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. 2020 Aug 21;15(8):e0237329. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0237329

Suicidality among Chinese college students: A cross-sectional study across seven provinces

Bob Lew 1,#, Kairi Kõlves 2,3,4,#, Augustine Osman 5,#, Mansor Abu Talib 6,#, Norhayati Ibrahim 7,#, Ching Sin Siau 8,*,#, Caryn Mei Hsien Chan 7,#
Editor: Vincenzo De Luca9
PMCID: PMC7444487  PMID: 32822365

Abstract

Background

Although the suicide rate in China has decreased over the past 20 years, there have been reports that the younger age group has been experiencing an increased incidence of completed suicide. Given that undergraduate groups are at higher risks of suicidality, it is important to monitor and screen for risk factors for suicidal ideation and behaviors to ensure their well-being.

Objective

To examine the risk and protective factors contributing to suicidality among undergraduate college students in seven provinces in China.

Methods

We conducted a cross-sectional study involving 13,387 college students from seven universities in Ningxia, Shandong, Shanghai, Jilin, Qinghai, Shaanxi, and Xinjiang. Data were collected using self-report questionnaires.

Results

Higher scores in the psychological strain, depression, anxiety, stress, and psychache (psychological risk factors for suicidality) and lower scores in self-esteem and purpose in life (psychological protective factors against suicidality) were associated with increased suicidality among undergraduate students in China. Demographic factors which were associated with higher risks of suicidality were female gender, younger age, bad academic results, were an only child, non-participation in school associations, and had an urban household registration. Perceived good health was protective against suicidality.

Conclusions

Knowing the common risk and protective factors for suicidality among Chinese undergraduate students is useful in developing interventions targeted at this population and to guide public health policies on suicide in China.

Introduction

The World Health Organization estimated about 793,000 suicide deaths worldwide in 2016, and a global age-standardized suicide rate of 10.5 per 100,000 population [1]. There are approximately 25 suicide attempts for every suicide death, and one suicide death is estimated to affect 135 people [2], resulting in 108 million people world-wide being negatively impacted by suicide.

Although China is the second largest economy in the world (with a Gross Domestic Product (GDP) of $13.6 trillion in 2018, compared to the United States at $20.5 trillion) [3], its suicide rate has decreased in the past 20 years from above 20/100,000 population to the current rate of 8/100,000 population [4]. The current rate translates to an estimated 112,000 deaths, 2.8 million attempted suicides, and 15.1 million people impacted by suicide in China [1]. This rate is lower than in the US which is estimated to be 13.7/100,000, and ranks between the suicide rates of the world’s ten largest economies which range from 5.5/100,000 (Italy) to 16.5/100,000 (India) [1]. Zhang has outlined that this drop may possibly be due to the following six factors: (1) fast economic development; (2) migration to urbanised areas; (3) modernised social values; (4) one-child per family policy; (5) college surveillance-based counselling; and (6) governmental media control [4].

Suicide is widely recognised as the second leading cause of death in young people in the 15- to 29-years age bracket worldwide [1]. There have been reports that this younger age group has been experiencing an increased incidence of completed suicide in China [5,6]. Thus, it is important to focus on individuals within this age bracket as they still have a long life-cycle. The emotional as well as the economic costs incurred by the suicide deaths of this age group are high [7]. Most undergraduate students fall within the 18 to 29 age range. Given that undergraduate groups are the emerging generation which determine China’s future, it is important to monitor and screen for risk factors for suicidal ideation and behaviors to ensure their well-being.

There is a collective body of evidence on the identification of risk and protective factors for suicide, which includes factors such as life stress and coping style [8], personality factors of impulsivity and aggression [9], and depression [912]. In addition, adverse developmental influences or events such as childhood adversity, divorce of parents, loss of a parent, and sexual abuse are also risk factors for increased suicidality [912]. Among Chinese college students, factors that have been found to influence suicidality are academic performance, academic stress, occupational future, recent conflicts with classmates, satisfaction with major, and the rupture of romantic relationships [12,13]. Finally, family influences such as parents’ educational level, family income, a history of suicide in the family, and originating from a rural background are also factors that are associated with suicidality among college students [1419].

Nevertheless, there still remains a lack of comprehensive studies on various common suicidality risk and protective factors on this population segment in China using sufficiently large samples. Although it may not be possible to study all colleges and provinces in a large country like China simultaneously, this research attempts to address this gap, using established and relevant psychological measurements. To the authors’ best knowledge, this is the largest study undertaken on risk and protective factors for suicide among undergraduate students in China, spanning seven provinces with more than 13,000 samples. A further understanding of risk and protective factors for suicide is needed to guide public health policies on suicide in China.

Materials and methods

Study design

We conducted a large cross-sectional cluster sample study of undergraduate college students in seven provinces in China comprising Ningxia, Shandong, Shanghai, Jilin, Qinghai, Shaanxi, and Xinjiang.

