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. 2020 Aug 21;15(8):e0237737. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0237737

Reconciling larval and adult sampling methods to model growth across life-stages

George C Brooks 1,*, Thomas A Gorman 1,¤, Yan Jiao 1, Carola A Haas 1
Editor: William J Etges2
PMCID: PMC7442236  PMID: 32822355

Abstract

Individual growth rates are intrinsically related to survival and lifetime reproductive success and hence, are key determinants of population growth. Efforts to quantify age-size relationships are hampered by difficulties in aging individuals in wild populations. In addition, species with complex life-histories often show distinct shifts in growth that cannot be readily accommodated by traditional modelling techniques. Amphibians are often characterized by rapid larval growth, cessation of growth prior to metamorphosis, and resumption of growth in the adult stage. Compounding issues of non-linear growth, amphibian monitoring programs typically sample larval and adult populations using dissimilar methods. Here we present the first multistage growth model that combines disparate data collected across life-history stages. We model the growth of the endangered Reticulated Flatwoods Salamander, Ambystoma bishopi, in a Bayesian framework, that accounts for unknown ages, individual heterogeneity, and reconciles dip-net and drift fence sampling designs. Flatwoods salamanders achieve 60% of growth in the first 3 months of life but can survive for up to 13 years as a terrestrial adult. We find evidence for marked variability in growth rate, the timing and age at metamorphosis, and maximum size, within populations. Average size of metamorphs in a given year appeared strongly dependent on hydroperiod, and differed by >10mm across years with successful recruitment. In contrast, variation in the sizes of emerging metamorphs appeared relatively constant across years. An understanding of growth will contribute to the development of population viability analyses for flatwoods salamanders, will guide management actions, and will ultimately aid the recovery of the species. Our model formulation has broad applicability to amphibians, and likely any stage-structured organism in which homogenous data cannot be collected across life-stages. The tendency to ignore stage-structure or omit non-conforming data in growth analyses can no longer be afforded given the high stakes of management decisions, particularly for endangered or at-risk populations.

Introduction

Individual growth rates are intrinsically related to survival and lifetime reproductive success and are key determinants of population growth [13]. Understanding an organism’s pattern of growth through time is of paramount importance to evolutionary and ecological studies and is necessary to construct realistic population dynamic models [46]. Without basic demographic and life-history data, projection models and viability analyses used in conservation management are marred with uncertainty [7, 8]. Furthermore, imprecise growth estimates are likely to bias rates of population growth and extinction probabilities [5, 9].

If animals can be accurately aged, there are many choices for those wishing to model growth, however difficulty in aging individuals from wild populations is a salient problem in ecological studies [1014]. Techniques that use physical characteristics (skeletochronology, otoliths, etc.) are often lethal, and size-frequency data are highly unreliable, particularly in species with overlapping generations [15]. As a result, several models have been modified to estimate growth rates for individuals of unknown age from mark-recapture data [1617]. In the context of endangered species management, mark-recapture studies may offer the only practical method to accurately model growth.

Of the models that have been adapted to mark-recapture data, the von Bertalanffy growth equation (VBGE) has yielded the most applications and model developments aimed at achieving increased biological realism. The VBGE benefits from relatively few model parameters to estimate and can be derived from metabolic theory [18, 19]. The VBGE has been modified to include seasonal or inter-annual fluctuations in growth rates [20, 21], individual heterogeneity within populations [2224], and shifts in growth as a result of stage-structured life histories [25].

To date, modelling shifts in growth requires data collected across life-stages to be homogenous. Whilst this assumption may hold for data collected to detect seasonal trends in growth, this is altogether less common in studies of organisms that exhibit distinct life history stages. In many taxa, life stages are distinct enough to warrant different sampling techniques, and data are often collected piecemeal across an organism’s ontogeny [13, 15]. Pond breeding amphibians are a case in point. Sampling methodologies for aquatic larvae are necessarily different from those employed to monitor adults [2628]. Moreover, many larval amphibians are small enough to preclude unique marking methodologies, or marks may be lost as a result of metamorphosis [29]. Hence, data collected for larvae and adults are sometimes not only qualitatively, but quantitatively different. Although the two types of data are disparate, they are not independent, and thus growth models can be strengthened by use of a single framework.

Here we model the growth of the federally endangered Reticulated Flatwoods Salamander (hereafter flatwoods salamanders), Ambystoma bishopi, using a hierarchical Bayesian approach. Flatwoods salamanders inhabit longleaf pine flatwoods in the southeastern Coastal Plain in the United States. Adults are fossorial and occupy mesic upland habitats, and undertake annual migrations to ephemeral wetlands with well-developed herbaceous groundcover to breed [3033]. Flatwoods salamanders lay their eggs in dry wetland basins before they fill, allowing embryos to develop so eggs can hatch when wetlands are inundated [32, 34, 35]. Unpredictable precipitation regimes and pond-filling dates favor such a delayed development strategy [36, 37].

