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. 2020 Sep 2;15(9):e0237501. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0237501

MRI- and CT-determined changes of dysphagia / aspiration-related structures (DARS) during and after radiotherapy

Steffi U Pigorsch 1,*, Chaline May 1, Kerstin A Kessel 1,2, Simone Graf 3, Henning Bier 3, Fridtjof Nüsslin 1, Birgit Waschulzik 4, Stephanie E Combs 1,2
Editor: Jessica D McDermott5
PMCID: PMC7467287  PMID: 32877418

Abstract

Purpose

The concept of dysphagia/aspiration-related structures (DARS) was developed against the background of severe late side effects of radiotherapy (RT) for head and neck cancer (HNC). DARS can be delineated on CT scans, but with a better morphological discrimination on magnetic resonance imaging (MRI). Swallowing function was analyzed by use of patient charts and prospective investigations and questionnaires.

Method

Seventeen HNC patients treated with intensity-modulated radiotherapy (IMRT) ± chemotherapy between 5/2012 – 8/2015 were included. Planning CT (computed tomography) scans and MRIs (magnetic resonance imaging) prior, during 40 Gray (Gy) radiotherapy and posttreatment were available and co-registered to delineate DARS. The RT dose of each DARS was calculated. Five patients were investigated posttreatment for swallowing function and assessed by means of various questionnaires for quality of life (QoL), swallowing, and voice function.

Results

By retrospective comparison of DARS volume, a significant change in four of eight DARS was detected over time. Three increased and one diminished. The risk of posttreatment dysphagia rose by every 1Gy above the mean dose (D mean) of RT to DARS. 7.5 was the risk factor for dysphagia in the first 6 months, reducing to 4.7 for months 6-12 posttreatment. For all five patients of the prospective part of swallowing investigations, a function disturbance was detected. These results were in contrast to the self-assessment of patients by questionnaires. There was neither a dose dependency of D mean DARS volume changes over time nor of dysphonia and no correlation between volume changes, dysphagia or dysphonia.

Conclusion

Delineation of DARS on MRI co-registered to planning CT gave the opportunity to differentiate morphology better than by CT alone. Due to the small number of patients with complete MRI scans over time, we failed to detect a dose dependency of DARS and swallowing and voice disorder posttreatment.

Introduction

Worldwide, 686.000 people were newly diagnosed with head and neck cancer (HNC) in 2012. Approximately 376.000 people died of HNC the same year [1]. Standard of care of small tumors consists of surgery or radiotherapy (RT). In locally advanced cases, surgery is complemented by radiotherapy or concomitant chemo-irradiation. If there is no possibility of tumor resection or the patient refuses surgery, chemo-irradiation is the treatment of choice. Intensity Modulated RadioTherapy (IMRT) is standard of care for radiooncological HNC treatment. Imaging integration into linear accelerators, so-called image guided radiotherapy (IGRT), and continuously improved imaging techniques before and during treatment has extended the therapeutic window. With modern techniques, the reduction of radiation-induced side effects is the second main goal besides tumor control. Radiation oncologists distinguish two types of radiation-induced side effects: acute onset, day 1 –day 90, of radiotherapy and late or chronic onset from day 91 for the remainder of life [2]. Late side effects may detrimentally influence quality of life (QoL) of HNC patients.

Irregular shaped HNC volumes and the surrounding normal tissue also called organs at risk (OAR) benefit from the development of IMRT and IGRT technology [35]. Due to the steep dose gradients between the Planning Target Volume (PTV) and OAR, differences between planned and delivered dosage may have different consequences than in conventional radiotherapy (RT) [6]. By IGRT, it is possible to reduce safety margins for set-up, which leads to lower dose exposure of OARs. Adaptive planning compensates anatomical changes and is realized during the course of RT (i.e. shrinkage of tumor, nodal masses, weight loss and resolving postoperative changes/edema) [7, 8]. When OAR doses can be minimized, this should be reflected in patients´ reported QoL and better OAR-function after IMRT/IGRT, as shown for salivary glands early in the IMRT era [9, 10].

The swallowing organs are situated within all of the mentioned structures (tumor, organs at risk) both inside and outside, but near the target volume for RT planning.

Eisbruch et al. developed the concept of dysphagia aspiration related structures (DARS) [11]. DARS are comprised of base of tongue, floor of mouth, superior and middle pharyngeal constrictor as well as crico-pharyngeal muscles, and the proximal part of the esophagus. The supraglottic and transglottic larynx are voice structures and build the barrier for aspiration and penetration to the lungs. In 2002, Eisbruch et al. published data on objective assessment of dysphagia with a detailed explanation of pathophysiology of deglutition disorders after concurrent chemo-irradiation [12].

IGRT is usually carried out using CT imaging. The novel approach of magnetic resonance guided radiotherapy (MRgRT) involving integration of static magnetic resonance imaging (MRI) into linear accelerators is a topic of current research. However, with interfractional repetitive static MRI during the course of treatment, it might be possible to explore the principle advantages of MRgRT. The aim of this work was to assess the changes of DARS during and after radiooncological treatment of HNC by co-registration of static MRI and planning CT scans for better delineation of DARS in order to detect morphological changes over the course of RT. The second aim was to compare these dosimetric and volumetric data to results of functional investigation of swallowing and voice.

Material and methods

At the department of radiooncology, University Hospital of the Technical University of Munich (TUM), 780 patients with head and neck cancer received various IMRT treatments between 1 January 2008 and 31 December 2015. Patients in this analysis were scheduled for a follow-up by 31 December2016. Thirteen patients were alive at the time of retrospective data acquisition and analysis. For prospective investigation, all surviving patients were invited. Only five patients consented to swallowing and speech tests. Eight patients refused participation.

Every patient with head and neck cancer treated at our department is examined prior to RT planning by means of MRI. The MR images are co-registered to the contrast enhanced planning CT-scan (3mm slice thickness). Patients are fixed for head and neck cancer RT with a 5-point thermoplastic mask system, which is individually adjusted to the patient. For this retrospective analysis, patients with MRI scans from three different points of time were included, representing all DARS recommended by Christianen et al. [13]. Patients with every kind of head and neck cancer, adjuvant or definitive treatment intention, independent of age, sex, and race were enrolled. Only 17 patients fulfilled this inclusion criteria. Upon commencement, there were no dose constraints concerning DARS implemented into the RT plan optimization for head and neck cancer. Thirteen of the seventeen patients were treated by definitive, while four of the seventeen received adjuvant RT with concomitant chemotherapy between 1 May 2012 and 31 August 2015. All had static MRIs performed prior to RT (MRI 1), at 40Gy (MRI 2) and six weeks post RT (MRI 3). For patient characteristics, see Table 1.

Table 1. Patient characteristics of all patients.