Data collection

Data was collected in survey format from students enrolled in various undergraduate degree programs from universities in seven provinces. One university was selected in each province. Students from each department were clustered according to the year of study. An equal number of classes from each year of study were then selected to obtain a reasonable representation of each grade. All students in the selected classes were briefed about the purpose of the research. Participants completed the questionnaires anonymously in approximately a half an hour, and no identifiers were collected. This study received ethics approval from the institutional review board of the Ethics Committee at the School of Public Health, Shandong University (No. 20161103). The participant signed an informed consent form before answering the questionnaire. Hotlines on counseling services were provided in the information sheet tailored to each province. Exclusion criteria were determined a priori as follows: 1) if gender and age were not provided; and 2) if all items on the Suicidal Behaviors Questionnaire-Revised were not completed.

Measurements

Demographics

The following information was collected: age (using year of birth), gender (male = 1; female = 2), physical health (poor = 1 to good = 3), economic status (poor = 1 to good = 3), academic results (poor = 1 to good = 3), only child status (yes = 1; no = 2), participation in school associations (yes = 1; no = 2), and household registration (urban = 1; rural = 2).

Suicidal Behaviors Questionnaire-Revised (SBQ-R)

The SBQ-R was developed as a brief measure of a range of suicide-related behaviors for use in both clinical and nonclinical settings. It is a 4-item self-report questionnaire [20]. The total score ranges from 3 to 18, with higher scores indicating greater risk of suicidal behaviors. A cut-off score of ≥ 7 is used to indicate suicide risk for undergraduate students [20]. Lifetime suicidal ideation and lifetime suicide attempt were determined by the question, “Have you ever seriously thought about suicide?”. Participants who responded “It was just a brief passing thought” indicated lifetime suicidal ideation. Participants who responded “I have attempted to kill myself, but did not want to die” or “I have attempted to kill myself, and really hoped to die” indicated lifetime suicide attempt. The Chinese translated version yielded an internal consistency estimate of Cronbach’s α = 0.67 [21]. In this study, the Cronbach’s α of the scale score is 0.75.

Risk factors

DASS-21

DASS-21 is a well-established instrument comprising three dimensions of psychological distress, including depression, anxiety and stress [22]. Each dimension is measured by seven items. The score on each item ranges from 0 = “did not apply to me at all” to 3 = “applied to me very much”, or “most of the time”). The total score ranges from 0 to 63. DASS-21 has been widely used in China for various psychosocial studies, such as Cheng et al. which reported an internal consistency estimate of Cronbach’s α = 0.77 [23]. In this study, the Cronbach’s α of the scale score is 0.95.

Psychache scale

The Psychache Scale [24] consists of 13 items reflecting psychache (i.e., mental pain) scored from 1 = “never or strongly disagree” to 5 = “always or strongly agree”. The Psychache Scale scores have adequate psychometric properties, with alpha reliability coefficients over 0.90 when completed by university students. In a sample of Chinese students, the Cronbach’s α was 0.94 [21]. In this study, the Cronbach’s α of the scale score is 0.96.

Psychological strain

The Psychological Strain Scales (PSS), which showed good validity and reliability estimates both in Chinese and American college samples, were first developed in a Chinese sample to measure the level of strain [25]. The PSS consists of the four dimensions of psychological strains, namely, value strain, aspiration strain, deprivation strain, and coping strain; each of these dimensions contains 10 items. For example, “I am often confused about what life means to me” corresponds to value strain; “I wish I had a better job now, but I cannot realize it according to some reasons” corresponds to aspiration strain; “Compared to others in my neighborhood (village), I am a poor person” corresponds to deprivation strain; and “Face is so important to me that I will do everything to protect my public image, even suicide” corresponds to coping strain. Response options for each item were as follows: 1 = never/not me at all; 2 = rarely/not me; 3 = maybe/not sure; 4 = often/like me; 5 = yes, strongly agree/exactly like me. The total score for each of the four strains was obtained by summing the total score of each dimension (10 items). The higher the total score of the PSS was, the greater the level of psychological strains. In this study, the Cronbach’s α of the scale score is 0.96.

Protective factors

Self-esteem scale

The self-esteem scale (SES), developed by Rosenberg [26], was originally used to assess adolescents’ overall feelings of self-worth and self-acceptance, is currently the most widely used self-esteem measure of this construct, and has solid reliability estimate (Cronbach’s α = 0.84). Although commonly used among adolescents, the scale has also been used in a Chinese college student sample.27 The SES consists of 10 items, with every item ranging from 1 = “strongly disagree” to 4 = “strongly agree”. The total score ranges from 10 to 40. Higher scores indicate greater self-esteem. The Chinese SES was tested in China and had acceptable reliability estimate (Cronbach’s α = 0.71) [27]. In this study, the Cronbach’s α of the scale score is 0.66.

