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. 2020 Oct 2;15(10):e0239291. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0239291

The longitudinal impact of employment, retirement and disability status on depressive symptoms among men living with HIV in the Multicenter AIDS Cohort Study

Deanna Ware 1,*, Sergio Rueda 2, Michael Plankey 1,, Pamela Surkan 3, Chukwuemeka N Okafor 4, Linda Teplin 5, M Reuel Friedman 6,
Editor: Ethan Morgan7
PMCID: PMC7532049  PMID: 33007781

Abstract

Many persons living with HIV (PLWH) either reduced their employment capacity or stopped work completely due to disease progression. With the advent of effective antiretroviral therapy, some PLWH were able to return to the workforce and many are now transitioning into retirement. We examined the histories of employment, retirement and disability status on depression among 1,497 Participants living with HIV from 1997 to 2015 in the Multicenter AIDS Cohort Study. Data were collected on depressive symptoms, employment, retirement, disability status as well as HIV-related and sociodemographic characteristics. Employment, retirement and disability status were lagged 2 years to assess whether the risk of depression at a given observation were temporally predicted by each respective status, adjusting for prior depressive symptoms and covariates. Being employed (aOR: 0.76; 95% CI: 0.71–0.82) had lower odds of depression risk two years later compared to those unemployed. There were higher odds of depression risk associated with disability (aOR: 1.43; 95% CI: 1.32–1.54) versus those not on disability. Retirement status was not associated with the risk of depressive symptoms. These findings could help inform policies and employment programs to facilitate the return to work for PLWH who are willing and able to work.

Introduction

Prior to the advent of potent combination antiretroviral therapy (cART), persons living with HIV (PLWH) dealt with the consequences of an episodic illness that limit their ability to participate in the workforce [13]. Wunderlich et al reported an increase in disability benefit awards to individuals based to their HIV infection in the late 80s, supporting the notion that many PLWH were unable to work [4]. With advancements in the management of HIV, some PLWH were presented with the opportunity to return to the workforce and many now are beginning the transition into retirement [1, 3, 5].

Unemployment has been identified as an independent predictor of depression in general populations [68]. Conversely, a systematic review of longitudinal studies showed a beneficial effect of return to work on health in working-aged adults and in a variety of times and settings [9]. The health benefits associated with going back to work in general populations resulted from health improvements after reemployment or health declines associated with continued unemployment. Specifically, PLWH who are unable to work are at significantly increased risk for psychological distress, suicidal ideation, psychiatric symptoms, anxiety, and are more than twice as likely to be hospitalized or die [1013]. Benefits of employment and working conditions among PLWH have also been documented. Participation in employment has been associated with better physical and mental health among PLWH [14]. The quality of employmentor the presence of adverse psychosocial work conditions, such as job insecurity, high psychological demands, and lack of decision authorityalso matters to health and depressive symptoms, suggesting that “bad jobs” may not offer the same mental health advantages as “good jobs” [15, 16]. In a large-scale study of 2,864 PLWH, researchers found that those who were employed reported lower depression symptoms and increased social functioning than those who were not employed [17]. A similar study reported that employed PLWH better handled life difficulties, had lower psychological stress, and better managed their health than unemployed PLWH [18]. Despite the potential health advantages of employment, unemployment rates among PLWH remain higher than the general population [1922].

Previous literature has been inconsistent in regards to the impact of retirement on mental health. Mandel and Roe (2008) reported improved mental health of older individuals who are retired [23]. Another study reported lower levels of depression during an individual’s first year of retirement, and higher levels thereafter [24]. Retirement is correlated with decreased physical health, decreased mobility, and challenges with activities of daily living, which becoming increasing present with older age [25, 26]. Further, information regarding retirement and depression among PLHWA. Therefore, it is important to ascertain any potential impact of retirement on mental health among aging populations living with HIV.

While the relationship between employment, disability and retirement and depression has been established in the general population, information is limited among PLWH. Rueda [27] conducted the first US-based longitudinal study using data from the Multicenter AIDS Cohort Study (MACS) to investigate the relationship between employment and health-related quality of life among PLWH. While they found employment to be associated with better physical and mental quality of life over time, the study was not designed to examine a time-lagged temporal effect between employment status and mental health [27] nor the relationship between retirement and depression risk. We sought to investigate the impact of employment, retirement and disability history on future risk of depression among participants living with HIV in the Multicenter AIDS Cohort Study from 1997 to 2015. We decided to conduct time-lagged analyses to allow for the potential effects of employment, disability, and retirement on health outcomes to become salient during the observation period, and we also wanted to consider the potential adaptation to the experience of retirement or disability [28]. We hypothesize that employed and retired participants will have a lower depression risk while those on disability will have a higher depression risk, after controlling for clinical and sociodemographic covariates.