Here we employ a modified von Bertalanffy equation with additional latent parameters for age and size at metamorphosis to 1) estimate growth rates in flatwoods salamanders, 2) model shifts in growth across the metamorphic transition, and 3) reconcile disparate data types collected from different sampling methodologies into a unified modelling framework. The final model incorporates individual heterogeneity in adult growth and variability in the timing and size at metamorphosis. Typical of many salamanders, the majority of flatwoods salamander growth occurs in the larval stage, but the majority of an individual’s lifetime is spent as a terrestrial adult. We find evidence for marked variability in growth rate, the timing and age at metamorphosis, and maximum size, within populations. An understanding of growth will contribute to the development of population viability analyses for flatwoods salamanders, will guide management actions, and will ultimately aid the recovery of the species.

Materials and methods

Measurements were obtained from a long-term mark recapture study of two breeding populations of flatwoods salamanders on Eglin Air Force Base, Florida. Wetlands were completely encircled with drift fences constructed from 60 cm tall metal flashing buried in the sediment approximately 15–20 cm. 85 cm x 20 cm funnel traps were placed flush with the fence and ground at approximately 10 m intervals on both sides of the fence. Drift fences were run discontinuously from 2010 to 2019. Fence operations began each fall to coincide with rains that trigger breeding migrations in late October or early November. Once we initiated drift fence operations, we checked traps multiple times per night through March-May, depending on how long wetlands continued to hold water. Upon capture, we recorded the date and time of capture, and measured snout vent length (SVL) to the nearest millimeter. All animals were marked with passive integrated transponder (PIT) tags. Following processing, animals were released on the opposite side of the fence to which they were caught.

In addition to measurements of terrestrial adults, measurements of larval salamanders were obtained through long-term dipnet sampling at all known breeding wetlands across Eglin AFB (n = 13), collected from 2003 to 2019. All measurements of adult and larval animals were taken using calipers. Sites were sampled using Model SH-2 and SH-2D (Mid-Lakes Corporation, Knoxville, TN) dipnets and efforts were concentrated in areas with inundated herbaceous vegetation [38]. All research was approved by the Virginia Tech Institutional Animal Care and Use Committee, protocol 19–113.

We employed a Bayesian hierarchical model to investigate individual growth in flatwoods salamanders. The Bayesian framework accommodates multiple sources of uncertainty and can include individual heterogeneity in growth rates [21, 39, 40]. When growth parameters vary within a population, hierarchical models allow for the estimation of individual-specific growth trajectories whilst still drawing on information from the population as a whole for statistical power [13]. In addition, the hierarchical approach lends itself to inconsistent capture histories prevalent in mark-recapture studies, and can incorporate as much or as little prior knowledge of the organism’s biology as deemed appropriate.

Model for larval stage growth

For larval measurements obtained via dipnet surveys, we employ the traditional formulation of the von Bertalanffy equation, using date of pond-filling as an estimate of hatch date (age = 0) for each individual. The von Bertalanffy equation is most commonly applied in studies of ectothermic vertebrates, but is considered a universal model of growth, and strongly resembles curves derived from basic metabolic principles [19]. For a larval individual of age t, the predicted size Lt from the von Bertalanffy equation is expressed as:

Lt=L(1-e-kL(t-t0))
L~U(30,100)
t0~U(-2,2)
kL~G(0.1,0.1)

where kL represents the growth-rate parameter of larval stage individuals, L the asymptotic size in mm (across all parameterizations), and t0 the theoretical age in years when length = 0. L was assigned a uniform prior with vague bounds based on the maximum and minimum sizes recorded for the species, kL was assigned a vague Gamma prior, and t0 a uniform prior with vague bounds.

Metamorphic transition

To integrate the larval and adult sub-models, measurements from 766 metamorphs were incorporated into the analysis to estimate size and the corresponding age at metamorphosis. Using parameters estimated from the larval model, predicted size at metamorphosis is thus defined:

Lt=L(1-e-kL(tm-t0))
tm~U(0.2,0.7)

where tm is age at metamorphosis. tm is assigned a uniform prior with bounds based on published data on larval flatwoods salamander developmental rates [33].