Purpose in life

The four-item purpose in life test–short form (PLT-SF) was used to measure the extent to which participants felt their lives had meaning and purpose [28]. The PLT-SF includes a 7-point Likert-type scale response format. Responses to the items are summed to obtain a total score ranging from 4 to 28. Higher scores indicate greater perceived meaning/purpose in life. A Chinese version of the PLT-SF has been shown to have acceptable reliability estimate (Cronbach’s α = 0.89) [29]. In this study, the Cronbach’s α of the scale score is 0.92.

Statistical analysis

Univariate and multivariate statistical analyses were conducted using the IBM SPSS v.21 (SPSS Inc.; Armonk, NY). The participant demographics were computed using descriptive statistics. Independent samples t-tests and one-way analyses of variance were conducted to test for significant mean differences between age groups, gender, economic status, academic results, only child status, participation in school associations, household registration, year of study, race, other province, and political party membership. A multiple regression analysis was used to determine the significant predictors of suicide risk based on SBQ-R total scores which were log natural transformed. A binary logistic regression was conducted to test the model for the odd ratios for being at risk of suicide (SBQ-R total score ≥ 7). For all comparisons, differences were determined using two-tailed tests while p-values less than 0.05 were considered statistically significant. Missing data were deleted list-wise during the statistical analysis.

Results

Participants

The total number of participants from seven provinces was 13,387. After deleting missing and out of range data for demographics and the SBQ-R, 11,473 participants were included in the final analysis (mean age = 20.69±1.35).

Demographic factors

Age

The highest suicidality score was reported by the 19-year-old (y.o.) age group at 1.44±0.42 and the 24 y.o. age group reported the lowest suicidality at 1.33±0.37 which is significantly lower than all the other age groups, F (6, 11,472) = 4.53, p<0.001.

Gender

Female students reported higher suicidality with a mean SBQ-R total score of 1.44 ±0.43 vs. male students with 1.40±0.41, t (9957.61) = -4.61, p<0.001.

Physical health

Students who self-reported “poor” physical health scored the highest in suicidality at 1.55±0.49 compared to those who reported “normal” and “good” physical health, F (2, 11,468) = 135.19, p<0.001.

Economic status

Students who self-reported that they have “poor” economic status scored the highest at 1.46±0.45 followed by “good” and “normal”, F (2, 11,461) = 14.09, p<0.001.

Academic results

Those who reported “poor” academic results had the highest level of suicidality mean score at 1.57±0.48, followed by “normal” and “good”, F (2, 11,454) = 62.11, p<0.001. The “good” category scored the lowest among the three categories (p<0.001). There appears to be a trend effect of the three categories of academic results (i.e. “poor” >“normal” > “good”) on suicidal behaviors.

Only child

Students who reported that they come from an only child family reported a higher suicidality mean score at 1.44±0.43 than students who reported that they have siblings at 1.41±0.42, t (7561.70) = 3.79, p<0.001.

School associations

Students who reported that they participated in school associations reported a lower suicidality mean score at 1.42±0.42 than those who do not participate in school activities 1.44±0.43, t (5371.37) = -2.06, p = 0.039.

Household registration

Students with an urban household registration reported a higher suicidality mean score at 1.46±0.44 compared to students who reported a rural household registration of 1.39±0.40, t (11,048.17) = 7.95, p<0.001 (Table 1).

Table 1. Mean comparison of demographic variables with suicidality (SBQ-R total score) (N = 11,473).
Demographic Variables N % Mean±SD t / F statistics Post-Hoc and p-value
Age 4.53***
 18 (1) 225 2.0 1.432±.406 1>7 p = .004
 19 (2) 2058 17.9 1.438±.423 2>5 p = .026
 20 (3) 3313 28.9 1.435±.426 2>7 p < .001
 21 (4) 2928 25.5 1.420±.424 3>5 p = .025
 22 (5) 1707 14.9 1.407±.411 3>7 p < .001
 23 (6) 895 7.8 1.405±.426 4>7 p < .001
 24 (7) 347 3.0 1.329±.370 5>7 p = .001
6>7 p = .004
Gender -4.61*** 2>1 p < .001
 Male (1) 4496 39.2 1.400±.407
 Female (2) 6977 59.8 1.436±.430
Physical Health 135.19*** 1>2 p = 0.002
1>3 p<0.001
 Poor (1) 740 6.4 1.554± 0.487
 Normal (2) 3749 32.7 1.489± 0.451
 Good (3) 6980 60.8 1.372± 0.388
 Missing 4
Economic Status 14.09*** 1>2 p<0.001
3>2 p = 0.038
 Poor (1) 2398 20.9 1.458±
 Normal (2) 7599 66.2 1.408±
 Good (3) 1465 12.8 1.437±
 Missing 11
Academic Results 62.11*** 1>2,3 p < .001
 Poor (1) 882 7.7 1.571±480
 Normal (2) 8318 72.6 1.413±413
 Good (3) 2255 19.7 1.397±413
 Missing 18
Only Child 3.79*** 1>2 p < .001
 Yes (1) 3868 33.9 1.443±.431
 No (2) 7537 66.1 1.411±.416
 Missing 68
School Associations 2.06* 2>1 p = .039
 Yes (1) 8358 73.0 1.417±.418
 No (2) 3094 27.0 1.436±.431
 Missing 21
Household Registration 7.95*** 1>2 p < .001
 Yes (1) 5419 47.3 1.455±.438
 No (2) 6026 52.7 1.392±.403
 Missing 28