Parameter Patient characteristics
Age mean 53.9 years [19–67]
Sex female: n = 6 (35%); male: n = 11 (65%)
Risk factors nicotine abuse (prior / ongoing) n = 12 (71%)
alcohol addiction n = 10 (59%)
poor hygiene and dental status n = 1 (6%)
Histopathological findings squamous cell carcinoma n = 15 (88%)
others n = 2 (12%)
Tumor site oropharynx and oral cavity n = 8 (47%)
hypopharynx n = 3 (17,6%)
naso-oro-hypopharynx n = 3 (17,6%)
oro-hypopharynx n = 2 (11,8%)
parotid gland cancer n = 1 (5,9%)
Tumor site of patients with FEES examination base of tongue n = 3
oro-hypopharynx n = 1
tonsillar fossa n = 1
TNM classification (according to UICC 2010) T1: n = 1 (6%)
pT1b pN2c cM1(PUL) G1
T2: n = 5 (29%)
pT2 pN1 cM0 G3
pT2 pN2a cM0
cT2 cN2b cM0 G3
cT2 cN3 cM0 G2
cT2 pN3 cM0 G3
T3: n = 6 (35%)
pT3 pN2a cM0 G3
cT3 cN2b cM0 G2
cT3 cN2c cM0 G2
cT3 cN2c cM0 G3
cT3 cN2c cM0 G2
cT3 cN2c cM0 G3
T4: n = 5 (29%)
cT4a cN2c cM0 G2
cT4a cN2c cM0 G2
cT4b pN2b cM0 G4
cT4 cN2c cM0 G2
cT4 cN3 cM0 G3
UICC-stage (according to UICC 2010) II: n = 1
III: n = 0
IVA: n = 8
IVB: n = 7
IVC: n = 1

Five patients were treated by a simultaneously integrated boost (SIB) concept (adjuvant n = 1 and definitive n = 4, 1/4 after R2 excision of lymph node metastasis for cancer of unknown primary (CUP) syndrome. One patient was re-irradiated due to local recurrence prior to swallowing investigations.

The static MRI scans were performed for MRI 1 (on average 16 days prior to RT), MRI 2 (during RT at 40 Gy) and MRI 3 (on average 54 days after RT).

DARS were delineated on static MRI scans by one physician (CM), trained by a senior physician (SP). The MRI scans were acquired in axial, sagittal, and coronal slices in T2 (stir) sequence. T1 sequence ± gadolinium was done in axial and coronal (fat saturated) sections.

Contouring of DARS as recommended [13] was modified: the proximal part of the esophagus was defined in the sagittal slice in diameter and the base of tongue included the floor of mouth. The cervical part of the esophagus was excluded. As relevant organs for function of voice and prevention of aspiration, the supraglottic and transglottic larynx were defined as DARS (Fig 1).

Fig 1. DARS delineation on static MRI according to Christianen et al.

Fig 1

Overview of the eight OARs relevant for swallowing in sagittal MRI-slice (superior pharyngeal constrictor muscle (red), middle pharyngeal constrictor muscle (light blue), inferior pharyngeal constrictor muscle (yellow), crico-pharyngeal muscle (dark blue), proximal part of esophagus (dark green), posterior one third of the tongue and floor of mouth–base of tongue (orange), supraglottic larynx (purple) und transglottic larynx (light green).

All patients were treated by IMRT or helical TomoTherapy (n = 14 with VMAT (Rapid ArcTM, Varian Medical Systems, Inc. Palo Alto, CA, USA; n = 3 with HI-ART TomoTherapy, Accuray, Madison, WI, USA).

The treatment parameters are given in Table 2.

Table 2. Information concerning treatment of all patients in the retrospective cohort.

Surgical Treatment
Tumor resection n = 6 (35%)
Neck dissection n = 5 (29%)
Radiooncological treatment
Intent of radiotherapy
Definitive radiotherapy [total dose 70–70.4 Gy] n = 12
Adjuvant radiotherapy [total dose 64–64.2 Gy] n = 4
Definitive radiotherapy after neck dissection n = 1
Combined modality treatment
Concomitant chemotherapy n = 14 (82%)
Technique of radiotherapy
Simultaneous integrated boost (by VMAT or TomoTherapy) n = 5
Volumetric Modulated Arc Therapy (VMAT) n = 14
TomoTherapy n = 3
RT parameters
Median single dose 2.0Gy [1.7–2.2Gy]
Median total dose 70.0Gy [64.0–70.4Gy]
Median PTV (50Gy) 1199.7cm3 [591.6–1805.5cm3]
Median duration of RT 49 days [44–53 days]
One patient was re-irradiated because of local recurrence (70.4 Gy as SIB in first course and 50.4Gy in second course, both with concomitant platin-based chemotherapy).

All planning CT scans and RT plans were rigidly co-registered. For RT planning, a minimum of two planning CT scans is required–one prior to RT and a second at 40 Gy for boost planning. DARS were delineated on MRI and all planning CT scans. The treatment planning system calculates a plan sum dose volume histogram (DVH), which was read out for each single DARS. The mean dose (Dmean) representing the dose in 50% of the volume for each DARS was read out.

In the second and prospective part of the study, five of the seventeen patients participated in a voice and swallowing test at the ENT department. The period between RT and examination was on average 22.2 months. For patient characteristics of the prospective cohort, see Table 3.

Table 3. Patient characteristics of the five patients of the prospective cohort (SCC–squamous cell carcinoma, ECE- extracapsular extension of lymph nodes, VMAT–volumetric modulated arc therapy, MV–megavolt, SQB–sequential boost, SIB–simultaneous integrated boost, qd7 –repetition every seven days).

Prospective patient no. No. 1 (female) No. 2 (male) No. 3 (female) No. 4 (male) No. 5 (male)
Age at diagnosis (yrs.) 53 59 54 56 63
Follow-up interval end of RT—examination 4.26 yrs. 3.6 yrs. and since Re-RT: 0.5 yrs. 2.68 yrs. 1.33 yrs. 1.48 yrs.
Tumor localization oropharynx (base of tongue) Initial: oropharynx (base of tongue, tonsil, dorsal pharyngeal wall) oropharynx (tonsil) oropharynx (base of tongue) oropharynx (base of tongue, tongue lateral side)
recurrence: dorsal pharyngeal wall
TNM stage cT3 cN2c cM0 G3; SCC Initial cT4a cN2c cM0 G2, SCC cT3 cN2c cM0 pT3 pN2a (1/25ECE-) cM0 R1 G3, SCC cT4a cN2c cM0 G2, SCC
SCC, p16 positive
Rec.: rcT2 rcN2c rcM0 G2, SCC
Lung disease after RT chron. bronchitis no no No Pneumonia
RT concept definitive VMAT initial: definitive VMAT, 6 MV-photons, SIB definitive VMAT adjuvant VMAT definitive VMAT
6 MV-photons, SQB 6 MV-photons, SQB 6 MV-photons, SQB 2 Gy to 50 Gy 6 MV-photons, SQB 2 Gy to 50 Gy
1.7/2.0/2.2 Gy to 54.4/64.0/70.4Gy
2 Gy to 50 Gy 2 Gy to 50 Gy
Boost: to 70 Gy
Boost: to 66 Gy
recurrence: re-irradiation by TomoTherapy;
Boost: to 70 Gy
Boost 1: to 60 Gy
6-MV-photons 1.8 Gy to 50.4 Gy (only FDG-PET-pos. tumor region and lymph nodes)
Boost 2: to 70 Gy
Concomitant chemotherapy Cisplatin 20 mg/m2 Initial: Cisplatin 20 mg/m2 Cisplatin 20 mg/m2 d1-5 and d29-33 Cisplatin 40 mg/m2/d qd7 Cisplatin 40 mg/m2/d qd7
d1-5 and d29-33 d1-5 and d29-33 6 cycles 5 cycles
Rec.: Cisplatin 40 mg/m2 qd7; 5 cycles
Local tumor control yes no (3 yrs. after initial RT) yes Yes Yes
yes, after re-irradiation
Neck Dissection no no no Yes No
Feeding tube at time of swallowing investigation no no no No Yes

Three German language, standardized, and validated questionnaires were completed without assistance by the patients themselves for evaluation of subjective voice and swallowing disorders and as well as related quality of life (QoL), i.e. Anderson Dysphagia Inventory (ADI-D) to report dysphagia, the Voice Handicap Index (VHI) to report on dysphonia, and the questionnaire of the European Organisation for Research and Treatment of Cancer concerning quality of life in head and neck cancer patients (EORTC QLQ- H&N 35). All questionnaires have been validated for the German language and are used routinely at the Ear, Neck and Throat (ENT) department of the Technical University of Munich.

