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. 2020 Nov 2;15(11):e0238576. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0238576

Four in every ten infants in Northwest Ethiopia exposed to sub-optimal breastfeeding practice

Workineh Shume Hailu 1, Mulat Tirfie Bayih 2,*, Netsanet Fentahun Babble 2
Editor: Jordyn Tinka Wallenborn3
PMCID: PMC7605653  PMID: 33137137

Abstract

Background

Improper breastfeeding practices significantly impair the health, development, and survival of infants, children, and mothers. A Breastfeeding Performance Index (BPI) is a composite index to describe overall maternal breastfeeding practice with infants under six months of age. To date, there is insufficient evidence on breastfeeding performance index and its associated factors in Ethiopia.

Objective

To assess the breastfeeding performance index and its associated factors in Sekela District, Northwest Ethiopia, 2019.

Methods

A community-based cross-sectional study was conducted on 605 randomly selected mothers having infants aged 6 to 12 months from April 02, 2019 to May 13, 2019. Data was collected using a structured interviewer-administered questionnaire. Multivariable logistic regressions were used to identify independent predictors of BPI.

Results

Two hundred forty-six (40.7%) of mothers had low BPI scores. Mothers who lived alone (AOR = 3.18; 95%CI: 1.15, 8.82), mothers who were merchants (AOR = 2.75; 95%CI:1.05, 7.15), attended three antenatal care (ANC) visits (AOR = 0.42; 95% CI: 0.20, 0.82), attended four antenatal care visits (AOR = 0.35; 95%CI: 0.12, 0.82), received postnatal care (PNC) (AOR = 0.35; 95%CI: 0.19, 0.64), had poor knowledge on breastfeeding (AOR = 3.19;95%CI: 1.14, 8.89) or negative attitudes towards breastfeeding (AOR = 2.70;95%CI: 1.13, 6.45), were independent predictors of low BPI scores.

Conclusions

The prevalence of sub-optimal breastfeeding practice in northwest Ethiopia was very high. A mother living alone, maternal occupation, ANC visits, PNC, maternal breastfeeding knowledge, and attitude towards breastfeeding were independent predictors of low BPI scores. Nutrition promotion should be implemented by considering the above significant factors to decrease inappropriate breastfeeding practice in Northwest Ethiopia.

Introduction

Exclusive breastfeeding is recommended for the survival and healthy growth of the baby by providing the most nutritious food and transferring some of the mother’s immunity to the infant. Breastfeeding creates an important psychosocial bond between the mother and baby and enhances modest cognitive development. It is the foundation of the infant’s wellbeing for the first year to two years of a baby’s life, when supplemental foods are withheld until after 6 months of exclusive breastfeeding [15].

WHO and UNICEF have emphasized the first 1000 days of life when the maximal brain growth occurs, as the critical window of the period for nutritional interventions [6]. The World Health Organization (WHO), USA Maternal and Child Health Bureau and Ethiopian Federal Ministry of Health recommend exclusive breastfeeding for the first six months with early initiation, to provide colostrum, and to discourage pre-lacteal feeding and feeding by demand, at least 8 to 12 times every 24 hours for up to two years or more, and gradually supplementing with nutritionally safe, adequate, and age-appropriate complementary feeding starting at six months [2, 613].

Improper breastfeeding practices may significantly compromise the health, development, and survival of infants, children, and mothers. Worldwide it causes 820,000 child and 20,000 maternal deaths in a year [14]. In low- and middle-income countries, sub-optimal breastfeeding such as early introduction of complementary feeding has a high contributed to malnutrition compromising physical and cognitive development throughout life [1517]. Over two-thirds of malnutrition is associated with improper feeding practices during the first year of life [18]. Annually, breastfeeding problems alone contributed to around 804,000 child deaths representing 12% of under-five deaths which can be prevented by optimal breastfeeding [19].

Every day, 3000–4000 infants die in the developing world from diarrhea and acute respiratory infections associated with inadequate exposure to breast milk benefits, and more than 10 million children die each year in Sub-Saharan Africa and South Asia due to poor breastfeeding practices [20]. Mainly, late initiation and nonexclusive breastfeeding are significant causes for diarrhea during the infant and young child age [21]. In Ethiopia, infants whose mothers had received low and medium BPI scores were more likely to suffer from diarrhea and other infections [22].

Breastfeeding performance index (BPI) is a scale used to quantify key breastfeeding practices into a single variable by summarizing different aspects of breastfeeding practices [23]. Though some studies have examined maternal breastfeeding practice in parts of Ethiopia [2426], the BPI and associated maternal factors have not been well studied in Ethiopia, particularly the Northwest Amhara region. Therefore, this study aims to assess BPI scores with associated factors among mothers having infants aged 6 to 12 months in Sekela District, in Northwest Ethiopia.