*p<0.05;

**p<0.01;

***p<0.001. Games-Howell post-hoc analysis was employed.

Risk and protective factors for suicidality

The results of the multiple linear regression indicated that psychache (β = 0.162, p < 0.001) and DASS-21 (β = 0.155, p < 0.001) demonstrated the strongest associations with increased suicidality. Together, the independent variables accounted for 22.4% of the variance, R2 = 0.221, adjusted R2 = 0.219, F (22, 10,455) = 134.32, p<0.001 (Table 2).

Table 2. Multiple linear regression of factors associated with suicidality (SBQ-R total score).

Variables B B SE 95% CI β t p-value
Upper Bound Lower Bound
Psychological Strain 0.001 0.000 0.001 0.002 0.077 6.542 <0.001
DASS-21 0.005 0.000 0.004 0.006 0.155 11.226 <0.001
Psychache 0.007 0.001 0.006 0.008 0.162 12.045 <0.001
Self-Esteem -0.005 0.001 -0.008 -0.003 -0.045 -4.201 <0.001
Purpose-in-Life -0.009 0.001 -0.011 -0.007 -0.097 -9.389 <0.001
Province
Jilin*
Ningxia -0.015 0.013 -0.041 0.011 -0.013 -1.121 0.262
Shandong -0.081 0.014 -0.108 -0.054 -0.062 -5.879 <0.001
Shanghai 0.032 0.013 0.006 0.058 0.028 2.408 0.016
Qinghai -0.094 0.015 -0.123 -0.065 -0.068 -6.330 <0.001
Shaanxi -0.083 0.013 -0.109 -0.057 -0.074 -6.283 <0.001
Xinjiang -0.096 0.014 -0.124 -0.068 -0.073 -6.685 <0.001
Age -0.012 0.003 -0.018 -0.007 -0.039 -4.320 <0.001
Gender
Male*
Female 0.077 0.008 0.062 0.092 0.089 9.871 <0.001
Physical Health
Normal*
Good -0.032 0.008 -0.048 -0.016 -0.037 -3.879 <0.001
Poor -0.027 0.016 -0.059 0.005 -0.016 -1.668 0.095
Economic Status
Normal*
Good 0.029 0.012 0.006 0.053 0.023 2.452 0.014
Poor 0.001 0.010 -0.018 0.020 0.001 0.058 0.954
Academic Results
Normal*
Good 0.011 0.010 -0.008 0.030 0.011 1.156 0.248
Poor 0.080 0.014 0.051 0.108 0.050 5.503 <0.001
Only Child
No*
Yes 0.021 0.008 0.004 0.037 0.023 2.479 0.013
School Associations
No*
Yes 0.026 0.008 -0.043 0.010 0.043 3.094 0.002
Household Registration
Rural*
Urban 0.046 0.008 0.030 0.062 0.054 5.577 <0.001

*Reference group.

The results of the binary logistic regression indicated that participants who scored higher in psychological strain, DASS-21 and psychache were at an increased risk of suicidality (p<0.001). Meanwhile, those with higher scores in self-esteem (p = 0.001) and purpose in life (p<0.001) were at a decreased risk of suicidality. In terms of demographic factors, females, those with perceived good economic status, poor academic results, were an only child, who participated in school associations, and had an urban household registration were at an increased risk of suicidality (p<0.001 to p<0.05). Meanwhile, perceived good health was protective against suicidality (Table 3).

Table 3. Binary logistic regression of factors associated with suicidality (SBQ-R total score).