Additionally, both a fiber-optic endoscopic evaluation of swallowing (FEES) with different consistencies and a voice test were performed. The procedure was performed by a senior consultant (SG) of the ENT department (TUM), who specialized in phoniatrics and pediatric audiology. Rosenbeks 8-points-penetration-aspiration-scale (PAS) [14, 15] was used to determine the severity of penetration and aspiration, while the Functional Oral Intake Scale (FOIS) classified by Crary [16] was employed to assess the oral food intake. The FOIS classification was done by the senior consultant (SG) of ENT department after FEES investigation. FEES is the standard procedure to detect disorders during the swallowing process by endonasal observation at the ENT department of TUM. Video fluoroscopy is performed only in some cases in order to avoid unnecessary x-ray stress to the patient. The voice test was carried out by a speech and language therapist. Objective assessment of the patient’s phonation was done by automatic voice processing. Using this computer-aided analysis, the vocal range profile was determined. For classification of the severity of vocal disorder, the Dysphonia Severity Index (DSI) according to Wyuts [17] was applied. For graduation of classification systems mentioned previously, please see supplementary information.

Ethics

Both the prospective study and final retrospective protocol were approved by the ethics committee of the medical faculty of the TUM (03/16/2016: 328/16 S). All procedures performed in this study involving human participants were in accordance with the ethical standards of the institutional and/or national research committee and with the 1964 Helsinki Declaration and its later amendments or comparable ethical standards. As for the retrospective analysis, all data was anonymized and the consent was waived by the ethics committee of the medical faculty of the TUM. For clinical investigation and questionnaires of the prospective cohort, the study protocol was amended by the ethics committee of the medical faculty of the TUM (07/21/2016: 328/16 S). Informed written consent was obtained from all five individual participants included in the prospective part of the study.

Statistics

The retrospective analysis of DARS changes in MRI and CT over time were done on imaging datasets of 17 patients. For each patient, eight DARS were recorded at three different points of time on MRI, and dosimetric parameters were analyzed after co-registration with the planning CT scan and RT dose matrix. Volume data of each DARS was calculated by iPlannet-software of Brainlab, Munich, Germany.

RT dose data was read out from the RT planning system Varian Medical Systems, Inc. Palo Alto, CA, USA 2013.

SPSS software (IBM SPSS Statistics version 21) was used for statistical analyses.

We calculated the volume difference between MRI 1 and MRI 2; MRI 2 and MRI 3 and MRI 1 and MRI 3. The paired t-test to analyze changes in the volume (differences) of the DARS and scatter plots were used for the explorative data analysis. The dose-volume relationship of the retrospective cohort was analyzed by linear regression. Also, a dose-dependence of dysphagia (measure–total applied dose) or dysphonia (measure total dose to the transglottic larynx) was analyzed. All information was extracted from patient charts. The analysis of this hypothesized relation was done by binary logistic regression. The level of significance p was set to ≤ 0.05.

Only five of seventeen patients were able to take part in the prospective part of the study. Due to the small sample size of only five prospective investigated patients, the results of the swallowing and voice examinations are only statistically described.

Results

Retrospective part: Change of DARS volume

Static MRI 1 was defined as basic data set. The paired t-test showed a significant change in the volume of four DARS: superior pharyngeal constrictor (MRI 1 to 2: p = 0.035; MRI 1 to 3: p = 0.002), middle pharyngeal constrictor (MRI 1 to MRI 3: p = 0.019), cricopharyngeal muscle (MRI 1 of MRI 2: p = 0.38) and the proximal esophagus (MRI 1 of MRI 2: p = 0.16). There was a significant volume growth in three DARS (superior pharyngeal constrictor, middle pharyngeal constrictor, cricopharyngeal muscle) and a significant volume reduction in the proximal esophagus.

For each DARS, the mean dose (Dmean) was read out. The linear regression analysis could not detect any influence of Dmean of DARS on volume change of DARS. Thus, there was no dose-dependent change of DARS volume in the 17 retrospective investigated patients.

Supraglottic and transglottic larynx as voice OARs (DARS) maintained a stable volume over time. Only the transglottic larynx showed a trend for change (p = 0.055).

Based on scatter plot analysis, there was no dose-related change in DARS volume over time.

Dose-symptom relationship (swallowing and dysphonia)

All patient charts were checked for details on swallowing function and dysphonia (time points: pre-therapeutic, during RT and at follow-up).

The binary logistic regression (Table 3) showed a statistic significant (p = 0.007) 7.5 times higher risk for suffering from dysphagia within the first six months after RT when Dmean to DARS is exceeded by steps of 1 Gy for all DARS. The risk of dysphagia six to 12 months after RT increases significantly (p = 0.015) by factor 4.7 with the same increment of exceeding mean dose (Dmean).

There was no dose dependency of Dmean to the transglottic larynx and dysphonia (within the first six months: regression coefficient = 0.118; p = 0.808; Exp(ß) = 1.125 and from months six to twelve regression coefficient = -0.118; p = 0.808; Exp(ß) = 0.889, see Table 4). Furthermore, no correlation between volume changes, dysphagia, and dysphonia was found. The retrospective analysis was limited to notes in patient charts concerning normal or swallowing dysfunction and dysphonia and normal voice. Therefore, it was impossible to test whether DARS volume changes influenced the development of late swallowing and voice toxicities.

Table 4. Binary logistic regression for influence of total dose (OAR) on development of dysphagia within the first 6 months and 6 to 12 months after the end of RT.

Regression coefficient β Standard error Wald df Sig. Exp(β)
1–6 months 2.015 0.753 7.164 1 0.007 7.500
6–12 months 1.540 0.636 5.863 1 0.015 4.667

Prospective part: Functional examination of voice and swallowing

Five of the thirteen surviving patients participated in prospective voice and swallowing tests. FEES described post radiogenic (edematous) morphological findings in three of the five patients and a reduced sensitivity in four of five patients (Table 5).

Table 5. Results of FEES investigation.

Results of FEES Patients n = 5
Edema 3 (60%)
reduced sensitivity 4 (80%)
aspiration (liquid) 2 (40%)
penetration (liquid / pulp) 3 (60%)
Residuals 3 (60%)
disorder of swallowing function grade 3 to 6 (FOIS scale) 5 (100%)

The functional swallowing test with pulpy consistency was classified as conspicuous in all five subjects (PAS 1–3). The functional test with liquids resulted in noticeable findings in three subjects with a PAS 2, 4 and 6. For solids (rusk), a considerable difficulty was seen in all subjects (PAS 4 and 6 in two subjects), which were compensated effectively. Residuals remained in the swallowing tract in three subjects. All subjects needed to drink after oral intake. In summary, disorder of swallowing function has been diagnosed in all subjects (grade 3 to 6 according to FOIS scale). Aspiration of liquids occurred in two subjects. Penetration was observed in three subjects (one with liquid and two with pulp). There was no penetration or aspiration of solids.