Methods and materials

Ethics approval and consent to participate

Ethical clearance was obtained from the Ethical Review Board of Bahir Dar University College of Medicine and Health Science. The supporting letter was written from the Amhara Public Health Institute of the West Gojjam Zone Health Bureau. The zonal health bureau also wrote a permission letter to the woreda administrative and health offices. Finally supporting letters were written from woreda health offices to selected Keble administrators. Written informed consent was obtained from each study participant before the interview after explaining the purpose of the study to the respondent. Confidentiality of the information was assured and the privacy of the respondent was maintained by removing personal identities from the questionnaire. Only individuals who had consented to participate were included in the study. No one coerced study participants in any way to participate. Lastly, the participants were also informed that they have the right to abstain from the study or to withdraw at any time.

Study setting and period

The study was conducted in the city of Gish Abay of the Sekela District, Northwest Ethiopia between April 02, 2019 and May 13, 2019. Sekela District is one of the 15 districts found in West Gojjam Zone, located 175 km and 460 km from Bahir Dar and Addis Ababa which are the capital cities of the Amhara Region and Ethiopia respectively. There are 33 Kebeles (equivalent to a county and the smallest administrative unit in Ethiopia) in the Sekela District with the total population 166,201. Among them 85,233 are female and 41,015 of whom are of reproductive age. According to the District Health Office 2011 Report, the total number of infants aged between 6 to 12 months was 3,136. There are 8 health centers and 31 health posts with 19 public health officials, 26 Midwives, 45 Nurses, and 77 Health Extension Workers [27].

Study design and population

A community based cross-sectional study design was used to assess the BPI and its associated factors. The study sample was obtained from all mothers who had an infant between six and twelve months of age, in randomly selected Kebeles of the Sekela District.

Sample size determination

The single population proportion formula was used to determine the required sample size by considering the following assumptions: prevalence of improper BPI scores was estimated at 56.9%, based on a recently conducted study of infants aged 6 to 12 months [24]; the desired degree of precision of 5%; and using Zα/2 as the value of the standard normal distribution corresponding to a significant level of alpha (α) of 0.05.

n=(Zα/2)2P(1P)d2

Due to the multistage sampling technique of the study, a design effect size of 1.5 was considered, and an adjustment for a 10% non-response rate yielded the final sample size of n = 622.

Sampling technique and sampling procedure

Before actual data collection, a house to house survey was done identifying 964 index mothers with an infant aged six to twelve months. Using a multi-stage sampling technique to select the study participants, ten Kebeles were randomly selected from 33 Kebeles in the district. Selected Kebeles had similar socio-demographic characteristics. From the list of survey registration numbers, individual participants from households in each of the ten sample Kebeles were randomly selected for participation in the study.

Data collection procedure

A structured interviewer-administered questionnaire adapted from previous publications was used to collect data [25, 28]. Questions included socio-demographic, obstetric, and maternal health service related factors; infant related factors; and maternal BPI scores in the first six months after the birth of their infants. Breastfeeding performance index (BPI) scores assessed positive BPI scores of 1 point each for seven healthy breastfeeding practices such as early initiation, frequent, and exclusive breastfeeding until 6 months of age, and not supplementing with pre-lactael food, bottles, solids, or formula. by allocating one point for each of the following: early breastfeeding initiation; pre-lacteal feeds; bottle feeding; exclusive breastfeeding; not receiving liquids; not receiving formula or other milk, and not receiving solids (Table 1).

Table 1. Variables and scoring system used to create breastfeeding performance index for infants age 0–6 months, 2019.
Variables 0–6 months
Breastfeeding performance index components
Early breastfeeding initiation No = 0
Yes = 1
Pre-lacteal feeds No = 1
Yes = 0
Bottles feeding No = 1
Yes = 0
Exclusive breastfeeding No = 0
Yes = 1
Not receiving liquids No = 0
Yes = 1
Not receiving formula or other milk No = 0
Yes = 1
Not receiving solids No = 0
Yes = 1
Range of total score 0–7

The BPI scores were summed to give a total score that could range between 0 and 7. The BPI scores were then classified as Low BPI (0–3), Medium BPI (4–5), or High BPI (6–7) [22]. The lowest two tertiles (low and medium) were merged as one category of the outcome variable representing poor breastfeeding practice [25, 29]. Because having low and medium PBI scores both correlate with similar nutrition and health effects, the lowest two tertiles (0–5) were analyzed as one PBI score. The odds of low and medium BPI were nearly equal in their association with increased incidence of negative health outcomes such as diarrhea, dyspnea, cough, and fever [22].

Maternal knowledge of and attitude towards breastfeeding were determined using a 16 item assessment Bloom’s Taxonomy cut of point. Knowledge and attitude scores were classified as poor knowledge or negative attitude (60% or lower), medium knowledge or neutral attitude (60–79.9%), and good knowledge or positive attitude (80%or higher) respectively. [30].

Wealth Index. The wealth index is characterized by ownership of different types of assets in urban and rural areas. Before creating the wealth index, all variables were transformed into numerical scale values. Yes/no answers were recoded into binary variables and variables with more than 2 categories were transformed into bivariate variables. The household wealth index was estimated using principal component analysis (PCA). The objectives of a principal component analysis are to discover or reduce the dimensionality of the data set and to identify new meaningful underlying variables. The first component explains the largest principle proportion of the total variance, and was used as the wealth index to represent the household’s wealth. After the PCA had been calculated, the index variable was divided into three categories such as: poor, medium and rich, and each household was assigned to one of these categories of household wealth index.