Variables Odds Ratio 95% CI p-value
Lower Upper
Psychological Strain 1.009 1.006 1.012 <0.001
DASS-21 1.033 1.026 1.040 <0.001
Psychache 1.036 1.028 1.044 <0.001
Self-Esteem 0.968 0.949 0.987 0.001
Purpose-in-Life 0.947 0.935 0.960 <0.001
Province
 Jilin*
 Ningxia 1.313 1.066 1.618 0.010
 Shandong 0.931 0.747 1.160 0.524
 Shanghai 1.418 1.175 1.711 <0.001
 Qinghai 0.898 0.719 1.122 0.344
 Shaanxi 0.798 0.653 0.976 0.028
 Xinjiang 0.686 0.527 0.891 0.005
Age 0.930 0.890 0.973 0.001
Gender
 Male*
 Female 1.679 1.484 1.898 <0.001
Physical Health
 Normal*
 Good 0.773 0.683 0.874 <0.001
 Bad 0.867 0.700 1.074 0.191
Economic Status
 Normal*
 Good 1.240 1.036 1.486 0.019
 Bad 1.003 0.868 1.158 0.968
Academic Results
 Normal*
 Good 1.037 0.888 1.211 0.648
 Bad 1.306 1.074 1.589 0.008
Only Child
 No*
 Yes 1.192 1.052 1.351 0.006
School Associations
 No*
 Yes 1.231 1.081 1.401 0.002
Household Registration
 Rural*
 Urban 1.265 1.117 1.432 <0.001

*Reference group.

Discussion

Our findings indicated that higher scores in the psychological risk factors (psychological strain, depression, anxiety, stress, and psychache) and lower scores in the protective factors for suicidality (self-esteem and purpose in life) were associated with increased suicidality among undergraduate students in China. This is similar to the results of a number of studies carried out in the West [3033]. However, the “negative life events” experienced by Chinese undergraduate students may differ, given that China has a different socio-political environment, educational approach, and even campus administration style [4].

In terms of demographic factors, females were at an increased suicide risk, a finding which is replicated in a number of Western and Chinese studies on college students [15 3436]. This may be due a number of factors, including a brooding ruminative style among females [35] or wider sociocultural issues affecting females such as gender inequality, especially among female individuals who adhere to Confucian ethics [3739]. Younger college students may be more susceptible to developing suicidality as they may still be transitioning to college life [40]. Perceived good physical health was protective of suicide. The late adolescence and young adulthood are considered the healthiest periods of an individual’s life [41]. Therefore, perceived poor health could be very distressing for this age group.

Undergraduates with an urban household registration reported higher suicidality compared to those with a rural household registration. This is in contrast with an earlier study which indicated no difference in the suicidality levels between rural and urban Chinese college students [42], or higher levels of suicidality among rural Chinese college students [10]. The findings may reflect the narrowing of rural:urban ratios in suicide rate, which has traditionally been higher among the rural Chinese [43].

Another interesting finding is that participants who reported a good economic status were at an increased risk of suicidality, as were those who participated in school activities. These results are inconsistent with past findings, as past studies have indicated that students from a lower socioeconomic background reported higher suicidality levels [44]. Participation in school activities was seen as being protective of suicidality because exposure to a wider social circle may increase social support [45]. Further investigations need to be conducted to test the possible mediating variables in the relationship between socioeconomic background and school activities with suicidality.

In the past 20 years, a decrease of suicide rates by 43% in China from 14.1 in 2000 to 8.1 per 100,000 population in 2016 has been recorded [46]. Compared to the US, college students in China have reported lower suicide-related behaviors risk [47]. The public health implementation of targeted suicide prevention activities may have worked synergistically to lower the suicide rates, apart from the possible effects of socioeconomic development. Examples include regulatory changes in the use of pesticides, or the implementation of the lock-box method for safe pesticide storage [48], the success of which was facilitated by urbanisation and migration from rural areas to the cities, where there is less access to pesticides. The success of such means restriction policies has also been successfully implemented in other Lower- and Middle-Income Countries such as India [49], and may inform firearm regulation policies in the US [50].

Conclusion

Understanding the common risk and protective factors for suicide among Chinese undergraduate college students is crucial in building a resilient and appropriate suicide prevention programme for this segment of society. The identified protective factors such as self-esteem and purpose in life could be reinforced through various suicide prevention and character-building curricula. Early intervention on this population could have long-term positive consequences.

Limitations

This is a cross-sectional study across seven provinces, thus causality could not be inferred. Provincial comparisons were not conducted as only one urban university was selected for each province. The results are therefore not representative of Chinese college students. There may be other important risk and protective factors for suicide which are not included in this study due to questionnaire length constraints. For example, what students do during their free time was not taken into consideration. The additional stress from working or caring for another individual may affect their emotional health compared to those who do not have such activities. In addition, the time of administering survey should be considered as specific times during the semester (e.g. before exams) may be associated with more stress and negative emotions. Therefore, future studies should include other risk factors facing college students such as parental and other relationships and personal time activities. The identification of stressful timepoints would enable school authorities to assist with timing for implementing more suicide intervention activities. A representative sampling of Chinese universities should be undertaken in the future to ensure the wider generalizability of the results.

Supporting information

S1 Dataset. PLoSOne student suicidality dataset.