The evaluation of the patient reported Anderson Dysphagia Inventory–D (German) (ADI-D) showed an average total value of 59.2, which correlates to "rather conspicuous" in the Bauer and Rosanowski Scale.

The individual classification on the Penetration Aspiration Scale (PAS) evaluated by a senior physician of phoniatrics resulted in a total value of 48 ("very conspicuous"). Three subjects (total value of 55 to 61) had a "rather conspicuous" and another subject (total value of 76) reached a "rather inconspicuous" on the PAS system.

Dysphonia ranged from a mild to high degree at the Dysphonia Severity Index (DSI) scale.

The Voice Handicap Index (VHI) revealed a moderate voice disorder in one patient. Four had no subjective voice disorder. In the symptom scales of the EORTC QLQ-H & N35, only low scale scores were achieved for most categories (Fig 2).

Fig 2. Results of EORTC QLQ H&N35 questionnaire (results given in % of patients reporting these symptoms).

Fig 2

Besides problems caused by xerostomia (dry (100%) and sticky saliva (63%)), only minor discomfort in respect to treatment related symptoms was reported by the majority of patients. All results of the prospective swallowing investigations are depicted in Table 6.

Table 6. Summary of results of the prospective investigations.

Parameter Proband 1 Proband 2 Proband 3 Proband 4 Proband 5
Swallowing investigation
Morphology post RT / edema inconspicuous post RT / edema inconspicuous post RT /edema
Sensibility reduced reduced reduced reduced normal
FOIS Level 4 6 5 5 3
Aspiration yes yes no no no
Penetration no yes no yes yes
Voice investigation
DSI moderate dysphonia moderate dysphonia light dysphonia slight dysphonia profound dysphonia
Questionnaires
ADI-D rather conspicuous rather inconspicuous rather conspicuous rather conspicuous sure conspicuous
VHI moderate dysphonia no dysphonia no dysphonia no dysphonia no dysphonia
EORTC QLQ-H&N35 Mean (%) 72 38 34 38 41
Further Parameter
Logopedic training before investigation yes no yes no No
Recommendation for logopedic training after investigation yes yes no yes yes
Pulmonary symptoms or disease after RT chron. bronchitis no no no pneumonia
Age at investigation 57 63 57 57 65
TNM at Diagnosis T3 T4+rcT2 T3 T3 T4
Interval RT—investigation [months] 48 6 28 12 16
Total dose RT [Gy] 70 70,4 (+50,4 –reirradiation) 70 66 70
Local recurrence no yes no no no
Neck dissection no no no yes no
Impairment of movement yes no yes yes yes
Feeding tube dependence at investigation no no no no yes

Discussion

For detailed recontouring of DARS, static MRI is much more suitable than cine MRI [18]. Static MRI scans acquired at three different points of time were co-registered to the first (prior to start of RT) and the second (for boost RT) planning CT scans. T1 and T2 sequences were used for delineation of eight DARS as recommended [13].

Despite changes in volume in four of eight DARS over time (3/8 DARS increase and 1/8 decrease in volume), we did not find a correlation between DARS Dmean and volume progressive change. In three DARS (superior pharyngeal constrictor, middle pharyngeal constrictor, cricopharyngeal muscle), we noticed a gradual increase in volume. Ricchetti et al. showed by recontouring OARS on weekly repeated planning CT scans over seven weeks of RT in 91.6% of their 26 patients with oropharyngeal cancer an enlargement of the volume of the constrictor muscles [19] and other OARs until week five. They mentioned that once a significant change in volume over the baseline was recognized, this remained for the following weeks. In our investigation, the last MRI was performed six weeks post RT, supporting the results of Ricchetti et al. During the time we treated the patients of our retrospective analysis, we did not use special dose constraints for DARS. Popovtzer et al. showed a Dmean > 60 Gy to the constrictor muscles will change the volume of these muscles detected by MRI three months post RT [20]. This group pointed towards pathophysiological changes in soft tissue of OARs in twelve different head and neck cancer patients, indicating that underlying effects of inflammation and consecutive edema were in fact a result of acute irradiation induced damage. Also, in our patients, both inflammation and edema could provide an explanation for the increase in DARS volume over time.

Fast swallowing function registration can be done by cine MR or video fluoroscopy as objective investigation methods. Video fluoroscopy, despite X-ray exposure of the patient, is the gold standard of objective assessment of dysphagia. In contrast, FEES is an endonasal procedure performed by a physician without exposing the patient to radiation.

The retrospective analysis was based on notes in patient charts concerning dysphagia and dysphonia. Dmean to DARS revealed an increased risk of dysphagia by a factor of 7.5 for the first six months post RT for every additional Gray above average Dmean to DARS. For the interval six to twelve months post RT, this factor drops to 4.6 for every additional applied Gray of average Dmean to DARS. Thus, the risk of developing dysphagia immediately after the end of RT up to six months thereafter is higher than in the second half year post RT. Perhaps, this is a finding caused by prolonged acute dysphagia as a consequence of radiation induced pharyngeal mucositis and consecutive edema. In 2007, Levendag et al. presented data concerning Dmean of RT to superior and middle constrictor muscle inducing severe dysphagia. They found a steep dose-effect relationship for late dysphagia: “increased probability of dysphagia of 19% with every additional 10 Gy” [21]. Patients of this trial were treated by 3D-conformal radiotherapy or IMRT and in some cases, with a brachytherapy boost. Dysphagia was assessed by patient reported outcome with EORTC H&N-35 and ADI questionnaires. For DARS delineation, the authors used the planning CT scans.

Dmean of DARS had no influence on the development of dysphonia in our trial. Despite whole-field IMRT for oropharyngeal or cancer of unknown primary, Sanguineti et al. reported only mild voice changes determined by RT dose to the larynx. The calculated threshold was Larynx Dmean ≤ 50 Gy [22].

Charters et al. performed a systematic review and meta-analysis of the impact of dosimetry to DARS [23]. They elucidated that despite the many papers published on this topic, the results on dose-effect relationships are neither homogeneous nor are the underlying investigation methods heterogeneous. It is a matter of fact that beam path dose of RT will touch DARS and lead to acute and late side effects. Especially for long term survivors, this will pose a struggle for years to come. For instance, Peponi et al. described the long-term results and treatment outcome for a group of patients with cancer of the larynx, oropharynx, and hypopharynx. They implemented a midline protection contour for RT planning from below the hyoid to the 2/3 cervical vertebra in order to reduce dose to the constrictor muscle. This midline contour was drawn outside the PTV. The 5-year local control rate was 75% and no treatment failure at the region of the midline protection contour was detected. Thirty-two months after RT, grade 3 and 4 toxicities were 10% [24]. Reducing side effects by sparing OARs in general while ensuring that target volumes receive the prescribed dose is the advantage of IMRT and should be the standard of care in head and neck cancer RT. Particularly parotid gland sparing leads to remarkable progress in reducing the incidence of xerostomia and aids swallowing function by better gliding of food [10].