Data quality assurance

Data quality was assured by using a properly designed questionnaire adapted from previous literature. Before data collection, the questionnaire was pre-tested using 5% of the total sample size from one Kebele with similar socio-demographic characteristics as the study Kebeles. Intensive training was provided for data collectors and supervisors prior to data collection. Training involved instructions on the questions to be asked, their meaning, how to ask them, and how to record the answers. Supervisors traveled with data collection teams to observe and ensure that their teams adhered to protocol. Each questionnaire was checked daily by supervisors, and principal investigators. Random re-testing of the households were done to ensure the reliability of the data.

Data processing and analysis

Data was cleaned, coded, and entered into EpiData Version 3.1 and exported to SPSS Version 23 statistical software for analysis. Further data management (variable recoding) was done after exporting to SPSS. Data analysis included basic descriptive and analysis of potential factors associated with BPI scores. Descriptive statistics were calculated for frequencies and summarized in graphs and tables. Binary logistic regression was used for analysis. Bi-variable and multivariable logistic regression was done to show significant associations between variables and BPI scores. A p-value < 0.2 on bi-variable analyses was entered into a multivariable logistic regression model to control for confounders. The model fitness was tested using the Hosmer and Lemeshow test with the p-value set at 0.33 (p-value > 0.05). Variables with a p-value < 0.05 set at a 95% confidence interval were considered as statistically significant. The strength and direction of associations with the outcome variables were checked using the adjusted odds ratios set at a 95% confidence interval.

Household wealth status was estimated using principal component analysis (PCA). The economic variables were converted to binary variables. Those binary variable values owned by less than 5% and more than 95% of the sample were removed from analysis because they could distinguish between richer and poorer households. After the PCA was run, the index variables were divided into three categories (poor, medium, and rich) and each surveyed household was assigned to one of these household wealth categories.

Results

Socio-demographic characteristics of respondents

A total of 605 women having an infant aged six to twelve months representing a response rate of 97.3% were included for data analysis. More than half (58%) of respondents were between 26 and 35 years old, with the mean (SD) age of 28.54 (±4.9). Almost all (99%) respondents represented the Amhara ethnic group and all were Orthodox Christian followers. Three hundred eighteen (52.6%) were unable to read and write (Table 2).

Table 2. Socio demographic characteristics of study participants in Sekela district, West Gojjam North West Ethiopia, 2019 (N = 605).

Variables Frequency Percentage
Age in years
18–25 178 29.4%
26–35 352 58.2%
≥36 75 12.4%
Region)
Amhara 598 98.8%
Others 7 1.2%
Residence
Urban 112 18.5%
Rural 193 81.5%
Educational status of mother
 Unable to read and write 318 52.6%
 Able to read and write 68 11.2%
 Primary level (1–8) 146 24.2%
 Secondary and preparatory 45 7.4%
 College diploma and above 28 4.6%
Marital status
 Married and Live with husband 539 89.1%
 Married and Don’t Live with husband 51 8.4%
 Single (unmarried divorced &widowed) 15 2.5%
Occupational status of mother
 House wife 495 81.8%
 Government employee 36 6.0%
 Merchant 53 8.8%
 Daily labor 21 3.4%
Wealth index of the household
 Poor 309 51.1%
 Medium 155 25.6%
 Rich 141 23.3%
Husband educational status (n = 590)
 Unable to read and write 134 22.7%
 Primary level 356 60.3.%
 Secondary and preparatory level 60 10.2%
 College diploma and above 40 6.8%
Husband occupational status (n = 590)
 Farmer 446 75.6%
 Government and private sector employee 50 8.5%
 Daily labor 32 5.4%
 Merchant 62 10.5%

Maternal related characteristics of study respondents

Five hundred fifty (90.9%) study participants attended at least one antenatal care visit. From these, only 196 (35.6%) of them attended four antenatal visits. Four hundred seventy-two (78%) study participants gave birth at healthcare facilities. Only 196 (32.4%) study participants attended a postnatal care follow-up. Four hundred thirty-four (71.7%) and 411 (67.9%) of the study participants had good knowledge of, and positive attitude towards breastfeeding respectively. (Table 3).

Table 3. Maternal health services among mother having infant 6–12 months old in Sekela District, West Gojjam zone North West Ethiopia, 2019 (N = 605).