(SAV)

Acknowledgments

The authors would like to thank the seven collaborators and associates in China for their coordination in data collection for each province: Prof. Cai Honglan (The People Hospital of Qinghai Province, Qinghai Minzu College, Qinghai Province), Prof. Jia Cunxian (Department of Epidemiology, School of Public Health, Shandong University; Shandong University Center for Suicide Prevention Research, Shandong Province), Prof. Kou Changgui (Department of Epidemiology & Biostatistics, School of Public Health, Jilin University, Jilin Province), Prof. Liu Changlin (Shanghai University), Prof. Liu Jiamin (Xinjiang Medical University, Xinjiang Autonomous Region), Prof. Liu Qiling (Department of Epidemiology and Health Statistics, School of Public Health, Shaanxi University of Chinese Medicine, Shaanxi Province), and Prof. Wang Zhizhong (Department of Epidemiology and Health Statistics, School of Public Health, Ningxia Medical University, Ningxia Autonomous Region). The authors also wish to thank the lecturers, post-graduate students, and the participants involved in this study. We wish to thank Prof. Wang Zhizhong who participated in the research design and the data coordination work in China.

Data Availability

All relevant Data is available in the Manuscript and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

CCMH acknowledges support from the Universiti Kebangsaan Malaysia grant DIP-2018-035. The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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Suicidality among Chinese college students: A cross-sectional study across seven provinces

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Reviewer #1: Suicidality among Chinese college students: A cross-sectional study across seven provinces – REVIEW

Minor revisions required

The paper is well-written and contains a few minor grammar and spelling mistakes. The following are the line numbers and the mistake that should be fixed.

99 Minor error with the words ‘may be’.

As per review the methodology, results and discussion were well-written and explained clearly.

The methods should be revised slightly to create potentially a new category reviewing student personal time. This could be measured as no time = 1 and having time to rest/to themselves = 3. I believe this could increase the integrity of this study by emphasizing the importance of resting and having time for students to recover from various stressors.

The discussion honed into specific points and did not leave any gaps for other researchers to identify.

With regards to the discussion, I advise that additional information should be provided regarding China’s current public health guides on suicide. This is to provide researchers insight on what the current standards are in the country, and how results of this study compare to the processes being done. By providing this information, it could lead to potentially improving the current guides set in China, and a higher reduction in suicide rates in the coming years. It will also strengthen the study by exhibiting what country has done to successfully have a low rate of suicide in comparison to the United States. Through discussing this information researchers can therefore learn and set goals to improve not only China’s suicide rates, but also find solutions to use on the United States’ suicide health guides.

Some changes I recommend when revising this study, are to emphasize two other limitations that affected this study. One of them being the time this study took place, and the other with regards to the student’s personal life (i.e. do they work part-time, are they helping a family member etc.).

The time of the study was not emphasized and was not included in the paper. I recommend that a timeline on when students took the questionnaire be included, and then later mentioned as a potential factor. I believe time may be a variable and or limitation as specific times during semesters can lead to more stress, or negative emotions. It also should be mentioned as it gives other researchers reading this study the potential to identify if specific times in a year lead to higher suicide ideation, and suicide attempts.

What students do on their personal time should be taken in consideration or mentioned as a limitation that was not identified/studied. This is because additional stress from working, caring for another may affect their emotional health more than other students. Researchers may identify that this was missed in the study and could argue that female students may have a stronger association to suicidality due to cultural expectations (i.e. female Chinese students may have a stronger obligation to take care of their family than male Chinese students).

Reviewer #2: Thank you for asking me to review this article.

It clearly concerns an important and interesting topic, and is a useful piece of work. In that respect, I would support its publication. However, there are some areas that need resolving before publication.

1. The results as presented in the paper and the abstract do not agree; is participation in school associations a risk factor for suicidal ideation or not?

2. Statistically, I am not quite sure why the authours have chosen to impose a cut-off on the scoring level to determine suicidal ideation or not. I would have thought that it would be more sensible to assess the impact of potential factors on the outcome as a continuous variable. While I do not object to the more simple binary approach used here, it would be good to see a richer approach, treating the SBQ-R as a continuous variable.

3. Some of the risk factors could also be modelled better. For example, when considering Academic Results: "Academic Results. Those who reported “poor” academic results had the highest level of

231 suicidality mean score at 1.57±0.48, followed by “normal” and “good”, F (2, 11,454) = 62.11,

232 p<0.001. The “good” category scored the lowest among the three categories (p<0.001)."

This would seem to suggest that there is a trend effect across the three categories (i.e. Poor > Normal > Good). If that is the case, then please say so, and please consider modelling it.

4. The section on Data Sharing is unclear. THe submission states that it is available in the additional material, but that was not made available for review

5. The Ethics statement in the overview is insufficient; if there was appropriate IRB and individual level consent obtained (as appears to be the case) then this should be stated.

Based on this, my recommendation would be to revise and resubmit. I would be happy to review a revised version of the article.

Dr. M. Williams

Imperial College London

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12 Jun 2020

Reviewer 1

Reviewer #1: Suicidality among Chinese college students: A cross-sectional study across seven provinces – REVIEW - Minor revisions required.