Materials and methods

Population

Since 1984, the Multicenter AIDS Cohort Study (MACS) has enrolled successive observational cohorts of men who have sex with men (MSM) with and without HIV in four US sites: Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania/Columbus, Ohio; Los Angeles, California; Chicago, Illinois; and Baltimore, Maryland /Washington, DC. Since its inception in 1984, a total of 7,352 participants have been enrolled in the study over 4 periods: 4,954 in 1984–1985; 668 in 1987–1991; 1350 in 2001–2003; 380 in 2011-current. MACS participants are seen at semiannual visits to undertake blood draws, physical exams, and behavioral and medical questionnaires. The MACS study design has been described elsewhere [29, 30]. Questionnaires are available at www.aidscohortstudy.org. Institutional review boards at John Hopkins University, Northwestern University, University of California Los Angeles and University of Pittsburgh approved the protocol, and written informed consent was obtained from all study participants. The current analyses center on employment, disability, and retirement status and depressive symptomatology collected from 1,497 MACS participants living with HIV over an 18-year period, between October 1997—September 2015 (study visits 28 and 63).

Covariates

Sociodemographics

Each participant reported race/ethnicity and date of birth at their enrollment visit. Age was calculated at each visit and categorized as 18–29; 30–39; 40–49; 50–59; 60–69; and 70 years or older. Self-reported educational attainment was represented at a given observation as 8th grade or less; some high school but no high school graduation or GED; high school graduate/GED; some college but no college degree; college degree; some graduate work and post graduate degree.

HIV status

HIV status was assessed using enzyme-linked immunosorbent assay with confirmatory Western blot on all MACS participants at their initial visit and at every visit for those HIV-negative. Participants living with HIV included all men who were identified as such at baseline and those who seroconverted during study observation.

Therapy

Participants reported the type of antiretroviral therapy for their HIV infection used since last visit. The responses included no therapy, mono-therapy, combination therapy, and potent antiretroviral therapy (ART).

Viral load

Plasma HIV RNA levels (viral load, copies/ml) were collected. Viral load was dichotomized into detectable and undetectable, based on the lower detection level of the assay used at visit.

Social support

Participants were asked if they had someone to talk to or count on for social support. The responses were: 1) No, no one; 2) Yes, 1 person; 3) 2 or 3 people; 4) 4 or 5 people; and 5) 6 or more people. The variable was recoded into low (0–1 person), medium (2–3 people) and high (4 or more people) social support [31]. In this sample, higher social support was associated with lower levels of negative psychosocial health conditions, including depression [31]. Therefore, we adjusted the model in order to account for possible confounding effect of social support.

Depression risk

Depressive symptoms were assessed at each study visit using self-administered questions derived from symptom checklist developed by the Center for Epidemiologic Study of Depression. The response values ranged from 0 to 3. Values were summed at each observation for all participants who completed the 20-question measure. The score ranged from a minimum of 0 to a maximum of 60. We created a dichotomous variable assessing whether participants had a score ≥16, a cut-off point associated with the risk of depression [32].

Employment, disability and retirement status

Employment (“Employed”, “Not Employed”) was derived from self-reported responses on full time, part time and self-employment status. A participant was considered “employed” if they reported any current full-time, part-time or self-employment. If the participant did not report any full-time, part-time or self-employment, they were considered to be “not employed”. Missing values on full time, part time, and self-employment status were coded as missing. Disability and retirement status was self-reported by the participant. Employment, disability and retirement status were not mutually exclusive categories; therefore, each outcome was modeled separately. We explored potential overlap between participants reporting combinations of employment, disability and retirement status and found the prevalence of overlap across participant visits to be less than 6%, supporting our decision to model them separately.

Missing values

Missing values were imputed by examining employment status in the prior visit and retaining the response from the prior observation. If employment status was not reported in the prior visit, we used the response from the following visit. If there were no values for employment status in the prior and following visit, then the employment status remained missing. Missing values on disability and retirement status were imputed in a similar manner.

Statistical analysis

Descriptive statistics for the outcome variable and covariates were generated at the index (October 1997/Visit 28), last (September 2015/Visit 65), and across all visits using frequencies/percentages and medians/interquartile ranges (IQRs) where appropriate. To assess the temporal relationship between employment, retirement and disability status and depressive symptoms, we fit separate generalized linear mixed models with a repeated measures statement controlling for within-subject variance. We programmed a 2-year lag for employment, retirement and disability in order to assess if depression risk at a given observation was predicted by these predictor variables at earlier study visits because the potential effects of labor market participation on health takes time to develop [28]. Additionally, we lagged the risk depression 2 years to adjust for prior risk of depression while predicting the future risk of depression. Analyses were conducted using SAS PROC GLIMMIX (SAS version 9.3, SAS Institute Inc., Cary, NC, USA). We assessed separately whether the risk of depression (CES-D score ≥16) at a given observation were predicted respectively by employment, disability, and retirement, adjusting for time (study visit), age, race/ethnicity, education, social support, risk of depression 2 years prior, antiretroviral therapy and viral load detectability. We reported adjusted odds ratios (aOR) and 95% confidence intervals (CI).