Variables Frequency (%)
At least one ANC follow up (n = 605) No 55 (9.1)
Yes 550 (90.9)
Number of ANC visit (n = 550) One visit 30 (5.5)
Two visit 98 (17.8)
Three visit 226 (41.1)
Four visit 196 (35.6)
Breastfeeding advice during ANC (550) Yes 130 (23.6)
No 420(76.4)
Pregnancy intension (n = 605) Wanted 491 (81.2)
Unwanted 114 (18.8)
Place of delivery (n = 605) Home 133 (22.0)
Health facility 472 (78.0)
Mode of delivery (n = 605) C/S delivery 17 (2.8)
Vaginal delivery 588(97.2)
Post natal care follow up(n = 605) Yes 196 (32.4%)
No 409 (67.6%)
Breastfeeding advice during PNC (n = 196) Yes 166 (84.7%)
No 30 (15.3%)
Maternal knowledge (n = 605) Good 434 (71.7%)
Medium 129 (21.3%)
Poor 42 (7.0%)
Maternal attitude (n = 605) Positive 411 (67.9)
Neutral 105 (17.4%)
Negative 89 (14.7%)

Infant characteristics of study participants

Three hundred eighty-eight (64.1%) study participants had three or fewer infants. One hundred seventy-seven (42.2%) study participants had birth spacing intervals of at least three years between the last two children (Table 4).

Table 4. Infant related factors associated with breast feeding performance index among mothers having 6–12 months infant in Sekela District, Northwest Ethiopia, 2019 (N = 605).

Variables Frequency Percentage (%)
Birth order (n = 605)
 First-third 388 64.1
 Fourth-fifth 133 22.0
 Sixth and above 84 13.9
Birth interval (n = 419)
 ≤3 years 177 42.2
 4–5 years 220 52.5
 ≥6 years 22 5.3
Number of under five children(n = 605)
 One 381 63.0
 Two 224 37.0

Maternal breastfeeding practice and breastfeeding performance index scores

Five hundred eighty-five (96.7%) study participants had breastfed their infants for at least six months. However, one hundred eighty-eight (31.1%) study participants delayed initiation of breastfeeding. Sixty-six (10.9%) study participants avoided feeding colostrum to their infant. Fifty-eight (9.6%) infants received pre-lacteal foods within three days after birth, while 193 (31.9%) infants were exposed to bottle feeding.

Moreover, 206 (34.0%) and 71(11.7%) of infants were exposed to fluids and solid or semi-solid foods before six months of age, respectively. Five hundred eighty-three (96.4%) study participants did not use a formula to feed their index infants. Two hundred thirty-nine (39.5%) infants were exposed to non-exclusive breastfeeding in the first six months after birth. The most frequently mentioned reasons for starting fluids, and solid or semi-solid foods before six months included insufficient breast milk 147 (61.5%), the mother returning to work 58(24.3%), and other significant pressure 27 (11.3%). Three hundred fifty-nine (59.3%) study participants had high BPI scores (Table 5).

Table 5. Breast feeding performance indicators of the study participants in Sekela district Northwest Ethiopia, 2019 (N = 605).

Breast feeding dimensions Frequency Percentage (%) Score
Timely initiation of breastfeeding
<1hr 417 68.9 1
>1hr 188 31.1 0
Pre-lacteal feeding
Yes 58 9.6 0
No 547 90.4 1
Start fluid feeding before six month
Yes 206 34.0 0
No 499 66.0 1
Start solid/semi-solid before 6 month
Yes 71 11.7 0
No 534 88.3 1
Breast feeding until six month
Yes 585 96.7 1
No 20 3.3 0
Avoid bottle feeding before 6 month
Yes 412 68.1 1
No 193 31.9 0
No Formula feeding before 6 month
Yes 583 96.4 1
No 22 3.6 0
Breast feeding performance index
Poor 246 40.7
Good 59.3

Factors associated with breastfeeding performance index

In bivariate analysis, BPI scores were significantly associated with maternal formal education, maternal age, maternal occupation, the mother living with her husband, household wealth index, pregnancy intension, number of ANC visits, breastfeeding advice during ANC visits, delivery place, mode of delivery, PNC follow up, birth order, birth interval, number of under-five children, breastfeeding knowledge and maternal attitude towards breastfeeding. In the final multiple logistic regressions adjusted for confounders, BPI scores were significantly associated with mother living with her husband, maternal occupation, breastfeeding knowledge, attitude towards breastfeeding, number of ANC follow ups, and postnatal follow up.

Women who were merchants were 2.8 (AOR = 2.8, 95%CI (1.05–7.15) times more likely to have low BPI scores when compared to housewives. Women who live alone were 3.2 (AOR = 3.2, 95%CI (1.15–8.82) times more likely to have a low BPI score when compared to those who live with their husbands. Women who had at least four antenatal care visits were 65% (AOR = 0.35; 95% CI (0.15–0.82), and who had third antenatal care visits were 58% (AOR = 0.42; 95%CI (0.20–0.88) times less likely to have low BPI scores as compared with those who had two or fewer antenatal care visits respectively. Women who had a history of postnatal care follow up were 65% (AOR = 0.35, 95%CI (0.19–0.64) times less likely to have a low BPI scores compared to those who had no postnatal care service. Women with a negative attitudes towards breastfeeding were 2.7 (AOR = 2.70, 95%CI (1.13–6.45) and those with neutral attitudes were 2.31 (AOR = 2.31, 95%CI (1.14–6.45) times more likely respectively, to have low BPI scores compared to those who had a positive attitude. Similarly, women with poor breast-feeding knowledge were 3.19 (AOR = 3.19, 95%CI (1.14–8.89) times more likely to have low BPI scores compared to those who had good knowledge. In addition, women who had medium breastfeeding knowledge were 2.83 (AOR = 3.19, 95%CI (1.42–5.65) times more likely to have low BPI scores when compared to women with good breastfeeding knowledge (Table 6).