Model for adult stage growth

For terrestrial adults repeatedly sampled at drift fences, we use a modified version of the von Bertalanffy equation that can accommodate mark-recapture information from individuals of unknown age. For the initial capture occasion, length is modelled similarly to larvae, but with the initial size set to the predicted length at metamorphosis,

Lt=L-(L-Ltm)(e-kA(t-(tm+t0)))
kA~G(0.1,0.1)
t~logN(log(α),σt2)
α~U(0.5,20)
σt2~G(0.1,0.1)

As age of adult individuals at first capture are unknown, they must be estimated and are assumed to be drawn from a truncated lognormal distribution. L was assigned a uniform prior with vague bounds based on the maximum and minimum sizes recorded for the species, and kA was assigned a vague Gamma prior. For all subsequent occasions, length-at-age relationships are modelled using the difference in time between capture occasions, δt, such that:

Lt=L-(L-Ltm)(e-kA((t+δt)-(tm+t0)))

By estimating the unknown age of adults and including parameters for size/age at metamorphosis, the larval, metamorph, and adult data can be reconciled into a single modelling framework and sampled jointly from the posterior. Following Hatch and Jiao (2016), observed lengths (Lobs) are assumed to be drawn from a normal distribution with mean Lt and variance σL2, to account for measurement error and/or individual heterogeneity in growth rates. σL2 is assigned a vague gamma prior, and is used across all life-stages in the model:

Lobs|Lt,σL2~N(Lt,σL2)
σL2~G(0.1,0.1)

All models were fitted in R and WinBUGS using Markov chain Monte Carlo (MCMC) optimization [4143]. Three chains of MCMC samples were generated from the posterior distributions of the model parameters, each of length 500,000 with the first 100,000 values being discarded as burn-in. To minimize autocorrelation, only every 100th sample was drawn for posterior summaries. Adequate convergence was assessed using Gelman-Ruben diagnostics and inspection of trace plots [44]. Bayesian p-values were calculated to assess goodness-of-fit [44]. All reported point estimates are posterior means, with associate 95% credible intervals in parentheses.

Results

Through dipnet sampling, 411 larval measurements were obtained from 2010 to 2018 between the months of December and April (Fig 1). Larval sizes ranged from 3.9 mm to 42.7 mm. Through drift fence sampling, 766 metamorphs and 927 adult salamanders were captured and marked. Metamorph size ranged from 27.5 mm to 51.9 mm, and showed considerable within- and between-year variability (Fig 2). Of the adults, 373 were recaptured on at least one occasion, and SVL ranged from 37.5–78.2mm, averaging 58.4mm (Fig 3).

Fig 1. Larval size distribution.

Fig 1

Size distribution of reticulated flatwoods salamander larvae captured by dipnetting and spotlighting at approximately 8–12 wetlands, including the two drift-fenced wetlands, on Eglin Air Force Base, Florida. Measurements are pooled across the years 2010–2018.

Fig 2. Metamorph size distribution.

Fig 2

Size distribution of reticulated flatwoods salamander metamorphs captured emigrating from two drift-fenced wetlands on Eglin Air Force Base, Florida, for a subset of years with differing hydroperiods. The year and corresponding hydroperiod for the wetlands that produced these cohorts are displayed above each panel.

Fig 3. Adult size distribution.

Fig 3

Size distribution of reticulated flatwoods salamanders captured as terrestrial forms at two drift-fenced wetlands on Eglin Air Force Base, Florida, across years. Histogram of snout-vent length (SVL) for post-metamorphic individuals by breeding season. Data are partitioned into adults (light blue bars), and yearlings (dark blue bars).

All model parameters adequately converged; all potential scale reduction factors (PSRF) for individual parameters were < 1.1. The multivariate PSRF for the full model was 1.08. Posterior p-values for larval size and adult growth increments both approximated 0.5 (0.51 and 0.506 respectively), indicating a good model fit. All parameters achieved an effective sample size >500 in the MCMC chains. Parameter estimates were insensitive to prior specification.

Larvae grew rapidly (kL = 1.77; CI: 1.65–1.91), reaching sizes necessary for metamorphosis (~35mm SVL) within 18 weeks (CI: 15–20; Figs 1 and 4). Timing and size at metamorphosis were positively correlated (Fig 2) and exhibit marked variability across cohorts. Transition between the two life stages occurred when individuals averaged 39.3 mm (CI: 37.8–40.1; Figs 2 and 4). Following metamorphosis, adults grew at an initial growth rate (kA) of 0.91 (CI: 0.73–1.13), corresponding to approximately 6 mm of growth in the first year. Adults grew to an average of 59.0 mm SVL (CI: 57.9–60.0), however there was significant variation among individuals in asymptotic size (σL2=5.0; Fig 4).

Fig 4. Growth curve.

Fig 4

Predicted growth of reticulated flatwoods salamanders across both larval and adult stages. The two vertical lines represent the 95% credible intervals for minimum and maximum age at metamorphosis respectively, and the dashed lines represent 95% posterior predictive intervals. Length is snout-vent length (SVL) in mm.

Individual heterogeneity and unknown ages of adult individuals contributed the greatest sources of uncertainty. Magnitudes of error in observed lengths sometimes exceeded 5% of the actual measurement, making it difficult to partition out model uncertainty from true variation among individuals. Maximum longevity for the species was estimated to be 13 (Fig 5), however growth plateaued at approximately 7 years of age, and thus uncertainty in age estimates for older/fully grown individuals was high. Credible intervals for the theoretical age at size = 0 (t0) overlapped with zero, and thus do not influence interpretation of model parameters.