In terms of local tumor control for patients with locally advanced squamous cell head and neck cancer, the ESCALOX trial [25] hypothesized a benefit of 15% at 2 years when a dose escalation up to 80.5 Gy to the GTV of the primary tumor and lymph nodes (≥ 2cm) is applied, while taking into account protection of OAR [26]. The literature review of Charters et al. [23] displays the inhomogeneity of DARS, the different dose parameters to DARS, and heterogeneous use of important functional outcome parameters (i.e. aspiration and stricture of DARS) analyzed in detail of 23 studies. Despite these obvious limitations, the authors conclude that impairment of the constrictor pharyngeal muscles is important for development of dysphagia. A radiotherapy dose threshold of 50 Gy is given for constrictor pharyngeal muscles. Despite protection of DARS, it is important to prescribe and apply a tumoricidal RT dose to the cancer. Sometimes, this may be detrimental to the swallowing function, but it is a crucial factor in saving patients´ lives. From the mentioned 23 studies [23], only 11 used gold standard examination methods (video fluoroscopy or FEES) to classify swallowing disorders.

For our objective evaluation, five patients participated in a voice and swallowing test.

In general, patients assessed the voice and swallowing function subjectively better than the observer. Other authors observed similar results, discussing an accommodation of the patient to the dysfunction of swallowing [27]. In contrast to subjective patient rating, FEES examination revealed in 3 of 5 patients a disorder of penetration and aspiration for liquids. Disorder of swallowing was not recognized by the patient. For pulpy and solid consistency, an impairment was detected in all patients. A dysphagia FOIS level 3–6 stresses these results. Two patients suffered from aspiration and three other patients were diagnosed with penetration (PAS). In a previous meta-analysis of deglutition disorders extracted from 17 studies including 229 patients, Porto de Toledo et al. reported a high frequency of aspiration in 28.6% of patients immediately posttreatment and during the following three months [28]. For the course of six months posttreatment, this meta-analysis revealed a penetration of fluids above the vocal folds and an impairment of laryngeal elevation. In contrast to our patients, in all studies, a baseline pretreatment imaging examination for swallowing (video fluoroscopy or fiber optic endoscopic evaluation of swallowing) was available. All kinds of RT techniques, fractionation schedules and chemotherapy schemes were included. The pretreatment investigations confirmed an aspiration in 8.4% of all meta-analysis patients. In only five studies, the pretreatment status concerning penetration of food, liquids or saliva was determined with a frequency of 10.5%. The penetration rate increased posttreatment up to 33.6% at the time point longer than six months posttreatment. This fact is limited since only three studies had observed this parameter. Aspiration during the first three months posttreatment was 28.6% and declined in the following three months to 17.6%. Later, the aspiration frequency was 16.2%. As for safety, the increasing percentage of patients with pharyngeal residues from less than six months (47.1%) to six months posttreatment (61.8%) is alarming. A higher frequency of patients with pharyngeal residues was reported after a follow-up more than six months with 73.8%, but only four out of 17 studies presented data at this point of time. Pharyngeal residues should be taken seriously, because they are precursors of aspiration. In summary, a higher frequency of deglutition disorders posttreatment compared to baseline parameters was demonstrated in cases of multimodality treatment.

From the studies analyzed within the meta-analysis [28], only the trial of Patterson et al. [29] used FEES as we did. They observed in 8 of 97 patients a silent aspiration at three months posttreatment. Only two groups presented data using the penetration aspiration scale (PAS). At our head and neck cancer center, FEES with PAS classification is the standard of care in routine examination today.

In all patients, a posttreatment change of speech and voice (mild to severe) was diagnosed.

Heijnen et al. reviewed literature until 2016 concerning dysphagia, speech, and voice changes after radiooncological treatment of HNC patients. They reported an improvement of voice after RT, but disorders of swallowing and oral intake. Quality of life was also reduced after RT [30]. Finally, the authors mentioned the heterogeneous group of patients and the diversity of applied examination methods to describe functional outcome after RT. It is hard to compare results of different trials because of heterogeneous measures.

In the prospective part of our trial, five patients participated in the Anderson Dysphagia Inventory (ADI-D) and the Voice Handicap Index (VHI) for subjective patient assessment in German language. For ADI-D, an average result of 59.2 points was calculated, indicating a rather conspicuous swallowing function posttreatment. In contrast to the objective voice analysis, only in one case did a patient report moderate dysphonia. For patient reported quality of life after head and neck cancer treatment (EORTC QLQ-H & N35), only low scores (1 –no impairment, 2 –little impairment; 3 –moderate impairment; 4 –strong impairment) were achieved for most categories. As known from routine follow-up examinations, all patients complained about xerostomia (63% about sticky saliva, 43% mentioned swallowing impairment).

The RT of head and neck cancer is associated with side effects reducing QoL for patients during and post therapy. Late RT-induced toxicity caused by morphological and functional changes of swallowing structures impairs QoL. Many patients are not aware of the protective function of coughing during swallowing. Because of loss of cough reflex due to reduced sensitivity after radiation, caused for instance by fibrosis or ulceration, patients suffer from silent aspiration and falsely consider themselves safe because of misinterpretation of cough. Without this reflex, penetration and aspiration is not recognized. It is important to be cognizant of this pathology, because aspiration can induce pneumonia. In some cases, patients die due to aspiration-induced pneumonia, especially long-term survivors (mortality 20–65%) [31]. Therefore, Eisbruch and colleagues developed the concept of DARS (dysphagia / aspiration related structures) [32] by using CT images early in the IMRT era. Knowledge about pathophysiology and development of deglutition disorders is important in order to prevent patients developing detrimental sequelae. FEES and video-fluoroscopy offer real-time insights into the swallowing process.

The retrospective investigations of DARS of 17 HNC patients contoured on static MRI and co-registered to CT-based RT plans were complemented by prospective clinical swallowing and voice examinations. Unfortunately, only five patients could be investigated prospectively from this group. This small sample size rendered it impossible to safely estimate dose-function effects.

Conclusion

By co-registration of static MR to planning CT scans, it was possible to delineate DARS better than with CT imaging alone. Over the course of RT and posttreatment of HNC, an increase in DARS volume was detected. With only 17 patients in the retrospective part, it was impossible to clarify the dosimetric impact on swallowing function posttreatment. Five prospectively investigated patients had changes in swallowing function, despite the fact that most patients did not recognize swallowing dysfunction.

Supporting information

S1 Data

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S1 File. List of abbreviations.

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S1 Table. Grading of ADI-D.

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S2 Table. 8-point-penetrations-aspirations-scale (PAS) by Rosenbek [13].

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S3 Table. Scale of oral food intake (FOIS) by Crary et al. [15].

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S4 Table. Classification of dysphonia by using DSI-values defined by Wyuts [23].

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Acknowledgments

The authors wish to thank all patients who participated in the study and the team at the phoniatric department of the Ear, Nose and Throat Department at the Technical University of Munich. We thank Dr. Sabrina Renfro-Kohl for her kind revision of the English manuscript and Dr. Victoria Kehl for her kind check of the statistical data.

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the manuscript and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

The author(s) received no specific funding for this work.

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MRI-determined Changes of Dysphagia / Aspiration related Structures (DARS) during and after Radiotherapy: influence on Function and Quality of Life (QoL) of Head and Neck Cancer Patients

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Reviewer #1: The authors performed a retrospective study of 17 patients with head and neck cancers to investigate the usefulness of MRI before, during and after radiation therapy.

Although the focus of this paper seems to be important in future radiotherapy, this paper has some serious problems.

First of all, there were only 17 cases in this study. In addition, this study included tumors at various sites and stages. There were also various treatments for tumors. The possibility that these tumor sites and treatments affected dysphagia, dysphonia, or other symptoms cannot be ruled out, and it is difficult to say that the scientific validity of the results of this study is guaranteed.