Table 6. Logistic regression analysis result for factors associated with breast feeding performance index in Sekela district west Gojjam zone North West Ethiopia 2019 (N = 605).

Variables Low/medium BFPI COR (95%) AOR (95%)
Yes No
Maternal age (n = 605)
18–25 80 98 1 1
26–35 117 235 0.61(0.42–0.88) 0.66(0.20–1.22)
> = 36 49 26 2.31(1.32–4.04) 0.74(0.14–3.28)
Wealth index (n = 605)
Poor 159 150 1 1
Medium 44 111 0.37(0.25–0.57) 0.56(0.28–1.12)
Rich 43 98 0.41(0.27–0.63) 0.60(0.30–1.20)
Maternal occupation
 House wife 187 308 1 1
 Government employee 14 22 1.05 (0.52–2.10) 1.28(0.24–6.72)
 Merchant 30 23 2.15(1.21–3.81) 2.75(1.05–7.15)
 daily labor 15 6 4.12(1.57–10.80) 1.41(0.28–7.03)
Mother live with her husband
 Yes 200 330 1 1
 No 32 19 2.86(1.58–5.17) 3.18(1.15–8.82)
Formal education
 Yes 75 144 0.66(0.46–0.92) 0.54(0.24–1.23)
 No 171 215 1 1
Pregnancy intension
 Wanted 172 317 1 1
 Unwanted 74 42 3.25(2.13–4.95) 1.73(0.85–3.54)
Birth order
 first up to third 140 248 1 1
 fourth and fifth 54 79 1.21 (0.8–1.81) 1.03(0.53–2.00)
 sixth and above 52 32 2.88 (1.77–4.68) 0.89(0.34–2.45)
Birth interval
 ≤3Years 104 73 1 1
 4-5years 55 165 2.49(1.00–6.25) 0.55(0.28–1.10)
 ≥6Years 8 14 0.58(0.23–1.47) 1.39(0.39–5.00)
Having number of under 5year child
 One 127 254 0.58(0.23–1.47) 0.77(0.40–1.49)
 Two 119 105 1 1
Number of ANC visit
 First and Second 88 40 1 1
 Third visit 81 145 0.35(0.16–0.40) 0.42(0.20–0.88)
 Fourth and above 51 145 0.16(0.10–0.26) 0.35(0.15–0.82)
BF advice during ANC
 Yes 42 88 0.58(0.43–0.98) 0.76(0.40–1.46)
 No 178 242 1 1
Place of delivery
 Home 74 59 2.19(1.48–3.23) 1.81(0.94–3.49)
 Health facility 172 300 1 1
Root of delivery
 C/S 10 7 2.13(0.08–5.68) 2.75(0.61–12.61)
 Vaginal 236 352 1 1
Post natal care
 Yes 46 150 0.32(0.22–0.47) 0.35(0.19–0.64)
 No 200 209 1 1
Ever informed about BF
 Yes 223 342 1 1
 No 23 17 2.08(01.08–3.97) 1.80(0.69–4.72)
Attitude towards to BF
 Negative 56 33 3.75(2.33–6.05) 2.70(1.13–6.45)
 Neutral 62 43 3.19(2.05–4.06) 2.31(1.14–4.66)
 Positive 128 283 1 1
Maternal BF knowledge
 Poor 25 17 3.09(1.62–5.91) 3.19(1.14–8.89)
 Medium 81 48 3.54(2.35–5.34) 2.83(1.42–5.65)
 Good 140 294 1 1

Discussion

This study was conducted to assess BPI scores with associated factors of women having infants less between 6 and 12 months of age. This study shows the prevalence of low BPI scores was 40.7%. This finding is lower than previous studies from different regions of Ethiopia such as Afar [29] and Sidama [24]. In this study, initiating fluid feeding (34.0%) was lower than in the study conducted in Mecha District West Gojjam, Ethiopia in 2012 [31], and Debre Berhan town Amhara Ethiopia in 2015 [32]. The BPI scores of this study are higher than in another African study, in Somaliland [33]. The prevalence of mothers who initiated later breastfeeding was higher than a study conducted in Debre Berhan in Amhara, Ethiopia in 2015 [32]. The current study showed that non-exclusive breastfeeding was 39.5% which is higher than a study conducted in Arba Minch, Southern Ethiopia [34]. The identified factors for low BPI score in this study were Single mothers or mothers not living with their husbands that is similar to the studies conducted in Wollo, Ethiopia in 2018 [35], Jimma Arjio, Ethiopia, in 2012 [26], and Pakistan, 2016 [36] and poor knowledge and negative attitudes about maternal breastfeeding that is consistent with previous studies in Debre Markos [37], Mecha district [31], Gonder [38] Shashemene [39], Sidama [40], Offa district South Ethiopia [41] and Gamo Goffa [42]. Whereas factors for higher BPI score were non-merchant mothers which is consistent with studies done in Debre Tabor [43], Hawassa [44], and Shashemene [39] and mothers receiving antenatal and postnatal care which is consistent with studies conducted in Mecha district [31], Hulu District, South Ethiopia [24]; Azezo District Northwest Ethiopia [45], and Southwest Somaliland [33].