The paper is well-written and contains a few minor grammar and spelling mistakes. The following are the line numbers and the mistake that should be fixed.

1. 99 Minor error with the words ‘may be’.

Response: Thank you, the error has been corrected.

2. As per review the methodology, results and discussion were well-written and explained clearly.

The methods should be revised slightly to create potentially a new category reviewing student personal time. This could be measured as no time = 1 and having time to rest/to themselves = 3. I believe this could increase the integrity of this study by emphasizing the importance of resting and having time for students to recover from various stressors.

Response: Thank you for the suggestion. Unfortunately, we did not collect data on student personal/free time. However, we have included information on participation in school associations, which somewhat addresses what students do when not engaged in academic activities. We have addressed this in the limitations section, and will include the suggested variable in future studies that we carry out (refer response to Comment #4).

3. The discussion honed into specific points and did not leave any gaps for other researchers to identify.

With regards to the discussion, I advise that additional information should be provided regarding China’s current public health guides on suicide. This is to provide researchers insight on what the current standards are in the country, and how results of this study compare to the processes being done. By providing this information, it could lead to potentially improving the current guides set in China, and a higher reduction in suicide rates in the coming years. It will also strengthen the study by exhibiting what country has done to successfully have a low rate of suicide in comparison to the United States. Through discussing this information researchers can therefore learn and set goals to improve not only China’s suicide rates, but also find solutions to use on the United States’ suicide health guides.

Response: We have included newly added literature and references on the decline in suicide rates in China in the past 20 years, and compared the lower suicide behaviors risk of Chinese students with their counterparts in the US. China’s public health guides on suicide as a possible contributory factor has been added, as follows (ll. 303-313):

In the past 20 years, a decrease of suicide rates by 43% in China from 14.1 in 2000 to 8.1 per 100,000 population in 2016 has been recorded [4546]. Compared to the US, college students in China have reported lower suicide-related behaviors risk [47]. The public health implementation of targeted suicide prevention activities may have worked synergistically to lower the suicide rates, apart from the possible effects of socioeconomic development. Examples include regulatory changes in the use of pesticides, or the implementation of the lock-box method for safe pesticide storage [48], the success of which was facilitated by urbanisation and migration from rural areas to the cities, where there is less access to pesticides. The success of such means restriction policies has also been successfully implemented in other Lower- and Middle-Income Countries such as India [49], and may inform firearm regulation policies in the US [50].

4. Some changes I recommend when revising this study, are to emphasize two other limitations that affected this study. One of them being the time this study took place, and the other with regards to the student’s personal life (i.e. do they work part-time, are they helping a family member etc.).

The time of the study was not emphasized and was not included in the paper. I recommend that a timeline on when students took the questionnaire be included, and then later mentioned as a potential factor. I believe time may be a variable and or limitation as specific times during semesters can lead to more stress, or negative emotions. It also should be mentioned as it gives other researchers reading this study the potential to identify if specific times in a year lead to higher suicide ideation, and suicide attempts.

What students do on their personal time should be taken in consideration or mentioned as a limitation that was not identified/studied. This is because additional stress from working, caring for another may affect their emotional health more than other students. Researchers may identify that this was missed in the study and could argue that female students may have a stronger association to suicidality due to cultural expectations (i.e. female Chinese students may have a stronger obligation to take care of their family than male Chinese students).

Response: We have added the following limitations of the study in the revised manuscript (ll. 326-336):

There may be other important risk and protective factors for suicide which are not included in this study due to questionnaire length constraints. For example, what students do during their free time was not taken into consideration. The additional stress from working or caring for another individual may affect their emotional health compared to those who do not have such activities. In addition, the time of administering survey should be considered as specific times during the semester (e.g. before exams) may be associated with more stress, and negative emotions. Therefore, future studies should include other risk factors facing college students such as parental and other relationships and personal time activities. The identification of stressful timepoints would enable school authorities to assist with timing for implementing more suicide intervention activities.

Reviewer 2

Reviewer #2: Thank you for asking me to review this article.

It clearly concerns an important and interesting topic, and is a useful piece of work. In that respect, I would support its publication. However, there are some areas that need resolving before publication.

1. The results as presented in the paper and the abstract do not agree; is participation in school associations a risk factor for suicidal ideation or not?

Response: We apologise for the discrepancy, and thank you for pointing it out. Non-participation in school associations was a risk factor for suicidality, as reflected in the following amendment to the abstract (l. 41):

Demographic factors which were associated with higher risks of suicidality were female gender, younger age, bad academic results, were an only child, non-participation in school associations, and had an urban household registration.

2. Statistically, I am not quite sure why the authors have chosen to impose a cut-off on the scoring level to determine suicidal ideation or not. I would have thought that it would be more sensible to assess the impact of potential factors on the outcome as a continuous variable. While I do not object to the more simple binary approach used here, it would be good to see a richer approach, treating the SBQ-R as a continuous variable.