Results

Population characteristics

There were 1,497 participants living with HIV in the analysis. Characteristics of the population was reported at the index visit (28), last visit (63) and across all visits (28–63) (Table 1). The majority of participants identified as White, non-Hispanic (53.2%), was between 30 and 50 years old (69.3%) and had at least a high school diploma (92.0%) at their first visit. Across all visits, most reported using potent ART to treat their HIV infections (75.0%), maintained an undetectable viral load (73.2%), and had a medium (40.0%) or high (34.5%) level of social support. There were 3,026 participant-visits with missing employment status. After imputation procedures, there were 157 participant-visits with missing employment status. Risk of depression was seen in 27.5% of the participants. Participants reported employment, retirement and disability at 64.7%, 9.4% and 23.8% across all visits, respectively.

Table 1. Characteristics of study participants.

  Index Visit (28) Last Visit (63) All Visits (28–63)
  n = 1497 n = 1117 N = 31489
Race/Ethnicity
White, non-Hispanic 797 (53.2%) 604 (54.1%) 19129 (60.8%)
Hispanic 233 (15.6%) 176 (15.8%) 3901 (12.4%)
Black, non-Hispanic 439 (29.3%) 318 (28.5%) 8094 (25.7%)
Other 28 (1.9%) 19 (1.7%) 364 (1.2%)
Age
17–29 years old 159 (10.6%) 42 (3.8%) 722 (2.3%)
30–39 years old 481 (32.1%) 104 (9.3%) 3353 (10.7%)
40–49 years old 557 (37.2%) 171 (15.3%) 10042 (31.9%)
50–59 years old 141 (9.4%) 387 (34.6%) 10267 (32.6%)
60–69 years old 22 (1.5%) 279 (25.0%) 3474 (11.0%)
70 + years old 137 (9.2%) 134 (12.0%) 3631 (11.5%)
Education
8th grade or less 30 (2.0%) 18 (1.6%) 530 (1.7%)
9, 10, 11th grade 89 (6.0%) 62 (5.6%) 1440 (4.6%)
12th grade 253 (16.9%) 184 (16.5%) 4673 (14.8%)
At least one year of college, but no degree 477 (31.9%) 344 (30.8%) 9829 (31.2%)
Four years of college/Obtained Degree 318 (21.2%) 253 (22.7%) 7001 (22.2%)
Some graduate work 119 (8.0%) 85 (7.6%) 2941 (9.3%)
Post-graduate degree 211 (14.1%) 171 (15.3%) 5074 (16.1%)
Therapy
No Therapy 585 (40.1%) 50 (4.5%) 4909 (15.8%)
Mono Therapy 82 (5.6%) 7 (0.6%) 145 (0.5%)
Combination Therapy 229 (15.7%) 27 (2.5%) 2701 (8.7%)
Potent ART 562 (38.6%) 1017 (92.4%) 23237 (75.0%)
Missing 39 16 497
Social Support
Low 369 (26.5%) 284 (27.7%) 7257 (25.5%)
Medium 552 (39.7%) 418 (40.8%) 11372 (40.0%)
High 471 (33.8%) 323 (31.5%) 9790 (34.5%)
Missing 105 92 3070
Viral Load
Undetectable 530 (40.5%) 877 (90.1%) 20000 (73.2%)
Detectable 780 (59.5%) 96 (9.9%) 7336 (26.8%)
Missing 187 144 4153
Disability
Yes 251 (18.0%) 238 (22.7%) 6799 (23.8%)
No 1140 (82.0%) 809 (77.3%) 21824 (76.3%)
Missing 106 70 2866
Retired
Yes 41 (3.0%) 161 (15.4%) 2699 (9.4%)
No 1350 (97.1%) 886 (84.6%) 25924 (90.6%)
Missing 106 70 2866
Employed
Yes 1033 (69.5%) 666 (59.9%) 20263 (64.7%)
No 454 (30.5%) 446 (40.1%) 11069 (35.3%)
Missing 10 5 157
Depression
Yes 440 (32.3%) 279 (27.3%) 7748 (27.5%)
No 922 (67.7%) 743 (72.7%) 20477 (72.6%)
Missing 135 95 3264

Employment, retirement and disability status on the risk of depression

After adjusting for race/ethnicity, age, education, prior risk of depression, social support, and viral load, being employed was associated with a 24% decrease in odds of depression risk compared to being unemployed (aOR: 0.73; 95% CI: 0.68–0.78) (Table 2). Participants reporting disability had increased odds of depression risk (aOR: 1.43; 95% CI: 1.32–1.54) (Table 3). Retirement was not statistically associated with depression risk (Table 4).