Fig 5. Predicted age distribution.

Fig 5

Predicted age distribution of adult flatwoods salamander at the start of the study. Average age of the population was between 4 and 5 years old; maximum longevity is 12–13 years. Dashed lines reflect 95% credible intervals.

Discussion

Here we present the first multistage growth model that combines disparate data collected across life-history stages. Measurements from larval surveys and mark-recapture data from drift-fence studies were reconciled into a single modeling framework. Estimating growth from only older individuals or failing to accurately quantify uncertainty can severely bias estimates [10, 14, 45]; the Bayesian approach presented here, permits the inclusion of all available data across life-stages whilst accounting for multiple sources of uncertainty in parameters of interest.

Like other ambystomatids, the majority of growth in flatwoods salamanders occurs in the larval stage; individuals reach ~60% of their asymptotic size prior to metamorphosis. Larval growth is an order of magnitude faster than that of adults. Variability in larval growth likely results in only some individuals within a cohort attaining sizes necessary for metamorphosis prior to pond-drying [46, 47]. Half of all larval growth trajectories are not steep enough to reach sizes (>35mm) necessary to successfully transition across life-stages (Fig 1). As we did not have repeated measures from dipnet sampling however, we were unable to include individual heterogeneity directly into the larval model parameterization.

Variation in larval growth within a cohort may pale in comparison to variation in size at metamorphosis across years (Fig 2). The distribution of sizes at metamorphosis appears to correspond to the hydroperiod duration in a given year. If wetlands continue to hold water, it appears as in other species (e.g. [48]), larvae will postpone metamorphosis in favor of continued growth. This plasticity in timing holds important consequences for population viability, as increased size at metamorphosis is thought to confer fitness benefits for the remainder of an individual’s lifetime [46, 4851] (but see [52]). Knowledge of this innate plasticity will prove invaluable to captive rearing efforts, and presents a facet of the life-history that can be targeted by management, through artificial manipulation of pond hydroperiods [53, 54].

Following metamorphosis, growth of terrestrial adults slowed considerably and plateaued after approximately 7 years at 60mm, but was highly variable among individuals. As we were unable to track individuals across the metamorphic transition, it remains to be seen as to whether variability in adult growth stems from variability in the larval stage, but concomitant individual rates across stages represents the most parsimonious explanation. Flatwoods salamanders are comparatively small for the family Ambystomatidae [55], and this may simply reflect a shorter larval development time, resulting in smaller individuals at metamorphosis. Metamorphs of congeners regularly exceed 50mm in length [55], in contrast to the focal species that rarely grew to 45mm prior to metamorphosis.

Our results also suggest flatwoods salamanders are not as long lived as other Ambystomatids. No individual was determined to be more than 12 years old. For any species that grows asymptotically, estimating ages for individuals that are at or close to maximum size is challenging, and thus wide confidence intervals on predicted ages of larger individuals prevents any strong conclusions. Survival rates in flatwoods salamanders however, do appear lower than congeners (unpublished data, G. Brooks). It is unclear whether lower longevity reflects a naturally faster life history strategy in flatwoods salamanders compared to closely related species, or a sign of inflated mortality that contributes to the imperiled status of the species. Diagnosing the primary agents of mortality in terrestrial individuals is of paramount importance, as it may reveal the cause of declines, and in turn hold the key for species recovery.

Discerning growth rates and size-age relationships can facilitate conservation efforts for threatened and endangered species [17, 56]. From such metrics, one can derive stable age distribution, age at maturity, and longevity, all of which strongly influence estimates of population growth rates from viability analyses [57]. Stage-structured organisms pose a real challenge to this end, and as a result, previous studies are largely limited to species without distinct life-stages [22, 5861], or for which homogenous data across stages can be collected [25, 62]. For all other circumstances, the tendency is to ignore stage-structure or to omit non-conforming data. We argue however, that for rare taxa, researchers cannot afford these concessions, as even data collected piecemeal contains real ontological insight and utility. Reliable population projections require accurate measures of growth rates across all life stages. Our model formulation has broad applicability to amphibian studies and studies of other stage-structured organisms in which homogenous data cannot be collected across life-stages. Given the ubiquity of complex life-histories and the logistical constraints of monitoring organisms throughout ontogeny, our approach will prove useful for a variety of ecological studies, extending far beyond amphibians. For flatwoods salamanders specifically, an understanding of growth will contribute to the development of population viability analyses, will improve management decisions and actions, and will aid the recovery of the species.

Supporting information

S1 Appendix. Raw data and BUGS code.