Response: We have included Table 2, which treats SBQ-R as a continuous dependent variable in a multiple linear regression model.

3. Some of the risk factors could also be modelled better. For example, when considering Academic Results: "Academic Results. Those who reported “poor” academic results had the highest level of 231 suicidality mean score at 1.57±0.48, followed by “normal” and “good”, F (2, 11,454) = 62.11,

232 p<0.001. The “good” category scored the lowest among the three categories (p<0.001)." This would seem to suggest that there is a trend effect across the three categories (i.e. Poor > Normal > Good). If that is the case, then please say so, and please consider modelling it.

Response: We have added to the manuscript the observation that there is a trend effect of academic results on suicidal behaviors, as follows (ll. 236-238):

There appears to be a trend effect of the three categories of academic results (i.e. “poor” > “normal” > “good”) on suicidal behaviors.

4. The section on Data Sharing is unclear. The submission states that it is available in the additional material, but that was not made available for review

Response: We have made the data available as a “Supporting Information” file.

5. The Ethics statement in the overview is insufficient; if there was appropriate IRB and individual level consent obtained (as appears to be the case) then this should be stated.

Response: We have added the appropriate IRB approval and the individual level consent statement for this study, as follows (ll. 120-123):

This study received ethics approval from the institutional review board of the Ethics Committee at the School of Public Health, Shandong University (No. 20161103). The participants signed an informed consent form before answering the questionnaire.

Based on this, my recommendation would be to revise and resubmit. I would be happy to review a revised version of the article.

Dr. M. Williams

Imperial College London

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Reviewer #1: Suicidality among Chinese college students: A cross-sectional study across seven provinces – RE-REVIEW

Minor revisions required

The revised version of the paper is well-written and concise. Previous comments were reviewed by the authors and taken account of. It was identified that the response to reviewers were implemented in the latest copy of the study.

Very minor errors were identified and are as stated below.

The following are the line numbers and the recommendations.

1. 79-95 I recommend ‘the collective body of evidence’ to be reformatted. It seems like a run-on sentence that takes a paragraph space on the paper.

2. 119-120 Recommend correcting the wording to ‘approximately a half an hour’.

3. 220 Recommend writing years old (y.o.) before using the abbreviation.

The study as stated previously has been revised and responded to the previous comments left by the reviewers. This version of the study contained small errors that can be corrected as per the discretion of the authors.

After reviewing the paper, I recommend to consider revising and resubmitting.

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PLoS One. 2020 Aug 21;15(8):e0237329. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0237329.r004

Author response to Decision Letter 1


14 Jul 2020

Dear Editor,

On behalf of my co-authors, I would like to convey our thanks for a further opportunity to revise our manuscript. Please find below our point-to-point response to the reviewer’s comments.

Thank you.

Warm regards

Dr. Siau Ching Sin

Reviewer’s comments:

Minor revisions required

The revised version of the paper is well-written and concise. Previous comments were reviewed by the authors and taken account of. It was identified that the response to reviewers were implemented in the latest copy of the study.

Very minor errors were identified and are as stated below.

The following are the line numbers and the recommendations.

Query #1. 79-95 I recommend ‘the collective body of evidence’ to be reformatted. It seems like a run-on sentence that takes a paragraph space on the paper.

Response: We have revised the paragraph as follows (ll. 79-89):

There is a collective body of evidence on the identification of risk and protective factors for suicide, which includes factors such as life stress and coping style [8], personality factors of impulsivity and aggression [9], and depression [9-12]. In addition, adverse developmental influences or events such as childhood adversity, divorce of parents, loss of a parent, and sexual abuse are also risk factors for increased suicidality [9-12]. Among Chinese college students, factors that have been found to influence suicidality are academic performance, academic stress, occupational future, recent conflicts with classmates, satisfaction with major, and the rupture of romantic relationships [12,13]. Finally, family influences such as parents’ educational level, family income, a history of suicide in the family, and originating from a rural background are also factors that are associated with suicidality among college students [14-19].

Query #2. 119-120 Recommend correcting the wording to ‘approximately a half an hour’.

Response: We have made the correction.

Query #3. 220 Recommend writing years old (y.o.) before using the abbreviation.

Response: We have made the correction.

Attachment

Submitted filename: PLoSOne_13072020_Suicidality of Students_Response.docx

Decision Letter 2

Vincenzo De Luca

24 Jul 2020

Suicidality among Chinese college students: A cross-sectional study across seven provinces

PONE-D-20-00103R2

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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reviewed and taken account of.

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Acceptance letter

Vincenzo De Luca

11 Aug 2020

PONE-D-20-00103R2

Suicidality among Chinese college students: A cross-sectional study across seven provinces

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