Table 2. Longitudinal associations between employment and risk of depression (participant N = 1482; total observation N = 29970).

  aOR 95% Confidence Interval p-value
2 year Lag Employment
Employed 0.73 0.68–0.78 <0.0001
Not Employed (Referent) - - -
Prior Risk of Depression (2-year Lag)
Risk of depression 6.20 5.79–6.63 <0.0001
No risk of depression (Referent) - - -
Race/Ethnicity
Black 0.99 0.91–1.08 0.6815
Hispanic 0.92 0.83–1.03 0.6214
Other 1.08 0.81–1.44 0.4419
White (Referent) - - -
Age
17–29 years old 2.18 1.41–3.37 0.0003
30–39 years old 2.27 1.54–3.35 <0.0001
40–49 years old 2.38 1.62–3.47 <0.0001
50–59 years old 2.13 1.46–3.11 <0.0001
60–69 years old 1.60 1.09–2.35 0.0097
70 + years old (Referent) - - -
Education
≤8th grade or less 1.52 1.18–1.96 0.0014
9, 10, 11th grade 1.84 1.55–2.19 <0.0001
12th grade 1.39 1.22–1.58 <0.0001
At least one year of college, but no degree 1.45 1.30–1.62 <0.0001
Four years of college/Obtained degree 1.24 1.10–1.40 0.0004
Some graduate work 1.14 0.98–1.33 0.0927
Post-graduate degree (Referent) - - -
Social Support
High 0.62 0.57–0.68 <0.0001
Low 1.98 1.83–2.15 <0.0001
Medium (Referent) - - -
Therapy
None 0.81 0.72–0.91 0.0006
Mono 1.02 0.64–1.63 0.9373
Combo 1.16 1.02–1.32 0.0208
Potent (Referent) - - -
Viral Load
Undetectable 0.69 0.63–0.76 <0.0001
Detectable (Referent) - - -

Table 3. Longitudinal associations between disability and risk of depression (participant N = 1418; total observation N = 27367).

  aOR* 95% Confidence Interval p-value
2 year Lag Disability
Disabled 1.43 1.32–1.54 <0.0001
Not Disabled (Referent) - - -
Prior Risk of Depression (2 year Lag)
Risk of depression 6.20 5.80–6.63 <0.0001
No risk of depression (Referent) - - -
Race/Ethnicity
Black 0.99 0.91–1.08 0.8163
Hispanic 0.94 0.84–1.05 0.2383
Other 1.13 0.85–1.51 0.4073
White (Referent) - - -
Age
17–29 years old 1.86 1.21–2.88 0.0051
30–39 years old 1.91 1.30–2.81 0.0011
40–49 years old 1.97 1.35–2.87 0.0005
50–59 years old 1.75 1.20–2.55 0.0035
60–69 years old 1.37 0.94–2.02 0.1053
70 + years old (Referent) - - -
Education
≤8th grade or less 1.44 1.12–1.86 0.0049
9, 10, 11th grade 1.76 1.48–2.09 <0.0001
12th grade 1.29 1.14–1.47 <0.0001
At least one year of college, but no degree 1.36 1.22–1.52 <0.0001
Four years of college/Obtained degree 1.20 1.07–1.35 0.0015
Some graduate work 1.08 0.93–1.25 0.313
Post-graduate degree (Referent) - - -
Social Support
High 3.25 2.98–3.55 <0.0001
Low 1.62 1.49–1.76 <0.0001
Medium (Referent) - - -
Therapy
None 0.87 0.78–0.97 0.0155
Mono 0.97 0.65–1.47 0.9
Combo 1.04 0.93–1.17 0.475
Potent (Referent) - - -
Viral Load
Undetectable 0.72 0.66–0.78 <0.0001
Detectable (Referent) - - -

Table 4. Longitudinal associations between retirement and risk of depression (participant N = 1389; total observation N = 24129).

  aOR* 95% Confidence Interval p-value
2 year Lag Retirement
Retired 1.10 0.96–1.26 0.1869
Not Retired (Referent) - - -
Prior Risk of Depression (2 year Lag)
Risk of depression 6.49 6.07–6.94 <0.0001
No risk of depression (Referent) - - -
Race/Ethnicity
Black 1.04 0.96–1.13 0.3339
Hispanic 0.93 0.83–1.03 0.1703
Other 1.07 0.80–1.43 0.6558
White (Referent) - - -
Age
17–29 years old 1.98 1.27–3.10 0.0028
30–39 years old 2.11 1.42–3.16 0.0003
40–49 years old 2.21 1.49–3.27 <0.0001
50–59 years old 1.98 1.35–2.93 0.0006
60–69 years old 1.54 1.04–2.27 0.0313
70 + years old (Referent) - - -
Education
≤8th grade or less 1.61 1.25–2.07 0.0002
9, 10, 11th grade 1.91 1.61–2.27 <0.0001
12th grade 1.39 1.22–1.58 <0.0001
At least one year of college, but no degree 1.42 1.27–1.58 <0.0001
Four years of college/Obtained degree 1.23 1.10–1.38 0.0005
Some graduate work 1.09 0.94–1.27 0.2344
Post-graduate degree (Referent) - - -
Social Support
High 0.63 0.58–0.68 <0.0001
Low 2.02 1.87–2.19 <0.0001
Medium (Referent) - - -
Therapy
None 0.85 0.76–0.95 0.0046
Mono 0.98 0.65–1.48 0.9142
Combo 1.06 0.94–1.19 0.3639
Potent (Referent) - - -
Viral Load
Undetectable 0.71 0.65–0.77 <0.0001
Detectable (Referent) - - -