The authors should increase the number of cases and unify the tumor site and treatment.

Other remarks are provided below.

1) The introduction should be a little shorter. For some sentences, the authors should move them to the discussion part.

2) I think that abbreviations should be unified. Please consider whether to write abbreviations in the text or at the end of the manuscript.

3) The authors should unify the description of date. “1.1.2008” or “5/2012”

Reviewer #2: This is a well written paper regarding MRI-based evaluation of Dysphagia/Aspiration Related Stractures(DARS).

Among 780 patients with head and neck cancer, 17 patients who had MRI before RT (MRI 1), at 40Gy (MRI 2) and 6 weeks after RT (MRI 3) were selected and retrospectively analyzed after the DARS were delineated on MRI and CT.

Furthermore, as a prospective part of the study, the authors carried out voice and swallowing tests in five of the 17 patients.

As the results, they found statistically significant changes in volume of four DARS; including increases and a decrease in volume depending on the sub-component of the DARS. However, there was no dose dependence of total dose to DARS in the alternation of volumes.

From the symptom described on the patient charts, dysphagia was related to the mean dose of DARS, but there was no significant relationship between volume changes of DARS and dysphagia.

Impression:

The authors investigated well in anatomical and functional changes related to DARS. However, they seemed to fail in constructing a definite conclusion from the findings they observed, although each finding is valuable itself. It will be acceptable for publication if the authors describes more of other related studies regarding this theme, and make it clear that what’s new this study(studies) could be added to the current shared knowledges.

Questions:

How the author selected 5 patients who participate in prospective study from the 17 patients?

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Minor points

Page 4, paragraph 2, last line: A full stop (and perhaps some preceding words) is missing.

Reviewer #3: The goal of the authors of the manuscript is to the potential of MR-image guidance for RT of head and

neck tumors because of better discrimination and resolution of soft tissues as DARS in MRI compared to CT.

The manuscript is poorly written and the authors do not respect the basic rules of scientific writing. Some sentences are impossible to understand due to the apparent absence of knowledge of some rules of english writing

The authors are not consistent in their use of acronyms. acronyms must be defined first completely in english with acronyms written between parenthesess after the definition

In a scientific paper the authors must always assume that their readers do not know fully the content of the paper and thus must be crystal clear. They must "take the readers gently by the hand" to present their scientific goal, to explain the materials and methods used, to justify the statistical methods used, to display clearly their data and then discuss seriously theirs results and especially the limitations of their study if there are any.

1) This abstract is unacceptable full of acronyms not previously defined

The table of ACRONYMS is at the end of the manuscript !!!!!!!!!!

Integration of MRI into RT-planning gives the opportunity to delineate DARS more precisely

for RT. DARS are important for QoL in H&N patients since late effects cause dysfunction. By

MRgRT improved DARS-contouring and adaption during RT is possible. 17 H&N-patients

(treated 5/2012 - 8/2015) were analyzed retrospectively. 14/17 had concomitant chemotherapy.

Median time RT- phoniatric evaluation was 1.78 years [range 0.42-4.26]. Patients were treated

by IMRT median single dose: 2Gy [1.7-2.2Gy] and cumulative dose: 70Gy [64-70.4Gy]. DARS

were delineated on MRI and planning CT scans and co-registered with all RT plans. 5/17

patients participated in a prospective voice and swallowing test (last RT – examination: 22.2

months (average)). For PRO Anderson Dysphagia Inventory, Voice Handicap Index and

EORTC QLQ- H&N 35 were applied.

FEES, voice test and automatic voice processing were used for objective assessment.

There was neither a dose dependence of Dmean DARS volume-changes over time nor of

dysphonia and no correlation between volume changes, dysphagia or dysphonia. One additional

Gy on Dmean DARS causes a 7.5fold risk to suffer from early (first 6 months after end of RT)

dysphagia and 4.7fold later than 6 months. By FEES 3/5 patients were diagnosed with post

radiogenic changes of morphology and 4/5 with reduced sensitivity. Functional swallowing test

detected disturbances in all cases. Dysphonia had a high variation. Swallowing related QoL

was "rather conspicuous". Patients ranked themselves good in EORTC QLQ-H & N35.

Every additional Gy on Dmean of DARS increases the risk for late dysphagia and should be

avoided.

2) It is not acceptable that the authors do not make available extensively their data about patients for so-called ethical reasons. The anonymisation of patients is always possible and garantee the private life and the identity of all patients

3) It is not clear how the 17 patients includec in this study were chosen out of more 700 patients

4) The introduction is very poor

5) the Materials and Methods are not clear at all. There is none justification for any of the statistical method used. A Specialist in Biostatistics should be included among the authors

6) The inclusion of various tumors at different stages with very few patients for each stage is a big flaw of this study

7) The classification of the tumors is not explicit for any common reader

8) The presentation of the results is very confusing

9) the discussion must be completely be rewritten

A dramatic revision is mandatory

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Reviewer #1: The authors performed a retrospective study of 17 patients with head and neck cancers to investigate the usefulness of MRI before, during and after radiation therapy.

Although the focus of this paper seems to be important in future radiotherapy, this paper has some serious problems.

First of all, there were only 17 cases in this study. In addition, this study included tumors at various sites and stages. There were also various treatments for tumors. The possibility that these tumor sites and treatments affected dysphagia, dysphonia, or other symptoms cannot be ruled out, and it is difficult to say that the scientific validity of the results of this study is guaranteed.

The authors should increase the number of cases and unify the tumor site and treatment.

Answer: As the discussion indicates, there are only very few studies on this topic comprising a larger number of patients. All in all, this patient collective largely proves to be non-compliant. Not all patients are willing to tolerate the considerable amount of expenditure involved in conducting the necessary examinations. The small number of 17 retrospective patients is due to the required entirety of DARS imaging. Only patients with complete DARS imaging were included. All patients still alive at the time of the prospective study were invited. However, only five of these patients agreed to participate in the evaluation. We plan to carry out further swallowing examinations in a prospective follow-up study.

Other remarks are provided below.

1) The introduction should be a little shorter. For some sentences, the authors should move them to the discussion part.

Answer: We have revised and shortened the Introduction section.

2) I think that abbreviations should be unified. Please consider whether to write abbreviations in the text or at the end of the manuscript.

• All abbreviations have been named and set in parentheses after the first use of the term.

3) The authors should unify the description of date. “1.1.2008” or “5/2012”

Answer: All date descriptions have been uniformed.

Reviewer #2: This is a well written paper regarding MRI-based evaluation of Dysphagia/Aspiration Related Stractures(DARS).

Among 780 patients with head and neck cancer, 17 patients who had MRI before RT (MRI 1), at 40Gy (MRI 2) and 6 weeks after RT (MRI 3) were selected and retrospectively analyzed after the DARS were delineated on MRI and CT.

Furthermore, as a prospective part of the study, the authors carried out voice and swallowing tests in five of the 17 patients.

As the results, they found statistically significant changes in volume of four DARS; including increases and a decrease in volume depending on the sub-component of the DARS. However, there was no dose dependence of total dose to DARS in the alternation of volumes.

From the symptom described on the patient charts, dysphagia was related to the mean dose of DARS, but there was no significant relationship between volume changes of DARS and dysphagia.