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Acknowledgments

We would like to thank the team of people who have made this research possible. Special mention should be given to Kelly Jones, Brandon Rincon, Steve Goodman, Vivian Porter, and the myriad seasonal technicians involved in data collection. We thank Emmanuel Frimpong for his guidance in developing the statistical analyses. We thank the Natural Resources Branch of Eglin Air Force Base (Jackson Guard), the U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service, the Department of Defense Legacy Resource Management Program, the Florida Fish and Wildlife Conservation Commission, the Aquatic Habitat Restoration and Enhancement Program, and the Department of Fish and Wildlife Conservation at Virginia Tech for funding and logistical support on this project.

Data Availability

All BUGS code and raw data are provided as supplementary files, however owing to the sensitive nature of the species (federally endangered with a high risk of illegal collection for the pet trade), GPS points of site locations cannot be revealed.

Funding Statement

This work was supported by the USDA National Institute of Food and Agriculture, McIntire Stennis project 1006328, awarded to CAH. The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Decision Letter 0

William J Etges

5 Jun 2020

PONE-D-20-12247

Reconciling larval and adult sampling methods to model growth across life-stages

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Reviewer #1: Overall, I thought this was an interesting manuscript that uses contemporary modeling methods to better understand growth and age in an imperiled vertebrate species. Authors provide a novel modeling framework that holds great utility, especially for researchers that study animals with complex life cycles. The research also has the potential to aid in endangered species recovery through a better understanding of life history. However, I have several comments below that I believe will improve the manuscript. Specifically, authors often rely, too heavily, on citations to relate their findings to previous work. There is nothing wrong with being explicit! R/WinBUGS Code should be provided as supplemental material (and referenced in the methods section). I am not an expert on growth models presented here, and although I have confidence in the authors’ abilities, I cannot comment on the model in great detail.

Other comments

Abstract: Provide some results! Currently, results of quite general (i.e., marked variability in growth, the timing and age at metamorphosis, etc.)

Line 27: Remove “hence”

Line 34: Topic sentence and supported sentences are mis-matched. The topic sentence indicates the paragraph will focus on the “many choices for those wishing to model population growth.” The supporting sentences do not focus on these model choices. Rather the focus is on “difficulty aging” and “techniques.”

Line 40-41: Why are mark-recapture studies especially important for endangered species management? Is it related to non-lethal nature of capture-mark-recapture studies?

Line 49: Remove “however”

Line 87: I don’t recall reading details on drift fence design or protocols used. Did the driftnet completely encircle each pond(s)? When and how often were they checked? Spacing between buckets? How were animals marked? Are you using Total length or Snout-to-vent length?

Lines 92-97: I would think most readers understand the benefits of using a Bayesian hierarchical model. These benefits are sufficiently outlined by the authors. What isn’t clear, however, is if the authors are basing their model on the Eaton and Link model (i.e., citation 13). If so, an explanation of the Eaton and Link model is needed as well as any modification to this model. Additional information, such as the importance of accounting for measurement error, should also be highlighted.

Lines 101-157: I’m not an expert on growth models. However, I think the authors provide a decent explanation of their model. Choice of priors was not explained and may be needed?

Lines 163-169: This paragraph should be the first one in the Results section as it explains the raw data as opposed to the modeling.

Lines 185: What sizes are needed to reach metamorphosis? Can you just provide the size?

Line 188-189: “Some evidence that size of metamorphosis impacted return rates the following year (Fig 3), possibly of reduced survival of smaller metamorphs”. First, I have difficulty interpreting this from Figure 3. Second, seems like this speculation (and lines 190-191) is best left for the discussion, if at all.

Line 192: “…from larvae to adult..” Should this be larvae to metamorph?

Lines 206-207: “Similarly, discernment of the demographic structure…” Again, should this be in the discussion section?

Lines 229-230: What are the sizes necessary to successfully transition across life-stages?

Line 241 – remove “this” as it’s written twice

Line 255 – What are some of the ages obtained by other Ambystomatids? And survival estimates.

Line 261 – The citation [51] is from Stearns, but it is being used as a comparison to related another species to flatwoods salamanders. This is not useful. Please be explicit in this comparison.

Line 265 – It is not clear if this topic sentence is based on your results? Who are the “individuals” you are discussing. Do the authors provide results that suggest distinct seasonal patterns? Where?

Line 291 – remove “however”

Reviewer #2: In general, this manuscript was technically sound, but important details regarding field and some analytical methods were missing. The data were not available, which is understandable for such a rare species, but some other information, particularly the BUGS model code, would be very useful to readers. The manuscript was generally well-written, but I have provided a few comments regarding organization and grammar in the attached document.

Please see attached file for my full review.

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PLoS One. 2020 Aug 21;15(8):e0237737. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0237737.r002

Author response to Decision Letter 0


13 Jun 2020

We would like to start by thanking the reviewers for their comments. I think they have greatly improved the manuscript. Following suggestions, we have provided more details of methods and sampling techniques, addressed reviewers’ comments to improve clarity and organization, and providing the BUGS code and raw data. Responses to specific comments follow.

AE comments:

1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming.