Other factors associated with depression risk

Compared to MSM 70 years and older, younger participants had increased depression risk: 17–29 years (aOR: 2.18; 95% CI: 1.41–3.37); 30–39 years (aOR: 2.27; 95% CI: 1.54–3.35); 40–49 years (aOR: 2.38; 95% CI: 1.62–3.47); 50–59 years (aOR: 2.13; 95% CI: 1.46–3.11); 60–69 years (aOR: 0.81; 95% CI: 1.09–2.35);. Lower educational attainment was associated with higher odds of depression risk compared to having a post-graduate degree: 8th grade or less (aOR: 1.52; 95% CI: 1.18–1.96); 9-11th grade (aOR: 1.84; 95% CI: 1.55–2.19); 12th Grade (HS diploma) (aOR: 1.39; 95% CI 1.22–1.58); some college (aOR: 1.45; 95% CI: 1.30–1.62); and college degree (aOR: 1.24; 95% CI: 1.10–1.40). Compared to having a medium level of social support, having high social support had lower odds of depression risk (aOR: 0.62; 95% 0.57–0.68), while low social support was associated with higher odds of depression risk (aOR: 1.98; 95% CI: 1.83–2.15). An undetectable viral load was protective against depression risk (aOR: 0.69; 95% CI: 0.63–0.76) (Table 2). Covariates in the disability and retirement models were similar in magnitude and statistical significance and are detailed in Tables 3 and 4, respectively.

Discussion

This paper aims to improve our understanding of the complex link between work and health in men living with HIV by conducting time-lagged longitudinal analyses to account for the delayed effects of upstream determinants of health on health outcomes and the potential adaptations to the experiences of employment, retirement, and disability. Following a social determinants of health approach, these findings contribute to the study of the causation hypothesisemployment leads to better health among people with HIV. The selection hypothesis—health is a necessary condition for employmentwas outside the scope of this paper but cannot be discounted (although previous studies have suggested that the magnitude of the causation effect may be larger than the selection effect) [14, 33, 34]. Contemporary thinking on these competing hypotheses, however, has been moving away from such binary distinctions to examining how both processes work in tandem to shape health and illness trajectories over time.

This longitudinal study found that employed men living with HIV had a lower likelihood of depression risk over time, after adjusting for key clinical and sociodemographic variables. This finding is in agreement with previous studies that have examined the cross-sectional and longitudinal associations between employment and mental health in people with HIV, including depressive symptoms [14, 15, 35]. It also extends previous analyses conducted with MACS data by introducing a two-year lag between the measurement of employment status and the assessment of the mental health outcome. In this previous MACS paper we examined the impact of employment on physical and mental health quality of life while the present paper examines the effects of employment on depression risk, a more direct measure of mental health. The present time-lagged finding further supports the temporal sequence between change in employment status and the mental health outcome because the results of the previous longitudinal analysis incorporated both the between-subject effects (i.e., the difference between employed and unemployed individuals) and the within-subject effects (i.e., the within individual change in mental health due to change in employment status) [27]. Those regression coefficients estimated the difference in mental health scores for the overall population of employed people compared to the overall population of unemployed people. Such “pooling” of cross-sectional and longitudinal relationships made it impossible to isolate the relative contribution of each. However, the present analyses define a temporal sequence by introducing a time-lag between the measure of employment and the measure of depression risk, which offers some reassurances that the change in mental health is better characterized as a result of the employment transition. The importance of conducting time-lagged analyses is supported in part by set-point theories, which propose that people’s experiences to stressful events show a decline in well-being only to return to baseline over time. This observation that people may experience adaptations to stressful experiences has been documented in some studies but not consistently [3638].

Our study also found out that participants on disability had an increased odds of depression risk after controlling for prior depression and other covariates. In the United States, persons with depression may be eligible for social security disability income [39]. Therefore, the relationship between depression and disability status can be bidirectional: 1) depression as a criterion for disability; and 2) disability as the cause of depression. By including pre-existing depression, we were able to tease out a causal relationship of disability on depression risk.

Previous studies regarding the association between retirement and depressive symptoms in general populations have been equivocal and the study of the health effects of retirement on people with HIV has so far been neglected in the literature. Greenfield et al found that, during retirement, increased social activities correlated with decreased depressive symptoms [40]. Reitzes (1996) noted less depression in the first year of retirement, but increasing depression in subsequent years [24]. In a 10-year cross-aged analysis, Segel-Karpas examined the reciprocal effects of retirement and depression. They found that retirement increased the likelihood of depressive symptoms and depression symptoms increased the inclination to retire [28]. In our analysis, the relationship between retirement and depression risk was nonsignificant after adjusting for prior existence of depressive symptoms.