The possible reason for the lower prevalence of BPI scores in the study area from other studies might be different study times, and active involvement of non-governmental organizations in those study areas. Whereas for a higher prevalence of BPI scores might be nutrition and health service coverage and socio-demographic differences. According to the Mini-Demographic and Health Survey 2019 by the Ethiopia Ministry of Health [46], four or more ANC visits and women delivering babies in facilities have increased from 32% to 43% and 26% to 48% respectively compared to the Ethiopian Demographic Health Survey 2016. In Debre Berhan and Arba Mich, the study populations were urban and included all mothers with children less than 2 years old [32, 34].

The explanations for factors associated with low BPI score in our study were it is possible that when mothers live with their husband, they get support from their husbands which decreases their workload and give them more time to breastfeed properly. Also, a mother who had poor knowledge and negative attitude about breastfeeding did not follow breastfeeding protocols like the introduction of food before six moth and early weaning breastfeeding and discontinuation of breastfeeding after six months. The possible reasons for factors associated with higher BPI score might be that housewives have more time to care for their infant and infants are not dependent on caregivers throughout the day and when mothers adhere to antenatal and postnatal care, they will get breastfeeding advice increasing their breastfeeding knowledge and motivating them to use good breastfeeding practices.

Some limitations include that data collection was based on maternal recall, and mothers may have difficulty remembering details such as the time they initiated breastfeeding. Therefore, there is a potential of recall bias which may overestimate or underestimate the results. Because the sample sizes for the low and medium BPI scores were small, it was not possible to run an ordinal logistic regression analysis, which may limit the strength of this study.

Public health significance

Breastfeeding is an effective intervention for improving child nutrition and reducing child mortality in developing countries. In this study, the finding shows there are significant numbers of infants exposed to sub-optimal breastfeeding. These findings have implications for policies addressing problems related to breastfeeding practices in developing countries like Ethiopia. Additionally, these findings influence our understanding of breastfeeding practice interventions. Finally, the BPI may have an impact on designing outcome-oriented breastfeeding promotion interventions.

Conclusion

The prevalence of sub-optimal breastfeeding practices in Northwest Ethiopia was very high. Marital status, maternal occupation, number of ANC visits, PNC, maternal breastfeeding knowledge, and attitude towards breastfeeding were independent predictors of low BPI scores. Nutrition promotion should be implemented by considering using evidence from this study to improve healthy breastfeeding practice.

Supporting information

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Acknowledgments

We would like to offer our in-depth gratitude to the data collectors, participants for their support to us. Also would like to express our deepest appreciation and cordial thanks to Professor Barbara J. Engebretsen for here language editing of the manuscript.

Abbreviations

ANC

Antenatal Care

BFPI

Breast Feeding Performance Index

EBF

Exclusive Breast Feeding

HEW

Health Extension Worker

IYCFP

Infant and Young Child Feeding practice

PNC

Post Natal Care

SPSS

Statistical Package for Social Sciences

TIBF

Timely Initiation of Breast Feeding

WHO

World Health Organization

Data Availability

All relevant data are within the manuscript and its Supporting Information files.

Funding Statement

the authors received no funding for this work.

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Decision Letter 0

Sara Fuentes Perez

7 May 2020

PONE-D-20-02694

FOUR IN EVERY TEN INFANTS HAD EXPOSED TO INAPPROPRIATE BREASTFEEDING PRACTICE Northwest Ethiopia

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Reviewer #1: Need major improvement in English, suggest to be reviewed by a native medical writer.

The scoring or index of BFPI need to be elaborated further, specifically on the different measurement or parameter used, compare to the original source. The adaptation process of BFPI also need to be explain exhaustively.

Has the questionnaire been validated? Need to indicate if yes or not and explain the reason/argumentation. If yes what is the Cronbach score?

Important to briefly describe 'what is principal component analysis (PCA) is?' and the rational of using it is still also missing.

It is extremely obvious that most of the subject were not able to read and write, however the authors failed discussed this in depth. This is a major lack of the manuscript.

The occupational factors and other work related determinants should also be explained in detail, to draw a line with the breastfeeding performance index, even though the percentage of the subject who are worker are only around 20%.

Reviewer #2: Overall a very interesting paper looking at predictors of higher levels of breastfeeding practices in Ethiopia. This study is important since no study has been published in this specific geographic region. However, I think this paper would greatly benefit to some restructuring of the introduction and discussion. I also think the public health significance of this study needs to be further stated. Perhaps with additional analyses where they look at the impact of the breastfeeding index on infant outcomes.

Abstract

1. Please add more detail into what is meant by associated factors. Do you mean things that are associated with the index?

