: (1.74-5.59)] categories of wealth rank, having lower dietary diversity [AOR = 1.89, 95% CI: (1.22-2.90)] and physical inactivity [AOR = 2.53, 95% CI: (1.64-3.90)].”

Introduction

Reference 1 does not seem to be appropriate here (the reference mainly reflects China, but the authors first sentence talks globally). A WHO reference might be more adequate here.

Accepted and corrected accordingly. The paragraph is rewritten and an up-to-date WHO reference is used.

Line 46: Cancer is also one of the major possible consequences of obesity, please do add that to the list of metabolic complications associated with obesity (although cancer is not a metabolic complication but a complex disease, and obesity one of the major risk factors globally speaking). Line 50: more critical for what? Please detail. Further explanation is added to detail about distribution of fat.

We have edited and rewritten the whole paragraph as “different risk factors contribute to the development of obesity; genetic, biological, individual, social, and environmental factors, which affect weight gain through the mediators of energy intake and expenditure. Obesity is associated with an increased risk of nearly every chronic condition, from diabetes, to dyslipidemia, to poor mental health. Its impacts on the risk of stroke and cardiovascular disease, certain cancers, and osteoarthritis are significant. Furthermore, various studies have shown that the distribution of fat is more critical than the total amount of fat alone. Increased abdominal fat accumulation found to be an independent risk factor for type 2 diabetes mellitus and cardiovascular risk conditions, such as coronary artery disease, stroke, and hypertension. It is also known that abdominal obesity is a more important risk factor for coronary heart disease than overall obesity. Visceral fat accumulation is associated with increased secretion of free fatty acids, hyperinsulinemia, insulin resistance, hypertension, and dyslipidemia.”

Materials and Methods

Line 89: Would the authors have a reference available for their choice of sampling technique? It seems to be the most appropriate in this setting but a reference would strengthen the authors choice and handling.

We also agree that multi stage sampling technique appears as the most appropriate technique. Yet, we have added a new reference.

And how was the one adult from a household chosen, if several adults belonged to a household and were generally eligible? I fear that specific members were chosen (either overweight, underweight or – to be on the safe side – normal weight) – and if this occurred several times, I would question the validity of the current study (and also the 25% prevalence of obesity in the population).

In the case of several eligible adults within a household, one adult was selected using a simple random method irrespective of his nutritional status.

Line 122: What were the 18 selected assets and utilities to calculate the wealth index? This might be a possible supplementary table.

We have now uploaded as supplementary information.

Line 130: I appreciate the tremendous efforts undertaken by the authors/personal to strengthen data and study quality. This was very well done.

Thank you and we appreciate your comments.

Results:

In general, I would suggest to write numbers with two digits, the authors are mixing the number of digits (i.e. OR and AOR with two, 95%CI with three, p-values even more).

Accepted and all the number of digits has changed to two digits (i.e. COR, AOR, 95% CI and P-values).

Line 168: Wealth Index: As depicted in Table 1, distribution across the three wealth indices was roughly equal. However, the authors write that two thirds were in the middle or above wealth rank – the other view would also be correct, i.e. two thirds were in the middle or below wealth rank. Both are subjective and I would refrain from applying subjective descriptions in the results section.

It is an important point and the statement has modified as “two-thirds were in the middle and above wealth rank” since middle and high wealth rank became two-third when they came together (added).

Table 3: Why not add prevalence and % of obesity into this table?

Well accepted and the prevalence of obesity is stratified by sex and included in table 3.

Line 191: As depicted in Table 4, sex and martial, smoking and chat chewing status never were associated with abdominal obesity, please correct.

We strongly agree that these variables never were associated with abdominal obesity in the final model and corrected accordingly.

Discussion:

The discussion would benefit from a native English reader correcting the grammar.

We appreciate that the reviewer asked for more accurate grammar and efforts were made to polish the discussion.

Thank you for comparing your baseline characteristics to other studies conducted in Ethiopia or further comparable countries.

Line 263: Please add your strengths here, such as your study and data quality protocol. And a limitation might be the cross-sectional design of the study, i.e. causality cannot be investigated. Which adds to further research that is needed.

Great point. We have modified the strength and limitation paragraph.

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