The strength of this study includes the longitudinal investigation of the depression risk associated with employment and disabilityand to our knowledge for the first time extends this work to the experience of retirementin a well characterized and large cohort of men who have sex with men and living with HIV. We also followed an analytical approach that included a time-lag to establish a temporal sequence between our predictors (employment, disability, and retirement) and depression risk, with a comprehensive adjustment for a range of potential confounders. This allowed us to take into account the potential delayed effects of upstream determinants of health and the experience of adaptation to different stressors such as unemployment, disability, and retirement. An important limitation of this study relates to residual confounding because we did not have data on important variables, especially those related to income, reasons for retirement and disability, length of time on disability or retirement, and other systemic barriers to employment, retirement and disability programs such as information on disability benefits, unemployment insurance, or work history. Our analyses however controlled for a number of important covariates related to the experience of living with HIV and labor force participation, including race/ethnicity, age, education, social support, antiretroviral therapy, and viral load.

In addition, our conceptual framework for the selection of the predictors and outcomes focused on the determinants of health and not on selection effects. It is entirely possible that experiencing higher depressive symptoms may interfere with participants’ ability to remain employed, increase the risk of going into disability, or precipitate early retirement. Future research should examine the relative contribution of causation versus selection effects and how they interact and reinforce each other as both have different clinical and policy implications. Due to limited sample size, we were unable to explore differences between participants who retired due to disability and those who retired without disability as this would have allowed us to examine important distinctions in the experience of retirement and its effects on subsequent health outcomes. Lastly, this study was restricted to MSM with HIV in four major metropolitan areas; therefore, results may not be generalizable to the general population of people living with HIV.

This research provided further evidence that employment leads to mental health benefits, and for the first time also suggests that retirement is also associated with better mental health outcomes, which suggests that policies that focus on improving employment opportunities and better retirement conditions may have a significant impact on the health of men living with HIV. It is well known that better disability policies may reduce some of the negative financial conditions people with HIV experience and the stress associated with maintaining employment, remaining on disability benefits, and a successful transition to retirement. However, this work in progress needs to be strengthened by further research to develop and support sensible clinical and policy recommendations to support people living with HIV. Policy research is needed to identify and address structural issues in the benefits and drug coverage programs that may be implicated in creating barriers for people with HIV to return to work or remained employed, provide additional supports while on disability (such as mental health treatment), and facilitate a successful transition to retirement when needed.

Acknowledgments

The authors are indebted to the participants of the Multicenter AIDS Cohort Study [MACS] Healthy Aging Study. The authors thank the staff at the four sites for implementation support John Welty, Montserrat Tarrago, and Katherine McGowan for data support of this study.

Data Availability

Data cannot be shared publicly because data contains potentially sensitive information covered by a NIH Certificate of Confidentiality for investigator-specific concept sheet proposals. The data are available from the data coordinating center at JHU Bloomberg School of Public Health for researchers who meet the criteria for access to confidential data. The data underlying the results presented in the study are available from mwccs@jhu.edu.

Funding Statement

The MWCCS is funded primarily by the National Heart, Lung, and Blood Institute (NHLBI), with additional co-funding from the Eunice Kennedy Shriver National Institute Of Child Health & Human Development (NICHD), National Institute On Aging (NIA), National Institute Of Dental & Craniofacial Research (NIDCR), National Institute Of Allergy And Infectious Diseases (NIAID), National Institute Of Neurological Disorders And Stroke (NINDS), National Institute Of Mental Health (NIMH), National Institute On Drug Abuse (NIDA), National Institute Of Nursing Research (NINR), National Cancer Institute (NCI), National Institute on Alcohol Abuse and Alcoholism (NIAAA), National Institute on Deafness and Other Communication Disorders (NIDCD), National Institute of Diabetes and Digestive and Kidney Diseases (NIDDK), National Institute on Minority Health and Health Disparities (NIMHD), and in coordination and alignment with the research priorities of the National Institutes of Health, Office of AIDS Research (OAR) [U01-HL146241, U01-HL146201, U01-HL146204, U01-HL146202,  U01-HL146193, U01-HL146245, U01-HL146240, U01-HL146242, U01-HL146333, U01-HL146205, U01-HL146203, U01-HL146208, U01-HL146192,  U01-HL146194, and U01-AI35042]. This study is also funded by the National Institute for Minority Health Disparities [R01 MD010680 Plankey & Friedman]. The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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The longitudinal impact of employment, retirement and disability status on depressive symptoms in HIV-positive men in the Multicenter AIDS Cohort Study

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Reviewer #1: Overall, this study utilizes a well-known and conducted research cohort, yet still manages to assess a novel question that will contribute to current literature. This is a very good paper with well-written and thought out analyses and results. The discussion is well developed and appropriately follows the findings. I only had a few suggestions below for the authors to consider.

1. I would suggest removing retirement findings from the results as they are non-significant, or at least moving it to the end of the paragraph after the significant findings.