Impression:

The authors investigated well in anatomical and functional changes related to DARS. However, they seemed to fail in constructing a definite conclusion from the findings they observed, although each finding is valuable itself. It will be acceptable for publication if the authors describes more of other related studies regarding this theme, and make it clear that what’s new this study(studies) could be added to the current shared knowledges.

Answer: In the last two years, other studies on this subject were compiled in various reviews due to the fact that the individual studies comprised only a small number of patients. These investigations were examined in detail in both the review and the individual publications.

Questions:

How the author selected 5 patients who participate in prospective study from the 17 patients?

Answer: All surviving patients at the time of our prospective study were invited. However, only five agreed to participate in the evaluation.

Minor points

Page 4, paragraph 2, last line: A full stop (and perhaps some preceding words) is missing.

Answer: The manuscript has been fully revised as recommended by Reviewer 3.

Reviewer #3: The goal of the authors of the manuscript is to the potential of MR-image guidance for RT of head and neck tumors because of better discrimination and resolution of soft tissues as DARS in MRI compared to CT.

The manuscript is poorly written and the authors do not respect the basic rules of scientific writing. Some sentences are impossible to understand due to the apparent absence of knowledge of some rules of english writing

Answer: We have taken this criticism to heart and implemented necessary changes and improvements in both our general and scientific style of writing. We have been careful to observe English language standards pertaining to correct spelling, punctuation, and common usage.

The authors are not consistent in their use of acronyms. acronyms must be defined first completely in english with acronyms written between parenthesess after the definition

Answer: We have ensured a thorough revision concerning this point as well.

In a scientific paper the authors must always assume that their readers do not know fully the content of the paper and thus must be crystal clear. They must "take the readers gently by the hand" to present their scientific goal, to explain the materials and methods used, to justify the statistical methods used, to display clearly their data and then discuss seriously theirs results and especially the limitations of their study if there are any.

Answer: We can affirm that we are well aware of this goal and have adapted our manuscript accordingly so that its contents can be fully understood and appreciated by non-professionals as well.

1) This abstract is unacceptable full of acronyms not previously defined

Answer: We would like to politely call to your attention that a table of acronyms can be found as a supplementary file.

The entire content has not only been adapted to all PlosOne requirements, but completely revised as well.

Integration of MRI into RT-planning gives the opportunity to delineate DARS more precisely

for RT. DARS are important for QoL in H&N patients since late effects cause dysfunction. By

MRgRT, (comma) improved DARS-contouring and adaption during RT is possible. 17 H&N-patients

(treated 5/2012 - 8/2015) were analyzed retrospectively. 14/17 had concomitant chemotherapy.

Median time RT- phoniatric evaluation was 1.78 years [range 0.42-4.26]. Patients were treated

by IMRT median single dose: 2Gy [1.7-2.2Gy] and cumulative dose: 70Gy [64-70.4Gy]. DARS

were delineated on MRI and planning CT scans and co-registered with all RT plans. 5/17

patients participated in a prospective voice and swallowing test (last RT – examination: 22.2

months (average)). For PRO Anderson Dysphagia Inventory, Voice Handicap Index and

EORTC QLQ- H&N 35 were applied.

FEES, voice test and automatic voice processing were used for objective assessment.

There was neither a dose dependence of Dmean DARS volume-changes over time nor of

dysphonia and no correlation between volume changes, dysphagia or dysphonia. One additional

Gy on Dmean DARS causes a 7.5fold risk to suffer from early (first 6 months after end of RT)

dysphagia and 4.7fold later than 6 months. By FEES 3/5 patients were diagnosed with post

radiogenic changes of morphology and 4/5 with reduced sensitivity. Functional swallowing test

detected disturbances in all cases. Dysphonia had a high variation. Swallowing related QoL

was "rather conspicuous". Patients ranked themselves good in EORTC QLQ-H & N35.

Every additional Gy on Dmean of DARS increases the risk for late dysphagia and should be

avoided.

2) It is not acceptable that the authors do not make available extensively their data about patients for so-called ethical reasons. The anonymisation of patients is always possible and garantee the private life and the identity of all patients

Answer: All data will be made accessible as anonymized raw data.

3) It is not clear how the 17 patients includec in this study were chosen out of more 700 patients

Answer: The precise method pertaining to the choice of patients from a total number of 780 patients was clearly explained and can be found in the Methods section.

4) The introduction is very poor

Answer: The Introduction has been revised in its entirety.

5) the Materials and Methods are not clear at all. There is none justification for any of the statistical method used. A Specialist in Biostatistics should be included among the authors

Answer: A statistician is amongst the authors. Moreover, the data has since been examined twice by other statisticians. Early on, the presented analysis had already been evaluated by our statistician.

6) The inclusion of various tumors at different stages with very few patients for each stage is a big flaw of this study

Answer: This is certainly the case. Patient selection for this study is limited, because complete MRI imaging of DARS is a prerequisite and vital criterion for inclusion in the study. MRIs were not performed for the purpose of DARS imaging, but for reasons of portrayal of the tumor and lymph nodes with the aim of contouring the target volume for radiation therapy. This explains the heterogeneity of the examined tumor patients.

7) The classification of the tumors is not explicit for any common reader

Answer: For details and explanation of tumor classification, we recommend further reading at ww.UICC.org.

8) The presentation of the results is very confusing

Answer: The presentation of the results has been exhaustively restructured.

9) the discussion must be completely be rewritten

Answer: Both the discussion and the entire paper have been rewritten. We thank you kindly for your valuable comments.

A dramatic revision is mandatory

Answer: This has indeed been implemented.

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Reviewer #1: Yes: Eiichiro Okazaki

Reviewer #2: No

Reviewer #3: No

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Decision Letter 1

Jason Chia-Hsun Hsieh

11 May 2020

PONE-D-19-32133R1

MRI-determined Changes of Dysphagia / Aspiration-Related Structures (DARS) during and after Radiotherapy: Influence on Function and Quality of Life (QoL) of Head and Neck Cancer Patients

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Dear Pigorsch,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we have decided that your manuscript does not meet our criteria for publication and must therefore be rejected.

Specifically:

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ACADEMIC EDITOR: Although the topic is interesting, two of the three reviewers gave a "rejection" to the manuscript. The two reasons include: (a) the too-small sample size and poor statistical power; (b) This small sample size rendered it impossible to estimate dose-function effects safely. A case series/report might be suitable for publication. 

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I am sorry that we cannot be more positive on this occasion, but hope that you appreciate the reasons for this decision.

Yours sincerely,

Jason CH Hsieh, M.D. Ph.D

Academic Editor

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Additional Editor Comments (if provided):

Although the topic is interesting, two of the three reviewers gave a "rejection" to the manuscript. The two reasons include: (a) the too-small sample size and poor statistical power; (b) This small sample size rendered it impossible to estimate dose-function effects safely. A case series or reports might be suitable for publication.

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: No

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: No

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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Reviewer #1: I confirmed the revised paper and the authors' response to the reviewer's comments.

I pointed out that the number of subjects in this study was very small (17 patients), which is not enough to obtain significant results. I think the authors' response to this indication is reasonable. Accumulation of a sufficient number of cases requires a lot of labor and cost. However, this fact does not make up for the small number of cases, and I think that the fact that sufficient cases have not been obtained in statistical studies is a huge disadvantage. I believe that the authors' responses are not sufficient answers regarding this statistical disadvantage. If there is not sufficient statistical proof, I recommend increasing the number of cases or writing a paper in the form of a case report.