We believe we have corrected any and all formatting errors

2. In your Methods section, please provide additional location information of the collection sites, including geographic coordinates for the data set if available.

We have added additional information about the study location, although specific GPS points cannot be revealed due to security concerns. (The study species is federally endangered and threatened with illegal collection for the pet trade.)

3a. Please amend your current ethics statement to include the full name of the ethics committee that approved your specific study.

corrected

3b. Once you have amended this/these statement(s) in the Methods section of the manuscript, please add the same text to the “Ethics Statement” field of the submission form

done

4. In your Data Availability statement, you have not specified where the minimal data set underlying the results described in your manuscript can be found. PLOS defines a study's minimal data set as the underlying data used to reach the conclusions drawn in the manuscript and any additional data required to replicate the reported study findings in their entirety. All PLOS journals require that the minimal data set be made fully available. For more information about our data policy, please see http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability.

We have included the raw data and BUGS code as a supplementary file

Reviewer #1:

Overall, I thought this was an interesting manuscript that uses contemporary modeling methods to better understand growth and age in an imperiled vertebrate species. Authors provide a novel modeling framework that holds great utility, especially for researchers that study animals with complex life cycles. The research also has the potential to aid in endangered species recovery through a better understanding of life history.

Thanks! We think it will be useful too!

Abstract: Provide some results! Currently, results of quite general (i.e., marked variability in growth, the timing and age at metamorphosis, etc.)

We have added some specific results to the abstract

Line 27: Remove “hence”

done

Line 34: Topic sentence and supported sentences are mis-matched. The topic sentence indicates the paragraph will focus on the “many choices for those wishing to model population growth.” The supporting sentences do not focus on these model choices. Rather the focus is on “difficulty aging” and “techniques.”

we have revised the opening sentence to improve clarity

Line 40-41: Why are mark-recapture studies especially important for endangered species management? Is it related to non-lethal nature of capture-mark-recapture studies?

yes, as stated in the previous sentence of that paragraph

Line 49: Remove “however”

done

Line 87: I don’t recall reading details on drift fence design or protocols used. Did the driftnet completely encircle each pond(s)? When and how often were they checked? Spacing between buckets? How were animals marked? Are you using Total length or Snout-to-vent length?

we have added a description of the long-term drift fence study and methodologies.

Lines 92-97: I would think most readers understand the benefits of using a Bayesian hierarchical model. These benefits are sufficiently outlined by the authors. What isn’t clear, however, is if the authors are basing their model on the Eaton and Link model (i.e., citation 13). If so, an explanation of the Eaton and Link model is needed as well as any modification to this model. Additional information, such as the importance of accounting for measurement error, should also be highlighted.

The model is not based on Eaton and Link, so no description necessary, but a sentence highlighting the importance of measurement error has been added

Lines 101-157: I’m not an expert on growth models. However, I think the authors provide a decent explanation of their model. Choice of priors was not explained and may be needed?

We have added a sentence in the results addressing/explaining choice of priors

Lines 163-169: This paragraph should be the first one in the Results section as it explains the raw data as opposed to the modeling.

done

Lines 185: What sizes are needed to reach metamorphosis? Can you just provide the size?

included

Line 188-189: “Some evidence that size of metamorphosis impacted return rates the following year (Fig 3), possibly of reduced survival of smaller metamorphs”. First, I have difficulty interpreting this from Figure 3. Second, seems like this speculation (and lines 190-191) is best left for the discussion, if at all.

removed

Line 192: “…from larvae to adult..” Should this be larvae to metamorph?

corrected

Lines 206-207: “Similarly, discernment of the demographic structure…” Again, should this be in the discussion section?

removed

Lines 229-230: What are the sizes necessary to successfully transition across life-stages?

added clarification

Line 241 – remove “this” as it’s written twice

corrected

Line 255 – What are some of the ages obtained by other Ambystomatids? And survival estimates.

this is addressed in subsequent paragraphs in the discussion

Line 261 – The citation [51] is from Stearns, but it is being used as a comparison to related another species to flatwoods salamanders. This is not useful. Please be explicit in this comparison.

Removed erroneous citation

Line 265 – It is not clear if this topic sentence is based on your results? Who are the “individuals” you are discussing. Do the authors provide results that suggest distinct seasonal patterns? Where?

whole paragraph has been removed following reviewer 2 comment

Line 291 – remove “however”

whole paragraph has been removed following reviewer 2 comment

Reviewer #2:

In general, this manuscript was technically sound, but important details regarding field and some analytical methods were missing. The data were not available, which is understandable for such a rare species, but some other information, particularly the BUGS model code, would be very useful to readers.

Thanks! Yes, we definitely cannot release detailed site information owing to risk of illegal collection for the pet trade, but we can detail the field methods and include the BUGS code!