2. Any hypothesis as to why those 60-69 had reduced odds of depression risk?

3. I would suggest including N’s for the models in each of table 2, 3, and 4

Reviewer #2: I commend the authors for seeking to look at healthy aging and employment among men living with HIV. This is a robust data set and provides ample opportunity to examine changes in labor engagement and mental health across the lifespan. I believe this manuscript has potential to make an important contribution and I have outlined suggested revisions and concerns below.

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1. The paragraph in the introduction on benefits/risks of retirement feels a bit disjointed. Revisiting this paragraph to clarify the primary point with better flow between supporting (or conflicting) studies would make it clearer why studying retirement specifically is important.

2. In line 75, participants are referred to as HIV-positive men. Elsewhere the preferred person-first language “People living with HIV” is used. Here, I suggest changing the language to “men living with HIV” in this sentence. People first, non-stigmatizing language should be used throughout. HIV-positive status can be changed to HIV status. HIV positive participants can be changed to participants living with HIV.

3. Social support is identified as a covariate but it isn’t explained why this construct would be important to include in the methods or introduction but it is mentioned briefly in the discussion. I suggest making it more clear why this is included and potentially discussing it’s link as an implied mechanism for linking mental health and labor engagement.

4. More detail about the depression measure would be helpful. How could a participant achieve a score of 16 to exceed the clinical threshold? For a reader to know this, the scoring on individual items should be reported. For example, on the CESD items are typically rated by frequency ranging from 0 to 3.

5. How many participants required imputation for missing employment status? Were any sensitivity checks completed to see if the imputation approach to missingness changed results? Similarly, why was this approach used for employment but not disability and retirement?

6. How was the index visit chosen and what does this mean?

7. The authors make the point (without citation) that the link between labor related determinants and depression is expected to be lagged, however, it is unclear why a 2 year lag was chosen. At the aggregate level it appears justified that average sample levels of depression may lag behind major labor market shifts quite slowly but it’s less clear why unemployment would take two years to impact mental health, particularly if in that two years employment status changes again. Because conclusions are drawn about implied causality, it is important to justify this time lag. There may be a number of confounding events or factors in that two year window that could also contribute to mental health.

8. The authors refer to both within and between subjects differences in the methods, however, no within subjects analysis was conducted. The repeated measures statement in SAS typically uses subject ID to indicate within the model that some data points belong to the same participant and are thus non-independent. Repeated measures from multiple subjects do provide more robust data however it appears only between subjects results are reported in this study. Some clarification would help to make it clear that the results are between-subjects only.

9. It should be stated in text that retirement was not associated with odds of depression risk. The confidence band include 1.0 and the p-value is far from the alpha = .05 significance or even p = .10 marginal significance. Likewise in the discussion it is inappropriate to draw conclusions that retirement is associated with better mental health. This is not supported by the study results.

10. How might retirement status be confounded with age? Perhaps a different study design would be more appropriate for examining the impact of retirement. That is, younger individuals are highly unlikely to retire thus providing little variance in retirement data earlier in life. A within-person analysis would better answer the question whether an individual’s mental health is different when they retire. The introduction appeared to frame the paper, in part, around aging and retirement but the methods didn’t really focus on this age group or life transition. I do agree with authors that understanding how retirement is related to health is important in the aging cohort of men living with HIV, but don’t feel this paper really provides much insight into that process.

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There are some minor editorial changes needed to ensure the same and correct tense is used across sections (for example, hypotheses should be in past tense).

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Author response to Decision Letter 0


24 Aug 2020

Response to Reviewer #1:

Thank you for your review of our paper. We have answered each of your points below. Additionally, we performed missing value imputation for disability and retirement status. All models (employment, disability, and retirement) has been re-analyzed. Therefore, results vary slightly from the initial manuscript.

Reviewer # 1 Comment

I would suggest removing retirement findings from the results as they are non-significant, or at least moving it to the end of the paragraph after the significant findings.

Author Response

Thank you for your comment. I moved the non-significant result of retirement to the end of the other significant findings as suggested.

Reviewer # 1 Comment

Any hypothesis as to why those 60-69 had reduced odds of depression risk?

Author Response

I performed missing value imputation for retirement and disability variables. The models for employment, disability and retirement were then re-ran. Those 60-69 no longer have a statistically significant decreased odds of depression risk in all three models.

Reviewer # 1 Comment

I would suggest including N’s for the models in each of table 2, 3, and 4

Author Response

I added the participant N and visit level N into Tables 2, 3 and 4 as suggested.

Response to Reviewer #2:

Thank you for your review of our paper. We have answered each of your points below. Additionally, we performed missing value imputation for disability and retirement status. All models (employment, disability, and retirement) has been re-analyzed. Therefore, results vary slightly from the initial manuscript.

Reviewer # 2 Comment

The paragraph in the introduction on benefits/risks of retirement feels a bit disjointed. Revisiting this paragraph to clarify the primary point with better flow between supporting (or conflicting) studies would make it clearer why studying retirement specifically is important.

Author Response

Thank you for your comment. I made changes to the paragraph introducing retirement for clarity (see lines 59-67) as suggested.