Reviewer #2: (No Response)

Reviewer #3: The authors have made significant uimprovements to their manuscript and provided transparently their data.

Nevertheless, The number of quite different patients at different stages of their tumors enrolled in this study is a major flaw of this investigation.

The title and goal of this manuscript is "MRI-determined Changes of Dysphagia / Aspiration-Related Structures (DARS) during and after Radiotherapy: Influence on Function and Quality of Life (QoL) of Head and Neck Cancer Patients". This study was supposed to support the hypothesis according to which Function and Quality of Life (QoL) of Head and Neck Cancer Patients are significantly improved. This goal could not be reached with such a very low number of patients who participated to this study.

The co-registration of static MR to planning CT scans, made possible a better delineation of DARS than with CT imaging alone. Over the course of RT and posttreatment of HNC, an increase in DARS volume was detected. This result could be very easily expected. The retrospective investigations of DARS of 17 HNC patients contoured on static MRI and co-registered to CT-based RT plans were complemented by prospective clinical swallowing and voice examinations. Unfortunately, only five patients could be investigated prospectively from this group. This small sample size rendered it impossible to safely estimate dose-function effects. This study does add any grounbreaking information to the field of clinical and basic oncology.

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Author response to Decision Letter 1


9 Jun 2020

Rebuttal Letter on PONE-D-19-32133R1

Dear Reviewer, dear colleagues,

Please find attached our answers to the questions and concerns of the reviewers to our re-submitted manuscript.

Thank You for Your support.

Yours sincerely,

Prof. Dr. med. S.E. Combs Dr.med. St. U. Pigorsch

Head of Department Managing Senior Physician

Comments to the Author

1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.

Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #3: (No Response)

Answer: We would like to center Your attention to above reviewer comments.

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2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: No

Answer: For further explanation please see our answer to each reviewer comment.

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: No

Answer: We refer to our response to the reviewer comments upon submission of the revised manuscript: “The complete statistical analysis has been revised anew by two statisticians.”

We must emphasize the status of our second statistician, who was independent and not involved in the initial analysis. This data review and statistics check was done especially in light of the reviewer comments.

________________________________________

4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

________________________________________

5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes________________________________________

6. Review Comments to the Author

Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)

Reviewer #1: I confirmed the revised paper and the authors' response to the reviewer's comments.

I pointed out that the number of subjects in this study was very small (17 patients), which is not enough to obtain significant results. I think the authors' response to this indication is reasonable. Accumulation of a sufficient number of cases requires a lot of labor and cost. However, this fact does not make up for the small number of cases, and I think that the fact that sufficient cases have not been obtained in statistical studies is a huge disadvantage. I believe that the authors' responses are not sufficient answers regarding this statistical disadvantage. If there is not sufficient statistical proof, I recommend increasing the number of cases or writing a paper in the form of a case report.

Answer: Neither labor nor the cost of an extended study were the reasons for the limited patient number. We explained in detail how the number of 17 patients was reached. MR scans representing all DARS completely at each point of time were our primary focus. Unfortunately, we were able to only extract 17 patients from a total of 780 with this inclusion criteria. The follow-up data on DARS organ function of these 17 patients were gathered from patient charts retrospectively.

Retrospective analysis in general are impaired by availability of complete datasets or images. We have referred to this limitation and the constricted conclusions. The findings of the five prospective examined patients for their swallowing function after therapy were only statistically described.

However, the main part of the manuscript deals with the 17 retrospective patients investigated for their DARS organ changes over a longer course of time including radiotherapy treatment weeks and follow-up time.

Reviewer #2: (No Response)

Reviewer #3: The authors have made significant improvements to their manuscript and provided transparently their data.

Nevertheless, The number of quite different patients at different stages of their tumors enrolled in this study is a major flaw of this investigation.

Answer: The presented data was generated from a retrospective analysis focusing on morphologic and volumetric changes of swallowing structures over the course of radiotherapy and later during follow-up by MR and planning CT scans. One goal was to improve the delineation of DARS by co-registration of MR scans to the planning CT scans for better anatomic discrimination. The other aim was to demonstrate and prove the hypothesis that DARS were changed over time by means of radiotherapy in regards to volume and structure. The last point – the influence of radiotherapy dose to the amount of DARS volume and function changes - could not be proven safely because only 17 of the investigated patients fulfilled the inclusion criteria.

If a prospective study for DARS evaluation were designed, the inclusion criteria would be: tumor entity, tumor stage, treatment intention (definitive or postoperative radiotherapy), combination with systemic therapy, imaging: CT and MR scans at defined time points, base line, and follow-up investigation of swallowing and voice function.

The title and goal of this manuscript is "MRI-determined Changes of Dysphagia / Aspiration-Related Structures (DARS) during and after Radiotherapy: Influence on Function and Quality of Life (QoL) of Head and Neck Cancer Patients". This study was supposed to support the hypothesis according to which Function and Quality of Life (QoL) of Head and Neck Cancer Patients are significantly improved. This goal could not be reached with such a very low number of patients who participated to this study.

Answer: Improvement of QoL for HNC patients was not the goal of this study.

The aims of our study were clearly defined at the conclusion of the INTRODUCTION: “The aim of this work was to assess the changes of DARS during and after radiooncological treatment of HNC by co-registration of static MRI and planning CT scans for better delineation of DARS in order to detect morphological changes over the course of RT. The second aim was to compare these dosimetric and volumetric data to results of functional investigation of swallowing and voice.”

The title of the submitted manuscript is obviously misleading for the reviewer. We like to apologize for this. To focus on the main part of the investigation we changed the title.

From: "MRI-determined Changes of Dysphagia / Aspiration-Related Structures (DARS) during and after Radiotherapy: Influence on Function and Quality of Life (QoL) of Head and Neck Cancer Patients".

To: "MRI- and CT-determined Changes of Dysphagia / Aspiration-Related Structures (DARS) during and after Radiotherapy of Head and Neck Cancer".

For our explanation concerning the number of patients, please see above.

The co-registration of static MR to planning CT scans, made possible a better delineation of DARS than with CT imaging alone. Over the course of RT and posttreatment of HNC, an increase in DARS volume was detected. This result could be very easily expected. The retrospective investigations of DARS of 17 HNC patients contoured on static MRI and co-registered to CT-based RT plans were complemented by prospective clinical swallowing and voice examinations. Unfortunately, only five patients could be investigated prospectively from this group. This small sample size rendered it impossible to safely estimate dose-function effects. This study does add any groundbreaking information to the field of clinical and basic oncology.

Answer: For our explanation concerning the number of patients, please see above.

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Jessica D McDermott

29 Jul 2020

MRI- and CT-determined Changes of Dysphagia / Aspiration-Related Structures (DARS) during and after Radiotherapy

PONE-D-19-32133R2

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Acceptance letter

Jessica D McDermott

14 Aug 2020

PONE-D-19-32133R2

MRI- and CT-determined Changes of Dysphagia / Aspiration-Related Structures (DARS) during and after Radiotherapy

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    S1 File. List of abbreviations.

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    S1 Table. Grading of ADI-D.

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    S2 Table. 8-point-penetrations-aspirations-scale (PAS) by Rosenbek [13].

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    S3 Table. Scale of oral food intake (FOIS) by Crary et al. [15].

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    S4 Table. Classification of dysphonia by using DSI-values defined by Wyuts [23].

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