Line 55: These statements about sampling methods for different amphibian stages are overly general. Although larval amphibians are typically sampled with nets or aquatic traps, I am unfamiliar with spotlight surveys for them. Even among terrestrial salamanders, sampling methods for adults can vary widely. The point about divergent methods for different life stages nonetheless is true for most amphibians with aquatic larvae and terrestrial adults.

We have modified the sentence to improve clarity

Lines 71–78: This paragraph would be better placed in the Materials and Methods.

We have moved most of the paragraph to the methods section.

Line 79: A paragraph here about the objectives of the research or the research questions addressed would bring the broader context of the Introduction to a logical conclusion regarding the impetus for this specific study.

We have more clearly stated our objectives in the penultimate paragraph of the introduction

Lines 87–88: See previous statement. It seems odd to reference the Introduction when referring to methods.

We have included more detailed field methods

Line 106–112: I recommend specifying the units for the parameters so that readers can better interpret the constraints imposed by the priors on lines 108–110.

added

Line 112: I recommend indicating that L ∞ refers to the asymptotic size of adults across all presented von Bertalanffy growth models if that is the case.

added

Lines 115–117: How is measurement error in this formulation separated from individual heterogeneity in growth, and how could these two sources of variation in L t be separated without marked individuals? It seems to me individual heterogeneity and measurement error would both be included in the variance parameter.

Good catch! this should’ve been in the model for adult growth; we have moved it accordingly

Line 134: Is equivalent to L t on line 126? If so, I recommend changing L t on line 126 to to make this explicit.

corrected

Line 150: It is probably worth citing the R2WinBUGS package here as well.

done

Line 159: Delete the “s” in “reductions.”

Corrected

Line 167: Replace “shows” with “showed” to keep the results in past tense.

Corrected

Line 192: I recommend replacing “parameterizations” with “life stages” to place the emphasis on the biology of flatwoods salamanders.

Done

Lines 192–193: The credible limits in Figure 4 appear to go from 20 mm to 50 mm. Why is the value in the text so much narrower? It almost seems like the dashed lines on the figure are the posterior predictive interval, rather than the credible interval. The same comment applies on line 195 for asymptotic length.

Good catch! Corrected.

Line 201: Replace “reflect” with “is.”

Corrected

Lines 207–210: How was longevity determined, given the plateau in size at 7 years, variability in individual size, and measurement error? A growth model with this shape seems ill-suited for estimating maximum lifespan; the mark-recapture data could, however, be used in other ways to try to estimate longevity (for an example, see Fellers et al. 2013).

Yes there is a high degree of uncertainty in the age of larger individuals, and we agree this is not the best way to estimate longevity (longevity was more of a byproduct from the growth analysis). We have another manuscript in prep that is more focused on estimating survival rates / longevity explicitly as you suggest, however we feel this very rough estimate derived here from the growth increments is worth including, if only to act as a straw man for subsequent analysis. We have shortened this section so that is not as prominent in the manuscript.

Lines 254–264: Better description of how the potential lifespan of flatwoods salamanders was estimated is necessary, otherwise this paragraph is largely speculative.

Added details for clarity

Lines 265–283: This paragraph can be deleted. It is entirely based on unpublished data and a personal communication, and not on the model or results presented in this study.

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Decision Letter 1

William J Etges

15 Jul 2020

PONE-D-20-12247R1

Reconciling larval and adult sampling methods to model growth across life-stages

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #2: General Comments:

NOTE: I reviewed a previous version of this manuscript, and I found the revised version substantively improved. In reviewing the responses to reviewers, however, I noticed that my general comments were not included. I apologize if this was an oversight of mine when submitting the review. Below, I include general comments that remain relevant, but I have removed any that were addressed in revisions (many were requests for more details about field methods that were addressed in the revisions). All specific comments from the previous version of the manuscript were adequately addressed.

This manuscript addresses two important issues related to modeling population growth of organisms with complex life-histories: 1) the inability to accurately age individuals of many species, and 2) quantifying changes in growth across life stages of such organisms. The manuscript presents a model that provides estimates of parameters from larval growth through metamorphosis to adult growth. Such a model is very appealing, because it allows estimation of growth parameters across life-history stages to encompass an organism’s entire lifespan. Being able to model growth across life stages can be particularly important for parameterizing population models to develop conservation strategies. Thus, the topic of this manuscript is both interesting and important.

Although the authors have improved the Materials and Methods by providing many of the details regarding the drift fence sampling, some additional information is necessary. In particular, for studies that rely on recaptures of individuals, it is important to indicate how individuals identified or marked. Also, because of the centrality of size measurements for a growth study, it is important to indicate how larvae and adults were measured for readers to assess whether it is appropriate to share an error term (especially if it is specifically measurement error, and not variation around the mean estimated size—see specific comment below) across life stages in the model.

In addition to these general comments, I reference specific comments by line number below.

Specific Comments:

Lines 78: I recommend replacing the comma with “and” because the structure of the last element of the list (“variability in the timing and size at metamorphosis”) results in only two elements.