Reviewer # 2 Comment

In line 75, participants are referred to as HIV-positive men. Elsewhere the preferred person-first language “People living with HIV” is used. Here, I suggest changing the language to “men living with HIV” in this sentence. People first, non-stigmatizing language should be used throughout. HIV-positive status can be changed to HIV status. HIV positive participants can be changed to participants living with HIV.

Author Response

As suggested, we used person first language throughout the manuscript.

Reviewer # 2 Comment

Social support is identified as a covariate but it isn’t explained why this construct would be important to include in the methods or introduction but it is mentioned briefly in the discussion. I suggest making it more clear why this is included and potentially discussing it’s link as an implied mechanism for linking mental health and labor engagement.

Author Response

Friedman et al assessed social support in this sample of men. They found that higher social support was associated with lower levels of negative psychosocial health outcomes (which includes depression). This has been added to the manuscript to make it clear on why we chose to include it as a covariate in the models (see lines 118 to 121).

Reviewer # 2 Comment

More detail about the depression measure would be helpful. How could a participant achieve a score of 16 to exceed the clinical threshold? For a reader to know this, the scoring on individual items should be reported. For example, on the CESD items are typically rated by frequency ranging from 0 to 3

Author Response

As suggested, I added the value range for the responses and the minimum and maximum scores (See lines 124-127).

Reviewer # 2 Comment

How many participants required imputation for missing employment status? Were any sensitivity checks completed to see if the imputation approach to missingness changed results? Similarly, why was this approach used for employment but not disability and retirement?

Author Response

There are 4,417 participant-visits with missing employment, retirement and disability.

Not imputing retirement and disability was an oversight as we were initially focused on employment status. Therefore, we have imputed the missing retirement and disability values. To ensure results did not change due to imputation, we compared the model results from imputed vs non-imputed data for each of the primary outcomes: employment, retirement and disability. The estimates for the primary predictors was less than 0.001. Therefore, we can confidently state that imputing missing values did not change our results.

Reviewer # 2 Comment

How was the index visit chosen and what does this mean?

Author Response

Index visit is the first visit in our retroactive observation of employment, disability, retirement status and depressive symptoms.

We chose the index visit of October 1997 because it was the peak of the HAART initiation within the MACS.

Many persons living with HIV were unable to work due to disease progression. By looking at the time periods in which potent HAART was introduced, we can assess how employment trends as PLWH become healthier and possibly re-enter the workforce.

Reviewer # 2 Comment

The authors make the point (without citation) that the link between labor related determinants and depression is expected to be lagged, however, it is unclear why a 2 year lag was chosen. At the aggregate level it appears justified that average sample levels of depression may lag behind major labor market shifts quite slowly but it’s less clear why unemployment would take two years to impact mental health, particularly if in that two years employment status changes again. Because conclusions are drawn about implied causality, it is important to justify this time lag. There may be a number of confounding events or factors in that two year window that could also contribute to mental health.

Author Response

Segel-Karpas et al used a 2-year lag on employment status and depressive symptom and decided to use a similar approach. Lines 85 to 90 explains our reasoning for the 2-year lag.

“We decided to conduct time-lagged analyses to allow for the potential effects of employment, disability, and retirement on health outcomes to become salient during the observation period, and we also wanted to consider the potential adaptation to the experience of retirement or disability”.

Reviewer # 2 Comment

The authors refer to both within and between subjects differences in the methods, however, no within subjects analysis was conducted. The repeated measures statement in SAS typically uses subject ID to indicate within the model that some data points belong to the same participant and are thus non-independent. Repeated measures from multiple subjects do provide more robust data however it appears only between subjects results are reported in this study. Some clarification would help to make it clear that the results are between-subjects only.

Author Response

We adjusted for between and within subject variances in our models. We did not report within subject differences. We will make it clear in the methods that only between subject results are reported (see line 160).

Reviewer # 2 Comment

It should be stated in text that retirement was not associated with odds of depression risk. The confidence band include 1.0 and the p-value is far from the alpha = .05 significance or even p = .10 marginal significance. Likewise in the discussion it is inappropriate to draw conclusions that retirement is associated with better mental health. This is not supported by the study results.

Author Response

We have made the change to reflect that retirement was not associated with the risk of depressive symptoms.

Reviewer # 2 Comment

How might retirement status be confounded with age? Perhaps a different study design would be more appropriate for examining the impact of retirement. That is, younger individuals are highly unlikely to retire thus providing little variance in retirement data earlier in life. A within-person analysis would better answer the question whether an individual’s mental health is different when they retire. The introduction appeared to frame the paper, in part, around aging and retirement but the methods didn’t really focus on this age group or life transition. I do agree with authors that understanding how retirement is related to health is important in the aging cohort of men living with HIV, but don’t feel this paper really provides much insight into that process.

Author Response

This is a repeated measures analysis so we adjust for with-in person variance of the predictor variables over time. That said, not all men started at the same age—so we adjusted for age for retirement (for example, to account for early vs. late retirement).

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