Introduction

1. “Breastfeeding creates an inimitable psychosocial bond between the mother and baby enhances modest cognitive development and it is the underpinning of the infant’s wellbeing in the first year of life even into the second year of life with appropriate complementary foods from 6 months[1-4].” Very long sentence and it seems like you are trying to say two important things. The benefits of breastfeeding and current recommendations. I would suggest putting these into two separate sentences.

2. You have very good and interesting information in the introduction. However, I think the introduction would benefit from some restructuring. Right now, it seems like the benefits and outcomes of breastfeeding are randomly dispersed throughoug. Instead, make sure to have all benefits in one paragraph, all recommendations in one paragraph, and do this with all major themes. That will help the transition between ideas.

Methods

1. To help readers, please state what Kebles are.

2. I am so glad you included how you determined your effect size. I would suggest using the more common terms of power. And then include what you set the main estimators to.

3. For the sampling procedure, it would be good to know if the Kebles were similar in terms of sociodemographic characteristics

4. Important to know how old the children/infants were when the interviews took place. If they were still breastfeeding at the interview, how did you deal with those participants

5. I would suggest making a figure to show exactly how the index was created. Right now, I find it a little confusing and hard to follow. So if you don’t want to make the figure I would suggest making the text a bit more clear. I think this is very important since the index is very interesting and is the major strength of your study

6. Please keep in mind that just because questionnaires were used in previous studies doesn’t mean they provide high data quality. I would add more details into how you considered if these questionnaires provided good data

7. Please also include a list of all confounders you considered

8. Did you get institutional review board approval?

Results

1. Is are any outcomes you can look at? To see if the breastfeeding index affects some of the outcomes you discussed in the introduction. This would really strengthen your paper.

Discussion

1. The discussion seems a bit long. I would like to see the first paragraph be a general overall and take home messages from your study. 2-3 discussion points for your take home messages. Strengths and limitations section. And finally conclusion with why this matters, and how you can change it..

Tables

1. Please create a table showing differences in characteristics between different levels of the breastfeeding index

Other

1. I would suggest a different title.

2. I would suggest additional editing to check for general typos

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PLoS One. 2020 Nov 2;15(11):e0238576. doi: 10.1371/journal.pone.0238576.r002

Author response to Decision Letter 0


29 Jul 2020

Rebuttal letter

Title: FOUR IN EVERY TEN INFANTS HAD EXPOSED TO INAPPROPRIATE BREASTFEEDING PRACTICE IN NORTHWEST ETHIOPIA

Ms. Ref. No.: PONE-D-20-02694

We like to thank the reviewers for the positive and constructive comments with regard to the submission for publication of our manuscript in PLOS ONE. We have tried to address all comments and suggestions of the reviewers’ point by point by writing question number and answer for each and revised our manuscript accordingly. Revisions to the text were highlighted in the manuscript.

Reviewer #1

1. Need major improvement in English, suggest to be reviewed by a native medical writer.

Answer: Thank you very much for your valuable comments. We have addressed your concerns and made correction.

2. Scoring or index of BFPI needs to be elaborated further, specifically on the different measurement or parameter used, compare to the original source. The adaptation processes of BFPI also need to be explaining exhaustively. Has the questionnaire been validated? Need to indicate if yes or not and explain the reason/argumentation. If yes what is the Cronbach score?

Answer: Thank you very much for your valuable comments. We have addressed your concerns and made correction. The questionnaire has been using to measure breast feeding practices in Ethiopia. The pervious study was validated the breast feeding performance index questionnaire in Ethiopia. For this study, we used the already validated tools.

3. Important to briefly describe 'what is principal component analysis (PCA) is?' and the rational of using it is still also missing.

Answer: Thank you very much for your valuable comments. We have addressed your concerns and made correction.

4. The occupational factors and other work related determinants should also be explained in detail, to draw a line with the breastfeeding performance index, even though the percentages of the subject who are worker are only around 20%.

Answer: Thank you very much for your valuable comments. We have addressed your concerns and made correction.

Reviewer #2:

Comment: Overall a very interesting paper looking at predictors of higher levels of breastfeeding practices in Ethiopia. This study is important since no study has been published in this specific geographic region. However, I think this paper would greatly benefit to some restructuring of the introduction and discussion. I also think the public health significance of this study needs to be further stated. Perhaps with additional analyses where they look at the impact of the breastfeeding index on infant outcomes.

Answer: Thank you very much for your valuable comments. We have addressed your concerns and made correction.

Abstract

1. Please add more detail into what is meant by associated factors. Do you mean things that are associated with the index?

Answer: Thank you very much for your valuable comments. We have addressed your concerns and made correction.

Introduction

1. “Breastfeeding creates an inimitable psychosocial bond between the mother and baby enhances modest cognitive development and it is the underpinning of the infant’s wellbeing in the first year of life even into the second year of life with appropriate complementary foods from 6 months[1-4].” Very long sentence and it seems like you are trying to say two important things. The benefits of breastfeeding and current recommendations. I would suggest putting these into two separate sentences.

Answer: Thank you very much for your valuable comments. We have addressed your concerns and made correction.