Line 89: Delete the period after “cm” and begin “funnel” with a lower case “f” if the preceding fragment is the size of the funnel traps.

Line 96: How was SVL measured? Was the same measurement method used for larvae (following paragraph)? I recommend including these details as they are relevant when trying to model growth across life-stage transitions.

Lines 122, 136, & 156: The equations on these lines appear to be missing a negative sign in front of the growth coefficient. It correctly appears on line 145.

Lines 138–139: tm is technically not the age at metamorphosis, but the time since the individual was theoretically length 0, correct? Is that incorporated into the prior, and is interpretation and subsequent use (e.g., in the adult growth equations) of tm as age at metamorphosis adjusted for the difference between hatching date and theoretical age at length 0? Reporting the posterior distribution of t0 also would help to explain how influential this technicality is: the closer t0 is to 0, the more closely tm will correspond to the age at metamorphosis.

Line 161: It is unclear to me how σ_L^2 separates measurement error from individual variation in growth. It seems to me that this error term would account for any variation between the model-estimated size, Lt, and the observed length, Lobs. Yes, this would include measurement error, but would it not also include individual heterogeneity? Even if individuals were measured perfectly, one would expect that Lobs ≠ Lt, as is the case for residual error when nearly any model is model fitted to data.

Lines 166–169: If I am reading this correctly, the number of retained posterior samples was 400,000 x 3 / 100 = 12,000. What was the minimum effective sample size across sampled parameters?

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PLoS One. 2020 Aug 21;15(8):e0237737. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0237737.r004

Author response to Decision Letter 1


28 Jul 2020

We would like to start by thanking the reviewers for their comments. I think they have greatly improved the manuscript. We apologize for missing these general comments in the first round of revisions.

This manuscript addresses two important issues related to modeling population growth of organisms with complex life-histories: 1) the inability to accurately age individuals of many species, and 2) quantifying changes in growth across life stages of such organisms. The manuscript presents a model that provides estimates of parameters from larval growth through metamorphosis to adult growth. Such a model is very appealing, because it allows estimation of growth parameters across life-history stages to encompass an organism’s entire lifespan. Being able to model growth across life stages can be particularly important for parameterizing population models to develop conservation strategies. Thus, the topic of this manuscript is both interesting and important.

Thanks, we think so too!

Although the authors have improved the Materials and Methods by providing many of the details regarding the drift fence sampling, some additional information is necessary. In particular, for studies that rely on recaptures of individuals, it is important to indicate how individuals identified or marked.

We have added the marking method

Also, because of the centrality of size measurements for a growth study, it is important to indicate how larvae and adults were measured for readers to assess whether it is appropriate to share an error term across life stages in the model.

We have added the measuring method

Specific Comments:

Lines 78: I recommend replacing the comma with “and” because the structure of the last element of the list (“variability in the timing and size at metamorphosis”) results in only two elements.

corrected

Line 89: Delete the period after “cm” and begin “funnel” with a lower case “f” if the preceding fragment is the size of the funnel traps.

good catch! corrected

Line 96: How was SVL measured? Was the same measurement method used for larvae (following paragraph)? I recommend including these details as they are relevant when trying to model growth across life-stage transitions.

added measuring methods

Lines 122, 136, & 156: The equations on these lines appear to be missing a negative sign in front of the growth coefficient. It correctly appears on line 145.

corrected

Lines 138–139: tm is technically not the age at metamorphosis, but the time since the individual was theoretically length 0, correct? Is that incorporated into the prior, and is interpretation and subsequent use (e.g., in the adult growth equations) of tm as age at metamorphosis adjusted for the difference between hatching date and theoretical age at length 0? Reporting the posterior distribution of t0 also would help to explain how influential this technicality is: the closer t0 is to 0, the more closely tm will correspond to the age at metamorphosis.

The posterior distribution for t0 was very narrow, and approximately centered on zero, so doesn’t unduly influence interpretation. Despite this, we retained t0 in the adult growth equations for completeness. We have added a sentence to the results clarifying this.

Line 161: It is unclear to me how σ_L^2 separates measurement error from individual variation in growth. It seems to me that this error term would account for any variation between the model-estimated size, Lt, and the observed length, Lobs. Yes, this would include measurement error, but would it not also include individual heterogeneity? Even if individuals were measured perfectly, one would expect that Lobs ≠ Lt, as is the case for residual error when nearly any model is model fitted to data.

you are correct; this is a relict from when we actually thought we could partition these two sources of uncertainty. I have clarified this where relevant.

Lines 166–169: If I am reading this correctly, the number of retained posterior samples was 400,000 x 3 / 100 = 12,000. What was the minimum effective sample size across sampled parameters?

The lowest ESS across parameters was approximately 600. I have added a sentence to the results stating this.

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Reconciling larval and adult sampling methods to model growth across life-stages

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