2. You have very good and interesting information in the introduction. However, I think the introduction would benefit from some restructuring. Right now, it seems like the benefits and outcomes of breastfeeding are randomly dispersed throughoug. Instead, make sure to have all benefits in one paragraph, all recommendations in one paragraph, and do this with all major themes. That will help the transition between ideas.

Answer: Thank you very much for your valuable comments. We have addressed your concerns and made correction.

Methods

1. To help readers, please state what Kebeles are.

Answer: Thank you very much for your valuable comments. We have addressed your concerns and made correction.

2. I am so glad you included how you determined your effect size. I would suggest using the more common terms of power. And then include what you set the main estimators to. Answer: Thank you very much for your valuable comments. For this study we use prevalence to estimate the sample size. The study was single proportion, not comparison study. We tried to calculate the sample size by considering important factors, but, the calculated sample size was lower than the sample size estimated using prevalence. Finally, we decision to use the large sample size to increase the power of analysis and representative

3. For the sampling procedure, it would be good to know if the Kebeles were similar in terms of socio-demographic characteristics

Answer: Thank you very much for your valuable comments. We have addressed your concerns and made correction.

4. Important to know how old the children/infants were when the interviews took place. If they were still breastfeeding at the interview, how did you deal with those participants

Answer: Thank you very much for your valuable comments. We have addressed your concerns and made correction.

5. I would suggest making a figure to show exactly how the index was created. Right now, I find it a little confusing and hard to follow. So if you don’t want to make the figure I would suggest making the text a bit more clear. I think this is very important since the index is very interesting and is the major strength of your study

Answer: Thank you very much for your valuable comments. We have addressed your concerns and made correction.

6. Please keep in mind that just because questionnaires were used in previous studies doesn’t mean they provide high data quality. I would add more details into how you considered if these questionnaires provided good data

Answer: Thank you very much for your valuable comments. We have addressed your concerns and made correction.

7. Please also include a list of all confounders you considered

Answer: Thank you very much for your valuable comments. We have addressed your concerns and made correction.

8. Did you get institutional review board approval?

Answer: Thank you very much for your valuable comments. We have addressed your concerns and made correction. The institutional review board approval protocol placed under declaration at end

Results

1. Is/ are any outcomes you can look at? To see if the breastfeeding index affects some of the outcomes you discussed in the introduction. This would really strengthen your paper.

Answer: Thank you very much for your valuable comments. But, we did not included variables which helps to measure the effect of breastfeeding index affects

Discussion

1. The discussion seems a bit long. I would like to see the first paragraph be a general overall and take home messages from your study. 2-3 discussion points for your take home messages. Strengths and limitations section. And finally conclusion with why this matters, and how you can change it.

Answer: Thank you very much for your valuable comments. We have addressed your concerns and made correction.

Tables

1. Please create a table showing differences in characteristics between different levels of the breastfeeding index

Answer: Thank you very much for your valuable comments. We have addressed your concerns and made correction.

Other

1. I would suggest additional editing to check for general typos

Answer: Thank you very much for your valuable comments. We have addressed your concerns and made correction.

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Submitted filename: Rebuttal letter_BFPI.docx

Decision Letter 1

Jordyn Tinka Wallenborn

12 Aug 2020

PONE-D-20-02694R1

FOUR IN EVERY TEN INFANTS IN NORTHWEST ETHIOPIA EXPOSED TO SUB-OPTIMAL BREASTFEEDING PRACTICE.

PLOS ONE

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ACADEMIC EDITOR: Please restructure the discussion so that you compare your findings with previous literature in one paragraph; followed by two paragraphs providing an explanation into your results. Right now, you have the majority of information you need, there just needs to be some restructuring of paragraphs 2-7 of the discussion.

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Author response to Decision Letter 1


17 Aug 2020

Rebuttal letter

Title: FOUR IN EVERY TEN INFANTS HAD EXPOSED TO INAPPROPRIATE BREASTFEEDING PRACTICE IN NORTHWEST ETHIOPIA

Ms. Ref. No.: PONE-D-20-02694

We have tried to address all comments and suggestions of the ACADEMIC EDITOR/ Editor Comments point by point by revised our manuscript accordingly. Revisions to the text were highlighted in the manuscript.

ACADEMIC EDITOR/ Editor Comments: Please restructure the discussion so that you compare your findings with previous literature in one paragraph; followed by two paragraphs providing an explanation into your results. Right now, you have the majority of information you need, there just needs to be some restructuring of paragraphs 2-7 of the discussion.

Answer: Thank you very much for your valuable comments. We have addressed your concerns and restructure the discussion part.

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Decision Letter 2

Jordyn Tinka Wallenborn

20 Aug 2020

FOUR IN EVERY TEN INFANTS IN NORTHWEST ETHIOPIA EXPOSED TO SUB-OPTIMAL BREASTFEEDING PRACTICE.

PONE-D-20-02694R2

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Jordyn Tinka Wallenborn

3 Sep 2020

PONE-D-20-02694R2

FOUR IN EVERY TEN INFANTS IN NORTHWEST ETHIOPIA EXPOSED TO SUB-OPTIMAL BREASTFEEDING PRACTICE.

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